~~US Girls and Those Girls~~FINAL CHAPTER UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [Archive]

bbgroove

March 18th, 2008, 11:58 PM

Prologue:

In a world where nothing is as it seems.

“I guess it just slipped my mind,” He said shrugging his shoulders and turning his back on her.
“No! The name of your third grade teacher slips your mind. Remembering to get eggs can just slip your mind. Being an international superstar ISN’T SOMETHING THAT JUST SLIPS YOUR MIND!” She yelled, her face becoming red with heated anger.

Where friends can be enemies.

“You mean to tell me you actually think you’re falling in love with him?” She questioned as she sat herself next to the crying teen. “You must be crazy! We’re only sophomore’s in college, you don’t just find true love out of the blue like that! Think of who he is, think of WHAT he is, think of…”
“Don’t give me that bull! You feel exactly the same way! Don’t tell me what I should think about, when your questioning everything that we’ve been taught about love! How dare you lecture me!” She cried back in anger.

And trust becomes a very hard thing to give.

“Please. Come with me.” He pleaded. She stepped away in shock and confusion. He held out his hand for her to grab as a sign of acceptance, but all she could do was let a tear fall down her cheek and thoughts of reality seep into her mind. What was she to do?

Comes the story of four girls.

U.S. Girls, and Those Girls meant to be read like us girls and those girls

Chapter One
The warm summer air of the bustling Berlin streets whipped around the bodies of four girls who, unbeknownst to them, where about to experience the greatest adventure their hearts have ever felt.
Blaine grunted lightly as she lifted her black suitcase from the back of the taxi and onto the concrete sidewalk. Her raven black hair lashed out in every direction around her face before she finally had the chance to tie it back in a messy ponytail, freeing her dark brown eyes to take notice of the scenery. She was an American, of mixed Filipino descent, tanned skin, button nose and, although the opposite of most islanders, fairly tall and athletically built.
“Blaine, can you help me with this?” Karissa pleaded more than asked, as she attempted to pull out her own luggage. Blaine quickly jammed her arms beneath the toppling suitcases and helped her ailing friend. Karissa was an American brunette, with fair skin, slightly shorter than Blaine, but far more gifted in the hip area, a very curvaceous form for such a tomboy. Her eyes were rather a strange fix on her beautiful body, they changed from a light mixture of brown and blue to a deep blue, depending on her mood, which at this moment was sick.
“Seriously Karissa, you should just head into the lobby, I mean you look sick enough to slap,” Jackie stated half-heartedly, as she herself began to struggle with her own bags. Blaine and Karissa just stared at her odd comment before Blaine ushered the sick girl and their luggage thus far, into the lobby. Jackie smiled in a flicker of triumph before combing her hand through her red hair and sighing in frustration at her heavy bag. Her chocolate eyes, a good inch below six feet, stared intently at her bags as if sheer will power would be enough to move them. Her lack of movement seemed odd in comparison with her strong but slim Caucasian build.
Paige smirked playfully as she easily pulled her own cases from the trunk and placed them to her side. “Need help?” Paige asked, wrapping her fingers around the handles of Jackie’s gear. Paige and Jackie pulled with a definite grunt and the stubborn suitcase finally let go. The taxi driver drove off with a small smile and a nod of good-bye. Paige laughed lightly, her stormy eyes twinkling with each breath as the quintessential blonde bombshell and redheaded vixen walked into the lobby.

XXXXXX In the hotel room XXXXXXX

“Hey, you should seriously rest,” Jackie told Karissa who busied herself with unpacking her carry-on in between fits of sneezing. Karissa groaned, her nose a deep red, and complied willingly with the younger teen.
“Can you believe we’re actually in Germany?” Blaine squealed in excitement as she threw open the curtains. A sudden gasp escaped her lips as her eyes landed on a balcony whose scenery could only be matched by the angels of heaven themselves. “We have an INTENSE view!” Blaine screamed over the edge of the gated balcony. The three girls back inside of the room laughed at their overly excited roomy.
“You mind telling me why our bodies reached the room before our bags?” Paige questioned, fingering a newly acquired stain that befell on her favorite pair of jeans. Jackie instinctively picked up the room phone and pressed a button here and a button there to reach the front desk.
“Hallo. Dieses ist zimmer 483 und wir waren gerecht, wundernd, als wir unsere Beutel empfangen würden? Nr., sind sie noch nicht hier. Zimmer 483, ja, danke. Auf Wiedersehen..” Jackie eloquently stated before hanging up the phone and smiling at Paige.
(Hello. This is room 483 and we were just wondering when we would receive our bags? No, they are still not here. Room 483, yes, thank you. Good-bye.)

“How’d I do?” the redheaded American asked. Paige just smirked and nodded her head in approval. Jackie did a fairly good job with her German, aside from the fact that she pronounced a few syllables wrong. Paige was always the go-to-girl in these kinds of situations, being fluent in a plethora of languages.
“You almost asked where our DOUGHNUTS were.” Paige joked lightly as a small knock came from the room door. Jackie propped herself up on the bed as Blaine flew past and launched herself at the door. The three other girls gave each other knowing glances.
“Halloooooooo! Haben Sie unsere Beutel?” (Halloooooooo! Do you have our bags?) Blaine greeted loudly, gleefully practicing her German. The bellboy just nodded kindly and brought in the trolley of suitcases. The young man, who apparently to Blaine looked like a Fred, waited patiently as each girl chipped in a few euros as a tip and said his goodbyes. An echo of ‘danke schoen’ and ‘Auf Wiedersehen’ followed, the newly dubbed, Fred out the door.
Paige pulled, what looked like her bag from the pile of cases and zipped it open for a change of clothing. Blaine grabbed Karissa’s bag as she asked to borrow the straightener. Jackie reached for hers, hoping to unpack fast enough to get the top drawer.
Blaine grabbed out the straightener and walked towards the bathroom when suddenly Karissa, in a raspy voice, heaved out, “What the ****?”
Blaine turned quickly, a look of confusion traced by her raised eyebrows. She turned to find a shocked Karissa pointing at the cord of the straightener. Following with her eyes, Blaine came across a rather manly looking pair of dark blue boxers. Now Blaine and Karissa had been friends long enough for both to know that Karissa was the Winnie the Pooh on booty undies kind of girl, not the man band boxers one.
Blaine, out of pure shock and disgust dropped the straightener, alien object and all.
“GOOD GOD!” Jackie screamed as she opened her own suitcase to find nothing but hats. Blaine jumped from her place next to the boxer-infested straightener to Jackie’s side where both girls just stared at the contents of the bag. Karissa hobbled over in a stupor, and when her eyes met with the others, she whipped around, as whippingly as a sick girl could, and reached for the phone.
The three girls, distracted by the strange contents of their, or what they thought was their, bags, a small wheezing sound could be heard. They all turned to find Paige in the doorway of the closet with her arms above her head, which looked to be trapped in a rather tight t-shirt.
“God Paige, at least warn us before you come here half naked. A person could go blind with all that white.” Blaine joked.
“I’m not trying ---- to flash you guys your----wildest dreams----I can’t breathe!” Paige gasped as she waved her arms violently within the shirt. Jackie and Blaine rushed to their suffocating friend and began to pull on the rims. Karissa began to dial hotel service, because just remembering that the police was 911 at home really wasn’t helpful.
“Paige stop ****ing moving! Suck it in!” Jackie yelled. Paige followed orders and once her stomach shrunk a few inches, the two helpers yanked the shirt down over her body.
Blaine looked to Jackie then to Paige, and asked in a half-hearted joke, “What did you eat, Canada?” Paige just glared and flipped her off as a response. Suddenly a loud *RRRRIIIIIIPPPPP* boomed throughout the room as Paige breathed in. The tight shirt ripped…no, rather exploded at the seams.
“I don’t think these are our bags, guys,” Paige stated as she peeled the remains of the shirt off her body.
“What makes you think that?” Karissa said sarcastically as she held up a small pack that had the words ‘TOKIO HOTEL’ written on it.
Jackie walked to the phone and dialed the front desk as Blaine asked, “Where the **** is Tokio Hotel?”

TanteMegs

March 19th, 2008, 12:00 AM

Ohhh, I like it already. Can't wait to see where this goes. Write more soon please.

Megan

SisterPym

March 19th, 2008, 03:27 AM

It's a good start. Can't wait to read more

JumbieLover

March 19th, 2008, 06:14 AM

YAY you posted it! Can't wait to read more cause I love it so far :D

LipsOfAnAngel

March 19th, 2008, 08:00 AM

Where the **** is Tokio Hotel?

i got a kick out of that!!! great story so far! mehr bitte!

cherry_kaulitz

March 19th, 2008, 10:20 AM

more more more plz i love great start WHERE THE **** IS TOKIO HOTEL? EXACT SAME THING I WAS WONDERING LOVE IT PLZ DO MORE

XxInyourNightmarexX

March 19th, 2008, 12:36 PM

Nice way to start off. I want to read the next post..

kArLa2tH

March 19th, 2008, 01:54 PM

awsome =) can't wait to read more

bbgroove

March 19th, 2008, 03:49 PM

CHAPTER 2---Part one

Lobby

“Would you let it go already?” Jackie pleaded as Blaine asked yet again where this Tokio Hotel was. Blaine just pursed her lips lightly and crossed her arms over her chest. Like always, it wasn’t hard for Blaine to get caught on a thought and not just roll, but also latch on and ride that thought until she figured it out.
“If this hotel has our bags, we should find it. How are you not even the least bit concerned?” Blaine asked following behind Jackie, trying to match her steps. Jackie just blinked and stuffed her hands deep into her pockets. The two teens walked up to the front desk manager quietly, who looked rather busy with the phones.
“Tokio Hotel? Nein!” He yelled repeatedly into the receiver of, if you counted, five phones at once. Jackie and Blaine just glanced at each other before Blaine swiftly reached her hand over the counter and onto the ‘speaker’ button of the phone just in time for the manager to repeat his ‘mantra’ of sorts to every single person on the line.
The manager gave a deep sigh in relief as the lines suddenly went dead. He began a thank you as he raised his head to greet his kind savior. But the second he found that there was a 19 and 18 year old before him he suddenly chanted his mantra, “Tokio Hotel? Nein!”
“Nein. Wir möchten gerade wissen, wo unsere Beutel sind. Sie schickten uns die Beutel von einem anderen Raum.” (No. We just want to know where our bags are. You sent us the bags from another room.) Blaine quickly said as the manager began to pull a can of pepper spray from bellow the counter.
He eyed the two girls for a tense few moments before he 180’d and smiled brightly. He quickly typed a few keys and suddenly began to mumble in frustration. The only thing the girls could manage to translate was, “Tokio Hotel.”

The Hotel Room

“You feelin’ better?” Paige asked Karissa as she dabbed a cold wet cloth across her friend’s forehead. Karissa just sniffed and sneezed in reply. Paige laughed lightly because for her, that was the only reply she received for every question thus far.
Paige ventured into another question, hoping for even a nod, if only she wouldn’t sneeze, “You want some soup?”
Karissa lifted the lid of her left eye long enough to wink it in reply. Paige smiled in assurance as she lifted herself from the bed by the sick brunette and walked to the door, heading for the kitchen.

Hallway

The girls walked solemnly down the hallway away from the front desk. They had successfully managed to find that their bags had been mixed with another guest at the hotel, but for some odd reason, he wouldn’t say what room they were in. This more than anything ticked the girls off slightly, more on the fact that they needed a fresh shirt and toothbrush after their plane ride and less about the fact that he ignored their pleas of speed with them.
“Dumb…freakin’… gah…with a monkey…..toupee for a face….” Blaine mumbled to herself as she once again croseed her arms over her chest and pursed her lips together. Jackie just walked casually to the door, making faces every time she caught a whiff of her day-old shirt.
The girls kept quiet as they left the lobby and down to the elevator, but the second they stepped foot off the elevator and onto their floor, “A freakin’ two hour delay, 8 hour plane ride, one hour baggage claim, and three hour FRONT DESK MANAGER BAKGAMMON MONKEY FACED TOUPEE!” Blaine screeched, she really wasn’t the type to be kept waiting, because when it came to time, she really felt it wasn’t something you could spare. Jackie turned quickly to her angered friend with an unusual smile on her face. Blaine just perked an eyebrow in confusion, wasn’t this NO SMILE time?
“I saw him dial the number to the room our bags are in,” Jackie stated triumphantly. Blaine’s eyes grew wide as she hurriedly grasped Jackie’s shoulders and said, “You mean, I get a clean shirt after all? WHERE?”
“Well not necessarily the room, but definitely the floor,” Jack just tilted her head in the opposite direction of their own room. Blaine just jetted down the hallway and began to knock on any door that she came to. Jackie’s eyes shot open in surprise as she tried to stop her friend, who at this point, seemed psychotic. Jackie reached Blaine on the fourth door she jammed her fist against and told her to be quiet. They waited patiently for a disgruntled guest to come stomping out to lecture them on the necessity of quiet, which never came. They two girls looked to each other, it’s impossible that no one else was in their room, it was 10 o’clock at night. Surely someone heard them.
Suddenly they heard a click of the door handle and a squeak of the hinges. The strange thing was, was that the noise was coming from a door that Blaine hadn’t pounded her fist against. The girls tuned slowly and came face to face, well for Jackie at least, with two young men, early 20’s late teens Blaine would guess.
One of the boys was freakishly tall, and quite feminine looking enough for Jackie to question if he WAS a man. He was slightly gangly-style, or at least appeared so, you couldn’t tell underneath the VERY baggy shirt and pants he wore. But those attributes weren’t even what made him so – unique, looking. On his head were long dirty blonde DREDS that were trapped beneath a baseball hat and a beanie of sorts.
The man next to him seemed rather normal in appearance than his baggy-wearing buddy on his right. He was slightly shorter, with long, straightened, brown hair that stopped at his shoulders. He wore dark jeans and a rather tight black t-shirt that enhanced the sight of his biceps, which were rather good to look at.
“Hallo,” The dred-ed one said, slapping on a smirk that seemed quite rehearsed and signatured to the girls. Jackie smiled curtly as Blaine brought her hand up and waved it once to the left.
“Wünschten Sie Kerle ein Autograph?” (Did you want an autograph?)The brunette asked. The girls looked at the boys in confusion, but brushed it off as a possible German saying for staring, like ‘take a picture, it’ll last longer.’
“Wirklich benötigen wir gerade unsere Beutel.” (Actually, we just need our bags) Blaine replied as she wrinkled her nose at the thought of how bad she might smell. Jackie did the same thing before she kindly explained what had happened earlier that day with the bag mix up, effectively leaving out Blaine’s bout of crazy just moments before.
“American?” the brunette asked. The girls smiled sheepishly and shook their head ‘yes.’
“I’m Georg, this is Tom,” the brunette introduced. Tom just smirked and looked to Jackie who flared her nostrils and looked to Blaine who just smiled at the thought of a clean shirt.

Part Two coming soon ^_^

ILuvKaulitzTwins4E

March 19th, 2008, 05:02 PM

awsome please write more....

kArLa2tH

March 19th, 2008, 06:21 PM

more please

LipsOfAnAngel

March 19th, 2008, 06:50 PM

awesomeness!!!! love it! mehr bitte!

cherry_kaulitz

March 19th, 2008, 09:52 PM

please do more
pwity pwity pwease

tiklemepurple

March 19th, 2008, 11:03 PM

wow that was really good
its so descriptive
like i can picture exactly what is happening
i hope this one is one of those fan fics that becomes like 100 pages long
write more!!!

bbgroove

March 19th, 2008, 11:19 PM

Chapter 3 (tech. part 2 of ch. 2....but whatever) :mrgreen:
Kitchen

The Kitchen of the hotel closed around 10:30, but with a few euros and some flirty winks, the head chef was kind enough to let Paige in for an hour or so. As she entered the kitchen she was rather surprised when the alluring aroma of chicken broth and veggies bombarded her senses. It was supposed to be locked, and to her knowledge Paige was the only one with a key.
Curious as to where the smell was coming from, Paige turned the corner where the view of a young man was standing over the stove in a rather embarrassing chef’s hat and apron.
“I’m sorry I didn’t realize anyone was here,” Paige apologized. The young man turned, slightly startled. He looked Paige up and down for a moment, perking his eyebrows briefly before replying, “Nein. Just making some soup.”
“I’m Gustav,” the blonde said as he reached his hand out for a friendly shake.
“Paige,” Paige replied accepting his kind gesture.
Paige smiled lightly and quickly asked if he wouldn’t mind sharing the kitchen. He quietly smiled back in accordance and went back to his cooking.
Paige stared at him from the corner of her eye as she looked for the necessities for her famous chicken noodle soup. He was rather small for a man his age, late teens most likely, only an inch or so taller than herself. He had short dirty blonde hair and a very muscular physique, meaning abs and a very nice-looking butt. Paige laughed as she remembered Blaine’s five ‘B’s or the perfect man, blonde, blue-eyed, bright, built and British. He was blonde, brown-eyed, bright, built and German, three out of five wasn’t too bad. Four B’s and a G.

During her one-woman staring contest Paige forgot what her hands were doing and was surprised to find a soft but firm surface beneath her fingertips. Trying to figure out what the foreign object was, she wiggled her fingers, which excited a small giggle from behind her. She turned slightly and came face to-- well, chest with a tall dark haired young man, same age as the blonde.
“You’re beautiful,” Paige heard being stuttered. Her eyes shot open in shock as she realized that those words came from her own lips. Suddenly her boob began to vibrate which caused not only strange looks from the boys, but a girlish squeal from Paige herself.
Paige grabbed her cell phone from her bra-strap and flipped it open. She reminded herself to kill Blaine about advising her to leave her cell phone there when you wore a dress.
“Paige, you’ve been gone for over an hour. Is my soup okay,” Karissa choked out before letting a horribly flemy-sounding cough vibrate through the cellphone speaker.
“The soup? I could have been kidnapped and raped, lying in a puddle of my own blood down here, and you’re worried about your soup?” Paige asked sarcastically.
“Were you kidnapped?” Karissa asked innocently. Paige replied with a stern ipsofacto ‘no’ to which Karissa said, “Good, so soup’s on the way then.”
Paige shut the phone violently before going back to work on the soup, ignoring the two staring men behind her.

Hallway

“I can’t believe all of you guys have enough money to each get your own rooms. We barely pulled through for ONE. We appreciate you helping us with our bags, but it wasn’t necessary,” Blaine stated as she gently placed her suitcases down and opened the door of the girls’ hotel room.
Georg followed closely behind as they entered and just replied, “It’s no problem, you have just as many bags as we do, it’s only fair.”
“Yah. Besides, it saves time between each room,” Tom added as he walked to the beds and placed the bags he had on them. When he tossed them on, a sudden yelp emitted from the blankets. Both boys jumped in surprise as Jackie and Blaine rushed to see if Karissa was okay.
The girls just huddled over their friend who seemed to be in a fit of coughs. Blaine ran to get some water as Jackie quickly raced through the doors to get Karissa’s medicinal inhaler, which was still in her bag in the Georg’s room. Tom and Georg just stood there in shock as this young girl coughed herself silly. Blaine yelled from inside the bathroom, frantically searching for a cup, “She needs fresh air!”
Georg, who seemed rather entranced by the scene before him, stepped to Karissa and swiftly lifted her from the bed. He carried her, as gently as he could, to the balcony.
The cool night air whipped around the two as Georg felt Karissa’s once convulsing body begin to relax. He whispered for her to breath deeply and watched her eyes flutter close. In moments he felt Karissa’s breathing become steady, signifying a light sleep. He took this chance to look at his damsel in distress. He was rather embarrassed to find that this pretty brunette in his arms was clad in nothing but a tank top and shorts. Averting his gaze from her rather attractive form, to her face, his breath was trapped in his throat as he swore he was looking at an angel. Her nostrils flared slightly with every breath she took. The way the moonlight washed across her face made her look like a beautifully fragile doll.
“Is she okay?” Blaine and Jackie asked in unison, holding water and medicine respectively with a shocked Tom standing behind them.. Georg just breathed in deeply before he answered that she had fainted from exhaustion.
They all walked back into the room where they let a sleeping Karissa alone and went to get more bags. Paige returned with a small bowl of steaming soup, and to Blaine, a few good-looking boys.

Chapter 4 coming once I receive five billion dollars....or comments....which ever comes first....I'm thinking the money ^_^

tiklemepurple

March 19th, 2008, 11:30 PM

haha
i totally have this page bookmarked
lol

Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S

March 20th, 2008, 12:44 AM

even though i have already read part 4 please post it soon so i can get lost imagining myself with Georg....love you Blaine...

~Karissa

LipsOfAnAngel

March 20th, 2008, 01:10 PM

ok i want ch 4 now so...

5 billion dollars for you. i'll e-mail it to you. now ch 4!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lilangel02371

March 20th, 2008, 05:05 PM

lol MORE
!!!! I THINK THAT 5 MIL COMMENTS WOULD CRASH THE SIGHT AND I DONT THINK WE WANT THAT LOL MEHR UND NOW!!! BITTE?

bbgroove

March 20th, 2008, 10:24 PM

Chapter 4

Roof-top of Hotel

Once all the girls were satisfied that Karissa could handle being left alone for a few hours after that incident they accepted an offer by the boys to see Berlin at night. Georg had decided that he was perhaps a little too tired for such a trip and opted out.
Paige, Blaine, and Jackie were expecting to head down to the lobby and out into the city, a rather normal way to see the sights. But the boys surprised them by taking the girls to the roof.
Blaine's POV
I seriously shuttered as the door that separated the roof from the stairs opened, allowing a barrage of cool air to sweep across my body.
Paige and Bill suddenly went off together as Tom asked Jackie if they could talk alone. So let the awkwardness begin.
I mean really, great job guys, leave me alone with someone I haven’t even talked to, like, ever. I just started walking to the edge of the rooftop keeping my eyes on the scenery. I felt Gustav follow in suit behind me, almost quick enough to make me feel like he didn’t like being alone at night. I smiled, a young man as built as he was, and he was scared.
We reached the edge where I crossed my arms over my chest and rested myself on the lip of the building. Gustav turned his back and rested himself next to me. I ignored him, putting my full attention on the view before me. Lights flickered beautifully underneath the night sky as I saw streams of cars and people flow like rivers in between tall buildings almost fully lit with a working glow.
I turned to Gustav only to find that he wasn’t even looking at this gorgeous sight, but rather his shoes. “The view doesn’t interest you?” I questioned, perking an eyebrow and turning my body to him.
Gustav turned to me and shrugged his shoulders, “I guess I’ve seen it so many times that I’m not that impressed anymore.”
“But something like this…”I started as I opened my arms towards the city below, “…never loses it’s beauty.”
“Everything goes wrong, always” He replied, a rather infamous quote I remember hearing a few years back. I smirked at the line and pushed my upper body over the edge as I tried to get a better view below me.
“That’s rather childish don’t you think?” I responded. It was now Gustav’s turn to smirk. “But I guess I know how that feels. I’m the baby of the group,” I added looking to him and smiling lightly.
“Baby as in age or attitude?” Gustav asked, watching me as I lifted myself to sit on the lip, allowing my legs to dangle over the edge.
I giggled and replied truthfully, “Both.”
I leaned forward slightly, I really wanted to see what was going on below. Suddenly I heard a small gasp and felt strong arms wrap around my lower body. I was tugged backwards until my back hit something. At that point the momentum of the pull made me fall into Gustav’s arms.
Gustav had apparently gotten paranoid about me falling and out of instinct grabbed me and pulled me to himself. Both he and I were breathing heavily from the excitement of that moment.
“What was…” My voice hitched in my throat as I stared into his eyes. I suddenly felt my stomach flip and my legs go weak. I was lucky to be in his arms because I’m pretty sure if I were standing I would have fainted.
He smiled as he noticed my stare. I coughed lightly into my hand as he set me down. “Sorry, I didn’t mean to scare you,” Gustav apologized. I gave him a half-hearted smile as we both heard Jackie call out that we should head back down.
I raced towards her as I saw Gustav from the corner of my eye walk towards a disgruntled Tom with a slow walking Paige and Bill.

Jackie's POV

After the boys surprised us by going up to the roof Tom reached for my arm and whispered into my ear that we should talk. I shook my head yes and followed him to one side of the roof as I noticed Blaine and Paige go off with Gustav and Bill.
“So. What did you need to talk to me about?” I asked Tom resting my elbows on the rim of the building.
He looked to me and said, “I wanted to apologize for making Karissa act up like that. I should have noticed that she was there instead of just throwing those heavy bags on her. I’m sorry.”
I turned sympathetically to him, my eyes opened in shock, “ It wasn’t your fault. Karissa has been sick since before the flight, she has to get worse before she gets better.”
Tom just bit his lip and looked out to the view, I did the same.
“It’s beautiful,” I heard Tom say.
I smiled and shook my head in agreement, it really was. It marveled me how big cities never seemed to sleep. The way lights turned on and off constantly, creating a sort of light show just for me. I smiled as I heard loud honks erupting from what seemed to be a car crash, even with beauty comes pain, something I knew all too well about.
“Beautiful,” I heard tom say again as I felt a pair of eyes watching me. I turned to find him moving his eyes up and down my frame, rather dog-like.
I smiled again, but not in the way he thought I should have. “You really don’t know who you’re messing with, I know a playboy when I see one. You’re smirks, cheesy pick-up lines and rather tempt-less body language are just proof of how good you are at breaking hearts,”I stated as I backed away from the edge, “…and maybe hymens,” I added patting him gently on the cheek. His eyes were mixed with a look of confusion and rejection. I shook my head and walked back to the door of the roof.
“Guys, we should head back down. Make sure Karissa is still alive,” I yelled over to the others. Blaine ran up to my side rather breathless while Paige seemed to lag a bit longer.

Paige's POV

When we got to the roof I instinctively walked to the edge, I mean who wouldn’t with this view. You could see for miles upon miles. I laughed a bit with excitement.
“I wanted to say thank you,” I heard Bill say as he came to my side. I furrowed my brows and gave him a quizzical stare.
“Thank me for what?” I asked turning my body to him and leaning my hip on the edge. He just smiled this puppy dog smile that melted my heart.
“I was raised to thank people who gave me a complement,” Bill added, hoping I would catch on. I just stood there with the same perplexed look as before as my hair lightly whipped around my face.
Bill sighed, he would have to say it, “In the kitchen. You said I was beautiful.”
My eyes flew open in surprise as, I’m sure, my face turned a deep red.
“I did? Uhm. Well, you see…I….the soup…nervous,” I muttered. I heard Bill begin to laugh a little.
“Don’t worry. I just wanted to return the favor.” Bill replied. I looked at him quickly and just began to mumble incoherently again. He brought his hand to my face and asked me, “Do you know who I am?”
A rather strange question to ask, but I answered with the only things I did know, “Your name is Bill Kaulitz. I met you three hours ago making soup. You have a twin brother….Oh, and you’re gorgeous,” I replied pulling one of my fingers with every count.
He seemed to sigh in relief as he let go of my face and just stared into my eyes.
“Gorgeous? I thought it was just Beautiful,” Bill joked. I elbowed him playfully at his sarcastic remark. The rest of our conversation went on like that, witty bantering and flirtatious interactions.
We both heard Jackie yell for us to leave as I saw Blaine dart to her side while Gustav walked to Tom who looked rather dejected. Bill grabbed my hand, forcing me to walk a little slower, we talked in whispers as we followed the group down the stairs.

tiklemepurple

March 20th, 2008, 10:41 PM

BURN!!
tom got rejected!!!!
write more!!

XxInyourNightmarexX

March 21st, 2008, 12:17 PM

Haha. Poor Tom.

I like this.

LipsOfAnAngel

March 21st, 2008, 12:26 PM

haha love it! mehr bitte!

luvukaulitztwins

March 21st, 2008, 01:02 PM

IT'S AWESOME MORE PLZ POST WHEN U CAN.

cherry_kaulitz

March 21st, 2008, 02:55 PM

haha plz do more if ya can i prolly woulda said the said the same to tom cuz like most of my guy friendz are like that and i can read those kinda guys HAHA BUT STILL UBER CUTE
IN FRONT OF BILL I WOULDA MELTED BUT GOT BACK UP AND START TALKING TO HIM LIKE YA SO PLZ DO MORRRREEEEEEEE :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

bbgroove

March 21st, 2008, 04:39 PM

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uJYowqb6LU0

This was the trailer I made a while ago for this fanfic. Please watch it while I give myself some time to type up the rest f the chapters that I've written.

I'm also In the process of making music videos for each couple and one dedicated to the girls....hope you like

LipsOfAnAngel

March 21st, 2008, 05:36 PM

sweet!!! i loved the video! can't wait to read ch 5!

drummergirl24

March 21st, 2008, 06:09 PM

Dang you! I was hoping that you typed more of it ya a-hole! I just reread everything and it's safe to say I love it even more now that it is official...that makes sense right...? Anyway I love YOU!

bbgroove

March 21st, 2008, 07:01 PM

Dang you! I was hoping that you typed more of it ya a-hole! I just reread everything and it's safe to say I love it even more now that it is official...that makes sense right...? Anyway I love YOU!

good God Jackie! lol.
I was scared that someone actually called me an a**hole, and the fact that they've already read most of it, but then I read that it was you, so I laughed. LOL
I love you too....promise I'll type up more by tomorrow....*muah*

blutundliebe

March 22nd, 2008, 01:11 AM

I absolutely <3 my character!!!! Bill makes my soul shiver!!!!! Danke schon. You can have my four-pack of Chips Ahoy...except...you're not here...so I'll eat them for you. Just know that I WOULD'VE given them to you.

Actually...you know me better than that...I would have never given them to you.

Anyway...I TOLD you guys I would read your stories. I just have to have the right amount of time.

I LOVE BILL!!!

Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S

March 22nd, 2008, 11:28 AM

come on!!!!!!!!!you really need to finish my part before I leave for Mexico!!!!!Hello other friends who love me(Jackie and Paige) and wrose than you guys I reasd it almost every day That I was allowed on the internet...please post more soon....

~love Princess(Karissa)

cherry_kaulitz

March 22nd, 2008, 03:44 PM

OMG i LOVE the vid/trailer omg

love da fanfic plz do more cherry love yooh!!!!!!i think you are gonna be a movie director/writer/trailer maker so yayayaya
OK ByE-bYE BUT MORE PLZ :D :D :D :) :)

bbgroove

March 22nd, 2008, 11:17 PM

I've finally typed up a few more chapters....but so I don't have to force you guys to wait forever before I post a chapter...I'm waiting one day in between each chapter before I post a new one...

I am posting Chapter 5 tomorrow (3/23/08) it's short, but I decided to make this like a book, I can regulate my time much better that way... hope you understand

if you have any questions or concerns or anything, I do not mind you commenting on my youtube or messaging/commenting me on this thread

luv ya peeps (cuz it's easter 2marra ^_^)

Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S

March 23rd, 2008, 09:05 AM

but ill be gone tomorrow....darn....now i ahve to wait all week to see what happens to me....

bbgroove

March 23rd, 2008, 12:57 PM

CHAPTER 5
It had been five days since the girls met the boys, at which point things started to get weirder.

Starting with Bill and Paige

It seemed rather meant to be that they met in the kitchen that night because from that small flirtation on they have been inseparable, except from 7 pm until the next morning. The morning would start with Paige jumping out of bed at 5 and racing through a quick shower and dress-up, where afterwards, Bill and her would meet in the lobby. They’d spend the day hanging around in the game room of the hotel, or chilling out on the roof. But once that clock struck 7 he was out of there and away from Paige.
Paige shivered lightly as the wind of Berlin swept across her frame when she walked through the doors to the roof. Bill hugged his sweatshirt tight around himself before walking behind Paige and rubbing his hands up and down her arms for warmth.
Paige leaned into his comforting touch before turning around to face him. “You mind if we just do the stairwell today,” Paige asked walking out of Bill’s arms and towards the door.
Bill furrowed his brows in confusion and turned yelling out to Paige, “You didn’t even wait to see if I’d say okay.”
“Please. Your jacket is thinner than mine, not to mention tighter,” Paige joked, opening the door and waving for Bill to go first. Bill smiled and strutted through the doors. He suddenly turned around before Paige could come in and shut the door in her face.
He heard a yelp come from behind the door coupled with a few bangs and muffled curses. He laughed hard at Paige’s predicament, basking in his triumph of wits over his blonde companion. Just as Bill began to cheer for his victory he groaned in pain as the door opened and he jerked forward. Paige grunted as she used her body to pull the door open. The two began a tug-of-war with the door.
“Let me in!” Paige yelled with a laugh, shutting her eyes with each jerk of her arms.
Bill just laughed maniacally in response before saying, “Never!”
The two continued in their battle before Bill thought of a great idea. Suddenly, and without warning, Bill let go of the door completely, causing Paige to stumble backwards. But, like a cat, Paige regained her balance and used the chance to race through the closing door and onto Bill.
They laughed loudly in the stairwell before sitting on the steps and relaxing into conversation.
Bill exhaled deeply and looked to Paige. Her eyes were rather wide with laughter and a question began to form in his mind. “If you could choose any color in the universe to change your eye color to, what would it be?” Bill asked, unzipping his jacket, as he began to feel hot from the excitement.
“Red,” Paige stated as she clasped her hands together rather giddily.
“Wow, you’d seriously die your eye color red?” Bill laughed at her response. Paige just shook her head in satisfaction as she opened her eyes wider and stared intently at Bill. Bill did the same and brought his face close to her. Paige gritted her teeth lightly as Bill came closer.
“She Shinks my Sheriasis ish shhhhh-exy,” Paige joked as she lifted her nose and made weird faces at the spikey haired teen beside her. Bill’s face began to turn a shade of red as he laughed harder. In the midst of all the laughter a loud beeping suddenly started from Bill’s back jean pocket. Paige stopped her fit of laughter and pouted just in time for Bill to look at her apologetically and dash down the stairs.
A few minutes passed before Paige shook her head sadly.
“Bill. What are you doing?” Paige muttered to herself as she pushed herself up from the steps and walked down the stairs as well.

chapter 5, part 2 coming soon...promise

luvukaulitztwins

March 23rd, 2008, 01:21 PM

MEHR MEHR MEHR BITTE *gets on knees and begs for more pouts and gives puppy dog eyes*

Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S

March 23rd, 2008, 01:51 PM

oooo....you added more to it i love it...well please post all of chapter 5 out....

Love Princess

bbgroove

March 23rd, 2008, 02:14 PM

Chapter 5 PT. 2
Persisted with Jackie and Tom.
It was rather a different story for Jackie and Tom. Tom couldn’t leave Jackie alone. He seemed infatuated with her, which was not the same case for Jackie. But no matter how much she complained about his impeccable choice in flowers and gifts, she secretly enjoyed the attention. She would be reading a book in the silence of the relaxation room of the hotel and he would pop up. To be nice she of course would converse with him, and after the first full day of talking she actually grew to like his company.
Jackie gave a small grunt as she plopped herself on the fluffy chair in the relaxation room. She reached over the arm rest and grabbed a book from her purse as she heard the door open quietly. Jackie didn’t need to look up, she already knew it was Tom.
“Hello beautiful girl,” Tom flirted as he sat himself in the chair opposite of the red head.
Jackie shook her head and stated, “Give up, you know it’s never going to happen.”
Tom smirked lightly as he reached over and pulled Jackie’s book away from her face. Jackie stared in shock for a moment before pulling the book back up.
“A guy can’t tell a friend that she’s beautiful?” Tom asked innocently as he once again reached for the book.
Jackie quickly tugged it away from his reach and answered him haughtily, “Friends? I thought the point of your immaculate gifts were to make sure we were more than that.”
“So you admit that you liked my gifts,” Tom teased scooting closer to the edge of his chair so he could be closer to Jackie. Jackie gave a witty giggle in response and placed her book back in front of her face.
“Come on, just one kiss,” Tom pleaded puppy-like. Jackie just glanced over the edge of her book and replied with a quick ‘never.’
“You do realize that you’re flirting with me, right?” Tom continued subconsciously running his tongue over his lip ring, something Jackie found rather annoying.
“How am I doing that,” she replied, bringing her attention back to the novel in her hands. Tom opened his mouth to respond when his left pocket began to vibrate. Jackie coughed back a laugh at how he clumsily searched for his cell phone in the depths of his pants. He jumped up quickly and smirked to Jackie, “See me later?”
Jackie rolled here eyes and said sarcastically, “It’s not like you won’t find me…. stalker.”
Tom just winked playfully and sauntered out the door.

Chapter 5 PT 3+4 coming in an hour....promise...if it's not up y 1:20 then you may hate me vigorously.

luvukaulitztwins

March 23rd, 2008, 02:18 PM

MEHR BITTE MEHR MEHR MEHR BITTE

Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S

March 23rd, 2008, 02:41 PM

more...more...more....

bbgroove

March 23rd, 2008, 02:51 PM

Chapter 5 PT 3
Prolonged with Blaine and Gustav
Blaine avoided Gustav for the better part of those five days slightly embarrassed at her schoolgirl antics on the roof. But, for some strange reason, that saying about absence making the heart grow fonder, applied directly to her. Blaine could remember distinctly where his hands were placed as he grabbed her from the edge, the way his hot breathe tickled her neck and face from the excitement of the moment. Thinking about it gve her goose bumps, he was just too hot to handle, literally.
Her fears had to be faced though, because every afternoon after dinner she would head off to the pool and as she entered, Gustav would always be leaving. It wasn’t fair of him, walking out with his rippling muscles dripping from the water. Blaine didn’t stand a chance. Blaine’s feelings just deepened as her fears became bigger.
Blaine huffed lightly, she knew that not going to the pool was a VERY logical option, but it just didn’t feel right to Blaine. Blaine was one who acted on emotion rather than logic, a gift and curse. So if she missed even one day of pool time at a hotel, she felt as if she were in a funk of sorts.
So every day, after dinner with the girls, she would strap on her purple halter topped, boy short-bikini and go to the pool. She timed it perfectly ever night, always able to see Gustav leave through the doors as she entered so no awkwardness need apply. Today, her timing was off, she blamed it on the weatherman, no reason why, she just did. Instead of coming just in time to see Gustav leave, she was a few minutes early, because he was still in the pool, swimming to the edge.
“Would you mind passing me that towel,” Gustav asked Blaine. Her eyes widened in shock as he lifted himself from the pool, water dripping from his body. Blaine gulped and felt her knees go weak beneath her.
“Next to you. On the table. To your right,” Gustav stated slowly, walking closer to Blaine. He looked at her with confusion, she looked sick to him instead of hormone-struck.
Blaine snapped out of her stupor when she felt Gustav place his palm on her forehead. She quickly grabbed the towel and shoved it into his chest just in time for Gustav’s cell phone to ring loudly.
He excused himself quickly as Blaine thanked God silently.

Chapter 5 PT 4 coming in no less than half an hour....maybe even 15 minutes

luvukaulitztwins

March 23rd, 2008, 02:57 PM

Ok can't wait to read the next bit :shock: IM HYPER HYPER HYPER HYPER.*jumps up and down while waiting for next bit* KAJOBA KAJOBA KAJOBA.

Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S

March 23rd, 2008, 03:12 PM

sorry it took so long for me to read that part but i want to know what happens next...because its my part....i kind of love you a lot oh! and Happy Easter...

bbgroove

March 23rd, 2008, 03:21 PM

Chapter 5 PT 4
And ended with Karissa and Georg.
Karissa and Georg were opposites of their blonde and raven-haired pool pals. Georg was drawn to Karissa, uncontrollably drawn to her.
He grew close to Blaine, someone he considered a friend, even after five days. Blaine and Georg would conspire closely on how Georg could swoon Karissa to her knees. Blaine told Georg everything she remembered of her best friend, and Georg happily soaked up the information.
“…and her favorite color is orange,” Georg listed off Karissa’s favorites. Blaine smiled half-heartedly at him before scrunching up her nose.
“You’re right….it’s just, you’re not being you if you mold your interests to hers,” Blaine stated.
Georg snorted a laugh and responded, “And you think I can get her by being me?”
He pushed himself from the chair he sat in and crossed his arms over his chest in defense. Blaine sighed deeply and walked over to him, placing her hand gently on his shoulder.
“If I really believed you could only get her with lies then you obviously don’t know me, or Krissa,” Blaine stated. She shook her head and replicated Gerog’s defensive stance.
She tossed her hair over her shoulder in a haughty manner as she added, “You can’t lie to her, mainly because she knows a liar when she sees one, and because I really believe that she’d love you just the way you are.”
Georg puckerd his lips together and clasped his hands jokingly, “You weally sfink so?”
Blaine laughed loudly at his sarcasm and punched him lightly in the arm before she stopped and opened her eyes wide. She smiled at Georg and stated, “Bet you that she’ll fall for you if you just be yourself. A hundred bucks.”
Georg gladly accepted, but just as he shook Blaine’s hand, she turned and ran into the bathroom muttering, “Show time then.”
Just as Blaine shut the door behind her, the hotel door opened and in popped a healthier looking Karissa. She turned and gave a yelp as she noticed Georg sitting on the edge of the bed. “Good God Geog, you could give someone a heart attack like that,” Karissa exhaled taking off her jacket and placing neatly on one of the hangers in the closet.
“Sorry. Uhm, I was waiting for Blaine. I promised to help her buy a gift for her sister, I know the best souvenir place around here,” Georg lied professionally extracting a small grunt from an annoyed Blaine in the bathroom.
Karissa just shook her head in acknowledgement and replied, “I need to get some stuff for my sisters too, mind if I join?”
“Well, considering how Blaine hasn’t shown up, you wanna take her place?” Georg asked, smirking at his ingenious ploy to get Karissa really alone, instead of one of her friends within earshot.
Blaine sighed deeply, how in the world Karissa didn't know Georg liked her was beyond all human knowledge. "Gah! Karissa, just jump him already!" Blaine whispered to herself
“Sure, let me grab my purse. You want to get something to eat too?” Karissa added to her acceptance as she went to her luggage and pulled a bag from it. Blaine laughed at how fluidly Karissa's response to Georg worked with her own statement.
Georg smiled in joy before his cell phone began to ring. He looked to Karissa, then to his phone a groaned as he rushed out the doors, yelling ‘rain check’ behind him as he left. Blaine burst through the bathroom doors nearly giving Karissa her second heart attack of the night, “****it Georg!”
Karissa looked at her friend in shock as Blaine coughed and said, “Hehe. Um, anyone up for dinner?”

Chapter 6 up tomorrow......yay!

Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S

March 23rd, 2008, 03:27 PM

lol!!!i loved it!!!i am cute....I kind of love you a lot and I miss you...i hope that you will have an amazing week for Spring Break if I don't tell you before I leave...And guess what im wearing Orange right now!!! I got some shirts yesterday!!! Oh!! sorry I didnt call you back last night it was like by the time I got the message...my phone didn't ring and well me and my parents started to watch a movie... Blaine i love you!!!

Love Princess

luvukaulitztwins

March 23rd, 2008, 05:17 PM

:shock: a bet naughty Georg TUT TUT is he playing her or wat or does he reli like her I NEED TO KNOW

bbgroove

March 23rd, 2008, 05:18 PM

bbgroove

March 23rd, 2008, 05:19 PM

:shock: a bet naughty Georg TUT TUT is he playing her or wat or does he reli like her I NEED TO KNOW

most will be answered 2marra....promise

cherry_kaulitz

March 23rd, 2008, 08:31 PM

love it kkkkkkkk buh-bye

tiklemepurple

March 23rd, 2008, 09:06 PM

haha!!
so cute!!
and you are so fast!!

LipsOfAnAngel

March 23rd, 2008, 09:07 PM

wow, i missed a lot. loving it!!! mehr bitte!

drummergirl24

March 24th, 2008, 11:04 AM

Ohhh I miss so much when I go camping...Hot **** I loved my part! Flirtacious banter is soooo much fun...and Tom's so hot! I loved everyone else's parts too just not as much as mine of course I am biased! You are wonderful! There I complimented you. NOW WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

bbgroove

March 24th, 2008, 03:58 PM

Chapter 6
Paige walked down the hallway and to the girls’ room somberly as she shook her head and sighed every few minutes. She slipped the card key into the door slot and pushed open the door gently as she heard unison ‘hellos’ from Blaine and Karissa.
“You want to come with us to get some pizza?” Blaine asked from the bathroom as she tugged off her bathing suit top and replaced it with a black cotton bra and bohemian top. Karissa jumped to Paige’s side and reached behind the blonde for a pair of jeans that hung in the closet.
“I’m buyin’,” Karissa stated as she took of her previous pair of jeans and put on the new ones that had a small rose imprinted on the front right pocket. Paige just shrugged off her jacket and threw it to the bed.
“Did she just NOT freak out over food?” Jackie stated as she walked through the door.
Karissa reached her hand over to touch Paige’s forehead lightly and said quite seriously, “I think she might have caught what I got.” Paige swapped away her hand and fell backwards onto the bed, groaning lightly.
“The gestation period wasn’t long enough for any of us to contract any virus. Unless the cold was possibly breaking all laws of medical science and could live outside of the body for more than a nanosecond,” Blaine stated as she popped her head out of the bathroom, half her hair tied up, the other preparing for a date with a straightener. All three girls perked an eyebrow in disbelief as they switched their attention from each other to Blaine, then to Paige.
Paige snorted as she laughed lightly, “That’s what we get for being friends with a med student. Next thing you know, she’ll be telling us how pizza is BAD for you.”
Jackie smiled at her friend’s sarcasm as she went to the dresser and pulled out a new shirt to wear out. Karissa smirked as she walked to the suit case next to the bed and pulled out a skirt and leggings and threw them onto Paige, “Wear these, they make you look less ugly.”
Paige opened her eyes in shock and turned her body so that she fell off the bed and onto Karissa, “You must mean I look fabulous in these!” Both girls laughed loudly and wrestled on the floor for a bit as Blaine and Jackie decided to ignore them and continue with their appearance preparations.
As Jackie attempted to walk around the tangled limbs of Paige and Karissa Karissa kicked out her leg and knocked Jackie on her but. Suddenly the whole room erupted into laughter as all three girls began to wrestle, with no apparent end in sight.
Blaine once again stuck out her head out o the bathroom, her hair now completely straight. She smiled widely as she set her body up and raced towards the pile of girls, yelling, ‘CAWABONGA!”
The wrestling match escalated when Jackie grabbed a pillow from the bed and began to swing it around. Each girl grabbed one and the battle continued.

The Streets of Berlin

“Blaine, stop complaining!” Paige stated, pushing her hands deep into her pockets. The girls decided to walk around town to find a place to eat and found themselves growing less and less hungry as time passed. Considering how they were out on the town anyways, they decided to stroll and see the sights a bit.
“I seriously think that one boob is smaller now, you shouldn’t have hit me so hard with that pillow,” Blaine complained, jabbing a finger into her right, apparently smaller, boob. The girls laughed as a group of young men passed with questioning glances at Blaine who now was in the process of groping herself to compare the sizes. Jackie quickly swatted Blaine’s hands down and laughed loudly as Blaine merely perked an eyebrow at the staring young men and continued her walk.
“Gosh! What was their problem?” Blaine asked as Karissa interjected sarcastically, “Yeah! Can’t a girl grope herself in public without people staring?”
Blaine glared at Karissa before Paige yelled for their attention, “Hey guys! It’s the boys!”
Jackie searched the streets for the outline of four boys but found nothing, “I don’t see them.” Blaine patted Jackie on the shoulder as she pointed to where Paige really meant the boys were.
In front of them, on a huge window panel were Bill, Tom, Georg and Gustav in a power pose with the words ‘Tokio Hotel’ underneath. The girls stood their in complete shock unable to comprehend what information they were being given.
"At least we found out where Tokio Hotel is," Jackie stated.
"Rather who," Karissa added.
"If it's who, then we still don't know them," Paige replied in annoyance as the girls just stood there in shocked silence.

Chapter 7 up in 2 days..... YAY!!!!!!! maybe

lilangel02371

March 24th, 2008, 05:53 PM

That was AMAZZZING!!! MEHR!!!

tiklemepurple

March 24th, 2008, 05:57 PM

naught boys for keeping a secret from them
tsk tsk

drummergirl24

March 24th, 2008, 07:08 PM

Gahhhhh it's so good....You are leaving me hanging now I have nothing to do with the rest of my day! Gimme more about Tom and Jackie they are so cute together *wink*....in my mind we are...

LipsOfAnAngel

March 24th, 2008, 08:15 PM

oh no they found out!!!!! mehr bitte!

bbgroove

March 25th, 2008, 01:17 PM

So I made a promise to myself that I would upload the fanfic no more than every two days.... but I realized that I have some filler that I could post in between each chapter to keep you guys interested....

so here is the cover of US GIRLS.... obviously the girls shown on the cover are not Blaine, Jackie, Karissa and Paige, but famous people. We chose this because we wanted to keep our anonymity, but trust me when I say that these choices were the closest to our actual physical characteristics as we could get.... do not assume they are twin-like, please, the last thing we want is for all of you to think that we look like them when they are just close replacements. I hope you understand

Purlple-Blaine
Cyan-Jackie
Orange-Karissa
Red-Paige
http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x174/bbgroove/120646644275629.gif

luvukaulitztwins

March 25th, 2008, 02:23 PM

MEHR MEHR MEHR BITTE and the thing that you have done LOOKS AWESOME I THINK UR STORY SULD B INTO A FILM THEN GET A HUGE AWARD FOR IT

drummergirl24

March 26th, 2008, 11:11 AM

Oh it is sooo wonderful...that biotch Hayley Williams stealin my man...control the anger...just kidding! It's wonderful! Now write more of the story good grief!

bbgroove

March 26th, 2008, 11:51 AM

Chapter 7
The girls huffed loudly as one by one they entered their hotel room. Paige ripped her jacket off of her body and threw it violently into the closet as Jackie paced in front of the bed. Blaine and Karissa crashed onto the chairs in the room and grunted with annoyance in unison before Paige began to rant.
“HOW DARE HE! HOW DARE THEY! KEEPING A ****ING SECRET LIKE……LIKE…….THAT!” Paige screamed at the top of her lungs as the other girls just stared at her outburst. Jackie, surprised at Paige’s cries reached over and grabbed her purse from the dresser and walked out the door without a word. Karissa bit her bottom lip until it turned a raw red before she huffed in anger and followed Jackie out the door. Neither of the two able to cope with the events of the night through outburst cries.
Paige continued to rant as Blaine just sat there in thought, listening empathetically.
“…and you know what makes it worse?” Paige seethed out as she turned her attention to Blaine who sat silently. Blaine huffed a small ‘what?’ before she pushed herself from the chair she sat in and walked over to her steaming friend.
“The way that he lied so…so casually. No stutter in his voice, no tremble of guilt. We’ve been inseparable since we’ve met, and he’s lied to me this entire time,” Paige stated as her countenance drastically switched from anger to a form of sadness. She choked back a cry as she squared her jaw and straightened her brows. Blaine looked at her best friend and thought of anything that could possibly her cheer up.
“They say that casual lying is a characteristic of sociopaths. If he wanted to kill you, he would have done it by now, that’s one good thing he’s done…or rather, hasn’t done,” Blaine failed miserably at a joke.
Paige looked to her friend with a perked eyebrow and smiled lightly, “Your cheer up jokes suck, you know that?”
Blaine smiled widely as she hugged her blonde friend and stated, “Yeah, I know….but, you love me anyways.”
“Ehh. You’re okay,” Paige replied sarcastically before Blaine elbowed her lightly.
“He probably had a good reason for not telling you…” Blaine stated as she rubbed her friends back in reassuring circles. Paige shook her head in disagreement before looking at the raven-haired teen next to her. A knock came at the door and woke the girls from their stupor. The girls stared at it for a moment when a second knock came, followed by a familiar voice.
“Paige, you want to watch a movie?” Bill said from the other side of the door. Blaine and Paige looked at each other with worried glances. Paige nodded ‘yes’ before Blaine walked and opened the door. Bill smiled friendly at Blaine before noticing a brooding Paige on the edge of the bed.
“I’m gonna go out for a walk…call me if…you know” Blaine stated as she walked out the door with her hand in a phone form at her ear. Paige just shook her head and watched Blaine smile reassuringly as she walked out.
“Hey beautiful!” Bill greeted as he sat next to Paige and kissed her on the head seeing as she refused to look at him. Bill licked his lips lightly before he furrowed his brows in confusion at Paige. He placed his hand on her shoulder but she just shrugged it away. Paige got up from the bed and walked out onto the balcony.
Bill followed in suit. He walked to Paige’s side and tried to get her attention, “What’s the matter?”
Paige turned to him and bit her bottom lip as her eyes began to water, “Where you going to tell me?” Paige reached into her pocket slowly and pulled out a folded piece of paper. She unwrapped it and pushed it into Bill’s hands. Bill grabbed it from his chest and stared at it, his face erupting into a countenance of surprise and guilt. Paige let a few tears fall at the sight of his reaction before he replied.
“I was going to tell you…” Bill started, but Paige just waved her hands in front of her face and interrupted him.
“You seriously thought I wouldn’t find out. Telling me about this should have been the first thing you said to me!” Paige said, her voice raising to a higher pitch as she let her tears flow down her face.
“What did you expect me to say? Hi, I’m Bill Kaulitz famous front man of a world-dominating band called Tokio Hotel, pleased to meet you? That would have gone well,” Bill stated defensively crumbling up the mini poster he held in his hands and throwing it to the ground.
“How would that have changed ANYTHING?” Paige screamed before she choked back a few tears and pushed Bill hard on the chest.
“It would have changed everything! I wanted you to want me for who I am, not because I’m rich and famous. Do you have any idea how many people have lied about knowing who I am, what I believe in because they wanted fame and money?” Bill shot back as he walked back to Paige, his face mere inches from her’s.
“I would have still loved you!” Paige yelled back before she realized her slip and slapped her hand over her mouth. Bill blinked back in shock and straightened himself. Paige lowered her hands her lips quivering as she watched Bill watch her.
Time stood still as Bill watched Paige’s hair whip around her tear stained face in the cool night wind. The moonlight on her tears made her face shimmer like a jewel, and before he knew it he had grabbed her tearstained cheeks and captured her lips with his own.

Uploads coming tomorrow.... ^_^

luvukaulitztwins

March 26th, 2008, 12:01 PM

:mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: DNT CHAPTER WAS AWESOME RELI THIS WULD B A WINNING BLOCKBUSTER IF IT WAS A FILM :mrgreen:

xgennevievex

March 26th, 2008, 01:59 PM

My breath has been taken away. This story is amazing. It's so hard to describe how great and amazing this is. The trailer you made was marvelous as well as this story. Man i love it so much. I think you should make this into like a tv series type thing.

LipsOfAnAngel

March 26th, 2008, 02:23 PM

*shaking fist up and down [don't know why, just am]* AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!! :o :o AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok, mehr bitte!!!!!!!! :mrgreen:

tiklemepurple

March 26th, 2008, 02:40 PM

gggggggggggaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!

drummergirl24

March 26th, 2008, 03:39 PM

bbgroove

March 26th, 2008, 03:44 PM

lilangel02371

March 26th, 2008, 03:51 PM

MORE!!! SOON AND NOW WOULD BE NICE THAT WAS AMMZZZZZZZZZZZZZING!!!

drummergirl24

March 26th, 2008, 03:53 PM

Oh man...I am dumbfounded. I was seriously excellent and I'm even kind of ****** at the boys now...you sucked me in...now I'm kind of ****** that it's over!HA! It was wonderful, yet again! One request...write more about me and Tom please?!

No worries sweetie...you and Tom are up next...^_^
YESSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!! By the way the cover is killer and my computer finally loaded the picture that you have on your signature...wicked

xgennevievex

March 26th, 2008, 04:05 PM

You should write a fanfiction using me
: D
Because i'm great
Lol
Jk
But it would be totally cool
: D

bbgroove

March 26th, 2008, 04:28 PM

You should write a fanfiction using me
: D
Because i'm great
Lol
Jk
But it would be totally cool
: D

I'd love to write a fanfic about you...you wouldn't mind it being a one-shot right?

I just need your
name:
fav th member:
birthday:
physical description:
Does your character know about TH or is it a surprise:
a quote you really want to be said in the one-shot:
and any other random thing you want, like a certain feeling, breakup, makeup, a telephone, a concert....

and I'll post it after I upload the next chapter for this story.... promise

xgennevievex

March 26th, 2008, 04:33 PM

bbgroove

March 26th, 2008, 04:43 PM

xgennevievex

March 26th, 2008, 04:47 PM

bbgroove

March 26th, 2008, 04:50 PM

You don't have to make one for me lol
I just thought it would be a cool thing
I reallly love your story here.
Maybe one day if you make up another fanfictions i could be in it.
I don't want to storm you with stuff : D

A one-shot is really no problem at all.....
I'll probably have it finished by fri. at the latest....
I like to write...
no burden

xgennevievex

March 26th, 2008, 04:57 PM

bbgroove

March 26th, 2008, 05:03 PM

xgennevievex

March 26th, 2008, 05:08 PM

All of them blehhhhh
I suck
:/

I guess i could narrow it down Gustav or Tom

xgennevievex

March 26th, 2008, 05:09 PM

I would say Tom i suppose

bbgroove

March 26th, 2008, 05:18 PM

okie day... I just nee the other info and I shall have that one-shot up for you by fri.

xgennevievex

March 26th, 2008, 05:36 PM

I just need your
name: Gennevieve
fav th member: Tom
birthday: April 16th
physical description: Dark cherry red hair with blond on the underneath of the bangs and the hair.Rests just in the middle of her shoulder blades medium length layers and side swept bangs. Very light brown eyes. sharp features. Strong jaw line and button nose. Ummm 5'8 full but slimming figure. I think thats all.
Does your character know about TH or is it a surprise: No not really.
a quote you really want to be said in the one-shot: ummmm to me you'll be forever sacred or doesn't count far or near i am here
and any other random thing you want, like a certain feeling, breakup, makeup, a telephone, a concert: Whatever i kinda want her to be the girl that turns tom around and knocks him off his feet : D

bbgroove

March 27th, 2008, 05:35 PM

Chapter 8
Jackie sighed in relief as she entered the elevator, the sound of a screaming Paige drifting farther and farther away form her ears. As the elevator doors closed Jackie leaned against the wall and tilted her head back. She bit her lip until it went a raw red and rubbing her palms over her face in annoyance Jackie suddenly began to cry, tears escaping from between her fingertips.
In her moment of despondency Jackie didn’t hear the elevator doors open to a rather tired looking Tom. Upon seeing a crying Jackie Tom wasted no time in entering the elevator and walking to her side.
“Jackie? What’s the matter?” Tom asked as he placed his hand on her shoulder. Jackie jerked away from his touch and quickly began to wipe away the tears from her eyes. She sniffed back the tears as she looked, with red-eyes, at the dred-ed blonde next to her. She quickly lunged towards the closing elevator doors and forced them to open as she walked out to the lobby. Tom stared at her in confusion as he quickly followed in suit.
“Jackie! Jackie, wait!” Tom called out to the rushing redhead. Jackie just ignored him as she raced through the lobby and into the relaxation room. Tom ran after her still calling for her to stop.
“Jackie! Tell me what’s wrong,” Tom called out again as he reached at her shoulder and turned her around to face him. Jackie pushed his hands off of her and quickly pulled out a small poster from her pocket and shoved it into Tom’s face.
“You want to know what’s wrong? THAT is what’s wrong,” Jackie cried softly, looking at Tom for any reaction of guilt. Tom’s eyes rose in shock before he crumpled the poster in his right hand and threw it over his shoulder. He looked at the crying teen before him and suddenly turned stoic.
“I guess it just slipped my mind,” He said shrugging his shoulders and turning his back on her.
“No! The name of your third grade teacher slips your mind. Remembering to get eggs can just slip your mind. Being an international superstar ISN’T SOMETHING THAT JUST SLIPS YOUR MIND!” She yelled, her face becoming red with heated anger. Jackie walked so her and Tom were face to face.
“You really expect me to want to date you now? Why would you keep a secret like that?” Jackie questioned harshly as she bent over and picked up the poster.
Tom perked his eyebrows in surprise at Jackie’s outburst and replied abrasively, “THS! You, me! That’s why I didn’t tell you!”
Tom walked closer to Jackie and continued talking in a lower tone, “You are probably THE only girl I’ve ever met that hasn’t fallen shirt over skirt for me. I liked the fact that I have to work for you to notice me. I liked fighting for your affections.”
Jackie’s breathing slowed down slightly as Tom came closer with every word he said to her. He looked t her for any reaction, and when all he got was a rather bewildered Jackie, he turned his back on her and sat down on the couch.
Tom subconsciously licked his tongue over his lip-ring and added, “I lied because I LOVED fighting for an angel.”
Jackie suddenly felt her body get hot as she stared at Tom’s lip action and listened to his hear-felt words. She began to breath faster to keep control of her hormones as Tom stood up and faced her again. “I guess, I love you,” Tom stated as he stared into Jackie’s eyes.
“You shouldn’t have said that,” Jackie replied, closing her eyes lightly as she heard Tom answer back.
“I wanted to,” Tom said quietly.
Jackie fluttered her eyes open as she looked at Tom intently. Tom waited silently for a reply as he suddenly felt the lightest of touches on his arm. Jackie traced her fingertips up his arms and onto his neck. Her right palm rested gently on his cheek as she nudged him to lower his face to her own. Tom complied silently as he felt her warm breath tickle his lips before feeling her lips with his own.
It was the lightest of kisses, light enough to make you believe it didn’t happen. Tom, unsatisfied with the gentleness of it all, grabbed Jackie by the waist and pulled her closer to him as he deepened the kiss.
In between each kiss Tom said jokingly, “I thought you would never---.”
Jackie interrupted him with a hard kiss and replied, “Shut up and kiss me, stalker.” Tom willingly obliged to her command before he heard a small moan escape Jackie’s lips and smiled.

Chpater 9 tomorrow!!!! yay!

xgennevievex

March 27th, 2008, 05:55 PM

Jeeez girl you have talent. I really love this story a lot.
It amazes me. I really do think that it should be made into a live action series one day lol

SCHREIoutLOUD

March 27th, 2008, 05:58 PM

If you get some free time, I wouldn't mind you writing one about me either. =] I love getting all tingly and bleh slkjdshglkdsjg. XD That's why I read these, especially when I can relate to characters. Lol

name: Taylor, But.. Use the name Yana or Suri.
fav th member: Bill of Course <3 Tom Second.
birthday: July 29th
physical description: Medium height, Lightweight, Naturally Blonde, dyed with black streaks. Hazel eyes.. blah blah blah. Big feet, lmao. Yep.
Does your character know about TH or is it a surprise: Knows =]
a quote you really want to be said in the one-shot: " WOULD YOU STOP BOUNCING AROUND LIKE A MONKEY TRYING TO **** A BASKETBALL!.... I need to talk to you.." XD
and any other random thing you want, like a certain feeling, breakup, makeup, a telephone, a concert....

Hmm. *thinks* I dunooo.

Let's have an affair with Tom! rofl. XD

bbgroove

March 27th, 2008, 06:05 PM

tiklemepurple

March 27th, 2008, 06:25 PM

i
love
you
i think i just drooled a bit

drummergirl24

March 27th, 2008, 06:35 PM

OOOOoooo I'm giggling like a little schoolgirl and I'm blushing, Blaine, I'm blushing! Oh my goodness I loved it!!!! AHH I can't sit still lip ring....tongue...shirt over skirt (which I loved by the way!)...tender Tom kisses...Oh I better have sweet dreams tonight!

tiklemepurple

March 27th, 2008, 07:12 PM

i read it again
:shock:
it was just as good
:shock:
but i knew from the very beginning that this ff would be soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good

LipsOfAnAngel

March 28th, 2008, 02:28 PM

AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! mehr bitte!!!!!!!!!

lilangel02371

March 28th, 2008, 03:49 PM

*runs around screaming and drooling lol* THAT WAS AWESOME I OLOVED IT!! **** TOM MAKING EVERYONE FALL FOR HIM! lol it's a good thing too

Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S

March 29th, 2008, 11:50 PM

you know its not really nice to not leave me hanging like this...especially after a long trip from Mexico...

Jackie you are an r-tard!!!

bbgroove

March 30th, 2008, 12:24 AM

you know its not really nice to not leave me hanging like this...especially after a long trip from Mexico...

Jackie you are an r-tard!!!

I'm sorry sweetie... I have writer's block for you and Georg... even with me and Gustav... I'll update on mon. though... promiseeeeeeee

Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S

March 30th, 2008, 06:49 PM

YAY! Princess is excited!!!! I cant wait to read it!!!

drummergirl24

March 30th, 2008, 07:54 PM

you know its not really nice to not leave me hanging like this...especially after a long trip from Mexico...

Jackie you are an r-tard!!!

I'm an r-tard! What?! Just because I finally get a little action with Tom...jk! I giggled like a little girl...fehe

Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S

March 30th, 2008, 10:24 PM

like I said your an r-tard...for that comment above...but i love you anyways...

Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S

March 31st, 2008, 11:02 PM

so Blaine are you going to post it I know from the back of my mind you have more...and I am dieing to know what happens...

tiklemepurple

April 2nd, 2008, 12:49 AM

bleh
i have an idea!!
you should post the next chapter
before i go crazy insane up the wall and out the window

bbgroove

April 4th, 2008, 12:21 AM

Chapter 9
Karissa left the hotel room just in time to watch Jackie enter the elevator somberly her shoulders slumped slightly. Karissa headed down the direction of the elevator quickly, thinking to hop a ride with Jackie, but as she got closer she could hear Jackie begin to sigh with grief and thought it best to leave her to herself. The distraught brunette bit her lip and decided to confront the boys face to face, and considering how she was closest to Georg’s room, she thought to start with him. She turned and walked down the hallway, a deep intake of breath with every few steps she took. It felt like the walk to the plain white door of Georg’s room took forever but once she did, she felt her confrontational courage begin to dissipate.
She contemplated lightly on whether her choice was right or not before her body took control and was running on autopilot. Her right hand lifted to rap against the door, but inches before she made contact with it she heard a light knock. She cocked her head to the side before a second knock came from down the hall where she saw Bill, who waited patiently at the door of the girl’s room with Georg headed in her direction.
“Hey Rissa,” Georg greeted as he walked up to the slightly dazed brunette teen. Georg waved his hand in front of Karissa’s face as she kept her stare intent on him. Georg opened the door to his room and offered Karissa entrance to which Karissa replied not with words but with action. She just pushed past the famous bassist and sat herself firmly on the edge of his bed.
Georg smiled as he thought of the many signs this girl was giving him. His smile turned into a smirk with what Karissa did next.
“Come here,” Karissa ordered rubbing the empty space beside her. Georg couldn’t have raced faster to her side. Georg’s voice hitched in his throat as Karissa lifted her left hand and placed it gently on his left arm, then suddenly punched him square in the shoulder with her right.
“FICK!” Georg screeched as he jumped up and began to rub his arm soothingly. If this was her idea of foreplay, he didn’t like it. Karissa just stuffed her hand in her pocket and pulled out a small poster before she threw it to the bed. Georg glanced at the small crumpled paper as Karissa quickly jetted to the door, not feeling up to actual talking. Her right foot barely left the room before Georg pulled her back in, guilt plastered across his countenance.
“Let me explain!” Georg pleaded as he let go of Karissa’s arm and watched her for a sign of agreement. Karissa looked at Georg and nodded her head before she walked back into the room and sat down on the bed.
“I never told you…” Georg started as Karissa watched him walk towards her, his hands deep in his pockets and his shoulders slightly slumped over. Karissa waited patiently for him to continue.
“…because…because…” Georg stuttered before a concerned Karissa lifted herself from the bed and placed her palm on his forehead. Georg looked up at this caring brunette teen before him and suddenly found himself speechless, again. Karissa smiled, a bit embarrassed by Georg’s staring, and dropped her hand from his face. Georg shivered at the cold where her warm hand had once been, but kept her eyes locked with his own.
“I think I love you,” Georg stated gently as Karissa’s eyes perked with shock. He grabbed her hand to prevent her from walking away. She needed to hear this.
“The first moment I saw you, I thought I had found a fallen angel. You looked so peaceful and angelic as you lay in my arms. The moon did nothing but make you even more beautiful. God, I’ve found myself doing anything to make you smile, because even the sweetest sound of heaven itself can’t compare to the beauty that exudes from your laughter. You are the girl of my dreams.” Georg stated.
Karissa stared in shock and awe of the words that came from this longhaired teen before her. The edges of her lips lightly tugged up as she smiled lightly.
“Blaine already told me that you thought I was cute. Took YOU long enough to say something, though,” Karissa teased as she threw her arms around his neck and kissed him lightly on the cheek.
As Georg laced his strong arms around Karissa’s waist she whispered in his ear, “But you still should have told me about Tokio Hotel.”
Georg smirked and whispered back, “I should have, but considering how Blaine told you my secret, I say we’re equal.” Karissa craned her head away from Georg’s ear and shook her head in disagreement. Georg followed her actions mockingly before Karissa giggled and planted the sweetest kiss on his lips. He lifted her higher so as to equal their height before he deepened the kiss. Karissa let a small giggle once again slip from her lips between kisses as Georg tried to keep her up and close the door which was a good two feet behind him. Eventually he grew tired and let Karissa down gently and turned to close the door. But just as the door was about to close, Karissa darted out into the hallway and looked at Georg with a playful grin.
“I’m abstinent,” was all Karissa stated before she gave Georg a peck on the lips and began to walk to her own room. Georg stared after his angel in shock as Jackie and Tom came through the elevator doors holding hands with a smiling Paige and Bill exiting the girls’ hotel room.
“Well you guys look happy,” Tom teased as he and Jackie walked closer to his brother and Paige. Bill swatted at his brother before placing his arm winningly over Paige’s shoulder. Karissa reached the group and laughed loudly as Georg rushed up behind her and grabbed her around the waist.
“Where’s Blaine? Wasn’t she with you?” Karissa asked Paige as she noticed the absence of their rather loud friend.
“She said that she was going for a walk,” Paige stated as she looked to her friends.
Jackie’s eyes shot open in shock as she questioned just the same, “You let her go on a walk, ALONE, in a city that none of us have ever been in?”
Paige gasped lightly at the realization of the dangers she let her friend put herself in. All three girls whipped out their cell phones and quickly tried to dial Blaine’s cell phone, but all three had no connection.
“**** roaming!” Paige screeched as she shoved her cell in her pocket and ran to the elevator doors. The girl followed in suit as the boys just stared at their freaked out girls.
“Where are you going?” Bill asked as he stepped to Paige’s side.
All three girls looked at him intently before they responded in unison, “TO FIND BLAINE!”
The girls rushed into the elevator and quickly pushed the button for the lobby floor. The boys woke from their stupor and raced to the carriage before the doors closed on them.
Karissa pulled out her cell phone and pressed her speed dial button for Blaine’s cell, as she yet again received no signal, “Blaine…please be okay.”

Sorry that it is sooooooooooo late... I had writer's block, then I broke it at school where unfortunately I had to write up on paper then tranfer on to here....
Please forgive...

Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S

April 4th, 2008, 12:36 AM

sigh....sigh again....and again...now i have to read it again...man, im more in love with him...i loved how i only talked like twice...anyways...please write about you and Gustav soon!!! I loved it....

~Princess

LipsOfAnAngel

April 4th, 2008, 10:44 AM

all is forgiven and great chappy!!!!!! mehr bitte!!

bbgroove

April 4th, 2008, 08:31 PM

Chapter 10

Blaine hung her head in disappointment as she cruised the halls of he hotel. Every once in a while fate would get the best of her and make her bump into something rather harshly. She groaned in frustration as she grabbed her head for the third time since she left Paige and Bill alone.
“I need air,” Blaine muttered to herself, as she entered the elevator and pressed for the closest button to the roof. She exited on the 20th floor and had to walk the rest of the way to the top. In the stairwell she skipped a few steps and even jogged the last five before finally reaching the roof door and pressing her body against it to open.
Blaine’s hair whipped around her face in the cool night wind as she tugged her jacket closer to her body. Somberly walking closer to the edge she breathed in and out as if the weight of the world had finally been lifted from her shoulders.
Propping her hands upon the side of the roof top edge, the exotic teen closed her eyes and allowed the world around her to be felt by her other four senses.
‘Looks can be deceiving,’ Blaine explained to herself in her thoughts. Looks were deceiving, an example being the four boys that they met and thought were normal. One of them caught her mind in particular. Gustav looked so…normal. He didn’t dress like a rock star, he didn’t act like a rock star, and he never showed any characteristic of ‘roskstar-ness.’
‘Looks can be deceiving,’ Blaine thought again before she thought of her other four senses. Those senses couldn’t lie, never. Like the way she only heard her heart beating faster and faster as he grabbed her from the edge that one night. The way he smelled like wonderfully musky cologne that wafted into her nostrils and made her shiver with heat. The way he felt, his arms wrapped around her body, so strong and protective. Oh, and how wondrous it would be to find that he tastes just as amazing as he makes her feel.
Blaine licked her lips lightly at the thought before she stood straight up again and swung her legs over the edge, sitting in the same way as the first night she met him. She looked over her legs, just the same, to see what was below her.
“What’s with you and near death experiences?” Blaine suddenly heard from behind her. She twisted her body around to get a better view of the speaker. She subconsciously shivered as she turned to find a smiling Gustav, a black jacket and jeans with a well-placed cap on his head.
Gustav smirked at Blaine who just quickly pushed herself back onto the roof and walked briskly past the blonde. But as she passed, the object of her affections grabbed her around the upper arm gently and turned her so they were face to face. It took all the will power Blaine had to pull her arm from his grasp and say, “I don’t converse with liars.”
“What?” Gustav questioned in astonishment as Blaine shoved her hands into her pockets, turned and walked away from him. She was almost gone, inches from the escape.

“Blaine, wait!” What do you mean liars?” Gustav asked as he once again gripped her arm and turned her to him. Blaine decided not to fight him, but to keep some form of dignity chose not to look at him. Gustav, noticing her averted looks placed his hand under her chin and gently forced her to look him in the eye.
“What do you mean liars?” he repeated his question before letting his hand drop from her face.
Blaine inhaled sharply as the warmth of his hand fell from her face, but reached in her pocket nonetheless and pulled out a mini poster before shoving at him.
“This is what I mean. Mr. Tokio Hotel,” Blaine stated with a tear of agitation in her voice. She shook her head and bit her lip as Gustav took the poster and stared at it quietly.
“I never lied,” Gustav replied, his jaw tightening as he crumpled up the paper and stuffed it into his own pocket. He looked up defensively and stared at Blaine.
Her eyes widened in shock as she gawked at him. She replied with annoyance, “So, what? You just withheld information?”
Gustav shook his head n agreement with her question as Blaine yelled back in interruption, “There is no such thing! Not telling the truth means it’s a lie!”
Gustav felt defiant as he yelled back, “Why do you care?”
In an instant of time Blaine shut her eyes and balled her hands into fists as she cried out, “Because I care about YOU!”
Blaine wiped the tears from her eyes and watched as Gustav took a convincing step backwards, away from her.
Blaine turned and ran away from him.

I know... no chapters for week ad now two in one day...(^_^) I decided to spoil you guys...lol

I'm posting more later... we find out where Blaine has run off to and if the girls will ever find their broken friend....
dun dun dun....
dun dun (O_o)yeah(^_^)

SCHREIoutLOUD

April 4th, 2008, 09:00 PM

NO DONT RUN

Danilovestokiohotel

April 4th, 2008, 09:02 PM

umm... i think i missed something cuz between ch.2 and 4 Bill and gustav weren't introduced... but then the girls go off with them....

:? <- is confused.

bbgroove

April 4th, 2008, 09:46 PM

umm... i think i missed something cuz between ch.2 and 4 Bill and gustav weren't introduced... but then the girls go off with them....

:? <- is confused.

They were introduced...
the kitchen scene....
I think it was chapter 3.... *goes and checks*
yep chapter 3 (^_^)

tiklemepurple

April 4th, 2008, 09:49 PM

kdufhgkjdahlkfghad
wtf
dont run from gustav
he is a teddy bear

briendy

April 5th, 2008, 01:45 AM

OMG!!!!!
This is absolutely amazing!!!!!!!!!!
Seriously....
can't wait for the update...
I like just signed up a few minutes ago just because of this story...
WRITE MORE SOON PLEASE!!!!!

rette_mich

April 5th, 2008, 10:39 PM

THIS IS AN AMAZING STORY!
I really love the Jackie character, she seems very smart. she reminds me of me.
sorry, off subject.

Poor Blaine (sp?), Gustav doesn't like her back.... not yet atleast.... I hope lol

please update soon

I have this bookmarked lol

bbgroove

April 5th, 2008, 11:49 PM

OMG!!!!!
This is absolutely amazing!!!!!!!!!!
Seriously....
can't wait for the update...
I like just signed up a few minutes ago just because of this story...
WRITE MORE SOON PLEASE!!!!!

WOW!
Thank you so much... I'm really glad you like (^_^)

bbgroove

April 5th, 2008, 11:50 PM

1000oceansluv

April 6th, 2008, 01:52 AM

I really like your story so far...
my friend Kara (rette_mich) told me about it (LOVE YOU KARA!!!)
Anyways, I read it all in one night, it's sooooooooooooooooooooo good

I know that rette_mich commented that she like Jackie... but my fav is Karissa, probably because she gets to kiss Georg (sigh) lucky lucky girl

please update soon I really hope Blaine is okay and that Gustav will realize that he is madly in love with her lol

I shoudl stop ( I tend to write long comments) sorry lol

LipsOfAnAngel

April 6th, 2008, 10:55 AM

amazing! mehr bitte!

bbgroove

April 6th, 2008, 05:51 PM

bbgroove

April 6th, 2008, 06:08 PM

Chapter 11

Gustav's POV
“Blaine!” I called out as she suddenly turned away from me and ran down the steps. I heard her shoes pad against the metal stairs and the slamming of a door. I just stood there, just listening. What else could I do?
I slapped my hand against my forehead, or tried to, considering how I was still wearing my hat.
I decided to go after Blaine.
‘Why?’ I thought to myself. I stopped in my tracks.
‘Because she needs an explanation,’ I reasoned, stepping forward to continue my task at hand.
‘Why?’ I thought again as I walked down the steps.
‘Because I hurt her feelings by lying,” I tried to argue, nearly a foot from the exit.
‘Why do her feelings matter?’ God this little double identity conversation was ******* me off.
‘Because they do,’ I stated plainly to myself, finally reaching the stairs.
‘Then why aren’t you RUNNING after her?’ it asked. I realized that I was walking, why would I walk if she was running. That instance I darted down the stairs and pushed open the door, just in time to watch the elevator door close, with a crying Blaine inside.
‘If she really mattered, you would have got to her in time,’ my evil self seethed. I rushed to the elevator and rapidly pushed the buttons multiple times hoping I could still catch her.
“I’ve officially gone insane,” I muttered to myself as I muffled the condescending tone of my other thoughts.
The doors dinged open and I quickly pushed the floor level of the hotel. I paced the inside of the elevator like a caged animal. God I’m a jerk!
I heard the doors open and looked up to find Karissa, Jackie and Paige racing to the front desk followed by the guys. I ran up to them and quickly asked, “Have you seen Blaine?”
Bill looked at me with a surprised expression as if he hadn’t seen me for weeks. Georg, noticing my presence widened his eyes in shock before he raced to Karissa’s side. What the **** was everyone’s problem, they were all acting pretty freaky.
“We don’t know where Blaine is, the girls are freaking out right now. Do YOU know where she is?” Tom asked, the only one of the three acting somewhat normal.
“If I knew where she was, do you think I’d be asking?” I replied with annoyance. Tom grimaced at my reply before the girl’s rushed past us. I remember Jackie grabbing my shoulder to come along.

Regular POV

The seven teens neared the doors when a sudden uproar was heard.
“AHHHHH! TOKIO HOTEL!” the crowd yelled at the mere glimpse of the boys. The doors were suddenly pummeled by screaming fangirls and hysterical teens. Jackie, Karissa and Paige looked at the boys and heard Bill yell over the crowd, “Go, well catch up later.”
“Yeah!” Tom agreed. Gustav and Georg replied with shots of approval before some bodyguards rushed the crowd and secured the doors just as the girls exited.
Working their magic the boys had to stay and sign autographs while Karissa, Jackie and Paige raced to the nearest doorman.
“Have you seen a girl, about my heighth, tan skin, dark hair?” Paige questioned the man. He pulled a stout finger upp and pointed down a dark street that lead to the nearest park.
The girls thanked him in unison before dashing off in that direction and calling loudly for a cab.
Jackie looked back at Tom who seemed to be handling the situation fairly well, smiling and hugging girls for pictures. A pang of jealousy rushed through her body before Karissa jabbed her in the shoulder to get in the cab that they got.
“I keep forgetting they’re famous,” Jackie stated as the cab revved its engine lightly and sped off in the direction that Blaine was last seen.

I know I know.... his chapter was very sucky.... but I had no idea what to do... I'm not very good with first person POV's and I had a rough time because there were sooooooo many people in the second half of the story....
please forgive

tiklemepurple

April 6th, 2008, 06:42 PM

sucky?!?!
are you kidding me?
ill take what i can get
lmao
post
more
soon
<333

bbgroove

April 6th, 2008, 07:07 PM

sucky?!?!
are you kidding me?
ill take what i can get
lmao
post
more
soon
<333

You're sweet (^_^)
and I'll update tomorrow... I have two more chapters typed up so atleast two more days of updates (^_^)

briendy

April 6th, 2008, 07:12 PM

Are you kidding?
I LOVE YOUR WRITING!
I seriously have fallen in love with this story...
please update soon

tiklemepurple

April 6th, 2008, 07:14 PM

rette_mich

April 6th, 2008, 07:15 PM

LOVE IT!!!!
I like where you're going with it...
Blaine might be in trouble, the girls are going to have to start dealing with having famous boyfriends... at least that's what I got from the last line Jackie said...

if I'm wrong than I'm sorry... and I still love the story

AHHHHHHHH!!!!!! AMAZZZZAAAAAZZZZZZIIIINNNNGGGGG!!!!!!

1000oceansluv

April 6th, 2008, 07:18 PM

Woah!
If that is a sucky chapter, then I'm Georg Listing... which would be weird considering how I am in love with the man....
meaning I would be in love with myself....
which I think is illegal in most states.... maybe not Maine

sorry, I rambled a bit

please update soon...pwetty pwetty pwease

1000oceansluv

April 6th, 2008, 07:20 PM

Ooooo...
forgot one more thing...
since I'm new, would you mind dearly if I added you as a friend?

or would that be too soon to ask?

ChaosLy

April 6th, 2008, 07:40 PM

I need more now!
If I give you a slice of the Red Velvet Cake I made will you post another chapter now?

bbgroove

April 6th, 2008, 08:15 PM

I need more now!
If I give you a slice of the Red Velvet Cake I made will you post another chapter now?

Red
Velvet
Cake
?
I LOVE RED VELVET CAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I promise I will post the next chapter tomorrow (say 4:30 A.M.) that's when I have to get up anyways, so might as well

shadowgrl

April 6th, 2008, 09:01 PM

I've been guesting on this forum for a really long time now...

and I decided to join finally because I really wanted to

1) join (obviously)
2) be able to comment on your story because it is soooooooooo amazing

bbgroove

April 7th, 2008, 06:55 AM

Chapter 12

Blaine's POV

“GOD that jerk! That freakin’ lying jackass!” I cried, racing through the hallway of the 20th floor. I reached the elevator doors and slammed my fist against the button for it to open. I leaned my body against the cool surface of the doors and wrapped my hands behind my head and sobbed openly. The tears were a release, but with the release seemed to come more pain. My body began to quake with sobs.
The doors slid open and I rushed in and quickly forced the doors closed. I pushed my palms into my face as I tried to stop the tears, but all I accomplished was getting my jacket wet.
“****,” I groaned as I tore off my jacket and chucked it to the floor. The wet cuffs just mad me even more mad. I heard the doors open and pushed past the people who were entering and rushed to the lobby doors.
The sound of buzzing cars and the feel of freezing wind hit my body. I opened my eyes and breathed in harsh shallow breaths. Tears, I’m sure, lined my face. I felt my body begin to collapse beneath me. All I could do in response of my aching was to start running. I darted across the busy street I heard honks and skids but all I could do was keep on running.
The only thing I could think of was how he reacted to my confession. He walked away from me as if I had a disease. Everything feels like pain, everything hurts.
I mean, I wasn’t in love, but the pain of his action was still excruciating.
He backed off as if I would infect him, as if I could kill him with a blink of my eye.
I’m not sure how far I had run, and definitely not how long either. I just felt my lungs begin to stiffen as I wheezed. I was such an idiot to say I cared about him like that. Just yell it on the rooftop, GOD!
I heard a violent scream, it was me. My legs had buckled from the exhaustion and I had fallen hard onto the concrete floor beneath me. I made no move to get up, I knew I had sprained something, I knew that I was treading on dangerous grounds, I knew I was alone. But I still never got up.
I cried into my arms and rolled myself over onto my back. Something poked me heard on the back of me neck and bottom of my back, but it was nothing to me. I just rolled back onto my stomach and pushed myself up. I was in a mixture of emotional and physical suffering.
I examined my wrist and diagnosed it as a possible hairline fracture. I had fallen on it pretty hard. I searched my surroundings for anything that I could remember. I didn’t.
“MY LIFE IS ****!” I screamed as I raked my good hand through my hair and began to cry again.
“Hallo? Miss? You American? You lost?” I heard before I turned to find a young man, about my age, step close to me with a worried stare. I shook my head ‘yes’ as he stepped closer.
“You hurt? You alone?” He interrogated, another step closer.
“I think I broke my wrist,” I replied, grabbing my left wrist for proof. He crept closer, his look of concern changing dramatically.
“Good,” I was suddenly aware that I was alone, in a city I hardly knew, with a fractured wrist and…. completely screwed. I’m not sure what had happened next, everything went black.
The last thing I remember was a deathly scream…my scream.

luvukaulitztwins

April 7th, 2008, 07:05 AM

OKAY U HAVE GOT TO POST MORE WHO IS THIS STRANGE GUY....I WANNA FIND OUT :mrgreen:

briendy

April 7th, 2008, 03:00 PM

Woah!
Wow... this is getting deep, I hope Blaine is okay after this..
FIND HER GIRLS B4 IT'S TOO LATE!!!!!!

1000oceansluv

April 7th, 2008, 03:10 PM

BLAINE!!!!!!
I'm sorry, but why didn't she run...
wait... she was probably tired... sneaky German kidnapper bad man!
please write more now!

rette_mich

April 7th, 2008, 03:12 PM

OMG!
I hope the girls get there in time to save her....

it rocks!!!!! can't wait for the update

bbgroove

April 7th, 2008, 03:14 PM

Seriously...
rette_mich--1000oceansluv--briendy
are you guys friends or something because you seem to all comment on my story like minutes apart from each other...
nothing wrong with it...it's just a freaky coincidence (^_^)

rette_mich

April 7th, 2008, 03:19 PM

No worries...
but yeah we're all best buddies...
we're at our school computer lab and we had to share a comp because we're sharing the room with another class...lol
we all read it and all commented ...
it took like forever because these comps are a little slower than what we're use to so we had to wait a few minutes before any of us could sign in and comment

But yeah... we're besties 4EVA!!!!!!!!
(^_^)

LipsOfAnAngel

April 7th, 2008, 04:02 PM

omg poor blaine!!!!!! nehr bitte!!!

tiklemepurple

April 7th, 2008, 04:57 PM

isdfuygiaduyhf
dude
i would be soo freaked out
she should have kicked him in the nuts or something
lmao

Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S

April 7th, 2008, 06:33 PM

OMG!!!!!!!!!BLAINE WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!!!!!I DIDN'T WANT IT TO BE THAT KIND OF BAD!!!Please tell me that Gustav and Georg kick the living day lights out of that guy!!!!Wait I hope we all do...man I knew that this was going to happen...please write more soon...

Love Karissa aka Princess

bbgroove

April 7th, 2008, 08:23 PM

isdfuygiaduyhf
dude
i would be soo freaked out
she should have kicked him in the nuts or something
lmao

I know... she (I) should have...
But i've been in a situation like that (thankfully not alone) and I found that I react by freezing up... my friend Stephanie had to pull me away...
So I'm trying to keep it true to who the girls are.

drummergirl24

April 7th, 2008, 09:11 PM

shadowgrl

April 7th, 2008, 09:14 PM

WOW
BBGROOVE you're making the story more extreme... I like it
I just hope that nothing will go wrong, can't wait for the update...

drummergirl24

April 7th, 2008, 09:34 PM

Blaine! GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!! So much new stuff!!!!!!!!! How could you do this to me?! Just kiddin! Awesome chapter, I want to karate chop that dude! Please let me kick his *** just a little bit...

bbgroove

April 7th, 2008, 09:46 PM

Chapter 13

The taxi raced through the streets of Berlin as the three female passengers frantically sat in the back with cell phones and cash in hand. When the taxi stopped the girls threw the money over the seat, not caring for change and rushed through to the park. The doorman of a nearby hotel said that he saw a tall, black-haired girl race into the center of the park. Then he heard, what he thought was a scream.
Jackie looked to the girls with worried glances as they neared the dark area where Blaine was last seen. A cloud of black mist surrounded the entrance to the park, an omen that none of the girls were brave enough to enter... at least not without protection.

“Weapons?” Jackie asked as she looked to the other girls for compliance. She turned and entered the gift shop that was placed between the hotel and the park.

Paige looked at her quizzically before she followed in suit and asked, “What weapons?”

Jackie searched through the store in a rush, looking for something specific. Finally she stopped in front of a rack of walking sticks and began to smirk.

“These weapons,” Jackie answered, grabbing a walking stick. Karissa nodded her head in agreement.

“I prefer something that has a little more swing,” Karissa stated as she walked to a small row of bats, she grabbed on with the longest neck and took a gentle practice swing. She smiled brightly as Jackie and her raced to the cash register to quickly pay.

Paige didn’t like the walking stick OR the bat so she hurriedly looked through the store to find a ‘weapon’ of her own. Something shiny glimmered in the corner of her eye and Paige giggled maniacally as she grabbed it from its small holding bin and paid for it. She walked outside to where Karissa and Jackie were waiting.

“An umbrella, really Paige?” Karissa asked a pang of confusion lining her face.

“Helloooo. It has a sharp pointy thing a the top!” Paige reasoned before Jackie and Karissa let their friend be and started for the foreboding park again.
Each girl inhaled a sharp, cool breath to calm their nerves as the passed under the entrance sign of the park and into the darkness. The walked slowly at first, not making a noise. But, then Karissa began to walk faster as a pang in her heart said they needed to find Blaine FAST.

“Blaine!” Karissa called out loudly, hoping for an answer.

Hey guys... this chapter is more of a comedic filler until the next chapter...
It gets darker, so I thought I should give you a more comedic chapter
and the boys come back in the next few chapters (^_^)
I know I'm keeping you in the dark...lol *laughs evilly*

LipsOfAnAngel

April 7th, 2008, 09:55 PM

EEEEEEEEPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! mehr bitte!

briendy

April 7th, 2008, 09:57 PM

Why must you toy with me so? (>__<)
please updat ASAP!!!!!
And if you let Blaine die I shall refuse to eat a cookie for the rest of my life (except holidays and weekends)
Please don't let it get too dark...
and I'm glad the boys are coming back

rette_mich

April 7th, 2008, 10:04 PM

Hello. SHARP pointy things always beat out bats and walking sticks (DUH!)
lol
I really love this story, but I'm scared now that you said it gets darker... hope Blaine is okay
I'm really hoping I'm spelling her name right...

tiklemepurple

April 7th, 2008, 10:07 PM

ahhhh
they are gonna get eaten by evil monsters and get taken away to a far away land where there is no such thing as tokio hotel!!!!
ahhhhhhh

1000oceansluv

April 7th, 2008, 10:12 PM

I'm getting scared now, I hope what happened to Blaine doesn't happen to the other girls *flees in terror*

shadowgrl

April 7th, 2008, 10:15 PM

Man, you just plain ROCK...
I can't wait for you to update...

Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S

April 7th, 2008, 10:51 PM

let me swing at him, let me swing at him!!!!!!!!!give me a strike to swing at!!!!i like how you gave me a bat...please write more soon you eviilll writer...

~Karissa

drummergirl24

April 8th, 2008, 07:00 PM

Holy popsicles Batman! That was killer, I would totally bring a blunt instrument! You can never be to careful...
Please let me kick a wee bit of ***?!

bbgroove

April 8th, 2008, 07:36 PM

Chapter 14

Blaine felt the lightest of touches on her face as her eyes fluttered open. A sharp pain shot up her back as she took a quick intake of breath and heard a cool voice say gently, “Ah, so the goddess is awake.”

Blaine blinked her eyes a few times until the blurriness dissipated. As everything came into focus she tried to scream but found her mouth was covered with duct tape. She tugged at her arms to find them bound around the tree that she was leaned against. She struggled in her binds as her captor, a tall, brunette, young man walked close to her and wrapped his hands around her shoulders. He shoved them violently against the bark of the tree causing cuts to appear and blood to flow down her back. Blaine gave a muffled scream as her tears began to well in pain. He stopped at her tears and gently wiped them from her face as he gently said, “I don’t want to hurt you, so don’t force me to.”

“Who is this beauty?” another voice called from the trees. Blaine moved her head, with what little room she had, to see another young man, but this time with a dark red tint to his shaggy hair. Her first captor smiled brightly and hugged the newcomer, “Chris.”

“Jason,” the red head replied. Blaine began to whine in terror as Jason came back to her and ran a finger down her newly exposed throat.

“She is a beautiful girl, isn’t she?” Jason stated almost lovingly, Blaine flinched away at his touch.

Chris smiled brightly and placed his hand on her thigh before looking to Jason and asking, “But why have her in such a filthy place, why not treat her like a queen?”

Blaine’s breathing became erratic and scared at Jason’s response, “That is the point. She is my exotic princess, she is accustomed to the wild already. No need to change her surroundings while letting human nature take it’s course.

Chris combed a rough hand through his red hair as the moon caught on something around Blaine’s finger. He smiled rather animalistic as he brushed his cool fingers against the promise ring that adorned Blaine’s left wedding finger. She closed her hands into fists at his touch and heard him say mockingly, “I do believe we have a virgin.”
Jason’s smile dropped gently from his face as he looked to Chris, “Damit.”

“You got the last virg Jas, it’s my turn,” Chris chuckled as he patted his friend on the shoulder. Blaine could feel herself begin to scream again out of pure hatred. The guys just laughed at her reaction before they continued their conversation. Blaine suddenly felt the duct tape lift a millimeter from the edge of her lips. She widened her eyes in shock and quickly opened and closed her mouth, darting out her tongue every now and then to dissolve some of the sticky substance.

“Blaine!” Karissa, Blaine knew that voice anywhere. She worked harder to get the tape off her mouth. Chris and Jason came back once they heard Karissa’s cry. Finally the cool night air hit Blaine’s lips as the tape fell from her mouth. She breathe din deeply and let out a loud scream

“HELP MEEEEEEEEEE!” Blaine shrieked before Jason and Chris grabbed her face and forced her to shut up.

A ruffle of the surrounding brush proved that the girls had heard her cry and were coming to save her. Blaine began to cry openly as Jackie and Karissa quickly jumped from the bushes and chased after Chris and Jason. Paige ran to Blaine and used the point of her umbrella to cut the ropes off her hands.

Blaine collapsed in Paige’s arms and whispered, “Call for help.” Paige whipped out her cell phone and called the number she knew would bring help, because the way things looked, they would need it.

Spoiler:
It gets worse...

briendy

April 8th, 2008, 07:44 PM

IT GETS WORSE!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
What is worse than an almost rape?... wait... no you wouldn't... would you?
(O_o) I'm scared now...
BUT is till think you should write more

drummergirl24

April 8th, 2008, 07:47 PM

Gahhhh, no more! Ok...well just a little more! Awesome dahlin'!

schrei.in.die.nacht

April 8th, 2008, 07:49 PM

this is quite suspenseful...im scared to see how much worse it gets...
write more! this is AMAZING!

rette_mich

April 8th, 2008, 07:51 PM

I shall cry a river (JT reference BABAY! woot) if it does get worse... I just hope that Blaine won't be too distressed after this, I know some people who have been really affected by things like this....

LipsOfAnAngel

April 8th, 2008, 08:01 PM

oh no!! on god no!! oh god no!! no, it's suppose to be better then this!! not so scary!! *cries lightly* nien!!!!!!!!!!!!! mehr bitte!

1000oceansluv

April 8th, 2008, 08:01 PM

Wow... intense yet again...
can't wait for the update

shadowgrl

April 8th, 2008, 08:03 PM

This is seriously the best... I love when it 'goes there' (yep, degrassi)
update soon please

tiklemepurple

April 8th, 2008, 08:06 PM

ummmmm no offense or anything, but i hate you
you cant just expect me to be like "ok ill just wait for more"
because it doesnt work that way!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
alkshrflkjshdflkjhaslkerhlaksjdf
you have to post MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

schrei.in.die.nacht

April 8th, 2008, 08:08 PM

This is seriously the best... I love when it 'goes there' (yep, degrassi)
update soon please

haha. i love degrassi.... sorry that was kinda random.

Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S

April 8th, 2008, 10:14 PM

im scared now....please write more soon...please say they will help...please...but first let me hit someone...

love Karissa

bbgroove

April 8th, 2008, 11:30 PM

im scared now....please write more soon...please say they will help...please...but first let me hit someone...

love Karissa

You hit someone... trust me... you hit someone (^_^)

Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S

April 8th, 2008, 11:33 PM

Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S

April 8th, 2008, 11:38 PM

im scared now....please write more soon...please say they will help...please...but first let me hit someone...

love Karissa

You hit someone... trust me... you hit someone (^_^)

YES!!!!!!!!!! oh man I hope i dont get hurt...

DeeDee

April 10th, 2008, 07:33 AM

* new reader *

hun its amazingly good i luv it already

so you know what im gonna say i want more of this :D

yaritzell

April 10th, 2008, 06:04 PM

briendy

April 10th, 2008, 11:27 PM

when is this girl gunna update...i have to say this is far the most well written and creative stori on here..usually the ones i read are about girls for sum reason knowing them from childhood oor sumthing.....its annoying

Yeah.. I know what you mean...
BB update already!!!!! luv ya girly
and goo... I mean break a leg at your performance tomorrow!!!!!!! Go TEAM FERRIS BEULLER!!!!!! (^_^)

1000oceansluv

April 10th, 2008, 11:31 PM

WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!WE WANT MORE!!!!!!

PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! (^_^)

rette_mich

April 10th, 2008, 11:32 PM

I have ONE word for you....

UPDATE!

okay... maybe 12, but still...

bbgroove

April 11th, 2008, 08:48 PM

Chapter 15

Jackie yelped in pain as Chris lunged at her and smacked the walking stick hard into her chest. She quickly retaliated with a kick to the stomach and a hard swing of the stick into his groin. He doubled over in agony as Jackie pushed him hard to the ground and pinned him down with her own body.

Karissa swung her bat, strike one. She swung again, strike two. He was quick, he dodged all her strikes so far. Karissa suddenly stabilized her legs, swung her hips open and swung hard at his abdomen. Home Run! Karissa smiled in excitement before she too pushed Jason to the ground and sat on top of him.

“Take that you perverted jackasses!” Karissa yelled as she smacked the butt of her bat hard into Jason’s side. The two men groaned in pain as the girls shared a small smile of victory. But their happiness was short lived when the two men, with unimaginable strength, suddenly shoved the girls off their backs and chucked them harshly to the park’s dirt floor.

Jackie cried in shock when she was thrown from Chris’s back and onto her own. The stick was thrown from her hands and landed a few feet away, but Chris rushed over and grabbed it from Jackie’s reach. He stared her down as h flipped the stick in his hand a few times, a conceited smirk gracing his features. He straddled Jackie with his legs and lifted the bat above his head, preparing to put Jackie in the same state as Blaine, unconscious. He swung the stick down but suddenly stopped as a pang of pain shot into his chest. Paige had taken the sharp point of her umbrella and stabbed it into Chris with a definite grunt. She had seen Chris throw Jackie and without hesitation helped her friend.

Karissa rubbed her side gently after she hit the ground, but regained her composure, bat in hand, as Jason lifted himself from the floor and charged her menacingly. Karissa began to swing again and connected with his shoulder, but instead of a cry of pain, she heard him laugh. He smiled mockingly at the brunette before he swung his leg up and kicked Karissa’s bat away. He charged her again and flung her to the ground before he jumped on top of her.

Blaine awoke once Paige had left her side and let her head fall hard onto the dirty, rocky floor of the park. She really had no time to adjust though, as she witnessed Karissa’s attack. She tried to push herself up, but found that her legs would buckle beneath her and her arms lay limp on her sides.

Chris had looked at Paige with a hard stare, then at the inflicted wound before he twisted his wrist ever so slightly an aimed for Paige. She backed a few paces when he suddenly swung the walking stick hard at her. Paige instinctively brought up her umbrella to stop the attack only to see it snap in half at impact. Suddenly Jackie jumped onto Chris’s back as Paige grabbed the stick and tried to pull it from his grasp. Chris yelled in anger as he ran backwards and shoved Jackie into the nearest tree. Once her grasp weakened against his neck he pulled back on the walking stick that Paige was also holding and swung her so she too smacked against the tree. The two girls were instantly knocked unconscious, allowing Chris to watch his new possessions ‘sleep.’

Jason grabbed Karissa’s head and smacked it hard against the ground. She thrashed her arms and legs violently to get Jason off of her, but in vein. He forced her head hard into the ground again and knocked her unconscious as well. He wiped the sweat from his brown with his arm and cackled as he looked back to Blaine.

“It seems as if your rescue team has failed you,” Jason stated, his red hair unruly with dirt and leaves. He grabbed Blaine by face and pulled her painfully up. Chris walked behind Blaine and grabbed her arms, pinning them behind her.

Chris whispered in her ear with a husky, tired tone, “All work and no ‘PLAY’ make Chris a VERY unhappy boy.”

Blaine could do nothing but allow the tears to fall from her eyes as Chris and Jason grabbed her shirt and pants and began to pull them from her body. She looked to her unconscious friends and began to pray that help would come soon.

Jason muttered underneath his breath, “Let the fun begin.”

Sorry that it took so long to update...
We have this annual charity event at our school called Lip Sync and my A.P. English teacher makes it manditory for you to participate...
We've been having practice from after school until 8 ALL week, I've barely had time to do my homework...
But tonight is Lip Sync, so say 'break a leg' 'tell me who wins' and leave comments my loves (^_^)

briendy

April 11th, 2008, 08:54 PM

AAHHHHHHHH!!!!!
this is so good...
this is so good
this is so good
this is soOoOoOoOoO GOOD!!!!!!!!!
I'm soooo scared fro the girls now! I hope the boys come and save the day (^_^)

rette_mich

April 11th, 2008, 08:58 PM

If there was any way for you to be even better at writting...
then the world just might collapse (O_o)

update soon pleasey

DeeDee

April 12th, 2008, 03:13 AM

:o bas*ards , more hunnij

LipsOfAnAngel

April 12th, 2008, 08:36 AM

AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !! NEIN!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!! no, update soon so i can know that the girls will be ok and that the boys (TH) will save them!!!!!!!!!!! mehr bitte!

cherry_kaulitz

April 12th, 2008, 09:53 AM

BREAK A LEG HONEY GOOD LOOK BUT WRITE MORE CUZ IM SURE YOULL WIN

herseykiss

April 12th, 2008, 03:50 PM

DUN DUN DUNN!!! where are the boys when u need them mann!!!

tiklemepurple

April 13th, 2008, 02:28 AM

*spazzzzzz*
im tellin you, kicking in the balls always works!!

1000oceansluv

April 13th, 2008, 10:34 AM

Sorry I haven't been able to read this until now... BIG friday night...
HEY!!!
did you guys win?

and please write more!!!!!! let the boys sve the girlies and it be all right..... (^_^)

bbgroove

April 13th, 2008, 11:54 PM

To al those who cared about the charity event that my school had...
WE WON TWO AWARDS!!!!! (^_^)
Best Costumes
and First runner up for most entertaining...
only one other group got two awards!

Anyways... the next chapter is coming in a few minutes (^_^)

bbgroove

April 14th, 2008, 04:00 AM

Chapter 16

“Stop struggling. Just enjoy it, it’ll feel wonderful,” Jason muttered as he and Chris tried to get a thrashing Blaine to calm down. She leaned into Jason’s grasp and tugged her feet up to kick Chris in the chest. He stumbled back a few feet and gasped, grabbing onto his now throbbing abdomen. Jason steadied his hold on Blaine as she tried to turn her body violently from side to side to get free. She began to realize that no help was coming and began to cry even harder. Her makeup streaked down her face, her hair sticking to her cheeks from the wet tears as she screamed as hard as she possibly could. Chris growled in anger as he stomped back to Blaine and slapped her hard across the face, “Don’t make this hard!”

Blaine stopped her screaming as her face ached from the slap and just whimpered in pain. Jason laughed in a haughty manner as Chris began to unbutton Blaine’s jacket from her body. Blaine tried to fight again, but felt her body fail her. Suddenly a loud guttural yell echoed through the trees before four dark figures lunged at Chris and Jason.

“Get off of her!” Gustav yelled in anger as he and Bill grabbed onto Chris and pulled him to the ground. Gustav wrapped his hands around Chris’ shoulders and pulled him up before Bill helped slam his body against a nearby tree.

Bill pinned Chris down, yelling, “Rape this jackass!” Suddenly Gustav pulled his arm back and clenched his hand into a fist, punching it hard into Chris’ stomach. Chris fell to the park floor in agony, but he lunged at Bill’s legs and threw him to the ground. Bill jammed his knee hard into Chris’ side as Gustav wrapped his right arm around his neck and tried to pull Chris off of his best friend. Bill quickly rolled from Chris’ punches when Gustav pulled him off and yelled out to Gustav, “Let go!” When Gustav’s head was a good foot away from Chris’, Bill swung his leg hard against Chris’ skull, knocking him unconscious and bloody.

Tom and Georg focused on Jason, ripping him from behind Blaine and chucking him against a tree trunk. Georg pushed Jason’s face hard against the bark of the tree and hissed into his ear, “YOU NEVER TOUCH THEM AGAIN!”

Georg let go quickly when Jason thrust his elbows back and knocked Georg in the sides. Tom, stabilizing Georg so he wouldn’t fall, raced at Jason and punched him square in the jaw. He tried to slam Jason against the tree again only to be caught off guard with a hard left hook to the face. He growled in anger as he and Georg simultaneously grabbed Jason and slammed his body hard against the tree, making sure to let his head receive the brunt of the force. Jason collapsed onto the dirty ground, out cold.

When Blaine felt Jason and Chris being pulled away from her body her knees buckled beneath her and she fell to the ground, her clothing torn and revealing. She heard the struggle between the men and felt it lasted a lifetime. But when she no longer heard the grunting of the fights she opened her eyes, praying the victors were not Chris and Jason. It wasn’t, Bill, Tom and Georg raced to their respective girls and tried to get them to wake as Gustav rushed to Blaine’s side. He pulled off his jacket and wrapped it around her, trying to save whatever modesty Chris and Jason left. With his strong arms around her body, Gustav lifted her from the ground as sirens where heard in the distance. Blaine gently laid her head against his chest and fainted from exhaustion. He held her close, making sure he could feel her chest rise and fall with each breath, proving that she was okay. When the sirens came closer he noticed that each of the other girls were successfully awakened from their attacks and being tended to by the boys.

Georg pulled Karissa into his lap when she fluttered her eyes open. He hugged her gently and placed kisses on her forehead. He felt her reach her arms around his body and cry into his shoulder, the momories of the night’s events flooding her mind. She lifted her head to look at him, wrapping her arms tighter and whispered, “Never let go.”

Georg stared down at his brunette angel and pulled her closer to him protectively enveloping her in his arms, “Never.”

Bill smiled brightly as Paige awoke. She held back tears as Bill quickly pulled her into his body, hugging and kissing her with all his might. Paige sniffed back a tear before burying her head into his shoulder. He brushed his hands over her body, proving to himself that she WAS in his arms, and that she WAS okay. Bill rubbed her back in soothing circles and repeated peacefully, “I’m here, it’s okay.”

When Jackie awoke Tom grabbed her and kissed her with all his might. He kept on planting kiss after kiss on her lips, her cheeks, her forehead. This was the one way that he could make sure that she was actually alive, and breathing. His heart had stopped when he saw her lying on the ground, not moving. Jackie gladly accepted his strange form of comfort.

When the medics the girls were all checked for any damage and taken to the hospital with Blaine, lying motionless on a gurney.

“I’m sorry,” Gustav whispered gently to himself as Tom pulled his arm, signaling that they were to follow the girls to the hospital.

The next chapter is not going to have the girls in it at all... we need more Tokio Hotel in this story (^_^)

DeeDee

April 14th, 2008, 05:54 AM

yayy you did well in your charity thing :D

and ja i luv it , mehr hunnij bitte

Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S

April 14th, 2008, 10:37 AM

*tears* "never let go".... aww....to bad i really can't say that to him...sigh...please write more soon...

LipsOfAnAngel

April 14th, 2008, 04:10 PM

amazing!!! boys to the rescue!!! mehr bitte!

briendy

April 14th, 2008, 07:33 PM

LOOOOVVVVEEEE!!!!!!
Good GOD!
How in the world could you make me fall in love with all the boys at once???

1000oceansluv

April 14th, 2008, 08:38 PM

(O_o)
GUSTAV JUST FREAKIN FALL IN LOVE WITH HER ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

rette_mich

April 14th, 2008, 08:40 PM

Awwwww! the boys are sooooooooooooooo protective of the girls... I love it!!!!! (^_^)

shadowgrl

April 14th, 2008, 08:41 PM

YAY!
The boys are back in town!!!!!
*sings my boyfriends back*
sorry, I just had a bucket full of sweets and a soda (^_^)
update soon

bbgroove

April 14th, 2008, 09:28 PM

I'm going to update in the next few hours... promise (^_^)

as for Gustav... he should fall in love with her already, but that just wouldn't be real...

cherry_kaulitz

April 14th, 2008, 10:37 PM

wahoo i want a prize good job and i really love ur story
and yes we do need more tokio hotel kk

bbgroove

April 15th, 2008, 12:23 AM

Chapter 17

Tom’s knuckles turned a bright red as he gripped the steering heel of the car and huffed angrily for the umpteenth time since they found the girls. He could still feel the release of anguish as his fist connected violently with Jason’s face. The way his blood began to boil at the sight of Jackie lying there lifelessly. He slammed his fist against the wheel and grunted, “******!”

Bill, sitting in the passenger seat, looked to his brother with concern before he grabbed his shoulder gently, trying to assuage his volatile emotions. He let go as he felt Tom relax underneath his touch and went back to looking out the closed, tinted window. The lion-haired teen was usually pacifistic when it came to life, so it came as a rather gargantuan surprise to himself at the anger he felt when the sight of the girls lying helplessly on the earth floor reached his view. He tapped his fingers gently against the window while he allowed memories of himself and Paige invade his gloomy thoughts. The only thing that was keeping him sane, was thinking of her smile. He jerked forward slightly as the car came to a red light and felt his seatbelt tighten at the pull.

Georg watched the street lights flicker in the night as he subconsciously kicked the back of the driver’s seat. He stopped when he heard Tom let a low growl escape his lips. He knew how irritable all of them got with stressful situations, and considering how ‘stressful’ this one was, he didn’t want to push the envelope. Georg sank low into his seat, the belt cutting into his chest and abdomen. He adjusted the belt and let his head fall back as he thought of Karissa, and how she cried into his arms. He thought about what would have happened if they didn’t stop Chris and Jason from getting to Blaine, if Karissa would have been next.

Gustav sat impatiently in his seat, patting his hands against his knees like a drum. He jerked a little as the car began to move again. He didn’t blink at all during the ride. Every time his eyes closed, even for a millisecond, he saw Blaine bound in Chris and Jason’s filthy hands. How they pulled at her shirt and pants, the way they rubbed against her innocent skin. The thing that really got him mad was the way she screamed at her tormentors, how she sounded as if she had no hope. He remembered the way her voice faltered as Chris ripped off her clothing. The way her tears drenched her face. He just hoped that Chris and Jason didn't have enough time to DO anything. If Blaine were no longer the girl she was just two hours ago, he knew it would be because of him. It was his fault.

Gustav rubbed his hands against his palms trying t wipe the memory from his mind. The car came to a stop in front of the hospital, where flashes of cameras and shout of the paparazzi filled the night. All the boys grunted and snarled at the invasion of heir lives, usually use to the attention. But this time, it wasn’t just about them. When the girls found out about their stardom, they hoped that at least to days would pass before the girls became victim to the onslaught of publicity. But only two hours had gone by since the revelation. Tom swerved the car quickly to the right and raced past the paparazzi, zooming into the parking structure of the hospital and quickly parking the car in a secure place. They exited the Cadillac with such speed that even the Flash couldn’t keep up. They piled into the elevator and headed down to where the girls were being kept.

“How long do you think we have before David calls?” Georg asked, a question everyone thought. None of them had a chance to answer because just as the elevator doors opened for them to enter the hospital, Bill’s cell phone rang, the word DAVID blinking in the front screen.

Hey people!!!!!
I shall update tomorrow (^_^)

Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S

April 15th, 2008, 12:31 AM

what is david going to say???

" if Karissa would have been next."

i was about to cry when I read that...please post more soon...

bbgroove

April 15th, 2008, 12:35 AM

what is david going to say???

" if Karissa would have been next."

i was about to cry when I read that...please post more soon...

I almost cried, writing it... It's weird thinking about that kind of stuff when you guys are actually REAL... am I making sense (O_o)
I'll post more tomorrow... promise

briendy

April 15th, 2008, 12:53 AM

GAH!
The boys are just soooo freakin' adorable it's amazing... it must me love (^_^)

rette_mich

April 15th, 2008, 01:00 AM

I'm soooooooo........... just...... WOW!!!!!!
I love the way you focused mostly on actions rather than words... very effective (^_^)

1000oceansluv

April 15th, 2008, 01:04 AM

I changed my text color!!!!
(^_^)
more please (^_^)

shadowgrl

April 15th, 2008, 01:12 AM

I think you are more in your element when action overcomes words...
In this case... your descriptive writing of action is definitely better than words...

bbgroove

April 15th, 2008, 01:15 AM

Thank you guys...
YAY Kate's text color change (^_^)lol

I do FEEL more in my element when I write the actions of people rather than the words that they are saying... I'm just a little disappointed in myself that I allow that to show in my work

DeeDee

April 15th, 2008, 08:23 AM

oh god more please hunnij

LipsOfAnAngel

April 15th, 2008, 06:06 PM

yay i love it!! more TH boys!! mehr bitte!

drummergirl24

April 15th, 2008, 10:58 PM

Wow

that's all

tiklemepurple

April 15th, 2008, 11:14 PM

ahhhh
gustav...dont blame yourself
its not your fault
*realizes its just a fanfic*

...

post more soon!!!

bbgroove

April 16th, 2008, 07:44 PM

Chapter 18

“David! Fine! We’ll do the interview, just make sure the paparazzi don’t get the girls’ names. Yes! We understand what we’ve done. Okay. We’ll see you later. Bye,” Bill stated to David as he explained why news coverage seemed to revolve around the ‘Tokio Heroes’ of Germany. He flipped the phone closed and sighed in frustration before he flopped himself linto the seat next to his brother.

Tom had his head in his hands, rubbing his temples as if to rid himself of an aching pain. All the boys had been on edge when they found that the girls were a little worse for the wear than they had originally had hoped and the constant call for their attention didn’t help. Some cop at the station whose daughter is in love with the boys called the press and leaked the night’s events, which is why the hospital was being stormed with news cameras and loud reporters fighting to get a shot of Tokio Hotel.

“What did David say?” Georg questioned as he passed a small tray of drinks onto the coffee table in the middle of the waiting room. Bill gently grabbed one for himself as he answered that they just agreed to an interview tomorrow at five in the morning. Tom grunted in annoyance as he closed his eyes tight and pressed his finger to his temple even harder.

The sound of squeaky sneakers against a linoleum floor echoed through the hallway as a nurse came to the waiting men. Each one of the boys quickly stood up and looked hopefully at the small brunette clad in pink. Suddenly three figures appeared from behind her, Karissa, Jackie and Paige.

Bill raced to Paige’s side where her arm was gently bandaged. He lifted the arm up and brushed his fingers against the clean cloth. Paige smiled lightly as he turned his attention from her arm to her face and kissed her lightly on the lips. He didn’t want to break her.

Tom watched as Jackie walked up to him and felt her place a soft kiss on his forehead. He laughed lightly as he realized that her kiss was placed where he was rubbing away his headache. Jackie looked at him in confusion as he just smiled brightly and wrapped his arm around her. “You just made everything better,” Tom whispered, their noses touching. Jackie shook her head lightly and reached her lips to meet with his.

Karissa felt Georg tenderly pull her into a hug, his hands protectively wrapped around her. She graciously accepted his comfort and smiled against his chest. She lifted her head from his body and looked him in the eye, “My hero.” She hugged him soothingly before placing a small kiss on his cheek. Georg just looked down at Karissa and felt his heart sink at her words. He wasn’t sure how she would take what was to come with being the girlfriend of a celebrity.

“How is Blaine?” everyone heard Gustav ask. They all turned their attention to the nurse who had entered before the girls and waited for her response.

The nurse seemed to tense up at the stare of the group but continued with her report, “She’s not waking up.”

GAH!! SOOOO short...
but I have more things to come (^_^)

Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S

April 16th, 2008, 08:12 PM

post more NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!please you are keeping me on the edge of my seat...

bbgroove

April 16th, 2008, 08:25 PM

post more NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!please you are keeping me on the edge of my seat...

gees... a chapter a day and I still don't get no love (>__<)...lol

but I promise more tomorrow

briendy

April 16th, 2008, 08:27 PM

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!!!

You really rock at cliffhangers... (^_^) which makes me hate you (>__<)
lol

rette_mich

April 16th, 2008, 08:35 PM

BLAINE!!!!!
WAKE UP!!!!

wow.... it so much weirder when you're friends with the author who also happenes to be the main character (O_o) LOL

1000oceansluv

April 16th, 2008, 08:37 PM

Yet again you have knocked me off my feet

or rather... chair

but still, this is such a great story... I'm glad you want to keep it somewhat real (^_^)

bbgroove

April 16th, 2008, 08:40 PM

BLAINE!!!!!
WAKE UP!!!!

wow.... it so much weirder when you're friends with the author who also happenes to be the main character (O_o) LOL

I know....
when I read...
"WAKE UP BLAINE"
I was all... I am awake Kara, freak (^_^)

but then I realized what you meant...lol

shadowgrl

April 16th, 2008, 08:41 PM

You are so talented... I'm not really a fan of any particular boy...
but girl you are making me fall in love with them

bbgroove

April 16th, 2008, 08:43 PM

A lot of people have been commenting that (^_^)

I like to spread love (^_^)

drummergirl24

April 16th, 2008, 08:48 PM

Awwww our noses touched! How freakin adorable! I actually sighed out loud
I love it, but you need to write some freakin more
keep your audience happy!

bbgroove

April 16th, 2008, 09:12 PM

Awwww our noses touched! How freakin adorable! I actually sighed out loud
I love it, but you need to write some freakin more
keep your audience happy!

Do I please no one?
(-_-)

Gustibear

April 16th, 2008, 09:26 PM

love this fic...

hope you update soon ;) :D

shadowgrl

April 17th, 2008, 01:41 AM

It's VVVEEERRRRYYYY late over here and I am not in the least bit tired, but I am VERY bored...
so I re-read this entire story

AND I STILL LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

UPDATE soon please (^_^)

DeeDee

April 17th, 2008, 04:56 AM

oh godd no she cant aww gustav poor him

mehr bitte wenn du kannst hun

LipsOfAnAngel

April 17th, 2008, 04:00 PM

wow, omg!!! mehr bitte!

bbgroove

April 17th, 2008, 09:40 PM

Chapter 19

Paige's POV

“WHAT!” I heard someone scream. It was me, and I wasn’t surprised that it was. I pulled away from Bill’s grasp and walked over to the nurse, hovering over her as if I would attack. She looked visibly shaken at my response as I just stared her down.

“Where is she?” I grimaced. She muttered a few numbers and a floor number before I raced towards the elevator. I could hear the others following me, but ignored their presence.

Now let me just explain WHY I’m being so… so… well THIS right now.

Blaine and I have been friends since the summer before our freshman year of high school, even before we met Karissa and Jackie. So of course I’d freak about finding out that one of my best friends is NOT WAKING UP! We met by being roommates on a trip to Washington D.C. that we signed up for that summer. She hung out with the ‘popular crowd’ of our little congregation of 20 pre-teens and I hung out with, well, people who were definitely cooler than that.

“Hey. Heather, Shelley and… Paige, right?” Blaine said, questioning the last part of her greeting. Heather and I looked to each other, then to Shelley, and on to Blaine combing our eyes over her as I she were a complete stranger. She stood there, her hands wrapping around them nervously, biting on her bottom lip. I raised an eyebrow at her and waited for her to continue as Heather and Shelley said quiet ‘hellos.’

“Would you guys mind if I hung out with you. You see, the group I was originally hanging out with…well, they just…SUCK!” Blaine stated, adding emphasis on the end as she let go of her hands and threw them in the air in frustration. I held back a chuckle at the sight as I pushed back a seat for her to sit in. I thought her friends were horrible people who needed to rot in ****, but suck was a good enough description.

I pushed the buttons to Blaine’s floor when I entered the elevator. As the elevator doors closed I could see the others trying to get them to open again so they could come with me. I didn’t let them. I couldn’t waist any time.

That first year of High School we hung out with a group of kids that we thought we connected with, that grew old FAST. We sort of, made our own group. We eventually did the best friend thing, you know. Hang out constantly, talk on the phone for hours, spend the night at each others houses. There was this butter incident that happened at her house that I despise remembering.

The butter knife passed through the toast a third time, a third hole that I’d have to deal with. I heard Blaine laugh beside me and effortlessly use her butter knife to spread the butter on her toast. I tried again, hoping at least some of my toast would still be intact for my eggs. I chucked the knife to the table, Blaine laughing lightly.

“Haven’t you ever buttered your own toast before?” Blaine asked, grabbing my discarded butter knife and putting it in the sink before grabbing a new one and buttering my toast for me.

I looked at her in frustration, embarrassed that I couldn’t complete a simple task as I replied, “Yeah, I’ve buttered my own toast. Just, not with butter.”

Blaine stopped what she was doing and looked to me with a perked eyebrow. A large smile formed on the edge of her lips before she busted out into hard laughter. I looked at her confused, before I realized what I had just said.

“NOT WITH BUTTER!” Blaine repeated as she grabbed her abdomen and laughed harder. Six years later and she still finds it to be the funniest thing in the freakin’ universe, pisses me off. But you can’t help but find her laugh contagious.

I heard the ding of the elevator doors open as I rushed to Blaine’s room. After passing a few doors I reached Blaine’s and bumped my arm against the frame. I grimaced in pain but still walked towards her bed. I stood at the end of it, just watching her. She had tubes and needles attached at every corner of her body. How the **** is that possible? How the **** could we have gone to being the happiest girls in the world visiting Germany to almost becoming a victim of rape?

Blaine ****** me off at times. She had these habits that always made me want to strangle her. She would always laugh EXTREMELY loud, a few decibels higher than what the human ear could take. She was always touchy-feely, wanting a hug from you every five minutes or to link arms while you walked, people actually thought we might be lesbians our sophomore year. She also does this thing where she complains constantly, she pushes you like she’s better than you and she ****in’ ALWAYS emotional, I swear it’s like she’s on constant PMS.

But no matter how much she would **** me off, and I would yell at her, she would never leave my side. She was like this lost puppy who follows you everywhere no matter what you do. And the best/worst part about her being my best friend… is that she IS my best friend.

I pulled the chair in the corner with my good arm to Blaine’s bedside and just sat there, looking at her. For the first time in my life, I really wanted her to wake up and say, “NOT WITH BUTTER!”

But even when the others finally reached us, and visiting hours had passed and we went back to the hotel for some ‘sleep’. She didn’t wake up.

I couldn't go to sleep, I couldn't. Bill saw me tense as the girls entered the room and I looked at Blaine's still made bed. He asked if we should get some fresh air, to which I willingly accepted.

We walked to the edge of the roof, the air wisping through the night as I breathed in deeply. Bill wrapped his arms around me, a comfort for which I was greatful. I turned in his arms tears threatening to fall from my eyes. I looked up to him and couldn't bear to hold them back.

I closed my eyes tightly, trying to keep the water at bay. When I did though, I felt the most gentle touch against my lids. Bill was kissing my tears, and if any of them fell from my eyes he would follow them down my cheek and into the wrinkle of my lips.

Bill lifted his lips from my own and placed them back onto my teary eyes. He whispered calmly, tickling my eyelashes,"I hate to see you cry a single tear. So I won't let you. I won't let you."

O
M
G
!

I think I just fell in love with Bill.....

NAH! I still love Gustav (^_^)

but Bill was extremely AMAZING in this chapter

briendy

April 17th, 2008, 09:49 PM

Bill IS love
I'm surprised it took you this long to figure that out....lol

great chapter as usual (^_^)

drummergirl24

April 17th, 2008, 09:51 PM

Good grief! Way to wail on yourself, you know we all freakin' love you you big dork!
I love you most though!
Good part, now write more about Tom and Jackie!
They're my favorite!!!!!!!!!!
he he

Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S

April 17th, 2008, 09:53 PM

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!! Bill i am in love you even more now...you are so adorable...in real life too...but I love Georg more cant beat those sexy hairflips... please write more...

rette_mich

April 17th, 2008, 09:54 PM

I wanted to cry soooooo bad...

that friendship kinda rocks... you know what I mean?

Like you guys can yell at each other constantly and still want to hang out five minutes later (^_^)

mehr bitte

bbgroove

April 17th, 2008, 09:58 PM

Good grief! Way to wail on yourself, you know we all freakin' love you you big dork!
I love you most though!
Good part, now write more about Tom and Jackie!
They're my favorite!!!!!!!!!!
he he

Ehh.
The best way to describe yourself is to understand your flaws... so I kind of went that way...

I love you to...(^_^)

1000oceansluv

April 17th, 2008, 10:03 PM

Poor Paige...

If this is how you guys really react when one of you get hurt... then all ya'll are definitely great friends (^_^)

shadowgrl

April 17th, 2008, 10:06 PM

How glorious the world seems, now that you have updated (^_^)

please write more and update sooner

TanteMegs

April 17th, 2008, 10:47 PM

AWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!! I think I'm in love with Bill now. That was sooooooooooo(too many o's) great. I want more!!!! BTW, did the butter incident really happen?? Sounds hilarious.

Megan

RetteMich

April 17th, 2008, 11:01 PM

post more!!!!!!i need 2 kno what happens next NOW!

bbgroove

April 17th, 2008, 11:20 PM

AWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!! I think I'm in love with Bill now. That was sooooooooooo(too many o's) great. I want more!!!! BTW, did the butter incident really happen?? Sounds hilarious.

Megan

Yeah... the butter incident really did happen (^_^)

she was use to using margarine, not butter...lol... I still make fun of her for it, even to this day (^_^)

TanteMegs

April 17th, 2008, 11:27 PM

Ohhh, I totally understand. My dad and I are the only ones who like margerine on their toast. So when I make my mom some, I have to use butter. But we now let it get to room temperature, so it's not as hard to work with. :) Refrigerated butter is a pain to mess with. Update soon, please!!!

Megan

LipsOfAnAngel

April 18th, 2008, 11:50 AM

*awing at a pitch only dogs can hear* that was so sweet!!! bill, i love you even more now!!!!!!!!!!! mehr bitte!

heehee, not with butter... heehee

xgennevievex

April 18th, 2008, 04:40 PM

More more more more
: D

bbgroove

April 18th, 2008, 06:38 PM

Chapter 20

Paige blinked her eyes open and breathed in deeply before she turned from her side onto the other. She grabbed the blankets of her bed sheets and pulled them closer to her face as her eyes focused on her surroundings. It was still night time, either that or early morning, as proven by the pitch black darkness that engulfed the room. She closed her eyes again, feeling she could use a few more hours of sleep. But, suddenly her face was pushed roughly against a smooth soft surface and her body wrapped in between two long lanky arms. Paige gasped lightly when she realized that her face was tentatively pressed against the bare chest of Bill Kaulitz.

Paige’s eyes opened in shock, but she was able to stable her body so she wouldn’t wake a sleeping Bill. She closed her eyes tight, thinking that maybe this was a dream, a wonderfully violating dream. When she opened her eyes to find Bill’s nipple staring back at her she bit her tongue harshly as she TRIED not to scream. This was obviously not her room. She pushed herself far enough away from Bill to look under the blankets and check if she was still wearing clothing. She clapped the blanket back onto her chest as she saw Bill in his jeans from last night. She mentally slapped herself as she realized she forgot to check for her own clothing. She bit her bottom lip as she risked a second glance under the sheets, where she was relieved to find that she still had on her own shirt and pants. She smiled to herself, glad to see that nothing happened last night.

Finally able to breath Paige looked back to Bill’s face. His eyes were closed and his nostrils flared gently with each breath he took, his jaw hanging open a small dab of drool hanging from the edge. She scrunched her face innocently as an evil thought popped into her head. She lifted the sheet higher above them and decided to continue her stare at Bill’s chest.

“You know it’s not nice to stare,” Paige heard, she let go of the blanket in her grasp and turned to Bill whose eyes were still closed but whose mouth was opened brightly into a smile. Bill opened one eye slowly followed by the other and looked at Paige mockingly.

Paige’s face flushed a deep red before she turned her body around and stuck her head under the pillow. As she suffocated beneath the soft cloud of cloth she felt Bill pull the pillow off of her head and wrap his arms around her waist. He gently tugged her to him and kissed her neck. “I like when YOU stare though. I only find it fair, considering how many times I stare back,” Bill joked gently against Paige’s ear. She giggled as his hot breath tickled her and his statement made her blush.

Their little moment of happiness was soon interrupted though as Paige’s cell phone began to ring. Paige pulled away quickly from Bill’s grasp and lunged at her phone.

“Is it the hospital?” Bill questioned, propping himself up off the bed and grabbing his shirt and hat. After Paige’s marathon to Blaine’s room last night he wanted to be prepared in case the call was about Blaine. Paige flipped open the cell phone and answered.
Before Paige could say anything else Jackie’s voice rang through from the other end, “Blaine’s woken up, but something went wrong. She just went into surgery. She might not make it, Paige.”

Paige felt everything go dark.

Just so there is no confusion... Paige and Bill did not have sex (>__<) they just fell asleep in Bill's bed, I swear...

update to come later (^_^)

xgennevievex

April 18th, 2008, 06:47 PM

OMG
AMAZING!
So excited for the next chapter!

briendy

April 18th, 2008, 07:02 PM

tsk tsk...

Paige (^_^) naughty naughty...

I would have done the same thing though... lol

rette_mich

April 18th, 2008, 07:06 PM

Freakin' A* Blaine!

I'm not sure what's gonna happen with Blaine... but I have a bad feeling about it...

Paige and Bill are just THE cutest couple right now (^_^)

1000oceansluv

April 18th, 2008, 07:08 PM

*sniff*

THAT WAS ADORABLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

mehr bitte

shadowgrl

April 18th, 2008, 07:10 PM

this is soooo great...
yu seriously should make this into book or something

bbgroove

April 18th, 2008, 07:12 PM

I just had the biggest burst of writing... I already have like two more chapters typed up or the next few days (^_^)

all hail me (^_^)...jkjk..lol

Gustibear

April 18th, 2008, 07:14 PM

OKAY!!!!!

officially a new AVID reader :D :D :D

I'm so excited for the update

herseykiss

April 18th, 2008, 08:06 PM

plz post more plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

briendy

April 18th, 2008, 09:16 PM

I know I've already commented...
But I really want to know what happens next....

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!

bbgroove

April 19th, 2008, 12:55 AM

Okay so I'm going to visit the University that I plan on attending next year tomorrow and I won't be home until REALLY LATE... so decided that I shall post tomorrow's chapter... in the next five minutes (^_^)

bbgroove

April 19th, 2008, 01:01 AM

Chapter 21

Gustav paced the waiting room for the millionth time that night. The others had left to go back to the hotel while he opted to stay behind in case any more news came about Blaine’s condition. He stuffed his hands deep into his pockets and exhaled a deep breath of exasperation every few minutes. The time seemed to have slowed down since he was left alone.

“Excuse me sir?” The pretty young nurse from a few hours ago called out to Gustav. He turned to her with hopeful eyes as she laced her fingers together nervously.

“My name is Lacey, and I was just wondering if I could have your autograph?” the nurse asked. Gustav’s eyes opened wide in surprise at the audacity of the young girl, but kept his composure and reached for the pad and pen that she held out for him.
“Is there any news about the woman in room 314?” Gustav questioned while he scribbled the pen across the pad of paper in a very robotic motion. He looked up to her when he finished his signature and placed the materials back into her hands.

Lacey’s eyes shot open with realization as she remembered what she originally come down here for. “She’s awake, but she’s still a little drowsy,” Lacey reported. Gustav quickly thanked the girl before rushing off to the elevator doors, leaving Lacey in a whirlwind of confusion.

When he reached Blaine’s doorway he looked to her bed, hoping that what Lacey had told him was not a dream. Sure enough, he saw Blaine popped up gently against the backboard of her bed flipping through channels on the television. It was as if she really didn’t go through that horrendous experience at the park.

“You coming in or what?” Blaine laughed, setting down the controller and paying attention to a staring Gustav at the door. Gustav woke from his stupor and entered the room silently, his shoulders gently slumped foreword and his hands back into the depths of his pockets. Blaine watched him intently as he crossed the room to the small couch that was neatly tucked in the corner by the window.

“Wow. You definitely make a girl feel loved,” Blaine joked as she mocked him gently for choosing the seat farthest away from herself. She pursed her lips together though as she noticed that he visibly stiffened at her comment and seemed to turn farther away from her. Blaine pushed herself up, adjusting herself into a better seating position.

Gustav heard the rustle of the sheets as he looked to find Blaine trying to lift herself from the bed. He watched in amazement as she almost succeeded, but her arms buckled beneath her and forced her to collapse against the frame of the bed. Gustav rushed to her side, and lifted her upper body so the pillows were beneath her.

“You okay?” He asked. Blaine just looked at his hands that were tenderly gripped around her arms and waist and took an unsteady breath. She looked back to Gustav, his eyes pleading for an answer. She smiled calmly and nodded her head in recognition that she felt no pain.

“But I must say, I’ll never look at parks the same way again,” Blaine tried to joke. She failed miserably according to how Gustav hurriedly let go of her body and sat down. At least this time it was in the chair by her bed.

“You okay?” Gustav asked for the second time that night, but with a different event in mind. Blaine gulped nervously at the question, feeling her own body begin to convulse lightly as the memories began to fly in.

“Nothing HAPPENED, if that’s what you’re asking,” Blaine replied, masking the real answer so some innocence could be kept in the conversation. She watched as Gustav’s shoulders relaxed a bit. He lifted his eyes to meet Blaine’s where the two just stared at each other in silence.

Blaine was the first to break the eye contact when she perked her eyebrows and continued, “About tonight, on the roof.”

“I didn’t mean to hurt your feelings,” Gustav started looking up at Blaine and moving his body to face her more directly. Blaine licked her lips lightly as she waited for him to continue. “I… well… I mean, a lot of girls confess their undying love for me…and I don’t know, the fact that I KNOW you made it… made it… well…I don’t know,” Gustav muttered trying to make SOME sense of his actions.

“I didn’t confess my undying love for you… I just said I cared,” Blaine interrupted his thoughts. Gustav furrowed his brows in confusion when he looked at Blaine and opened and closed his mouth trying to figure out how to respond. He replayed the rooftop events in his head and realized that that WAS all she said. He mentally slapped himself at the mistake he had made.

“******! Then why did you run?” Gustav asked his confusion becoming overwhelming.

Blaine tilted her head to the side and bit her lip before she answered, “Just because it wasn’t love, doesn’t mean the pain wasn’t the same.”

Gustav just stared at the raven haired teen before him as she looked back with doe eyed blinks. He lifted himself from the chair and walked to her side, leaning over and placing a soft kiss on her forehead.

“I just, want to take it slow. We barely know each other enough to fall in love. But… you are kind of hott,” Gustav stated with a joke at the end. He felt Blaine chuckle at his statement as they looked to each other again. Blaine took her hand and tenderly caressed his face in her palm.

Suddenly though, Blaine’s eyes glazed over and her body went limp. Beeps and alarms began to go off in the room as Blaine’s heartbeat seemed to become erratic. Gustav called her name a few times trying to get her to wake again. A doctor and two nurses came rushing through the door and pushed Gustav from Blaine whose body began to convulse violently.

When the doctor pulled Blaine from the room on another gurney the nurse told Gustav to call any relatives of friends about the situation. After Gustav called Tom’s cell phone and informed his friends, he was ushered to the waiting room, where he had to wait. Wait while the doctors tore off Blaine’s clothing and prepped her for surgery. Wait while they cut into her chest and blood flowed from her like a river. Wait while the monitor beeped out of control as they found one of her broken ribs moved and punctured a lung. Wait while the doctors hurried to save the life of a dying teenage girl.

Kara, Kate and Lisa...
I know that you guys said you were either going camping... visiting parents... and grounded from the computer...
so that was another reason I posted the next chapter...
To give you guys a surprise when you get back (^_^)