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Chaos Crazy
March 26th, 2008, 02:14 PM
ADDISON POV:
My parents would have killed me, knowing I was out after curfew. I had no reason to go back home. They weren't there. They would never be there, because they didn't seem to love me anymore. My only responsibility was not for myself---it was for my little sister.
"I wanna go home!" she says sadly.
I take her hand and we walk together back to our tiny apartment. It had to be tiny, all we had was my own earnings. And I worked at Starbucks. My sister probably had better education than me. She went to school while I worked part-time.
We stepped into the apartment and pulled off our jackets.
"You hungry?" I asked her.
She nodded and sat down on the couch. I looked at her eyes. They showed fear. I knew that soon we wouldn't have enough to eat. We ate and went to sleep.
We are going to go shopping, to see if there is anything in my budget for my sister.
She's only five, so she's not picky.
I get her some new stuff, and don't worry about buying anything for me. Anna comes first, and I spend all of the money on clothes and shoes for her. People are staring, probably at how terrible I look. Then finally, a group of guys come in, and they don't stare. One of them glances at me sadly and walks on. He can tell I'm not a mom.
"Come on let's go."
We walk home, and I feel like someone's following us. I don't see anyone and i don't hear footsteps. Just a feeling. We go into the house and I read to Anna.
After I read to her, I go to sleep. I have the craziest dream about that boy...

BILL POV:
I went shoping with the guys earlier today. First we went to Aero, just to be funny, then Hot Topic. After that we just went browsing all of the stores. At the last one, I saw a little girl and I'm supposing, her older sister. Both girls looked miserable and lonely. I followed them home to find that they lived at a dirty little place that looked a lot like skid road, without the drunks. It killed me to see people so young having to live in a place like that. They're probably starving. Tommorow, I have to find them again. I don't know how, but I have to.

I awaken by Tom sitting on me.
"Ow, Tom, get OFF!"
I push him onto the floor and he screams like a girl.I have to find those girls.
Everyone else wanted coffee, so we all decided to go to Starbucks. I'm shocked at what I find there. The older girl from yesterday is there. I walk up to her and ask her her age. She tells me she's sixteen, but I get a bit too personal.
"Why aren't you in school?"
She walks away from me then, not answereing my question.
"Wait!" I pull on her arm and make her sit down. Her eyes grow wide, but she doesn't run away this time.
"Please tell me, I won't hurt you, and I won't tell anyone."
She takes a deep breath. "I need money to pay rent, and for food, and my sister---more than I need education."
I'm crying for her inside, but I try my best not to let it show.
Oh...I-I'm so sorry!" I say really fast. I probably look really sad, because she's giving me a weird stare. There's a tightening feeling in my stomach. I grimace from the pain, she askes me what's wrong.
"Nothing,"I say.

TanteMegs
March 26th, 2008, 02:25 PM
This is a good start. Can't wait to read more. Post more soon please.


Megan

Chaos Crazy
March 26th, 2008, 04:20 PM
BILL POV:
I already know I'm going to get sick. This is a weird reaction. I've never felt so bad for someone in my life.
"I'm sorry!" I yelled, turning my head to avoid throwing up on her.
"Are you okay?!" she said.
I'm choking, but I don't puke. Well, that's not what it looks like it was. Tom rushes over to me.
"Oh my god!" he said,"SOMEONE HELP ME MY BROTHER'S COUPHING UP BLOOD!"
He's crying. I close my eyes, and don't feel anything else.

ADDISON POV:
I was just sitting with the guy and he starts choking. I didn't know what to do.
At first I thought he had gotten sick, but then his brother came over and started yelling that he was coughing up blood.
So now, I'm sitting alone by his bed at the hospital, waiting for him to wake up.
Finally, he does, and he sits up.
"You never told me your name," he says.
"Addison. Your brother said you're Bill."
He just nods, ands starts to close his eyes. But when they are halfway closed, he opens them again.
"Is there something wrong with me?"
"No,"I say. "The doctor says you are fine, and that maybe the cause was just blood thats out of place."
"Out of place?" he says, falling asleep.
I fall asleep next to his hospital bed, and I feel like I'm forgetting something...

I wake up again two hours later. Bill's already normal again, and he seems to be waiting for me.
"You were sleeping so peacefully, I didn't want to wake you."
Then I know what I was forgetting.
"OHMYGOD! I FORGOT TO PICK ANNA UP AT SCHOOL!"
Bill tells me he'll drive me down there.
When we get there, Anna is outside on the front steps crying.
"Addy!" She says when I open the door.
Bill helps her into the car and buckles her seatbelt. What a gentleman! He was being so sweet!
"Addy is that your boyfriend?"
Bill and I both laugh. "No, Anna, he's not."
I think that he's not taking us to our apartment. He didn't even ask for directions to it. But we do end up at our apartment.
"Go get your stuff. You guys can stay with me."
"Forever!?" Anna says.
Bill laughs," Sure."
"I...I...thankyou, but you dont have to do-"
Bill put a finger over my lips.
"It's okay, go get your stuff."
And my thoughts are that I barely even know this guy, but somehow he's not a stranger to me. Something just tells me that he's a good person.

Chaos Crazy
March 27th, 2008, 08:09 AM
I officially have 1 reader! :cry:

Chaos Crazy
March 27th, 2008, 10:03 PM
*sighs* i wrote this three times! haha. Well, I dont see why it matters if no one's gonna read it... This may be the last post for good. I must write pretty bad...
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BILL POV:
It seems to have been forever since I've felt this great. Actually, I don't think I ever have. I really loved helping them. I took both girls shopping for new stuff. Addison kept insisting that I not buy them anything. I couldn't help it though. And I went a bit overboard.


ADDISON POV:
I didn't notice how much he had given us until we got to his Hotel room.
"You live in a hotel?" I asked.
"No...come here, I'll explain."
He led me into the next part of the room. He put a hand on my shoulder."You have to understand, I'm a singer, in a band...Tokio Hotel...sorry."
He kissed me. He really kissed me, and I barely know him.
The door opened while our lips were locked.
"Are you gonna be my new daddy?" Anna asked excitedly.
Happily ever after. Not. It was way more complicated than that, especially went I wasn't a fan of travelling.
"Ask Addy."
And Anna asked me what he said. And he finished,
"Addison, will you..."

Chaos Crazy
March 28th, 2008, 10:24 AM
Bye! I'm done with this since no one likes it :cry:

lilangel02371
March 28th, 2008, 05:08 PM
no please write more even if I'm the only one reding please write more!

D.C.Valentine
April 7th, 2008, 09:51 AM
The odds of Bill proposing to someone he's barely met is a slim chance at all, but this is your story and you write it how you want. I'd be interested in seeing where it goes, even if I find the idea of a quick marriage dull.

You have two readers now.

-DCV-

kArLa2tH
April 7th, 2008, 10:48 AM
please write more <3

ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
April 7th, 2008, 04:40 PM
noo please write more i want to know what he says ...please write more