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xgennevievex
March 27th, 2008, 08:18 PM
Prologue:
In a world where everything seems perfect.
Annelie wrapped her arms around Aiden as she realized that everything was perfect. There lives were molding into something beautiful. They were ready to live their own lives. They had found the right place and they had even met the most adorable twins. There lives were falling into place.
Nothing last forever.
Annelie feel to her knees and covered her face. Tears stained the ground as she breathed heavily. The world moved all around her. Her sobs grew harder and longer. The feelings she felt where undescribable. The heartache the hurt. No one was meant to feel this much pain.
People are deceived.
“it was nothing I did NOTHING with her” he screamed angry at Annelie’s back. She stood still while tears fell silently. She knew the truth and if he wasn’t going to tell her then what was she to do. She was angry and her face was heating up. His eyes darted back and forth from Annelie to the door. He knew what he did was wrong but he didn’t want to loose her.
Love will bring them back.
Annelie-
She pulled her hair away from her tear stained face as she took one last glance at the apartment that she had accompanied for over two years. Her hands shook with every deep breath she took. She didn’t understand why she was so distressed. This was what she had always wanted. Wiping the tears from her face she picked up her bags and walked out of the apartment door for the last time. The empty room beckoned for her to come back but she keep on. There were so many memories in this town that she couldn’t bare to let go of. She dropped her bags down on the cold ground and pulled out her camera. The only thing that could store those soon to be lost memories. “I will only be a minute” she spoke quietly to the driver. He simply nodded and closed the taxi door. Slowly she approached the grass that surrounded her apartment building. Bending down she placed her focus on the building in front of her. Click. Smiling she continued to shoot the scenery. The minutes passed as she realized the time. “Oh wow” she spoke to herself as she returned to the taxi. “I’m so sorry about that “softly she spoke as she shut the door and pulled her seat belt across her chest.
Adien-
The door slammed behind her as she traveled across her room throwing things in her suit case at the last minute. “Aiden don’t forget your stuffed animals”. She rolled her eyes as she locked the suitcase and took a last look at her room. She wasn’t going to miss this place at all. She let a heavy sigh escape her lips. Closing her eyes she inhaled breathing in the sweet smell of home. She remained with her eyes closed until the door was thrown open and into her back. “arghh whatt” she belted. Her mom was at her side dusting off her back. “I’m going to miss you honey “her mother whispered sadly as she threw her arms around her daughter. The girl just rolled her eyes and began pondering why her mother was for once being nice to her. “Mom you can still call me” the girl replied in a helpless tone. She wrapped her arms around her mother and gave her a lasting hug. The walk down the stairs was filled with chaos. Her brother yelling at her about something random and her mother pleading for her to stay. She waved good bye to them as the stepped outside and began walking to the bus stop. Finally she was away. This was what she had always wanted. Freedom.
Side note- This is my second Fanfiction so i understand that it is not amazing. It gets better and this is my first time trying this style of FanFiction writing. Please be easy on me.
Credit to bbgroove for the prologue style.
MrsKaulitz
March 27th, 2008, 08:38 PM
mmm its amazing or what ever that big word is.
xgennevievex
March 27th, 2008, 08:39 PM
mmm its amazing or what ever that big word is.
Thanks
: D
xgennevievex
March 27th, 2008, 09:21 PM
I hope people like mine as well
:/
I worked hard and have amazing things planned
MrsKaulitz
March 27th, 2008, 09:36 PM
I hope people like mine as well
:/
I worked hard and have amazing things plannedthey will, check in the morning or after school
Chaos Crazy
March 27th, 2008, 09:48 PM
More pleas :D
Ahh,, you used my favorite word<3 *cough* CHAOS *cough*
xgennevievex
March 27th, 2008, 10:01 PM
More pleas :D
Ahh,, you used my favorite word<3 *cough* CHAOS *cough*
: D
Do you really like it?
xgennevievex
March 28th, 2008, 08:09 PM
Will post more tonight
TH_luv
March 28th, 2008, 08:22 PM
eek that was good! >.< I want mehr bitter?
lilangel02371
March 28th, 2008, 09:03 PM
awesomme!! more!!!
MrsKaulitz
March 28th, 2008, 10:58 PM
wheres the post missyQ!
xgennevievex
March 28th, 2008, 11:02 PM
Chapter 2
Annelie-
The car launched forward as Annelie pulled out her cell phone. * almost there* smiling she closed the phone and pushed it back into her pocket. Her attention was drawn to the passing strangers that she knew would never be significant. This place she called home would be lost. The memories she held were nothing more then devastation .Her whole life was filled with depression and heart ache. She shrugged it all off and thought of the things to come. Within the next twenty four hours she would be in a new country starting a new life with her best friend. Their personalities were perfectly in tune. They shared so many of the same interest. Some even thought they were twins. As the taxi pulled up to the airport Annelie passed the driver some money and thanked him. She looked around frantically for Aiden whom she knew would have been here by now. Slowly she set her stuff down and as she did she felt someone light jump on her back. She squeaked with happiness as she pulled the girl into a hug. “AIDEN I'm so excited" she laughed as she jumped up and down. The happiness subsided the sadness.
Aiden-
Aiden let a sigh of relief escape her lips as she walked slowly to the bus stop. All the happy memories of this place hit her suddenly and her eyes began to tear up. The place she called home would be left behind. She knew she had to be strong for her self and even more so for Annelie. She was like the sister she never had. They were so close to each other that they were almost inseparable. As she approached the stop sign the bus pulled forward. Climbing in she sat down at the front of the bus. As soon as it took off she pulled out her cell phone and sent Annelie a text saying that she was almost there. The airport was just about ten minutes away from her house and she knew that Annelie would be there much later then herself. She smiled to herself as the scenery keep her occupied. The trip was short and before she knew it she had arrived at her destination. She nodded a thanks to the driver and pulled off the bus. Annelie didn’t seem to be there yet so she placed her stuff on a near by bench as she kept her eyes open. Her eyes scanned the airport until they found her. Smiling she ran up behind her and jumped on her back. “heyyy are you ready for our grand adventure” she laughed loudly as she was pulled into an embrace. She quickly checked her phone for the time. Their flight was set to leave in the next hour. She was that much closer to freedom.
MrsKaulitz
March 29th, 2008, 12:14 AM
Well; i love it : D
SCHREIoutLOUD
March 29th, 2008, 08:37 AM
<3
TH_luv
March 29th, 2008, 01:19 PM
awesomeness! =D
Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S
March 30th, 2008, 01:28 AM
please write more...
xgennevievex
March 30th, 2008, 10:59 PM
Chapter 3
The two girls walked into the enormous airport confused as to which tunnel to take. Annelie walked up to a side desk and asked “which tunnel do I take for the flight to Hamburg Germany at 5:30?” The attendant typed something on her computer and pointed to the farthest tunnel. Annelie nodded a thanks and pulled Aiden along with her. Annelie was tall and slim but had curves in all the right places. As for Aiden she was only an inch shorter then her best friend. Annelies piercing unusually light brown eyes scanned the tunnel for the baggage check-in. She huffed angrily as she couldn’t spot it “aiden where the **** is this thing”. Aiden just laughed and searched the tunnel as well. As she spotted it within minutes she smiled at Annelie and pulled her to it. When their many bags were checked-in the two girls walked over to the waiting section. Annelie tugged at her tight ripped blue jeans as Aiden crossed her legs over the edge of the seat. The two girls completed each other. Annelie was the girl who had been through everything but still was the most optimistic and fun loving of the two. Aiden was the girl who didn’t have everything but made the best of it. They came into each others life at just the right time. Annelie bounced up and down in excitement as Aiden tried to calm her down. Giving up Aiden smoothed her black skinny and crossed her legs once again. “Flight 594 to Hamburg Germany now boarding”. Annelie and Aiden jumped up and walked over to the entrance with their carry-ons. The lady took their tickets and nodded them forward. “I’m sooo excited” Annelie exclaimed as they took their seats at the middle of the plane. “Me too I wanted this my whole life” Aiden smiled and pulled the seat belt across her lap. The flight didn’t take off for more then thirty minutes later. As it was in the air Aiden started to read a book and Annelie pulled her mp3 player out and turn the volume up a good amount. As she pressed the next button she suddenly gave a squeak of excitement. She began bouncing slightly up and down and singing very quietly “Cuizinier avec ton petit sexe entoure de poils roux Je narrive pas a croire que tu puisses croire quon veuille de toi” Aiden rolled her eyes and returned to her book. Annelie was a quarter French and Italian and half German. Her skin was a creamy tan color and she had a strong jaw line. Her bone structure was incredible but of course she did not believe the same as others. She had a small amount of freckles across her face and a slender button nose. She knew a couple of different languages that included German, French, and English. The plane ride was long but the girls keep there self entertained.
Song-
Yelle: Je veux te voir
MrsKaulitz
March 30th, 2008, 11:07 PM
MEHR MEHR MEHR!!!!!!!!!
*DEMANDS MEHR*
I LOVE IT
xgennevievex
March 31st, 2008, 09:28 AM
Chapter 4
*BEEEEPPPP* “We will be landing in a few mintues…” Annelie woke with a shock as the loud noise pierced her ears. “jeez” the flight was almost fifteen hours long. She shook her friend trying to wake her up as well. Aiden moaned and pushed Annelie away. “pfft whatever” she said as she straightened out her black tight twloha hoodie. Her eyes scanned the plane and saw that many people where still asleep. Laughing lightly to her self she pulled her legs up onto the seat and crossed them. Aiden slowly opened her green eyes and yawned stretching her hands over her head. “Are we almost there” she asked. Annelie smiled at her best friend and nodded. Aiden and Annelie embraced in a hug and gave a squeak of excitement. This was it. They were finally here. Annelie opened the blinds on her window and examined the beautiful place below her. “Look how pretty it is here” Annlie exclaimed as Aiden leaned over her to see the view. “woah it is” Aiden sounded shocked as she sat back down. They had planned this trip for over four years and they finally succeeded. It almost seemed unreal. They had already paid for their apartment which was right next to some studio in Hamburg Germany. It was ok though Annelie was interested in working at the studio anyway. Aiden’s hands ran along her stomach as it growled. “I’m starving” she laughed as she tugged at her yellow paramour shirt that hung tightly on her body. “You’re always hungry” Annelie shoved her friend playfully as the plane began to land. “This is it” Aiden breathed in deeply and exhaled. “Finally” Annelie said breathlessly. The flight attendant came on the system once again with a loud beep and said that they were now going to let everyone off. Annelie and Aiden took their seat belts off and grabbed their bags. As soon as Aiden stood up she almost fell over. “mannn I forgot I was on a plane for FIFTEEN hours” she laughed and stretched out her legs before she began again. Annelie just laughed at her friend as she climbed over her and began walking off the plane. “Wait up Annelie don’t leave me behind” she whined. Aiden caught up with her in the lobby of the small airport. When she did Annelie was biting down on her lip ring which was placed on the right side of her lip. “Hmmm even though this place is small I have NO idea where our bags are” Annelie seemed confused. Aiden huffed sarcastically and looked around but this time she was not successful either. The only thing that they knew was that their furniture was on its way to their apartment. It was boarded on a whole different plane and it had taken off an hour earlier then theirs. “Maybe we should ask someone” Annelie suggested. Aiden agreed and walked over to the closets desk. “Auf wo die Gepäckwahl ist”. The man smiled sweetly to the two girls and said “Gehen Sie gerade und dann Drehungsrecht dort” he said pointing to the right of the tiny airport. “danke shon” Aiden replied as she grabbed Annelie’s hand and lead her once again in the right direction.
Twloha= To write love on her arms. http://www.twloha.com/index.php
What was said:
Aiden:Where is the baggage pick up??
Man: Go straight then right there.
Chapter 5 will be posted later tonight and possible 6
xgennevievex
April 2nd, 2008, 05:33 PM
Chapter 5
VERY crappy!!!
She smiled at her friend leading her in the right direction. Aiden ran her tongue against her silver ring that rested on the left side of her lip. She squinted her eyes when she saw a crowd of people ahead of them. “What’s going on up there” she asked Annelie as she was twirling her industrial piercing. “hmm..oh I dunno looks crazy” she laughed as her attention was now on the crowd rather then her left ear. Annelie pushed her bag up her shoulder and continued to walk towards the crowd. There seemed to be two boys in the center of all the commotion. Aiden coaxed her head to the left as she examined their appearances. They were both very tall. She couldn’t see their facial features because of the many people in front of them. As they walked closer she caught a better look at one of the tallest faces. He had dreads and had captivating brown eyes that were slightly darker then her own. Smiling she watched him sign autographs. When he looked up their eyes meet and Annelie stopped causing Aiden to run into her. As this happened Aiden caught her first look at the tall poofy haired boy next to the one with dreads. Her and the boy exchanged smiles and Annelie coaxed her head to the side while keeping eye contact. She had never seen someone as stunning as the boy in front of her. Aiden laughed at her friend but suddenly stopped as her eyes fell into the tall poofy haired boys eyes. Their eye contact didn’t last long but it seemed forever. After what seemed to be five minutes Aiden pushed her friend forward and they left the crowd. “Who were they” Annelie asked breathlessly. “I don’t know but they were stunning.” Aiden's breath seemed to be taken away as well. When they approached the baggage pick up their bags were waiting for them on the side. Picking them up the girls walked out of the small airport. When they were safely in the taxi and on their way to the house they began to gossip about the two boys. Suddenly the driver turned around having recognized the boys features and said “ohhh that is tokio hotel the tall one with poofy hair is named Bill and the other one you talk about is Tom” amazed at this the girls smiled and included the driver in their conversation.
Tom and Bill-
The crowd was growing larger by the seconds. They had both returned from a week long vacation on a private island. Smiling Tom walked up to the group first “ladies ladies there is enough Tom to go around” he joked as he signed the girls autographs. Some girls where screaming and some were crying. Bill walked up beside his brother and started to sign as well. “Your welcome” he would say every so often but those where the only words spoken by him. They pushed their way through the crowd. Being unsuccessful they continued to sign them as they walked closer to the exit. As Tom looked up he caught sigh of a breathtaking girl. He stopped breathing as his eyes locked with hers. He had seen many beautiful girls but she was different. As he remembered to breath he signed some more while still watching the girl who had now coaxed her head to the side. He almost gave a squeal of excitement before he caught himself. He looked down and as he did she was gone. Bill shoved his brother as he noticed his and Annelies stare. He looked at the girl but his eye wondered over to the shorter one Aiden. His eyes catching hers he smiled. She was beautiful and his heart began to beat faster. This time it was Tom who nudged him. Laughing they both pushed through the crowd to the back exit where they were mobbed with more girls. Bill and Tom didn’t mind the attention I mean this was their dream. When they reached the white van they jumped in and waved at the fans running after them. When they were far away they too began to talk about the girls. “She was stunning Bill I…just couldn’t pull myself away” he sounded like he was in a daze. “Did you see the other girl I mean WOW” they exchanged their thoughts on the girls hoping that one day they would see them again.
ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
April 2nd, 2008, 05:54 PM
love it please write more
xgennevievex
April 2nd, 2008, 06:12 PM
Do you really??
MrsKaulitz
April 12th, 2008, 03:20 PM
more, nao :D
xgennevievex
April 18th, 2008, 04:44 PM
I'm sorry for not writing
So much stuff has been going on
Updates coming tonight bbys!
: D
xgennevievex
April 18th, 2008, 06:20 PM
Sucky but it will hold you guys over
Chapter 6
The girls-
Annelie’s heart pounded as the taxi pulled further into Germany. Her piercing eyes scanned over the people walking along the sidewalk. A smile spread across her pale lips revealing a bright smile. The 3 horrible years she spent in braces paid off. Her teeth were gleaming. To her left sat Aiden who was listening to her zune while jumping around. Annelie raised one of her eyebrows and waited for Aiden to glance at her. When she did the two girls flared with laughter. Annelie then turned her attention back to the passing images. Her complexion was often envied by many. It was flawless but that was not always the case. During her junior year her face had broken out and she spent her whole year trying to get her complexion back. Thankfully in her senior year she succeeded. The only make-up that rested on her face was smoky eye-liner and a glide of mascara. Her hands rested in her lap as her legs bounced up and down. Staying still was often very hard for her. Her lips began to move with the words that blared from her head phones. “Hey operator what’s the 411 I met a girl last night and I think that she’s the one”. She tapped her foot along to the beat. Aiden had her legs crossed now laying her head against the window. Her eyes were tightly shut as she mouthed the words to paramore’s my heart. Anxiety rested inside of them as the car came to a stop. Aiden pulled her head phones from her ears and asked “Why are we stopping” she seemed confused as did Annelie as she realized what was happening. “I’m sorry ladies I can not take you any further the hill to your apartment is very steep and my car can not take the incline” Annelie huffed with frustration and nodded to him. Aiden tossed him the money and they both jumped out of the car grabbing their bags from the back. As the taxi drove off Annelie placed her ipod into her luggage safely and looked at their surroundings. Aiden’s eyes wondered above them when she caught sight of a sign. “hmmm some record company” she laughed sadly. “bleh this is ridiculous” Annelie said as she sat on the curb. Adien gave her friend a weak smile and sat on her lap. “Everything will be fine” she said as she hugged her best friend. When she let her arms fall to her lap a white van pulled up and two very familiar boys got out.
Tom and Bill-
The van pulled away from the airport as many girls ran after it crying and screaming. Bill waved happily to them as Tom slouched down in his seat. His was tired from the long trip. After ten minutes all the fans had subsided and nothing was left but the street and its many wonders. They chatted about the two breath taking girls for a while until Tom drifted off to sleep. They were returning to the apartment which they shared with two other older boys. First they had to meet at the studio which was very convenient. Bill had one leg resting under his other and his hands interlaced in his lap. He was very excited to see his friends and crew again. They had been gone for way to long he thought. A permanent smile was placed on his face. Tom rested his head against the window smiling in his sleep. The two were perfect for each other. Identical twins but two different people. They had a strong connection that many would never experience. Bill bit down on his lip as he began to bounce up and down happily when the studio was becoming into view. Tom opened his eyes and licked his lips. “hmm home” he said breathing deeply. As they grew closer they saw two girls sitting on the curb. They looked very familiar. The shorter of the two was sitting on the taller one. Tom squeaked with excitement as he realized that they were the girls that the boys were fascinated by at the airport. Bill smiled widely as he clapped his hands together. “wait” Bill said as he threw his arm against his brothers chest. “Compose yourself” he laughed as they both calmed down and stepped out of the car.
Song sung by Annelie
Anniversary by Josh Phiffer
http://www.myspace.com/joshphiffer
RetteMich
April 19th, 2008, 01:44 PM
i like it so u HAVE 2 post more :D
DeeDee
April 20th, 2008, 08:17 AM
gahh why did you stoppp ?!
i love it
mehr bittee i beg
xgennevievex
April 23rd, 2008, 04:19 PM
Chapter 7
Annelie scanned the dread head with her bright eyes. He was just as astonishing as she remembered. The time difference being a mere thirty minutes. Her hands moved from the lap of Aiden and onto the cold rough ground. Her legs supported her thin friend. A deceiving smile spread across the girls pink lips. Almost instantaneously a smile formed across Aidens lips as well. Annelie coaxed her head to the left and bit down gently on her lip. The taller of the two boys stepped out of the car. His long legs making Aiden’s look smaller then imagined. He was extremely thin as was Aiden. Her body was more filled out then the boys of course. The two boys pulled there bags from the car and as soon as they set them down one very large man swept them away. Annelie and Aiden stood up and brushed their bodies off. Annelie tugged at her sweater that clinged to her thin hour glass figure. The two boys approached them smiling widely. “I’m bill” the poofy haired boy said “and this is Tom” he continued as he pointed to the “gangster” boy.
More when I get home from school
: D
xgennevievex
April 24th, 2008, 05:35 PM
More tonight
If anyone cares lol
xgennevievex
April 25th, 2008, 07:16 PM
Chapter 7 continued
Sorry its so crappy
Annelie nodded parting her lips “I’m Annelie and this is Aiden” she smiled pointing to her best friend. Aiden waved her hand in a quick motion while continuing to smile. Annelie placed her hand on her hip as she leaned into it. “So what are two fine ladies like your self doing here” he asked raising his left eyebrow. Tom interlaced in fingers making a triangle out of them. “We just moved in to those apartments up there” Aiden said as she pointed to the only other building that was up the extremely large hill. Tom smirked as his eyes ran over Annelie’s face and then her body. “Really” Bill asked the excitement rising in his voice. “Yea but the taxi wouldn’t take us any further then this” Annelie said huffing in frustration once again. Her eyes wondered from the hill to Tom. Almost instantaneously a smile spread across her lips when their eyes locked. Tom ran his tongue over his lip ring. Annelie bit down on her lip gently averting her eyes away from his. “We have actually lived there a while” Bill replied leaning against the glass window trying to look as cool as possible. “Wow” Aiden whispered as she stared at Bill. “That’s so awesome” Annelie smiled “we should throw a party one day” She suggested as she shoved her hands into her pockets. Laughing the twins agreed. “Well we have to get up this enormous hill our stuff is waiting to be unpacked” Aiden sighed picking her heavy bags up. “Come by sometimes our room is 973” Annelie said as she picked her bags up as well . She smiled back at the boys. “See you guys around” they said waving at them as they climbed the huge hill. By the time they reached the apartments they were so exhausted. “Oh man” Aiden breathed heavily. She was bent over her chest moving with her breathing. “That was intense” Annelie laughed. After gaining more strength they walked into the building. They rode the elevator to the 9th floor. "floor nine" a squeaky lady's voice said over the intercom. “Here we are” Aiden said with excitement. Annelie pulled the key out of her pocket and gently slid it into the key hole. Aiden kicked the door open as they got their first glance at their apartment. Walking in the girls dropped their bags. Eyes wide and smiles spread across their lips. Annelie wrapped her arms around Aiden as she realized that everything was perfect. There lives were molding into something beautiful. They were ready to live their own lives. They had found the right place and they had even met the most adorable twins. Their lives were falling into place.
MrsKaulitz
April 25th, 2008, 09:15 PM
I adore your story more than anyone elses
♥
xgennevievex
May 11th, 2008, 12:33 AM
Chapter 8
The dim light shadowed the face of a tired Annelie. The two girls had been unpacking for four straight hours and they were exhausted. Annelie had her legs crossed and her head lowered as she stared at a photo album in front of her. It brang back many unpleasant memories. She tossed it to the side as a yawn escaped her lips. “Hey I’m going to go get us some food want to come?” Aiden asked leaning in the arch way by the kitchen, “sure I can’t stand unpacking another box” Annelie replied enthusiastically. She jumped up and dusted the dirt off her legs. She still wore the same jeans from earlier but her jacket was off revealing a black tank top. She stretched her arms out and arched her back a small pop was heard. “Man at least we got the beds up” Annelie said as she pulled her shoulder blade length dark cherry red hair into a pony tail. Her hair had many layers causing the pony tail to appear quite choppy and for some hair to fall around her face. Aiden smiled appearing in front of the door her clothes were similar to Annelies. Aiden wore dark skinny jeans and a purple tank top. Her hair fell to the middle of her back and had plenty more layers then Annelies. The color was very different from most. Her hair was naturally black but she accented it with blue, purple, hot pink, and orange highlights. Aiden let her hair fall as she slipped on a black simple zip up jacket. Annelie walked over to the door and opened it waiting for Aiden to walk through it. Slamming it shut Annelie locked it and walked to the elevator at the end of the hall. Another door was heard closing and the girls glanced down the hall way. Walking towards them were two acceptingly pretty girls. One had brown hair the other blonde. “Hey” the blonde one said as she pressed the down arrow. “Did you guys just move in” the brown headed one asked in return. “Um yea we did” Annelie responded smiling. The elevator had arrived now and the four girls stepped into it. Aiden pressed the one button and leaned against the wall. The elevator jerked down as the four girls held a conversation about the apartments and everyone in them. “Talk to you guys later” Aiden said waving at the two girls. “They were nice” she smiled turning to her best friend. “Yea they actually were” Annelie said as she glanced around the lobby. Her eyes stopped and so did her breathing. “Annelie” Aiden said waving her hand in front of her face. Annelie caught sight of Tom and Bill but mostly Tom. “Sorry he caught me off guard” she smiled as she finally responded to Aiden. Aiden’s gaze moved from her friend and onto the twins. Smiling they walked over to them. “hey do you know of any good food places” Annelie asked rubbing her flat stomach “ were starving” Aiden added. Tom jumped at the surprise but kept his cool “yea we can think of a couple places” he said as he ran his tongue across his lip ring.
MrsKaulitz
May 11th, 2008, 01:05 AM
AWAAH!
I LOVE IT!
Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S
May 11th, 2008, 01:08 AM
my goodness you are such a good writer I love your story I can't wait to read more!!!
xgennevievex
May 11th, 2008, 01:16 AM
Thank you
: )
i will write more soon
bbgroove
May 11th, 2008, 01:27 AM
yay... you updated (^_^)
amandaaraujo
May 11th, 2008, 02:52 AM
OMGtis story is awesome cool kk im a new reader and of course your neew fan becauae im always a fan of every FF in this Category so keep writing because im really interested :D
xgennevievex
May 15th, 2008, 04:44 PM
Chapter 9
3 Months later
Annelie and Aiden were moved in and had been for some time. Annelies job at the record company down the road hadn’t worked out as planned but she did have a nice paying job at a different record company. Aiden had landed a job at the same place but as a photographer for an unknown band. The two boys from before were now fairly good friends with the girls. Every now and then they would stop by and chat sometimes even go out. The boys weren’t around much because as the girls found out they were in a popular band by the name of Tokio Hotel who were getting big in America. Annelie and Aiden had no idea why they didn’t know who they were at first glance. The brunette and blonde from their first night were now their new best friends. It was 6:30 in the evening and Annelie had been home for more then an hour. Her hair was pulled into a sloppy pony tail with her layered side bangs hanging out. She sat on top of the counter with her legs hanging off the edge. Adorning her torso was a black and blue company hoodie that slung averagely on her body. Her eyes scanned the empty apartment hoping that someone would stop by soon. Annelie tugged at her short blue jean shorts as she heard the door open. She pressed her hands on the counter and leaned forward to catch sight of who had come in. When she saw that it was not her black haired best friend she gave a small sigh but quickly smiled. “Hey we got done early so I thought I would stop by” the guest said as he walked into the kitchen and leaned against the counter top opposite of Annelie. “I have been so bored I’m happy somebody came by” she said as she examined his features. “So do you know when Aiden will be home me and Bill were thinking of going out” he said crossing his arms across his chest. His head was lowered looking at the ground but his eyes would occasionally glance up and run over Annelie’s face then body just as he did the first day of meeting her. “That sounds like fun I think she should be home in about 20 mintues do you want to hang out here until she comes” She asked swinging her legs back and forth. Her lips spread into a smile as she saw him look up and nodded smiling as well. “If your hungry there is food in the frig” Annelie said pointing to the left of her. “I’m sooo starving” he laughed unfolding his arms and opening the small black refrigerator. The door opened and two figures walked in. One very tall and one much shorter. Annelie smiled brightly as she jumped down off the counter and ran to her friend hugging her tightly. Aiden looked tired but happy she had meet Bill in the lobby and they had walked up here together. After hugging Aiden she gave Bill a small hug and returned to the kitchen were Tom was shoving his face. Aiden and Bill followed her and burst into laughter as they saw Tom. “jezz pig” Bill said walking over to the table at the end of the kitchen. “so you girls ready to go out?” He asked. The girls exchanged looks and replied with a no. They ran to their rooms and began throwing clothes around. When what seemed like thirty minutes had passed the girls were ready. Annelie wore a pair of fitting dark blue jeans with a blue decorative tank top. Along with that she had pulled her hair down and had applied smoky dark eye make-up and had put on blue pumps. Aiden wore a pair of black skinny jeans with a red decorative tank top. Her make-up was dark as usually and her hair was pulled up into a bun. Her bangs fell around her face as she slipped on a pair of red pumps. Smiling at each other they walked out of the room and as they did the boys dropped whatever was in their hands and smiled nervously
amandaaraujo
May 15th, 2008, 07:35 PM
ooh nice... :D :D please update soon
Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S
May 15th, 2008, 08:08 PM
aww....how adorable!!!! where are they going???
xgennevievex
June 21st, 2008, 01:22 AM
Going to update soon
I PROMISE!
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