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MrsKaulitz
March 27th, 2008, 08:26 PM
Shanie stomped Into school turning up her ipod ignoring her mom’s yells. Her and her mom had just got into the worst fight of they month. The second she walked into the school she was bombarded by her two best friends and Mr.Gluam the principal, she could tell now that he was not happy with her. “Shanie, I told you that if you did not change you hair color and the style you would be suspended.” Her hair was black with pink, orange, purple, and blue highlights and it stuck out more then a infuriated porky pine. Kandace and Zoey where hiding behind Shanie like they where the ones in trouble. But Shanie just frowned and replied angrily “I told you yesterday Mr.Gluam, I can’t change my hair color right now because we do not have the money.” She was lying. She had four thousand dollars laying at home under her bed for her and Armelle’s run away escape to Germany. He Grunted and walked off. Zoey and Kandace both grabbed one of Shanie’s hands and pulled her down the hall way flopping down pulling her with them. “so do you have bill today? What’s the news on tokio hotel” Kandace squealed obnoxiously “Yeah we know you know so no lying!” “okay guys Bill is better now, sortta he is still sick and cant talk but his surgery was yesterday.” “awwh.” They both threw on the fakest sad smiles ever “what about Bill. Do you have him” Zoey asked trying to seem calm Shanie pulled out her yellow ipod with a black case and orange stickers on the back that said bill. “Of course I do, and nein, you can’t borrow him.” Zoey rolled her eyes and looked up. Shanie screamed “ow what was that for you jerk!” She had been kicked in the back. She looked up it was Pete her boyfriend. She stood up and hugged him.
Then she threw her self back onto the ground praying for the bell to ring she wanted away as soon a possible. “hey what’s the time Zoe?” “8:30 why?” Shanie didn’t answer she just gathered her stuff up and began to walk away as the bell was ringing she was half way down the hall when everyone caught up to her she hated the hallways. She pushed and shoved people out of the way till she got to the classroom, she wanted this day to be over with it was her last day in Texas, or American even. Half way threw Mrs. Evans language arts class she had fallen asleep to her rambling. She was startled awake by the bell to get to the next class. ”yes, now to a class I can use German” she whispered to herself clenching her fist tightly. Some girls looked back at her and giggled her smile slowly faded away, she tried not to cry but couldn’t handle her tears where to much for her to control. She shoved through the girls and ran to her next class, she couldn’t figure out why it hurt so much she was used to the teasing she had been putting up with it since she was thirteen, and she was seventeen now. She whipped away her tears and started down the hall, she passed up her class and keep walking it turned into a run she ran straight out of the school and down to the convenient store that was a little ways down the street. She pulled out her phone and texted Armelle.
Shanie; Leave school now ell.
Armelle; why?
Shanie; Armelle, we are leaving today get your *** out of the school and meet me at my house.
Shanie looked around her only way home was her mom and they weren’t talking so she called Armelle. “never mind meet me at the Exxon.” “okay” Shanie hung up and waited inside looking for food thirty minutes later Armelle showed up her pockets bulging “what’s in your pockets?” “I snuck into your room and grabbed the money.” She smiled “how are we getting to the airport”
xgennevievex
March 27th, 2008, 08:31 PM
I love it.
Its astonishing
: D
MrsKaulitz
March 27th, 2008, 08:34 PM
Danke schon steph : D
MrsKaulitz
March 27th, 2008, 08:39 PM
Augh i hope people like it
agoraphobiaticalibi
March 27th, 2008, 09:16 PM
i like it! :D it's really good!
MrsKaulitz
March 27th, 2008, 09:21 PM
danke schon
agoraphobiaticalibi
March 27th, 2008, 09:31 PM
ur welcome! u should post more pretty soon here!
MrsKaulitz
March 27th, 2008, 10:00 PM
I will if i get more feedbackk
lilangel02371
March 28th, 2008, 05:12 PM
MORE!! I LIKE IT!!
MrsKaulitz
March 28th, 2008, 07:33 PM
"a taxi okay?" “perfect” Shanie said walking to the yellow car parked out side filling up on gas.
Armelle Jumped in the back and Shanie followed her in she seem a little to excited for her. Elle was jumping up and down “where too” asked the driver sounding quite annoyed with Elle. “um the closest airport.” He looked at Shanie then the ever so bouncy Elle. “okay, where are you girl off too?” “Germany.” Elle smiled. Shanie tightened her grip on her binder why was she so nervous? Elle must of sensed her nerves because she shot Shanie a very worried look the grabbed her binder pulling out a picture of Bill Kaulitz and handing it to her “come on you know you want it ill throw it out the window if you don’t take it” she began to roll down Shanie tackled her snatching the picture away from her threatening hand. “don’t you dare!” She said hugging the picture “this will be my future husband you ding-dong” she stuck her tongue out at her.
Once they arrived at the airport they thanked the taxi driver and Shanie paid him while Armelle went to buy the tickets for the next flight to Germany. As Shanie calmly walked in Armelle was yelling at the lady she was trying to buy tickets from “what do you mean you wont sell me the tickets IM THE ONE WITH THE MONEY!” she was wildly waving her hands and the money around when Shanie walked up to her “what’s going on?” she looked at the red Elle and then at the lady, “your friend is trying to buy tickets to Germany, you are under aged.” She looked back to Elle “and I can not sell you the tickets.” Armelle sighed and stomped off infuriated “I’m sorry Miss.” She said walking away to catch up with Armelle when she bumped into a very tall, scrawny young man her eyes traveled up his body until they met his eyes she choked back a scream she knew he would never date a fan “I’m sorry bill.” She mumbled her face was burning red. He smiled “its okay.” His eyes looked at her his eyes seemed to be admiring her, Shanie brushed the fallen hair out of her face. “So I’m Shanie.” She said smiling by this time Armelle was standing by her “and I’m Armelle, you guys can call me Elle though” they all started walking Elle and tom in back and Bill and Shanie in front “so where are you and Elle off too?” “well we where going to Germany but the chick wouldn’t take our money she said we are too young” Shanie did air quotes when she said young and Bill laughed “well how old are you?” “seventeen.” She answered quickly huffing “hmm if you give me the money I will get them for you.”
“okay.” She smiled and handed him the money. “ So where were you off to?” “Germany.”
lilangel02371
March 28th, 2008, 07:58 PM
MORE THAT WAS SOO FRIKKIN AMAZZZZZING!!more more more more!!
MrsKaulitz
March 28th, 2008, 08:19 PM
Oh mein gott, ill try as soon as possible but you have to do me a favor befor i write more
viewtopic.php?f=23&t=1291 (http://tokiohotel.pop24.de/forum/us/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=1291)
read that und comment.
lilangel02371
March 28th, 2008, 09:04 PM
ok i did i likted it anyway WRITE MORE ASAP!!!
SCHREIoutLOUD
March 28th, 2008, 09:13 PM
<3
MrsKaulitz
March 28th, 2008, 09:45 PM
Glade you all like it
im working on more
lilangel02371
March 28th, 2008, 10:00 PM
OH JA!! YOUR WORKING ON MORE!! lmao
MrsKaulitz
March 28th, 2008, 10:54 PM
I dont this part is going to be as good D:
MrsKaulitz
March 28th, 2008, 10:59 PM
HERES A SHORT LITTLE POST TO TIDE YOU GUYS OVER : D
Shanie smiled at bill and playfully bumped into him flirting with him.
Armelle ran up to Shanie and bill tom’s hand in hers. “im with tom!!” she was jumping up and down screaming everyone was looking people had pulled out cameras and you could hear the whispers of teenage girls. “Elle, Bill is going to get us our tickets!” They both jumped up and down screaming excitedly. Shanie turned around to thank bill when he suddenly leaned in his lips meeting hers. He quickly pulled away. ”oops.” His face turned and light shade of red “nein, its okay.” She replied smiling her and bill walked to the lady. “by the way, where is georg in gustav?” “oh there in Germany we are meeting them there.” Bill smiled and played with Shanies fingers, she grabbed a hold of is hand and looked down as he spoke to the woman about there tickets.
“okay we have the tickets now lets go find Elle and Tom.” Shanie giggled
lilangel02371
March 28th, 2008, 11:03 PM
MORE!!
MrsKaulitz
March 28th, 2008, 11:03 PM
oh mein gott
i cant write like fastly i have to work so it comes out right and not all crappy like my last one
lilangel02371
March 28th, 2008, 11:12 PM
aww lmao okies thensky I'll waitsky then evensky thoughsky I dont likesky tosky ^.^ lmaosky
MrsKaulitz
March 28th, 2008, 11:44 PM
“okay we have the tickets now lets go find Elle and Tom.” Shanie giggled bill smiled at her and kissed her cheek lightly Shanie suddenly fell to the ground and was laughing tom had slobber all over his face, he rubbed his mouth quickly getting spit all over his over sized jacket. “heh you didn’t see that did you?” “neeeiiin.” Shanie and bill replied trying not to laugh as She got up off the ground “so where is Elle, I need to give her the ticket.” “the restroom” tom replied stubbornly “okay bill you wait her” Shanie skipped off to the restroom humming loudly “ARMEEEEELLLLLE!” Screamed Shanie into the stalls “what Shane, im right here.” She sounded upset, “what’s wrong Elle?” “I think me and tom are going way to fast, I just want to be friends first, im so confused Shanie-ray.” That was Shanies full name she knew something was really wrong. “its okay elle-bell” Shanie hugged her best friend “oh hey, Bill got our tickets.” She handed her the ticket and placed her hands on Armelle’s shoulders. “we need to go back out there be brave sweetie.” Shanie grabbed her hands and walked out of the door “where’s tom?” she asked bill who was oddly standing right at the door. “uhm he’s behind there” He was pointing behind the door “oh mein gott!!” Shanie swung the door back open and Tom fell over with it “tom what where you doing” Elle ask kneeling down by him worried “not listing…” he smiled and kissed her on the cheek.
lilangel02371
March 29th, 2008, 12:00 AM
more!!
MrsKaulitz
March 30th, 2008, 06:24 PM
<3
SCHREIoutLOUD
March 30th, 2008, 06:52 PM
mehr mehr mehr =]
MrsKaulitz
March 30th, 2008, 08:18 PM
okay
ill work on it
MrsKaulitz
March 30th, 2008, 10:13 PM
Heres a nice new chunk : D!
As Shanie and Elle stood right before they boarded the plane they said bye to the twins, they would be riding first class while Shane and Elle would not be, Tom and Elle where in a lip lock Shanie and Bill where holding hands staring at each other intensely Bill leaned in for a kiss but Shanie was pulled away by Armelle. She attempted to pull him with her but he let go and stood there. “you had to do that Armelle?” Shanie complained angrily “well did you want to miss our flight cause you and mister man where making out?” Shanie sighed she had a point, besides she had right to kiss him whenever how ever. “halloo Earth to Shanie-ray!!” “HUH WHAT?” “we land in twenty minutes und you talk in your sleep.” Elle was smiling bouncing around every where, She ran up to tom and kissed him throwing her arms around him. Shanie skipped over to bill “well, im finally here!” She squealed excitedly she was loosening up around bill “so where are you guys staying” She asked him, she felt kind of stupid knowing he lived in Germany. “Our home.” He laughed. Armelle ran up to bill “can we stay with you guys until we get money for our apartment?” She was holding her hands and swaying back and forth trying to look as cute and innocent as possible. Bill just looked at her and nodded. “YAY!” Shanie jumped up and down clapping she tackled bill into a hug and kissed him blushing. “Shanie!” gasped Elle trying not to laugh. Bill laughed “Awwh, I liebe dich.” “I love you too.”
MrsKaulitz
March 30th, 2008, 10:33 PM
<3
MrsKaulitz
March 30th, 2008, 10:36 PM
do you not like the storry
agoraphobiaticalibi
March 30th, 2008, 11:00 PM
i like the story!!!!! :D
MrsKaulitz
March 30th, 2008, 11:24 PM
dats good im wrking on it
agoraphobiaticalibi
March 30th, 2008, 11:34 PM
good, u better be working on it!!! lol
MrsKaulitz
April 1st, 2008, 09:27 PM
yay a new partt!
Shanie whispered in his ear. Armelle grabbed her arm and pulled her away to the baggage they had sent it a few days before o everything was there. “hey Tommy baby where do you guys live?” He glanced at bill who was staring at Shanie admiring her every move, her every breath, every blink of her eye. “bill!” Tom shoved him He blushed when he finally realized that he had been caught staring “what?” “the girls want to know where we live, where do we live?” “um lets just show them” he laughed at tom and his confused face. Bill walked over to Shanie and held her hand “we’ll have someone send your bags to our house.” He walked behind her hiding from every camera flash and fan attempting to see them.
Shanie laughed as they left the building and got into a car. Shanie sat with bill laying her head onto his sholder. He smiled and ran his hands threw her flattened hair Tom and Armelle where on the other side of them playing with each other Tom was holding on to Armelle’s hand while she tried to get loose and steal his hat. Shanie laughed as they pulled up to a house. She had finally got his hat. Shanie jumped out of the car and stood there staring at the home they where going to stay until they found a home of there own and had money
<3ByYourSide<3
April 2nd, 2008, 04:27 PM
awww. i just read all of this and loved it!
MrsKaulitz
April 4th, 2008, 08:38 PM
Danke schon
sorry i havent posted in a while i got grounded from my laptop and apperently my mutti is trying to keep me AWAY from tokio hotel and anything to do with them
DeeDee
April 16th, 2008, 02:30 PM
* new reader*
mehr hunnij
MrsKaulitz
April 20th, 2008, 03:18 PM
Okay, I may not have a new post up today, it depends i got my laptop taken away do to grades but there better, so i guess i can write.
MrsKaulitz
April 26th, 2008, 09:24 PM
LOOK KIDS A NEW BIT <3
She was knocked over by Armelle who had jumped out of the car and ran straight into her. “auff!” Shanie shouted waving her hands in the air trying to keep her self standing. She was wearing toms hat and trying to get around Shanie she shoved Shanie out of the way and took off inside tom trailing after her struggling to keep his pants up. “billlllly.” Shanie called back behind her “yessums?” “hurry up. I wonna see your house and go site seeing” she giggled stepping back so he could get out he finally stepped out. “it’s a bout time!” Shanie playfully shoved him, she giggled as they walked inside bumping into each other. Once they got inside the first thing they saw was tom chasing elle he wasn’t holding his pants up any more, Shanie shouted “hey tom your pants are gonna, Oh my god pull your pants up!” she quickly covered her eyes and elle laughed and bills hand shot over his eyes tom was as red as a cherry he struggled to pull his pants up. “jeez Tom haven’t you ever heard of a belt?!?” Armelle teased tossing him the hat.
MrsKaulitz
April 27th, 2008, 02:10 AM
Oi vey no one likes it no more D:
amandaaraujo
April 27th, 2008, 03:10 AM
oh come on dont be like that keep writing have patients its awesome and funny suggestionput some drama into it ive noticed people here like drama :D
xgennevievex
April 27th, 2008, 04:09 AM
You need to write more.
Your killing me
: D
MrsKaulitz
April 27th, 2008, 04:10 AM
Its to early for drama but i have some planned : D
amandaaraujo
April 27th, 2008, 05:53 AM
Its to early for drama but i have some planned : D
KK your the writer hehehe keep writing your soo good at it keep writing and check out my FF love hurts looove your story :D
tomismistress2343
August 2nd, 2010, 10:27 AM
please write more i'm waiting for it patiently.... ~sits on hands and rocks back and forth staring at the computer~
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