just a poem i wrote--> Hearts Whisper

[setsuna3]

Most people don't hear it.
some just don't listen.
this voice different from any other,
is the part of you that cries out to you,
impersonating your mental voice.
your hearts whisper.
it tells you what to want.
secretly working with you.
at times even speaking for you.
posing as a shapeshifter to sometimes ruin you,
and sometimes make your life a perfect dream.
yet always asking for one thing in return.
the heart of another.
i may not be able to grant this wish.
for i am nobody, yet someone so very special.
so hard to be wanted.
as soft as a cloud, and as hard as a diamond.
spending nights kissing stars and days pretending.
my heart quietly begging. "please oh, please"
whispers becoming screams. "please i need this now!"
and all i can say is "i am so sorry".

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tell me what you think ; )

[POGOx3]

i like "your heart whispers".
i kinda got this outta that line:
you have to listen closely to heart
to hear what it says.

nice :]

[setsuna3]

Please comment because i want to know what you think. even if its a little mean. :cry:

[Izzylicous]

Lub it!!!!!!!!But I like more sadder and dramatic poems.....I lub it!

[BlondPunk]

I like it :]

[GustavsGirl14]

i luvd it its so true