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luvukaulitztwins
April 6th, 2008, 04:11 PM
Okay I wrote this today ik I'm doing 3 ff's at a time but thts easy I just posted it bcose I was bored so I thought I wuld carry on with it after I give u the first chapter Engjoy
Chapter 1
I woke up by my alarm hearing the radio and a discjockey talking about the English army. I turned over,moaned and smashed my hand on the off button. I looked at the time eleven 'o' clock. I got up and walked down the stairs into the kitchen. My phone went off so I picked it up, it was my best friend Issabella.
"Yo what up Izz"
"Okay huge news were you planning on going to the skate park?"
"Uh maybe I'm not to sure well...I...guess a yes"I had a confused look on my face.
"Okay meet you there at one 'o' clock bye"
"Huh...wait..."Then the disconnected tone came, I sighed and put my phone down. My brother walked down and came in and messed up my hair.
"BLANE!"I moaned, he giggled.
"You already look like the bride of frankenstein...oh wait you still do"He said giving a fake laugh I gave him evil eyes. He was making toast I was waiting to grab it and steal it from in. I took it and bit it then he tried to take it and saw I bit it, I smiled and butterd it. Blane shook his head. I skipped into the living room and sat down and watched TV. After and hour and thirty minutes later I looked at the time twelve thirty. I ran up stairs,jumped in the shower and washed my hair. I took out a tight fitted top of Bullet For My Valentine,black skinny jeans and black and white checkerd vans. It was too hot to wear a jumper so I picked up my arm warmers that I bought from Blue Banana. They we're black with lace coming up the back and buckles at the front. I brushed my long straight brown hair and took out the hair dryer and dried my hair as quick as I could.I ran into Blanes room and stole £40, I got down stairs I picked up my bag.
"Pay ya back tomorrow bro see ya"I yelled running out the door. I walked quickly to the skate park. Once I got there I saw all my friend Jake,Jack,Brad,Issabella,Sara,Jane,John and Lucy. Jake ran over and hugged me then kissed me on the cheek.
"Guna your late...doesn't matter"Issabella yelled. She pulled my wrist and sat me next to her on a bench.
"Okay you know the new film Death Insanity ...well...my aunt has been invited to the premiere and the after party...so...she can't go so she is letting me go and I can bring a guest...you wanna come"
"**** yea it will b awesome to see famous people in person"
"Uh...one more thing it's in two days"
"2 ****ING DAYS"
"Yea sorry we will go shopping tomorrow" I sighed and got up and walked to my other friends. Six hours later I came home I was tierd and it was only eight pm. So I got into my Emily The Strange PJ's and got into bed.
Okay this is all I'm writing for now if anyone likes it comment so I will write more ik it's kinda **** and ik it's short :mrgreen:
luvukaulitztwins
April 6th, 2008, 06:07 PM
Okay nobody likes it i suld stop **** i wish i had not wrot any more on my computer IM SUCH A *****
bbgroove
April 6th, 2008, 07:10 PM
WAIT!!!!!!
I really liked it... mostly because my name is Blaine (^_^) but I'm a girl...
and it is a very good first chapter
please post more.......please
luvukaulitztwins
April 6th, 2008, 07:36 PM
Okay here is chapter 2 i guess no one likes it but im bored so here to nobody
Chapter 2
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Next day
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I forgot to set my alarm . Someone banged one my door. I moaned and opened the door it was Issabella.
"DO YOU KNOW WHAT TIME IT IS I HAVE BEEN PHONNING SINCE 11AM THE SHOPS OPENED THREE HOURS AGO GO GET READY" I looked at the clock it say one 'o' clock. I ran and had a shower, I came out and got changed. I wore green converses,pink skinny jeans and green and pink striped top with a white skull burning in flames. I ran down stairs, once I was in the living room I saw Blane and Issabella fighting over the remote looked like flirting to me.
"Guna money"Blane asked.
"Uh...I need that for today"
"Okay here" He took out £70 I smiled. I kissed him on the cheek.
"Thanks bro see ya" Me and Issabella ran out. We went on the train to Camden market. We went into Blue Banana I bought New rock boots and a purple and plaid mini skirt with fishnet at the bottom made by Death Kitty,but Issabella bought nothing. So we went to Hellwear. I bout a t-shirt and Issabella finally bought a skirt it was black and white it had lots of fishnet and had white lace running through it and T.U.K shoes. We went into Chriminal Damage last and Issabella bought a plain black T-Shirt. We went home at about eight. I went home and all night me and Issabella was talking about it.
Guna says:Who do u think will b there
Issabella says:idk i wish i knew i wuld luv someone from Sum 41 to b there
Guna says:yea lolz maybe even Bill Kaulitz
Issabella says:yea i wuld luv him 2 come and bring the others i wuld luv to see Georg but i doubt they will be there
Guna says:yea
We kept talking about it till it got to 3am. I went to bed.
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Next Day
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I slept I did not know for how long. Then I woke up my eyes we're blinded by the sun. I sat up and looked to my left. The clock read two 'o' clock. I sighed four hours till the premiere. I walked down stairs. I saw my mum dad and my brother and my little sister.
"Why are you not at school"I yelled.
"There ill"My mum said.
"Sure they are I missed six form"
"It's okay first time you missed one you need your rest"My parents walked out. I sat on the sofa with my legs crossed.
"So why you faking"
"Because"
"Because what"
"I don't wanna go to school"
"Why"
"I don't know"
"What about you Jaisca"
"Oh same as Blane" I sighed. Blane sat next to me. I glared at him.
"What you want"
"Nothing" I sat there I then fell asleep on Blane's shoulder. I got woken up by my mum.
"Dear"
"Huh"
"Issabella is here" I woke up and got up. I ran upstairs and had a shower. I got changed into my normal clothes and showed Issabella where to change. I went into my room and got changed into my new clothes. Ten minutes later I came out my friend was waiting.
"You look like a punk"We said in unison. We left for the premiere. We waited and walked through we entered the movie theater I sat down I looked next to me. I smiled at the guy he smiled at me back I looked at him again,it was Bill Kaulitz I sat there and looked foward but I could see him in the corner of my eye. I sat and watched the movie all through out the movie I could see him staring at me. At the end of the movie I left out a different way.
Short crappy sorry I wuld post more tonight but I can't it's 00:38 post more 2moz
RetteMich
April 6th, 2008, 07:45 PM
post more plz :D
luvukaulitztwins
April 7th, 2008, 05:44 AM
Chapter 3
I found Issabella.
"You will never guess who I sat next to"
"Who"
"Bill Kaulitz"
"And I sat next to Georg Listing"
"Woo so our wishes kinda come true"
"No wishes never come true we was just lucky"
It was now ten 'o' clock.
Bill's POV:
I want to find that girl who was she. I know she was not famous but she was just so beautiful. I have got to find her.
Gun's POV
Issabella pulled my wrist and pulled me into the afterparty.
"Wow it's dark look it's Johnny Depp"Then I screamed Issabella put her hand over my mouth and smiled to the people looking at me. She pulled me over and sat me down at the bar.
"That was so embarassing"Issabella whispered.
"And look Orlando Bloom"Issabella turned her head
"HE IS SO FREAKING HOT"
"I know"I had as big grin on my face.
"What would you like"The bar tender asked.
"Uh...two white wines please"Issabella said.
"Here"
"Thank you"
I started to drink I was looking for more famous people I saw Tom Cruise,Keira Knightley,Arnold Schwarzenegger and more. I sat there just looking around.
"Hey look"
"Huh" I looked where Issabella was pointing Tokio Hotel walking in I smiled and turned back round. Tom came next to me.
"Hey you wanna hang with me"
"Sorry Tom not up for one night stands"I tapped him on the shoulder and stood up and walked away. Tom had his mouth open and was shaking his head. I sat down on the sofa. I saw Monica Sanz and Bill talking I had remembered I had heard they are dating. I looked down,Bill started to walk towards me.
"Hi um...I'm Bill Kaulitz and you are"
"Oh...uhh...I know and I'm Guna,Guna Ritsch"
"Wow I love your name"
"Thanks"
Me and Bill got talking about childhood and find out about what Bill and Tom got up to before they we're famous.
"Hey uh...I kinda got to go"
"Uh...okay" I stood up the Bill pulled my arm.
"Can I ha...ha...have your phone number" Bill looked down.
"Sure" He passed me his mobile and I put in his number. I went to Issabella,she was signalling for me to come.
"Hey we better get home and what did you and Bill talk about"
"What did you and Georg walk about"I raised my brow. She started to walk to a giggled and followed. We left home and we talked about what we talked about but there was something Issabella wasn't telling me so that night I never found out.
luvukaulitztwins
April 7th, 2008, 05:35 PM
OKAY I HAVE GOT IDEAS I NEED TO POST A FEW CHAPTERS SO BILL AND THE GIRL CAN GET TO KNOW EACH OTHER THEN BAM SOMETHING HAPPENS IM TYPING MY IDEA UP NOW ON MY LAPTOP
luvukaulitztwins
April 7th, 2008, 07:42 PM
Okay no comments :(
Chapter 4
In the morning I got woke up by my brother singing.
“SHUT UP BLANE”
“Sorry sis but you asked for it you came in drunk singing Bill Kaulitz is my new boyfriend”
“What no wait”
“Mum was looking for your phone so I hid it for you”
“Uh....I had to get drunk”
I got up and walked down stairs,my parents we're in the kitchen sitting at the breakfast table.
“Honey come and sit down”My mum said trying to false smile. My father left.
“Okay I want you to tell me is there a dream you have been having because your saying that Bill Kaulitz guy is your boyfriend when he is clearly not it is impossible he is too famous and he is does look gay”I had to think of some way to lie and get my way out of it and say I have been dreaming and I have no contact with him, it made me angry that she called him gay.
“Uh....yea I have it's just my imagination and he is not gay”
“Okay good honey” I stood up and ran up stairs into Blane's bedroom.
“Hey get out you didn't knock”
“Yea talking to your girlfriend...any who where is my mobile”
“Oh here by the way you got a text from Issabella”
I opened the text.
Hey Georg has just asked
if you wanna come to the hotel
they guys are staying at are you coming
well I can't chat Georg is here picking me up
anyway come to the Browns hotel in Mayfair
make sure be there by twelve or one oh and
Bill's room is room 483 and
he could be waiting.
:D
Luv Issabella
I giggled.
“YES I HIT THE JACKPOT”
“Huh”Blane gave me a look as if what the **** has happened to you,you have turned loopy.
“Oh uh got invited to the hotel the band is staying at”
“What if something you know happens”
“First Bill is not like that,that is Tom and if something nearly did it wouldn't”
“You have only known this guy for five minutes he will say anything on camera”
“Oh shut up” I slapped him around the head. I ran into the bathroom and had a shower I got changed. I had no clue what to wear everything was in the wash except for the really emo look. I took out black skinny jeans,red converses and a white top with a red heart bleeding on it. It was raining so I put on my Criminal Damage jumper with multi coloured stars I put on my studded belt only putting it through one hole and the rest round and through the buckel. I brushed my hair,picked up my bag and left without saying goodbye or without telling my parents where I was going,I thought no need “I'm 18 I can make my own decisions .” I walked and took the train and then a bus then ten minutes walk it felt I would never make it.
kArLa2tH
April 7th, 2008, 07:49 PM
moreeeee please more <3
luvukaulitztwins
April 7th, 2008, 07:54 PM
Chapter 5
I walked into the lobby it was huge it was so posh I had never been in this hotel it looked so amazing. Someone put there arm out.
“Uh....and you are”A member of staff said.
“I'm here for room 483”
“Sorry I cannot permit that as you have seen in the papers the word has got out about Tokio Hotel this morning and what rooms they are staying in and hotel so may you leave now if you have no other business”
“No”
“Sorry miss” I moaned. Then girls started to pour in. I fell over,I managed to stand up and get out of the crowd of girls. I took out my mobile and phone Issabella.
“Issabella they wont let me in”
“Oh yea sorry I forgot”Then the line cut off. I put my phone away and waited. Then someone grabbed my wrist. I turned Bill was standing there and all the girls where nearly killing the staff.
“Hi Guna”
“Uh...hi Bill”He took my hand there was paparazzi every where. We got to into the elevator it was silent you could even hear a pin drop. We walked till me saw 484 Bill knocked on the door,nobody answered. Bill put in the key card and opened it. I saw Georg and Issabella sitting there flirting. I knew something was up but I still had no clue.
“Uh...Georg do you mind if I steal Issabella for a min”
“No,not at all” I grinned and pulled her over.
“Okay I did not tell you I...I kissed Georg at the after party”
“Georg lover say wah”
“Look don't go all hyper on me look I got scared”
“My folks know something and there not happy”I moaned.
“Well play it normal”
“No,I can't Bill took my hand in the lobby cameras flying everywhere my mum will see magazines she is not blind and at this minute I wish she is”Issabella walked back to Georg. I stood there I started to smash my head against the wall. I felt someone kiss my neck I turned to see Tom and Bill had his hand on his shoulder. They smiled at me. I looked away and then Bill and Tom went outside all you could hear was yells and not make out what they where saying they where to far away. Then Bill came in with tears in his eyes. Georg hugged Bill,Tom walked in rubbing his side of his arm then Georg punched him in the arm and then tripped him over. I looked I was so confused Bill crying Tom about to cry. Bill stopped crying. We went into his room I sat on the bed Bill sat next to me he started to talk to me hew could not stop talking,how could Tom say this is annoying he was so interesting to talk to. After hours I had fell asleep on Bill's lap.
lilangel02371
April 8th, 2008, 12:04 AM
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!
luvukaulitztwins
April 8th, 2008, 04:46 AM
Chapter 5
Then sunlight struck me my eyes opened with a sharp pain in them from the sun.
“Guys wake up Bill concert”Bill jumped up and ran into the shower. I sat there and waited when I heard the shower turn off I left. I went to Issabella and I saw her and Georg kissing. I was standing next to Tom laughing at Tom making kiss noises. They stopped kissing.
“Well here is the love next is marriage then there wont be a baby in a carriage because Georg is gay of course”I laughed and was trying to stop because Issabella was giving me daggers. Bill walked in he smiled at me.
“Hey Georg my fuse just went on my straighteners and I use yours”
“Sure knock your self out”
“Oh Guna you can use the shower”
“To wear”
“There's something on the bed” I walked into Bill's room and saw some of Bill's clothes laid out I went into the shower and came out and got changed. Bill's clothes fit perfect I never knew I was this skinny. I walked into the bathroom of Gustav's room but no Gustav. I saw Bill doing his hair straightening a bit up then spraying it with hairspray. Bill pointed to the make-up I smiled and walked over and put some of it on. Once Bill had finished he kissed my cheek.
“Hey you wanna come backstage to tonight's concert”
“Sure”
I smiled hugely. Bill started applying his make-up he took my hand and we walked in Tom's room where the others where at.
“Hey you guys ready”
“Yea”they all said in unison. David walked in.
“Right and you two are” David said pointing at me and Issabella.
“Well Issabella is Georg's girlfriend and I'm Bill's friend”
“So hm....Bill talk now”
“I'm going bye”Said Issabella
“Wait why aren't you coming”
No I got to get home Megan has been asking where I have been”(Megan,Isabella's sister)
“Uh..okay bye”she hugged me and I hugged her back.
“Right the girls are not far from you Tom clothes don't get hooked and no girls and grab you and pull you in Gustav smiley and Georg show your green eyes and Guna straight into the limo if you want to avoid insults” David took Georg's big sun glasses and put them in his pocket.
Bill took my hand and we walked down into the lobby and outside I saw all screaming fans. Bill let go of my hand and I sat in the limo. After five minutes the guys got in,one hour of driving we arrived Brixton Academy I smiled. I got out first and we walked in Gustav put his arm around my shoulder. I looked at the floor the Tokio Hotel sign the SCREAM in big letters on the floor it looked amazing. I sat at the back one the tuned up I came out to see them practising when they where about to sing Talking Bill made me do it. I shook my head I started to sing Bill recorded it. I was so embarrassed. At the end I ran off I walked backstage and sat down, Once they finished they come backstage at about 5pm. They where getting some food Bill came and sat next to me.
“Hey you want some food”
“Na I'm okay thanks” I moved out of the chair and sat on the sofa that was there. David came and sat next to me.
“Hi David”
“Hello Guna...uh is there anything going on between you and Bill”
“Nope” He sat there and just stared into space after that. At 6pm they sat in a little room and practised. Bill came up to me jumping up and down clapping at 6:45 I giggled. I knew he was exited the fans where making so much noise. He sat next to me and kissed my cheek twice. I laughed and thought “Why did he kiss me on the cheek twice” Bill started to get nervous and sat there looking down. Gustav was listening to music with his eyes shut, Tom was cleaning his guitar and Georg was trying different standing positions to see which one he would choose.
“Okay guys out” Gustav Tom and Georg got up. Bill looked up and took his mic and stood up. He kept sighing. They started to play Bill was not out and the lights where meant to shine now but Bill stood there frozen the crowed stood there waiting.
“I can't do it”Bill said
“Why not” I asked him
“I don't know I just don't feel right”
Bill's POV
I did not want to go out on stage without telling Guna I liked her a lot,or either I love her. I just had lots of tension in my back I stood there confused. She hugged me which made me better and I smiled grabbed and ran out. I began to sing Ready Set Go .
“Hello London it's so great you could come and see us so how have we all been doing tonight”
“Gut Danke” The crowed yelled back. Tom and Georg and Gustav where smiling.
“Right next song we are going to do is Where Are Your Hands”
I know it is pretty **** but I did not have time to think of much I got to go get clothes for a funeral :(
luvukaulitztwins
April 9th, 2008, 07:02 PM
Okay im posting the rest of my story ik this one was short i had like another writers block kinda and i had an idea for a new ff and started to write it I got it from when i went to the funeral today :( sad but im happy i may post my new one i wrote i typed up alot kinda :mrgreen:
Guna's POV
I fell asleep at the end I woke up with Bill stroking my hair. I smiled.
“Oops **** I fell asleep”
“It's okay”
“I heard you sing to songs it was awesome” I stood up and told the others they did great.
“Hey want me to drive you home”
“Uh. .. no I will get a train home”
“No I will drive you” Bill pulled me before I could argue we going into the Mercades Benz he drove me all the way home on the motorway. After ten minutes I blacked out.
I woke up I could not open my eyes all I could hear. I could here Bill talking talking .
“It's all my fault me and my stupid wanting to drive you home could have killed you”I could hear him starting to cry.
“I love you but god ****** you can't hear it the thing I wanted to say the most to you and your in a comer and you can't hear” I heard him walk off. I was trying and trying to open my eyes. I had no clue for how long I was trying for my eyes opened. I looked around all white I looked saw all these machines hooked up. I saw Gustav sitting next to me reading a book.
“Gusti”
“Guna your awake”
“Yea”I coughed. He ran out Bill came in with him.
“Thank god I thought you would never wake up” They called in a nurse to check on me. They told me I must stay in for two days just to see that I was okay to go home.
“Bill”
“Yes”
“I.....I heard what you said to me”
“Uh...what” all of the other three leaned in and wanted to hear but Bill pushed them out.
“That...you said you loved me”
“YES!” Bill yelled, I laughed.
“I love you too”
“Are you serious Bill asked me”
“Yep” He kissed me on the cheek he had a big smile on his face. I felt tiered so I went to sleep. After the two days went I got all my machines disconnected .I sat up and got out Bill gave me some clothes Issabella dropped round she had to go to collage. My parents we're waiting outside. I got changed and went up to Bill I hugged him. He kissed me softly on the lips I walked out to my parents. They both hugged me.
“What did you think you was doing going in a car with a stranger just because he is famous doesn't mean it gives you the right to do what you like” My mum grabbed my wrist and my dad took my stuff Bill was shocked. I pulled away.
“Mum I'm 18 I can do what I like I'm not a silly 14 year old kid I'm an adult and you don't have to care for me...”My mum cut me off.
“He is a famous rock star I don't want to you dating someone of that manor you don't even know him”
“Yes I do mum I ****ING LOVE HIM”
“Well if you want to screw up your life with a rockstar then go ahead when everything goes wrong I wont be here to help”My father dropped my bag and my mother and father left. I looked down. Bill came and hugged me.
“What am I gonna do”I whispered,while my head was in Bill's chest.
“Your staying with us guys”
“I can't and next week your meant to go on a US tour I can't I will find somewhere else to stay,I could as my brothers druggie friends if they could put me up somewhere”
“No your staying with us”
“Thanks” I picked up my bag,then Georg came and grabbed it from me. We got back to the hotel. I walked up to the room and saw David waiting.
“Okay so what happened...guys why is she with you she has got her own family to go to”
“Not anymore she doesn't”Tom said,sitting down and getting a can off beer.
“WHAT we have got a tour first Georg you can't have a girlfriend she could hold back your carrier and same for you Bill”
“What me and Issabella would never do that” I moaned
“Well okay girlfriends then but we are going back to Germany for two days well one and a half”David said smiling.
“What the tour is a week away”Bill said,looking angry
“Not anymore I got you to do more gigs”
“Uh...then I wanna go back to Germany today say I can have my two days”
“Well...uh....we have planned to go back today but you wont get two days”David said.
“UH...me and Tom miss family one day to visit them and Georg and Gustav could be missing home”
“Uh...no worries there Bill I'm fine my little sister will be home pain the butt”
“Right pack flight is it seven 'O' clock” They all separated to pack I followed Bill.
“Hey you want me to help you pack”
“No I'm okay thanks” I turned on the TV in the room and watched cartoons since there was nothing else on that was better. After two hours they where done. It was 17:30. David walked in looking annoyed.
“OKAY Georg is having a hissy fit over his straighteners who's got them” I burst out laughing when he said he is having a hissy fit. Bill just looked then Georg came.
“WHERE THE **** ARE MY STRAIGHTENERS BILL YOU HAD THEM LAST”
“Oh yea sorry no need to get into a fit over it”I was laughing and started to cry tears of joy,it was better then the cartoons. I thought Bill would be a drama queen but I guess Georg is one too.
“Okay lets move out no signing anything so where leaving out the back way”David said walking out. I got up and started to walk taking my bag once we got in the limo girls saw banging on the window.
“Bill I have not got a passport” I yelled
“Holy **** where do you live from here somewhere in south east London”
“Wont your parents have put it in my bag”
“Why would they do that”
“I don't know”
“Look”I opened my bag Bill was right but why would my parents put it in my bag. I closed it. After 30 minutes of driving we arrived at Gatwick,girls and Tom winking at everyone while playing with his lipring. We just walked straight in we got into the checking desk we waited 10 minutes in a queue. Somehow David had a ticket for me. I gave him a look he smiled and gave it to the lady. Once the others checked in it was 6:30.
“Bill I have got no clothes”
“Well you can get new ones”
“No money”
“I have money”
“I'm not taking your money”
“Yes you are”
“No”
“Yes”
“NO”Bill yelled. We sat down waiting and waiting. Georg and Gustav where talking about girls and Gustav and Bill about music. I sat there bored,time passed and we got on the plane. I sat in my seat the window seat and Bill next to we then Tom next to him. Behind was Georg next to the window then Gustav then David. We was on the plane for an hour nobody was talking. Then bam shouting
“HEY GEORG YOU CAN'T CHEAT LIKE THAT”
“Yes I can I'm older”
Gustav threw the cards at Gustav.
GOT WRITERS BLOCK IT CULD B THE END AHHH GOD I GOT TO THINK IT CULD B A WHITE LIKE MY OTHER FF
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