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margaritalouita9
April 7th, 2008, 11:34 PM
So this is my first attempt at a fanfic, let me know what you think.
Chloe's POV
I sat on the phone with my mother as she screamed at me louder and louder. "Chloe, how could you be so stupid as to lose your passport!? Your flight leaves tomorrow, they won't let you through customs!"
I rolled my eyes. "Mom, I didn't lose it, I got mauled. A little sympathy would be highly appreciated." She continued her rant as I examined my electric blue shiner in my compact. Wincing as I touched it, I realized the other end of the line was silent. "Um, Mom?"
A sigh. "Chloe, it is more than apparent that this conversation is not important to you, so I am going to hang up and when you've learned some respect you can come crawling back for my forgiveness." With that, she hung up on me.
I stared at the phone for a minute, mouth gaping in shock and disgust that my own mother could be that self-righteous. I didn't know why she was so worked up, I'm eighteen and I'm going to school in Germany with a valid student visa. I just wouldn't be able to visit my oh so loving family over the break. The dean of my university had assured me they would research all possible options for me to choose from. I was hoping beyond hope that they could find a way for me to earn German citizenship so I could stay.
I shrugged off my mother's attitude with a sigh. After I covered up my bruises as well as I could, I changed into my hoodie and jeans. I yelled at my room mate to wake up as I headed to class for the morning. I shivered in the brisk air, and scowled as I noticed the stares of my classmates. They knew I had been robbed, but they didn't know that the thief hadn't beaten me up. It had been my boyfriend, Alex. When I told him I was planning on going back to the states just for their spring break, he freaked out. He grabbed me and started shaking me, and when I yelled at him he hit me, and wouldn't stop. when he finally stopped abusing me, I was lying on the floor choking on my sobs. He had hit me before, but never like this. I had avoided him since it had happened, but I knew he would eventually "bump" into me. Luckily, if you can call it that, the robbery happened as I was leaving his apartment. I wouldn't have to admit to an abusive boyfriend
Don't worry, Georg will come in the next post, I just have to go to bed right now. I will post again ASAP! :D
luvukaulitztwins
April 8th, 2008, 07:44 AM
OMG I LIKE IT MEHR BITTE :mrgreen:
bbgroove
April 8th, 2008, 03:04 PM
I really love this story! please continue... Georg needs more fics with him in it (^_^)
margaritalouita9
April 8th, 2008, 04:58 PM
Aw, thanks! Here's the next part.
Georg's POV
I frowned as I tried to remember how exactly Bill had managed to con me into carrying all his books. It's not like he's a fragile waif in need of constant coddling! I grinned as he walked into a sliding glass door in the inner courtyard of our new campus.
"Did you have a blonde moment there, bill?" yelled his equally obnoxious, if not more self-sufficient twin Tom. Don't get me wrong, I love those two like my own little brothers, which is why I can harass them without any punches thrown. Poor Gustav, he looked so uncomfortable with this place, especially that shallow-looking group of girls who kept following us everywhere. I glared menacingly at them and they ran off shrieking.
"Lousy twits," I muttered. I looked up to see a girl who, despite looking like she had had an encounter with someone's fist, was the most attractive girl I had ever seen. I tried to see where she was headed, but I lost her in the sudden throng of students heading to class. the las glimpse I had was of her fiery red hair flowing behind her as she merged into the mass. Realizing what time it was, I turned to the other three. "We should go toss these in our room right now or we'll be late. what kind of a first impression would that make?" the others agreed and we ran to the dorm to throw our belongings on the beds and rush to our first class.
Still Georg's POV
It was finally our lunch hour and I felt shell shocked. I couldn't remember what most of my classes were, let alone what we had done in them. Eyes still somewhat glazed over from the last class, I attempted to focus on my food. As I looked up from my sub, I saw the beautiful girl again. As I got up the nerve to go talk to her, I saw that Tom had beaten me to her. I watched in horror as he walked up to her and started talking to her. I was tense, but I relaxed as it became apparent that this girl was clearly not interested in Tom's idea of a good time. that meant I still had a chance. As Tom sauntered back to our area, I asked what she had said.
Understanding my meaning, he said, "Don't waste your time, Georg. She has a boyfriend. Pretty defensive about him too, I would say."
Hmm... this could be more difficult than I had anticipated. I glanced at my phone and realized I had five minutes to get to the other side of campus. The red headed girl was nowhere to be seen.
I'll post again later, that's all I have so far. Comment, please!
LipsOfAnAngel
April 8th, 2008, 05:10 PM
sweet! um, are the boys famous?
margaritalouita9
April 8th, 2008, 05:12 PM
I didn't really think about that while I was writing, but I figured, heck, why not? It could make things interesting.
Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S
April 8th, 2008, 06:35 PM
yay!!! another fanfic about the hottie georg...please write more soon...
XxInyourNightmarexX
April 8th, 2008, 09:44 PM
I really like this fanfic. While abuse of any kind is really serious, I think it is good when people are brave enough to write about in stories. I had a fanfic about abuse before. It was on the old boards, but I'm glad there's one here too. It's encouraging to write about b/c it's so realistic. And Yay Georg, I love him. He's the main character in the new fanfic I'm coming up with.
margaritalouita9
April 9th, 2008, 12:20 AM
To XxInyourNightmarexX, I agree with you entirely on the subject of abuse, and don't worry, this will have a happy ending. But I won't tell you how happy or how long it will take to get there. Mwahahaha! :P
Here it is, fresh off the press!
Chloe's POV
i settled into my seat, thinking about that Tom guy who had just tried to hook up with me. He was cute, but not my type. besides, Alex would have skinned me alive if he saw me with another guy and then stripped said guy of his manhood. I don't think I could put anybody through that. but that friend of Tom's had caught my eye with that piercing stare of his. It made my heart stutter just to think about him. Stop it, Chloe, you're not available, no matter how much you want to be! You don't even know his name!
"Know whose name?" said a confident, masculine voice right above me. Oh crap, did I say that out loud!? I looked up into the hazel eyes of the man I had almost been fantasizing about.
"Um, yours of course!" I managed to get out somewhat coherently. "I don't think we've been introduced before." i smiled what I hoped was an inviting grin.
He smiled back at me. "I do believe you're right. I'm Georg, and you are...?" He waited for me to respond as I gaped at his huge muscles. "Uh, my name is... Chloe..." I sighed. Wow, I seriously needed to get a grip on myself. This was not good, Alex would be so ****** if he were to find out. I glanced at Georg's bulging biceps and thought back to Alex's stringy arms. It was pitiful, really, that I could be hurt so badly by my wimp of a boyfriend. I didn't even remember why I had fallen in love with him in the first place. Oh yeah... it was his laugh. That hooked me and then his charisma pulled me in. He was the perfect boyfriend, so attentive and caring. Until I messed up, that is. According to him, I kept looking at other guys when I wasn't. At first, I thought his jealousy was just a sign of how much he loved me, but then he just kept getting more and more possessive. Eventually I just became apathetic and only showed emotion when I couldn't move from the pain. Then I had met this guy, Georg, and i felt like I was in junior high again. The idea made me almost giddy with anticipation. I realized belatedly that he had asked me a question and I just stared blankly at him.
"Do you mind if I sit next you?" he repeated, a confused and worried look in his eyes.
"Oh, of course, go ahead!" Goodness, I have been spacey lately! I resolved to pay more attention to what was going on around me, but as soon as the professor started talking, my eyes glazed over and my mind wandered to this interesting new specimen of masculinity beside me.
That's all for tonight, I'll try to write more during school tomorrow in between bouts of late homework. :P Keep commenting, all opinions are appreciated!
bbgroove
April 9th, 2008, 12:44 AM
CUUUTTTEEEE!
Loveing it so far...
hope Georg can fix Chloe's heart and give her bf a could talking to (fist to face)
margaritalouita9
April 9th, 2008, 12:47 AM
lol! maybe... I can't make any promises, that would ruin the story! :D
XxInyourNightmarexX
April 9th, 2008, 02:44 PM
Very Nice Post! And call me Erica! =]
I luv Georg's character here!
LipsOfAnAngel
April 9th, 2008, 03:42 PM
my eyes glazed over and my mind wandered to this interesting new specimen of masculinity beside me.
love that line!! best ever! mehr bitte!
margaritalouita9
April 9th, 2008, 05:41 PM
Aw, donkey shins! Sorry, play on danke schon. Hi Erica! :D FYI, I would love to get to know you all, since you are my readers, so because I'm still kinda new, please put your names in your posts at one time or another so I don't feel totally stupid. :P and I liked that line too, I was laughing as I wrote it. I crack myself up... :mrgreen:
Lawwa
April 9th, 2008, 06:37 PM
Finally, another G fanfic. Gs need more love too! (Uh and I'm Laura btw)
LipsOfAnAngel
April 9th, 2008, 06:50 PM
iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii'mmmmmmmmmm..................... ......... NIKKI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
how's that?
margaritalouita9
April 9th, 2008, 08:37 PM
Hi Laura! Hi Nikki! K, I realized right after my last post that I didn't tell you guys who I am, so I felt really dumb. I'm Margaret, but you can call me Margarita, Louita, Meg, whatever, just not Peggy, that brings back bad memories of swim team. ;) um, yeah, I'm working on the next post as we speak, but it's coming kinda slowly, sorry!
margaritalouita9
April 9th, 2008, 10:01 PM
Ok, be proud of me, I'm doing a good job of posting somewhat regularly. :D
Georg’s POV
Chloe is amazing. But very confusing. She seemed so spacey when she talked to me before class, and now she looks like the undead. A very pretty undead girl, but undead nonetheless. I wonder what she’s thinking about right now. Probably not this lecture on chimpanzees. Much as I hate this class, I’m very glad I signed up for it so that I could spend time with Chloe. I don’t know her very well yet, but I want to. Wait, she has a boyfriend, doesn’t she. Ugh, not fair, why do beautiful girls always have to be taken!? And she either doesn’t know about me and the guys, or she doesn’t care. Either one would be amazing, seeing as how all four of us had nearly gotten molested by the screaming fangirls before we even got on campus. Her accent was strange, maybe she wasn’t German. I remember hearing something about her having family in the States, but I wasn’t sure. That could explain her accent. It was a hot accent. I started to drift off into what she could say to me in that accent, especially about how I was so much better than her boyfriend…
“Mr. Listing, would you like to explain to the class the difference between monkeys and apes?” burst out the professor. I jerked my head up from my daydream with a startled look.
“Er, one group has tails and is uglier?” I was pretty sure at least part of that was right…
The class burst into laughter, and our professor rolled his eyes. Chloe jerked to attention, much like I had, and as she looked at me, I blushed a deep scarlet. Aghk! I’m acting like a sissy! I don’t blush! What’s wrong with me!? Embarrassed that Chloe had seen me looking so idiotic, I quickly hid my face behind my hair and stared straight ahead for the duration of class.
Chloe’s POV
I had been fantasizing about caressing Georg’s luscious arms while he held me tightly to him for a romantic and sweetly demanding kiss, when I heard sudden raucous laughing. I woke from my daydream in confusion, and I looked over to Georg hoping for clarification, only to see that his face was bright red. Although unexpected, it was surprisingly endearing, something Alex would never be caught doing. I realized right then, that I really hated him, and I wanted to kill him, but I knew I could never do it. I also realized that I would be satisfied if he would never touch or talk to me again and someone made him understand, even to some miniscule degree how he had made me feel and what he had done to me. I decided that I wasn’t going to let that sick animal control me anymore. How I was going to manage that, I had no idea, but I felt for some strange but wonderful reason that I would be able to do it.
As soon as class was over, I leaned over to Georg, bold with my newfound resolution. “Hey, what’s your number?” I asked, gazing into his lush eyes. He looked at me with the most adorable grin I had ever seen, and quickly wrote it down for me, and I gave him mine. “Thanks,” I beamed. I gulped. Here was the hard part. “Would you want to hang out tonight?”
His smile widened. “Yeah, that sounds way cool. Would you like to go to my dorm or yours?”
I thought about this for a moment, and, figuring that my room mate is obnoxious as all ****, and I wanted to get to know him, not frighten him, I decided on his place.
“Your place, mine is frightening. I’ll text you when I’m on my way?”
He nodded, and I nearly skipped to my next class, I was so ecstatic.
As always, let me know what you think, and I'll keep working on the new parts.
margaritalouita9
April 9th, 2008, 11:45 PM
Homework got boring, here's the new post.
Georg's POV
As soon as i was sure no one could see me, I started leaping about, punching the air and yelling in delight. "Yes! She wants to hang out! This is great! She's coming over tonight!!"
"Who's coming over tonight?" cut in Tom, accompanied by Bill and Gustav. I flipped around, a cheesy grin plastered on my face and my spirits so high that nothing and no one could bring them down. "Chloe is coming!" I crowed, hugging the startled three.
"Who is Chloe!?" cried Bill and Gustav in unison. Tom piped up, "She's that chick I tried to hook up with at lunch, but she said she wasn't interested because she has a boyfriend. Why did she say yes to you, Georg?" Tom glared at me.
"Probably because he didn't ask for sex before her name, Tomi!" laughed Bill. Tom merely punched Bill in response, and Bill started shrieking and cowering behind Gustav while Tom threatened his life. After Gustav and I separated the two, I finished my story.
"I didn't invite her, officially that is. It kinda just happened. She asked for my number, so I gave it to her, and then she asked if I wanted to hang out, so of course I said yes. When I asked where, she said at our place, and that she would text me when she was on her way.
Bill started clapping his hands in delight. "Oh, this is exciting, Georg finally has a girlfriend instead of a stalker!! Can I make her a cake?" *puppy eyes*
"Bill, she already has a boyfriend, and I just met her. Try not to scare her off before I even have a fighting chance, ok? That means no cake, no extravagance, and an attempt to be normal."
He pouted until I caved. "Fine. You can make a cake, but nothing fancy, and you are required to have both Tom and Gustav in the kitchen at any time that you attempt to use the oven." I thought about this for a moment. "Or the mixer. Or anything in the kitchen with electricity. Do I make myself clear? If you were to try anything in there by yourself, you would burn down the entire city!"
Bill just waved his hand at me as he pranced off. "Oh, Georg, you worry too much! Just relax, it'll be fine!"
I watched him run off with Tom and Gustav in tow, and couldn't help feeling a distinct ball of nerves develop in the pit of my stomach, slightly bringing down my good mood. I hurriedly sent Chloe a message, warning her about the havoc she would probably walk into when she arrived.
As always, comment. I'll post more tomorrow.
XxInyourNightmarexX
April 10th, 2008, 02:49 AM
Well it's nice to meet you Margarita!!
I LOVE this fanfic. It's funny, serious, and romantic all at once.
LipsOfAnAngel
April 10th, 2008, 03:15 PM
amazing but one thing... georg doesn't have chloe's number. just wanted to point that out. other then that, great! mehr bitte!
Lawwa
April 10th, 2008, 04:18 PM
Ahaha that's cute. I love how Bill wants to make a cake although he can't cook for his life :D
margaritalouita9
April 10th, 2008, 07:50 PM
Thanks for pointing that out, Nikki, I fixed it. :D And Laura, I'm glad that made you happy, that's kinda how I imagine Bill, although I can't speak from personal experience obviously. He just seems like the type to need constant supervision for the safety of those around him. :P
margaritalouita9
April 11th, 2008, 12:21 AM
New post
Chloe's POV
I was in a panic. Clothes were strewn about my room, hanging out of drawers and draped on chairs and roommates. I wanted to look nice, but not fancy, and I still hadn't done anything with my hair. I flopped on my bed and noticed that I had nine new messages from two people. One from Georg, and the other eight from, you guessed it, Alex. They started out as apologies for the other night, and then they got angrier and angrier until he finally relented. I frowned as I read them. How could I have let it get so bad? I knew I had to talk to Alex soon, but I was going to have fun with Georg and his friends first. I quickly typed Alex a message, telling him I needed to talk to him, and that I was busy tonight. Then I sent Georg a message that I would be there in about thirty minutes. I shut off my phone and threw on a cute shirt and curled my hair so I looked like a bolder, older, sassier redhead version of Shirley Temple. I grabbed my jacket and went off to meet Georg and the others.
When I got to his dormitory door, I heard clanging and frantic shouts coming from inside. I knocked tentatively, worried I had come to the wrong door.
"AAH!! She's here! Tom! Help me put the icing on, I can't finish this by myself!" What the devil? Was this the same Tom from lunch? Talk about awkward...
Georg opened the door, flour in his hair. He grinned when our eyes met. "Come in, sorry about the mess. Bill didn't believe me when I told him he couldn't be trusted alone in the kitchen."
I walked in and my jaw dropped at what looked like an explosion from the refrigerator. I saw a figure with poofy hair nearly weighed down by the flour and chocolate in it. That must be Bill, he seemed to have suffered the worst damage from the kitchen warfare. His hair, face and body were proof of his culinary struggles. When he saw me, he grinned widely and waved.
"Hi! I'm Tom's twin Bill! I tried to make you a cake, but it kinda set on fire, and I was trying to salvage enough of it to frost when you showed up." He looked slightly embarrassed, but cheerful nonetheless.
I extended my hand to him and he wrapped me in a surprisingly firm hug for how fragile he looked. I immediately decided to adopt him as my new little brother, as well as Gustav, who had given me a warm smile when I entered the room.
After releasing me from the hug, Bill returned to the kitchen as Tom entered the main room. He gave me a somewhat flirty smile when he saw me, and I just grinned. "No hard feelings about earlier today, right?" I asked him.
He shrugged. "I'm not too crushed. You seem better suited for Georg anyway. He's a fun hater too." The wicked gleam in his eyes told me he was just kidding. I chuckled at his sarcasm.
Georg yelled from the kitchen where he was helping Bill clean up, "I am NOT a fun hater! He's a dirty rotten liar, don't believe a word he says about me!" Tom, Gustav, and I burst out laughing. Bill peered around the corner. "What's so funny?" he asked. The three of us looked at each other and fell on the floor in a laughing fit.
More later, my creative juices went on vacation for the moment. :P
LipsOfAnAngel
April 11th, 2008, 03:13 PM
it's great! real funny! mehr bitte!
XxInyourNightmarexX
April 11th, 2008, 05:30 PM
=] This is good Margarita!
Lawwa
April 11th, 2008, 06:58 PM
Whoot. Omg Bill is so awesome <33333 I can totally help him make a cake ;). I love it, keep updating :D
DeeDee
April 11th, 2008, 07:25 PM
* new reader *
and yes obviously i want more
margaritalouita9
April 11th, 2008, 08:29 PM
Hi new reader! I'm working on the next post while simultaneously making dinner, so I will post in the next few hours, no worries! Thanks for the comments, they are amazing, I love you guys! :D
margaritalouita9
April 12th, 2008, 01:32 AM
It has arrived! Ta-da!
Later that night, Georg's POV
We all had piled onto the couch to watch Monty Python after making the mess Bill had created almost recognizable as the kitchen once again, and Chloe was cuddled up next to me, snorting every so often at the exceptionally stupid moments. Despite all combined effort to redeem the maimed cake, it was to no avail. It had a tragic ending in the gaarbage disposal and was ceremoniously replaced by Chinese takeout. After babbling nonstop for over an hour, Bill had finally collapsed in the middle of his fried rice like a dead rechargeable battery, and Tom and Gustav had carried him to bed, where he lay curled up like a little kid. When they came back, Tom sat relatively still for about five minutes when he got a text message and flew out the door so fast, he almost lost his hat. I whispered to Chloe that he had probably run off to meet a girl. She chuckled softly at this. "I would believe it," she murmured to me. The movie ended and we watched random stupid tv until Chloe pointed out that Gustav was asleep on the sofa, quietly snoring. I laughed gently, then looked down in mild surprise as Chloe interlaced her fingers with mine. Our eyes met, hers apprehensive, yet full of desire. I leaned forward.
She put a hand up to my chest, holding me back. "I'm sorry, Georg, I can't. I still have a boyfriend." She sounded torn, refusing to look at me.
I reached for her face, gently pulling it towards me. I brushed the hair from her eyes, noticing fully for the first time the extent of the bruising on her face and arms. She looked ready to cry.
"Chloe, what are these bruises from?" The tears poured down her face, smearing her eyeliner and mascara as she shook her head. "Chloe, did he hit you? Please, let me help, I'm worried about you." She started sobbing uncontrollably, and I pulled her close, wrapping my arms around her. Her body convulsed, but she shook less as she calmed down. When she had gotten control of her emotions, I took hold of her shoulders and faced her squarely.
"I'm so sorry," she whispered. "I feel like an idiot. Really, this is no big deal." She tried to break my hold and leave, but I held on to her.
"Chloe, don't be crazy, this is serious, if he's abusing you, you need to break it off with him! What can I do to help you?" I held her gaze, intent on receiving an answer.
She shook her head. "No, you don't need to get involved. I told him I needed to talk to him, and I'm going to break up with him. I can't do it in person, but I will do it on the phone. I just can't be alone with him." Her voice trailed off.
I pulled her back into my embrace, cradling her head to my chest. She clutched me tightly. We stood there, I don't know how long, holding on as hard as we could. Finally, although too soon, we broke away.
"I'll walk you to your dorm," I said.
"I would like that." She smiled weakly at me. I grabbed her hand and we sauntered through the campus to her dormitory.
Next post will be a doorstep scene! *gasp!*
Try to stay calm, I'll post tomorrow. ;)
DeeDee
April 12th, 2008, 03:18 AM
thanks for the welcome hunn
argh i hate that boyfriend of hers :evil: aww georg is justt soo adorable
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LipsOfAnAngel
April 12th, 2008, 08:30 AM
oh this is getting good!!! stupid boyfriend. mehr bitte!
margaritalouita9
April 12th, 2008, 10:22 PM
Hey everyone, sorry, but I don't think I'll be able to post the next section tonight, because I haven't had a chance to write it, but hopefully I can post it tomorrow night at the latest. Sorry!
Margaret
MrsKaulitz
April 13th, 2008, 03:54 PM
AHHHH!
bill is such a cutie ♥
arugh its so good i love it<3
XxInyourNightmarexX
April 14th, 2008, 01:36 PM
Darn her boyfriend! But at least there's Georg.
margaritalouita9
April 15th, 2008, 01:12 AM
Hello new reader! :D
Sorry it took me so long, this was kinda hard to write.
Chloe's POV
I was still trying to sort out my emotions as Georg and I traversed the campus, hand in hand. My mind was reeling from the battle going on inside my head. I had almost kissed him, and he had wanted to kiss me too! I mentally whacked myself upside the head. Idiot! You're breaking up with your boyfriend, you can kiss whomever you like! Alex doesn't control you anymore, remember? I gritted my teeth and vowed to make sure Georg knew just how good a kisser I was before he got back to his room. Before I realized it, however, we were at my door. No! I wasn't ready! This sort of audacious behavior takes more than a mere five seconds preparation to talk myself into it!
"Well, we're here," Georg sighed. We didn't let go of each other's hands.
"Georg, I -" I was cut off by the collision of his lips to mine, gently caressing and moving in synch with mine. I sighed, wrapping my arms around his neck and tangling my fingers into his soft hair. I thought I was good at kissing, I had somehow stumbled across the god supreme of amazing, mouth-watering kisses! I could feel my knees turn to jelly, and I was grateful for his strong arms to hold me up. I felt safe with him, secure, but also liberated. His honey-fire kisses continued to become more passionate, urgent, and I could barely contain my need and desire to respond in suit. Without warning, he pulled back, his breath heavy. I looked up at him, confused, panting.
He smiled and opened my door. "I think that was enough fun for tonight, beautiful. I don't want to spoil you too soon." Oh, he was good, and he knew it, that wicked look he had made my heart stutter. He softly kissed my hair, whispering, "Think about me in your dreams tonight, Chloe. I'll meet you there." With one last sweet, frustrating kiss, he left me standing in the doorway with my spirits soaring yet thoroughly and completely dissatisfied with the quantity of physical contact I had shared with him. I rushed off to my bed so my memory of his lips against me would meld into my dreams, continuing the dream until morning.
I had fun writing this, hope you had fun reading it! ;)
Please continue to comment, the feedback is greatly appreciated. :D
DeeDee
April 15th, 2008, 08:18 AM
finallyyy they kissed , yayy alex is not controlling her anymore yayy
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TanteMegs
April 15th, 2008, 12:57 PM
WHOA!!! Is it getting hot in here??? I had to fan myself. This is getting really good. I can't wait to see what happens with her boyfriend. Please hurry.
Megan
xXxMandiixXx
April 15th, 2008, 01:44 PM
wow this is awesome
i hope she breaks up with her boyfriend ok :\
<3 Mandii xx
LipsOfAnAngel
April 15th, 2008, 06:05 PM
ahhh!!!!!!!!!! i love it!!! mehr bitte!
margaritalouita9
April 15th, 2008, 07:39 PM
Hi Megan and Mandii! Thanks for commenting! :D
Here's the new post.
Georg's POV
I sauntered back across the courtyards, taking my time to return to the dormitory. I normally wasn't that forward with a girl, but Chloe brought out a side of me that was totally unfamiliar, yet very intriguing. Just thinking about her made my heart race and my pulse pound through my veins. I was so glad that she liked me more than Tom. He somehow managed to grab a girl and get her in bed before I could even say hello. It was embarrassing! But with Chloe, I had barely met her and I felt a stronger attraction and connection to her than I had ever felt to another girl, which is probably why Tom hadn't pushed the matter. There was a certain attitude about her, a no-messing-around way of seeing things which I think had been suffocated by that boyfriend of hers. Thinking about him filled me with a heated rage. Chloe had cried over what he had put her through, and I had been too stupid to find out his name. Nobody had the right to treat another human being like that, like a crushed toy doll thrown to the side by an ignorant child. I wanted more than anything for her to be happy, and I hoped to be the one she was happy with. the way things were going, it seemed luck was on my side in this relationship. I approached the door to the dorm and walked in quietly, trying not to disturb Bill and Gustav, who were sound asleep. I turned to sit on the couch and stifled a yelp. Tom was sitting there, his arms crossed, giving me an inquisitive look.
"What the heck, Tom! You nearly gave me an effing heart attack! What is your problem?" I sat down on the chair next to him, glaring.
He leaned forward, frowning slightly. "You know Chloe's boyfriend?"
I raised my eyebrow at him. "I know of him, but I don't know his name and I couldn't pick him out of a lineup. Why?"
Tom rubbed his hands together. "Well while I was with my, erm, associate tonight, I happened to hear some of the campus gossip. Mostly about Chloe and her boyfriend. Especially the boyfriend." He looked up at me.
I paid closer attention. "What exactly did you hear about her boyfriend?"
Tom leaned back into the couch. "Well for starters, his name is Alex, and apparently he's pretty infamous on campus. Chloe isn't the first girlfriend he's had here, but she doesn't know that because she transferred here from the States. Pretty much everybody is worried about what he does to Chloe, but because they can't prove anything they can't make a formal complaint against him."
"You're saying that they think he abuses her?" This wasn't exactly news to me.
"Not just that. there are stories about his last girlfriend. Apparently she quit school abruptly and nobody has heard from her since."
"Was she going out with Alex at the time?"
Tom shook his head. "No, they had split up about four months earlier, but he kept showing up wherever she was. She ignored all of his calls and they had no mutual friends, but he somehow kept finding out where she was and who she was with. He wouldn't let her go, no matter how hard she tried to get away. I heard that the only reason he didn't try to find her after she left was because he met Chloe, and she was an easy target.
I stiffened at this.
"Not like that, Georg, just the fact that she was a new student and she didn't know about his reputation. He's a master liar, and he tricked her into thinking he was the sun and the moon. It's what he's good at."
I sat back, thinking. "Why are you telling me this, Tom? I'm pretty sure I can take him if he tries to get in my way, and if he proves to be exceptionally persistent, that's what you and Gustav are for. I would ask Bill, but he would probably trip over himself." Tom adn I both chuckled at this. Tom fell quiet. "I'm telling you this because I've seen what guys like him can do. He may not be as tough as us, but he's a weasel. I would actually feel better if he made a huge fuss about you and Chloe, because then he would be less likely to try a stunt like he did with his last girlfriend. If he lets this happen quietly, I just want you to be on your guard. I can see how much you care for Chloe, and honestly, it's about time you found somebody who could make you feel like that."
"That's a bit rich of you, playboy," I interjected.
"That's not the point. I always let the girl I'm with know beforehand that I'm only interested in one night. They can't say that I've led them on because I'm always honest with them."
I nodded, smiling. It was true, he never did lie to a girl about his intentions, and he always treated them with respect before and after. He may not have given them the relationship they were looking for, but he never promised things he wasn't willing to give. "Thanks for telling me this, Tom. I'm really worried about the reaction she's going to get frhim in the morning."
Tom looked confused. I explained, "She's breaking up with him in the morning. Over the phone though, she is afraid to be alone with him."
Tom smiled. "What?" I asked.
"Nothing. I might tell you if the time gets right. go to bed, tomorrow is going to be fun. You'll want to be awake for all the excitement." With that, he got up and walked away from me. I quickly followed suit, and as I lay in bed, my dreams melded with my memories of the sweetness of Chloe's kiss and her shape.
Wow, that one was long. Hopefully this will tide you all over until I get the next part finished.
Lawwa
April 15th, 2008, 07:54 PM
It was about time for an update! Wow stalker boyfriend. I've experienced one of those before, though...not...as...vicious.
LipsOfAnAngel
April 15th, 2008, 08:09 PM
love it!!!!!!!!!!!!! mehr bitte!!
XxInyourNightmarexX
April 15th, 2008, 08:17 PM
I really like this story. I hope Alex bites the dust.
TanteMegs
April 15th, 2008, 11:23 PM
YAY!!!! Got to love Tom and his "assosicates" :D Can't wait to see what Georg does with this new info. Keep them coming.
Megan
xXxMandiixXx
April 16th, 2008, 04:06 AM
wow go tom lolz
and as for georg hes got a lot to handle after chloe breaks up with alex im guessing GO GEORG hehe
keep up the awesome work :P
cant wait for the next chapter
<3 Mandii xx
DeeDee
April 16th, 2008, 11:25 AM
mehr hunnij hope nutin happens to her
XxInyourNightmarexX
April 17th, 2008, 11:41 AM
This is Erica speaking! Please update soon!
margaritalouita9
April 18th, 2008, 05:00 PM
You guys, I'm so sorry I haven't updated, my teacher's have all decided to turn into Nazis! I promise to have the new section up tonight, even if it kills me! No worries!
DeeDee
April 19th, 2008, 08:25 AM
we officialy dont like teachers i guess some of them are reall as*holes grr
we understand hun
margaritalouita9
April 20th, 2008, 10:50 PM
Urgh, european history is officially the worst subject in the world, followed closely by math. Here we go!
Chloe's POV
I sat on the edge of my bed, tossing my phone back and forth between my hands. I had been contemplating what I would say to Alex for over an hour now, and I still couldn't figure out what to say while making my point explicitly clear. I fell back into my pillows, huffing loudly. I really didn't want to do this alone, it was too intimidating. I flipped open my phone and started dialing.
"Hello?"
"Hey, Georg, um, if it's not too much of a problem, could you come over while I talk to Alex? Just for moral support, you know." I held my breath while I waited for his response.
"Of course. Do you want me to be in the same room or just in the dorm?"
I considered it. "Yeah, I'd like you in the same room. Even on the phone I'm afraid of him." And I'm scared that he'll twist what I say to his advantage.
"Just wait until I get there, ok Chloe? It'll be all right." With that, he hung up. Five minutes later, Georg was at my door, hugging me close to him. I must have looked like a monster, my hair was still in bed head mode and I hadn't bothered to get out of my pajamas. He grabbed my hand and we walked into my bedroom and sat on the bed. With Georg's arms around my shoulders, I started dialing. My breath was shaky as I waited fro him to pick up.
"Hello?"
I started to hyperventilate. "Alex?" I half choked, half whispered.
"Chloe? What did you want to talk to me about?" He sounded genuinely concerned and I wavered. Maybe I was overreacting... No, I remembered how he made me cower while he beat me, and the look in Georg's eyes when he found out my boyfriend was an abusive creep.
"Alex, I'm breaking up with you." Silence. I was almost ready to hang up when he started screaming at me through the phone.
"You stupid *****! You cheated on me, didn't you, and you got pregnant! I'll kill the baby and the father, and then I'll make you wish you were never born, you ugly slut! I'll kill both of them!" He kept screaming as I started to sob uncontrollably. Georg stood up and grabbed the phone from my hands.
"Listen, you ignorant piece of filth, you're a blemish on humanity, and I hate all scum like you!" His arms tensed as his green eyes flashed with anger.
"Who the **** are you!?" hollered Alex from the other end of the line.
"I'm the person who will make you wish YOU were the one who had never been born if you even lay your eyes on Chloe again, you disgusting slimeball! Someone as caring and beautiful as her deserves more than the left overs the devil threw out. If I see you anywhere near her, or I hear any whisperings, I'll make you regret it." With that, Georg hung up on him and scooped me into his arms. He carried me into the bathroom and turned on the shower. I sat on the counter, still in shock, tears streaming down my face. He came back into the bathroom with a clean outfit and a towel.
"Take a shower and put this on. I'm going to call the guys and we're going to get out of here." He shut the door behind him and obediently climbed into the soothing, healing heat of my shower stall.
Yay! I did it! Applause and treats would be greatly appreciated! ;) j/k! Mostly... Comment please.
Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S
April 20th, 2008, 11:14 PM
aww...georg is a sweet man...please post more soon...
XxInyourNightmarexX
April 21st, 2008, 12:03 AM
Just lovely!
Grrr! Alex should go play in traffic! Scumbag!
Lawwa
April 21st, 2008, 09:13 AM
Go Georg, I knew you could do it!
DeeDee
April 21st, 2008, 10:14 AM
aww georgg that was so nice of you
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LipsOfAnAngel
April 21st, 2008, 03:30 PM
aww i love georg! and here's some candy for you! *candy* mehr bitte!
margaritalouita9
April 21st, 2008, 04:57 PM
Yay! *snaps for me* lol, I got the next part done, apparently I write in spurts. :P
Tom's POV
It was morning, but I wasn't ready to get up. We hadn't had a break for a while, and I wanted to sleep in as long as possible, but as soon as I started to drift back to sleep, my cell phone started ringing. I groaned and curled up underneath my comforter. It kept ringing and Bill came stomping in, groggy and lethal.
"Tom, if you don't get your scrawny self out of that bed and answer that fetching phone, there will be blood!!" hollered Bill. He turned around and stomped off to the kitchen to load up on coffee and all other sources of caffeine. I grumbled as I rolled over, looking at who was calling. Georg? Where the devil was he at this hour? I flipped open my phone.
"Georg? Where are you, and why couldn't you call Gustav instead?"
"I'm at Chloe's, and -"
My eyebrows shot up. "Are you kidding me? You left her place, came back here, then went back to hers once everyone was asleep so you could have a sleepover with her! Dude, I didn't think you had it in you, I'm so proud, I think I'm starting to tear up a little."
A loud exhale. "No, Tom, I didn't have a sleepover with her, I got here about half an hour ago."
I whistled. "You work fast."
"TOM!! Shut up and listen to me! Nothing happened! She broke up with Alex."
"Then what are you waiting for? She's single, you're single, you've got the hots for each other, do you need me to hold your hand while you do it?" I knew I was being a brat, but I couldn't help it. He had it coming for that playboy comment.
"Tom, keep your mouth shut, you know full well we haven't been messing around."
"Yet," I muttered.
He ignored me. "The conversation was going badly, so I had to intervene, to put it lightly. she's in the shower right now, don't say anything, and we need to get her out and moving. I think if she dwells on this any longer she'll implode."
I sobered up pretty quickly. "What did you have in mind?"
"I honestly can't think of anything, I'm too occupied with keeping Chloe from going into shock. Do you think you could round up Bill and Gustav and come over in about twenty minutes?"
"Yeah, see you soon."
The next part will be up tonight, I'm writing it right now, this was just a good stopping spot.
LipsOfAnAngel
April 21st, 2008, 05:12 PM
love it! mehr bitte!
XxInyourNightmarexX
April 21st, 2008, 05:46 PM
Nice, nice, nice!
Lol @ Bill!
DeeDee
April 21st, 2008, 06:00 PM
oh my god tomm for heavens sakes you just woke up haha
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Lawwa
April 21st, 2008, 07:11 PM
Grumpy Bill= <3. Looks like Georg is really worried though. Interesting :geek:
margaritalouita9
April 23rd, 2008, 11:47 PM
New post
Georg's POV
I hung up the phone, rolling my eyes at Tom. The door creaked open behind me.
"Georg," whispered Chloe. "Thank you so much for being there for me. It means a lot." She shut the door behind her. I turned around to see her, hair soaking wet, looking so vulnerable yet pristine. Her bruises were beginning to fade, and her pale skin shone brightly. I traced my hand down her arm.
"Chloe," I murmured. "I think I'm falling for you." She looked up at me, blue eyes shining bright. She brushed the hair from my face, reaching up slowly.
"I think I'm falling for you too," she whispered. She tentatively leaned closer, kissing my neck. I sighed, pulling her to me, kissing her back with fervent passion. We fell back on her bed, when Tom knocked on the door.
"**** it," I muttered. "If I didn't know any better, I would think Tom planned that." I disentangled myself from Chloe, kissing her once more before answering the door. Tom, Bill and Gustav all peered in curiously, noting my mussed up hair and Chloe's heavy breathing.
"All right boys, what did I tell you? I think you both ahd better pay up." Tom held his hand out to Bill and Gustav. Chloe and I blushed furiously.
Bill turned to me. "You guys really did it? I thought Tom was joking, why didn't you tell me?" He pouted his lower lip, giving me an injured look.
"No, we didn't do anything like that!"
"Then why are you two so red?" smirked Tom, arms folded across his chest.
"I'm not red!" yelled Chloe as she buried her face in a pillow. Everybody burst out laughing at this.
"Did you come here just to abuse us, or are we actually going to leave and do something?" I interjected, hoping to distract Tom.
It worked, partially. "Yeah, we actually wanted to go mini golfing, but it looks like you guys are having enough fun on your own, so we won't force you to go if you don't want to." Tom smiled, leaning against the doorway.
I grabbed Chloe and shoved Tom out of the way. "We're going mini golfing." I muttered sternly. Bill and Gustav guffawed at Tom on the floor, following me and Chloe.
* * * *
We arrived at the golf course about forty minutes later. It was situated in the middle of an entertainment center, and because most people were still at work, we were practically the only ones there. Chloe had claimed to have no previous golfing experience, miniature or otherwise, but I think she was pulling the wool over our eyes. As the scores stood, Chloe was tied for first with Gustav, Tom and I were about the same after them, and poor Bill was lucky if he could hit the ball, let alone get it in the hole. We had gotten to about the ninth hole when a mob of sinister looking girls came upon us. I motioned to Tom, who paled at their number.
"Ah, Bill, Gustav, I think we should go back to hole three." stammered Tom. Gustav and Bill looked up, their eyes widening with fear.
"Why do you want to go all the way back to the beginning?" asked Chloe. "What's the point?"
"Um, i think Bill cheated, so we have to start over," I quickly lied.
Chloe glanced at the score sheet. "No he didn't, what are you talking a-"
"TOKIO HOTEL!!" screamed the crazed mob of fangirls.
"RUN!!" yelled Tom and Bill in unison. I shoved a very confused and shocked Chloe in front of me as we dove for cover behind a plastic hill and watched in horror as Bill was poked and prodded and Tom was trying desperately to write down all the numbers given to him. Gustav had managed to escape by climbing a prop tree and hiding in the synthetic foliage. Chloe turned to me, still looking very confused, but with a slight tinge of irritability.
"Do you have something you would like to tell me?" she demanded. Gustav, who had managed to sneak past the fans to join us, turned to me.
"You haven't told her?" he asked.
"Told me what!" she demanded vehemently.
I sighed. "Well this is the first time there has been a pressing need," I tried to explain.
"Just tell me. I don't like being kept in the dark." She scowled at me, hands on her hips.
I gulped. She looked mad. "Well, you see, we're kind of the most famous band in Germany."
She raised her eyebrows at me, hesitant.
"We're called Tokio Hotel, and Bill's the singer, Tom's the guitarist, Gustav's the drummer, and I'm the bassist. I didn't want to hide it from you, but we're on hiatus right now, and so many people know who we are because of our music that when you didn't attack us at first glance, it was a pleasant change. I didn't want to ruin it. Can you forgive me for not telling you sooner?" I waited nervously for her response.
She frowned at me, looking for any sign of deception, then stared at Gustav. She peered over the hill at the spectacle that was Bill, Tom, and the mass of girls. She seemed convinced that my story was true. "All rght, Georg, I believe you. But you didn't have to hide it from me, it doesn't change anything."
"Really?" I asked.
She smiled. "Well, maybe one or two things." She smiled at me flirtingly. "Do you want to make a bet?" she asked.
I grinned, "You're on."
Ha, the bet shall be kept secret until the next post! Mwahaha! :twisted:
It's so much fun playing with your minds. Comment please! :D
XxInyourNightmarexX
April 24th, 2008, 12:07 AM
This is the bestest.
Lol @ Tom making that bet with Bill and Gustav. I laughed so hard at the part where he was like "Pay up"
Lmao! Plz continue, must know the bet.
Luv Erica!
DeeDee
April 24th, 2008, 04:38 AM
ow maj gowdd tomm pleaseee
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LipsOfAnAngel
April 24th, 2008, 03:30 PM
oooooooooooooooooohhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!! nnnoooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!! aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
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margaritalouita9
April 28th, 2008, 11:19 PM
Ugh, I hate writer's block... sorry for the delay.
Chloe's POV
"Do you want to make a bet?" I asked, giving him a sneaky look.
He smiled. "You're on."
I grinned widely. "I get Bill and you get Tom. Whichever one of us can get them to safety first wins, and Gustav will referee."
He laughed. "What are the stakes?"
My sly look returned. "When I win, you have to play me a song. Your favorite one that you guys have recorded. I want a private concert."
"What do you mean, when you win? I'll kick your butt, I do this on a regular basis! When I win, you're going to sing ME a song!"
"But I can't sing," I protested. "You're a musician, so my request is fair and has at least a little basis in reality!"
"Exactly. You never said it had to be fair, so I'm taking advantage of your lapse in judegement." I glowered at him, urging him to back down.
"Fine," I said. "I accept your terms, but just so you know, i will not show any mercy while beeating your sorry-"
"Would you two hurry up and save them already! If this goes on any longer, they'll be naked!" yelled Gustav.
We looked over and, sure enough, the mob had managed to rip off pieces and occasionally full articles of clothing off of Bill and Tom, who both looked as though they feared for their lives. Georg turned to me and caught my eye. I nodded. We both ran out from behind the hill. Before Georg could even say anything, I screamed. "OHMYGO****'SGEORGGETHIM!!"
That had the expected and desired effect. The hungry mob, nearly finished with their meal of fresh Kaulitz, returned to feeding frenzy mode with the scent of fresh meat. Georg gave me a shocked but impressed look right before the girls pounced on him. I grabbed Bill and Tom and, with the help of Gustav, dragged them behind the hill. Gustav was choking on his laughter as we watched Georg scramble up a tree barefoot, the girls having stolen his shoes.
"Oh man, that look on his face was priceless," chuckled Gustav. "That was pretty devious of you, I'm impressed."
I smiled coyly. "I'm pretty sure he didn't think I would be able to manipulate that crowd so well. I can't wait to get my reward."
Bill and Tom looked at us, confused and bruised. I had forgotten that we had bet on their safety without their consent, and felt a little sorry for them. I quickly explained it all to them, and they congratulated me on beating Georg so cleanly.
We were discussing possible ways to save Georg from an untimely death of over adoration, when security finally arrived and forced the girls to cease and decist. Georg stumbled over to us, clothes ripped, but looking very proud of himself for having survived the ordeal.
"Chloe, I am going to get you so bad for that."
I smiled, "Sounds good to me. Just complete your end of the deal first." I smiled at him flirtingly, pushing his buttons to see what he would do.
"Fine. But we're getting dinner first, I'm starved." He grabbed my hand, interlacing his fingers with mine and smiling at me so I would know he wasn't angry.
Bill coughed. "Can we get some new clothes first? I'm kinda naked..."
We all laughed. "Yes, Bill, please get dressed, nobody here wants to see your skinny naked body!" said Gustav.
"I don't mind it," I cut in. Georg gave me a hurt look, and I smiled at him wickedly. "But your body looks so much more fun. I can't wait to see you with your shirt off. It's probably even more yummy than Tom's."
Everyone agreed to this, except for Tom, who spent the rest of the walk to the car complaining that ever since I had hooked up with Georg he had been getting less attention than he deserved.
I will post more later.
Comment, bitte!
DeeDee
April 29th, 2008, 04:46 AM
hahahaha serves you right tom , georg needs some attention doesnt he ?!
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XxInyourNightmarexX
April 29th, 2008, 02:45 PM
Haha!
I love it.
Bill: "I'm kinda naked here" :mrgreen:
LipsOfAnAngel
April 29th, 2008, 03:12 PM
ahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!! aww poor tom!!!! haha love it!!!!! mehr bitte!
Julily
May 1st, 2008, 08:39 PM
YAY! I love this story!!! :D I can't wait for the next post!!!! hurry please!
margaritalouita9
May 8th, 2008, 12:19 AM
Hi Julie! I finally have the new post! Curse the AP test... Grr...
Georg’s POV
We all traipsed into the dorm so Bill and Tom could get redressed. Gustav had been volunteered to pay for our meal, so he went to go find his wallet, leaving me and Chloe alone in the living room area. As soon as the other three were out of earshot, she wrapped her arms around my neck and started kissing me with fervor. I kissed her back, my hands resting on her waist, right above her hips. We pulled back for a breath.
“What’s that for?” I asked. She looked up at me, taking my breath away with her radiance. She was such a tease, I could barely stand it.
“I felt bad for getting you chased up a tree by crazy teenage girls, so I figured this would be an appropriate apology. Am I forgiven?”
I stood there, considering what she had said, toying with her curls as she held me close. I decided to exact some revenge, just to tease her.
“No.” She looked up at me, shocked. “At least, not yet.” She relaxed slightly, a cautious look in her eyes.
“What are you playing at?” she asked, pulling away slowly.
“You’ll find out,” I promised, gripping her sides. She glared at me, a grin tugging the corners of her mouth.
“You had better tell me. I want to be forgiven!”
“I might not. I think I like all the attention I’m getting. I’ll keep you in this needy state as long as I can if it gets you to spontaneously make out with me more often.” I smiled, kissing her sweetly before she could complain. We stood there making out for what must have been several minutes before I heard a soft snickering by the bedroom doors. I looked up to see Tom with his phone out, filming us as we kissed. Bill and Gustav peered curiously over his shoulder to see what was going on.
“TOM!!” I yelled, pulling Chloe behind me.
He snickered some more, tucking his phone away. “First thing tomorrow morning, this is going up on Youtube.”
I tackled him, wrestling him for his phone, but he tossed it to Bill, who threw it at Gustav, who was then attacked from behind by Chloe, who wrested it out of his hands and was about to give it to me when Tom leapt from the ground and dove into her, rolling on the floor right into the closet. There were several loud bangs and multiple random objects came flying out of the closet, including, but not limited to, a pair of what looked like Tom’s pants, a bra, and a bicycle tire. Moments later, Chloe emerged, looking as though she had just taken a relaxing power nap, holding Tom’s phone triumphantly in her hand.
“I totally kicked his ***. Here’s the phone, Georg, I’ll let you do the honors. Only if you’ll forgive me, though.” She smiled and winked.
I held back my laughter as best I could. “Of course I forgive you, I wasn’t upset to begin with, I just wanted to get you back for teasing me so much. What exactly did you do to Tom, though?”
She grinned a purely evil smile. “Oh, nothing serious, I’m sure he enjoyed it.”
I gave Bill and Gustav a concerned but curious look. We wandered over to the closet Chloe had emerged from, worried about the sight that was about to greet our eyes. We peered in, and saw that Tom had been removed of his clothes and was sitting in his boxers, hands tied to the doorknob with a bra that had apparently been left in there from a previous encounter. He looked as though he had gone into shock, and sat there with his mouth gaping open.
“I can’t believe she got me that good.” He finally managed to say.
I burst into laughter at that point, unable to hold it in any longer. “Dude, she got you good.” I pulled out my phone and took a picture of him sitting there, all dignity stripped from him. He turned his face away, but I laughed at him, “It’s no use, Tom. I’m filming this for posterity”
He swore at me in German, forgetting that Chloe knew exactly what he was saying, and yelled for help out.
Chloe shook her head. “Nope. Not until you learn how to play nice.”
He gave her a highly exasperated look. “Are you freaking kidding me? What do you want me to do, beg for your forgiveness and mercy?”
She laughed, “As much as I would enjoy seeing you grovel, I’ll let you off easy. We’ll not only untie you and give you your clothes back, but we’ll delete this video IF and ONLY IF you delete your video and promise to be a good boy for the rest of the night.” She gave him a satisfied smirk, hands on her hips.
Tom gave her the angriest death glare he could muster, and caved. “Fine! Just untie me! I want out!”
Chloe giggled and I helped her release Tom from his bondage. He stood up and grabbed his pants, acting as though he had been bodily injured.
“Oh stop whining, Tomi!” interjected Bill, who had been laughing his face off with Gustav in the corner. “It’s about time you didn’t get all the attention! Goodness, you’re just mad because she wouldn’t sleep with you!”
“Shut the **** up, Bill.”
The room got very silent as Tom and Bill faced each other. Chloe backed away and stood close to me. Tom stared Bill in the eyes for almost an eternity before he walked off angrily. He slammed the door shut behind him. I tried to catch Bill’s gaze, but he refused to look at me.
AAH! Drama! Please don't hate me for the cliffhanger! Comment, bitte.
DeeDee
May 8th, 2008, 05:41 AM
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LipsOfAnAngel
May 8th, 2008, 09:09 AM
love cliffhangers, how could i hate you for that? mehr bitte!
Julily
May 9th, 2008, 07:27 PM
Yay for random make out sessions! :P I LOVE IT!!!
margaritalouita9
May 19th, 2008, 06:20 PM
oh my lanta, i'm sorry i haven't posted in forever and a week, things have been hectic.
I'm working on homework as we speak, and I will try to finish the next post and put it up soon, hopefully tonight or tomorrow.
Once again, sorry for the wait!
Julily
May 19th, 2008, 10:11 PM
Yeah you better hurry margaret! Your public awaits!!!! :lol: Jk well... I mean its true but... I know school sucks so... Yeah.....lol
cassirolla
May 28th, 2008, 05:56 PM
hey margareta i finally got on this thing! lol nice cliff hanger except you should just screw krugers essay and write on here instead
XxInyourNightmarexX
May 28th, 2008, 09:47 PM
Yay at least you updated.
I missed this story!
margaritalouita9
May 29th, 2008, 11:49 PM
Finally. The new post has arrived. Sorry it's short and anticlimactic... It'll get better with the succeeding posts, I promise.
Tom's POV
I glared at Bill, furious that he felt it necessary to share what we'd discussed in private. He knew how I felt about Chloe, and yes, I wanted some action, what guy didn't, but that wasn't all I wanted. Of all people, my own twin should understand a little about what I was going through. Bill glared right back at me, daring me to say something, anything. A wave of anger washed over me again, and I flipped around, walking into my bedroom and slamming the door shut behind me.
I punched the wall, furious that my secret had come out in the open. Pacing around the room, I grabbed my acoustic and flopped on the bed. I started playing In Die Nacht, but stopped as soon as Bill's face popped into my head. I pulled a face and tried to think of any song that wouldn't remind me of my best friends. I pulled out my enormous store of music, and decided on playing some Three Days Grace. They were angry, and that couldn't describe how I felt any more eloquently. I was in the middle of I Hate Everything About You when someone knocked on the door. I ignored it, figuring it was probably Bill being a moron again. He knocked again.
"What do you want," I bellowed, irritated at Bill's persistance.
"Tom." It was Chloe. "Can I come in?"
I nearly fell off my bed in shock. I scrambled to the door, opening it to see Chloe's concerned face. Behind her, Georg Bill and Gustav looked at me, expectant and impatient. Georg looked as if he were ready to punch me, suspicion and hurt raging in his eyes. I refused to look at him, letting Chloe in and shutting the door behind her. I turned around as she sat on the bed, looking nervous and upset. I felt immediately remorseful for the way I had acted. It wasn't Chloe's fault that Bill was an airhead and that I was emotionally retarded. I sat down nest to her, my hands in my lap. We sat in silence for a moment.
"Chloe," I began. She looked at me, her expression incomprehensible. I took a deep breath. "I'm sorry about what happened out there. I was totally out of line, I'm sorry if I upset you."
She pursed her lips. "Tom, I wasn't looking for an apology. I just wanted to make sure you were ok. You seemed really upset, and yes, you did act like a jerk, but you were justified at least a little, so I don't really blame you. I just want to clarify why you freaked out. Are you just angry at Bill, or is there something more going on that I can't see?" Her gaze cut right through me, refusing to take any lies or excuses. I sighed heavily, pondering how to answer tactfully and still be honest.
caro.lina.
May 29th, 2008, 11:59 PM
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LipsOfAnAngel
May 30th, 2008, 03:17 PM
oh my... mehr bitte!
tiklemepurple
May 30th, 2008, 03:32 PM
<3
More!
XxInyourNightmarexX
May 31st, 2008, 08:33 PM
Just tell her Tom...
It's for the best :P
margaritalouita9
June 2nd, 2008, 04:56 PM
Hi new readers! This next post is really long because I won't be able to get on at all next week, so I'm trying not to deprive you all, lol!
Chloe's POV
My mind was racing, I didn't know what to think. I was in love with Georg, but Tom was a really good friend. My gut told me what I knew he felt, I just didn't know how to handle it all. I felt like I was about to lose a best friend, and I was questioning how that would affect me and my new boyfriend. I had finally found friends that had made me feel safe from Alex, and Tom was threatening to ruin it by being so selfish! I could my face flush with anger as Tom started to speak.
"Chloe, I'm really attracted to you, and not just physically. I only told Bill because he'd somewhat figured it out already, being my twin and all, and I didn't want to ruin things between you and Georg. He hasn't had a girlfriend for a while, and he'll definitely treat you better than Alex did, and probably better than I could. All I know how to deal with when it comes to relationships is one night stands." He cracked a smile and I burst out laughing, nearly all my confusion, worry, and anger washed away by the relief in tension.
"Chloe?"
"Yeah, Tom?"
"I know you're not interested, and I'm not going to push it too much, but if you and Georg don't work out, just remember that I'll be waiting, ok?"
I stiffened, and he noticed.
"Just consider it, please? That's all I need to hear."
I nodded. "If that happens, I'll make sure you're the first to know my feelings, Tom."
He grinned, giving me a one-armed hug. I hugged him back, briefly.
"Let's go back out and have some fun, ok?" I told him.
"Ok."
Bill's POV
After Chloe had gone into Tom's room, Georg had sat down on the couch with his arms crossed, fuming. I didn't blame him; Tom knew he was crossing the line by showing any interest in Chloe as more than a friend. I felt bad for Tom too, though. Girls always saw him as the playboy of the group, and he'd felt pressured to keep up that image throughout our entire career. I was the only one who knew how badly he longed for someone to come home to at night and hold in his arms while the stresses of the day washed away. He and I both knew that Chloe was perfect for him, but she and Georg needed each other right now, and I wasn't about to let Tom interfere with their relationship. Personally, I didn't think Georg and Chloe were that well suited for each other, but I wasn't going to voice that opinion to either of them unless push came to shove. Healing needed to happen first, and I wasn't sure which of them needed it more. All I could do was keep Tom out of the picture as much as possible. Tom's door opened as I sat down on the couch.
Georg's POV
It was all I could do not to slug Tom as Chloe walked into his room. He'd briefly caught my eye for less than an instant and I knew he could tell how much I hated him right now. All three of them knew what I went throught with Rachel, and how much I needed Chloe, almost as much as she needed me. A nagging voice in the back of my mind, annoyingly reminiscent of Bill's, told me that perhaps this was a poor foundation to build a relationship on. I brushed it aside, ignoring my fears that we might only be dating because we were both needy. thoughts of Rachel swam through my mind as bile rose in my throat. She'd been cheating on me throughout our entire relationship, and I hadn't had any idea until the day she told me she was pregnant. When I asked if it was mine, I was entirely ready to marry her and raise our child together. Instead, she cussed me out, calling me an idiot and saying she wouldn't let me touch her or the baby even if I was the father. I'd been caught off-guard by this, and flipped out, asking who the father was if it wasn't me. She had screamed back that she wasn't sure, but that any bum off the street would make a better father than me. At that point, I couldn't take it anymore and I told her to take her whoring self and the baby and find the father, and never bother me again with her excuses and lies. I'd never found out if the child was mine or not, and even though I was still hurt by what she'd said, I still loved her. But not as much as I love Chloe, my heart reminded me.
Tom's door opened, and I looked up to see if there was any sign on Chloe's face as to whether Tom had told her about Rachel. She was smiling at me as she came over to kiss me softly, and Tom's face darkened momentarily, so I assumed Rachel was still my secret. For now, reminded mind Bill. I hugged Chloe tightly.
"He didn't put any moves on you, did he?" I asked, half joking. Tom scowled again as Chloe laughed. I saw Bill elbow Tom out of the corner of my eye.
"No, he was a perfect gentleman," she retorted softly. "Now can we please go get some dinner? I'm starving!"
"Yes, please!" moaned Gustav from beneath the pillows in the corner.
I'll try and get some more written before next week, but if I can't, this will have to tide you all over. Comment please!
DeeDee
June 2nd, 2008, 05:35 PM
poor tomii
mehr bitte wenn du kannst hun
Julily
June 2nd, 2008, 06:30 PM
awh! tom actually has feelings! :) lol. poor georg with stupid rachel. did he really have a gf named rachel? jw.
LipsOfAnAngel
June 2nd, 2008, 07:16 PM
that was soo intense!!! mehr bitte!
cassirolla
June 2nd, 2008, 09:30 PM
stinky rachel what a *#^@*$(@*($
margaritalouita9
June 2nd, 2008, 10:37 PM
awh! tom actually has feelings! :) lol. poor georg with stupid rachel. did he really have a gf named rachel? jw.
As far as I know, he didn't, because I just made that name up off the top of my head in third this morning. If he did, then that's kinda creepy, lol!
XxInyourNightmarexX
June 2nd, 2008, 10:54 PM
Was Rachel retarded or something? She threw away a perfectly good guy like Georg. *shakes head*
margaritalouita9
June 12th, 2008, 05:47 PM
Hey everybody!!
So I'm working on the new post, and I need some new characters, so if you want to put yourself in, or a character that you've made up, just fill out the application form and I'll see what I can do.
I need some girls to be acquaintances of the guys and possibly stay in the group for more than just a few posts, and I need more characters of indiscriminate gender to play the antagonists.
Name:
Appearance:
Personality:
Other:
Role in the story:
Danke!!
DeeDee
June 12th, 2008, 06:10 PM
heyy i would love to be in it :D
name : Diandra
appearence : tall , short dark brown hair , big brown eyes , white skined and sumtimes very pale , im not stick thin and neither fat just normal .
personalty : veryy outgoing but shy at first
other : nuting really
role : anything you like but i mostly like the aquaintinces for d boiis .
margaritalouita9
June 14th, 2008, 11:32 PM
Ok, Diandra, I'm pretty sure you'll fit right where I need you.
I still need more characters!!
xXxMandiixXx
June 15th, 2008, 12:56 AM
*new reader*
loving the story
continue!!! :)
ooo can i be a character please!
Name:Mandii
Appearance:black hair with pink in the side fringe and under layer fairly short but not too short slightly tanned skin with bluey grey eyes and is is average weight not to fat not to thin
Personality:Hyperactive,caring,loving,serious wen need be and the friend you can always rely on
Other:loves laughing and cant help but laugh wen looking at some one and has a hyperactive reaction to sherbet and sugar
Role in the story: acquaintance of the boys :)
<3 Mandii xx
margaritalouita9
June 15th, 2008, 01:45 AM
Mandii will work too!
*hint*
I still need antagonists!
tokiohotel26
June 15th, 2008, 02:11 AM
ooohhh ooohhh pick me! pick me!
Name:lexi [alexis]
Appearance:mixture of bill and tom
emo and hip hop-sounds weird but its a cool style...
and i LOVE black nail polish!
Personality:likes to party,fun,up for anything but is not a whor.e, is secretly in love with bill!
Other:drinks when something is wrong or has a drinking problem <-------[idea]
Role in the story:bill's new girlfriend or a longtime friend that is in love with bill [[if thats not 2 much 2 ask]]
margaritalouita9
June 15th, 2008, 10:45 PM
Hey, lexi, I finished writing the next post before your comment, so I'll see if I can fit you in later! I still really need antagonists, though you guys. They are pertinent to the plotline!! Danke!
*About three weeks after the last post*
Chloe's POV
We all piled into the subway, searching for the next train to the restaurant the boys had wanted to go to. Diandra and Mandii, who were both friends of the boys, had joined with us so I could have some female company, and to hopefully break up some of the tension. Diandra and Bill had met a few days ago in an ethics class and Mandii was a long-time friend of Gustav's, and had known the rest of the band for the past few years. Gustav had called her to hang out a few weeks ago and found out she was going to the same university as the rest of us, so they had been planning on going out with everyone and tonight had seemed like the perfect opportunity. I had immediately hit it off with the two of them; Diandra reminded strongly reminded me of one or my best high school friends, not only with her height and short brown hair, but with her introverted personality. Until you got her talking, that is. At first Mandii had seemed like she was too funky to be friends with Gustav, what with her fashion forward black and pink hair cut and exuberance, but once she actually started talking it was apparent that she and Gustav had very similar down-to-earth personalities. I tried to spend more time talking with Mandii, Diandra, and their dates than with Georg and Tom. Despite my reassurances, Georg had refused to relax, and his stiffness was ruining my mood. Tom wasn't much better; he was very conscious of where he was in relation to Georg, and he always shifted to keep on the far side of the group from him. I felt like a Georg/Chloe/Tom sandwich with a fresh batch of hate on top, and I didn't like it in the least. I was really hoping that they could just make up, even if it was just for the evening, and enjoy everyone's company. If they would just bottle it up for tonight, they could duke it out after everyone else went home, but if they didn't get their acts together soon I was going to make them both regret it.
The train finally arrived and we all rushed in as a mass to avoid getting separated. A group of tourists pushed through us, though, and we were split down the middle, with Mandii, Diandra, Bill, and Gustav on one side, and me stuck with Georg and Tom on the other side. I clenched my jaw and scowled as I leaned against the wall, preparing myself for twenty minutes of strained silence and unspoken death threats. tom and Georg each positioned themselves on either side of me as I crossed my arms, refusing to look at either of them. Georg wrapped his arm around my waist, pulling me closer to him, and I tried not to be too stiff, even though I was mad at him for being such a stubborn idiot. Tom immediately tightened his posture and was very careful not to look directly at me or Georg. Georg became so possessive in his presence that finally Tom wormed his way through the crowd to an opening a few feet away from us.
"Georg," I whispered. "Could you please relax? I don't know why you're so worked up, he promised to back off, but he's still allowed to be my friend. And in case you'd forgotten, he's been your friend longer than I've been your girlfriend, so I think that relationship matters more."
He pursed his lips at me, unwilling to admit that I was right. I pushed his arm away from me, turning to face him fully. "Georg, if you don't fix things with Tom right now on your own, I'm going to make you two fix things."
He raised an eyebrow at me. "How exactly do you plan on doing that," he asked, trying to grab my hand. I shoved him back, not letting him tough me.
"Like that. Unless you can grow up, be a man, and learn how to forgive one of your best friends for feelings he can't help and a secret that his brother forced into the open, then you can't touch me at all. Not to help me, or to hinder me. You have to forgive Tom before we can have a relationship anymore. And by the way, you have fifteen minutes until we get to our stop, so unless you want to be sitting in the cold by yourself I suggest you get your rear in gear and go talk to him. Now."
Georg gave me a highly affronted look, as if he couldn't believe his ears that I was actually threatening to withhold contact with him. I stared at him until he backed down and worked his way over to Tom.
Tom's POV
During that mad rush onto the subway train our group had gotten separated, and, just my luck, I was on one side of the car with Chloe and Georg while everybody else was an entire tourist group away. I tried standing next to Chloe in a neutral manner, but Georg got really uptight when he saw me, so I took the hint and backed off. Way off. As I moved away from them, I could hear Chloe start to argue with Georg, and I again felt a pang of guilt for the tension I was causing in their relationship. I knew Chloe had forgiven me, but Georg was harder to bring around, even though I hadn't technically done anything wrong. Anything that I could control, at least.
i saw her shove him away and my thoughts drifted back to Alex. It had been a while now since she had broken up with him, and the intitial trauma seemed to have worn off. As fas as I knew, she hadn't heard form or about him since that last phone call, which seemed to be a good sign, but I remembered Georg telling me about the threats he'd made before he intervened. I hand't actually met this guy before, but the things I'd heard about his reputation made my blood run cold. I really hoped he'd moved on from his revenge against Chloe; if he was still looking for ways to hurt her, he was due to hit soon.
Somebody crashed into me while I was thinking, and I looked up in time to see a tall, fair-haired, lanky man move towards the back of the bus. Towards Georg and Chloe. I knew I recognized him, but I couldn't place where I had seen him before, and my brain was screaming at me to figure it out faster, my gut teling me he was bad news, but not why. I figured out that it was Alex just as Georg started to move in my direction. Alex slipped behind an older couple as Georg walked pasthim, towards me, and then slowly moved closer to Chloe as she stared absently out the window next to her.
I tried to run past Georg as Alex got closer to Chloe, but he put his arm up and shoved me back into the wall. I tried to shrug him off, but he held me back.
"Georg, let me go!"
"Not until you listen to me, Tom!" He pushed me back, writhing and fighting against him. I held still, realizing that I couldn't fight him off, he was too strong for me. "Tom, I'm sorry i've been such a jerk, you're one of my best friends, and I should have realized that you weren't trying to push into my space."
i nodded quickly, keeping my eyes on Alex. He was only a foot or two from Chloe now, and I did like the look in his eyes. "I'm sorry too, Georg. Now will you let me go?"
He frowned. "Why aren't you listening to me, Tom?"
"I am!"
"No, You're not, you're not even looking at me, you're looking over my shoulder at Chloe!"
"I'm not looking at Chloe, i'm looking at her ex-boyfriend Alex, who's about to take advantage of your absence," I yelled at him, shoving my face into his. "Now either let me go so I can get him away from her or get your *** over there and do it yourself!"
Georg flipped around in time to see Alex tapping Chloe on the shoulder. I wiggled out of his hold and shot through the crowd, narrowly avoiding a young Asian couple standing near them. Chloe had turned around to face Alex and her eyes were widening with fear as I ran up and punched him in the face. He flipped around and tackled me, knocking down the people around us. We rolled around on the floor as Georg pushed his way through the frantic mob and picked Alex up by the collar of his shirt and body slammed him into a wall, much the same as he had done to me moments earlier. I ran to Chloe and quickly slipped her out of the way as Georg 'accidentally' cut off Alex's airway and threatened his manhood if he ever saw Alex in the same vicinity as chloe again. After Alex seemed on the brink of passing out, Georg let him go and watched him fall to the floor and crumple in a mass of limbs. Georg gave him one last warning before walking off to join Chloe and me. As soon as Chloe saw Georg she enveloped herself in his arms and started bawling. Georg was preoccupied with comforting her, so I focused my attention on Alex instead. He was wincing as he stood up and massaged his throat, but he was smiling. I frowned as I tried to figure out what he was up to, because I couldn't see any reason for him to be smiling after getting smacked around unless he was up to something devious. I tried to make my way toward him, but the subway stopped before I could and he disappeared amongst the throng of tourists.
Whew!! That was a lot! Please comment, and I'm still taking submissions for characters, especially if you don't mind being categorized with Alex the scum bag. lol.
xXxMandiixXx
June 15th, 2008, 11:44 PM
OMFG can i kill alex please lolz
make him dissapear or become a woman if you get wat i mean *wiggles eyebrows*
love it
continue!
<3 Mandii xx
Julily
June 16th, 2008, 12:58 AM
Ha ha ha "get your rear in gear" thats my favorite line EVER!!!! I am so going to use that one! YAY! alex is gay. lol woman haters should be shot. lol
LipsOfAnAngel
June 16th, 2008, 11:06 AM
oh boy! mehr bitte!
Unknown598
June 18th, 2008, 02:35 PM
New reader
nice story, it, like draws u in, and yea, amazing ^_^
more bitte :D :mrgreen:
margaritalouita9
June 18th, 2008, 03:58 PM
oh, thank you, thank you! :D
I'm still working on the new post, but it should be up tomorrow morning between 9:30 and 10:30
hopefully...
*reminder* I REALLY need some more people to apply as antagonists, because they're coming up SOON and if i don't have them, i can't post! Come on people, please?
Bill Kaulitz=Love
June 18th, 2008, 04:24 PM
I'm also a new reader, and I just love your writing. How do you manage to update so often? I really can't wait to read more, and find out what Alex has on his mind for revenge (that shetbag!). I just want to punch him in the face, but that's a good thing because you write him in such an evil way I hate him. Please update soon!
DeeDee
June 18th, 2008, 05:13 PM
oh my god shame on me i didnt post :oops: :oops: :oops: sorry hun
10x loadzz for putting me into it :D
god dat alex doesnt know how to get on wit now revenge does he :evil: :evil: i hate him :evil:
hmm i like d idea of me and bill being frieds :D
aww and you get sum company , femail company dat is after you had to stay wit 4 boys which drive you up the wall :lol:
mehr wenn du kannst :D bitte
margaritalouita9
June 19th, 2008, 11:45 AM
I'm also a new reader, and I just love your writing. How do you manage to update so often? I really can't wait to read more, and find out what Alex has on his mind for revenge (that shetbag!). I just want to punch him in the face, but that's a good thing because you write him in such an evil way I hate him. Please update soon!
You are much too kind to me! & the only reason I update so often is because I feel really guilty leaving you guys without anything to read for long periods of time. I'm typing up the next post as we speak
margaritalouita9
June 19th, 2008, 12:02 PM
kk, it's kinda short, but that's because i was up doing astronomy homework last night and i got distracted by the pretty lights in the sky... lmao no really, it was cool. Just go out at about midnight or one in the morning sometime and just lay on the lawn and look at the stars. It's crazy. Anyway, here's the new post! :D
Bill's POV
I was freaking out. Georg and Tom couldn't be left alone with each other, at all. Even though the whole incident had happened almost a month ago, Georg's temper was still volatile and Tom was just trying to lay low. Fat chance of that happening if he was RIGHT NEXT to Georg! Diandra noticed that I was stressing and she asked me what was up. I swallowed, wondering if I should tell her about the soap opera that was my life right now. She, and Mandii too, I assumed, had no idea about Georg and Tom's feud over Chloe, and I'd been hoping to keep it that way, but it looked like they were figuring it out. It wasn't rocket science, after all, and those two weren't exactly prime examples of subtlety and finesse. I hurriedly described the situation to Diandra, and she grabbed Mandii and asked her if Gustav hada told her anything about it. Gustav had kept his mouth shut too, just like me. As soon as Mandii and Diandra had finished berating us for keeping them out of the loop, they started chatting up a storm, speculating whether or not Tom and Georg would actually duke it out on a subway. Before they could come to a conclusion, however, we all heard shouts and screams coming from the back of the train, where Georg, Tom and Chloe all were. I caught a glimpse of the situation before I was knocked over by someone's elbow in my face.
"What did you see!?" demanded Mandii and Diandra as they helped me resume my balance.
"I couldn't get a good look, but from what I saw, Georg had smashed someone into the wall and they were choking. I can only assume it was Tom, because I don't think he'd randomly attack a stranger like that..." I tried to get a better look, but the multitude was too thick. Just as we were beginning to panic, the train stopped and more than half the passengers got off. We rushed forward to see if Tom was ok, but when we got there, he didn't even have a scratch on him. Georg looked fine too, but Chloe looked about to have a nervous breakdown.
"What happened here?" asked Mandii. She magically produced a tissue out of nowhere and handed it to Chloe to wipe her tears with.
"Alex showed up," murmured Tom, standing to the side somewhat. I looked at him in surprise.
"So Georg was beating up Alex, not you?" I asked, surprised and relieved.
Tom's face broke into a sad half smile. "He wanted to, until he realized I was staring at Alex and not Chloe. But yeah, just for everybody's information, Georg and I have talked and we're cool now. Right, Georg?" Tom glanced over his shoulder at Georg.
Georg nodded. "We're cool. Not perfect, but close enough for now."
I exhaled loudly and flopped onto a nearby seat. Tom and Georg looked at me, eyebrows raised. "You two, I swear, are more dramatic and unpredictable than Mexican soap operas!" Tom just laughed at me as Georg shook his head. Chloe finally looked up from her tear-stained tissue.
"Bill, where the heck have you seen Mexican soap operas?" she inquired.
I laughed. "When you're in an American hotel and the cable goes out, it's better than watching the Antiques Roadshow. I didn't understand a word, but they were intense."
Chloe giggled at this, and looked up in time to see that we were coming to our stop. She pointed it out and we all stood up and prepared to go get dinner.
I almost forgot! You're welcome, Diandra! I'm hoping to get some time to write during my classes, so I'll either post later this afternoon or tomorrow sometime. Oh, and Bill Kaulitz=Love, giving myself deadlines also helps me to update often, lmao! 8-)
Bill Kaulitz=Love
June 19th, 2008, 12:20 PM
Tehe, smashing Tom into the window. I can totally imagine him doing that as revenge for all the times Tom has teased Georg. Poor guy, he's the center of every joke!
DeeDee
June 19th, 2008, 12:39 PM
yayy you posted more :D
finally tom and georg are nearly ok
haha i can imagine giving bill a shout for not telling me hahahaha
Tehe, smashing Tom into the window. I can totally imagine him doing that as revenge for all the times Tom has teased Georg. Poor guy, he's the center of every joke!
ye poor georg he's always getting teased :evil:
more please when you can :D
LipsOfAnAngel
June 19th, 2008, 01:37 PM
oh boy..... mehr bitte!
Unknown598
June 19th, 2008, 01:51 PM
mexican soap operas lol
*very good* :D
margaritalouita9
June 19th, 2008, 03:02 PM
Ok, you guys, I'm going to try and post again tonight, try to be patient! I love you guys!
margaritalouita9
June 19th, 2008, 05:47 PM
New post
Chloe's POV
Every time I closed my eyes, I saw him, face dark, eyes flashing. I couldn't rid him from my mine, despite all efforts. I huddled closer to Georg, trying to find comfort from his warmth. He noticed my shaking and gripped me tighter. I could hear Diandra and Mandii whispering to each other about what had just happened to me. i opened my eyes to look at everyone and take in their reactions. Bill, although he'd somewhat lightened the mood by mentioning Mexican soap operas, was looking at me every few moments out of the corner of his eye. Mandii and Diandra, bless their hearts, seemed to be planning a girl's night for next week. That sounded fun, and i felt better just looking forward to it. Gustav was standing on his own, stoic as usual. Georg was hovering over me like a mother hen, whispering to me that it would be ok when a fresh wave of shuddering washed over me. Someone was missing, though. I looked around for Tom. He was standing next to a window apart from the rest of the group. He'd been oddly silent since Alex had shown up. His whole person reeked of melancholy and frustration. I wanted desperately to go comfort him, but I knew Georg wouldn't like it. They had just started patching their relationship, and if I was going to have any chance of keeping those two in my life, I had to neglect Tom a little longer, much as i hated it. I hoped he would understand and could forgive me someday.
i have the next two posts written, but I'm not posting until I get some good commentary, lol! :twisted:
margaritalouita9
June 19th, 2008, 06:11 PM
Ah, screw it, I just want to give you all more to read! Goodness, I don't think I've written this much in a long time... Here's the next two posts!
Georg's POV
i noticed Chloe looking over in Tom's direction and my heart sank. I felt wretched about making her feel guilty for being friends with Tom, but i couldn't help my possessiveness. Tom was one of my best friends, and because of that, I didn't entirely trust him with girls. I knew he wasn't inherently malicious, and that was always straightforward about his intentions with those girls, but after practically living with him for seven years, I knew how flighty he was. He may think he loves Chloe, but he could change his mind just as fast and hurt her without intending to. Not to mention I didn't want to give her up.
"Oh really? Are you sure about that?" inquired the Bill inside my head. I quickly smothered that thought and shoved it into the deep recesses of my mind. I knew the answer to that question, but I refused to think about it; that was in the past.
Tom's POV
I resisted the temptation to bang my head against the wall. How had Alex found her? What had been his intention to contact her? Did he just want to frighten her? If so, he was doing a fine job of that! And why the devil was he smiling after Georg beat the living daylights out of him? My head was spinning with all my unanswered questions, and right at the murky center of it all, there was Chloe. Ever since Bill had outed me, I'd basically committed sexual suicide. I hadn't even kissed a girl since then, only because I wasn't interested. A girl would show some interest, and even before I could start flirting, I would start to compare her to Chloe, and Chloe always came out on top. Not surprisingly, I was extremely moody, to put it lightly. I felt like a man dying of thirst on a deserted island, where all other girls were poisonous salt water to me, and Chloe was not only what I desired but what I needed to survive, and she was also the one thing I couldn't have. Except I needed Chloe more than I needed water and air, but despite that need, I had to let her remain where she was unless she voluntarily came to me. If I forced her, we would both be unhappy. I was still arguing with myself by the time the train stopped.
*le gasp!*
What was Georg's conscience, in the form of Bill's voice, talking about?
Why WAS Alex smiling?
How will this love triangle continue to develop?
Answers shall come in the form of new posts, hopefully made at least once weekly by your favorite author, MARGARET!!
lmao
Unknown598
June 19th, 2008, 06:36 PM
O.o o.O
:evil: i shall be patient :!:
dont... do .... it.....
June 19th, 2008, 06:39 PM
XD
XD
XD
I love it, but not as much as I love you Margaret, ;D
LOL.
&& Like I said the other day =o
You can use me if you want, haha, I think you know enough about me?
=o
lol.
Bill Kaulitz=Love
June 19th, 2008, 06:56 PM
Wait, Tom LOVES her? If it's a Georg fic why is he partly willing to give her up? These are the questions I ask.
DeeDee
June 19th, 2008, 07:09 PM
tom seems to be falling harder by the second
more pleasee :D
margaritalouita9
June 19th, 2008, 07:52 PM
Wait, Tom LOVES her? If it's a Georg fic why is he partly willing to give her up? These are the questions I ask.
Do you remember the post where Rachel was mentioned? That has something to do with it...
And Unknown598, don't do what?
I love you too, Ashlyn!! Hahahaha!! I'm pretty sure I know you very well! We only talk like, EVERY DAY!! lmfao
LipsOfAnAngel
June 19th, 2008, 08:31 PM
wow, poor tom!! he's so moody!!! mehr bitte!
cassirolla
June 19th, 2008, 08:56 PM
i shall NOT be patient margareta loueeta josephia montoya hiya. no. but you can use me for a dude if you like, i think you might know what i look like... maybe =P
margaritalouita9
June 19th, 2008, 09:02 PM
i shall NOT be patient margareta loueeta josephia montoya hiya. no. but you can use me for a dude if you like, i think you might know what i look like... maybe =P
you SHALL be patient! Especially because you spelled my nickname wrong, lol
Bill Kaulitz=Love
June 19th, 2008, 09:10 PM
LE GASP! YOU CHANGED THE NAME TO JUST CHLOE, SO SHE DOESN'T NECESSARILY HAVE TO BE WITH GEORG! YOU DIDN'T THINK WE'D NOTICE, BUT I'M ONTO YOU!
margaritalouita9
June 19th, 2008, 09:11 PM
LE GASP! YOU CHANGED THE NAME TO JUST CHLOE, SO SHE DOESN'T NECESSARILY HAVE TO BE WITH GEORG! YOU DIDN'T THINK WE'D NOTICE, BUT I'M ONTO YOU!
Chillax, i've been planning on changing it for a while now, but I just barely figured it out because I'm a blonde. You still have no idea what's going to happen next, I promise you!
Bill Kaulitz=Love
June 19th, 2008, 09:15 PM
Hmm, that could just be a ploy...ah, whatever. I believe you.
margaritalouita9
June 19th, 2008, 09:17 PM
lol you should, because i am ruler supreme in this literary world! lmao danke!
Bill Kaulitz=Love
June 19th, 2008, 09:23 PM
Sie sind willkommen (according to freetranslation.com, that means you are welcome)
June 19th, 2008, 09:23 PM
lol you should, because i am ruler supreme in this literary world! lmao danke!
oh **** yes XD
June 19th, 2008, 09:24 PM
I love you too, Ashlyn!! Hahahaha!! I'm pretty sure I know you very well! We only talk like, EVERY DAY!! lmfao
LOL.
XD
OF course.
Our mad texting skills && "stories"
XD
LOL
margaritalouita9
June 19th, 2008, 09:28 PM
I love you too, Ashlyn!! Hahahaha!! I'm pretty sure I know you very well! We only talk like, EVERY DAY!! lmfao
LOL.
XD
OF course.
Our mad texting skills && "stories"
XD
LOL
oh gosh... dare i incorporate any of our stories in here, or do you think that would be too risque?
June 19th, 2008, 09:32 PM
LMAOO.
Heyyyy, it'd make it interesting
o______O
VERY.
hahah.
xD
But in a good way ;D
margaritalouita9
June 19th, 2008, 09:34 PM
hmmm... it'll be hard, but i'll see if i can pull it off...
June 19th, 2008, 09:37 PM
Hahah.
xD
okay.
oh god, this is gonna get very very interesting
xD
JumbieLover
June 19th, 2008, 09:43 PM
**new reader** I love this story, can't wait to read more =D
And Ashlyn, I think every conversation you have with someone is interesting LMAO
Unknown598
June 20th, 2008, 12:44 PM
Wait, Tom LOVES her? If it's a Georg fic why is he partly willing to give her up? These are the questions I ask.
Do you remember the post where Rachel was mentioned? That has something to do with it...
And Unknown598, don't do what?
I love you too, Ashlyn!! Hahahaha!! I'm pretty sure I know you very well! We only talk like, EVERY DAY!! lmfao
about that.. srry, i was thinkin to myself ... ^_^
Julily
June 20th, 2008, 06:38 PM
Margarita!!!!!! why must you leave us with cliffhangers? Why? :cry: lol I like how you changed it to a fanfic by MARARET makes me laugh. YAY for girls nights! Alex is so creepy. me no likey. lol... hurry and write more! :D
margaritalouita9
June 21st, 2008, 06:42 PM
i really need to write, but i have no idea where this post is going, so i'm asking forgiveness in advance
Georg's POV
We all stepped off the subway and headed to the restaurant. It was about a five minute walk, so we had a ways to go. The streets were pretty crowded, so I turned to Bill and asked him if he'd made reservations. His face dropped as he thought about it, and I surmised that he hadn't even thought to ask, so I grabbed my cell and dialed the restaurant to see if there was even any point of us going. The phone rang three times before anyone picked up.
"Hello?" answered a panicked voice.
"Hello, um excuse me, but if my group and I were to walk in, about how long do you think it would take us to get seated?"
"Well, how big is your group?"
I quickly counted. "Er, there's seven of us..."
The person on the other line let out a whimper. "I'm so sorry, but if you walked in, we wouldn't be able to seat you until thursday night two weeks from now."
I could tell my face was showing signs of shock. "Well thank you for telling us, I guess we'll have to try and come by another time. Thank you anyway." I hung up my phone and looked at everyone.
"Well, it looks like we're going to have to change plans unless everybody is free for the next two weeks."
Diandra snorted at that and so did Mandii. Not long after, everyone was laughing, even though the situation was completely stupid and our plans had to be entirely rearranged.
"So what should we all do instead?" asked Chloe.
Mandii cut in, "We can still have dinner, but we should just raid a grocery store or something and go play night games at a park and have a mock picnic!"
ok, my brain really hurts, and I don't want to think about this story anymore today, so this'll have to do. Sorry!
DeeDee
June 21st, 2008, 07:09 PM
ok bill is soo much of an idiot sumtimes
:( ok hun i'll wait
margaritalouita9
June 21st, 2008, 07:23 PM
i'm going to try again
Georg's POV
Everyone agreed that this would be a fantastic idea, so we ran to the nearest grocery store as fast as we possibly could. When we got inside, it was surprisingly empty, considering how many people were wandering the streets. To make it more fun, we decided to split up, girls vs. boys. considering our superior numbers, i was sure that we as males would find the most delicious AND inexpensive food in the grocery store in the time alloted, twenty minutes. Bill, Gustav, Tom and I frantically rushed up and down the aisles, looking for all things delicious and nutritious, but it seemed that nothing was on sale! We had pooled our money, but between the four of us we only had fifteen dollars and change. We fought over what we could possibly buy for that small amount of money, and figured we'd buy some dead animal products and bread and try for a mini deli. When it got down to it, we realized it was a MINI deli... We met up with the girls as planned at the front cash register, and our jaws dropped when we saw how much food they had bought.
"How did you manage that!?" one of us managed to squeak out.
Mandii flashed her credit card at us. "Daddy loves his little girl." She gave us a wicked smile and she and the other two girls started distributing heavy laden grocery bags to us losers. We were just about to leave the store when I caught a glimpse of someone familiar. I flipped around to see who it was, but as i turned, all i could see was her auburn hair. The blood drained from my face. She couldn't be back, I told myself. Auburn hair is plenty common, she's gone forever, you know that.
hmm... i think you're all smart enough to figure it out yourselves, so this is all the commentary you're getting. :D
DeeDee
June 21st, 2008, 07:47 PM
oh **** noooo not her :evil:
more please ?!?! * puppy eyes *
cassirolla
June 21st, 2008, 08:36 PM
good greif you and your cliff hangers i swear...
Unknown598
June 21st, 2008, 08:38 PM
Qué asco! ive had an off day when it comes to Georg
... por supuesto! this JUST HAS to happen...
*my spanish spelling skills suck
... Post more when you can ^_^ bitte :D
xXxMandiixXx
June 22nd, 2008, 06:02 AM
i love it and hehe daddy love his little girl cause the truth is my dad does love me enough to give me money lolz
continue!
<3 Mandii xx
LipsOfAnAngel
June 22nd, 2008, 08:38 AM
oh boy. mehr bitte!
cassirolla
June 22nd, 2008, 05:21 PM
I'm also a new reader, and I just love your writing. How do you manage to update so often? I really can't wait to read more, and find out what Alex has on his mind for revenge (that shetbag!). I just want to punch him in the face, but that's a good thing because you write him in such an evil way I hate him. Please update soon!
You are much too kind to me! & the only reason I update so often is because I feel really guilty leaving you guys without anything to read for long periods of time. I'm typing up the next post as we speak
plus i bug the heck out of her till she updates...sorry about that margaret (:
margaritalouita9
June 22nd, 2008, 11:16 PM
Yes Cassie, yes you do... *sigh*
jk i lurv ya!
Hi new readers!! I just realized I forgot to do that for the last few posts. I'm Margaret (obviously) and I would love to know your names if it isn't totally obvious from your username, just so i don't feel like a moron when I'm trying to address your questions
Danke!
Unknown598
June 22nd, 2008, 11:52 PM
o.o im Marissa ^_^
:D
margaritalouita9
June 24th, 2008, 11:36 PM
bump
i'm afraid this'll get forgotten about...
Unknown598
June 25th, 2008, 01:54 PM
im here ^_^
yet, i will disappear @ sometime...
O.o
TWIXX
June 28th, 2008, 06:56 PM
~NEW READER~
THIS IS REALLY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!
GIRL YOU NEED TO UPDATE THIS UP SOON!!!!!
OMG I CANT BELIEVE HER EX BF ALEX!!!!
WOW I KINDA DO THINK THAT HER AND TOM MAKE A BETTER COUPLE AND HER AND GEORG SHOULD BE FRIENDS!!1
MEHR BITTE!!!!
Unknown598
June 28th, 2008, 07:06 PM
HA
that makes atleast 2 people im aware that have been here!!
HA ZA!!
:oops: im such an idiot xD
cassirolla
July 4th, 2008, 04:13 PM
hey. hey margaret. guess what i posted on mine! yourturn
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