View Full Version : In Die Nacht*please read it*(my first fanfic.hope u like it)
Mz.Kaulitz483
April 12th, 2008, 02:51 PM
In Die Nacht
By.jessica( Mz.Kaulitz483 )
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Tom’s pov
i just got back from school.. u don’t imagine how much I hate it ..all I see in that stupid school is some rich kids that they think they can have anything they want and lets not talk about my teachers I have no idea why they don’t like me.. All that matters right now is that I only need one more month and ill be out of there.. I can’t wait to start my music career.. all I want is be able to express my self in a way I like even know im not good at music class I love music . But the reason I don’t like my music class because all they want me to do is to sing *something im not good at* and learn the history of music.. come on I don’t wanna know about other peoples life all I want is to make history with my own music ..all my family supports me and im happy about that ..My mom is always there for me ..my dad.. well I don’t know my dad my parents divorced when I was just 6 months old so I don’t know him all I know is that he lives in Berlin… I have a step dad (Michel) and he lives with me and my mom ..My step dad was the one that bought my first guitar I remember that day it was my birthday and that was the best present I ever received that day….My step dad is helping me start my music career he knows a lot of people from the music industry…….moving on …….I’ve been feeling really sad this days even if I don’t have a reason for it ..its really weir because when im happy I don’t feel that way its like …never mind that’s a stupid thought.. but anyway *hears a nock on the door* “ who is it? ” “ its me Michel” “ oh come in whats up ” “ guess who just called me?” *tom gives him a -I don’t know- look* “ the director of Cherry Tree Records and ask me if u were interested in joining this new band they are going to make ….” *tom stops him and with a big smile on his face he says * “ ARE U SERIOUS WHEN DID HE CALLED U …THAT IS f***** AMAIZING” * Michel continues * “so they are looking for talented kids that want to join the band ..and well he thought about u ..remember I told him that u play the guitar …so now he wants to meet u and see if u can join the band.. of course if you’d like to” “of course I want to.. this is a big opportunity for me”....
tell me what u think should i continue or not :? its in ur hands people....and thnx for reading :D ♥ and sorry if theres any spelling and grammar mistakes...be nice please its the first one i make ..and once again thank you for reading :mrgreen:
luvukaulitztwins
April 12th, 2008, 03:10 PM
I like it is was short but reli good mehr bitte x]
Mz.Kaulitz483
April 12th, 2008, 09:26 PM
I like it is was short but reli good mehr bitte x]
yes it was short because first i wanna know if u guys are going to like it if not i just will not continue writing but it has more for that part its not finish yet ;) ..and thanks for taking some time to read it♥
TH_luv
April 13th, 2008, 01:21 AM
Im want you to continue this! Its really good :D
BlondPunk
April 13th, 2008, 06:15 PM
I like it mehr bitte ^^
Mz.Kaulitz483
April 13th, 2008, 07:12 PM
thank you everyone so i will keep writing my fanfic-tomorrow you'll see what happens with tom ;)
Mz.Kaulitz483
April 14th, 2008, 05:56 PM
new post!!
(Michel)-“ I know this is a big opportunity for you, me and your mom are so happy about it, but there’s a problem” * tom looks at him confuse * (Tom)-“ what’s the problem” “ you have to fly to Berlin.. Tomorrow! ” “ tomorrow ?.. I can’t I have my final exam”
Tom’s povhttp://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc83/jessica_baby_th/ICONATOR_ace6284bb98b3147d2b8c73-1.png
Can this get any better I just got some great news that can change my life and they are going to be destroy by my final exam.. this can’t be happening to me I have to find a way to go to both places. (Tom)-“what time do I have to be there? ” “ well the auditions start at 10:00 am ..and they’ll probably be done by 4:00 pm ” this can’t be happening I have to take that stupid test at 12:00 pm and I’ll be done by 3:00 and I don’t think I can make it to the auditions this has to be a punish by God why me why tomorrow why not other day ugh!!… I can’t believe this is happening to me … And the problem is that I can’t miss that test I only have to take that test and I will be done with school and if I don’t take it I have to wait till next year and I don’t want to wait more time to get out of there .
( Michel )- “ I’m sorry Tom , I didn’t know that you had to take a test tomorrow, I feel bad telling you this but I don’t think you can go another day to the auditions , but let me see what I can do I’m going to call my friend and ask him if he can give you another day to do your audition so don’t get sad I know how much this means to you and I will not let you down in this one I will try to do the best I can to make sure that you go to the audition.. I promise!!. So u better find a song u want to play for them ok ”. What Michel just said made me feel I little better but I was still feeling all this mixed emotions-anger, relief … but what I need to do right now is study for my test and tomorrow will see what Michel’s friend said ..I hope I can get another day .
And The Next Day….
Tom’s mom ( Diana ) its in the kitchen making breakfast then Michel enters.. (Michel)- “ hi honey how are you? Did you sleep well last night? ” (Diana)- “ not really I was thinking about Tom and how sad he was when he found out that he is not going to be able to go to the audition” (Michel)- “ I know and I feel sad as well we’ve been waiting for this so long and now that a opportunity is here we can’t make it ” “ But did you call your friend and ask him if Tom can go another day? ” (Michel)- “yes I did but he said that they are going to do the auditions today only! ” “are you going to tell Tom about this” “ no way you know that he has that big test today and I don’t want to tell him this because it will affect him really bad that im afraid he will not do good in the test” “you are right we better not tell him until he comes back” *tom enters to the kitchen*
(Tom)-” good morning mom, hi Michel ” * Michel and Diana*”hi Tom” (Diana)-”are you nerves about your test Tom? ” “yes mom I was studying really hard last night I hope I can past the test because I can’t wait to get out of school ” (Diana)- “ oh Tom I never understood why you never like school, you are so smart ” “yes mom that the word I’m smart to smart for school ” (Michel)- “Tom, Tom you never change ” (Diana)- “he better past that test and I’m sure he will because he is to smart for school ” * they all laugh*
(Tom)-” ok I must get going because I’m going to be late” (Diana and Michel)- “ok tom good luck!! ”
3 Hours Later…..
(Tom)- “ Hey Michel., where’s my mom? ” “hmm I think she went shopping because you know how she is when she gets upset she buys stuff like crazy…” * Tom stops him* (Tom)-” upset about what? ” (Michel)-”tom we need to talk” “what happen? ” “ remember I told you that I was going to call my friend to see if you could go do the audition tomorrow ” “yes” “well he said that they are only doing it for one day only ” * Tom dropped his head and Michel understood that he wanted to be along so he left*(michel)"im sorry Tom"
Tom’s povhttp://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc83/jessica_baby_th/ICONATOR_ace6284bb98b3147d2b8c73-1.png
I couldn’t believe what he said…now all my hopes were down to zero, how did I missed this opportunity I’m so mad right now all I wanted to do is go back in time and go to the audition instead of going to that stupid test but I knew how important it was for my mom to see me with my diploma and see his son finish school with no problem at all, I couldn’t disappoint her it’s the least thing I could do to pay her everything she had done for me . Just then I heard the phone ring, I didn’t wanted to answered so Michel did and he was saying some nonsense words for me at that moment like “yes” ”no” “ok” “thank you” “we’ll be there” my heart stop beating for a second … is it … my mom???
sorry if is a big chapter but i had 2 catch up because i didn't write yesterday hope u like it i now its not good :cry: but i promise it will get better :D
BlondPunk
April 14th, 2008, 06:41 PM
I need to know what happens next!!!
Please continue :]]]
and where's Bill...??? :|
Mz.Kaulitz483
April 14th, 2008, 07:18 PM
I need to know what happens next!!!
Please continue :]]]
and where's Bill...??? :|
tomorrow ill post more and about bill well thats a surprice* its a secret* ;)
BlondPunk
April 14th, 2008, 08:15 PM
I need to know what happens next!!!
Please continue :]]]
and where's Bill...??? :|
tomorrow ill post more and about bill well thats a surprice* its a secret* ;)
:D yay Bill!!!
:D
Mz.Kaulitz483
April 15th, 2008, 08:24 PM
Tom’s pov
I couldn’t believe what he said…now all my hopes were down to zero, how did I missed this opportunity I’m so mad right now all I wanted to do is go back in time and go to the audition instead of going to that stupid test but I knew how important it was for my mom to see me with my diploma and see his son finish school with no problem at all, I couldn’t disappointed her it’s the least thing I could do to pay her everything she had done for me . Just them I heard the phone ring, I didn’t wanted to answered so Michel did and he was saying some nonsense words for me at that moment like “yes” ”no” “ok” “thank you” “we’ll be there” my heart stop beating for a second … is it … my mom???
Now I was really worried about the phone call..
(Michel)- “omg Tom…I can’t believe this” “What happens ?” “Tom you must pack your suitcase because your going to Berlin tomorrow” (Tom)- “What…what are you talking about??” “Kevin(Michel’s friend) was the one that called and told me that they had so many people waiting for the auditions that they didn’t had time to see all of them so they are doing more auditions tomorrow” “What!! are you serious I knew this wasn’t going to be like this, I have to be there and show them what I got, you see Michel this men right here that is standing in front of you will be a star and I will drive the ladies crazy” *they both laugh* (Michel)- “ ok Tom I will get your passport and everything so everything its perfect by tomorrow, your mom is going to be really happy about this”
The next day…..
Tom’s pov
I just took a shower and I can’t believe I’m going to the auditions, this its going to be the best day of my life and I know it but I have to confess I’m a little scare because I’m going by my self not knowing where exactly I have to go hopefully I don’t get lost. I can’t wait to show all of the producers how amazing I am playing the guitar and hopefully I make it to the band. I better hurry up.. *Tom gets to the building of cherry tree records where the auditions are taking place* Dammmm there’s a lot of people in here but good thing that Kevin knows me or that’s what I think because Michel told me to ask for him and that way he will know that its me.. hopefully…after waiting 15 minutes till they actually believed me that I knew Kevin they allowed me to go inside…some hot woman took me to a big room were some guys were waiting to do there auditions…I sat on a big red and I must say really comfortable couch I saw a really weird kid he was really tall and skinny, he was wearing a black leather jacket with a bunch of jewelry and skinny jeans, and I must say he looked ridiculous with that clothes but then I thought that it wasn’t that bad, he also had black long(really)long hair it was black with some with highlights or something like that he had it like a lion all puffy and he probably has some small living creatures in his hair cuz if I get closer to him I might get lost in his hair..
i know its short but i just wanna give an idea of what is going to happen :D
BlondPunk
April 15th, 2008, 08:33 PM
:O
OMG.
I.
NEED.
TO.
KNOW.
WHAT.
HAPPENS.
NEEEEEEEEEEEXXXXXT.
;DDDDDDD
Mz.Kaulitz483
April 15th, 2008, 08:51 PM
:O
OMG.
I.
NEED.
TO.
KNOW.
WHAT.
HAPPENS.
NEEEEEEEEEEEXXXXXT.
;DDDDDDD
thanx for reading my fanfic i guess you are the only one that will read it but i will do it just for you if no one alse whats to read it and thanx again i ♥ you :D
BlondPunk
April 17th, 2008, 04:54 PM
:O
OMG.
I.
NEED.
TO.
KNOW.
WHAT.
HAPPENS.
NEEEEEEEEEEEXXXXXT.
;DDDDDDD
thanx for reading my fanfic i guess you are the only one that will read it but i will do it just for you if no one alse whats to read it and thanx again i ♥ you :D
:]
don't worry, more people will come when the action rises :]
It's only the begining of the story :]
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