brand new fan fic...**CANCELLED!!!****RE-WRITE UP SOON!!!**

[<3ByYourSide<3]

so im writing a new fan fic and im thinin about posting it on here...but there arent many people reading my other story BY YOUR SIDE...so ill post part of the first chapter to see if any one will like it...


this is only part of CHAPTER 1

"Why wont you just listen to me?!" I yelled as I fet the sting of tears falling sown my face. "Whats there to listen to...you're 15, just like any other teen!" she yelled ack. "Whatever! you dont understand me ans you never will!" I yelled with the hint of hate strong in my voice. "I hate you" I finished begining to run upstairs. "Well...I hate you more than you could EVER hate me!" I heard her yell as I ran in my room slamming the door and locking it behind me. I plugged in my iPod and turned it up loud. "Hold On" blasted through my speakers as tears ran stung my cheeks. No one understood me except Kaity...and Josh...but he broke my heart. I felt alone and forgotten in a way.
I picked up my phone and dialed Kaity's number. "Hello" she answered. "Hey, can I stay at your house? me and my mom got in a big fight again." I said. "Yeah, of course you can" she replied with the sound of concern in her voice. "OK, Ill be over in a little bit" I replied and hung up. I packed some clothes along with my iPod. I heard my mom come upstairs and go in her room. I opened my door a little and...


so..should i post more???

[LipsOfAnAngel]

JA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[<3ByYourSide<3]

TH will be in soon but i dont think ill post more til i get a few more readers...

[BlondPunk]

:]
I want to now what happens next ;DDD
Continue please.

[kArLa2tH]

i want more
good beginning(sp)

[TH_luv]

dude,I want mehr,bitte?this sounds very interesting.

[<3ByYourSide<3]

ok heres the rest of chapter 1


I heard my mom come upstairs and go in her room. I opened my door a little and...
I noticed that all the lights in the house were off. She had gone to bed. I grabbed my hoodie and put it on. I then picked up my bag andhouse key and left as fast as I could. I walked down the street and finally got to Kaity's house. Thank God she lived so close. She was sitting on the porch waiting for me. She stood up and hugged me. "You ok?" she asked. "Yeah" I managed to say. I followed her into her house to her room. She had me tell her everything that happened and she helped me feel better. I dont know what I'd do without Kaity.
We got off that subject and started talking about school. We were so excited to be starting high scholl. "Jess told me that we are getting 4 new guys that are from a different counrty" Kaity said smiling. "Really? Thats cool! 4 guys from a different country...hmmm..." I said. "Yeah, she said they were already here but I havent seen them yet" she said smiling. "Me either" I said thinking.
"Hey, we should got to the mall tomorrow" Kaity said bouncing up and down. "Yeah, that sounds goo" I said yawning.
I layed there thinking about everything and I hoped tomorrow would get all of it off my mind. But I had another thing comming. I slowly drifted off to sleep.



hahaha more to come if you guys want! :D

[Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S]

more please...

[<3ByYourSide<3]

ill post more tonight...im now off to school... :D

[luvukaulitztwins]

O_e i like it cant wait for next chapter

[<3ByYourSide<3]

there will be more VERY SOON i PROMISE! :D ;)

[<3ByYourSide<3]

to my readers... i havent had much time to post but hteere will definately be more in the next 2 days

[TH_luv]

okay then,I'll be waiting for the next post! :D

[<3ByYourSide<3]

okay then,I'll be waiting for the next post! :D


your wait is now over!
yet i still waish i had more readers... :|

CHAPTER 2

AUTHOR'S NOTE


The next day we got up and went to the mall as planned. Kaity drove since she was the one with a license. When we got there, we went straigh to Starbucks and got frappachinos. We then went to Hot Topic to see if they had any new t-shirts or other cool stuff. We walked in and Megan said hi to us as usual. We looked at shirts and nothing really caught my attention . "Hey have you heard any more about that band Tokio...ummm...Tokio..." Kaity started. "Hotel?" I asked. She nodded her head. "No, Im not really into them...I couldnt even tell you what they looked like"I said laughing. "Me either" Kaity said continuing to look at shirts. i began looking at CDs when all of a sudden, someone bumped into me.
"Oh, Im sorry..I wasnt watching where I was going" he said. he had a funny accent, and it was reallly unusual for our area. "It's alright" I said smiling at him. "Im Bill" he said and smiled. Wow, that smile made my heart skip a beat. I looked at him again. He wasnt that bad to look at. He was actually pretty cute. He seemed to be the shy type. "Im Hannah" I replied. "Are you new around here?" I asked. "Yeah, me and my brother, and 2 of my friends moved here from germany" he sai smiling again.
he said straight black hair with a few blonde highlights. He also wore eyeliner, unlike the guys at our school. He was different. I noticed him staring at me. I looked at him and he looked down at his feet and blushed a little.
"Hey, you wanna hang out with me and my friend Kaity?" I asked him. Kaity walked over and stood but was interupted. "Hey Bill...whoa baby" the guy said. He had dirty blonde dreads and wore clothes that were 3 times his size. He also had his lip pierced. "I think I just died and went to heaved" he said looking at Kaity. Bill looked aggrivated. "And this is my idiot brother Tom" Bill said. "Hey" Tom stood between us and put his arm around Kaity. "Thats Kaity and this is Hannah" Bill told him. Tom stood between us and put his arm on our shoulders. I looked at Bill who looked like he could sap Tom at any moment.
"Yeah, I'll hang out with you" Bill said smiling at e again. I smiled at him and stood beside him. "What aout me?" Tom asked with puppy dog eyes. "You can come too" Kaity said.
We walked out of Hot Topic and walked through the mall. I walked by Bill and Kaity and Tom waled together behind us.
"So you guys and the other 2 must be the new students we heard about" I said. "yeah we're gonna be freshmen" Bill said. "So are we"I said smiling. "Awesoem, hopefully we'll have some classes together." Tom said. We a;led by Hat World and Tom almost freaked out. "He has this thing for hats" Bill said sounding annoyed. "Ill have to come back here" Tom said. "Well, we need to get going" Kaity said. "Yeah" i said.
Bill looked at his feet again. I glanced at him, he was really cute.
"Hey do you wanna see a movie tonight?" Bill aksed me. I smiled. "Yeah" I said.
"You wanna see a movie tonight?" Tom asked grabbing her hand. Bill rolled his eyes. "Yeah" she said smiling. "we can pick you up"Katy said. "Since Im pretty sure she's the ony one of us who can drive" I said pointing at Kaity. Bill and Tom agreed. "So we'll pick you up around 7:00" Kaity said. They agreed and we got their numbers and address...


so tell me what you guys think...

[KaityKins]

HANNAH!! You tweaked it!!!!!! owell its GOOD!!!!!



AND TOO HER READERs.....





I KNOW WHATS HAPPEN AFTER THIS!!!!!!
BECAUSE IM COOL LIKE THAT AND MOSTLY BC I GO TO SCHOOL WITH HER!!!!!!
OLO

[<3ByYourSide<3]

i told you i would...ill post more soon!

[BlondPunk]

I luv it so far
write more soon pleaz ;]

[amandaaraujo]

plezzzzzzz write more plezzzxzz i oh and finish beside you its really good i want to know oh and dont forget to check mine out forbidden love its kinda of intence
it was my first story:)

[Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S]

yay!!!..it was good please post more soon...

[<3ByYourSide<3]

i will try to post more tonight if i have time!

[DeeDee]

* new reader*

i luv it hun

mehr bitte wenn du kannst

[<3ByYourSide<3]

more will be up very soon!

[<3ByYourSide<3]

ILL ONLY POST MORE IF ANYONE WANTS ME TO!!!

[<3ByYourSide<3]

i guess no one wants to read...so i may cancel this one

[BlondPunk]

If you cancel this, I'll have my Hobo freinds come and get you.
MORE.
SOON.
OR ELSE HOBOS.
>:]]]

[xXxMandiixXx]

NEIN!!! DONT CANCEL !!!!!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT HEHEHE :)


CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE

<3 Mandii xx

[<3ByYourSide<3]

ok ok...no hobos PLEASE!!! ill have more soon... :D

[<3ByYourSide<3]

ive decided to re write this fan fic...the first few chapters will be the same but ive changed it and made it A LOT better...it will be up soon!