View Full Version : Not Your Average Cinderella Story[Fanfic from the old forum]
Izzylicous
April 16th, 2008, 06:29 PM
was writing this on the old forum and well...I thought that I should continue it...
CH.1-Introducing Roxy
Hi I'm Roxy Brookes, I'm 17 years old and I'm a senior in high school.Also I'm your average punk rocker.I have black hair blue eyes and my skin is kinda pale.My life is kinda crappy considering that my mom died when i was only 9 and now i have a *****y step mom named Nina and a *****y step sister name Natalie.[[No this is not a Cinderella type of story]]Now my dad doesn't really care about me anymore all he cares about is Nina.I think she only married my dad for his money.By the way my dad is named Allen Brookes.But I have an awesome best friend named Jessica Cruz.But I get picked on a lot at school though =[[.Anyways.....
"ROXY! GET YOUR *** DOWNSTAIRS RIGHT NOW!"
Uggggghhhh
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herseykiss
April 16th, 2008, 06:36 PM
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Izzylicous
April 16th, 2008, 06:37 PM
CH.2-School and TOKIO HOTEL?!
Roxy ran down stairs to find her step mom in her trampy business outfit.'Oh God what does she want now?'Roxy thought."I want you to clean the whole kitchen before you go to school"Nina said.'NO I'm going to be late' she thought."Mother how do I look?"Natalie asked her mother.Natalie was wearing a REALLY short skirt with a belly shirt and 4 inch heels."Beautiful",Nina replied.'If u ask me she looks like "Jabba the Tramp"' Roxy chuckled a little."And what are YOU laughing at?"Nina asked.
"Ummm....Nothing"Roxy replied quietly."Natalie might teach you a thing or two about fashion...Because you look horrible with your 'PUNK ROCKER STYLE'!"
Roxy quickly grabbed a granola bar and put it into her pocket.And She started to clean the kitchen.Jessica her best friend came by after Natalie and Nina left."Hey you should tell your dad what that slut does to you!"Jessica said."I always try to but he never believes me Nina always has some bizarre excuse.....and he has changed a lot after my mom died, Well I'm done.....Lets head to school."
"Yeah", Jessica agreed. On their way to school
Roxy ate her granola bar.Finally their school came into sight.When they walked onto campus EVERYONE was talking about a band named Tokio Hotel.'Tokio Hotel huh?I should probably check them out when I get home', Roxy thought.Suddenly the school bell wrung signaling for all the students to get to class.
"See you in English",Jessica said."Yeah, bye", Roxy replied.
Finally lunch time came.Roxy and Jessica met up in the lunch line."Jake is so cute", Roxy said."Yeah",Jessica agreed.Jake is a jock but of course Roxy didn't have a chance with him because 1 she was a punk rocker 2 she wasn't popular and 3 he is Natalie's boyfriend."OH MY GOSH I JUST LOVE TOKIO HOTEL!!!",some random girl yelled."Okay SERIOUSLY what is up with Tokio Hotel!?"Roxy blurted out.The ENTIRE cafeteria was staring at her.'Oh God' she said to herself."Tokio Hotel is the most AWESOME band ever"some guy said."Yeah"everyone inside the cafeteria said in unison. And lunch continued.All of a sudden Natalie came into the cafeteria with her clique and she walked up to Roxy."You really need to get over yourself and get better clothes.Its sooooo.....EMO!she said."Your clothes look sooooo.....SLUTTY!""Roxy said.And she walked away with Jessica,they were going to eat outside.Lunch
and school passed by so quick and now Roxy is at home on her computer about to search up Tokio Hotel
I got 'Jabba the Tramp' from 'Jabba the Hutt'
lol
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Izzylicous
April 16th, 2008, 06:46 PM
CH.3-The lead singer
'So whats up with this Tokio Hotel band?'Roxy thought.She searched up some of their music and she loved their music because it related to her especially the song "Scream".And she thought that Bill Kaulitz was really hot.She really did just want to scream it all out at times.Roxy heard the door open down stairs 'oh great just my fricken luck "They" are home' She thought to herself.Natalie walked in the house making out with Jake, Roxy frowned.'Get a room' she said inwardly."Roxy I want you to clean the entire house and I don't want not even one single spot of dust or dirt I want the house to be spotless if its not you will have to start all over!You got that?!"Yelled Nina.It wasn't really a question.'This woman wants everything perfect.'Roxy nodded her head.
Roxy finally finished cleaning the house.'Finally' she sighed inwardly.She hopped in the shower and put on her pajamas.She went back on the computer and kept on looking at picture of Bill.[[who wouldn't?]]"AAAAAh he is sooooo adorable he is WAY hotter than Jake."She said.
Roxy heard the door down stairs open which meant her dad was home.Her eyes lighted up.She ran down the stairs "dad your home!" she said with a hint of excitement in her voice.Out of the blue came Nina"Allan my Snookey Pookey bear your home!Nina kissed her "husband" "passionately.Roxy almost gagged at the nick name Nina used for her father.She felt a stray tear fall from one her icy blue eyes 'Dad use to kiss mom at look at mom in that same way'.She wiped the tear away quickly so her dad wouldn't notice.She ran back up the flight of stairs and looked at the picture of Bill that was on the computer screen "until next time Bill"she whispered.And she lightly kissed the picture of Bill and closed the browser displaying the picture and she shut off the computer.'I'll probably be better of dead nobody cares about me anymore except for Jessica, I miss my mom' she thought and she began to cry.And she cried herself to sleep.
And she started to dream.........."Mom???" she said[[she is dreaming now]]
Hope u like it...Comment tell me what u think!
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Izzylicous
April 16th, 2008, 06:55 PM
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Ch.4-Dreams,Memories,and Roxy's mom
Roxy is dreaming
"Mom"she said in a quiet tone."Yes its me honey"her mother replied in a soft tone.Roxy began to cry."I.......miss......you...so...much"Roxy said in between sobs as she was embracing her mother."Don't worry honey I'll always be with you no matter what."A smile began to grow on Roxy's face."I know"."But its like dad doesn't even know that I exist any more, all he cares about is Nina.And that Nina is sooo EVIL.""So I've heard"her mother replied."Your dad does love you
and i know that because he told me.""How do you know that?"Roxy asked."I popped into one of his dreams a week ago."Roxy began to laugh a little bit."But you do have people that love you."Her mother said soothingly."Like who"Roxy began to question."Well Jessica,your father,and me"she smiled."I guess your right"Roxy confessed."Well its almost time for you to get up."but I don't want you to go"Roxy said as she began to frown."Don't worry I'll pop into one of your dreams again.""Okay"Roxy said.She went to go give her mom a hug and she was awoken by her Nina's screaming.
[[end of dream]]
"GET YOUR *** DOWN HERE RIGHT NOW I WANT MY BREAKFAST!!!!"
"Not AGAIN"Roxy said to herself.
Roxy quickly brushed her teeth jumped in the shower and ran downstairs.
"What took you so long Roxy!?"Nina asked.
"She was probably to buisy being a lazy *****!"Natalie spatted out."Actually I was getting ready"Roxy said."What ever just make me my breakfast"Nina said.
15 minutes later
Roxy made Nina and Natalie eggs,sausage,bacon,pancakes,and toast.
'Looks like another granola bar for me'she siad to herself."Instead of going to 'college' why don't you stay here and be our cook and we'll pay you by letting you stay here."Natalie insisted."No"Roxy said."Hopefully by the time I get to college my dad would finally realize that he should divorce you' she thought.
"Ok what ever Natalie lets go I'm going to drop you off at school."Nina said."Mom Jake is going to give me a ride today.""Okay honey."
They both left 'YES THEY'RE GONE!'.
Roxy walked out of her house to see Jessica waiting for her......
to be continued
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Izzylicous
April 16th, 2008, 06:56 PM
Ch.5-More About Jessica,a Sleep Over Invitaion,and a Flash Back
[[This is a sad chapter
Roxy ran up to her best friend Jessica.Jessica Cruiz is 17 years old and a senior in high school just like Roxy.They've been friends ever since Kindergarten.Jessica's parents died when she was only 4 and now she lives with her older sister Andrea Cruiz who is twenty.Jessica has brunette hair and brown eyes so does Andrea.Jessica is your average punk rocker just like Roxy.Her sister is more of a girly girl though but she accepts her sister for who she is.And Jessica is very nice but she sometimes can have an attitude and she loves to speake her mind no matter WHAT.But now on with the story!!!
"Hey you wanna sleep over my house tonight?"Jessica asked."Yeah that'll be great,I'm sure my dad wont mind.""Hey you know that new Tokio Hotel band???"Roxy asked."Yeah the guitarist is uber hot what about them???"
"Their music is REALLY good and the lead singer is SUPER sexy.""He is pretty cute but i like Tom better."Jessica said."Anyway I had a dream about my mom last night."ROoy said."Really?!Wow that must of been nice.....I could barely remember my parents.""I'm sorry......."ROxy apologized."No its ok I'm sure my parents were good people!"Jessica said reassuringly."Yeah".
Everything became quiet.
[[ssssssssshhhhhh Roxy is going to get a flash bask!!!]]
"Mama don't go!"9 year old Roxy said while crying right next to her mom in the hospital room[[her mom had cancer]]."Its ok sweetie even if I leave the face of this earth I'll always be with you no matter what and if I die I'll be all better and the cancer will be gone and I wont be in pain any more"her mother said while gripping on to her hand.Roxy looked up at her mother.Her mother has blue eyes, and used to have black hair like Roxy but it fell off because of the kimo therapy and her mother's skin was very pale.Then her mother whispered"I love you my little Angel....."her heart machine stop and she was dead.Roxy began to sob and she looked up at her father to see tears coming out of his eyes."I'll miss you Mama"she whispered quietly to herself as the salty tears fell from her eyes.
[[End of flash back]]
"ROXY!!!HELLOOOOOOO!!!!"Jessica said while waving a hand in front of her face."Oh sorry I guess I Must of blanked out...."
"Well we're here at school....I'll see you in English."
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Izzylicous
April 16th, 2008, 06:58 PM
[[This CHapter has humor in it]]
Roxy was sitting down in a table with Jessica eating lunch."YOU REALLY NEED TO GET MORE FRIENDS!I MEAN YOU HANG OUT WITH THE SAME PERSON EVERYDAY!!!"Nina yelled from behind.Roxy jumped a bit from the sound of her voice,it was like nails scratching a chalk board.'Oh god!'Roxy's inner voice frantically yelled.Roxy stood up."SHUT UP NATALIE!!!!WHY DO YOU ALWAYS HAVE TO MAKE MY LIFE A LIVING NIGHTMARE!?!?!?!?!WHY CAN'T YOU JUST GO AND BOTHER SOMEONE ELSE?!?!?!?WHY ME?!?!?!I GET IT ENOUGH FROM YOU AT HOME!!!!!LEAVE ME ALONE!!!!!!!BUT YOU KNOW WHAT ITS TIME FOR YOU TO GET WHAT YOU DESERVE!!!"Roxy grabbed her sand which opened it so that she was holding one piece of bread in each hand,and she smushed it into Natalie's face after that she took her milk and dumped it onto her Natalie's head.And Roxy just walked away with Jessica cracking up behind her."UGH!!!!!!!!!!MOM IS SOOOOO GOING TO HEAR ABOUT THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"Natalie screamed at the top of her lungs.The bell rang.
"Well looks like its time for Chemistry"Roxy said.
[[In Chemistry]]
"Well looks like we put this whatchamawhoozit in the formula"Roxy said as she looked at her lab partner,Jessica.KABOOOOOOOOOOOOM!
"Jessica?"Roxy asked in shock."Yeah Roxy?""Did I just destroy the entire Chemistry lab????""I think ya might of put in the wrong liquid.""No REALLY?!?!?"Roxy said with her voice full of sarcasm.Everyone was staring at them."SORRY MR.FLABERBOB!"Jessica and ROxy said in unison as the teacher came walking towards them."Its okay ladies I've done this also in my years of high school."Mr.Flaberbob said[[CHemistry teacher has a retarded name X]]
You girls jsut clean this mess up.
By the time the girls finished cleaning the entire Chemistry lab school was over.
Now they're walking home from school.
"So you wanna head straight to my house or do you wanna pick up some clothes."Jessica asked.
"I have to pick up some clothes but I'm going to have to sneak in because if "She" sees me she is going to freak out on me about how I dumped food on her precious little daughter."
"Ok"Jessica said.
They arrived at Roxy's house.
"Ok Jessica wait outside for me I'm going to climb the tree thats next to my window okay??If you see Nina or Natalie walk outside jump inside a bush or try to distract them or just make a light conversation with them Okay???"
Jessica nodded.Roxy began to climb the tree."Oh no!My ankle is stuck!Jessica quick they're like right next to the window!Knock on the door and tell them that your selling magazines or you want them to sign a petition or something!!!"
Jessica knocked on the door and Nina opened.
"Hello sir or madam would you like to ummmmm..........sign this petition on ummmmm.........Saving paper!!!???"
'Huh?!?!!?'Roxy shrugged.Jessica shrugged back.
"If it will get you out of my front lawn faster then okay I will."Jessica just nodded
And then while Roxy tried to get her foot out of the whole it was stuck in,she flew off the tree."Ouch" She said.Jessica started to chuckle and she gave Roxy a look that said 'are you okay?'Roxy stuck her thumb up and smiled.She finally got to climb into her room and she packed two bags one with her laptop and some cd's and another one with clothes in it.And when she got out of her room she walked outside to greet Jessica."Thanks for covering for me."Roxy said."No problem thats what friends are for!"Jessica said while smiling.And They both started to walk to Jessica's house.
When they arrived at Jessica's they decided to take showers so they can change into their pajamas.Now they're sitting in Roxy's room talk about all kinds of random things.
"Roxy I have some news"Jessica piped up."What is it?""Me and my sis are moving to Los Angeles in a week.....But you could move with us if you want since you hate your life here....and maybe you could start all over.But you have to ask you dad and stuff......."
To be continued
ok sooo tell me what you guys think of the story so far
and don't worry we'll soon seee are boys[[Tokio Hotel ofcourse]]
But please tell me what you think.....
Izzylicous
April 16th, 2008, 06:59 PM
Ch.7-The Big Question and the Run Away
Roxy and Jessica had tons of fun at their sleep over.But Roxy still has to ask her dad about moving to L.A. with Jessica and Andrea."My dads probably going to say no but its worth a shot" Roxy said to herself quietly.She quietly walked into her dads library/office[[if u guys didn't know Roxy's dad is really rich]]."Yes Roxy"her dad said.'I guess he must of heard me walk in'."Dad yo know how I always say that I don't fit in around here and stuff......""Yes I know"her father answered."Well I was wondering if I could move to L.A. with Jessica and Andrea.""No"her dad answered dully."PLEASE?!COME ON DAD I'M ALMOST 18 YOU CAN'T TREAT ME LIKE A CHILD!ITS NOT LIKE YOU'LL MISS ME OR ANYTHING!I'LL EVEN CALL YOU EVERY SINGLE DAY!PLEASE DAD!?!"Roxy begged."THE ANSWER IS NO AND THAT IS FINAL!""BUT DAD YOU CAN'T EVEN LOVE ME ANY MORE I WONT BE MISSED AROUND THIS HOUSE HOLD!YOU CHANGED EVER SINCE MOM DIED!!!NOW EVERYTHING IS WORK OR NINA!!!I HAVE TO MAKE AN APPOINTMENT TO GET SOME QUALITY TIME WITH MY OWN FATHER!!!!"Roxy was really angry at her father right now as you can see."ROXANNA BROOKES IF YOU ASK ONE MORE TIME YOU'LL BE GROUNDED 'TIL YOU HIT THIRTY"Roxy calmed down a little bit."Fine dad but you wanna know something................I HATE YOU!!!!!!"Roxy yelled as she left his office,and she ran to her room.
'Fine if its like that then I'm running away!'Roxy thought to her self.
[[AT MIDNIGHT]]
Jessica and Andrea were waiting outside of her house with a truck full of their furniture and their regular car.Roxy explained everything to Andrea and Jessica and they understood were she was coming from and they told her that she could move with them.Roxy's bags were packed with some clothes shoes jewlery her laptop and of course cd's.
She took out a piece of paper and began to write on it
'Dear dad,I know you said no that I couldn't move to L.A. with Jessica and Andrea but I'm going to anyway .I'm sorry if I hurt you dad.I know that deep down your still that happy loving father I used to have.But lets face it dad I wasn't happy over here and I think if I move with Jessica and Andrea I'll get to start over again you know?And dad I didn't mean to yell at you.I don't hate you dad I love you so much buy I just got kinda upset.But I hope you accept what I have to say.
I love you dad
Love, Roxy'
after writing it Roxy went down to the kitchen and left the note on the kitchen counter.She quickly left through the back door and hopped into the car with Andrea and Jessica.
Roxy new that her dad might get mad but she has to do this so she could live a better life.
She also new that it was going to be a long ride from Boston,Massachusetts[[yes she lives in Boston]] to Los Angeles,California.
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Izzylicous
April 16th, 2008, 07:00 PM
More about Roxy
Ok Roxy is Spanish and American her mother is from Spain and her dad is American.Therefore Roxy knows how to speak Spanish and of course english.And Roxy knows how to sing and play the piano the guitar the flute and the violin.
Izzylicous
April 16th, 2008, 07:01 PM
Ch.8-Boston to Los Angeles and Buying Tickets to a Tokio Hotel Concert
Ok I decided not to do road trip
The flight from Boston to Los Angeles was agonizing long,well to Roxy it was.
She just couldn't stay still so to calm herself down she started listening to some of Tokio Hotel's music.
"The flight from Boston to Los Angeles will be landing in 20 minutes please fasten your seat belts"the flight attendant said.
'FINALLY' Roxy thought.
"Its about time this plane landed."
"Roxy the flight was only 3 hours long."Jessica said
"Really are you sure?"
"I'm going to have to agree with Jessica the flight wasn't that long."
"Oh.....I guess I was over reacting."Roxy confessed as she started to collect her luggage.
"Well does everyone have their bags?"Andrea asked.
"Yup"the two younger girls replied.
"Well then lets go."
The three girls were standing in front of their new apartment.
Andrea pulled out the apartment key and unlocked the door.
"Well this is it home sweet home"Andrea said.
Furniture was already in the apartment.The apartment was pretty big
it had 3 bed rooms 2 bath rooms a kitchen a dining room and a living room.The walls were white and it had colorful modern art up on the walls.there was a flat screen T.V..The dining room table was made of glass but the seats were blue and black.All the furniture in the apartment was modern.
"Sis did you pay someone to put all of our furniture into the apartment???"Jessica asked.
"Yeah"Andrea replied.
"Ok well lets go put in the rest of our clothes in our closets"Roxy said.
After they put their clothes in their closets Andrea was ordering takeout from a Chinese restaurant while Roxy and Jessica were on the computer.
"Roxy I heard theres going to be a Tokio Hotel concert next week on Saturday we should buy tickets."
"That would be AWESOME!!!"Roxy said with excitement.
"I'm going to buy the tickets online right now."
"OH MY GOSH I'M SO EXCITED!!!!!!!!!"Roxy sreamed.
To be continued
okay TH is coming
in either the next chapter or the chapter after that
Izzylicous
April 16th, 2008, 07:02 PM
Ch.9-The Concert, a call from dad,a Fight,and a Surprise!
The day has come!They are finally going to the Tokio Hotel concert.Right now the girls were getting ready.Roxy was putting on her make up while Jessica was passing the iron over her hair.
Andrea walked into the room.
"AAAAAAAAAW!!!!You guys are so cute I remember when I used to be obsessed about the way I look when I go to concerts and other events"Andrea said.
"You still are!"The 2 younger girls said at the same time..
"Oh what ever.I just came to let you know that you'll be starting school on Monday."
"NOOOOOOO"Jessica screamed.
"I know its tragedy!"Roxy said while pretending to cry.
"You guys are so dramatic.Well continue getting ready!"Andrea grinned.
Roxy finished applying her make up.
"Roxy are you done!?!"
"Chill out Jess all I need to do is put on my outfit."
"Ok!"Jessica said.
Roxy finished getting ready.Roxy wore her hair down with her bangs covering one of her eyes and there was a little red bow in her hair at the side of her head.As for clothing and accessories was wearing a A cute hoodey with cheetah spots on it with a black tank top under it,skinny jeans,red ballet flats,red bracelets,and red earrings.Jessica wore a black and white tank top with a skull on it and a small hoodey over it with some low flare jeans and black ballet flats.Now they were about to leave for the concert.
"Awwwww you guys grow up so fast!"Andrea squealed.
"We go to go Sis!"
"Wait before you girls go I have to tell you something."
"What?"They both said.
"If you girls meet any cute guys that wanna hang out with you.......Don't give it to them on the first night!!!"
"Wow............."Roxy said while Jessica was crapping up.
"You guys don't want me to drive you there?"Andrea.
"Its okay we'll just catch a taxi sis"
"Okay what ever you guys say"Andrea replied.
And they left the apartment to go to the concert.
"OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!CAN YOU BELIEVE WE'RE HERE AT THE CONCERT!!!!"Jessica screamed with excitement as they began to enter the stadium."IMAGINE IF WE ACTUALLY GET TO MEET THEM!!!!"Roxy squealed with delight.But what they didn't know is that that night they actually were going to meet them.......
"SCREEEEEEEEEEEAM 'TIL YOU FEEL IT!SCREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAM 'TIL YOU BELIEVE IT SCREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAM AND WHEN IT HURTS YOU SCREAM IT OUT LOUD!"The girls screamed as the band played.Roxy couldn't take her eyes off Bill and Jessica couldn't take her eyes off Tom.The concert finally ended with the last song "Scream"."Oh how I'd love to actually meet one of the band members"Jessica said as she sighed dreamily while she and Roxy were walking out of the stadium."Don't worry we will......in an alternate universe...."Roxy replied like a little smart ***."Aaaaaaw why do you have to ruin my fun"Jessica pouted."Because thats what I do for fun............I'm just kidding."Roxy said.
"The concert was awesome though"Jessica said.
"Yeah they're concert was freaking amazing"Roxy agreed.
Roxy received an incoming phone call from her dad.
"ROXY!DIDN'T I TELL YOU THAT YOU WERE NOT GOING TO MOVE TO L.A. WITH JESSICA AND ANDREA!AND WHAT DO YOU DO YOU GO AND DISOBEY EVERYTHING I TOLD YOU!"Jessica could even hear Roxy's dad scream.
"DAD I'M SORRY BUT I'M ALREADY STARTING TO LIVE A BETTER LIFE HERE!I RAN AWAY SO I COULD START OVER AGAIN!WHY CAN'T YOU JUST LET ME BE HAPPY FOR ONCE?!?!?WHY CAN'T I JUST LIVE A LIFE THAT I ENJOY LIVING!?"Roxy screamed as tears rolled down her cheek.Roxy was furious.
"ROXANNA BROOKES I SWEAR IF YOU DON'T GET A PLANE TICKET DOWN HERE WITHIN THE NEXT WEEK THEN I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN!I'LL EVEN CALL THE POLICE IF I HAVE TO!!!"
"BUT DAD!"Roxy yelled.
Her dad hung up.
"Maybe you should leave....."Jessica said but she trailed off on the last word.
"But I don't want to I'm happy here..."
"But Roxy you and I both heard what he said he'll even call the police......."
"I know.."Roxy answered.
"So when we get home I'll ask my sister if she could buy you a plane ticket back to Boston.
"But I don't want to go!"Roxy cried.
"I know you don't Roxy but you HAVE to!"
"You know what I need some time alone to think this out okay you can head on home I'm going for a walk okay.....I'll probably be home in an hour or maybe later which will probably be around one o'clock."
"Well I'm going on a walk to my seperate way!"
Jessica said.
Jessica was walking along a small park when she accidentally into none other than Tom,Gustav,and Georg."Oh.....my..........gosh you guys are Tokio Hotel......But were is Bill?"
"Nice to meet you too"Tom said.
"Tom don't be so rude shes just another fan of ours......and by the way Bill is walking around because hes 'recollecting himself'."
"I'm sorry my name is Jessica"she stuck out her hand.
"Nice to meet you Jessica"the three boys said in unison.
Roxy was crying on a near bench."I don't know what to do....."she whispered quietly to herself.
"Are you okay???"
"Oh my gosh your Bill Kaulitz."Roxy said
to be continued
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Izzylicous
April 16th, 2008, 07:04 PM
CH.10-OMG! ITS TOKIO HOTEL!
"Yeah I guess you know me already,"Bill said.
"But why are you crying?"He questioned.
"Its a long story"she answered
"I see"
"I feel so stupid crying in front of you....gosh I'm such an idiot."
"No its okay obviously you have enough on your shoulders.....Would you like to take a walk with me???"Bill asked
"Okay......".
"So Jessica why were you out here all alone???"Gustav asked.
"Well me and my best friend Roxy got into a fight."
"OH!!!!!Is your best friend hot like you?!?!?"
Tom said as he winked at her.
"Tom don't be so rude!"Georg bopped the back of his head.
"Ouch"Tom pouted.
"Well don't you think we should find her?"Gustav asked.
"Yeah I think we should......"Jessica said quietly.
"I never got your name...."
"My name is Roxanna Brookes but every one calls me Roxy."
"Roxy....Thats a cute name for a very cute girl."
Roxy's face turned as red as an apple.
"Anyways.....Can you tell me why you were crying????"Bill asked
"Its a long story i told you."
"I've got all the time in the world."
"Ok well my mom died of cancer when I was 9 years old and my dad is re-married to an EVIL woman name Nina who has an EVIL daughter named Natalie and my life has been a complete disaster....But my best friend Jessica has always been there for me.....And she told me that she was moving here to L.A. and she asked if I wanted to move with her and her older sister Andrea I said yes but when I asked my dad he said no so I decided to run away.I also decided to run away because I felt like an outsider...... But now I live with Andrea and Jessica....But my dad called me like an hour ago and he told me that if I didn't get a flight back to Boston-were I used to live-within next week he'll come hunt me down and if worst comes to worst he'll call the police.And Jessica and I got into a huge fight whether if I go back home or I stay here......"
"Wow............That is a long story.......But we should get you home."
"Yeah....."Roxy agreed
'Wow Bill is soooo adorable and sweet!'
"So cutie would you like to hang out with me sometime???"Tom asked.
"Ummmmmm....Sure....."Jessica said while blushing.
"Roxy?!!?!"
"Oh my gosh I'm so sorry!"Roxy said running up to her best friend to give her a hug.
"I was being so selfish I should go back to Boston
that way you wont get into trouble with my dad or the police."Roxy apologized.
"Don't be silly Roxy your going to stay with me and Andrea......no matter what."
"Thanks Jessica....."
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAW!"The 4 boys said in unison.
"What a beautiful moment!"Tom said in a dramatic tone.
"Well this is our stop" Roxy said to the four boys.
"Call me"Tom said as he handed Jessica a little piece of paper.Jessica walked into the house.
Roxy and Bill were just standing in front of the front door staring at each other.
"You guys can go ahead.....I'll catch up in a few"Bill told the rest of the guy.
"Ok"Tom,Georg,and Gustav said.
The guys walked ahead.
"Well I guess I'll have to say good night"Bill said.'Gosh I don't wanna leave her yet' Bill thought.
"Yup"she answered.
There was an awkward silence between them."Can I have your number?"Bill asked."Yeah of course"she said.She wrote it down on a small peace of paper and handed it to him.
"Heres mine"he said as he handed her a small folded up peace of paper.
"Well good night then"Bill said,then he kissed her on the cheek and she began to blush.
As he walked away he began to say something
"By the way you look really cute when you blush!"He said as a grinned from ear to ear.
She began to blush even harder.
ok
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Izzylicous
April 16th, 2008, 07:05 PM
Ch.11-A magazine and getting chased by a bunch of fan girls
Roxy felt like jumping around the house in happiness this morning.She couldn't believe that she actually met Tokio Hotel.
"Hey you wanna go out and get some breakfast and then go shopping Roxy??"Jessica asked.
"Umm sure."
The girls got ready.
Roxy was wearing a pair of of ripped jeans that, a tank top with a skull and a bunch of designs on it, some flip flops, and a pair of sing glasses.Jessica wore a a red V-neck t-shirt,a pair of jean shorts that went a little bit above the knee,and some sandles.
The girls walked out of the house.
The girls picked up some breakfast at a dinner and now they were shopping.
When Roxy and Jessica were passing by a magazine stand something caught Jessica's eye.....It was a picture of Bill Kissing Roxy on the cheek and the head line was 'Does Bill Finally Have a girlfriend?'.
"Look at this Roxy"Jessica said in shock.
"What happened?"
"You and Bill are on the front cover of a magazine!"Jessica said.
"Oh my gosh!I need to call Bill!"Roxy panicked.
She took out her cell phone and called Bill.
"Hallo?"Bill answered.
"Hey Bill its me Roxy can I talk to you for a second?"
"Of course whats up?"
"Yeah remember when you kissed me on the cheek last night?Well I guess a paparazi was hiding and he caught us together....And now its the front cover of a magazine and the headline is
'Does Bill Finally Have a Girl Friend?'"
"Oh my gosh!I'm so sorry....I should of been more careful!"Bill apologized his voice full of sorrow.
"Its okay I just wanted to let you know...."
"Well can I pick you up tonight??I would really like to get to know you better...."
"Umm okay Bill...."Roxy answered in a daze.
"How about eight o'clock?"Bill asked
"Thats fine."
"Well I guess I'll see you tonight."
"Bye Bill."
"Bye Roxy."
They both hung up.
"I'm going on a date with BILL KAULITS!!!"Roxy told Jessica a little too loud.
A LOT of girls were staring at her like they were going to attack her or something....
"OH GOD....Roxy I'd suggest you run!"
Roxy and Jessica started running the girls were chasing them!
Roxy tipped over a hot dog and it went rolling down the sidewalk and it knocked over some girls down........
"NICE ONE ROXY!"Jessica said.
"TAXI!"Roxy called out.
The taxi stopped and picked up the two girls.
Then the girls turned around and looked out the back window and they saw no fan girls chasing them anymore.
"They're GONE!"Roxy said victoriously.
"Yeah!"Jessica said.
The girls finally got home.
But Roxy had to get ready for her
"date"....But she didn't even know if it was a date......
Hope u guys like it
Well comment
thanx
TH_luv
April 16th, 2008, 07:14 PM
yay! your continuing this! :D I wondered what happened to this fanfiction =D
kArLa2tH
April 16th, 2008, 07:58 PM
i just started readin this
i like it
BlondPunk
April 17th, 2008, 07:02 AM
omg you r continuing this fanfic!!!
Do you know how happy I am to hear this awesome news?!?!?!?
I'm very happy...happyx10000!!!
Please Contnue...OR ELSE I'LL DO SOMETHING.
:]]]
xXxMandiixXx
April 17th, 2008, 08:36 AM
hey new reader here
loving the story hehe
please continue :)
<3 Mandii xx
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