I hate you, No wait I love you. (new fanfic)

[Tom_Screams]

:P This is my first so before i screw it up I want to let you know that i had all intentions of making this the best fan fic ever


Kimmy kicked her locker in disgust
“WOULD YOU OPEN UP ALREADY!” she yelled in anger. She punched the locker once more.

“Whats her problem?” Renee, her friend asked Felicia.
“I think she has her period” she whispered back. Kimmy glared at her 2 friends angrily.
“I HEARD THAT” she snapped.
Her two friends shifted uncomfortable away from her, afraid that she would snap and slap them (she was known for her temper) Kimmy couldn't blame her friends for being scared of her, she was having a bad day, and was “acting out”.

Why was she angry? well for one, her boyfriend of 2 months randomly broke up up with her...and the cafeteria had no more of those giant chocolate chip cookies left (thats enough to get anyone ******).

“THE WHOLE WORLD HATES ME!” she bellowed, as she pounded her locker door.
Everyone in the hall turned around and looked at her oddly, you would think by now that they would get use to her sudden outbursts.

“What the heck are you watching?” she snapped. Everyone turned there head and looked away in unison.

“Stupid jerk. I hate him!”she said out loud to herself. Today was officially the worse day of her 16 years of life. She was hungry, boyfriend-less and she had cramps.

Since her locker wouldn't work she grabbed her notebook and headed for the exit, mumbling and grumbling all the way, about how unfair and stupid people can be sometimes in life.

Kimmy arrived home 30 minutes later, hair disheveled, laces untied and mascara running down her cheeks.
“Had a bad day hunni?” Her mom in a normal voice as she entered the kitchen. Her mom was use to her hissy fits.

“Justin broke up with me, the chemistry teacher had a go with me for chewing gum, and there were no chocolate chip cookies in the cafetaria.” she said in mono-tone and marched upstairs to her room.
Kimmy's mother shakked her head. Kimmy the drama queen.

Kimmy opened the door to her room and without looking she threw her bag on floor and pounched on the bed.
“OUCH!” she shouted in pain. Something was on her bed...no wait...SOMEONE was on her bed.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Kimmy let out a high pitched scream.
A boy was on her bed, someone was in her room, eww it was boy. Footsteps raced up the stairs

“Are you ok?” Kimmy's mother came rushing into the room.

“GET THE **** OUT OF MY BED!” she shouted at the person. Ignoring her mom and snapping at he person.
“Kimmy, calm down, breathe” She mother said calmly.
The boy come up from under the covers he looked a bit startled it looked as if he had been sleeping.
“Oh I'm very sorry” he said with a strong weird accent he flustered out of the bed.

“VERY SORRY?” She shrieked , she was doing a lot of shouting today.

“Kimmy, this is Tom, he and his brother will be staying here for the semester , they are foreign exchange students,” she said quickly and calmly.
“...be nice now..” she added cautiously. And gave her the you-better -be or else stare

Kimmy examined the boy, he was taller then her, he had on a stupid white shirt that said
“Wait till you see my...” and an arrow pointed down to his pants. He had a on a white cap and here was the one that killed her most, he had dreadlocks. She forced back her laughter.

Based on the way he dressed Kimmy could tell , he was mischievous, he was a compulsive flirt, and he was conceited. One look at him and she knew that she hated him instantly.

(ahh i kno i could do better)

[D.C.Valentine]

...this could be interesting.....

I'd be interested in seeing how this goes. I love to read the best fanfics, so keep your standards at that.

While I am here, let us strike a deal. I read this and tell you how much I love it, and you read mine and tell me how much you love it.

Comprende?

It's called "Heartbreak. Incarnate."

I would like to read more of this.

-DCV-

[TanteMegs]

Ohhhh, I know I'm going to like this story. I love that shirt of his, btw. Can't wait to read more. Keep them coming.

Megan

[BlondPunk]

More bitte!!!
I was in love with this story from the first sentence.
:]]]

[SCHREIoutLOUD]

This Fanfic, is officially AWESOME.

I personally.. would totally like to be in it. XD If you feel like adding me in, you can.. but that's completely up to you. XD I just wanna be in it. I <3 Bill und Tom. XDDD Most people do. Lmao'

Name: Taylor
Hair: Blonde and layered with Black Tipped layers
Body: Slim, not tall but not short.. average, but leaning towards tall.
Age: 16
Other: Born In Germany, moved when she was 6, fluently speaks english, german, and french. XD Is secretly in love with Bill. Loud, but quiet... outspoken. But she keeps her feelings bottled up unless someone can get it out of her. Does not have a good relationship with her Mother. XD Wants to poke toms dread locks and go 'ew' XD Lmaooo. Very often uses the word '*******' and '****!' XDDD

If you think you're story could use me, I'd be more than happy to be in it! XDD I officially Love thsi fanfic. I can't imagine falling onto Tom In my bed though. LMAO

[LipsOfAnAngel]

soo good! mehr bitte! :geek:

[Tom_Screams]

This Fanfic, is officially AWESOME.

I personally.. would totally like to be in it. XD If you feel like adding me in, you can.. but that's completely up to you. XD I just wanna be in it. I <3 Bill und Tom. XDDD Most people do. Lmao'

Name: Taylor
Hair: Blonde and layered with Black Tipped layers
Body: Slim, not tall but not short.. average, but leaning towards tall.
Age: 16
Other: Born In Germany, moved when she was 6, fluently speaks english, german, and french. XD Is secretly in love with Bill. Loud, but quiet... outspoken. But she keeps her feelings bottled up unless someone can get it out of her. Does not have a good relationship with her Mother. XD Wants to poke toms dread locks and go 'ew' XD Lmaooo. Very often uses the word '*******' and '****!' XDDD

If you think you're story could use me, I'd be more than happy to be in it! XDD I officially Love thsi fanfic. I can't imagine falling onto Tom In my bed though. LMAO

I'm totally gonna add you dont worry. part 2 coming soon.

[Tom_Screams]

I started the 3rd part. Um I am gonna finish it before i go to bed hopefully By the way guys Go read D.C Valentine's faniction called Heartbreak Incarnate its pretty cool. (Truthfully i only read a few fanfics so if you think ur story its cool Tell me about it and i'll read it)

I can't believe this is happening to me. Me of all people. She thought to herself. She rubbed her temples in a circular motion and sat down on the chair next to her computer. She completely forgot he was still in her room. She was in her own little self-absorbed world.

Her mom left her so that she can “get to know him”. Could this day get any worse. Kimmy had seen the worse or worst today. She expected sulfur and fire to rain from the sky soon. Yea that would be a perfect end to an already disastrous day.
“So...” he started. “Nice room..” he said looking up at the walls around him.
“yea” she muttered.
“So where are you from...Foreigner” she asked being careful not to call him by his name

“Oh I'm from Germany. I guess you could tell my accent is strong” He said looking down at his sneakers. Kimmy wanted to laugh, she could tell she was making him uncomfortable but she enjoyed making him squirm.
“Do you always wear shirts like that?” She arched her eyebrows and pointed to his shirt.
“yea” he smirked “like it?” Was he flirting with her? God forbid.
She smiled forcefully then said “No its rather ridiculous and stupid and if your gonna be in my presence I suggest you change it”
“Fine” he said and a sly spread across his face he then reached for his shirt and started to raise it.

“Never mind, never mind” She said quickly, covering her eyes as she spoke. She could tell this was gonna be a very long semester...



“OH MY GOSH SIS!” the door flew open and an older looking Kimmy stood there jumping and down ecstatically. “

“Sis you gotta meet Bill, he so awesome, Oh my gosh” she pulled the boy next to her. He was wearing tight jeans and finger less red gloves and an Escape the Fate T-shirt. Kimmy looked from Tom the to Bill then back at Bill again. Yup identical twins. She prayed they weren't anything alike.
“Hi I'm Bill” he said smiling wanly and stretching out his hand to shake hers. His smile was warm and inviting
“Hi” She said she could barely speak. Her eyes burn just looking at him. She just met this guy was she crushing on him already. She nervously shaked his hand.
“Sis I swear he's my twin, he likes Coldplay , Adidas, like me and look we shop like crazy.” Angel, Kimmy's sister said as she pulled a what seemed like a trillion shopping bags in front of her.
“Thats...nice” Kimmy said slowly but was distracted Bill's beautiful face.
“Well we're off. We're gonna go karaoke. Toddles!” she said and darted out the room pulling Bill along with her.

Looks like she found another boy-toy Kimmy thought as she left. It was a shame too Bill was her kind of guy. Unlike a certain guy....

She rolled her eyes back at the weird looking boy in her room.
“Well I hope you know your not staying in my room” she snapped.
“But you're mom said-”
“Forget what my mom said I am not having your germs touching any of my stuff ”
“Look I'm not here to cause you trouble or my you feel not welcomed in your OWN house. I'm just here to go to school and have some fun.”
“Whatever” Kimmy said and started to throw his suitcase and guitar case over to the door.


“Kimberly Smith! I heard that! Get off your **** pedal stool and stop being a snub to our guest.” Her mom shouted angrily from the other room. Tom found it very hard not to laugh.
“What are you laughing at Foreigner” She snapped and starting to pull his luggage back into the room.


“Wow!” he exclaimed.
“What?” “You play video games ?” He asked pulling out her ps2 games that were scattered across her dresser
“Yea, why you act so surprised? What you think a girl can't play video games is that it?!?”
“No thats not it. Just, a lot of girls don't play video games.” he said his voice shaking a little bit cause she was glaring at him with Evil eyes

“Well I do... Look I don't have time to chit-chat with you I got a life and I peeps to go chill with.” she walked away and without missing a beat she picked up her bag and walked out the room not loooking back. Leaving a poor, awakard Tom in the room.

The hardest part was over she had a conversation with the freak now all she had to do was to show him his class then she could pretend he didn't exist

[SCHREIoutLOUD]

Awwww. Poor Tomi =[ *cries for tom* I love your brother, But you're so **** cute when you're confused and trying to be yourself and someoen won't accept it.

*pokes dreadlocks*

[TanteMegs]

Ok, I am deffinetly loving this ff. Not many people will try and put Tom in his place, they usually have their girls fall all over him. Sorry guys. Keep it coming. Oh, and if you'd like, go read my ff. Please Be Gentle. It's on hold right now becasue I'm stuck on a part and am currently in Chicago and can't work on it. But I think what's there is good.

Megan

[BlondPunk]

XD
LOL for Tom =P
XD
Pleaz continue, this is good :]]]

[POGOx3]

this is a cool story.

lol. "something..no someone was on her bed."
ahh tom <333

[Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S]

i really like it please write more soon....

[kArLa2tH]

haha poor Tom :(
great ff i love it

[Tom_Screams]

Finally i got a new chapter this took me a while
TanteMegs I will check out ur fanfic!! (does tante mean aunt?)Thanks for the comments guys. Here's a new one before i go to bed

TOMS POV
Tom woke up that morning grumpily, to the sound of the alarm. He rolled out of the bed and yawned lazily. He was still tired. He had stayed up all night going through Kimmy's things, he felt like a stalker looking through her drawers looking for more information about her. But she was interesting something about the way her soft brown skin looked and the way her eyebrows arched sexily when she was mad she was so intriguing yet very dangerous.

Kimmy had enough anger to fuel Mike Tyson in a boxing match and enough testosterone to possibly destroy the entire male population. She hated him so much it was scary.

Tom also found out that just like him, she liked hip hop a lot and she also played guitar he found a very beautiful orange and black guitar in her closet it was very unique the way it was designed, he could tell it was handcrafted.

And like him, she had a sweet tooth. He found that out when he looked under her bed and found a box full of different kinds of chocolate candy. He went through her photo-album. One was marked “Spring vacation” He liked that one the most cause of all the girls in bathing suits.
Their family was pretty normal, She had an older sister in college,Angel. A bunny rabbit named “Ronnie” named after the lead singer of Escape the Fate and her mom seemed pretty nice...except when she was mad. Guess it was time for the first day in school.
Tom was nervous he was afraid of how the kids would react to him, and his accent and they way he dressed. It was hard enough for him and Bill to fit in, in school back in Germany. He knew it would be worse in America. But pushing aside negatives feeling and fears he got ready for school. Hoping for a great day.

KIMMY'S POV
It took forever for everyone to get to school that morning. Kimmy crawled out of the sofa (literally) and groaned she had a hard time sleeping last night. OH NO not when she wasn't on her soft fluffy bed but on an old,squeaky,hard sofa ...while a stupid geeky boy was in her bed. Angel dashed down the stairs she skipped around in the living room singing “Cinderella dressed in yellow” someone was quite happy today. Kimmy pulled herself up and forced herself up the stairs to get ready for school.

They arrived in school 30 minutes later. Bill wearing black leather jeans, red T-shirt and his hair was spiky and long like a lion's mane he looked cute Kimmy thought especially with make up Tom dressed in a red t-shirt that said “True playa fo real” And a red cap to match it.
Kimmy wore her usual jeans, and because she was on a bad mood, she wore a black shirt that read “Beware! Angry female”.
As they walked through the hall people were whispering and looking. Possibly they were wondering who the heck were these kids. Several girls stopped talking mid-sentence and winked at both Tom and Bill. Kimmy rolled her eyes ....typical.

Then she heard someone call her . “KIMMY !!!” a girl shouted, there was no need to turn around. Kimmy knew who it was already.
“Hi Taylor!” she smiled and waved.
“GIRL I had this CRAZY dream last night. You were drowning in a pool of chocolate ice cream, wearing a clown suit and I was walking across the water with tennis rackets tied to my sneakers. Jared Leto was-” she stopped mid-sentence.
“ Oh hey!” she said smiling at Bill.
“Hey Taylor meet Bill...and tom...” Kimmy said pointing at Tom like he was a piece of garbagethat she didn't want to touch.
“Hi ! Bill !” she said in a high pitched voice. (she was crushing on Bill, Kimmy could tell)
“ er..Hi...Tom” Taylor said uneasily. Without notice, she grabbed one of Tom's dreads “Eww”
Kimmy laughed hard... a little too hard. This was the first time in days that she laughed. Taylor had a habit of speaking what was on her mind that's why they were such close friends.
“Hello..” tom and bill said together, they shot each other puzzled glances.
“Oh wow you guys have an accent you must be the foreign exchange students. Where are you guys from?” She asked
“Germany” they both replied.
“OH My gosh. Me too!” she exclaimed and started speaking rapidly in German. Bill looked token aback he, Taylor and Tom went on talking about their own German related stuff.
Kimmy on the other hand was in her own little world . Could it be because a certain, tall muscular, cocky, confident ex-boyfriend of hers was walking down the hall. She was hurting again, its amazing how someone had control of her emotions like that.

TOM'S POV
Tom couldn't help but notice how hot Taylor, she was pretty cute with her blonde hair with black streaks it looked bill's hair but inverted. She cursed a lot and she seemed really spunky it was cool how she was German. Under a normal circumstance he would of tried to get into her pants but Tom had to remind himself that he had to behave.
He made resolution with himself before he left Germany, that he was gonna try to get to know a girl before getting into her bed. Tom knew he had a problem with sex. He had sex when he was down. Had sex when he was happy. Talked about sex when the conversation was WAY off from the topic of sex.
Instead of looking at girls for their body why not get to know them? The whole sex thing got boring anyway.

Tom looked around for Kimmy, she was too quiet. He found her by her locker she was staring across the hall frozen in place.

“Whats wrong?” Tom asked a put a hand on her shoulder. She looked as if she was about to cry. She shook his hand off her
“Nothing..leave me alone” she muttered.

“Hey Kimmy, We need to talk...” Said someone behind them Tom spun around to find a guy about 6'3 his brown arms muscular, he jaw chiseled, and he looked like Will Smith. Things didn't sound so good between them. Tom knew something was up
“No we don't” Kimmy grumbled not even looking his way.
“See that's your problem. Your always so moody that's why I can't stand you” He barked at her.
“OH really is that really the reason why you broke up with me. Cause I heard that your with someone else now?” She shot back.
“Yea I am with someone else. Someone better than you. And she sure a'int no prissy (curse word inserted here for a nasty woman) like you” He snapped.

OOOH the hall echoed...everyone was crowed around the former couple. Water was starting to brim around Kimmy's eyes
“SHUT UP! JUSTIN” Kimmy snarled.

“Hey why don't you leave her alone?” Everyone turned around to Tom. He couldn't believe he just said that.
“So I guess your her new man?” Justin walked up to Tom and got into his face. Tom knew what to do. He learned this in school, never back down. Even when they picked on him and bill he never coward away.
“What you gonna do punk? huh?” Justin said breathing in his face.
“Stop it!” Kimmy said coming in between the 2 boys “Justin get to your class ” She said in a low threating voice. This time she got into his face
“I don't want to speak to you again, I don't want to look at you. I'm over you. You have no longer control on my emotions and you never will, ever again” she she spoke in almost a whisper but everyone could clearly hear what she, said she it with a force.
Tom stared at her, he never saw someone do that, she stood there bold and confident he could tell that she was certain that she would never be him again. Just by the way she looked him in the eyes. She looked as if she was...somewhat...free.
“Come on let's go to class” she said and pulled Taylor with her.
Just as Justin was walking away he came close to Tom's ear and whispered
“I see how you look at her. I Know where this is going, but don't worry..I got something for you...Sleep with your eyes open ” and he walked away slamming his shoulder into Tom's collarbone.

[Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S]

more please that was really good...better than my story anyways.....anywho love you story lots and lots...

[BlondPunk]

Oh wow...
this is getting real good...
Mehr Bitte
:]]]

[TanteMegs]

OHHHHHHH!!!!! Me likey!!!! More please. And yes, Tante means aunt. I'm half-Dutch and my nieces call me that.

Megan

[TH_luv]

*new reader*zomg! >.< Toom! watch out! dude this is a heeella awesome fanfic! XD I feel the need for...more please! :D

[SCHREIoutLOUD]

I officially love you, and this fanfic.

XDDDDD <3

[D.C.Valentine]

I love it. You do exactly what I do, and leave the reader begging for more.

Thanks for the recommendation to all the readers to check mine out.

I'll definitely be back to read more.

-DCV-

[DeeDee]

more hunnij
and justin you leave tom alone ****ole

mehr bitte

[D.C.Valentine]

I think its quite humorous that you chose to censor hole instead of ***.

-DCV-

[DeeDee]

gahh im an idiot :oops: aint i ?

[BlondPunk]

more hunnij
and justin you leave tom alone ****ole

mehr bitte

I think its quite humorous that you chose to censor hole instead of ***.

-DCV-



LMAO!!!!!

no...u rn't an idiot DeeDee :]

[herseykiss]

*new reader*
woo its awsommee!!!

i would like to be in this too plz i begg uu!!

name-semiha
hair-natural dark blonde wit natural blonde highlights
fav band memeber-tom or bill
personality-awsome lol fun outgoing crazy and random
langues known-turkish,a lil french a lil germen and english
clothing-mini skirts sometimes even skinnys witha tank top

[DeeDee]

danke hunnij , for saying i ain't an idiot :D

[Tom_Screams]

sorry i wont be able to post the next chapter But i will post it on monday. <3 bye guys thanks for commenting.

[latinaTHfanfurimmer]

*New Reader*
This Is So Amazing!!
Keep It Up!!
Ooo I See You Have MSN Im Gonna Add You If Thats Ok.
I Need More People To Talk To About TH Stuff! :mrgreen:

[Tom_Screams]

*New Reader*
This Is So Amazing!!
Keep It Up!!
Ooo I See You Have MSN Im Gonna Add You If Thats Ok.
I Need More People To Talk To About TH Stuff! :mrgreen:

sure go ahead

[herseykiss]

*New Reader*
This Is So Amazing!!
Keep It Up!!
Ooo I See You Have MSN Im Gonna Add You If Thats Ok.
I Need More People To Talk To About TH Stuff! :mrgreen:

sure go ahead

ooo ooo ;et me add u too plzz ...

[Tom_Screams]

*New Reader*
This Is So Amazing!!
Keep It Up!!
Ooo I See You Have MSN Im Gonna Add You If Thats Ok.
I Need More People To Talk To About TH Stuff! :mrgreen:

sure go ahead

ooo ooo ;et me add u too plzz ...
go ahead everyone add away!

[herseykiss]

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ok well my screen name starts wit turkish

[Tom_Screams]

ooo ooo ;et me add u too plzz ...
go ahead everyone add away![/quote]


ok well my screen name starts wit turkish[/quote]
hey i added you sorry i didnt respond i was upstairs sorry.

[latinaTHfanfurimmer]

*New Reader*
This Is So Amazing!!
Keep It Up!!
Ooo I See You Have MSN Im Gonna Add You If Thats Ok.
I Need More People To Talk To About TH Stuff! :mrgreen:

sure go ahead
Kk

[xMusiicLuv]

NEW READER

luvvvv your ff

[xMusiicLuv]

ooo ooo ;et me add u too plzz ...
go ahead everyone add away![/quote]


ok well my screen name starts wit turkish[/quote]

ooh add me 2 plsss

[Tom_Screams]

:D Finally it took me all morning. I was so slow today! I hope it wont take so long tomorrow i really want to read everyone's fanfic I will read somemore after i post this chapter. Thanks for the comment peoples ! thanks alot. it keeps me going. I usual stop writing fanfics mid-way. Anyway here it is. I notice i use the word "shaked" alot and my Spelling check thingy tells me i spelt it wrong


Tom couldn't figure out why people disliked him. He was harmless...except in bed.
“Come on, Class is way.” Kimmy said pulling Bill and Tom into a room.
When Tom entered the room he realized that it looked just like the classrooms in Germany, gum under the desks, kids on the desk talking about movies they saw. The wall with graffiti . Then he noticed the teacher. She looked as she was in her mid-40's her hair graying and she wore those glasses with the strings around the ends. She was sorting out papers on top of the desk.
“Um hi Mrs. Roberts.” Kimmy said coming up the teacher quietly.
“Oh hi!” the teacher exclaimed looking up as she saw them. “you must be the new students! I'm Mrs. Roberts I hope you enjoy your stay at Foreman High.
“Hi!” the boys said together.
The bell rang signaling the start of class.
“Why don't you let us know a little bit about yourselves ?” Mrs. Roberts said then she pushed Bill in front of the class. Bill looked nervous but smiled.
“Hi I'm Bill. Um I'm from Germany. Um Its nice to meet you. I like to sing and shop, and I write songs in my spare time.” He smiled again, then nervously pushed Tom in front of him.
“ Uh hi Um I'm Tom. I'm his brother...bet you could tell....Anyway I like to play guitar, listen to hip-hop and annoy my brother. In my spare time I flirt with women” The girls started to laugh. He winked at the blonde girl and the front row that was eying him as if he was something to eat.
“Well” Mrs. Roberts said in a flustered tone, “...Any questions?”
The blonde girls raised her hand
“So Tom do you have a girlfriend?” She asked staring him with goo goo eyes.
“Nope!” he smirked and winked at her. Kimmy rolled her eyes she couldn't believe people actually like him. This was so surreal.
“Okay...that enough questions... Bill you sit over there.” She said pointing to the empty desk next to Taylor. Taylor shot Kimmy a can-you-believe it look.
Kimmy shot her back a Good-Luck stare. She could tell Taylor liked Bill and Bill liked Taylor, but Angel liked Bill too. This would cause some...confrontation. Kimmy could tell this wouldn't be good. Then she would have to sit on the fence cause she hate to take sides, this was her best friend and her sister, she couldn't do that. Kimmy hoped nothing like that would ever happen. Mrs. Roberts pointed to the empty chair next to Kimmy.
“And Tom you sit there!” she pointed...Kimmy groaned. Could this day suck anymore?

The morning classes was almost too unbearable for Kimmy, with the same “Introduce yourself” routine and the same “OMG!” reaction from the Barbie doll girls, and of course Tom's compulsive flirting.
Bill, on the other hand was completely oblivious the fact that the girls were practically throwing themselves at him; instead he and Taylor were in their own German speaking, gummy bear loving world.
Lunchtime seemed to take longer then it usually should, making her more anxious and irritated.
“Oh thank you Lord!” she cried as she entered the lunchroom. Taylor was showing Tom and Bill where the food was.
“Whats up with you?” Christi asked. Christi was another one of Kimmy's friends, Kimmy was quite popular despite her “Hulk” like behavior. Out of all her friends Christi was the most concerned about Kimmy's well being, simply because that was the type of person Christi was... caring, sweet and quiet

“Okay ,” Kimmy started taking a deep breathe, “So yesterday, I come home, I'm stressed out and quite frankly, ******. I go to my room. MY ROOM, only to find this Smeagul in my bed!” She pointed over to the “Grill Lunch” line to Tom who had his mouth stuffed with fries and was attempting to hold a near impossible conversation with Taylor and Bill.
Christi cackled and nearly choked on her soda. “HAHA! Okay he's not even ugly, he's kinda cute!”
“NO he's not. He smells like Axe. Who the HECK wears Axe anymore. He's conceited, he flirts, he snores, he took like a 30 minute shower this morning. and lets not even start with his hair. Its growing a -”
“Um what are u guys talking about..I heard “something about someone's hair” ?” Taylor asked as she sat down next to Kimmy.
“Kimmy and I were just talking about Donald trump, weren't we Kimmy?” Christi said and kicked Kimmy's legs under the table.
“Ouch- Um yea Donald Trump...his hair is so fake.” Kimmy said reluctantly she rested her head on the table and groaned. Tom and Bill followed behind Taylor.. Bill taking a seat next to Taylor and Tom taking a seat next to Kimmy unfortunately. Kimmy shifted away from him, making sure not part of her body touched his diseased skin..
“So I'm Christi nice to meet you guys!” she shaked hands with the boys.
“I'm sorry if I sound really stupid saying this, but your hair...its really pretty, like rich and brown is it natural?” Tom suddenly said without notice.
Kimmy scowled, she quickly tried to get the images of her pimp slapping Tom with her lunch tray out of her head.
“Oh yea its natural, thank you!” Christi blushed. Kimmy rolled her eyes for the 40th time that day.
“Oh hey! have you guys heard of the new school play?” Christi bubbled. Christi was the head of the Drama Club, she always alerted everyone, when the school had a play going on. Taylor had been the star of the last play “Wonderful Night” about a rich girl who meets a Poor farmer boy at a Ball. It was something like Cinderella, except reversed.
“Yup! This one is called “GUSTAV!” Its about a German boy who falls in with a beautiful American girl.... Romantic isn't it!” Christi giggled. “You guys should audition for it !” she said to Tom and Bill.
“ I don't think that its a god idea for me to be the star of the play.. all the girls in the play will fall madly in love with me and it will be disastrous.” Tom puffed.

“Or... they will barf at the thought of kissing you” Kimmy retorted. Tom shaked his head.
“Well I think 90% of the girls in this school, find me rather attractive. Don't you think Christi!” he gave a sly flirtatious grin. blushed again.
“PSHH! Please, you're NOT all that.” Kimmy snorted, dipping her French fries into mustard on accident . Tom rolled his eyes this time.
“Well...neither are you!” He got up and threw away his lunch. Christi looked at Taylor. Taylor looked at Bill. Then all 3 of them looked at Kimmy and Tom and shaked their heads.


Toms POV.or later that day
Whats was her problem anyway. Her friends were all so nice and warm to him...well maybe not Taylor she was lukewarm, but Kimmy was ice cold. She treated him like crap. Tom wished there was someway to make her stop hating him, but he could think of nothing.

Here he was, walking down this empty hall after school with Kimmy, thinking of what to say to his mortal enemy . Kimmy was walking far ahead from him as if she had no clue of his existence.
The white faded walls and the red lockers stretched before him never-ending and narrow. Then something caught his attention, music and laughter. He stopped walking and followed the sound. It was beautiful music, it sounded like a harps and a piano, was it the orchestra?

“Okay Kevin I need you to start the second verse on the C note. It sound horrid on G” said a young woman she spoke quickly. She had long dark blonde hair with blonde highlights. She had on a red tank top and a black mini-skirt. Tom peeked inside and pushed the heavy double doors slightly slipping in.
It was an auditorium a huge one too. Much bigger than what they had back home in Germany. Maybe this was the auditions for the play. Tom took a seat all the way in back so that he wouldn't be noticed.

“Okay the next couple Mark and Gwen” the young blonde woman said. A boy and girl stood up from their seats and walked on the stage.
“Ok you Two !!!SCENE 2”
The boy and girl nervously looked down at there manuscripts and started the scene.
“Louise, don't leave me!” the nervous looking boy shrieked . Tom started to laugh but coughed instead hoping that no one noticed him, the boy's voice was weak and feeble, not to mention his fake German accent completely sucked.
“I can't do this! Not with you, your not right for me. We aren't the same leave me alone let me be!” The girl said she sounded as if she was reading from her manuscript.

“Um Okay Um Mark and Gwen... that was...good. UH thats enough for today...I'll see you guys next week hopefully, look on the notice board to see if you guys are up there for call backs” said the young woman. Gwen and Mark Gave looked at each other happy. Gwen squealed and ran off the stage.
“Okay thanks Semiha ! See you next week at call backs” she grabbed Mark's hand and they both dived out of the auditorium. As soon as they left the young woman with the long blonde hair sighed.
“Mrs. Roberts they were the best... This is gonna be a disaster!” She emitted .
“It wasn't that bad ..was it ?” said Mrs. Roberts. Tom recognized Mrs. Roberts. He met her In the first class that morning
“Awful,awful!” The gorgeous blonde young woman moaned.

Suddenly the Auditorium doors burst opened BANG!

“THERE YOU ARE! You idiot!” it was Kimmy. Her long black hair was disheveled, her shirt was slightly unbutton, her chest was heaving . She looked like she just ran a marathon. Mrs. Roberts and the woman looked at her blankly.
“Hi! Semiha... Hi Mrs. Roberts! I'm just here to get Foreign Boy over here!” she waved to the Semiha and Mrs. Roberts then ran over to Tom and pulled him by one of his dreds
“Wait Wait ! You're one of transfer students aren't you?” Semiha suddenly asked Tom.
“Um yes” He said in a painful little voice. Kimmy was pulling his hair too hard.
“You're German aren't you?” Semiha said her eyes opened widely as if she just discovered gold.
“Yes I am!”
“AND YOU'VE BEEN SITTING HERE THERE ALL THE TIME!” Christi bellowed shaking her fists widely. She picked up an manuscript and threw it at his head
“Read that a couple of times.” she ordered. She started pacing up and down the Auditorium muttering to herself in Turkish. Kimmy knowing Semiha, as she was more than likely thinking up something....this was bad. Tom picked up the manuscript and started reading.
“AND YOU !!WHAT ARE U DOING STANDING THERE?:...you too!!!!!!!” Semiha shouted and pelted another manuscript at Kimmy. Kimmy took the manuscript with shaking hands and started to read too. She knew better than to mess with Semiha, she was crazy, crazier than herself.


“Okay guys on the stage!” Semiha ordered
“But who are we?” Tom asked nervously. He hoped Kimmy was playing the part of the French maid and not the love interest Louise.
“Tom you will play Gustav. Kimmy your Louise. NOW GO !” she demanded. Tom groaned. Then he and Kimmy scurried to the stage both of them nervously looking at Semiha as they got up there
“Start!” Mrs. Roberts commanded as she opened a notebook.

SCENE 2
“Louise! Don't leave me!” Tom said in a warm begging voice. He grabbed Kimmy hands .
“I can't do this! Not with you, your not right for me. We aren't the same leave me alone let me be!” Kimmy pleaded as she pretend to struggle from “Gustav”s grasp.
“You and I, We are the same soul, It doesn't matter who we are. It doesn't matter where we are from. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise.” Tom grabbed her wrists pulling her into him. “I need you so much.” he whispered into her ear. Kimmy shivered a little.
“And I need you so much more. More than you will ever know” Tom pulled her closer to him, he cupped his hands on her cheeks and leaned forward.


Christi was orignally Semiha but i thought the characters didn&#39;t fit. So i made Semiha more cooler. Lolz

[herseykiss]

omg im famouss!!!

semiha and tom are the best charecterss!!

lol awsome stary more dankee!!

[DeeDee]

oh god whats gonna happen next

mehr bitte im dying of curiosty here hunnij

[spammi]

[new reader]
OH MY GOD! this is like so awsome! i cant wait for more!
hey if u dont mind could u add me into the story to!

name:samantha (would rather be called spam)
tall, blond hair, blue eyes, pale skin, weres skinny jeans, shirts with odd designs and band shirts, loves the color orange, doesnt were make-up, weres a flannel, weres skater shoes, dirtbikes, paint balls, and horse backrides. and really energetic always in a good mood (but doesnt smile very often) "out there" . ok thats all i can thin of.
so yeah if u could add me in it that would be awsome1

[SCHREIoutLOUD]

AHHHHHH

*pants waiting for more*

[BlondPunk]

Mehr!
Please wright more!

[ChOcoLaTe_CuP_CaKe]

ja this is awesome

i cant wait for the next chap.

<3333333

[xMusiicLuv]

OMG OMG!!!

was he gonna kiss her??!!! :shock: