xMusiicLuv
April 19th, 2008, 09:17 AM
Chapter 1: Knock-offs & fashion crimes
Amber sighed.Already she noticed that this school was no different to all the other ones.
The strange stares, the hushed whispers...Why did her mother always have to put her in such snobby schools.Why did her motherhave to move constantly for her crappy jobs.
Everytime Amber and her mother moved to yet another shabby appartement Amber hoped.She hoped that this timethey would stay put, she hoped that this time the people in her new school would like (or atleast TRY to like her) her for who she was and not prejudice her because she had bright pink streaks in her jet black hair or that she wore worn out and written on converse All-Stars.These hopes she hoped in private and in vain.Dep down knowing that it would be the same as allways.
But for some reason before she had moved to her newest destination she had had a feeling that this time it would be different,better, that this time she would actually make friends.
Yet still she sighed because the reaction she got from her new peers was all to familiar.I geuss moving to a whole different continent would be different,Amber thought bitterly.She shuffled allong the what seemed to be endless corridor.She was deep in thought...trying to be thankfull for this life of hers.Okay she thought, it's a good thing that I was blessed with my language skills or I would really look like and idiot being in the Netherlands without knowing a speck of Dutch,or moving to Germany without knowing how to spell sehr gut.It was that second country that she moved to, Germany.The east of Germany to be exact.
Amner tried to be thankfull for other things and failed miserably.Still deep in thought and feeling a bit sorry for herself Amber sighed once again,but stopped mid sigh because now she didn't see the grey tiles anymore that she was studying but a pair of white stilletto boots.Amber raised her pierced eyeborw and looked,in front of her stood 3 girls.Obviously thay seemed to be the popular girls.Amber could just tell, the way they looked at her , the way they stood with an air that Amber always thought seemed very arrogant."Can I help you?" Amber asked lazily.
The white silletoed girl spoke:"Yes you can", she smiked at Ambers accent."My name is Meggie and could you please give me youre name and adresse".
"Why would you be needing those" Amber asked eyebrows raised."Oh, just to put you in my fashion crimes notebook" Meggie finished with a smirk.The crowd around them oohd.
Amber looked at her from head to toe and smirked.
"And ofcourse you would never be in that notebook of yours.Knock-offs being in and all"Amber said this with lovely sarcastic tone in her voice.She smiled, it was only then that she noticed that the crowd had suddenly gotten silent and that Meggie looked like she was on the verge of exploding."Now if you don't mind geeting out of my way, because I have to get to the principals office to get my timetables.Tschuss"Amber walked of smiling.
that was my first chapter.please tell me if it's good or not..or if I have to keep writing..it's up to you guys
ps sorry for any grammar mistakes
Amber sighed.Already she noticed that this school was no different to all the other ones.
The strange stares, the hushed whispers...Why did her mother always have to put her in such snobby schools.Why did her motherhave to move constantly for her crappy jobs.
Everytime Amber and her mother moved to yet another shabby appartement Amber hoped.She hoped that this timethey would stay put, she hoped that this time the people in her new school would like (or atleast TRY to like her) her for who she was and not prejudice her because she had bright pink streaks in her jet black hair or that she wore worn out and written on converse All-Stars.These hopes she hoped in private and in vain.Dep down knowing that it would be the same as allways.
But for some reason before she had moved to her newest destination she had had a feeling that this time it would be different,better, that this time she would actually make friends.
Yet still she sighed because the reaction she got from her new peers was all to familiar.I geuss moving to a whole different continent would be different,Amber thought bitterly.She shuffled allong the what seemed to be endless corridor.She was deep in thought...trying to be thankfull for this life of hers.Okay she thought, it's a good thing that I was blessed with my language skills or I would really look like and idiot being in the Netherlands without knowing a speck of Dutch,or moving to Germany without knowing how to spell sehr gut.It was that second country that she moved to, Germany.The east of Germany to be exact.
Amner tried to be thankfull for other things and failed miserably.Still deep in thought and feeling a bit sorry for herself Amber sighed once again,but stopped mid sigh because now she didn't see the grey tiles anymore that she was studying but a pair of white stilletto boots.Amber raised her pierced eyeborw and looked,in front of her stood 3 girls.Obviously thay seemed to be the popular girls.Amber could just tell, the way they looked at her , the way they stood with an air that Amber always thought seemed very arrogant."Can I help you?" Amber asked lazily.
The white silletoed girl spoke:"Yes you can", she smiked at Ambers accent."My name is Meggie and could you please give me youre name and adresse".
"Why would you be needing those" Amber asked eyebrows raised."Oh, just to put you in my fashion crimes notebook" Meggie finished with a smirk.The crowd around them oohd.
Amber looked at her from head to toe and smirked.
"And ofcourse you would never be in that notebook of yours.Knock-offs being in and all"Amber said this with lovely sarcastic tone in her voice.She smiled, it was only then that she noticed that the crowd had suddenly gotten silent and that Meggie looked like she was on the verge of exploding."Now if you don't mind geeting out of my way, because I have to get to the principals office to get my timetables.Tschuss"Amber walked of smiling.
that was my first chapter.please tell me if it's good or not..or if I have to keep writing..it's up to you guys
ps sorry for any grammar mistakes