View Full Version : Are we really freinds? [(fanfic)]
BlondPunk
April 19th, 2008, 09:11 PM
It's a new fanfic, hope you guys like it.
I'm still working on The unamed ff :]
"HOLLY! GET YOUR *** DOWN HERE!!!"
Again, I wake up to the screaming of my mom. I get up and take a shower. Than I put on my ripped pants and my red Vans shirt. Then my black converse. I quickly brush my black and red hair. It's messy, but it works for me.
I run downstairs to see what my mom was yelling about.
"Your freind is waiting for you in her car. So go to school. Oh god, you look terrible.Why you go outside like that."
"Mom, it's what I like!"
"Well, I don't see anybody else like you!"
"That's because you can't see! And there are more people who look like me!"
And there are more people like me!"
"Holly, why can't you be more like your sister?"
I glared at the blonde haired, blue eyed creep of a sister that was eating at the table.
"Why would I want to look like her?"
"Why wouldn't you? You look like a freak!"
"I AM NOT A FREAK!"
"Yes you are! Now go to school.Idon't want yopu to lay foot in my house up until you decide to dress more apropriate!"
I ran up to my room to get all my things that I'll need and slam the door behind me.
"Hey Holly. How are you?"
"Don't ask."
Tell me if u like it or not <3
herseykiss
April 19th, 2008, 09:41 PM
more more more
luvukaulitztwins
April 20th, 2008, 07:51 AM
OH- mein Gottpfosten mehr, wenn Sie können
schrei.in.die.nacht
April 20th, 2008, 09:57 AM
i like it! post more!
BlondPunk
April 20th, 2008, 02:59 PM
More :]
Finally we arrived at school. The people stared at me, like usual.
"Holly, you really need to dress more like the others."
I glared at my freind. She was the only one who actually hung around me at school. But, she was just as stuck-up as the others at my school.
"Julia, can't you just except me for who I am?"
Julia looked at me. She didn't say anything.
"Well, I don't want to be late for class."
Then she left me. And she wasn't late at all, First period started in thirty minutes. Sometimes I wonder if wer'e really freinds. And now, I have to go to my locker, and listen to Lindsey talk about her boyfreind and how hot he is. Great. So I get to my locker and get my stuff as fast as I can and go to I.S.S. I'm in I.S.S. for beating some boy up for making fun of me. I get in The dark room and see Mrs. Haymore , A.K.A. Lisa, sat at her desk, ready to give me my assignements.
"Good morning miss Holly."
"Yeah, hi."
"Here's your work."
I pick up the stackfull of assignments and jsut wright random answers down. More people arrived in the room. A girl from my secound period was complaining, flipping her bleach blonde hair every few secounds. Then a teacher comes in and whispers something to Lisa.
"Holly, come here."
I get up and go to Lisa.
"What is it?"
The teacher next to her gave me "the look" for my sarcasism.
"There's a new student. I think you and her will get along good."
Why me? Why do I have to introduce the new kids to the school?
"Should I leave my stuff here?"
"No, bring it with. Wer'e going to give you the same schedule as her. So today you won't have I.S.S."
Yes. I get to get out of this craphole. The teacher led me to the conselor's office, and introduced me to this girl with black hair with blonde/white highlights, black jeans, red, white, and black leather jacket, and cowboy boots.
I could tell from the strat I'd like her.
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More tommorow <3
RetteMich
April 20th, 2008, 03:13 PM
more!!!!!!!!!! :D
xx_hardcore
April 20th, 2008, 08:29 PM
I'm going to read this fanfic.
I know the character isn't me, but she totally has my name.
BlondPunk
April 21st, 2008, 06:56 PM
:] more...
Holly's POV
The girl stood up.
"Hi, I'm Bill. I guess you'll be my schoolmate."
Oh geez, I thoght for sure that was a girl. And he had a very think accent.
"Hi, I'm Holly, Where are you from?"
"Oh, I'm from Germany."
"Okay, cool. Let me see your schedule."
We had the exact same schedule.
Then a boy came out of the nurses office, saying things to the spiky haired sonic the hedgehog boy.
"Why aren't we allowed to wear our pants under our waiste? This is torture! Look what they gave me. These wierd, not baggy pants! I've been here for what, ten minutes? And I already hate it here."
The boy with dreads kept on saying things about how rude that is. Then Bill spoke up.
"Give this school a chance, okay Tom?"
So his name was Tom.
"Whatever."
He turned over to me.
"This is my twin brother Tom."
Tom looked my way and said a plain "Hi."
Bill looked over to Tom.
"Tom, say Hi nicer. It's just rude."
I bet he didn't know I spoke or understood German.
"Ja, it doesn't matter. He can be rude if he wants to."
"You speak German?"
"Yeah. That's the only reason I got picked to show you guys around."
"Great, now me and Bill can't have a private German conversation without you knowing."
"Sorry, usaully Tom is nicer. He's just in a bad mood because he had to get up early."
"Haha, Okay."
Bill's POV
Holly was a really nice girl. I can't believe that Tom is so rude today. Well, at least Georg isn't here. He'd be picking on poor old Georg. Well, if Georg was here, maybe Tom would be nicer to the people here.
"Okay, I guess wer'e ready to go."
"Yep."
"No."
I nudged Tom in the side.
She led the way out of the office.
"I guess we get to go to math first."
I followed her to the Math room. When we entered, we all got bunches of stares. They were all dressed Hollister, Aeropostale, Abercrombie, or American Eagle. Every single person. This made me feel very ncomfortable.
"Mrs. Faar, these are the new kids. Wer'e going to have the same schedule for a week."
"I thought you had I.S.S. for throwing paper balls in my hair."
"I did, but I'm out for a week."
I stared at the teacher's hair. It was brown, and looked like Marge Simpson's hair.
"Hello new kids."
The teacher gave us a very unwelcomed feeling.
And then, Tom looked the teacher in the eye, and opened his mouth to say somehting. I dreaded for the secound he would say something to her.
LipsOfAnAngel
April 21st, 2008, 07:08 PM
ahhh!!!! tom shut up! haha, they thought bill was a girl! mehr bitte!
schrei.in.die.nacht
April 21st, 2008, 10:38 PM
no tom! dont say anything stupid!
i am really liking this so far.
luvukaulitztwins
April 22nd, 2008, 03:44 PM
MORE RUDE TOM...NEXT HE WILL B CHECKING OUT THE TEACHER =X
I SAID NOTHING NOTHING AT ALL
BlondPunk
April 22nd, 2008, 05:03 PM
More <3
Bill's POV
"Hello Mrs.Fart, it's very nice to meet you.I'm Tom, and this is Bill"
I glared at him. Then I kicked him lightly on the leg.
"I should write you up young man, but since it's your first day of school, I'll let you slide. Okay Bill, go sit next to Holly. Tom, go sit in the desk in the back."
I went over to the empty desk next to Holly, and Tom went to the lonely desk in the back of the room. The desk was very small too, he barely fit in it.
Holly's POV
Thank god Math ended quick. Me and Julia walked over to our next period, Science.
"So those are the German boys?"
"Yep. And They get to follow me for a week. Then It's back to I.S.S for me."
"Haha. At least you won't have to be around them anymore. I feel so bad for you."
"Why?"
"Because, Look at how different they are. It's bad for you Holly, you're already wierd enough. They're just going to influence you to stay the way you are. It would ruin your social life."
I stopped in the middle of the hall, letting the boys walk into me and take a few steps back. I glared at Julia.
"Julia, I'm doing what I want to do. It's not going to ruin my social life, it's going to ruin yours, because everyone says that "you hang out with the freak, that's wierd. I don't want to hang around people who hang around freaks." And you don't even hang around me at school, I was just lucky to get to talk to you today. A real freind wouldn't care what other people think or say about you! You ignore me when I try to talk to you when you're around those prissy preps. Julia, I have a question for you, and you better answer this seriously. Are we Really freinds?"
I realized I was yelling, because half the school was watching us. Julia looked down at her feet.
"Answer me!!!"
She kept on looking at her feet, and took in a deep breath.
"I-i......"
"JUST SAY IT!"
"I don't know, okay?"
I folded my arms and looked a her in the eyes.
"Julia, it's an easy yes or no question. So is it YES or is it NO?!?"
More tonight <3
DeeDee
April 22nd, 2008, 05:30 PM
my god julia wot the **** is wrong with you my god , two boiis who are adorable and you are saying they are freaks gahh ok ok i need to calm down
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<3ByYourSide<3
April 22nd, 2008, 05:37 PM
wow...im lovin this...MORE SOON!
LipsOfAnAngel
April 22nd, 2008, 05:47 PM
****! mehr bitte!
BlondPunk
April 22nd, 2008, 06:56 PM
Here's more <3
Holly's POV
She just stood there, and din't say anything. I knew what she was going to say. My eyes were already watery.
"JULIA, I ALREADY KNOW WHAT YOUR GOING TO SAY, SO JUST SAY IT!"
"But..."
"JUST SAY IT!"
"NO!!!I'M NOT, OKAY?"
I smiled at her.
"So WHY were you even BOTHERING HANGING AROUND ME?"
"Because. I really liked you at first. But now you're just freaky. Please try to understand me."
I walked up really close to her and put my face in hers.
"IF YOU EVER CALL ME A FREAK AGAIN, I SWEAR I WILL BEAT YOU UP. Go have fun with the prep *****es, and don't bother looking, talking, or anything with me."
Then I shoved her into a locker and looked her one last time in the eye, and that was the last time I ever will.
Then Bill put his hand on my shoulder. At first he scared me, but the I shook it off.
Bill's POV
I can tell she wants to be left alone, so I just wait for Tom to catch up. I looked at Julia to see that she and her freinds were looking at the bruise Holly made on her arm.
Note to self, don't make Holly mad.
"Wow. I can't believe Julia thinks wer'e freaks."
I looked over at Tom.
"What if Alot of Americans are like this?"
Tom shrugged.
I went back over to Holly who was now entering the class room. We went over the same drill in every class. Stares, Rude teacher, Rude Tom, sit next to Holly, and now since Holly and Julia don't sit together, we three all sit together in every class.
Holly didn't talk much to us ever since the fight with Julia. But at the end of school she was talking again.
Holly's POV
Finally it's the end of school.
"Are you guys hungry?"
"Yes! The school meals are too small!"
"Okay then, how's Pizza?"
"Yes! I love Pizza!"
Tom shrugged.
"I guess."
We head over to the pizza place across the street.
We all order our Pizzas and sit down to talk about each other.
"So, what are some things you like to do?"
"Me and Tom both are in a band. I sing and Tom plays the Guitar."
"I always wanted to have a band, but there is nobody that I know of that actually would want to start a band."
Then all the sudden Julia's boy freind, Cody(captain of the football team), comes over to pay me a visit.
"Hey Holly, I heard you messed with Julia."
I stood up.
"And you care why?"
"Nobody messes with my girl freind. Especially not some Freak."
I stared at him and smiled.
"And what are you going to do about it?"
"I just wanted to tell you to leave her alone."
"Okay, whatever. Now go along back to your "girl freind"
"I will."
"Good."
"Yeah it's good."
I sat back down. He finally left.
"Idiot."
Tom laughed.
"Well he is! Who'd want to go out with her?"
Tom stopped laughing. Me and Bill looked at Tom.
"You'd go out with her?"
Tom nodded silentley, and me and Bill cracked up.
"What?"
"She looks like all the other girls, you can barely tell them apart!"
It was true. All the girls except for me wanted golden blonde hair, blue eyes, and wanted to wear Hollister.
It was crazy how alike some of them were, and they weren't even twins.
And that reminded me something---Mom
"I just realized something."
"What?"
"My mom won't let me inside her house up until I look "normal". I was going to stay at Julia's house..."
"You can stay at our house, it's no big deal."
I got up and hugged Bill.
"Thank you!"
"It's no problem."
"Did anybody ask for my opinoin?"
"No, but tell us. Can I stay at your house?"
"Yep."
"And why did I have to ask you if you were going to say yes?"
"Hey, I want to be included on the vote."
More soon <3
LipsOfAnAngel
April 22nd, 2008, 07:01 PM
love it! mehr bitte!
BlondPunk
April 22nd, 2008, 08:34 PM
Mehr <3
Tom's POV
Couldn't they understand that I want to share my opinion?
Gosh.
"Alright, let's get to my car before any other people start bothering you."
I took out the keys from my pants, MY pants, not those pants the school nurse gave me. Holly smiled at us, drinking her Green slushy in about five sips. The whole thing.
"Let's go."
I led the way to my awesome Black Ecsalade. She took a few minutes to admire my car.
"Nice car Tom."
"Thank you."
I got in the front of the car, and Bill got in the passeneger seat, leaving Holly alone in the back.
"Now I'm all alone back here. Thanks guys."
She was very sarcastic.
"Well, I can't come back there."
"Why not?"
Bill answered for me.
"Beacause he's married to the car, and I think the car would be mad at Tom if he goes back there with you."
"Haha. Very funny."
I couldn't wait to get home and show Holly around
Sorry, i was short ik.
More tommorow <3
DeeDee
April 24th, 2008, 02:24 PM
hmm i wonder whats gonna happen i'm curious
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schrei.in.die.nacht
April 24th, 2008, 08:43 PM
i love it.
post more.
im excited to see what happens.
BlondPunk
April 25th, 2008, 05:09 PM
Mehr <3
Bill's POV
Of course on our way to the house, Tom had to put on Sammy Deluxe.
"Uggggggghhh...Tom! I don't want to listen to him!"
I took out the CD and put Nena in. Then I sat back comfortabley in my seat and smiled.
"**** NO! I'M NOT LISTENING TO NENA! I MUCH RATHER LISTEN TO SOME OLD WOMAN SINGING LIKE A DEAD BIRD!"
I looked at Tom and gave him puppy-dog eyes and made my eyes look watery.
"I said No!"
"Okay! Stop it!"
Holly leaned in front of us, smiling. She changed the CD and put Cine Bizzare in. I leaned back and crossed my arms.
"What's the matter?"
She gave me this innocent look.
"I don't like CB, they want to top us."
Holly smiled.
"Yeah, I know. They're your arch enemy in the music world."
"What?!? You know about me and Tom...and Tokio Hotel?"
She gave me the yeah-no duh! look.
"Of course I do."
Does she like us...does she hate us? Does she think we suck?
"Sooo, do you like us?"
"Yeah..."
Her face turned a little red.
"Why didn't you scream or anything?"
She raised her eyebrow.
"Do you really think I'm a C.F.F.?"
"Whaaaaat???"
"C.F.F.- Crazy effing Fangirl."
I couldn't help but laugh. And Tom was laughing too.
"I never heard that before!"
Holly smiled.
"Alright, wer'e here."
Holly's POV
There house wasn't as big as I expected it to be...it was about the size of mine.
"It's kinda small, but it works."
I went in and took of my shoes.
"Where's my room?"
"Ummm...there's only two rooms. You'll have to share one with me or Tom. But you can decide later."
"Okay..."
I decided to put my stuff in Bill's room for now. Then we sat down in the living room and relaxed.
"So, why are you guys here?"
Billa nd Tom looked at each other, and I guess they were somehow talking to each other without words. Then Bill spoke up.
"We were looking for somebody...somebody like you to help us with something."
Muahahaha! I will write more soon!
<3 <3 <3
LipsOfAnAngel
April 25th, 2008, 05:15 PM
help them with what?!?!?!?!?!?! AAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! mehr bitte!
DeeDee
April 25th, 2008, 05:48 PM
help with whatt
what room are they going to choose hmm im curious
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BlondPunk
April 28th, 2008, 05:13 PM
:]]] Sorry it took so long ;]
Holly's POV
"Help with what?"
He played with his thumbs.
"We are making a video for Heilig/Sacred. Me and Tom were chose to find a girl who won't freak around us, and who's not ugly...and...yeah."
His face was red.
"Really? Me? In a music video?"
Bill nstantley smiled.
"Yes you, silly. Who else?"
"There are many girls who are way prettier than me, and you know it. But why did you want me?"
Tom answered for Bill.
"Holly, you are very pretty. Me and Bill were talking about this in the bathroom at school, and we both agreed your more than pretty enough to do this. And if I say you're pretty, I mean it."
That is so sweet of Tom! Awwww. But I still think I'm ugly, no matter what.
"So are you in? You don't have to though."
"Of course I'm in!"
"Yes! That was so easy!"
The boys jumped up out of their seats and hugged each other.
Bill's POV
I can't believe she thinks she's ugly. Oh well, most all girls are like that anyway.
"Okay, so what do we want for dinner?"
"Umm...we ate an hour ago Bill."
"I know, I'm always hungry!"
"Do you only think about food?"
Tom broke in and had a huge smile on his face.
"He always wants to eat when he's around a pretty girl."
I got up and punched Tom.
"Do not!"
Tom was laughing hysterically.
"Yes you do!"
I pulled down Tom's loose pants to reveal pink boxers.
"OH MY GOD! PINK BOXERS TOM?!?!?! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I WOULD'VE NEVER KNEW THAT!!!"
I laughed at the Tomato-faced Tom.
"And now you look like a Tomato!"
Tom was starting to get mad. He got up and pulled up his pants, ready to pounce on me. I ran screaming away from him.
"GET BACK HERE BILL!"
He was a faster runner than me, and was gaining on me. Holly wasn't too far behind. I made it to the back door and closed it behind me, running away. I heard him run into the door as I quickly jumped into a nearby bush. I heard the door open. I had to catch my breath quickly, or else Tom would hear me.
"I see your hair!"
I quickly jumped out of the bush while Tom tackled me and was pulling on my pants. I grinned.
"That's why I wear a belt."
Now he was trying to take off my belt, so I started kicking him with my cowboy boots.
"Owww!"
"Haha!"
Tom got up and went inside, mad because I defeated him, just like I always do.
Holly's POV
Me and Bill were sitting in the living room, drinking water. Bill also had a cold pizza in his hand.
"I can't believe Tom would wear pink underwear."
"Ja, me neither! I thought he would be wering something black."
We heard Tom playing his guitar rather loudly in his room. If you listened carefully, you could hear him singing wierdly in a disturbing way. Then all the sudden a loud noise came from his room.
Dun dun dun....what was the noise?
More soon <3
TexasGirlLovesTH
April 28th, 2008, 05:50 PM
What was the noise??? :?:
Does she pick Bill's room??? ;)
I NEED TO KNOW!!! :!:
THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!!! :shock:
Sorry about that. I'm kind of a spazz. :D
ChOcoLaTe_CuP_CaKe
April 28th, 2008, 06:18 PM
lmao
i love this story
AND ONLY A TRUE MAN CAN WEAR PINK **** IT!
<333
BlondPunk
April 28th, 2008, 08:14 PM
lmao
i love this story
AND ONLY A TRUE MAN CAN WEAR PINK **** IT!
<333
XD LOL! Ja, but in the story it's a wimpy color.
But in real life it's not!!!
What was the noise??? :?:
Does she pick Bill's room??? ;)
I NEED TO KNOW!!! :!:
THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!!! :shock:
Sorry about that. I'm kind of a spazz. :D
I will write more tommorow, and she might pick Bill's room...I still don't know.
And the noise... XD
Ahhhh...can't say too much :]
LipsOfAnAngel
April 28th, 2008, 08:31 PM
*GASP* don't do that to me!!!!!! mehr bitte!
schrei.in.die.nacht
April 28th, 2008, 10:18 PM
what was the noise?!
is she gonna pick bill's room?
i would pick bills room...
BlondPunk
April 29th, 2008, 07:03 PM
More <3
Do i have to write more when I write more?
Woah, I just consued myself
O_o
*ahem*
ignore this please!
Read on!
Holly's POV
Me and Bill ran in Tom's room to see what happened. What I saw was so funny, yet it looked so painful. Tom fell flat on his face. He tripped over his guitar.
"Oh my god, are you okay?"
Bill was laughing, but he still managed to make his words sound serious.
Tom got up.
"Yeah, I just tripped over my guitar, and fell on my face."
"Oh, okay."
I couldn't help but laugh.
"You tripped over your guitar? BWAHAHAHAHAH!!! HOW CAN YOU DO THAT?"
"HAHAHA. LAUGH ALL YOU WANT."
Then he slammed his door and put a "leave me alone...OR ELSE" Sighn on his door handle.
"I know where I'm sleeping."
"Yeah, I'm sorry about Tom. He really wasn't up for going here anyways. He'll be nicer tommorow. If not we can go do some fun things that Tom would hate."
"Like shopping?"
Bill's smile lit the whole room.
"Yeah! I haven't went shopping with somebody in agaes! The boys never will go shopping with me."
"Alright, we can go to the mall tommorow!"
"Yep."
I went in Bill's room and made up a fluffy bed on the floor that was very comfortable.
"Your sleeping on the floor?"
"Yeah, I'm used to it."
"So you and your mom get in alot of fight?"
I plopped on my bed.
"Yeah. She won't except that I don't want to be like everybody else. I really hate that she doesn't like that. So now I can't be in her house unless I change."
Bill's smile faded.
"Wow. My mom never cared what we did. She was care-free, and let us do whatever we want to do."
I sighed.
"Lucky."
"I'd hate my mom if she would hate me for how I look like."
"That's why I leave home and go to Julia's house."
"Oh. That girl."
"Yeah... we always get to be freinds again in the end. She just doesn't want people to think she's wierd when she hangs around me."
An evil smiled came across Bill's face.
"What are you smiling about?"
"We should give her payback."
"What? She didn't do anything!"
"We can temporarely dye her perfect hair black, blue, green, red, any color we can imagine! Then change all her clothes with one pair of ripped jeans and some Funky clothes of yours. Then put on the same make-up I wear on her, waterproof of course, and paint her nails that long-lasting black and purple. It'll be the perfect revenge!"
"I don't know Bill, it sounds like fun, but I don't want to hurt her."
"And she didn't hurt you?"
I thought for a while. She did hurt me.
"Yes she did. Let's give her payback!"
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<3 <3 <3
LipsOfAnAngel
April 29th, 2008, 07:43 PM
mehr mehr bitte!
schrei.in.die.nacht
April 29th, 2008, 09:34 PM
ahh, payback...
such a wonderful word
now post more!
TexasGirlLovesTH
April 29th, 2008, 10:02 PM
YEAH!!! I was right!! I mean, honestly...who would NOT pick Bill's room? I know I would! ;)
More!!
PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!!!??? With Bill, Tom, Gustav, and Georg, covered in rainbow sprinkles, whipped cream, nuts, sexy sauce, and strawberries on top!
BlondPunk
May 1st, 2008, 04:40 PM
:]]]
More <3
Holly's POV
Bill smiled an evil smile.
"Alright then. Tommorow we have to go shopping for everything we need."
"This will be the best evil plan ever!"
"Yes! Now let's get some Waffels!"
I looked at the clock hanging from the living room.
"It's 7:00."
"So?"
"I guess I could make some...."
"Yay!"
All the sudden Tom came running through the door.
"Waffels? WHERE?!?"
He looked like a crazy animal searching for food.
"I'm making waffels. But not for Toms."
Tom's jaw dropped.
"But I love Waffels!"
He looked as if he were about to cry.
"I'm just kidding! You can have one."
"Only one?"
"Only if you're nice you'll get more."
Tom groaned and went back to his room.
"Sooo...what now?"
"Waffels!"
Bill's POV
Yay! Waffels! We went into the kitchen. I sat down on the table and watched Holly get all the ingredients out. In not time there were five Waffels on my plate. Then Tom came running in.
"Where are mine?"
Holly put a waffel about one inch long and two inches wide on plate, then sat it on the table.
"There you go!"
Tom looked at her in dibelief.
"I'm hungry woman! This miniture waffel is too small! I need more!"
Then Holly put some fresh hot waffels on the plate.
"There, that should be enogh."
Tom inhaled the waffels, but I ate them slower.
"They were pretty good!"
She glared at Tom.
"Pretty good?"
"No, they were really good."
She smiled and went into the living room, Tom following her.
Tom's POV
I followed her into the living room. She layed on the couch and looked at me.
"Are you following me?"
"What, me? No, I want to watch T.V."
Bill plopped himself on my favorite couch, and stuck his tounge out.
"Get off my couch Bill!"
"Make me!"
"Ugghhh...Is that all you guys do? Fight?"
"It's Tom who starts it."
"No, it's you."
He laughed at me.
"Shut up."
He smiled at me, not yet done laughing.
I sat down at her feet and turned on the T.V. Then the T.V. was boring.
"This is boring."
"Then why did you turn it on?"
Holly's POV
Pretty soon I got bored of watching the two fight, so I went to Bill's room. It had red walls, and was very clean. It had a full sized bed, a T.V., a black dresser, and a few other nic nacs. I plopped on the covers on the floor and fell asleep, listening to the twins fight.
LipsOfAnAngel
May 1st, 2008, 04:43 PM
oh mehr bitte!
TexasGirlLovesTH
May 1st, 2008, 04:50 PM
I wouldn't mind falling asleep to that! ;)
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 1st, 2008, 04:56 PM
I wouldn't mind falling asleep to that! ;)
me neither..
MORE!!!
BlondPunk
May 1st, 2008, 05:39 PM
:D
I'm glad you guys like it :]
....... :]
Holly's POV
I woke up to hearing the front door slam shut. Then I heard heavy footsteps coming. Then the bedroom door opened and Bill layed on the bed, putting his hands over his face.
I got up and walked over to him.
"What is it?"
"Tom...got mad at me...I don't know..why. And then...he started to...punch and...kick. And...we kept on fighting...and now...he's leaving."
He gasped every other secound for air. He took his hands off his face and sat up. I put my hand over his hand.
"It's going to be okay Bill, he'll come back."
He looked at me, his black make-up washing off his face. Tears streamed down his face.
"I never saw him that mad before. He also said...said..."
He buried his face in his knees and cried. I never saw him cry before. It was unusual to see him cry, he's always so happy on T.V. and everything. I got on the bed and hugged him.
"What did he say?"
"He said he...he was going to quit...with Tokio Hotel. He said he couldn't put up with all this...attention and...work."
I could barely hear what he said.
"I'm pretty sure he didn't mean it."
He looked up form his knees.
"He sounded very...serious."
He wiped his eyes and cried again. Was Tom really serious?
And was he really going to leave?
TexasGirlLovesTH
May 1st, 2008, 05:53 PM
WHAT!!!???
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Tom, don't leave!!!
Just because I would rather tap Bill, George, and Gustav (in that order ;) ) before I smash you, doesn't mean you have to quit!
Who else am I gonna make fun of? :D
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 1st, 2008, 06:53 PM
NOOOOOOO!!!
DONT QUIT TOM!!!!!
QUITTING IS FOR LOSERS!!!
ARE YOU A LOSER TOM?????
I DONT THINK SO!!!!!
BlondPunk
May 1st, 2008, 08:39 PM
Holly's POV(Next morning)
I was sitting on the couch, thinking. All the sudden, an idea came to my head.
"Bill, what if I talk to Tom? What if he'll tell me what's going on?"
Bill sighed, playing with his waffel.
"I guess you could try. Here's his number."
He scribled down his number on a newspaper sitting on the coffee table. I took it and when to Bill's room to get my cell phone. I enetered the number, took a deep breath, and punched the green call button.
"Hallo?"
"Hey Tom, it's Holly."
"Oh, hi."
"Tom, I need to talk to you. Bill is worried about you."
There was no answer on the other side.
"Tom?"
"Yeah?"
"Can I come to talk to you?"
"Yeah, I guess."
"Where?"
"At the Hampton inn next to Wal-Mart. Come at 4:00, I'll wait infront of the hotel.Don't bring Bill."
"Okay.I won't. Bye."
"Bye."
I punched the red button and set my cell phone down. I walked over to Bill, who was still playing with his waffel.
"He said I can meet him at 4:00, but you can't come."
He ripped the waffel in half.
"Okay."
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 2nd, 2008, 02:09 PM
i hope holly can
talk some sense into tom...
LipsOfAnAngel
May 2nd, 2008, 03:31 PM
awwww thats soo sad!!! mehr bitte!
LipsOfAnAngel
May 2nd, 2008, 03:32 PM
awwww thats soo sad!!! mehr bitte!
amandaaraujo
May 2nd, 2008, 04:01 PM
awwww poor billy i wonder what the fight was about :( :? can you wright one of the boys POVs to find out what got Tom so angry??llove your story so far and you made me laugh so hard i was weezing when Tom turned out wearing Pink boxers ahahahahahhh oh and i know how she feels about her appierence ii hate when people do that oh and my so caled friends also ditched me when they found out i liked TOkio hotel and started to wer thick eyeliner hmm guess there not real friends.
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 2nd, 2008, 04:43 PM
awwww poor billy i wonder what the fight was about :( :? can you wright one of the boys POVs to find out what got Tom so angry??llove your story so far and you made me laugh so hard i was weezing when Tom turned out wearing Pink boxers ahahahahahhh oh and i know how she feels about her appierence ii hate when people do that oh and my so caled friends also ditched me when they found out i liked TOkio hotel and started to wer thick eyeliner hmm guess there not real friends.
i hate "friends"
like that too.
why cant people
just accept other people?
amandaaraujo
May 2nd, 2008, 07:08 PM
awwww poor billy i wonder what the fight was about :( :? can you wright one of the boys POVs to find out what got Tom so angry??llove your story so far and you made me laugh so hard i was weezing when Tom turned out wearing Pink boxers ahahahahahhh oh and i know how she feels about her appierence ii hate when people do that oh and my so caled friends also ditched me when they found out i liked TOkio hotel and started to wer thick eyeliner hmm guess there not real friends.
i hate "friends"
like that too.
why cant people
just accept other people?
i know man oh well jus hopping i can get real friends well thaats a relief i gotthat off my mind :D im happy now cuz TH is coming to NYC and im going to see them hopefully meet them oh and if i get to meet them ill comment the storyies here to themm wohooo
RetteMich
May 2nd, 2008, 07:30 PM
mehr bitte
BlondPunk
May 2nd, 2008, 08:06 PM
:]
Hopefully this will help solve all of your questions <3
Holly's POV
I waited infront of the Old Hotel, wondering where he was. It was already 4:00. But he did come.
"Come on, let's go before somebody sees me again."
He took my hand and pulled me into his room. He sat down on the couch.
"Tom, what is wrong? You can't just hurt Bill like that, he's your brother! What's gotten into you?"
He gave me a hurt look.
"I don't know what I want. I'm tired of having people follow me to see what I'm doing. It's so overwhelming. I'm tired of bieng famous, and I'm tired of bieng followed."
Tom's POV
I got choked up on the last sentence. I really can't take it anymore. I feel so watched, I hate it.
TexasGirlLovesTH
May 2nd, 2008, 08:10 PM
Awwwwwwwwwwww. Now I feel bad for Tom! :(
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 2nd, 2008, 08:21 PM
awwwwwww
poor tom!!!!!!!!!
BlondPunk
May 2nd, 2008, 09:11 PM
Tom's POV
"Tom, it's okay that your stressed out, everyone gets overwhelmed at times. But you didn't have to let it all out on Bill."
"I know but..."
"But what? He's not eating, and he's just sitting around doing nothing! Tom, there's something wrong with him, and you know it!"
She was right, Bill never done that unless something was bothering him really badly.
Guys, I'm cutting it short cuz I'm kinda busy ;]
But more of the story will come tommooroow
I think.
..........
:]
amandaaraujo
May 2nd, 2008, 09:17 PM
oh ok if your busy but hmmm i really want to find out what happens
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 2nd, 2008, 09:20 PM
i really want to kno what happens...
but take your time if youre busy.
BlondPunk
May 2nd, 2008, 09:54 PM
Finnaly!
Okay, I only wrote "busy" cuz this annoying boy was watching every word I wrote, and was begging me to take him on a dirt bike ride T_T :]
Tom's POV
"Holly, I didn't mean what I said to him. I just couldn't think."
"Well, what did you say to him."
"I told him taht I couldn't put up with bieng around him, and that I didn't want to see him anymore. And I said that I was quitting. But I really didn't mean it! It just slipped out of my mouth!"
"I know you aren't going to quit, or?"
"No, it just came out. I felt like doing it, but I really won't. I know how much the band means to Bill and the others, and it means alot to me too."
"All you need is a vacation. Just, relax somewhere."
"I can't though, the people always finds out where we are and bother us. There is almost no vacation for us."
Holly's POV
I didn't know this was how Tom felt. I really want him to get back to bieng happy. This was definetley not the Tom that I see on the internet.
"Then you should go home, rest, do something."
"Yeah, maybe."
"So are you coming back with me, or are you staying."
He sighed.
"I guess I have to come. I don't want Bill to get worried."
He went in his car and I went in mine.
"Holly?"
"Yeah?"
"Is everything all my fault?"
"No Tom. It's not your fault."
He smiled and left for his car.
amandaaraujo
May 2nd, 2008, 10:20 PM
awwwwww keep writing pleeez can you update sooner hihi i just want to see bill and tom happy its killing me :D
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 2nd, 2008, 10:21 PM
awww, cheer up tom!
post more i love this story.
BlondPunk
May 3rd, 2008, 08:59 AM
Holly's POV
I held the door open for Tom. He went over to Bill. Bill was sleeping on the couch, still having his waffel in his hand.
"Don't wake him up. He didn't go to sleep last night. You have to wait until he wakes back up."
He nodded and walked around the house. Bill moved a little, but didn't wake up. I had a feeling it wouldn't be easy to wake him up either. I sat down and waited for him to wake up.
"How long will this take?"
Tom shook his head.
"I don't know."
Tom sat down next to me, but left enough space between us so that another person could sit there. He was growing impatient.
I'll continue soon!
<3
BlondPunk
May 3rd, 2008, 03:01 PM
Tom's POV
Finally after an hour of waiting, Bill woke up. We waited until he was really awake before I came back in. I went in and sat down next to him.
"Bill, I didn't mean what I said yesterday."
He nodded, and he knew what I meant.
"And I'm definetley not quitting. All I want is some peace, away from paparzi and crazy fan girls."
"Ja, I figured that's what you wanted, but I really didn't know. You were so mad, so I couldn't tell if you meant it or not."
Bill, bieng Bill, hugged me.
"Okay, you can stop hugging me now."
He let go. I was looking at the couch, and I spotted something. A waffel. I picked it up.
"Now what is this perfect waffel doing in between the cracks of a couch?"
"I don't know."
I wanted to eat it, but then Bill took it out of my hands and ate it.
"But now it's gone, in my stomach."
LipsOfAnAngel
May 3rd, 2008, 03:39 PM
awww its soo cute!!! mehr bitte!
cherry_kaulitz
May 3rd, 2008, 05:53 PM
MORE PLZ I LOVE IT BILL AND TOM ARE UBER CUTE
BlondPunk
May 3rd, 2008, 06:10 PM
Holly's POV
This is how I expected the twins to be. Funny, Happy, annoying each other but not in a mean way, and laughing at each other. They are so cute. I barely ever see Tom smile in pictures, and I barely see him laugh. But that's what I'm seeing right now, in front of me.
"Why did you eat my waffel?"
"It was mine!"
"But I found it, finders keepers!"
"Nein! It's my waffel!"
Tom found the other part of the waffel, and ate it.
"NEIN! Cough it back up!"
"No, it's mine now."
Soon they calmed down. They were crazy just a few minutes ago. REALLY crazy. Bill was curled up on the couch, sleeping. Tom was about to fall asleep. And I was on the floor, falling asleep too.
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I woke up to the boys staring at me, saying something.
"Are you okay?"
"What? Why?"
Bill let out a sigh of relief.
:]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]
LipsOfAnAngel
May 3rd, 2008, 07:12 PM
WAAAASS!!!!!! WAS WAS WAS!!! mehr bitte!
[translation for was: what]
DeeDee
May 3rd, 2008, 08:14 PM
aww bless they made up
mehr bitte hun
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 4th, 2008, 01:03 PM
yay!!
they made up!!!
BlondPunk
May 4th, 2008, 03:38 PM
Holly's POV
"Well, Bill kinda tripped over you just a few seconds ago."
"Really?"
"Yeah. So are you sure your okay?"
"Yeah... but how did you trip over me?"
"I was trying to get by, but Tom pushed me, and then I tripped. I really didn't mean to..."
Bill looked at me innocently, while Tom was sitting there smiling his evil smile.
"No it's okay."
"Okay."
He smiled and went back to what he was doing. I got up and got ready for the day.
"Can we go to the mall today?"
"No! The mall sucks!"
"How do you know?"
"Because. I hate shopping."
"Uhhh...Tom! Don't be so negative! You'll just have to go through the torture of the mall anyways."
"Great."
"So, are you ready to go?"
"Yeah."
"Great! Then let's go!"
LipsOfAnAngel
May 4th, 2008, 03:51 PM
mehr bitte!
BlondPunk
May 6th, 2008, 08:08 PM
Bill's POV
The mall was a little dissapointing, it was old, and not what I was used to. But maybe it'll have some cool stores.
The first store I went to was Hot Topic, I remember it from New York. Tom was looking everywhere for hats, but only found a few. I found bunches of Belts, jewelery, pants, and shirts. Holly had already found a shirt when we entered the store. Then I found an awesome belt. It was red and had black stars on it. It also had a long silver chain from the back to the side. I was so close to getting it, but Holly grabbed it first.
"Hey! I wanted that!"
"I got it first. Anyways, there's another one right behind it."
I picked up the identical belt and added it to my pile of clothes on the couter.
"I think that's enough, for this store."
The cashier had black hair with blonde highlights, and a few piercing. She gave me a horrified look when I was ready to pay for all my clothes. It took the poor girl a long time before I was ready to give her the money. She handed three bags full of clothes to me.
"I hope you have a bad day."
That was all she said to us as we left the store.
"Why did she say that?"
Holly laughed.
"That's what the people do there." [[( or at least at mine they do)]]
"Oh, that's not nice."
Tom was looking at his hats the whole time. We went to a few other stores, but Holly begged us not to go Hollister. We got something to drink and sat down. That's when Holly's freind, Julia, and her boyfreind came over to see her.
"Hey wierdo, what's up?"
Holly smiled and looked up from her drink.
"How about you two go into some prep store, like Hollister or Abrecombie and Fitch?"
Oh great.
Holly's POV
Stupid girl, when will she get the hint I don't want her in my life anymore? She and her boyfreind just need to go do some prep things and leave me alone.
"For your information, we already went there. And I see you wierdos went to Hot Topic."
"Oh, yeah we did. It was fun too."
"Well, I hope you losers have fun. Bye-bye!"
Prep.
LipsOfAnAngel
May 6th, 2008, 08:38 PM
*****. mehr bitte!
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 6th, 2008, 08:55 PM
julia's a *****....lol
amandaaraujo
May 6th, 2008, 10:30 PM
oooommmmgggg i cant beleive i've missed sooo much (I BLAME SCHOOL UGGGHGHGHHG) hihi update reall soon!!!!!
BlondPunk
May 7th, 2008, 04:40 PM
oooommmmgggg i cant beleive i've missed sooo much (I BLAME SCHOOL UGGGHGHGHHG) hihi update reall soon!!!!!
School is the blame for everything.
It makes people like me stupid... If you understand that.
And yes, Julia is a *****.
BlondPunk
May 7th, 2008, 05:51 PM
Holly's POV
Julia's boyfreind glared at me.
"Don't mess with Julia, okay? If you ever, EVER, hurt her from the inside or outside, I'll get you."
"I'm not scared of you!"
I took a sip from my drink and looked at the giant football player. He was very strong, but really, he doesn't scare me.
"Oh really?"
"Yeah, really."
He left and went to Julia.
Bill's POV
I can't believe Holly isn't scared of Julia's boyfreind! She doesn't show any fear, and no Emotion towards people. She's so cool, I wish I would be as tough as her.
"So, you want to go now?"
"Yeah, don't want to run into those creeps again. Anyways, I think if we go in any other stores Bill's gonna be broke."
"It's not like you didn't buy alot either."
We went in the car and made our way home. We parked in the garage and got out. I went to my room and unpacked all of my clothes. Holly put her clothes on her side of my closet.
"I can't saty here forever, this house is only big enough for you two. I have to go back home one of these days."
"No, it's really no problem for you to stay here."
"My mom will be wondering where I am though."
"You don't have to go back yet, but if you ever think you want to go back you can."
She nodded and went over to the livngroom couch and layed down. She closed her eyes and fell asleep.
<3ByYourSide<3
May 7th, 2008, 06:17 PM
i love this story! mehr bitte!!!
LipsOfAnAngel
May 7th, 2008, 07:07 PM
mehr bitte!
amandaaraujo
May 7th, 2008, 07:15 PM
AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWW keep wrinting adnd pleeeez update soon
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 8th, 2008, 04:39 PM
love it.
more.
BlondPunk
May 8th, 2008, 07:49 PM
Holly's POV
"I wish you were more like your sister. Why do you have to be so wierd Holly?"
I glared at mt mom.
"Because this is the way I want to be, I like myself this way. If you won't except this, than fine. Because this is the last time I'll ever see you."
She smirked.
"You'll always be a creepy little Goth-Emo-Punk girl. You won't ever have freinds. They all hate you because of the way you dress. Can't you just be normal?"
"Can't you just except the fact that I am who, ho, and what I am? Is it so hard?!?!?!?"
Tears were running down my face.
"Nobody loves you, Not even I love you Holly!"
"Shut up!"
"I HATE YOU! I HATE YOU SO MUCH! WHY CAN'T YOU JUST BE LIKE EVERYONE ELSE! I HATE YOU!!!"
"SHUT UP!"
"I WISH YOU WEREN'T MY CHILD! I HATE YOU!!!"
I woke up, tears coming down my face. It was only a nightmare, but it really hapened. It was a fight between me and my mom. I felt Somebody put there hand on my shoulder.
"It's okay, it was only a dream."
Tom was sitting next to me. I hugged him.
"I know, but the dream really did happen. It wasn't just a dream. It was a fight between my mom. She...said she...wished I wasn't her...daughter, and that she..hated me."
"But it's over, it won't happpen again."
"I wish I could believe that, but my mom really does hate me."
I didn't know why this upset me so much. Maybe it was because I never had somebody really say that they love me.
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 8th, 2008, 07:53 PM
awww that chapter was sad....
DeeDee
May 9th, 2008, 12:40 PM
awww poor girl
mehr hun bitte
LipsOfAnAngel
May 9th, 2008, 03:18 PM
*tear* mehr bitte!
Tokio_Hotel_Luv3r
May 10th, 2008, 05:35 PM
***** mom.....lol - BIGGEST FAN I LIEBE YOUR STORY!!!
BlondPunk
May 10th, 2008, 07:54 PM
:]
Sorry for the wait, my brain is dying :]
Holly's POV
"Go back to sleep."
I nodded my head and Tom walked back over to the floor where he was sleeping before.
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I woke up the next morning to Bill shaking me awake.
"Come on! Wake up! We have to leave in an hour!"
I rubbed my eyes and looked at Bill.
"Go where?"
"School!"
I tore the covers off of me and hurried to Bill's room, getting my clothes. Then I went to the bathroom. I took a shower, put on my clothes, and then did my hair. I got my stuff and headed for the car. I did my make up in there. We made it to school just in time. We had ten minutes until first period started. That's when I met her.
It was a girl who was at her locker, taking out her things. I went over to her, seeing that she wasn't a preppy little girl.
"Hi, I'm Holly. Who are you?"
The girl stood up. She was much shorter than I was.
"Hi. I'm Kayla. Nice to meet you."
"So where are you from?"
"I'm from Alabama."
"Cool."
I looked at her schedule. She had me for first, fourth, and last period.
"We have first, fourth and last period together. You can hang out with me if you want."
Kayla nodded.
"That sounds cool."
We went over to Bill and Tom's locker.
Tom's POV
Holly came to us, bringing some girl with her. She had redish-brownish hair, green-brown eyes, and was really short.
"Hey guys, this is Kayla. She's new here."
"Hey Kayla."
She looked at me and Bill, as if confused.
"You guys look familiar...aren't you Tokio Hotel?"
"Yeah..."
"My freind is obsessed with you guys."
"Really?"
"Yeah, so is my sister."
"How old is your sister?"
"My sister is four minutes younger than me."
"So you guys are twins?"
"Yeah."
Holly's POV
I think I saw her sister coming, and they were nothing alike. Her sister had balck hair with red, blue and white highlights. She came towards Kayla.
"Hey people, I'm Kaitlyn."
She was really open.
"That's my sister."
She looked at Bill.
"Oh My God! I know you! You guys are the awesomest band in the world!"
Kayla laughed.
"I told you she was obsessed."
"I'm not obsessed with them!"
Bill laughed. I could tell that Kaitly's heart was melting. Bill whispered to Tom something in German. Then Tom smiled and nodded. I smiled, understanding what Bill said. Bill saw that I knew. He gave me the "you-better-not-tell-her" look. I waited for them to already make there way to class. Kaitlyn had the same schedule as Kayla.
"I know what he said."
"What did he say?"
"He said that he thinks you guys are cute."
amandaaraujo
May 11th, 2008, 03:00 AM
oooommmmgggg i cant beleive i've missed sooo much (I BLAME SCHOOL UGGGHGHGHHG) hihi update reall soon!!!!!
School is the blame for everything.
It makes people like me stupid... If you understand that.
And yes, Julia is a *****.
ahahahah i know hihihi omg i missed soo much again ughghghghg school*what am i going todo??*ahhaha keep writnnggggggwoooooooww
BlondPunk
May 11th, 2008, 08:30 AM
oooommmmgggg i cant beleive i've missed sooo much (I BLAME SCHOOL UGGGHGHGHHG) hihi update reall soon!!!!!
School is the blame for everything.
It makes people like me stupid... If you understand that.
And yes, Julia is a *****.
ahahahah i know hihihi omg i missed soo much again ughghghghg school*what am i going todo??*ahhaha keep writnnggggggwoooooooww
You miss alot because they are more things to do in life besides sitting on the computer???
That's what my excuse is =P
LipsOfAnAngel
May 11th, 2008, 10:28 AM
nice nice nice!! mehr bitte!
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 11th, 2008, 10:36 AM
yay you updated!
BlondPunk
May 11th, 2008, 08:34 PM
Bill's POV
Tom already made his way to the seat in the corner. Poor Tom, the seat was way too small, and he was one of the tallest, next to me. I pointed at him and laughed. He glared at me, but ended up smiling. Julia sat further up front, talking to some cheer-leaders and such. Holly just came in the classroom with Kayla and Kaitlyn. They all sat down in the empty row in front of me. Then the Teacher came in.
"Good morning class, my name is Mrs. Faar. The reason I'm saying my name is because I see we have two new students."
Everybody stred at the twins.
"Please, introduce your selves."
Kaitlyn stood up.
"My name is Kaitlyn. That's my twin sister Kayla."
"Very nice to meet you."
I could tell the teacher didn't like them.
"I would like for Kayla to sit next to Bill please, and Kaitlyn, please trade places with..."
:]
Okay guys, If you want to be in the story, please answer the following: I need 2 people!!!
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Appereance:
Personality:
Holly's freind or Foe?:
Favorite subject:
Type of Family:
Bitte und Danke :] :] :]
riza13
May 11th, 2008, 11:35 PM
hahaha... another twins...
i dont think you will like my character to be in your story, but still here:
Name: riza (can i use this name?)
Age: what ever the story needs me to be, but it will be nice if she is younger than holly and the others
Gender: female
Appereance: black hair until the back of the shoulder, fair skin, and tall maybe like holly, and brown eyes, and skinny even she eats a lot
Personality: gets along with other people very well...
open minded...
treasures her friends and family...
she plays the drums and has a band
loves rock music, and always with her mp3 player
Holly's freind or Foe?: friend
Favorite subject: math (i want her to be a geek XD but a cool one)
Type of Family: only with her mom but they love and understands each other. his dad left her mom...
but still your decision :D
LipsOfAnAngel
May 12th, 2008, 03:30 PM
oh god!
Name: Nikki
Age: 17
Gender: female
Appereance: 5'6". short brown hair, blue-grey eyes, freckles, alittle overweight
Personality: happy, but can be depressive, funny, crazy!
Holly's freind or Foe?: oh friend!
Favorite subject: music!
Type of Family: devorsed parents, live back and forth between mom and dad
BlondPunk
May 12th, 2008, 04:27 PM
Thank you!!!
:]]]
And riza is a cool name :]
I'll update asap!
BlondPunk
May 12th, 2008, 05:54 PM
Holly's POV
Please not Julia please not Julia!
"...Julia."
I groaned and pounded my fist on the table. Julia came over all preppy and happy and sat down next to me, giving me the fakest smile in the world.
"We are going to have so much fun together!"
"Dear god please get me away from this moran, please!"
I turned my attention towards Bill, who was smiling.
"What are you smiling about Sonic?"
"Sonic?"
"Oh! I forgot to tell you me and the K's made up a nick-name for you- Sonic. You know, Sonic the hedgehog..."
"Oh, okay."
I don't think he liked that. Jlia smiled at me again.
"Stop smiling, it makes you look like a brainwashed barbie."
"Well, frowning all the time gives you wrinkles."
I ignored her and took out a sheet of paper and wrote a note to Kaitlyn and Kayla, telling them all about Julia. Once hey read the note, Kaitlyn leaned back and mouthed the words "Julia sounds like a B***ch."
"I know!" I mouthed back.
Finally the torcher ended. I walked up to the K's and just started ranting about Julia.
"Did you see how she talked to me the whole period? She wouldn't leave me alone! And she read the notes I was writing! And then she had to tell the teacher I was passing notes. I swear I'll kill her!!!"
"Woah...calm Holly! Just ignore her. What she wants is for you to snap, that's why she's doing it."
What Tom said made sense. He's right, she wants me to beat her up o that I'll get expelled. Then a teacher came up to me.
"Holly, I heard from your teacher that you've been doing really well lately. Because of your hard work, we will eliminate that week of I.S.S."
I completely forgot about that. The teacher left to break up a fight between two boys.
"Yeah, you're right Tom."
He smiled.
"Well, we don't have next period together, so I guess I'll see you at lunch."
"Yep!"
We made our way to the class room. I sat down in my usual spot, and then a girl with black hair that ended on the back on her shoulder, fair skin, and brown eyes came in. She was skinny, and looked about as tall as me, maybe taller than me. She looked really nice.
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 12th, 2008, 06:03 PM
is it too late for me to want to be in the story?????
Name: sedona
Age: im 14, but whatever age will fit the story is fine
Gender: female
Appereance: green eyes, faded black hair
Personality: hyper and friendly, not afraid to speak my mind and hurt feelings though
Holly's freind or Foe?: hmmm friend
Favorite subject: does orchestra count?
Type of Family: nice parents that let me get away with anything
BlondPunk
May 12th, 2008, 06:11 PM
is it too late for me to want to be in the story?????
Name: sedona
Age: im 14, but whatever age will fit the story is fine
Gender: female
Appereance: green eyes, faded black hair
Personality: hyper and friendly, not afraid to speak my mind and hurt feelings though
Holly's freind or Foe?: hmmm friend
Favorite subject: does orchestra count?
Type of Family: nice parents that let me get away with anything
I can squeeze you in :]
But this is the last character, I don't need any more :]
Sorry others :]
AND the G's are coming soon :]
LipsOfAnAngel
May 12th, 2008, 06:15 PM
sweet chappy! mehr bitte!
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 12th, 2008, 06:18 PM
is it too late for me to want to be in the story?????
Name: sedona
Age: im 14, but whatever age will fit the story is fine
Gender: female
Appereance: green eyes, faded black hair
Personality: hyper and friendly, not afraid to speak my mind and hurt feelings though
Holly's freind or Foe?: hmmm friend
Favorite subject: does orchestra count?
Type of Family: nice parents that let me get away with anything
I can squeeze you in :]
But this is the last character, I don't need any more :]
Sorry others :]
AND the G's are coming soon :]
YAY!
berthaxoxo
May 12th, 2008, 08:56 PM
I love your story!!
It's so cool!!
Hope you keep writing more and more
I just have a question for u?
does Julia really exist?
and if she do she's so stupid!!
riza13
May 12th, 2008, 11:11 PM
YAY! riza's made an appearance!
lol im just freaking out again
btw, upadate soon :D
BlondPunk
May 13th, 2008, 04:30 PM
I love your story!!
It's so cool!!
Hope you keep writing more and more
I just have a question for u?
does Julia really exist?
and if she do she's so stupid!!
Kinda...
This story does relate to me in some way, but my mom isn't THAT mean :]
But my mom is VETY disapointed that I'm not a preppy little girl, and more of a Punk-Goth-maybe Emo-ish girl.
But there is a girl in my class that was freinds with me, but once I found new freinds she decided that she hated me.
But she has a different name. :]
BlondPunk
May 13th, 2008, 05:50 PM
Tom's POV
Holly got up and introduced herself to the girl that came in.
"Hey, I'm Holly."
"Hi, I'm riza."
"Riza is an awesome name."
Holly sat dwon and in vited riza to sit down next to her. When she looked back she looked a little confused and pointed at me and Bill.
"You guys look so familiar..."
"Oh, we're Tokio Hotel."
"Yeah! I heard about you guys!"
Then she turned around and talked nonstop about things with Holly. I turned over to Bill.
"They talk to fast, and too much."
"Ja, but that's something they like to do. Talk."
"That's something you like to do to Bill."
He rolled his eyes. Then Julia's boyfreind came up to me.
"You!"
He pointed his finger in my face.
"What?"
"I want you to help us."
"What?"
"Listen, I want to get things right with you. I broke up with Julia, because I saw how she treated others. It was just wrong. I really want help with..."
DUN DUN DUN!
Next chapther will be frightining!!!
just an FYI!!!
:]
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 13th, 2008, 05:52 PM
frightening is good!
maybe....
blah! i wanna see what happens!
LipsOfAnAngel
May 13th, 2008, 06:00 PM
duuude!! major cliffhanger. i don't like that. mehr bitte!
BlondPunk
May 13th, 2008, 06:02 PM
:]]]]]]]]]]]]]]
You will hate me after the next chapter :]
TexasGirlLovesTH
May 13th, 2008, 06:12 PM
DUDE!!!! :o
You can't leave me hanging like this!!!
PLEASE don't make me get out the hunting rifle. *loads and cocks rifle* Too late! 8-)
*points rifle at BlondPunk* Don't make me use this! :twisted:
UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 13th, 2008, 06:17 PM
DUDE!!!! :o
You can't leave me hanging like this!!!
PLEASE don't make me get out the hunting rifle. *loads and cocks rifle* Too late! 8-)
*points rifle at BlondPunk* Don't make me use this! :twisted:
UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE
lmao.
youre funny
BlondPunk
May 13th, 2008, 06:58 PM
O_o
UPDATING!!!
BlondPunk
May 13th, 2008, 07:03 PM
Tom's POV
The guy was starting to scare me.
"Help with what?"
He leaned over and whispered something in my ear. And it scared me.
"Listen, I know you live with Holly and all. Nobody knows this okay, so can you keep this a secret?"
I guess I can trust him.
"Yeah, sure."
He smiled. Then he whispered something in my ear again.
"I...I don't know how to say this...but for a long time now, I really...like Holly. You know what I mean, right?"
"Yeah."
"I was wondering if you could...find out what she likes, and maybe...help me get with her together."
I stared at him in disbelief, then looked over to Holly.
Why would he like Holly? Not that she's ugly...but I...I wanted to get with her together.
LipsOfAnAngel
May 13th, 2008, 07:08 PM
:o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o
:o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o
:o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o
:o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o
:o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o
:o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o
mehr bitte! :o
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 13th, 2008, 07:23 PM
:shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock:
holy *******!
more!!!!!!!!!
BlondPunk
May 13th, 2008, 07:28 PM
I told you it would be frightning ;)
:]
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 13th, 2008, 07:49 PM
I told you it would be frightning ;)
:]
i was very frightened.
*hides under desk*
BlondPunk
May 13th, 2008, 08:36 PM
Okay, just an FYI
The twins= Bill and Tom
The K's= Kayla and Kaitlyn
:]]]]
Tom's POV(continued)
But I didn't want to get on his bad side.
"Yeah, I'll help. But don't get mad if Holly doesn't like you."
"But you can't just tell her."
"Why not?"
"Because."
Well, I'm going to do it that way anyways. Finally lunch came around, and we were introduced to Riza. She was cool.
Holly, the K's, and Riza sat together. Me and Bill sat a few seats away from them. Then Julia's boyfreind came by and sat next to us.
"I never got your name."
He sat infront of me.
"Oh, I'm Tom."
"Jerry."
I was scared of this guy. Why was he all the usdden hanging around me? It was all day like this, he was talking to me, telling me all about football and wrestling. He said I should try out for football, but I don't think a guy with dreads and football mix.
Holly's POV
New students seemed to come out of nowhere. The new preps were getting along with all the others. Then a girl with short brown hair and blueish-grayish eyes decides to sit with us. She introduced herself.
"Hi, I'm Nikki!"
"Hi, I'm Holly, This is Kayla, Kailtyn, and Riza."
"Hi!"
She had a smile on her face, and started talking.
"So Nikki, what brought you here?"
"Oh, my dad moved here because he got a job promotion. Right now I'm living with him, but next month I'm going back to my mom. It used to be weekley, but now since my dad moved to a different state we do it monthly."
"Oh...so your parents are divorced?"
"Yeah."
I smiled.
"I used to live with only my mom and sister, but now I moved in with the twins."
I pointed at Bill and Tom.
"Are your parents divorced too?"
"No."
"Wheres your dad?"
It felt like a rock was in my throat.
"My dad...he...died."
My voice sounded hoarse. I could tell the twins heard.
"Oh...I'm sorry..."
The others also said there apologies.
"When did he die?"
"Almost a year ago."
I hated this pittied feeling. They were all pittying me, even the twins.
"How did he die?"
I hated answering this question.
"He...commited suicide."
BlondPunk
May 13th, 2008, 08:37 PM
DUDE!!!! :o
You can't leave me hanging like this!!!
PLEASE don't make me get out the hunting rifle. *loads and cocks rifle* Too late! 8-)
*points rifle at BlondPunk* Don't make me use this! :twisted:
UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE
Pleasa don't shoot me PLEASE!!! :[
LOL
You can call me Yana :]
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 13th, 2008, 08:52 PM
wdriguherhviluershvbk!!!!!!
nein!!!
suicide is BADDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!
LipsOfAnAngel
May 13th, 2008, 09:01 PM
*gasp* omg! and i'm listening to a sadish song right now too! but yay!!! i'm in the story!!! yay!!!!! mehr bitte! :geek:
amandaaraujo
May 13th, 2008, 10:10 PM
:( :( thats soo sad
riza13
May 13th, 2008, 11:20 PM
:shock: wow... that was unexpected..
berthaxoxo
May 14th, 2008, 09:58 PM
I love your story!!
It's so cool!!
Hope you keep writing more and more
I just have a question for u?
does Julia really exist?
and if she do she's so stupid!!
Kinda...
This story does relate to me in some way, but my mom isn't THAT mean :]
But my mom is VETY disapointed that I'm not a preppy little girl, and more of a Punk-Goth-maybe Emo-ish girl.
But there is a girl in my class that was freinds with me, but once I found new freinds she decided that she hated me.
But she has a different name. :]
Oh ok!! well thank God that your life isnt that hard like in the story!! Yeah my mom is kinda dissapointed of me too but I'm not emo!!
berthaxoxo
May 14th, 2008, 10:08 PM
OMTH!! I never expected that your story rocks!!
Post soon please!!
TexasGirlLovesTH
May 15th, 2008, 11:07 AM
*puts rifle away*
Sorry about that, Yana. :? I'm a cancer, and we tend to get overemotional. :roll:
But anyway...OHMYGOD!!!!! That was so unexpected.
Oh, the DRAMA! *smacks head with hand and faints*
BlondPunk
May 16th, 2008, 05:00 PM
Sorry, I wasn't allowed on the computer yesterday :[
Holly's POV
Everybody gave me a shocked look.
"How can you just say it like that? I wouldn't be able to...I'd probably start crying."
The rock in my throat got heavier. It is really hard to just say it without crying. But I know I can hold back the tears...I did it plenty of times, so I can do it now too.
I kept quite. Then Bill changed the subject.
"So Holly. This weekend we'll start the first part of the video for Helig. Is that okay?"
"Yeah...I have nothing better to do."
"And Georg and Gustav are coming in two days."
Tom's POV
"Ja, the G's are cool, but me and Bill are cooler."
Holly tried to smile, but I see that changing the subject won't help.
"So Tom, we'll meet in the 20 minute break. How about we meet at the pizza place across the street?"
"Sure."
"Good. See you there."
Jerry got up and left the table. He was scaring me.
LipsOfAnAngel
May 16th, 2008, 05:03 PM
nice, mehr bitte!
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 16th, 2008, 10:30 PM
yay you updated!!!!!!
riza13
May 16th, 2008, 10:42 PM
thanks for the update
more :D
berthaxoxo
May 16th, 2008, 10:46 PM
Thanks 4 updating!!
BlondPunk
May 17th, 2008, 10:21 AM
I have to sneak o the computer...I'm grounded from it :]
And I'm really sorry for all the waiting you have to do :]
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 17th, 2008, 12:23 PM
I have to sneak o the computer...I'm grounded from it :]
And I'm really sorry for all the waiting you have to do :]
thats okay...ill be patient...
BlondPunk
May 17th, 2008, 06:52 PM
:]]]]
Sneaking on :]
Bill's POV
I wonder what Jerry wanted with Tom. We all made our way to our next class. Only Nikki had the next class with us. It ended quick too...and then we had a twenty-minute break. I finally had a chance to talk to Tom.
"Tom, what is Jerry doing?"
Tom shook his head.
"I promised to keep it a secret."
"But Tom! You saw what he did to us..."
"I know, but if he really changed his mind I don't want to get on his bad side."
"Tom, I won't tell anybody. I have nobody to tell."
"Okay, okay. I have to help him get together with Holly."
I laughed. How stupid of him! He'll never get Holly!
"But Holly hates Jerry."
"I know. It's going to be hard for me to get them together."
"Yeah, it's hard to do that when the other person doesn't like him."
"That's not the hard part..."
"Then what is the hard part?"
"I...I...never mind. It doesn't matter."
"Yes it does Tom."
"No it doesn't! I gotta go, see ya."
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 17th, 2008, 06:59 PM
yay for updating!
amandaaraujo
May 17th, 2008, 08:17 PM
Yay you updated are you still grounded?
BlondPunk
May 17th, 2008, 08:24 PM
Yay you updated are you still grounded?
Yes.
But right now my mom is sleeping :]
So I'm sneaking on :]
again
BlondPunk
May 17th, 2008, 08:47 PM
Tom's POV
I made my way to the area behind the gym. Then Jerry pulled me in.
"Hey. Sup'?"
"Uhmm, nothing much, you?"
"I'm great. I need to know some things about Holly. What she likes, what she doesn't like. You think you can do that dreads?"
"Yeah, I can do that. Is dreads my new nickname now or something?"
"The whole school is calling you dreads."
"So people are talking behind my back?"
"Yeah...but some really like you."
"As long as they don't hate me."
"Yeah. So, dreads, what would you think of joining the football team?"
"Me? Football? No way."
"You'd be a great offense, I'm sure."
"Listen, I'm sorry Jerry, but I have no clue how to play football. To tell the truth...I hate football. I hate bieng outside."
"I see. Catch ya later dreads. And remember Holly."
"I'll remember."
He left, shoving me into the wall.
Holly's POV
I think I was pretty depressing the rest of the day. We all went home and I put my stuff in a croner and layed on the couch. I felt so...sad. I'm happy I made new freinds, yet I'm sad. I turned on my side. I remember the day he died.
[this is her emory of that day]
I was in the living room, watching T.V. when my mom and Dad were fighting again.
"YOU NEVER HELP ME WITH ANYTHING HENRY! I'M SICK AN YOU DON'T EVEN VACUM THE STAIRS OR DO THE DISHWASHER LIKE I TOLD YOU!"
"JENNY! I HAD OTHER THINGS TO DO!"
"YEAH, YOU COULD'VE TAKEN OUT THE TRASH!"
"I'M SICK OF FIGHTING WITH YOU!"
He took his wedding ring and trew it on the floor, making a dent on the wood.
"WELL I'M SICK OF LIVING WITH YOU!"
My dad ran upsatairs, and then came back downstairs, glaring at my mom. He went over to me and hugged me tightly.
"Holly, I want you to know that I'll love you forever."
I smiled.
"I love you too dad."
He went to the door and said one last thing.
"See you in ****."
That was my last memory of him. A few hours later a police found him dead in his car.
[end of reeberance]
I ctried really hard not to cry after that, but I couldn't stop it.
Tom's POV
Holly layed on the couch. I streched and got something to drink. When I came back in she was crying. I sat my drink down and went over to her.
"Holly, what's wrong?"
She kept on crying. I hugged her. After a few minutes she stopped crying.
"Why are you crying?"
"It was just... a memory."
"Of your mom?"
"No. Of my dad."
"Oh."
She told me the story, and nded up crying again. After hearing that. I could've cried too.
LipsOfAnAngel
May 17th, 2008, 10:37 PM
oh my. mehr bitte!
amandaaraujo
May 18th, 2008, 01:31 AM
aaw poor holly :cry: :cry: im crying now ..... please update soon :( im now sad too. oh and sneak n as much as you can :) to update you uberamazing story :D
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 18th, 2008, 05:21 PM
poor holly! that was so sad!
BlondPunk
May 19th, 2008, 04:53 PM
Holly's POV
I hate crying in front of people. It makes me feel like little kid. Tom hugged me again.
"It's okay, please stop crying Holly. If you keep on crying I'm going to start crying."
I smilied a little.
Tom's POV
It's good that she stopped crying and smiled. Then the doorbell rang.
"I'll get it."
I opened the door to find a woman. She looked old and ragged. She had pieces of dark brown hair stick out from her frizzy ponytail. She had the same green-brown eyes like Holly did, and her mouth was straighter than a line. She looked mad. She was skinny, wearing a white tank top and blue jogging pants. A hello-kitty tatto was on her left arm, and another Hello-Kitty tatto on her back. I knew who that crossed-armed mad-faced woman was.
amandaaraujo
May 19th, 2008, 05:12 PM
omg is that her mother????? why is she angry uhoh what is she going to do to Tom???? ahhhh suspenss=eee
LipsOfAnAngel
May 19th, 2008, 05:14 PM
oh boy! mehr bitte!
BlondPunk
May 19th, 2008, 08:01 PM
Tom's POV
I looked at Holly than looked at the woman.
"Hi."
That's all I said.
"Hello. I heard from a freind of my daughter's, Julia, that she was staying here with you."
[color=#8000FF]:[
Can't write anymore because my mom is back.
Rude or?
:[
jklnl;lo0olo
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 19th, 2008, 08:13 PM
is her mom gonna get all psycho crazy mad?
MORE!!
BlondPunk
May 19th, 2008, 08:29 PM
Sorry :]
My mom kicked me of the computer, but now I'm back on :]
Holly's POV
I recognized that voice immeadiently. It was my mom. I sank into the couch.
"Holly Marie Keeler, get your *** here. NOW!"
I got up and sludged to the door.
"Young lady what were you thinking? Living with two boys? I don't think so!"
All the sudden Bill came out of his room, rubbing his eyes from his nap.
"Oh, so now you're living with three people? Is this one of the other boys girlfreind? Is this the girl that influenced you to be Emo?"
She pointed at Bill. He looked at my mom, shocked.
"Mom, that's Bill. He's a boy. And I'm NOT EMO! And why are you here for me? Huh? You said you don't want to see me up until I change and act more like Helen! Didn't you?"
"Yes Holly, I did say that. But after hearing that you were living with two boys,I had to take you back."
"Well I'm not going back!"
"Holly, I'm your mother. You do as I tell you do and get in my car RIGH THIS INSTANT!"
Her voice was sharp and grew louder each word. I stayed where I was, crossed my arms, and laughed a little.
"I...am...not...going..with..you. Do you not understand that."
She stared at me with disbelief, then smiled and laughed a little.
"You don't talk to your mother like that Holly. NOW GET IN THE CAR!"
"I..."
"GET IN THE ****ING CAR NOW HOLLY!!!"
"I DON'T WANT TO!!!"
Then she slapped me right across the face. She grabbed me by my shirt and pulled me back up.
"Now Holly. If you don't get in the car I'll have to call the police. You don't want that, now do you? I don't think so."
I felt my cheek. And burned to touch it. I was really mad. My mom was waiting for me at the door. I went over to her and looked her in the eyes.
"Mom, you never, NEVER, told me that you loved me. When you did, you didn't mean it. I'm going to be eighteen next month, I'm old enough to take care of myself. You ever wanted me. The only reason you want me is because you don't want me to live here. You don't want me to have any fun, you don't wan tme to be the way I want to be. You know what mom? I hate you."
She stood there, her straight-lined mouth that she's so famous for turned into a frown.
"Holly, get in the Car, Now!"
I grabbed my purse and shoved her away from the door, running as fast as I could. I don't want to live with her anymore. I kept on running, turning to run in the forest.
I know she isn't sporty enough to run after me, but I could tell I was bieng followed.
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 19th, 2008, 09:17 PM
that was AWESOME
LipsOfAnAngel
May 19th, 2008, 09:20 PM
oh boy, please let it be bill following her. mehr bitte!
amandaaraujo
May 19th, 2008, 09:41 PM
omg kkk ill wait hihihi
BlondPunk
May 20th, 2008, 05:04 PM
Holly's POV
In the distance I heard my mom yell "GET BACK HERE!"
I don't know who was following me, but I wasn't going to stop running for nothing. I was already pretty deep in the forest, but I could hear crunching footsteps from far behind. I couldn't keep on running. I kept on going and found a nice spot behind the trees to hide. I layed down, out of breath. I realized I dropped my purse, but I wasn't going to get it back now. I ran to the only safe place that I knew of. The abandoned Hospital.
"Holly? Holly! Where are you?"
I know they were looking for me, but they know I'll come back. I ran, following the trees spray painted in the order Orange, Green, Red, Orange, Blue. An easier way to remember is OGROB.I came to the last blue, dodged some guards, and snuck in the broken window. I forgot my flashlight, so I had to saty against the wall. It was wierd how there was still furniture in the Hospital, and how the hallways were flooded with water. Graffitti is all over the walls, in one area my dad did graffitti. He told me he used go here and get drunk on the weekends. I walked around, finding the usuall hangout. I heard other voices, and they must've heard me because they stopped talking.
"Do you think somebody's in here John?"
"I don't know Steve, but if so, It's our lucky day."
Hobos. I heard of John and Steve in school. I thought they were just some joke, but I guess they really were real. I heard that they've been in every abandoned buliding in this city. I also heard stories about them raping people, or even killing people. I was too scared to find out, so I stayed where I was. They whispered something, then laughed a little, then made their way to the door, the one I was standing next to.
amandaaraujo
May 20th, 2008, 05:15 PM
holy shiesse holy crap holy **** HOLLY RUNNNNNNNN omg someone save her please im crying right now im so scared for her ahhhhhhhh
BlondPunk
May 20th, 2008, 06:48 PM
Holly POV
I was in shock. I didn't know whether I shold run or not. But I ran, and they ran after me.
"Get back here!"
They chased me, and they were faster than me. They tackeledd me then pinned me down. They laughed at me evily.
"Hahahaha...lookie we got her Steve! You go get "it" ready. I'll bring her to the "you-know-what"."
amandaaraujo
May 20th, 2008, 06:51 PM
aaaaahhhnh no some one hellllpppp her ahhh im crying aaaahhhh TOm Bill whats the other guys name that has a crush on holly? oh well someone save her aaaaaahhhhh :o :shock: :cry:
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 20th, 2008, 07:28 PM
BILL! TOM! GO SAVE HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LipsOfAnAngel
May 20th, 2008, 07:44 PM
AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! mehr bitte!
BlondPunk
May 21st, 2008, 06:57 AM
aaaaahhhnh no some one hellllpppp her ahhh im crying aaaahhhh TOm Bill whats the other guys name that has a crush on holly? oh well someone save her aaaaaahhhhh :o :shock: :cry:
Jerry ;]
riza13
May 21st, 2008, 09:32 AM
ive been gone for a few days, and saw you updated i was so happy :D
i really like the suspense, but please update asap :D
are you still grounded?
BlondPunk
May 21st, 2008, 04:12 PM
ive been gone for a few days, and saw you updated i was so happy :D
i really like the suspense, but please update asap :D
are you still grounded?
nope, I'm not grounded anymmore :]
amandaaraujo
May 21st, 2008, 04:29 PM
yay your not grounded :D
BlondPunk
May 21st, 2008, 05:05 PM
ALL INFORMATION ABOUT DRUGS IN THIS STORY CAME FROM A BOOK, CALLED DRUGS ON THE STRRET. NO, I DO NOT DO DRUGS, BUT THANKS TO THIS BOOK I WAS ABLE TO DESCRIBE HOW IT FEELS TO TAKE SPEED. THANK YOU DRUGS ON THE STREET (BOOK)
Holly's POV
John picked me up and walked me to a place down in the old basement, where the freezers [(place where they put dead bodies in)] were. I tried to get away, but he was too strong.
"Hold still little girlie."
"Don't touch me with your dirty Hobo hands!"
"My hands aren't dirty, little girl. If I were you I would keep my mouth shut before somebody named John here kills you."
I shut up. He smiled as he brand me deeper in the basement. My cell phone buzzed in my pocket. He stopped and looked at me. One of his eyes were bigger than the other, his face wasn't as dirty as I hought, and he had some missing teeth.
"You have a cell phone, ay?"
I nodded.
"Well, here you're not allowed to have one."
He took my cell phone and flung it in a corner. Then he laughed. He came to a stop by a door. He opened it. There was graffitti in here, and some blood on the floor. He was laughing the whole time. He was creeping me out.
"Steevie wil come in...ummm...about 20 minutes with all our freinds. But in the spare time, I have you all to myself."
Now he was really scaring me. He closed the door, and then came over to me. Those storys people tell about John raping poeple. That's true. Because he raped me. Then he did something, I don't know hat it was, but it knocked me out.
------
I woke up on some blankets. I looked around to see a circle of Hobos laughing together. I got up and took some random objeact to put under the covers, so it looked like a person was there. I walked off to find my cell phone. The I ran upsatirs to my favorite room, the one with the green couch. I sat on the couch and looked at the phone.
5 messages.
"Message one.
Holly, you can come back home know...your mom left. BK
Message two.
Where are you? B
Message three.
Holly, your scaring me. B
Message four.
Pleeeeaase stop it.
Message five.
Holly, are you dead or something? Please answer me. It's been 4 hours! B"
I texted him back, hlafway before the Hobos found me.
"Now what are you doing little girl? Calling for help? Well, that won't work!"
He picked me up and brought me bac to the circle.
"Monkey will be watching you."
Monkey was a small, yet muscular, Hobo guy. He sat next to me and smiled.
"Hey, little girl. What's your name?"
"None of your buiseness."
"Hmmm...We'll nickname you....Sputnik."
"I didn't give you permission to nickname me."
"Well, when you give you a nickname you're an official member."
"Why would I want to be a member of some Hobo clan, especially when they raped me!"
"Woah...Sputnik has some attitude."
A hippie-looking Hobo looked at me. He doing something. I think it was crack.
"Here...take this."
The hippie had a needle in his hand.
"Take it."
I swiped it out of his hand.
"I'm not doing any drugs fool."
Monkey held me tight.
"Groove, give it too her."
the hippie, who's name was Groove, got the needle and walked over to me. Monkey held out my arm. I tried to pull it away, but I couldn't. He took the needle an ingected it into my arm, wich didn't hurt as bad as I thought it would.
For the first few seconds I got this feeling creeping up the back of my neck. All the sudden it's like my head explodes, and my mind has never been so alive. I'm more awake then I ever was in my life. Then this rush comkes in - it zappped into my head, and my head was floating. I never felt so...good so to say. But I had to tell myself that it's drugs. It's bad. I felt kinda crazy, I barely knew what was going on. But now I feel like I'm ide awake...and I can't sleep. It's like the worst feeling ever. Everything seemed wrong. All I want to do is cry and cry...but I couldn't. I felt agitated, and hot and cold at the same time. I was shaking...and I wanted to just huddle in a corner and cry. I felt like I was chained up and beaten for days. I wanted the feeling to go away...but it wouldn't. I wanted to cry...but I couldn't. I couldn't think striaght. All I remember was falling into a big, dark, black hole, where everyone and everything was against me...wanting to kill me.
Thank you school books for teaching the effects of drugs!!!
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 21st, 2008, 06:35 PM
SAVE HER BILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and yay for being not grounded
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!
LipsOfAnAngel
May 21st, 2008, 08:58 PM
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!! mehr bitte!
BlondPunk
May 22nd, 2008, 04:29 PM
Tom's POV
After five hours of worrying, Holly finally sends a mesaage back. Or at least half a message. It told us where she was, how to get there, and to come Asap. But then she said "bring sumtnig ot rpoctet oyu."
"I can't read what it says..."
"Maybe it's...bring some pockets with you?"
"No, no. That's stupid."
"Oh, thanks alot Tom. I was just trying."
"Bring sometjing to...rocket you?"
"Tom, that's stupider than mine."
"How about..bring something to protect you?"
"That sounds better. I guess a baseball bat would do."
"Yeah."
The rest of it said "watch out for the guards and"
That was it.
"Watch out for the guards and what?"
"I don't know, but we better go get her. I have a feeling that she wouldn't ask us to come for her. Holly seems like the person who would just come back."
"Don't overeact Bill."
"But why does it say "bring something to protect you" and "watch out for the guards an the whatever she was going to say.""
"Just stay calm, nothing bad is going to happen."
Bill's POV
I had a bad feeling about this. What if she's in trouble? Or am I really overeacting? Tom just takes life so unseriously. We made our way to the "Hospital." Was she hurt and i the Hospital? We came up to an old, old, very old building. It was also abandoned. It had soem guards walking around the outside, but me and Tom mad eit past them easily. Was this some abandoned Hospital? We crawled through the window she old us to go through...the one with blue and red spray paint on it. Then we followed the long dark tunnel. We didn't have a flashlight, but we had a baseball bat. We heard voices, deep men voices. Tom stopped. He looked at me, then did a small jerk with his hed. Then he shrugged his shoulders. It meant "who are they?" I shrugged my shoulders and pointed in the direction they were coming from. We tiptoed in there, not making a sound. There were about seven people there, doing drugs. Hobos. They didn't see us, and we didn't see Holly. But she was there, in the corner. The Tom stepped on something and it made a loud noise.
"Who's there?"
"Tom! You idiot!"
"Show yourselves cowards!"
LipsOfAnAngel
May 22nd, 2008, 04:33 PM
MG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! mehr bitte!
berthaxoxo
May 22nd, 2008, 07:05 PM
Oh gosh I hope they can save her!!
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 22nd, 2008, 10:00 PM
GAHHHHHH!!!!!
PLEASE SAVE HER!!!!!!!!
KICK SOME MAJOR HOBO *** BILL!!!!!!!!!!!!
and tom too!
amandaaraujo
May 23rd, 2008, 12:39 PM
aaahhh what the **** that *** hobo tom you idot aahhh please get to her in time and please dont hurt her anymore ahhhhhhhhhhh..bohoo im crying>>>>>>____<<<<<<<<<<
BlondPunk
May 24th, 2008, 02:05 PM
Bill's POV
Tom was stupid enough to go out and show himself. I followed behind.
"And what are you to doing here?"
The hobo-dude came up in Tom's face and looked him in the eyes.
"We're here for Holly."
The Hobo-dude scooted back and laughed a little.
"Where is she?"
"Oh! You mean Sputnik!"
"Sputnik?"
"Yes, yes. She's ours."
"She's not yours!"
While they argued, I went over to the corner Holly layed at. She was unconcious. I picked her up and then ran out the door.
"Come back here Squirt!"
The hobos ran after us. I climbed through the window, then Tom shoved Holly out the window for me to catch. Then he came out. We ran to the car, all the hobos following us. We got in and sped off.
"What the crap? Why were there hobos?"
"It's the only place they can live Tom. Abandoned places, Forests, Under bridges. Things like that."
"I knew that."
We got home, and there was nobody there, thank god. I layed Holly on the couch and Tom went to do his own thing. I read my book, the sequel to another good book I read. Outside I could here it thundering and raining. She moved a little, then moved her arm. I could see a bruise on it, like those bruises that people on drugs were. Ddi she do drugs?
"Hey, Tom. come here."
Tom walked over.
"What now?"
"Look at her arm."
"She does drugs?"
"I don't know."
Tom left, shaking his head.
About thirty minutes later, Holly woke up. She sat upright, and then rubbed her eyes.
"Where am I?"
"Home. How are you feeling?"
"Horrible."
She wasn't acting like she normally did.
"Holly, what did they do to you?"
She shook her head, and then started crying. I hugged her, and she cryed in my shoulder. Tom walked in.
"What is it?"
I gave him a look that said it all. He nodded his head and sat down next to her.
"Holly, you have to tell us what they did to you."
She shook her head "no" like a stubborn child did when what they said would get them in trouble.
"You won't get in trouble. Just tell us."
There was a long pause of silence, then she sat on the couch and helt her legs to her chest, not looking at us.
You could barely understand what she said.
"The one hobo...he raped me...and then...the...other one held....me down....and gave.... drugs, and...I don't remember.."
She burst into tears.
"Oh my god! They really raped you? And then gave you drugs?"
She nodded.
"It's all my fault! If I would've went home with my mom then it would've never happened!"
Ihugged her.
"Holly, it's not your fault."
"Yes it is!"
"No it's not. It's his fault."
"But what if I have a hobo baby now?"
"You won't Holly, trust me."
"How do you know?"
"Because. I know it won't happen."
"What if he has some std?"
"He doesn't."
"How do you know?"
"I just know that nothing will happen to you. And if something does, me and Tom will always be there for you. We won't let you go back to your mom's house if you don't want to. I'd go beyond the earth to help you. I like you, Alot.
LipsOfAnAngel
May 24th, 2008, 02:32 PM
awww! mehr bitte!
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 24th, 2008, 04:44 PM
awww
that was so sad/happy/awesome
all at the same time.
BlondPunk
May 24th, 2008, 05:52 PM
Tom's POV
Holly blushed.
"I like you too Bill."
My heart sank. I walked back to my bedroom, plopping on my bad. Why did they like each other? And what will Jerry say? He'll kill me!
riza13
May 25th, 2008, 08:02 AM
poor jerry... how will he handle that?
LipsOfAnAngel
May 25th, 2008, 09:41 AM
oh boy. mehr bitte!
BlondPunk
May 25th, 2008, 10:03 AM
poor jerry... how will he handle that?
Jerry = football captain.
A boy who actually COULDN'T fit in the clothes Tom's wearing because he has SUPER-GIANT-HUGENORMOUS MUSCLES.
Did that give you a hint?
BlondPunk
May 25th, 2008, 11:43 AM
Holly's POV
The next day we went ot school. It was annoying, terrible, and horrible. Tom was really quite, watching me and Bill the whole time as if he was a body guard. Bill stayed with me almost everywhere I went, but was usually talking to Tom. I didn't tell anybody about yesterday, and told the twins it should be forgotten, like it never happened. Bill sometimes helt my hand, other times he put his arm around my shoulder. but usually we were just walking side by side. I guess everbody could tell that we were going out.
Nikki was the first to say something about it, in the bathroom.
"So, whats up with you and Bill going around everywhere together. Are you guys going out? Cuz it looks like that."
"Yeah."
"I knew it! So did you kiss yet?"
She bombed me with a million questions.
"Did you guys make out?"
"No!"
By the end I was laughing at how many things I said no to.
"Oh well...if anything happens, you better tell me!"
"I might...or it just might stay my little secret."
"Okay, see ya."
Tom's POV
During the twenty minute break, Jerry pushed me up against the lockers.
"What is your scrawny little brother doing around my girl?"
"Jerry, it's not my fault."
He pushed me up harder.
"You could've stopped them! You idiot! Gah!"
He threw me against the locker, and raised up his fist. But then some boys got Jerry off of me.
"Jerry, leave reads alone!"
"But he..."
"No buts! Dreads is awesome, and if you want to hurt him, then you are unawesome. Come on dreads."
I followed him.
"I'm Ryan. And you are..."
"Tom. Tom Kaulitz."
He shook my hand.
"Why does everbody think I'm cool?"
"Dude...you don't know why?"
"No..."
"Because you're like the only gangster in this school man! Everybody is scared to death of you! They want to be your freind, so that you won't hurt them. You know what gangs do to schools."
They thought I was in a gang? Okay...
"Yeah. I know what they do. But this school is pretty tight. But you never know when my gang will strike."
"You're-You're a gang leader? Dude! Can I join?"
I didn't have a gang, I had to think of something, and quick. I studied his muscles, and his face. He had short black hair, blue eyes, and almost no muscles.
"Sorry man, you don't look scary enough."
"Dang..."
"Maybe someday in the future."
He smiled, and nodded. I can't believe they really believe me.
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 25th, 2008, 11:49 AM
BAHHAHAAAHA!!
THEY THINK TOMS IN A GANG!!!
THATS HILARIOUS!!!!!
xXxMandiixXx
May 25th, 2008, 12:03 PM
bahahaha tom a gangster in a gang lolz
*falls of bed laughing*
he wishes
continue!
<3 Mandii xx
BlondPunk
May 25th, 2008, 04:50 PM
Gaaaaah!!! I have a sunburn from the pool
-_-'
Holly's POV
Me, Riza, Nikki, and the K's went in the bathroom and talked.
"Yeah...your brother Kyle is hot! I love his Black and red hair...and how it covers only one eye. I can't believe you two have such a hot brother!"
"Riza, we already know our brother is hot, but he's annoying and is full of himself."
"Speaking of hot guys..don't you think Tom is hot?"
We all looked at Nikki.
"Yeah he's hot too."
"Oh! I just heard from some people in the hall a few minutes ago that Tom has a gang. That scares me. I'm not going out with a gangster, even if he is hot."
"Kayla, where did you hear that?"
"Some nerds."
"I that's a lie...he always is in his room, playing his guitar."
"You never know Holly."
I sighed. Was Kayla right about Tom? I'd have to ask him. The bell rang, only one period left.
"So...you guys wanna meet at Luisa Pizzeria?"
"Sure. Right after school?"
"Yeah."
They all nodded, and then we left. Me Riza, and Nikki walked to our last period. Our teacher, Mrs. Kolz, wasn't there today, so we had a substitue. Her name ws Mrs. Veedermahn, and she fell asleep after ten minutes. I pushed our desks together so we could talk. Then Jerry came over to talk to me.
amandaaraujo
May 25th, 2008, 08:32 PM
hahhahahahahah they think tom has a gang ahahhahahah he couldn't be anymore harmless hahahahhahahah....
amandaaraujo
May 25th, 2008, 08:32 PM
hahhahahahahah they think tom has a gang ahahhahahah he couldn't be anymore harmless hahahahhahahah....
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 25th, 2008, 09:01 PM
whats jerry gonna say???
I NEED TO KNOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW
BlondPunk
May 25th, 2008, 09:22 PM
Holly's POV
I gave him the "What the **** are you doing here?" look. He didn't seem happy.
"Hey Holly. How are you?"
What the...?
"Uhhh..good?"
"Great. You like Bill, don't you?"
"Yeah..."
"Alot?"
"What the ****?!?!?!?!"
I must've said it too loud, because everybody was looking our way. He gave me a mad look. Bill gave me a look that said "What is he doing?" I shrugged, and then he went back to reading his book, every few secounds looking over at me.
"You and Bill are going out, am I right?"
"Yeah. What's that to you?"
"Oh, it's alot to me. I really like you too...just as much as you like Bill. You wouldn't have to tell Bill we were going out. It can be a secret."
I stood up, gaining attention from all of the class. I pointed at him, jabbing his nose.
"Listen, you might like me...you might want to go out with me, but I don't. I would never, NEVER, go out with you. I wouldn't cheat on Bill...EVER. And if you actually think I would do that...then you are messed up. After everything you said to me in the past...I would never consider going out with you."
He glared at me, and then slammed me against the wall.
"Nobody Rejects going out with ME!!!!"
I shoved him off, sending him back a foot or two. Then I kicked him, alot of times. He fell to the floor, holding his stomach.
"GAAAAH!!! YOU LITTLE WH***!!! I'LL GET YOU!!!"
"Yeah right!"
I walked away, getting my back pack. The bell rang and class was dismissed. I waited at the door for Bill. He came out of the class, smiling in disbelief.
"I can't believe it..."
"I can't believe that retard wanted to go out with me!"
"I can't believe you knocked him down!"
I laughed.
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 25th, 2008, 10:01 PM
woo hoo!
holly kicked some major ***!
riza13
May 26th, 2008, 05:26 AM
GO HOLLY!!!!
poor jerry... how will he handle that?
Jerry = football captain.
A boy who actually COULDN'T fit in the clothes Tom's wearing because he has SUPER-GIANT-HUGENORMOUS MUSCLES.
Did that give you a hint?
ya.. it did.. hahahaha... lol
BlondPunk
May 26th, 2008, 11:05 AM
Bill's POV
Holly really kicked Jerry's ***...literally. She and her freinds were talking and every few secounds, laughing. They sometimes looked back at me and then giggled a little.
What were they saying? We went to the pizzeria across the street...the girls were still talking about who knows what.
"So...where should we meet tommorow?"
"How about the mall?"
"No...we went there a few days ago."
"How about Our house?"
"Sure!"
So now Holly invited all the girls over to my house...great. And the G's were coming tonight. I sighed, and went back to eating my giant pizza. Tom laughed.
LipsOfAnAngel
May 26th, 2008, 11:52 AM
omg i missed soo much!! funny!!!!!! mehr bitte!
BlondPunk
May 27th, 2008, 04:17 PM
Bill's POV
"Why are you laughing?"
"Did you just see that one guy? His girlfreind got mad and threw her pizza at him! You didn't see that?"
"No..."
"You're so lame."
Holly's POV
"Hey guys...I need to go. I have to go rehearse with my band. We have to practice before Saturday. Wer'e gonna have a concert at the one concert hall place this weekend."
"Have fun Riza...I'll call you later."
She waved and then left. A girl walked in. She had green eyes, and faded black hair. She ordered a pizza and sat down. She looked about 16...and I never saw her at my school.
LipsOfAnAngel
May 27th, 2008, 04:30 PM
SHE'S A VAMPIRE!!!!!!!!!!!!! RAAAAAAAWR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *shifty eyes* what?
mehr bitte!
BlondPunk
May 27th, 2008, 06:52 PM
XD She's not a vampire ;]
Holly's POV
The girl sat at a table, all alone. I went to sit down with her.
"Hey, can I sit here?"
"Sure."
She seemed shy.
"I'm Holly, who are you?"
"I'm Sedona."
"Cool. Where do you go to school?"
"I go to the high school up the road."
"At least you don't go to the prep high school."
She sighed.
"I have to go there next year. Do you go to that school?"
"Yeah. It's pretty cool. It's only filled with preps in every corner. Except for my freinds over there. You should come meet them."
I grabbed her hand and pulled her toward my table.
"This is Sedona. She goes to the other high school."
They all waved and said hi. She got to know everybody, except for Bill and Tom.
"I'll show you Bill and Tom, the twins."
"Okay..."
I brang her up to the table where they were sitting. Bill smiled his ever-so beautiful smile and shook her hand. Tom smiled, and didn't shake her hand, but he said hi.
"This is Bill, and this is Tom. Guys, this is Sedona."
"Hi Sedona."
"Hey."
"So...you want to come over to my house tommorow? Everone's gonna be there."
"Sure."
We went back to the table and talked. After another half hour, we all had to go.
"Sedona, what's your phone number?"
She wrote it down and handed the paper to me.
"Cool. See ya!"
I waved and went to Tom's car. We got home, and Bill sat on the couch. I layed down, my head in his lap. He played with my hair.
"You need to get your hair re-dyed sweetie. It's fading."
"Ja...I know."
He had a beautiful smile.
Can't write no more...mom is watching -_-
LipsOfAnAngel
May 27th, 2008, 06:56 PM
ah, moms. great mehr bitte!
i wish she was a vampire. *pout*
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 27th, 2008, 07:45 PM
woo hoo sedonas in the story now!
BlondPunk
May 27th, 2008, 07:48 PM
Bill's POV
I looked at her brown-green eyes, looking right back at mine. She sat up, never breaking eye contact with me. I moved my hand over hers, and other hand reached for her face. I leaned foward, and kissed her. Tom came in the door, and then started laughing.
"I leave you guys alone in the house for five minutes, while I'm outside checking out the hot girls jogging by, and when I come in you two are kissing? BWAHAHAHAHAAA!!!"
Holly's face was red, and I felt my cheeks were red too.
"God Tom. You do it all the time!"
"So?"
"Ughhhh...you're so annoying."
He smiled.
"That's what I'm here for./
LipsOfAnAngel
May 27th, 2008, 07:52 PM
Tom came in the door, and then started laughing.
"I leave you guys alone in the house for five minutes, while I'm outside checking out the hot girls jogging by, and when I come in you two are kissing? BWAHAHAHAHAAA!!!"
Holly's face was red, and I felt my cheeks were red too.
"God Tom. You do it all the time!"
"So?"
"Ughhhh...you're so annoying."
He smiled.
"That's what I'm here for./
funny funny stuff!!! mehr bitte!
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 27th, 2008, 08:34 PM
haha love it
BlondPunk
May 28th, 2008, 03:44 PM
Holly's POV
I can't believe what just happened. This has to be some dream, and I'm about to wake up. But it couldn't be a dream.
"Tom, just leave us alone!"
"Yeah, so you can kiss again, right?"
"You're just jealous that I get the hot girls and you don't."
Tom smiled and shook his head side to side. His face was a little red.
"Hahahaha, I'm not jealous...not at all."
He was bieng really sarcastic. I think he really is jealous of me and Bill.
"See! You're bieng sarcastic!"
Tom glared at Bill.
"No way!"
Tom stomped down the hall, opened up his room door, and put his "Leave me alon, OR ELSE" sign on the handle, and slammed it shut. The sign fell off.
"Tom, your sign fell off!"
He opened the door, picked up his sign and put it back on. Before closing the door, he glared at Bill again. Bill scooted deeper into the couch.
"At first I had no clue why Tom was bieng an *** at school, but then I realized that he was just jealous. He'll get over it by tommorow."
"Hopefully."
All the sudden there was a knock on the door.
"I'll get it. Stay here."
LipsOfAnAngel
May 28th, 2008, 05:05 PM
oh boy... mehr bitte!
Monicaalynn
May 28th, 2008, 06:54 PM
aww newbie on the reader train I love it, it's sooo adorable. c: ok I'm such a tard I was looking for a button that was shaped like a smilie face on my key board hahahaha
please write more the suspence!!! aaahh... c:
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 28th, 2008, 08:49 PM
lol that chapter was funny.
"Tom, your sign fell off!"
i have no idea why, but that was hilarious!
BlondPunk
May 29th, 2008, 09:21 AM
lol, welcome new reader ^^
oh, and it's not Holly's mom.
Bill's POV
I opened the door to find Georg and Gustav laughing at me.
"Bill! Your hair!"
"What about it?"
Gustav was still laughing.
"I've never seen your hair messed up!"
I walked to the bathroom to see what was so funny. They put there suitcases in the living room and sat down on the couch. I looked in the mirror.
"Georg, there is nothing wrong with my hair!"
They laughed harder. I went over to Georg and Gustav.
"Yes there is! Your hair is messed up!"
"How?!"
"Look on the back of your head."
Holly started laughing too. I took a small mirror and went to the bathroom. I looked at the back of my hair to find a lolipop sticking in the back.
"Where did this come from?"
They still laughed. I took it out of my hair, and there was still some of my hair on it. I went back to the living room and sat down next to Holly.
"I can't believe you had a lolipop in your hair!"
"It couldn't have been all day though, I would've seen it."
"If he would've had it all day, that would've been hilarious!"
"And don't forget embarresing."
"Okay! Stop talking about the stupid lolipop! So how was your flight?"
"Gustav was sleeping most of the time, and I was watching a really good movie about a girl who..."
"We don't want to know what the movie is about! Were there any paparazi?"
"Of course, millions asking were Bill and Tom were and if they're okay."
"Oh."
"So when are we moving in the other house?"
"I was thinkng Friday afternoon. Does that sound good?"
"Yeah, it sounds good."
"Holly, how many days of schopol do we have before Summer Vacation?"
"I think we have two weeks left. I think."
"Okay good. We'll be able to finish the Heilig video by then."
"So, it's obvious that you're gonna be the girl in the video."
"Yeah. I still can't convince them that they can find a prettier girl than me."
Gustav looked at Holly in disbelief.
"You think you're not pretty enough?"
"Yeah..."
"You must be crazy Holly, you're really pretty!"
Holly's POV
Why does everybody think I'm pretty? I'm not pretty! Bill was glaring a little at Gustav.
"What?"
He gave Bill an innocent look.
"Nothing."
"You're mad at me! What did I do?"
"Nothing!"
"If you say so."
I rested my head on Bill's shoulder.
"I'm going to bed. See ya in the morning."
"Good night."
I walked into Bill's bedroom and fell asleep on my little bed on the floor.
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 29th, 2008, 10:31 AM
lollipop lmao.
i love how random this story is.
BlondPunk
May 29th, 2008, 11:58 AM
Bill's POV
"I guess you and Tom were pretty bored without me and Gutav."
"No, we had Holly to keep us company."
"Bill, why is she staying here?"
"Because. She and her mom got in a fight, and her mom doesn't want her back in her house. Well, now she does because Holly is staying with "boys". Do you have a problem with that?"
"No, not really."
"What do you mean by not really?"
"Why doesn't she just stay at one of her freinds house? Couldn't she do that?"
"Of course she could!"
"Then why doesn't she?"
"Because, I'm her boyfreind, and I like her bieng here. I don't know why you guys are having such a big problem about her living with us for a while! She's not going to be here every night, she has alot of freinds and will probably spend the night at there house and..."
"She's your girlfreind?"
"Yeah, but..."
"And you didn't tell us! Oh my god! I can't believe it! It's been 4 years since you had a girlfreind!"
"I know! As I was saying..."
"I would've never thought that..."
"GUYS! Listen! David called yesterday and said we are going to do a concert on Saturday night, and make the first session of the Heilig video in the morning. The part with Holly isn't very long, and there's about five or six parts. Gustav, you're going to have your own little part, same with Georg and Tom. We have a couple of interviews after school. You guys won't be going to school though, me and Tom are just finishing school the easy way. You guys already finished school. And then we have two concerts next weekend and on wednesday, and they're all here in california."
"Wer'e pretty busy, but at least we have about 8 days off."
"Yeah. so you guys have to sleep in the living room tonight, maybe tommorow you can sleep in my room."
"Where's Tom?"
"Oh, he's mad and jealous."
"Why?"
"None of your buiseness."
I got up and went to bed. Holly was already sleeping in her bed on the floor. I got in my rather small bed and went to sleep.
LipsOfAnAngel
May 29th, 2008, 03:33 PM
cool mehr bitte!
Monicaalynn
May 29th, 2008, 05:08 PM
haha, awww I think gustav kinda likes holly...
and now you made me want a lollipop really badly.... i green one to be spacific hahaha.
please write more
BlondPunk
May 29th, 2008, 06:56 PM
Holly's POV
"Holly, get up! We have to go in fifteen minutes!"
"Go where?"
I put the covers over my head.
"School silly!"
"I don't wanna go to school."
"Well that's too bad, you have to go anyways."
I pulled the covers off of my head and got out the clothes I was going to wear today. Black jeans, red and black striped shirt, and my black boots. I straightened my hair, put a black and red bows in random places on my hair, and put on some mascara and eyeliner. Then I took a few rings, chained necklaces, and a choker from Bill. I went to the living room, everybody staring at me.
"I know I look bad, I only have five minutes to get ready now."
Bill looked at the choker I was wearing.
"Did you ask to borow that?"
"No. Can I borow it?"
He crossed his arms and looked over to Tom, then me.
"Hmmmmm...I guess you can."
"Thanks."
I got my back pack and filled it with random things I think I would need for school, even though I probably have it all in my locker already. Then I got the sandwich I made for lunch. It was a ham and cheese sandwich, and a water bottle. Not much.
"Ready?"
"Yep."
We got in the car and headed to the place I dreaded. School.
Bill's POV
Holly looked really pretty today, but I think my smaller black choker would've looked better. We got to the school, and everybody was still going inside. We were early. I got out of the car and headed for my locker, getting everything ready for the next two classes. It went the same as always Julia bugging Holly, Holly talking non-stop to her freinds, Tom sitting in the lonely corner where the desk was way too small for him, and a few run ins with with Jerry. But finally lunch came around. I sat inbetween Holly and Tom.
Monicaalynn
May 29th, 2008, 08:28 PM
aww Bill's a cutie!!! ich <3 es
please write more.
BlondPunk
May 29th, 2008, 09:08 PM
Holly's POV
For some reason I had the feeling something bad was going to happen, but I don't know what.
"Julia was really annoying today in math! I can't take it anymore!"
"Julia's just a *****. Ignore her, think of something to say back. You should get some duct tape and duct tape her mouth closed and her hand together. That would help."
"Ha, I wish I could do that, but one more ISS and I fail this grade."
"Oh...then I'll do it for you!"
"Then you're gonna get ISS!!"
"Oh, right. I wish we could do something to get that girl to shut up. She did tell your mom about where you live, right?"
"Yeah..."
"There's our reason to give her payback! And for making your life miserable!"
"Let's just drop the subject, I don't like thinking about Julia."
All the sudden Julia came up with her feeinds and sat infront of Bill, the rest sitting next to her and around Tom. Julia gave me a fake smile.
"Hey Holly! How are you? Your sister Helen wants to talk to you! She's coming back from her trip today, in about an hour!" She said it in this high-pitched voice that you'd probably talk to a baby or pet with.
I glared a little at her.
"Oh. That's nice." I said coldly.
"Aren't you happy? Oh! I told your mom where you were, and she was really mad. And your sister and I talked last night, and she said she's gonna take you back home and give you a makeover! Maybe after the make-over you'll get some sense in style, and I'll let you be my freind again!"
Everybody except for Julia's freinds, and Tom who much rather payed attention to her freinds, were glaring at her.
"Why are you guys glaring? Is this some staring contest?"
"Julia, I have more sense then you and you and freinds have put together. I don't give a **** what you did, I don't care."
"Oh, I have way more sense than you ever will have. You're just a stupid little emo girl that has no life, and all you do is listen to music and sit around and cry. Don't you want me to be your freind, don't you want to be normal? But, I would never be your freind even if you change because you're too ugly! Have you ever seen her face up close? It's so ugly! Nobody wants to be freinds with you because your ugly! Have you ever noticed that?"
I looked down at my shoes. Bieng called ugly is my weakness, because I really think I'm ugly. I just don't like bieng called ugly.
"Holly is not ugly. She's the prettiest girl I've ever seen, and I've seen alot of girls in my life. If anybody here is ugly, you are the ugly one, not Holly. You're just jealous that Holly is way prettier than you, and that your ex-boyfreind dumped you for her. I don't want Holly to change, I like her the way she is. Holly would never be your freind, never. And guess what? Holly is so pretty that she's going to be in my music video, the second star."
I stared at Bill, in amazement.
Bill's POV
Julia laughed.
"A music video? You're not even famous! And how can you see alot of girls in your life?"
I handed her a few magazines that were in my urse.
"I see alot of girls at our concerts."
"Oh my god! You're famous?"
"Yep."
She looked at me, smiling like crazy fans do.
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 29th, 2008, 09:44 PM
Okay. So those of you who have a character in my story, I would like you to pick a band member. You may pick two, including Bill. I'll pick who I think goes good with :]
did i read that right?
if so, i pick TOM UND BILL!!!!!!
even though im kinda a useless character
riza13
May 30th, 2008, 01:51 AM
um... i pick bill and gustav...
mybe even georg or tom...
ummm.. you pick for me :D
i havent been here for a week, i think...
i didnt have the time to use the PC
it was a busy week for me
nice updates! :D
Monicaalynn
May 30th, 2008, 07:14 AM
awww poor holly. at least bill stood up for her. c:
please write more.
amandaaraujo
May 30th, 2008, 07:32 AM
wow you go bill wohoo..
BlondPunk
May 30th, 2008, 09:00 AM
Okay. So those of you who have a character in my story, I would like you to pick a band member. You may pick two, including Bill. I'll pick who I think goes good with :]
did i read that right?
if so, i pick TOM UND BILL!!!!!!
even though im kinda a useless character
You aren't a useless character!!!
BlondPunk
May 30th, 2008, 09:25 AM
Okay, Pleaze don't be mad :]
I have the Bill part planned out, and I'm not saying who he'll be with either, but he'll get his chance with one of you guys.
Riza and Gustav
Sedona and Tom
Nikki and Georg
Bill's POV
She kept on smiling at me, and it was starting to scare me.
"So you're really famous?"
"All of Europe knows us, and some of America too."
"Oh my god, I love famous people!"
"Ummmm...okay."
She kept on staring at me.
I looked over to Holly, who was glaring at Julia.
Holly's POV
I know what she was thinking. Famous = Rich. Marrying Famous Rich guy = Fame and Fortune for life. She was going to try to get Bill to like her. She's such a ***** and a slut. She was smiling at Bill nonstop. Bill looked around the room, clueless about what she's doing. He stopped at me. Thank god I understood German, and could speak German, and Julia couldn't.
"I don't get it. What is she doing?"
"She likes you now, because your rich and famous. Nothing more."
He nodded his head. Julia gave me a confused look.
"Were you talking about me?"
"No, why would we talk about you?"
"I heard my name in there."
"You did? You must have misunderstood what we were talking about."
She glared at me, clearly knowing we were talking about her. Then Julia turned her attention to Bill.
"How can you possibly think Holly is pretty?"
"Because she was born beautiful, and you weren't."
"Um, excuse me? Did you just say I'm not pretty?"
"Yep."
"How could you say that?"
"Because, I don't lie to people."
If she didn't close her mouth soon it would be full of flies.
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 30th, 2008, 12:48 PM
HAHAHAHAHAHA
julia just got BURNED!!!!!!!!!!!!
LipsOfAnAngel
May 30th, 2008, 03:24 PM
oooooooooohhh!!!!!!!!! buuuuuuurrnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! mehr bitte!
BlondPunk
May 30th, 2008, 06:36 PM
Bill's POV
"I can not believe you just said that! I'm way more beautiful than Holly, can't you see?"
"She is the most beautiful girl in this school, so just shut up. Everybody knows you're just jealous. Get over it."
With that said Julia stood up and went to another table. Holly hugged me.
"Thanks for standing up for me Bill."
I nodded.
Sorry it was short...
LipsOfAnAngel
May 30th, 2008, 06:43 PM
mehr bitte!
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 30th, 2008, 07:18 PM
aww bills so sweet.
and julia just got BURNED AGAIN!
lol
amandaaraujo
May 30th, 2008, 11:29 PM
ya go bill he stood up for her again awww and he's doing a pretty good job..
BlondPunk
May 31st, 2008, 09:35 AM
Holly's POV
"So guys, we'll meet infront of the school. We'll drive home in Tom's car. Everybody's coming, right?"
The K's looked at me uneasily.
"We can't come."
"Oh, that's too bad."
"Maybe another time."
"Yep."
We got up and went to our next period, wich was really boring. Then there was 20-minute break, and then last period. We had a substitute, agaian, and the same one that fell asleep. We pushed our desks together like last time.
Jerry was sitting at his table, glaring at me. Bill and Tom were talking, and arguing, in German. Thank god Julia wasn't in my last period.
"What are they saying Holly?"
"Huh?"
"What are Bill and Tom arguing about?"
I listened, and heard things like "Shut up Tom, we don't need no more breaks." amd "Why did you schedule this interview for tommorow Bill?"
"Bill scheduled an interview tommorow and Tom wants the day off."
"Oh, okay."
I loked around the room, and spotted Jerry glaring at me. I ignored him and went back to talking.
Monicaalynn
May 31st, 2008, 11:27 AM
haha, julia gott burned. lol. poor tom he just wants to relax... : P
BlondPunk
May 31st, 2008, 04:22 PM
Bill's POV
I was watching Jerry the whole time, because he was glaring at Holly. He finally decided to get up and make his way over to Holly. I wanted to get up and go to her first, but Tom pulled me back to my seat.
"She can take care of herself Bill."
I nodded and sat back down.
Holly's POV
Jerry pulled up a chair and sat down next to me.
"You did good yesterday."
"What?"
"Taking me down like that. You're pretty strong."
"Um, Thanks?"
He smiled and nodded. He had giant muscles, blonde hair that went over his eyes, and bleu eyes. He was normal, nothing extraodinary like Bill. I liked it when people were different and not afraid to be. He streched, showing off his muscles. I rolled my eyes and turned back to Riza and Nikki. I could here girls giggle in the background. Why did the most popular and stupidist boy in the school have to like me? I felt like hiding in a closet until he found a girlfreind.
"So.....what are you doing tonight?"
"Hanging out with my freinds, breathing, sleeping, doing stupid things."
"Oh, cool. So you're busy?"
"Yeah."
I could see Bill glaring at Jerry.
"Oh, yeah. See ya."
"Whatever."
I rolled my eyes and let my head bang on the table.
"Why does he like me?"
amandaaraujo
May 31st, 2008, 04:40 PM
poor holly i would totaly hide forever too.
Monicaalynn
May 31st, 2008, 05:34 PM
gahh poor poor holly.:c
LipsOfAnAngel
May 31st, 2008, 06:32 PM
poor holly. mehr bitte!
schrei.in.die.nacht
May 31st, 2008, 08:21 PM
jerry's a jerky loserface
more!!!!
TWIXX
May 31st, 2008, 09:28 PM
~new reader~
this is really good!!!!
omg you have to update this soon!!!!
wow i cant believe her mother said that to her!!!!
dang so tom liked her?? i wonder of he still do or did he get rid of his feelings cuz his brother like her??
and omg i cant believe she got raped by a hobo and i cant believe they gave her drugs!!!!
i hope she aint catch anything, from the drugs and the hobo!!!!
but girl you really need to update this up soon!!!!
riza13
June 1st, 2008, 02:42 AM
stupid jerry...
more! :D
xXxMandiixXx
June 1st, 2008, 03:07 AM
omfg she seriously has to kick jerry in the *** i mean honestly he's got to give up she's not interested besides she has a sexy bf as it is
continue!
<3 Mandii xx
BlondPunk
June 1st, 2008, 06:57 PM
Welcome new reader ^_^
You guys are gonna hate me so bad...
Bill's POV
Jerry went back to his seat and all the girls flooded to him to talk to him. He needs to just get together with one of those girls and forget about Holly. Class ended, and me and Tom hung around for a little while outside. Holly's freinds were all waiting, but no Holly.
"Where is she?"
"I don't know, I'll go find her."
I went thorugh the whole school, and finally by the cafeteria I found her...and Jerry.....kissing. What was she doing, was she really secretley going out with him behind my back? I ran away, hopefully unoticed. I don't want to destroy their relationship together. I was trying to not show that I was sad, or mad.
the truth shall be told next chapter ;)
schrei.in.die.nacht
June 1st, 2008, 07:40 PM
:o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o
BlondPunk
June 1st, 2008, 08:06 PM
Here's what Really happened....
Holly's POV
As I left the classroom, Jerry cam up to me.
"We need to talk, now. Meet me in the cafeteria."
It couldn't hurt to talk to him.
"Hey guys, I forgot something. I'll meet you outside later."
"Okay."
I went to the cafeteria, and Jerry was sitting on the table. I stood next to him.
"Why won't you go out with me?"
"Why won't you just understand the fact that I don't want to?"
"I don't understand! Why won't you?"
"Because, I just don't like you in that kind of way! I'm sorry!"
I heard footsteps down the hall.
"But I like you!"
He pulled me towards him and kissed me. I slapped him, but he was pressing me against him so I couldn't get away. Then he stopped. I slapped him as hard as I could.
"You Retarded Monkey-faced JERK!!! Ew!!!"
I wiped my mouth, and before leaving I kicked him a few times. I ran to the water fountain and washed my mouth out.
schrei.in.die.nacht
June 1st, 2008, 08:33 PM
evil jerry.... :x grrrrr.....
Monicaalynn
June 1st, 2008, 08:34 PM
gasp drama drama drama, i hope bill's ok. :c
LipsOfAnAngel
June 1st, 2008, 08:50 PM
oh boy. mehr bitte!
BlondPunk
June 1st, 2008, 09:28 PM
~new reader~
this is really good!!!!
omg you have to update this soon!!!!
wow i cant believe her mother said that to her!!!!
dang so tom liked her?? i wonder of he still do or did he get rid of his feelings cuz his brother like her??
and omg i cant believe she got raped by a hobo and i cant believe they gave her drugs!!!!
i hope she aint catch anything, from the drugs and the hobo!!!!
but girl you really need to update this up soon!!!!
Finally, somebody who is still wondering about the Hobo and drug accedent!
:twisted: *evil smile* :twisted:
I shall say nothing.
.....................
BlondPunk
June 1st, 2008, 09:42 PM
Holly's POV
I went to meet up with my freinds. Bill wouldn't look at me. We got in Tom's car and rode home. Bill and Tom were quietly whispering stuff in German, and Tom looked back at me a few times. I caouldn't here what they were talking about. We got out of the car. We sat in the living room.
Gustav and Georg were looking at us strangeley.
"This is Gustav, and that's Georg."
They waved.
"We'll go outside on the porch and leave you guys alone."
Bill went in his room and slammed the door shut. We were alone.
"You guys wouldn't believe what Jerry done!"
"What did he do?"
"He kissed me! In the cafeteria! Ew! He's such a Jerk and retard!"
"He's sounds messed up!" Sedona said
"I know! He IS messedd up! I washed my mouth out in the bathroom, and EW!"
"Ewww, I feel bad for you Holly." Riza said
"Bill's acting strange ever since this afernoon. Do you know why?" Nikki asked.
"I have no clue. He won't talk to me anymore."
"Wierd."
We talked for about another hour.
"Let's go outside in the backyard."
We sat in the back yard and talked some more.
Sedona stood up.
"Where's the bathroom?"
"Ask Bill."
Okay.
Sedona's POV
I knocked on Bill's door.
"Who is it?"
"Sedona. Where's the bathroom?"
He opened the door. He had no make-up on, and he looked like he was crying.
"Down their."
"Thanks."
He nodded and closed the door.
Holly's POV
Sedona was gone for about ten minutes. I went in to go see if she was okay, and to get some cookies. But what I found,
was.....................................
DUN DUN DUN.
WHAT DID SHE FIND?
schrei.in.die.nacht
June 1st, 2008, 10:14 PM
WHAT DID SHE FIND??????!!!!!!!!!
yay my POV is in yellow!!!!! that just happens to be my favorite color!!!!
BUT WHAT DID SHE FIND????!!!!!!!!!
Nyloria
June 1st, 2008, 10:25 PM
*New Reader*
I am absolutly in LOVE with you fanfic. I have been reading it for a while I just never got an account until now :D . Please continue!
schrei.in.die.nacht
June 1st, 2008, 10:51 PM
*New Reader*
I am absolutly in LOVE with you fanfic. I have been reading it for a while I just never got an account until now :D . Please continue!
hi new person!!!!
my names sedona!!!
welcome to the forums!!!
amandaaraujo
June 1st, 2008, 11:08 PM
what the **** jerry gah stop it perv someone call the police. ooh Bill dont you do something bad it wasnt halloy's fault... :o :shock: :evil: :evil:
Nyloria
June 1st, 2008, 11:52 PM
*New Reader*
I am absolutly in LOVE with you fanfic. I have been reading it for a while I just never got an account until now :D . Please continue!
hi new person!!!!
my names sedona!!!
welcome to the forums!!!
Hi Sedona *Waves* I love your name. My name is Regina. Or you could call me by my nickname Regiss. My friend gave it to me so it's a little weird (like her) but I still love it.
riza13
June 2nd, 2008, 01:12 AM
hi regina! riza here...
jerry.. is disgusting...
what did holly saw?
and is there more about the hobos?
tokiohotel26
June 2nd, 2008, 02:04 AM
IVE BEEN READING THIS FOREVER 2 BUT I HAD JUST GOT AN ACCOUNT
I LOVE THIS STORY
MORE!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!
Monicaalynn
June 2nd, 2008, 07:10 AM
ahhhh whathappenswhathappenswhathappens??????? what does she find????
Hi Regina! welcome to the forums! I'm Monica c:
BlondPunk
June 2nd, 2008, 09:47 AM
[color=#0080FF]Hi new readers :]
I'm Yana, have fun here :]
I won't say nothing about the Hobos!
I still don't have it all planned out.
But two people secretley reading my story, That's cool.
schrei.in.die.nacht
June 2nd, 2008, 12:23 PM
i think georg should get raped by hobos now...jk!!!!!!
BlondPunk
June 2nd, 2008, 03:57 PM
XD noooo...poor Georg!
I have something planned out, but I really have no clue how to make it work without it seeming unreal.
THIS IS ALL BILL'S FAULT!
None of this was Sedona's fault, all Bill's!!!
Holly's POV
......Sedona. And Bill, kissing. I couldn't believe it! I thought he liked me! This couldn't be real! I walked out the door and slammed it shut. The G's and Tom were sitting on the porch talking.
Tom's POV
Holly slammed the door so hard the porch was shaking a little.
"Where are you going?"
She kept on walking, but then stopped.
"Home."
I got up and walked over to her.
"What do you want their?"
Before I could finish the sentence she was running away from me. I ran after her.
"Holly! Stop!"
She kept on running, but I grabbed her and turned her to me. She was crying.
IT'S ALL BILL'S FAULT!
LipsOfAnAngel
June 2nd, 2008, 03:59 PM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's cuz he's mad at her. mehr bitte!
BlondPunk
June 2nd, 2008, 04:03 PM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's cuz he's mad at her. mehr bitte!
Yep :]
schrei.in.die.nacht
June 2nd, 2008, 04:19 PM
woo hoo i kissed bill!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol
but grr bad bill!
dont be mean to holly!!!
amandaaraujo
June 2nd, 2008, 07:31 PM
i could slap you bill ugh dont worry holly i do it for you .. Bill im ashamed *hides behind tom* :oops:
amandaaraujo
June 2nd, 2008, 07:32 PM
woo hoo i kissed bill!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol
but grr bad bill!
dont be mean to holly!!!
shrie i like you sign. what band is it?
schrei.in.die.nacht
June 2nd, 2008, 07:34 PM
woo hoo i kissed bill!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol
but grr bad bill!
dont be mean to holly!!!
shrie i like you sign. what band is it?
apocalyptica
its from the video "i dont care" feat. adam gontier (sp?)
Monicaalynn
June 3rd, 2008, 07:18 AM
awww why do things always happen to holly!!!! please write more. bitte!
riza13
June 3rd, 2008, 07:51 AM
aww.. why is holly's life always messed up?
and yes, it's BILL's fault!! (sorry, bill)
but still.. right more!! and i mean now!!!
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