~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~LOVE HURTS(my new fan fic)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[amandaaraujo]

BILL:a boy with many dreams that had mostly came true but true love hasn't...yet

Mandy(nick name for Amanda):a girl who had many dreams that were destroyed after a disasterous tragedy that changed for ever but a special person revived her dreams and she had never been in love...until

Tom: a player unlike his twin brother Bill very different apperence and personality. He also likes never fallen in love...yet

Lauren: mandy's cousin. Lauren who was in a relationship with a guy in south America but left for the States looking for a better life , crushe by the long distance relationship , breaks up with him before she left. She now lives with her cousin in a small town in NY called west harrison.

George: a fun playful guy who is in a band formed by his friends and himself and now is touring around the world, but tired of one night stands unlike Tom, and is searching for love but almost gave up...until

Madelline: mandy, lauren, and Natalias best friend who also left south America. She was not self confident and never was satisfied with her body is also searching for love but doesnt know where to begin... until something amazinng happens.

Gustav: a quite but very deep person who is the drummer of the band he was done with girl fans protesting there eternal love for him, and he wonders if he would ever fall in love... until he meets someone totaly different from him

Natalia:a fun outgoing girl, who loves to party , she also likes to drink a lot, looking for her true love but tired of getting her heart brocken...until


This is a story of love
where fighting through obsticles
bigger than you can imagine. You will
see who this world LOVE is destoned to
HURT .

DO YOU GUYS LIKE IT SO FAR LATER OR MABE TOMORROW ILL WRITE MORE .. TUNE IN:) REMEMBER LOVE HURTS NO MATTER WHAT

[amandaaraujo]

CAPTER 1


Mandy was sitting by the window sad and depressed with tears in her eyes. Lauren comes to consol her devestated cousin and also asks her why she was crying."why are you crying Mandy?" Mandy lifts her head to face her cousin she looks into Laurens eyes and tells her" I feel like a bird cajed in,where I can't even walk out the door because my mom is calling the police. And my dad is either threatning to beat her or throw her out of the house."Lauren trying to make her cousin feel better "Don't be like that. Im sure your parent will let you loose when you turn 18 tomorrow." Mandy feeling a little better raises her head " You really think so?" I know so." replied Lauren
Suddenly Lauren had a tremendous idea." Im calling Madellie and Natalia and we're spending 2 weeks in NYC." "What are you crazy. If my parents won't even let e go park you really think they are going to let me go to the city for two weeks with no parents." "Yeah tomorrow your 18 and you'll be an adult." "Ok but you come to ask my parents." "Deal." So Lauren flipped her brand new phone ( She was proud of herself for getting a better looking phone then the motorola phone she had before) She speed dialed Natalia " Natalia you want to spend two weeks in NYC?" "Totally, when" "tomorrow" "Wait is this for Mandy's B-day tomorrow?" "Yup" "me likey, Ill start packing." "kay but stay on the line im calling Madelline.""allright" RING RING"HELLO" "hey madelline want to spend 2 Weeks in NYC?" TWO weeks we havw school.""NO, well oh come on its for Mandy's B-day" "Madelline don't be a party pooper" said teasongly Natalia." "Fine ill start packing."

So the day passed and it was Mandy's B-day ahe asked her mom first about going to NYC for 2 weeks." MOMY please please let me go with lauren, Madelline and Natalia to go to NYC for two weeks for my b-day." Mandygave her the best puppy dog look she could give. " well i dont know." "please momy" "Fine ill try to talk your dad into it." "thank you momy " said pleased Mandy.

Mandy's mom went to talk to her dad. Mandy's dad started cursing and furiosly saying no. Mandy could imagine her dads face.

"**** no im not letting her go anywhere" bellowed Mandy's furious father. But quickly Mandy looked at lauren warning her that she was making up a lie or idea how ever you may put it Lauren had to follow. " no dady not alone it thats what your thinking were going with Natalias mom and Madellines mom so we wont be alone." After Mandy's dad thinking over it finally said yes " I have one condition don't come back without being married and with kids." he said teasongly." for the first time she felt like her dad loved her but she knew soon enough he'd go back tpo the mean over protective ogre he really was.



TOKIO HOTEL :POV:

Tom was sitting on the couch of his hotel room with his guitare"**** i hate being bored." he said to no one. Tokio Hotel were staying at the hilton hotelin NYC. They were staying for two weeks since they were new in the States. Suddenly bill come in. "dude i though you were out partying ?" yeah me too, but i have no one to go with, anyways im not in the mood." soon both of them walked toward George and Gustavs room. " hey guys you want to grab a bite ?"asked Tom "allright." replied Gustav. " yeah im starved. why didn't you come sooner." said george mockingly. So all four came to planet hollywood a really cool resturant in NYC. they had their picture taken fo the wall of fame.
so tom ordered a coke and a cheezburger George ordered the same thing. Bill ordered pasta and a sprite. and gustav ordered a tuna sandwhich. while the guys were conversing over sound check they felt lonley as if the didnt have a girl to care about that wasnt fake and looking for money or fame.

[bbgroove]

Good start sweetie...
(sorry... I tend to call everyone sweetie (O_o))
(^_^)

update soon please

[DeeDee]

i luv it hunn

write more pleasee

[amandaaraujo]

CHAPTER 2


The girls were getting ready to go to the train station in white plains. Mandy, wearing tight jeans that she loved because it made her look skinnier that what she already was with a low but not to low tank top. Lauren was wearing her read tights with a french coat that was a dress. Madelline was wearing jeans and tight tank that fit so perfectly on her model body which she is not proud of for some odd reason. And Natalia was wearing a miniskirt with abercrombie hoodie. 'Hey guys im scared about getting lost." said Madelline worriedly. "oh come on its our city, we won't." " just promise me we will find adventure and love." said mandy almost sighing in boredom. "yeah, i hope so." said Lauren painfully. They bought tickets and waited patiently for the train.

TOKIO HOTEL ~POV~

" hey guys do you think we'll find love here." said Bill with excitemment. "I dunno so many cities so many girls just faking it, Im not sure." responded Tom. Tomm who had just brocken up with Trina because she was a fakout, did not know what to do. Gustav was tired of and wnted to sleep said " Guys can we go back to the Hotel." "No are you kidding we just got here ." responded George.


GIRLS POV

As the train arrived the girls walked and took their seats all sitting together . All of them put their ipods on.When Mandy noticed a blasting rock music Mandy liked rock alot but loved every single kind of music. " Madelline what are listing to?" Asked Mandy. As soon as Lauren and Natalia all the girls paused their ipods. " oh its this band called tokio hotel, i found on youtube. they are German. they are really famuos in Europe." said madelline proudly. "oh" sighed Mandy. ON the picture on the ipod of the four guys she was attracted by Bill the lead singer of this so called tokio hotel. she saw his fragile face and soft expression as shelooked over friends shoulder. She had fallen in love with a guy that was thousands of miles away. But the girls had no idea how close they were to them.

As the train arrive to Grand centralthe girls happily jumping walked out to the city streets. " Ooh im hungry." pointed out Natalia. "ok lets go to planet hollywood and we'll celebrate Mandy's B-day." sounds great. "lets go".

[bbgroove]

Tokio boys finding love... I love the plot...

and planet express... wasn&#39;t that a pizza place in A Toy Story (O_o)... maybe I just havn&#39;t heard of it because I&#39;m in Cali (>__<)

update soon

[amandaaraujo]

Tokio boys finding love... I love the plot...

and planet express... wasn&#39;t that a pizza place in A Toy Story (O_o)... maybe I just havn&#39;t heard of it because I&#39;m in Cali (>__<)

update soon

no that was pizza plante
planet hollywood is a real resturant in NYC that stars go to butawesomnes let normal people in!!:)

[amandaaraujo]

CHAPTER 3

As the girls walked toward the enterance Mandy got a strange but exciting feeling.
When the girls were attended they walking through the empty tables Madelline noticed tokio hotel. "OH MY GOD look whos sitting over there!" Madelline almost ripping Mandy's arm off. Then Mandy glanced over and saw BILL and was amazed of how handsome he was. Bill looked back and made eyecontact with Mandy. as soon as lauren saw her her cousin in such a state she looked over where she saw the four guys sitting there talking. Natalia right away squeled but after the girls were seated they acted cool as if nothing happened.

WAS THIS A FOOLISH GAME OF DESTINY.

Tom was watching Lauren with a fragile but serous spanish like fece with bright brown reddish hair, looking deeply into her light caramel eyes. When he thought to himself "I dont care about that stuff" and intantly was attrackted by her big but not so big chest. Lauren was to busy to notice. While this happened to Tom. Madelline said" im going to the bathroom." As madelline walked toward te guys to go to the bathroom. Gustav glanced to see her but quickly went back to his conversation.

The four girls were enjoying their exquiset meal, when Madelline lauren and Natalia started singing happy birthday to Mandy. As the boys took a look at the beautiful and happy girls singing Natalia calls to the waiter."hey waiter may we have the bill please." Oh no need ladies the nice gentlemen across the room payed for it.

stay tuned to see what happens next

[DeeDee]

aww thats just soo nice

mehr bitte hunnij wenn du kannst

[Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S]

exciting...please post more soon...i wish someone would buy me dinner...heck why not just have someone as my prom date...wow I have issues...sorry...i really loving it!

[bbgroove]

BILL PAID THE BILL!!!!!!

that seriously made me laugh my but off (^_^)

update soon it&#39;s getting good....

[Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S]

BILL PAID THE BILL!!!!!!

that seriously made me laugh my but off (^_^)

update soon it&#39;s getting good....


hey that reminds me of one of the songs we hav eto sing and it makes me crack up everytime because I think of Bill while I sing"pay the Bill"

hehehehe...ok im done now... :D

[amandaaraujo]

hey guys ill write tomorrow cause im really tired but you guys are in for a giagantic surprise so stay tuned:)

[bbgroove]

I hat e surprises... I&#39;m the kind of girl who reads the end of the book before starting it or reading the spoiler of a movie before watching it...

but I&#39;m sure your surprise will be an exception... can&#39;t wait til tomorrow (^_^)

[amandaaraujo]

CHAPTER 4

Natalia went t o the guys table to thank them but turned out she started flirting with Georg."hey guys thanks so much for paying our bill." Bill thought she had said his name but then noticed she met the money bill. laughter circled the table. Soon after Lauren came to her flirtatuos friend to clean up what she started "Natalia get off your high horse and come on we need to find a hotel room for the four of us ." Laughter once again came to the table at Laurens comment.

Then Mandy and Madelline came to see what the excitement was all about."hey guys thanks so much for everything but really have to go." said Mandy responsivly. then Bill got up and said" so do we but isf you need help getting a hotel room." Then he looked into Mandy's eyes making her blush. "oh not to expesive because we're not rich or famous." said Lauren " i wish ." said Mandy with a sigh. " ok then we'll pull some strings so you guys can stay at the same hotel we are in." said Tom with a smirk on his face. which he tried to get Lauren's attention but failed in the act. all he got was Lauren rolling her eyes at him. "which hotel wold that be." NAtalia asked suspicously . "the Hilton" responded Georg flirting back at Natalia.

So the girls went with the guys in thei car avoiding the group formed by TOkio Hotel fans. When all of them got into the car Mandy saidZ" we haven't introduced ourselves." "I'm Amanda but you can call me Mandy, this is my cousin Lauren and these are my two best friends Natalia and Madelline. " well nice to meet you girls." the guys said in unisom which caused giggles between the girls. " oh ok my name is bill this is my twin bro Tom and this is georg and Gustav. The girls smiled. when they got to the Hotel a huge amount of screaming fans were crowded around the hotel. the sound of the screaming fans was deafoning. " is this what you have put up with" asked Mandy with copassion. "yeah" said all four of them in unisom. "But i like it" Tom said flirting with Lauren but Lauren still pay attention to Him. "yeah just because the girls all fall for you" said Bill Mockingly. the girls were escorted in an other sid of the hotel to avoid tabloads and paparazzi. sighning autographs and taking pictures with the girls the finally got to the front desk where they saw the girls waiting for them. The boys were talkig to the guy at the front desk. "sir do have any extra rooms for these beautys." georg said winking at Natalia which made her blush and make the girls giggle. "eh no" "sir but did you look" bill said angrily. "look this hotel has been packed so may please get out there i need to attend other people" fu**ing manager" tom said under his breath. The girls understood" don't worry we'll find another place" said madelline sadly. " no how about since we have four rooms we can bunk up and leave two for th girls" said Gustav proudly. Bill shook his head in agreement so did the boys. "aw thank you so much" we'll pay for the rooms okay" said Mandy. "NO" siad bill think of it as a B-day gift. "its fine we'll pay for it" said Bill. "NO you guys payed for our food we have to give something back" No really its fine " said bill insiting getting annoyed.

WHile that happened Gustav was checkin Madelline out. She gave himm a heart warming smile which melted his heart. tha was interupted by Mandy's almos screaming voice "you KNow what then we'll pay minimon and you guys pay the rest if you wont let me pay in full" Mandy almost screaming at bill which was so much taller than her. "Mandy is the kind of person who starts with money has to pay some part to not feel like a burdon" lauren explaining it to the guys which made MAndy blush and give her cousin an angry glare."its settled you pay minimon and we'll pay the rest sounds good Mandy" said bill softly which made Mandy blush even more because she felt guilty for yelling at him.

When everyone got up to their rooms Tom and Georg walked up to the girls rooms inviting them to go to a club with them Lauren and Natalia immediatly said yes"Sure what time" At 8" tom said "wait thats in ten mintutes." SO you better hurry up said tom flirting. but lauren ignored it. Lauren and Natalia went to get ready. TOm asked mandy "Are you coming hotstuff" again flirting. "Do you always have to be flirting with a girl to get their atention, and yesim going but later. " Georg came up to the girls and you could hear"aaahhhhh georg dont do that" ahhhh i almost got you with the curling iron. said natalia.. ahhh stop it stop. the girls were chasing him around the room with the steaming hot iron. hahahahahh. so the four of them left for the club Madellin are yu coming cause im ready. "um no im reading this great book you go" are you sure yeah" ok" Mandy was leaving her room when she bumped into bill putting them in an akward position as if they were about to kiss "um excuse me sorry" said mandy quickly. MAndy where are you going" asked Bill " oh um im going to the club your brother invited me. "what are you doing here" Mandy asked suspicously."oh I came to ask you if you wanted to come with me. "will you" "sure lets go"

At the club Lauren was dancing and having a good time Laughing with Natalia. Soon GEORG came up to Natalia asked her to dance"yeah sure" So tom and Luaren were lestr alone. soon the conversation carried on Tom asked Lauren"you want to dance" Lauren feeling more secure "yeah sure"
Mandy and bill walked in the club all smiling and fooling around when mandy hears Laurens screams"oh my God thats my cousin" said yelling at the top of her lungs so bill would hear because the music was to loud"bill thats my cousin come on" both ran toward the where the screaming came from. when bill got to his brother and Mandy went to luaren and Natalia. BIll asked woridly" what happened" that your perveted brother put his hand on my ***." screamed Lauren "please control your idotic brother" Natalia scowlded. Then Tom laughinG and Luaren came up to him and slapped him across the face. "You dont even know how to treat a girl you only ttreat them like hookers but im not like that "so dont even try to talk to me everrrr" Bill went up to Lauren "lauren im really sorry" "bill you dont have to apologize" then she gave tom an evil glare. then she left. "bill i think i should i think i should talk to my cousin."yeahGoerg im going to my friend.

Bill and toms conversation
" you idiot you shouldnt of done that"
"what i couldn't control myself"
"yeah you can never control your hormones"
"jeez for once could you respect a girl"
and you ruined my chance with Mandy"
"wait you like Mandy"
Yeah is there a problem "
"no"
"im going back to the hotel"
"allright bye"


Bill left and tom satyed with georg to party some more.

lets see what happends next so stay tuned:)

[DeeDee]

ow maj gowdd tom pleasee i beg you pleasee learn how to treat a woman will youu

mehr bitte wenn du kannst hunnij

[amandaaraujo]

ow maj gowdd tom pleasee i beg you pleasee learn how to treat a woman will youu

mehr bitte wenn du kannst hunnij


hahahahah yeah i know grow up all ready lol hAHAHH im glad you guys are enjoying it

[Tokio_Ho]

ME~OW!!!! This fanfic = love!! <3333
Now there should be a whole fee-asco(sp!) with edible panties!!! <3 jk <3

[cherry_kaulitz]

I LOVE IT THAT WAS SO TYPICAL OF TOM BUT OH WOW MORE PLZ

[bbgroove]

GAH!!!

I can&#39;t believ I missed you updating a chapter (._.)

I am now sad... I&#39;m leaving for four day and won&#39;t be able to read this fanfic for that time... but I promise I will comment on EVERY chapter you have from here on out (after 4-day competition (^_^))

cya sweetie (^_^)

[amandaaraujo]

GAH!!!

I can&#39;t believ I missed you updating a chapter (._.)

I am now sad... I&#39;m leaving for four day and won&#39;t be able to read this fanfic for that time... but I promise I will comment on EVERY chapter you have from here on out (after 4-day competition (^_^))

cya sweetie (^_^)


oh ok dont worry im glad your enjoying it have fun in choir:)

[xXxMandiixXx]

hehe love it

bahah theyre is a girl named mandy or amanda thats my name lolz


keep it coming

<3 Mandii xx

[amandaaraujo]

Ok guys i may not update in a little bit because i have A science fair thing which our science teacher told us todayto start it and the due date is the 30th can you beleive that oh well mabe very soon ill start writig again:) :D :)

[amandaaraujo]

hehe love it

bahah theyre is a girl named mandy or amanda thats my name lolz


keep it coming

<3 Mandii xx

oh cool my name is Amanda but i have two nick names Mandy and Smanders ahahah

[amandaaraujo]

CHAPTER 5

When Bill wnet back tothe hoteltrying to get alone time with Mandy. "Its ok he's a jerk anyways"Bill heard natalias faint voice through the door." I know that, the worst thing was that i started to likd him but now he just ruined it for the both of us." "Dont worry, you'll find someone that will treat the way youor supposed to be treated" Mandy said tryingto console her furios almost crying cousin. Bill decided to stop easdropping and knokced on the door softly. " Who is it" asked Madelline. "Its me Bill can I come in?" As Madelline unlocked the door Bill looked around nervously, when Madelline finally opened the door Bill gave a faint smile. He quickly up to Lauren"I'm so sorry about what Tom did to you." "No its ok you dont have to apologize." When Bill looked at Mandy with theintention to ask her out he chickend out."well i just came here to see if Lauren, i have to go and start rehearsing." He looked at Mandy and saw her with a brigt smile and he knew it was meant for him. " your leaving so soon" whined Madelline "yeah, im sorry i cantstay any longer, Bye" Bill said with a nervous voice. As he left he had not notice he had left the door open. Mandy quickly got up to close it when she heard Bill talking to himself" ugh why did i chicken out to ask out Mandy" "ugh im so stupid" "I could've, she was right next to me in front of me" ughghg". "you were going to aske me out" said Mandy while closing the door room. Bill jumped in astonishment. "you heard that?" "yeah" " so were you going to ask me out" Mandy repeated her question longing for an answer."yeah, do you , im sorry i didnt ask you in there, well i was nerv..." he was stopped there by mandy's index finger. "your cute when your nervous" said Mandy with a grin on her face. ten she gave him a kiss on his cheek and said while she went back to the room."tomorrow at 7pm at the top of the empire state building ill meet yu in the enterence. She smiled and giggled as she walked in her room. Bill was astonished and happy at the same time. he smiled then he heard a bunch of girls giggling as he walked away he asumed she had told them.

Lauren's POV

Lauren was so happy at the resturant. All the girls were singing happy birthday to Mandy they were laughing and Lauren almost cried and peed herself from the laughter. After they had calmed down she heard Natalia say"waiter can we have our bill" But the waiter had told her that the guys across the room had payed for their dinner." you go thank them" Lauren heard Madelline teasing Mandy. "NO you go" she told Lauren. "No" she answered. "you know what all you chickens ill go" the girls heard Natalia say. Luren watched as Natalia mae her way to the guys. All the girls started giggling.When at the corner of Laurens eye she could see Natalia flirting so she got up before Natalia did something Stupid. THen the girld found themselves in tokio hotels car having the time of their lives. Laughing. when they got to the hotel the snooty manager told the guys there were no rooms so theboys so kindly gave us two of their's since they had four.then out of nowhere Lauren sees tom getting close to her and wispered "ill give you my room so we can be together forever""get a life" wispered Lauren giggling. But Mandy had to be so humble they ended up paying minimun of the pay for the rooms.

when the girls were unpacking tom ang georg came to their rooms and asked them if they wanted to go to the club Lauren desperate of going to party said yes so did Natalia. so they were in toms cadillac going toward the club Tom started to flirt with Luaren again. But she just rolled her eyes.

they were in the club having a good time. WHen georg goes up to Natalia and takes her to the dance floor.
Leaving Lauren and tom alone to talk. "hey why are you so mean" asked tom with inocense in his eyes"Becaue i dont fall easily head lover heels for a guy, oh and your trying to hard." she giggled making him laugh."so where are you"
from asked tom interested."im from colombia""oh thats a nice country whydid you leave, why are you here?" "because i want to persue my career here. "but i reallhy want to go home. why so many questions tom" asked Lauren suspicously thinking he was going to be those psycopaths that wanted to know everysingle thing about her. "no no reason just starting a conversation," are you dating any one " asked TOm. "No" "how about you" "nope" "im tired of talking lets dance."allright" Lauren felt more secure around tom so she was letting loose when she was thinking to herself when she feels someones hand on her rear. she looked andit was toms hand. she swiped it violently."hey whats the matter with you" bellowed Lauren angrily. "no just feeling what i got in mhy hands" "ughghghgh why do always think im an easy girl you can lay your hands on" she screamed. when she saw bill and mandy run toward them. "what happened asked Bill no just that your perverted brother grabbed my ***. she heard tom laughing she walked up to him and slapped him you just los your chance and you will nbever ever talk to me in your life. she said with tears in her eyes of how furious she was. she walked out with Mandy and Natalia they were on the side walk. Bill offered a ride but the girls refused " i think the cool air will calm Luaren" Mabdy said to bill with worry in her eyes. bill jut left ion his car back to the hotel.


Alright guys it mught be in two days ill update because of the stupid sciencefair in my school enjoy :D

[DeeDee]

but tommmm did you have to ruin it grr

mehr bitte wenn du kannst hun
it's ok we'll try to wait patiently

[Tokio_Ho]

OMG!! the nail biting suspense! By the time this is near the end I iwll need fake nails to cover the ones I've bittien off!

[amandaaraujo]

CHAPTER 6
color=#8000FF]Mandy's POV

As Mandyand Bill were driving in Bills car going to the club to meet up with Lauren and Natalia. They talked the whole ride. "so what brings you to the city besides your birthday.""Well I love the city" Mandy said with illusions and dreams in her eyes. "yeah its so beautiful to". said Bill los in her eyes. "well what you here Bill."well we have a concert. Bill still lost in her eyes. Hey do you wear contacts or did you die your hair?" Bill asked this had tormented him since they've met."Niether I'm all natural.""WOW" "yeah i know i get that question a lot" they both laughed. As they parked the car then walked toward the enterance. Mandy felt a tickle in her ribs."ahh" she screamed." "Bill you scared me" "why" You came out of nowhere." "hahah" Both laughed. he kept tickling her so she started but failed because she couldn't resist laughing. "stop""ahhhh" "please stopim really ticklish" "neverr" "ahhh please bill stop." When they got to te enterence when a scream ruined the moment. they ran toward the screamed.

THE DATE

Mandy was getting ready with the help of Lauren. She was extremely nervous,it was her first date. "what if i make a fool of myself.""oh come on everyone does.""thanks for the help." mandy said sarcasticly."Dont worry he likes you a lot he'll understand."

Bill in his room

Im so freakin nervous" Bill said to his brother."You nervous, what did this girl do to you." Tom said mockingly."Your no help"n "oh i have to tell you something tom." "uh come on if its about me putting my hand on Laurens *** i dont want to hear it ill apologize later." "well partly" "ugh fine lay it on me" "well when i was going to ask Mandy out after the whole drama i heard the girls talking and i heard Lauren say that she started liking you but you had to ruin it by you akready know what." "**** what did i do" "yeah you should've of thought before you did that stupid move" "now she doesnt even want to see you not even in a photo." "oh ****" " well i have to go pick up Mandy." "have funon your date" Tm said devilishly.bill just ignored him.

There was a knock on the door. Lauren went up to answer the door. "who is it" "its me bill im here to pick up Mandy." when Mandy heard that she cloul've sworn her heart skipped a beat. Lauren opened the door smiled and looked at MAndy. "werent we going to mee up at the enterance of the empire state building. "yeah but since we're so close i decided to pick you up and save you the ride on cabn" bill said and winked at her. Mnady smiled and walked ot with Bill.

They were in the car."Why are you so quiet tonight" "im just nervous,this is my first date" "oh really , do you have butterflies" Yeah" "so do I. both of them giggled." Bill was so nervous he felt like his hands were flowing streams. Mandy felt like passing out . they got to the empire statebuilding holding hands and smiling. "i have a surprise for you" "really for me."yup" Close your eyes" "ok" as Bill placed his hands on Mandys eyes they walked toward the elevater close t each other.giggling.[/color]
[color=#BF40BF][size=150]stay tuned for more its getting juicy and youll find out what Madelline acually did.[/

[DeeDee]

grr why did you have to stop there :evil:

mehr bitte you're gonna drive me up the wall

[bbgroove]

WOW....

I&#39;ve missed a lot, but this is REALY good (^_^)

more please

[amandaaraujo]

Chapter 7

Madelline POV

I watched Mandy as she left and as soon i heard the door close i went back to my book,when i heard a knock at the door i went up to answer it thinking it was Mandy that she forgot something to my surprise when i went and opened it it was Gustav. "hey you mind if we talk, im lonley in my room" "um no come in" "so what do yu want to talk about" "hmm i dont know" "Hmm what are you reading" "oh um its US girls and those girls by bbgroove." "oh whats it about." well its about four girls going on vacation to germany and meet a famous german rock band" she said slowing down at the last bit."wierd huh" "yeah what are the odds of us meeting." "both laughed" Gustav got up and sat next to her Madelline was so burried in her book she didnt notice. "Madelline what are you doing" reding what does it look like im doing." Gustav blushed then leaned and was aboout to kiss her when "BANG" the door swung oopen giving Madellin and Gustav the scare of their lives. "I ****in hate him" Lauren screamed Gustav looked and slowly aparted from MAdelline. He saw Mandy and Natalia run after her. "what happened yelled MAdeline in worry. Lauren was to furious to answer then Mandy explained Gustav went up to LAuren and apologized and left. Before he left he smled at Madelline and Madelline smiled back.



Bills POV after he had talked Mandy he ran to his room and called TOm on his cellphone " guess what i asked MAndy out well she did but that isnt the point." "um good for you" "yeah i just need you to know and tell Georg i have and idea for our date tomorrow." "i was thinking of giving her a surprise party because Lauren told me she never had one" Oh ok ill tell georg and he'll call NAtalia. "ok thanks bro " anthing."




Mandy's POV

As they were in the elevater Mandy felt comforable and less nervous with Bill plus she didn't mind his hands on her face. when the elevator dinged i jumped a little. "we're here" Bill said mandy tried to pull away but Bill denied."let go" wait still have to take a few steps." Bill opened to what seemed to me a door. he let go gently. "wow what a view" "how did you get it empty." "oh i just let sliped a few cash to the guy and i set this up." "aw thank you" "ohh i almost forgot" Hey guys come out." "SURPRISE" a huge crowd screamed." Mandy was blushing and felt like her cheeks were on fire." "happy late Birhtday Lauren screamed." I turned around "Bill" "yeah" "you did this all for me" "yup your cousin told me you had never had a surprise birthday party so i got an idea." "thank you so much" I tried as hard to reach him so i just pulled him toward me and gavehim a kiss on his cheeks. he blushed then he wrapped his arms around on my waist and i wrapped mine around his neck he was lightly touching his lips with mine but my phone wrang." Excuse me" she took a few steps away from Bill. "fuch who could be calling" she said to herself."hello"sobs "dad why are you crying" Mandy had never seen or heard her dad cry so it took her by surprise and shock and started to tear up." "dad why are you crying" she asked again " Amanda sweety" sobs"your mom died" "WHAT" she screamed she started to cry sob and weep uncontrollably."dady dont telll me that" she said in between her tears. "ill come home right away" no honey stay where you are you dont really want come home now" she just the phone downn and through it down at the ground. she through herself on the floor and screamed "NOOOO WHY ME" she cried and cried when Bill saw her like that he ran worried and lifted her up." "MANDY MANDY WHATS WRONG HE YELLED" Mandy looked at him and saw his tears and the worry in his eyes and that all i remember i blacked out. LAuren , MAdelline, Naatalia , Georg gustav and tom came runing." WHat happened" LAuren screamed looking at her poor defensless cousin in Bills arms. "i dont know " what did you do" madelline screamed. Nothing she was talking on the phone and she started to cry and shacking so i went to her. Natalia went to pick up the phone off the floor and hit redial. "hello" hello " oh hi jaun(thats mandys dads name) "what happned" "om my GOD im so sorry" allright ok " bye" thats what the group heard. NAtalia came and explained the situation bill when he heard that MAndy's mom had died his heart fell to the floor. he leaned over to mandy and wispered in her ear its ok im here dont leave me here not now. he kissed her on the cheek and lifted her up and cradled her into his arms and took her to the car. where everyone followed. he could just see his little angel defensles in his arms made him cry harder. to see her in such pain. he drove off leaving the others behind he thought to himself why her why when she wa the happiest girl he had seen had to become so sad and full of pain in just a few seconds "**** ****it wy why now" ":****" he said to himself. when he got to the hotel he didnt have her hotel room key so he took her to his bedroom and layed her in his bed took off her shoes and pu a blancket on top of her and he sat down just crying he felt her pain he knew what it felt to be in so much pain. he just sat there lookinn at her with pain.

stay tuned :cry: :cry:

[bbgroove]

YOU MENTIONED MY STORY!!!!! (^_^) :LOL:
I LOVED THAT (^_^)

poor mandy... I had a friend who lost a mother, it was heart breaking :cry: :cry:

on a happier note, Madeline and Gustav are cute together (^_^)

[amandaaraujo]

YOU MENTIONED MY STORY!!!!! (^_^) :LOL:
I LOVED THAT (^_^)

poor mandy... I had a friend who lost a mother, it was heart breaking :cry: :cry:

on a happier note, Madeline and Gustav are cute together (^_^)

yeah that almost happned to me when i was three my mom was diognosed lung cancer the wierd thing is that she didnt smoke she had surgey no she has one lung and bald to top it off when i was 7 she had a ministroke again sick and bald i hated seeing my mom like this now im 17 and her cancer came back but not to her lung but to her liver my moms a fighter so when i told her about my story and told i was going to say she died she totally agreed (cause she keeps reminding me that when shes gone i had to no cry)but tha made me cry anyways, she sid that to loose myself in pain in the story it would be easier to take it if she acually you know.... :cry: :cry:
anyways happy thing now theres going to be somthing big so stay tuned and yeah i showed your story up there cause thats how much i like it...love it :D

[amandaaraujo]

ill update more mabe after tomorrow (science fair ughhh) keep rockin everyone :D :D

[RetteMich]

mehr bitte

[amandaaraujo]

Chapter 8
Mandy's POV
I woke up and i found myself in a strange room.It wasnt mine. I heard the shower go on. I looked around scared when i noticed it was Bill and Toms room, i eased my suspicion a little but i thought to myself what am i doing here. I remembered what my dad had told me earlier tonight but still had a question why i was in Bills room but didnt care. I raised my legs to my chest and wrapped my arms arround my legs and started to cry. I heard the shower turn off then a bunch of sounds in the bathroom and head a crash. I giggled a little but still there were tears coming down my eyes then i heard mumbling with pain. Then Bill walked out with clothes on but his hair was wet. I assumed he took his clothes with him to the bathroom. "hey are you ok" he asked. I looked up with tears streamin out of my eyes but i didnt respond just looking at him made me cry a little less. Bill came and wrapped his arms around me. He was stronger than i imagined but it felt good to feel his embrace."what happned all i remember was seeing your face at the party" "oh ok you blacked out so I took you back here because i didnt have your room key so i let you rest in my bed, id let you sleep in Toms bedd because its more comfortable but i have no idea what kind of things are in that bed." he smiled i laughed a little. he gave me a bigger smile when i laughed. " thank you for the party sorry i ruined it." "its not your fault. tears came to my eyes agian unexpected fell on bills bed leaving little wet dots. he came again and hugged me so i huged him back feeling secure in someones arms knowing no matter how hurt i was he'd be there for me.

Bill's POV
I set her down on my bed i wrapped her with a blancket. I went to the closet took my clothes and a towel. I walked as quietly as possible to the bathroom and turned on the shower. I took my clothes placed them neatly on the sink and stepped into the shower. the warm water pouring down my head to my face and to the rest of my body was so relaxing, i kept thinking about today but tried to leave those painful images behind me. I turned of the shower dried myself up and put on my clothes when crash down on the floor i went. "ohhh" i mumbled trying not to wake up Mandy. I heard a giggle and noticed i had woken her up. Im not use to changing in the bathroom but since Mandy was there i didnt want to embarass myself but i guess i did that already. I walked out and there she was a very small smile but tears coming down. I went to her and asked her if she was ok. she didnt respond so i just went up to er and gave her a hug. [/color]Then we started talking.




ill post the conversation if you want to so leave comments oh and then we'll see how the other guys did coming home.

[bbgroove]

Whose POV is the first paragraph?..

it&#39;s cute...

[amandaaraujo]

Whose POV is the first paragraph?..

it&#39;s cute...


oops heheh thx for telling me its supposed to be Mandy's POV heeheh

[ShadowIW]

L....O....V.....E!

[amandaaraujo]

hmmm no one is reading or leaving comments well some of you guys ill wait till tomorrow and if there isnt any comments ill skip there conversation and go directly to the girls onthe street and the boys following> :(

[amandaaraujo]

Chapter 9The girls and boys POVThe six were walking along the sidewalk.The reason why is because Bill had taken Toms car and he had just left wihtout the six of them so Mandy wouldn't know he doesnt have his driving licnese. "Im tired" whined Natalia. "Yeah we all are but no ones complaining." said Madelline harshly." (Madelline can be harsh at times) Gustav looked at Madelline in shock."Don't Worry she just acts like that when she's tired,frustraded or mad." said Natalia. Madelline just glared at Natalia and blushed. "Oh ok" said Gustav barley. Then he made a self note :waatch out for Madelline: the thought made him smile and laugh a little.

After what had happned Tom stopped trying to get Laurens attention."Mabe i'll stay here and get some coffee"said Lauren."Ill go with you" TOm said quickly."Alone Laauren said loud enough to get it straight to him that she detest him, As she walked away. Tom felt guilty." um guys ill stay with Lauren so she wont get lost" TOm said quietly to the group."BUt she just said" said Georg but cut off by Tom" Ill keep my distance." TOm responded coldly.

Laurens POVAs i walked farther and fartherfrom the group I just started crying thinking of what my cousin was doing in this moment. I felt what she was feeling but i just cried harder.I just couldnt imagine that my aunt well you know. I ran through the lit streets of tiimes square. I felt someone follow me so i ran faster when i tripped and fell on the wet concrete floor i hadn't noticed that it started to rain. I just lie there thinking. And what was my cousin and i supposed to do, I felt my clothes getting soaking wet underneath the almost black sky, when i saw someon before me. I didnt want to look up I knew who it was.when i sid"I thought i made myself clear i wanted to be alone" LAurren said with anger in her eyes slowly looking up piercing right throug TOm. "I know but i couldn't just leave you alone in the streets on this cold night."I don't ****ing care i said i wanted to be alone.""Lauren Please listen to me."What do i have to hear that is so important." "Well i wanted to say....im sorry." "Thats all you had to say, and what made you think that i wanted to hear your apology right now.""I just want you to give me a chance" " I gave you a chance but u ****ed it up." " i Know but I" cut off by Lauren"If you dont leave in this instance ill scream" "fine scream if you want i just want to talk to you" when i stared into his eyes i saw sincerety but i didnt want to beleive so i begant to open my mouth to scream when i felt him rush up to me and felt his lips agianst mine I enjoyed it after 1 second but knew he couldn't find out i pushed him violently i raised my hand to slap him but before i could do anything he grabbed it and pulled me into his embrace he hugged me so tightly i felt i couldn't breath all i could do was cry into his chest and our clothes were soaking wet so we went into the nearest CAFE`.

Georg,Gustav, Madelline,and Natalia POV

as they walked toward the enterance of the hotel they saw news casters paparazzi tabloads you name it.


ILL CONTINUE THIS PART LATER IF I GET COMMENTS :( :(

HEHEHEH ILL UPDATE SOON ITS JUST TO MUCH HOMEWORK HOPE YOU LIKE THIS CHAPTER :D

[bbgroove]

Poor girls...

update soon

and tell lauren to fall in love with Tom already (^_^)

[amandaaraujo]

Poor girls...

update soon

and tell lauren to fall in love with Tom already (^_^)

hehehe yeah prob in the next CH :D

[bbgroove]

Poor girls...

update soon

and tell lauren to fall in love with Tom already (^_^)

hehehe yeah prob in the next CH :D


YAY!

[amandaaraujo]

Poor girls...

update soon

and tell lauren to fall in love with Tom already (^_^)

hehehe yeah prob in the next CH :D


YAY!
hhijihihihhihhihhhh imm so giggly today ohhh and i have a a biggg mix up drama mabe even accidental cheating
lips that never meet cuz of interuptions mabe mandy will get the kiss at the end :ooops did i say that hihi: but havent told you with who still bill or somone else hmmmmmmm mabe youll just have to stay tuned hih oh and almos forgot ?drugs?

[bbgroove]

:o :o :o :o
:shock: :shock: :shock: :shock:
:? :? :?

WHAT THAT HEY!!!!

OMG SO MUCH IS HAPPENING!!!!!

update soon please!

[amandaaraujo]

Continueing Chapter 9

Goerg,Gustav,Natalia,Madelline POV

As they walked toward the enterance they could see paparazzi, news caster, tabloads you name it.
"oh shiesse" Gustav saidin astonishment. *ring ring* Geord picked up the phone it was Jost."Georg why is the hotel you guys staying up filled with cameras" "I dont know we kept our cover real low i dont know how they knew we were here" " Ok Georg you need to find out a way to get in the hotel and not get noticed" "ok Bye Josat"

"that was Jost we need to get in and try not to get the attention from the camera." said Georg as fast as he could s o they wouldn't waste time."ok how about we go thjrough the back" said Gustav trying to help the situation." "No they're probably there too." said Natalia biutting har on her lip she didnt notice it started to bleed. "got it" said Natalia draging Madelline Georg Gustav and Madelline toward the fire escape latters. "what im not climbing those." screamed Madelline, when she had noticed she said it to loud she. All three slapped their hands agains Madelline's mouth. "owwwww sorry ill try to keep more quiet" said Madelline whispering. As the four climbe the stairs Madelline was getting dissy she hates hights ever since she went to six flags and puked herself sick. Gustav grabbed Madelline's hand. She smiled and said "Don't worry i'll be ok your the one who needs to get in despretly." Gustav smiled and said"I know but the thats not going to stop me from saving my princess." Madelline smiled and took another step.
*baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnng:Ahhhhhhhh hhhhhhh* they heard Natalia's stepp had broke off. "NATALIA" all screamed ion unisom. Georg quickly went cliumbing down as fast as he could. "Georg HELP me " as natalia was daangling from the stairs. her hands started to get cut on tnhe metal no she only one hand supporting her from her faithful death.

[bbgroove]

:shock: :shock: :shock:
Update before she falls to her death!!!!!!!!!!

princess...lol... that was cute (^_^)

[amandaaraujo]

:shock: :shock: :shock:
Update before she falls to her death!!!!!!!!!!

princess...lol... that was cute (^_^)


I know i just of that ihihi.

[amandaaraujo]

CHAPTER 10

Tom's POV
As we ran into the cafe` I noticed the Cafe` was empty for no reason since the sighn said open. I looked toward the counter no one was there then a turned to face Lauren who i saw was as astonished as me. "woa creepy no ones here" i said as i turned once again toward Luaren but saw that she was gone."LUAREN,LAUREN if this is a joke its not funny?"
No answer. "LAUURREEENNN" I yelled. as i looked franticly through the Cafe` I heard a faint scream in the distance. It sent a chill down my spine i ran toward the scream i saw a flight of stairs a started running then panting because i had lost my breath. "LUAREN" i screamed once again.

KK i have to stop here ill continue tomorrow cuz my mom is soooooo anoying at times BYEEEE.

[amandaaraujo]

Chapter 11
Lauaren's POV

As we walked in it was deserted i had a strange feeling i kept on getting chills for every step we take. "its creepy" i heard him say. when i feel someone behind the person grabbed me he covered my mouth with a cloth and his enormous hand. I tried to scream but the grip was to stron there was something on the cloth that made me drousy. I caught a glimpse of the person, it was a guy about 6'5 taller than bill but had muscles all over he had evil in his eyes it scared me. some how through the struggling i bit his hand he let go for an instance and i screamed "TOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMM" i was afraid he didnt hear me cause i had noticed the man had taken me up a flight of stairs. As the man fregained himself i screamed as loud as i could but soon i was in the mans grasp i was scared i wondered what would happen to me.
I tried to keep myself awake but the substance that the cloth was strong. I just kept figting.



Mandy's POV

Bill let go slowly form our hug. "umm sorry to ask but how did your mom die?" Bill asked with a concern look. I didn't want to talk about it "umm you dont have to tell me if you don't want to." he said and was about to change the subject but i stopped him."no its ok, its a long story and i really want to let it out." he nodded still with the concen in his eyes. "well it all started when i was three she got lung cancer." i was cut off "wow that young" i nodded. "well she didnt smoke or she wouldnt of made it this far.".......

Bills POV

As she was telling me about her mom and said that she didn't smoke and it just happened and that if she had smoked she wouldn't have lived this long i felt guilt in myself knowing that my brother and i smoked. as we talked and she told me the story i saw that her life had been much harder than the divorce my brother and i had gone through. i felt sorry for her but then she noticed."Bill dont feel sorry for me life is life it happends and i really don't like when people start with that crap that people get sympathy its not that i hate it just makes me feel uncomfortable."" oh um ok sorry" i responded. "it ok really never did have a good relationsip with my parents but my mom understood me better than my overprotective dad." " oh, but then how did you get to come her efor 2 weeks." i asked suspiciously. "oh i lied and said that Natalia's and Madelline's moms came." she responded with a giggle. we stopped talking an i leaned foward to kiss her lips we were about an inch away when i heard her heart thumping really hard so did mine but hers was in an alarming pace and out of nowhere she stated coughing an coughing uncontrolably her face got pale and she was gasping for air.


Natalia's POV

"GEORG HELLLLLLPPPP MEE SOMEONE AHHHH" I was freaking dangling from the railing cbout 12 stories high. my hands started geting cut on the metal. I cried from the pain in my fear of falling. my left hand sliped and i screamed louder."ahhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh" "heeeeeellllp" i saw all of them trying as fast as they could to come to my aid. But for me iot felt like an eternity i started to cry.
Georg's POV






When i heard Natalia scream my name i quickly without looking climbed down as fast as he could. "heeeelllp" i heard again mhy hands got swaety and my nerves were on edge. I cought up to her i saw her hands gushing blood and without thinking i grapped her by the shoulders and lifted her up with every single energy i had i then notice i pulled her to hard and we fell on the little walkway the fire escape had. Then she gasped for air and smiled at me it seemed that she had forgotten what had happened.

Natalia's POV

He squeezed my arms to hard but i didnt care he had just saved my life i smiled and forgot everything when i fell on top of him on the walkway."are you ok" he asked I just kept smiling. i opened my hand and let out a shrieck of pain. "ohh those look deep we need to stop the flowing of blood." I looked at him and cocked my head in confusion and asked him." how do you know so much medical things." "oh hehe i watch a lot of Er and animal planet vets." "i gave out a little laugh and so di he when we heard Gustav and Madelline crack up. ahahhahah "you never told me you watched that, hahah oh and now i know when you kept on saying that it just happened to appear," Gustav said mockingly. "because you guys would make fun of like you are now ." he frowned. "its ok georg i think its sexy that a guy would like to take of someone espesialy someon you care about. i let out a devilish grin he just let out a faint laugh. "ok um do you have gause on you?" he asked then noticed he had said something stupid once again and heard madelline and gustav cracking up again. "never mind ill use my shirt. as he took it off i was dumbfounded he had such a physic that made me melt inside he ripped it and i was cought staring i blushed and looked somewhere else.

Goerg's POV

when i tore my shirt i noticed Natalia was staring it made me feel wierd but ten i just let it go i wrapped peices of the shirt tigfht on her hands she jumped a little when i tightned it.

Mandy's POV

I felt like i was going to die my asma atack came back it hadn't for years but now it decided to come back. I was gasping,"eeiiihgiegeie" "ughhcoughcough" I noticed Bill was so scared and i didnt want him to be.

Bill's POV

I ws so freaked out she was not breathing i thought she was going to die in my arms. when i heard frantic knocking on the window i freacked out even more. I peaked and it was Georg and gustav then i saw Madelline and Natalia behind. I opened it quickly " **** you scared me guys" i screamed. Then i noticed Georg didn't have a shirt and all of them were sweating."uh what were you guys doing" out there i raised my eyebrow. "then i saidwere you guys doing it out side?" "NOoooo you perv" geor practicly screamed. we were running away from the paparazzi at the enterance of the Hotel" Madelline said catching her breath" Omg how they find out." "I don." cut off by Natalia . "what the **** what is happening to Mandy" she screamed . I then came to what i really was supposed to do and i felt stupid." you idiot how can you be talking when your girlfriend is there gasping for air.When i heard the word girlfriend my heart jumped .they were still poutside but not for long natalia pushed Georg who fell on top of me then Madeline Gustav we all fell like dominos and natalia stepped all over us running toward Mandy.
"**** what do we do" Natalia screamed " what wrong " i asked franticly. " her freaking asma came back she hasnt had it for 2 years but i guess it came back." she said runing throught the room trying to think of what to do.
"ahaaa got it, Bill do you have black coffe" natalia aske panting. " yeah here i reached ove the side table and hand it to natalia spilling most of it. i saw her lift Mandy's haed up and Mandy drank it coughing. soon seconds later she started breathing normally. she had coffe stains all over her white top which became see through. Madelline and Gustave and georg got up after wattching the drama that had just happened.

Mandy's POv
I had a drink of the coffe that helps open you lugs during the attack. "HoLy shiesse" i said everyone looked at me. Natalia looked at me "WHere is your inhaler" she said sternly like she was my mom. "uh i left it at home because i thought the asma went away. "yeah well you thought wrong im getting you the inahler now"he said " wait but i need a prescrition and the doctors office is closed right now." "fine we'll get it tomorrow." Natalia said. Bill ran to me an hugged me and he said dont scare me like that agian. I giggled and hugged him back covering him in coffe. I appaarted and i looked at my shirt you could see my bra i quickly covered my chest and i felt my face was beat red. I ran into the bathroom and yeled to Madelline to get me a clean shirt. "Oh ****" i said.

Bill's POV

when i saw her look at herslef i had notice that the coffe had made her shir see through i guess she noticed i saw and she ran to the bathroom i blushed so hard.

Madelline's POV

I ran to our room with Natalia to get her a shirt. "i found one" Natalia said when my cellphone rang ."hello"i said "madelline oh thank god you answered" said tom franticly. "Tom whats wrong" i said worrying Natalia loked at me withj worried eyes. "some guy took Luaren and i cant find her we are in a cafe`." "did you call the police i said practicly screaing." "yeah their on their way, PLEASE COME were at 200 BLVD 5th ave." "okay we'll be there. I told Natalia she screamed we ran into Bills room and said everything in an alrming pace when Mandy heard that she didnt care she swung the bathroom door open not caring who saw her " Lets go we cant just stay here" she screamed . after she had swung the door she could've sworn there was whole in the wall. "heres your shirt" Natalia said. she grabbed it.


Mandy's POV
when i heard that my cousin was gone i didngt care who saw me i grabbed the shirt opened the door to the hotel hallway took my shirt off infront of all 5 and put the dry one on.

BILL's POV'

Wheni saw her take her shirt off we were all in shock. I couldn't help but stare she had such a perfect body I quickly snapped out of and followed the others.

"**** wait Mandy the paparazzi" i screamed so everyone heard . Mandy stopped dead in her tracks but then said "i dont care myu cousin needs me"and began to run. So did all of us. pushing through the crowd i felt lke i was in the middle of the ocean and i was drowing but when i saw Mandy cut through the croud like ice it made me want to run to her so i kept running.


STAY TUNED AND PLEEEEEEZ LEAVE COMMENT PLEEEZ

[amandaaraujo]

hmmm no one is reading mabe ill stop updating for a while :(

[bbgroove]

Sorry... when do you update, because I&#39;m like always on the fanfic thread and I never catch your updates...

I really liked this chapter... your longest yet (^_^)...

please update (^_^)

[amandaaraujo]

Im so sorry i havent updated im going through writers block for this story and i keep on getting ideas for other stories!!!! AND it doesnt fit with LOve hurts should i start another FF while my writers block for Love hurts ends??? please let me know :D

[bbgroove]

Im so sorry i havent updated im going through writers block for this story and i keep on getting ideas for other stories!!!! AND it doesnt fit with LOve hurts should i start another FF while my writers block for Love hurts ends??? please let me know :D


what ever gets your writers block over with so you can update is okay with me (^_^)

[amandaaraujo]

Chapter 12

Lauren’s POV

As i woke up i found myself in a dark room tied to a chair and i couldn't tell where i was. I heard speakers go off and heard a deep distorted voice. "DO you know where you are?" the voice said. I didn't answer. "ASNWER ME" the voice screamed. I started to cry and shook my head no. I then screamed. "LET ME GO,LET ME GO NOOOOWWW." with sobs in the words. then the voice said again "you will now join the others. I looked around franticly around the room and I see two men walk in through a door and grabbed my arms. I struggled and I kicked, scream everything you can think of. When we got to another room it was much bigger I saw about twenty girls there. The men pushed me in and I fell onto someoneSrry its soo short:OK FINALLY I GOT OVER WRITERS BLOCK ALL I NEED IS ONE MORE CHARACTER IS ANYONE INTERESTED?

[bbgroove]

YAY!!!!

scary chapter :( :(

I&#39;d love to be a secondary character (^_^)
what do you need to know?

[amandaaraujo]

KAY i need to know your features and your personality :D glad you like it. Its going to get scarier but then totally romantic :D

[bbgroove]

KAY i need to know your features and your personality :D glad you like it. Its going to get scarier but then totally romantic :D


I&#39;m sooooo excited... but scared excited, you know?

anyways...

Black hair,
Brown eyes
tanned skin (Filipino),
5&#39; 9" (tall)
Sports built (broad shoulders, thick hips, medium chest)
Button nose (? nto really sure where I should stop...lol)


Personality
Stubborn
Loyal
Friendly
Outgoing
Doesn&#39;t take shhh from anyone without a fight

hope that helps... if you need more just ask (^_^)

[amandaaraujo]

OK thats good BB okay all i need is 2 more people and im ready for the next chapter

[xXxMandiixXx]

me me me lolz

um ok sooo

my character hmmm

Appearence:

Black hair medium length with hot pink under layer and some in the fringe

medium bild not too skinny but not too fat
right side of lip pierced
gray eyes and ivory skin
fairly tall

Personality :

hyperactive, sensitive, serious wen need be,pritty funny but really mostly wen hypo lolz
friendly,trust worthy and caring

hope its enough and hope i get in but i understand if i dont :)

GREAT! story btw
im scared O_O
dont hurt lauren!

<3 Mandii xx

[amandaaraujo]

KK Mandii would you prefer your real name or want me to make one up

And Blaine would you also like to use your name or want me to make one up??

KK

[ILuvKaulitzTwins4E]

tall, 5' 9"
black hair with blue and pink streaks
dark almost black eyes
normal weight
tanned skin

personalit

crazy, out going, fun, nice, caring, friendly



name : Kelsey

[amandaaraujo]

alright think thats it are you ready for the next CH..?? im updating now :D

[amandaaraujo]

Chapter 13

Luaren POV

When I got Up "Im so sorry" I said with a cracked voice from crying so much. "No its ok" I heard a voice in the dark said. I heard someone coming from outside the room"alright all you princesses its time to go out and bring some cash to pappa." A man said from the open door where light shined through. I saw all the girls faces now and saw the girl i had landed on. she was a Black hair,
Brown eyed girl with tanned Fillipino skin colored girl. She was about 5'9 and had a sport built body with curves all in the right places.

"Alright move it move it now." said the man at the doorway.

"where are we going" I asked. "I dont know i just woke up a few hours ago and found myself here and i dont know why." the girl responded she started to cry and i impulsively hugged her. "hey you two cut the chitchat now MOVE" screamed the man. we walked scared and they led us to the manhatten streets. I didn't recognize the area. There were alot of people with crazy hair and really tight clothes. Mostly leather. Then i noticed i was wearing something similar. A really tight shirt that showed my bellybutton with a high miniskirt. I looked over the girl who i met a few minutes ago she was in shock too. We walked the streets with a man behind us watching or every move. "how about we make a run for it." she told me. I nodded my head and we counted to 3. we were runing like there was nothing else to do.

Mandy's POV

I ran through the crowd of people i didn't care who saw me or took my picture. I got out to the enterance a miracle i thought. I looked back and saw all 5 of them struggling then they met up with me."eheuhe, Lets get a Taxi." Georg said panting with Natalia by his side. "ok yeah lets go before they get more of what they wanted." Madelline said without a breath. I finally got a taxi and all of us hopped in but then i noticed i didnt see Bill anywhere."holy crap where's Bill." I screamed. I ran out the others followed ."No guys you go ill catch up." I said"Fine be careful" Natalia said.

I ran indside and i saw Bill flooded with questions. "bill" I yelled.

BILL'S POV

I had almost gotten to the enterance when a stupid photographer blocked my way."Bill, where are you going in such a hurry."-"Bill who are those girls"-"Bill what is your opinion in the comments they say about you sexuality"-"BILL BILL BILL BILL BILL BILL BILL" i wished i wasnt bill at the moment.
When i heard Mandy's voice I looked franticlly everywhere. She somehow got to me."Bill come on." she said without breath. "Ok but how."i asked. "alright when i count to 3 we're going to drop to the floor and crawl out got it." She said "Ok" "1,2,3" We were on the floor crawling as fast as we could. We finally got to the enterance and we didn't bother getting a taxi we were running throught the Manhatten streets.

Gustav's POV

we got to the taxi and We had noticed Bill was missingf in the crowd so Mandy went to get him and we left for the cafe` Tom was waiting for us. "To 200Blvd on 5th ave please and Hurry." I said to the taxi driver. I guess he saw our worry and stepped on it.

OK sohow do guys Like it YAY i finally updated :D :D

hmm i wonder whats going to happen to Lauren and the girl she met.
Are the guys going to get to her in time.

[xXxMandiixXx]

OMFG go LAUREN!!! AND BALINE !!(ithink thats the girl name )


and you can use my real name if you want or if its too much trouble you can use the name Serena she the character in my fanfiction 'Something I Never Expected'

CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE!

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[amandaaraujo]

Chapter 14
Lauren's POV

We ran for two miles straight until we though we were safe. WE tried to catch our breath we hid behind some buildings. We heard the man who was supervising us ran past the building we were hiding behind. "umm i know thi isn't the right time but my name is Lauren what is yours" I asked the panting Girl next to me."oh uh its ok and its Blaine." she smiled. "ok Blaine i think we should look for help." I said "yeah i agree". so we ran to the streets and we saw a car coming we ran infront of it so it would stop and it did and we nearly killed ourselves. "Please,please help us." Blaine yelled behind the tinted glass of the car. The window rolled down a cried out girl about in her 19-20 years she had black hair medium length with hot pink under layer and some in the fringe. with gray eyes and ivory colored skin. First she looked at us in worry and then she asked "Whats wrong." she asked."Well we ran away from these guys who kidnapped us and we'd really appreciate it if you could help us out." I explained as fast and clrealy as i could. "Oh My God are you two okay." She said getting out of her car. "yeah but we need to get out of here as fast as we can." Blaine said looking around the streets for the man who had followed us. "oh **** there those two are oh i see the have fresh meat." A thick voice man said the same man who they found in the room. "Hurry get in" she said . Blaine and i ran in the car and the girl stepped on the gas all the way. she took us to her apartment and we settled down she let us borrow som of her clothes.

Blaine's POV

We sat down in the living room of her apartment. "so tell me what happened." she asked us. Well i was on my way to my apartment and the lights went out. I felt like someon grab me from behind an knock me out." I explained chocking in some of the words. "And I was.." Lauren stopped and started to cry but held back her tears and explained to us. "well my cousin and i came to NYC for her birthday. and we went to her birthday party and we recieved news that her mom ded..." lauren said with tears rolling down her face ."and so she fainted and well her boyfriend took her back to the hotel"(wierd that everyone call them Boyfriend and girlfriend and they haven't made it official or had their first kiss).." and well my friends and i didnt have a ride so we went walking.. then" cough" i separated from the group and walkked alone and walked into a cafe` and thats where they grabbed me." "oh my god" the girl and i said in unisom. Now Lauren was crying incontrolably. We both got up and hugged her. "im sorry we didn't catch your name. Lauren said out of tears. " oh my name is Serena." "oh thats a beautiful name." Lauren said feeling better. "So what happened to you because we saw that you had been crying." I said.

Serena's POV

when Blaine asked me that i wanted to start crying ui had i knot in my throat and felt a tear roll down. "Well today i went to see my boyfriend at his apartment.." I said feeling my heart start to hurt."And since i had his keys i walked in and found him with my step mom in bed doing what ever it was." i started to sob. "I hate her she always did that to me trying to put me down in every way she could and the worst thing is that shes just 2 years older than me." I choked in every word but i guess they understood they immediatly went up to me and hugged me saying it wasok and that , that boyfriend of mine was scum and what ever.


TOM's Pov ki couldnt wait anylonger these stupid police all they did was ask questions and do nothing to look for Lauren i couldn't hold it back i exploded."What the **** yu already asked that question." I screamed at the officer. "Mr. Kaulitz i know your upset but we need to do our routine" the plumped officer said. " Well i don't care abut your ****ing routine I care about getting the NYPOD the FBI the Secret agents or something to look for my girlfriend she could be killed by now if you dont move your fat *** to do somehting of the situation." I yelled again. "sir im going to have to ask you to calm down." the officder said getting red in the face. "No i will not calm down untill i see action being done to find her."

BIll's POV

We metup with Georg NAtalia madelline and Gustav shortly. we saw Tom yelling at the officer. Mandy had started to cry after seeing the Cafe` she couldnt hold back her tears. "Bill i tried to be strong but i cant im to weak, im dieing inside i cant help it." She said crying she hugged and i hugged as tight as i could then she wispered." Don't let me go dont let me break inside." those words made me tear up and i wispered back."Never i will always protect you and if your breaking i'll pick up the pieces and put them back together." She hugged me and just cried for an hour.

SOOOO tell me what you think and Kelsey il add you in the next Chapter :D

[xXxMandiixXx]

woop woop

and you used sorta the same thing as in my fanfic thats kool :)

and dont worry blaine and lauren Serena will keep you safe :)

continue continue continue!

<3 Mandii xx

[ILuvKaulitzTwins4E]

ok i can't wait..
.....i really like your story its really good


~*Kelsey*~

[amandaaraujo]

ok i can't wait..
.....i really like your story its really good


~*Kelsey*~


im glad you like it and omg i had you in my next chapter and my freacking computer earased so i have retype dont worry :) ;)

[amandaaraujo]

Chapter 15
Madelline's pov

I turned to look at Gustav who was right behind me. "Gustav im scared what if.." I stopped i guess he noticed what i tried to say he just leaned close and gave me a hug and i started to cry. When i gues i cried myself out Mandy's cell phone rang. "hello" "oh my God Lauren are you ok." Thats what she said and when i heard that ran toward Mandy and Bill.

Mandy's POV

As i cried on Bill, feeling him stroke my hair gave me somewhat a relaxing feeling, when my cell phone rang. "hello" i said." Madny oh Mandy its me LAuren. she said with a bit of panic in her voice. "lAUREN oh my god are you ok. "Yeah how about you." "Im fine where are you." Lauren asked." We're at the Cafe` with Tom and the Police where it all happened." "oh god." "Lauren where are you." "oh a girl rescued us and we are at her apartment." she said realxing a bit. "Oh who's the other person." "i met her at the place where the guy tool me." "can you guys pick me up." she asked. " yeah sure, where is it. "um its 45 blvd ave." "oh ok we'll be there."

I hung up and smiled. "What who is." Tom asked getting edgy. "It was Lauren she's ok." "she told me to pick her up at the girl who rescued her and her friend from that man." "Oh thank god shes ok." Tom said relxing.

TOM'S POV

when i heard Mandy say Lauren was ok and safe i felt the wieght of guilt lift up from my chest. "excuse me" said a girl behind me. The group turned to look at her she was about 5'9
black hair with blue and pink streaks
dark almost black eyes. "yes i responded." "uh im a secret agent and i think i have an idea who was the person who kidnapped your girlfriend." she said hushing her voice. Everyone was dumbfounded. "um you know" i said almost mumbling. "Hi im kelsey and i've been researching on this guy named the dark venom as he likes to call himself." "he usauly hangs in this place looking for trouble and a lot of kidnapping has been done here." she said eyeing the police. "So you know this guy" I said with anger. "yes but i dont have enough evidense to put that bastard in jail so i need your help and your friends." she said. "um ok what do need to do." Natalia said brecking apart from Georgs grip. "alright so come on and ill take you in my car and ill tell you the story." she said seriously. I felt someones hand on my shoulder i turned to look and it was Bill."its ok we'll get throug this together." he wispered.


KAy so tell me what do you think.
sorry its so short :?

[xXxMandiixXx]

omg love it

o...k im confused is kelsey good or bad ?

please say good

<3 Mandii xx

[ILuvKaulitzTwins4E]

yay im in it..........i hope im good not bad


~*Kelsey*~

[amandaaraujo]

youll just have to find out :) :)

no your good dont worry :)

[amandaaraujo]

alright guys i cant update today or tomorrow i only could update for Ok Wait a MInute sorry guys. I have midterms all this week ugh sorry i really am :cry:

[amandaaraujo]

Chapter 16

Normal POV
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As all 8 of them piled up in Kelsey's van they started asking questions." so whats the story about this dark venom guy?" Gustav asked holding Madelline close."well this guys name is really fedrik Kaffin. he changed his name to dark venom. 2 years ago he started a gan named the the snakes of **** and bought that cafe` TOm walked into. They always had parties there the best people would ssay if they weren't the ones missing. The gang wol always kidnap about 20 girls and put them to work in well you know prostitue themselves. That was there business. I have been undercove for about 6 months invstigting andc nothing the police are bought by him because he always gets away with it." She said driving toward My cousins friend's apartment. "oh goodness." Mandy said started to tear up. Bill imidiatly grabbed Mandy into a hug. "so what are we suppose to do the guy is gone and Lauren is safe." said Tom ajdusting his cap. "yeah thats what you think that guy doesnt rest untillhe gets what he wants and if she escaped well he is going to look for her." Kelsey said taking a left turn. "OK I THINK we're here." said kesey. she stopped the car and everyone jumped out and ran to ring the apartment buildings eneterance. "hello" a voice said. "hi we're here for LAuren its Tom." Tomsaid into the mic. "oh ok come in." the voice said and in seconds the buzzer went off and the door opened. everyone walked in and went to the elevator. As all of them were in the elevator and finally walked toward the apartment door somone had already opened it. "oh God LAuren your ok." Mady said running toward the door where Lauren was waiting. The two girls were hugging and soon Natalia and Madelline joined in. "Are you ok" asked Georg "yeah" Lauren responded. Tom ran to LAuren and hugged as tight as her could and wispered into lauren's ear. "i though i lost you." Lauren didnt hesitate and looked up and kissed him passionatly."Wow I wasnt excpecting this." Tom said Smiling. "hey I guess i should get kidnapped often to give you kisses. Lauren said jokingly. "hey dont say that you almost killed me." Mandy said inturupting.

[xXxMandiixXx]

no no no lauren no more kinapping poor tom and mandy were worried

bahaha tom lolz

soz in a weird mood XD

continue!

<3 Mandii xx

[amandaaraujo]

Chapter continues for 15

Normal POV

"hey would you like to come in." Said Serena at the doorway. "yeah sure" They all said walking in. "Sit guys." Serena said welcomingly. "Hi" Blaine said with a weak smile. " hi" everyone said back. "ill go get some refreshments" Serena said walking into the kitchen. "so you were kidnapped too. "Bill asked breaking the silence. "yeah unfortunetly." Blain said frowning. Mandy pinched Bill on the arm. he jumped and wispered to Mandy"what was that for." "you dont jus ask that after having a traumatizing moment." "sorry" "dont apologize to me apologize to her." "ok". "um sorry was that wrong to ask." Bill said to Blaine hoping for forgivness."yeah its fine at least im out of that place."Blain said smiling a little. Serena came back with water. everyone took a glas and sat down in the living room.


Sorry itts so short im kinda having a bad day :cry: :(

[xXxMandiixXx]

yay continue hehe i swear im a hero whoop whoop *plays star wars theme *

ok weird freak out over lolz

<3 Mandii xx