So Unpredictable a fanfic. please read <3

[ChOcoLaTe_CuP_CaKe]

hi you guys im imani, some of ya'll know me .. and some of ya'll dont... i mostly read fan fic and leave comments...
well i got board and thought ... maybe it's time for me to right a fan fic ... so here it is ... i hope you guys like it ... if you do ... i'll update it ... if not ... lol it was fun ... well enjoy! and comments are AWESOME <333

"OMG! Amber were gona miss the concert!!!! Arghhhh ... I told you 2 you use it before but Noooooo- hey where are we?"

Hi I’m imani ... but people call me mani! I'm well known for my red locks and even crazier personality. Me and my best friend Amber was at the Tokio Hotel concert at the Fillmore Plaza on the 19th. Every thing was going great until amber decided she had to use the bathroom 5 minutes before the concert!!!!

I love that chick but sometimes ...

"Can I apologize enough??? But seriously when you gotta go you gotta go! now seriously I think were los- UMPPPP"

That’s Amber just your average brown hair and brown eye beauty ... I envy her sometimes... but right now I couldn’t be more embarrassed by her ... or excited cause you see the person amber just ran into was BILL KAULITZ!!!

"Awww amber you’ve done it know running into one of the hottest guys in the- "
as I look into Bill’s memorizing honey brow eyes I completely forgot what I was about to say.

"Can I help you" he say in a German accent

at this point amber steps in .... but she no better than I am

"w-w-w were looking for the thingy"
"Thingy??" bill repeats uncertainly
"yea you know the thing that you use ???" I try to continue but with no avail ...
"the bathroom?" bill says with a genuine smile
" yes! That!" we say in unison

He laughs and points right behind us. In big letters was the word

"BATHROOM"

" I don’t think you allowed to use it , but because u got lost ... and I can tell you friend over hear really has to go" he says pointing to the now squirming amber "I’ll let you go"

"THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!! amber says running into the bathroom"

He laughs "no problem” he answered ... just don’t tell my boss" he turning around and began walked away

"Good luck tonight .. every though I know you wont need it" ... I called out ... just as he's about 2 leave

He stopped, and turned a round .. "thanx! I hope you enjoy it" he smile at me and then walks away ...

I hear the toilet flush "Wooooh thank the lord cause I could not hold it in any longer ....

we both burst out laughing running back to our position ready to see Tokio hotel ROCK THE HOUSE!

[luvukaulitztwins]

MEHR BITTE =]

[SammiiXliebe]

Lmao! Dude, Bill is god! Continue!! xD

[XxInyourNightmarexX]

Shweet!

[ChOcoLaTe_CuP_CaKe]

yay i'm glad you guys like it <333

come on more comments n then i'll update <3

[SammiiXliebe]

yay i'm glad you guys like it <333

come on more comments n then i'll update <3






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updatenaoplz. :]

[BlondPunk]

:]]]]
Update.........OR ELSE!

;DDDD

Bill is ueber-amazing

[ChOcoLaTe_CuP_CaKe]

lol well because sammi was spazzing ... and I got threatened ... guess its time for an update <3

"OMGOMG O.M.G that concert was awesome! wasn’t it awesome? I love Starbucks? don’t you just loveee double_coco_chocolate lattés with extra Carmel, sugar and whipped cream"

It was the day after the concert and like I said, it was amazing! Tokio Hotel is wayyy cuter in person and they sounded amazing<333. It was a dream come true for me and amber. And the only two words that could describe it was orgasmic & magical.

"Yea Imani though it was great to, but I think that’s enough coffee for you ... and stop jumping!!! .... that's your third one ... AND YOU EYE WONT STOP TWITCHING. OMG I don’t think that's normal" Amber said looking a little scared

we was in a Starbucks in Manhattan. We decided to just chill out and watch a movie, probably go shopping or just site seeing (and I’m not just talking about the boys XD).

"You know what I feel like doing Amber ... do ya do ya do ya? I feel like running... WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE" I SAID

"Oh No ... this is the last time you get coffe- STOP JUMPING!!" she said.

So we go into a random park well I more like bounce into the park while Amber tries to pretend she doesn’t know me.

"I FEEL SOOO ALIVEE- OWWWWWWW" I say as I begin running through the park.

Next thing I know I’m on the floor, my head throbbing and I hear a group of people arguing in German??

"Omg Imani are you o-" I heard amber say
Then suddenly I heard a familiar voice say
"we really should stop meeting like this. Are you ok?"

Once again their stood bill, this time I was the one that knocked into him… to make matters worse he was with his brother (who might I mention is uber hott <3) Tom! Could this get more embarrassing???

" I think" I said trying to stand up ... if it wasn’t for amber and bill catching me I would have fall again.

" or maybe not" amber says looking really worried along with Bill and Tom.

"Awww man Tom look what you did! Would it have hurt if you was looking were you were going??"


"I'm so sorry! I really didn’t mean it! Let me make it up to you ... why don’t we take you our hotel ... you can get some rest and when you fell better we'll send a limo to bring you go hom-" Tom starts

"GREAT IDEA ... SEE AT LEAST YOU DID SOMETHING RIGHT " Bill said ... " sticking his tongue out at tom "and when you feel better we'll send a limo you bring you home."

"Hey!" Tom said ... “that’s what I said”
"really?" bill said smirking, as tom gives him a play full push... " I didn’t hear you ...."

Amber began to laugh and then I joined in even though it hurt my head a little to laugh.

"By the way we never got your names" bill said

"I'm Imani" I began ... "and I’m Amber" Amber finished

"well Amber and Imani let start heading to the limo. Gustav and Geog is waiting for us at our hotel" Tom said

As they began to walk towards the limo ... amber did a silent little happy dance and I started cracking up ...

" Are you guys coming ... were you dancing???" bill says looking at amber with laughter in his eyes

"NONO! NOT AT ALL AMBER SAYS"

"ITS OK" Tom say ... "your pretty hot when you dance"

At this point we all started laughing.

[BlondPunk]

XD
That was uber-amazing!
More please!

[D.C.Valentine]

I enjoyed it at the very least, although I must say it is absolutely not unpredictable. I've read a handful of ones like this, where fans meet the boys in awkward situations.

Work on your grammar. You have a talent.

In the mean time, refer to my signature and check out my own fanfic. Just click on the white words.

-DCV-

[ChOcoLaTe_CuP_CaKe]

I enjoyed it at the very least, although I must say it is absolutely not unpredictable. I've read a handful of ones like this, where fans meet the boys in awkward situations.

Work on your grammar. You have a talent.

In the mean time, refer to my signature and check out my own fanfic. Just click on the white words.

-DCV-


THANX! I LOVE HOW U WERE HONEST !
UMM SORRY ABOUT MY GRAMMAR, IT WAS 3:00 AM AND I WAS 1/2 ASLEEP, BUT I HAD THIS IDEA AND I REALLY WANTED TO POST IT

ACTUALLY I HAVE READ YOU FAN FIC.
I LOVE IT <3333 I REALLY DO ... YOUR FAN FIC. ROCKS <33

[ChOcoLaTe_CuP_CaKe]

XD
That was uber-amazing!
More please!

THANX BLONDPUNK ... THAT REALLY MAKES ME WANT 2 POST MORE CHAPTERS ... KEEP READING I HOPE YOU ENJOY IT <33

I <3 YOU SIG. BTW

[SCHREIoutLOUD]

Yes, I do agree, your Grammar does need some work. There were a few Spelling, and Grammatical Mistakes. Other than that, this fanfic has potential. I have read a boat load of fanfics similar to this, so try to make it unique and your own. It could be really nice. Keep writing :]

[ChOcoLaTe_CuP_CaKe]

Yes, I do agree, your Grammar does need some work. There were a few Spelling, and Grammatical Mistakes. Other than that, this fanfic has potential. I have read a boat load of fanfics similar to this, so try to make it unique and your own. It could be really nice. Keep writing :]

thats a lot <3 it really means a lot to me ...

argh grammer and spelling ... the 2 things i suck at the most ... but i'll improve.

i understand what everyone is saying about my story being simialar to others ... so i'll try and put my own twist on it to make it different...

<33333

[NacolleMarieKaulitz]

hey now! I updated millie TWICE recently! lol now you have to update for me!! I cant be stuck writing all the time i need good stuff to read too!! AAAAH MORE MORE MORE !!! PLEAAAAAAAASE

[SammiiXliebe]

AYO! Tom invited you to the hotel already?! lmao.

[BlondPunk]

XD
That was uber-amazing!
More please!

THANX BLONDPUNK ... THAT REALLY MAKES ME WANT 2 POST MORE CHAPTERS ... KEEP READING I HOPE YOU ENJOY IT <33

I <3 YOU SIG. BTW


If you play Duck, Duck, Goose....you will get Random things for your signature.
I got a boy who loves coloring...
:]
And I will keep reading till the end!!!

[ChOcoLaTe_CuP_CaKe]

Don’t lose interest people ... I will try and give this fan fic. my own little twist to make it unique <333

"HOME HOME HOMEEE. WEREEE AT THE HOTELLLL" Bill said, jumping up and down.

Amber raised her eyebrow. "Does he act like this all the time?" she asked.

"You have no idea." Tom answered, shutting the limo door.

As were approaching their hotel room, we begin to hear screaming.

"Yesss Yesss! PUSHHH IT PUSHHHH IT! WERE ALMOST THERE, FASTER!!! YESSSS!!!"

"What that ****???" we said at the same time.

Tom rushes to open the door, as soon as he opens it Geog is screaming.

"PUSH IT , PUSH THE GREEN TRIANGLE FASTE- YESSSS! WE MADE IT! LEVEL 25! THE UNBEATABLE LEVEL! WHOOO HOOOO!" Just as he was in the middle of his victory dance Gustav hits him with a pillow and points to us.

Each of us had looks of surprise on our faces and then we busted out laughing.

"what’s so funny guys?" Geog starts

" NOTHING, NOTHING, NOTHING AT ALL" Tom says snickering

All of a sudden Amber runs over screaming " IS THAT THE PLAYSTATION 3 LIMITED!!!! THERE ONLY 3 OF THOSES MADE IN THE WORLD ... OMG! I MUST PLAY!" She says pulling her own wireless control from her backpack.

" WHAT THE !?! Where the **** did that come from?" I said, pointing to the control.

"My bag. Duhhhh! Everyone carries controllers these days! GET WITH THE TIMES MAN!"

" It’s true.” said Tom as he pulled out his own wireless controller from the back pocket of his abnormally large jeans.

" You've got to be kidding me!" I said
" The sad thing is" bill continued "their not."

Once it sunk into their heads that their were two complete strangers in their hotel room, Geog and Gustav gave Bill and Tom a " ummmm... who is this?" look.

"Meet Amber and Imani" Bill said.

When they gave him a "And ??? ....." look he returned it with his own " I’ll tell you later!!” look.

"Well, Amber" Gustav said. I see your ready to test this bad boy out, so join the game!"

"whoa. WHOA. WHOA! I’m playing to!" Tom Screamed " I Missed beating your asses."

"Dont you mean Loseing to our asses" Gustav mumbled.

"You said something?" Tom Said.

"ummmm, yea I said, That sky today! It's just so blue!" Gaustav answered over Geog's snickers.

Tom raised his eyebrow. "Weridos." he said.

As they began to play I went to Bill.
"Hey can I go lay down? some rest should make me feel better."

"Of course" he said, walking me to his bedroom.

"thanks a lot" I said as I fell unto his soft mattress. My eyes were already closing.

All I heard was "It's the least I could do" and then I fell into a deep sleep.

[SCHREIoutLOUD]

Better. :] Haha Playstation. LMAO.

[ChOcoLaTe_CuP_CaKe]

happy dance*

yay! i tried really hard ... and i checked for spelling and grammer about 1000 times.

:D

[agoraphobiaticalibi]

nice. me likey. :D

[ChOcoLaTe_CuP_CaKe]

Chapter 4

Next Chapter Yo <33

The door opened as Bill stepped into his bedroom.

"Oh! I hope I didn’t wake you." Bill said " I just had to get my Axe body spray."

" And you forgot to put a shirt on????" Imani said with a raised eyebrow.

Right before her stood Bill in nothing but pants. His star Tattoo standing out, while the moon light was shining upon it.

"Oh!" he said. "Does it bother you? Cause I think it's sexy." Bill slowly walked to the bed.

Before Imani could answer, he kissed her. Soft at first then passionately. Just as he was about to unbutton her shirt a song came out of no were.

"BOOTY, BOOTY, BOOTY, BOOTY, ROCKIN' EVERYWHERE
ROCKIN' EVERYWHERE, ROCKIN EVERYWHERE!!"

"What the ?!" I said as I suddenly woke up. "Oh snap, it was a dream. Just a dream."

I picked up my phone to find my sister Nia, calling me.
"Talk to me" I said.
"Yo! Where are you? Mom's starting to get suspicious, and I’m tired of lying to her!"

OH YEAH! I forgot I told my mum that I was at the library. She wouldn’t have like the fact that I was chillin’ in Manhattan. And judging on what had happened so far today, I was beginning to understand why.

"Well make something up yo! Don’t make me tell her about that time when you-" I threatened.

"OKOK! but I’m giving you three more hours tops!-" Nia said.

"Love ya sis." I finished, quickly hanging up the phone.

As soon as I did that, Bill came in. This time with a shirt on!

"Oh! I hope I didn’t wake you." Bill said " I just had to get my Axe body spray."

WHAT THE!?! I mentally slapped myself, but quickly gain composer.

"Na, it’s cool. I was just waking up!" I said.

"Cool!" He said. "Once again I’m-" Bill began

"BILLL IT'S OK! IM FINE! REALLY! Besides, my head is feeling much better." I said.

He smiled “ I was going to say I’m just looking for my axe, but o.k.?”

“Oh” I said nervously.

"Now where did I put it" He began looking all over the shelf for his body spray. While he was doing that he began to hum a very familiar song.

"HEY! Is that Boulevard of Broken Dreams by Green Day?!" I began excitedly.

Next to Tokio Hotel, Green Day was my favorite band.

"Yes!" He said looking a bit surprised at my sudden excitement.
Then he began jumping up and down. "I LOVE! LOVE! LOVE! GREEN DAY! .... Almost as much as I love my hairspray!"

I began to laugh " Word! You never can have to much hairspray!" I said.

He grinned. "EXCATLY! And I though I was the only one! Hey! What’s your favorite green day song?" kithen

"HMMMMMM" I began. "I'd have to say its a cross between Wake me up when September ends and Holiday."

"I Love the holiday video! It's so different from other rock video's. You know what I mean?" He said.

"I know exactly what you mean" I said. " In fact, I have that video on my I-Pod, along with my favorite movie Interview with the vampire! I could watch the movie over and over!"

"OMG!!!! I Love that movie. But my favorite movie I’d have to say is The Labyrinth. I used to watch that every day when I was little..." He said. In his eyes he seemed to be remembering back to when he was younger. When life wasn’t so difficult.

"I actually never saw it" I said, quickly bringing him out of his daze. " But I heard it's really good"

"NO WAYYYY! You have to see it. Its awesome!" His eyes lighting up as he said it.

So me and Bill just sat their, talking. I found out his favorite color is orange and he found out I loved chocolate. He told me how much he loves his brother and how he couldn’t live with out him. While I told him how my sister is sooo annoying, but as much as we fight, life would be gray without her.

" And then their was this one time when me and Nia got into a big water fight ... RIGHT IN MY PARENTS BEDROOM! The room was drenched with water!, and we got in sooo much trouble ... but it was worth it!"

Bill laughed. " Your sister seems like a handful!" He said.

"She is." I stated. “And I love her for it!"

After that their was silence. But not an awkward silence, a nice and comfortable one.

"You know Bill Kaulitz, your not so bad." I said, playfully pushing him.

"Owwwww" He said, pretending to be hurt. "That hurts!"

I giggled and stuck my tongue out.

" Well you know what?!" he asked.

"What?” I said.

"Your not to bad yourself Imani B." He answered while hitting me with a pillow.

"OH NO YOU DIDN’T !!!!" I shouted.

"OH YES I DID" HE SAID while he snapped his fingers and playfully rolled his eyes.

At this point I couldn’t hold it in any longer and neither could he cause after that we couldn’t stop laughing

[ChOcoLaTe_CuP_CaKe]

READDD PEOPLE READDDD <3333

[xXxMandiixXx]

loving it

baha i cant help but laugh wen people say oh snap lolz


keep it coming

<3 Mandii xx

[RetteMich]

Mehr bitte!

[ChOcoLaTe_CuP_CaKe]

TEEHEE

glad you like it ...

but i need more comment so i can feel loved enough ... then i'll post the next chapter <333

FAITHFULL READERS UNITE <3

[BlondPunk]

XD PLAY STATION!!1
BWAHAHAHAHA
Ahhhh....I love this story so far <3
Keep writing pleaz!

[ChOcoLaTe_CuP_CaKe]

Yo ? You know what’s cool? COMMENTS ARE COOL <3333 THANX SOO MUCH to those who HAVE READ AND COMMETED MY STORY SO FAR <333

CHAPTER 5

"GOGOGOGOGOGO YESSSSS!AMBER YOU ROCK!" said Georg. They were playing teams for the game Call of Duty 4. Amber was paired with Georg, and Gustav with Tom.

"Eh" said Tom. "Beginners luck!"

Georg raised his eyebrow. "You do realize that this is the 20th time you've said this right ???" He said.

Gustav coughed, however it sound more like "cough* sore loser cough* cough*"

"What did you say???" Tom asked, while sending him a deathly glare.

“Umm I said- AHHH A BEE!!!!” Gustav screamed.

“AHHHH WHERE?! GET IT OFF MEEE!!!” Tom said as he began slapping his self.


“Tricked ya!” Gustav said while laughing! “ But you cant deny it Tom, Amber got game!”

Amber laughed. “Why thank you Gustav, saying that almost makes me, consider going easier on you next round. ALMOST” She said while sticking her tongue out.

“Come on come on come on you guys!! Lets play!!” Georg said

So they all went at it again. Amber began focusing on the game, but she couldn’t help feeling a pair of eyes staring her down. Quickly she turn her attention to Tom, but as soon as she faced him he blushed and went back to looking at the game.

“AMBER FOCUS YOU ALMOST GOT SHOT” Georg shouted!

“Sorry!!” Amber said shaking her head. She tried to focus on the game but then she felt those same pair of eyes staring her down again. Quickly she looked at Tom, But this time he was prepared. When she turned her attention to him, he was playing with his lip ring in that oh-so-sexy way. After that she lost complete concentration.

“no! NO! NOOO!” AWWW MAN” Georg cried in defeat

“Well, well, well look who the losers are now!” Tom said

All of a sudden Tom and Gustav broke out into a victory dance.

Five minutes later they finished their dance with a “YEAH!”

“You can’t be serious!” Amber said. “After winning one game?! I mean really people!”

“Yup!” Georg sighed. “These are the losers I hang out with…” he turned his head down in disgrace.

“Awwww come on! Don’t be a bad sport! Besides Amber, I cant deny it, you really are good at games, for a sexy chick!” Tom said, Giving her a flirtatious smile.

When she heard this she rolled her eyes and said. “We’ll you just have to start learning from the best … and not just talking about video games!”

Tom smiled and in his head he seemed to be thinking “This is going to be fun!”

Their moment was interrupted when I ran out the door closely followed by Bill.

“COME ON COME ON COME ON! Amber we have to go it’s really late! I said looking worried

“What are you talking about Imani” Amber said. “It’s only- OH MY GOD ITS 8:00! WE HAVE TO GO!”

“Clam down! I said I would give you a ride and I will in my limo!” Said bill.

“Thanks so much!” me and Amber said.

“Well, we’ll wait for you down stairs while you guys get every thing ready!” I said

“Yeah! Come on Georg and Gustav” Amber said pulling them.

“What? where coming to?” Gustav asked confused

“Of course” I said “Who else is going to tell me about how Tom got his *** got beaten in Call of Duty 4?”

“HEY?! IT WAS ONE TIME!” Tom said acting hurt

“Sureee” I said.

“Whatever helps you sleep at night” Amber screamed, while running out the door to catch up with me, Georg and Gustav.

“Tee He! She told you” Bill said laughing

“Shut up! Anyways what was you and Imani doing in you bedroom all alone for 3 hours-
OWWW!!! WHAT WAS THAT FOR?” Tom said rubbing the place where Bill hit him.

“That was for not minding your business. Gosh! I’ll tell you later.” Bill said, getting the keys to lock the door.

“O.K! That Amber chick though, is hot- OWWW NOW WAS THAT NESSARY?” Said Tom.

“Now that was for you being a womanizing pervert!” Bill said sticking his tongue out, while running away from Tom, who was chasing him down the hall.

[BlondPunk]

XD
Ahhh...you gotta love Tom's stupidity ;]
More Please <3

[D.C.Valentine]

The only thing that really irks me besides the grammar and spelling is you've made the boys sound like thirteen year old drama queens.

On the grammar part, I noticed a common error I can assist in repairing.

You are known to do this:

"He thrusts his fists into the posts and still insists he sees the ghosts" said Jimmy.

or this:

"Are you in or are you out? You can't win either way." said Dave.

A direct quote should look like this:

"He thrusts his fists into the posts and still insists he sees the ghosts," said Jimmy.

That is only for speech that ends in a period. If it were a question, you would end the sentence in a question and let the reader know that the speaker asked something.

"Are you in or are you out?" asked Dave.

Say you wanted to end a quotation in the middle of the sentence to perhaps show a brief expression.

"The sky seems to threaten rain," he said, smiling, "and I'm not sure if you'll enjoy it."

or like this.

"The sky seems to threaten rain," he said, smiling. "I'm not sure you'll enjoy it."

And you don't have to always say he said, she asked, they exclaimed. You could mix it up. That's the glorious thing about the English language. There are so many words to play with. Try he noted, she inquired, they announced.


This grammar lesson was brought to you by:

D.C. Valentine

If you've ever read Stephen King's It, you'll understand the ghost quote. The "Are you in?" quote was stolen without asking from the lyric booklet thing from AFI's Decemberunderground. I made up the last quote.

-DCV-

[ChOcoLaTe_CuP_CaKe]

The only thing that really irks me besides the grammar and spelling is you've made the boys sound like thirteen year old drama queens.

On the grammar part, I noticed a common error I can assist in repairing.

You are known to do this:

"He thrusts his fists into the posts and still insists he sees the ghosts" said Jimmy.

or this:

"Are you in or are you out? You can't win either way." said Dave.

A direct quote should look like this:

"He thrusts his fists into the posts and still insists he sees the ghosts," said Jimmy.

That is only for speech that ends in a period. If it were a question, you would end the sentence in a question and let the reader know that the speaker asked something.

"Are you in or are you out?" asked Dave.

Say you wanted to end a quotation in the middle of the sentence to perhaps show a brief expression.

"The sky seems to threaten rain," he said, smiling, "and I'm not sure if you'll enjoy it."

or like this.

"The sky seems to threaten rain," he said, smiling. "I'm not sure you'll enjoy it."

And you don't have to always say he said, she asked, they exclaimed. You could mix it up. That's the glorious thing about the English language. There are so many words to play with. Try he noted, she inquired, they announced.


This grammar lesson was brought to you by:

D.C. Valentine

If you've ever read Stephen King's It, you'll understand the ghost quote. The "Are you in?" quote was stolen without asking from the lyric booklet thing from AFI's Decemberunderground. I made up the last quote.

-DCV-


lol grammer lesson # 1 ...

gosh darn it!
i really though i improved with the grammer ... not even a little bit?

man! and i check and edit it like 5 times befor i post THE fic. to make sure its perfect ... well i guess i lot a long way 2 go.

thats for the lesson i'll try and do better next time ... im srry this is honestly the first time i wrote a fan fic. / story basically im free styleing this so ... please bear with me?

i didnt really mean to make them sound like drama queens ...
in my eyes that just how they r seen ....

well we all dont really know the guys from tokio hotel, however from the zimmer dvd,THTV, and many more things that give u glimpes into their life i see bill as the, childish hyper one, tom as the flitatious one, gustav is the person that pops out of no where and always got someing smart to say ... (then blends right back into the background, and gerog as the dude thats... their .... umm also ... they seem like, you know, kids at heart! for ex. you always c bill jumping around and singing crazy childish songs, and tom cracking these imature jokes when it's not needed, ect. sooo i tried to portay that in their Character in the story ...

wow this was long!

ja but i'm learning every day

and i'll do better!

i'll try and make their characters more mature ...

thanx for the constructive criticism

I WILL DO BETTER!!!

[D.C.Valentine]

I'm not saying you haven't improved. I'm just providing a simple lesson.

None of us know how they truly act, but drama queens is something I believe they do not act like.

-DCV-