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LipsOfAnAngel
April 25th, 2008, 04:23 PM
ok guys, here's another one of my stories. i started writing this when i first joined the uk forum and it took a good number of months for me to finish. now, it's in three books, as you can see from the title. so, enjoy!

Chapter 1

Bill, Tom, Georg, and Gustav all sat at a back table in their favorite restarant. It was a place where everyone knew them and wouldn’t asked them for pictures and autographs. There was only six other people in the place. Two were a waitress and a bartender. As they sat, ate, and talked, they heard a boom outside and the ground shook. After it stopped, Bill got up and walked over to the bar.
“Hey, Andrew. What do you think that was?”
“I don’t know, Bill. Maybe some kids got a hold on some fireworks and are setting them off.”
Just then, the front wall blow apart, knocking bill off his feet. The blast killed one person and injured another who were sitting near the door. As the dust cleared, Tom, Gustav, and Georg went over to Bill.
“Are you alright?” Tom said as he coughed.
“Yeah i’m fine.”
Bill looked up at the hole in the wall where the door use to be. Standing there was eight people. Four girls and four guys. The girl that was standing in front seemed to be the leader. They all had guns or daggers in their hands. One of the guys looked at her and she said with a heavy German accent,
“Kill the injured one. She is of no use to us.”
While she talked, Bill saw fangs. They were vampires. He had heard that some were living underground but he never saw any, til now. The guy raised his hand, in it was a gun. He fired it several times. The girl who was injured stopped moving, she was dead. Bill, Tom, Georg, and Gustav didn’t move, they just watched what happened.
Andrew the bartender and the waitress were behind the bar, just peering over the top. The leader girl nodded and to guys jumped behind the bar. There was screams and a sound like cutting. After a few minutes, the two guys appeared from behind the bar. There was blood all over their mouths. Bill swallowed hard and looked at Tom. Tom didn’t look scared but Georg and Gustav did. The leader girl nodded to the other to guys and they jumped on the man and woman who were still alive. This time, Bill saw what happened. The vampires sank their fangs into their necks. The woman screamed out in pain and shock. Within a few minutes, the man and woman were dead. The two guys sat there and licked the lips. Then the leader girl focused on the four of them.
“Well, well, well. Look who we have here girls. It’s Tokio Hotel, your favorite band.” there was an evil glint in her eyes.
“Girls,” she looked at the three girls behind her, “Take your pick.”
The three girls ran forward. Each one grabbed one of the guys. They brought them to their knees and grabbed hold of them so they couldn’t escape. Bill was left sitting there, looking at his friends. The leader girl walked up to him.
“Oh, poor Bill. Don’t worry,” she placed her hand on his cheek and made him look at her, “You won’t be left out.”
Bill’s eyes widened. She put her index finger under his chin and made him kneel in front of her. Her nail was sharp.
“Now, you all have a choose. We bite you, and turn you into vampires or,” she made Bill turn so he faced the others, “We bite you and kill you.”
She let her hands play over Bill’s shoulders and neck.
“I’ll never join you, you filthy scum!” yelled Georg.
“So be it. And what about you, Gustav?”
“No, I’d rather die.”
“As you will. And, oh... Tom, the twin brother.”
“Never.”
“Sorry Bill, your fate has already been decided for you.”
“Girls, you know what to do.”
Georg was first. The girl vampire bit his neck and her fangs sank in. He screamed and his hands flew up to her arm. She continued to drink his blood til he hit the floor. Gustav was next, that vampire girl sank her teeth into him. Gastav screamed as well and had his hands in fists. His screams disappeared faster.
Wait. Let the twins say their good-byes.” said the leader girl.
Bill looked at Tom. Tears were pouring down his face.
“Tom, i’m so sorry. If I had known-”
“How could you. And it’s not your fault. Look, this is going to sound corny but, i’ll always be with you. Your my brother, nothing can stop that. And the others, they’ll be with you too.”
“Tom.” Bill said through tears.
“Good-bye, Bill.”
The vampire girl bit Tom’s neck. He didn’t scream but he had his hands in fists. But at the very last seconds, he let out a small scream and died.
“Oh, how sad. The lose of a brother. You know Bill, you won’t be joining them. I’m going to turn you. It will be painful, I know this.”
Her mouth was right by Bill’s ear. Tears were streaming down his face.
“I’m going to bite you now, Bill.”
He felt her fangs touch his neck then sink in. He couldn’t bare the pain. He screamed as loud as he could. When it was over, he felt to the ground and blacked out.

XxInyourNightmarexX
April 25th, 2008, 04:38 PM
Vampire stories rule. I like how this one ended on a dark note. Plz, continue.

Magicly Emoicious
April 25th, 2008, 05:00 PM
What's with Killing Tom, Gustv, and Georg?

LipsOfAnAngel
April 25th, 2008, 05:10 PM
you'll see, just have to read my story!

Chapter 2

Bill woke up in a bed. It wasn’t his bed, it was much bigger and had a canapy. The sheets were black silk and the comforter were red satin. There was red curtains around the bed. He sat up and pulled the curtain back. There was a nightstand and on it a clock. It read 12:00pm. He got up and looked around. There was a black, plush carpet and red textured walls. All of the furnature was made out of black wood. There was a desk against the wall farthest from the door which was to the left of the bed. Next to the desk was a huge wardrobe and next to that, a three-way mirror. On the other side of the room, across from the desk was a bureau. There was a table on one side of it.
On the desk were all of his writing, in the top drawer there was a stack of blank paper and on top of that, his favorite lucky pen. He wrote all of his songs with it. He walked to the wardrobe and inside were all of his clothes, at least, the ones that hung on hanger. On the floor were all of his shoes, every single one. At the bottom was two drawers, one had all of his belts and belt buckles. The other had all of his caps. He closed the wardrobe doors and stood up. He turned completely around and walked to the bureau. The top two drawers had all of his underwear and socks. The rest of the drawers had his graphic t-shirts and other shirts. On top of it was all of his jewlery. On the table was a CD player and his cds. Also his hairdryer and flat iron. There was two doors on the wall opposite from his bed. Bill walked to the first one closes to the wardrobe. It was a closet, inside were sheets for the bed, boxes of tissues and towels. Bill went to the other door, it was a bathroom. It had mint green and white tiles with a matching shower curtain. The sink and toilet were white and there was a mirror over the sink. In the mirror, which was also a cabinet, there was his hair produces, make-up, toothbursh and toothpaste.
He walked out of the bathroom. He went to the wardrobe and pulled a pair on jeans out and a pair of black and white sneakers. Bill then walked over to the bureau and looked at his t-shirt. He finally pulled out his ‘Icon’ T. He put all of this on his bed and walked to the closet. He grabbed a towel and went into the bathroom. He pulled back the shower curtain and saw all of his stuff in there. His face wash, body wash, shampoo, and conditioner. He looked around the bathroom and saw a laundry basket. He undressed and through his clothes in it. He got into the shower and turned the water on.
He washed his face and his body. He then washed his hair. As he raised the soap out the realization came to him. Tom, Georg, and Gustav were dead. They were never coming back. And he was a vampire. He placed his hands on the wall behind the showerhead. The water poured down his back and on his face. The water mixed with the tears that streamed down his face. When Bill finally stopped crying, he leaned against the tiled wall and looked at the curtain. He looked down and saw the star tattoo on his right hip. He took a deep breath and turned the water off. Bill got out and toweled off. He wrapped it around his waist and walked out of the bathroom. As he passed the bureau, he pulled the top two drawers open and gabbed a pair of socks and underwear. He walked to his bed and got dressed. He looked at the clock. It read 12:56pm. Just then there was a knock on his door.

Magicly Emoicious
April 25th, 2008, 05:29 PM
AGH! MORE!

XxInyourNightmarexX
April 25th, 2008, 05:48 PM
Cool! plz continue.

BlondPunk
April 26th, 2008, 09:50 AM
CONTINUE!!!

Awwww...this is sad...I'll probably be sad with Bill.
Egghh, I'm so depressing lately.

LipsOfAnAngel
April 28th, 2008, 03:23 PM
sorry for the long wait.

Chapter 3

Bill walked to the door. He looked through the peep hole and saw a woman with a tray. He opened the door and said,
“Who are you and what do you want?”
“I’m Angela and i’ve brought you some food.”
“Oh. Well, come in.”
Bill stood aside and Angela walked in and placed the tray on the desk. She removed the lid and under it was a wine glass filled to the brim with a crimson liquid. On the plate was a steak. Bill walked to the desk and looked at it.
“It’s steak... cooked rare. And in the glass is blood. It’s all we can eat.”
Bill looked at her and sat down. She walked out of the room and closed the door. He picked up the knife and fork and cut a piece from the steak. It bleed out onto the plate. He ate it and a sensation came over him. He felt fangs grow from his canine teeth. He picked up the wine glass and took a sip. The sensation grew.
Bill ate everything. When he was done, he sat there. The sensation stayed with him. It was weird, he liked it and didn’t like it. He put the lid back on and got up. There was a knock at the door. He opened it and Angela was standing there.
“I’ve come to take your tray, if you are finished.”
“I am.”
She walked in and picked the tray up. She walked to the door then Bill asked,
“Um, Angela, what’s going on here?”
She stopped and put the tray on the floor.
“i had a feeling you were going to ask something like that. Go on, sit down. I’ll tell you.”
Bill sat down on his bed and Angela sat in the desk chair. She crossed her legs and took a deep breath.
“Well, I guess I should start from the beginning. Our leader was turned back in the 16th century. An unknown vampire turned him while he was away from home. When he finally came back some ten years later, he turned his wife and son. Our leader and that vampire is Alexander. His son is Jason.
Slowly thay turned more people into vampires. In the 18th century, there was an attack on a village and I was turned. After awhile, we stopped attacking people. there was already alot of us. We even had to split up the covinet and move them to another house.”
“But where are we?” Bill was sitting crosslegged on his bed. He leaned forward.
“We’re on the edge of Germany in a forest. Far from any major city.”
There was another knock on the door. The nob turned and a girl walked in. It was the girl that turned Bill.
“You.”
She just stared at him.
“Your the one who turned me. Your the one who had my friends killed.”
“I- I know. I just wanted to that i’m sorry.”
Bill was standing now. She walked towards him.
“Get away from me!”
He started to back. He tripped over his own feet. The girl ran towards him to catch him before he hit the ground. She was too late so she wrapped her arm around his shoulders. Bill looked up at her and pushed her away. He scrambled across the room and hit the desk. He just looked up at her. Tears were streaming down his face. Bill slowly shuck his head. Angela got up and pushed her out the door. Bill heard them say,
“I just wanted to say sorry.”
“It’s to early Chloe. Maybe some other time.”
“I just want to say sorry.”
Angela closed the door. She walked over to Bill.
“Are you alright?” she asked.
He didn’t say anything. He just got up and sat on his bed.
“Who is she?” Bill finally asked after having sat there in silence for a long time.
“That’s Chloe.”
“What’s her story?”
“Alexander’s son, Jason fell in love with a human woman. That was not aloud. He either had to forget her or turn her. He turned her. She had knew he was a vampire long before that and was somewhat ok with it. They also got married. Jason’s wife, Nicole, had a daughter. She was only thirteen when her mother was turned.
You see, the daugther, who is Chloe, was a loner. She didn’t have any friends. She also dressed gothic. So, Chloe wanted to be turned, but her mother wouldn’t let her. Her answer was always,
“When you finish school.”
So, Chloe went through middle school and high school. In high school, she learned how to play the guitar and piano. Her style got extreme, she dyed her hair different colors, wore heavy eyeliner and her clothes, well you can imagine.
She continued to ask her mother to turn her and after her mother said,
“Go to and finish college first.” She did.
Chloe went to college for music and passed with flying colors. Her style calmed down and she was still a loner but when she got out of college, she went to her mother and said,
“I am finished with school. I’m not going to get a good job as a musician and i’ve been to the covinet house so much that they think i’m a vampire already. So turn me, please.”
And her mother did. Nicole didn’t want her stepfather to do it, she wanted to do it because she was her birth mother and had the right. And so Chloe was turned into a vampire at age 21.”
Bill’s eyes widen. He was 21. Angela saw this and said,
“Yes, the same age as you, but she was turned back in 2004.”
“That was a year before our first album came out.” Bill said.
He remembered back when he was young and Tokio Hotel had just started to get big.
“Bill, what are you?”
“Excuse me?”
“What have you become?”
Bill just looked at her.
“I’m, i’m a- a-”
He couldn’t say it out loud.
“A vampire. Look, the first step to excepting who you are now is to say what you are out loud.”
He looked down at his hands. He turned them over and saw that the nailpolish had started to chip. He frowned and looked back up at Angela.
“The first step, huh?” Bill said.
He sighed and fell back onto his bed. After a little while, he heard Angela get up and leave. He lied there some more then got up. He walked to the three way mirror and looked at himself. He looked the same as always. Bill looked at his mouth. He could feel the fangs but he wasn’t sure if he wanted to see them. He took a deep breath through his nose and opened his mouth. His eyes widened, he couldn’t believe what he was seeing. He closed his mouth and ran to the bathroom. Bill grabbed his toothbrush and toothpaste started to brush his teeth. The sensation disappeared, he didn’t know it was there this whole time. He felt his fangs shrink and go back to normal canine teeth. But now, they were sharper then normal.

BlondPunk
April 28th, 2008, 04:47 PM
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What happens next? I wanna know!!!
Gah! More!

TexasGirlLovesTH
April 28th, 2008, 05:36 PM
Oh, I wonder where this story is going..... I like it!

LipsOfAnAngel
April 28th, 2008, 08:34 PM
Chapter 4

“Um, Bill. You’re not aloud to leave until Alexander thinks you and everyone else is ready.”
Bill just looked at Angela. He mouth was open. She reached over and closed it.
“What, why?”
“Well, back when there was a lot of us, Alexander couldn’t keep the new from old. And the new vampires ended up fighting and even sometimes killing older vampires. So now, he gives it a few days, giving the new vampires time to ajust and the old to except.”
“Ok, fine.”
Angela got up to leave. Bill was sitting on his bed.
“Eat what I brought you. You can’t not eat.”
And she left. Bill got up and turned the radio on. He tuned it until a good station was on. They were talking and he zoned it out. He picked up the newspaper Angela brought for him and opened it. The second he did he dropped it. On the cover was a picture of him and the band.

Three of the four Tokio Hotel members killed last night. The one, Bill kaulitz, is missing. Evidence found that it was vampires doing. People and police hope that Bill is still alive. More news will be reported when found.

Bill kicked it under his bed. He took the lid off the tray and found chicken hearts swimming in blood. And a glass on blood. He started to eat when the radioman started to talk about him.
“So, we all know about the tradgey that happened last night. Our favorite band is dead with one missing. I’m going to take calls on what you, the listeners, think about this.”
There was a click.
“Hello, you’re on the air.”
“Hi, my name is Emily. And I knew Tokio Hotel personally.”
Emily was his friend that he liked, a lot.
“Well Emily, what do you have to say?”
Well, I am very upset that they are gone.”
“Aren’t we all. Alright, in memory of Tokio Hotel, here is their single, ‘Falling’”
A single guitar was playing. It was Tom. There was a few cords then the bass and drums came in. Bill heard his own voice start to sing.

I tried to call you
But you didn’t hear

I reached for you
But you didn’t see

And now, i’m falling
Can you save me?
I’m falling
Through space and time
Please save me, i’m falling

I saw your eyes
in the light

I ran but I got nowhere
Because, i’m falling
Can you save me?
I’m falling
Through space and time
Please save me, i’m falling

Bill ran across the room and turned the radio off. He walked back to the desk and sat down. He finished eating and pulled out the song he was writing. He copied down the chorus and looked at it. It needed another verse but he couldn’t think. Not after the newspaper and the radio.
He put it away and got up. How many days would he have to stay here? He paced his room. Then there was a knock at the door. He answered it and it was Angela.
“Angela, i’m going to go insane if I stay in here any longer. I need to get out.”
“I know, but not yet. Look, I aranged for a TV to be put in your room. There’s really no need since we have a game and TV room downstairs. But, since you might be here for awhile... Oh look, it’s here.”
Two men walked in carrying a nice sized TV. They placed it on the table and plugged it in.
“Would you like to stay?” Bill asked Angela.
“Sure, I have nothing else to do.”
She handed the tray to one of the men and sat next to Bill on his bed. He turned it on and flipped until he came across a movie that was about the start. He looked at Angela and said,
“Close your eyes and listen. I want you to tell me whos voice you here.”
She did and the movie started.
“A woman’s voice.”
Wait til you here a male voice.”
She did, then,
“I know that voice.”
She opened her eyes.
“What are we watching?”
“Arthur and the Minimoys. I did the german voice over for Arthur.”
“Bill, you never told me that.”
“It never came up.”
“Til just now.”
“Yeah.”
They watched the movie. He found it weird to hear himself but after a while, he forgot. The credits were rolling up the screen when there was a knock on the door. Angela answered and was pulled outside. Bill looked through the peep hole and saw a man, no older them himself. He couldn’t hear so he put his ear to the door.
“By orders of Alexander, you are not aloud to spend time with the boy.”
“That’s not fair! He’s stuck in there all day with no human interaction! You’ve got to be kidding me.”
“Do you want Alexander to deal with you himself?” threatened the man.
Angela didn’t say anything. She walked away. The man followed her.
Bill stepped away from the door. He looked at it then the TV. He turned it off then walked to the three way mirror. He looked at himself hard. He could feel his fangs. He took a deep breath then said outloud,
“I am a vampire. I can’t change that. T- T- Tom, Georg, and Gustav are d- dead. I can’t do anything about that either. I am going to stay a vampire forever, until I die.”


song by me. it's crappy, i know.

TexasGirlLovesTH
April 28th, 2008, 09:39 PM
OMG, I'm gonna cry! :cry:
That was really good, though. I feel so bad for Bill. I can't even imagine what he would be feeling after all that.

But PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE continue!!!

Magicly Emoicious
April 28th, 2008, 11:23 PM
I yell at you once more: HOW COULD YOU KILL TOM, GEORG, AND GUSTV?!?!?

LipsOfAnAngel
April 29th, 2008, 03:19 PM
you know what magicly, deal what it!!

Chapter 5

Bill pulled the curtain away to look out the window. It was night so the shudders weren’t closed. He saw a forest a little ways from the house. He looked down to closed to the house. Vampires were sitting out and talking. Some were running around and chasing each other. He pulled the curtain closed and fell onto his bed. It had been a day since Angela was pulled out of his room. There was a knock at the door and he answered. A man who looked about 35, stood in the doorway. He had a cane and in his eyes, Bill saw he was much older. Bill stood aside and the man walked in. He pulled the desk chair out and sat down with a sigh. He motioned for Bill to to sit on the bed. He did and looked at the man.
“Bill,” he began, “I am Alexander, leader of this covinet. And i’ve come here to explain some things to you.”
Bill just looked at him.
“You were turned against my rule. We had long ago created a rule that no one was to turn someone into a vampire. My granddauther and her friends had decided to live underground, under German cities. It’s like when they move out. I aloud this, they weren’t causing any harm. But, sometimes, they act on impulse. I bet you’ve done that.”
Bill remembered back to the UK tour. He had bet Tom to a fish and chips eating contest. He lost and both Tom and Gustav won money.
“Well, I have made them come back here so that it can’t happen again. I am truely sorry about your friends. That was a horrible thing they did. If only we could bring tthe dead back to life... but we can’t.”
Bill looked down into his lap.
“Alexander, Sir. When will I be able to leave my room?”
“I was coming to that point. Tomorrow, I think. The others are comfortable with the fact your here. And I know you’ve excepted who you are. So, tomorrow. When you wake up tomorrow, just knock two times on the door. And when you are ready to go, and I suggest you wear something nice, we don’t encourage sweats or regular clothes, just knock four times and a guide will be there to show you around.”
Alexander got up and left. Bill sat there and thought,
Tomorrow, I get to leave tomorrow.
He got up and sat at the desk. He pulled out his song. He knew it was pointless to write it if he wasn’t in a band anymore. And besides, he couldn’t think of anything for the last verse.
He thought of how Chloe played piano and guitar. Maybe, just maybe she’d have what he was looking for.

TexasGirlLovesTH
April 29th, 2008, 04:44 PM
Oh, so now Bill wants to talk to Chloe! :P

It's official. You have sucked me into this story. I give in. :mrgreen:

UPDATE ASAP!!

LipsOfAnAngel
April 29th, 2008, 04:46 PM
Chapter 6

His eyes flew open. Today was the day. He got up and knocked twice on the door. Then went into the bathroom. He took a shower and when he got out he got half dressed. He pulled on a pair of shinny black jeans and throw a pair of boots out of the wardrobe. He blow dried his hair and straightened it. He went into the bathroom and used hairspray and gel to get it to stand up.
This whole time, he had a cd playing. It ended and when he walked back into the room he changed it. He picked what jewelry he was going to wear and pulled a long sleeve shirt on over his head. He walked back into the bahtroom and put on his make-up. From the wardrobe, he pulled out his long, black, leather coat and throw it onto the bed. He put on his rings and necklaces. He pulled on his boots and coat and knocked four times on the door. It opened and Chloe was standing there.
“Before you say anything Bill, I am truely sorry for what I did to you and your friends. It was wrong of me. Oh and my grandfather made me be your guide. I told him of what happened last time you saw me and I really tried to get out of it because I didn’t want to scare you or have you freak out.”
“That was a mouthfull. So where are we going first?”
“To breakfast. Then i’ll give you the tour.”
Bill stepped out and closed his door. Chloe turned and walked left down the hall. He followed.
At the end they turned right, the only way to go. A door was one the right wall. Then a railing started. Bill could see downsairs and there was a livingroom. A grand staircase came up and they walked down it. A few people were there and they were whispering. Bill looked to the right and saw two grand double doors with windows in them.
They reached the livingroom. Chlow led him to a set of double doors behind the livingroom.

The diningroom was huge. In the center was a long table with two high backed chairs, one at either end. Most of the seats were filled but there was still plenty more. Alexander walked in, he saw Bill and went over to him.
“Bill, my boy. Come and sit next to me. I’d like to talk to you.”
Bill looked at Chloe but she was already walking to the other end of the table. Bill followed Alexander and sat in the chair directly to the left of the high backed chair.
Bill looked down the table and saw Chloe sitting in the same seat on the same saide as Bill but at the other end. Across from her was a beautiful woman and in the second high backed chair, a man with black hair.
They must be her parents. Bill thought.
Chatter was all around him. He saw Angela on the other side, a few seats down. She wouldn’t make eye contact.
“I’d give up if I were you.”
Bill looked around for the speaker.
“Angela’s bad news, you wouldn’t want to get mixed up with her.”
Bill reaslised it was the girl across from him. She had shoulder lenght red hair and hazel eyes.
“I’m Kelly, by the way.”
“Bill.”
Servents came with plates and placed one down in front of everyone. Then a glass of blood. Alexander lifted his glass and evertyone followed suit.
“May we live forever.”
“In peace and good health.” His son, Jason, finished.
They all took a sip. Bill felt the sensation again. He bagan to eat like everyone else.
“So, Bill. How are you adjusting to vampirism?” asked Alexander.
“I’m getting use to it. It’s goingto take some time, though.”
“Of course.”
“Bill, why did you want to make eye contact with Angela?” asked Kelly.
“She’s my friend.”
“Your friend?! Do you even know what she’s done?”
“What?”
Kelly leaned forward and lowered her voice.
“Alexander himself asked her to kill inoccent people. And inoccent vampires, just because he could. And she did it without saying anything.”
Bill looked at Angela then back at Kelly.
“Some say she’s the reason the war started.” said the person next to him.
“I’m Eric.” he said.
Bill smiled.
“So are the rumors true?”
“What?”
“The rumors of how you were turned. That Chloe did it and her friends killed yours?” asked Eric.
“I guess so.”
“I’ll tell you how I was turned.” said Eric.
“Ok.”
Kelly rolled her eyes.
“Here we go again.”
“Ignore her. Anyway, my father suplied the covinet food. Blood, raw meat, stuff like that. Well, my father didn’t want to do it anymore, he wanted out. I worked for him by then. Well, some vampires came to the factory and used me as a threat. They would kill me if he didn’t continue. Well, he agreed to continue, but the vampire that was holding me got restless and bit me anyway. So I was turned and had to come here. That was back in the ‘80’s, I was 26.”
“Wow.”
“If we’re all sharing stories, then i’ll tell you ow I was turned.” said Kelly.
“Back in the ‘40’s, I was part on an everyday family. I had a mom and dad, a little brother and an older sister who was married. She had a daugther, too. Well, we were all having dinner one night and they invaded our home. They killed my parents and tried to turn my brother. They killed my sister’s husband and tried to turn her daugther, My brother and her daugther both died. They were to young and could handle the bite. My sister was turned but after two weeks of being a vampire, she killed herself.”
“How?” asked Bill.
“Stabbed herself in the heart with a piece of wood.”
“Ouch.”
“Yeah, ouch is right.” said Eric.

Magicly Emoicious
April 29th, 2008, 05:09 PM
Now I Shalln't!

LipsOfAnAngel
April 29th, 2008, 05:15 PM
short mcshort short!!! my chappy!

Chapter 7

Bill walked out of the dining room into the living room after breakfast. Eric and Kelly walked off somewhere. Chloe appeared next to him.
“So, that tour. Still want it?”
“I’d like to sit for a little first.”
Bill sat in a black leather chair. Some girls were sitting near him and were looking at him. They got up and walked over to him.
“Are you Bill Kaulitz?” one of them asked.
“Um, yes?”
“Oh my god!! I love you!” another one said.
More girls came and Bill ended up signed autographs and getting his picture taken. Chloe got them to go away and leave him alone.
“I’m sorry about that. I forgot to tell them to leave you alone.”
Bill looked at his hands in his lap.
“What is it?”
“Some of those pictures I signed... were of the band.”
“I’m sorry, Bill.”
She sat down on the couch next to him. She put her hand on his shoulder. He looked at it.
After a while Chloe said,
“come on, i’ll show you around.”
She got up and had to pull him up by his arms.
“Ok. This is the living room. Over there is the front doors, never open them during daylight hours. To the left is the grand staircase that leads to the bedrooms. Under the stairs is a door leading to more bedrooms. To your right, is the elevator that would take you up to my grandfather’s room and my parents. It’s like an apartment up there. Now, if you look back, the middle door is the dining room, you knew that. To the right of the, is the games room. There are TVs, ping pog tables, computers, they’re new, and pin ball machines. To the left is the door to the hospital wing. Let’s hope you never have to go in there. And to the far left, hidden in the corner is the door and stairs that lead downstairs to the basement. All of our weapons are done there.”
“Weapons?”
“Yeah, didn’t anyone tell you? We’re in the middle of a war.”

TexasGirlLovesTH
April 29th, 2008, 06:04 PM
War? :shock:
What is this war you speak of? :?
I need to know!

BlondPunk
April 29th, 2008, 06:42 PM
O_o
War???
What war???
The story has sucked me in...
It's awesome.
The story makes me think bieng a vampire is fun ^_^
I WANNA BE A VAMPIRE NAU!!!
:]
Okay, maybe not......
I need more soon!
OR ELSE!

LipsOfAnAngel
April 29th, 2008, 07:45 PM
you ask for more, i'll give you more! HERE!!!!

Chapter 8

Bill sat back down.
“A war.”
“Yeah. No one told you, did they?”
“Well, the only two people I saw while I was in my room was Angela and Alexander.”
“Well, Angela wouldn’t tell you and Alexander doesn’t know.”
“He doesn’t know?”
“Yeah, my father is the head of our army.”
“But Eric and Kelly, I met them today, they didn’t tell me.”
“That’s because they’re not part of the army. They don’t like the idea of fighting.”
“And what about you?”
“Well, let’s put it this way. If my father got killed, i’d become to new head.”
“Why not your mother?”
“She doesn’t fight either.”
“Oh.”
“Chloe.”
Her father, Jason was walking towards them.
“Chloe I need you. I got a letter from- Who’s this?”
“This is Bill, father.”
“Does he know?”
“He does now.”
“Anyway, I got a letter from the leader of the other covinet. He said that he want’s to fight but only when we’re ready. That means you have to get back into training.”
He turned to Bill.
“You, do you know how to use a sword?”
“No.”
“A dagger?”
“No.”
“A gun?”
“No, sir. I’m sorry, sir.”
“Please, call me Jason. Sir is my father.”
“Ok.”
“Chloe, tell him everything. Then after lunch, bring him down.”
“Yes, father.”
“Everything?”
“Everything there is to know about this war. Come on, we’ll go to my room.”
She lead him up the stairs and to the door he saw going to breakfast.
“This is your room?”
“Yep.”
Chloe’s room didn’t looked like the rest of the house. The walls were pale blue and the carpet was tan. The wood of everything was painted white. The bed had a white canopy with a light purple bed spread. There was a piano in the corner and her guitar was leaning against her bed. She sat her bed, Bill followed suit.
“Ok, first. If a new vampire tastes human blood, like days within turning, he will become wild. Uncontrolable and continue down a path with only human blood. There was a vampire, turned back around the same time as my grandfather, Alexander. He killed a human only two days after turning. He began his own covinet and made them taste human right after turning. Now, Alexander tried to help thoughs who were new in that covinet. But failed. The other leader, Michael, hated him for doing that. He then raged war against Alexander and us. There has been battles through out the years, but they were in the forest or small towns, so news of us didn’t get big. There hasn’t been a battle for almost ten years now, but Michael wants to fight. So, when we have enough people in our army who are ready to fight to the death, we will call apon Michael and set a battle.”
“He seems nice, almost.”
“He’s better then the rest of them.”
Chloe looked at Bill.
“So, will you help us?”
“You want me to fight?”
“If you want.”
“I’ll do it.”
“Great, after lunch we’ll start your training.”

schrei.in.die.nacht
April 29th, 2008, 09:22 PM
no bill!
dont fight!
your gonna get yourself KILLED!

LipsOfAnAngel
April 29th, 2008, 09:57 PM
Chapter 9

After lunch, Bill walked out of the dining room to find Chloe and Jason talking near the basement door.
“Are you ready?”
“Ready as i’ll ever be.”
They went down stairs. It was a huge area. In the corner facing Bill was an office. On the wall to his left was a long shooting range. And in the corner behind and the the left of Bill was a mat with weapons on shelves and the wall around it.
“Wow.”
“Take your coat off. It’ll only get in the way now.”
Bill did as asked and put it on the floor at the edge of the mat. Jason picked up two wooden staffs and threw one to Bill. He barely caught it.
“Bill, the first thing you need to know is that vampires are far stronger and faster then any human you’ll ever meet. The same goes for the vampires of the other covinet. Now, whatever weapon you hold, it is an extension of your arm and hand.”
Bill nodded.
“I want to see what you can do without training, first. So, get ready. I’m going to try and attack you, and you have to block me.”
Jason walked around Bill in a circle. He went for Bill’s legs. He hit Bill and he fell on all fours.
“Get up!”
Bill got up and this time he thought he was ready. Jason came at him and went for his shoulder. Bill turned but got hit in the back, making him stumble. Jason stood in front of Bill. He brought the staff down apon Bill’s head but he blocked it by bringing his staff over his head.
“Good. Now i’m going to start teaching you.”

Everyday after lunch, Bill would by trained by Jason. Sometimes Chloe would help but she had her own training to think about. They worked with the staffs for two weeks straight.
Bill could feel himself getting stronger and faster. Until one day,
“Stay focused Bill.”
Jason came at him. Bill did a complicated move and tripped Jason. He fell to the ground. Bill laughed and did and little victory dance.
“I did it! I did it! I did it! I did it!”
Just then, Jason came from behind and put Bill into a headlock. When he let go, Jason said,
“What did I tell you? Stay focused! Just because your enemy has fallen, doesn’t mean he’s defeated. Do it again.”

A few days later,
Bill, I think it’s time we start working on something else.”
“Like what?”
“Daggers.”
Jason walked over to the wall.
“We’ll be using wooden ones until I think your ready. The same with go when we work with swords.”
He handed Bill a wooden dagger.

“Good, good. Keep it up!”
Bill was fighting Chloe with a real sword. It had been a month and a half since he started training. After Jason thought Bill was ready to move on, he would start using a gun.
Bill held the sword in front of him with both hands. He grought it up and down into Clhoe. It made contact with her sword. He brought it back to strike again but she ducked and ran she that she was behind him. Bill turned and ran at her. She tripped and dropped her sword. He stood over, ready to strike. But stopped.
“Good Bill, that was great. Maybe we’ll start with guns today.”
Bill helped Chloe up and took her sword. He put them back on the shelf.
“Guns? Really? Do you think i’m ready?”
“With the way you were doing today, you are.”
Jason walked over to the shooting range. He picked up a gun.
“Now this is the kind on gun most of us will be using. I don’t know about the others though.”
“What kind on bullets will we use? Regular won’t kill them.”
“Ultra-violet. But regular for today.”

“Ultra-violet bullets?”
“Yeah, my father’s been working on them. We don’t know if they work though. He perfected them after the last battle.”
They were walking up the stairs.
“Hey Chloe, do you have any songs you wrote?”
“Not really. I mostly play pre-written stuff. Why?”
“Because I have a song that needs one more verse. And if you had something that worked, I could finish it.”
“Well let me look at it.”
“Let me go get it.”
Bill ran down the hall to his room. He came back shortly with a piece of paper. He went into Chloe’s room to find her playing her guitar. She stopped and looked up.
“Let me see it.”
He handed it to her. She read through it and got up. She placed it on her desk and looked through the papers. She pulled out a piece of scrap paper.
“see if this works.”
She handed him his song and the scrap paper. He read through it and looked up.
“It works! Your amazing!”
He went to the door.
“Where are you going?”
“Back to my room to get my lucky pen. I alwas write music with it. And nothing else.”
Chloe laughed as he left. He came back and went to her desk. He wrote her verse then copied the chorus.
“How does it go?”
He cleared his throut and begain the sing. Chloe picked up her quitar and played a few cords. When they finishs Bill looked at her. He was shaking his head and smiling out of amazment.

schrei.in.die.nacht
April 30th, 2008, 02:08 PM
yay! bill's happy!
post more!

LipsOfAnAngel
April 30th, 2008, 03:08 PM
Chapter 10

Bill was sitting in his room, writing down something when there was a knock at the door. He got up and answered it. It was Eric, Kelly, and three more people, a guy and two girls.
“Um, yes?”
“Bill, we haven’t seen you for mouths.” said Kelly.
“So, we thought, let’s all go to a club.” explained Eric.
“Um, ok.”
Bill closed the door and grabbed his jacket. He went back and asked,
“Who are these guys?”
“This is Millissa and Amanda, and that is Jordan.” said Kelly.
“Hey.”
‘Come on.” said Millissa.
They all walked down stairs and out the front door.
“Here is my baby.” said Eric.
“Nice car.” said Bill.
“Thanks.”
Eric got in the driver’s seat. Jordan and Kelly both called shotgun so they sat up front. Millissa got in the back, then Bill then Amanda.
“Look at you, workin’ it!” said Jordan as they pulled out of the front driveway.
They went into town and stopped in front of a club called ‘The Vamp’.
“Bill, your not suppose to be alive so you hide behind us as we go in.” said Eric.
Bill nodded.
They got out and got in the club with ease. The guys and Kelly walked up to the bar.
“Four Bloody Marys, hold the mary.” said Eric.
“Eric, that’s an alcoholic drink. We can’t have that.”
“Bill, this is a vampire club. The bartender is a real vampire, the rest well, most are fakes. But a Bloody Mary, hold the mary is,” He picked up a glass and handed it to Bill, “Blood.”
Bill took a sip, it was blood.
He finished it off. Even though it was blood, he felt drunk like it wasn’t. Maybe it was where he was. He was dancing with some girl he didn’t know. She pulled him out and into a wrap around booth.
“Hey guys. This is my new friend.”
“hey.” they said.
There was three couples. A guy and a girl, who was sitting on his lap. Two girls with their arms wrapped around each other. And two guys with their legs crossed on top of each other.
“so, what’s your name?” the girl asked.
Bill didn’t say anything.
“So how long have you been a vampire?”
“Three months.”
“Your new to this! Have you been ‘bitten’?”
He just looked at her.
“I wasn’t ‘bitten’ yet but I got implants in my neck,” she pulled her hair back to show two silver studs in her neck, “to make it look like I did.”
“We were all ‘bitten’.” said one of the girls.
“What do you mean by ‘bitten’?”
“A current vampire ‘bites’ you then the two of you have sex.”
Bill’s eyes widen.
“Why don’t I bite you and you bite me?”
“I thik i’ll have to pass.”
Bill got up and walked into the crowd. He saw Millissa sitting at a table against the wall.
“Why are you over here?” he asked her.
“I’m really shy.”
“You didn’t seem it to me.”
“That’s an act I put on. I’ve always been shy. Even when I was turned.”
“How did it happen?”
“Well, my mother was killed by a vampire when I was six. And she was the only family I had. So that vampire took care of me. Until I was old enough to be turned. Then he turned me. A stort story but there isn’t much else.”
“It’s fine. Come on, let’s dance.”
Just as the got on the dance floor, the music changed to a slow song. Bill shrugged and they danced.
“Look at you, boy!” said Jordan as he and Amanda passed by.
“We’re just friends, right?” Bill asked with a smile.
“Yeah, really good friends.”
Millissa put her head on his shoulder. The slow song seemed to last forever. When it did change, they changed their dance too.
Eric came up to them.
“Guys, it sun will rise in a half hour. It’s takes us 20 minutes to get home. Bill’s eyes widened. He and Millissa ran outside to the car, the others were waiting in it.
“Come on!” yelled Amanda.
Bill jumpped in the car and they drove off. They just made it to the house, the shudders were being closed. They all ran inside just as the sun peeked over the horizon.
“Oh- my- god. You- guys- almost- got- me- killed.” said Bill whiletrying to catch his breath.
“Yeah, but it was a fun night out.”
They all laughed.

TexasGirlLovesTH
April 30th, 2008, 04:29 PM
OH, that was good. I could picture Bill freaking out like that.

But...I still dont understand the whole "bitten" thing. I'm confused... :?
Someone please explain it to me!!

schrei.in.die.nacht
April 30th, 2008, 04:49 PM
haha that last part was funny.
the "bitten" thing was interesting though.
im not so sure if i completely understood it either...
but i probably shouldnt have said that cause
now im gonna feel stupid.

LipsOfAnAngel
April 30th, 2008, 04:50 PM
ok, i'll try to explain better. vampirism, in the non-mythical way, is almost like a way of life. 'vampires' wear snap in fangs or get them permanetly put in by a dentist. now, the 'bitten' part i made up. how it works, once you've been 'turned' or when you've decided to take up vampirism, you can have a current 'vampire' 'bite' you. so, they really bite your neck, whether it draws blood or not, then the two of you have sex. the sex is like, finalizing your 'turning', with the 'bite'. do you get it?

Chapter 11

Bill stood at the shooting range. The gun in both hands in front of him. His eyes were focused on the target at the other end. He had gotten use to the sound and didn’t flinch or blink when he fired.
He pulled the trigger and it fired. Again and again he fired, hitting the bullseye almost everytime.
A hand touched him on the shoulder and Bill jumpped.
“Calm down there, vampire. It’s just me.” said Chloe.
“You surprised me.”
“Did you hit the bullseye everytime? It’s really good but let me show you how a pro does it.”
“A pro? Hardly.”
“This is my gun. I never use any other, only this one.”
Bill just looked at her. Chloe stood next to him and fired the gun eight times. She hit the bullseye everytime so there was a big hole in the middle.
“Wow.”
“Thank you.”
Chloe put her gun away and walked to Jason’s office. Bill watched her. He put the gun away and followed her.
“... Very important news. I got another letter from Michael. He was wondering where we are. He called us cowards, running from a battle.”
“But we didn’t, we haven’t. We’re just training.”
“I know, but if I tell him that, he’ll thing we’re weak.”
“But that’s good. He’d come to the battle with fewer people who think they’ll win.”
“But it won’t be fair.”
“Oh, and killing my grandmother, your mother, for revenge is fair?!”
“Chloe, please calm down.”
Bill walked backwards then walked into the office.
“I heard yelling, is everything ok?”
“We got another letter from Michael.” explained Chloe
“Which means we have to set the battle now.” said Jason.
“Why?”
“Because, he’s waiting for us. And if we don’t, he’ll come looking for us and kill anyone in his path.”
“Then set it! I’m ready if that’s why your waiting!”
“Bill, it’s not that simple, I have to organize everyone in the army, and there’s a lot of us.”
Bill stared hard at Jason the stalked out of the office.
“He’s impatient, just like Michael.” said Chloe.
“That’s what scares me. We don’t know what he’s truely capable of.”
“You mean... ?”
“Yes.”

schrei.in.die.nacht
April 30th, 2008, 05:00 PM
okay i understand it now!
wait, what is he truly capable of?

i like your story though.
post more.

BlondPunk
April 30th, 2008, 05:03 PM
What???
Like capable of what???
D0N'T DO THIS TO ME!!!
I MUST HAVE MORE!

BlondPunk
April 30th, 2008, 05:04 PM
CAPABLE OF WHAT?
TELL ME!!!
PLEASE!

schrei.in.die.nacht
April 30th, 2008, 05:08 PM
CAPABLE OF WHAT?
TELL ME!!!
PLEASE!


i want to kno too!!!!

LipsOfAnAngel
April 30th, 2008, 05:16 PM
ok, this is the end of book 1. but don't worry, there's a book 2 and 3.

Chapter 12

Bill lied on his bed. He stared up at the canopy. He was deep in thought. There was a knock on his door. Bill looked at it but didn’t do anything. After a few moments, Chloe walked in a lied down next to him.
“What you doing?” she asked.
“Thinking.”
“Um, Bill. My father and I are... worried about you.”
“Why are you worried?”
“Well, you yelled at my father.”
Bill sighed. Chloe propped herself up so she could see Bill’s face.
“Bill, what’s bothering you?”
“Is Jason really stalling because of me?”
“No. We just don’t have enough people. We’re out numbered and we’ll lose.”
“Then train more people.”
“It’s not that easy. We first have to get people who is willing to fight. Then train them all. Look how long it took you to learn everything. We don’t have that much time.”
“Oh.”
Bill continued to look at the canopy. Chloe sat up then leaned over Bill. She place each hand on either side of him.
“What are you doing?” Bill asked.
Chloe didn’t say anything. She just looked into Bill’s brown eyes. Bill looked into her green eyes. Chloe slowly lowered herself to Bill. Her lips reached him first. Bill started to kiss her. He pulled her on top of him and kissed her more passionately. Chloe’s finger ran through Bill’s hair. His arms were wrapped around her waist. She broke the kiss and Bill leaned in for more but she pulled away. A smile played on Bill’s lips. They lied there for some time until Bill saw the clock.
“It’s 12:30. We’re going to be late for dinner.”
“Then let’s be late.”
“I don’t want to be late. I’ve never been late.”
Chloe got up off the bed followed by Bill. She surprised Bill by kissing him when he got up. He almost fell over from it. Bill broke the kiss and opened the door.

Bill and Chloe were laughing and walking into the living room holing hands when Jason came up from behind them.
“Come with me. Quickly.”
He steered them to the basement door and downstairs. They walked into his office and he sat behind his desk.
“I will be asking around if anyone wants to fight. They will be trained quickly, on only the very important things then, when we are completely ready, with the plan and everything, we will fight. I will send a letter to Michael then and the battle will most likely be in two days after that.”
“Who’s going to train the others?” asked Bill.
“Everyone.”
“What?” asked Chloe.
“Everyone, including you two, will train the new recruits.”
“But I don’t know how.” said Bill.
“Then you’ll be Chloe’s assistant.”
Both Chloe and Bill nodded. Jason waved his hand and they left.
“God, it’s going to come so soon.”
“Don’t worry, we’ll be ready by then.”
“How do you know, Bill? What if everthing goes wrong?”
“It won’t, trust me.”

TexasGirlLovesTH
April 30th, 2008, 06:02 PM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOK. I get it now. Thanx!
HOLY SHIZ! RSG just came on FUSE! *turning volume waaaaay up* :mrgreen:

schrei.in.die.nacht
April 30th, 2008, 06:27 PM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOK. I get it now. Thanx!
HOLY SHIZ! RSG just came on FUSE! *turning volume waaaaay up* :mrgreen:

awesomeness.
i dont think i get fuse..
maybe i do.
i dont kno.

BlondPunk
April 30th, 2008, 09:29 PM
More please!
ORE ELSE!

Magicly Emoicious
May 1st, 2008, 10:24 AM
I want more!!