Don't Let Me Go { Chapter 13 up ! }

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

Chapter One“Leave me alone!”
“Miss, please.”
“I said, LEAVE ME ALONE!” Kate started to cry.
She was on the edge a roof, sitting down, rocking herself while sobbing. The police was waiting at the bottom of the building and an officer was on the roof, trying to calm her.
“Miss, you don’t want to do this, nothing is worth your life, not any guy.”
“You could never understand! Bill was my life, and now he has a girlfriend. I can’t live without him.”
“I understand, but maybe if you stepped down we could talk this over…”
“I know who you are! You’re just some guy who wants to save me to be a hero. I won’t come down, only Bill could save me…”
“If you killed yourself, you’re giving up on your love for him.”
“Please, go, or I jump.”
“But miss please…”
“I need to calm myself.”
The officer went back down, worried about what she might do.
Hours later she was still there, hesitating about if she should jump or not. She leant forward, closer to the edge.
“Don’t!”
“I told you to go away...” But as she turned around, she saw Bill standing there. She gasped. He approached her and kissed her tender lips. She closed her eyes with bliss.[/center]

“Kate! Kate! WAKE UP!!”
“Wha--? Hmm…?” she groaned as her mum woke her up from the couch. “Was this all a dream?” she thought to herself, feeling cold and numb.
“Honey, what’s up? You don’t look too well…”
“I just read the Bill has a new girlfriend in Chelsea’s magazine…”
“Oh darling, how is she? What’s her name? You shouldn’t go in your sister’s stuff; she’ll get mad if she finds out she took your magazine.”
“Oh mum! You just don’t care about what I feel do you? You always take Chelsea’s side!”
“Oh, you know it’s not like that! Bill is just some rock star you’ll get over anyway, this is just some faze you’re going through, don’t worry.”
“You really don’t understand do you? I NEVER want to get over Bill!” she ran into her bedroom and jumped onto her bed, sobbing in her pillow. She heard a faint ‘Schrei’ in her room. She picked up her cell phone from her desk.
“Hey Kate! How are you? GUESS WHAT!!” Holly, her best friend said.
“Hi Hollz, what’s up? What happened?”
“So my mum, she has this friend, and her aunt has a friend who has a cousin who is the…”
“Holly, please I’ve got a headache, just get to the point.”
“Okay, okay calm down. Well don’t cause soon you’ll be screaming your head off.”
“Holly…”
“I GOT BACKSTAGE TICKETS FOR TOKIO HOTEL’S CONCERT NEXT WEEK!”
‘Oh my god!! Are you serious?!?”
“YES! And we get to speak with the band!”
“OMG HOLLY!! OMG OMGoshh!!!!!!”
“Yes!! I know! You can finally marry Bill now!”
“Yerr…um…you know he’s going out with Stella Hurbon right?”
“Yeah, I know. But babe, when you’ll be there, he won’t even remember her name!”
“Hahaha. Yeah, I wish! Thanks so much Holly, Oh my god you are the bestest friend ever!”
“That’s okay, we both need some relaxing after our exams anyway. Got to go eat now my mum’s going hysteric.”
“Okay bye! Call me tonight.”
“Bye!”

[xMusiicLuv]

I like!!!;) 8-)

please continue.... :P :D

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

I like!!!;) 8-)

please continue.... :P :D


Danke =]]]]]]]]]

[xMusiicLuv]

I like!!!;) 8-)

please continue.... :P :D


Danke =]]]]]]]]]

you are very welcome indeed xD

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

Chapter Two
It Was Saturday afternoon, six hours before the concert. Holly had just arrived Kate’s house, wearing black jeans, a red tank top, black boots and a dark jacket. Debbie had changed outfits seven times. She was now wearing light grey skinny jeans, black converse, a TH shirt and a black leather jacket.
“Wow Kate! You look great!”
“Thanks, you look good too! Come on, lets go or we will be late for the backstage tickets.”


As Kate and Holly stepped out of the taxi, they stared in admiration at the huge crowd.
“Come on! Let’s go!
After 20 minutes, they found a door with VIP written on it, they both gave their tickets and passes, and then the guards let them in. They followed the security men until they arrived in a room. Inside were the group, waiting for them.
“Hi, I’m Holly,” she said confidently.
“Hey Holly,” they smiled at her, and then their eyes switched to Deborah, who was fidgeting with her rubber bands and staring at the floor timidly.
“What’s your name hottie?” Tom asked, grinning at her.
“I…umm…my names Kate..”
Bill stared at Kate; her skin was so soft he wanted to cuddle her close.
She noticed his gaze upon her and smiled shyly at him, Bill proposed a drink to her.
“Sure,” she said.
“Okay, follow me into the next room, you can choose a drink there.”
Tom raised his eyebrows at Holly, who winked back without hesitating. Some kind of union was going on between them.
While Tom and Holly were flirting, Bill and Kate were in the other room, both drinking soda.
“So…um…where you from?”
“Italy.”
“Right…ugh…cool country…”
“Yeah.”
Bill gazed into her blue eyes, and put a strand of her dark hair behind her ear.
“You are really beautiful.”
Kate’s eyes dropped down, and her head leaned forward. Bill cupped his hands around her skin and kissed her soft peach lips. As he pulled away, her head was still lifted upwards, her eyes were closed and her mouth was smiling.
“Hey Bill! Stella’s here!” shouted Gustav from the other room.

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

Oh shiz! :shock: The GF just HAD to show up...
****! :evil:

PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE continue!!!

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

Chapter Three


Bill and Kate walked awkwardly into the other room. Stella, Bill’s new girlfriend walked up to Bill and snuggled up to him, giving Kate a death stare.
“Baby! Where were you? I missed you last night!” she said, squeezing his butt.
“Sorry, I was busy with the new record. This is Holly and Kate.”
“Oh…what are they doing here?”
“Just had some backstage tickets…”
“Yeah, yeah, whatever! Kate, could you come help me? I need to carry some boxes,” Stella asked, forcing a smile.
“Stella, I don’t think they came for that, they only have one hour of backstage tickets and…” Gustav said.
“Don’t worry, won’t be long.”
Kate followed her into the corridor.
“Where are the boxes?” She asked.
“Look, forget the boxes, I came here to talk. I don’t know what you’re playing at, but Bill is mine! I managed to twist him around my little finger, and now he will do anything for me. You can have him when I break up with him, in a few years or so when we will divorce after our wedding. Everything is planned, and the last thing I need is a schoolgirl like you, who will destroy all my chances of getting rich.”
Kate was too stunned to speak.
”Yes, it’s better if you don’t talk. If you say anything to him, you will see what will happen to you,” Stella sneered, pulling Kate back into the room.
“No boxes?”
“Nope, the workers took them. They are so kind,” Stella smiled, “I have to go now, dinner with a friend.”
“Aren’t you going to stay for the concert, like you promised?” Bill asked, hurt.
“Which concert?” She asked, pulling her coat on.
“The first one this year in America…you promised…”
“Sorry, gotta go. Call me! Mwah!” she blew him a kiss and left.
“*****!” Tom said under his breath.
Everyone, except for Kate, looked at Tom, surprised by his harsh words. But deep inside they all knew he was speaking aloud for them. Kate was looking at Bill, wondering if she should go comfort him or not. She stepped forward and reached to hug him, but he looked back at her, confused, and pushed her away. She stared at him, tears in her eyes, her arms still in mid-air. She took her handbag and ran to the bathroom, tears streaming down her face.
Holly ran after her.

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

THAT... :shock: BLEEP.BLEEP.BLEEP.BLEEP.BLEEP.BLEEP.BLEEP.BLEEP. BLEEP!
Bill doesn't deserve that shiz.
Can I cut Stella? PLEASE??? *holding up knife*
Oooh, can I beat her up? *holding baseball bat and lead pipe*
PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE? With Bill, Tom, Gustav, and Georg, covered in rainbow sprinkles, nuts, extra sexy sauce, and strawberries on top!!!

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

THAT... :shock: BLEEP.BLEEP.BLEEP.BLEEP.BLEEP.BLEEP.BLEEP.BLEEP. BLEEP!
Bill doesn't deserve that shiz.
Can I cut Stella? PLEASE??? *holding up knife*
Oooh, can I beat her up? *holding baseball bat and lead pipe*
PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE? With Bill, Tom, Gustav, and Georg, covered in rainbow sprinkles, nuts, extra sexy sauce, and strawberries on top!!!
Hahaa
It will happen in the story (;

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

Chapter Four

Tom shook his head at Bill.
“What?” Bill asked, as though nothing had happened
“You know very well what. You didn’t need to push her away like that. She’s just a fan!”
“Exactly, she’s just a fan. She shouldn’t have tried to hug me, they should’ve just asked for an autograph, a picture, and left.”
“Bill…It’s partly your fault.”
“What do you mean?”
“You kissed her!”
“I didn’t mean to!”“You still did. She probably thought something was going on between you too. I mean, you can’t blame her. She just wanted to comfort you, after what Stella did to you.”
“Stella didn’t do anything wrong!”
“Oh, yeah, of course.”
“She’s allowed to go see a friend.”
“Whatever Bill, you know very well she was supposed to come tonight.”
“Look, leave Stella out of this. Anyway, I don’t want to talk about this any more.”
He left the room, slamming the door.

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

Stella's a -bleeped out for your safety- !!! :)
I REALLY wanna beat her, or cut her, or smash her into a brick wall. :mrgreen:

Keep updating!!

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

Chapter Five

A few minutes later, Tom was eating muffins. His appetite had taken over his sadness. Holly came to see him.
“How is she?” he asked.
“Not to good, but she’ll get over it. She won’t get over Bill though, only the situation. She has had a thing for him since…what…three years now? And now she’s just a tad bit upset.”
“Should I go see her?”
“Oh, sure, if you want to. But I don’t want to go there again, it’s too depressing.”
Tom carefully put his muffin on the counter, trying not to waste a crumb of it. He then went joined Kate in the bathroom. But the door was locked. Tom knocked on the door.
“Who is it?” she asked, her voice thick.
“It’s Tom, open up.”
“No, Leave me alone!”
“Kate, come one hun, open the door.”
After a few seconds of silence she unlocked the door.
Her eyes were swollen, she had smudged makeup all over her face.
“Aww come here,” Tom said, pulling her towards him, “You’re freezing!” he pulled off his hoodie and put it on her shoulders, “better?”
She nodded.
As he hugged her, she let her head rest on his shoulders. He gently untangled her damp her and stroked her arm.
“Thank you,” she whispered, gazing up at him.
“No problem,” he smiled at her.
“I’m really sorry for all this, I mean, it’s all my fault and…” Kate started.
“Shhh,” Tom put his finger on her lips, “You did nothing wrong, don’t say another word.”
“Mmm…”
“He’s a jerk. You don’t deserve him.”
“Tom! He’s your brother!” she was finally smiling.
“Yeah well. There’s always the good and bad twin eh?”
Kate laughed.
Tom gazed at her; thinking how he loved to see her smile, laugh…
He realised he was falling for her.

[D.C.Valentine]

Another typical fanfic with which I have read over and over.

I must say, this is the better of the many of its kind.

I would love to hear more.

If I were writing something like this, someone would have died by now.

-DCV-

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

Another typical fanfic with which I have read over and over.

I must say, this is the better of the many of its kind.

I would love to hear more.

If I were writing something like this, someone would have died by now.

-DCV-

Thankss? I feel insulted, and complimenteed --'
I prefer my old fanfic, but it's on the old forum
Duude, I want someone dead too..but who?
Lets kill Tom :mrgreen: arrw, no, I need him while to break Holly und Kate's friendship.
Oh ****. I just spoiled the story for everyone.

[D.C.Valentine]

Please, don't take it as an insult! I constructively criticize everything.

What I said was a compliment.

Whoever you kill (besides whatserface) make it tragic. Tragedy is fun.

Read my fic, if you dare.

Heartbreak. Incarnate.

-DCV-

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

I will read it.
Yeah tragedy is (Y)
Only for stories
Had enough tragedies in my life
Yerr.
Well.
Sounded like an insult to me
I don't want my FanFic to be
'like the others'

[amandaaraujo]

awww tom is nice omg cant beleive bill could be like that oh well your story is really good not like the others no way i say for all of us who writeFF has their own personality and creativity into their stories so dont feel bad ilove it so far and keep writing its getting good :D

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

awww tom is nice omg cant beleive bill could be like that oh well your story is really good not like the others no way i say for all of us who writeFF has their own personality and creativity into their stories so dont feel bad ilove it so far and keep writing its getting good :D
ThanQuu (:

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

Chapter Six

Kate laughed.
Tom gazed at her; thinking how he loved to see her smile, laugh…
He realised he was falling for her.

"Tom?" she said, still in his arms
"Yes?"
"You know, you're not that bad. You seem so different on TV. But, you're not like that at all."
"You shouldn't believe all that media."
"I know, but you are much more different than i thought."
"Is that...good?" he hesitated "Do you prefer me like that?"
"I love it," she whispered.
Tom rubbed his finger on her cheek, bent his head closer to hers.
Kate backed away, standing up sharply.
"What are you doing?!"
Tom was shocked by her rejection.
"I...uh...I thought...that there was somethi-"
Kate interrupted him
"There isn't ANYTHING between us Tom! You are just like what everyone says. You take advantage of every situation. I can't believe this. I thought you were really kind, coming here to comfort me after Bill's reaction, but you just wanted to hit on me!"
"Thats not true Kate!"
"Whatever, I'm leaving." she said, storming out of the bathroom, "Come on Holly, we're going."
"What?" But Kate was already outside, "Call me." she said, pointing at her number on a notebook. She then rushed outside to join Kate.

[BlondPunk]

Keep writing!!!
this story is so good!

AND STELLA IS A MO**** F****** B****
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
:]
More please :]

[xx_hardcore]

My name?
In two fanfics?


HA.

Eventhoughit'snotme.

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

My name?
In two fanfics?


HA.

Eventhoughit'snotme.

It IS you!
Remember dinosour years ago [a few months]
I asked you if you wanted your name in my fanfic
And you replied yes
And I wrote a fanfic, but i just started it again

[xMusiicLuv]

oh god i'm such a bad reader i haven't read or commented on your ff in ages...


**dun dun dun**
oh the drama xD

GAAAAH STELLA!!!

[BlondPunk]

My name?
In two fanfics?


HA.

Eventhoughit'snotme.



Yes, because your name is awesome, and I can't think of any other names that I like.
since I was eleven I wanted to name my daughter Holly.

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

I'm not sure if I shouls continue


U____________________u

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

ihatethisone

[BlondPunk]

IF U DON'T CONTINUE IMMA BE MAD CUZ THIS FANFIC IS AWESOME!!!
CONTINUE.
OR ELSE YOU'LL GET THE HOBO TREATMENT.

[Emma B.E]

I WANT MORE!!!!!O.o

[amandaaraujo]

polease please please continue i want to know what happens lplplplplplease

[Emma B.E]

PLEASE MORE!!!!! <3

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

Mkay.
I didn't see people write that they wanted more
O_______________o

Will do

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

Chapter Seven

Come on Holly, we're going."
"What?" But Kate was already outside, "Call me." she said to Tom, pointing at her number on a notebook. She then rushed outside to join Kate.

Tom slowly walked around the room, still in a daze,
His thoughts were empty, he had never been so speechless in his life.
'Why doesn't she like me? What did I do wrong?' Tom thought.

[Authors note: Listen to this song to get the emotion: http://youtube.com/watch?v=sILGChRYQd8 XDD]

As he was encircling the room, he saw a grey purse on a chair. Tom opened it, and found all of Kates belongings.
"What?" he said to himself, "I better call Holly, just to tell her that...that Kate forgot her purse. Thats right...just to tell her that.."
He slumped onto the couch, closed his eyes in despair, and drifted to sleep.
[...]

"WHY THE **** DID YOU LEAVE, KATE?" Holly screamed at her in the car.
"Just leave me ALONE! I don't want to talk about it."
"You DON'T WANT TO TALK ABOUT IT? Katee! This was our only chance to meet them! Don't you realise that you spoiled it ALL!"
"PLEASE JUST STOP SHOUTING! I've got a really bad headache."
A silence grew over them.
Holly opened her mouth to talk, but closed it again. She knew it was useless to fight, her chance was spoiled just because of that selfish little...
DRINGG!
"Hello?" Holly said, her voice weak.
"Hi Holly, um.. it's Tom.."




TELL ME IF I SHOULD CONTINUEE! (L'[/size]

[Emma B.E]

*LE GASP*



Please, write more!! :D

[BlondPunk]

CONTINUE.
*puts hobo away*
:]]]

[Emma B.E]

I can't wait!!! o.o

[amandaaraujo]

oooooohhhhhh omg please continue please

[Emma B.E]

PLEASE!!!! :D<3

[TH_luv]

dude,I'm falling in love with this fanfic! XD continuuuuuuue!

[Emma B.E]

I want more <333

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

Chapter Eight

DRINGG!
"Hello?" Holly said, her voice weak.
"Hi Holly, um.. it's Tom.."

"TOM?!" Holly screeched, glancing at Kate's horrified stare, she continued, "-AS? Thomas, hi."
"What's with Thomas?" Tom asked.
"I don't want Kate to know we're talking," Holly whispered, her lips pressed on her cell phone, "Call me back."
"Wai-" Tom started.
BEEEEEEEP.

Holly rolled down her window, feeling Kate watching her.
"Who was it?" Kate asked flatly.
"Oh, just Thomas, some guy from school..."
"Ooooh! What did he want? Why are your cheeks all red?! Hollz; i think you like him!" Kate giggled, stopping the car infront of Holly's house.
"I DON'T WANT TO TALK ABOUT IT, OK?" Holly stormed out of the car.
"Holly! Whats wrong?" Kate asked, biting her lip. But Holly had already slammed her front door. Kate pushed her foot on the accelorator.



***


Holly was lying on her bed, thinking of Tom.
'I think he likes me," she thought, "i wish he would call me.."
Her phone suddenly rang.
"Hello?" she said, breathlessly.
"Tom here."
Holly smiled at herself, thinking 'right on cue'.
"Hi," she repeated.
"Well Kate left her handbag here, and i was wondering if..."
"Sure Tom! I'll come get it!"
"No, that's not what i meant. I was wondering if youu could arrange something with Kate, I really want to see her again."
"What? You like HER?"
"Yeah, i mean after we kissed..."
Tom continued talking, but Holly couldn't hear it anymore, her ears seemed to block out all sound.
'How could Kate do this to me?' she thought, 'How? When she knew knew that I was head over heels about him. Just cause Bill totally rejected her, doesn't mean that she had to steal Tom from me. I need a revenge..a revenge, a revenge....but what?'
"Holly, you alive?" Tom asked.
'perfect,' she thought, 'you'll see Kate, what i'm preparing for you with Tom, you'll see..."
"I'm here Tom."

She smiled.

[BlondPunk]

O_O
what has she prepared???
I MUST KNOW.
MORE PLEASE

[Emma B.E]

O.O



Please write more!!!! :D <3

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

NEW PART COMING UP;
WRITING IT NAU.

[BlondPunk]

I can't wait!!!

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

i'm not sure now;
on the poll
people said it was boring
&& that they hatedd it.

T___________________T

[kArLa2tH]

*new reader*
i love it =)

[amandaaraujo]

please continueeeeeeeee

[Emma B.E]

I love it!!o.o

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

Guys;
I'm not continuing it.
THE END.

[Emma B.E]

WHY !!!??????
IT'S SOO GOOD!!!! :(


*cry*

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

Chapter Nine
"Holly, you alive?" Tom asked.
'perfect,' she thought, 'you'll see Kate, what i'm preparing for you with Tom, you'll see..."
"I'm here Tom."

She smiled.

"Yeah, so how can I go see her?" Tom asked, getting impatient.
"I can give you her address, her parents LOVE Tokio Hotel..."
Holly sneered.


***

"WHY CAN'T YOU JUST ACCEPT ME THE WAY I AM?" Kate screamed at her mother.
"Because I'm ASHAMED. I'm ashamed of you Kate. Who would want a daughter like you, look at what you're wearing, for gods sake," Kate's mum said, looking at her outfit.
"What do you mean by that, mum?"
"Look at you; those strippy tights are HIDEOUS. Your hair shouldn't NEED extentions, or a fringe that covers half your eyes. And WHY THE **** DO YOU NEED PIERCINGS?"
"Mum, you'd never understand.."
"Oh, I understand all right, this is all because of that group, Kioto Hotel."
"TOKIO Hotel mum," Kate reproched, pulling a face.
"Whatever. Listen to me Kate, i don't EVERR want to hear ANYTHING about that group again, do you hear me?"
"WHAT?"
"EVER."
"But mu-" before she could finish her sentence, the doorbell rang.
Kate ran up to her bedroom, slamming her door. A few minutes later:
"KATE!! COME DOWN HERE IMMEDIATLY." her mum screeched.
"What do you WANT?"
"IMMEDIATLY."
Kate jumped off her bed and went downstairs.
"What mum?"
"Someone is here for you."
Kate turned towards the door, and nearly fainted out of shock.

[Emma B.E]

O.O <3

[xXo0BillKaulitz0oXx]

OMG! please keep going!
The whole thing is just great!!
L.O.V.E it!
<3
Thanks for writing,
please continue!

[BlondPunk]

MORE!!!
If you discontinue I'll throw hobos at you.
DIRTY hobos.
THIS FANFIC IS UBER-AMAZING!!!
:D

[o.o merrie x.x]

Kate's life is my life o.o


u know the mom part x.x


iloveit
MORE
imissu u.u

[amandaaraujo]

Lalaa update this story immediatly PLeaseee i neeeed to know and omg totally understand holly my mom says the same thing ugh parents what do they know

[<3ByYourSide<3]

Oh My Gosh! i LOVE this...MORE MORE MORE!!!

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

More tonight :]]

[BlondPunk]

More tonight :]]

yay!
I'm excited to see what happens :]

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

Chapter Ten


The doorbell rang. Kate ran up to her bedroom, slamming her door. A few minutes later:
"KATE!! COME DOWN HERE IMMEDIATLY." her mum screeched.
Kate jumped off her bed and went downstairs.
"What mum?"
"Someone is here for you."
Kate turned towards the door, and nearly fainted out of shock.

"TOM! What are you you doing here?!" Kate asked, backing away from her mother.
"I..well..you forgot your purse when you came over."
"WHAT?" Kate's mother shouted, "DON'T TELL ME WHAT I THINK THIS IS KATE. YOU SLEPT WITH THIS FLITHY RAG?"
"Mum! Of course i didn't. He is soo not my type anyway.."
"So what is all this nonsense about?" Kate's mother questioned, her arms crossed.
"Well, Holly gor backstage tickets for Tokio Hotel.."
"BACKSTAGE TICKETS?" Her mum interrupted, "and WHY did i not know about this? I didn't even know you were going to that concert until this morning. So what did you do, get off with some random guy while you were waiting?"
"No mum, what did you think?"
"Well who IS this person?" she asked, pointing at Tom.
"This is Tom Kaulitz mum.."
"Who?"
"He's the guitarist in Tokio Hotel.."
"KATE. I DON'T BELIEVE THIS! Tokio Hotel. Tokio Hotel. It's ALWAYS Tokio Hotel. Who are you? You're not my daughter."
"Stop it mum, not in front of guests," she hissed angrily.
"I DON'T F***ING CARE ABOUT THIS STUPID GUY. I DON'T THINK YOU UNDERSTAND THAT I AM ASHAMED OF YOU!"
Kate was speechless, she had never heard her mum being so horrid. She ran up to her bedroom, leaving her mother and Tom alone. She once again slammed her door.
Her mobile rang.
"Hello?"
"Err is this Kate?"
"Yes..who is this?"
"Hi, um, this is Bill.."

[Emma B.E]

WOOW...... O________o

omg!!!!


More please!!!! XDDD :D


*CAN'T WAIT*

[Emma B.E]

*bumpes up*

[xXo0BillKaulitz0oXx]

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!
As soon as possible!!
IM Falling in love with the Story!!
Its really good!!
XD
LoL!

[Emma B.E]

yaaay !!:D


More bitte! <3

[BlondPunk]

O___________O
Evil mom.
What is Bill gonna say?
???????????
You better update!

[o.o merrie x.x]

come on Laura!!!!!!!


o.o

[luvukaulitztwins]

LAURA MEHR BITTE


BITTE BITTE FICCA BITTE

[tokiohotel26]

~new reader~
wow! :shock:
this is an interesting story
i love it! :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

[BlondPunk]

LAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUURRAAAAAAAAAAA!!!
Why are you not continiung?
*holds up hobo*
don't make me use this!

[-Billenia-]

please,continue.....we want more! :D

[BlondPunk]

*eye twitches*
I have problems with waiting, I'm an impatient person when it comes to these things.
*lays hobo down*
*holds up knif*
These kind of things go to drastic endings when I don't get what I want.
*sharpens knife*
DON'T MAKE ME USE THIS!
lol, jk.

[xXo0BillKaulitz0oXx]

You want to drive us crazy!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Write more!
I love the story!!XD
<3
Continue!

[Unknown598]

*New Reader*


FANTASTIC! MEHR!!! bitte ^_^

:D :mrgreen: :twisted:

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

*is continuing*

Didn't see people liked it.
I was about to top this FF.
But Chyeah <3 ;D.

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

Chapter Eleven


Kate ran up to her bedroom, leaving her mother and Tom alone. She once again slammed her door.
Her mobile rang.
"Hello?"
"Err is this Kate?"
"Yes..who is this?"
"Hi, um, this is Bill.."


"Bill?" she whispered, softly."
"That's me."
"Why..What are you..? Why are you calling?" she asked, her voice shaking. She had been dreaming he would call her for the past week.
"I..ugh..just wanted to apologise for last time.. i mean -"
"It's fine."
"- i'm REALLY sorry, i don't know why i acted like that.."
"It's Okay, BilL!"
"- and I just.. Oh. Okay, are you sure it's okay?"
"Fine Bill, everything's fine."
"Cool."
Neither Bill nor Kate knew what to say. A few seconds ticked by, which seemed like minutes to Kate.
Bill coughed lightly.
"Listen Bill, i have to go now."
"Oh, ok, but i was wondering.."
"What?"
"Well, just to be forgiven if i could-"
"BILL, I SAID IT WAS OK!"
"Right. Well, OK. Just for the sake of it. Would you like to have dinner sometime, with me..?"
"Like.. a date?"
"Like a date."
"Umm. Sure, OK."
"Cool. That's Cool."
Kate smiled, she knew she wasn't the only anxious one.
"Yes Bill, that's cool."
"Mmm."
"Well, i have to go now."
"OK, well, i'll call you!"
"Sure. Wait. How did you get my number?"
"It was in your handbag.."
"Jeeeeez. You looked in my handba-"
Kate was interruped by a shriek from downstairs, her mother, most probably.
"Whatever Bill. It doesn't matter. See you!"
"Tchuss!"
"Bye!"

Kate threw the phone onto her bed and ran back down the stairs. She heard her mother talking to Tom. She was sure he had made her angry. She stormed into the kitchen, ready to shout at Tom. She couldn't believe what she was seeing. This time, she fainted. It was one shock too many.












WHAT IS GOING ON? WHAT DID SHE SEE? GUESS : )
&& GUYS, IF YOU WANT ME TO CONTINUE THIS FF,
YOU NEED TO COMMMENT MORE REGULARLY, BITTE.

[o.o merrie x.x]

*faints*

WHAT did she see?


OMB u cant leave it there ....

are u trying to kill me woman!!!!!????

[Emma B.E]

JJGKLFHGKLVKLGNKLGNKLGKLDHKLDLHHCUIHUN FYEWNFRGEFREGFONUIFUIVRYIVUFVOPWE9NR !


MORE !!!!!!! :shock:

[<3ByYourSide<3]

What the...



MORE!

[BlondPunk]

O_O
MORE
WHAT IN THE WORLD DID SHE SEE???
.................
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!

[luvukaulitztwins]

COKME ON MORE MORE MORE MORE

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

new part COMING UP ;D

[Emma B.E]

Wii !!!! :D

I love this fan fic!
and the girl who writes it!!:D
she's lovely<3

Random ! :D

[BlondPunk]

new part COMING UP ;D


I can't wait!!!!!

[xXo0BillKaulitz0oXx]

Gah,
LOVE IT,
POST MORE PLEASE!!!
Im dying to know!
XD

[tokiohotel26]

o gott please tell me before i hurt u with that hobo BlondPunk mentioned! i cant use the knife! ****** she has it... :lol:

but really hurry

[BlondPunk]

o gott please tell me before i hurt u with BlondPunk mentioned! i cant use the knife! ****** she has it... :lol:

but really hurry


*holds up knife and smiles evily*
MUHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAA AAA
DON'T MAKE ME USE THIS!!!
I want more!
pweazeeee???

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

Chapter Twelve


Kate threw the phone onto her bed and ran back down the stairs. She heard her mother talking to Tom. She was sure he had made her angry. She stormed into the kitchen, ready to shout at Tom. She couldn't believe what she was seeing. This time, she fainted. It was one shock too many.


***

Kate opened her eyes, looked around the room; it was all white, everything was white.
"I'm dead!" she whispered, terrified.
"Oh, honey!" said a voice.
"Mum!" kate said, relieved. Her mother hugged her tightly.
"Oh honey, i was so scared, the doctors said you would be fine, but thats what they said for your father too..."
"What happened?" Kate glanced qround the plain room.
"You...you don't remember?" her mother asked, her voice shaking a little.
"I don't think so-" Kate stopped suddenly, her memory came back, showing the scene in a flash.
Kate's mum stroked her hair.
"Get OFF me!" Kate screeched.
"What?" Kate's mother was shocked, had she remembered, or not?
A young nurse came in to check on Kate.
"You know very well what, i saw you snuggling up to Tom Kaulitz!" Kate said, disgusted.
The nurses head suddenly flinched. Kates mum was already out the door, feeling guilty.
"Escu-use me, miss, i couldn't help over hearo,g what you were saying, but, your mother kissed Tom Kaulitz!?" the blond nurse asked.
"You know Tokio Hotel?" Kate said, without replying tothe nurses question.
"Yes, um, i'm a very big fan.."
"Well, i think you'll be glad to know that Tom Kaulitz is right outside,"
The nurse glanced outside the glass window, seeing a familiar hat...dreadlocks.. surely it couldn't be?! The nurse rushed outside, leaving her badge on Kate's bed, it said "Nurse EMMA B.E." Kate smiled and closed her eyes, leaving the painful world behind, losing herself in her long lost dream....

[tokiohotel26]

oh thank gott cuz i was about to post something about that hobo...





now after reading...

:o :shock: :o :shock:
she kissed him? that slut of a mother! eww...in my mind...ugh...u really dont wanna be there at the moment

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

oh thank gott cuz i was about to post something about that hobo...





now after reading...

:o :shock: :o :shock:
she kissed him? that slut of a mother! eww...in my mind...ugh...u really dont wanna be there at the moment

Lulz, is it ok, though ? Cause, on the poll people say they don't likee it u.u

[tokiohotel26]

oh thank gott cuz i was about to post something about that hobo...





now after reading...

:o :shock: :o :shock:
she kissed him? that slut of a mother! eww...in my mind...ugh...u really dont wanna be there at the moment

Lulz, is it ok, though ? Cause, on the poll people say they don't likee it u.u
yea its good! i voted **** YEAH!! OMG! CONTINUE.

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

oh thank gott cuz i was about to post something about that hobo...





now after reading...

:o :shock: :o :shock:
she kissed him? that slut of a mother! eww...in my mind...ugh...u really dont wanna be there at the moment

Lulz, is it ok, though ? Cause, on the poll people say they don't likee it u.u
yea its good! i voted **** YEAH!! OMG! CONTINUE.

Thankss :-*

[tokiohotel26]

ur welcome! now post more!!!!

[BlondPunk]

oh thank gott cuz i was about to post something about that hobo...





now after reading...

:o :shock: :o :shock:
she kissed him? that slut of a mother! eww...in my mind...ugh...u really dont wanna be there at the moment


lol. dirty hobos. XD
I don't think dirty hobos are that threatning.
So that's why I got my knife.
*puts knife back in dresser*

WAAAAAAAAAAATT?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Her mom was KISSING Tom Kaulitz????
OMFG
Amazing Chapter.
Emma's in the story!!!
cools!
More bitte!

[tokiohotel26]

oh thank gott cuz i was about to post something about that hobo...





now after reading...

:o :shock: :o :shock:
she kissed him? that slut of a mother! eww...in my mind...ugh...u really dont wanna be there at the moment


lol. dirty hobos. XD
I don't think dirty hobos are that threatning.
So that's why I got my knife.
*puts knife back in dresser*

WAAAAAAAAAAATT?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Her mom was KISSING Tom Kaulitz????
OMFG
Amazing Chapter.
Emma's in the story!!!
cools!
More bitte!

ok then no hobo... :(

oooh how about a chainsaw? naw too messy...
i got it!...nope i lost...im outta ideas

[BlondPunk]

oh thank gott cuz i was about to post something about that hobo...





now after reading...

:o :shock: :o :shock:
she kissed him? that slut of a mother! eww...in my mind...ugh...u really dont wanna be there at the moment


lol. dirty hobos. XD
I don't think dirty hobos are that threatning.
So that's why I got my knife.
*puts knife back in dresser*

WAAAAAAAAAAATT?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Her mom was KISSING Tom Kaulitz????
OMFG
Amazing Chapter.
Emma's in the story!!!
cools!
More bitte!

ok then no hobo... :(

oooh how about a chainsaw? naw too messy...
i got it!...nope i lost...im outta ideas


pointy sticks! Those wierd things they used in the old days! Clubs! Baseball bats!
Wait
That would hurt.
Cute cuddly teddy bears!

I'm thinking about making alot of new accounts just so I can vote HECK YEAH! OMG, CONTINUE! alot of times.

[tokiohotel26]

oooh i gots it! my softball bat! thats perfect. u reminded me of it when u said baseball
if ur thinking of cute cuddley teddy bears u should just use gustav... :lol:

[xXo0BillKaulitz0oXx]

More More More!!
XD

[Emma B.E]

wooow!!o.o

me?! o.o <3 *runsaroundscreaming* :shock: :D

MOOOORE PLEASE!:D

U're soo lovely!!! o.o<3

[Emma B.E]

was this my nurs costume?? o.o xDDDDDD

http://i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff246/EmmalovesBill/83050X.jpg

LMFAO!!!

[-Billenia-]

synexise laura!einai teleio!<3

[BlondPunk]

:cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: I'm dieng for more!
DIENG!
DIENG!
MORE MORE MORE MORE!
*holds up cute cuddly teddy bear*
DON'T MAKE ME USE THIS!

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

UPDATE SOON : ) Just really busy at the mo.
Glad you gaiz liked it ;D

[xXKillerxQueenXx]

-New Reader-
I loved what was written so far!
Update soon, please!

[BlondPunk]

UPDATE SOON : ) Just really busy at the mo.
Glad you gaiz liked it ;D

YYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!
I can't wait!

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

Finally; an update. Are my readers still as enthusiastic? ;D.


Chapter Thirteen

The nurse glanced outside the glass window, seeing a familiar hat...dreadlocks.. surely it couldn't be?! The nurse rushed outside, leaving her badge on Kate's bed, it said "Nurse EMMA B.E." Kate smiled and closed her eyes, leaving the painful world behind, losing herself in her long lost dream....

* * *
"Wake up !" a soft voice whispered to my ear.
"Hmmf?" i groaned, slightly opening my eyes, then quickly shutting them again. Bill Kaulitz was leaning over me, holding my hand. Oh god, thankyou-thankyou-thankyou-.
"What?"
Oh my, god. I was saying it out loud.
"Nothing," i smiled.
He instantly smiled back.
"I was so worried..." he started.
"But, why?" i asked, puzzled. I mean, seriously, what would this guy have to do with me?
"Because, i haven't stopped thinking about you..." his eyes were getting lower.
"But...stacy?"
"It's over."
"What?"
"I realised that I had no reason to go out with her,"
"Ohh.." I didn't know what to say.
"I was wondering...would you like to.. g-go out with me some time?"
"Ummh-"
"Oh, if you don't want to, it's okay,"
"No!"
He looked puzzled now.
"I mean, i do want to go out with you,"


* * *

I went to the bathroom, i was grinning to myself. I could finally get out of this hospital. When i went in, i dropped my handbag. Oh, god. Not again.
"Tom! Are you going to kiss every living thing?" i screamed at him.

[-Billenia-]

i love it!

[in.die.nacht.]

~*New reader*~
I think this fanfic is wonderful.
I can't wait for more.
^-^

[Lalaa_Kaulitz]

Danke schon

I like new readers. But, they don't seem to stick around much;;

[BlondPunk]

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!
YOU UPDATED!!!!
you just made my day!!!
=D
mehr bitte!!!

[xXo0BillKaulitz0oXx]

Please Post More!!!
I am Impatient!!
XD

[BlondPunk]

Please Post More!!!
I am Impatient!!
XD

My patientcy is this big: -

[xXo0BillKaulitz0oXx]

Please Post More!!!
I am Impatient!!
XD

My patientcy is this big: -



Lucky!
I have none-excistant!
:oops:

[Emma B.E]

more. :shock: