...~*Stop and Stare*~... NOT DISCONTINUED

[ShadowIW]

I looked around. Nobody was there.
'Great, alone again! good job!' I thought when I looked around for the rest of the band. I was part of the band "DoN't BiLNk" I was one of the singers. We were on tour and this was our first perfomance in Washington DC. 'Of course this could be our last performance if I dont find the others!' I thought again. Ok, so this wasnt what I planed, I am walking around the club before it opened for our concert. Then my phone rang.
"Hello?" I answered, it was Marie that called
"Dude! Where are you?" Marie asked
"Where am I?! where are you? Im at the club." I said
"What street is that on? The others and I cant find it."
"Oh..I could just bang my head against the wall right now!"
"Ok then you go ahead and do that."
"Marie!"
She laughed "Jk Jk. But really what street is it on?"
"Its on Main Street."
"Oh! then we're here!"
"Good-bye." I hung up

Then our manager walked in.
"Hey Ave. Where are the others?" Ms. Smith said
"Umm..they are here..just not here." I said
"Im not going to question that, any way, i have great news! There are some famous people
coming to see your concert tonight!" Ms. Smith
smiled
"Whaa? Oh! well who are they?" I asked
"Here is a list." Ms. Smith handed me a page of names.
I read it out loud.
" J-Lo, Avril Lavigne, Paris Hilton, Nicole Richie, Lindsay Lohan, Hillary Duff, and Tokio Hotel" I raised an eyebrow
"Who the heck is Tokio Hotel?" I asked
"They are a Teen German band..they are about you guys' age." Ms. Smith replied
"Uh... Are you trying to set us up with German guys?" I asked
"No! No!...if you guys just make a connection...it just happens." then she left
She's trying to set us up with German dudes. I thought tp myself, just then Marie, Shebly, Lena,and Jazmin walked in.
"Hey guys where were ya'll?" I said
"We were lost." Lena said
"ugh! ya so lets just get the sound check done, by the way some famous german dudes are coming to the concert." I said and walked off
"lets just get the sound check done." Lena grumbled.
Once the sound check was done we all went back stage to get ready.
"German boys..." Marie thought to herself out loud.
When the concert started I was sang and scaned the crowd. The people looked normal, I saw Avril rockin' to our beat. I also saw 5 boys, one had Dreads, 2 had blonde hair, one had brown hair and the other had long jet black spiked hair....If only I could get my hair like that.


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[TexasGirlLovesTH]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! It's great!! I like it!!! Continue!!!
TeeHee...my name's in it. :mrgreen:

[SCHREIoutLOUD]

Whoa.

I had a fanfic called stop and stare on the other THUS Forums.. the original ones before these ones. O.O

[TH_luv]

woot woot! we're in a band! XD thats awesome :D I want mehr,bitte?

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

I looked around. Nobody was there.
'Great, alone again! good job!' I thought when I looked around for the rest of the band. I was part of the band "DoN't BiLNk" I was one of the singers. We were on tour and this was our first perfomance in Washington DC. 'Of course this could be our last performance if I dont find the others!' I thought again. Ok, so this wasnt what I planed, I am walking around the club before it opened for our concert. Then my phone rang.
"Hello?" I answered, it was Marie that called
"Dude! Where are you?" Marie asked
"Where am I?! where are you? Im at the club." I said
"What street is that on? The others and I cant find it."
"Oh..I could just bang my head against the wall right now!"
"Ok then you go ahead and do that."
"Marie!"
She laughed "Jk Jk. But really what street is it on?"
"Its on Main Street."
"Oh! then we're here!"
"Good-bye." I hung up

Then our manager walked in.
"Hey Ave. Where are the others?" Ms. Smith said
"Umm..they are here..just not here." I said
"Im not going to question that, any way, i have great news! There are some famous people
coming to see your concert tonight!" Ms. Smith
smiled
"Whaa? Oh! well who are they?" I asked
"Here is a list." Ms. Smith handed me a page of names.
I read it out loud.
" J-Lo, Avril Lavigne, Paris Hilton, Nicole Richie, Lindsay Lohan, Hillary Duff, and Tokio Hotel" I raised an eyebrow
"Who the heck is Tokio Hotel?" I asked
"They are a Teen German band..they are about you guys' age." Ms. Smith replied
"Uh... Are you trying to set us up with German guys?" I asked
"No! No!...if you guys just make a connection...it just happens." then she left
She's trying to set us up with German dudes. I thought tp myself, just then Marie, Shebly, Lena,and Jazmin walked in.
"Hey guys where were ya'll?" I said
"We were lost." Lena said
"ugh! ya so lets just get the sound check done, by the way some famous german dudes are coming to the concert." I said and walked off
"lets just get the sound check done." Lena grumbled.
Once the sound check was done we all went back stage to get ready.
"German boys..." Marie thought to herself out loud.
When the concert started I was sang and scaned the crowd. The people looked normal, I saw Avril rockin' to our beat. I also saw 5 boys, one had Dreads, 2 had blonde hair, one had brown hair and the other had long jet black spiked hair....If only I could get my hair like that.


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Oh shiz! I totally just noticed that my name is spelled wrong, but it's ok!
For future reference: S-H-E-L-B-Y :mrgreen:
Like I said...it's all bueno! (yeah. Droppin` some Spanish on y'all! 8-) *bueno=good)

[ShadowIW]

After our show I walked into the bathroom to splash water on my face and fix my makeup...I get sleepy after shows so I do that to wake my self up. When I walked back out our manager called over to us. We walked up and saw that Avril and the other celebrities wanted to congradulate us. I saw those boys again. I asume they are Tokio Hotel.
"Hello." I said
"Hey, you guys rocked! Your sound flows with your feelings." Avril said to us
"Thanks!" Lena squeaked
Then she left, It was only her and those boys that came to say 'hi'. there was one of those akward silences until the with boy dreads spoke up.
"Hey, nice sound...what are your names?" He directed the question to Marie
"Oh. I'm Marie!, This is Lena, jazmin, Shelby and uh- uh-." She couldnt remember my name. She was blushing like heck, she probably liked him. "Avery!" I spoke up
"Nice to meet you. I am Tom, this is my twin Bill and our friends Georg, gustav, and andreas." Tom said
"Hey." Us girls said in unison
"Hey we are going to a party. Do you girls want to come?" Bill said
"Sure!" Jazmin answered for us
We ended up going to a party at a different club. I thought Marie couldnt stop blushing when Tom kept talking to to her. When Tom asked her to dance I thought she would pass out! Shelby was with Bill having a nice conversation at the bar. Lena was with Andreas they were just dancing and talking.
Gustav was with Jazmin talking. I dont really know where Georg was. I on the other hand was in a dark corner. Showing no intrest in dancing I was having to much fun seeing my friends act silly with boys they just met.
The club played so many different artist, Then the club owner anounced a Dance-off. i wasnt going to do it until Shelby walked up to me
"Will you join that with me? Please?" She gave me the unstoppable puppy-dog eyes.
"Sure." I said but I was thinking i will probably fall flat on face and embrasse all of my friends infront of the guys they like and then they will hate me and I will have to live under a rock for the rest of my life.
When Shelby got our numbers we stood off to the side-lines trying to figure out what to dance to and how to dance. Lena wished us luck and informed the others that we had joined.
I know I took dance lessons for 9 years but I dont that much self confedince in it. When it was our turn we got up on stage and saw the others got in the front row. We danced to CASCADAs Miracle. When it was over the crowd cheered! We won second place. I was tired but the other girls were ready to climb a mountain ever sense they met those boys. I went to the hotel early it was like 12am, ya thats early for us. At 2am you could hear the others walk through the hall to their rooms. They were laughing, I am glad they had a good time and got back safely.

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[TH_luv]

awesomeness! XD I love it! :D mehr bitte?

[NacolleMarieKaulitz]

oh you know im so in love with this now omg MORE MORE BITTE !! *le sigh* oh tomi! lol

[ShadowIW]

The next morning I got up late. I thought that was strage cuz someone usually calls me and wakes me up. Today I woke up at like 11:45am and nobody called. I got up took a shower and got dress. When I walked past my hotel room door there was a note. It was from the girls
It said

Hey! so the boys asked us if we wanted to go to lunch. we said ya, we thought you were sleeping so...we didnt want to bother you. we have our cells!
Marie Lena Shelby and Jazmin

So then I realized I had the day to myself. I could go anywhere and have time to myself. I grabbed my pruse and cell phone, then walked out. First I went to the movies, then went on walked around DC. I lived here when i was little. I loved it then and I still do. I went back to the hotel around 4pm I called the other girls but all I got was voice-mail. Then I called their rooms. Still no answer. Did they ditch me? either way... I was still alone. So I go back into my PJs and just hung-out in my room. I ended up taking a nap, a really really long nap. When I woke up everyone was in my hotel room staring at me.
"What is it?" I grumbled then turn on my side
"WE THOUGHT YOU WERE DEAD!" Lena said as she shook me. "Stop Shaking me." I moan then laid back on the bed.
"Is she ok?" I heard Tom ask
I hid under the sheets
"I think so." Jazmin said then poked me...she did that because she knows when I am poked I squeak like a hedgehog and freak-out.
And that's what I did. I squeaked and twitched in side the sheets.
"Why are you people here?" I said
"We called you and you didnt answer so we used the spare key to get in a check on you." Andreas said
"Did you sleep all day?" Gustav asked
"no." I answered then stuck my head out of sheets.
"I walked around DC. After I came back you peoples didnt answer my calls so I had no other choice but to sleep." Then I got out of bed, the boys just stared at eachother. The girls had a shocked look in their face.
"What?" I asked annoyed
"Your infront of boys in your PJs!" Shelby blushed
"Oh come on! Im wearing a huge t-shirt and Pajama bottoms! Plus I think they-- nevermind."
Then I took some cloths from my suitcase and went into the bathroom and changed.

[TH_luv]

lmao! I love this fanfic! XDDD mehr?

[CrazyKenya16]

More plz

[ShadowIW]

Once I came back out we all went to dinner and then walked around a bit. Georg showed no intrest in me what so ever. I didnt mind that though, he was still really nice to me. All of the boys were nice to me....of course they could just think I am insane. While we were all walking around I felt like we were being watched, but I just dismissed the thought.
"This night is so Beautiful!" Marie said holding Tom's hand. I was behind all of them I was day dreaming.
Then someone came up from behind me and grabbed my purse from my hand then started running.
"HEY!" I yelled
The others saw the guy running and wonder what happened.
I Started running after the guy. When I finally caught up to him I tackled him to the ground...and got my purse back. The others were a little bit behind us, they were running too.
"Avery! Avery! Are you ok?" Jazmin asked
"ya- ya." I said breathing heavly "Let's just go."
When we got back I staied up late because I slept most of the day. I kinda had a random thought to go up to the roof sense I wasnt in my PJs yet. So I walked up the stairs to the roof. When i got up there and looked down the city looked beautiful. The cool wind felt good against my face and there wasnt a sound. Then I felt as if I wasnt alone, As if someone was staring at me. When I turned around I saw someone in the shadows.
"Hello? Who's there?" I said into the dark
I saw the figure move out of the shadows.
"Hey, Im Vick." he said moving closer
He had dark brown eyes, his hair looked about brown medium length, he styled it. As he got closer you could see that he wasnt to buff but not twigy, you could also see that he was taller than me.
"Hello. I'm Avery." I said
"Did I scare you? I didnt mean too." he asked
"Oh no you didnt." I replied
"Yes I did."
"Ok maybe just a little bit."
"Sorry."
"Your Forgiven."
"So, your in that band 'Dont Blink' right?"
"Yes..." I started to get a little worried
"I was at your concert the other day." Vick smiled "You sang really well."
"Thanks." I said is he like a stalker?
"you probably think I have been following you."
"No, it just weird to meet some one on a roof. How old are you?" I tried to keep us off the subject.
"Im 18. What about you?" He asked
"Im 17." I thought this was the longest conversation I ever had
"Well thats cool. How long are you going to stay in DC?" you could tell he wanted to ask me out.
"Oh a couple more days. You and I should get together sometime!" I said smileing
"I'd like that! It's late...you should get rest." he said
"your right."
"Can I meet you up here tomorrow around 7:30pm?" he asked
"Sure. See you then!" I smiled then left, I was walking down the stairs when I heard
"TOm! Your so funny!"
Marie and Tom were still up.
I walked back to my room.

[TH_luv]

schweetness! O.O he seems...mysterious!OOOOh! is he a creepy stalker?...a vampire?!(sorry I was just in the vampire thread lolz) zomg! >.< who is he?! XD

[amandaaraujo]

whhhhhooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaa updateeeeeee really soon pleeeeeeeeezzzzzzzzz this is sooo cool man i wish i was famous :::::::hey doesnt everyone:::::::: hihihihihiplease update really soon

[ShadowIW]

the next morning i woke up to a phone call.
"Heeyyy..." I said yawning
"AVERY! Get the girls I have to take you-guys to an interview!" Ms. Smith said rushing
"ok...bye." I hung up and Got dressed then I woke the other girls then i invited Bill, Tom, Georg, Gustav, and Andreas.
When Ms. Smith pick us up we were all tired.
I thought we all were brain dead in the interveiw. Marie was staring at Tom the entire time. He was looking back at her playing with his lip-ring.
She was on cloud nine!
I was answering questions with Shelby.
After that was over we went to lunch. Shelby was sitting next to Bill. very, very close.
Andreas was next to Lena and Gustav was next to Jazmin.
"So when do you guys have another concert?" Bill asked
"um, i think in a few days." Shelby said
"Cool,we will be there cheering you guys on!" Andreas said
"Hey guys...what time is it?" I asked
"Uh..3:30. why?" Georg asked
"uh...no reason." I said quickly
"Uh does this has anything to do with the guy you met on the roof?" Shelby asked
"What?! Where you spying?!" I said loudly
"No. Bill and I were going up to the roof and when we got there we saw you and mystery boy up there." Shelby explained
"oooh! Avery likes someone!" Marie giggled
I just rolled my eyes

[TH_luv]

awesomeness! :D ooohohohohoho! Mystery Boy and Avery! >.< mehr? bitte?!

[cherry_kaulitz]

awsome babe more pls kk I LOVE IT MAMII GOOD JOB HEHE IM IN A BAND .JAZMIN IS THE WAT DRUMMER GUITARIST SINGER BASSIST ??????THANXX LOVE MORE MORE KK TALK 2 YOOH LATER

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

See what had happend was....Bill and I were on the roof(that's all I'm gonna say. :oops: ), and we saw y'all. I was gonna go and bust you and that guy, but Bill came up from behind me and...well...let's just say I got distracted! :mrgreen:

[ShadowIW]

See what had happend was....Bill and I were on the roof(that's all I'm gonna say. :oops: ), and we saw y'all. I was gonna go and bust you and that guy, but Bill came up from behind me and...well...let's just say I got distracted! :mrgreen:

Ah! LOL!

[ShadowIW]

So after that embarassing moment, We went back to the hotel. I asked them to help me pick out a outfit (yes I also asked the guys...I need a boys opinon)they sat on the bed as I changed in the bathroom.
I first came out in a plaid skirt with black trim and a black tube top.
"I like it!" Lena said
"No! No! No! You dont want to scare him!" Bill laughed
"I agree!" Shelby and Jazmin said
I turn around and walked back into the bathroom.
Next I came out in faded jeans and a brown spagetti stap top.
"Uh...no." Marie said
"You too blah blah blah." Andreas stated
This was going to be longer than what i expected
"Ok then you chose and out fit ." I pointed to the boys then the girls "Boys against girls!"
Then everybody was up and looking through my cloths.
the boys gave me an outfit and then the girls.
I first came out in what the girls pick out
It was boot-cut jeans with a hint of sparkles with a yellow halter top
"eh...ok..." I said as I walked out
"Go try our outfit on!" said gustav
so I walked back into the bathroom
before I came out to see what everybody else thought I yelled "OH MY WORD! I LOVE IT!"
It was a white dress that ended a little bit above my knees and it has black lace on the side I wore that with black leatards and black stelletos.

"See us boys have some style." Tom said
"Why yes you do!" I giggled
"What time is it?" Marie asked
"7:00." Andreas replied
"Oh I got to go! Bye everyone." I said grabbing my purse and cell as I rushed out the door.
When I got to the roof Vick was early and was waiting for me.
"Hey Vick." I said walking up to him
"Hey Avery." he smiled
"So what are we going to do?" I asked
"I got us reservations at Monty's." He said
"Montys! Thats the best resturant in town!" I giggled
"come on." he said as he took my hand and he led me down the stairs to the parking lot.
he got his car keys out of his pocket
then he opened the doors to his car.
"You have a Jaguar?!" I said as he opened my door for me
"ya." he said cooly
I was excited

[NacolleMarieKaulitz]

more more more moooooooooooooooooore PLEAAAAAAAASE lol

[cherry_kaulitz]

MORE BABE PLEASE

[ShadowIW]

When we got to the resturant. I was already having so much fun! Vick was making jokes and making me laugh. He was very nice, then a couple of friends ran into us. They were walking past our table when they saw us. They looked 'Bizarre' to me. To me they looked very girly
"Hey Vick!" One of the guys called out (there were 5 guys.)
"Hey guys. I would like you to meet Avery." Vick said
I showed recognition to them
"Hey I'm Kiro." one said
"hey I'm Yu." another said
"I'm Luminor." A tall one said
"Im Strify!" A guy said with a big grin
"and I am Shin." One said lowly
Oh Snap! Now I'm scared. I smiled sweetly
"They were at your concert too!" Vick Smiled at me
"Oh you all were! How teriffic!" I tried to sound surprized
"You and the others were really really good! Can we have your autograph?" Kiro asked
"SURE!" I said then I got a peice of paper and a pen and gave them my autograph.
After that strange encounter Vick and I finished dinner and went back to the hotel.
When I got back to my hotel room I opened the door and found everybody in my room....it was like they never left.
"Soooo how was your date?" Shelby asked almost about bounce off the walls you could see Bill was trying to keep her from doing that.
"It was wonderful....we even ran into some of his friends." I said
"Did his friends like totally mess it up?" Gustav asked
"His friends are like...bizarre." I said
"What do you mean?" Marie sounded concerned
"Ok so....his friends are very girly looking." I said
"SO? They say that about us." Bill said
"Bill you compared to them...you look like a guy.......you dont scare me. They on the otherhand." I said
"Were they mean to you?" Marie soundedd even more concered
"Wait...Was one of their names Strify?" Shelby asked
I turned to her with a shocked look on my face
"How the heck do you know?" I asked back
"OHHH!! YOU MET CINEMA BIZARRE!!" She said jumping up and down.
We all looked at her.
"WooooooW.....no comment I said." Then they all left.
When Tom and Marie were in the hall I could hear them talk.
"Hey Marie can I ask you something?" Tom asked
"Yes Tommi Tom." She giggled
"Will you be my girlfriend?" Tom asked
"OH TOM! YES!" She said
That was all I heard. I knew they liked eachother!

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD!!!!!!!!!
I'M SOOOOOOOOOO HAPPY RIGHT NOW!!! :mrgreen: YOU USED CINEMA BIZARRE!!!!! :mrgreen:
I AM AMAZED THAT YOU USED THEM!!!! :mrgreen:
I FEEL SPECIAL!!!!!! :mrgreen:

Just one thing...please don't put me in some love triangle with Bill and either Strify or Kiro. That's WAAAAAAAY too much drama! :oops:

[ShadowIW]

Will this day never end? I mean i could hit my head against a wall!
I was looking at our schedule for the day. It was filled with interviews. SO we couldnt spend time with the guys until like 9:30pm. Going to the interviews was like finding a needle in a haystack. Except this was 8 needles in a haystack as big as DC. So we had to try to find them with the neverlost thing in the car...lets just say that didnt work.
"You're using it wrong!" Jazmin said to lena
"Im trying! SHUT Up!" Lena yelled back
"Guys just quit it! Im driving! I need to concerntrait!" Marie said to them
they didnt listen
"EVERYONE JUST SHUT_UP!" I yelled
they did.
"Whats wrong with you Ave?" Lena said
"I have a headache." I said rubbing my temples
"Ugh there is always something wrong with you!" Shelby said laughing
"Ya thanks...i wonder..." I thought out loud
"Wonder what?" Marie asked
"I wonder if my old friends from when I lived here are still here." I said
"Well I doubt it. I mean if you were here when you were 13 then they could have moved by now." Shelby said
"I dont think so." I replied
"Here we are!" Marie said as we pulled up to the next interview just in time. After that we went to the other ones. Once we got back we went to club with the TH boys and Andreas.
When we got there it was extremely fun. this time I wasnt in the corner laughing as was danceing and having fun. I was talking with Georg when i heard someone behind me
"Hey Avery!" I turned and saw ihat it was Strify
act happy to see them, no matter how much they freak you out.
"Hey Strify! How are u?" I smiled Georg could tell that I was nervous so he stood beside me
"Hey I'm Georg!" He said and smiled
"Hey!" Strify said then I introduced them to Georg.
"Georg, why dont you get the others?" I said to him then he left to go get them
"Avery?" Shin said to me "We need to warn you..." My eyes got widened
"What?" I tried to stay calm
"It's about Vick..." yu said
"What about him?" I said
"Well, we like you enough to warn you to watch out for him." Kiro said
"HUh?!" I sqeaked
"He sometimes uses girls or cheats on them." Luminor said, then the others walked up
"GUYS! I want you to meet Shin Yu Strify Shin and Luminor." I said
"OH MY WORD IT'S THEM!!!!!" Shelby said jumping
"WOW! I am such a big fan!!!!!!!!!!"
"ooook well then.." I turned to Cinema Bizarre
"This is Shelby, Marie, Andreas, Lena, Jazmin, Bill, Gustav and Tom."
After I introuduced them we just hung out and once me and the others left bill whispered "So they scare you? I can see why.."
Once in the car I told them about what Luminor said
"Ave you have to be careful, around them and now Vick." Gustav said
"I think I will befine i mean..ya I'll be fine." I said, my voice choppy
"If anything happens... Scream ok? run and kick and defend yourself." Tom said concered
"Ya and we will be there immedatly. We will help ok?" Marie said
They were all scared for me. You could really tell when they all walked me to my room and said they would check on me during the night.

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

:shock: oooooooooooooooooooooooooh!
What's gonna happen next, I wonder????
Anywayziz, why are you scared of them? They're too pretty to be scary! Especially Kiro (who you forgot :x ) and Strify. I mean...wow. :mrgreen:

I still prefer Bill, though! ;)

[ShadowIW]

:shock: oooooooooooooooooooooooooh!
What's gonna happen next, I wonder????
Anywayziz, why are you scared of them? They're too pretty to be scary! Especially Kiro (who you forgot :x ) and Strify. I mean...wow. :mrgreen:

I still prefer Bill, though! ;)
im just joking lol.....sorry about kiro.

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

:shock: oooooooooooooooooooooooooh!
What's gonna happen next, I wonder????
Anywayziz, why are you scared of them? They're too pretty to be scary! Especially Kiro (who you forgot :x ) and Strify. I mean...wow. :mrgreen:

I still prefer Bill, though! ;)
im just joking lol.....sorry about kiro.

Chill, girl! It's all bueno.( Yeah, a white girl droppin some e-span-yole on y'all! :D ) Ya know, I honestly thought you would have been on the TK Squad. That would have been awesome!! Wait...are there groups for the G's?? Hmmmm....

[amandaaraujo]

woooahh crazy guy attack ahahahahahahahah wathc ouuuttt hihihi please update soon

[cherry_kaulitz]

wow babe fukkin awsome....do more or i die!!!

[TH_luv]

oh mein gott thats hella funny! XD lmao I dun think the guys in Cinnema Bizzare are scary I actually find one of them hawt and...are they asian? cuz their names are asian,but they dont look asian at all except one of them looks...sorta asian..hmmm.anywayz awesome mehr? bitte?

[ShadowIW]

The next day I was hanging with everyone at the mall when I got a call.
"hey this is Avery." I said
"Hey Ave." It was Vick
I signaled the others that he called
"Whats up Vick?" I said
"Nothing. What's up with you?" He sounded sweet
"Nothing with me." I giggled
rememer what they told you...dont fall for it
"Hey do you want to go out tonight?" he asked
"Uh, I dont know if I can i have to check with my schedule. k?" I made up an excuse I didnt have anything planned for that day
"Sure babe, you just call me when you find out." Vick sounded soothing
"Okay I will call soon." I hung up
"What did he say?" Lena asked
"He wants to go out with me tonight." I answered
"Ok, say yes...then sense he didnt meet any of the boys..they can follow you guys and check on you." Marie said
"I always wanted to be a spy!" Georg said
So after that I called Vick and told him that I could go on a date. He said he would pick me up at the hotel. the guys dressed cool and hide then waited to see when we left then started following us.
Vick took me to some fancy reasurant with some french name that I cant pronouce.
When we were seated I could see the guys sitting at a table behind Vick so I could see them but he couldnt.
"So, how was your day?" Vick asked
"Good how was yours?"
"It was boring without you, now it's wonderful." He smiled as he reached for my hand and held it
I blushed
"Your wonderful doll." He said
Ok this is the second date and he is calling me doll...i wonder what he would do If I called him a cute name...
"Thanks babe." I said curiously
He smile got bigger
he looked deep into my eyes
How could those eyes lie? Remember dont fall for it! I told myself
I looked back at the guys who were watching closely, then I looked back at Vick and smiled as if I had never been told that he could use me
After dinner he took me for a walk in the park. The boys still followed.
As we were walking Vick held my hand
"It's a beautiful night." I said
"Not as beautiful as you." then he put his arm around my waist
i could hear one of the boys gasp
All I did was smile
"Your eyes are brighter than all the stars." he said then as we crossed a bridge he stopped us in the middle of it
"Vick, um I thi-" I stamered and then he kissed me.
I could hear Tom cough from far away.
"So, Avery. Will you be my girl?" he said soothingly his voice was hypnotizeing
"Yes, Vick I will." I said without thinking
I am sooo stupid! how did I say that?!
Apparently the guys heard it and were yelling in German so Vick couldnt understand it...little did they know I knew what they were saying...
"lets get out before those creeps get us." Vick said I just played along
When i got back to the hotel and found the girls and the guys we all went to my room.
the first thing I said was to the guys

"Wie Sie jene Sachen sagen konnten?! Sie brannten fast Ihre Abdeckung durch!" (in english it means How could you say those things?! You almost blew your cover!)

They stood there shocked "Ya I know German!" I said
"What happened?!" Jazmin asked
"She said she would be his Girlfriend!" Gustav yelled.

[TH_luv]

aaaah! no ways! she's his gf! woah! now you have a right to be ****** off at you if he ever uses you!

[ShadowIW]

"You said WHAT?!" Marie yelled
"I was stupid. I mean if you look into he eyes it is like 'aaaahhhh'." I said in my defense
"great! Great!" Jazmin said sarcasticly
After this agument we all made a plan to figure out what we would do about Vick.
The next couple of days went by and I would get calls from him but nothing much else.
Bill asked Shelby to be his girlfriend.
Gustav was like getting close to jazmin and Lena became Andreas' girlfriend.
Then one day vick called and asked me out again. I would follow the plan that we all made earlier,
The boys would follow us again and the girls would be in a van following us too.
The next date Vick said he would take me on an afternoon picnic.
How could this guy be bad but be romantic?
We set our picnic up under a tree. We talked and ate then I took off my shoes and put my feet in the cool grass.
Vick layed back on the picnic blanket and we talked.
"So Avery how many boys have you dated?" he asked
strange....
"About five. What about you?" I said
"I have had about seven." he said "But I never had a girlfriend that beauty was as blinding as yours." He said then he grabbed my arm and pulled me back on the blanket to lay next to him.
say something cute ave! I thought
"I never had a boyfriend as sweet as you." I lied
Ha ha he is beleiveing it?!
"That's sweet baby-doll."
I hate that nickname!
He rolled over on his side
"How about I take you somewhere more private?"
He asked quietly
he could do this to kill me or something! I knew what he was getting at
"Vick, I dont think so... Im not that type of girl." I said
His face went blank and he tried to convince me again. I kept saying no.
The boys saw and from far away called my cell and I answered it and I made up some excuse to leave. It was weird when Vick was driving me back he acted as if he never asked that question....

TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!

[amandaaraujo]

aaaaahhhh that was freacking awesommmmeee pleeeeeeez update more tonight plllleeeezzzz i want to know what happendsss... :D :D :D !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[CrazyKenya16]

Kool-ski!

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

YAY!!!
I'M BILL'S GIRLFRIEND!!!!!
AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

oh mein gott thats hella funny! XD lmao I dun think the guys in Cinnema Bizzare are scary I actually find one of them hawt and...are they asian? cuz their names are asian,but they dont look asian at all except one of them looks...sorta asian..hmmm.anywayz awesome mehr? bitte?

I bet you're talking about Kiro! N-E Wayziz, as far as I know, none of them are Asian. They're all German. They met at an Anime convention in Berlin. The bio on their website explains everything.
So...which one do you think is HAWT?? ;)

[TH_luv]

oh mein gott thats hella funny! XD lmao I dun think the guys in Cinnema Bizzare are scary I actually find one of them hawt and...are they asian? cuz their names are asian,but they dont look asian at all except one of them looks...sorta asian..hmmm.anywayz awesome mehr? bitte?

I bet you're talking about Kiro! N-E Wayziz, as far as I know, none of them are Asian. They're all German. They met at an Anime convention in Berlin. The bio on their website explains everything.
So...which one do you think is HAWT?? ;)

haha no wonder they look like that XD well I think the one all the way in the back of yur siggy is hawt stuffs lmao the one in the waaay back with the black hair.Haha and ja I'm now Andrea' GF XD schweetness

[latinaTHfanfurimmer]

oh mein gott thats hella funny! XD lmao I dun think the guys in Cinnema Bizzare are scary I actually find one of them hawt and...are they asian? cuz their names are asian,but they dont look asian at all except one of them looks...sorta asian..hmmm.anywayz awesome mehr? bitte?

I bet you're talking about Kiro! N-E Wayziz, as far as I know, none of them are Asian. They're all German. They met at an Anime convention in Berlin. The bio on their website explains everything.
So...which one do you think is HAWT?? ;)

haha no wonder they look like that XD well I think the one all the way in the back of yur siggy is hawt stuffs lmao the one in the waaay back with the black hair.Haha and ja I'm now Andrea' GF XD schweetness
Oh Thats Yu Hes The Gutraist Und A Sex Addict :shock: lol

[latinaTHfanfurimmer]

I Officially Love You For Putting Cinema Bizarre In This!!

[TH_luv]

Oh Thats Yu Hes The Gutraist Und A Sex Addict :shock: lol

ack! XD lmao I just listened to acouple of they're songs and they're awesome :D they're pretty addicting lolz now I demand mehr of the story! >.<

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

Oh My Gawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwd!
I am so happy that I'm not the ONLY CB fan here.! :mrgreen:
*happyhappyjoyjoy*

[TH_luv]

Oh My Gawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwd!
I am so happy that I'm not the ONLY CB fan here.! :mrgreen:
*happyhappyjoyjoy*

lolz ja so far my fave CB songs are Escape through the stars and Silent screams

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

Oh My Gawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwd!
I am so happy that I'm not the ONLY CB fan here.! :mrgreen:
*happyhappyjoyjoy*

lolz ja so far my fave CB songs are Escape through the stars and Silent screams


Yeah. "Escape to the Stars" ans "Silent Scream" are great. But I'm really into "Get Off", "Lovesongs (They Kill Me)", and "Forever or Never".

Oh, before I forget...Dont forget about my offer, Shadow! :P Or else..... :twisted: It applies to BOTH stories.*evil laugh*

[TH_luv]

Yeah. "Escape to the Stars" ans "Silent Scream" are great. But I'm really into "Get Off", "Lovesongs (They Kill Me)", and "Forever or Never".

Oh, before I forget...Dont forget about my offer, Shadow! :P Or else..... :twisted: It applies to BOTH stories.*evil laugh*
holle ja! those songs are awesome too! although I haven't heard "Get Off" most likely I'll listen to it,cuz I'm right now listening to alot of their songs on youtube

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

Yeah. "Escape to the Stars" ans "Silent Scream" are great. But I'm really into "Get Off", "Lovesongs (They Kill Me)", and "Forever or Never".

Oh, before I forget...Dont forget about my offer, Shadow! :P Or else..... :twisted: It applies to BOTH stories.*evil laugh*
holle ja! those songs are awesome too! although I haven't heard "Get Off" most likely I'll listen to it,cuz I'm right now listening to alot of their songs on youtube

You HAVE to hear it!! You'll LUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUV it!!!
It makes me wanna.... :oops: I can't say. 8-)

[TH_luv]

Yeah. "Escape to the Stars" ans "Silent Scream" are great. But I'm really into "Get Off", "Lovesongs (They Kill Me)", and "Forever or Never".

Oh, before I forget...Dont forget about my offer, Shadow! :P Or else..... :twisted: It applies to BOTH stories.*evil laugh*
holle ja! those songs are awesome too! although I haven't heard "Get Off" most likely I'll listen to it,cuz I'm right now listening to alot of their songs on youtube

You HAVE to hear it!! You'll LUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUV it!!!
It makes me wanna.... :oops: I can't say. 8-)

WOW! lmao XD ooookay lolz well I'll make sure to find it. (as in I've searched and can't find it on youtube >.<)

[cherry_kaulitz]

more more plz i wanna know more about me and gustav hahahahehehehehehehe
IM BEGGING YOU MORE PLZ

[ShadowIW]

I can not post soon....family emergency...family member has been hospital

[TH_luv]

okay I understand 100% =]

[cherry_kaulitz]

i understand babe im here for you all day every day

[ShadowIW]

NEW PART!

A few days past and there wasnt a call from Vick, maybe after what happened I could have turned him off. I was hoping for that.
It also could have been that I was swamped with interviews. Nothing could be so redundent by listening to the same questions over and over again. How many times can some one ask you how you got the band together? Apperently too many times. When I got some free time I thought it would be a good idea for me to sleep....and maybe let the others know so they wouldnt think that I am dead...like last time
-__-
So after that I finally got in to a comfertable postion and was about to go to sleep when my phone rang.
SHUT UP!!
I tried rolling over to get it off of the nightstand but I fell off the bed.
When I answered it, it was Vick
"Hello?" I asked tiredly
"Hey babe."
"Oh hey" I rubbed my eye
"Is something wrong?"
"Oh no...I just tripped on my shoe or something like that."
"Oh, well I am sorry for what I said."
"Well, no worries...i forgive you."
"Great babe, would you like to go out on another date...this time on the roof?"
CANT ANYONE LET ME SLEEP?!!?!
"Sure I would love that. What time?" I got up
"Oh...how about 8:15?"
"Sure see you later on tonight." I hung up
I told Shelby and Jazmin what happened
"HOW COULD YOU FORGIVE THE SCUM?!" Jazmin yelled
I rolled my eyes, I have no explanation
"UGh! Why cant you see that he is an idiot? My Billy on the other hand...." Shelby started
"OH Shelby just shhh about Bill! okay? maybe I am tired maybe this could be an adventure!"
I far back as I could remember I was never the risk taker of the group.
"An Adventure of death." Jazmin mumbled

[TH_luv]

lmao adventure of death xD schweet! Im so glad you updated! :D mehr? bitte?

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

I'm sorry!
I just really love my Billy!! :mrgreen:

[ShadowIW]

"I heard that!" I snapped at Jazmin
"calm down...just go on the date." she moaned
So then I told them that they should tell te boys not to follow tonight. Which all of them protested that thought. After that agruement...which I won. LOL, I chose to just wear some jeans and a comfy tee-shirt.
I honestly dont care what Vick thinks anymore.
When I walked up to the roof he saw me, ran to me picked me up and twirled me around.
I couldnt help but start laughing
"I love your smile." he said looking deeply into my eyes.
"your so sweet." I said, he looked different tonight
"I cant imagen my life without you." He said
Then he got down on one knee
What? whaaa? HUH?! the- but- ohhh dang it!
I was stunned I was like O.-
was he proposeing??!!?!??!!??!?!?
"Avery, I know we havent known eachother that long....but It seems as if I have known you all of my life...I have been searching for the perfect girl for a long time. Will you marry me?"
OH SNAP HE WAS!!!!!
"OH VICK!!!"
come on say something! uh what do I say?!!
then the words just spilled out of my mouth
"YES!!!!!!" I screamed
Apparently the boys and girls did spy on me and I could see them looking through the door window, their mouths hung open. I thought Lena would break the door down but they walked off just stunned.
Then ring Vick put on my hand was HUGE!! like WOW!
I must be in big trouble now...
A few days went by and Vick and I spent almost everyday together.
The girls showed that they hated him....

[amandaaraujo]

HOly crap he propose *thinking* mabe he's not as bad as they say *slaps self* No way if everyone else feels like somethings wrong with him it mst be true.....OMG what is he up to????

[TH_luv]

zomg say WHAT?!?!?!?!!!! NOOOOO I SHOULD'VE BROKE THE DOOR DOWN! XD lmao wow that was outta nowhere.


mehr,bitte???

[ShadowIW]

zomg say WHAT?!?!?!?!!!! NOOOOO I SHOULD'VE BROKE THE DOOR DOWN! XD lmao wow that was outta nowhere.


mehr,bitte???
LOL that made me laugh so hard!

[ShadowIW]

I didnt want to have to spend that much time with Vick. I just didnt know how to get rid of him...So one day when I finally had some free time Georg walked up with the rest of the boys.
"Listen....we are scared for you." Georg said
"Dont be..." I said I tried to sound brave but my voice cracked...
in truth I was scared to death. I didnt want to be in this situation
"Avery...those girls care for you and we do to...we cant sit here and see you get hurt." Tom said apperently Marie gave him a new hat that he was wearing
"Listen-" I stopped when I thought I heard footsteps, then they passed "I am fi-fine...I can handle it."
Bill cocked his head to the side
"Shelby said you would try to sound brave and try to handle it yourself." he said
"This time I---" I stopped I couldnt speak anymore so I just started to cry and tell what I really felt
"I cant do this. I am scared to death, i need help..." I sobbed then Georg put his hand on my shoulder
they all tried to comfort me, so they took me to the girls.
"Ohhhh...dont cry!" Jazmin and Marie said at the same time.
"I know what will make you happy!" Lena said
"Lets go to that new club!" she said
So we ended up going.
When we got there we again ran into Cinema Bizarre
"Hey, Ave." Kiro said walking up to me
"Oh hey." I smiled
Then Shin walked up
"Congradulations on the whole wedding thing with vick.....but why?" Shin asked
"Because i dont think before I speak and that will one day bring me to my downfall." I said
They laughed
"Well, still be careful...he is now acting weird around us." Kiro said
"Thanks I will."
"What is ur cell number, sence we keep running into each other." Shin said
Then we traded phone numbers.
Then Strify ran up "Avery...I am so sorry."
"About what?" I asked
the girls over heard and alerted the boys...this time I was thankful for it.
What could possibly be wrong now?
"Avery...Vick is here...with another girl I just ran into him...." Strify stammered
"What?!" I said shocked then the others walked up
Strify showed us where Vick was, we were at a distance so he couldnt see us.
He was kissing and flirting another girl.
HE IS MY FIEANCEE!
oh no he didnt just do that!
I couldnt take it anymore so I walked up to them
"VICk!" I said then took off my ring and threw it at him
then I started to walk away but I felt a hand around my wrist.
Vick turned me around
"YOUR NOT GOING TO BREAK_UP WITH ME!" then he knocked me to the ground.
I tasted blood in my mouth and realized that he split my lip.
then the Boys, Girls and Cinema Bizarre ran up to us. TH and Andreas got infront of me to guard me and the others were checking to see if I was ok.
"GEt out of my way freak." Vick said trying to push away Bill then Shelby got mas and pushed Vick.
Then Vick hit her, then Marie.
Tom got mad and started yelling.
I couldnt take it anymore and I got up then pushed the boys out of the way.
"You dont mess with them." I said
"What are you going to do? idiot." Vick said
Then I punched him in the stomach
"Why I should.." then flipped me
"I didnt tell you I knew judo." he laughed evily
"I didnt tell you that I am a black belt." I said as I put him in a head lock then I did a round kick to his ribs.
Then he did an upper-cut to my chin.
The boys were starting to help.
"Stop this is my fight!" I yelled to them......



DUN DUN DUN!!!!

TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!!!!!!!
MORE OF THE GASP PART SOON!!!1

[ShadowIW]

I didnt want to have to spend that much time with Vick. I just didnt know how to get rid of him...So one day when I finally had some free time Georg walked up with the rest of the boys.
"Listen....we are scared for you." Georg said
"Dont be..." I said I tried to sound brave but my voice cracked...
in truth I was scared to death. I didnt want to be in this situation
"Avery...those girls care for you and we do to...we cant sit here and see you get hurt." Tom said apperently Marie gave him a new hat that he was wearing
"Listen-" I stopped when I thought I heard footsteps, then they passed "I am fi-fine...I can handle it."
Bill cocked his head to the side
"Shelby said you would try to sound brave and try to handle it yourself." he said
"This time I---" I stopped I couldnt speak anymore so I just started to cry and tell what I really felt
"I cant do this. I am scared to death, i need help..." I sobbed then Georg put his hand on my shoulder
they all tried to comfort me, so they took me to the girls.
"Ohhhh...dont cry!" Jazmin and Marie said at the same time.
"I know what will make you happy!" Lena said
"Lets go to that new club!" she said
So we ended up going.
When we got there we again ran into Cinema Bizarre
"Hey, Ave." Kiro said walking up to me
"Oh hey." I smiled
Then Shin walked up
"Congradulations on the whole wedding thing with vick.....but why?" Shin asked
"Because i dont think before I speak and that will one day bring me to my downfall." I said
They laughed
"Well, still be careful...he is now acting weird around us." Kiro said
"Thanks I will."
"What is ur cell number, sence we keep running into each other." Shin said
Then we traded phone numbers.
Then Strify ran up "Avery...I am so sorry."
"About what?" I asked
the girls over heard and alerted the boys...this time I was thankful for it.
What could possibly be wrong now?
"Avery...Vick is here...with another girl I just ran into him...." Strify stammered
"What?!" I said shocked then the others walked up
Strify showed us where Vick was, we were at a distance so he couldnt see us.
He was kissing and flirting another girl.
HE IS MY FIEANCEE!
oh no he didnt just do that!
I couldnt take it anymore so I walked up to them
"VICk!" I said then took off my ring and threw it at him
then I started to walk away but I felt a hand around my wrist.
Vick turned me around
"YOUR NOT GOING TO BREAK_UP WITH ME!" then he knocked me to the ground.
I tasted blood in my mouth and realized that he split my lip.
then the Boys, Girls and Cinema Bizarre ran up to us. TH and Andreas got infront of me to guard me and the others were checking to see if I was ok.
"GEt out of my way freak." Vick said trying to push away Bill then Shelby got mas and pushed Vick.
Then Vick hit her, then Marie.
Tom got mad and started yelling.
I couldnt take it anymore and I got up then pushed the boys out of the way.
"You dont mess with them." I said
"What are you going to do? idiot." Vick said
Then I punched him in the stomach
"Why I should.." then flipped me
"I didnt tell you I knew judo." he laughed evily
"I didnt tell you that I am a black belt." I said as I put him in a head lock then I did a round kick to his ribs.
Then he did an upper-cut to my chin.
The boys were starting to help.
"Stop this is my fight!" I yelled to them......



DUN DUN DUN!!!!

TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!!!!!!!
MORE OF THE GASP PART SOON!!!1



I just loved that part.....

[TH_luv]

mehr! mehr!!! I DEMAND MEHR!!! I need to see how this ends!!! >.< Im about to have a heart attack!Give me mehr!

[amandaaraujo]

WHATTTTTTT the bastard hit Averyyyy that asswhole WTF has he ever heard that a man never i mean never hits a girl o that vick ****** me off that uhghhghghghghgn omg please update soon. :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :twisted: :twisted: :evil: :evil: :evil:

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

WHAT!!!!
HOW DARE VICK HIT ME!!!???
DUDE, BEAT HIS ***. OR I'LL DO IT MYSELF!!

[cherry_kaulitz]

babe i wanna fight plzplzplz jazmin wants to fight mabey just wen ave beats himm i can say you messed with wrong ppl and kick him and finish tha job plzplzplzplzlpzlpzpllzpzplzpllzppzpzlzzpl all ment to say plz

[ShadowIW]

So after that the fight went on with the hitting and kicking and the flipping... then I took a blow to the head and blacked out.
I dont know what happened after that.
But I know the last thing I heard in my head was people screaming.
When I woke up I was in the hospital.
Cinema Bizarre was there, so was TH, Andreas and the girls.
They all had some type of injury.
Like Split lips, broken arms, things like that.
"uh-- *opening eyes* hello?" I said wakeing up
"Hey! Ave!" Marie leaned over me
"Where am- am I?" I stammered
"Your in the hospital. girl you fought hard." Jazmin said rubbing her bruised eye
"How did y'all get hurt." I asked
"After you blacked out we thought we would pound him for you!" Shebly said with a smile
Bill's hand was around her waist and he was holding her extremely close.
"hmmm....what happened to vick?" I said

[TH_luv]

Hey! what are you stopping for?! >.< I wanna know what happened to that sorr4y little bastard! :evil: you know what Imma take care of him myself! *shoots him in the head and throws his body in the pacific ocean* woah!What the ****?! * walks away whisteling like I never did anything* oh what the **** happened to Vick?....hmmm I wonder :twisted:

[ShadowIW]

I have an excuse for not wrighting......EXTREMELY BAD GRADE on BIG TEST.........I am mad at myself, so mad that I have wrighter's block......im thinking...sorry

[TH_luv]

dude!Tests suck! >.< atleast Summer breaks almost here.But seriously you gotta love how I got rid of Victor! he?he? *nudges you*

[ShadowIW]

So after that the fight went on with the hitting and kicking and the flipping... then I took a blow to the head and blacked out.
I dont know what happened after that.
But I know the last thing I heard in my head was people screaming.
When I woke up I was in the hospital.
Cinema Bizarre was there, so was TH, Andreas and the girls.
They all had some type of injury.
Like Split lips, broken arms, things like that.
"uh-- *opening eyes* hello?" I said wakeing up
"Hey! Ave!" Marie leaned over me
"Where am- am I?" I stammered
"Your in the hospital. girl you fought hard." Jazmin said rubbing her bruised eye
"How did y'all get hurt." I asked
"After you blacked out we thought we would pound him for you!" Shebly said with a smile
Bill's hand was around her waist and he was holding her extremely close.
"hmmm....what happened to vick?" I said


Marie Smiled "Lena and Shelby chased him down for five miles until he stopped running."
"Wow!" I said "Why am I here?"
"You have 2 fractured ribs, a broken ankle and a concusion." Georg said sounding concered
"I feel like I have been sleeping for a 1000 years." I yawned "And I am still tired."
"YOu should be. You fought long and hard." Andreas said holding Lena's hand
"Those years in millatary school did me some good then." I laughed "Ow...it hurts to laugh."
"Then dont." Shin said
Then the doctor came in "Hello everyone."
"hey." we replied
"Ok so I have good news and bad news." The doctor said
"Good news first." I said
"OK, well you will recover soon."
"Ok..good. I will be up on stage soon then?" I said hoping he would say yes

"Well thats the bad news....you have 2 choices, 1. you could stay here and recover or 2. you could use a wheelchair and try to recover outside of the hospital....but it could be more painful and time consumming."
I moaned and sighed

More pain? yea thats what I need...\

"I think I will go for number 2 please." I smiled
Everyone eyes widened
"Are you sure?" The doctor said
"very sure." I Replied

[CrazyKenya16]

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

more plz

[TH_luv]

hahahaha!Shelby and I chased him XD hahaha I'm so proud of us!Though he deserved to die! :twisted: anyways dude,recovering sucks! >.< mehr,bitte?

[ShadowIW]

HI!
So I am working on more!!! sorry for such a long break of it....

[ShadowIW]

When it was time to leave the hospital they gave me a wheel chair.
Let me tell you this...moving hurts!
"Ow ow ow ow ow ow." I mumbled only Jazmin heard
"shhh....just try to...I dont know."
well that was an adventure in it's self.
When we finally got back to the hotel the girls filled me in on the new livivng arangements.
So I would have to room with one of the girls. I chose Lena 'cuz Marie would want to be with Tom and Bill would want to be with Shelby and so I just chose Lena 'cuz she was the eagerest to room with me.
Then we heard that Cinema Bizarre would be in the same hotel as us....
I was a little grumpy that day when I was talking to Lena.
"Do they have to stay here with us?" I said
"They are 3 floors above us! It's not like they are staying in the same room with you." she said flatly
"Dont joke ok."
"ugh! what a grumps you are!" she turned to her suitcase and got out a bracelet
"here." she said handing it to me
"What is this?" I asked
"Get well present." she smiled
"Thank you!" I smiled back

[TH_luv]

hehe I ish nice,even when you're a missy grumpy gills :D :lol:

[dragoness573]

Shadow...(growl)
Don't you DARE have a long brake again!!!
You have a tendency to leave for a very long time...
-VIP-

[ShadowIW]

Shadow...(growl)
Don't you DARE have a long brake again!!!
You have a tendency to leave for a very long time...
-VIP-

*hiss* *growl*
VIP hello???
*knocks on your head*
Most of those breaks where for the exams in college!
Which I do have to say I did well on....
Anyway...would you just like to---- never mind
*thinks*
OH YES....the next chapter will be dedicated to YOU!!!......
*laughs evily*

[TH_luv]

Shadow...(growl)
Don't you DARE have a long brake again!!!
You have a tendency to leave for a very long time...
-VIP-

*hiss* *growl*
VIP hello???
*knocks on your head*
Most of those breaks where for the exams in college!
Which I do have to say I did well on....
Anyway...would you just like to---- never mind
*thinks*
OH YES....the next chapter will be dedicated to YOU!!!......
*laughs evily*

oh snaps,I never knew you people could have that evil streak go through you...O.O *innocently backs away* ...are you updating?

[ShadowIW]

Shadow...(growl)
Don't you DARE have a long brake again!!!
You have a tendency to leave for a very long time...
-VIP-

*hiss* *growl*
VIP hello???
*knocks on your head*
Most of those breaks where for the exams in college!
Which I do have to say I did well on....
Anyway...would you just like to---- never mind
*thinks*
OH YES....the next chapter will be dedicated to YOU!!!......
*laughs evily*

oh snaps,I never knew you people could have that evil streak go through you...O.O *innocently backs away* ...are you updating?

I will update soon tonight I think.
dont worry about me, VIP over there is just....lets just say, we know eachother and well we are critics of eachothers stories.....
*looks at college roommate, C.C.*
*Then yells through the wall to VIP's doorm* "WHICH IF SHE POSTED HERS ON HERE IT WOULD BE FUN!!!"

sorry....I am not evil, just a drama queen...

[TH_luv]

I will update soon tonight I think.
dont worry about me, VIP over there is just....lets just say, we know eachother and well we are critics of eachothers stories.....
*looks at college roommate, C.C.*
*Then yells through the wall to VIP's doorm* "WHICH IF SHE POSTED HERS ON HERE IT WOULD BE FUN!!!"

sorry....I am not evil, just a drama queen...

ooooh,okay I understand XD kk,I'll be waiting for yur update :D

[ShadowIW]

THIS IS FOR my friend "VIP"!!!
I put the bracelet on. it was my favorite color, pink.
"What are you going to do while you're recovering?" She asked as she sat on her bed
"Wright... maybe see if I can see some of my teachers...maybe Georg or the guys could take me." I replied
"Thats it? Why not go on a date with um, Georg?! or maybe Shin or Kiro, or Yu or um, Strify...OR Lumin-"
I intterupted her
"Dont you dare say Luminor..." I said
"Fine." she sighed
"I dont think I want to date either." I said stiffly
She put a hand on her forehead moaned and fell backwards on the bed
"You can never see when guys like you..." she moaned
"well...its kinda hard....take vick for instance..."
"ya well..."
"Well.."
There was a dead silence.
"I am going to check on Cinema Bizarre...sense there is nothing to do." I said
"you go do that...I will be here napping." she said
I wheeled myself out of the room. Then I got on the elevator. I chose the floor the CB was on. then I started humming random songs.
When I got on their floor i remembered what rooms they said they would be in so I wheeled myself down the hall until I got to Strify's room.
Before I knocked I heard talking
"You should wait Shin, I do think she would be over it." I heard Yu say
"Wait, Wait who said that you were the only one that wanted to asked her out?" I heard Strify say
Then I heard Kiro "Ya, What if I wanted to?"
"What do you mean 'if you want to ask her out?" Shin and Strify said
I really really hope they arent talking about me...
I knock on the door.
Then Strify answered "Ave! How cool you came! Come in! How are you?"
"I good as I can be." I wheeled in
"So what are you going to do tomorrow?" Kiro asked then stood beside me
"I wanted to see my old school and some old teachers." I smiled
"I'll take you!!" Shin, Kiro and Strify said in unison
"All of y'all can take me." I said
"Awesome! So, what teacher are you going to see first?" Yu said
"I think I want to see my old strange science teacher mr. Perrez...or Mr.PZ for short."
"Why is he do you say that he is strange?" kiro asked the put a hand on my shoulder
"Um, he is... well he barks, and freaks out at little things." I said laughing at remebering old memeories that flashed in my head
"Wait. He BARKS?" Strify said raiseing an eyebrow.
"Ya..." I said
************
Back at the room lena heard a knock at the door
It was Georg with flowers
"hey lena!" He said
"Hey" she said
"Is Avery here?"
"You just missed her." She replied
"Dang it!" he said




TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!

[TH_luv]

lmao he barks! XD when you said 'strange' I thought of my weirdo science teacher she easily gets ****** off,but when you said that he...barks,lmao I started laughing I love it,poor Georg! >.< she should go with him...cinema bizarre need to chill! lolz

[ShadowIW]

lmao he barks! XD when you said 'strange' I thought of my weirdo science teacher she easily gets tinkle off,but when you said that he...barks,lmao I started laughing I love it,poor Georg! >.< she should go with him...cinema bizarre need to chill! lolz

My old science teacher really did bark...

I am very serious....

[TH_luv]

lmao he barks! XD when you said 'strange' I thought of my weirdo science teacher she easily gets tinkle off,but when you said that he...barks,lmao I started laughing I love it,poor Georg! >.< she should go with him...cinema bizarre need to chill! lolz

My old science teacher really did bark...

I am very serious....

well,there will always be weirdo teachers out there

[ShadowIW]

Georg gave the flowers to Lena.
"Can you give her these for me?" He asked
"Sure...but dont you want to give them to her yourself?" she replied
"Well, I would but Gustav and I are going to see the Washington Monument sence we are in D.C."
"oh. okay then, have fun!" She said
Then they heard fighting down the hall
"Why did you go and do that?!" Marie shouted
"I didnt do anything!" Tom said in defense
"Oh dont give me that! I saw the way you looked at her!"
Georg and Lena walked down the hall to see them
"Whats wrong?" Lena asked
"Tom was checking some girl out!" Marie said holding back tears
"I was not! The way she was dressed was werid!" Tom said
"Thats no excuse!" Marie shouted
"Ok OK first of all Marie, breath deep, second of all Tom, calm down." Georg said
Then I wheeled down the hall and was listening to what was happening....
So of course I but in...
"Marie, Tom, answer these questions." I started
Lena smiled because she knew what I was doing
"OK, so Marie, did tom flirt with the girl?" I asked
"No." She replied
"Good. Now Tom, you say this girl was dressed weirdly." I said
"Yes....is weirdly a word?" he said
"Thats not important. Anyway, what was she dressed like?" I said
"Um, she was wearing a Neon pink shirt, a knee length skirt, army green leggings, a blue cowboy hat and uumm I think she had rainbow colored hair...IT was weird." he said
"Exactly!! So as you can see Marie...He was checking her out...he thought she was weird! and if he was then you have the right to get mad but sence he wasnt....calm down..." I smiled in victory...

[TH_luv]

lmao I loved it! XD mehr,bitte? :D lolz that IS a weird way to dress

[ShadowIW]

The next day all the members from CB took me to my old school because I thought they would hurt eachother if I only let one of them take me.When we got there we walked inside and Strify wheeled me into the office.
"Hello may I-- Avery!?" Mrs. Frenth said
"Hello! I came to visit!" I smiled
"Yes! You and your friends go right on in! today is off for the students but not for the teachers! Why are you in that wheelchair? You were the best one on the track team!" She said
"Its a long story...I got into a fight with my exfiancee and lets just say it wasnt pretty." i replied
"Oh, well, thats no good. anyway have fun visiting!" she said
then Strify and the others led me out into the main hall.
"Which way first?" Shin asked
"Follow me!" I laughed then rolled myself to the right to the english hall
"hmm..if I remember she is right, here!" I said in front of a classroom, I looked in
"Hello? Mrs. McMan?"
She looked up from her desk
"Avery! Come in!"
I rolled my self past the desks to her. the others follow sheepishly
"Oh look at you! I havent seen you in forever and a day! What happened to you?" she asked
"I got into a fight." i said
"That is unlike you, but you probably got into it for a good reason. That a girl! Do you still write?" she said
"Oh yes! I still love it! oh, I want to introduce you to my friends, Shin, Kiro, Strify, Yu, a Lumnoir." I said
She looked at them
"Did you know that she was the best writer out of all of classes? She wrote with great empathy and vocabulary."
I smiled, My teachers love me...
"Well I let you be on your way, keep in touch!" She said then we left
"Now to the history hall!" I said turning left
"When will we meet Mr.PZ?" Kiro asked
"Very Very soon...its after the history hall."
When we got to the history hall I saw my old history teacher, Mrs.Valendi
"MRS. VALENDI!" I yelled in excitement
"well avery! your back! wonderful! wonderful! I see that you are in a wheelchair...no matters you are probably getting pounded by questions of it. So how is the band?" She said
"very very good! did you hear about that they think they found Nefertiti's tomb?" i said
"Oh did they?! I must get right on that! Who are your friends?" she said
"Oh this is Luminoir, Yu, Kiro, Strify, and Shin." i introduced them
then I heard someone behind me.
"Avery! Avery! Your back!"
I turned and saw one of my old friends, Kenya
She had shouulder length brown hair with bangs cut to the right.
"Kenya! Oh my word!" I yelled

[TH_luv]

ooooh new friends...I think I know who Kenya is :D awesome chappy,I wanna see them meet Mr.PZ XD mehr,bitte?

[ShadowIW]

She ran to me and hugged me!
"I havent seen you in forever!" She said
"I know! Guess what?!" I said
"What?"
"We are going to see Mr. Perez!"
"I HAVE TO GO WITH YOU!!!" She said
Then Kiro and the rest wheeled me to the science hall. Mr. Perez was walking into his room. So I told the others to be quite.
We got into the room quitely. His back was faceing the door.
Then I yelled
"MR. PEREZ! LOLA WANTS TO BITE ME!"
he turned and said
"NO BITEING!"
THen He froze and started to freak out
"AHHHH! they're back!!!! THEY COMEING TO GET ME!!! Ahahahahah!waaa ni ahh! Woof woof!"
Yu and Strify raised and eyebrow and looked at eachother, the others were laughing their heads off
"HI!!!!" Kenya and I said
"Hello, Avery! Kenya!" He smiled "Who are the...unusal people with you."
"This is Luminoir, Strify, Yu, Kiro and Shin."
"Bark! Bark!" he replied
"What are you doing in class this year?" Kenya asked
"We are building rockets again. hopefully it wont end up like what happened with Lola's"
"She said that she didnt mean for it to start a small grass fire." I denfended
"Yes, but YOUR the one who brought the flammable paint." he laughed
"How is it my fault that the paint didnt say 'WARNING: do NOT use on rockets'?"
We all started to laugh, then he started to sing
"Measure it up! Measure it up! Oh, what fun it is!"
"MR.PEREZ!!" I said
"What?!" he jumped
"remember that debate we had about the wall color?" Kenya said
"Oh...dont remind me." he rubbed his temples
"I still think its green." She said
"No its not its off-white." Shin said
"Not again!" Mr. PZ moaned
"Guys...Its white-off-white-greenish." I said
Then he growled
"What are you doing?" Kenya laughed
"You children drive me to my insaneity." he said
"Come on....we do not..." I giggled
"You scare me...."
"No we dont." Kenya said
"All children, scare me." he replied
"Then why are you a teacher?" Yu asked
"I love children!" Mr. PZ said



I WILL POST MORE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!

BARK BARK
WOOF WOOF

all of this chapter was based off of REAL CONVERSTAIONS OF MY OLD TEACHER!!!
for example:
the measure it up song
the children scare me sentence
the debate about the wall color (that was a very weird day)
the freaking out/ barking episode
The biteing part

and mostly everything else.....

[TH_luv]

lmao rofl! XD funny teacher,he seems like someone who would entertain me to the max :lol:

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

Wow.
And I thought I had weird teachers... :|


:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

[ShadowIW]

SHELBY! FOR U!


After that the CB boys took me and Kenya back to the hotel so she could meet the others.
That was fun, we laughed so much.
Marie and Tom thought it would be a fun idea if they went to get take out and brought it back so we could eat it in one of our rooms.
Lena and My room was picked.
"I am going down stairs to get a coke." Strify said getting up.
"Cool, I could use one too!" Shelby said
Then they left.
"Hey does anyone know where the ice machine is?" Bill asked
"Its down 2 floors with the coke machine." I said
Then he grabbed to ice bucket and left.
******
When Strify was with Shelby he started to flirt with her. He was combing his fingers through her hair.
He put his hand around her waist but she pushed it away.
"Come on, Shelby, you know you like me."
"Nice try." she said, she put her 25cents in the machine and got her coke.
when she turned around he backed her up to the machine and pinned her arms to it so she couldnt move.
"Come on...we are alone...Bill isnt here...one little kiss..."
she turned her head so he couldnt kiss her.
She saw Bill's figure down the hall
Strify turned her head to face him and his face got closer
"Bill!" She screamed
Bill started running to them, when he saw what Strify was doing he pushed him out of the way like a line-backer.
"Bill, dude!" Strify said getting up
"DONT TOUCH HER!" Bill made a fist and punched Strify
Shebly just stood there stunned.
Then Bill took her hand and led her to the elevator.



So...Shelby....What do you think?
Hmmmm? Too much? Too little?

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

MY Billi!!!!
He's so protective of me... :mrgreen:

I feel kinda bad for Strify, but he should have known better! :x

[ShadowIW]

Hey Y'all! I feel bad for saying this, but I am taking a break for a little while....cuz well, I feel bad, like extremely bummed and sick and tired. I dont know why, but please bear with me for the next few days. I just feel miserable right now.

[TH_luv]

aaawww,Strify's a bad guy :( but it's a good thing Bill showed up! XD

[lilangel02371]

[cololol I loved it!! I CAME I!! LMAO finally! jk keep writing whenever you can!r=#0080BF][/color]

[ShadowIW]

Hey Y'all! I feel bad for saying this, but I am taking a break for a little while....cuz well, I feel bad, like extremely bummed and sick and tired. I dont know why, but please bear with me for the next few days. I just feel miserable right now.

OK so I am better...
ick...
well for those who know
*wink wink*....I say ick.

(Hope you get it....)

Either ways I am going to be able to write more!!!! cuz well...something just gave me more free time!

so new chapter tomorrow!

[lilangel02371]

GLAD YOU FEEL BETTER AND YAYSKY THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW, come on!!! :evil:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!! :x
Bitte?? :P

[ShadowIW]

When they got back to the room, we could hear them talking outside the door.
"I never liked that strify guy." Bill said
"Ya." Shelby said still stunned.
When they walked in....Kiro made the bad choice of talking first.
"What happened to Strify? How come you guys dont have cokes or ice?"
"Lets not talk about it." Shelby said
Then Strify walked through the door.
“I hate you Bill.” He mumbled
Then Bill was about to hit him again when Gustav and Jazmin held him back
“Shut-up Strify or I’ll-“ he started
“Bill, you idiot!” Strify taunted
“PEOPLE! SHUT-UP SIT DOWN AND—“ Shelby started to cry and ran out of the room, then Bill went after her.
“I cant believe you people!” I started to say “All of you acting like children! Like you, Strify, any chance of me being with you…you just crushed it. Tom and Marie yelling in the hall like no one could hear you guys!”
I started to wheel myself out of there.
When I got to the elevator I saw the girl Tom described earlier
He was right…she was dressed weird
I wheeled myself to the nearest CVS. I was tired of this wheelchair.
When I go there and bought the crutches, I saw a little girl with a broke leg and her father was carrying her.
“Excuse me sir.” I said to him
He turned to face me. “Yes?”
“Your little girl can have my wheelchair.”I said getting up to use my crutches
“Are you sure?” he said
“Yes, she need it more than me.”
“Oh thank you! You can we do to repay you?” He asked setting her in the chair
“Nothing.” I smiled and then left.
When I got out the front door I saw Shin, apparently he had been following me.
“What are you doing out of your wheelchair and into those crutches?”
“Shin, its ok, I’m fine.”
“Well, do you what to go back to hotel?” he asked nervously
“No, lets take a walk down M street.” I smiled
“Are you sure?”
“Yuppers!” I laughed

just so u know....
M street is real...

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

Should I feel bad cuz I'm the cause of all the trouble between Bill and Strify? :oops: I'm not sure... :?

Oh, I thought I was the only one who said Yuppers! :lol:

[TH_luv]

awesome chappy! :D mehr,bitte?

[lilangel02371]

lol I want some more... please??? bitte for Tokio Hotel??? lmao

[ShadowIW]

Should I feel bad cuz I'm the cause of all the trouble between Bill and Strify? :oops: I'm not sure... :?

Oh, I thought I was the only one who said Yuppers! :lol:

NEIN!
dont feel badly.

Strify is an idiot in this.








and Avery is just.....mentally tourtured by fighting.

[Tokio_Hotel_Luv3r]

i love you O_O lol XD :D
jk jk
i lov your story :D

[ShadowIW]

i love you O_O lol XD :D
jk jk
i lov your story :D

YAY!

new reader!

[lilangel02371]

who doesnt love your story!!!

[ShadowIW]

More soon!!
I just want to leave you with these thoughts until next time....
1.
You're a great friend but if the fans chase us, im tripping you....

2. One day, llamas will rule the world...

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

More soon!!
I just want to leave you with these thoughts until next time....
1.
You're a great friend but if the fans chase us, im tripping you....

2. One day, llamas will rule the world...

O.o
Honey, what the fudgey monkeys are you talking about?
We all know that I'd trip you first! ;)

[ShadowIW]

More soon!!
I just want to leave you with these thoughts until next time....
1.
You're a great friend but if the fans chase us, im tripping you....

2. One day, llamas will rule the world...

O.o
Honey, what the fudgey monkeys are you talking about?
We all know that I'd trip you first! ;)

O.O
Will just see about that.....

[ShadowIW]

HUGE FAMILY EMERGENCY! I MAY NOT BE HERE, AND WELL, WE ARE WORRIED SO.... this is extremely bad.

I just dont know what else to say

[awesomequeen]

HUGE FAMILY EMERGENCY! I MAY NOT BE HERE, AND WELL, WE ARE WORRIED SO.... this is extremely bad.

I just dont know what else to say

COUSIN! I love ur story! but ya totally know with the family emergency, lets hope for the best! He will be fine... we just got to pray.

*hugs*

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

I understand.
We'll all be here waiting and hoping for the best.
*bearhug*

[ShadowIW]

OK, everything is fine... everything is great now, I wish my family would stop freaking me out....
so new chapter soon.

[ShadowIW]

So we walked.
We talked about our lives and our friends.
"I wonder when we can get back on stage." I said
"Not until your better." Shin said
"Im fine! my ankle will be better soon." I replied
"Well, I dont want you feeling bad."
"Im going to the doctor's tomorrow...would you drive me?"
"Sure!" He said excitedly
I laughed then we rounded the corner to the hotel.
He walked me to the room and opened the door for me. Then he left.
Lena was the only one there when I got back..
"Well Well, you missed a lot.." She said
"what?" I said
"Well, Georg and Kenya are fling ad well Strify punched the door but it didnt make a dent"
"Punched the door?" I repeated
"Ya, everybody is grumpy and mad."
"I'll talk to them tomorrow." I yawned
"good, save up your fighting power...or yelling power."
she said
then I went to bed.

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

Crap. :shock:

What about me and Bill?
What happend to us, Felicity?
8-)

[awesomequeen]

WOWZERS!

[lilangel02371]

lol i wonder what u meant by kenya and georg are fling lol sorry prob a typo more whenever u can and sorry about your family emergency

[awesomequeen]

Cools!!! ;)

[ShadowIW]

Ok I want yalls opinion!!!
what could I make better on this story???
any thoughtS?

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

For starters, you could write more of the Bill-Shelby-Strify love triangle! ;) ;)

*poke*
*meow*
:geek:

[ShadowIW]

OK since I am working on more here is a little song!

"This is about a dream i had last night,
how this old man tracked me home and came inside
put his foot inside the door and gave a crooked smile,
something in his eyes
something in his smile
something in his laugh
made my skin crawl off.........."

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

OK since I am working on more here is a little song!

"This is about a dream i had last night,
how this old man tracked me home and came inside
put his foot inside the door and gave a crooked smile,
something in his smile
something in his voice
something in his laugh
made my skin crawl off.........."

WTF??? :|

[TH_luv]

ummm,lets see...you could have Lena get into some trouble =] that'd make it interesting,like...Lena in trouble while the whole Shelby,Bill,and Striffy love triangle things going on,and some other dramas,drama ist gut! :D

[ShadowIW]

OK since I am working on more here is a little song!

"This is about a dream i had last night,
how this old man tracked me home and came inside
put his foot inside the door and gave a crooked smile,
something in his eyes
something in his smile
something in his laugh
made my skin crawl off.........."

here is more to that while I write more:

He said, "I've seen you here before
I know your name.
You could have your pick
Of pretty things.
You could have it all
Everything at once.
Everything you've seen,
Everything you'll need,
Everything you've ever had in fantasies."

"You've one life,
You've one life.
You've one life left to lead."

I woke up from my dream
As a golden man
With a girl I've never seen
With golden skin
I jumped up to my feet
She asked me what was wrong
I began to scream
I don't think this is me
Is this just a dream
Or really happening?

What direction?
What direction?
I'm splitting up!
I'm splitting up!
This is my personal disaffection

What direction? What direction?
What direction now?

I looked outside the glass
At golden shores
Golden ships and masts
With golden cords
As my reflection passed
I hated what I saw
My golden eyes were dead
And a thought passed through my head
A heart that is made of gold can't really beat at all

I wanted to wake up again
Without a touch of gold.............."




here it is:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Jxlv384GZM

[writeratheart412]

OK since I am working on more here is a little song!

"This is about a dream i had last night,
how this old man tracked me home and came inside
put his foot inside the door and gave a crooked smile,
something in his eyes
something in his smile
something in his laugh
made my skin crawl off.........."
LOL!!!! That's Switchfoot, that is! Faust, Midas, and Myself is one of my favorite songs! I love the story!

[ShadowIW]

The next day I didn’t even bother to get the others together, but instead I was in the room when Shelby ran in.
“Avery! I need to talk to you.” She said

Here we go….

“What is it?” I asked
“I am so freakin’ confused!” she said as she sat on the couch
“What? Why?” I asked
“Strify won’t stop bothering me! And Bill keeps acting protective…too protective!”
“What is happening?”
“Strify follows me, and Bill tries to listen in on my phone calls!”
“Ok that’s it!” I said and I grabbed my crutches then stood up.
“Get the those boys.” I said
Shelby got up and walked out then a few minutes later she walked in with two very angry boys.
“Strify! Bill! Sit down across from each other!” I commanded
They sat, I cant believe that I have to do everything around here.
“Listen up children!” I started then was interrupted by Strify
“We are not children!”
“SHUT UP! You are acting like a child, there for you are one!”
He was quiet
“Strify, what posses you to try to date Shelby?...dont answer that.”
They all looked at me with wide eyes waiting to see what I would do.
For the first time I was clueless I think.
“OK! You two are a bunch of idiots, I mean doing this isn’t right just..just..come with me…you too Shelby, you need to drive.”
Then we got in the car and I told Shelby where to go but I didn’t tell the others.

[writeratheart412]

I wonder where their going...write more! This is good for the soul!

[ShadowIW]

I wonder where their going...write more! This is good for the soul!

....good for the soul....LOL :lol:

[TH_luv]

lmao little childrens XD I luv feel bad for Shelby =[

[writeratheart412]

Me, too...hey, ch. 6 of New Dawn is up! Not sure when the next chapter will be up, since I don't know where to go with it, but I'll try to have it up soon.

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

Ash...where exactly am I taking us?
I mean, you know I drive REALLY fast...so we must be going somewhere important.
Right?

[ShadowIW]

Ash...where exactly am I taking us?
I mean, you know I drive REALLY fast...so we must be going somewhere important.
Right?

BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

I SHALL NEVER TELL!!!

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

Ash...where exactly am I taking us?
I mean, you know I drive REALLY fast...so we must be going somewhere important.
Right?

BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

I SHALL NEVER TELL!!!


:|
Tease.

:lol:

[ShadowIW]

Ash...where exactly am I taking us?
I mean, you know I drive REALLY fast...so we must be going somewhere important.
Right?

BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

I SHALL NEVER TELL!!!


:|
Tease.

:lol:

NEIN!

[ShadowIW]

:shock: I hope ya'll think this is funny.... :shock:

When we got to our deestination
Nobody but me knew why we were there.
We arrived at a house, it lots of big trees in the front.
I hobbled to the front door with the others and rang the doorbell....
Mr.PZ answered
"BAA! You People!" he jumped
"Yes, it is us....I have a favor for you."
I smiled and he raised an eyebrow
"OK then...come in."
HE showed us inside and we sat on the couch
"How do you know where I live?" he asked
"Um, that got out a long time ago." i laughed
"Ugh, I have to move." he moaned
"Ok so the favor...." I started
The others were listening intently
"OK so...Can Strify and Bill stay with you for awhile?"
Everyone was looking at me like I was crazy.
"Why??" Mr.PZ said
Then another man walked through the door
"BROTHER!" he said
"Oh no..." Mr. PZ said
"What is it?!" The man said
"Wrong timeing." Mr. PZ mumbled
The other man stared at us
"HI! You must be some of his students! I am Mr. PZ brother Mr.P!"
"Whaat???" Shebly said shocked "There is more of you?!"
"YES!" MR. P said
"How come you are Mr. P and You are Mr. PZ?" Bill said looking back and fourth at them confused
"Well, we didnt want are students confused when we worked at the same school." Mr. PZ said
"Yes, now why are you here?" Mr. P looked at us
"I want these to boys to stay with you two...we need them to learn..well, a lot." I replied
Just then Mr.PZ made some weird noise then Mr. P said "Shusha Your Mouth." in a fake italin accent
Strify made a weird look on his face
I looked at Mr.PZ and Mr. P and whispered"I will pay you, these two boys are driving me up the wall! You have got to help."
"Ok we will do it." Mr. P said
"Good, Shelby and I will be back with their stuff."

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:


Please don't traumatize my Billi. :|

[writeratheart412]

Nice bribary; I hope everything goes well. It was so funny!

[TH_luv]

lmao nice!This is gonna get interesting XD

[ShadowIW]

When Shelby and I went back to the hotel to get the boys’ things,
I went to my room to ask Lena if she wanted to come with us.
But when I walked in I saw Jazmin and Gustav making out on the couch.
“ahh-hemm” I coughed
They looked up
“What are you two doing in Lena and my room?” I asked
“Lena let us in and we were talking then she said she had to go…she hasn’t come back yet…” Jazmin said
“And this is how you pass the time?” Shelby said walking up behind me
“It’s not like you never made out with Bill!” Jazmin defended
“Shhhh!” I said “How long has Lena been gone?”
Gustav looked at his watch “ An hour and a half.”
I looked at Shelby “We will have to go look for her while we are out there.”
“Ya.” She nodded
So then we left to go back to leave the boys’ stuff at Mr.PZ’s house
When we got there the boys were fighting but Mr.P was handling it
“OK, if you guys are acting like that then this is how we handle it!”
The boys looked at us as if we knew what to do.
“Ok, Bill you are going to clean the tile in the kitchen using a toothbrush and soap with water.”
Strify laughed
“Strify! You are going to clean the entire bathrooms with a toothbrush and pinesol!”
Shelby gave me a fist bump.
When we left I tried calling Lena’s cell phone while we were looking for her.
“Shelby, slow down! If we pass her we won’t know it!”
“FINE!” she sighed then slowed down when I called Lena again
She answered panting “Hello?? Whoa!”
“Lena? Where are you?”
“I am being chased.”
“Huh? By what?” Then I put it on speaker
“By angry--” then was some static “I am in the park.”
“OK we will be there!” Shelby and I said then Shelby sped up the car and we rushed to the park.

[writeratheart412]

By angry what? An angry mob?

[awesomequeen]

:shock: :shock: :o

[cherry_kaulitz]

IM GONNA DIE TELL TELL TELL .....ME!!!!!!!!!!!!




AHH GO JAZMIN(ME)

[TH_luv]

lmaorofl! XD Im being chased by an angry mob! XD lolz or ann angry...kittycat?doggy?...angry man?...angry WO-man?...O.O :shock: I must find out

[ShadowIW]

lmaorofl! XD Im being chased by an angry mob! XD lolz or ann angry...kittycat?doggy?...angry man?...angry WO-man?...O.O :shock: I must find out

YOu will like it! :lol:

[TH_luv]

lmaorofl! XD Im being chased by an angry mob! XD lolz or ann angry...kittycat?doggy?...angry man?...angry WO-man?...O.O :shock: I must find out

YOu will like it! :lol:
ooh then I really can't wait! XD

[awesomequeen]

lmaorofl! XD Im being chased by an angry mob! XD lolz or ann angry...kittycat?doggy?...angry man?...angry WO-man?...O.O :shock: I must find out

YOu will like it! :lol:
ooh then I really can't wait! XD

I cant wait either! :D

[ShadowIW]

update soon guys

[THDNacolleMarie]

MORE BITTE!

[writeratheart412]

I NEED AN UPDATE OR I SWEAR I WILL DIE!!!!!

[ShadowIW]

MORE BITTE!

YAY! you like it!

[awesomequeen]

coolie

[ShadowIW]

more soon

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

more soon

Yeah, you better be posting more soon! :x

:|

:?

:roll:

:lol:
I love you, Ash!
My fellow Yellow Rose! 8-)

[awesomequeen]

Chad


:lol: :lol:

[ShadowIW]

more soon

Yeah, you better be posting more soon! :x

:|

:?

:roll:

:lol:
I love you, Ash!
My fellow Yellow Rose! 8-)


Ahh!!! Thank you!!
*tacklehug*
Your sweet!

Yellow Roses got to stick together!

[ShadowIW]

Chad


:lol: :lol:

SHUT UP ABOUT CHAD ALREADY!

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

CHAD????

WTF???

One of you better tell me what's up with this CHAD dude!!! :x

[ShadowIW]

CHAD????

WTF???

One of you better tell me what's up with this CHAD dude!!! :x

Do you really want to know?

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

CHAD????

WTF???

One of you better tell me what's up with this CHAD dude!!! :x

Do you really want to know?

YES I REALLY WANNA KNOW!!!!!
NOW TELL ME!!!!

[ShadowIW]

CHAD????

WTF???

One of you better tell me what's up with this CHAD dude!!! :x

Do you really want to know?

YES I REALLY WANNA KNOW!!!!!
NOW TELL ME!!!!



OK So she has a crush on the drummer from Switchfoot...and SHE WONT SHUT UP ABOUT HIM!!

she also used to date someone named chad....

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

:| oh...ok...

And here I was thinking that she got a new pony and named it Chad! :lol:

[ShadowIW]

:| oh...ok...

And here I was thinking that she got a new pony and named it Chad! :lol:

DONT GIVE HER ANY IDEAS!!!!!!

[awesomequeen]

:| oh...ok...

And here I was thinking that she got a new pony and named it Chad! :lol:

OOOO! A PONY NAMED CHAD!!!!!

I LIKE THAT IDEA!!! THANK YOU!!!

[ShadowIW]

:| oh...ok...

And here I was thinking that she got a new pony and named it Chad! :lol:

OOOO! A PONY NAMED CHAD!!!!!

I LIKE THAT IDEA!!! THANK YOU!!!

O__o


Oh no...

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

:| oh...ok...

And here I was thinking that she got a new pony and named it Chad! :lol:

OOOO! A PONY NAMED CHAD!!!!!

I LIKE THAT IDEA!!! THANK YOU!!!

O__o


Oh no...

:lol:

Sorry, my bad!

[TWIXX]

~NEW READER~
THIS IS REALLY GOOD!!!!!!!!!
OMG I CANT BELIEVE VICK!!!
DANG SHE GOT LIKE 7 GUYS THAT LIKE HER!!!!
MEHR BITTE!!!!

[iilyRein]

*new reader* I Want more

[ShadowIW]

YAY!!!

2 new readers!

update soon!

[awesomequeen]

I WILL UPDATE FOR YOU IF YOU DONT UPDATE NOW uPDATE!

[lilangel02371]

I wants more sorry I cpouldnt be on earlier my cpu messed up for a bit more please

[ShadowIW]

I wants more sorry I cpouldnt be on earlier my cpu messed up for a bit more please

thats ok

[CrazyKenya16]

I want more too ^.^

[ShadowIW]

When we got to the park we saw Lena running for her life.
"What the FREAK?!" Shelby yelled as she saw what was chaseing Lena, it was a bull.
"How did a Bull get in the Park?!" I yelled
Shelby got the automatic side door to open on for Lena to Jump in.
I rolled down the Window
"LEna!!!!" I screamed
"Im coming!!!" She said running at full speed to the car, she jumped in and shut the door.
"GO SHELBY! DRIVE!" I yelled watching the Bull run towards us
Shelby put it to full gear and raced away.
I turn around to Lena
"HOW did a BULL GET IN THE PARK!?"
"It got loose from the Petting Zoo." SHe panted
"Why did it chase you?"
"Do I look like I have an answer for that!?"
The ride home was silent
"I am going to write a song about that!" Shelby laughed as we ran into Marie and Tom
"About What?" Marie asked
"We just saved Lena from death by a bull."
"She- You- What?!" Tom studdered
"She was being chased by a bull. Yeah I know, I think that its time we all go to bed and sleep...maybe for the rest of our lifes." Shelby yawned
"You people are going to kill me." I said then looked at Lena
"You may get yourself killed if you keep going to petting zoos..."
"ha...ha....not funny." Lena repiled
Then we went to bed.

Early the next morning...very early....I heard the door open and and close gently then I heard footsteps.
I opened my eyes a little I was burried underneath the comforters and blankets so who ever was there couldnt tell if i was awake or not, I was faceing Lena's bed that was near the window, but she wasnt there, in fact none of her stuff was there...it was someone elses...but who?
Was i in the wrong room?
No...I couldnt be, lena was here too
I felts someone sit on the side of my bed
Oooohhh no....

I felt a hand on my shoulder and i shot up to see Shin.
"Ah!" I blurted out
"Good morning to you too!" he laughed
"What are you DOING?!" I almost shouted
"Calm down, Lena and I switched rooms."
"HUh!?" I made a strange face, like that I must be dreaming face
"Yeah, she will be with Andreas."
"But- But- We are against-" I started
"Whoa! Whoa! Whoa! Not like that. No we wouldnt do that!"
"Then why are you here?" I asked
"We thought we would just do it!"
"Nah, you- She- But- Can I go to sleep?" I moaned
"Sure, I will go down stairs and get breakfast." he stood up
"Ah-huh..." I nodded in disbelief
"Before you go can I ask you a question?"
"Sure!" he turned around
"Did someone tell you that i am dieing?"
"You arent dieing. Go to sleep."
I fell back on the pillows and pulled the sheets above my head.

[cherry_kaulitz]

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh more!!!!!!!!ahhhh jusss ahhh

[lilangel02371]

MORE!! I wanna be more in this please? I just love the way you write!!

[ShadowIW]

MORE!! I wanna be more in this please? I just love the way you write!!

ok :D

[TH_luv]

zomg!Hahaha,me and Andreas together at last haha...I was chased by a bull...that was so random,I was like wtfdfndjlfndkfn!

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

Ash...what is up with you and having people being chased my random animals?

First the tiger, now a bull. What's next? Ponies? *****, maybe I shouldn't have mentioned ponies. I forgot that Codi reads this...

WTF???

[ShadowIW]

Ash...what is up with you and having people being chased my random animals?

First the tiger, now a bull. What's next? Ponies? *****, maybe I shouldn't have mentioned ponies. I forgot that Codi reads this...

WTF???

1. ...I am a dorkfish....
2. I saw it on TV!!!
3. the tiger thing was a GOOD IDEA!

[TH_luv]

Ash...what is up with you and having people being chased my random animals?

First the tiger, now a bull. What's next? Ponies? *****, maybe I shouldn't have mentioned ponies. I forgot that Codi reads this...

WTF???

1. ...I am a dorkfish....
2. I saw it on TV!!!
3. the tiger thing was a GOOD IDEA!


...you saw someone running away from a bull in a park o tv?

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

Ash...what is up with you and having people being chased my random animals?

First the tiger, now a bull. What's next? Ponies? *****, maybe I shouldn't have mentioned ponies. I forgot that Codi reads this...

WTF???

1. ...I am a dorkfish....
2. I saw it on TV!!!
3. the tiger thing was a GOOD IDEA!

:|

Sometimes...I worry about you, Ash.
She seriously needs to lay off the sugar!

[ShadowIW]

Ash...what is up with you and having people being chased my random animals?

First the tiger, now a bull. What's next? Ponies? *****, maybe I shouldn't have mentioned ponies. I forgot that Codi reads this...

WTF???

1. ...I am a dorkfish....
2. I saw it on TV!!!
3. the tiger thing was a GOOD IDEA!

:|

Sometimes...I worry about you, Ash.
She seriously needs to lay off the sugar!

I am not on sugar!!!

[ShadowIW]

Ash...what is up with you and having people being chased my random animals?

First the tiger, now a bull. What's next? Ponies? *****, maybe I shouldn't have mentioned ponies. I forgot that Codi reads this...

WTF???

1. ...I am a dorkfish....
2. I saw it on TV!!!
3. the tiger thing was a GOOD IDEA!



...you saw someone running away from a bull in a park o tv?

Yes I did!

[ShadowIW]

zomg!Hahaha,me and Andreas together at last haha...I was chased by a bull...that was so random,I was like wtfdfndjlfndkfn!


I rock like that!

[ShadowIW]

I couldn’t fall back asleep
So I got up and got dressed, I couldn’t go back to sleep.
I think I should go to an insane asylum…..
Then I walked down to the breakfast area to see Jazmin and Gustav eating their food.
They looked at me,
“Sooo….you saw Shin this morning?” Jazmin said
“ah-huh.” I nodded while I walked past them to where the bagels were
“What was that like?” Jazmin followed me
“It freaked me out.” I said grabbing a bagel
“That’s it?” She sounded disappointed
“What?” I said as I turned to face her
“Well, I thought- that…” She started
“What did you think?” I said walking to the closet tabled and setting my crutches to the side
“I thought something, would happen, like you would either be upset or you would think it was romantic.”
“No, I am just going insane.” I said taking a bite of my bagel
I saw Gustav move tables to come to where I was sitting and I saw Kenya walk in looking for us.
I waved to her to come sit down at the table as Jazmin and I continued to talk
“What do you mean insane?” Jazmin said sitting next to Gustav again
“Hmmm…let’s see, my ex-boyfriend tried to kill me, things happen during the night that I am not aware of, Lena was chased by a bull….Wait! I am not the only insane person! Ha ha! We are all INSANE! That’s right! I mean look at what has happened! Tom and Marie disappear for long periods of time, Strify and Bill are with two insane teachers, Shelby drives REALLY fast….and- and- WE ARE ALL INSANE!”
“Except me!” Kenya added
“Ok, except for Kenya.”
They all looked at each other
“Are you ok?” Kenya asked
“Huh?” I said
“She is right, you are not yourself, something is wrong.” Jazmin said
“Maybe because everything has turned upside down.” I replied looking at my crutches
“What do you mean?” Gustav asked
“I am not used to all these fights and all the boys.” I said
“Maybe what you need is a new look!” Jazmin said cheerfully
“Maybe you are right!” I replied “Do you two girls want to go shopping with me?”
“SURE!” they replied simultaneously
“Gustav, you can come too!” I smiled
“I rather not, I don’t want to see the trouble you girls get into.” He replied
We all giggled then I got my crutches and we walked to Kenya’s car.
When we got to the mall, the first thing that I wanted to do was go into Hot Topic, that wasn’t like me at all.
I like the GAP.
When we walked into Hot Topic I went wild looking at everything.
The girls looked at me as if they thought I was weird.
I bought black makeup and everything.
Then we went to Forever 21 and Kenya must have bought the entire store out.
Then we went to the GAP, Jazmin and I bought some stuff there.
I was looking at hats when I saw a cowboy hat, “Shelby would love that!” I said grabbing it from the rack then went up to the register to pay for it.
That night I went to bed early, i dont know when Shin got in...
I was already asleep....
but the thought of me changeing in a bad way bothered me...

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

Aww. I hate that she's feelin bad.

Her and Shin should cuddle! :mrgreen:

[ShadowIW]

Aww. I hate that she's feelin bad.

Her and Shin should cuddle! :mrgreen:

:| :shock:


no comment......

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

Aww. I hate that she's feelin bad.

Her and Shin should cuddle! :mrgreen:

:| :shock:


no comment......

-.-'
Oh, like you've never wanted to just cuddle with Shin? I know you have! You can't deny it!

[TH_luv]

Zomg,it's okay wearing dark colors aren't bad...unless you absolutely don't agree with the fashion,then you have a problem.

[cherry_kaulitz]

omg bay i love it hehe new look i ussually buy somthing out of fashin and somthing ppl wont expect

more plz

[ShadowIW]

Aww. I hate that she's feelin bad.

Her and Shin should cuddle! :mrgreen:

:| :shock:


no comment......

-.-'
Oh, like you've never wanted to just cuddle with Shin? I know you have! You can't deny it!

NEIN! LIES! LIES!!!


:shock: at least not with Shin.... :oops:

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

NEIN! LIES! LIES!!!


:shock: at least not with Shin.... :oops:

-.-'

Uh....I'm not so sure I wanna know who you WANT to cuddle with

[ShadowIW]

NEIN! LIES! LIES!!!


:shock: at least not with Shin.... :oops:

-.-'

Uh....I'm not so sure I wanna know who you WANT to cuddle with

What does that mean!?!? :? :lol:

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

NEIN! LIES! LIES!!!


:shock: at least not with Shin.... :oops:

-.-'

Uh....I'm not so sure I wanna know who you WANT to cuddle with

What does that mean!?!? :? :lol:

Oh, nothing.
Nothing at all...*whistles*

[ShadowIW]

Oh, nothing.
Nothing at all...*whistles*



It must mean something....
*becomes suspicious*

[ShadowIW]

The next morning I woke up with a headache, I saw Shin still sleeping like a rock so I got up, got my crutches and some of my new clothes and went into the bathroom to change.
When I walked out in all black with fishnets, black makeup, and a studded choker, Shin woke up
“Whoa! What- What the heck!?” he said wide eyed
“Do you like it?” I said looking at myself in the mirror
“Um, Well, it’s a very interesting look for you…” he said cautiously
“Well, anyway, I am going to get breakfast before Tom and Bill eat everything.” I said as I walked out
I walked down to the breakfast room, while getting strange looks in the elevator…
When I got there I saw Tom and Marie eating breakfast.
“So, where are you two going to disappear today?” I said then they looked up
“Avery!” Tom exclaimed “You look so different.”
“Yup!” I smiled
“No pink today? Anyway, we are going to the Lincoln Memorial.”
“How nice.” I said getting some cereal
I went and sat down with them when Kiro, Shin and Yu came in
“Hey guys!” Kiro said, then I turned to see them
“Hey.” I replied
“What hit you in the head this morning?” Kiro laughed
“You don’t like it?? I pouted
“No, I love it!” He replied
“Why did you deiced to dress like that?” Yu questioned
“Just wanted to.”
“That’s a good reason.” He replied
Shin sat next to me.
Then I said something I would never say “I think I am going to get my lip and eyebrow pierced.”
Marie sat there and just stared at me
“Well, if you are going to do that just know they hurt.” Tom said
Marie smacked him in the back of the head
“What did you go and do that for?!” he said
“You’re supposed to stop her!” Marie replied
“Then I would be a hypocrite!”
Kiro, Yu and I laughed.
Then Shelby, Lena, Andreas, Georg, Gustav, and Jazmin walked in.
I think they didn’t realize who I was yet
“Hello All.” I said to them
Lena’s mouth hung open and Shelby started babbling like crazy
“Oh No! You finally did it! You really have lost your mind! I thought- You really lost your mind! How? How- What happened to the rainbow fairy that we used to see with the smiles and the singing?! I will take my bass and hit you in the head if you do anything remotely even odder for you!”
Marie then shouted “She is going to get an eyebrow and a lip ring!!”
“I will be right back….” Shelby said walking out of the room
When she came back she had her bass in her hand
“Oh dang it!” I said burying my head in Shin’s chest. he covered my head with his arms and jacket
“Shelby…put it down…” Georg said calmly
“But- But- SHE IS- she-“ she started
“We know…just put it down…eat breakfast.” He said
She set it down and we all ate breakfast together
Then Shelby and I went to check on Bill and Strify.
We rang the door bell, Mr. P answered
“Well, hello! Came to see your friends?” he asked as he let us in
Bill was cleaning the windows with Stirfy.
Mr.PZ walked in
“Avery! Bah!”
“Bark Bark.” I replied
“Meow!” Shelby giggled
Then Strify and Bill turned around

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
*poke*
*meow*

8-)

[lilangel02371]

more please i like her new style!! thanx for putting me in the story!!!

[ShadowIW]

more please i like her new style!! thanx for putting me in the story!!!

you are welcome!!! :D

[ShadowIW]

there is more to come, just give me some time. :mrgreen:

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

there is more to come, just give me some time. :mrgreen:

*WAITING*

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

there is more to come, just give me some time. :mrgreen:

*waiting patiently*

[ShadowIW]

there is more to come, just give me some time. :mrgreen:

*waiting patiently*
thank you :)

[ShadowIW]

Then Strify and Bill turned around
“NO!” They screamed then started to babble to each other.
“Bill! They got to them!” Strify said putting his head in his hands
“No! No! No! Look at Avery clothes! They made them insane!” Bill whined
Then Mr.P said “Shusha your mouth, don’t make me bring out the ‘Transitional Chicken’!”
They looked at each other and started to clean the windows again.
“Oh good they get along.” Shelby smiled
“Here is some money for your trouble.” I said handing them $400
Mr. PZ split the money with Mr.P.
Then we took Strify and Bill back to the hotel, hearing them plead with us all the way back.
“Please, Please, please! Don’t ever, make us go there ever again!” Bill said
“Just as long as you two always get along!” Shelby said turning on to the highway
“Oh, we will, we are like brothers now!” Strify said
When we got back I told them my ankle was bothering me so I hobbled back to my room.
I opened the door and sat down on the couch in the sitting area.
I put my ankle on the coffee table, gasping because it hurt so badly.
I couldn’t get back up to walk because of the pain, Shin wasn’t there so I couldn’t ask him to help me, but I did call him on my cell phone.
“Hey, Shin?”
“Avery? What’s wrong?” he asked
“Listen, are you near by the hotel?”
“I just walked in the hotel doors.”
“Good, come up to the room, I need your help.”
“What is wrong?”
“It’s my ankle, It hurts so bad I cant get up and walk.”
“Ok, I will be there very soon.”
We hung up, I suffered in silence for about 2 minutes when Shin bolted through the door.
“hey, I am going to get ice.” He stated as he grabbed the ice bucket and plastic sacks
“ok.” I squeaked
When he came back he put the ice on my ankle and stayed by my side.
“Do you want me to take you to the doctor’s tomorrow?” he asked leaning back
“Yes, please.” I said as he put an arm around my shoulders
I rested my head on shoulder
Mmm, His cologne smells so good.

I closed my eyes for about a minute then I opened them again because the pain in my ankle.
I looked up at Shin, he had a worried expression to his eyes that could only go away if I was better.
He suddenly looked down at me, and gently smiled, then he kissed me.
That’s right! He kissed me!!!!!! On the lips!!!
I had so many emotions in me I didn’t know what to say or do.
When it was over he looked at me, I had a red face and was smiling like no tomorrow.
He laughed
I felt so mixed up. I think, not knowing made me even more confused.
“um, wow.” Is all I said which made him laugh a little harder, and then I started to laugh about how stupid I was.
“You know what?” I said
“No, what?” He said looking at me sweetly
“I want to be your girlfriend.” I grabbed his shirt collar and brought his lips back to mine.





*twitch* :shock: *twitch*


comments anyone?

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

8-)
I knew that shiz was gonna happen.

Now I know who you wanna cuddle with! :lol:

[ShadowIW]

8-)
I knew that shiz was gonna happen.

Now I know who you wanna cuddle with! :lol:

*shifty eyes* :shock:

I have nooo clue what you are talking about....

*gulp* :shock:

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

8-)
I knew that shiz was gonna happen.

Now I know who you wanna cuddle with! :lol:

*shifty eyes* :shock:

I have nooo clue what you are talking about....

*gulp* :shock:
8-)
Oh, I think you do!
*poke*
*meow*

[ShadowIW]

8-)
I knew that shiz was gonna happen.

Now I know who you wanna cuddle with! :lol:

*shifty eyes* :shock:

I have nooo clue what you are talking about....

*gulp* :shock:
8-)
Oh, I think you do!
*poke*
*meow*

*poke**poke*
*bark*
*hug*
*poke*

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

*meow*

Remember that idea I had????

*purr*
8-)




:lol:

[lilangel02371]

[color=#0080BF][size=200]I LOVED IT!! OOH MY GUSTI! I didnt see that comeing well maybe a little

[ShadowIW]

*meow*

Remember that idea I had????

*purr*
8-)




:lol:

:shock: yes.... :shock:

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

*meow*

Remember that idea I had????

*purr*
8-)




:lol:

:shock: yes.... :shock:

8-)
DO IT!!!!

:lol:

*purr*


I LOVE STRAWBERRY WINE!
MY FAVORITE COUNTRY SONG OF ALL TIME!!!!!!!!!!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uaXuyGSd_vw&NR=1

8-)

*PURR*

[ShadowIW]

*meow*

Remember that idea I had????

*purr*
8-)




:lol:

:shock: yes.... :shock:

8-)
DO IT!!!!

:lol:

*purr*


I LOVE STRAWBERRY WINE!
MY FAVORITE COUNTRY SONG OF ALL TIME!!!!!!!!!!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uaXuyGSd_vw&NR=1

8-)

*PURR*



:roll: ill think

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

:roll: ill think

:mrgreen:
That's better than a no!

[ShadowIW]

:roll: ill think

:mrgreen:
That's better than a no!

*still thinking*

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

:roll: ill think

:mrgreen:
That's better than a no!

*still thinking*

*meow*
*purr*
:mrgreen:

[ShadowIW]

*meow*
*purr*
:mrgreen:
your still waiting

Im still thinking....

I need to go over it with my editor...LOL

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

*meow*
*purr*
:mrgreen:
your still waiting

Im still thinking....

I need to go over it with my editor...LOL

Who is your editor??

[ShadowIW]

*meow*
*purr*
:mrgreen:
your still waiting

Im still thinking....

I need to go over it with my editor...LOL

Who is your editor??


........depends on the stories..........your one of them...........soooo.......I have around 5 or 6.....I have more stories than just these 2.......

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

........depends on the stories..........your one of them...........soooo.......I have around 5 or 6.....I have more stories than just these 2.......


Ok, then!

[ShadowIW]

........depends on the stories..........your one of them...........soooo.......I have around 5 or 6.....I have more stories than just these 2.......


Ok, then!
write write write!! :lol:

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

........depends on the stories..........your one of them...........soooo.......I have around 5 or 6.....I have more stories than just these 2.......


Ok, then!
write write write!! :lol:
I'm gonna get offline and go do that!

[TH_luv]

aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww! :D I just had a spazz attack,that was so adorable! XD mehr,bitte?

[ShadowIW]

aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww! :D I just had a spazz attack,that was so adorable! XD mehr,bitte?

Thank you!!1

[awesomequeen]

:D

[ShadowIW]

:lol:

[ShadowIW]

*cough*

[ShadowIW]

*cough*
*cough* *cough*

[ShadowIW]

NEXT CHAPTER ROCKS!

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

NEXT CHAPTER ROCKS!

THEN POST IT, ****IT!

I luffs you!

[ShadowIW]

NEXT CHAPTER ROCKS!

THEN POST IT, ****IT!

I luffs you!


Its NOT DONE YET!


One hint....HE'S BAAAACK!

I luffs you too! *does my bestfriend tackle hug*

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

NEXT CHAPTER ROCKS!

THEN POST IT, ****IT!

I luffs you!


Its NOT DONE YET!


One hint....HE'S BAAAACK!

I luffs you too! *does my bestfriend tackle hug*

:shock:
Oh...shiz.

*flying tacklehug*

[ShadowIW]

One hint....HE'S BAAAACK!

I luffs you too! *does my bestfriend tackle hug*

:shock:
Oh...shiz.

*flying tacklehug*


The war of hugs! :lol: :lol:

[awesomequeen]

:? did i miss something?

[Tokio_Hotel_Luv3r]

i luff your story :lol:

[ShadowIW]

i luff your story :lol:

Thank You!

[lilangel02371]

More please ASAYC! As soon as you can!

[ShadowIW]

I let go of his shirt collar after the kiss, he just stared at me.
“I- I- wow.” He said
I grinned
“Please, be my girlfriend?” He said
“I already said I wanted to be!” I giggled
He got closer to me and kissed me again,
We stared at each other like we were dreaming.
Then all of the others barged in,

They can ruin a good moment.

“Ooops! Are you busy?” Yu asked
“What would make you assume that?” I asked
“Well- Any way, um Avery you have a problem.” Luminor said
“What would that be?” I asked
“Uh….Vick.” Andreas said
“What about Vick?” Shin said
“He’s back, he’s here and he’s looking for Avery.” Marie said
“Let me at him!” I said grabbing my crutches and trying to stand up
“No! You are not! We are all staying here with you.” Tom said
“He is coming close to here.” Gustav added
“Ok, I know a plan so…here it is.” I said
Then I told them my plan. We waited from Vick to find my room.
When he finally knocked our plan went into action.
We all hid, I was behind a corner in the bed room that was there when you first entered.
He knocked and said “Avery? It’s Vick, listen we need to talk.”
“Come in! The doors opened!” I yelled and got ready
He came in, “Where are you?”
“I am in the bedroom!” I said
“Ah, there you are.” He said rounding the corner “I am not done with you yet.”
He walked closer and closer until he got close enough to me that I could hit him with my crutch.
He pushed me down.
Then Shin and Andreas tackled him from behind, then they threw him against the wall, then Tom and Marie pinned him there.
“Now, we meet again.” Tom smirked as he slightly growled
“Did you think she would actually let you hurt her again?” Marie said then she slapped him
Vick then hit Tom in the stomach knocking the wind out of him, which got Marie very angry then she grabbed Vick by his collar and pushed him up against the wall “Listen, up buddy, I can break you into two pieces in three seconds…” Then he kicked her in the stomach.
I was crawling to get to the dresser to stand up with a crutch and get some balance.
Then I saw Bill and Strify running out of the bathroom with cans of hairspray spraying them at Vick.
“Strify! Strify! Stop I thought we were friends!” Vick yelled
“Not anymore!” Strify yelled
Vick fell on the bed, I sat up on the dresser and Yu and Lena grabbed my crutches, then started to hit him with them, Shelby, hit him with pillows, Kenya hit him with purses, and Jazmin, had called the police then hit Vick with the phone.
I was being guarded by Gustav and Georg, laughing at this site. Lena and Shelby started yelling
“SHE SUFFERED A FRACTURED RIB BECAUSE OF YOU!!!”
Kenya yelled “Feel the pain!”
I told Georg and Gustav to carry me over to Vick while everyone was beating him up.
They did, I told the girls to stop. Everyone stared at me seeing what I would do, I looked down at Vick to see what he would do.
All he did was stare at me like he was scared child.
“What’s wrong I can see the fear behind your eyes your scared you might walk away unsatisfied…” I said
“You- You-“ he managed
“That’s right! I stood up to you. I defended myself, they help defend me. Stand Up!” I said
He didn’t stand up.
“I SAID STAND UP! A PERSON LIKE YOU SHOULD BE ABLE TO STAND UP AND LOOK ME IN THE EYE!”
Then the police ran in and arrested Vick. I was happy.

[TH_luv]

YEAH THATS RIGHT!I'm glad we beat the crap outta him! :D I enjoyed this chappy alot xD

[TexasGirlLovesTH]

I am very handy with pillows. 8-)




:lol:

[ShadowIW]

:shock:

[dragoness573]

Hello, sorry took a break to Cali.
Now my delema. It's MR. PARRAZ. Why did you use my last name instead?
*growl* :evil:

[ShadowIW]

Hello, sorry took a break to Cali.
Now my delema. It's MR. PARRAZ. Why did you use my last name instead?
*growl* :evil:


GRRR! I didnt mean too! I forgot how to spell his NAME!!!!

[lilangel02371]

I LOVIES IT!!! MEHR BITTE NOW!! OR as soon as you can lol

[ShadowIW]

Update TONIGHT!

[ShadowIW]

Sorry for not updating in a really long time!


The next day Shin took me to the doctor, and the doctor said that it was time for my brace on my ankle to come off and that is why it was hurting…blah blah.
So the doctor took it off and I can now walk without crutches!!
Shin then took me to Basken Robins to get ice cream, he is so sweet!
When we got back to the hotel our manager was there waiting for me with the rest of the girls
“Avery! Yay! You are better!” Mrs. Smith said
“Yes.” I replied “SO whats up?”
“I have good news! Well, the thing is that your music is selling big time in Europe!”
“That’s great! What does that mean?” Shelby asked
“It means you all have concerts in France, In England….IN GERMANY!”
“Yes!” Marie and I said
“Can Kenya come too?” I asked
“Sure!” Mrs. Smith replied
So we get to go to Germany….yay, after this I just want to sleep sense everyone is denying me of it.
We flew over to England…where the boys came too
And I just about died when we went to france literally.
I woke up in my hotel room, and felt like someone was stabbing me, I was screaming in pain, and fell off the bed, It hurt to move.
I managed to get my phone and call the first number on my phone which was Lena.
I was also screaming into the phone
“LENA!” I screamed
“WHATS WRONG??!” She freaked out
“HELP ME!” I screamed
In like the next to seconds, I hear the door open and hear her footsteps and everyone elses
We travel in Packs.....
I was screaming, like no tomorrow
“The EMTs are on their way!” Lena said nervously
“GET THEM HERE NOW!” I screamed
“What does it feel like?!” Marie asked
“IT FEELS LIKE I AM BEING STABBED AND CANT MOVE AND I DON’T WANT TO TALK RIGHT NOW IT HURTS SO BAD!” I yelled then the emts ran in a sped me off the the hospital.

After I woke up from what ever happened I found out that my appendix burst.
Yay me….
They said I could still go on stage just not do any dramatic….
Would I feel like doing a back flip on stage?





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Hope you Like it!

[victoria]

ohhhhhh :shock: :o !!!!! UPDATE AGAIN!!! who do you think you are to leave us with such an expectative, lady!?

[TH_luv]

FINALLY! xD

I was just thinking of this FF yesterday,going "whatever happened to that ff?...did I not notice it was being updated of what?" and now you update! :D

lol mehr,bitte?

[awesomequeen]

Update for US!