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Izzylicous
May 6th, 2008, 06:27 PM
I got this inspiration by watching TH on TRL.
ENJOY!
Ch.1-Sitting Outside Of Time Square
Here I am.Sitting outside on the sidewalk in Time Square with my best friend Brianna,who is OBSESSED with this band called "Tokio Hotel".I don't know much about them.The lead singer is pretty cute actually...All of them are,and their music is pretty good.Well I'm sitting here watching their performance on TRL.Brianna is just singing her lungs off as the people walking are staring at us.My friend said that she wanted to take me some where for my Birthday yes ironically today is my Birthday May 6th,and she decided to take me to Time Square to watch Tokio Hotel's performance "TH" as she likes to call them.Their performance is almost over and she is just exploding with excitement because we're supposedly supposed to go to an after party that her brother got "connections" to.Ad who am I you may ask well.....I'm Josie.I'm eighteen and my high school graduation is soon.I hope to go on to be a musician or artist or something that is totally bad ***.Maybe a rock legend like "The Beatles" or "The Rolling Stones" maybe like this "Tokio Hotel" band that is becoming famous across the world.Well right now you could say that I need to find myself or I'm confused an I'm probably not going to take the right path in life.But I don't really give a rat's *** about what you think.[[XPPP lol]]Well anyways I have short hair that is about 2-3 inches below my ears,it's black and it's straight.My skin is really light and I have light green eyes.I'm pretty thin kind of tall but that Bill guy makes me feel REALLY short.I dress punker and I wear really deep eye liner.People think that I'm a slacker but I think that I'm smarter than they'll ever be.Anyways enough about me and on with my story.....
I know that I write a lot of ff's but I'm discontinuing "Live a Little" and Trapped! is on hold and I will TRY my best 2 update "To Win Her Love" but it's hard because I NEED ideas for a date and I'm still brain storming...So
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Kind of short paragraph....
BlondPunk
May 6th, 2008, 07:47 PM
Mehr bitte!
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Izzylicous
May 8th, 2008, 08:43 PM
P.O.V's my change [[Usually from Normal to Josie]]
Reminder:
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WARNING:This contains smoking,and alchohol
Ch.2
"COME ON JOSIE!WE HAVE TO GET TO THE PARTY!I CAN'T LEAVE THE BOYS WAITING!"Brianna yelled."Chill Bri I still need an outfit for the party.And what do you mean by "the boys"?"Josie said making quotation marks with her fingers to emphasize "the boys" part."Okay well you need to be quit and get it!I told you it would of been a good idea for you to bring the outfit that you were going to wear in a bag!But no you had to be lazy and not pack one!And what I mean by "the boys" is TH duh!And plus I heard that all the boys in TH are single and I think that you and Bill make a cute rock and roll couple!"Bri answered.Oh god here she goes trying to play "Match Maker" I don't even want a boyfriend the truth is,I never had a boyfriend so I have no dating experience at all.Guys have asked me out but I just deny their offers."Okay well what are you waiting for let's get the outfit!"Bri yelled.
Now we're in the taxi on our way to the after party...My outfit of choice was a black dress that came up a little bit above my knees,it has a bunch of zippers and straps.On my legs I have fish net stockings and black and green stripped socks,and on my feet I have black combat boots.Green and black accessories,black wrist warmers,and a silver tiara [[xPP]].I think that my outfit looked cool.It's different than what everyone at the party were going to wear so what the heck.The taxi just pulled up at a very large hotel.I guess this is where the party is gunna be at.Kudos to who planned this party.I looked at Bri who was about to bounce out of her seat."WE'RE HERE!"she yelled almost blowing off my ear.The taxi came to a halt and we both stepped out of the car.Well let the fun begin....
This is THE worst Birthday ever besides the time my dad forgot to show up at my part but we don't need to talk about that...Here I am sitting in a corner while everyone looks like they're having the time of their lives.Especially Bri who was socializing with everyone and dancing.People always called me anti-social but I never believed them,now I realize that actually I am.I guess I should let loose a little bit...Now I see Bri walking up to me."Aww honey!You need to loosen up a bit!Have fun it's your birthday and not only your birthday your EIGHTEENTH BIRTHDAY!"She yelled over the music."No I wanna go home!"I said pouting crossing my arms."Fine I'll just leave you in this corner all alone with no one to share the happiness you feel inside because you're finally eighteen..."Bri said dramatically while walking away.This is going to be a long night...Is it me or is that lead singer dude from "TH" is walking towards me nope I don't think so he's probably diggin' that perfect chick who's like a few feet away from me.Nope I'm wrong he's comin' towards me.And now he just sat next to me."Hi I'm Bill Kaulitz" he said smiling sticking his right and out."O.C.D."I simply said shaking his left hand."Well that's different.Anyways what Is your name?"He asked with his sexy German accent...Um wait did I just think that...Lets pretend that I never thought that."I'm Josie"I smiled at him."What a pretty name.So Josie where are you from?""Well I'm from Trenton,New Jersey but when I was twelve my mom moved here to New York,Manhattan.And I'm guessing that you're from Germany."I replied."Well you're right.How old are you?""I just turned eighteen today actually."I said proudly."Well you look like you weren't having fun sitting in this corner.Would you like a drink?""Sure"I said."Come on!"Bill said taking my hand walking towards the bar.
We talked about every thing and also we had a few drinks and now I'm **** drunk but I guess Bill knows how to hold his liquor...
[[NORMAL P.O.V.]]
"Bill you're REALLY cute"Josie said hanging onto Bills' arm giggling."You are too but I think it's time that we get you home.I mean you're friend is home right now and she's probably worrying about you!"Bill said in a worried tone."I'm not drunk!But I wanna stay with you!PLEASE!!!!!!!"Josie said an inch away from Bill's face.Her breath smelled like alcohol.Bill wanted to get to know her even more but he knew that if she would stay it might lead to other things."You don't like me don't you.You think that I'm a freak like everyone else does!You want a perfect girl don't you!"Josie said crying."Shhh...Don't say that"Bill said in a voice close to a whisper while wiping of the wet mascara that was running down her cheeks."People may not see you as perfect but I do.""Do you really mean that?"Joie asked her voice sounding more clearer."Of course I do.Come on you can stay with me for the night."Bill said bending down that wait she could climb on his back.She was drunk and well she was stumbling over.
They got to Bill's hotel room.Tom came in."Who's the chick?"Tom asked."A girl I met today at the party.She's really sweet."Bill replied."Alright well I was just checking up on you.Guten Nacht."Tom said waving while walking out of the door to go to his hotel room.
Bill took a shower and was on the bed laying down.Josie was taking a shower and she was going to borrow some of Bill's comfortable clothes to sleep in.The sound of the shower stopped.A few minutes later Josie walked out of the bathroom in a shirt and some short with her hair wet.She smiled seductively at Bill she walked towards him and she did the unthinkable...She pounced on him.And she began to kiss him and he began to kiss back.No I can't do this she's drunk! Bill panicked in his head.But it feels so right!"I love you..."she whispered into Bill's ear.Her lips barely touching his earlobe.It gave him goose bumps.And soon things led to other thing!Well you know what happens!
[[Josie's P.O.V.]]
I woke up with a terrible head ache.The sun woke me up.It was extremely bright this morning.I looked to the other side of me and there was Bill sleeping like a baby.As he looks so adorable.Oh my gosh I'm naked and Bill is what did we exactly do last night?!Oh lord.I gotta go this is embaressing as it it is!Okay well my clothes are in that small pile near the door.I'll just put on my clothes and leave him a note on the the bed next to him.
[Normal P.O.V.
Josie had her clothes on and she found a small little notepad on the counter.She wrote the note.The note said "Bill,I don't really remember what happened last night but I do have a clue of what happened.Well anyways I think that it's best that we don't talk to each other and pretend that this never happened.I'm probably just another girl that you sleep with.If you wanna call me because you wanna walk about this situation then reach me at my cell...I put the number in your phone already it's under "Josie" okay so bye Bill..."Josie quietly left the note on the pillow she once laid in.And with that she quietly left the hotel room...
to be continued
It gets better in the next chappie!
So comment tell me what you think....
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Wanna be a character in this stroy then just tell me everything about the character and what it looks like!=D
Well hope you guys like....
Comment tell me what you think
Danke
DeeDee
May 9th, 2008, 01:21 PM
oh gosh whats gonna happen now and by the way i love it hunnij
i would love to be part in it if you don't mind , you could choose anyone you like
im very tall dark brown short hair , big brown eyes , now thin not fat just a bit of curves , loves wearing black clothes and stuff you can add anything to my character hun if you gonna put me in it :D
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Izzylicous
May 10th, 2008, 12:08 PM
Here you go
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Reminder:
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Thinking in German
Okay well here is
CH.3
Josie's P.O.V.
It's been 2 months since I've seen Bill.He didn't call back and I'm kind of glad that he didn't because things would just be awkward.I have his number but I don't want to call him back.My high school graduation was 1 month ago and I'm proud to say that I'm a high school graduate.HAHA!I wont be seeing any of those little *****es any more!Anyways...I still haven't moved out of my mom's place.We live in a nice apartment since she makes pretty good money.But I'm planning on moving out soon maybe I'll move in with Bri.I don't know.I'm not one of those people who plan out what their life is going to be like.Then what's the whole point of life knowing what's gunna happen the next day?What's the whole point of life with out risks?But yeah I don't really know.HOLY ****!I have to puke.....
God I've been puking for the last two hours!What the **** is wrong with me!I'm not going bulimic!There's no way.I probably just have a stomach virus that's all.I should probably call up Bri to tell her to bring me some medicine.
"Hey Bri yeah it's Josie.Can you come over and bring me some soup and stomach medicine?"I asked.
"Why don't you ask your mom?"Bri said on the other side of the phone."Mom's at work"I replied."Okay fine I'll be there in a few"she said.
Normal P.O.V.
Bill looked at his phone...He wanted to call Josie but he didn't know what he was going to say to her.He can't just say "Oh hey what's up Josie it's Bill.That rock star you slept with.So how's life?"He couldn't say that."Bro if you want to talk to her just call her!"Tom said."I can't it'll be too weird."Bill replied.What exactly did you guys DO?!?"Georg asked."Well I kinda slept with her or she slept with me.I don't know which way it goes!"Bill said confused."Awwww my little brother is in LOVE!"Tom said in a sing-song voice."Don't worry Bill she'll end up calling sooner or later"Gustav said reassuringly.
"I hope so..."
[[WITH JOSIE]]
"Hey Josie I'm here"Bri said knocking on the door."Ugh I'm coming"Josie replied.She opened the door.Bri had a container of soup and some medicines."Dude you look like **** are you okay?"Bri asked."Yeah of course I'm okay despite the fact that I've been barfing my brains out all morning"Josie said sarcastically."Come on in"Josie said.
[[Josie's P.O.V.]]
"Okay well here you go"Bri said handing me a bag with soup,stomach medicines,and a....PREGNANCY TEST!?"What the **** is this?"I said holding the box that containing a pregnancy test."It's a pregnancy test.I mean you could be pregnant!"Bri replied coolly."Ummm...yeah I'm still a..virgin..."my voice got lower."You did it with him that night you stood in his hotel room didn't you?!"Bri said with a little bit of laughter in her voice.Of course I "did it" with him!This is not a laughing matter!"This is sooo not funny!"I yelled on the verge of tears."Aw I'm sorry"Bri gave her best friend a hug."It's not for sure that you're pregnant.Have some soup and then take some of that medicine.If the medicine doesn't work really good you're going to have to take that pregnancy test"Bri said.
"Okay..."I said a little bit relieved.
"BRI THIS MEDICINE ISN'T WORKING FOR ****!"I yelled.My head was hovering over the toilet as I barfed.[[gross i know]]"Okay well you need to take the test then!"Bri said rubbing my back."I don't wanna"I said childishly.The puking had JUST stopped."You have to"Br replied."Okay...Get me the test then"I replied glumly."Okay"Bri ran down stairs.Yes my moms apartment is two stories.Bri took a few minutes.Those few minutes were agonizing I just wanted to find out if I was preggars or not."Found it!" Bri yelled.I could hear her foot steps getting closer.Bri ripped open the box and handed it to me.Bri stepped outside of the bathroom and closed the door.And finally I peed on the test.
I just sat there on top of the toilet.Yes my pants were on I was sitting on the cap.I looked at the pregnancy and there it was...Those two little lines on both of the little screen which meant that I was pregnant...I didn't know what to do.I just slid to the floor and began to sob.I've never cried like this.I wasn't ready to be a mom.No one is ready to be a mom at 18.I still have a life to live.How am I going to tell my parents?...How am I going to tell Bill?
Is God out to get me or something?"Bri opened the door."What happened what are the results?"Bri said anxiously."I'M PREGNANT!"I yelled sobbing."Oh my lord!"Bri knelt down beside me."Why don't you get an abortion?""I can't do that Bri!Abortion is murder!"I sobbed."Okay well the first thing you need to do is tell...Bill..."
"I know I think that I should get him on the phone..."
[[Normal P.O.V.]]
Bill's phone began to ring.To me you'll be forever Sacred... that was Josie's ring tone.
"Hello..."Bill answered a little shock.His fellow band members were staring at him."Put her on speaker"Tom mouthed giving him a thumbs up.Bill put her on speaker."Bill I need to talk to you"Josie croaked."Yeah sure.Is there anything wrong?"he asked.
"Bill I'm pregnant..."
To be continued...Well hoped you liked it!=D I'll update soon...I still haven't had any "Brain Blasts" for To Win Her Love but don't worry I'll update....And I'll update soon on this one!
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DeeDee
May 10th, 2008, 02:15 PM
oqqowww im curious hun
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Izzylicous
May 10th, 2008, 03:41 PM
Drama!!!!!!
Here is CH.4
"Y-y-ou're what?"Bill asked shocked.OH MEIN GOTT!I'M GOING TO BE AN UNCLE!"Tom yelled happily."TOM YOU ARE NOT HELPING!"Bill screamed."Are you sure?Is it mine?"Bill asked."I'm sure I just took one of those home pregnancy test because I was feeling like **** today you know barfing and stuff...And the test was positive..But I need to go to the doctor to find out if it's 100% true...And yes it is yours because you're the ONLY guy I've ever slept with."Bill's eyes were wide.He was in shock."Bill are you okay?"Gustav asked waving is hand in front of Bill's face.Yeah I'm fine Gustav..."Josie took a deep breath"Sooo...Are you going to be there for the baby or not because I am not getting an abortion...Because abortion is murder...."Josie said."Okay ummm...I'll catch a plane to New York...I'll probably be there in two days..."
"Okay then bye Bill...""Bye Josie..."and they both hung up...
"What are you going to do?"Tom asked.I don not know...But I will take care of my child But the hard thing is getting away from publicity.."Bill said.
"MmmHmmm"The wrest of the band members said in unison while nodding their heads.And then all of them began to pack their bags because they were going to leave for America soon...
[[Josie's P.O.V.]]
Well Bri is in my room right now...My mom is finally home and I sat her on the couch co I could tell her the news."What is it?"My mom asked,her voice was stern."Well....How can I say this mom...Well...I'm pregnant..."I said looking at my feet."Oh my god...Are you serious?"My mom,Tanya asked."Yes I am..."I replied."Who's the father?""Well mom...He's actually the lead singer of a really famous band names Tokio Hotel....His name is Bill Kaulitz"I said."Oh okay well...You need to take care of this baby...Because I know that you're probably not going to get an abortion...But I am extremely upset at how IRRISPONSIBLE you were and not use protection!But you are eighteen now and you're going to have to make your own decisions...Why couldn't you be more like your older sister Lisa?"Mom said.I hate when my parents compared me...They didn't see it but it really did hurt me.Me and my sister never really had a sister relationship.We never really talked.She was brain washed by my mother and every time I did something bad she would just call my dad.Even if it was spilling over a glass of milk or something.So I never spoke to her.I never really did like her.I know it sounds harsh but I only saw her as a sister biologically..."YEAH WHY CAN'T I BE MORE LIKE MY SISTER!BECAUSE SHE'S PERFECT YOU JUST LOVE HER!"I yelled
Second part coming up soon
COmment
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kArLa2tH
May 10th, 2008, 04:00 PM
this is really interesting
please continue =)
DeeDee
May 10th, 2008, 05:04 PM
oh gosh bill you seem shocked
and gowdd her mum pleasee dey're always comparing
mehr bitte hun
Tokio_Hotel_Luv3r
May 10th, 2008, 05:49 PM
why aren't you continuing?! i love it!
Izzylicous
May 10th, 2008, 06:19 PM
Sorry I had 2 get off the computer...so here is
CH.4-Part 2
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"It's not that I love her better it's just that you need to make better decisions!"my mom yelled."Cut the crap mom I'm not that stupid!Why couldn't you just give me up for adoption or something...But really Karin isn't that better than me...Now at 28 she decides to go to college!""At least she tries!""And I don't!Mom you've been ruining my life ever since you and dad broke up when I was six!You wanted me to get used to Javier as the Replacement but you know what he will NEVER be my dad!And you brain washed my sister and you even tried brain washing me!""You are so selfish!"I hate it when she calls me the selfish one.Every time I try to tell her how I feel she always says that I'm the selfish one.I remember when I was eleven and I finally told her that I hated my step dad guess what she said....I'm the selfish one."Mom I'm always the selfish one!I'm always the meanest one!I'm always the different one!And I'm always the weirdest one!I get it!You know what I need to move out already.Remember when I was younger and I always said that I couldn't wait to move out of this house!Well I said that because I wanted to be away from you!Always comparing me always wanting me to be something that I'm not.You always made me feel horrible about myself when I was younger!AND I'M ****ING SICK OF IT!"With that said I ran up to my room crying...Bri was in my room mortified."I think it's time for you to go Bri I need to be alone"I said shaking.Bri quickly nodded waved and then left my room.Why does this always happen to me.But I told my mom...I could only imagine how my dad's goin' to act.My dad always had high expectations for me.He always wanted me to get straight A's always wanted me to be at the top of the class.Yeah it was like that until high school.I couldn't take the pressure anymore and I kind of began to flunk.The teachers expected me to do better also.But my dad got remarried to a woman named Angelique.Angelique had two oh so perfect daughters one who was named Lilly and was two years older than me and another one who was named Marissa and was four years older than me.My dad wanted me to be like them.I felt like he cared about them more than he cared for me.I felt like an outsider every time I went to his house.They were so flawless and I was the opposite.I felt like a nobody.Every time I would annoy Lilly she would always black mail me but Marissa was the nice one.I always felt like my dad found something much better than me and my sister.He found a new family....I'm so tired I think that I should take a nap.....
CHapter comin soon!Comment though
Hope you guys liked it
thanx
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DeeDee
May 10th, 2008, 06:38 PM
aww poor girl
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Izzylicous
May 10th, 2008, 07:01 PM
Reminder:
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English thought
Speaking German
German thought
Speaking Spanish
Okay I can speak Spanish but I don't feel like writing in Spanish so here....
Enjoy!
Ch.5
I woke up and I heard my mom and my step dad down stairs.They're probably having dinner.I should go eat.I got up out of my bed and began to walk down stairs.I got to the dinner table."Look how ugly she is!"My step dad said laughing his discusting laugh.I forgot to mention I'm Spanish from Spain and my mom met some Cuban guy,Alex and now she's married to him and he's my step dad unfortunately.He's a dick.He's occasionally nice but most of the time he's rude.I picked up some food and took it to my room.As I was eating my phone began to ring....It was Bill.I picked it up.
"Hey Bill"I said quietly."I was wondering if we could talk.Like you know just get to know each other better and stuff"Bill said,his voice had a hint of shyness."Yeah of course.So what's up holmes?"I asked.I was kind of relieved that were talking as if I never got pregnant or anything."Nothing much.Me and the guys are just hanging out.We already finished packing and we should probably be there by Friday.You?"Bill said."Just got into this HUGE fight with my mom and my step dad is being a gay fag as usual...My mom freaked out when I told her the news about our kid"I replied."Am I to going to have to meet your mother right away?"Bill asked a little scared."Not right away but you're eventually going to have to meet her"I chuckled a little bit."And you're probably going to have to meet my dad too...But I haven't told him yet.""It's okay but I need to tell you something...I really did have feelings for you and I want to maybe start a relationship with you...Maybe even marriage"Bill said."Well I did too but marriage is taking it too fast"I answered."Well we can start off as maybe girlfriend and boyfriend but I think that it would be better if we get married before the baby is born...It's your decision"Bill said."I think that we should start off slowly and maybe it would be best if we get married before the baby is born but it's better if we take things one step at a time maybe as boyfriend and girlfriend"I smiled at the thought of me being Bill's girlfriend."Well I got to go"Bill said."I love you."I was completely shocked at what he just said.But it made me feel good."I love you too..."We both hung up.I looked at the time.It was around 10:00PM and I should get to bed.So I drifted off into sleep with a smile on my face...
I thought that the ending was cute and mushy
XPP
anyways Comment
Gracias!
kArLa2tH
May 10th, 2008, 08:29 PM
awww
plase more
amandaaraujo
May 10th, 2008, 11:58 PM
aaaaawwwwwwwww oh and just to let you know this storrryyy rrrrooocckkkssss awesomeness oh and can i ask id like to be in your story,
Name:Amanda
Age:17
Personality: nice, funny, understanding, and romantic at times :)
Im a 5'3 wiegh 98 IBs and can i ask to be a nice person in your story and hook up with a TH member (oerfered TOM) but what ever you think is best your the writer so your desicion keep writting because i lovve this story especially if babies are involved :D
DeeDee
May 11th, 2008, 01:02 PM
awwww dats adorable
more hhun
Izzylicous
May 26th, 2008, 10:46 AM
Time to fess up...A lot of the things that r happening in the story(U know Jossie and her mom and her sis and her dad and stuff) well thats kind of like my life..Accept I get along with my dad and I'm 2 scared 2 tell him how i really feel bcuz of my mom.....BUT IM NOT PREGNANT XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
But I thought that u guys should know that...But if u haven't read "The Best News Ever" topic on the General section well its about my step mom moving out of my dad's house!
:D
Well I'll update probably now
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ChOcoLaTe_CuP_CaKe
May 26th, 2008, 11:48 AM
aww think of how cute german spanish babies r gona be <333
anyhoo ... i really like this story, it's very ... different ... and funni!
keep going ma <3
hey if you need new chararters, can i be 1
Name: Imani
Age: im 16 but if ya want u can make me older ...
Personality : crazy, hyper, funni, im always the one to cheer you up when your down, and have you back!
Style: i'm black, with dreads some of them blue! (AND YES I HAVE BLUE DREADS CAUSE IM MADD GANGSTER PIMPISH LIKE THAT YO) erm anyhoo, and erm kind of punk i guess,
well if ya need a chrarater ... its their ... if not ... ah well your story will still rock!
cant wait for a next chap.
Izzylicous
May 26th, 2008, 09:32 PM
Ch.6
JOSIE P.O.V.
Well here I am.Waiting for Bill and his fellow band mates.I don't now why but I have this nervous feeling in my stomach.I shouldn't be nervous he is my "boyfriend"....I think....I don't know.HUH?Why did my vision just go black?"Guess who" a familiar voice whispered in my ear...It was Bill and he was covering my eyes with his hands."Ummm...Micheal Jackson.."I said jokingly to see what he would say.He took his hands off of my eyes and then stood in front of me and began to pout."No it's me Bill.""I was just kidding"I got up and I playfully punched him in the arm.He caught me off guard he leaned his face close to mine and I knew what he was going to do so I leaned my face
closer but then I leaned to close and our foreheads smacked.OUCH!"Oh my God I'm so sorry Bill!"I apologized."It's okay really.It was actually funny"and he began to laugh and I joined in with him."Come on love birds let's get going!"Bri shouted and she was next to Tom,Georg,and Gustav and they all were giggling.Bill grabbed my hand -which made me blush by the way- and we walked off.
In The Car NORMAL P.O.V.
While in the car Josie drifted off into sleep.And she began to dream.
Six year old Josie heard her parents fighting again.She heard screaming and crying.She began to walk downstairs,with each step she took her heart began to beat faster.Until she finally reached her destination and there she saw her dad yelling banging on the door and her sister was behind him banging on his back screaming and crying.This sight scared Josie so much.She heard feminine screaming come from behind the door and it said "I'm going to call the police!!!"It was her mom.She heard her parents fighting yesterday talking about how her mom went on a trip with her sister and cheated on her dad.She ran up to her room and began to cry.
She walked downstairs again and saw a police man sitting on the couch with her dad,her sister,and her mom.Her mom walked up to her and her eyes were red and puffy she could tell that her mother was crying."Go pack up some of your things"she said quietly."Where are we going?"Josie asked."I said go!"She said pointing in the direction of the stairs.She obeyed.When she came back down her sister had somethings packed and her mom had her car keys in hand and she wore big dark sunglasses on her eyes.Her father began to walk toward her.He looked down at her and a tear rolled down his cheek."Goodbye baby"he said to her as he bent down kiss her on the cheek."Bye daddy"she said.Then she walked out the door with her mom and sister and got in the car.She looked back to see her dad waving at her and he began to fade away as her mom drove further.(This dream right here it actually happened to me in real life.It was really hard for me to right this because I almost cried :''''()
"Wake up Josie!"Bill said shaking her."Huh?""You were cying and you were like mumbling some weird things"he said with his cute German accent."Oh sorry guess I had a bad dream"Josie said.The car stopped in front of Josie's apartment building and they got out of the car.I wonder what my mom is going to say about the boys staying at my house?Josie asked herself.
Well here is chapter 6!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Well hope you enjoy
If you haven't check out these fanfics....
To Win her Love
Trapped
&
The Runaway
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Danke ;)
Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S
May 26th, 2008, 10:17 PM
how sad!!! im sorry that that had to happen to you! I really cant wait for more...please update soon!
TH<3
May 26th, 2008, 10:51 PM
such a good story! yur a great writer! more please :D
amandaaraujo
May 26th, 2008, 11:01 PM
omg that is so sad im sorry... well you can feel better that, that is in the past and to let it go is good once in a while well i love this story so dont ever stop kay:)
DeeDee
May 27th, 2008, 01:56 PM
i bet her mum's gonna be a pain
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TH<3
June 27th, 2008, 08:35 PM
dude did this story die? haha
Izzylicous
July 7th, 2008, 11:22 PM
im going 2 try my best 2 update its just that my internet goes out sometimes and its hard >.<....and i need ideas....if u wanna help AIM meat Izzylicous12....or u can yahoo me at izzyTRAGEDY....i will try my best...oh and my step sis hogs the comp >.<....oh and did i mention that my dad and step mom arent getting divorced anymore....
Izzylicous
July 7th, 2008, 11:23 PM
lets say i have a chapter written down but i have no internet...u can AIM me or yahoo me and ill just post it 4 u and u can post it on here :]
Izzylicous
July 7th, 2008, 11:32 PM
thank you guys sooo much 4 reading and tell me if u guys have fanfics that u want me 2 read and comment :]
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