berthaxoxo
May 16th, 2008, 09:34 PM
Ok so I tried to do a fanfic please read it and tell me your opinion!! I'm not sure about this fanfic!! But please be honest!!
Catherine’s POV
Today I was seeing the place where I grew up
Just vanished
It was 5:00 am and the sun was starting to appear
I could see that thanks to the airplane window
I was just thinking about my friends, school and all the things that I left just so I could move to Germany
I was flying alone because I was going to start leaving with my dad
I lived all my life with my brother and mom and now I decided that I needed a break from my mom (because of all the fights) so this was the best thing I could do
Even though I decided to move there I was sad because who could assure me that I was going to find great friends like I had in Margarita and I didn’t know German so I was screwed.
I started to feel sleepy so I decided to sleep, I hoped that I could sleep some hours so I wouldn’t frustrate that much because the flight last 17 hours or something like that.
15 minutes ago
So I woke up thinking that I had slept hours and hours then I saw my clock and I just slept 15 minutes, I was getting mad, so I decided to listen to mi Ipod, every song reminded me of my friends of the songs we started to dance and sing to the whole class and stuff like that.
The whole flight I listened to my Ipod, slept, and ate oh yeah and get like really bored.
So after 17 hours the flight was over I was really tired and wanted to just go to bed.
When I got off the plane I went to look for my baggage luckily my baggage was already there so I grab it and started walking I didn’t know where to go and I didn’t know German so I was screwed.
I started to walk and walk, the closer I was getting to the exit door I saw that there were a lot of people most of them were girls screaming Ich liebe Bill, Tom, Georg and Gustav then I saw this four guys I imagine that they were the guys the girls were screaming for.
When I started to walk my Ipod fell so I try to grabbed it but someone already did when I LEVANTE my head I saw this guy with black hair and blonde highlights, he had black and white painted nails and brown eyes at first I thought it was a girl but I heard a girl screaming and touching his arm saying Ich liebe Bill then I knew it was a boy I grabbed my Ipod and when I was going to thanked him he started talking to me in German so I told him sorry I don’t know German oh and by the way Thanks or should I say Danke he just said you welcome and smiled at me I was kind of melting he had a charming smile.
Bill’s POV
Gosh it’s always the same we can’t walk with no screaming girls around us said Tom
Yeah well that’s the price you pay for fame said Georg
Well relaxed they are the ones that gave us fame so we got to treat them well and our fans are cool people I said
Yeah whatever said Tom
So we started walking we were getting closer to the exit door when I saw this girl, she was alone carrying three bags she had brown hair and brown eyes, I saw she was walking when suddenly she stopped and I was close enough so I could saw that her Ipod fell to the floor so I grabbed it and I saw that she was listening to Keane so I told her that she had good taste of music but she put a face of like what are you saying so she immediately answer me saying “sorry I don’t know German oh and by the way Thanks or should I say Danke“ so I just replied here with a you welcome and gave her a smile.
Then I just realized Tom was coming to were I was
Hey hurry up; I want to get home before its midnight said Tom
Yeah I’m going I said
Then Tom started looking to the girl
He immediately told me Dude she’s Hot what’s her name?
I don’t know I said
So what are you waiting for to ask her? Tom said
I was going to but you didn’t let me I said
So I looked to the girl
And asked her hey my name is Bill and his is Tom what’s your name?
Nice to meet you mine is Catherine she said
So did you come for vacation?
No I’m going to start leaving here but I’m kind of screwed because I don’t know German she said
Umm that’s cool well you’ll have to start to learn it
Yeah… she said
Hey do you want to come with us to our place and eat something? I asked her
Um I would like to, but my dad is waiting for me outside and I got all this bags but thanks she said
Well too bad
Yeah well I think I can leave all the bags in the car and tell him that I’m going to your house
Yeah cool I’ll wait for you in the car I said
Ok cool
Tom’s POV
I was walking to the car when I realized that Bill was still in the airport talking with some girl so I went were they were and I realized that my brother was talking to the a hot girl and he didn’t told me anything I was mad so I told him that we got to hurry up he just told me Im going, so I asked him what was the girls name and my dome brother hadn’t ask her name
So he started talking to her in English like I don’t know that much I prefer stay quite, then bill asked her if she wanted to come to our place I had to admit it that was a good move.
Catherine’s POV
So when I was stopping the song that I was listening to a guy was coming to were I was he had kind of brown and blonde hair, he actually had dreadlocks, and brown eyes It was kind of obvious that they were twins, they were both cutes but so different.
So they started talking in German so obviously I didn’t understand a thing
Then he introduce me his brother and himself, we started talking and he asked me to go to his place I really wanted to go but my dad was waiting for me and I had all these bags so I had to refuse he kind of put me a sad face so I tried to find a way to go and finally an idea came to me so I told him
Well I think I can leave all the bags in the car and tell him that I’m going to your house
Yeah cool I’ll wait for you in the car He said
Ok cool I said
I said Hi to my dad I put the bags in the car I told him that I was going to a friends house for some hours and then I was going to the house so he left me go and gave me the address and a cell phone so he could call me I said bye and hugged him
So I started walking towards Bill’s car, the door suddenly open and there was Bill smiling at me, I got in and he introduce me to Georg and Gustav
Hi nice to meet you said Georg and Gustav
Nice to meet you too
We all started talking and talking they were all awesome guys
So why did you move here? Tom asked me
I wanted to spend more time with my dad and I was kind of having lots of fights with my mom and I didn’t wanted that to get worst
Oh ok cool so welcome to Germany They all said
Thanks haha
Phone ringing * En una noche de luna llena conocí a una sirena y siento que me dijo Tiqui Tiqui*
They all looked at me with a face of what is that song saying?
I picked up my cell phone this one had like a month and I bought it in Margarita
Hi I said
Hi how are you? My friend said
I’m good you?
I’m great, I can’t believe that you are not living here
Yeah I know it’s sad but well I kinda needed a change I said
Yeah well we all miss you, so what are you doing?
Um well I’m with some friends I’m going to their house
What you never told me that you had friends there? She said
Um well actually I just met them
What? You just met them and you’re going to their place
Well they are cool people and cute too
Well now that you say that I understand lol, hey could you take them a picture so I can see if they’re cute?
No I just met them they’re going to think I’m a freak or something
Ok ok but I want a picture
Ok go to your computer and look for your Th folder
Huh? Why would I do that?
You are so dome, don’t you understand they are Tokio Hotel
What????????????? Oh My Tokio Hotel You know them ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh and why you didn’t told me before that you were with them
Haha because I didn’t thought it was something important to mention
What? Are you crazy they’re most important than you
Hey stupid I got to hang-up bye talk to you later
Yeah I hate you
Haha bye
Bye she said
So they all started to look at me and Bill asked me
That wasn’t English right?
Yeah were I lived everyone speaks Spanish so that’s why I was speaking Spanish with my friend
Oh ok cool so I guess that ring tone is a Spanish song right?
Yeah it is
Cool can I ask you a question?
Yeah I said
Did you said tokio hotel?
Yeah I know you guys are Tokio Hotel
So why didn’t you started screaming like the other girls do? Tom asked me
Um because I’m not like the other fans
Well that’s cool that you’re not like them, because it would be really annoying if you were screaming all the time he said
Yeah haha
It’s here Georg said to the driver
So the driver stopped the car and started getting off the car
The house was ok it was very masculine but that’s obvious because 4 boys live here
Bill took my hand and showed me the whole house, we stopped in front of a door it was his room, when he opened the door I could see that it was really clean actually it was all organized there were some posters of his favorite bands and lots of black and red stuff, so we started watching TV we were lying down on the bed, there were some guys on the tv talking and talking and it seemed like Bill was having fun, I didn’t understand a thing what they were saying but Bill kept laughing I was just looking at his beautiful smile I was totally melting so he started talk to me
So what do you like to do?
Well sing, play guitar and listen to music and talk and shop yeah I guess that’s pretty much it you?
The same things except play guitar because I don’t know how to play it
Yeah you let Tom do that
Yeah haha
And are you in school? He asked
Yeah this is going to be my last year I was waiting this for all my life
Why it gives me the impression that you don’t like school?
Haha yeah well it’s really boring and all those stupid teachers and the ugly uniforms, the only thing I like about school is that I see my friends
When I attend school I hate it too, the most I hated was my teachers they were so annoying
Hey are you hungry? He asked me
Um a little bit
Ok lets go to the kitchen
When we got there Tom, Georg and Gustav were eating and just talking
Bill’s POV
We arrived at my house and I took her hand and showed her around then we finally were in front of my room door we enter and we started watching TV I guess she wasn't understanding a thing because the only thing she was doing it was looking at me I was just laughing then we started to talk, I just felt so good with her I actually know it was too hurry to invite her to my house but I don't know there was something about her that just kept me wanting and wanting more from her.
Ok so please honesty!!
Catherine’s POV
Today I was seeing the place where I grew up
Just vanished
It was 5:00 am and the sun was starting to appear
I could see that thanks to the airplane window
I was just thinking about my friends, school and all the things that I left just so I could move to Germany
I was flying alone because I was going to start leaving with my dad
I lived all my life with my brother and mom and now I decided that I needed a break from my mom (because of all the fights) so this was the best thing I could do
Even though I decided to move there I was sad because who could assure me that I was going to find great friends like I had in Margarita and I didn’t know German so I was screwed.
I started to feel sleepy so I decided to sleep, I hoped that I could sleep some hours so I wouldn’t frustrate that much because the flight last 17 hours or something like that.
15 minutes ago
So I woke up thinking that I had slept hours and hours then I saw my clock and I just slept 15 minutes, I was getting mad, so I decided to listen to mi Ipod, every song reminded me of my friends of the songs we started to dance and sing to the whole class and stuff like that.
The whole flight I listened to my Ipod, slept, and ate oh yeah and get like really bored.
So after 17 hours the flight was over I was really tired and wanted to just go to bed.
When I got off the plane I went to look for my baggage luckily my baggage was already there so I grab it and started walking I didn’t know where to go and I didn’t know German so I was screwed.
I started to walk and walk, the closer I was getting to the exit door I saw that there were a lot of people most of them were girls screaming Ich liebe Bill, Tom, Georg and Gustav then I saw this four guys I imagine that they were the guys the girls were screaming for.
When I started to walk my Ipod fell so I try to grabbed it but someone already did when I LEVANTE my head I saw this guy with black hair and blonde highlights, he had black and white painted nails and brown eyes at first I thought it was a girl but I heard a girl screaming and touching his arm saying Ich liebe Bill then I knew it was a boy I grabbed my Ipod and when I was going to thanked him he started talking to me in German so I told him sorry I don’t know German oh and by the way Thanks or should I say Danke he just said you welcome and smiled at me I was kind of melting he had a charming smile.
Bill’s POV
Gosh it’s always the same we can’t walk with no screaming girls around us said Tom
Yeah well that’s the price you pay for fame said Georg
Well relaxed they are the ones that gave us fame so we got to treat them well and our fans are cool people I said
Yeah whatever said Tom
So we started walking we were getting closer to the exit door when I saw this girl, she was alone carrying three bags she had brown hair and brown eyes, I saw she was walking when suddenly she stopped and I was close enough so I could saw that her Ipod fell to the floor so I grabbed it and I saw that she was listening to Keane so I told her that she had good taste of music but she put a face of like what are you saying so she immediately answer me saying “sorry I don’t know German oh and by the way Thanks or should I say Danke“ so I just replied here with a you welcome and gave her a smile.
Then I just realized Tom was coming to were I was
Hey hurry up; I want to get home before its midnight said Tom
Yeah I’m going I said
Then Tom started looking to the girl
He immediately told me Dude she’s Hot what’s her name?
I don’t know I said
So what are you waiting for to ask her? Tom said
I was going to but you didn’t let me I said
So I looked to the girl
And asked her hey my name is Bill and his is Tom what’s your name?
Nice to meet you mine is Catherine she said
So did you come for vacation?
No I’m going to start leaving here but I’m kind of screwed because I don’t know German she said
Umm that’s cool well you’ll have to start to learn it
Yeah… she said
Hey do you want to come with us to our place and eat something? I asked her
Um I would like to, but my dad is waiting for me outside and I got all this bags but thanks she said
Well too bad
Yeah well I think I can leave all the bags in the car and tell him that I’m going to your house
Yeah cool I’ll wait for you in the car I said
Ok cool
Tom’s POV
I was walking to the car when I realized that Bill was still in the airport talking with some girl so I went were they were and I realized that my brother was talking to the a hot girl and he didn’t told me anything I was mad so I told him that we got to hurry up he just told me Im going, so I asked him what was the girls name and my dome brother hadn’t ask her name
So he started talking to her in English like I don’t know that much I prefer stay quite, then bill asked her if she wanted to come to our place I had to admit it that was a good move.
Catherine’s POV
So when I was stopping the song that I was listening to a guy was coming to were I was he had kind of brown and blonde hair, he actually had dreadlocks, and brown eyes It was kind of obvious that they were twins, they were both cutes but so different.
So they started talking in German so obviously I didn’t understand a thing
Then he introduce me his brother and himself, we started talking and he asked me to go to his place I really wanted to go but my dad was waiting for me and I had all these bags so I had to refuse he kind of put me a sad face so I tried to find a way to go and finally an idea came to me so I told him
Well I think I can leave all the bags in the car and tell him that I’m going to your house
Yeah cool I’ll wait for you in the car He said
Ok cool I said
I said Hi to my dad I put the bags in the car I told him that I was going to a friends house for some hours and then I was going to the house so he left me go and gave me the address and a cell phone so he could call me I said bye and hugged him
So I started walking towards Bill’s car, the door suddenly open and there was Bill smiling at me, I got in and he introduce me to Georg and Gustav
Hi nice to meet you said Georg and Gustav
Nice to meet you too
We all started talking and talking they were all awesome guys
So why did you move here? Tom asked me
I wanted to spend more time with my dad and I was kind of having lots of fights with my mom and I didn’t wanted that to get worst
Oh ok cool so welcome to Germany They all said
Thanks haha
Phone ringing * En una noche de luna llena conocí a una sirena y siento que me dijo Tiqui Tiqui*
They all looked at me with a face of what is that song saying?
I picked up my cell phone this one had like a month and I bought it in Margarita
Hi I said
Hi how are you? My friend said
I’m good you?
I’m great, I can’t believe that you are not living here
Yeah I know it’s sad but well I kinda needed a change I said
Yeah well we all miss you, so what are you doing?
Um well I’m with some friends I’m going to their house
What you never told me that you had friends there? She said
Um well actually I just met them
What? You just met them and you’re going to their place
Well they are cool people and cute too
Well now that you say that I understand lol, hey could you take them a picture so I can see if they’re cute?
No I just met them they’re going to think I’m a freak or something
Ok ok but I want a picture
Ok go to your computer and look for your Th folder
Huh? Why would I do that?
You are so dome, don’t you understand they are Tokio Hotel
What????????????? Oh My Tokio Hotel You know them ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh and why you didn’t told me before that you were with them
Haha because I didn’t thought it was something important to mention
What? Are you crazy they’re most important than you
Hey stupid I got to hang-up bye talk to you later
Yeah I hate you
Haha bye
Bye she said
So they all started to look at me and Bill asked me
That wasn’t English right?
Yeah were I lived everyone speaks Spanish so that’s why I was speaking Spanish with my friend
Oh ok cool so I guess that ring tone is a Spanish song right?
Yeah it is
Cool can I ask you a question?
Yeah I said
Did you said tokio hotel?
Yeah I know you guys are Tokio Hotel
So why didn’t you started screaming like the other girls do? Tom asked me
Um because I’m not like the other fans
Well that’s cool that you’re not like them, because it would be really annoying if you were screaming all the time he said
Yeah haha
It’s here Georg said to the driver
So the driver stopped the car and started getting off the car
The house was ok it was very masculine but that’s obvious because 4 boys live here
Bill took my hand and showed me the whole house, we stopped in front of a door it was his room, when he opened the door I could see that it was really clean actually it was all organized there were some posters of his favorite bands and lots of black and red stuff, so we started watching TV we were lying down on the bed, there were some guys on the tv talking and talking and it seemed like Bill was having fun, I didn’t understand a thing what they were saying but Bill kept laughing I was just looking at his beautiful smile I was totally melting so he started talk to me
So what do you like to do?
Well sing, play guitar and listen to music and talk and shop yeah I guess that’s pretty much it you?
The same things except play guitar because I don’t know how to play it
Yeah you let Tom do that
Yeah haha
And are you in school? He asked
Yeah this is going to be my last year I was waiting this for all my life
Why it gives me the impression that you don’t like school?
Haha yeah well it’s really boring and all those stupid teachers and the ugly uniforms, the only thing I like about school is that I see my friends
When I attend school I hate it too, the most I hated was my teachers they were so annoying
Hey are you hungry? He asked me
Um a little bit
Ok lets go to the kitchen
When we got there Tom, Georg and Gustav were eating and just talking
Bill’s POV
We arrived at my house and I took her hand and showed her around then we finally were in front of my room door we enter and we started watching TV I guess she wasn't understanding a thing because the only thing she was doing it was looking at me I was just laughing then we started to talk, I just felt so good with her I actually know it was too hurry to invite her to my house but I don't know there was something about her that just kept me wanting and wanting more from her.
Ok so please honesty!!