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PolkaDottedPenguin
May 19th, 2008, 05:33 PM
This is my first time writing a FanFic.
I don't think the title fits but it'll have to do for now..........
If you guys/girls have a better title for my story, feel free to share ^^
Please leave a comment =)
Btw, for my convenience, everyone in this story speaks English :)

Chapter 1


Light.
That's the first thing I saw when I woke up in the alley of somewhere.
Somewhere.
Where am I?
What am I doing here?
Who am I?
As I stood up to walk away from this alley, the back of my head throbbed.
It hurts a lot.
"Did I got hit in the head?" I wondered.
As I wandered through the unfamiliar street, I heard screaming in a distance.
All of a sudden, someone knocked me onto the ground.
Before I even have time to react, this person pulls me up and started pulling me along with him. (At least I think it's a him, I can't see this person under the sunglasses and the hat.)
He was pulling me along, running, fast.
I considered to stop or pull away, but if I stop, I will for sure fall again and he's too strong.
He stops suddenly, and pulls me into an alley.
He flatten against the wall and motion me to do the same.
Confused, I follow and flatten against the wall also.
After a while, a mob of screaming girls run past the alley.
He relaxed.
Scared, I pulled my wrist from his grip and stared at him with frightened eyes.
"Who are you?" I asked in a shaky voice.
"Don't worry, I won't hurt you." He said.
"Who are you?" I asked again.
"Ok, just don't scream or anything." As he speaks, he takes away his sunglasses and cap to reveal a European guy aged between 18-20 with jet black hair with white streaks in it. He has an eyebrow pierced too.
"Who are you?" I demand.
He stares at me with wide eyes.
"You don't know who I am?" He asked, amused.
"No, but I might use to know you."
"Use to?" He ask, skeptical.
"MmHm, anyway, who are you, for the thousand time."
"O, sorry. I'm Bill Kaulitz from Tokio Hotel."

That's the end of chapter 1.
I'm sorry this story goes so slow - -"
I'll see how the response is and release chapter 2 as soon as possible ^^
O, if anyone catches my grammar mistakes, which I'm sure there are quite a bit, can you post the mistake here or PM me. I would hate to have tons of grammar mistakes to make this story hard to read.
Thanx for reading ^^

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PolkaDottedPenguin
May 19th, 2008, 05:57 PM
Thanx x]
I think I might post the next chapter tomorrow ^^

kArLa2tH
May 19th, 2008, 06:35 PM
i like it
continue

amandaaraujo
May 19th, 2008, 07:35 PM
omg please write more

drummergirl24
May 19th, 2008, 09:27 PM
Keep going! Don't let what other people say hinder you from doing what you want. It is really good!

SammiiXliebe
May 19th, 2008, 10:51 PM
eek. I liked that. :]
lmao. I could just imagine Bill being like
"wtf. You don't know meh!?"

hehehe. :]
continue pleasee :] <3

PolkaDottedPenguin
May 20th, 2008, 05:42 PM
Thanx people, for ur support ^^
Here's chapter 2, hope u like it =)


Chapter 2

"Bill what from where?" I asked, confused.
"Bill KAULITZ, a German name, from TOKIO HOTEL, my band." Bill answered, slightly annoyed.
"O, you have a band? Are they famous?" I asked, curious.
"Urg..... Yes, I have a band and yes they are famous. Why do you think there were fan girls chasing me." Bill said, really annoyed now.
"O, sorry.......... Wait, did you say you're German?"
"Yes, is there a problem?"
"Ummmm........ I know it's a dumb question, but are we in Germany right now?"
"Uhhh...... Yes......." He looked at me like I'm crazy...........
"Anyway, what's your name?" He asked me.
"My name..........."
"What, you don't know your name?"
"I don't think so........." I said, starting to realize the truth.
"Ummmm...... Do you have a wallet or something, maybe you'll have an ID in there." Bill said, trying to be nice after seeing that panic look in my eyes.
"Ok." I say, as calmly as I could.
I reach into my pocket.
Nothing.
I try my other pocket.
Nothing.
I search every possible place that I could possibly hide my wallet, but nothing.
Nothing........
My eyes started tearing up, realizing how bad the situation is.
1) I'm stuck in Germany with no money.
2) I don't know who I am or how I got here.
3) I don't have anywhere to live.
4) I'll probably die in the streets.
After those thoughts, the tears started spilling out. Real fast.
Bill stared at me. Shocked.
"It's Ok." He said, trying to comfort me.
"No it's not," I wailed. "I have no money. I don't know who I am. I'm stuck in Germany. I'm going to die in the streets!" I cried.
"It's... It's alright, I will get you to the police station. We'll work something out, Ok?"
He was trying everything he can to comfort me, but still, I don't feel comforted.
"How can they help me if I don't know anything? Not even who I am. What if they put me to jail or something because they thought I was some kind of criminal or illegal immigrant?" I said, crying harder still.
"Ummmm........ It's Ok......... Do you have anywhere to go?"
"No." I cried.
"Uhhh...... You can come with me. Uh... To our studio." Bill said.
"Really!?" I said, feeling a ray of hope. Maybe he's not as bad as I thought.
"Yes, until you get your memory back or find your family, you can stay with us."
"Really!? Thanx!!!!" I scream, jumping with joy.
"But I'll feel bad for living in your studio and not doing anything......." I said, after I was done with the jumping.
"That's alright, we need a house keeper anyway. If you can keep our house clean and cook our meals, will you feel better about staying with us?"
"Yes! Thank you so much!!!" I was so happy i gave him a hug. " You saved my life! Now I don't have to starve in the streets and die in the cold!" I yelled.
Bill laughed. "Let's go and meet the rest of my band then ."

That's Chapter 2 for u ^^
Hope you liked it and stay until the story ends =)
I'll try and get chapter 3 on tomorrow xD

SammiiXliebe
May 20th, 2008, 05:54 PM
oh goodness. the poor girl. D:
Bill is so nice.xD

continueee <3

PolkaDottedPenguin
May 22nd, 2008, 12:01 AM
Sry, no time 2day, will post Chapter 3 tomorrow - -"

PolkaDottedPenguin
May 22nd, 2008, 05:25 PM
Sorry, 'bout the late release - -"
I had to do a science project and study for an algebra finals so I didn't have time to get on the computer.
Well, here's Chapter 3, hope you enjoy it =)

Bill hides behind me under his cap and sunglasses.
We even switch our jackets, just in case.
Once we got out of the alley, we got on a cab and went to their studio.
On the way there I asked him why are they staying at the studio.
He said, "O, we're off tour right now, so it's kind of like our rest/creation period. Since the studio has everything we need to create new songs, we stayed there."
"O."
"By the way, there's something you should know........" Bill said, hesitating.
"What is it?"
"Stay away from Tom."
"Huh?"
"Stay away from Tom, he's my twin brother, he's the one who wears clothes 10 sizes too big for him and has dreadlocks."
"You have a twin!?"
"Yes, identical twin. Just remember to not walk too close too him......."
"Why?"
"Just do as I say."
"Ok."
Not soon later, we arrived at the studio.
It's more like a condo though.
"WE GOT COMPANY!!!!" Bill shouted.
After a while, three guys started descending from the top of the stairs.
The first one has short blond hair, and the second one has longish brown hair and the last one has dreadlocks, Tom.
"Who's that?" They all ask.
"She will be staying with us until she regain her memory or when her family finds her." Bill announce.
"What?" They all ask, confused.
So Bill and I explained to them about the whole incident.
The guy with blond hair, extended his hand, "Welcome and please take care of us. I'm Gustav, the drummer, by the way. "
I took his hand and shook it, "Don't worry, Gustav, I'll make sure you guys get at least 3 meals a day =)"
"That's great, I'm getting tire of take-outs. I'm Georg the bassist." The guy with longish brown hair say and extended his hand too. So I shook it.
"Me too." Tom say.
"If Bill haven't told you yet, I'm his twin, Tom. I play the guitar."
I hesitated when I shook his hand, remembering what Bill said in the cab.
Tom raised his eyebrow but didn't say anything.
"What should we call you?" Gustav ask "You need a name."

I'm going to stop here, because I need some name suggestion for this girl - -"
Any ideas?


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PolkaDottedPenguin
May 27th, 2008, 05:31 PM
Sry 4 the l8 release, been kinda busy since graduation is coming, what with all the finals and all.......... - -"
I've decided on a name 4 the girl main character!!!
I've decided 2 name her Verlorie.
I just made it up since it's close 2 the German word for lost; verloren.
Well, here comes Chapter 4 and please comment ><


Chapter 4

By the majority vote of 3-1, they decided to name me Verlorie.
I don't really mind what they call me as long as I have a name...........
Bill made the name up for me.
He said the name Verlorie is close to the German word for lost, verloren.
Since I'm lost, he decided to name me that.

"Do you guys live here alone?" I ask.
"Well, we're now......... We used to live with our director and managers and the crew and all that, but we wanted some privacy and they think we deserve it after all the fan-chasing from the tour, so they left us alone to create more songs for the next album." Bill says, "They visit us at least once a week though, to check up on us."
"Do you guys mind me staying then?"
"No, of course not!" They all shouted.
"Really?"
"Yeah, you can stay as long as you want, or until your family finds you......." Gustav says.
The others nod in agreement.
"Thank you so much!!!" I yelled, jumping with joy, smiling from ear to ear.
"No problem." Georg says.
"Ya, we needed a girl around anyway." Tom says, and winked at me.
Bill elbowed him and whispers something in his ear.
"O, by the way, since I'm your housekeeping lady, I want you guys to write down your eating habits and stuff like when you wake up and all so I can get your breakfast before you wake up."
"Sounds good ^^" They all say.
So, that's the beginning of my housekeeper life with Tokio Hotel.

Sry I don't have time to write a longer chapter, but I might have more time after graduation, well, actually after summer school, but I'll keep the chapters coming at least once a week ^^

As usual, please comment and thx 4 reading =)



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PolkaDottedPenguin
May 29th, 2008, 05:26 PM
Chapter 5

I woke up at 6:00am this morning.
I need to beat Gustav to make the breakfast.
I heard that he always wake up first and cook for the rest of the band.
Since I'm their housekeeper now, I can't let him do that.
After I read what they wrote about themselves yesterday, I found out that they all like eggs, bacon, and pancake.
So, that's what I cooked today.
I have to be careful not to wake them up..............
When I was about done, Gustav came out with a big grin on his face.
"Cooking breakfast?" He asked.
"Yep :) Would you like orange juice, coffee, milk or tea?"
"I'll take the coffee, thank you."
"Ok."
"You don't know how much this means to me. I always have to take care of those guys, this is such a relieve. Thank you so much."
"No problem, that's why I'm here ^^"
While we were talking, the rest of the band got up.
"Something smells really good." Georg said.
"It's eggs, bacon and pancake." Bill said, really happy.
"Yum" Said Tom.
"Do you guys want any drinks to go with that?" I asked
"Orange juice" Bill
"Tea" Georg
"Orange juice" Tom
"Ok." Me =)
"Georg, your hair is a mess." Gustav said.
"Ya, I'll straighten it after breakfast, I'm starving."
"Can I straighten your hair? I would straighten my hair, but I don't need to." I said.
"Sure, less work for me =)" Georg replied.
So, after breakfast, I straighten Georg's hair.
It was so much fun, it's like having a sister xD
Except I have to be really careful not to burn him with the iron =/
I wanted to braid his hair or tie it up too, but he refuses.
So I turned to Bill.
He lets me do it but I have to take out the braids afterwards.
Bill looks so funny with braids, I can't help but laugh.
Tom, Gustav and Georg saw it and started laughing too.
It was so much fun.
After Bill, I turned to Tom and braided his dreadlocks too.
His dreadlocks feels so cool. I like his dreadlocks a lot, it's awesome.
I braided Tom's dreadlocks into two pigtails, he looks really funny too and all of us started laughing.
Georg said he was so glad he refused to let me braid his hair and Gustav said he was so glad he didn't have long hair.
After I did their hair, they have to start writing their songs and I have chores to do.
I have to vacuum, dust, do laundry and go out and buy grocery for dinner.
I've got a long day ahead of me, but I can tell the rest of days are going to be really fun.




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PolkaDottedPenguin
June 12th, 2008, 12:11 AM
Sry 4 the really, really l8 delay.
I have summer school and 2 summer jobs.........
If I have time, I would probably sleep away.........
Anyway, here's Chapter 6, enjoy ^^

Chapter 6

The boys told me that they would do their own laundry, which was a relieve to me (I wouldn't want to wash their boxers or what not..........- -") After I was done with the cleaning, I went out to get some grocery. You would be surprise how much 4 guys can actually eat............ Tom offered to go with me since I would probably get lost again. So we went and get some groceries.
"Hey Verlorie......" Tom said.
"Yes?"
"Do you really not remember anything?"
"Ya, it seems........."
"Do you know what happened? Like how did you lose your memory?"
"Well, I'm not sure, but I think I might have been hit on the head and got robbed............"
"O, I'm sorry........."
"O, no, it's alright I guess............. If I didn't lose my memory, I wouldn't have met you guys, right?"
"Ya, I guess you're right. If Bill didn't find you, we would still be eating take outs, not that I don't like it, but I like your cooking better........"
"Really?! Thanks ^^"
We finally arrived at the grocery store.
"It feels so good to go outside." Tom said.
"Do you not go outside often?" I asked.
"Of course not! Superstar here, remember?"
"Right."

Allow me to explain why nobody's staring at Tom............

1 hour ago..................

"I want to go get some groceries with Verlorie." Tom said.
"Ummmmm, do you not remember who you are? You are TOM of TOKIO HOTEL!!!!! Do you think people out there are blind?! They will definitely recognize you!" Bill screamed.
"But she'll definitely get lost again, she lost her memory!" Tom argued.
"True......... But what can we do?" Bill asked.
"I could disguise myself." Tom offered.
"How?"
"Could I borrow some of your clothes, Bill?"
"OMG!!!! Did I heard that right? YOU are going to wear MY clothes and not you little dress size shirts and elephant size pants?!"
"If I wear those clothes, people are definitely going to recognize me......... Let me borrow one of your cap too."

So that's how Tom ended up here at the grocery store wearing a cap over his head and Bill's clothes and sunglasses.
This disguise has worked so far, no one gave him a second glance...... He looked just like any young boys on the street.
We bought enough food for at least a week so we don't have to come out as much.
When I was in the store, I felt someone following us, but when I turned around, nobody's there.........
So I asked Tom, "Hey Tom, did you feel anybody following us?"
"No, but let's hope I'm right. Because it might be a paparazzi......."
"O, maybe it was just me.........."

Behind them, a shadow flitted behind the shelves as they crossed the aisle..............


Please comment!!!!
More to come l8r xD

PolkaDottedPenguin
June 13th, 2008, 06:02 PM
Chapter 7

I made dinner when we got home.
We're having lasagna tonight.
They all seemed to like it.
"This is good!" Bill said.
"Ya, it's delicious!" Tom said.
"Definitely better than fast food." Georg said.
"Or ordering pizza." Gustav added.
"Anyway, anything interesting happen today when you guys were outside? Any paparazzi or screaming fans?" Georg asked.
"No, but Verlorie said she felt someone following us." Tom replied.
"I'm sure it's just me though............." I said.
"Well, let's hope it's not a stalker fan or anything like that." Gustav said.
"Ha ha, very funny." Bill said sarcastically.

*Next Day*

"I think we should just relax and hang out today." Tom said.
"Ya, we've been working pretty hard lately." Georg said.
"Ok then, what do you guys want to do then?" Bill asked.
"I want to go out and play or something..........." said Tom.
"Uhhhhhh, are you nuts? We are TOKIO HOTEL!!!!!!!!" Bill screamed.
"I could disguise you guys." I offered.
"Oh ya, she disguised me yesterday and no one even gave me a second glance!" Tom exclaimed.
"Ok then, Verlorie, show us what you got." Bill said.

A few hours later.................

Georg came out with curly-ish hair tied up in a low ponytail, sunglasses and a cap with a t-shirt and jeans.

Gustav came out with black hair (temporary dye), glasses and blue eyes (colored contacts)

Tom came out with the same disguise as last time..........

Bill came out with red streaks in his hair (temporary dye also), a cap and sunglasses with purple colored contacts underneath.

I was going to disguise Bill and Georg as girls, but they won't let me. I swear they will be out there and no one will even think that they are Bill and Georg.

Anyway, we decided to go to an amusement park.

We went about a few hours before the closing time, and since it's a weekday, there aren't much people there, which was really good.

They dragged me on the roller coaster.
I sat between Bill and Tom and screamed the whole way.
I was crying when I got out.......... They started to comfort me and promise they won't drag me on another roller coaster ride again.
We had ice-cream too ^^
We went on the tea cups and Tom just won't stop spinning the tea cup! We all got really dizzy afterwards............
We didn't went on any wet rides tho.......... It will wash off Gustav and Bill's hair dye...........

"I can't believe we are actually enjoying a day with no screaming fans, flashing cameras, reporters or paparazzi!" Bill said, extremely happy.
"Yup, and it's all thanks to Verlorie!" Tom said, and gave me a kiss on the cheek.
"Thanks Verlorie." Bill said, and gave a kiss on the other cheek.
Tom and Bill each have a hand over my shoulder. I can't see, but I think they're glaring at each other, I can kinda feel it in the atmosphere...........
Georg and Gustav stared..........
After a while, Georg and Gustav said, "It's getting kind of late, why don't we drive home..........."
"Sure," I said, "I'm getting tire........." I yawned to add to the effect.
"O, Verlorie, are you really tire? I think we should go home then." Bill said.
"Ya, we wouldn't want you to get too tire." Tom said.
"Ya, let's go home." Georg added in.

When we were leaving, again, I have the same sensation that someone's following us, but I didn't tell anyone because I didn't want to ruin the evening for them.

PolkaDottedPenguin
June 27th, 2008, 05:35 PM
Chapter 8

It's time to get groceries again.
Bill insist that he will go with me, but I know he has work to do so I told him no.


***

Once I got to the grocery store, I picked out what we would need for at least a week, when I saw a shadow following me.
Immediately, I picked out the stuff quickly, and paid for it.
As I was walking to the parking lot, the shadow didn't slow down or walk away, it kept following me.
I fumbled with my keys, but I got it to ignition and drove away as fast as possible.
I drove as fast as possible, without passing the speed limit.
But when I turned around, there was a black Benz Mercedes tailing me.
I tried to shake it off, but it just kept following me.
Once I got to the drive way, I ran out of the car and into the house.
With panic and fear written all over my face, I arrived home.
"What's wrong?" Everyone asked.
"Ummmm...." just when I was about to tell them what happened, the door bell rang.
"Don't get it!" I yelled.
Everybody stared at me, wide eyed, as I tip toed and peered through the peek hole on the door.
And there he was, a guy in a black suit. The guy who followed me.
I felt me knees shaking as I kneel to the ground.
"Are you alright?" Bill asked, kneeling beside me.
"Hide me, hide me, please!" I begged with tears in my eyes.
"What's wrong?" Bill asked.
"I'll tell you later, but for now, just hide me, please!" I said, desperately, as the door bell rang again.
"Okay. Tom, go downstairs with Verlorie, I'll handle our little guest outside." Bill said.
As Tom went downstairs with me, Bill went and answer the door.

"Hi, how can I help you today?" Bill ask the guy in the suit.
"Uhhhhh.......... Is there a Catherine Williams here?" the guy in the suit asked.
"Huh? Who are you talking about and who are you anyway?" Bill answered, looking at him with his weird stare.
"O, sorry, allow me to introduce myself. I'm Bob, I'm princess Catherine's bodyguard."
"Princess Catherine?" Gustav asked, confused.
"Yes, Princess Catherine is the heir of King Jacob Williams of Wingsland."
"Wingsland?" Bill, Gustav, and Georg asked all together.
"It's a small island country in the North Sea." Bob replied.
"o...."
"Anyway, can I come in ?" Bob asked.
"Not unless you tell us why you're here." Bill said.
"I already told you, I'm trying to find Princess Catherine."
"Well, we don't have a princess Catherine here, now if you'll excuse us, we got work to do." Bill said, about to slam the door on Bob's face.
"Wait, the girl that just came in was Princess Catherine!" Bob said, stopping the door.
"O ya, well prove it!" Bill said.
From his pocket, Bob retrieved a picture, on it was Princess Catherine and her family.
"Isn't this Verlorie?" Georg asked, shocked.


***

''Are you going to tell me what happened?" Tom asked.
"Okay......"
So I told him the whole story about how I started feeling someone following me to when the guy actually started following me home.
''Are you scared?" Tom asked.
"Of course I'm scared!"
"Don't worry, we'll protect you, you're our little princess...." Tom said as he wrap his arms around me into his warm embrace.