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BorisKLuca
May 22nd, 2008, 09:23 PM
I'm writing Unearth, but I wanted to write something light on the side. So this is my side project.

I really need a lot of characters, so if you want to be in it or if you can think of someone you think would be good then let me know.
I'll need a name, occupation, style, and anything else that goes with them.
K, thanks.



Chapter 1:

“Half a million dollars,” Kate says and my coffee burst out of my mouth covering her. She makes a digested face but I am too in awe to apologize.

“To fake fall in love with some girl?” I say looking down at the picture in front of me.

“Actually he’s a boy. He’s European or something, I don’t know,” Kate says rolling her eyes, “But I’m producing it. We can pull this off.”

“I don’t know. I mean a Reality Show. I’ll never live that down,” I say. Kate takes a sip, her berry lips drinking in her latte. She looked sophisticated in a navy blazer and a white designer shirt. Her long strawberry hair is pinned up and her glasses gave her an air of intelligence. Through this you almost miss her valley girl accent and the malicious glimmer in her eyes.

“Look, even if you don’t win you could walk away with a model contract or something. And plus you’ll get to lay around and tan in some Hollywood mansion. You can’t beat that,” She says convincingly. I think about my current residence and shudder. I live in a tiny one-room apartment with rats and cockroaches.

“True,” I say sipping my plain black coffee. Whereas Kate looks upper-class, I’m the opposite. You’d never know we used to live in the same house. I’m messy in long black shorts, a purple hoodie with a unicorn on it, and my blonde hair pulled back into a low messy side ponytail. You’d never know we had the same mother. The big difference is Kate’s father is ten times richer than mine, she grew up most of her life in Hollywood and I grew up in a small town in North California in a duplex. The only resemblance is a small mole on our right cheeks trademarks of Kellogg girls.

“What do you say Campbell?” She asks leaning forward to hear my answer, “Are you going to walk away or take a chance?”

“What’s his name?” I ask lowering my head a bit.

“Bill Kaulitz,” She says stumbling a bit over his last name. I pick up my cup and sigh.

“Alright, let’s do it,” I say taking one more look at the picture and then Kate before we touch our glasses together and she smiles evilly.

“You won’t regret this,” She says. And I kinda actually don't believed her.








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LipsOfAnAngel
May 22nd, 2008, 09:47 PM
great start! i want to be in it. here's me:

name: Kia
occupation: painter (fantasy mostly, does other stuff too)
style: tomboy-ish, paint covered everything, paint and turpintine smelling most times, paint under nails and in hair, but can clean up real nice.


hope that helps. mehr bitte!

ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
May 23rd, 2008, 04:58 PM
name: kelsey
occupation: designer
style: funky, totally random, good tastes in clothing

BlondPunk
May 24th, 2008, 05:27 PM
oooohhhh....sounds really interesting :]

Okay! My character:

Name: Yana Charleen Kohly
Occupation: Hair Cutter, Fashion Desighner, and Make-up artist, but not for famous people.
Style: She has short natural honey blande hair parted to the right, has black and white highlights. Brown-green eyes, a little more brown than green. She's short, about 4,1 to 4,3. Not skinny, but not fat, just right. ALWAYS has nailpolish on. usually black, but also likes red and purple.
A little about her: She's really caring, and her heart is easy to break. She just doesn't show it. Usually she's really tough, strong, and very confident. But in the inside she's soft. She's fun, outgoing, laughs alot. Fun to hang around with.
She's been through alot, but doesn't talk about her past life. She doesn't like crying. Her dad died when she was 11, and her mom died when she was 14. She lives with her younger brother with her Aunt, who hates her.

:]]]
Update ASAP

SCHREIoutLOUD
May 24th, 2008, 07:31 PM
OOOOOOOO. I'd love to be in this. :]]]]]

Name: Suri Lorraine Schwartz
Occupation: Guitarist, Works in a Recording Studio, Went to school for Veterinary work but decided not to be a vet and dropped out of College to work on music, her one true passion.
Style: Suri dresses in rags. - Just Kidding. Suri has her own unique style, she's been called 'emo' and 'gothic' and 'preppy' as well as 'skateboarding - chick' all at once. Which, doesn't seem to make sense to her. Usually Suri wears tight jeans that are ripped, but stylish, and often she wears Skinny jeans. She is known for her studded belts, black vans and converse all stars. Most of the time Suri wears Band-tees, but she also wears nice shirts with all sort of designs and prints on them. She dyes her hair a lot, but currently it is layered, naturally blonde, with the layers' black tipped as well as several other black chunks. She has a tattoo of music notes on her ankle, and the initials 'C. A. B.' on her left wrist that stands for 'Colby Aiden *****ell' a friend of hers who commit suicide in the 7th grade. And was her only friend when she had moved to the U.S From Germany.
A little about her: A lot of information about her can be seen above. But Suri at first can seem loud, obnoxious, and irritating. But she can also be charming once you get to know her, she can keep a secret and is a really good friend. And inside, she's just looking for that one guy to fall in love with her that's perfect all around and accepts her. She doesn't go anywhere without her Martin Acoustic Guitar and Gibson Les Paul, that's just impossible. She also goes no where without her iPod and Cell phone. They have all of her music on them. Music is her passion, but it 's something that can't really love her back in the way she's been looking for love. Maybe she'll find it. She needs someone to trust and be herself around. :]

drummergirl24
May 25th, 2008, 08:55 PM
I'd like to be in your story though it's obvious quite a few people have wanted to already...
What the hey, I'll give you my info anyways!
name: Charli (Charlotte) Declaire
occupation: preschool teacher or fast food chain worker (Ha!)
style: very unique, kind of bohemian...Lots of longs necklaces and bangles, band t-shirts and jeans or flowy skirts. Long wavy red hair and deep brown eyes, about 5'10 with a long and lean body.
personality: outgoing, but sweet. kind of the nurturing motherly type, always the voice of reason, but known to be outrageous given the right place and time. Loyal and honest, almost to a fault.
I hope that helps your decision, if you don't pick my character it's totally fine!

BorisKLuca
May 30th, 2008, 03:36 PM
Unfortunately I don't have an update yet.
Finals are this week and I have had NO down time.
I'm actually typing this in the middle of a study session so I promise to update both stories as soon as I can.

Something funny I heard today, I was talking to this German exchange student , Mae, and I asked her if she knew who Tokio Hotel was.

Her reply: “Tokio hotel? They’re like the Britney Spears of Germany! I come to America to get away from them.”

Haha, I thought it was pretty funny. She was joking btw.