Just Friends - [Tom/OFC] OPEN AGAIN!!!! [Updated]

[screamxitxoutxloud]

My old fics weren't that good, I'm hoping this one makes it

=]


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Prolouge-

I knew it.

Ever since my 13th birthday when Bill, Tom, and Andreas had throw me a suprise birthday in Bill and Tom's backyard.

They sat me down in a circle with them and like...16 other kids in our grade and an empty glass coke bottle in the middle of the circle. The bottle was handed to me, the honors of being the birthday girl.

So I spinned the bottle.

And it landed on Bill.

I froze and Bill's eyes flew to his brother, his mouth open.

And we leaned across the circle and kissed. Bill's mouth on mine for 10 seconds then it was over and I excused myself to the bathroom, where I sat on the floor in front of the toilet because my stomach was shaking and flipping so violently that I thought I might vomit.

And I learned within the next 2 hours that I had really big feelings for Bill.

So when he sat next to me when we opened presents, my heart was in my throat.

When I opened his present and found the MCR hoodie I've wanted for my whole fan-girl life I felt my lungs, my stomach and my heart collide.

When he put his arm around my shoulder and danced this super weird dance with me during my 'Happy Birthday' song, I never wanted him to let go.

When he hugged me goodnight that night as we got ready for bed, since I spent the nnight over his house, I almost kissed him all over again.

As I was lying awake that night and Bill rolled over in his bed and flung his arm on me in his sleep, I almost screeched.

And everytime after that kiss I was close to Bill I felt like my heart was on fire.

Ever since my 13th birthday, I knew I was in love with Bill.

I'm in love with Bill, my best friend in my whole entire life.

[tiklemepurple]

Ok, I'm sorry to say this... but YOU SUCK!
You can't just expect me to read that and then not want more.
I swear to God you have to write more.
It was soooooo good!
O_O'

[amandaaraujo]

Ok, I'm sorry to say this... but YOU SUCK!
You can't just expect me to read that and then not want more.
I swear to God you have to write more.
It was soooooo good!
O_O'


I have to agrreeee this story is awesome and sweet i love the begining oh boy i wished my 13th b-day was like that :D

[tiklemepurple]

Ok, I'm sorry to say this... but YOU SUCK!
You can't just expect me to read that and then not want more.
I swear to God you have to write more.
It was soooooo good!
O_O'


I have to agrreeee this story is awesome and sweet i love the begining oh boy i wished my 13th b-day was like that :D
Haha no kidding.
Don't we all?
I need to know what happens next...
O____________o

[Haley1018]

This fic is cute! You MUST post more soon!!!

[screamxitxoutxloud]

=3 You don't know how big my smile is right now X]

I'm writing now...

[tiklemepurple]

Yayez!
You're writing more!
She's writing more!
You're writing more!
She's writing more!
O_______o'
I'm not crazy.

[screamxitxoutxloud]

Ok, I'm stuck.

Very very very stuck.

I have to work on my art project too ]:

I WILL write more by tonight or tomorrow.

[DeeDee]

* new readere *

dis is amazing , it kinda reflects wot i went trough :cry:

mehr bitte wenn du kannst :D

[tiklemepurple]

Ok, I'm stuck.

Very very very stuck.

I have to work on my art project too ]:

I WILL write more by tonight or tomorrow.
'Tis ok.
I'll wait.
*eats skittles*

[screamxitxoutxloud]

This is going to turn out like **** and I KNOW it
Bear with me, I want to keep this going :]
Extra long chapter since I haven't updated much in the past day or so.
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"Andi, you're staring again." Bill says, smirking as his smooth, black, straight, gorgeous...

His hair. I'm talking about his hair like it's art.

**** I speak of him to Tom like the sun shines out his ***.

Which, I believe, it totally and completely DOES.

"Sorry." I mumble, glancing down at my guitar. Staring has become some sort of a habit now. I hate it, he notices too.

"Elly is coming over soon, I better get home. Tom wanted me to invite you over for him while Elly and I go catch a movie and some dinner."

My breath hitches, catching in my throat as I turn away and pick up my guitar case.

"Yeah, I'll come." I say, my voice calmer then I expected.

Elly is a slut-faced hoe.

THE ONLY AND NUMBER ONE slut-faced hoe.

I hate her. She's Bill's girlfriend.

"Come on then, I have to shower."
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"So what happened today? Did you tell him?" Tom is to overly estatic that Bill and I spend every day together.

"He's going out with Elly tonight so what do you think?!" I snap.

"Well, I think that...it's been 4 years...and you've acted like everything is fine for too long."

Tom always has to be friggin right.

"Shut up. He's in the shower, he probably can hear you." I say playing my guitar louder.

I play the same song over and over and over.

Faber Drive's 'Tongue Tied'.

This friggin song rocks.

Suddenly, after about the tenth time I played the song, Tom's hand grips the neck of my guitar.

"Bill just left with Elly, speak."

It takes that much for me to throw my guitar down, stomp of to Tom's bed, grab one of his pillows, shove my face into it and scream as loud as I can.

I scream untill I think my throat is bleeding.

Then I just lay on the bed, my face in Tom's pillow and I try and catch my breath. Tom walks over and lays next to me, his arm on my waist and his head resting on my neck.

"Are you ok?"

"No, he's going out with her tonight, perfect little Elly. Her names probably not even Elly. It's probably something like Gertrude or another comepletely disgusting name. I bet that tan is sprayed on too. Bill likes brunettes any way, she's a platinum blonde. She's not even the pretty platinum blonde either like Hayley Williams is, she's the 'DUDE DID SOMEONE POUR HAIR BLEACH ALL OVER YOUR HEAD?!' kind of nasty blond. She needs to take her oversized knock off Prada bag and hightail it out of Germany and back to Cali where she came from."

"Is your rant over yet?"

"NO! HE BOUGHT HER THAT FRIGGIN PURSE THAT I WANTED! He never bought me a Prada purse, he should have used the money to buy something useful like a can of tomatoes or a new oven or something."

"That bag was over 2 thousand dollars, it would have to be a can of gold tomatoes if he was going to spend 2 tohusand dollars on it."

"There is no such thing and you know it."

Everything is silent for a minute,

"You know, she is a bottle blond."

"I KNEW IT! God, and are her eyes even green?! Bill loves her eyes, the look like puddle of muddy grass to me. What about Bill's eyes, yeah I know I'm talking about your eyes too but hush. Bill's eyes are actually a window to his soul. I can see and feel myself when he is upset. I bet Elly can't even feel her own face with all the botox that was injected into her body."

Tom sighs into my hair and I scowl at the image of Bill and Elly kissing.

"Maybe we could push her into a well or something." Tom says and I can feel his lip ring on my neck as he smiles.

"Bill would follow the scent of her disgusting perfume and find her, then dive in, risking the snapping of his own neck, and save her, then he would marry her right then and there."

"You wear the same perfume." Tom laughs.

I sniff my shirt.

****.

"Bill doesn't want to get married without you there anyway." I say.

If they elope he's sealing my death.

"And I know he'd do everything in his power on God's Green Earth to make you happy. So just tell him you don't like Elly."

I sigh, really really really heavily and turn on my back.

"He's to happy, I don't care if I love him so much that I end up jumping off a building on their wedding day, I'm just happy that he's happy."

"You are not."

"**** straight I'm not. I'm going to ***** and whine and pester untill the day their relationship ends. And mine can begin."

[Haley1018]

lmao!!!
I love how Andi talks about Elly. It's too funny XD

post more please!!!

[screamxitxoutxloud]

Glad you like it :]

Wait untill I get more reviews and then there will be more

I promise :]

[ILuvKaulitzTwins4E]

lmffo.....ahahah this is soo funny i love it.........
..........is it just me or does it seem lke tom is gettin kinda close

[screamxitxoutxloud]

lmffo.....ahahah this is soo funny i love it.........
..........is it just me or does it seem lke tom is gettin kinda close

Take it as you want, it will become clearer in the coming chapters

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[DeeDee]

i guess she hates the living s*it out of her

mehr bitte :D

[BlondPunk]

OMG I LUV THIS FANFIC.
It reminds me of a stupid dumb **** head named Tyler >_<
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But in a good way.
MORE PLEASE, OR ELSE HOBOS.

[tiklemepurple]

<3
*applauds*
OMG I'm you're number one fan.
I swear to God if you stop writing this I will hurt you.
O_O'
It's sooooooooooooooooooooooooo **** good.
Keep going.
Write more!
:]]]

[LuckyShelbs92]

Her rant sounds like one of my friend's drama queen moments...

I love it! :D Please continue!

[whiteseawitch]

Not Bad ANDI... I can see where you get your drama queen moments from too!! LOL if you get stuck and need any help... lemme know... I swear if Tom jumps you it'll be too soon!! lmao kk

[screamxitxoutxloud]

I'm writing more know

Don't hurt me if it sucks/I get it up super late

I haven't written a fic in a long time

:]

[tiklemepurple]

I'm pretty sure this fan fic can't suck.
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[BlondPunk]

I'm pretty sure this fan fic can't suck.
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me neither...
I never saw a fanfic like this, and I like the fact that it's different :]
Different is GOOD
:]

[Monicaalynn]

haha, the second part made me luagh, I really like. please post more soon! c:

<3<3

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"I knew it. I frigging knew it, I knew he would come home late, he always does, it's 3 in the morning for Pete's sake. FOR PETE WENTZ'S SAKE! THERE I SAID IT! FOR PETE WENTZ'S SAKE. He isn't even home yet and already I'm afraid he's off somewhere...I don't even want to think about it. He's your baby brother and you're letting him go off skanking it up with the slut."

I ended up spending the night in Tom's room, mainly because the thought of going home to my mom and raging about this was sickening.

She would probably think I'm talking about Ryan Ross.

Jesus, I keep to many things from her.

Tom rolls his eyes and grabs me by my sides, picking me up and putting me on the edge of his bed, holding both of my arms and looking me directly in my eyes (he knows I hate when anyone besides Bill does that).

He just stares at me.

And stares.

And stares.

Then stares some more before speaking.

"You, are insane."

I kick Tom back by his stomach and flop back on the bed, barely missing my guitar.

"I'm not insane, I'm...I just think really really hard about situations that could possibly happen at any given time so I know exactly what I'm going to say if those situations do happen."

"Insane."

"Bill promised me he would get home at a decent time to watch that new movie with me. Yeah, that really happened, didn't it?! *****."

Tom sits down next to me and smirks.

"You don't think Bill's a *****."

"Yes I do, he can be a total ***** but he's MY ***** not HER *****. And I have the authority to call him a ***** as well considering her A.) Is one of my best friends ever and B.) Ditched me to get it on with a bottled blond hoe who can't spell 'Cat'."

Tom starts to laugh at this.

I'm being completely serious.

Kaht.

That is how she spells the friggin word 'cat' and she owns one.

Pssh, she's even more of a hoe then I thought she was.

"You're just angry, come on get up." Tom says, pulling on my arms.

"NO!"

"YES!"

"NO!"

"YES!!!!"

And Tom pulls on my arms so hard that I fall into him, we spin around trying to catch out balance but fall anyway in an...

Akward...

Postion...

"I'm sorry, but this is all your fault and you're the one who did this."

"I know."

We lay there for a minute.

And another minute.

Tom's just staring at me, again.

"Do you want to um-"

I hear a car door slam and the front door open and suddenly I have all the energy in the world to push Tom off of me and try and find a place to hide.

"Hidemeplease!I'macoward!" I whisper super fast. Tom just rolls his eyes and pulls me over to his bed.

"Just chill and watch some T.V." he commands.

I stick my tongue out and cross my arms across my chest. Bill comes into Tom's room, glowing like he has a friggin lightbulb radiating in his skin.

That sounds so gross but he looks happy.

"Oh my god, I just had the best night of my life."

My stomach drops, drops like a brick from a building.

"What's her problem?" Bill asks when I ignore him and turn my attention to the T.V.

"YOU DITCHED ME RETARD!" I yell, chucking a pillow at Bill.

Honestly I want to yell,

'YOU ARE COMPLETELY OBLIVIOUS TO THE FACT I'M HEAD OVER HEELS IN LOVE WITH YOU AND YOU SLEEP WITH THAT SLUT-FACED EXCUSE OF A GIRLFRIEND WHILE I SIT IN YOUR BROTHERS ROOM AND SCREAM ABOUT HOW MUCH I WANT TO BE WITH YOU!'

Tom rolls his eyes and throws the pillow back on his bed.

"Did not."

"'Hey, how about after my date tonight we watch that new movie, '27 Dresses'? I hear it's really cool. I'll cut it short so we have time. I promise.' Sound familiar to you?!"

Oh, I am so smooth.

"Sorry if I was out with my GIRLFRIEND, I don't even get why you hate her so much! Gos, you wouldn't be mad if I wasn't out with Elly!"

"I have REASONS to hate her though! You make it seem like I just hate her for no reason at all!" I say, my voice breaking.

I'm having a heart attack, I swear.

It's either that or my heart is just thumping for fun.

"Whatever, Andi. You have no reason to hate her. She's perfect! You're just jealous!"

Tom and I freeze, right there.

Tom looks at me, then Bill, then me.

"*** hole." We say together.

Tom pushes Bill out of the doorway and locks his door. He turns to me, his blonde dreads falling over his bare shoulders and chest.

"Are you ok?" he asks. I shake my head and put my hands up to my face. It takes all my strength not to sob.

"I feel like an idiot, Tom."

"Bill's the idiot, don't worry. He'll dump the slut and come for you, and if he doesn't he's missing out."

I wish I could believe him...

[DeeDee]

bill i swear i could kill you right now

mehr bitte

[Haley1018]

OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS FIC SOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!

BILL, YOU BETTER DUMP THAT HOEFACE RIGHT NOW AND GO OUT WITH ANDII!!!!!!!!!!! OR I'LL F**KING FORCE YOU TO!!

[ILuvKaulitzTwins4E]

omg this is soo ff is soo good please update soon

[caro.lina.]

tom's a sweetie!

[Monicaalynn]

ahhh bill is an ***. but i love him.

.......... I think put his make up on a little too thick that day.... I dont think he can see past it.... hahaha. I'm sorry I make myself laugh some times.... c:

[BlondPunk]

Gaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh Bill you retard!!!
MORE!!!

Oh...and it didn't suck ^^
It was really good

[tiklemepurple]

OMG! Bill is an idiot for ditching her for that ho bag!
Tom is so sweet tho. Maybe a little too sweet?
<__<
>__>
Can't wait for the next chapter!

[RetteMich]

mehr bitte!!!!!!!!!

[ILuvKaulitzTwins4E]

omg i can't belive bill ditched her and then said that she was jelouse ...............please update

[screamxitxoutxloud]

Updateing für dich!

Review and you all get Tom and Bill cookies...

SHIRTLESS Tom and Bill cookies

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[Haley1018]

Updateing für dich!

Review and you all get Tom and Bill cookies...

SHIRTLESS Tom and Bill cookies

:]

Shirtless Tom and Bill cookies...yum :mrgreen:

[BlondPunk]

Updateing für dich!

Review and you all get Tom and Bill cookies...

SHIRTLESS Tom and Bill cookies

:]


yummmyy
I want shirtless Bill and Tom cookie.
I will review :]

[tiklemepurple]

Updateing für dich!

Review and you all get Tom and Bill cookies...

SHIRTLESS Tom and Bill cookies

:]
Yummm.
Sounds good to meh!
:D

[screamxitxoutxloud]

This is going to be rushed, I knew it was but I think it turned out awesome ;]

Again, if you review, expect a shirtless Bill and a shirtless Tom cookie under your pillow tonight X]

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I'm making waffle in the kitchen when Tom wakes up.

"I see you're still not over last night." he says, grabbing the carton of orange juice from the fridge with his eyes closed.

He always make me think of him as a zombie when he does that.

"What makes you think that?" I ask through clenched teeth.

"You only cook when you're angry."

****it, he knows me too well.

"Shut up and eat."

Tom laughs and takes the plate of waffles I pushed at him.

"You, will stop laughing right now, or else the waffle shoved up your nose."

Tom takes the whip cream from the fridge and starts to cover his waffles in it.

"You're going to get sick if you eat all that!"

"Leave me alone, you're going to get sick if you keep obsessing over Bill like this." Tom snaps.

I spin around, shocked and Tom is sitting on the counter with a fork and looing down at his waffles.

Where did that come from?

"You could have just told me to shut up if I annoy you that much. I would have stopped." I say quietly.

Everything is quiet for a minute and I finish making my waffles. I look down at the plate, my back to Tom. I hear foot steps behind me and I turn around, Tom standing close to me.

It's not that, but...I l-I think that Bill really likes Elly and I don't want you to hurt anymore then you already have."

"Oh...I know...You don't know how much I've tried to get over him in the past couple weeks."

"You have to play the feild."

"I don't like any guys except Bill."

"We're 3 weeks into the summer, you have PLENTY of time to look for a guy." Tom says laughing. I shake my head and hug him. He's truely the best friend anyone could ever ask for.

For the first time I notice how good he smells without a shirt on.

Like Axe...and guy...

We pull away and Tom puts his arm around my shoulder, shoving a handful of blueberries into his mouth.

"You have to make him jealous, he'll know what he's missing if you find someone who gives you compliments, goes out of his way to treat you to everything you deserve, and makes you smile a LOT." he says through the berries.

I laugh and put a berry into my mouth, flipping the waffles on my plate to cover them with syrup.

"So if you want to make him jealous, make sure to kiss him as much as possible in front of Bill, but don't over do it so it's obvious. Lean your head on his shoulder and let him put his arm around your waist to pull you close, like this-"

Tom does an exact demonstration.

Bill fumbles down the stairs and comes into the kitchen, as if on cue,

Tom kisses me full on the lips.

"Asses." Bill mumbles, grabbing some cereal and a bowl, storming back upstairs.

Only when Bill's bedroom door slams shut does Tom pull away from me.

He does it slowly though.

VERY slowly.

Did I kiss back?

What's this feeling?

Oh ****, oh **** no, it's back.

"What was that?" I ask quietly, my hand falling from Tom's arm, which I had unknowingly held during the kiss.

"Practice makes perfect."

And then I'm left standing alone in the kitchen, Tom sitting on the porch with his waffles and Bill probably laying on his bed with cereal and texting Elly.

I'm left alone.

Alone and very confused.

I rush upstairs to Tom's bedroom, laying on his bed, my waffles downstairs on the counter, but my hunger has evaporated.

I lay on his bed and I think.

What the **** is going on?

[BlondPunk]

oh my gusti :shock:
That was so amazing, and awesome, and wow!
I LOVE THIS FANFIC!!!
Yes, it turned out awesome!!!
More please!

[tiklemepurple]

*dies*
Tom did NOT just go there.
Did he?
Yes he did.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
aksjglksghlkjlgag
WTF Tom?!
WTF Andi?
WTF... eh... I don't know your name... but you HAVE TO WRITE MORE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!

[DeeDee]

scheisee ppor girl she must be uber confused


mehr bitte wenn du kannst :D

[Haley1018]

I think Tom likes her...

post more soon!

[Monicaalynn]

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhmazing.. ..

please writte more bitte!!!! I want to know what happens!!!! I wanna know what bill does!!! tell meeeeee!!!!!! please. c:

[screamxitxoutxloud]

*dies*
Tom did NOT just go there.
Did he?
Yes he did.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
aksjglksghlkjlgag
WTF Tom?!
WTF Andi?
WTF... eh... I don't know your name... but you HAVE TO WRITE MORE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!

My names actually Andi X]

I couldn't think of any girl names

AND MY NAME IS STILL TECHNICALLY A GUYS NAME

X]

More tomorrow

I promise

YOU ALL GET YOUR COOKIES!!!!


*passes out Tom and Bill cookies*

[Monicaalynn]

yay!!! COOKIES!!!! yummi, but i dont thikn I'll eat mine... who could eat that sexiiness???? hahah not me.

[Haley1018]

yay!!! COOKIES!!!! yummi, but i dont thikn I'll eat mine... who could eat that sexiiness???? hahah not me.

lol me either!

[tiklemepurple]

Ok.
Andi and Andi.
Woah.
Try saying that 10 times fast.
O____o
*eats cookies*

[BlondPunk]

I'm saving my cookie ^^
Okay, maybe one bite...

[ILuvKaulitzTwins4E]

omg i new Tom had somethin for andi...............you have to update i love this fic
.........im saving my sexy Tom cookie :D

[Tomi_327]

write more....I love this story! :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

[amandaaraujo]

omfg i cant beleive sorry i didnt comment in a while its cuz of my stupid laptop connection its so hard for me to go on omg i love this story absolutley love it you make like tom a little bit more because of his sensitive side but im stickig with my billy boy hehe i love it soooo much that this comment will be as long as it can be. I feel bad for andii tom kissed her infront of bill hey mabe bill will learn a lesson hehe. :) :D i cant wait untill you update plese update soon because i think ill die if you dont oh and d you have an extra shirtless bill and tom cookie i gues i waas kinda late heheh ...

[screamxitxoutxloud]

I think this was a little pointless, but I'm writing it anyway :]
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Practice makes perfect.

What the does that mean?

I swear I could just ***** slap someone right now.

Preferably Elly.

Oh yes, her murder is ALL planned out.

Every last detail right up to her final word-

"Are you going to eat that?"

Leave it to Tom to snap you out of your amazing thoughts.

"No, take it." I say, shoving my peice of pizza at him and flipping to Animal Plannet where some weird looking Hippos are walking around in water.

"Tom lay out your hand. Palm up."

"Why?!"

"Do it. Now."

Tom rolls his eyes, but holds out his hand anyway.

"This. Is. Your. Sex. Noise!" I say, pushing down each of Tom's fingers , pushing back his pinky when I scream 'Noise'.

Tom screams like...

A girly dieing chipmunk.

A girly dieing chipmunk who swallowed helium.

A girly dieing chipmunk who swallowed helium and is on drugs.

A girly dieing chipmunk who swallowed helium, is on drugs, and is giving birth.

SO disturbing.

Tom grabs my hands, pins them above my head on the couch, sits on my stomach and leans his head over mine.

"What the **** did you just do?!"

"I found out when you have sex you make sounds that sound like a small dieing rodent who is on drugs and giving birth!"

Tom rolls his eyes, and lets go of my hands, spinning on my stomach so he's facing the T.V.

"Get off of me or you face the same fate as Elly."

Tom laughs and makes himself comfortable, sliding to lay down on my legs, putting a pillow on my thigh.

I am so serious right now I'm almost positive her glanced upward.

"WHAT THE **** IS THIS?!" Tom and I scream together.

On the large T.V. screen in my living room, a horrid scene was taking place.

Two gazelles are getting it ON.

"OHMYGOD THEY'RE MAKING YOUR SEX NOISE!!!"

"THEY ARE NOT!!!"

"THEY SO ARE HOW CAN YOU NOT HEAR THEM?!"

"I DON'T WANT TO HEAR THEM! OR SEE THEM! TURN IT OFF!"

The gazelles were barely visable now in the tall tan grass of the place they live. One of them squealing like Tom.

Can you feel the passion? CAN YOU?

Tom obviously can...

"Ohmygod, turn it off!" Tom yells, flailing his arms around, trying to find the remote. I flip of the T.V. and Tom has ended up on the floor.

I guess he under-estimated the space between him and the edge of the couch. I look up at the clock, noticing it's almost eleven.

X-----------------X

"Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit!" Tom yells, kicking me in the stomach as he rolls off the couch.

That and the house alarm souding off woke me up.

Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit is the exact word to say in this moment.

"OHMYGOD! TOM GET THE FIRE PLACE THING!" I yell motioning to the metal holder of about 700 fire place things.

"WHICH ONE?!"

"THAT ONE!"

"YOU'RE WAVING YOUR HAND TO THE BASKET! YOU'RE NOT SPECIFYING ANYTHING!"

"I TOTALLY AM! MOVE I'LL GET IT!"

I grab the pointiest and sharpest fire place thing and shove tom in front of me towards the stairs.

It sucks to have an axe murderer in your house and you're stuck in the lower area den.

"GO!" I we whisper in hushed tones, pushing eachother.

I roll my eyes and Tom cowers behind me, holding my arm in a death trap.

I swear I think my left hand just went numb.

We get to the top of the stairs.

"OHMYGOD RAPIST IN MY HOUSE RAPIST IN MY HOUSE RAPIST! IN! MY! HOUSE!" I scream, dropping the fire place thing.

"ANDI! DON'T GET RAPED! YOU'RE TO YOUNG TO DIE! ANDI DO NOT GO NEAR THEM! THEY'LL RAPE AND MURDER YOU!" Tom screams.

I flip on the light switch on, realizing the rapist was none other then my cat, Luna, who tripped the alarm by having a plant bang the window.

"Oh my frick 'n fracking god! THAT IS NOT A RAPIST! YOU *** I THOUGHT YOU WERE GOING TO DIE!" Tom screams, putting me into a headlock. I fall on the ground, bringing Tom with me.

And again, we end up on the floor, face to face.

And again, I end up with Tom's mouth latched on to mine.

Only this time I am fully aware of how much I'm kissing back.

[ILuvKaulitzTwins4E]

oh my freakin god.......... you have got to update please i love this fic it is soo good

[SCHREIoutLOUD]

OMG.

I think I just fell in love.

*pants*

*stomach flips*

ADD MORE PLEAASEE

[tiklemepurple]

*dies*
*comes back to life*
Points to title of thread.
[Bill/OFC]
O_________________________________________________ ___O
I'm pretty sure that Tom IS MOST DEFINITLY NOT Bill!
Write more.
*dies*

[amandaaraujo]

hahahahhahahahahahhahahahahah omg tom though Luna was a rapist what kind of rapist would a cat be hhahahahhahahaha omg i laughed so hard... oooooh Tom is getting it on with Andii oooh i love this FF its funny romantic everything you can imagine i looov vvve it hahah

[Sidsel]

Moooooooooar!~
Jetzt o.o

That was... Omg <333 *pure luv*

[xXxMandiixXx]

*New reader*
OH EM GEE!!! i love it CONTINUE!!!!

<3 Mandii xx

[screamxitxoutxloud]

*dies*
*comes back to life*
Points to title of thread.
[Bill/OFC]
O_________________________________________________ ___O
I'm pretty sure that Tom IS MOST DEFINITLY NOT Bill!
Write more.
*dies*



It IS a [Bill/OFC]

You just have to see

;]



I'M WRITING MORE TODAY

Just let me wake up and get going

[BlondPunk]

XD XD XD XD XD
That was hilarious!!!!!
OMG, more bitte :]

[tiklemepurple]

*dies*
*comes back to life*
Points to title of thread.
[Bill/OFC]
O_________________________________________________ ___O
I'm pretty sure that Tom IS MOST DEFINITLY NOT Bill!
Write more.
*dies*



It IS a [Bill/OFC]

You just have to see

;]



I'M WRITING MORE TODAY

Just let me wake up and get going
*spazzzz*

I. Can't. Wait.

laskjrdl;gksjdf;lakhsdfa;sd

I ♥ this fan fic.

:|

[screamxitxoutxloud]

Ok, there might be TWO chapters today :]

MIGHT be...
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So I kissed back.

You only kiss back if you love them, or you're really drunk.

But I kissed back.

This is the second day this has happened, second day in a ROW.

I was so sure I had this all figured out.

I DID HAVE THIS ALL FIGURED OUT!

So, why am I so confused now?

I lie awake in my bed, Tom sleeping beside me.

I've been trying to sleep for about three hours now.

THREE.

HOURS.

And I still can't get asleep.

Any time I close my eyes, TOM is there.

Any time I let my mind drift off, the kiss is being replayed.

I hate it.

HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE IT!

Not that Tom isn't a good kisser-HE'S A FABULOUS KISSER!

But that's not the point.

The point is I think I'm falling again, for my best friend ever and the brother of my first love.

I think I'm falling in love with Tom.

And it scares me.

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"Aren't you hungry?" Tom asks me, 2 weeks later.

"No." I say, pushing the box of pizza away from me.

"Ok, so you're never tired, you're never hungry and ou're never up for doing anything except sitting and watching T.V. What the **** is wrong with you?" Bill asks me.

I'm in love with my two best friends who just happen to be twin brothers.

Yeah, they're really getting THAT twisted truth out of me.

"Nothing, I'm just not hungry." I say rolling my eyes and flipping a page in my magazine.

"Bull ****. Eat." Tom says, pushing a plate of pizza towards me. Bill looks at me and so does Tom, fully glaring.

They don't know what they do to me.

"I'll just eat something at home. My mom wants me to clean my room today." I say, shoving my feet into my hightops and waving. I walk out of Bill and Tom's house before anyone can say anything.

I'm completely suprised when halfway down the street, i'm grabbed by my arm and spun around so I'm face to face with Bill.

"What the **** is wrong with you?" he asks.

"I can't tell you."

"Since when can't you tell me stuff Andi?! You haven't been eating, you haven't been sleeping and you haven't been doing much of anything! I'm worried!"

"Like I said I. Can't. Tell. You."

"JUST ****IN TELL ME ANDI!"

"WHAT DO YOU WANT ME TO SAY BILL?!"

"THE TRUTH!"

"YOU WANT THE TRUTH? FINE! THE TRUTH IS I CAN'T EAT BECAUSE I'LL THROW UP IF I DO, MY STOMACH HAS BEEN FLIPPING SO BAD! I CAN'T SLEEP NO MATTER HOW TIRED I AM BECAUSE I CAN'T STOP THINKING! I CAN'T DO ANYTHING BECAUSE I DON'T THINK I CAN HANDEL ANYTHING ANYMORE!"

"WHAT IS THAT SUPPOSED TO MEAN?!"

"IT MEANS THAT I'M IN LOVE, BILL! I'M IN ****ING LOVE WITH YOU AND TOM! AND IT SCARES THE **** OUT OF ME!"

I don't realize I'm crying untill I've slammed the door to my room after running home.

I think I've cracked.

[screamxitxoutxloud]

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No reviews...

REVIEW AND YOU GET A SUPER SPECIAL TH CAKE!!!

With M&M's in the middle

The mini kind that taste epicly delicious

:]

[SCHREIoutLOUD]

OMFG.

So emotional.

What will Bill say?

Will he tell Tom?

OMFG.

[Haley1018]

OMFG.

I wonder what Bill will say to her...

Post more soon!

[xXxMandiixXx]

OMFG I LOVE THIS STORY!!!

CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE!

:)

<3 Mandii xx

[amandaaraujo]

omg she spillled omfg what will they do is Bill going to follow her home are both of them omg the suspense the emotion aaaaaaaaaaahhh i think ill go bizzerk....ooooh can i have a ppiece of cake? continue continue

[DeeDee]

billll grr

poor girl she loves dem both

mehr bitte :D

[Monicaalynn]

]:

No reviews...

REVIEW AND YOU GET A SUPER SPECIAL TH CAKE!!!

With M&M's in the middle

The mini kind that taste epicly delicious

:]

awww... i was gonna reply like 3 hours ago but there was a massive thunderstorm and i was hiding at my friends house/ supermarket. hahaha

please write more. I wanna see what happens next.... PLEASE!!!!!

[amandaaraujo]

billll grr

poor girl she loves dem both

mehr bitte :D

who doesnt't ?

[JumbieLover]

**new reader**

I LOVE THIS, PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON :D

[BlondPunk]

This is one of the best ff's I've ever read, seriously. I love it!
I can't wait to hear what Bill + Tom are gonna think/say!

[screamxitxoutxloud]

YOU ALL GET CAKE!!!

Wow, this is turning into such a Tom fic X]

Pairing has been changed :]
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You know the phrase, 'Everything seems brighter in the morning'?

Never believe anyone who says it.

It's CRAP and nothing more then that.

I wake up feeling the same as yesterday.

Like my heart had ripped out.

Ripped out, thrown on the ground, and had the Cha Cha Slide danced all over it.

I want to throw up.

I stumble down my stairs, catching myself as I routinely trip on the last step.

"Good morning, angel." my mom says, grabbing her purse and Vitamin Water from the counter and brushing back her soft, honey blonde waves from her bright aqua blue eyes.

My mom is drop dead gorgeous, only 29 (she had me when she was 15). She's got a body like an hour glass and every single friend I've had (including Bill and Tom) have called her beautiful. She could be a super model.

I have no idea how I got stuck with the rebelious dark brown curls and matching eyes, curvy body and short height.

Life sucks.

"Morning." I mumble, slouching over on to the table, laying my head on my arms.

"I'm going out for a bit I'll be back around five."

"Yeah ok." I mumble, my voice rough.

"Baby, are you okay? Do you want me to stay home?"

"No, mom, go out, have a good time." I fake a smile.

And she see's right through it.

She see's through everything, I swear.

"I'll be back at 5, I expect to hear everything then." my mom says, smoothing down my hair and kissing my cheek. I smile faintly and my mom leaves.

Not even 10 minutes later I hear a knock on the door.

Great, she forgot her keys.

I yank open the door expecting for my mom to smile and walk past me, grabbing her keys from the table by the front door, kissing me again and saying, 'Love you, angel.'

But instead, someone else is standing in the doorway.

Standing in front of me is Bill.

Oh. My. God.

"We need to talk, Andi."

"No, we don't."

I try and close the door ut Bill stops me and comes inside.

"Yeah, we do."

"Then talk." I snap, crossing my arms.

"What you said yesterday...Did you mean it?"

"No, I said it in the heat of the moment? Just thought it was the right thing to say, let the passion build up then BAM drop a bomb like that."

"Andi, be serious now."

"Then stop asking stupid questions."

I'm suprised at how harsh I am.

Actually...no I'm not.

I can be a total ***** if I want to be.

Bill's bringing it upon himself.

"*****, please. Do not start that with me!" Bill says, putting his hip out and his eyes glaring daggers through me.

He makes me feel like a helpless puppy sometimes.

"Well what do you want me to say?!"

"Nothing, let me talk!"

I cross my arms across my chest and scowl.

"Tom has been sitting in his bedroom since you left. I don't know what's going on with him, even though I should. You HURT him Andi. And I know for a fact, you love him, not me." Bill says, hands on his hips.

"You know nothing about me." I say.

Which is fully not true.

"Prove it to me then, kiss me."

I stare at Bill, who rolls his eys.

Bill walks over to where I'm standing and kisses me.

Full on the mouth.

And I kiss him back.

It's nothing like I imagined it would be.

My stomach doesn't flip at all.

My head doesn't spin at all.

I feel nothing at all, not even when Bill attacks my tongue with his own.

Nothing.

[Haley1018]

ahf30elvkpaebjmnzpjf-.

That is all I can say.

Mehr bitte!!!

[amandaaraujo]

oh **** this is soo a tom one oh boy but i like it cuz i think bill is triping for Andii ohhhhhh i want to know what happends please update please

[ILuvKaulitzTwins4E]

ahh omg she finally kissed Bill and she feels nothin..........please update as soon as you can i love this ff

[BlondPunk]

woah........
more bitte

[DeeDee]

finally she got to her senses she really does love tom yayy

gr you're turning me into a tom luver now

mehr bitte wenn du kannst

[Monicaalynn]

more????? please?

[tiklemepurple]

Oh sh;t.
O__________________________________________O;;;;;; ;;
*points to title of thread*
AHA! TOM IS TAKING OVERR!
alsgjklalgjafhdl;kjahslgas
dfakshgalkhg;kagh
asdgkajlgjsahdflhgalksg
Two chapters in ONE DAY!
You're truly amazing.
:]

[screamxitxoutxloud]

THREE chapters in one day :]

I'm more amazing then you thought X]
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"That was the most akward kiss I've ever shared in my entire life." I breathe, Bill releasing me from the kiss.

"Like kissing my best friend." Bill agrees, smiling.

The smile that used to make me melt.

Now it just makes me want to hug him and tell him how awesome of a friend he is.

And I do just that.

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"Just go in, he wants to talk to you."

It took me an hour for Bill to convince me to come see Tom.

An hour, 10 dollars and a trip to the mall later.

I know how to milk them.

And I use it to my advantage.

"**** to the NAWH. What if he's like...naked or something?! WHAT IF HE'S WATCHING PORN?! I can NOT bear another meeting with Mrs. TNA."

Bill and I shudder at the memory.

I'll spare you the details.

You'll thank me tonight when you're dreaming about Gerard and Mikey.

You will thank me.

"Tom's not doing anything like that! His music is playing, can't you hear it. Dumb ***." Bill scoffs.

Sure enough the music was playing, which made me want to take my money and shopping trip and RUN, since I hate it.

Tom listens to the kind of music you dance to so it looks like your humping the ground.

Or anything that's breathing if you're in a club.

This makes me start laughing.

Which causes Bill to yell at me so I'll shut up.

Which causes the music to be shut off and Tom's door to be swung open.

So Tom see's Bill and I in our little ***** fight.

"Uh...Bye." Bill says, shoving me into Tom, and closing his bedroom door.

"So, I see you were Samy Deluxe." I say motioning to the open CD case on Tom's dresser.

"Andi, cut the crap, what do you want?"

"I want to apologize?" I guess.

"YOU WANT TO TELL HIM WHAT YOU TOLD ME!!!" Bill yells outside of Tom's door before running down the hall to his bedroom.

"So, are you going to tell me what you told Bill?" Tom asks me, picking up his guitar and playing the begining chords of a song I know well.

'In Die Nacht', the song Bill wrote for him and Tom.

"Uh, yeah I guess."

I sit on Tom's bed, next to him, and cross my legs.

"Bill kissed me."

Wow, great way to start out a conversation.

"I'm happy for you." Tom says, playing louder.

I grab the neck of his guitar, stopping the notes.

"It was like kissing my brother."

"It was, huh?" he asks, looking down at his guitar, a smile playing on his lips.

"Yeah, suprisingly. The smile that once made me melt now just makes me want to hug him and tell him what a great friend he is." I say, repeating what I thought earlier.

Just beacause it's that **** fabulous.

"So, do you have any other crushes in mind?" Tom asks, even though he doesn't even have to.

He plays with his lip ring, staring at me.

"Yeah, I do."

"Who?"

"This guy..."

"What about this guy makes you like him?"

"A lot of things. He's into guitars like me, his laugh makes me smile, his eyes make my world stop and everything about him makes me happy." I say.

I look down at my lap and my curls fall in front of my face.

Tom pushes my hair behind my ear and his hand trails down my arm, stopping at my hand.

"I have a crush on this girl. You probably know her." he says. I play along.

"Tell me about her."

"She's cool, you guys would be best friends. She LOVES music, would die without it. She hates sports, has a pretty smile and her eyes are enchanting. I make her sound corny and like she's from the inside of a greeting card, but she's really amazing."

I smile the biggest smile I've ever smiled.

"How long have you know you've liked her?" I ask.

Tom's hand moves from mine and I look up at him.

"I've liked her ever since we we're six. The day we we're playing at school and I fell, she came over to me and helped me up. She kissed my cheek where there was a scratch then grabbed my hand and ran over with me to play with Bill. It started out like a crush, but it grew. I've loved her since we we're twelve."

I think my throat closes up.

"You should meet her. She's perfect." Tom says playing his guitar.

And with the friggin lip ring.

"I'm sure she has her flaws."

"She does, she can't remember what she ate for breakfast, she has the *****iest temper I've seen in anyone besides Bill, she can fight with someone over ANYTHING, but it's justthose things that make her even more perfect then she already is."

"She loves you."

"He loves you."

"Tom?"

"Yeah?"

"I love you."

Tom smiles and puts his mouth close to my ear, his breath hot against my neck.

"I love you too."

[JumbieLover]

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WRITE MORE.....NOW!!!!!! please? LOL

[ILuvKaulitzTwins4E]

"it was like kissing my brother" i laughed so hard when i read that.......please update

[amandaaraujo]

aaawwwww that was amazing and sooooo coooll you changed the title hehe omg i couldn't stop awing when they sarted to play that i like this girl/boy aawwww i screamed into my pillow then awing of the ecitmentawww i absolutley loved when I liked this girlsince we were six when i fell and she came and helped my up and gave me a kiss on the cheek and too my hand to play with bill that melted my heart and i started to cry tears of awingness heheh i made ujp a new kind of tears ahahhahahh please dont end it i want to know what happends till forevverrrr.

[Monicaalynn]

ahahahah/awwwwww when bill ran down the hall that but me into hysterics.... after that it made me want to cry.... I'm sooo goopy. ahahaha


please write more??!!?!

[SCHREIoutLOUD]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWHHH.

Perhaps.

FOUR CHAPTERS IN ONE DAY?

YESYESYES>

[LuckyShelbs92]

I just re-found this after forgetting things for exams, and all I can say is MORE! Please? :D

[xXxMandiixXx]

whoop whoop go tom and andii
also go bill for your expertise in getting them together :)

Continue !

<3 Mandii xx

[Tomi_327]

you better write more soon!!!

[screamxitxoutxloud]

Crap crap crap crap :[

This is gonna turn out to be crap -_-

Excuse me for the horribleness of this coming chapter

The idea for it makes me feel like an obesessed little pre-teen fangirl who hides pictures of Tom in her cereal boxes and has a shrine in the back of her closet, with candles and everything.

The kind that make weird love poitions and chant during meals.

But more is on the way right now :X

[tiklemepurple]

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*dies*
Are you kidding me?!
You're turning me into a TOM LOVER.
>.<
NEIN!

[Monicaalynn]

The idea for it makes me feel like an obesessed little pre-teen fangirl who hides pictures of Tom in her cereal boxes and has a shrine in the back of her closet, with candles and everything.

The kind that make weird love poitions and chant during meals.



hahaha, that made me laugh. c:

[screamxitxoutxloud]

So here it is

It turned out better then I thought it would :]

Reviewers get Anthony Padilla :D

Best rewards yet X]
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We sit in silence.

It's so silent I'm afraid the moment is slipping away.

He loves me.

And I love him.

"Kiss me." Tom says into my hair.

I pull back from him and shake my head.

"You have to promise me one thing."

"Anything."

"Nothing is going to change between us, I'll be your best friend before your girlfriend always and even if we break up, you can't hate me. I can't do this if I'll lose you." I say, my voice shakey.

I've never been nervous around Tom.

It shouldn't be coming this quickly.

"I promise." Tom says holding out his pinky. I smile, roll my eyes, and hook my pinky around his.

Tom takes this opporunity to pull in front of his face and kiss me.

"EW!!! OH MY EYES!!!" Bill screams, flinging open Tom's door.

I throw my converse at him, nearly missing his face.

"Are you done yet?!" Bill whines, his eyes covered by his hands.

"Yeah." Tom says, grabbing the back of my head and kissing me again.

"LIARS!"

Tom pulls away from me, against my protest, and throws his own shoe at Bill.

"You can always ruin a perfectly good moment." he says, his hand resting on mine.

"I do my best."

"Naturally." Tom mumbles.

Bill shrugs and skips out of Tom's room singing, 'My brother and my best friend were just caught making out! My brother and my best friend were just caught making out!'

I could just strangle him with my belt right now.

"If he's going to do that EVERY time we kiss, I'm never coming over." I say, crossing my arms and falling back on Tom's bed.

"Yeah, it would be great if we could have a place for just us, that certain annoyances didn't know about."

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*Later That Night*

Tom puts his hands over my eyes and leads me through the forest in his backyard, holding me by my waist.

"Where the **** are we going?!" I say, nearly falling over something my foot catches on.

"Wait a minute and you'll see!"

"You know better then anyone that I'm the most impatient person in the WORLD. Tell me."

"3..."

"Tom."

"2..."

"THOMAS!"

"We're here, chill."

Tom's hand is taken from my eyes and I'm greeted by the one thing that can make me cry.

The place where Bill, Tom and I used to come every day after school for the entire 3rd, 4th and 5th grade.

The Tree House.

Tom has found the old rope ladder, put down a blanket over the old plywood floor and put a few candels at the base of the tree.

"Oh. My god." I say.

Tom smiles and takes my hand, entwineing our fingers and leads me to the rope ladder.

"Is this thing going to hold us?" I ask, climbing up the ladder behind him. Tom grabs my hand and pulls me up, catching me as I stumble forward.

"You really think that after everything I've said and done today and the past month, I would let you get hurt?"

So, my question was a stupid one...

Who cares?

Not me.

[Haley1018]

Aw how cute!
I bet they are going to do naughty things in that tree house XD
Mehr bitte!

[DeeDee]

you made me cry out of tom's sweetness

mehr bitte hun

[SCHREIoutLOUD]

AWWWWHHH

[screamxitxoutxloud]

*throws Anthony Padilla at reviewers*

There you go

:]

I'm writing more now

[tiklemepurple]

AHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Tom is such a little cutie pie!
:D
You don't know how awesome you are that you keep on writing and writing and writing.
*happy sigh*
:]

[Monicaalynn]

awww how cute c:

[screamxitxoutxloud]

Ok, reveiw and Ryan Ross is YOUR'S

:]

You ALL want him

And you KNOW it...

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"So this is our place now?" I ask, walking over one of the small windows.

I remember I had a picture of Gerard Way hanging up next to his window when I was ten.

Those were the days.

Tom comes up behind me, wrapping his arms around my waist and kissing the top of my head.

Ok, so being a tad on the short side isn't ALL bad.

"Yup, it's all ours." Tom says. I lay my head against his chest.

Then an idea comes to my head.

"Hey, Tom?"

"Hm?"

I wiggle free of his hug and pull myself up onto one of the tree branches covering the top of the tree house.

"Andi, what are you doing?! Don't get hurt!" Tom yells up to me.

I'm already half way up.

"Come up, Tom, the sun's setting!" I yell down. Tom shakes his head and starts to climb up.

I laugh when he almost falls.

"Andi, I swear if we fall..." Tom says gripping my shoulder tight.

His hold on me is tighter then Mikey Way's jeans.

Amen for Mikey.

"I've done this a bajillion times. We're not going to fall."

"Promise?"

"I promi-"

I cut myself off with a scream and I flail my arms.

Tom completely ****s.

"I'm kidding, gosh." I say smirking and crossing my arms.

Tom stares at me and smacks my arm.

"Scare me half to death, I swear to god, what if you had fallen! YOU COULD HAVE BEEN KILLED! WHAT WOULD HAPPEN THEN?! Oh god And-"

"Shut up."

"No, I'm mad now."

"Aww poor baby."

"Hush. Come on, I promised your mom I'd get you home in one peice by 9:30."

"Ok...YOU TOLD MY MOM DIDN'T YOU?!"

"No, my mom told your mom."

"Who told your m-"

"Bill."

"I should've known."

I climb down from the tree after Tom, jumping down onto the ply-wood floor on the last branch.

"I can't believe Bill told my mom. MY MOM. She's going to act so...UGH, i'm going to put him through torture, worse then what I'm going to go through. Imma put him in a tree and throw things at him."

"Awh," Tom coos, putting his arm around me and kissing my forehead, "I'll make sure he is tortured. I'll hide his eyeliner and hairspray."

"Or spray some junk in his eye."

[SCHREIoutLOUD]

Or spray some junk in his eye.

XD


hehe

[DeeDee]

nooo not in his beutiful eyes

mehr bitte wenn du kannst :D

im in love wit it

[BlondPunk]

XD
I was gone one day and missed three chapters!!!
Awesomeness.
I want more :]]

[tiklemepurple]

:D
Haha. Tom is cute in this fic.

RYAN ROSS! *melts*
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:]
:]

[Haley1018]

Tom completely ****s.

That made me burst out laughing!
My ribs hurt now.
Mehr bitte!!

[Monicaalynn]

haha one of my fave chapters yet....


where's my Ryan ross..... I WANT HIMMMM!!!!!! [I have an obsession...c:]

[LuckyShelbs92]

Awwwww....!

dang it, I'm becoming a puddle of lovey-dovey-ness. Ah well.

Mas, por favor. (translation: more, please!) :D

[amandaaraujo]

hahahaha that waas so funny ahhaha please update ssosonn :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

[Tomi_327]

andi...is going to spray some junk in his eye....I luahged so hard when I read that. and yes amen to mikey

[screamxitxoutxloud]

*Hands/Out/Ryan/Ross*

You may have him for today

Then he goes back in my bedroom for sfae keeping...

Under the floorvoards so he can't excape again...

MORE IS COMING SOON-ish

I have an eye doctors appointment today

So if I don't get the chapet done this morning

It won't be untill later this afternoon

[tiklemepurple]

Yay! Ryan Ross!
Yay! More fan fic...!
:|

[screamxitxoutxloud]

Ok, so my vision is blurry and I have the biggest headache ever and I should NOT have ordered that Vanilla Bean Frappachino in Venti

I feel like crap

But I'm updating now :]

Excuse me if this chapter doesn't quite make it far

I can't really see what I'm writing

X]

[BlondPunk]

I hope u get better :]
Can't wait for the next chappy

[screamxitxoutxloud]

I really wish I could say the chapter's on it's way...

But it's not

:/

I'm trying to think, but I really don't know if i'm going to post any more tonight.

I am so sorry

]:

I feel HORRIBLE about not writing

But my head is just KILLING me, so I can't think AT ALL

I'm sorry

But you get a consolation prize :]

http://i26.tinypic.com/105tr4p.jpg

BILL AND TOM KITTIES

=D

You ALL know you love it

And Ryan is now back in my room under the bed

Next chapter, if you review I'll get some Frank Iero in here

;]

[JumbieLover]

I really wish I could say the chapter's on it's way...

But it's not

:/

I'm trying to think, but I really don't know if i'm going to post any more tonight.

I am so sorry

]:

I feel HORRIBLE about not writing

But my head is just KILLING me, so I can't think AT ALL

I'm sorry

But you get a consolation prize :]

http://i26.tinypic.com/105tr4p.jpg

BILL AND TOM KITTIES

=D

You ALL know you love it

And Ryan is now back in my room under the bed

Next chapter, if you review I'll get some Frank Iero in here

;]

YEAH FRANK IERO!!!

[BlondPunk]

:]
It's okay if you can't write today.
Imma put the piccie in my siggy, it's ADORABLE!!!

[tiklemepurple]

It's ok.
I hope you feel better!

[screamxitxoutxloud]

I'm giving you all

...


JARED LETO!!!

Just because you guys are so nice

x]

*passes/out/Jared/Leto*

My headache has gotten better so tonight there will be a new chapter!

[Monicaalynn]

awww, i'm sorry you havent been feeling good. i hate headaches. but i'm glad your feeling better, c:

[screamxitxoutxloud]

Writing Now

:]

[tiklemepurple]

Yay!
:D

[lilangel02371]

I FRIKKEN LOVE IT!!!!!

[BlondPunk]

Writing Now

:]


yaaaay!!!

[Monicaalynn]

Writing Now

:]


hazzah!!!! haha, i'm so weird...

[screamxitxoutxloud]

Don't get mad if you favorite person gets injured by flying delicious sweet treats :]

Or called a name x]

And don't ask where the 'G' talk came from O.o

Me and my friend, Shannon, have VERY fun IM convo's

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*2 weeks later*

"I can''t believe you talked me into seeing Narnia with you. I haven't even seen the first one." Tom says, walking into the empty theater with Bill, Andreas, Shannon and I.

"Then get ready to be extremely confused. But I swear Narnia number one was like THE BEST MOVIE EVER so this one should be good." Andreas says, throwing popcorn in the air and trying to catch it in his mouth.

Andreas fails.

EPICLY fails.

"Yeah, and the whole theater is deserted on Wednesday's anyway, so we can do this-" I take a handful of skittles and chuck them at Shannon.

"HEY!"

"And while you're doing that you can scream, 'TASTE THIS RAINBOW!'" I say, repeating my first action.

"If you do that one more time, Immaeatchu." Shannon says, pulling a skittle out of her hair.

"Taste the rainbow." I say throwing a purple skittle at Andreas.

"ANDI!!" Andreas whines, flailing as the skittle falls to the ground.

"Taste the rainbow." I say, throwing a orange skittle at Tom.

"Tomi doesn't want to taste the rainbow, HE WANTS TO TASTE THE ANDI!!!" Bill yells.

Tom pounces at Bill like a kitty.

"TOM LOOKS LIKE A KITTY!" I yell, taking my seat in the middle of the middle row.

The best seat in the house ****it.

Tom holds up his hand in claw, like form and meows.

"YOU SOUNDED LIKE LUNA!"

"You can stop yelling now, Andi." Shannon says from behind Andreas.

"NO! I LIKE YELLING! IT IS THIS LOUDEST FORM OF TALKING!" I yell.

"Hey, Bill, Andreas, Shannon. How about you sit in the back." tom says, throwing me a pack of twizzlers.

THE RAINBOW KIND.

I have the best boyfriend in the world.

"Why?" Andreas asks.

"Because he doesn't want us interfereing. Just come on, Andy." Bill says, rolling his eyes.

They sit, ONE row back from us.

Out of all the empty seats in the theater, they sit ONE row back.

"I MENT IN THE BACK!"

"I'm sitting here!" Bill says, jumping over the seats and sitting on the right of me.

"I'M SITTING NEXT TO TOMI!" Andreas yells

"NO YOU AREN'T!!!"

"Why?"

"Because you'll cry."

"NO I WON'T!!"

"You cried at 'My Little Ponies' being thrown off the top of our garage when we were 5.

"THAT WAS VERY EMOTIONAL! YOU KILLED THE ONE WITH THE RAINBOW ON IT'S ***!"

"That was the whole POINT of doing that. To kill them!" I say through a moutful of skittles.

I swear I crammed like...30 in there.

"Wanna eat more skittles, Andi?!" Shannon asks me.

I nod and shove 5 more in my mouth.

"That's nice...really nice." Bill says.

"Shut up, the movie is starting." Tom says, throwing popcorrn at Bill.

"IMMA SIT-"

"JUST PICK A SEAT ALREADY!" Tom, Bill, Shannon and I yell.

"*****es."

Andreas is just jealous of our seat picking skillz...

With a Z because we're so gangster it's not even funny.

FO SHIZZLE YO!

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Ten minutes left in the movie.

The scene where the total suspense was building up.

Would the children stay?

Would Susan kiss the totally hot prince?

All questions are finally going to be answered.

"I think Susan should stay with Mr.Tights-with-*** in Narnia!" Andreas says.

"ANDREAS SHUT UP!" Bill yells to the oother end of the row, through the darkness.

"GOD I WAS JUST MAKING A STATEMENT!!"

"A RUDE ONE!!!"

Silence filled the theater again, untill Shannon decided that she should try and catch popcorn in her mouth like andreas tried to not to long ago.

"SHANNON YOU GOT POPCORN IN MY HAIR!" I yell.

"Andi, close it." Tom says in my ear.

Shivers run down my spine.

"OHMYGOD THEY JUST TOTALLY KISSED!!!" Andreas yells.

"ANDREAS I CAN'T HEAR THE MOVIE!!" Tom yells.

"THEN SHUT UP!!"

"I'M NOT SCREAMING THE EVENTS OF THE MOIVE NOW AM I?!"

"SHUT THE FRICK UP!"

"BE MY GUEST!"

"YOU FIRST!"

"NO YOU!"

"Thank you, no we missed the end of the movie!" Bill yells.

"HA! I CAUGHT IT!!!" I yell, jumping up as the credits play.

"So did I." Shannon says

"I MISSED THE MEANING OF LIFE BECAUSE YOU TWO IDIOTS WOULDN'T SHUT UP!" Bill yells, hitting Tom and Andreas with a bag of M&Ms.

"YOU'RE WELCOME!" Andreas yells, standing up so quickly im suprised his jeans didn't rip.

Those things are tighter then Frank Iero's arse.

AMEN.

[BlondPunk]

XD
SHUT UP ANDREAS!!!
more more more :]
please :]

[Haley1018]

Omfg that was SO F**KING HILARIOUS

I love Andreas and Bill lmao XD

[LuckyShelbs92]

"You cried at 'My Little Ponies' being thrown off the top of our garage when we were 5.

"THAT WAS VERY EMOTIONAL! YOU KILLED THE ONE WITH THE RAINBOW ON IT'S ***!"

:shock:
LMAO. Dead serious. That has got to be the best line of anything EVER.

[JumbieLover]

:lol: I LOVED IT!!

[tiklemepurple]

Good job. Now my mom is looking at me like I'm an idiot because of my random bursts of laughter.


Taste the rainbow <3

Tomi doesn't want to taste the rainbow, HE WANTS TO TASTE THE ANDI lmao <3

NO! I LIKE YELLING! IT IS THIS LOUDEST FORM OF TALKING I say that all the time... <3

Andreas is just jealous of our seat picking skillz... Oh yeah... O_O;; <3

I think Susan should stay with Mr.Tights-with-*** in Narnia I died of laughter when I read that. <3

I MISSED THE MEANING OF LIFE BECAUSE YOU TWO IDIOTS WOULDN'T SHUT UP I can totally picture Bill saying that... lmao <3

AMEN!

[amandaaraujo]

Hahahahhahahahahahah that was sooooo funny hahahahahah "My little pony" ahahahahhahahahah "Hey i missed the mesning oflife" Funny ahahahhah think imma going to be laughing at this for a long time now hhahahhahah.

[tokiohotel26]

[quote="screamxitxoutxloud"]
Tom laughs and takes the plate of waffles I pushed at him.

"You, will stop laughing right now, or else the waffle shoved up your nose."

~new reader~
dont ever read those lines while drinking some thing because i know from experience :lol:
anyway i LOVE your fanfic!!!

[tokiohotel26]

ok these r my favorites!!

TASTE THIS RAINBOW!

"Tomi doesn't want to taste the rainbow, HE WANTS TO TASTE THE ANDI!!!"

"THAT WAS VERY EMOTIONAL! YOU KILLED THE ONE WITH THE RAINBOW ON IT'S ***!"

Andreas is just jealous of our seat picking skillz...

With a Z because we're so gangster it's not even funny.

FO SHIZZLE YO!

"I think Susan should stay with Mr.Tights-with-*** in Narnia!" Andreas says.

"I MISSED THE MEANING OF LIFE BECAUSE YOU TWO IDIOTS WOULDN'T SHUT UP!" Bill yells


omg i was crackin up the whole frickin time!

[Sidsel]

Pure love <3

More! :')

[screamxitxoutxloud]

I'll get a chapter up tonight or tomorrow

I gotta think

:]

[BlondPunk]

I'll get a chapter up tonight or tomorrow

I gotta think

:]


Okay!!!
:]

[Dreaminginthestars]

+New Reader+
Oh my gosh. I am in love with this story. It's so insanely adorable, not to mention frickin' hilarious. Update soon!

[Monicaalynn]

hahaha, omg. i was gonna pee when i read the my little pony part. and now i totally have to buy skittles and trow them at my friends yelling taste the rainbow hahahaha.

I love this story. it's awesome! [but your making me fall "in love" with tom, I want bill!!!!]

[whiteseawitch]

Andi... I am seeing frickin RAINBOWS everywhere thanks to YOU.... LOL...

and Bill won't miss the meaning of life for too long.... I WANT MORE

danke

[Sidsel]

[but your making me fall "in love" with tom, I want bill!!!!]

Yeah, Tom is like sooo .. Mhmm.. (<3) in this o.o;;

[tokiohotel26]

[but your making me fall "in love" with tom, I want bill!!!!]

Yeah, Tom is like sooo .. Mhmm.. (<3) in this o.o;;
doesnt matter 2 me i LOVE [LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE] them both :P

[screamxitxoutxloud]

Don't be mad at me

But I've been trying to think ALL DAY

And nothing has come

I will post once I get an idea

But for now, I shall try and cool off

It reached 98 in my classrooms today

Which made me sick

Which stops my thinking process

>.<

I'M SO SORRY!!!

Vote to see who gets to be passed out next review!!

1.Brendon Urie

2.Edward Cullen (you all know you want this)

3.Daniel Clark (Guy from Degrassi, he looks like Georgs younger brother to me O.o Google him if you don't know who he is)

[screamxitxoutxloud]

robert pattinson as edward cullen
or 'whoever you always imagined' as edward cullen??


;)

Who ever you imagined as Edward

[screamxitxoutxloud]

I have an idea now

:]

Fear the drama

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*1 week later*

"What the PHUCK?!" Bill and I yell together.

Tom called me earlier today, told me how he wanted to make up for the movie last week, how Andreas, Bill and Shannon coming wasn't part of the plan. Told me to wear something dressy, he's taking me out to dinner.

I come over, I put on HEELS and a DRESS for him. I work on my hair and makeup for an HOUR AND A HALF.

Bill answers the door, says Tom, Elly and him are watching a movie in the den.

Now we walk downstairs and Elly is on Tom's lap, and their mouths are connected.

We're talking leech on leech here.

Tongue and ALL.

Elly jumps off of Tom and stares wide eyes at us.

"She kissed me, I swear she did." Tom says, standing up, coming over to Bill and I.

"YEAH THAT'S WHY YOUR HANDS WERE ON HER THIGH AND ***!" I scream, pushing him back.

"Andi, I-"

"Don't come near me, don't. Bastard."

"Andi, just let me-"

"EXPLAIN?! EXPLAIN WHAT?! THAT IT HASN'T EVEN BEEN A MONTHS AND ALREADY YOU'RE ALL OVER SOME OTHER GIRL?! A GIRL THAT'S YOUR BROTHERS GIRLFRIEND?!"

"SHE'S NOT MY GIRLFRIEND ANYMORE!!!" Bill yells from behind me.

"WHAT?!" Elly's eyes are wide.

As if she didn't see that coming.

"Get someone else to walk all over, prissy little *****." Bill sneers.

Elly storms out of Bill and Tom's house, slamming the door behind her.

"Andi-"

"DON'T TALK TO ME!"

"Just-"

"YOU SAID YOU LOVED ME! YOU SAID THAT YOU HAVE PHUCKING LOVED ME SINCE WE WERE SIX! YOU DON'T SAY THAT TO SOMEONE THEN GO AND KISS ANOTHER GIRL! I THOUGHT YOU MENT IT, THAT YOU WEREN'T LIKE THOSE GUYS THAT BREAK HEART OR THOSE GUYS THAT PLAY AROUND WITH THE WHOLE FEMALE STUDENT BODY! I GUESS I WAS WRONG!"

"You weren't wrong. Just let me explain!"

"I CAN'T BELIEVE I FELL FOR ANOTHER GUY LIKE YOU! EVERY GUY! I SWEAR I CAN'T FIND ANYONE GOOD!"

"Andi, shut up! You won't even let me explain!"

"DON'T PHUCKING TELL ME TO SHUT UP, TOM! EVERY KISS, EVERY WORD WAS A LIE! I SHOULD HAVE SEEN IT COMING! I'M NOT LETTING YOU EXPLAIN BECAUSE IT WILL JUST BE MORE LIES! I KNOW EXACTLY WHAT I SAW AND SHE WASN'T FORCING YOU TO LIFT HER SKIRT UP, WAS SHE? SHE WASN'T FORCING YOU TO STICK YOUR TONGUE DOWN HER THROAT, WAS SHE?"

Tom stands and the silence kills me.

"No, she wasn't. You're right, I did that on my own."

Wrong. Answer. ***. Hole.

I slap Tom across the face and push him against the wall.

"If you see me on the street, don't look at me. If you see me here with Bill, don't talk to me. If you ever touch me again I will hit you twice as hard. Leave me alone, for good." I say.

I look him straight into the eyes when I say this.

And every single word rips another hold in my heart.

Every word is another tear hiding behind my eyes.

Every word is another day that will drag by without him.

My hand flies up to my neck and I break the chain on the locket he gave me last Friday.

"I'll love you forever. What bull ****." I say, throwing the necklace at him and walking out of the house. I kick off my shoes and I run, the skirt of my short black dress flying behind me.

The tears start to fall before I'm even home.

I slam the front door to my house, my mom's head snapping up from the magazine she's reading.

After looking me over, looking at the black tears running down my face, the shoes in my hand, the cut on my neck from the silver chain scratching me.

It registers to her.

"Oh hunny."

I fall into her arms.

I think I've lost it.

[SCHREIoutLOUD]

oh my 'phucking' god...

[Nyloria]

*New Reader*
Wow. :shock: That was amazing. The whole time I was reading it I was thinking about the song "Your Love Is A Lie" by Simple Plan. Please write more!

[Haley1018]

:shock:

OH. MY. GOD.

D*MN YOU, TOM!!! I'M GOING TO F**KING KILL YOU!!!

******, YOU'RE ABOUT TO MAKE ME CRY!

[tiklemepurple]

Holy phuck!
Tom is a freaking idiot!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
What an *** hole!
:x
More!

[LuckyShelbs92]

:shock: Dude...I'm speechless. That was just an unbelievable turn of events.

I want to smack Tom now. :x

(Bill said scallywag. XD Sorry, I'm just easily amused by some things.)

[DeeDee]

oh my good lord

tommmmmm if you were to be infront of me you'll be dead by now thats for sure


mehr bitte wenn du kannst :D

[BlondPunk]

DDDDX
TOM YOU MORAN!!!
-_-*
BAD TOM!
.......
MORE

[screamxitxoutxloud]

:shock: Dude...I'm speechless. That was just an unbelievable turn of events.

I want to smack Tom now. :x

(Bill said scallywag. XD Sorry, I'm just easily amused by some things.)

The mods are trying to 'nice' things up and Bill was ment to say W-H-O-R-E but they changed it to 'scallywag'

I tried to change the niceness but I missed that one

I was all

What the phuck?!

When I read your post

x]

More tomorrow

*tosses/Brendon/Urie/to/crowd*

[whiteseawitch]

umh.... WOW... speechless... ja... phucking idiot is RIGHT!! and Bill... he is kinda umh... an idiot too right about now... heehee... MORE MORE MORE!!!

[LuckyShelbs92]

The mods are trying to 'nice' things up and Bill was ment to say W-H-O-R-E but they changed it to 'scallywag'

I tried to change the niceness but I missed that one

I was all

What the phuck?!

When I read your post

x]

More tomorrow

*tosses/Brendon/Urie/to/crowd*
hoe->scallywag

that makes so much more sense. But the line is just...OH! BURN!

I'll be a-waitin'. :]

[Dreaminginthestars]

Dude. Tom, how could you? Wow, this is gettin' intense. Update soon! :]

[tiklemepurple]

omgomgomg..
just as everyone's falling 'in love' with tom
whaaammm he's a jerk! ughh
AND ELLY! that skank!!! >.>



I am in love with this FF.
MY FAVORITE
She's a ho bag.
>.<
I was starting to like Tom more than Bill. Then BAM! Tom is an idiot.

[tokiohotel26]

isnt he always
?

god tom ur such an ***
im gonna cry!:cry:
gosh u have me mad at my computer now!!!
lol :evil:


y did u do this 2 me

omgomgomg..
just as everyone's falling 'in love' with tom
whaaammm he's a jerk! ughh
AND ELLY! that skank!!! >.>



I am in love with this FF.
MY FAVORITE
She's a ho bag.
>.<
I was starting to like Tom more than Bill. Then BAM! Tom is an idiot.


me 2, me 2

[Monicaalynn]

wow, i seriously never saw that coming. but i'm slow when it come to things like that.

i cant wait to read more!!!!

[Sidsel]

Umg, drama o.o;;;;;

More, please!

[ILuvKaulitzTwins4E]

omg i cant believe Tom did that...i thought Tom hated Elly to ..hmmm....please update soon

[amandaaraujo]

oh myt jgskdfjvkdfjkvbhjd****jvkdfcbfkjdjg TOM u effing idiot you oooohhh you aaahhh i was starting to like you aaaaaah im sooo mad !!!!!!! :evil: :evil: :evil:

[screamxitxoutxloud]

Ohmygod I'm so sorry I haven't written anything

;_;

I'm thinking right now and I'll have something up tonight

I promise

YOU ALL GET BILL AND TOM SKITTLES!!!

*passes out buckets of Bill and Tom skittles*

[amandaaraujo]

Ohmygod I'm so sorry I haven't written anything

;_;

I'm thinking right now and I'll have something up tonight

I promise

YOU ALL GET BILL AND TOM SKITTLES!!!

*passes out buckets of Bill and Tom skittles*

yum tom and bill skittles
take your time*says trying not to choke on a handful of skittles*

[screamxitxoutxloud]

Ok, here's more...

Again, I'm sorry!

;.;

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"Bill why are we driving through the woods?! Where are you taking me?!" I ask, looking out my window.

"Would you just shut up?"

"No, you held me captive in my bedroom for 4 hours doing my hair, makeup, nails and getting me dressed, I DESERVE TO KNOW!"

"Well if you didn't have hair like Taylor phucking Swift we wouldn't have been spending 4 hours getting you ready now, would we?"

"SHUT UP! MY HAIR IS GOLD AND YOU KNOW IT! You only can DREAM of these sex beast curls so I would shut up if I were y..." I stop mid sentence as Bill pulls over at a lake.

"Why is Tom standing in front of the car and why is there a picnic blanket and OHMYGOD BILL TAKE ME HOME NOW!" I say panicing.

"No. I promised him."

"NOW! RIGHT NOW!"

"Andi, just talk to him."

"No, Bill. I've been so good about forgetting it ever happened for the past week and then you get me dressed up so I look hot and you...you bring me out here to HIM!" I yell, my eyes burning from threatening tears.

"Don't cry, your makeup will run."

"Bill don't even TRY and joke right now!"

"I'M NOT!"

"So you're not taking me home?" I ask after several minutes of silence.

"Nope."

I roll my eyes and open the car door.

"Where are you going?" Bill asks, running after me.

"I'm walking home!"

"In heels?!"

I look down at my feet and kick the earth with the toe of my silver mary jane pumps.

"Give him a chance. He really misses you." I look behind me at the lake scene.

Candles, a picnic blanket spead on the beach, Tom.

Oh god, I've missed him this week.

I've missed him so much.

"Fine." I say, walking back. I stop by Bill and hug him so tightly I think I've strangeled him.

"You're welcome." he says, brushing back one of my 'sex beast' curls from my face and smiling. I smile back and Bill squeeze's my hand before pushing me off towards Tom.

"You came after all." Tom says smiling. I nod and blush.

Why am I acting so shy around him?

"You look really really pretty."

"Thanks, you look nice too."

Everything is silent again.

"Andi, I'm so sorry."

"I know."

"No you don't. I feel like crap because of everything that happened. I miss you so much."

"You didn't miss me too much when your hand was going up Elly's mini skirt." I say, playing with my dress.

"I was stupid."

"NO really?!"

The sarcasm was totally and completely needed by the way.

"Elly means NOTHING at all. I don't even know why I did what I did, but believe me when I say, she came on to me."

"I believe you..."

"And she-you believe me?"

"Yeah," I bite my lower lip and look up at Tom from under the locks of hair that have fallen in my made up eyes,"We weren't exactly official either. I should have heard you out. But I was mad. And you-" my eyes burn and a tear falls down my cheek.

"Tom, you hurt me like I've never been hurt before. And I never expected that from you."

"Because you never had a reason to expect that from me."

"I know, and you got me so friggin mad."

"I know."

"You made me cry."

"I know."

"I never cry over a guy."

"I know."

"So it must mean that I love you."

Tom looks up at me, his face shocked.

"What?" I ask. I look down and wish I hadn't said that.

"I'm sorry, that was stupid, really stupid you-" I negin after a minute or two of silence but I'm cut off by Tom taking my face in his hands and bringing my face close to his.

"Stop, that was perfect."

"Are you sure because I think that was complete-"

"Shut up or I'm pushing you in the lake."

"Shutting up." I squeak. Tom laughs and kisses me.

I shiver from his touch and my heart leaps in my throat.

"I've missed this too much for my own good." I say as we pull away.

"Angel, you're not the only one." Tom whispers into my hair, pulling me into his embrace.

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K so this is my outfit because I found it while I was looking for summer clothes and thought it would be great for the chapter

http://www.kohls.com/kohlsStore/juniors ... +Dress.jsp (http://www.kohls.com/kohlsStore/juniors/dresses/specialoccasion/PRD~366046/Speechless+Strapless+Bubble+Dress.jsp)

http://www.target.com/Xhilaration-Skyle ... YS2LC8532M (http://www.target.com/Xhilaration-Skyler-Patent-Mary-Pumps/dp/B000PKY8OY/ref=cm_reviews_dp_seemore/601-4616672-3795301?ie=UTF8&coliid=&frombrowse=1&alt%5Fview=custReviews&asin=B000PKY8OY#RVCYS2LC8532M)

http://www.kohls.com/kohlsStore/jewelry ... rrings.jsp (http://www.kohls.com/kohlsStore/jewelry/fashionjewelry/earrings/PRD~172969/1928+FauxSapphire+and+Jet+Drop+Earrings.jsp)

[LuckyShelbs92]

All I can say is AWWWWWWW!!
that was beautiful!

sex beast curls XD

I loved it! :D

[whiteseawitch]

GIRRLLLLLL... SEE.. talking out what you want to happen and all... I knew you could do it... GO ANDI!!

ja.. sex beast curls, eh?? hehe

[caro.lina.]

saweeet.

[screamxitxoutxloud]

Writing now

Next chapter, reviews get Alex Evans

=]

Because he's a model and a photograph who can make snake bites look like they're god sent

[forlornfate]

Writing now

Next chapter, reviews get Alex Evans

=]

Because he's a model and a photograph who can make snake bites look like they're god sent


He took those out. :|

[Sidsel]

Awww-mg!

<333~
More, that's SO sweet! Amg <3

[screamxitxoutxloud]

Writing now

Next chapter, reviews get Alex Evans

=]

Because he's a model and a photograph who can make snake bites look like they're god sent


He took those out. :|

NO

:O

****it

-_-*

He's still a sex god

[DeeDee]

dat was soooo sweet

awww tomm

:evil: your turning me into a tom luver now :evil:

mehr bitte wenn du kannst

[tokiohotel26]

B-E-A...um...UTIFUL!
yay i can spell! lol
but i still wouldnt have forgave tom that easily
and i love the sex beast curls part!

[BlondPunk]

That was so sweet.
:]
More please

[screamxitxoutxloud]

****

-_-

Sorry I didn't post yesterday

Went to see a movie

]:

Didn't get home untill late

But the movie was comeplete ********

So you get revenge there

I'll try and write more but I had a really crappy day and I just want to cry right now

Cry and eat 5 pounds of chocolate

Then sleep

:]

I lost my point but still

More if I can think

YOU GET ALEX HEARTBREAKER EVANS FOR FREE NOW!!!!

[amandaaraujo]

Ok take your time hope you feel better :)

[screamxitxoutxloud]

WRITING MORE NOW

:D

Oh what boring movies in a hot classroom can do to you

[ChOcoLaTe_CuP_CaKe]

new reader***

I LOVE THIS FIC.

from the first chapter i was like "i love this fic"

and once i read the next chapter ... i asked it 2 marry me ... swear to god!

it was A M A Z E I N G!

IS FUNNI, AND THE CHARACTERS R PERFECT, AND U HAVE THE PERFECT AMOUNT OF DRAMA (NOT 2 MUCH NOT 2 LIL)

TEARS OF JOY* IM JUST SO HAPPY

KEEP GOING MA .. AND UPDATE!

I WONT ALLOW U NOT 2!

[screamxitxoutxloud]

More now

:D

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I wake up the next morning smiling. The night replayed as if it was a dream and I lazily stretch.

That's when I realized Tom is laying in the bed next to me.

And I have nothing but a sheet on.

I sit up quickly and look on the floor.

Tom's shirt...

Tom's pants...

My shoes...

My dress...

My panties...

My bra...

Tom's boxers...

The bed...

Tom...

Me...

Tears welled up in my eyes as I pull the sheet closer around me.

He played me.

Played me so bad.

Everything last night was a lie, maybe he ment it at one point but then it was just to get into my pants. Are they ALL the same?!

I'm sixteen.

I look down at the silver band on my right ring finger with a small emerald heart in the middle. The ring of my vow I took only two short years ago. The vow of absitenence.

Tears rolls down my cheeks and I hear Tom groan as he rolls over.

"Morning, love."

"Don't." I say, pulling myself away from his touch. My body shakes and I hurt, all over. My mind flashes back to when I was 14. I squeeze my eyes shut as Tom puts his hand on my shoulder.

"Andi, what's wrong? I...I thought you were ok with it...You didn't say anything last night..."

"I'm sorry...I'm sorry Tom...Please don't touch me...Don't play with my heart like that..." I say. I pull the sheet tighter around me, my body burning and my stomach hurting.

"I-"

"Tom..." I begin but I start to cry to heavily. I'm scared. I can't remember if I agreed or not. I can't remember anything except it hurt really badly.

I'm so scared.

~FLASHBACK~

'Frank...stop...you're hurting me...' My voice is only a whimper as my fourteen year old body is pressed down on the bed, my 2 year older boyfriend, Frank, pressing his lips hungrily to my neck and holding my arms down.

'Shut up, let me have this.' Frank says, pushing me down, harder. I close my eyes as he puts his hands on my stomach.

I pull his hands down.

'Frank. NO!' I yell and my mouth is slapped, blood leaking from my lip.

'Shut up, or I'll make you.'

I scream but it does no good.

--

'Baby, what happened?!' my mom exclaimed as I walk into my house. My body shakes as she brings me into her arms.

I tell her everything.

~END~

Tom tries to hold me but I pull away.

"Tom, please let me get dressed."

"Andi-"

"Leave, PLEASE!"

Tom grabs his boxers and holds a blanket around him, walking into his bathroom. I shakily dress and run down the street to my house.

"MOM!" I cry from my spot against the front door. When she doesn't come I yell louder, untill she comes flying down the stairs.

"Where have you BEEN?!"

"Mom...we..." I can't say it. All I do is look down at my abstinence ring.

"Oh, love. Are you ok? Did he..."

"No, mom he didn't rape me. I'm still so scared though. I feel so hurt, he probably only apologized to get in my pants." I cry into my mom's shoulder.

"Andi, you have every right in the world to be scared. But Frank took you, he hurt you. Tom wouldn't do that." my mom says.

The truth is.

I don't know if I believe her.

[Haley1018]

I thought Tom meant everything he said...
I'm seriously about to start bawling. :cry:
YOU JUST HAVE TO RUIN ALL OF MY HOPES AND DREAMS, DON'T YOU, SCREAMXITXOUTXLOUD?!?!?

[Tomi_327]

oh god...

[LuckyShelbs92]

Holy schniz... :shock:
I think I'm about to cry. :(
Ditto on what Haley said.

[ChOcoLaTe_CuP_CaKe]

awesome cant describe how amazeing this story is!

[amandaaraujo]

OH FICK I MISSED 2 FREACKING IMPORTANT CHAPTERS AAAAAH OMG POOR ANDI DID SHE EVER TELL BILL AND TOM ABOUT FRANK. OMFG I CANT BELIEV IT AHH IM CRYING WHEN I HEARD ABOUT FRANK I GOT THIS AKWARD PAIN IN MY SIDE.. OH WELL PLEASE UPDATE SOON YOUR KILLING ME FROM THE SUSPENSE I CANT BELEIVE IT ALTHOUGH I DONT THINK TOM DID IT ON PURPOSE OH MAN I FEEL LIKE I WANT TO CRY AND FORGET ABOUT TESTING TOMORROW.! :shock: :? :? :cry: :cry:

[steevie!]

>.<
cheese.
this is intense -.-

[Monicaalynn]

holy *****!!! poor Andi. I wonder if tom realizes what he did...? ahhhh!

[Sidsel]

AMGAMGAMGAMGAMGAMGAMG!!!

Srsly, that was... O' dear!
- Your fic is so amazing <3

[Emma B.E]

*new reader*


OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :shock:

This is one of the best fan fic's ever!!!! o.o

Please more!!!! XDD :D

[BlondPunk]

O.O
.....................
Omg.............
:[
More pleaze

[Emma B.E]

Please.. I'm dying here!!!! XD

[ChOcoLaTe_CuP_CaKe]

Please.. I'm dying here!!!! XD

word!!!!
must update <3333

[Emma B.E]

*waiting* xD

[steevie!]

-impatientface-

[Emma B.E]

I can't wait! XD

*I have problems* xD

[amandaaraujo]

HEllo is anyone updating ????? :?

[jackjackio]

I liiike.

Update? :]

[screamxitxoutxloud]

SORRY

It was the last day of school so I went over to my best friends house and I got home like...an hour ago and we caought tadpoles so I'm trying to figure out how to take care of them so they don't...

Die like my other ones did...

IMMA THINK NOW

And see where that gets me

BUT SCHOOL'S OUT

So I have more time to write :]

[steevie!]

yeah :D
-excitedface-

[amandaaraujo]

SORRY

It was the last day of school so I went over to my best friends house and I got home like...an hour ago and we caought tadpoles so I'm trying to figure out how to take care of them so they don't...

Die like my other ones did...

IMMA THINK NOW

And see where that gets me

BUT SCHOOL'S OUT

So I have more time to write :]






ah that must of been fun lolur sooo lucky i still have hmmm until the 20th ugh bohoo i want get out of school i wnanaa bohoo anyways back to you please update as fast as you can oh and how was graduationg have fun???

[tiklemepurple]

Oh sh;t.
No sh;t.
I miss a couple of days and THIS HAPPENS?!
Holy sh;t!
*dies*
Tom is such a man*****!
:|
Can't wait for more.
:D

[Emma B.E]

Oh sh;t.
No sh;t.
I miss a couple of days and THIS HAPPENS?!
Holy sh;t!
*dies*
Tom is such a man*****!
:|
Can't wait for more.
:D



I KNOW!!! xD O.o

can't wait!!:D

[ShadowIW]

:shock: :shock: :shock: ......WOW...... :shock: :shock: :shock:

[BlondPunk]

Oh sh;t.
No sh;t.
I miss a couple of days and THIS HAPPENS?!
Holy sh;t!
*dies*
Tom is such a man*****!
:|
Can't wait for more.
:D



I KNOW!!! xD O.o

can't wait!!:D


I can't wait either!
I'm very impatient.
Please update Asap!!!
Please?

[Emma B.E]

omg, I just came home from the stable and all I could think of when I was rifing was this f.ucking amazing fan fic!! XD

[screamxitxoutxloud]

OK I'M WRITING

-_-*

I'm sorry, I have lots of laudry to do

O_o

I'm drowning in laundry

-_-

[BlondPunk]

OK I'M WRITING

-_-*

I'm sorry, I have lots of laudry to do

O_o

I'm drowning in laundry

-_-

I HATE doing laundry!
don't remind me! lol
My closet is swimming in laundry. literally.
I don't want to do laundry.
And I have to sneak on the computer cuz I'm grounded for a week from it.
Can't wait for more + danke for writing ^^

[Rejects_Angel]

I love love love this story, I love it so much that I read the entire thing up til now on the little itty bitty screen on my phone because I didn't have a computer for awhile. Do you know how hard it is to read a story on a 1 inch screen? That's how good this story is

[tiklemepurple]

Haha wow. You got a lot of fans.
Nopressureoranything.
O___o

[Emma B.E]

Haha wow. You got a lot of fans.
Nopressureoranything.
O___o


lol. XD

[screamxitxoutxloud]

Kay here's more

----------------------------------------------------

'Meet me @ the treehouse XO Tom'

I look at the text again and then the time and wonder where Tom is. I'm about to leave when Tom comes up.

"Hey, I'm so sorry about what happened I don't even know why I did that." I say. Tom shakes his head and sits next to me, hand enclosing mine.

"Andi...there was a reason why you reacted that way...something happened before, didn't it?"

I freeze as Tom speaks.

"No." I say quickly. Tom turns to me and his eyes lock with mine.

"Andi, something did happen. I KNOW something happened."

Crap.

I take a deep breath and shake my head.

"I can't tell you, you would hate me." I say, my voice a whisper.

"Andi, I could never hate you."

"Yes you could, especially for this."

Tom leans close to me and shakes his head.

"Andi, please tell me what happened, I won't be able to live with myself if you've gotten hurt in someway and I couldn't do anything about it."

I close my eyes, tears forming quicker then I wish they would.

"You know how I'm afraid of that Law and Order show, SVU? And how I can't sleep with my windows or bedroom door unlocked at night? And how I took a vow of abstienece?"

Tom nods.

"Remember when you visited me in the hospital, because I 'fell' out of a tree broke my wrist and they needed to keep me over night?"

Tom nods again.

"Remember how I broke up with Frank the next day?"

Tom nods again, his eyes look worried.

I swallow and look down.

"I didn't fall out of a tree."

"Then what happened?"

I close my eyes and takes slow breaths.

"One night Frank called and asked me to come over so we could watch a movie together. I went over and Frank asked me to help him move something in his bedroom. We went upstairs and locked the door behind us. He started to kiss me-" I look straight ahead as a couple tears roll down my face.

"I thought we were only going to kiss," I say sobbing,"But he grabbed my wrist and pushed me against the wall and it broke, he pushed me onto his bed and I tried to tell him to stop. I was only 14, Tom. He raped me."

I'm instantly in Tom's arms.

"Andi, it's ok."

"No, Tom, it's not. I got scared when I woke up and my clothes were off, and I blamed it on you. I shouldn't have."

"Andi, you have nothing to apologize for. I just wish you would have told me sooner."

"I couldn't. I was scared of what you would have thought of me."

Tom pulls away from me and looks me in my eyes, brushing back some curls from my face.

"I would have thought a bastrad hurt one of the most amazing girls in my life and that she never deserved to have someone take her like that." he says and fresh tears come.

"Promise you won't tell anyone."

"I promise, I'm telling Bill though."

"I don't care if you tell Bill, but make him promise to keep his mouth shut too."

"I promise."

"Thank you."

"I'm so sorry, love. You never deserved to have that taken from you." Tom says, pulling me against him. He kisses my forehead and I bury my face into his chest.

"I love you, Tom."

"I love you too, Andi."

[Haley1018]

Yay Tom's not a man*****!

[steevie!]

holy cheese >.<

I wanna cuddle with Tom too >.<

he's sucha sweetheart.

[amandaaraujo]

aaawww she told him she told him *jumps up and down pointing aat Andii* aww thaat was sweet please more mehr mas.

[Emma B.E]

awwwww !!!!!!!!!!! :shock: <3

[Emma B.E]

can't wait!! (A) :D


*hyper*

*runsaroundscreaming*

xDD

[DeeDee]

awww tomm is sooo sweet

mehr bitte :D

[Dreaminginthestars]

Aw. So cute. Continue soon.

[tiklemepurple]

Awww!
Tom is worthy of my love again.
<3
He's so perfect in this fan fic.
:D

[Monicaalynn]

awwww. tomi's soo cute!

[LuckyShelbs92]

Awwwww. <3
yay! :D

[BlondPunk]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!
Tom's sop sweet ^^
I'm soooo happy you updated, but now I want morte again :]

[jackjackio]

Love it!

And this isn't a BAD thing or anything, but
are you a fan of Pirates of the Caribbean?
Because I see a lot of it's influence. :]

[steevie!]

-can'twaitformore-

:D

[Sidsel]

Holycow T.T

Tom is like the sweetest evar in this fic. Moar, bitte!

[Emma B.E]

Can't wait!!!!:D

[screamxitxoutxloud]

I'm writing now!

[screamxitxoutxloud]

Nevermind O_O

Let me think

I had an idea but it WOULD NOT fit in with the story AT ALL

Be patient

x]

It's only the second day of summer vacation

[Sidsel]

Nevermind O_O

Let me think

I had an idea but it WOULD NOT fit in with the story AT ALL

Be patient

x]

It's only the second day of summer vacation

Oh, my vacation starts first the 29th T.T

[BlondPunk]

Nevermind O_O

Let me think

I had an idea but it WOULD NOT fit in with the story AT ALL

Be patient

x]

It's only the second day of summer vacation


This Saturday It'll be the fifth week since I'm out. And I want to go back to school already.
Are you sure there is no way to make your idea fit with the story???

[Emma B.E]

Nevermind O_O

Let me think

I had an idea but it WOULD NOT fit in with the story AT ALL

Be patient

x]

It's only the second day of summer vacation


This Saturday It'll be the fifth week since I'm out. And I want to go back to school already.
Are you sure there is no way to make your idea fit with the story???


lol !!!!!!!!! XD :D

[amandaaraujo]

Nevermind O_O

Let me think

I had an idea but it WOULD NOT fit in with the story AT ALL

Be patient

x]

It's only the second day of summer vacation


This Saturday It'll be the fifth week since I'm out. And I want to go back to school already.
Are you sure there is no way to make your idea fit with the story???


lol !!!!!!!!! XD :D
wow i have to wait till the 20th

[screamxitxoutxloud]

Sorry for the put-off

]:

I have the worst case of writers block EVER

I can BARELY think

And I'm getting sick

-_-*

[BlondPunk]

This Saturday It'll be the fifth week since I'm out. And I want to go back to school already.
Are you sure there is no way to make your idea fit with the story???


lol !!!!!!!!! XD :D
wow i have to wait till the 20th


move to Hall or Gwinnet County, Georgia. But I reaaaaally want to go back to school! I miss my freinds.

[BlondPunk]

Sorry for the put-off

]:

I have the worst case of writers block EVER

I can BARELY think

And I'm getting sick

-_-*

It's okay :]
Don't be sorry

[Emma B.E]

Hope you feel better soon :)

[amandaaraujo]

yeah dont worry andi we'll wait have you thought of ideas that dont fit but if you do try to tweak them thats what happends to me and it works sometimes..

[qweenb717]

i love reading this story..but i'm sorry..if i was Andi, i would have been ****** when it came to him making out w/ bill's gf Elly..whether or not she came on to him doesnt matter b/c he still had his hand up her skirt..he soooooooo woulda had to do so much more to gain my trust or to get back w/ me..he hardly even put any work into getting her back..otherwise, i cant wait to see what happens next! i check the story almost everyday to see if it's been updated

[Emma B.E]

****, I can't wait!! XD

you're killing me! XD

[Rejects_Angel]

Sorry for the put-off

]:

I have the worst case of writers block EVER

I can BARELY think

And I'm getting sick

-_-*


I hope u feel better soon.

[screamxitxoutxloud]

Ok, this fic is officialy on HIATUS for right now

I'm sorry, but I have SO many other ideas for NEW fics and maybe once I get some ideas down on paper it will come to me

I feel bad now

;_;

SORRY!
XO
Andi

[Dreaminginthestars]

No need to feel bad. Sometimes, you just need to take a break. And I'm sure when you decide to update again, it'll be phenomenal!

+ Amy +

[screamxitxoutxloud]

No need to feel bad. Sometimes, you just need to take a break. And I'm sure when you decide to update again, it'll be phenomenal!

+ Amy +


Thank you, gosh everyone on here is so supportive

;-;

XO
Andi

[Sidsel]

I couldn't say it better myself^^

Rly, that's alright (:
- Sometimes Tom just need to sleep, also (;

[BlondPunk]

No need to feel bad. Sometimes, you just need to take a break. And I'm sure when you decide to update again, it'll be phenomenal!

+ Amy +

Exactly!

[jackjackio]

Oooh, it's okay.
:]
No worries.
Absence makes the heart grow fonder.

[berthaxoxo]

*New Reader*

THIS FANFIC IS AMAZING!!
I JUST CLICKED THE LINK FOR MISTAKE
AND NOW I THANK IT!!
I JUST FRIGGIN LOVE IT!!
IT'S AMAZING IT HAS MAKE ME CRY, LAUGH!!
JUST LET ME KNOW WHEN THE HIATUS IS OVER :D

[Emma B.E]

No worries <3 :)

[Emma B.E]

Bumpes ^^,

[Emma B.E]

again ^^,


omg... I saw my old colour... and now I miss it... :cry: