NEW FIC!!!~~ what goes around comes around

[Tomi_327]

okay I dont know if this is going to turn out good, so wish me luck!

It all started in the seventh grade, nothing had changed for me and my life was the same, not any different like I wanted it to be.

I have been wearing my lucky necklace for who knows how long, waiting for this crapy luck to wear off, when if finally came one day.

Two new students came to my school that day,
"Oh this is my luck, more people at my school that I need to worry about." I mumbled to myself.

They were in my first hour, the longets hour of the day, and when they walked into my classroom, Andi and I looked at them and they looked right back, right into our eyes, like they were looking inside us.
It was just that strange look, those eyes, that shot electric right through me.
I didnt know what this was, and I surely didnt know it was going to change my life

[BlondPunk]

oooohh more!
continue!

[Tomi_327]

*2 years later*

Those two kids, that were in that classroom, managed to get through to our heads. Andi and I became best friends them. We didnt know how or why they did it but they were never not with us.
Their names were bill and tom.
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"Bill, I cant believe this is happening to me! Is my luck turnig around?"
I ask Bill, I was crying.
"No, it was just a unfortunate event, its going to be okay, shannon please stop crying."
He said as he wiped tears from my face, as I lay there squeezing him.
"No, she was the only one I had left Bill.."
I had lost my mother.
"I'm sorry, I am so sorry Shannon."
He said as he held me close to his chest. His scent wafting in my nose.
She died in a terrible accident.
I just lay there, helplessly, in Bills arms, crying until nothing matters anymore.


I will write more tomorrow

[Tomi_327]

Andi, Bill, and Tom have always been there to comfort me. I seem to always have a bad day when they arent around, my luck must not work anymore.
"Shannon, you okay?" Tom asked concerned
I shook my head yes, tears still falling.
"I think I'm gonna be fine Tommy, its just really hard."
"Yes,yes I know..I know."
Andi and Bill were in the other room, making something to eat, so it was only Tom and I in the room.
I sat there on the couch, with my arms wrapped around him, while I was settling down from crying.
Tom took my hand a stroked it, the electric feeling came back from seventh grade.

[BlondPunk]

Poor Shannon!
More please :]

[Tomi_327]

I was still upset about my mother dying, but I soon got over it, crying every now and then. It was other things that came into my mind, that night, when I was in Toms arms, bawling my eyes out. The feeling of electric tingling down my spine, I just couldnt get my mind off of it.

I couldnt get to sleep at night because I had pictures of Tom running through my head, and thoughts all jumbled up in there.I couldnt sleep, at 9:00 when Andi came in my room, I was still awake, my arms wrapped around my knees, and my eyes dark.
"Woah..."
That was all she said.
"I didnt get any sleep last night.."
She looked at me really weird
"Why?"
I looked at her, and thought if I was going to tell her the truth or not.
"I dont know.... I just couldnt get to sleep, I had a stomach ache that wouldnt go away."
"Oh well do you need medicine? You should really go to sleep."
I sat up weakly,clumsily walking out of the room.
"No I'm okay."
Andi looked concerned, but she didnt say another word.

I sluggishly walked in the kitchen, and pulled up a chair. I was surprised I could even pull it. I just set my head on the table with a loud thump. I couldnt even close my eyes.
I heard someone sit next to me and I saw it was Tom.
"woah.....what is with your eyes?"
He was like staring at me like there was a fricking dog talking.
" I didnt get any sleep last night.."
I said yawning quietly.
"why?"
Oh no, I didnt know what to say...what if the answer suddenly spilled out on accident?
"umm I had a stomach ache..."
"Oh okay, are you better?"
"Yes."
"Do you want something to eat?"
"No I am not hungery."
I heard him crunch his cereal with a loud "ok"
I didnt know when this was going to end, but I knew it wasnt going to be soon, if I told him...maybe it would get better.

[screamxitxoutxloud]

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[ILuvKaulitzTwins4E]

omg this fic is soo good please update soon

[tiklemepurple]

OOOOO
More!
<3

[BlondPunk]

more bitte!!!

[amandaaraujo]

aaaaaaawwww omg i feel so bad for shanon but ooh lalala Tom ignites her viens hehe please update when you can

[Tomi_327]

This feeling needed to stop, I was hardly ever hungery but I forced food down that I could. And I wasnt getting enough sleep, it was getting so frustrating.
I turned on the TV to see music videos playing.I just kept is on. Tom was sitting on the couch next to me, and Andi and Bill were somewhere that I didnt know about. I knew nothing anymore.
"Shannon are you okay?" asked Tom concerned
"Yeah, I guess why?"
"Because you look so terrible, I mean you havent been sleeping, you hardly eat, and I mean just look at yourself! Something is seriously wrong."
Tom just stared at me, waiting for me to answer, while my spine was being electrocuted, I looked away.
"It probly is just that I have been sick lately..."
Tom rolled his eyes.
"Try again."
I took a big sigh...I didnt know what to say.
"JUST FRICKING TELL ME SHANNON!!"
I just looked at him, and stared.
"WELL I DONT KNOW TOM, MAYBE EVERYTIME YOU LOOK AT ME I GET A ELECTRIC SHOCK DOWN MY SPINE, AND I CANT SLEEP BECAUSE YOUR IN MY MIND ALL THE TIME. IS THAT WHAT YOU WANTED? HUH? BECUASE THAT IS THE REASON."
Tom just stared at me as I walked away.
I ran outside, and started walking I didnt know where, but it was going to take me somewhere else.

After I had walked at least three blocks,a car pulled up next to me.
It was Tom.
"Shannon....get in please."
I stood there for at least 30 seconds, thinking if I should get in or not. But I did.
He started driving out of the neighborhood, not saying a word, and into the nearest McDonalds.
"You need something to eat, come on."
I got out of the car sluggishly and walked in beside him.
I just got something to drink.
But Tom got me something anyway that I probly wasnt even going to touch.
We sat down in a booth and Tom folded his hands a opened his mouth to talk.
"So you feel that way about me?"
I shook my head looking down with the straw in my mouth.
He cleared his throat, preparing to talk again.
But he didnt, he just gave the most cutest smile ever. Like he was happy that I felt that way about him.
"I've been waiting for this, Shannon."
I just looked at him really funny.
"Ever since I saw you in that classroom, in seventh grade...I dont know...why do you think I wanted to be your friend so badly? I mean think about that now."
*flash back*
Tom sat across from me at lunch, staring at me. The same cute smile.
"Hey, I'm Tom."
I just smiled and didnt say anything.
He just kept talking to me, even though I didnt talk back. And I though that, that was so brave because every guy taht trys to talk to me just leaves and doesnt talk to me again. But Tom, he talked to me everyday. Piecing together a friendship.
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I smiled from that flash back and looked at him.
Taking a bite of my chicken select.
I think he was happy that I was finally eating.
He just reached out and touched my hand, his velvety skin touching mine, and smiled.

[Tomi_327]

sorry there is a few typos guys!! :?
thanks for the great comments you guys make me write more :mrgreen:

[raven]

awsome write more
please read mine its under no name yet

[BlondPunk]

yay! she told him and he's not scared! I can't wait for more!

[Tomi_327]

Tom pulled up the driveway,and neither one of us got out of his car.
His hand was on mine, and his face leaned in close. He gave me a kiss on the cheek as I..
*flashback**
"Tom it hurts make it stop!!"
I yell.
I had jumped off a swing, and landed on my wrist.
Tom ran over to me,
"Are you okay?" he asked.
"No, it hurts really bad." I say, tears streaming down my face.
He took my wrist, and examined it.
"Can you move it?"
I moved it back and forth very slowly and painfully.
"Yes." I said
"Well, I think you sprained it."
My face got into an even bigger frown.
Then TOm took my wrist and gently kissed it.
"Feel better?"
A smile inched across my face.
******

I cam back to the real world, to Tom staring at me.
"Are you okay?" he said chuckling.
"Ummm...yeah, sorry, daydreaming."
He just got out of the car and walked inside,as I did the same.

I went up to my room, it felt different wehn my mom wasnt around. Luckily, my aunt is helping me with the payment. THere were very little, so there was nothing to waorry about.

I sat on my bad, and saw a box that was dusty. I took it out from between shelves. I opened it and found pictures and old toys and stuff.
Bella.
One of my best friends.
Bill was in love with her,but she didnt know until the week before she moved away...
I hardly ever talk to her anymore, have no idea where she lives either.
Man,Bill was to upset, he was bawling his eyes out.

I pulled out a picture, and laughed at it.
It was of me and Bella, with big sunglasses hidig our eyes, on a ferris wheel at the fair. You could just see a piece of bills hair.
Then I pulled out another one, It was of Bella and Bill.
Bill was smiling really big, while bella was laughing.
"Your happy arent you?"
Bill walked in out of nowhere scaring the crap out of me.
God , you scared me!" I said in a stern voice.
"Ha ha, I know." he said shrugging and taking a sip out of a water bottle.

Then out of nowhere, BIll yells something about pickles, and I dont know why it is so funny, but I was laughing so hard, I almost fell of my bed.
Then I found Bill, right next to me, his face in a pillow.
"What are you doing now?"
He shrugged his shoulder.
I layed down next to him, and he took his face out of the pillow.
"Bill you got makeup on my pillow!" I said flicking him,
"Oops...I'll clean it..."
he said
"No, no its okay."
"No, I think I will." he said, insisting and starting to argue, just because he knows it gets on my nerves.
"Bill, that wont be necessary,"
He didnt even answer. He just started taking my pillow case off.
I siaghed and grabbed the pillow case from him and threw it across the room.
"Why do you want to clean it so badly anyway?"
He shrugged his shoulders,
"Because, I got makeup on it."
"Well forget about it."
I just layed ack down on my bed and closed my eyes.
I ended up falling asleep, and waking up to Toms velvety skin touching my face, and his soft lips kissing my forehead. I smiled and opened my eyes.
I got up and found that the pillow case wasnt there.
Bill....

[BlondPunk]

XD
Bill....
More please!

[tokiohotel26]

OMG that is a good story! u need [need need need need NEED] to write more and lol Bill!

[Tomi_327]

sory guys, I am so blank right now. I need inspriation

[tokiohotel26]

ok ill give u some inspiration ill pm u ok?

[Tomi_327]

I walked down the stairs to see my pillow case perfectly folded on the dryer.
"Do you do everything perfect?" I asked Bill, clenching my teeth.
He shrugged his shoulders,
"Sure."
I rolled my eyes and picked up the pillow case and started attacking him with it.He was sitting on the ground and I tripped over his leg and fell on him.
We were face to face.
Bill just looked at me..
and put his soft lips to mine, locking them together.
But the weird thing was, I didnt break away, and it felt.....right...
He broke away and I just looked at him, and got off of him before someone saw.
I smiled and walked to my room where the phone was on my bed.
I dialed Andis number.
"Andi?"
"Yea?"
"Can you come over like,right now?"
"ummmmm sure, is something wrong?"
"Well...no not really.."
"Okay. See you when I get there."
What was I going to say to her? Everything was cramming up in my head...how can Bill like me too??

[Tomi_327]

tell me what you think

[tokiohotel26]

yay! u used it! im so happy! [[does happy dance]] :mrgreen:

[Tomi_327]

yay! u used it! im so happy! [[does happy dance]] :mrgreen:
your welcome :D

[ILuvKaulitzTwins4E]

woah........
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i didnt expect that

please update this ff is really good :D

[Tomi_327]

Andi knocked on my door to my bedroom,
"Shannon let me in." she said
I just layed there, staring into space, thinking...
"So, uh whats up?"
"I dont know what to do Andi.."
She looked confused.
"What are you talking about??"
I swallowed and prepared to talk.
"Well....I tripped over Bill...and he kinda..you know....kissed me."
She just stared at me.
"And?"
I stared at her right back.
"Well I kinda liked it and I am supposed to be in love with TOM!!! I mean after all that I put him through!!!"
"Well then stay with Tom!!" she said like I was stupid/
"But what if I dont feel the same way about him?"
She though about that for a second.
"Well.....uhhh.....oh wait..wait...um yeah i got nothing..."
I sighed along sigh.
"I'll just have to find out."

[Tomi_327]

have so much on my mind, I'll try to think of something, god trying to write two fanfics is harder than I thought!

[Tomi_327]

okay guys tell me what you think so far...school got out today, I am so excited!!!!

[Tomi_327]

Right then and right there.
Tom walked in.
"Whats wrong?"
he asked concern in his eyes
"Im...gonna go now..."
Andi said, snickering...how rude of her
"Nothing is wrong Tom."
He shrugged his shoulders..well okay..then...
he looked kinda mad..but then suddenly happy
it was scary
He sat on my bed, and wrapped his arms around me, I turned towards him and my lips connected to his. Butterflys started in my stomach,and it was flipping rapidly.
How can I be in love with two people at a time?

[tokiohotel26]

brothers nonetheless!

[Tomi_327]

brothers nonetheless!
I know how can you not like both of them??

[tokiohotel26]

i know!
*drooling*
sorry dreaming about them... :lol: :mrgreen:

[Tomi_327]

its hard not to dream about them!! :D

[screamxitxoutxloud]

Write more and dude, it's SO totally possible to be in love with two people at the same time because both of their qualities can compliment your's and make you feel attracted

:]

Boo-yah I FOR TOTALLY just explained the age old question!

[Tomi_327]

My thoughts were all crammed together. I guess it was possible to be in love with two people. But I am with Tom, no matter how much Bill wants me..

I walk to Bill and Toms house. I made sure Tom wasnt going to be there so I could talk to Bill.My heart was beating out of my chest, I was so nervous, I have never been nervous around them. I ran up the stairs to his room. Of course he was there, just watching TV.
"Hey Bill."
He looked at me and smiled.
"Hey."
"Ummm...I have to talk about something."

I said sitting next to him.
"Okay anything."
He said as he put his hand on top of mine.
"I-I just want to let you know, that I am with Tom. So please dont kiss me or anything like that."
He pulled his hand away from mine.
"But-but I thought we had something.."
"Bill......if I ever break up with Tom, if anything goes wrong..anything. I will come to you. I promise."
A small smile inched across his face, but slowly faded away.
"Its okay."
I hugged him and he hugged back.
Nothing can tear apart us right now

[Tomi_327]

hope you guys like!

[Tomi_327]

I am so sorry I cant think!!! but tell me what you think about my last post

[xlisax]

love love loved it! (:

[Tomi_327]

I woke up covered in sweat, but I was shivering.My stomach was in knots and my muscles were stiff and sore. I looked at the clock, trying not to fall from dizziness.
5:00
Toms room seemed miles away.
I was breathing heavier, and then the shivering made my teeth chatter.
I walked down to Toms room, and everything..just went...black.
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I woke up in my bed, my stomach still in knots, but the shivering gone.
Tom was laying next to me, sleeping. I moved and he instantly woke.
"Shannon are you okay?"
"I-I think so....I dont know what happened.
"Well I found you in front of my room, sleeping on the floor.So I carried you back, you had a fever."
I smiled at him.
"Thanks."
He strocked my face, and I felt an electrical feeling run down my spine.
I felt like I could stay here forever