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luvukaulitztwins
June 1st, 2008, 03:46 PM
Okay i have no clue why i wrote this. What happened was it was 5am i was in the hotel every1 was asleep i was bored. I went and took some paper and a pen and just started writing this.

Idk if it was meant to be a poem or wat O_e

There is a meaning to it but it's for u guys to find out

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Together we stand as one
Just to take it one by one
Just to find
Nothing to just to die
Can you
Be here for me
No maybe it wont work
Can you
Just stay here beside me I trust you
Forever you dare

Forever darkness
Drying the pain
All alone
Where will I find you
Just to talk to you
All alone

Darkness takes over
Here we are again
Please take it slow
I am alone I need you

Just remember I am here for you
All alone
Where will I find you
Just to talk to you
All alone
Just take my hand
All alone
I sit her
All alone
Just be together
Take this and hide this
All Alone
Just take time to think
I am here all alone


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Ik a hunk of junk i cant write plus i was awake jet lagged xD

So comment free speech i dnt care if u say oh thats reli **** im not bothered speak ur mind i dnt like people saying they like it when they really hate it

ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 1st, 2008, 04:35 PM
omg i am serious when i say i realy realy like it........you are a realy good writer

luvukaulitztwins
June 1st, 2008, 04:37 PM
I cant write i was trzing to write a song i guess it turned into a poem or something i was too tired i was trying to watch south park at the same time i wrote it in bout 10 minutes i spent half of it looking at the TV

I culd maybe do better O_e

I knew i culd O_e
And danke schön

tiklemepurple
June 1st, 2008, 05:03 PM
Aww! I love it!
You should write more 'poems or whatever O_e'

luvukaulitztwins
June 2nd, 2008, 02:47 AM
Aww! I love it!
You should write more 'poems or whatever O_e'
I cant write them :oops:

It's like scary x]

I will write another it may be a bit O_e

x]

raven
June 2nd, 2008, 11:45 PM
wow thats really good

pressure
June 3rd, 2008, 03:46 AM
Ja! Those are really good!

luvukaulitztwins
June 4th, 2008, 02:54 AM
xD

Some boy come up with this song in class

I believe i can fly
I got shot by the F.B.I

I got shot in my privet bits
I see them lying on the floor

I believe i can fly
I got shot by the F.B.I

O_e

xD

tiklemepurple
June 4th, 2008, 03:21 AM
Lmao.
That's funny!
&& it rhymes~!