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Haley1018
June 1st, 2008, 05:25 PM
New ff I began writing last night. Enjoy and comment. :mrgreen:
Chapter One
Darkness filled the large bedroom as the sky outside darkened and thunderclouds rolled in. Leona lazily got out of bed and closed the window before rain started pouring in. She leaned against the windowsill and stared out at the buildings that made up Los Angeles. A clap of thunder shook the mansion, scaring Leona.
She quickly climbed back into bed and buried herself under the covers. She listened to the rain pattering against the closed window, and saw the occasional strike of lightning light up her bedroom. She sighed heavily and soon slipped into an uneasy sleep.
A loud knock on the door awoke her. “James! Answer that!” she demanded groggily, getting out of bed and pulling on skinny jeans and a Fightstar hoodie over her pajama top. James, the family butler, bowed in her direction, turned on his heel, and opened the door.
In stumbled four boys, each carrying about five suitcases. The one with perfectly straight hair grumbled something in German, and set down his suitcases. Leona let out a long sigh, and ran a hand through her multi-colored hair. Putting on a friendly face, she stepped forward and shook hands with each of the boys. “You must be Tokio Hotel,” she said. “My father is looking forward to producing your new CD.” Leona was used to musicians showing up at her mansion, living there for three months, and then leaving. Her father was a huge music producer, and singer and band was dying to work with him.
“You’re very pretty,” the boy with dreadlocks said, grinning seductively. “No,” Leona flat out told him before he could say anything more. His face fell, and the guy with funky black hair that stood up in all directions laughed at him. Leona turned to the butler. “James, if you would be so kind as to show them their rooms.” James bowed again, and led Tokio Hotel upstairs.
This experience will be very...interesting, Leona predicted, skipping off to her bedroom.
ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 1st, 2008, 05:33 PM
omg awsome start i can't wait to read more........
......update soon
Haley1018
June 1st, 2008, 05:39 PM
omg awsome start i can't wait to read more........
......update soon
Thank you! I'm going to post more tonight. :mrgreen:
ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 1st, 2008, 05:46 PM
YAY!!! i can't wait :mrgreen:
Haley1018
June 1st, 2008, 05:49 PM
:mrgreen:
Haley1018
June 1st, 2008, 05:54 PM
Chapter Two
Leona lay on her back in her bed, staring up at the ceiling and listening to “99" by Fightstar. There was a knock on the door, and in walked the boy with the funky hair. She raised an eyebrow at him as he sat on her bed. Is this guy insane? she thought. Usually the hot boys always keep their distance from me. “You are Dave’s daughter, right?” he asked. Leona nodded. The boy smiled and stuck out his hand. She gingerly shook it. “I’m Bill Kaulitz. The singer from Tokio Hotel.” “Leona Williams. The heiress of the Williams fortune.” Bill raised his eyebrows. “You’re an heiress?” he asked incredulously. He looked her up and down. “...But, you, um, don’t look much like an heiress...”
Leona rolled her eyes. This was the reaction she always got whenever she told people. “I’m no Paris Hilton. Heiresses don’t always have to be sophisticated or wear expensive clothes or go out partying every night,” she said. “Some heiresses wear skinny jeans and love rock music and put green, blue, red, purple, and orange streaks in their hair, just like me.” “Oh, really?” Bill asked amusingly. “Name one.” Leona looked puzzled. “Um...me!” Bill laughed. “Well, I’ll leave you alone now,” he said, getting off of Leona’s bed and leaving. She stared at the door for a moment after he closed it. She couldn’t shake off the feeling that he was so...familiar.
screamxitxoutxloud
June 1st, 2008, 05:56 PM
Mehr!
You get the extra Bill and Tom cookies if you do!
WHO DOESN'T LOVE SHIRTLESS BILL AND TOM COOKIES?!
No one, that's who.
Update, now.
*holds/up/baggie/of/cookies*
ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 1st, 2008, 06:10 PM
ahh shirtless tom cookies *charges at screamxitxoutxloud* :mrgreen: ....
......please update i love this ff
screamxitxoutxloud
June 1st, 2008, 06:14 PM
ahh shirtless tom cookies *charges at screamxitxoutxloud* :mrgreen: ....
......please update i love this ff
*hides/behind/Georg*
GEORG SHALL PROTECT ME!
But you can have some...
*Tosses/cookies/to/ALL*
ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 1st, 2008, 06:18 PM
YAY......i lovvvee shirtless tom cookies :lol:
now if only i can see him shirtless in real life....hmmm :D
Haley1018
June 1st, 2008, 06:49 PM
Lol. :lol:
Thanks for commenting!! I'm working on chap. 3, and I'll post it up shortly! :mrgreen:
Haley1018
June 1st, 2008, 07:46 PM
Chapter Three
“You’re up bright and early,” Dave said to his daughter as she entered the kitchen the next morning. Leona glanced at her watch. “It’s only noon.” “Exactly my point. You rarely get up before three p.m.,” Dave replied. Leona rolled her eyes at her father and stomped off into the den.
She plopped down onto the couch with the Tokio Hotel boys, sitting between Georg and Bill. “Oh my God!” Leona exclaimed, staring at Georg’s hair. “Your hair is...gorgeous! How do you get it so straight?” “Hair straightener,” Georg answered. “Well, duh. But what hair products do you use?” “None.” “Georg doesn’t like to give away his beauty secrets,” Bill explained. “At least I don’t wear makeup like a girl,” Georg said. “Lots of boys wear makeup,” Bill told him matter-of-factly.
“So, when are you going to start recording your album?” Leona asked, changing the subject. “Hopefully tomorrow or later this afternoon,” Tom replied. “Then I’ll get to show you my awesome guitar-playing skills.” Oh God, here he is, trying to flirt with me again. “Who said I was going to watch?” Leona said, smirking at Tom. The grin left his face, and he grumbled something in German. Bored, she got off the couch and went outside to the backyard.
The sound of footsteps behind her entered her ears, and she whirled around she find Bill following her. “What are you doing here?” she asked curiously. Bill shrugged. “I just wanted to...talk.” “Talk? You wanted to just talk?” Bill nodded. Leona took a step towards the tall, sexy boy. “Okay, then. Talk to me.”
Haley1018
June 1st, 2008, 10:12 PM
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Haley1018
June 2nd, 2008, 12:13 AM
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Nyloria
June 2nd, 2008, 12:37 AM
*New Reader*
I love this fanfic! :D It's so different from the others. Please continue!
Haley1018
June 2nd, 2008, 12:40 AM
*New Reader*
I love this fanfic! :D It's so different from the others. Please continue!
Thank you! :mrgreen:
Btw, I'm in love with your avatar.
Nyloria
June 2nd, 2008, 01:02 AM
*New Reader*
I love this fanfic! :D It's so different from the others. Please continue!
Thank you! :mrgreen:
Btw, I'm in love with your avatar.
Your welcome! And thanks! I love colors so when I saw this I thought is was perfect!
Haley1018
June 2nd, 2008, 01:05 AM
*New Reader*
I love this fanfic! :D It's so different from the others. Please continue!
Thank you! :mrgreen:
Btw, I'm in love with your avatar.
Your welcome! And thanks! I love colors so when I saw this I thought is was perfect!
It's beautiful! It totally caught my eye when I was scrolling down. I'm so going to use it on another forum, if you don't mind. :D
Nyloria
June 2nd, 2008, 01:08 AM
Thank you! :mrgreen:
Btw, I'm in love with your avatar.[/quote]
Your welcome! And thanks! I love colors so when I saw this I thought is was perfect![/quote]
It's beautiful! It totally caught my eye when I was scrolling down. I'm so going to use it on another forum, if you don't mind. :D [/quote]
Sure! I don't mind if you use it. I'm Regina by the way. Nice to meet you.
Haley1018
June 2nd, 2008, 01:12 AM
I'm Haley, obviously by my screen name. Nice to meet you too!
Nyloria
June 2nd, 2008, 01:14 AM
I'm Haley, obviously by my screen name. Nice to meet you too!
Hi Haley! I wish I could talk longer but I have to go to bed because I have to get up and do some stuff tomorrow. Good-night. I'll keep commenting on your story!
Haley1018
June 2nd, 2008, 01:23 AM
Ok then, good night! And thanks! :mrgreen:
TH_luv
June 2nd, 2008, 10:03 AM
Haley!!!!...I guess Imma new reader for this one,huh?...okay just a sec....
♥~New_Reader~♥
Alright there we go lmao XD anywayz I loves it and I think that tall,dark haired,and sexy (Billy Boy) and her are gonna fall in love! >.< anywayz mehr,bitte? this ff ist uber guton
ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 2nd, 2008, 03:36 PM
i love it...bill just wants to talk aww :D
please update soon
sence you guys were tellin each other your names im gonna tell ya mine.........im Kelsey :)
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 2nd, 2008, 04:35 PM
!!!*NEWREADER*!!!
Haley, I really like this story! :D Please add more soon! :P
I'll be lurking around, waiting for updates. I take that back. I'll most likely be adding chapters to my own story, or checking out pictures of Strify, or spazzing out like I always do!! :lol: Hmm, so many options...what's a girl to do? :?
Anyway...UPDATE SOON! Oh! And I'm Shelby, by the way. :mrgreen:
Haley1018
June 2nd, 2008, 04:43 PM
Thank you Shelby and Kelsey for the comments!!! :mrgreen:
Btw Shelby, I live in Texas too, in a town not too far from Houston. Where do you live?
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 2nd, 2008, 04:50 PM
Technically, Galena Park. But my house is within Houston city limits. Over here on the Southwest side. Right next to Channelview, Passadena, and Baytown.
Haley1018
June 2nd, 2008, 04:53 PM
So we don't live too far from each other! Maybe three hours tops. How rad!
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 2nd, 2008, 04:58 PM
*high fives then tackle hugs Haley* :mrgreen:
YAY! Maybe we'll wind up seeing eachother at some point? ;) Cuz that would be awesome!
Haley1018
June 2nd, 2008, 05:01 PM
That would be so cool!! :mrgreen:
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 2nd, 2008, 05:04 PM
I just had an idea! :o Would you like to be in my story? :mrgreen: I feel like I need another character..so, you wanna? :mrgreen:
Haley1018
June 2nd, 2008, 05:06 PM
Ok!
You wanna be in mine? :mrgreen:
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 2nd, 2008, 05:16 PM
Yeah!
I'm gonna need your physical description, some info about your personality, and what you wanna study in college. Oh, I'm gonna put you with Andreas, so I hope you don't mind!
ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 2nd, 2008, 05:17 PM
im just wonderin what is Texas like i have always wanted to go ther but i havent got there yet and i live really far away (i live in Canada)
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 2nd, 2008, 05:22 PM
It really depends on where you go. The hill country is very pretty. Especially up around Austin! It gets VERY hot here. Sunny, like, 96 percent of the time. Right, Haley? Wide open land. Not quite like what you see in movies, but close. I like it here, but I wanna get out and see other places. Like Canada! What's it like there?
ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 2nd, 2008, 05:33 PM
it's COLD!!!!!!!!!!!!! exspecially in the winter...
.....i geuss it kinda looks like what you said Texas looks like.....when you see valleys and hills it is very beautifull...the summers are hot in the day and cold at night
Haley1018
June 2nd, 2008, 05:37 PM
Yeah!
I'm gonna need your physical description, some info about your personality, and what you wanna study in college. Oh, I'm gonna put you with Andreas, so I hope you don't mind!
I have shoulder-length brown hair, hazel eyes, a few freckles on my nose, I'm not fat but I'm not that skinny, and I'm 5'6". Generally I'm a nice person, but I can get very *****y if I want to, I'm a bit feisty, and I'm obsessive-compulsive. Idk what I want to study in college, so you can just give me anything. And I'm perfectly okay with Andreas, he looks like this guy I like named Dave Williams! :mrgreen:
Now you'll have to tell me about yourself.
Oh and yeah it gets REALLY hot. Like whenever I tried to go outside earlier I had to go back inside after ten minutes cos it was so frickin hot.
ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 2nd, 2008, 05:46 PM
sweet..
.....i was wonderin could i be in you story..........please :lol:
Haley1018
June 2nd, 2008, 06:13 PM
sweet..
.....i was wonderin could i be in you story..........please :lol:
Sure!!!
Just give me your physical appearance and what your personality is like. :D
ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 2nd, 2008, 06:32 PM
my hair goes just past my shoulders and it is dark brown with pink and blue streaks, dark almost black eyes, not fat but not skinny, athletic body, i am 5'8"
i am nice, freindly, out-going, have a short temper sometimes, my friends think i have ADD but it hasnt been proven :lol: ....yet
hope that'll work
Haley1018
June 2nd, 2008, 06:40 PM
my hair goes just past my shoulders and it is dark brown with pink and blue streaks, dark almost black eyes, not fat but not skinny, athletic body, i am 5'8"
i am nice, freindly, out-going, have a short temper sometimes, my friends think i have ADD but it hasnt been proven :lol: ....yet
hope that'll work
That's great!
I'm working on Chapter Four right now, so you'll be introduced in there! :D
TH_luv
June 2nd, 2008, 06:43 PM
Haley...can I be in yur fanfic?...pretty pretty please?
Haley1018
June 2nd, 2008, 06:52 PM
Haley...can I be in yur fanfic?...pretty pretty please?
Ok!
Tell me your name, appearance, and personality. :mrgreen:
Haley1018
June 2nd, 2008, 07:06 PM
Chapter Four
Bill stared at Leona. “Are you going to talk?” Leona asked anxiously. “Well, uh, um, sure, I guess,” Bill stammered. Leona laughed at him. “Has my beauty got you speechless?” she joked, flipping her colorful hair. Bill forced a fake laugh. If only she knew.
“Well, if you’re not going to say anything, I’m leaving,” Leona said, turning on her heel and marching off. “I’ve got a place to be.” “Where?” Bill asked questioningly. “My best friend Kelsey’s apartment. We made plans for tonight.” “Right.” Leaving Bill behind, Leona marched towards her silver Mercedes and got inside. The engine roared and dust rose into the air as Leona sped away. Bill sighed heavily and went back into the house.
*At Kelsey’s apartment*
“Your dad is producing Tokio Hotel’s new CD?” Kelsey screamed. “Um, yeah,” Leona confirmed, plugging her ears. “You’ve got to let me meet Tom!!!” Kelsey exclaimed, grabbing her friend and shaking her. “KELSEY! LET GO OF ME!” Leona roared. Kelsey obeyed and gave Leona a serious look. “I’m not kidding. You have got to show me to Tom. Or I will never talk to you ever again.” Leona shrugged. “Yeah, sure, whatever. You can have him. I’m tired of him hitting on me all the time anyway.” “I would die if he hit on me!” Kelsey squealed. Leona laughed. God, Kelsey was such a fangirl. “So when can I meet Tom?” “Tomorrow, if you want to.” “OF COURSE I WANT TO!” Kelsey shrieked. “Okay, then it’s all settled. You’ll meet Tom tomorrow.” “EEEK, I CAN’T WAIT!”
amandaaraujo
June 2nd, 2008, 07:08 PM
hey haley :) im new reader for this one too.! I absolutley love it ive been buysy reading your sequel for so in love with two its ssoooo awesome i think im hooked to you stories oh and if you need an extra in your story im up for the job :):D
Haley1018
June 2nd, 2008, 07:11 PM
hey haley :) im new reader for this one too.! I absolutley love it ive been buysy reading your sequel for so in love with two its ssoooo awesome i think im hooked to you stories oh and if you need an extra in your story im up for the job :):D
Thank you! :mrgreen:
You want to be in my story, yes?
Just give me a description of your physical appearance and personality. And your name is Amanda, yes?
TH_luv
June 2nd, 2008, 07:13 PM
Ok!
Tell me your name, appearance, and personality. :mrgreen:
thank you Haley! :D
Name:Lena
Appearence:Hair color is burnette with red,purple,and pink highlights,eye color is brown she's got an hour shape figure,but weighs more than she looks,is around 5'3 colors her nails black and nothing else but black.Loves to have her hair down.loves to wear skinny jeans and Chuck Taylors or skater shoes.
Personality:Lena is a fun loving out-going person who loves to make people laugh.She's always smiling and laughing,but only infront of people who she chooses not to be close to.Lena loves to stand out and skateboard.She hates dresses and skirts.She only dates people or hangs out with people who also stand out from the crowd unless she's made an acception to them and really likes their personality or has known them since forevers.Lena is open minded and when she wants something,she gets it but doesn't get it by acting like a total brat.Unless she must come down to that option,which barely ever happens.
TH_luv
June 2nd, 2008, 07:17 PM
awesome chappy! XD haha fangirl XD mehr,bitte?
Haley1018
June 2nd, 2008, 07:18 PM
Ok!
Tell me your name, appearance, and personality. :mrgreen:
thank you Haley! :D
Name:Lena
Appearence:Hair color is burnette with red,purple,and pink highlights,eye color is brown she's got an hour shape figure,but weighs more than she looks,is around 5'3 colors her nails black and nothing else but black.Loves to have her hair down.loves to wear skinny jeans and Chuck Taylors or skater shoes.
Personality:Lena is a fun loving out-going person who loves to make people laugh.She's always smiling and laughing,but only infront of people who she chooses not to be close to.Lena loves to stand out and skateboard.She hates dresses and skirts.She only dates people or hangs out with people who also stand out from the crowd unless she's made an acception to them and really likes their personality or has known them since forevers.Lena is open minded and when she wants something,she gets it but doesn't get it by acting like a total brat.Unless she must come down to that option,which barely ever happens.
Ok, I got you down!
You'll show up in either Chapter Five or Chapter Six. :mrgreen:
amandaaraujo
June 2nd, 2008, 07:19 PM
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ok um
Name:Amanda
my description hmm ....i have long black hair thinking of getting streaks ice blue eyes yeah i know wierd cobination um ivory color skin not fat not skinny (i think im an odd one oh well) not very tall 5'6 nice comprehensive helps out in problems,and sensitive out going crazy jokes a lot and knows how to beserious in a serious moment (temporaly mocked for liking rock and Tokio hotel *i hope its stops it hurts :? :cry: *) and thats practicly it
amandaaraujo
June 2nd, 2008, 07:20 PM
danke shone haley :D :D you made my day :D
Haley1018
June 2nd, 2008, 07:23 PM
danke shone haley :D :D you made my day :D
You're welcome :mrgreen:
Thanks for commenting :mrgreen:
TH_luv
June 2nd, 2008, 07:25 PM
Ok, I got you down!
You'll show up in either Chapter Five or Chapter Six. :mrgreen:
yay!Okee thank you :D
Nyloria
June 2nd, 2008, 07:36 PM
Oooo... I can't wait for the next chapter! More please!
Haley1018
June 2nd, 2008, 07:38 PM
Ok, I got you down!
You'll show up in either Chapter Five or Chapter Six. :mrgreen:
yay!Okee thank you :D
You're welcome :mrgreen:
Haley1018
June 2nd, 2008, 09:20 PM
Chapter Five
Sunlight streaming in through the window awakened Leona. She slowly opened her eyes. After puzzling over where she was for a moment, she remembered she had spent the night over at Kelsey’s apartment. She yawned and sat up. Her back and neck ached from accidentally falling asleep on the floor when the girls were watching movies. On her side, Kelsey was waking up too.
“When is Lena and Amanda coming over?” Leona asked. Kelsey shrugged in response. “I don’t know. I think sometime around noon.” Leona glanced at her watch, which told her it was ten minutes until noon. “Then they’ll be here soon.” As soon as the words escape her mouth, the door burst open and her other two best friends Lena and Amanda ran in. “Kelsey! Leona! You need to lock the door!” Amanda scolded. “You know how I worry.” Leona laughed at her friend’s concern. “God, you sound like my mom.”
“Jeez, Lena, how the **** can you wear all black when it’s been, like, ninety-six degrees the last few days?” Kelsey asked. Lena simply shrugged. “Eh. You get used to it after six years.” Amanda draped her arms around Kelsey and Leona’s shoulders. “So, what are we doing today, girlies?” “Meeting Tokio Hotel,” Leona answered as Kelsey grinned.
“NO WAY! REALLY?!?” Amanda and Lena shrieked in unison. “Yes. My dad is producing their new CD, so they’ll be staying at my house until they’re done recording it.” “Well, what the **** are we waiting for?!?” Lena screamed. “Let’s go meet those boys!”
TH_luv
June 2nd, 2008, 09:41 PM
schweet! XD haha people seriously ask me that when I wear black on hot days XDDD lmao hella funny!Mehr,bitte? I luv yur stories they're all extremly funny
Haley1018
June 2nd, 2008, 09:41 PM
schweet! XD haha people seriously ask me that when I wear black on hot days XDDD lmao hella funny!Mehr,bitte? I luv yur stories they're all extremly funny
Thank you!! :mrgreen:
I'ma post more either tonight or tomorrow. :D
TH_luv
June 2nd, 2008, 09:42 PM
schweet! XD haha people seriously ask me that when I wear black on hot days XDDD lmao hella funny!Mehr,bitte? I luv yur stories they're all extremly funny
Thank you!! :mrgreen:
I'ma post more either tonight or tomorrow. :D
coolio :D
amandaaraujo
June 2nd, 2008, 09:43 PM
hahahahahaahhaha that was funny im totally like that hahahah people call me mom at school which freaks me out but i got used to it hahahah omg i loved. :lol: :lol: :lol: :D
Haley1018
June 3rd, 2008, 12:53 AM
Chapter Six
“I’m so excited!” Kelsey squealed as she, Leona, Amanda, and Lena pulled into the driveway of Leona’s mansion. “I’m finally going to meet Tom, after two long years of waiting!!” Leona rolled her eyes as the girls got out of the car and walked into the mansion. “BILL! TOM! GUSTAV! GEORG! I’VE GOT SOME PEOPLE FOR YOU GUYS TO MEET!” The guys, along with a blonde boy Leona had never seen, followed Leona’s voice into the living room, and found her, along with three other girls.
“Who’s that?” Leona asked, pointing to the blonde guy. “That’s Andreas!” Lena cried. She ran up to him and hugged him fiercely. Andreas looked taken aback, but hugged her. “Andreas! I love you! You’re so cool!” Lena exclaimed whenever she let him go. “How do you even know me? I’m not that famous,” Andreas said. “Yeah, but I did a lot of research on you. Plus, I know some people.” Andreas nodded, but was a little freaked out.
Kelsey, who had been silent, let out a high-pitched scream that sounded like a ringing alarm. Everyone in the room plugged their ears, wincing from the loud noise. “Oh mein gott,” Georg said. “None of our fans have ever screamed that loud.” “IT’S TOM! IT’S TOM KAULITZ! TOM KAULITZ IS STANDING IN FRONT OF ME!!!” Kelsey threw herself at Tom, who caught her and tried not to fall backward. “I LOVE YOU, I LOVE YOU, I LOVE YOU, I LOVE YOU!” Kelsey hollered. Tom looked at her up and down. “You’re pretty,” he said with a dazed look on his face. Kelsey grinned seductively. “It’s all yours if you want it,” she said. “Ew, God, get a room,” Bill said, turning away from the two.
“I like Gustav best,” Amanda said sweetly, gently hugging Gustav. “You didn’t tell us your names,” Bill said. “Oh, yeah. I’m Lena.” “I’m Amanda.” “And I’m Kelsey, the biggest Tom lover on the planet.” “You’re also the cutest Tom lover,” Tom told Kelsey. She grinned, and tossed Tom a seductive look. “Stop. Flirting. Now,” Leona demanded. “Unless you want to go into the guest bedroom.” “Okay!” Tom exclaimed, taking Kelsey by the hand and leading her to the guest room. “Oh, God. Well, if they’re going in there, I’m going outside so I can’t hear anything,” Bill announced. “I’m coming with you,” Georg said, following him. “Me as well,” Gustav and Andreas said in unison, trailing behind the two boys. Leona, Amanda, and Lena decided to follow them.
Haley1018
June 3rd, 2008, 02:56 PM
bump
Nyloria
June 3rd, 2008, 02:59 PM
This story rocks! More please?
Haley1018
June 3rd, 2008, 03:00 PM
This story rocks! More please?
Thank you! :mrgreen: I'm nearly done with chapter 7, and I'll post it up shortly! :mrgreen:
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 3rd, 2008, 03:02 PM
Ok, here's my description. Sorry it took so long! :oops:
I'm 5'5" /w/ blondish brown hair just past my shoulders. Hourglass body shape. Green/brown eyes. Pale skin.
I'm very easygoing, but I tend to spazz out. Like, A LOT!
Um...what else do you need?
Nyloria
June 3rd, 2008, 03:02 PM
This story rocks! More please?
Thank you! :mrgreen: I'm nearly done with chapter 7, and I'll post it up shortly! :mrgreen:
Oooooo... I can't wait. I am thinking about starting my own fanfic. But I am not so sure.
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 3rd, 2008, 03:20 PM
You should, Nyloria! :) I really enjoy it. I mean, it helps me clear my head and relax...but that's just me! :lol:
Plus, it's a great feeling knowing that people are reading something you created. And when they actually like it and want to read more...it's just an awesome feeling! 8-)
Nyloria
June 3rd, 2008, 03:27 PM
You should, Nyloria! :) I really enjoy it. I mean, it helps me clear my head and relax...but that's just me! :lol:
Plus, it's a great feeling knowing that people are reading something you created. And when they actually like it and want to read more...it's just an awesome feeling! 8-)
I have already written 2 stories called "Life Though My Eyes" and "Deathbed", but they are not about Tokio Hotel. I do kinda have a story line going on in my head right now though.
ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 3rd, 2008, 03:45 PM
OMG I Love this story
....were did you get the idea that i love Tom *looks down to signature* :P
please write more soon
~*Kelsey*~
Haley1018
June 3rd, 2008, 03:49 PM
Ok, here's my description. Sorry it took so long! :oops:
I'm 5'5" /w/ blondish brown hair just past my shoulders. Hourglass body shape. Green/brown eyes. Pale skin.
I'm very easygoing, but I tend to spazz out. Like, A LOT!
Um...what else do you need?
That's okay and that's all I need! :D
Haley1018
June 3rd, 2008, 03:50 PM
OMG I Love this story
....were did you get the idea that i love Tom *looks down to signature* :P
please write more soon
~*Kelsey*~
Thank you! :mrgreen:
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 3rd, 2008, 05:21 PM
Haley!! What did you do to your icon? :o I miss the chick with the poofy pink hair! :cry:
But it is my Billi-bear...so, YAY!
Haley1018
June 3rd, 2008, 05:28 PM
Haley!! What did you do to your icon? :o I miss the chick with the poofy pink hair! :cry:
But it is my Billi-bear...so, YAY!
Lol, you mean my avatar of Audrey Kitching?
Well, I'm not done re-adjusting my avatar and siggy. Plus, I kinda miss her too. :cry: So I'll probably put her back up there or put her in my siggy.
Haley1018
June 3rd, 2008, 05:29 PM
Chapter Seven
“Oh, you’re finally done?” Bill asked as Kelsey and Tom, looking flushed, joined them outside two hours later. Kelsey and Tom looked at each other and burst into a fit of giggles. Leona and Bill rolled their eyes in unison. “Well, at least Kelsey can die happy now,” Lena said. “Definitely!” Kelsey confirmed. A mysterious car suddenly pulled up into the driveway, and an elegant girl with dirty blonde, almost brown, hair stepped out. She marched over to the group and grinned widely. “Shelby!” Leona exclaimed, jumping out of her lawn chair and hugging the girl. “What are you doing here?”
“Well, Daddy phoned and told me that Tokio Hotel was staying at the house, so I came down from New York City to visit,” Shelby said. “Kelsey. Amanda. Lena. Nice to see you three again.” “You too, Shelbs,” Lena replied. “How’s your fashion career going in NYC?” Amanda asked. Shelby’s face lit up. “Perfectly great! I’m getting ready to start selling my new clothing line.”
“Wait...Shelby? What’s your last name?” Bill questioned. “Uh, Williams. Duh.” Shelby rolled her eyes. “Oh mein gott, Shelby, you’re Leona’s...sister?” Tom cried incredulously. Leona frowned. “Yeah, she’s my sister,” she snapped. “You’re Shelby Williams?” Andreas asked. Shelby smiled and nodded. “Yes, Shelby Williams. The famous Williams heiress,” Leona said. “While I am the other Williams heiress. You know, the one that nobody knows who she is.”
“Oh, sis,” Shelby said, flipping her hair. “I told you if you’d start going out more and getting into fashion like I am, you’d be famous, just like me.” “Who said I wanted to be famous?” Leona hissed. Shelby looked hurt. Leona sighed. “I’m sorry, sis. I know you’re trying to, erm, help. I didn’t mean to hurt your feelings.” “It’s fine, darling,” Shelby reassured her. “I forgive you.” She turned to address the group. “How about we go out to a club, you guys? It’s almost nine, so they should be opening soon.” “Sounds fun to me!” Tom exclaimed. “Alright, then it’s settled. I’ll call a limo for us,” Shelby said.
ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 3rd, 2008, 05:38 PM
if only this story would come true cuz then i would be very happy :mrgreen:
~*Kelsey*~
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 3rd, 2008, 05:39 PM
YES!! :mrgreen: I'm in the story!! And I'm your sis!!! Bwahahaha.!!! :lol: I feel loved! 8-)
That reminds me, have you read the chapters (16 & 17) I added today? You're in chapter 18, which I've already written. I'm just editing now, so hopefully I'll post it tomorrow! ;)
amandaaraujo
June 3rd, 2008, 05:51 PM
:D awesome I love it ahahh omg im so shy ahahha. :oops: :lol:
Nyloria
June 3rd, 2008, 06:06 PM
Chapter Seven
“Oh, you’re finally done?” Bill asked as Kelsey and Tom, looking flushed, joined them outside two hours later. Kelsey and Tom looked at each other and burst into a fit of giggles. Leona and Bill rolled their eyes in unison. “Well, at least Kelsey can die happy now,” Lena said. “Definitely!” Kelsey confirmed. A mysterious car suddenly pulled up into the driveway, and an elegant girl with dirty blonde, almost brown, hair stepped out. She marched over to the group and grinned widely. “Shelby!” Leona exclaimed, jumping out of her lawn chair and hugging the girl. “What are you doing here?”
“Well, Daddy phoned and told me that Tokio Hotel was staying at the house, so I came down from New York City to visit,” Shelby said. “Kelsey. Amanda. Lena. Nice to see you three again.” “You too, Shelbs,” Lena replied. “How’s your fashion career going in NYC?” Amanda asked. Shelby’s face lit up. “Perfectly great! I’m getting ready to start selling my new clothing line.”
“Wait...Shelby? What’s your last name?” Bill questioned. “Uh, Williams. Duh.” Shelby rolled her eyes. “Oh mein gott, Shelby, you’re Leona’s...sister?” Tom cried incredulously. Leona frowned. “Yeah, she’s my sister,” she snapped. “You’re Shelby Williams?” Andreas asked. Shelby smiled and nodded. “Yes, Shelby Williams. The famous Williams heiress,” Leona said. “While I am the other Williams heiress. You know, the one that nobody knows who she is.”
“Oh, sis,” Shelby said, flipping her hair. “I told you if you’d start going out more and getting into fashion like I am, you’d be famous, just like me.” “Who said I wanted to be famous?” Leona hissed. Shelby looked hurt. Leona sighed. “I’m sorry, sis. I know you’re trying to, erm, help. I didn’t mean to hurt your feelings.” “It’s fine, darling,” Shelby reassured her. “I forgive you.” She turned to address the group. “How about we go out to a club, you guys? It’s almost nine, so they should be opening soon.” “Sounds fun to me!” Tom exclaimed. “Alright, then it’s settled. I’ll call a limo for us,” Shelby said.
Wow! I am so in love with this story. I have started a fanfic. It's called Doublestar. I have not got chapter 1 up yet but I will tonight.
Haley1018
June 3rd, 2008, 06:10 PM
YES!! :mrgreen: I'm in the story!! And I'm your sis!!! Bwahahaha.!!! :lol: I feel loved! 8-)
That reminds me, have you read the chapters (16 & 17) I added today? You're in chapter 18, which I've already written. I'm just editing now, so hopefully I'll post it tomorrow! ;)
I just read them and they were great! :mrgreen:
And I know who the mystery friend is... 8-)
Haley1018
June 3rd, 2008, 06:11 PM
Chapter Seven
“Oh, you’re finally done?” Bill asked as Kelsey and Tom, looking flushed, joined them outside two hours later. Kelsey and Tom looked at each other and burst into a fit of giggles. Leona and Bill rolled their eyes in unison. “Well, at least Kelsey can die happy now,” Lena said. “Definitely!” Kelsey confirmed. A mysterious car suddenly pulled up into the driveway, and an elegant girl with dirty blonde, almost brown, hair stepped out. She marched over to the group and grinned widely. “Shelby!” Leona exclaimed, jumping out of her lawn chair and hugging the girl. “What are you doing here?”
“Well, Daddy phoned and told me that Tokio Hotel was staying at the house, so I came down from New York City to visit,” Shelby said. “Kelsey. Amanda. Lena. Nice to see you three again.” “You too, Shelbs,” Lena replied. “How’s your fashion career going in NYC?” Amanda asked. Shelby’s face lit up. “Perfectly great! I’m getting ready to start selling my new clothing line.”
“Wait...Shelby? What’s your last name?” Bill questioned. “Uh, Williams. Duh.” Shelby rolled her eyes. “Oh mein gott, Shelby, you’re Leona’s...sister?” Tom cried incredulously. Leona frowned. “Yeah, she’s my sister,” she snapped. “You’re Shelby Williams?” Andreas asked. Shelby smiled and nodded. “Yes, Shelby Williams. The famous Williams heiress,” Leona said. “While I am the other Williams heiress. You know, the one that nobody knows who she is.”
“Oh, sis,” Shelby said, flipping her hair. “I told you if you’d start going out more and getting into fashion like I am, you’d be famous, just like me.” “Who said I wanted to be famous?” Leona hissed. Shelby looked hurt. Leona sighed. “I’m sorry, sis. I know you’re trying to, erm, help. I didn’t mean to hurt your feelings.” “It’s fine, darling,” Shelby reassured her. “I forgive you.” She turned to address the group. “How about we go out to a club, you guys? It’s almost nine, so they should be opening soon.” “Sounds fun to me!” Tom exclaimed. “Alright, then it’s settled. I’ll call a limo for us,” Shelby said.
Wow! I am so in love with this story. I have started a fanfic. It's called Doublestar. I have not got chapter 1 up yet but I will tonight.
Thank you! :D I'll be sure to read your fic when you post it! :mrgreen:
Nyloria
June 3rd, 2008, 06:16 PM
Thank you! :D I'll be sure to read your fic when you post it! :mrgreen:
I have the characters posted. You can go check them out so you know who is who when the story starts.
Haley1018
June 3rd, 2008, 07:23 PM
Chapter Eight
“Oh, God,” Leona grumbled as a drunken girl passed out on the dance floor in front of her. “Ugh, I hate clubs.” Leona pushed through crowds of intoxicated people dancing badly, and found her sister chatting endlessly with an old friend of hers. “Leona! Having fun?” Shelby asked. “Let’s see...well, I’ve had three old guys hit on me, I’ve had a chick puke at my feet, and another chick just passed out in front of me. Do you think I’m having fun, Shelby?” “I’m guessing not?” “You are so smart, Shelbs.” Shelby stared at her younger sister. “Are you being sarcastic?” “OF COURSE I’M BEING SARCASTIC! GOD, HOW DENSE ARE YOU?!?” Leona screamed.
“Do you guys know where Kelsey and Tom are?” Georg asked, suddenly appearing next to the squabbling sisters. “Um, I think they’re in one of the back rooms,” Shelby answered. Leona sighed and grumbled something under her breath. She turned sharply on her heel and marched towards the back rooms.
She threw open the door of one of the rooms to find Tom ripping off Kelsey’s baby blue top. “Oh my God!” Kelsey and Tom shrieked. Kelsey immediately pulled her top back down, her cheeks turning a deep scarlet color. Leona, however, seemed totally unfazed by what she just saw. “Yeah, um, Kelsey, I know this is, like, your dream come true and sh*t, but would you two just keep your hands off each other for five f**king minutes?!?!? You’ve already had sex today! You two can do it again when we go home!” She slammed the door and ran off. “The h*ll’s her problem?” Tom asked. Kelsey shrugged and replied, “She has a short temper.”
“Are you almost done yet?” Leona grouched as she approached Shelby. “I wanna go home already.” “Me too,” Bill agreed. Shelby sighed. “Fine, if you’re gonna be such a baby about it, sis, we’ll go.” “Good.” Leona grabbed Bill’s hand and dragged him out of the club.
Nyloria
June 3rd, 2008, 07:33 PM
"I’m guessing not?” “You are so smart, Shelbs.” Shelby stared at her younger sister. “Are you being sarcastic?” “OF COURSE I’M BEING SARCASTIC! GOD, HOW DENSE ARE YOU?!?”
Lol that sounds so much like one of my friends if I am being sarcastic. She can't seem to tell the difference.
Haley1018
June 3rd, 2008, 10:23 PM
"I’m guessing not?” “You are so smart, Shelbs.” Shelby stared at her younger sister. “Are you being sarcastic?” “OF COURSE I’M BEING SARCASTIC! GOD, HOW DENSE ARE YOU?!?”
Lol that sounds so much like one of my friends if I am being sarcastic. She can't seem to tell the difference.
:lol:
Thanks for commenting!
amandaaraujo
June 3rd, 2008, 10:33 PM
awesome omg ripping off her blue top man i was reading fast and confused ripping as rapping sorry LOL please update soon
Nyloria
June 3rd, 2008, 10:40 PM
"I’m guessing not?” “You are so smart, Shelbs.” Shelby stared at her younger sister. “Are you being sarcastic?” “OF COURSE I’M BEING SARCASTIC! GOD, HOW DENSE ARE YOU?!?”
Lol that sounds so much like one of my friends if I am being sarcastic. She can't seem to tell the difference.
:lol:
Thanks for commenting!
You're welcome! Thanks for commenting on my story. :D
Haley1018
June 3rd, 2008, 10:41 PM
Lol that sounds so much like one of my friends if I am being sarcastic. She can't seem to tell the difference.
:lol:
Thanks for commenting!
You're welcome! Thanks for commenting on my story. :D
You're welcome! :mrgreen:
Haley1018
June 4th, 2008, 12:39 AM
Chapter Nine
“You’re seriously staying over here at my apartment when your sister, who is gorgeous, is at your mansion where TOKIO HOTEL ARE STAYING?!?” Kelsey cried. “Um, evidently,” Leona answered. “Or else why the h*ll would I be sitting on your couch?” “Yeah, but, Leona, aren’t you worried she’s gonna hog the boys all to herself?” Lena asked. “And possibly have sex with every single one of them while you’re gone?!” Leona shrugged. “I don’t really care. She can have them.” “NO, SHE CAN’T!” Amanda roared. Kelsey, Lena, and Leona stared incredulously at their usually quiet friend. “What. The. F*ck, Amanda?” Kelsey questioned. Amanda blushed. “I–it’s just–I don’t want her taking Gustav.”
Amanda’s outburst had temporarily silenced the girls and they stuffed popcorn into their mouths as they watched their favorite movie, Ever After, for the millionth time. “Seriously, though, Leona. You don’t have feelings for any of them?” Lena said. Leona shook her head. “I love Tom!” Kelsey spoke the obvious. “And I love Andreas!” Lena said, a dazed look appearing on her face. “Gustav is a sweetie,” Amanda stated, smiling widely. “So, Leona, that leaves you either Bill or Georg.”
“When we were at the club earlier, I noticed Bill kept staring at you practically the whole time,” Kelsey told Leona through a mouthful of popcorn. “I noticed, too. I think he likes you,” Amanda said. Lena nodded her agreement. Leona pondered this for a minute. “You guys really think so?” Kelsey, Amanda, and Lena nodded. “Ask him out!” Kelsey cried. Leona was silent for a moment before saying, “Okay. I’ll ask him out tomorrow. Maybe we can all go on one huge date together!”
Haley1018
June 4th, 2008, 01:41 AM
Btw you guys Ever After really is one of my favorite movies
So if anyone wants to be a major fangirl about it with me
I'm cool with it :ugeek:
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 4th, 2008, 08:55 AM
OHGODILOVETHATMOVIE!!!!! :o
IT'SALMOSTASF*****AEWSOMEASMOULINROUGE!! :mrgreen:
Sorry. Spazzing out again! :roll: Btw, I will gladly take Georg. ;) You can have your fun with Bill. Just give me some hot&shmexsy alone time with Georg, and all will be well! :mrgreen:
TH_luv
June 4th, 2008, 03:32 PM
Mein Gott!Yesh finally she's gonna ask Billy out! XDDD anywayz thats funny,the quiet girl fihnally speaks up outta nowhere XD anywayz I'm sure I can get Andreas all to my self sooner or later :twisted:
ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 4th, 2008, 05:38 PM
i love Tom....*happy dance* :lol:
..please write more i love this
~*Kelsey*~
Haley1018
June 4th, 2008, 05:57 PM
Chapter Ten
“Loose lips sink ships and leaders, for this you need to lead us on,” Leona sang along with her iHome as she straightened her very colorful hair. “We apologise for nothing, we apologise for nothing, heads will roll away from us, but we apologise for nothing.” “Leona! Hurry up! Gah, how long does it take for you to straighten your hair?!?” Lena complained, flopping around on Leona’s bed. “She’s just trying to look beautiful so Bill will have to say yes to her,” said Amanda, glancing at herself in the mirror to make sure she looked fine. “Well, Tommy will most definitely say yes to me,” Kelsey said confidently. “Yeah, cos he wants to get in your pants. Again,” Lena told Kelsey. “Andreas will surely go on a date with me!”
Finally satisfied with her hair, Leona turned off the hair straightener and stood up. “Okay, girls, let’s go.” The four marched into the den, where they found Bill sitting on the couch, reading over lyrics he had written the previous day. “Where’s Gustav, Andreas, and Tom?” Amanda asked. “Tom and Gustav are in the studio recording, and I think Andreas went shopping with Shelby,” Bill answered. Lena’s face turned bright pink at the name of Shelby. “I told you, Leona,” she hissed. “Your sister is going to steal my man!”
Bill chuckled. “Calm down, Lena. Andreas doesn’t like Shelby like he likes you,” he assured her. Lena’s face lit up. “Really?!? Andreas likes me?!?” “Yup,” Bill confirmed. Lena squealed and jumped up and down. “Does Gustav like me?” Amanda asked shyly. “Yes. He thinks you’re very sweet and pretty.” Amanda swooned. “And I know Tom likes me,” Kelsey said, grinning. “He likes your t*ts,” Leona muttered under her breath. Kelsey gasped and smacked Leona’s shoulder.
“Are you gonna ask him?” Lena hissed under her breath. Leona’s mind went blank and she gulped as she stared at the perfection that was Bill Kaulitz. “Uh, um, Bill...” Leona stuttered. “Yes?” “If Gustav wants to go with Amanda and Andreas wants to go with Lena and Tom wants to go with Kelsey, would you want to, um...go on a date with me?” Bill raised his eyebrows. “Well, it’s really not a date, cos Amanda and Gustav and Lena and Tom and Andreas and Kelsey will be there, so it’s more of a get-together thing...” Leona stammered. Bill laughed at her. “Of course, I’ll go with you,” he said sweetly. “Um, okay. Thanks,” Leona said, turning on her heel and running back to her bedroom, her friends following close behind her.
Haley1018
June 4th, 2008, 05:58 PM
Chapter Eleven
Leona threw herself on her bed and buried her face in a pillow. “I’M GOING ON A DATE WITH BILL KAULITZ!” she screamed into the pillow. “That’s if the other boys want to go with us,” Lena reminded Leona. “Hey, what about Georg? We can’t leave Georg home alone,” Amanda said. “Yeah, but we can’t bring him with us, either. He’ll be a ninth wheel,” Lena said. “Maybe we could hook him up with Shelby!” Kelsey suggested. “That’s a great idea!” Amanda exclaimed. “Yeah, but what if Shelby won’t want to go with him?” “******, Lena, you always have to put a damper on everything!” Kelsey grouched.
“Um, guys.” Leona sat up on her bed. “It’s Shelby Williams. And Georg Listing. An heiress of the Williams fortune and a bassist in Germany’s biggest rock band. Of course Shelby is going to go with him. She’d do anything for publicity.” “But what if Georg doesn’t want to go with Shelby?” Lena asked. “LENA! STOP RUINING EVERYTHING!” Kelsey yelled. “He’ll go with her. Shelby is a big-boobed blonde,” Leona said. “Her hair is barely blonde. It’s more brown,” Lena told her. Kelsey furrowed her eyebrows and punched Lena in the stomach. “SHE’S STILL BLONDE, ******! GEORG IS GOING WITH SHELBY, AND SHELBY IS GOING WITH GEORG, EVEN IF WE HAVE TO MAKE THEM!” Kelsey roared. “AND IF YOU SAY ONE MORE THING ABOUT IT, LENA, I SWEAR TO GOD I WILL RIP YOUR F**KING HEAD OFF!!!!” Lena shot Kelsey an evil glare, but said nothing more.
Haley1018
June 4th, 2008, 05:59 PM
I'm going to try to update as much as possible today and tomorrow, because I'm going out of town Friday and won't be back until Monday. But I promise I'll bring a journal with me so I can write while I'm gone and have plenty to post when I come back! :D
ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 4th, 2008, 06:16 PM
ahahahaha........this is soo good i love this story........i hope georg and Shelby will go together........
~*Kelsey*~
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 4th, 2008, 06:24 PM
:o Awwww! Come on! I'm not a publicity wh@%#! Just you're average everyday $1ut! :lol:
And I secretly have the hotts for Georg, who also secretly has the hotts for me. ;) Then we make out :) , then we bang 8-) , then we fall in love and are together forever!!! :D Mwahahahaha.....! :mrgreen:
Haley1018
June 4th, 2008, 06:28 PM
:o Awwww! Come on! I'm not a publicity wh@%#! Just you're average everyday $1ut! :lol:
And I secretly have the hotts for Georg, who also secretly has the hotts for me. ;) Then we make out :) , then we bang 8-) , then we fall in love and are together forever!!! :D Mwahahahaha.....! :mrgreen:
You're not really a publicity wh*re
You just like the attention :mrgreen:
But Leona is jealous of you, so she makes you sound like one
Haley1018
June 4th, 2008, 06:52 PM
Chapter Twelve
The girls stared at themselves in the full-length mirror for the thousandth time. They wanted to look perfect for their dates, and they were. Leona was wearing a short black dress with matching heels, Lena was wearing a fancy midnight black halter top and black sequined capri pants, Kelsey had on a lovely carnation pink tank top with a denim mini skirt, and Amanda was fashioning a long-sleeved lavender dress that went down to her knees.
Shelby, however, stood out from the girls, as always. She was wearing an extremely short strapless red dress, black boots that cost at least $5,000, and sparkling diamond bracelets and earrings. Leona sighed as she stared at her sister. “Shelby, must you always have to wear fancy-schmancy clothes? Can’t you just wear regular clothing, like us?” “Um, no!” Shelby answered. “Leona, I am a woman of wealth. And I like to show it off.” “Hello, genius, I’m a woman of wealth too,” Leona reminded her. “I just prefer to save my money and spend it on important things.” “We must get going,” Shelby said, ignoring her little sister. “Come along, darlings.”
As the five girls walked into the den, the boys’ jaws dropped. “You look...beautiful!” Bill exclaimed as Leona went to stand by him. “You don’t look so bad yourself, handsome.” “Tom, stop staring at Kelsey’s boobs,” Lena demanded, watching Tom out of the corner of her eye. Tom blushed as Andreas, Bill, Georg, and Gustav laughed at him.
“Um, where are we going again?” Tom asked, trying to change the subject. “A lovely French restaurant I booked,” Shelby said. “I made sure the restaurant would turn away the other customers, so it shall be only us ten.” “Sounds great,” Georg said. “Yeah, I’m starving,” Gustav agreed. “Then stop standing around and come on!” Lena snapped. Everyone obeyed, and went outside to pile into the waiting limo.
TH_luv
June 4th, 2008, 07:40 PM
Awesome chappy! XD I loved it lmao Kelsey and I had me laughing hella loud and just about to litterally roll on the ground laughing! XD lolz mehr,bitte?
Haley1018
June 4th, 2008, 07:54 PM
Awesome chappy! XD I loved it lmao Kelsey and I had me laughing hella loud and just about to litterally roll on the ground laughing! XD lolz mehr,bitte?
Thanks! I'll be posting more up in a few minutes :mrgreen:
TH_luv
June 4th, 2008, 08:00 PM
Awesome chappy! XD I loved it lmao Kelsey and I had me laughing hella loud and just about to litterally roll on the ground laughing! XD lolz mehr,bitte?
Thanks! I'll be posting more up in a few minutes :mrgreen:
schweet :D
Haley1018
June 4th, 2008, 08:06 PM
Chapter Thirteen
“Shelby, where are you taking us now?” Amanda asked as the five couples settled themselves in the limo, their stomachs full of delicious French delicacies. “You’ll see,” Shelby said secretively. “It’s my little secret for the time being.” She then locked lips with Georg, ignoring the other couples.
Which was fine by them, since they were all making out, except for Leona and Bill. Leona occupied herself by watching them suck each other’s faces, trying not to giggle at them. Tom was getting a little frisky, feeling up Kelsey through her tank top. Oh, how Leona wished Bill would feel her up like that. Leona tried to force the naughty thoughts out of her head, but was unsuccessful. She found herself staring at Bill’s lips, wondering how they would feel against her own.
Leona noticed that Bill was staring at her, as well. He began to inch his face towards hers. Leona’s throat closed up and she could hardly breathe. She could feel Bill’s body heat. Soon his lips collided with hers, and Leona could feel sparks fly through her body. Bill wrapped his arm around Leona’s waist and pulled her closer. He kissed her with more ferocity, and soon the couple were making out.
The clearing of a throat brought them back to Earth, and they noticed eight pairs of eyes on them. “We’re here,” Shelby announced, opening the limo door and stepping out.
TH_luv
June 4th, 2008, 08:13 PM
Oh snaps!Make out sessions! XD lmao rofl
ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 5th, 2008, 04:28 PM
awww they finnaly had a makeout seesion :lol: lmfas
Haley1018
June 5th, 2008, 05:07 PM
Chapter Fourteen
“You brought us to..a field?” Tom asked incredulously. “I thought you’d be happy about it,” Shelby said. “Now you have more room to bang Kelsey.” “Okay.” Tom grabbed Kelsey’s hand and led her to a patch of grass where they sat down and instantly attached their lips together. The other couples followed the same procedure, and soon only Bill and Leona were left standing. Bill sat down by a tree, and pulled Leona down with him.
He pulled her so close to him that there was only three centimeters of space between them. “Leona,” Bill whispered as he kissed Leona’s neck and lips. “I think I love you.” Leona was too shocked to speak. Well, why the h*ll am I so surprised? she asked herself. He’s been making out with me all night. “Are your feelings for me the same as mine for you?” “I’m pretty sure they are,” Leona whispered back. Bill let go of Leona and leaned against the tree, staring at her in awe. “Re-really?” he stammered. “You love me?”
Leona thought about it for a moment. “Yes,” she answered. “I’m pretty sure I’m in love with you.” Bill then lunged at her, and crashed his lips into hers.
ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 5th, 2008, 05:10 PM
ahaha awww there in love :mrgreen: :lol:
Nyloria
June 5th, 2008, 05:26 PM
Awwww... How cute. I am going to update my fanfic in a few minutes.
Haley1018
June 5th, 2008, 06:55 PM
Awwww... How cute. I am going to update
my fanfic in a few minutes.
I'll be sure to read it! :D
TH_luv
June 5th, 2008, 07:02 PM
aaaaawwwwww!Look at the two love birdies! XD....but...please listen to these lines of a certain Nirvana song "Acting stupid,and so dangerous,here we are now,entertain us" Dear children listen to those words and compare them to kissing.....sounds sorta whorish doesn't it?....wait...I was onto something Darnit! >.< ugh I forgot what that had to do with wut I was gonna say,but still mehr,bitte?
Haley1018
June 5th, 2008, 07:04 PM
aaaaawwwwww!Look at the two love birdies! XD....but...please listen to these lines of a certain Nirvana song "Acting stupid,and so dangerous,here we are now,entertain us" Dear children listen to those words and compare them to kissing.....sounds sorta whorish doesn't it?....wait...I was onto something Darnit! >.< ugh I forgot what that had to do with wut I was gonna say,but still mehr,bitte?
:?:
:idea:
Hmm...that does sound whorish...
Haley1018
June 5th, 2008, 07:15 PM
Chapter Fifteen
Leona and Shelby sat on Leona’s bed in their bathrobes, painting their nails. “Georg is an amazing kisser,” Shelby said dreamily. “And you looked like you were really getting into Bill!” Leona blushed and shrugged. “Oh, whatever. You know you love him!” Leona giggled. “Yeah. I do.” Shelby squealed. “Aw! My little sister’s in love!” Leona laughed at her older sister. “Shelby, you are such a dork.”
“So, do you like Georg?” Leona asked. “Um, duh. He is so cool! And hot! And nice!” Shelby exclaimed. “He’s the perfect guy.” “Bill is the perfect guy!” Leona argued. “Whatever. To you, maybe.” “You’re just jealous because I’m going out with Bill, and you’re not.” Leona stuck out her tongue. “Sure, right. I’m perfectly happy with Georgy-kins,” Shelby said. Leona burst into maniacal laughter. “Georgy-kins? Have you called him that to his face?” “No. I wouldn’t dare.”
“Well, Bill asked me out on another date tomorrow night,” Leona said. “Where are you going?” Shelby asked curiously. “We’re going to the movies.” “Ooh, that sounds fun. I’ll have to make plans with Georg.” “Are you trying to compete against me?” Shelby thought for a second before answering, “Yes. Yes, I am.” Leona laughed, and hit her sister with a pillow.
Yay sisterly love
XP
TH_luv
June 5th, 2008, 07:22 PM
lmao Georgy-kins :lol: XD lmao rofl thats hella funny surprisingly.Wow,but that was a really cute scene :D I luv yur stories yur such an awesome writer
Haley1018
June 5th, 2008, 07:30 PM
lmao Georgy-kins :lol: XD lmao rofl thats hella funny surprisingly.Wow,but that was a really cute scene :D I luv yur stories yur such an awesome writer
Aw thank you!!!! :mrgreen:
TH_luv
June 5th, 2008, 07:35 PM
lmao Georgy-kins :lol: XD lmao rofl thats hella funny surprisingly.Wow,but that was a really cute scene :D I luv yur stories yur such an awesome writer
Aw thank you!!!! :mrgreen:
yur welcome :D
Haley1018
June 5th, 2008, 11:00 PM
There won't be any updates until Monday, because I'm going out of town tomorrow to visit relatives and won't be back until then. I'm bringing a journal with me so I can write whenever I get bored (which will be an awful lot, trust me), so I'll plenty to post when I come back. I'll miss you guys!
Haley1018
June 10th, 2008, 11:33 PM
I'm having some writer's block right now :x
But I'm working on a chapter atm
I'll update soon, I promise :)
TH_luv
June 10th, 2008, 11:35 PM
I'm having some writer's block right now :x
But I'm working on a chapter atm
I'll update soon, I promise :)
oh snaps!a writers block isnt good >.<
Haley1018
June 10th, 2008, 11:37 PM
I'm having some writer's block right now :x
But I'm working on a chapter atm
I'll update soon, I promise :)
oh snaps!a writers block isnt good >.<
Ew God
I can't stand it
It makes me want to bite someone in the face :twisted:
TH_luv
June 10th, 2008, 11:44 PM
I'm having some writer's block right now :x
But I'm working on a chapter atm
I'll update soon, I promise :)
oh snaps!a writers block isnt good >.<
Ew God
I can't stand it
It makes me want to bite someone in the face :twisted:
how violent lolz but what's with the evil face?...O.O...don't look at me! >.<
Haley1018
June 10th, 2008, 11:45 PM
oh snaps!a writers block isnt good >.<
Ew God
I can't stand it
It makes me want to bite someone in the face :twisted:
how violent lolz but what's with the evil face?...O.O...don't look at me! >.<
Do not fear, Lena, dear!
You aren't my target.
My target is hopefully my mother, since she is being a hoeface to me.
TH_luv
June 10th, 2008, 11:51 PM
Do not fear, Lena, dear!
You aren't my target.
My target is hopefully my mother, since she is being a hoeface to me.
oh danke gott! XD I was about to say
Haley1018
June 10th, 2008, 11:53 PM
Do not fear, Lena, dear!
You aren't my target.
My target is hopefully my mother, since she is being a hoeface to me.
oh danke gott! XD I was about to say
Lol :lol:
Haley1018
June 11th, 2008, 12:07 AM
Chapter Sixteen
The lights darkened in the movie theater, and previews for upcoming movies began to flash across the screen. Bill and Leona were all alone in the theater, and took advantage of this. After the first fifteen minutes of the movie, Bill turned and crashed his lips into Leona’s.
Surprised but ecstatic, Leona kissed him back, slipping her tongue into his mouth. Bill returned the favor, and the two began to make out, doing everything but f**king each other (though they were pretty close).
The pair shocked when the lights flickered back on. Leona pulled away from Bill’s embrace and adjusted her messed-up clothes. “The movie’s already over?” she mumbled, mainly to herself. They heard snickering from the back, and turned around to see three twelve-year-old boys laughing at them.
“You...saw...everything, didn’t you?” Bill sighed. The boys nodded, bursting into another round of chuckles. “The kissing, the fondling...gah, you two just couldn’t keep your hands off each other, could you?” one of the boys said. Blushing furiously, Leona shook her head, grabbed her purse, and stumbled out of the theater, Bill following close behind her.
Sorry for the shortness and the suckiness people, I had writer's block. :oops:
TH_luv
June 11th, 2008, 12:10 AM
lmao naughty little boys! XD they were so enjoying that with their maughty little minds lmao poor Leona,hope yur writers block goes away soon
Haley1018
June 11th, 2008, 12:13 AM
lmao naughty little boys! XD they were so enjoying that with their maughty little minds lmao poor Leona,hope yur writers block goes away soon
Those boys
remind me of the time when Tom told the "hotel story"
when they were watching this guy f**k this chick at a hotel.
lmfao
THAT IS SO SOMETHING ME AND MY BEST FRIEND CASSIDY WOULD DO.
WE WOULD TOTALLY WATCH PEOPLE F**K EACH OTHER AND COMMENT ON THEIR POSITIONS AND HOW GOOD THEY WERE.
And danke! :mrgreen:
TH_luv
June 11th, 2008, 12:16 AM
lmao naughty little boys! XD they were so enjoying that with their maughty little minds lmao poor Leona,hope yur writers block goes away soon
Those boys
remind me of the time when Tom told the "hotel story"
when they were watching this guy f**k this chick at a hotel.
lmfao
THAT IS SO SOMETHING ME AND MY BEST FRIEND CASSIDY WOULD DO.
WE WOULD TOTALLY WATCH PEOPLE F**K EACH OTHER AND COMMENT ON THEIR POSITIONS AND HOW GOOD THEY WERE.
And danke! :mrgreen:
lmao! I love that interview!It was so funny,and how Tom wanted to ask the lady if she wanted to screw a real man lmao XD such entertainment!
Haley1018
June 11th, 2008, 12:17 AM
lmao naughty little boys! XD they were so enjoying that with their maughty little minds lmao poor Leona,hope yur writers block goes away soon
Those boys
remind me of the time when Tom told the "hotel story"
when they were watching this guy f**k this chick at a hotel.
lmfao
THAT IS SO SOMETHING ME AND MY BEST FRIEND CASSIDY WOULD DO.
WE WOULD TOTALLY WATCH PEOPLE F**K EACH OTHER AND COMMENT ON THEIR POSITIONS AND HOW GOOD THEY WERE.
And danke! :mrgreen:
lmao! I love that interview!It was so funny,and how Tom wanted to ask the lady if she wanted to screw a real man lmao XD such entertainment!
I JUST HAD A BRILLIANT IDEA. :shock:
Tom should be in a porno. XD
HE'D BE THE BEST D*MN PORN STAR EVERZ.
TH_luv
June 11th, 2008, 12:22 AM
I JUST HAD A BRILLIANT IDEA. :shock:
Tom should be in a porno. XD
HE'D BE THE BEST D*MN PORN STAR EVERZ.
lmao rofl! XD he'd have lots of fans! XD I admitt it,he definitly would lmao
Haley1018
June 11th, 2008, 12:24 AM
I JUST HAD A BRILLIANT IDEA. :shock:
Tom should be in a porno. XD
HE'D BE THE BEST D*MN PORN STAR EVERZ.
lmao rofl! XD he'd have lots of fans! XD I admitt it,he definitly would lmao
He would go down in porn star history :lol:
But I bet the fangirls (me included) would go insane if we watched him f**k another girl. XP
TH_luv
June 11th, 2008, 12:25 AM
I JUST HAD A BRILLIANT IDEA. :shock:
Tom should be in a porno. XD
HE'D BE THE BEST D*MN PORN STAR EVERZ.
lmao rofl! XD he'd have lots of fans! XD I admitt it,he definitly would lmao
He would go down in porn star history :lol:
But I bet the fangirls (me included) would go insane if we watched him f**k another girl. XP
lmao XD yesh I agree insane is just the word,to see Tom as a porn star definitly a good acupation for him lmao him fu**ing another chick hmmm...not very enjoyable lolz
Haley1018
June 11th, 2008, 12:35 AM
I is getting naughty thoughts now... :?
I MUST GO LISTEN TO A RAP SONG NOW.
PREFERRABLY A VERY NAUGHTY ONE.
TH_luv
June 11th, 2008, 12:39 AM
I is getting naughty thoughts now... :?
I MUST GO LISTEN TO A RAP SONG NOW.
PREFERRABLY A VERY NAUGHTY ONE.
lmao XD Buck in here is sorta naughty lolz not really,but naughty lolz
Haley1018
June 11th, 2008, 12:48 AM
I is getting naughty thoughts now... :?
I MUST GO LISTEN TO A RAP SONG NOW.
PREFERRABLY A VERY NAUGHTY ONE.
lmao XD Buck in here is sorta naughty lolz not really,but naughty lolz
Who sings it?
TH_luv
June 11th, 2008, 12:51 AM
I is getting naughty thoughts now... :?
I MUST GO LISTEN TO A RAP SONG NOW.
PREFERRABLY A VERY NAUGHTY ONE.
lmao XD Buck in here is sorta naughty lolz not really,but naughty lolz
Who sings it?
Akon,lil John,Ludacris,aaand some other dudes lolz
Haley1018
June 11th, 2008, 01:26 AM
lmao XD Buck in here is sorta naughty lolz not really,but naughty lolz
Who sings it?
Akon,lil John,Ludacris,aaand some other dudes lolz
Mk I shall go check it out nowz
Danke
TH_luv
June 11th, 2008, 01:31 AM
Mk I shall go check it out nowz
Danke
yur welcome =]
ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 11th, 2008, 12:06 PM
please update soon
ill have to go check that one out to cuz i got some other song called Dangerous stuck in my head and only one line is playing and its annoying
lilangel02371
June 11th, 2008, 01:06 PM
I liked it its good mehr bitte?
Haley1018
June 11th, 2008, 05:45 PM
I liked it its good mehr bitte?
Danke schon!
lilangel02371
June 11th, 2008, 07:13 PM
your welcome but I love it !!! I had to keep reading it
Haley1018
June 11th, 2008, 09:10 PM
F**king writer's block is still here. :evil:
But here's chapter 17.
Chapter Seventeen
Bill began to laugh uproariously whenever he and Leona were out of the theater. “Those boys remind me of the time me, Georg, Tom, and Gustav watched a man f**k this girl in his hotel room!” he exclaimed. He held his sides because they ached from his laughing. Leona began giggling at Bill, which made him laugh harder. “We should get home,” Bill suggested after the two calmed themselves down. At that precise moment, Shelby showed up in front of them. “I’ll give you a ride, sis,” Shelby offered, grinning.
“Where’d you come from?” Leona asked her sister. “Well, when a man and a woman love each other very much...” Shelby began. “I know that!” Leona snapped. “I meant, how did you know where we were?” “I was stalking you,” Shelby answered simply, shrugging her shoulders as if to say ‘You should have known’. Leona raised her eyebrows. “Look, do you want to ride home with me in the limo or not?” Bill and Leona nodded.
Once they were in the limo, Shelby began firing questions at Leona and Bill. “How did the date go?” “Great,” Bill and Leona answered in unison, eyeing each other and chuckling. “You spent the whole length of the movie sucking face, didn’t you?” Shelby didn’t know why she asked; she already knew the answer. “Yeah,” Leona replied casually. “I’m so proud of you!” Shelby squealed, squeezing Leona. Leona gave her a weird look, but said nothing. “My little sister almost got to third base, my little sister almost got to third base...” Shelby sang loudly, clapping her hands. Leona turned bright red and Bill laughed at the sisters.
TH_luv
June 11th, 2008, 09:32 PM
lmao rofl! XD how embarrassing,I should act like that when my little sistern makes out for the first time just for all the times she's p*ssed me off! :lol: mehr,bitte?
Haley1018
June 11th, 2008, 09:44 PM
lmao rofl! XD how embarrassing,I should act like that when my little sistern makes out for the first time just for all the times she's p*ssed me off! :lol: mehr,bitte?
Lmao
I give you the right to sing my song whenever your sis makes out with someone XD
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 11th, 2008, 09:46 PM
I make such a great big sis, don't I? :lol: :lol:
*hugs Haley*
Haley1018
June 11th, 2008, 09:47 PM
I make such a great big sis, don't I? :lol: :lol:
*hugs Haley*
Yes, you're the best big sis ever! :lol:
TH_luv
June 11th, 2008, 09:48 PM
lmao rofl! XD how embarrassing,I should act like that when my little sistern makes out for the first time just for all the times she's p*ssed me off! :lol: mehr,bitte?
Lmao
I give you the right to sing my song whenever your sis makes out with someone XD
yay!I get to use one of Haley's weird songs! XD
Haley1018
June 11th, 2008, 09:49 PM
lmao rofl! XD how embarrassing,I should act like that when my little sistern makes out for the first time just for all the times she's p*ssed me off! :lol: mehr,bitte?
Lmao
I give you the right to sing my song whenever your sis makes out with someone XD
yay!I get to use one of Haley's weird songs! XD
XD
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 11th, 2008, 09:50 PM
Good. 8-)
'Cuz I've now adopted you as my little sis!! :P
BWAHAHAHAHAHA!! :lol:
Haley1018
June 11th, 2008, 10:08 PM
Good. 8-)
'Cuz I've now adopted you as my little sis!! :P
BWAHAHAHAHAHA!! :lol:
lol :lol:
Now I have an older sister!
sveet!
Haley1018
June 12th, 2008, 05:45 PM
Chapter Eighteen
The stars twinkled in the night sky, and the moon sent a ray of light through the window into the dark kitchen. Unable to sleep, Leona stumbled into the kitchen, searching for the light switch. She finally found it, and switched it on. Shelby was standing on the tiled floor, staring at her sister. Leona clamped her hand over her mouth to stop the ear-piercing scream that was climbing in her throat.
“Oh my God, Shelby!” Leona shrieked. “You scared me!” “I know,” Shelby replied, giggling to herself. “Couldn’t sleep?” she guessed. Leona shook her head. “Me either,” Shelby confessed, sighing. “I have too much on my mind.”
“Like what?” Leona asked, concern in her voice. Shelby shrugged, staring at her bare feet. “It’s just...Georg, Bill, and the rest of the boys are starting relationships with us girls, right?” Leona nodded. “And they’re causing us to fall deeper and deeper in love with them. But what happens when they’re done recording their new album?”
Leona’s heart stopped. She had never thought about that. “So what are they gonna do when they’re finished with their CD?” Shelby went on. “I seriously doubt they’ll stay here in America, so they’ll be going back to Germany. And we’ll probably never see them again.” A huge lump settled in Leona’s throat at the thought of Bill leaving her.
“I don’t think I could live without Georg,” Shelby said. “I love him too much.” “If they love us too, wouldn’t they stay here with us?” Leona’s voice wasn’t much more than a whisper. Shelby looked at her younger sister, her eyes full of sorrow. “What if they’re just playing us our hearts? What if they think this is all just a summer romance?” she wondered aloud. Leona’s eyes filled with tears. “I think I’m going back to bed,” she mumbled, forcing her feet to drag her out of the kitchen.
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 12th, 2008, 05:58 PM
I'm sorry I made you cry, sweetie. *hug*
But...I do have a point.
ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 12th, 2008, 06:10 PM
omg what are they going to do know????? i hope they dont break up with the boys :(
TH_luv
June 12th, 2008, 06:11 PM
Nooo! >.< dont play with our hearts...it's too sad to bear! :cry:
Nyloria
June 12th, 2008, 06:19 PM
Dang, I am really sad now.
Haley1018
June 12th, 2008, 06:28 PM
I'm sorry I made you cry, sweetie. *hug*
But...I do have a point.
'Tis okay.
And you do.
lilangel02371
June 12th, 2008, 07:54 PM
aww i hope they dont leave and i dont think theyre playing
Haley1018
June 12th, 2008, 07:56 PM
Thanks for all the comments, darlings!
Haley1018
June 12th, 2008, 09:21 PM
Chapter Nineteen
“...They’ll be going back to Germany. And we’ll never see them again. ...They’ll be going back to Germany. And we’ll never see them again.” Shelby’s words echoed over and over again in Leona’s head, showing no signs of stopping. “In two months, I’ll never see Bill again.” Tears welled up in her eyes and spilled over, causing her mascara to leave black streaks down her cheeks. She wiped her eyes, but the tears continued to flow.
“Leona? Why are you crying?” Bill asked, wrapping an arm around her shoulder and pulling her close to him. “N-nothing. It’s nothing.” Leona forced herself to stop crying; she didn’t want Bill to see her like this. “If it’s nothing, then why are you weeping?” Leona sighed. “I can’t tell you, Bill. I wish I could, but I can’t,” she replied. Bill nodded and said, “I understand.” He kissed her wet cheek, and rested his head on top of hers. This action almost made Leona start bawling all over again, but she kept her composure.
“I don’t like seeing you like this,” Bill whispered in a barely audible voice. “It makes me upset to see you so sad.” Leona stared at Bill for the longest time, her eyes drinking in his perfect features, the sorrow in his eyes at seeing her cry, his extraordinary hair. She debated whether to ask him her question or not, but decided to ask anyway.
“Bill, do...” she began before closing her mouth. “Do I what?” Bill whispered, stroking her arm. “Do–-do you...love me?” Bill raised his eyes in surprise, but then smiled. “No. I’m in love with you.” He gently kissed Leona’s lips, to prove he really was in love with her.
lilangel02371
June 12th, 2008, 09:30 PM
AWW BILL IS SO SWEET!!! I hope they don't leave or at least take the girls with them
tokiohotel26
June 12th, 2008, 09:32 PM
i leave 4 like a day nd i miss 2 chapters! gosh! i have bad timing!
nineteen was a sweet chapter though! it made me cry :cry:
amandaaraujo
June 12th, 2008, 10:19 PM
oh my Efing G Haley i give yu permission to shoot me im such a bad reader i missed like since chapter 16 im so bad please forgive me and omg i made out with gustav hahah. aww Bill loves leona awwww. :) oh boy i hope they dont leave the girls *us* :? I blame all the testing at school
amandaaraujo
June 12th, 2008, 10:19 PM
i leave 4 like a day nd i miss 2 chapters! gosh! i have bad timing!
nineteen was a sweet chapter though! it made me cry :cry:
I know me too :cry:
Haley1018
June 12th, 2008, 10:27 PM
oh my Efing G Haley i give yu permission to shoot me im such a bad reader i missed like since chapter 16 im so bad please forgive me and omg i made out with gustav hahah. aww Bill loves leona awwww. :) oh boy i hope they dont leave the girls *us* :? I blame all the testing at school
'Tis okay, I forgive you for missing the chaps. :D
amandaaraujo
June 12th, 2008, 10:28 PM
oh my Efing G Haley i give yu permission to shoot me im such a bad reader i missed like since chapter 16 im so bad please forgive me and omg i made out with gustav hahah. aww Bill loves leona awwww. :) oh boy i hope they dont leave the girls *us* :? I blame all the testing at school
'Tis okay, I forgive you for missing the chaps. :D
THX :oops:
Haley1018
June 13th, 2008, 08:17 PM
Chapter Twenty
At precisely 6:30 in the morning, Leona’s alarm clock went on, making a loud buzzing noise. Leona popped up like in her bed like a piece of bread in a toaster. She buried her face in her hands and groaned loudly. “******,” she swore. “I don’t want to get up right now!”
She had nearly all of the night thinking about how she was going to live without Bill whenever he went back to Germany, and had finally fallen asleep around 3 a.m. “GOOD MORNING, SUNSHINE!” Shelby screamed, flinging open the bedroom door and pouncing on her younger sister. “Oof!” Leona cried when Shelby landed on her. “Come on, come on! Get out of bed!!!” Shelby demanded, pulling Leona out of her bed. “We have to get going or we’ll be late!” “Fine.” Leona picked herself off the floor and went to her closet to change into the outfit she had prepared last night.
“Where are we going anyway?” she asked as she took her pajama top off. “Somewhere.” Shelby grinned to herself; she loved keeping secrets from her sister. “Be fast, Leona; we’ll miss our flight!” Leona finished getting dressed, grabbed her suitcase, and followed her sister out the front door. Where the **** are we going?
Nyloria
June 13th, 2008, 08:31 PM
Where are they going?! Where?! Where?! Where?!
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 13th, 2008, 09:29 PM
Where am I taking you??
I should know, but I don't... :|
TH_luv
June 13th, 2008, 11:14 PM
dude awesome chappys! XD I wonder where Shelby's gonna take Leona! :D mehr,bitte?
Haley1018
June 13th, 2008, 11:54 PM
Chapter Twenty-One
“Why did you take me all the way to New York?!?” Leona demanded whenever she and Shelby had gotten off their flight and went to Shelby’s apartment. “Well, I figured you and I deserved some alone time with Georg and Bill,” Shelby replied. “They’re coming tomorrow. Plus, you haven’t been out of Los Angeles in a long while; I thought a trip out of the city would do you good.” Leona had forgotten how thoughtful Shelby could be; she didn’t see her sister much anymore.
That reminds me... “Shelby, how much longer are you going to be staying in Los Angeles?” Leona questioned. “I’m moving there,” Shelby answered. Leona raised her eyebrows. “Really? But I thought you loved New York!” “I do. But I miss you and Daddy and Mom.” “But what about your fashion career?” “I’ll continue to do it, just in LA.” Leona closed her mouth, satisified that her questions were answered. She squealed and hugged her sister tightly. “You’re gonna move back in with us!” she exclaimed. Shelby laughed. “Yes, I am,” she confirmed, hugging Leona back.
“Bill and Georg will be here tomorrow at nine in the morning,” Shelby said, unpacking her suitcase. “You and Bill will sleep in the guest room, and Georg will stay with me in my bedroom. Are you okay with that?” Leona nodded. She squealed once more, excited about her upcoming private time with Bill.
Sorry this chapter sucks, I have a little bit of writer's block >.<
TH_luv
June 13th, 2008, 11:57 PM
aaawww! >.< her and Billy get alone time :D woah,Shelby's really nice! XD mehr,bitte?
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 14th, 2008, 12:03 AM
HAIL YEAH!
PRIVATE TIME WITH BILL! 8-)
I bet you must love me right now.
Do ya, little sis? :?:
Haley1018
June 14th, 2008, 12:04 AM
HAIL YEAH!
PRIVATE TIME WITH BILL! 8-)
I bet you must love me right now.
Do ya, little sis? :?:
Yes of course, big sis :mrgreen:
Haley1018
June 14th, 2008, 04:41 PM
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Haley1018
June 14th, 2008, 04:58 PM
Chapter Twenty-Two
“The love I have for you makes me blind, I can’t see, the love I have for you cuts my throat, I can’t speak,” Leona’s iPod sang in her ears as she patiently waited in the airport for Georg and Bill. Oh, how this song mimicked her feelings her Bill. Soon she saw the tips of Bill’s porcupine hair sticking up in the air, and a wide grin broke across her face.
“Leona!” Bill cried, spotting her and rushing over to her. He picked her up and swung her around a few times before setting her feet back on the ground and kissing her tenderly on the lips. “I missed you terribly.” Leona smiled. “I was only gone for a day.” Bill played with a strand of her hair and replied, “I know. But I don’t like spending even a minute away from you.” Leona’s heart swelled.
“Come on, lovebirds!” Shelby’s voice tore the couple out of their own private little world and thrust them back into reality. “We must be going to my apartment now.” Bill quickly kissed Leona one last time before taking her hand and following Shelby to the limo she had waiting for them.
I know the last few chapters have sucked, but it gets better, I promise!
Haley1018
June 14th, 2008, 06:07 PM
bump
amandaaraujo
June 14th, 2008, 06:14 PM
ooh alone time with Bill aawwww :) update soon i have a friend over and she is driving me crazy srry the comment is short... :)
TH_luv
June 14th, 2008, 06:44 PM
aaaawwwww! :lol: lovebirds is definitly what you should call them! XD mehr,bitte?
Haley1018
June 14th, 2008, 07:20 PM
bump
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 14th, 2008, 08:13 PM
What happend to Georg? :x
Wasn't I supposed to be having "Private Time" with him? 8-)
Haley1018
June 14th, 2008, 08:41 PM
What happend to Georg? :x
Wasn't I supposed to be having "Private Time" with him? 8-)
Don't worry, I'll make the next chapter all about you and Georg :D
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 14th, 2008, 08:45 PM
Yes!
I love my little sister!
*hugs Haley*
Haley1018
June 14th, 2008, 08:47 PM
Yes!
I love my little sister!
*hugs Haley*
I love my big sister!
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 14th, 2008, 11:36 PM
So...when will you update?
*poke*
Haley1018
June 14th, 2008, 11:40 PM
So...when will you update?
*poke*
I'm going to start writing in a second.
I am REALLY ****** off right now, so I need something to occupy myself with, so I'll write and update soon.
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 14th, 2008, 11:42 PM
Oh, ok.
Now, tell your big sis what's wrong.
*hug*
Haley1018
June 14th, 2008, 11:46 PM
Oh, ok.
Now, tell your big sis what's wrong.
*hug*
Well, my ex-best friend Mariana keeps texting me, bragging about herself and all this stuff she just got and making fun of me and my cousin Brooke, and it's REALLY ******* me off. I don't even know why she's wasting her time texting me, cos she knows how much I hate her.
:evil:
Thank you for listening to my whining, big sis. :)
I feel better now.
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 14th, 2008, 11:53 PM
Oh, ok.
Now, tell your big sis what's wrong.
*hug*
Well, my ex-best friend Mariana keeps texting me, bragging about herself and all this stuff she just got and making fun of me and my cousin Brooke, and it's REALLY ******* me off. I don't even know why she's wasting her time texting me, cos she knows how much I hate her.
:evil:
Thank you for listening to my whining, big sis. :)
I feel better now.
That's what I'm here for! :mrgreen:
*poke*
*waiting for update*
*poke*
Haley1018
June 14th, 2008, 11:54 PM
Oh, ok.
Now, tell your big sis what's wrong.
*hug*
Well, my ex-best friend Mariana keeps texting me, bragging about herself and all this stuff she just got and making fun of me and my cousin Brooke, and it's REALLY ******* me off. I don't even know why she's wasting her time texting me, cos she knows how much I hate her.
:evil:
Thank you for listening to my whining, big sis. :)
I feel better now.
That's what I'm here for! :mrgreen:
*poke*
*waiting for update*
*poke*
I'm almost done, don't worry! :mrgreen:
Haley1018
June 14th, 2008, 11:59 PM
Chapter Twenty-Three
Georg set his suitcases down on the floor of Shelby’s bedroom, and looked around. “Your room is huge!” he exclaimed. “I know,” Shelby responded, shrugging her shoulders. She walked over to Georg and threw her arms around his neck. “How was your flight?” she asked in a low voice. “Fine,” Georg mumbled. He could barely speak, for Shelby’s beauty was so breath-taking, especially up close, and he couldn’t breathe.
Shelby inched her face even closer to Georg’s, and kissed his lips. He responded by easing his tongue into her mouth. As things started to get heated, Shelby’s cell phone began to rang loudly. “I’m really missing it in so many ways, I anticipate us making out,” her ringtone sang. Shelby’s face turned bright red; she had set that as her ringtone the day before, when she was waiting for Georg to arrive in New York and dreaming of how she was going to spend her private time with him, hence the line about making out.
Deciding the call wasn’t important, she tossed her cell phone back into her purse and threw her purse on the floor. She then turned to Georg, grabbing his shirt and using it to pull him with her to her bed. Georg raised his eyebrows in surprise, then lowered them and smiled with pleasure. Knowing what Shelby had in mind, he began removing his clothes and joined Shelby on her bed.
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 15th, 2008, 12:02 AM
8-)
Haley, have I ever told you that I love you?
If not...I LOVE YOU!!!!!!
Haley1018
June 15th, 2008, 12:03 AM
8-)
Haley, have I ever told you that I love you?
If not...I LOVE YOU!!!!!!
I love you too! :mrgreen:
Haley1018
June 15th, 2008, 01:53 AM
bump
Haley1018
June 15th, 2008, 11:10 PM
bump
amandaaraujo
June 15th, 2008, 11:16 PM
bump
uhoh Haley what's up with the bumps your making me nervous??
Haley1018
June 15th, 2008, 11:18 PM
bump
uhoh Haley what's up with the bumps your making me nervous??
I don't want my fics to get to the second page!
I work too hard on this **** for it to get to second page and be ignored.
amandaaraujo
June 15th, 2008, 11:50 PM
smart thinking yeah i know how you feel it gets frustrating at times... I love your FFs so when i see that its going down ill coment so it will go to the top because i also think you work to hard on these really good FF for them to be ignored :)
Haley1018
June 15th, 2008, 11:53 PM
smart thinking yeah i know how you feel it gets frustrating at times... I love your FFs so when i see that its going down ill coment so it will go to the top because i also think you work to hard on these really good FF for them to be ignored :)
Aww, thank you, Amanda! :D
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 16th, 2008, 01:01 AM
HALEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What up, lil sis?? 8-)
Haley1018
June 16th, 2008, 01:05 AM
HEY GIRL HEY!
I is doing nothing, what you up to, sis?
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 16th, 2008, 01:11 AM
Nothin much. :|
Geez, I'm bored!
Steevie's not online, so I can't argue with her. *sniff* I miss our arguments. :cry:
Haley1018
June 16th, 2008, 01:13 AM
Nothin much. :|
Geez, I'm bored!
Steevie's not online, so I can't argue with her. *sniff* I miss our arguments. :cry:
*Pats back*
'Tis okay, dear sister. She'll be back soon, because she is ALWAYS online.
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 16th, 2008, 01:15 AM
True dat!
:lol:
Haley1018
June 16th, 2008, 01:16 AM
True dat!
:lol:
:lol:
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 16th, 2008, 01:32 AM
Dude, Steevie's on now!!
:lol: :lol: :lol:
We were right!!! 8-)
Haley1018
June 16th, 2008, 01:38 AM
Of course! We're always right. 8-)
amandaaraujo
June 16th, 2008, 02:00 PM
smart thinking yeah i know how you feel it gets frustrating at times... I love your FFs so when i see that its going down ill coment so it will go to the top because i also think you work to hard on these really good FF for them to be ignored :)
Aww, thank you, Amanda! :D
Hi :)
Haley1018
June 17th, 2008, 10:44 PM
smart thinking yeah i know how you feel it gets frustrating at times... I love your FFs so when i see that its going down ill coment so it will go to the top because i also think you work to hard on these really good FF for them to be ignored :)
Aww, thank you, Amanda! :D
Hi :)
Hello :mrgreen:
Haley1018
June 17th, 2008, 11:25 PM
I'm SO sorry I haven't update lately, I'm working on a new chapter right now!!!!
Haley1018
June 18th, 2008, 12:46 AM
Chapter Twenty-Four
“So, what do you want to do?” Leona asked after Bill had finish unpacking, flopping onto the bed. Bill shrugged, joining her on the bed. He snuggled next to her and rested his head on her shoulder. “How about today we just hang out here and relax?” Bill suggested. “Sounds good to me.” Leona got off the bed and walked over to the radio. “Mind if I turn on some music?” “Nein.” She dug through her suitcase until she found what she was looking for, and popped the CD in the radio. She skipped track one, which was the intro, and turned in on track two, then went back to her place on the bed.
She sang loudly to the song, her lovely voice blending in with the lead singer’s. “Covered and coarse, well I can wait my turn and pay them all back. Let’s turn original, let’s take it all back. You can hide but I won’t. How do you know? Blacked out and bleeding. Take it away. One look and you’ll never leave, because this can’t hold us down!” Leona closed her eyes and let herself sink deeper into the music. “If I wake up on my own, and something happens, please come home. Wake me up before you go.”
Bill watched her sing with curious eyes, admiring her beautiful voice. Discovering he actually liked the music playing, he asked, “What CD is this?” Leona opened her eyes and looked at Bill. “‘Grand Unification’ by Fightstar. My favorite CD in the world by my favorite band in the world. But Tokio Hotel’s my second favorite band!” she added quickly. “Sing some more for me,” Bill said. Smiling at his request, Leona turned the CD onto track eight and opened her mouth to begin singing.
“I’m not from around here. I’ll hold onto you, but...I can’t hold on to this day, it’s all gone. Waiting always, it came down to save us, untouched open, and end it all. Cos I’m under the outside and over all. Cos I’m a thousand miles away and I’m out of oxygen and I’m falling faster than I’d like to be.”
“Your singing is superb,” Bill complimented her. Leona blushed. Bill laughed at her and gently kissed her on the nose before wrapping his arms around her waist and pulling her close to him. “Let’s go to sleep.” “But it’s only four o’clock!” “I know, but my flight wore me out a bit,” Bill told her. Using the remote that went along with the radio, Leona turned the CD off and closed her eyes, soon drifting off into sleep.
The first song is "Grand Unification Pt. 1" and the second is "Lost Like Tears In Rain" and they're both by the amazingly talented British band, Fightstar. If you like rock music, you should definitely check Fightstar out, they're INCREDIBLE!!!
Haley1018
June 18th, 2008, 01:29 AM
Again, I apologize for not updating in a while!
Haley1018
June 18th, 2008, 09:16 PM
bump
Haley1018
June 18th, 2008, 11:35 PM
bump
Haley1018
June 18th, 2008, 11:54 PM
I'm the raddest queen of them all, I can have anyone, so what I want? Perfect, get it right, never wrong...
*random :? *
Haley1018
June 19th, 2008, 12:13 AM
OH MY GOD.
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 19th, 2008, 12:18 AM
OH MY GOD.
What? :shock:
Haley1018
June 19th, 2008, 12:20 AM
OH MY GOD.
What? :shock:
I was getting ******* cos no one would reply.
BUT YOU DID, MY DEAR SISTER! 8-)
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 19th, 2008, 12:21 AM
OH MY GOD.
What? :shock:
I was getting ******* cos no one would reply.
BUT YOU DID, MY DEAR SISTER! 8-)
Yup!
Cuz I love ya!
Haley1018
June 19th, 2008, 12:24 AM
What? :shock:
I was getting ******* cos no one would reply.
BUT YOU DID, MY DEAR SISTER! 8-)
Yup!
Cuz I love ya!
I love ya too!
Nyloria
June 19th, 2008, 12:24 AM
I love this fanfic! Sorry I haven't commented in a while. My life has kept me away from Tokio Hotel. More please?
Haley1018
June 19th, 2008, 12:27 AM
I love this fanfic! Sorry I haven't commented in a while. My life has kept me away from Tokio Hotel. More please?
Danke schon!
And 'tis okay! :mrgreen:
Haley1018
June 19th, 2008, 05:17 PM
:)
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 19th, 2008, 05:19 PM
HALEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*tacklehug*
Haley1018
June 19th, 2008, 05:22 PM
SHELBY!!!!
*tackleshugs*
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 19th, 2008, 05:25 PM
Haley, listen to this!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_JmSDsrRf80
Haley1018
June 19th, 2008, 05:28 PM
Haley, listen to this!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_JmSDsrRf80
The video is a bit weird
But the song is groovy 8-)
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 19th, 2008, 05:33 PM
Haley, listen to this!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_JmSDsrRf80
The video is a bit weird
But the song is groovy 8-)
I know the vid is weird, but it's Depeche Mode! That's what really matters... :)
Haley1018
June 19th, 2008, 05:34 PM
Haley, listen to this!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_JmSDsrRf80
The video is a bit weird
But the song is groovy 8-)
I know the vid is weird, but it's Depeche Mode! That's what really matters... :)
My stepdad likes them
But I've never really listened to them before
Haley1018
June 21st, 2008, 05:30 PM
Sorry I haven't updated in so long!
I'm working on more now! :)
jackjackio
June 21st, 2008, 10:44 PM
Woo, please update!
I def. thought I commented before.
Parents must've walked into the room...
that = automatic closing of le box.
Pleeeeeeeeeease update!
Haley1018
June 21st, 2008, 11:13 PM
Chapter Twenty-Five
Shelby hurried to unlock the door to her apartment and she, along with her boyfriend, sister, and sister’s boyfriend, collapsed on the floor in a heap. “I can’t feel my legs,” Georg mumbled into the carpet. “Me either,” Bill admitted. “Oh, God, my feet are covered in blisters,” Shelby announced, kicking off her silver stilettos. Leona made a face. “Um, ew. You didn’t need to tell us that.” “Maybe you shouldn’t have worn heels,” Bill said. “Yeah, Shelby,” Leona agreed. “You knew we were going to be walking all around New York City.”
“I wear heels everywhere,” Shelby told her sister, picking herself up off the gray carpet. She helped Georg up off the floor, and the pair retreated to Shelby’s bedroom to, erm, “have fun”. Bill and Tom sat down on the couch closest to them, and began laughing ferociously whenever they heard moans coming from Shelby’s room. “Maybe we should give it a try,” Bill suggest. Leona looked confused. “Give what a try?” she asked, even though she thought she had a pretty good idea of what Bill meant. “Try what Georg and Shelby are doing,” he said, grinning. So I was right, Leona thought. A smile slowly spread across her face. “If you want to, Bill,” she whispered. “Oh, I do.”
Bill picked Leona up bridal-style and carried her to the guest room where the two were staying. He gently placed her on the bed, sitting down beside her. Leona reached up and crashed her lips into Bill’s with so much force Bill nearly tumbled off the bed. Her tongue danced around on his lower lip before entering his mouth. Bill tugged on the hem of Leona’s t-shirt before ripping it off of her body and throwing it on the floor while she did the same to him. Soon they were unclothed, and ready to begin their, shall we say, adventurous night.
TH_luv
June 21st, 2008, 11:28 PM
oh my,love...they must be...enjoying this lolz
Haley1018
June 21st, 2008, 11:38 PM
oh my,love...they must be...enjoying this lolz
lolz :lol:
Haley1018
June 22nd, 2008, 12:03 AM
:)
amandaaraujo
June 22nd, 2008, 12:38 AM
haha that was funny ,,poor tom doesnt have his girl tonight. hihii love this ff sooo whats up; :)
Haley1018
June 22nd, 2008, 12:48 AM
haha that was funny ,,poor tom doesnt have his girl tonight. hihii love this ff sooo whats up; :)
Danke! :D
Nothing's going on with me, how are you, Amanda?
Haley1018
June 22nd, 2008, 04:30 PM
:)
TWIXX
June 28th, 2008, 07:38 PM
~NEW READER~
YOU NEED TO UPDATE THIS SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG THEY MAKE THE PERFECT COUPLES!!!!!!!
I WONDER WHATS GONNA HAPPEN WHEN THEY LEAVE IN 2 MONTHS!!!
MEHR BITTE!!!!
Haley1018
June 28th, 2008, 07:44 PM
~NEW READER~
YOU NEED TO UPDATE THIS SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG THEY MAKE THE PERFECT COUPLES!!!!!!!
I WONDER WHATS GONNA HAPPEN WHEN THEY LEAVE IN 2 MONTHS!!!
MEHR BITTE!!!!
Danke!!!!! :D
I'm working on another chapter right now.
Haley1018
July 1st, 2008, 04:01 PM
Chapter Twenty-Six
Though the two couples wished that their private little get-away would last, they knew that it wouldn’t. They were awfully depressed when they boarded the plane back home to Los Angeles, but cheered up whenever they were greeted by their dear friends.
“SHELBY! LEONA! I MISSED YOU GUYS SO MUCH!” Kelsey screeched, throwing herself at the sisters. “Oof!” Shelby exclaimed she caught Kelsey. “Did you have a nice trip?” Amanda asked sweetly, gently hugging Leona. “It was lovely,” Leona answered, stepping out of Amanda’s arms and into Lena’s. “Leona! I HAVE GREAT NEWS!” Lena squealed excitedly whenever she finished hugging her best friend.
Leona cocked an eyebrow, suspicious. “What is it?” “ANDREAS AND I ARE GETTING MARRIED!!!” Lena screamed, jumping up and down. Everyone’s jaw dropped except for Andreas’s.
“Are you *****ting me??” Tom asked incredulously. Andreas shook his head, grinning. “Nope. I proposed to her last night.” “B-b-b-but you’ve only known her for a couple of months!” Gustav exclaimed. “Surely you should wait before you dive into marriage?”
“Reasonable people do,” Andreas said. “But who said we were reasonable people?” Gustav sighed and threw his arms up in the air. “Whatever! Your life,” he muttered, stomping off.
“I think Gustav may have a point,” Georg admitted. “You should probably wait a little bit before getting married. Marriage is a big thing, and you don’t want to get into it with the wrong person.” Lena frowned. “Are you saying Andreas and I don’t love each other?”
Georg’s eyes widened in shock. “No, no! I’m not saying that! It’s just...what if you find out that you don’t like each other as much as you thought you did?” Lena’s face burned with anger. “I LOVE ANDREAS!” she roared. “Why can’t you just be happy for us instead of telling us what to do?”
“I’m happy for you, Lena!” Shelby exclaimed, pulling her friend into a tight embrace. The other girls murmured their agreement and joined the hug. “I can’t believe you’re getting married!” Kelsey shouted. “I know!” Lena squealed. “You’ll have to tell us all about the proposal tonight,” Leona ordered. “I will,” Lena assured her, giggling.
TexasGirlLovesTH
July 1st, 2008, 04:05 PM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
Andi proposed!
Haley1018
July 1st, 2008, 04:06 PM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
Andi proposed!
Yes, he did. 8-)
I wanted one of my couples to get married and I felt bad for having so little to do with dear Andi, so I made him the groom-to-be. 8-)
Haley1018
July 1st, 2008, 04:37 PM
:P
Haley1018
July 1st, 2008, 05:33 PM
8-)
TH_luv
July 1st, 2008, 05:40 PM
lmao ZOMG Im getting married to Andreas! XD we were meant to be,Georg and Gusti are just jealous cuz they're not the first,and thats right!...IM NOT RESPONSIBLE! XD
Haley1018
July 1st, 2008, 05:46 PM
lmao ZOMG Im getting married to Andreas! XD we were meant to be,Georg and Gusti are just jealous cuz they're not the first,and thats right!...IM NOT RESPONSIBLE! XD
:lol: :lol:
Yes, they are just jealous :lol:
Haley1018
July 1st, 2008, 06:04 PM
:D
Haley1018
July 1st, 2008, 07:42 PM
8-)
Haley1018
July 1st, 2008, 11:53 PM
8-)
Haley1018
July 3rd, 2008, 09:07 PM
:D
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