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Nyloria
June 3rd, 2008, 06:03 PM
Okay so I have had an Idea for a fanfic with Tokio Hotel in it. I am still working on the first chapter but here are the main characters:
Full Name: Leela Neela Heron
Age 17
Born: In India. Moved to the US when she was 5.
Hair Color: Long Black hair with red tips.
Eye color: Chocolate Brown
Instuments: Piano, drums, bass, guitar
Occupation: Currently in a band called Doublestar. She is lead vocals and guitar. But she is going to school for music.
Full Name: Stephanie Nicole Rustrum
Age: 17
Born: In Singapore. Her mom is Canadian and her dad is from Singapore. Moved to the US when she was 3.
Hair color: Natually brown but it is dyed black with Dark purple highlights.
Eye color: Brown
Instuments: Piano, drums, bass, guitar
Occupation: Currently in a band called Doublestar.
She is Bass and vocals. Also going to school for music.
Full Name: Lena Skye Heron
Age: 17
Born: In India. She was adopted by Leela's family when she was 15.
Hair color: Shoulder length black hair with blond in the front.
Eye color: Brown
Instuments: Piano, drums, bass, guitar
Occupation: In a band named Doublestar. She is the lead guitar player and she sings background vocals.
Full Name: Raza Josee Hernandez
Age: 17
Born: In Mexico. Moved to the US when she was 6.
Hair color: Dark Red
Eye color: Brown
Instuments: Piano, drums, bass, guitar
Occupation: In her friends band called Doublestar. She is the Drummer and background vocals.
Full Name: Katie Delancee D'Ambrosio
Age: 17
Born: In Scotland. Moved to the US when she was 7.
Hair color: Natually bright red.
Eye color: Brown
Instuments: Piano, drums, bass, guitar
Occupation: The band Doublestar. She plays Piano and guitar and sings background vocals.
I Hope I can get the first chapter up tonight. The boys should be in the story around chapter 2 or 3.
Haley1018
June 3rd, 2008, 06:15 PM
Kewlio!!!!
I can't wait until you post it! :mrgreen:
Nyloria
June 3rd, 2008, 06:17 PM
Kewlio!!!!
I can't wait until you post it! :mrgreen:
Thanks! I love your siggy by the way.
Haley1018
June 3rd, 2008, 06:18 PM
Kewlio!!!!
I can't wait until you post it! :mrgreen:
Thanks! I love your siggy by the way.
Thank you! :mrgreen:
Nyloria
June 3rd, 2008, 06:20 PM
Thank you! :mrgreen:
You're welcome! :D
Nyloria
June 3rd, 2008, 07:27 PM
Chapter 1
Leela's P.O.V
"GOOD MORNING SUNSHINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I groaned and rolled over as Stephanie boucned up and down on my bed. "Why now?" I asked and she stopped bouncing "BECAUSE IT'S 9:00 IN THE MORNING!" She shouted right in my ear. "Steff, did you have sugar already this morning?" "Maybe..." she answered and ran out of my room to go wake up Raza. I got up and streched as I thought about what was planned for the day.
"Let's see, first we have an interview at 11:00, then lunch, then... " "Then we meet the new boys that are joining our tour!" I jumped at the sound of Lena's voice. "What have I told you about knocking Lena?" "Sorry. I am just so excited to meet Tokio Hotel. I have never heard of them, have you? She asked me. "No" I lied, "I have never heard of them either." "Oh well. I just can't wait to see them. I wonder if their Guitarist is cute?" She walked out of my room, leaving me to my thoughts.
The truth is, I know tons about Tokio Hotel. I had spent the last week researching them on my computer late at night after I heard one of the other bands talking about them joining our tour. That's why I was so tired in the morning but I just told everyone that I had been up late reading. I didn't want anyone to know becuas ewhenever I look at a band, our tour manager Shane, always makes fun of me saying that I am just looking for a new boyfriend since my last one didn't work out. I know he means it in a good way but it still get's on my nerves.
"Leela! Are you gonna sleep all day or are you going to take a shower?!" I heard Katie call to me. "I'm up and I am going now!" I yelled back to her. I chuckle to myself as I think about how much she sounds like my mom. "Well, the bathroom is not going to stay open forever. I better get in there before someone decides they want to get in there and spend 2 hours on their hair" I say to myself as I grab my cloths and head for the shower.
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 3rd, 2008, 07:58 PM
MOREMOREMOREMOREMORE! :o
I like it!
I need more!
:D
Nyloria
June 3rd, 2008, 08:11 PM
MOREMOREMOREMOREMORE! :o
I like it!
I need more!
:D
Yay! I am glad you like it! I am working on more now.
Haley1018
June 3rd, 2008, 08:14 PM
I love it!
Mehr bitte!
Nyloria
June 3rd, 2008, 08:55 PM
Chapter 2
Leela's P.O.V
By the time I got done showering it was 10:00 and I went to eat some breakfast. "Crap! We're out of milk again!" I shouted as I opened up the frige on our bus. "Sorry. I thought we had more." I turned to see Jared, our merch guy sitting at the little kitchen table with his computer.
Jared is a pretty cool guy. He has brown hair that is styled in a skater boy type of way and he also has snakebites. He plays guitar in a band with his two brothers and their friend. He also has a crush on Lena, but he doesn't know I know that. He would kill me if he found out I had evesdropped on that conversation with Shane.
. "It's okay. I'm not really hungry anyway." I answered him sitting down on the couch and turning on the T.V. "Well, you better eat something because you have a long day ahead of you." He said tossing a granola bar at me."Thanks! I didn't know we had these." I said unwrapping the bar and taking a bite."I keep them on the bus for when we run out of milk." He answered, winking at me.
* 2 hours later *
As we all sat around in Denny's waiting on our food, Shane explained the schedule for the rest of the day.
"So everyone, We did our interview, and at 3:00 we have sound check, then- OW!" Shane yelled as he rubbed the side of his face were Raza just hit him with a spit ball. Raza put on a dead serious face and pointed at me when he turned to look to see who it was. "Leela what have I told you about-" "ATTACK!" I shouted as everyone started shooting spit balls at him. He tried to block them but he still got hit.By this time, everyone in the resteraunt was looking at us. But just as I shot one, he ducked and it landed in the drink of the lady across from us. They lady stood up and started cussing us out and she got the manager of the place and we got kicked out.
"I can't believe you 5 got us kicked out of Denny's!" Shane fumed as we walked back to the van. We all acted like we were upset but on the inside we were laughing our butts off. "We're sorry Shane." We all said together. "But you have to admit, that lady's face was hilarious!" Lena said as we got in the Van. "Yeah and so was your's Mr. tour manager!" Stenphanie added.
After that, we did everything to make Shane laugh. Becuase if he laughed, we knew he wasn't mad anymore. By the end of the ride, we were all laughing so hard we cried. Thank goodness we got on his good side again. Now it was time for sound check and then, we would meet Tokio Hotel!
amandaaraujo
June 3rd, 2008, 09:07 PM
awesome love it
Nyloria
June 3rd, 2008, 09:14 PM
awesome love it
Thank-you! I will post more tomorrow.
Nyloria
June 3rd, 2008, 09:41 PM
Here is a logo I made for the band in this Fanfic:
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u138/kaya4622/Doublestarr.gif
tokiohotel26
June 3rd, 2008, 09:46 PM
this is a kool fan fic keep riting some more!!!
nd awesome logo!
Nyloria
June 3rd, 2008, 09:48 PM
this is a kool fan fic keep riting some more!!!
nd awesome logo!
Thank-you! I will write more tomorrow.
Haley1018
June 3rd, 2008, 10:35 PM
This fic rocks!
And I love the logo!
Nyloria
June 3rd, 2008, 10:38 PM
This fic rocks!
And I love the logo!
Thanks Haley! Your's is awesome too!
Haley1018
June 3rd, 2008, 10:40 PM
This fic rocks!
And I love the logo!
Thanks Haley! Your's is awesome too!
Thank you! :D
Nyloria
June 3rd, 2008, 10:50 PM
This fic rocks!
And I love the logo!
Thanks Haley! Your's is awesome too!
Thank you! :D
You're welcome. I finally got a Siggy that fits my mood.
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 4th, 2008, 09:12 AM
"ATTACK"
:lol: :lol: :lol:
Please tell me you're writing more!!??
Nyloria
June 4th, 2008, 10:11 AM
"ATTACK"
:lol: :lol: :lol:
Please tell me you're writing more!!??
Yes, I am writing more now.
Nyloria
June 4th, 2008, 11:06 AM
Hey everyone, sorry this chapter is a little boring, The next chapter will probably be about Raza and Lena.
Chapter 3
Leela's P.O.V
"Hey Leela, What song are we covering again tonight?" Stephanie asked me as we sound checked. "We are doing "Welcome to my Life" by Simple Plan." I answered as I put away my guitar. "Oh yeah. I really like that song...." she said, staring off into space. "What's on your mind Steff?" "Hmm... Oh Sorry! I was just thinking about Tokio Hotel." "It seems like everyone is today." I answered. "Yeah well, they are pretty huge in Germany and-" "HEY LEELA AND STEPHANIE! GET YOUR BUTT'S DOWN HERE!" Lena shouted from across the arena we were playing in that night. "Why?" I called back to her. "BECUASE TOKIO HOTEL IS HERE!!!" Lena answered and ran out the door. "Looks like somebody is excited to meet them." I said as we made our way down the steps of the stage.
Stephanie's P.O.V
As Leela and I walked backstage, we turned the corner I ran into something that I thought was brick wall. I looked up to see a man, about 21, with green eyes and straight, shoulder length, light brown hair staring down at me. "Oh sorry I wasn't watching were I was going." I said and turned to see that Leela had left me behind. "That's okay. I'm Georg." "Hi Georg! I'm Stephanie. I play in the band Doublestar. Hey wait, What band are you here with anyway?" "Tokio Hotel. I am the bassist." He answered. My mouth dropped open. I couldn't believe it. I would be touring with this cute guy for the rest of the tour?! I quickly closed my mouth. "Wow! So I guess we will be seeing each other everyday huh?" "Yeah I guess so. Hey we better go find the rest of the guys and your friends too." "Alright. Let's go I said.
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 4th, 2008, 11:55 AM
Aww...!
I think I know where this is going! ;) ;)
Nyloria
June 4th, 2008, 12:17 PM
Aww...!
I think I know where this is going! ;) ;)
You may be suprised. I will update in a little while. I have to go clean my room.
Nyloria
June 4th, 2008, 01:26 PM
Chapter 4
Raza's P.O.V
Do you feel like a man when you push her around?Do you feel better now as she falls to the ground? I was singing "Face Down" by The Red Jumpsuit Apparatus when I suddenly felt a tap on my shoulder. I ignored it because I thought it was Lena being annoying again. I felt the tap again... and again... and again... then they pulled my earphones out of my ears. "Lena would you leave me al- Oh sorry. I thought you were someone else I said to a boy with short blonde hair and brown. "That's okay. What's your name?" "Raza. You must be Gustav." "How did you know?" He asked. "I listen to your bands music sometimes." I answered.
"Oooo....Raza's got a boyfriend!Raza's got a boyfriend!Raza's got a boyfriend!" I turned around to see Lena running out of the room chanting that. I get picked on because I never talk about boys. It's because right now they are a waste of time to me. I have a life and dreams I want to meet and I am not looking for a relationship right now. I look back at Gustav who seems to be a bit embarrassed about the whole thing.
"Don't worry about her. She is always like that." I said to him. "Oh okay." He smiled. "You have a great voice." "Oh thanks I guess."
"RAZA!!!!!" I hear Shane call. "I'm in here!" I yell back. "Raza, you have a phone call from you mom. Something bad must have happened becuase she is crying". Shane said coming into the room Oh no. What could have happend at home?"Okay let me talk to her." Shane handed me the phone.
"Mom, what's wrong?" I ask. I can hear her crying on the other end. "Raza, It's about y-y-your father...
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 4th, 2008, 01:49 PM
:shock:
OHMYGOD!
WHAT HAPPEND???
He died, didn't he? :(
Oh, something tragic, I bet. :cry:
Nyloria
June 4th, 2008, 01:59 PM
:shock:
OHMYGOD!
WHAT HAPPEND???
He died, didn't he? :(
Oh, something tragic, I bet. :cry:
Hmm... I guess you'll have to wait and see won't you? :twisted: Oh and by the way, I love your story! It's rocks.
ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 4th, 2008, 05:55 PM
omg i love this story it is really good...........omg what happened to her father????????
.....please write more
Nyloria
June 4th, 2008, 06:11 PM
omg i love this story it is really good...........omg what happened to her father????????
.....please write more
I don't know if I will be able to write more tonight. I am going to be kinda busy. But I will try. Oh and thanks for commenting on this story.
Haley1018
June 4th, 2008, 06:16 PM
WHAT HAPPENED TO HER DAD?!?!
MEHR BITTE!!!
Nyloria
June 4th, 2008, 06:20 PM
WHAT HAPPENED TO HER DAD?!?!
MEHR BITTE!!!
I'm writing more now. But it will be up a little later because I have to go eat dinner.
Nyloria
June 4th, 2008, 10:35 PM
Chapter 5
Raza's P.O.V
"Mom! What happened to Dad?! Tell me!" I practically shouted into the phone. By this time, all of my band, Tokio Hotel, and all the staff had gathered around me to see what was wrong. "Let me start from the beginning. Put me on speaker phone because I'm sure all of the people there want to know what is going on." She said. I put her on speaker phone as everyone crowded around to hear what happened. "Okay mom. Start from the beginning and tell me everything." I said.
"Okay well, it all started last night. Your father went out to a bar with some friends to hang out. Well, as you know, your father has a drinking problem and he gets mean when he's drunk. Well, I went to bed around 10 and you father must have got home around 1 in the morning. I woke up to the sound of him opening the door to our room. I sat up and greeted him but then I noticed and object in his hand. It turned out it was a gun. He raised it ready to fire at me. But somehow, your older sister woke up and ran to see what was happening and as she swung open the door, the gun was knocked out of his hand. But unfortunately, the gun went off and hit you sister right though the heart. She died instantly. But that didn't stop you father from going any further. He was too drunk to find the gun so he picked up a lamp and swung it at me. I screamed as it hit me. You brother called 911 as all this was happening and he gathered up your baby sister and little brother and went outside to wait for the police. Then you father beat on me with any object he could find. I didn't know how much longer we could last. I-" "Wait mom" I interrupted "What do you mean by "We"? I heard her sigh as she started to talk again. "Raza, I was pregnant when you father attacked me. But I lost the baby in the fight." I choked up in tears. I couldn't believe it. "Raza, there is one other thing if you want to hear it." I heard my mom say. "Yes mom. What is it?" "You father turned the gun on himself after he beat me up." That did it. I burst out in tears and started running out of the room. "Wait Raza!" I heard Leela yell. I didn't stop. I kept on running. I ran and ran and ran until I could run no longer. I ran onto the bus and collapsed and the couch "How could this happen to me?"I thought to myself and I cried my eyes out."My sister's dead. my father is dead. My mothers unborn child is dead. Why? Why me?"
Haley1018
June 4th, 2008, 11:24 PM
:shock:
:shock:
:shock:
:o
Oh my :shock: :o
Nyloria
June 4th, 2008, 11:29 PM
:shock:
:shock:
:shock:
:o
Oh my :shock: :o
Suprised aren't you? I had to have something happen. I didn't want it to be all sunshine and flowers. Also, Lena will be faced with a challenge later in the story.
Haley1018
June 4th, 2008, 11:39 PM
:shock:
:shock:
:shock:
:o
Oh my :shock: :o
Suprised aren't you? I had to have something happen. I didn't want it to be all sunshine and flowers. Also, Lena will be faced with a challenge later in the story.
Very. :o Ooh, what sort of challenge?? :?:
Nyloria
June 4th, 2008, 11:41 PM
Okay everyone, just so you know, I will probably not update Friday, Saturday, or Sunday. I will be busy all day Friday becuase I am helping wash horses to get ready for my horse show. And Saturday, I have a horse show in the morning, then I come home, then we go out of town for my brothers graduation. Then Sunday, I may be going to an amusment park. I am taking a note book with me so I can take notes of whatever comes to mind to help make the story better. So thanks for your comments and I will update as much as possible tomorrow.
Nyloria
June 4th, 2008, 11:43 PM
:shock:
:shock:
:shock:
:o
Oh my :shock: :o
Suprised aren't you? I had to have something happen. I didn't want it to be all sunshine and flowers. Also, Lena will be faced with a challenge later in the story.
Very. :o Ooh, what sort of challenge?? :?:
You will have to wait and see. But believe me. It will be tough for her. She will have to choose...
Haley1018
June 4th, 2008, 11:43 PM
Okay everyone, just so you know, I will probably not update Friday, Saturday, or Sunday. I will be busy all day Friday becuase I am helping wash horses to get ready for my horse show. And Saturday, I have a horse show in the morning, then I come home, then we go out of town for my brothers graduation. Then Sunday, I may be going to an amusment park. I am taking a note book with me so I can take notes of whatever comes to mindto help make the story better. So thanks for your comments and I will update as much as possible tomorrow.
It seems as if everyone is busy this weekend!
You have your horse show and your bro's graduation, Shelby's going on a cruise, and I'm going out of town.
Have fun, love! :mrgreen:
Nyloria
June 4th, 2008, 11:46 PM
Okay everyone, just so you know, I will probably not update Friday, Saturday, or Sunday. I will be busy all day Friday becuase I am helping wash horses to get ready for my horse show. And Saturday, I have a horse show in the morning, then I come home, then we go out of town for my brothers graduation. Then Sunday, I may be going to an amusment park. I am taking a note book with me so I can take notes of whatever comes to mindto help make the story better. So thanks for your comments and I will update as much as possible tomorrow.
It seems as if everyone is busy this weekend!
You have your horse show and your bro's graduation, Shelby's going on a cruise, and I'm going out of town.
Have fun, love! :mrgreen:
Thanks! You have fun too Haley! I will tell you how things went at my horse show when I get home.
Nyloria
June 8th, 2008, 05:15 PM
Hello everyone. As you can see, I made it back from my trip. My brothers graduation was awesome. I am super tired and will post the next chapter tomorrow. Oh and I got two 1st place and one 2nd place ribbon in my horse show. :D
tokiohotel26
June 8th, 2008, 09:49 PM
congrats!
Nyloria
June 9th, 2008, 04:55 PM
Chapter 6
Lena's P.O.V
I could not believe what happened to Raza. I mean, losing a sister? A dad? Even a child that has not been born? It was all to much to handle. I saw the others walk out of the room to go find her. I sat down on the couch to take in all that had just happened. As I sat there, I felt a pair of arms wrap around me and someone kiss my cheek. I giggled because I knew it was Tom.
Tom and I had something in common right away because of us both being guitar players. After we met, I showed him around the arena that we were playing in that night. As I showed him around I noticed he kept staring at me. So finally I turned around and just as I did that he pulled me into a kiss. But we were disturbed by Shane running by, asking if we had seen Raza. We both shook our heads and followed him to try to find her.
"It must be very hard for Raza to lose 3 family members in one night." He said to me. "Yeah. I would probably die if I lost Leela. She means a lot to me even though I was adopted and we aren't related." He nodded.
As we sat in silence, I began to think about the dream I had been having for about a week. I began having it when I found out we were touring with Tokio Hotel.
It started out with me standing in a park I didn't know. As I stood there, I would see two figures appear. I could only see the outlines of them but I knew they were both men. One I knew was Tom because of the baggy clothing he wore. But I didn't know who the other man was. As they got closer, I would see Tom begin to fade and the other silhouette become stronger. Then I would wake up.
I didn't know what the dream meant but I remembered the words Leela once told me. She said "If you have a dream, and you think it means something, even though it may be stupid, keep an eye out for things that remind you of it. Well Tom certainly reminded me of it. If only I could figure out who the other man was. If I did that, maybe things would start to make sense.
"Lena? Are you alright?" I heard Tom say. I turned to him and nodded. "Yeah. Just thinking" I said and kissed him. He kissed me back and we started making out.
But as we were doing that, I couldn't help but feel like someone was watching us.
Nyloria
June 9th, 2008, 04:57 PM
Just to let everyone know, This will be the only chapter for today because this morning, I got spacers in my teeth to get ready for my braces that I will be getting in 2 weeks. And let me tell you, I am in so much pain right now it's not even funny. But don't worry, I should be feeling better by tomorrow.
Haley1018
June 9th, 2008, 11:03 PM
Just to let everyone know, This will be the only chapter for today because this morning, I got spacers in my teeth to get ready for my braces that I will be getting in 2 weeks. And let me tell you, I am in so much pain right now it's not even funny. But don't worry, I should be feeling better by tomorrow.
I hope you feel better!
Loved the chapter btw
Nyloria
June 9th, 2008, 11:07 PM
Just to let everyone know, This will be the only chapter for today because this morning, I got spacers in my teeth to get ready for my braces that I will be getting in 2 weeks. And let me tell you, I am in so much pain right now it's not even funny. But don't worry, I should be feeling better by tomorrow.
I hope you feel better!
Loved the chapter btw
Thanks! I feel like someone has punched me in the face. But I will update tomorrow.
Haley1018
June 9th, 2008, 11:08 PM
Just to let everyone know, This will be the only chapter for today because this morning, I got spacers in my teeth to get ready for my braces that I will be getting in 2 weeks. And let me tell you, I am in so much pain right now it's not even funny. But don't worry, I should be feeling better by tomorrow.
I hope you feel better!
Loved the chapter btw
Thanks! I feel like someone has punched me in the face. But I will update tomorrow.
Ouch!
Nyloria
June 9th, 2008, 11:16 PM
Ouch!
lol yeah. I had tears in my eyes after she put the first one in. And I had to get 6.
:cry:
Haley1018
June 9th, 2008, 11:25 PM
Ouch!
lol yeah. I had tears in my eyes after she put the first one in. And I had to get 6.
:cry:
:shock:
TexasGirlLovesTH
June 10th, 2008, 10:12 AM
OHMYGAWD!!!
Dude!!
Can you say, DRAMA?!
:shock: :shock:
Nyloria
June 10th, 2008, 02:45 PM
OHMYGAWD!!!
Dude!!
Can you say, DRAMA?!
:shock: :shock:
DRAMA! lol glad you like it. But believe me, Lena is going to have a tough time figuring out this dream of hers.
Nyloria
June 10th, 2008, 09:46 PM
Chapter 7
Leela's P.O.V
I walked out of the room with the others to find Raza. Since no one knew where she went, we decided to split up and look. I started to make my way towards our bus since that was Raza's favorite place to hang out and listen to music.
"Where are you going?" I jumped as I heard a voice behind me. I spun around to see Bill following me. It's not that I don't like Bill, it's just that I really don't want to be in a relationship right now. My two other ones hadn't worked out for me and I didn't feel like getting my heart broken anytime soon.
"I am going to the bus. I think Raza would probably be there since she likes to listen to music in our front lounge." I said. "Oh okay. Can I come?" he asked. "Sure why not?" I answered as we made our way to the bus.
"Umm... Bill?" I asked as we walked down the hall. "Hmmm?" He looked down at me. "Can we just be friends for now? My other boyfriends didn't work out for me and I really want to be single right now." I said. He looked at me and burst out laughing.
"What!? It's not funny!" I fumed. "Sorry, I'm not laughing at you. I am just surprised that you said that to me." "Why?" I asked. "Well, when I met you earlier, you said you knew tons about my band and I was afraid you would jump all over me about being you boyfriend." "Haha.. I can see why you laughed now. I would never do that to you. I know what it's like to have people jumping all over you about being in a relationship with them."
As we reached the bus, I was I little hesitant to go inside because I was wondering if Raza wanted to be alone. But I had to find out how she was doing. As we walked inside, I saw Raza sitting on the couch watching TV. I could tell she had been crying.
"Raza? Are you alright? Or do you want to be alone?" I asked as Bill and I sat down on the couch. "Yeah I'm fine right now." She answered as she turned off the TV. "Gustav is really worried about you." Bill said. "And believe me, he only gets worried if he really likes the girl." I saw Raza blush when he said that.
"I really like Gustav too. He is a very shy but sweet guy." She said and smiled. "Well look who's talking miss I-never-talk-about-guys." I said to her. She picked up a pillow and threw it at me. "Shut up." She said and I laughed.
"Ohmigosh! We have to play our show in 1 hour!" Bill exclaimed. We all jumped off the couch and ran out of the bus to get ready for the show.
Nyloria
June 11th, 2008, 05:07 PM
No comments? :(
Nyloria
June 11th, 2008, 09:31 PM
Okay no updates tonight. I am having family issues right now. Anyway, please comment. Your feedback keeps me writing.
Nyloria
June 12th, 2008, 06:06 PM
:cry: Is it that bad?
ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 12th, 2008, 06:27 PM
omg i love this.......please update soon
p.s. no this story isnt bad
Nyloria
June 12th, 2008, 06:30 PM
omg i love this.......please update soon
p.s. no this story isnt bad
I will update tonight. And thanks!
Haley1018
June 12th, 2008, 06:30 PM
:cry: Is it that bad?
No!!
I loved it.
Nyloria
June 12th, 2008, 08:06 PM
:cry: Is it that bad?
No!!
I loved it.
Thanks Haley! I am updating now. I am making a little Thank-you for my readers. I will post it up here if I can snag my brothers camera for a few minutes.
Haley1018
June 14th, 2008, 12:07 AM
:cry: Is it that bad?
No!!
I loved it.
Thanks Haley! I am updating now. I am making a little Thank-you for my readers. I will post it up here if I can snag my brothers camera for a few minutes.
You're welcome. :mrgreen:
And kewlio!! I wanna see it!
Nyloria
June 14th, 2008, 08:19 PM
New update coming tonight. Oh and I am almost done with the thank you for my readers.
Haley1018
June 14th, 2008, 08:44 PM
New update coming tonight. Oh and I am almost done with the thank you for my readers.
Kewl!!!!
AND I LOVE YOUR DAKOTA ROSE SIGGY AND AVATAR!!!
But I hate her *****y sister Kiki Kannibal :x
She was so rude to me and my best friend Cassidy
Nyloria
June 15th, 2008, 09:02 PM
New update coming tonight. Oh and I am almost done with the thank you for my readers.
Kewl!!!!
AND I LOVE YOUR DAKOTA ROSE SIGGY AND AVATAR!!!
But I hate her *****y sister Kiki Kannibal :x
She was so rude to me and my best friend Cassidy
Awww.. thank you! I love Dakota Rose too! She is so pretty! But I don't like Kiki Kannibal. I read some girl's journal online that said Kiki sold her a piece of her Jewelry and when it got to her, it was all broken. What did she say to you and your friend Haley?
Haley1018
June 15th, 2008, 09:12 PM
New update coming tonight. Oh and I am almost done with the thank you for my readers.
Kewl!!!!
AND I LOVE YOUR DAKOTA ROSE SIGGY AND AVATAR!!!
But I hate her *****y sister Kiki Kannibal :x
She was so rude to me and my best friend Cassidy
Awww.. thank you! I love Dakota Rose too! She is so pretty! But I don't like Kiki Kannibal. I read some girl's journal online that said Kiki sold her a piece of her Jewelry and when it got to her, it was all broken. What did she say to you and your friend Haley?
Kiki did that to Cassidy, too. And one day when Cassidy spent the night at my house, we were e-mailing her and asking for a refund and she was being a ***** to us.
So, we went on her webshow and posted the link to a pic of her naked for people to see and she got SO FLIPPING MAD!!! :lol: It was the funniest thing ever! It was so worth getting banned off that website! :lol:
Nyloria
June 15th, 2008, 09:19 PM
Kiki did that to Cassidy, too. And one day when Cassidy spent the night at my house, we were e-mailing her and asking for a refund and she was being a ***** to us.
So, we went on her webshow and posted the link to a pic of her naked for people to see and she got SO FLIPPING MAD!!! :lol: It was the funniest thing ever! It was so worth getting banned off that website! :lol:
OMG! That is soooo funny! I would totally do something like that! Even if I got banned. :lol:
Haley1018
June 15th, 2008, 09:55 PM
Kiki did that to Cassidy, too. And one day when Cassidy spent the night at my house, we were e-mailing her and asking for a refund and she was being a ***** to us.
So, we went on her webshow and posted the link to a pic of her naked for people to see and she got SO FLIPPING MAD!!! :lol: It was the funniest thing ever! It was so worth getting banned off that website! :lol:
OMG! That is soooo funny! I would totally do something like that! Even if I got banned. :lol:
It was the funniest night of my life :lol:
Nyloria
June 15th, 2008, 11:04 PM
Kiki did that to Cassidy, too. And one day when Cassidy spent the night at my house, we were e-mailing her and asking for a refund and she was being a ***** to us.
So, we went on her webshow and posted the link to a pic of her naked for people to see and she got SO FLIPPING MAD!!! :lol: It was the funniest thing ever! It was so worth getting banned off that website! :lol:
OMG! That is soooo funny! I would totally do something like that! Even if I got banned. :lol:
It was the funniest night of my life :lol:
I can imagine!
Nyloria
June 18th, 2008, 11:56 PM
Chapter 8
Katie's P.O.V
"Joe! Look I can't help it. I have a life and I am not gonna waste it. I am touring with one of the biggest bands right now! I know I know. Joe, I have to get get ready for bed. Talk to you tomorrow. Bye." I just hung with my boyfriend (Or soon to be ex-boyfriend if he keeps acting like this!) Joe. He is a really nice guy. Or should I say was.
I have been friends with Joe since I moved to the U.S. We grew up together and some people even thought we were twins because of our fire red hair and freckles. I always thought of Joe as just a friend until one day he asked me out.
We had been together about 3 months when all of a sudden he started acting really defensive and he never seemed to be able to relax when we are out somewhere. He also won't let me near his cell phone. I think he is cheating on me but I can't worry about that right now.
As I hung up, Shane came in to tell us we were on stage in 3 minutes. I grabbed my guitar and headed out of the dressing room. As I neared the entrance of the arena, the sound of 20,000 fans was deafening. I could see the lights of the stage and hear the announcer.
I reached down and brushed my star tattoo on my left ankle. I saw the others do the same. You see, on our 16th birthday, we all got a star tattoo on our left ankle to symbolize that we are a team.
"And now, here is the all girl band everyone is talking about, please welcome, DOUBLESTAR!"
I ran on stage with the others and we began to play. As I rocked out on my guitar, all thoughts of Joe disappeared and I was only focused on giving the crowd the show of their lives.
Haley1018
June 19th, 2008, 12:07 AM
Mehr bitte!!!
Nyloria
June 19th, 2008, 12:20 AM
Mehr bitte!!!
I will have more up tomorrow. I was a little stuck on this last chapter, but I think I can make it work out now.
Nyloria
June 23rd, 2008, 07:30 PM
I will update tomorrow night because I just got my braces on today and I am hurting. But I should be better by tomorrow. Also, starting July 1st, I will not be online at all. I will be packing and getting ready to go to the Bahamas and I won't have time to update. I will probably be back on the site on the 13th. Anyways, Thanks for waiting and understaning. :D
Nyloria
July 19th, 2008, 03:44 PM
I'm sorry everyone but this fanfic will not be updated until school starts again. I am very busy right now with another story and I hope you will understand. Thanks for commenting and I will Try to write more chapters if I can.
Nyloria
July 28th, 2008, 11:54 AM
Chapter 9
Stephanie's P.O.V
"Wow! That was the best show we have had in a long time." I said to Leela as we were walking back to our bus after the show. "Yeah I know. Tokio Hotel was great. I love their songs." She answered. "And their bassist." I giggled and we both burst out laughing.
As we got on the bus, I saw Katie sitting on the couch, with her chin on her knees. "What's wrong Katie?" Leela asked. She sighed and answered "It's about Joe. I think he is cheating on me but I'm not sure" "WHAT?!" I practically shouted. "Shhhhhh! Lena is trying to do her school work and she will be really mad if we are loud. Anyways, about Joe. He has really changed over the past few months. Have you guys noticed that when we are home?" "Yeah." Leela and I both answered in unison. "Well, he called me right before the show tonight. he is trying to blame things on me and he is saying I never call him and stuff." "Doesn't he know that music means more to you right now?" I asked. " I don't think he understands. Oh well. Anyways, I got to go call my mom and tell her how the show went." she answered. "Yeah and I got to go take a shower. I really smell bad." Leela said and they both left.
I decided to go for a walk and clear my head. As I walking, I heard footsteps behind me. I turned around to see Georg standing there. "Hey what's wrong?" He asked me as he walked up to me and wrapped me in a hug. As soon as he did that I burst out in tears. I told him about Katie's problem and how I wanted to help her. And about Raza's sister dying and how I wanted to just make her reappear again. I must have cried for about 15 minutes. But the entire time Georg never let go of me (Even though I soaked his shirt crying). "Sorry." I said as I looked up at him. "It's okay."He said in his cute German accent. And before I knew what happened, he bent down and kissed my lips ever so softly. At that moment, all of the drama going on in the band seemed to disappear and It was just me and him.
Well, I finally got this updated sooner than I thought. I was bored so I decided to write the next chapter. Enjoy and comment!
Haley1018
July 28th, 2008, 06:38 PM
Georg!<3
How sweet he is!
Great chappie! :D
Nyloria
July 28th, 2008, 09:38 PM
Georg!<3
How sweet he is!
Great chappie! :D
Thanks! The next chapter will be about Lena.
Nyloria
July 29th, 2008, 05:57 PM
Chapter 10
Lena's P.O.V
After we finished our show, I went up to my bunk to work on a paper that was due for school. It was always hard to find time to be quiet and do school. As I was sitting there, I heard someone some upstairs. I looked up to see Jared standing there. Jared and I had gotten really close over the tour and I really got to know him really well.
"Hi Lena. What's up?" He asked as he sat down next to me. "Not much. Just got done doing some school work." I answered.
Jared was probably what you could consider a girls dream. He was tall, with shoulder length brown hair with side bangs, ice blue eyes, and snakebites. He was pretty cute if you ask me.
"That's cool. You guys did a great job at the show tonight." He said smiling. I blushed. "Thanks. I never thought when I was little that I would ever be doing this. I was always scared of having to stand up and do stuff in front of people."
We talked for a little while longer. About life, music, and random stuff.
As we sat there talking, I hadn't noticed that his arm had slipped around my shoulders. Then out of nowhere, his lips crashed into mine. "No! No!" I screamed to myself in my head. "This is supposed to be Tom kissing me, not Jared!" But somehow, I just couldn't seem to pull myself away.
Finally he pulled back and looked at me. "Lena, I love you."
Sorry for being so short. But I promise the next chapter will be longer.
Haley1018
July 29th, 2008, 08:16 PM
Drama Llama!!! :o
I loved it! :D
Nyloria
July 29th, 2008, 09:11 PM
Drama Llama!!! :o
I loved it! :D
Thanks! :mrgreen:
Nyloria
August 16th, 2008, 06:43 PM
New post coming tonight! :D
Nyloria
August 16th, 2008, 09:07 PM
Leela's P.O.V
As I sat in my bed room on the bus, I heard a knock at the door. When I opened it, I saw Lena standing there crying.
"What happened?" I asked as Lena flew straight past me and threw herself on the bed sobbing. "I-it's J-Jared!" She choked out. "What about Jared?" I said sitting down next to her. "He kissed me!" She shouted going from sad to furious in 2 seconds (I sometimes think she's bi-polar).
I stared at her my mouth wide open. "But-" I started to say then I stopped. I suddenly remembered about the dream Lena told me she kept having. "Lena! What about your dream?! The other man must be Jared!"
Lena shot up from were she was sitting on the floor and stared at me with wide eyes. "Leela, I think you are right. But what about the other part? You know, where the one shadow faded while the other grew stronger?" I don't know Lena. I wish I did but I don't.
Suddenly I burst out in tears. I don't know why. Maybe it was because I hadn't slept well for 3 days. Or because of stress. Or maybe it's because life is too dang confusing!!! Lena came over and wrapped her arms around me. "I wish I could just figure all these problems out." I thought to myself.
* 3 days later *
We finally had a day off from tour so Lena and I decided to go shopping at Target to find some items for our bus.
"Hey Leela, is it just me, or is it cold back here?" Lena asks me as we walk down the aisle. "Lena, we're in the frozen food section that's why." I laugh.
"Hey girls did you find everything that you need?" Shane asks as he comes up to us. "Yep!" We both answer at the same time. "Good let's go then."
Okay this chapter isn't the best but I try. And the whole frozen food section at target thing really did happen with my mom.
Mom: It seems really cold back here.
Me: That's because we're in the freezer section mom. :lol:
Mom: :lol:
Haley1018
August 16th, 2008, 09:41 PM
lmao XD XD
Mehr bitte!
Nyloria
November 25th, 2008, 11:02 PM
Yikes! It's been quite a while since I updated this story. I hope to get at least 2 chapters done before Thanksgiving break is over.
Nyloria
November 25th, 2008, 11:45 PM
Chapter 12
Raza's P.O.V.
*Raza's Diary*
It has been a week since my dad's and sisters death and I am feeling a bit better. Gustav had finally gotten the courage to ask me out and we are doing great. Now both Katie and Lena have boy problems. I really don't like to get involved in those conversations due to never really being in a serious relationship like I am now. Stephanie and Georg are acting like newlyweds (Even though they aren't. And I hope that doesn't happen anytime soon.). And Leela, well, she's just being Leela. You know, acting like an idiot. Drawing mustaches on her face with eyeliner and faking a french accent. Oh and also-
"YO RAZA!!! IT'S TIME TO GO!!!!!" Leela practically shouted in my ear. "Ouch! No need to shout. I'm right here." I sighed and put away my pen and dairy and got up from my uncomfortable seat in the airport to go board our plane to Europe.
We were on our way to Moscow Russia. I have always wanted to go there. But I'm a little nervous about all of the fans. I had never been out of the U.S except to go to Mexico to visit my family. I hope all the fans there are nice.
"Hey what are you thinking about?" I turned to see Katie walking beside me with her carry-on bag. "Not much. Are you nervous about Russia?" I asked as we walked down the ramp to our plane that we shared with Tokio Hotel. "A little." She smiled. "Are you?" "Yeah." I answered.
As I got on the plane, I noticed Gustav had saved me a seat beside him. That's one thing nice about private jets. You can sit next to whoever you like =).
"What's up Gustav?" I asked as I walked over and put my carry-on in the overhead storage bin. "Hey not much. You want to listen to some music?" "Well, I think that's probably what I'll be doing for the next 18 hours." I laughed sitting down next to him and putting one of the headphones in my ear.
Nyloria
November 29th, 2008, 12:20 AM
Comments?
olivez
November 29th, 2008, 03:38 PM
*new reader* love this story!!!more please???
Nyloria
November 30th, 2008, 10:26 PM
*new reader* love this story!!!more please???
Yay new reader! More coming as soon as possible :D
Nyloria
May 23rd, 2009, 04:30 PM
Ugh, I've been meaning to update this story for a while. Better get on to it...
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