View Full Version : NEW FAN FIC!!!! **CHAPTER 2 IS UP!!!**
<3ByYourSide<3
June 5th, 2008, 04:28 PM
ok...so i had a fa fic going before, which was unnamed, and i got a little bored with it. I have begun to rewrite it and i would like to know if anyone wants me to post it. some of the parts of the old story are in it. the begining is very similar...so let me know what you all think! :D
<3ByYourSide<3
June 5th, 2008, 10:35 PM
ANYONE WANNA READ IT??? :( :cry:
Rette mich
June 5th, 2008, 10:37 PM
I'll read it...I didn't read the old one but I'll read this one...
tokiohotel26
June 6th, 2008, 02:43 AM
yes! me too!!! can i be in it?
<3ByYourSide<3
June 6th, 2008, 06:26 PM
heres the begining for ya!
Chapter 1.
"why cant you just listen to me?" i yelled. "Whats there to listen to, you're 17, just like any other teen" she yelled back. "Whatever! You dont understand me and you never will!" I yelled as tears came to my eyes. It burned. "I hate you!" I finished, running up the stairs. "Well I hate you more than you could EVER hate me" I heard her yell as I ran in my room and slammed the door shut. I plugged my ipod into my stereo and turned it up. "Hold On" played as tears ran down my cheeks, soaking my pillow.
No one understands me except Kaity, my best friend, and Josh, my boyfriend. I picked up my phone and dialed Kaity's number. "Hello" she answered. "Hey can I stay at your house? My mom and I got into a huge fight again"I said. "Yea, of course you can"she replied with worry hanging on her every word. "Ok...thank you soooo much...I'm gonna go see Josh and the Ill be right over" I said. "Ok, see you soon" Kaity said and we hung up.
I packed some clothes and put my ipod in my pocket. I heard my mom walking up the stairs. She went in her room. I opened my door just a little bit and saw that all the lights in the house were out. She had gone to bed.
I grabbed my hoodie and pulled it over my head. I grabbed my bag and house key and left as quickly and quietly as possible.
thats not all of chapter 1....but let me know what you think so i can decide whether to continue or not... ;)
Rette mich
June 6th, 2008, 06:33 PM
I liked it...could the Hold On you mention be the one that goes "cuz an empty room can be so loud there's so many tears drown them out so hold on hold on hold on hold When you love someone and the break your heart don't give up on love have faith restart just hold on hold on hold on hold on" or am I completely wrong??
<3ByYourSide<3
June 6th, 2008, 06:46 PM
I liked it...could the Hold On you mention be the one that goes "cuz an empty room can be so loud there's so many tears drown them out so hold on hold on hold on hold When you love someone and the break your heart don't give up on love have faith restart just hold on hold on hold on hold on" or am I completely wrong??
hahah its Hold On by Good Charlotte...shall I continue anyone?
Rette mich
June 6th, 2008, 06:59 PM
I liked it...could the Hold On you mention be the one that goes "cuz an empty room can be so loud there's so many tears drown them out so hold on hold on hold on hold When you love someone and the break your heart don't give up on love have faith restart just hold on hold on hold on hold on" or am I completely wrong??
hahah its Hold On by Good Charlotte...shall I continue anyone?
Yeah... i was just wondering...that's the only Hold On i kno the one by Jonas Brothers....
<3ByYourSide<3
June 6th, 2008, 07:08 PM
I liked it...could the Hold On you mention be the one that goes "cuz an empty room can be so loud there's so many tears drown them out so hold on hold on hold on hold When you love someone and the break your heart don't give up on love have faith restart just hold on hold on hold on hold on" or am I completely wrong??
hahah its Hold On by Good Charlotte...shall I continue anyone?
Yeah... i was just wondering...that's the only Hold On i kno the one by Jonas Brothers....
ok...more will be up soon...
Yes plz :)
i see you like paramore....you should read my story BY YOUR SIDE...paramore is in it! :D
tokiohotel26
June 7th, 2008, 03:18 PM
yes more please...:mrgreen: [[insert innocent smile]]
<3ByYourSide<3
June 7th, 2008, 11:24 PM
yes more please...:mrgreen: [[insert innocent smile]]
haha. more soon!
<3ByYourSide<3
June 8th, 2008, 04:01 PM
heres the rest of chapter 1
CHAPTER 1 CONTINUED
I began walking to Josh's house.
When I got there, I got they key out from under the rug and opened the door. Josh's mom and dad were on a vacation in the Bahamas. I began walking upstairs. I got to Josh's room adn knocked on the door. No answer. "Josh?" I said as I opened the door. "Josh are..." I began but stopped dead in my tracks. "Hannah...I..." he bean. "F*ck you Josh! How could you?" I yelled. I felt tears run down my cheeks.It burned. My chect felt like it was gonna explode. I didnt even want to look at him. he was lying in his bed making out with my ex-best friend Chey. I turned around and began to walk quickly down the stairs. "Hannah! Wait!" I heard him say. "No Josh! Its over! Go be with her...dont event ry tto explain" I yelled and walked out of the house.
I glanced back only to notice Josh stand with Chey next to him, her arm around his waist.
Im mad, sad, ******, and many other things. Im an emotional wreck right now.
I pulled my hood overmy head and continued walking, staring at my feet. How could he? Why would he? I thought he loved me...i guess i was wrong.
the next thing I know, I run into someone and we both fall down.
Authors Note-
hmmmm...what will happen next? comment and you shall find out who the mystery person is..lol
tokiohotel26
June 9th, 2008, 12:20 AM
who is it? who is it? who is it?
im dying of curiosity
remember curiosity killed the cat
i dont wanna end up like the cat! :lol: i crack myslf up
[its ok if u think im weird]
Rette mich
June 9th, 2008, 09:21 PM
OO curious...PMS
<3ByYourSide<3
June 10th, 2008, 02:03 AM
more will be up soon.
but im having a hard time right now. my great uncle jsut passed away.
<3ByYourSide<3
June 15th, 2008, 08:59 PM
chapter 2 will be up very soon!
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