In a Heartbeat------New Fic

[Tomi_327]

okay, I am writing this fiction too, but I will still be writing in my other on the other one


Shannons pov:
I walked outside in the dark with my dog on her leash. I was standing in the middle of my backyard, waiting.

I saw Lilys ears pirk up, she must of saw something. Two boys were talking and walking their dog together with a dog the same color as the darkness. These boys, I did not recognize, as they both looked at me. One smiled.
"Hallo." he said. His black hair in a beanie, and his bright eyes shined in the darkness. The other one didnt say anything. They continued to walk.
"Scottie come." I heard one say.
As they walked off into the darkness.

I slowly went inside,looking back as frequently as I could.
"Lily finished her buisness!!"
I said to my Aunt Holly.

I didnt have anyone else. I didnt know my mom, my dad. All I have ever been with is my aunt. She never told me storys about any of them.
Why they left.
Or if they even cared about me.

"Okay honey!" She said from in her room.
We didnt have a very big house either, a ranch. I went to bed, laying in the warm sheets and listenin to music, and just....drifting...off...

Bills pov:

"Did you see that girl?" I asked Tom as scottie almost tripped me.
"Yea..." he said staring at the ground.
"Awww....I think Tomi has a little crush!"
I saw him smile.
"Bill,come on now, I dont even know who she is!"
"Good point, but I know you. You at least though she was cute."
"Maybe..." he said blushing.
We walked up the driveway and went into our house.
"Mom, home from our walk!"
I yell up the stairs.
"Okay!" she yelled back.
I walk up the stairs, into my room, and sighed.
First day of eighth grade tomorrow...great.
I said to myself.
I set my clock for 6:00 AM, and layed on my bed and looked at the cieling. Blank.

Shannons pov: I walked outsid, my backpack around me. First day of eigth grade, it sent newvous chills down my spine. I walked to the corner and saw the same two boys, walking with backpacks. I started to quicken my pace.
I got to the school without them catching up, and found my locker. As I opened it I saw the two boys, and couldnt help but stare. The one with the black hair kept going as the other one came over here and stopped at a locker two away from mine. I shoved my backpack in and attemped to pull out my scedule and it dropped beneath the other boys feet. He saw it and picked it up.
"Thanks.." I said looking at his face,his eyes not meeting mine.
I had to make my way to my first hour, science.
I found it and took a random seat. I looked at the board and in capital letters was the name: MR.HAVASY. Then I looked who was coming to sit behind me. The boy that said hi to me yesterday.....I actually took time to look. He had black hair, and skin two shades darker than pale. His eyes still shined as I remembered them yesterday. That very second, as he took my seat, I felt his eyes on me.


Bills pov:

There was the firl from yesterday, I didnt really look at her face, but I saw her curly brown hair. Then the teacher walked in.
"Hello class, I am your science teacher, Mr.Havasy"
"Hello Mr. Havasy.." some people said saracasticly.
He started to take attendence
"Andi, Peter, Emily, Sean...."
Then he came to the name Shannon and I heard the girl in front of me say here.
After a few more names I heard mine.
"Bill?"
"Here"
I said loud enough so he could hear
So her name was shannon.....

Toms pov:
I wonder what class Bill is in now, Too bad I got Math first.
Then I remembered that girl from yesterday. I didnt even know her. But I know now that I beleive in love at first sight.

[<3ByYourSide<3]

Awww. continue please!

[Rette mich]

I like it...plz continue...

[Tomi_327]

Shannons pov:
I walked to lunch slowly and quietly. Holding my books to my chest. I sat at a lunch table alone, when everyone started to pour in.
Bill and the other boy walked in. I too look down because they started to come over to my table. They sat on the other side, not directly across from me though.
I scooted over a bit.
"What, we are not going to bite."
Bill said looking at me with a smirk on his face.
I shrugged my shoulders.
"I saw you last night outside." he said
"Yea I saw you too."
I said quietly
"Oh by the way, this is Tom, my twin brother, you havent met him yet."
I waved and he just smiled.
So I smiled back.

Toms pov:
Oh god why did Bill pick this table, I feel like a total idiot!
Her smile makes me blush. God I have never felt like this before, I am need to talk sometime, just not now....I am so shy...

Bills pov:
I am so glad I picked this table, Tom needs to meet her. He really likes her.
I wonder what music she likes?
Tom could so play a song for her.....

[tokiohotel26]

oooh tom has a crush
thats so cute lol!

[Tomi_327]

Toms pov:
I sat on my front porch strumming my guitar, as I started to make a song. About her.
It didnt have anywords yet.Not until I actually knew her.

Bills pov:
I heard Tom strumming his guitar, I guess he read my mind

Shannons pov:
Those boys are nice I guess, I didnt know what to think of Tom. He never talked, but Bill was nice. Why did he keep talking to me?
I took my dog out of her cage, and put her on the leash and started to walk.
I was about half way down my block, when I saw a brick house, with white awning around the top.
Tom was sitting on the houses front porch, playing a guitar.
I waved, even though I was shy, and walked up to him.
Lily was unbeleivebly calm.
"You play too?"
I asked
He nodded.
"Yeah...I have been playing for a while now."
"Well, I am not that good."
"Well, that is what practise is for, right?"
"Yeah."
"Well,uh I better get going, Lily needs her walk."
I nodded again.
"Maybe we can hang out sometime??"
He asked with a hopeful look in his eyes.
"Sure."
He smiled and I walked away, as he watched me turn the corner

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I'll take Tom from you if you don't!

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I went there

[Tomi_327]

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I'll take Tom from you if you don't!

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I went there
your not gonna be in it this time..it is different then all my other ones sorry!!! :?

[Tomi_327]

Shannons pov:
I walked in the school found my locker. Tom was already standing at his, taking out books.
My heart skipped a beat, he looked unbelievalby cute.
He looked at me with those bright brown eyes.
I waved and looked down.
I opened my locker andshoved my backpack in like any normal person would.
Tom walked away as a note fell out....

Toms pov:
Oh god..why did I put a note in her locker... I am so stupid!!
I quickly went to my homeroom, at least she isnt in this class with me.

Shannons pov:
I picked up the note and put it in my pocket.
I closed my locker and began to my homeroom.
I took my normal seat where Bill was sitting behing me, and opened the note.
It said:

~Shannon~
Hi, this is Tom.
I couldnt bring myself to ask you, so I am doing it the old fashioned way.
Would you like to go to a movie or something with me?
It would be really cool if you could.
Ummm just let me know at lunch or something.
Bye --Tom

I stared at my desk.
Why would Tom want to go out with me??
I am far from pretty.
But at least he was brave enough to actually write a note to me. I like the old fashion way.

Toms pov:
I sat at the lunch table, waiting for her to come.
I didnt want to make it too obvious that I was waiting for her answer.
She sat down and had a note for me. She handed it too me looking strait at me..I wish I was more braver like her. She acted like this happens everyday.
I took the note and opened it.
It said.
~Tom~
I would love to go to the movies with you. That would be really nice.
And by the way, I love the old fashion way, at least you were brave enough to put it in my locker!!
well bye!!!--shannon<3

I smiled when I saw that heart next to her name, and I think she saw me light up, because she smiled.

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I'll take Tom from you if you don't!

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I went there
your not gonna be in it this time..it is different then all my other ones sorry!!! :?


Who said it was going to be in a fic?

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[amandaaraujo]

aswwwwww the old fasion way love it :D :D

[Tomi_327]

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I'll take Tom from you if you don't!

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I went there
your not gonna be in it this time..it is different then all my other ones sorry!!! :?


Who said it was going to be in a fic?

Burn
NO YOU WILL NOT TAKE HIM FROM ME!!!!*snickers*

[Tomi_327]

Bills pov:

I cant believe Tom had the guts to do it!!!!
Now he can finish writing that song!

Shannons pov:

"Hey Aunt Holly?? Is it okay if I go out tonight?"
"Sure, where?"
"Well this guy...he asked me to go to the movies with him..I think he likes me."
She looked at me for a second and smiled.
"Just don't do anything stupid Shannon!"
She said. and smirked
She knows I wont do anything stupid.
"Thanks Aunt Holly."

I went to my room and picked out some clothes, nothing fancy, nothing dressy, just....normal.
http://www.kohls.com/kohlsStore/juniors ... ce+Top.jsp (http://www.kohls.com/kohlsStore/juniors/tops/shortsleeve/PRD~359072/Wrapper+MockLayer+Surplice+Top.jsp)

http://www.kohls.com/kohlsStore/juniors ... +Pants.jsp (http://www.kohls.com/kohlsStore/juniors/shortscapris/capris/PRD~353599/Paris+Blues+Denim+Crop+Pants.jsp)

http://www.kohls.com/kohlsStore/juniors ... andals.jsp (http://www.kohls.com/kohlsStore/juniors/shoes/sandals/PRD~329535/Candies+Krussh+Sandals.jsp)

I hope this was good.I looked at the clock,4:00 he was picking me up in an hour.

Toms pov:

I was nervous, I told her I would pick her up and 4:30. I wasnt even ready and that was half an hour away. I quickly got dressed in casual clothes made sure I didnt smell bad (I never do). By the time I got that done, it was 4:25. So I started down my block to go get her.
I knocked on her door. And her mom answered.
"Hello, you must be Tom, Shannon has told me all about you."
"Yes, thats me, is she ready?"
She nodded, she'll be out in a minute, just wait here.
She went inside, and I thought.
She talked about me??

Then she came out. She was very pretty, I couldnt help but stare..
"Are you okay?"
She asked and weird look on her face.
"Oh umm sorry."
"Is it really that bad?"
She asked me.
"No no it isnt bad at all..it is actually...very nice."
"Oh okay." She said smiling.
Then we walked back to my house and got into the car.

[Tomi_327]

hope you guys like it, I will write more soon!

[Tomi_327]

Shannons pov:
We pulled up to the movie theater in his moms car. She is really nice, I wish I had a mom as nice as her, more like I wish I had a mom, but I am lucky to have my aunt holly.

I watched Toms mom drive away, as Tom got the tickets and pulled me inside the theater.
He gave me my ticket:
Prom Night.
"Its supposed to be really good."
He said to me.
"I wanted to see this so bad!"
Tom smiled.
"Well, I guess your seeing it now."

Toms pov:
I cant beleive I am actually doing it right. She wanted to see the movie. This is going to be good I guess afterall.

Shannons pov:
I sat in the seat with my skittles that I bought. Tom offered, but I declined. He doesnt have to get me everything, he already bought my ticket.
The movie finally started.....
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The girls best friend was running from the killer, when the killer slices her neck and blood splatters all over the wall.
I dug my face is Toms chest.....

Toms pov:
I looked at her.
She looked at me.
"Sorry, habit I guess..."
She looked embarrassed.
"Its okay really."
I saw her smile and blush.

Shannons pov:
I cant believe I did that.
Man he is so adorable though.

Toms pov:
She doesnt like me..does she?

Shannons pov:
I wanted to show him that I had feelings for him too. I didnt want to hide it my whole life, so I put my head on his shoulder, it took alot of guts.

Toms pov:
So...ummm maybe she does like me.
Man this is the one Tom, she is definatly the ONE.

[Tomi_327]

please please please tell me what you think!!

[tokiohotel26]

i like it
i think its good and u should continue writing

[Tomi_327]

i like it
i think its good and u should continue writing

danke schon!!!
I really have been waiting for people to reply

[Tomi_327]

*next day*
Toms pov:
"Bill, she is the one, I swear. I have never felt this way before for anyone but her."
Bill stared at me.
"Tom, you have only known her for like 5 days now."
I shrugged my shoulders.
"And?"
Bill just looked the other way as I saw him shake his head.



sorry its not much guys, I cant think! :?

[screamxitxoutxloud]

It's rushed and you aren't putting much detail or events in the chapters, they're too short as well

:S

This fic is great, great plot, great characters but you have to BUILD from that

Don'thurtmeplease

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XO
Andi

[Tomi_327]

It's rushed and you aren't putting much detail or events in the chapters, they're too short as well

:S

This fic is great, great plot, great characters but you have to BUILD from that

Don'thurtmeplease

;_;

XO
Andi

I know it is a bit short, but it I havent been able to think at all=S....and I the reason why it is so rushed is because I wanted more people to read it.

[Tomi_327]

Shannons pov:
I couldnt stop thinking about HIM. I didnt know what to think really, everything was kinda...out there.

I had a weird feeling inside when I was with HIM.
It never stopped.
What is this?
.................................................. .........

I walked on the sandy beach, a hand interlocking mine. But I didnt know who's. I slowly lifted my head up, and surely Tom was standing right there.---Then everything just...fell....I was suddenly in walking in a graveyard, with a woman, I didnt know who she was. She took me to a gravestone, ingraved in it was: 'Shannon-1989-2025-Loving Wife and Neice'
In front of the grave, was Tom. He was weeping in his hands. He was much older. The woman started walking away, and I started walking after her. It started to get foggy and I was getting farther from her than closer.

I woke up in a sweat. I was wrapped up in a blanket and I was burning.
Why did I have that dream? It was scary

Toms pov:
I couldnt go to sleep, and Bill couldnt either. Probly because I couldnt and sometimes being twins does that.
"Why are you still awake Tom?"
"I dont know."
I actually did know, I didnt want to tell Bill. My buissness.
I heard Bill sigh really loud.
"Whatever Tom. Just go to bed...bitte"
He added a German word. Something that we dont really do anymore unless it is like, something that we dont want people to hear. I still was getting used to english though.
My thoughts were crammed about everything imaginable.
English
Bill
and...
HER
and too much about HER

[Tomi_327]

can some one please tell me what they think? I feel like I am writing for no reason!

[tokiohotel26]

ur not! continue

[Tomi_327]

Shannons pov:
I felt like school would never end. Each minute felt like an hour, and still the same things in my head.

And what was with that weird dream? And who was I married too? TOM?

I should tell him this....


Toms pov:
I saw Shannon outside of the school. It looked like she was waiting for someone. When she saw my face, she instantly found her person. I saw her face flush, as if she was embarrassed though.
"Tom, I need to tell you about this really weird dream that I had..."
I nodded.
"Okay...So I was with this woman, and I was walking on a beach..and then everything fell, then I was in a graveyard, and I saw my gravestone, and it said I was a loving wife and neice..and you were crying on my grave...and yea.....it was weird.."
I actually felt happy about the dream, I didnt know what to say though."
"Wow, I-I dont know what to say..."
"I was afraid to tell you because I was afraid that you would think I was a freak."
I gave her a funny look.
"I would never think that."
She gave me a smile, that made my heart beat faster.
"Thanks. I guess..I'll see you around..."
I waved goodbye, and saw her smile in my head, burned into my memory.

[xlisax]

lovveeee it!
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[Tomi_327]

Shannons pov:
I cant beleive I was that stupid,
"I was afraid to tell you because you would think I was a freak?"
How dumb was I to say that????
I shoved my face in my pillow and screamed so only I could hear.
He probly thinks I am such and idiot.

Toms pov:
That was so brave of her to say today.
I would not be able to bring myself to say that.

Shannons pov:
I wonder what he thinks of me?

Toms pov:
She is so pretty.....those eyes just stare right through me.

Shannons pov:
He probly doesnt even like me that much, probly just...a mistake..

Toms pov:
I like her a lot.

Shannons pov:
He'll never know

Toms pov:
She'll never know

[iilyRein]

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
u finally update =)
I LOVE IT !!!!!!!

[mandieluvsth4ever]

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this is good :]

[Tomi_327]

thanks guys.

Shannons Pov:
"Im taking Lily for a walk!!"
I took Lily by the coller, and hooked the leash on.
I started down the sidewalk, and turned the corner. I noticed Bill and Toms house was coming up. Hopefully they wouldnt even know I am here.

I started to pass, but unfortunatly, Scotty started to bark, he was looking strait at me. I pretended not to notice.
I walked about two houses past their house, when Bill came out......my hopes? Crushed.

"Shannon!"
He called after me, I was thinking about not turning around, but that wouldnt be very nice to do.
"Oh, Hi Bill.."
He gave me a funny look.
"Is..everything..okay?"
"Yes, Im fine."
"Do you mind if I walk with you?"
"Sure why not."
I took Lily tighter, so she wouldnt attempt to make Bill into a walking carpet.
"Hey Lily."
Bill said very sweetly.

"Soooooo about Tom..."
I gave him a weird look,
"Is there something wrong?"
I watched him make hand gestures, and try to explain what was up with Tom.
"He is just.......he doesnt know what to think..he really really likes you."
I stopped right in my tracks, and stared at the ground.
"He likes me?"
"Yes...too much."


Toms pov:

Where is Bill?

[Brenna104]

new reader*
update soon...this fanfic is soo good!

[Tomi_327]

Bills pov:
It surprised me that she didnt know about Tom. I mean, all the signs, the way he looks at her, he couldnt possibly let go.

Shannon:
I felt a smile on my face, and I couldnt seem to get it off.
"You seem happy about it."
Bill said cheerfully.
"Its just that...well...no one has ever liked me before..I mean I have had guy friends...but yeah.."
"Oh I see...I know what you mean...."

We reached my house, which ment the end of our walk.
"Bill wait!" I called after him.
He turned and looked at me.
"I usually take Lily for a run in the field after, the one down the street? You wanna come?"
Bill shrugged his shoulders.
"Why not, but do you mind if I call Tom first? He would really enjoy it."
"Sure."

I saw him pressing the numbers on my phone and then hearing him telling Tom to come over here.

It took him like one minute. Quick enough for me.

"Hi Tom."
I said and smiled.
He smiled at me like I was the answer to his prayers.
"Hi."

We walked to the field, silent. But when we got there, Lily knew what to do.
I ran with her, and Bill and Tom at my side.
We ran all the way to the swings. At the end of the field.
I sat out of breath.
"Your a pretty fast runner."
Tom said.
"Yeah, well you get used to it after a while.

"Hey Bill, wanna try something?" I asked him into a challenge.

"Sure."
"Okay, so take the leash of Lily, and see the squirrels out there? She chases them and she makes you run."
"Im so up for that."
He headed toward a squirrel and Lily saw it.
He-went-flying.

He must have thought it was fun because he did it a few times.

I watched as Bill enjoyed himself.
The I turned to Tom.
He was staring at me, a smile still on his face.
"Your perfect.."
I gave him a funny look...
"What?"
"Oh..uh...sorry...did I say that..?"
I nodded, and laughed.
"Its ok, your not so bad yourself."
I think I really liked him.
A lot.

Bill started to run back, with Lily.
"That-was-awesome. We have to do this again sometime."
"Sure, anytime, just give a knock on my door."

We started to head back, laughs all the way.

[Tomi_327]

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Shannons pov:

So yeah I had the most greatest time yesterday. I just kept thinking to myself..wow..Tom really is amazing. I just want to know what goes on in his head!!
RIght when I got through my bedroom door, and layed on my bed. I fell asleep.

*The Next Day*

Toms pov:
I guess we should start planning for the movies soon. Shannon and I. I would really like to hang out with her more. Good thing she lives right by me. But Im too scared to knock on her door! I would have Bill do it, but I dont want her to think that I expect everyone to do everything for me!! Ughhh, drama is life huh?

After I was done having a conversation with myself at my locker, I saw shannon opening hers. I hope she didnt see anything.





So yeah so I havent been on in a really really long time, so all of you who did read my fic, its back up now, and I am starting to write.

[Tomi_327]

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