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Haley1018
June 12th, 2008, 03:11 AM
A standalone (which is a one shot) I wrote last summer for the McFly message boards.

Don't let it go away, this feeling has got to stay
Don't let it go away, this feeling has got to stay
And I can't believe I've had this chance now
Don't let it go away

I've never met someone like Tom before. Just thinking about him makes my belly explode with butterflies. He's handsome, talented, funny...my list could go on for centuries. I've never felt this way about anyone before, but I think I like this strange feeling.

New, you're so new
You, you're new
And I never had this taste in my past
New, you're so new

My normal hesitation is gone
And I really gravitate to your will
Are you here to fetch me out?
Cos I've never had this taste in my mouth

I loved wasting my time with him. We could just be sitting in the grass, watching the sun sink in the sky or making out at a party, but I loved every second of it. Whenever we are together, I don't see anyone else; it's just me and him.

Oh, you're not old
And you're not familiar
Recently discovered and I'm learning about you

New, you're so new
You, you're new

I've only known Tom for a few weeks, but he's practically my best friend. And I don't know a lot about him, but I'm fine with that. If he doesn't shatter my heart into a thousand pieces, then I'll learn more and more about him.

And you're consuming me violently
And your reverence shamelessly tempting me
Who sent this maniac?
Cos I've never had this taste in my past

Oh, you're different, you're different from the former
Like a fresh battery, I'm energized by you

He makes me excited by saying one word. And seeing him smile makes me grin for hours on end. I wanted him to stay with me forever, never to leave.

Why am I so curious?
This territory's dangerous
I'll probably end up at the start
I'll be back in line with my broken heart
New, you're so new
You, you're new
And I never had this taste in my past

I really shouldn't be doing this. I'll probably get my heart crushed and have to start all over.

But on the other hand, Tom might feel the same way about me. I'll never know until I try, right?

Don't let it go away
This feeling has got to stay
Don't let it go away
This feeling has got to stay
And I can't believe I've had this chance now
Don't let it go away

And I can't believe it
Can't believe it
Can't believe it
Can't believe it
Don't let it go away, this feeling has got to stay
Don't let it go away

New, you're so new.

The italics are the lyrics to "New" by No Doubt.

Comment please! :mrgreen:

Haley1018
June 12th, 2008, 03:42 PM
Anyone?

TexasGirlLovesTH
June 12th, 2008, 03:46 PM
Hmm.... :|

More, sis! :P

I'll be waiting. ;)

Haley1018
June 12th, 2008, 03:49 PM
Hmm.... :|

More, sis! :P

I'll be waiting. ;)

Glad you like it!
But it's only a one-shot.

TexasGirlLovesTH
June 12th, 2008, 03:54 PM
o.0
Oh.....I see.

It's cute, though.
Sounds like a story could come from it. ;) ;)

Hehe!

Haley1018
June 12th, 2008, 03:58 PM
o.0
Oh.....I see.

It's cute, though.
Sounds liek a story could come from it. ;) ;)

Hehe!

Danke schon!
That's a good idea...
Hmm...

Haley1018
June 12th, 2008, 05:29 PM
bump.

Haley1018
June 12th, 2008, 06:39 PM
bump.

TH_luv
June 12th, 2008, 06:52 PM
sweet one-shot! :D I liked it =]

Haley1018
June 12th, 2008, 07:01 PM
sweet one-shot! :D I liked it =]

Danke schon! :mrgreen:

jackjackio
June 12th, 2008, 07:39 PM
I love it!
Def write more.
One-shots always disappoint! Because they're always so good but THAT'S IT.

And thank you, you jsut reminded me of how much I freaking love No Doubt and their Return of Saturn phase.

Haley1018
June 12th, 2008, 07:49 PM
I love it!
Def write more.
One-shots always disappoint! Because they're always so good but THAT'S IT.

And thank you, you jsut reminded me of how much I freaking love No Doubt and their Return of Saturn phase.

Danke schon! :D
I love No Doubt as well and thought I should make a standalone with this song.
Their Return Of Saturn phase was freaking awesome, but their Rock Steady phase was even better, I think.

screamxitxoutxloud
June 12th, 2008, 08:23 PM
You should TOTALLY make a sotry out of this!

This could be GREAT!!!

Write it...

WRITE IT!!!

Haley1018
June 12th, 2008, 08:26 PM
You should TOTALLY make a sotry out of this!

This could be GREAT!!!

Write it...

WRITE IT!!!

Thank you!!
And I'm thinking about making it a full-length story.
I'll start writing it in a few minutes and post it. :mrgreen:

ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 13th, 2008, 06:35 PM
omg please make this one-shot a full length story is really good....and it will be even better if it was a full length story

PLEAE WRITE MORE!!!

Haley1018
June 13th, 2008, 07:32 PM
Okay guys, I made it a full-length story now! :mrgreen:
Here's the link if you wanna read it:
viewtopic.php?f=23&t=3993 (http://tokiohotel.pop24.de/forum/us/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=3993)