luvtkaulitz4ever
March 12th, 2008, 09:20 PM
I'm going to give you the 1st chapter and the link to the rest of the chapter. The story is unfinished. :mrgreen:
dana:
brown hair with red highlights
asian
lives in queens, NYC
I was at my house unwrapping my birthday presents. It was summer so I was home from school. My bff since the 7th grade was there too. The last present was going to be her present. "Here's your present!" She handed me 2 pieces of paper. 2 pieces of paper?! I looked down and turns out they were concert tickets. "OMG!!!!!! Tokio Hotel tickets!" I hugged her and started jumping up and down screaming, "I'm going to the Tokio Hotel concert!" I was their fan for 1/2 a year. I loved their music and had a MAJOR crush on the band's guitarist Tom Kaulitz who was the twin of the vocalist, Bill Kaulitz. The whole band waas my inspiration. To be honest, I was unsure if Bill was a guy when I first saw them, but I came to love them. The concert was tomorrow. "We HAVE to go shopping!" My friend Sadie and I grab the keys and went to the mall. She wasn't a Tokio Hotel fan, but that didn't matter. I bought a black t-shirt that had the words 'music is life' on it, a pair of bootcut jeans, a black high top converses.
The next day...
Me and Sadie were waiting in line to get into the theatre. "This line is soooo long!" I whined. "We're almost there."
We went sat in our seats and waited. Our seats were not too far from the stage, but I wasn't at the front role either. The room was very hot, but the band finally appeared on stage. "We are starting off with Monsoon" Bill said in a heavy German accent. The crowd cheered. The concert started. I stared at Tom who was playing intensely. The fans at the front role where reaching to get Bill and Tom. LUCKY.
The concert was over. There was a soda machine by the exit. I waited for the bus with Sadie while drinking my Mountain Dew. God. The bus was taking so long. All the fans had left. I paced and paced. I tripped and fell. I scraped my knees and blood came. "Ouch!" a voice said. I was Bill who tripped over my soda can that I dropped while falling. I turned around. I was so scared. I ran over and started apologizing in everyway I could. "I'm sooo sorry. I didn't mean to. It was a total accident!" Bill was rubbing his arm and looked up at me. Oh god. Please don't call security. "It's ok" he said in a heavy German accent. "why aren't you here? Traffic? How long?" He finally closed the cellphone and let out a frustrated sigh. This tall rough looking guy came out. Me and Sadie were in the back by the exit and her didn't notice us. "Robbery. Give me your money" he said in a deep voice to the 4 boys. I grabbed Sadie and hid behind a bush. "Nein!" Bill said. He grabbed Bill by the shirt and lifted him. Where the **** are the security guards? Oh god. The other 3 boys tried to attack the robber, but then some other tough looking guys came out and held each off them. They were helpless. Out of the corner of my eye, I spotted a couple of beer bottles. I grabbed the 8 beer bottles and handed 4 to Sadie. I also grabbed a piece of glass off the ground. "I'll throw the 1st. We have to help them." Sadie nodded. I threw the 1st bottle and it hit the guy's head. For once, I aimed right. Bill was dropped and the other guys saw us. By now, the guy who was grabbing Bill was out cold. One of them came toward us. "We got a couple of girls!" I stood up, grabbed a bottle tight and hammered him on the head. he fell out cold too. The guys let go of the 3 boys and advanced toward us. Sadie and I threw bottles and them. 2 of them were knocked out cold, but the others were still advancing. We were out of bottles. One of them grabbed my arm. I used my free arm and grabbed the piece of glass. I stabbed his eye with the glass. "Help!" me and Sadie screamed. Next thing I knew, I was dropped on the ground. I looked up and saw the Tokio Hotel boys pouncing on top of them. Wow. I never thought young celebrities would care if their fans were being attacked. I was grateful, but I wanted them to go. "Run!" I yelled. "Nein!" Tom yelled. I looked around. Me and Sadie grabbed the glass shards of the ground and smashed it into their heads. Tom and Georg got cut with the glass, but they were ok. "Danke." "No, thank YOU or I would have been raped" I said. I called the police and we all got dragged to the police station while the Tokio Hotel boys yelled at the security gurads who were taking a break during all this. "If it wasn't for those girls, we would have been dead!" Bill yelled.
We explained the whole attack. I translated for the boys. Finally, the manager of Tokio Hotel came. "Come on, get in the limo." They walked to the exit but before they left, they turned around. Tom came up to me and said, "thank you for saving my brother and the rest of us." The boys nodded in agreement. "To thank you, we'd like to offer you backstage passes for tomorrow's concert" Bill said. "Thank you so much!" Me and Sadie jumped up and down in happiness. The boys laughed. "See you tomorrow!" Bill shouted.
Tom's POV
Tomorrow...
We went up on stage, but instead of playing, we were going to give those girls a suprise. Bill announced, "yesterday, we were attacked. 2 brave girls saved us. They are in the audience right now. Come up!" The girls came up the stage and the fans cheered for them. We each hugged them and god they smelled good. Some reason, I didn't want 1 of them to go. Something just occurred to me. I didn't know their names. They went back to their seats and we started the concert. I kept looking at the one with the highlights, but she didn't look back. I hope she wasn't 1 of those fans who were obsessed with Bill.
The girls were waiting backstage. "I never expecting you to thank us on stage" the 1 with the highlights said. "I'm sorry, but we didn't get your names" I asked. "I'm Dana Wong and this is my best friend Sadie Huang. We're 18." "Nice to meet you Dana." "Nice to meet your Tom." We shook hands. I was expecting more, but atleast that was something.
Dana's POV
OMG. I was shaking hands with Tom Kaulitz! I wish I can hug him, but that'll be weird. I hope he doesn't know I like him. His hand was strong.
Bye." "Bye!" "Bye!" I waved to the the Tokio Hotel boys and said our goodbyes. I gave Tom my # and hoped he called.
(I'm not Dana. Lol. I'm only 12.)
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dana:
brown hair with red highlights
asian
lives in queens, NYC
I was at my house unwrapping my birthday presents. It was summer so I was home from school. My bff since the 7th grade was there too. The last present was going to be her present. "Here's your present!" She handed me 2 pieces of paper. 2 pieces of paper?! I looked down and turns out they were concert tickets. "OMG!!!!!! Tokio Hotel tickets!" I hugged her and started jumping up and down screaming, "I'm going to the Tokio Hotel concert!" I was their fan for 1/2 a year. I loved their music and had a MAJOR crush on the band's guitarist Tom Kaulitz who was the twin of the vocalist, Bill Kaulitz. The whole band waas my inspiration. To be honest, I was unsure if Bill was a guy when I first saw them, but I came to love them. The concert was tomorrow. "We HAVE to go shopping!" My friend Sadie and I grab the keys and went to the mall. She wasn't a Tokio Hotel fan, but that didn't matter. I bought a black t-shirt that had the words 'music is life' on it, a pair of bootcut jeans, a black high top converses.
The next day...
Me and Sadie were waiting in line to get into the theatre. "This line is soooo long!" I whined. "We're almost there."
We went sat in our seats and waited. Our seats were not too far from the stage, but I wasn't at the front role either. The room was very hot, but the band finally appeared on stage. "We are starting off with Monsoon" Bill said in a heavy German accent. The crowd cheered. The concert started. I stared at Tom who was playing intensely. The fans at the front role where reaching to get Bill and Tom. LUCKY.
The concert was over. There was a soda machine by the exit. I waited for the bus with Sadie while drinking my Mountain Dew. God. The bus was taking so long. All the fans had left. I paced and paced. I tripped and fell. I scraped my knees and blood came. "Ouch!" a voice said. I was Bill who tripped over my soda can that I dropped while falling. I turned around. I was so scared. I ran over and started apologizing in everyway I could. "I'm sooo sorry. I didn't mean to. It was a total accident!" Bill was rubbing his arm and looked up at me. Oh god. Please don't call security. "It's ok" he said in a heavy German accent. "why aren't you here? Traffic? How long?" He finally closed the cellphone and let out a frustrated sigh. This tall rough looking guy came out. Me and Sadie were in the back by the exit and her didn't notice us. "Robbery. Give me your money" he said in a deep voice to the 4 boys. I grabbed Sadie and hid behind a bush. "Nein!" Bill said. He grabbed Bill by the shirt and lifted him. Where the **** are the security guards? Oh god. The other 3 boys tried to attack the robber, but then some other tough looking guys came out and held each off them. They were helpless. Out of the corner of my eye, I spotted a couple of beer bottles. I grabbed the 8 beer bottles and handed 4 to Sadie. I also grabbed a piece of glass off the ground. "I'll throw the 1st. We have to help them." Sadie nodded. I threw the 1st bottle and it hit the guy's head. For once, I aimed right. Bill was dropped and the other guys saw us. By now, the guy who was grabbing Bill was out cold. One of them came toward us. "We got a couple of girls!" I stood up, grabbed a bottle tight and hammered him on the head. he fell out cold too. The guys let go of the 3 boys and advanced toward us. Sadie and I threw bottles and them. 2 of them were knocked out cold, but the others were still advancing. We were out of bottles. One of them grabbed my arm. I used my free arm and grabbed the piece of glass. I stabbed his eye with the glass. "Help!" me and Sadie screamed. Next thing I knew, I was dropped on the ground. I looked up and saw the Tokio Hotel boys pouncing on top of them. Wow. I never thought young celebrities would care if their fans were being attacked. I was grateful, but I wanted them to go. "Run!" I yelled. "Nein!" Tom yelled. I looked around. Me and Sadie grabbed the glass shards of the ground and smashed it into their heads. Tom and Georg got cut with the glass, but they were ok. "Danke." "No, thank YOU or I would have been raped" I said. I called the police and we all got dragged to the police station while the Tokio Hotel boys yelled at the security gurads who were taking a break during all this. "If it wasn't for those girls, we would have been dead!" Bill yelled.
We explained the whole attack. I translated for the boys. Finally, the manager of Tokio Hotel came. "Come on, get in the limo." They walked to the exit but before they left, they turned around. Tom came up to me and said, "thank you for saving my brother and the rest of us." The boys nodded in agreement. "To thank you, we'd like to offer you backstage passes for tomorrow's concert" Bill said. "Thank you so much!" Me and Sadie jumped up and down in happiness. The boys laughed. "See you tomorrow!" Bill shouted.
Tom's POV
Tomorrow...
We went up on stage, but instead of playing, we were going to give those girls a suprise. Bill announced, "yesterday, we were attacked. 2 brave girls saved us. They are in the audience right now. Come up!" The girls came up the stage and the fans cheered for them. We each hugged them and god they smelled good. Some reason, I didn't want 1 of them to go. Something just occurred to me. I didn't know their names. They went back to their seats and we started the concert. I kept looking at the one with the highlights, but she didn't look back. I hope she wasn't 1 of those fans who were obsessed with Bill.
The girls were waiting backstage. "I never expecting you to thank us on stage" the 1 with the highlights said. "I'm sorry, but we didn't get your names" I asked. "I'm Dana Wong and this is my best friend Sadie Huang. We're 18." "Nice to meet you Dana." "Nice to meet your Tom." We shook hands. I was expecting more, but atleast that was something.
Dana's POV
OMG. I was shaking hands with Tom Kaulitz! I wish I can hug him, but that'll be weird. I hope he doesn't know I like him. His hand was strong.
Bye." "Bye!" "Bye!" I waved to the the Tokio Hotel boys and said our goodbyes. I gave Tom my # and hoped he called.
(I'm not Dana. Lol. I'm only 12.)
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