One Day At A Time - REWRITE!!! [Tom/OFC]

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Ok, so when I had closed the fic the last time I said a rewrite might be in the future...

SO HERE IT IS!!!

I can't seem to get away from this fic!

Expect it to be longer this time.

I hope you guys like it better this time then the last time, I'm going to do research to help and make it seem more detailed and realistic.

Chapter 1 will be up shortly :]

EDIT:
AND I CHANGED THE PAIRING!!!

XO
Andi

[BlondPunk]

Yaaaaay, finaaly! You're amking the rewrite! I can't wait for chapter 1!
:]

[jackjackio]

Woohoo!

:]

I'm excited.

[tokiohotel26]

yay!!!! im so happy! i was reading the original yesterday [before you decided to do the rewrie] and i was like dam.n she actually stopped this story?!?!? i really like it. i hope that she does the rewrite soon
now here it is
i should make wishes more often! :lol: :mrgreen:

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K Um, my best friends are coming over now to spend the night so TOMORROW chapter 1 shall be up

:]

In the mean time if you haven't read the first original fic

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Ok I'm writing Chapter One now!

Sorry

I was sick yesterday

T-T

[Emma B.E]

Can't wait !! :D

r u going to write somthing on "just friends" soon ? :)

[screamxitxoutxloud]

Confused e_o

Imma think it over before I post, I don't know what's going on with me right now but I can't think and I feel sick to my stomach and I can BARELY function right now

I'm so so so sorry

But we all have those times, right?

I just hate that mine is right now

-_-*

[Emma B.E]

Confused e_o

Imma think it over before I post, I don't know what's going on with me right now but I can't think and I feel sick to my stomach and I can BARELY function right now

I'm so so so sorry

But we all have those times, right?

I just hate that mine is right now

-_-*


oh, I understand.. >.< :(

I hope u feel better soon :)

[BlondPunk]

I'm sorry you feel bad :(
I hope you get better soon <3

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K Chapter ONE up today

I've had time to think but I still feel a bit sick so don't blame me if it's not exactly up there

;_;

I'm working on it now

[whiteseawitch]

It's KK sweetie.... just take your time... this screwed up weather is getting to a lot of people... this weekend would be a good time to write things too...

I can't wait to see how you change it....

XOXO WSW/Mariana XOXO

[screamxitxoutxloud]

K, my comp was being a mofo and I had to restart it

I lost the whole chapter last night

;_;


I'm writing it again now

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Chapter one, 5 weeks-

If you look at the pictures on my wall, you would have never expected this to happen to me.

There are pictures of me jumping on trampolines with my 3 best friends when I was 10. One of me and my mom making cookies for her works bake sale. Several of my friends and I running or sitting or sleeping in the feild behind my yard. Kodak moments never show you what to expect.

So I guess you should expect everything, so then nothing is un-expected.
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"Hey." I wave to Scarlette, one of my best friends, who is sitting on her deck, painting her toenails a blue-gray the exact shade of her eyes. Her light brown softly curling hair is pulled back from her face to show that her freckles have grown lighter with the summer sun.

"Hey, I got your call, what's up?" she says, closing the bottle of polish and blowing on her toes.

"You should put glitter polish over the blue. It would look cool." I sit next to her and search through her bag of polish, finding the remover, some cotton balls, dark purple nail polish and a glitter top coat for her.

"You're right." she agrees and I start to do my own toes. We sit in silence, listening to the MCR song she's playing on her iPod speakers.

"So, are you going to tell me ordo I have to guess?" Scarlette asks me, closing the glitter polish and admiring her work. I finish my toes and close the polish, pulling out a thin white stick from my back pocket.

"Look." I say, handing it to her and Scarlette's eyes grow big.

"Wh- H- Andi-"

"Scarlette, I'm pregnant." I say quietly, pulling my knees up to my chest. Scarlette puts down the pregnancy test on the table and looks over at me.

"Woah." is all she's able to say.

"I know."

"Are you alright?" Scarlette asks me, leaning her head against my arms.

"I'm scared." I say before bursting into tears. Scarlette sits next to me, brushing back my dark brown hair from my face.

"It's Tom's, isn't it?" she asks and I can only nod before fresh tears run down my face.

"He loves you. A lot. He won't let this come between you."

"We used a condom. he said he couldn't risk me getting pregnant, a kid would ruin the way things are right now. He's going to hate me." I sob, leaning against Scarlette.

"He won't. I know he won't. He'll just be really scared, like you are. He'll be scared for you and how people will treat you." Scarlette says, arms around me.

"Oh god...my mom, Scarlette. What about my mom?! She's going to kick me out! She's going to fricking kick me out of the house and I'll be living on the streets." This only causes me to cry harder.

"If she does, you'll stay here. You can live here. We have extra rooms anyway so the baby can live here too."

"You have an answer for everything." I say, wiping my eyes and laughing.

"No, just ideas." Scarlette smiles.

"God, I feel like crap."

"Probably morning sickness. When my cousin had her baby, she got really sick and she felt really bad for the first couple of months." I scowl.

"That doesn't help."

"SCARLETTE I'M HOME!!!" Kay, Scarlette's mom, yells from the driveway. I freeze and Scarlette shakes her head.

"We won't tell her yet. We'll take it a day at a time."

[writeratheart412]

0.0

Okay, that's really, really good. It reminds me of the movie Juno. Keep up the good work, I can't wait for updates! :)

[BlondPunk]

more more more more more more!!!!
awesomness!!!
And this time it's Tom's..................
cool :D

[Emma B.E]

OMG!!!!!!! :D

More!!!<3

[screamxitxoutxloud]

I'm writing :]

Story is set up so every chapter is another two weeks into the pregnancy

[Emma B.E]

can't wait! XD <3

[screamxitxoutxloud]

Ohmygod, WTF?

BIG storms came in and I lost all of it

Blame mother nature, not me

>_>

Haven't been able to write much with the storms coming on and off

[Emma B.E]

lol. XD

:shock:

It's ok, we can wait :)

[screamxitxoutxloud]

Oh my lord, I haven't done anything D;

I fail >_>


I'm writing now I promise

[Emma B.E]

lol.

*waiting*

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Chapter 2,7 weeks-

"Mom, I'm pregnant."

Scarlette shifts uncomfortably in her spot on the bed as my mom's eyes grow wide and silence fills her bedroom. My mom looks down and shakes her head, not knowing what to say.

"Who...who did you...?" she stutters with the words, voice barely above a whisper.

"Tomi...we were really careful though. We used a condom and everything and made sure and...I don't know how it happened." I explain. I look up and lock eyes with my mom. I now see, when we're both scared ****less, how much we look alike. The curve of our bottom lips, the color of our eyes and and hair, the natural curliness to our hair. It's all there in genetics, somehow matching parts of us.

"Why would you do this if you knew the risk?" my mom asks me. I shake my head.

"I...We...I don't know." I admit. I sound so weak.

"So, you're pregnant...Are you positive? You're absolutly sure?"

"I pee like I have a leak, I can't eat anything without it coming back up, I can smell everything, I'm tired and I'm craving some chicken right now. Chicken nuggets. From McDonalds."

My mom stares at me and Scarlette tries not to laugh.

"How long?"

"About... 9 weeks ago... this site said that means I'm 7 weeks along, since you don't get pregnant untill about 2 weeks after the actual... uhm... yeah..." I ramble.

"Do you know what you're going to do? Being a teenage mom is so hard, girls." my mom says sighing. She should know.

"Yeah... I want to keep the baby. And I DID think about it, a lot. Scarlette and I decided together." I can't look at my mom now.

Silence.

"Don't screw this up, Andi. Don't you dare screw this up." my mom says, shaking her head. I nodd and climb into my mom's open arms with Scarlette.

"You do know the consequences to this? You know this is going to mess a lot of plans up. You're still young, 16." my mom says. I nod and the room falls silent again.

"Well... you girls go to bed... get some sleep." my mom says. She kisses my forehead and hugs us both again. She shoos us out of her bedroom quickly.

"Well that went well." Scarlette says, smiling and following me into my bedroom as I put in our favorite movie 'Thirteen'.

"Yeah, I was suprised at how well she took it. Oh my god, I'm hungry. Be right back, don't start the movie without me!" I say, running to the stairs. I freeze outside my moms doorway, hearing a weird noise. I slyly open her door a little and I can see her crying on her bed. She's talking to someone on the phone.

"Mom, I'm so scared. She has screwed up her future so much. I have always had regrets about having a kid at 16-"

Ouch.

"-And now it's like I can't trust her to make the right decisions! She's pregnant at 16! I didn't want her to make the same mistake I did! Mom-"

I shake my head and walk away, going downstairs to the kitchen and make some popcorn.

"I was a mistake... Unwanted... Regretted" I say to myself. I put my hand over my stomach as the microwave beeps.

"You're wanted. I don't regret you." I say, a tear rolling down my face.



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Good?

Bad?

Tell me :]

[tokiohotel26]

its awesome but a sad chapter

i was a mistake 2...:cry:
i havent seen my real dad since i was 3
and my step dad hates me...

but enough about me...
i thought i was a awesome chapter!!!

[screamxitxoutxloud]

its awesome but a sad chapter

i was a mistake 2...:cry:
i havent seen my real dad since i was 3
and my step dad hates me...

but enough about me...
i thought i was a awesome chapter!!!

My parents... I was also an accident, they used birth control and everything, they didn't want a kid so soon, they weren't even married

AGH screw it, I'm not going into my sad story, it's not even that sad >_>

Danke for the review!

[tokiohotel26]

its awesome but a sad chapter

i was a mistake 2...:cry:
i havent seen my real dad since i was 3
and my step dad hates me...

but enough about me...
i thought i was a awesome chapter!!!

My parents... I was also an accident, they used birth control and everything, they didn't want a kid so soon, they weren't even married

AGH screw it, I'm not going into my sad story, it's not even that sad >_>
Danke for the review!
my mom was 18 my dad was...idk how old he is now so i dont give a monkeys *** about him and they werent married either
i feel like yelling: there are these new inventions that keep u from getting pregnant. they r called condoms and birth control! at least try to use them! :x


ok i will shut up now cuz i sound extra stupid talking trash about my parents to people i dont know
no offense

[Emma B.E]

OMG... What is TOM going to say ???o.o

(ps. I love the story)

[whiteseawitch]

ANDI!!.. you gotta write more... I wanna see what happens! get off the Wii for 5 minutes and post something good!!

LOL

love u

Mari

[screamxitxoutxloud]

Writing Noa

:]

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Chapter 3,9 weeks-

"You should seriously sit down, you're going to get motion sickness." Scarlette says as she reads a magazine on my bed.

"Yeah well while you're reading about the perfect pedicure I'm trying to think about how to tell Tom I'm carrying his child." I snap. As if on cue Tom knocks on the door. I open the door and Tom's face just spells worry.

"Andi, what's wrong? What's up with the frantic call? What do you need to tell me?" he asks as I step aside and let him in. I open my mouth to say something but close it. I close the door and sit next to Scarlette on my bed.

"You're scaring me." Tom says.

"Well this is pretty scary." I admit.

"You're dieing aren't you?"

"No..."

"Well then what is it?!"

"If you would shut your mouth maybe I could tell you!"

"WELL IF YOU TOLD ME MAYBE I WOULD SHUT MY MOUTH!"

"FINE! I'M PREGNANT!"

Ouch... I did not mean for it to come out like that.

"Wait...what?!" Tom's voice is truely confused.

I get up from the bed walk over to Tom and look him in the eyes.

"I'm pregnant."

Tom's eyes grow BIG and he steps back from me a bit.

"Wh-whe-oh god." then he holds me really tightly.

"I want you to keep it, but I'll support any desicion you make and you aren't going through this without me." Tom says.

"This is amazing." Scarlette says looking up from her magazine for the first time.

"Yeah I know." Tom says, smiling down at me.

"Wait, you think getting an absolutly fabulous pedi/mani at home is great too?"
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"Here." Tom says, dropping about 5 magazines on my bed, the next afternoon.

"What is this?" I ask picking one upreading 'Fit Pregnancy'.

"Reading material. I've already read through them, god. Do you know how AKWARDLY the checkout chick stared at me?" Tom says sitting next to me on my bed.

"Uhm, thanks?" I say, flipping to an artical on Jessica Alba.

"How long have you been knocked up?" Tom asks, turning to a calender in one of the magainzes.

"Nine weeks. Says the doctor. She was totally a B and I wanted to face punch her." I say, marking a page on nursery's.

"MOOD SWINGS!" Tom says in a sing-song voice.

"I am not having mood swings! I am perfectly emotionally stable!" I say, my voice louder then I intended.

Tom stares at me and shakes his head.

"I rest my case. And you need to start getting healthy. I mean REALLY HEALTHY. We're talking walks and green stuff and crap like that."

"NO! I refuse to eat anything green." I snap, shoving the magazine away.

"You will eat it..." Tom puases to make sure I'm listeing, "And you will like it..."

I scowl and Tom puts his arms around me.

"It's all going to work out, you'll see. And I will be there for you, wether you like it or not, holding a salad and a bag of gummi bears!" he says and I poke him in his side.

"I love you too." I say and smile.

[Emma B.E]

AWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!! :shock: <3

TOM IS SO ****ING SWEET!!!!
PLEASE MORE BITTE. <3

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I'm really bored O.O

So I'm writing more noa :D

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Chapter 4,12 weeks-

"Stop it, you look gorgeous." Scarlette assures me as Tom, Bill, Scarlette and I drive to school.

"It's the first day of school and I have heartburn like no other and I gained weight and people are going to effing find out soon and I've ruined my life." I cry.

"You're also an emotional roller coaster and are going to be having more energy then ever. Maybe you could get in those walks we talked about and you'll b-"

"Tom is you don't shut the **** up I'm going to shave your dreads off and hide every single one of your caps." I growl and Bill, Tom's twin brother, starts to laugh.

"She'll do it too. Oh believe me, she'll do it." Scarlette says, nodding and dodging some retarded kid who ran across the street.

"I've been pregnant for three months barely and I feel like CRAP. And it's only supposed to get worse." I complain and Tom smooths my hair back from my face.

"It's going to be alright. You have us, we'll get through it." Bill says smiling, twisting around in the front seat and putting his hand on my knee. Tom nods and kisses my forehead as Scarlette pulls into a free parking space.

"You ready?" Scarlette asks and I shake my head. She's ALWAYS been the one to decide when it was the right time to go, she should know better then to ask me.

"We'll go in when you're ready." Tom assures me.

"Then we should go in now, because I'll never be ready." I say and climb out of the back of Scarlette's car.

"I'll see you at lunch." Bill says and runs off to his firt class, Andreas stopping him half way to catch up.

"I'll see you third period and then we can go get lunch with Bill and Scarlette. Where ever you want." Tom says hugging me and kissing my cheek before walking to his class room. Scarlette and I stand in the lobby of the highschool.

"Well, we're juniors!" Scarlette cheerleads and I look down, smoothing out my black and white skirt and pulling down my black tanktop.

"We'll get through this school thing, Andi. I promise." Scarlette puts her arm around me and I nod, collecting myself.

Crap, I think I have to hurl.
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"How have you been so far?" Bill and Tom ask as Scarlette and I walk up to her car.

"I've only vomited twice." I say and I slide into the backseat of the car, Tom following me.

"The book said that you're constant barfing would ease up soon." Scarlette points out, starting the car and backing out.

"I deserve a cookie." I scowl, crossing my arms and Bill laughs at me.

"The last time you ate a cookie you ended up swearing off anything with chocolate." Tom says.

"Well those were disgusting and burnt and everything tat is wrong with the world!" I say.

I'm ignored.

[Emma B.E]

XDDDDDD

i love it!

[Bill Kaulitz=Love]

Aww, Tom would be such a cute father. Continue!

[Emma B.E]

Aww, Tom would be such a cute father. Continue!


I know .. o.o <3

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I skipped 4 weeks because nothing would be going on -_-*

Oh and I get ALL of this information on what's going on and how far along stuff is and such from babycenter.com

Just thought I'd throw that out there, that all that's happening is acurate and I'm not making the mood swings or showing patterns up :]

And I'm going to start putting up my info pages :]

Page for this week: http://www.babycenter.com/6_your-pregna ... p=timeline (http://www.babycenter.com/6_your-pregnancy-16-weeks_1105.bc?intcmp=timeline)
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Chapter 5,16 weeks-

"I don't want to talk about it. JUST LEAVE ME ALONE" I say almost bursting into tears right there in the middle of the sidewalk Scarlette, Tom and I are walking on, making my nose stuff up more then it already has been for the past 4 days. Tom follows me as I stomp into my house, telling Scarlette he'll deal with me and to go home.

Poor Scarlette... She's so tired of me.

"Andi, hun. What happened? Just TALK to me, please?" Tom asks as I fling open my bedroom door.

"FREAKING SARAH SMITH HAPPENED!" I scream, throwing my back pack on my bed and kicking off my Converse low-tops.

"I know, you hate her, she always makes fun of you. What did she do?" Tom asks, oblivious.

"Well um lets see. Um, well I'm pregnant and she found out last week and it finally got around to EVERYBODY." I say. I'm about ready to face punch everyone in my school.

"No. What did she do?!" Tom's eyes grow wide and he sits on my bed.

"I'm sitting in English and we have a free period because Mrs.Nathan has to grade some tests from a couple weeks ago and-"

"OH GOD I WANT POPCORN FOR THIS!" Tom interuppts me. I roll my eyes and walk downstairs, Tom following close behind me.

"Do we have chocolate sauce?" I ask and Tom nods, tossing the bottle over to me.

"Continue." Tom says, pouring himself a glass of Coke.

"Mrs.Nathan has to grade tests so we had a free period. Julie-you know her, the ditzy blonde who can't spell France-comes over to me and is all 'Hey girl, what's up!!!'" I continue, using a high fake voice for Julie's part.

"Ugh I hate her, dated her for two weeks and ohmygod I hated her voice, but she was a great kis-" Tom stops mid-sentence and notices my glare.

"AND THEN THE MOST AMAZING GIRL TO HAVE EVER WALKED THE EARTH CAME INTO MY WORLD AND I COMPLETELY FORGOT ABOUT JULIE BECAUSE I WAS SO ENGULFED IN LOVE!!! I AM SO LUCKY TO HAVE YOU, MY ONE AND ONLY LOVE WHO IS TEN MILLION TIMES BETTER THEN ANY DITZY FAKE TANNED BLONDE WHO NEEDS TO DYE HER ROOTS AGAIN!!!" Tom says, an ATTEMPT to save himself.

"Nice save." I narrow my eyes at him and open the bag of hot popcorn.

"What save?! PISH POSH! I don't say anything that's not true, my one and only girl, my world, my everyth-"

"Shut up, and let me finish."

"AWH YOU LOVE ME BACK!" Tom smiles.

"I didn't say that." I say, taking my half of the popcorn.

"You gave me more popcorn then you gave yourself, it shows your true knowladge and love of me." Tom says and follows me to the living room. I roll my eyes again.

"So Jamie comes up and is acting all nice to me. Asking me where I get my hair done because it looks so good, she lied about that by the way, and telling me I look good today, lie again." I pause and shove some chocolate covered popcorn in my mouth.

"Then all of a sudden-BAM!-'SARAH SAID YOU'RE PREGNANT! YOU AND TOM GOT TOGETHER OVER THE SUMMER! CONGRATS HUN!'"

"OH NO SHE DIDN'T!!! IN FRONT OF THE WHOLE CLASS?!" Tom asks through a mouthful of popcorn.

"YES SHE DID! AND WHAT THE HECK AM I SUPPOSED TO SAY! I MEAN THE EFFING SHIRT I WAS WEARING DIDN'T EXACTLY HIDE THIS HUGE BUMP I'M GROWING!"

"SO YOU SAID YOU ARE?!" Tom looks worried.

"NO! I told her to shut up and mind her own business. But that's basically-'Yup, and I don't want anyone to know so I'm going to ignor that statement.'-which is almost as bad as saying straight out yes."

"Oh that girl. Now I have another reason to avoid her at all costs." Tom shakes his head and eats some more popcorn.

"That's just the first part!"

"THERE'S MORE?!" Tom almost chokes on his popcorn.

"I'm walking down the hall and some girl I don't even know looks at me like I have 'I'M PREGGERS AND IT'S TOM'S KID' tattooed on my forehead. I am getting dirty looks from everyone. Then art rolls around and the teacher goes out of the room." I change the channel on the TV, pausing for dramtic effect.

"And then freaking Gina comes over to my table with her little group of nasty girls and sits next to me and is all 'So, you're pregnant?!' of course I roll my eyes and tell her to go away. She smiles and is all 'OHMYGOD ANDI YOU'RE PREGNANT?! CONGRATS GIRL!!' all loudly and what not and so everyone is whispering about me and as I'm leaving, these girls bump my shoulders and 'accidently' shove me into a wall and say '*****' and 'Slut' and crap like that."

"No way." Tom says, eyes wide.

"Yeah, so needless to say. I'm not going to be happy at school." I say, finally putting the remote down and watching TRL.

"Well...so everyone knows, big deal." Tom says looking down.

"Yeah, BIG DEAL! I'm a ***** and slut and whatever else they call girls!" I cry.

"No, just because you're pregnant doesn't mean you're a ***** or a slut. You haven't slept with like...30 guys in a year-AND IF YOU SAY YOU HAVE I'M GOING TO BE MAD!" Tom says.

"You know better then that." I narrow my eyes and hit him.

"Exactly. And everyone else should as well."

"Then how do I deal with all the girls and half the guys in our grade looking at my stomach once and calling me easy."

"You ignor it and come talk to me or Bill or Scarlette." Tom has an answer for everything. I finish my popcorn and lean against Tom.

"I wish it was as easy as that."

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OK so it was basically a fluff chapter, but I can't write confrontation and cat fight scenes well.

ATLEAST YOU KNOW THAT THE PREPSTER *****EZ KNOW SHE'S PREGNANT :D

Bad?

Good?

If you read it, review it.

[Emma B.E]

aww.. I still think Tom is uber cute!!!:D
he's soo nice, I'm sure he's going to be a great dad!!!

can I ask you about somthing?
your real name is andi right???
is this fan fic and the *just friends* ff about you??:)

you're a great writer! :)

are you going to write a new chapter on the *just friends* thing, I really like it... :roll: <3

[screamxitxoutxloud]

can I ask you about somthing?
your real name is andi right???
is this fan fic and the *just friends* ff about you??:)


Heheh

Yes...-_-*

It's a habit from my Dylan and Cole Sprouse (*shudder*) fan fic days

XD

[Emma B.E]

can I ask you about somthing?
your real name is andi right???
is this fan fic and the *just friends* ff about you??:)


Heheh

Yes...-_-*

It's a habit from my Dylan and Cole Sprouse (*shudder*) fan fic days

XD


lol. XD

[BlondPunk]

AWESOMNESS!!!
*is happy Tom's so nice*

MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!

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*****

Sorry I haven't written in this

I'll write more really soon

[whiteseawitch]

Take it from me.. you will be craving gourmet food after all that... haha...

This is so sweet! I am sure the crying fits will come in soon too though... although my pregnancy was a bit whack...

anywho... I WANT MORE!!!

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Hey, remember how about I don&#39;t know 4 months ago I said I&#39;d write more?

Guess what XD

I finally am XD

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Chapter 6, 20 weeks-

"There she is, the one who's pregnant!"

"Ohmygosh she's getting huge!"

"Do you think that this is her 4th or 5th one?"

"Ohmygod she's such a WHXRE!"

By the time the day is over, I can't wait to get out of the school.

"Everyone's staring." I say and smooth my hand over my growing abdomen as Tom walks beside me to Scarlette's car. Tom takes my hand in his and I look down, my hair being blown wildly in the cold November wind.

"Well, we have a couple extra days off for Thanksgiving Break." he points out and I nod, sighing and wishing my coat would zip up.

The ride home is silent. Tom, Bill and I go to Scarlette's house for the remainder of the day.

"Wanna watch a movie?" Scarlette asks and the twins nod.

"I'm going to try and fall asleep." I say yawning and lay against Tom.

I don't know what they're watching, but the only thing I hear are screams and 'Oh God please no!'.

Just as I'm about to drift off, I feel something flutter in my stomach, then something totally kicks me awake. I sit up as quick as my aching, tired and pregnant body allows me and my jaw drops.

"HOLY **** THE BABY MOVED!" I scream and everyone turns to look at me.

"NO WAY I JUST THOUGHT YOU HAD TO PEE AGAIN!" Scarlette screams and runs over from her spot on the other couch to attack my stomach. Bill kneels next to her and puts his hand next to Scar's and Tom just stares at my belly.

"IT MOVED?" he asks and I nod, tears filling my eyes.

"AWH IT'S ALIVE OHMYGOD AND IT LIKES HORROR MOVIES! IT ALREADY KNOWS WHAT'S GOOD IN LIFE!" Tom yells and claps his hands. I shake my head laughing.

"Stop calling HER and it!" I say and Tom stares at me.

"When did you plan on telling me this?! I have a daughter I have a daughter I have a daughterrrrr!" Tom sings and I am at this point, laughing so hard I'm crying.

Or maybe it's just the hormones.

I don't know, either way.

"SHE'S ALREADY THE MOST BEAUTIFUL GIRL ON THE PLANET, next to you Andi of course, AND SHE'S NOT GOING OUT WITH ANY GUY UNTILL SHE'S 25! AND IF SHE EVEN DARES TO LOOK AT A SKIRT SHORTER THAN FLOOR LENGTH BEFORE SHE'S 21 I'M GOING TO KILL HER! OH I'M SO EXCITED!" Tom says skipping around the living room.

"God Tom she's barely 5 months old in the womb!" Bill laughs and smiles as he feels her flutter against his hand.

"Move baby brother I want to say hello to my Daughter!" Tom says and squeezes in between Bill and Scarlette. He smiles and I move his hand directly to where her hand is moving against the top of my stomach.

"She started moving more when you came down, Tom." I say honestly and I don't think he can even hear me.

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Later that night, Tom and I are sitting in my bedroom, Tom playing his guitar and me looking through a magazine.

"Do you think she can hear us?" Tom asks me and stops playing his guitar.

"Uhm, maybe. I'm not sure. Try talking to her." I say laying down the magazine and sitting up a little more. Tom lays down beside my stomach and holds my hand.

"Hi baby girl, I'm your dad... I just wanted to say hi. I think you're amazingly special and great and just know that you have the potential for genius and un-deniable good looks because you're half me!" Tom says and I laugh. Just as I stop laughing, she kicks SUPER HARD, sending me into a straight up sitting position.

"She heard you." I say breathless and Tom smiles putting his hand on my lower stomach.

"Maybe we should put her into martial arts." he says and laughs. I let out a breath and lean back onto my pillows.

"Wait if she can hear you does that mean she can hear music too?!" I ask and I *slowly* sit back up and get off my bed, picking up my laptop and opening up youtube.

"You're going to corrupt our child already?!" Tom whines as I turn on All Time Low 'Poppin'' And I smile as she begins to kind of dance.

"Ha, she LOVES ATL, she's dancing like crazy!" I say triumphantly. Tom takes the laptop from me and turns on Samy Delux 'Die Cap Song' .

"She's still dancing!" I laugh and Tom puts his cheek against my stomach.

"Awhhh my little Hip-Hop star!" he says.

"I hope she has your eyes." I say and gently smooth my hand over my stomach.

"I hope she has your hair." Tom says and tugs on one of my curls.

"She has to have your smile! It's ruin the experiance if she doesn't!" I laugh and Tom smirks.

"I hope she's short, like petite, like you are, because then I can call her 'Shorty' since you'll try and stab me with a pencil if I call you that." he says and his smirk turns into a full blown smile.

"You will call her by her name, you will NOT call her Shorty!" I say and Tom pouts.

"But I have to give her a nickname that totally suits her! Your mom did that to you! My dad did that to me! It's tradition!" Tom whines and I roll my eyes.

"Well then think of something besides Shorty." I say.

"I like the name Emily." Tom says and I think.

"Too plain, I want something exotic and unique." I say and Tom sighs.

"How about Shaniqua?"

"Now that's just ridiculous." I say and roll my eyes again.

"Well I'm not good at unique names!" Tom argues and I start to think.

"Isobella. Elarah. Elaina. Andromeda." I list off and Tom sighs.

"We have time to think of names." he says and sits back up, grabbing his guitar and starts to play a song I don't recognize.

"What are you playing?" I ask and Tom smiles.

"I wrote a song for you two."

[Emma B.E]

naawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww<3


PILAR.

Pretty name

[screamxitxoutxloud]

I wanted to do something different XD

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Baby Girl, 20 weeks-

I finally did it! I kicked Mommy and she felt it! I've been trying to get her to pay attention to me for 2 weeks, and today I had the strength to kick hard enough!

YAY!

I'm so happy, she had Daddy talk to me. He told me I'm a genius and gorgeous. I can't wait to meet him.

Daddy played me a song earlier. Well a song for me and Mommy. It was pretty. He can play whatever he was playing really well. I really can't wait to meet him.

Mommy started crying when the song was over. Then her and Daddy laughed when I moved around a little, they said I was going to sleep again. I think the song Daddy wrote was a lullaby.

OH! I have an Uncle and an Aunt too! Uncle Bill and Aunt Scarlette. And Aunt April too! She's actually my cousin I think, because she's Mommy's cousin. But Aunt April said she liked the sound of 'new relative title' so I'm just going to call her Aunt April.

She came over after Daddy, Uncle Bill and Aunt Scarlette left. They talked about a baby shower. And my name.

Mommy likes the names Alexandria, Kairi and Ashlynn. Aunt April likes Ashlynn too.

I like Alexandria best, Kairi second best. I like Ashlynn too though.

Mommy sounds really nice. She only yells when she's really excited or when someone at her school tries to make fun of her and call me a bad name. Daddy calls her beautiful. I think she is too. She even SOUNDS beautiful. I love her voice. She sings to me a lot. Before she goes to bed she sings me a song. I can't wait to meet her too. I want her to hold me. I want her to kiss me and tell me I'm pretty and for her to love me. She says she loves me a lot. She tells Daddy that she already loves me more than anything. More than air. I think she needs air to live.

I think Mommy is saying goodbye to Aunt April now and is going upstairs to go to bed. She takes a really long time to get ready for bed. She usually takes an hour in this thing with water I think it is, I don't know I haven't heard her tell me about it. Sometimes she does things to her hair that take a long time too. Usually I'm tired of her moving around by the time she's out of the water thing, so I just want her to go to bed.

Hmm maybe I should kick her again, she's too quite now.

She asked me if I wanted a song, I'll move my hand across the dark walls to tell her I do.

She's singing a soft song now, and I can hear the water thing being turned on too.

I don't mind her being up right now though. I'm glad she's singing to me.

[screamxitxoutxloud]

Bump?

[Janaye]

Bump?

Yes! Bump!