View Full Version : Will this ever work out? {FINISHED!}
BrittnayySTFU
June 17th, 2008, 08:19 PM
If you can not find a chapter, You can PM me and I will be glad to send you any chapter that you need!
Will This ever work out?
Chapter 1
Brittnayy sat at her kitchen table looking at the notebook that contained the notes that her and Bill were writing back and forth the night before he had to go back to Germany to get ready for Tokio Hotel’s big European tour. She read the lines over and over again, just looking at Bill’s handwriting made her go weak in the knees. I was true, she really missed him. She missed Bill more then she had ever before.
Shut up and let me go... (Ringtone)
“Hello” Brittnayy set the notebook down.
“Yes, this is your therapist Mr. Mary’s secretary, I am just calling to tell you that we are upping your dosage for you bi-polar medication.” A male voice replied.
“Bill shut up. We both know that I do not have a therapist and that I don’t take medication.”
“How in the world do you always know that it’s me? I mean I can never prank call you but when you try to do it to me I never have a clue that it is actually you!”
“Babe I always know it’s you because I’m smart, and I can always prank call you without you finding out because you’re dimwitted.” Brittnayy giggled.
“That’s just rude.”
“I was kidding. I’m sorry Hun.”
“It’s okay. Anyways I was just calling because I wanted to tell you I miss you. The boys and I are in a cab, and I had a little time to call.”
“I miss you too, you don’t even know how much.”
“Well we’re here, so I will let you go.”
“Okay, Goodbye.”
“Bye.” The line went dead.
Brittnayy got up from the kitchen table and walked into the living room. She looked around the room and took in the scenery, she was glad that she was finally on her own, and that she had her own place. She hated living at her parent’s house. She didn’t miss it one bit, all of the rules, the curfew, and the food, she hated her mother’s cooking. She flopped herself on the couch and flicked on her big screen television. She let her eyes fall and she slowly fell asleep.
TABLE OF CONTENTS!
Chapter 2 - pg. 1
Chapter 3 - pg. 1
Chapter 4 - pg. 1
Chapter 5 - pg. 1
Chapter 6 - pg. 4
Chapter 7 - pg.10
Chapter 8 - pg.13
Chapter 9 - pg.17
Chapter 10 - pg.18
Chapter 11 - pg.20
Chapter 12 - pg.21
Chapter 13 - pg.22
Chapter 14 - pg.23
Chapter 15 - pg.26
Chapter 16 - pg.29
Chapter 17 - pg.30
Chapter 18 - pg.32
Chapter 19 - pg.34
Chapter 20 - pg.35
Chapter 21 - pg.36
Chapter 22 - pg.39
Chapter 23 - pg.41
Chapter 24 - pg.43
Unknown598
June 17th, 2008, 08:56 PM
^_^
thats really good,
interesting...
more plz! i'd like to see wht happns...typng shrt is fn lol
BrittnayySTFU
June 19th, 2008, 11:06 AM
CHAPETER 2!
Ff- few days later
Fer sure maybe fer sure not…….. (Ringtone)
Brittnayy looked at her phone, Tom had been prank calling her all day and it was getting on her nerves. It was always the same thing. “Hey baby, what cha wearing?” “I want your body babe!” or the most famous one “I’m coming by to pick you up so we can have some hot and sweaty fun in the hotel room....” Brittnayy would always say the same thing- “Tom you pervert, I don’t like you that way get a life!”
No matter how long she and Tom had been friends, it always got old when he decided he wanted to have a little fun and prank call her. She always had fun with it at first but after the 5th time it kind of got annoying, especially when it was the same thing every time…..
She picked up the phone, “quit calling me you pervert”
“What?” Bill replied, “How in the world am I a pervert?”
“Oh, it’s you. I’m sorry; I thought it was your brother again calling to ask me if I want to have some fun in his bathtub.” She giggled.
“No…. I’m not Tom. I was just calling to tell you that the guys and I just got off the plane and we are on our way to your place. Yes I have your address so don’t even ask, ha-ha.” He chuckled.
“I figured you had my address because I sent it to you the day I moved.”
“Oh yeah, I forgot that you sent it to me.”
“That’s exactly why you have it, because I didn’t send it to you.”
“Don’t be sarcastic!”
“Sorry… you know me I always have to have some sarcastic remark. Well, I will let you go because I have to get ready. I miss you.”
“Okay, I miss you too. See you in a little bit.”
Brittnayy walked around her house making sure the place was nice and clean. If it wasn’t perfect Tom would find something to pick at and make her mad. After she was done picking up trash, cleaning the counter tops and closing all of the windows the guys were there banging on the door.
“Hold on,” Brittnayy yelled at the door “I will be there in a moment.”
“Okay.” They all replied.
“Hey,” Brittnayy opened the door, “come in, I’m sorry if the place is a little messy.”
Tom walked in first, “Nice place, Brittnayy.”
“You sarcastic little freak!” Brittnayy stepped towards him.
“Whoa.” Tom ran and hid behind George.
“Hiding behind George won’t save you!” Brittnayy tried to move closer but found herself struggling. “God dang it, get off of me!” she yelled.
“No.” Bill Replied.
Brittnayy stopped trying to get at Tom and fell back into Bill’s arms, “Fine, you win.”
“Nice house,” Bill looked around, “it’s cozy.”
“Thank you….” Brittnayy replied.
Brittnayy walked over to the couch and sat down. She patted the place beside her; Tom walked over and sat down.
“Not you, you freak!” Brittnayy pushed Tom off of the couch. “I was obviously talking about Bill; I don’t like you that way for the fortieth time!”
“But…. But…” Tom looked up with a puppy dog look on his face.
“Don’t give me that crap, you retard.” Brittnayy yelled.
Bill came over and sat next to Brittnayy. “Tom haven’t you learned your lesson yet? Brittnayy is mine not yours so stop trying…” He giggled.
“Yeah!” Brittnayy nodded in agreement.
“So what have you guys doing while you’re in New York?” Brittnayy looked around the room.
“Oh nothing, were just hanging out we have a month off, and we thought it would be cool just to come down here and hang out.” Bill replied.
“Do you mind if we stay here?” Gustav asked.
“No I don’t I have enough room. But, Tom has to sleep outside, there’s not supposed to be any animals in my apartment.” She giggled.
Tom glared at her, “very funny, I’m laughing on the inside.”
“Don’t be such a loser!” Brittnayy leaned down and hugged him, “there you happy you got me to touch you?”
“I knew you couldn’t resist me!” tom chuckled.
Brittnayy ignored Tom’s comment and went on talking about the boys staying, “so yeah I have, three bedrooms, two not including mine, and I have a fold out couch. So, Gustav and George, you both can have a bedroom to yourselves, and Tom you can sleep in the living room.”
“Why do I have to sleep in the living room?” Tom whined.
“Don’t complain you get the big screen television!” Brittnayy snapped.
“That’s a plus.” Tom said.
“Yeah…. Anyways, I have plenty of food so I’m not worried about running out; just help yourself to anything….”
“Thanks a lot Brittnayy, we really appreciate this ha-ha. It’s always better than staying in a hotel room.” Gustav laughed.
“WAIT! Where am I supposed to sleep?” Bill blurted out.
“You’re a doof!” Brittnayy yelled.
“Oh, yeah maybe I am.” Bill said realizing that he was so dumb.
“Well, it’s 10 at night, and I am getting tired. Everyone lets go to bed.”
Brittnayy walked down the hallway, and entered the last bedroom, letting Bill in behind her. “Welcome to my palace….” Brittnayy made a motion as if she were a show girl showing a car at a car show.
“I like it.” He walked over to Brittnayy and picked her up, “Hello wonderful, I missed you.” He put her down on the bed.
Brittnayy leaned up and stole a few kisses, “I missed you too….. Handsome.” She giggled, stealing a few more kisses. “But, alas I am tired, let’s go to bed.”
“Okay.”
“Night, babe!” Bill giggled.
“Goodnight” Brittnayy leaned over and shut the lights out. She didn’t feel like talking anymore she was just glad that Bill was here, with her, and they were laying together.
writeratheart412
June 19th, 2008, 11:09 AM
That's pretty good! Keep up the good work!
BrittnayySTFU
June 20th, 2008, 12:33 PM
Chapeter 3!
FF- ONE WEEK
“Hey give me that!” Brittnayy yelled jumping over the couch. “I was watching TV!”
“Well now it’s our turn to watch TV” Tom said standing on top of the couch making sure that the remote was out of her reach.
“Whatever, what are we going to watch then?”
“I don’t know.” Tom flipped through the channels. “You know Bill isn’t here right now, so we could… yeah you know.”
Brittnayy hit him with a pillow, “when are you going to give up?”
“I was only kidding! You’re my best friend.” He said finally picking a TV channel; of course it was a hip hop station.
“I know, I know. I was messing around too!” Brittnayy giggled. She listened to the music, currently cyclone was on. “I like this song.” She got up and started to dance.
“You’re a loser Brittnayy” Tom replied.
“Come on let’s dance!” Brittnayy pulled Tom up making him fly into her. “Ouchy!”
“Wont Bill be mad?” Tom asked.
“No, were only dancing.”
While Brittnayy and Tom were dancing Bill came home. “What the ****?”
“Hey Bill” Brittnayy sat down.
“What in the world were you two just doing?”
“We were dancing, what did it look like?”
“I don’t know….”
“So what’s up?” Brittnayy stood up.
“Nothing. I just got back from shopping.”
“What did you get me?”
“Nothing…..”
Brittnayy grabbed Bill’s hand and drug him into her room. “I missed you…”
“I was only gone for an hour.” Bill replied
“An hour to long.” She lay on the bed, Bill lay next to her.
“Okay?”
“What’s wrong with you?” Brittnayy propped herself up with her hand.
“Nothing, it’s just I didn’t like seeing you dancing with Tom.”
“For god sakes he’s your freaking brother, and I love you not him!” Brittnayy yelled.
“I know! I love you too, but it was just surprising!”Bill yelled back!
The conversation turned into a big yelling fest. Brittnayy yelled, Bill yelled, and they both yelled. Bill grabbed Brittnayy and pulled her close to her, he tempted her by putting his lips only a centimeter away from hers. She pulled him in stealing a kiss. She kissed him again, the kiss grew deeper. Brittnayy didn’t feel any more anger; it was as if that one kiss erased her whole memory of the fight. Brittnayy pushed Bill on the bed….. And the rest was history.
Chapter 4!
Brittnayy walked out into the kitchen only to see all of the guys (except for Bill) sitting at the kitchen table. Tom sat there in his boxers eating a piece of chocolate cake. George and Gustav were already dressed and were eating a slightly healthier breakfast then Tom.
“Where’s Bill.” Tom asked.
“Still sleeping.” Brittnayy replied
“You guys had a busy night…..”
Brittnayy ignored him. She dug through the cupboards looking for a coffee mug but couldn’t seem to find one. When she couldn’t find one she walked over to Tom and stole his when he wasn’t looking. She was so tired she didn’t get to be until at least 1 in the morning last night. She fixed herself a cup of coffee hoping that it would wake her up.
“Do you want to go with us today?” Gustav asked.
“Me?”
“No the dude standing next to you! Yes you!”Gustav laughed
“Where you going?”
“Just out.”
“No I’ll pass, I’m kind of tired.”
“Okay.” He and George got up and left the apartment.
Brittnayy took a seat right across from Tom, seeing that he grabbed another piece of chocolate cake. “So what’s up buddy?” Brittnayy asked as cheerfully as she could.
“Oh nothing, I’m really tired, I think when I’m done with this chocolate cake I’m going to go back to sleep. Do you mind if I sleep in Gustav’s room?”
“No you can sleep in there, it doesn’t bother me.”
“Okay, night.” Tom walked out of the kitchen.
Brittnayy was thinking the same thing, she wanted to go to bed, but she couldn’t she had work in about an hour and she had to get ready. She got up and went into the bathroom. She set her coffee cup down and took off all her clothes making sure they were close to the shower, so when she got out she wouldn’t get them wet. She shut off the lights and stepped into the bathroom (yes she takes showers in the dark it’s quite calming). She let the water wash over her, she really was tired. She heard the bathroom door open. “Who ever you are get out, and if your Tom defiantly get out!” she exclaimed.
“It’s Bill and all I’m doing is taking a pee.”
“Okay”
“I love you!”
“I love you too” he left the bathroom.
Brittnayy hurried up and got washed up, and quickly got out. When she was all dried off she got dress as fast as she could. She rushed out of the room, stopping to look at herself in the mirror, she grabbed her car keys and left.
I hope you like it....
writeratheart412
June 20th, 2008, 12:39 PM
I wonder where she's going...I love it, keep up the good work! Can't wait for the fifth chapter! If you want to read my fanfic, It's called "A New Dawn".
Unknown598
June 20th, 2008, 01:14 PM
i still think its interesting *i have little word choice*
mehr bitte por favor ^_^ :D :mrgreen:
Unknown598
June 21st, 2008, 12:06 PM
:D
<3ByYourSide<3
June 21st, 2008, 12:29 PM
im loving this...
MORE PLEASE!
BrittnayySTFU
June 21st, 2008, 10:21 PM
So i had a slight case of writers block, but i got somthing, hope you like it.
LEAVE COMMENTS!
Chapter 5!
At work-
“Brittnayy, can you turn on the coffee maker please” Brittnayy’s co-worker Lindsay said.
Brittnayy looked over at Lindsay, who was sitting at a table talking on her phone. God Brittnayy hated Lindsay; she was the deffiniton of lazy. She would never help open up, or she would slack off while Brittnayy was left to do everything. Everything included- making the customers the drinks they ordered, taking the orders, cleaning up everything, and restocking. The only good thing about working at Starbucks was she got free coffee whenever she was on the clock.
“Oh, and I suppose you want me to get you a drink to.” Brittnayy shot back, “do it yourself, I’m busy.”
“What the ****?” Lindsay got up. “I do everything around here; you could at least do one thing.”
“You don’t do ****! I do everything, I take the orders, I make the orders, and I clean up! Mostly after you.” She yelled.
“I don’t need this!”
“Then quit! You don’t do anything anyways.”
“Whatever, I’m leaving!” Lindsay stormed out the door.
Brittnayy let out a sigh of relief. Finally some peace and quiet around here, no more laziness, and no more freaking back talking, Brittnayy thought to herself. Just then the bell on the door rang.
“Were not open yet.” Brittnayy said.
“Oh I’m not here to order anything, I’m here looking for a job.”
Brittnayy walked behind the counter and grabbed a piece of paper, “here’s an application sheet. You’re not lazy are you?”
“No…” she replied
“Good I’m glad to hear that, because if you would have said yes I would have taken that sheet right out of your hand and told you to leave.” They both laughed.
“Well here’s my application, hopfully i get the job. Bye.” The girl turned around and headed for the door.
Today is going to be a long *** day, Brittnayy thought to herself.
blackmoon91892
June 21st, 2008, 11:16 PM
Brit needs to write more!! even if she did just put up chapter five!!
tarnished-memory
June 22nd, 2008, 12:27 AM
Don't worry so much, you're doing a wonderful job with each chapter. =3
BrittnayySTFU
June 22nd, 2008, 11:45 AM
Thanks everyone for the comments
Keep reading.
BrittnayySTFU
June 22nd, 2008, 08:50 PM
Ughh no one is reading it!
Samantha<3Bill
June 23rd, 2008, 03:28 PM
I'm reading it.. I just haven't commented yet, but I think its awesome plz keep going.
Unknown598
June 23rd, 2008, 03:33 PM
im reading also...
i just forget where the post is and lose it and mmmmmmmm
I WILL KEEP READING! ^_^ :D :mrgreen:
BrittnayySTFU
June 23rd, 2008, 06:04 PM
I have flipping writers block.
And i need new characters
so if you want to be in it
fill this out.....
Name:
Age(what age you want to be)
Style:
Personality:
How you want to know me in the story:
Anything eles?
ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 23rd, 2008, 07:17 PM
NAME: Kelsey
AGE: 18
Style: mid-length black hair with bright pink streaks, tall, athletic body, kinda like Bill's style but not as much
Personality: fun, out-going, nice, friendly, nows hoiw to have a good time.
How you want to know me in the story: can i be one of your friends
i donno if you need this but my fav band member is Tom
BrittnayySTFU
June 23rd, 2008, 09:41 PM
Thanks Kelsey
I will put you in my story
BrittnayySTFU
June 23rd, 2008, 11:36 PM
I'm not writing untill
i get more replies!
blackmoon91892
June 24th, 2008, 01:56 PM
Name: Ariel
Age: 18
Style: medium length brown hair thats UBER layered
Personality: extreamly hyper and insane. loves everyone unless theres a good reason not to, and then if i dont like you, youll know it. reletivly shy around new people and ocd about even numbers and getting things done right
How you want to know me in the story: oh oh!! can i be the chick that applied to work at starbucks!? that'd be uber fun!! and if not....i guess ill be a friend!!
BrittnayySTFU
June 24th, 2008, 08:57 PM
Name: Ariel
Age: 18
Style: medium length brown hair thats UBER layered
Personality: extreamly hyper and insane. loves everyone unless theres a good reason not to, and then if i dont like you, youll know it. reletivly shy around new people and ocd about even numbers and getting things done right
How you want to know me in the story: oh oh!! can i be the chick that applied to work at starbucks!? that'd be uber fun!! and if not....i guess ill be a friend!!
I'll surprise you!
haha, you make my day,
you always comment my stuff when no one eles does!
blackmoon91892
June 24th, 2008, 09:14 PM
Name: Ariel
Age: 18
Style: medium length brown hair thats UBER layered
Personality: extreamly hyper and insane. loves everyone unless theres a good reason not to, and then if i dont like you, youll know it. reletivly shy around new people and ocd about even numbers and getting things done right
How you want to know me in the story: oh oh!! can i be the chick that applied to work at starbucks!? that'd be uber fun!! and if not....i guess ill be a friend!!
I'll surprise you!
haha, you make my day,
you always comment my stuff when no one eles does!i like to make other people happy.
xXxMandiixXx
June 24th, 2008, 09:35 PM
Name:Mandii
Age(what age you want to be)116 i want to be the youngling hehe
Style:punk/rock with long black straight hair with blue pink and purple highlights average weight and height bluey-grey eyes slighty tanned with snake bites
Personality:hyperactive outgoing serious wen need be caring loving romantic and highly trust worthy
How you want to know me in the story:i say a best friend
Anything eles?love marshmallows,sherbet, sugar in general
is a Camera-Wh*ore not in the bad way lolz just love taking picture of herself and her friends aswell
hope im in hehe love the story so far :)
<3 Mandii xx
BrittnayySTFU
June 24th, 2008, 10:55 PM
Ariel, I'm going to surprise you on what part you get....
blackmoon91892
June 24th, 2008, 11:08 PM
Ariel, I'm going to surprise you on what part you get....
oh god im scared now
BrittnayySTFU
June 24th, 2008, 11:11 PM
Why are you scared haha!
You're going to be a Funeral Director!
Ha, just kidding you will like you part i think,
When you make your apperance, your staying for the whole story
blackmoon91892
June 24th, 2008, 11:38 PM
Why are you scared haha!
You're going to be a Funeral Director!
Ha, just kidding you will like you part i think,
When you make your apperance, your staying for the whole story
ive learned to be scared of certain surprse situations
if you were to make me a funeral director, id kill you
YAY!! i get to stay in for the whole story!! hurry up and write so i can see what happens!! you shouldnt have writers block now! i can be very inspiring! now look what youve done. youve gotten me excited and i wont be able to sleep tonight
BrittnayySTFU
June 24th, 2008, 11:48 PM
I'm sorry my stupid writers block
is messing me up, dangit!
I kindof have an idea of what i want
to do, now only if my stupid
Word wasnt locked!
I think I'm going to start writing!
blackmoon91892
June 24th, 2008, 11:52 PM
I'm sorry my stupid writers block
is messing me up, dangit!
I kindof have an idea of what i want
to do, now only if my stupid
Word wasnt locked!
I think I'm going to start writing!YAY!! and you dont have to use word. i type mine straight onto the board and then copy and paste them to notepad and save them. notepad opens faster and makes smaller file sizes
BrittnayySTFU
June 24th, 2008, 11:56 PM
Thats what i'm doing now...
GummiWorms!
blackmoon91892
June 25th, 2008, 12:01 AM
Thats what i'm doing now...
GummiWorms!
omg your putting gummiworms in the chapter arent you? *gasp* will i be in contact with these gummiworms are some point?
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 12:02 AM
I have no Idea....
I just randomly wrote GummiWorms
blackmoon91892
June 25th, 2008, 12:06 AM
I have no Idea....
I just randomly wrote GummiWormsaww i thought you were giving me a hint...AH! can i have one?
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 12:22 AM
Name:Samantha
Age:15
Personality:Awsome, cool, fun,nice, funny
How I want 2 be known: I wanna b Tom's gf!!!! woohoo! lol.
Appperance, Brown hair, short, usually wearing band tshirts, and jeans w/ a hole in the knee
BTW. your writing is AWESOME.
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 12:24 AM
Oh, and I have a nose ring! woot.
xXo0BillKaulitz0oXx
June 25th, 2008, 12:25 AM
Post more please!
I like it!
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 12:29 AM
The reason I picked Tom's gf is because I think it would be an interesting charactor. And I was CREATIVE and was the only one who said it YAY ME! haha sorry. I'm just so dang proud of myself!!! :D :) ;) :P :lol: :!: :mrgreen: :geek: 8-) 8-) 8-)
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 12:40 AM
Chapter 6!
Brittnayy walked through the front door and threw her keys down on the end table. "I'm home!" she yelled.
She walked into the kitchen and opened the fridge.
What the heck is up with Gustav always having to take my water? she thought to herself.
"Is anybody home?" She walked into the kitchen only to see Bill sitting on the love seat nawing on somthing. "What the **** are you eating?" She looked at the container, which was filled with colorful gummies. "My GummiWorms! Where the **** did you get them?"
"Hidden Under the kitchen sink."
"Exactly, hidden..." She sat down next to him.
"Why did you hid them?" Bill asked turning the container towards Brittnayy.
"Because, I did'nt want anyone eating them, you know me and my cravings." she took a few Gummies.
"And, you know me and my cravings."
"Yeah, I guess I forgot how much we both like gummiworms."
"So how was your day today?" Bill asked trying to change the subject.
"Weird, you remember that Lindsay chick?"
"Yeah, why?"
"She went nuts today, she quit. After that I thought that I would be working alone for the rest of the month, but just then a girl walked through the door, and she needed a job..."
"Who?"
"Oh, I only got a quick look at her application; her name's Ariel, and she's 18, only one year younger then me, so I think that we could get along pretty well."
"Cool, you can get along with anyone so why would'nt you get along with her?"
"There are some people that I DO NOT get along with...*cough*Lindasy*cough*"
"Yeah her, nobody likes her."
"Exactly!" Brittnayy Giggled.
"Who ever likes her is insain!"
Brittnayy grabbed the container of GummiWorms, closed it, and put it back in the bag. She walked out of the room.
"Where are you going?" Bill shouted.
"Going to hide my gummiworms!" Brittnayy shouted back.
"I'll find them!"
Brittnayy walked into her room and searched for a place to hide her precious GummiWorms. Underwear drawer? Nein.. Under the bed? Nein.. Closet? Nein.... God dangit! Brittnayy walked around the room, and suddenly tripped. What the ****? There was a loose floorboard, she lifted it up. PERFECT! She threw the GummiWorms into the empty spave under the floorboard. She walked out into the livingroom again with the biggest smile on her face.
"What?" Bill asked.
"Oh, nothing. You are NEVER going to find my GummiWorms."
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 12:41 AM
This is really my first attempt at writing a good fan fic so i hope you like it. Leave feed back please
Brittnayy sat at her kitchen table looking at the notebook that contained the notes that her and Bill were writing back and forth the night before he had to go back to Germany to get ready for Tokio Hotel’s big European tour. She read the lines over and over again, just looking at Bill’s handwriting made her go weak in the knees. I was true, she really missed him. She missed Bill more then she had ever before.
Shut up and let me go... (Ringtone)
“Hello” Brittnayy set the notebook down.
“Yes, this is your therapist Mr. Mary’s secretary, I am just calling to tell you that we are upping your dosage for you bi-polar medication.” A male voice replied.
“Bill shut up. We both know that I do not have a therapist and that I don’t take medication.”
“How in the world do you always know that it’s me? I mean I can never prank call you but when you try to do it to me I never have a clue that it is actually you!”
“Babe I always know it’s you because I’m smart, and I can always prank call you without you finding out because you’re dimwitted.” Brittnayy giggled.
“That’s just rude.”
“I was kidding. I’m sorry Hun.”
“It’s okay. Anyways I was just calling because I wanted to tell you I miss you. The boys and I are in a cab, and I had a little time to call.”
“I miss you too, you don’t even know how much.”
“Well we’re here, so I will let you go.”
“Okay, Goodbye.”
“Bye.” The line went dead.
Brittnayy got up from the kitchen table and walked into the living room. She looked around the room and took in the scenery, she was glad that she was finally on her own, and that she had her own place. She hated living at her parent’s house. She didn’t miss it one bit, all of the rules, the curfew, and the food, she hated her mother’s cooking. She flopped herself on the couch and flicked on her big screen television. She let her eyes fall and she slowly fell asleep.
blackmoon91892
June 25th, 2008, 12:45 AM
i knew thered be gummiworms. and if Bill doesnt find them, i will. and that will be worse because youlll be all "HOWD YOU GET IN MY HOUSE!?" lol. im a nut.
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 12:46 AM
Haha you are not getting into my house!
I will put it on lock down!
tarnished-memory
June 25th, 2008, 12:47 AM
Gummiworms!
blackmoon91892
June 25th, 2008, 12:48 AM
Haha you are not getting into my house!
I will put it on lock down!
oh that wont stop me! im the Majik Ninja!!
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 12:48 AM
Gummiworms!
Yes GummiWorms,
I was craving some before i wrote it
so i decided to write about gummiworms
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 12:49 AM
Haha you are not getting into my house!
I will put it on lock down!
oh that wont stop me! im the Majik Ninja!!
I will change the hidding plave of them!
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 12:50 AM
How do we know when we get the partt lol!! I'm deing 2 know.
tarnished-memory
June 25th, 2008, 12:51 AM
Gummiworms!
Yes GummiWorms,
I was craving some before i wrote it
so i decided to write about gummiworms
I had a craving for eggrolls a while ago. Does that mean I should write a random story about eggrolls?
No. It doesn't.
But it worked for you. XD And poor Bill, what if he suffers from withdrawal without gummiworms?!
And Ariel will break in.
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 12:52 AM
How do we know when we get the partt lol!! I'm deing 2 know.
I will use you, i just have to think of
a good part for you, dont worry.
But i will use you!
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 12:53 AM
Gummiworms!
Yes GummiWorms,
I was craving some before i wrote it
so i decided to write about gummiworms
I had a craving for eggrolls a while ago. Does that mean I should write a random story about eggrolls?
No. It doesn't.
But it worked for you. XD And poor Bill, what if he suffers from withdrawal without gummiworms?!
And Ariel will break in.
Haha, Maybe you should write a story about eggrolls!
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 12:54 AM
YAY! I hope I get the part of Tom's gf lol!! Cuz I'm smarts and I thought of that hahah
blackmoon91892
June 25th, 2008, 12:54 AM
Haha you are not getting into my house!
I will put it on lock down!
oh that wont stop me! im the Majik Ninja!!
I will change the hidding plave of them!
oh that wont matter. we think the same, remember? whatever you come up with, i will think to look there. and if you acciently find the hiding place, so will i!
oh yeah and i think i will use you Britt...Alina needs a frined that doesnt live in the United States....give me a discription of your character!
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 12:55 AM
Haha, maybe.
Since it's summer i will be writing more
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 12:56 AM
Awsome. Good luck!
tarnished-memory
June 25th, 2008, 12:56 AM
Haha, Maybe you should write a story about eggrolls!
Maybe I will. It won't be very pretty though. XP
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 12:59 AM
Ariel-
Name:Brittnayy
Description- A very outgoing chicka, isnt mean unless needs to be, love playing practical jokes on people that are close to her. I have Medium length black brown hair, blue eyes(cant forget that!) i am pretty skinny, and i am 5'5"
Can i be Tommy's gf in your story?
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 12:59 AM
Ariel-
Name:Brittnayy
Description- A very outgoing chicka, isnt mean unless needs to be, love playing practical jokes on people that are close to her. I have Medium length black brown hair, blue eyes(cant forget that!) i am pretty skinny, and i am 5'5"
Can i be Tommy's gf in your story?
I already asked. Read above. Sorry, ur a little late.
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 01:01 AM
Woah, that sounded kinda mean when I re read that haha sorry :mrgreen:
blackmoon91892
June 25th, 2008, 01:01 AM
Ariel-
Name:Brittnayy
Description- A very outgoing chicka, isnt mean unless needs to be, love playing practical jokes on people that are close to her. I have Medium length black brown hair, blue eyes(cant forget that!) i am pretty skinny, and i am 5'5"
Can i be Tommy's gf in your story?
of course you can be Tom's gf. hey my frined Brittney says chicka too! OMG I FORGOT MY EYE COLOR!! you didnt want it, did you?
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 01:02 AM
Haha, Maybe you should write a story about eggrolls!
Maybe I will. It won't be very pretty though. XP
Haha, you toats should!
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 01:02 AM
Ariel-
Name:Brittnayy
Description- A very outgoing chicka, isnt mean unless needs to be, love playing practical jokes on people that are close to her. I have Medium length black brown hair, blue eyes(cant forget that!) i am pretty skinny, and i am 5'5"
Can i be Tommy's gf in your story?
of course you can be Tom's gf. hey my frined Brittney says chicka too! OMG I FORGOT MY EYE COLOR!! you didnt want it, did you?
Naw its fine!
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 01:04 AM
Wait I'm confuzzeled. Did she say she wanted 2 b Tom's gf in YOUR story or in this one. meep, help me out here. :P
tarnished-memory
June 25th, 2008, 01:05 AM
Brittnayy: When my creativity bar goes up. It doesn't function well late. XD
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 01:07 AM
Wait I'm confuzzeled. Did she say she wanted 2 b Tom's gf in YOUR story or in this one. meep, help me out here. :P
No I'm going to be Tom's girlfriend in Ariel's story.
haha, sorry about that.
When you read random parts of
Ariels and mein convos
you get really confused haha
blackmoon91892
June 25th, 2008, 01:07 AM
Wait I'm confuzzeled. Did she say she wanted 2 b Tom's gf in YOUR story or in this one. meep, help me out here. :P
Brittnayy, the writer of this story, wants to be Tom's gf in my stroy, 1000 Oceans
xXxMandiixXx
June 25th, 2008, 01:08 AM
loving it
continue!
btw did i get a part ?its ok if i didnt :)
<3 Mandii xx
blackmoon91892
June 25th, 2008, 01:09 AM
Wait I'm confuzzeled. Did she say she wanted 2 b Tom's gf in YOUR story or in this one. meep, help me out here. :P
No I'm going to be Tom's girlfriend in Ariel's story.
haha, sorry about that.
When you read random parts of
Ariels and mein convos
you get really confused hahayeah sometimes i get confused. but sometimes thats just because it late and my brain doesnt funtion right and neither do my contacts so words look like different words and yeah....but then sometime just dont make sense...to outsider....its inside stuff....
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 01:11 AM
I was talking about if
anyone trys to read our convos
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 01:11 AM
loving it
continue!
btw did i get a part ?its ok if i didnt :)
<3 Mandii xx
I will put you in my story
I just have to figure everything out!
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 01:12 AM
Okay, just forget what I said lol. Continue... SORRY GUYS :P :D
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 01:13 AM
What are you talking about?
blackmoon91892
June 25th, 2008, 01:15 AM
I was talking about if
anyone trys to read our convos
i know!! that didnt confuse me! i was just saying that sometimes even i get confused by them....so it would deffinatly confuse an outsider.
when i wrote down your bio i remembered that i measured myself earlier. IM 5' 3" NOW!!! I GREW HALF AN INCH SINCE THE LAST TIME I MEASURED MYSELF!! AND I HAVE NO IDEA WHEN THAT WAS BUT I DONT CARE!! I GOT TALLER!!!!
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 01:16 AM
Yeaaaa for growing taller!
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 01:17 AM
Okay, just forget what I said lol. Continue... SORRY GUYS :P :D
What are you talking about?
tarnished-memory
June 25th, 2008, 01:17 AM
when i wrote down your bio i remembered that i measured myself earlier. IM 5' 3" NOW!!! I GREW HALF AN INCH SINCE THE LAST TIME I MEASURED MYSELF!! AND I HAVE NO IDEA WHEN THAT WAS BUT I DONT CARE!! I GOT TALLER!!!!
Since you said that. . . I get the feeling I'm getting shorter. =_=
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 01:19 AM
I'm about 5'5"
I feel like I'm really tall now!
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 01:20 AM
Ahh. Just forget it. lol I'm really confusing myself I'm tryint to talk on the phone, aim, talk to the person next to me and read at the same time. i thought she was talking 2 meh but she was talking 2 u lol.Never mind. I'm sorry. :lol:
tarnished-memory
June 25th, 2008, 01:20 AM
I think I've barely hit five feet.
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 01:21 AM
Ahh. Just forget it. lol I'm really confusing myself I'm tryint to talk on the phone, aim, talk to the person next to me and read at the same time. i thought she was talking 2 meh but she was talking 2 u lol.Never mind. I'm sorry. :lol:
Ohkay!
I think I've barely hit five feet.
Wow now i feel really tall...
blackmoon91892
June 25th, 2008, 01:22 AM
Ahh. Just forget it. lol I'm really confusing myself I'm tryint to talk on the phone, aim, talk to the person next to me and read at the same time. i thought she was talking 2 meh but she was talking 2 u lol.Never mind. I'm sorry. :lol:
omg i hate doing that much stuff at once. i once tried to have 5 convos at once and watch tv...and three of the convos where with the same person
tarnished-memory
June 25th, 2008, 01:22 AM
I think I've barely hit five feet.
Wow now i feel really tall...
You should.
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 01:23 AM
Hahah. yah. lol I understand, thats crazy.
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 01:24 AM
But like there's this guy in my school
He's like 6'9" or somthing
all i know is he has to duck
to get into my aunts house...
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 01:24 AM
Hahah. yah. lol I understand, thats crazy.
i'm crazy too...
I need a new idea for chapter 7....
tarnished-memory
June 25th, 2008, 01:25 AM
But like there's this guy in my school
He's like 6'9" or somthing
all i know is he has to duck
to get into my aunts house...
*feels self shrinking* ****. . .
Chapter idea. . . er. . . hmm. . .
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 01:29 AM
Yeah he scares the sxit out of me
I was playing a game and
my back was to the kitchen
i hear the fridge open so i turn around
there he is rumaging through my aunts fridge
I jump really high off the chair
and fall....
tarnished-memory
June 25th, 2008, 01:39 AM
*laughs*
I've done that a lot and its usually when my dad comes back into the house.
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 01:40 AM
Hmmm,
I can think of anything for the freaking 7th chapter!
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 01:49 AM
I think i have an idea!
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 02:45 PM
Thanks everyone for the feedback
It's acually inspiring me to write more....
That and Ariel's constant begging to keep going,
because she can't wait to see what happens next.
(Sometimes i think that girls has no patience
what so ever.)
But right now I am write chapter 7,
and it should be up sometime later today,
Keep sending in your applications(if that what you want to call it)
To be part of the story.
Again, thank yo so much!
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 03:04 PM
Ahh. I can't wait. YAY!!
Syd-Syd
June 25th, 2008, 06:31 PM
Heh, I like your fanfic so far.
Your style is amuseing.
ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 25th, 2008, 06:35 PM
please update soon.
......when do we get to be in it?????
~*Kelsey*~
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 07:16 PM
I will update soon,
I have to sort everything out
with the characters right now
but you will be in it,
i have to go back through
and see who all wants to be in it.
blackmoon91892
June 25th, 2008, 08:18 PM
Thanks everyone for the feedback
It's acually inspiring me to write more....
That and Ariel's constant begging to keep going,
because she can't wait to see what happens next.
(Sometimes i think that girls has no patience
what so ever.)
But right now I am write chapter 7,
and it should be up sometime later today,
Keep sending in your applications(if that what you want to call it)
To be part of the story.
Again, thank yo so much!
there are very few things i have the ability to wait for
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 08:38 PM
Ariel, trust me i know.
blackmoon91892
June 25th, 2008, 10:34 PM
Ariel, trust me i know.are you writing? do not make me use pics of Bill amd instead of the stupid smilies over on the side here.....and if i have to ill get pics of Ville Valo making faces...and thsoe can be scary
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 10:52 PM
I MADE A FANFIC!! its under the name "00>A twist in a tail<33" go read if u get a chance!
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 10:54 PM
Always remember to put the lid on the blender before turning it on.
Brittnayy walked out of the kitchen with some kind of pink goo dripping from her hair and all over her shirt. Ariel burst out laughing.
"What happened?" She asked.
"This is what happens when you tell me to make smoothies at 3 in the morning!"
Ever since Ariel started working at starbucks she kind of grew on Brittnayy. Her And Ariel were best friends now. And Brittnayy thought she would'nt like her.....
"I'm sorry i had a straw berry craving!"
"Oh... SO YOU HAD ME MAKE A SMOOTHIE!"
"You were up...."
"We were both up, and you could have just eaten some strawberries."
"Is the smoothie done?"
"Ughh!" Brittnayy stormed down the hall and into her room.
She went into her bathroom and flipped her head into the bathtub underneath the faucet. She turned on the water and scrubbed her hair to rid it of the pink goop. She turned the faucet off and graded a somthing to dry her hair. She looked down at what she grabbed and just dried her hair with; it was a pair of Bill's boxers.
What the ****? Does he know how to clean up anything!?
She walked out into her bedroom and grabbed a new shirt to change into. She ended up grabbing a plan black one. She walked back into the living room, jumped over the back of the couch and flopped on the couch.
"Ouch!" Tom screamed
Brittnayy looked under her. "Sorry did'nt hear you come through the door. How was your night?"
"Good, und yours?" He said.
"Oh good. I tried to make a smoothie for Ariel and got pink goopie stuff on me, so i washed it out of my hair, und then i dried it with Bill's boxers."
Tom laughed. "Can you get off of me, please."
"Just because you said please." She hopped off of Tom and sat on the floor facing him. "I've never heard you say please to me."
"Really?"
"Awww, Tommy is warming up to me." She smiled.
"Yeah, I know..."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`
"What do you want for Breakfast guys?" Brittnayy sat on the counter. "Ariel don't even say smoothies, I'm never going to make a smoothie for you again."
"I'm not hungry anyways." Ariel sat in a chair at the table.
"Can I get an egg?" Gustav asked.
"Yeah, just wait till i see what everybody eles wants."
"EGGS!" Everyone eles said at the same time.
"Okay, eggs it is."
She got off the counter and kneeled down to get a frying pan. She walked over to the fridge to get the eggs, but she could'nt open the door(mainly because a man with big poofy hair was blocking it.)"Bill move, I need to make the eggs."
"No!"
"Bill ple-" Before she could finish she was over Bill's shoulder and on her way out the door. She had dropped the pan behind her(which smashed Tom's toe). "Bye guys! I guess I have no will anymore!" She grabbed the door, still on Bill's shoulder, and closed it.
Before leaving the hallway Brittnayy herd Tom scream."I think Ariel steped on Tom's toe."
"Knowing her, she probably did..."
tarnished-memory
June 25th, 2008, 11:04 PM
*begins laughing* That was uber special!
And I could really see Ariel doing that.
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 11:04 PM
HAHHA. that was good!! Poor Tom gets jumped on, his toe crushed, whats next?! OMG HURRY UP AND POST chapter8!!!!!!
blackmoon91892
June 25th, 2008, 11:05 PM
I LOVE STRAWBERRIES!!! and i would so be too lazy to make my own smoothie....and you know what i would do now that you have dropped a pan on Tom's toe and Bill has carried you off? i would laugh at Tom and probably step on it to make it worse and then i would follow you, still laughing with a video camera so i could laugh at it whenever i wanted (im trying to give you ideas, just so you know)
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 11:05 PM
HAHHA. that was good!! Poor Tom gets jumped on, his toe crushed, whats next?! OMG HURRY UP AND POST chapter8!!!!!!
Don't rush me girl, I am human
and I am alreay multitasking!
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 11:06 PM
Ariel, haha that would be hilarious i'm going to fix chapter 7 real quick!
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 11:07 PM
Aww, poor tommy I would be laughing sooo hard yet hugging tom! Your like amazingg gurll! Keep up the good work. Aerial your awesome, smoothies at 3am hahah! that's crazy. Somthing I would totally b doing!
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 11:10 PM
Yeah Ariel is nuts,
but that why I LOVE HER!
tarnished-memory
June 25th, 2008, 11:11 PM
Your revision was just icing on the cake. ^.^
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 11:11 PM
Do u know each other out side of the site?
blackmoon91892
June 25th, 2008, 11:11 PM
Ariel, haha that would be hilarious i'm going to fix chapter 7 real quick!
HAHA!! I STEPPED OON TOM'S TOE!! oh dear...i see revenge in the future.....things could get ugly...oh you could do that.....a war between me and Tom....and you could get caught in the cross fire!! haha!!
blackmoon91892
June 25th, 2008, 11:12 PM
Do u know each other out side of the site?
no we dont actually. we just mat a few days ago, actually
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 11:14 PM
Ariel we met like a week and a half ago
But i still wuv you!
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 11:14 PM
Oh okay, lol haha that would be funny like a revenge thing! Ahh I can't wait 2 get into this storyy. This is amazing.
blackmoon91892
June 25th, 2008, 11:16 PM
Ariel we met like a week and a half ago
But i still wuv you!I HAVENT EVEN BEE ON THE BOARD THAT LONG!!! WE MET SIX DAYS AGO, WHEN I JOINED!!! unless you actually live in where i live and arent telling me.....but even then i havent met anyone new in......ummmm....two months?
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 11:17 PM
Ariel we met like a week and a half ago
But i still wuv you!I HAVENT EVEN BEE ON THE BOARD THAT LONG!!! WE MET SIX DAYS AGO, WHEN I JOINED!!! unless you actually live in where i live and arent telling me.....but even then i havent met anyone new in......ummmm....two months?
LOL. oh yah she has been secretly stalking you. hhhahah.jk
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 11:18 PM
Oh well I'm not good with how long i've known people!
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 11:20 PM
Nether am I hahaha. your like "I MET YOU A WEEK AND A HALF AGO!" and she hasn't even been a member for a week and a half. wow u guys are crazzy. lol, but it's all gravvy ur bolth still awesome.
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 11:21 PM
I'm going to write chapter 8 now...
I'm in a good mood.
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 11:22 PM
I'm going to write chapter 8 now...
I'm in a good mood.
YESSSS!!!
tarnished-memory
June 25th, 2008, 11:22 PM
YAY!
blackmoon91892
June 25th, 2008, 11:27 PM
Oh well I'm not good with how long i've known people!
you could have looked at how long ive been a freaking member!!! i wish i had exact dates for all my friends!!
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 11:33 PM
Yah that would be pretty awesome.
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 11:34 PM
Aerial where are u from?
blackmoon91892
June 25th, 2008, 11:38 PM
Aerial where are u from?Georgia
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 11:39 PM
Swweett!! I'm right under you. lol!
blackmoon91892
June 25th, 2008, 11:40 PM
Swweett!! I'm right under you. lol!
gott your climate even hotter than mine. i dont think i could stand living in Florida. i hate Georgia enough as it is
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 11:41 PM
I hate the hot weather I LOVEEE the cold and rainyness I wanna move to England where its like cold and rainy!!
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 11:43 PM
Chapter8
Bill finally put Brittnayy down when they got outside. He carried her down 3 flights of stairs.
"Thank you"
"Your welcome." Bill opened the door for Brittnayy and motioned her to get in.
"Aww, how sweet." Brittnayy kissed Bill on the cheek, and she got into the car.
Bill got into the drivers seat and started the car.
"So where are we going?"Brittnayy asked.
"No where."
"Whatever...."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~
"Tom get out of here, that candle smells horride! With a capital freaking H!" Ariel yelled.
"Why is the smell bothering you?" Tom asked.
"No, i just said it smelled horrid because i like the smell! Get out of here!"
"No..."
Ariel got up and walked over to Tom."Get out!"
Tom didn't budge.
"I can't belive you!" She drew her leg back and kicked Tom in the shin.
Tom squealed and hopped out of the living room.Stupid Ariel, I will get my revenge.
[i]Ughh! I cannot see how Miranda can stand him!
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 11:45 PM
awesome! whose Miranda?
blackmoon91892
June 25th, 2008, 11:46 PM
HAHA!!! the war has begun!! and Tom had better watch himself before i aim higher (i actually rarely aim for the shin anymore. i go straight for the testicals)
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 11:47 PM
Haha,
Oh miranda is my friend...
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 11:47 PM
No i mean like who is she in the story? lol.
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 11:48 PM
Oh, she really hasnt come in yet
But she will be soon you will just have to wait...
Samantha<3Bill
June 25th, 2008, 11:49 PM
Oh okay.
BrittnayySTFU
June 25th, 2008, 11:52 PM
Yeah, instead of Tom's gf
do you want to be George or Gustav's?
Because when i was planning this story,
i promised my friend she could
be Tom's Gf....
But, I toats forgot about that.
BrittnayySTFU
June 26th, 2008, 12:19 AM
I guess not...
Samantha<3Bill
June 26th, 2008, 12:21 AM
It's okay. Ahh that's hard, umm I guess Gustav :? Not that I don't love them but I love Bill and Tom more 8-) :lol: :)
Samantha<3Bill
June 26th, 2008, 12:22 AM
Oh I'm sorry, I was in the middle of writing the second chpter to my fanfic lol. You should read it I need some feedback, and I'm looking for new ideas and charactors AERIAL TOO!!!
BrittnayySTFU
June 26th, 2008, 12:27 AM
Gustav okay.
Sorry, i just forgot that i promised
Miranda....
Samantha<3Bill
June 26th, 2008, 12:28 AM
No probs. :)
BrittnayySTFU
June 26th, 2008, 12:30 AM
Man not many people read this!
Samantha<3Bill
June 26th, 2008, 12:31 AM
Umm, I count as like 20. hahah.
Samantha<3Bill
June 26th, 2008, 12:31 AM
Not alot are reading mine
I just had my friend read it and she said she loved it but she dosen't have a account. I sent the link to her.
tarnished-memory
June 26th, 2008, 12:40 AM
Oh I'm sorry, I was in the middle of writing the second chpter to my fanfic lol. You should read it I need some feedback, and I'm looking for new ideas and charactors AERIAL TOO!!!
Hey, just to let you know. . . her name is spelt Ariel, not Aerial.
blackmoon91892
June 26th, 2008, 12:41 AM
I COUNT AS 100 PEOPLE SINCE I HAVE THE ENERGY OF THAT MANY PEOPLE!! HAHAHA!! and when im on some kind of sugar, im 1000 ocea-people!! (yeah...what the **** did i eat that had sugar besides the oreos......? )
Samantha<3Bill
June 26th, 2008, 12:43 AM
Yah, I'm oober hyper 2! But I'm about 2 read urs Ariel!
Samantha<3Bill
June 26th, 2008, 01:06 AM
Hahah I LIKE IT its good. I have to write ch.3 of mine my friend courtney wants a next one I need 2 new charactors so I need Brittnayy's and Ariel's bio thing like we did the age, description of style and personality and eye color :) and order of the band u like from best (bill of course)to the end like my order of likness is BILL then TOM then GUSTI then Georg
Samantha<3Bill
June 26th, 2008, 01:26 AM
Whose going to the VIP chat on monday?
BrittnayySTFU
June 26th, 2008, 01:31 AM
Me.
Samantha<3Bill
June 26th, 2008, 01:36 AM
YAY. have u ever been 2 one? like do u know what goes on?
BrittnayySTFU
June 26th, 2008, 02:08 AM
I have no idea...
blackmoon91892
June 26th, 2008, 10:00 AM
Areil's going but the only thing ive ever seen that was close to one was one with Nikki Sixx that lasted eight minutes and was prerecorded or whatever you want to call it...like they asked him the questions and he answered and then later they put it up and just made it look like he was there typing it at that moment
Samantha<3Bill
June 26th, 2008, 12:20 PM
That sucks!! But like I don't know what 2 say lol how does it work is it like a big chat room cuz like evryone is going to be talking at once.
blackmoon91892
June 26th, 2008, 12:35 PM
That sucks!! But like I don't know what 2 say lol how does it work is it like a big chat room cuz like evryone is going to be talking at once. the fans wont be talking. if its like a chat room, then one of the questions that was picked will pop up and the TH will answer it. i hope they havent already answered them and are just doing what Nikki Sixx did...
Samantha<3Bill
June 26th, 2008, 07:25 PM
Yah, but then again this is TOKIO HOTEL and they are really like into there fans like REALLY into there fans so I don't think I can see Bill and Tom doing prerecorded shizz
blackmoon91892
June 26th, 2008, 07:49 PM
Yah, but then again this is TOKIO HOTEL and they are really like into there fans like REALLY into there fans so I don't think I can see Bill and Tom doing prerecorded shizz
i know thats what im hoping. if i find out it was pre recorded or something like that, im posting a comment on their myspace that says "I THOUGH YOU LOVED US!!"
Samantha<3Bill
June 26th, 2008, 09:07 PM
Hahahah. awesome.
tears.dont.fall
June 26th, 2008, 10:33 PM
...if georg is still free...i want him...just so i can call him Awesome Possum...like in my story Break Away.
name: Sy
Age: 17
Style: unique...like bill's...but with tom's hats...
black hair with multicolored streaks...snakebites...green eyes.
anything else:...um...an odd obsession with vampires...and pixi stix
attitude: dont tick her off...she's a blackbelt in taekwondoe...mello and very sweet despite her outward appearance
Samantha<3Bill
June 26th, 2008, 11:11 PM
Sorry, I would love to put you in but Georg is taken by my friend Rachel, but I will be soon to hosting people to play gustav's are you interested?
Samantha<3Bill
June 26th, 2008, 11:12 PM
P.S I FREAKING LOVE VAMPIRES AND SNAKEBITES so ur on my awesome person list lol!! you can still be in the story if you want like one of my friends and you can call him awesome possum, you can be like maybe there manager or something?
Samantha<3Bill
June 26th, 2008, 11:13 PM
Ahh. I wanna c ur hairr!! and pixi stixs are like amazing.
Samantha<3Bill
June 26th, 2008, 11:17 PM
WOAH. I thought I was on my fanfic!!!! sorry guys lol! Sorry brittnayy!
Samantha<3Bill
June 26th, 2008, 11:27 PM
LOL. I was just at my computer replying to messages and I guess when I hit backspace it took me back to here and I thought I was on my fanfic comments!!! wow. I'm smart.
BrittnayySTFU
June 27th, 2008, 02:39 PM
...if georg is still free...i want him...just so i can call him Awesome Possum...like in my story Break Away.
name: Sy
Age: 17
Style: unique...like bill's...but with tom's hats...
black hair with multicolored streaks...snakebites...green eyes.
anything else:...um...an odd obsession with vampires...and pixi stix
attitude: dont tick her off...she's a blackbelt in taekwondoe...mello and very sweet despite her outward appearance
Yeah you can have Georg
tears.dont.fall
June 27th, 2008, 11:37 PM
...if georg is still free...i want him...just so i can call him Awesome Possum...like in my story Break Away.
name: Sy
Age: 17
Style: unique...like bill's...but with tom's hats...
black hair with multicolored streaks...snakebites...green eyes.
anything else:...um...an odd obsession with vampires...and pixi stix
attitude: dont tick her off...she's a blackbelt in taekwondoe...mello and very sweet despite her outward appearance
Yeah you can have Georg
b*tchin'
BrittnayySTFU
June 27th, 2008, 11:38 PM
Yup,
Now i just have to find when to put put you in...
BrittnayySTFU
June 28th, 2008, 01:41 AM
Chapter 9!
"Stay here!" Brittnayy said, Slamming the car door behind her.
She ran up the drive way to house 487, stormed through the front door, and run up the stairs. She poked her head through the doorway of the first bedroom. "Miranda?"
A girl with long blonde hair stuck her head up from underneath the blankets. "Ughh!"
Brittnayy and Miranda were best friends, they have been since 8th grade. They shared most of their first- First concert, first HUGE party, first allnighter, and so on.
Brittnayy walked over to the end of the Be, Miranda's feet were sticking out from underneath the covers.Do I really have to do this?
Miranda moaned, "Five more minutes!"
Brittnayy didn;t respond. She grabbed Miranda's feet and started pulling.
"What the he-" Before she could finish she was laying face first on the floor. "I'm awake now!"
"Good grab you bathingsuit and meet me in the car. Oh yeah, Tom is waiting for you!"
"Oh! My baby!"
"Yeah..... Your baby." Brittnay left the room.
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I'm not done I am finishing it!
tears.dont.fall
June 28th, 2008, 01:52 AM
xD nice!
BrittnayySTFU
June 28th, 2008, 01:53 AM
Haha thanks!
BrittnayySTFU
June 28th, 2008, 09:42 PM
PART NINE IS UP BUT NOBODY CARES!
blackmoon91892
June 28th, 2008, 09:49 PM
i care!! i just cant read right now cuz Munchkin will get bored
BrittnayySTFU
June 28th, 2008, 10:17 PM
well ahdfdaskjfads to that purple chick!
blackmoon91892
June 29th, 2008, 11:19 AM
well ahdfdaskjfads to that purple chick!
lol she was all "whatd i do to her!?" :lol:
*glomps* i lo0o0o0ove yo0o0o0o to0o0o!!
BrittnayySTFU
June 29th, 2008, 02:05 PM
I Love You too.....
Well it's not that long, its only the begging of the chapter....
Samantha<3Bill
June 29th, 2008, 08:09 PM
It was good!! Keep up the good work.
blackmoon91892
June 30th, 2008, 12:53 PM
"oh my baby!"
lol that was funny
BrittnayySTFU
June 30th, 2008, 12:59 PM
yeah haha
tears.dont.fall
July 2nd, 2008, 02:18 AM
miss brittany...if you want...just make me some random person who chases fangirls away from a cafe that i could possibly work in?
hint hint nudge nudge say no more squire
SAY NO MORE!
xD monty python....i saw spamalot...it was ah maze zing.
ooo and pweese update soon
BrittnayySTFU
July 2nd, 2008, 09:23 PM
CHAPTER 10!
Why the **** does he have to take so long in the bathroom? All I wanted to do was go out with him, along with his brother and Miranda.
Brittnayy heard the door to the bathroom sqeak open. "Tom get out of here!" she heard Bill say.
She walked around the corner, only to find Tom standing in front of the bathroom door. His noes only centimeters away from it. He walked away. Brittnayy walked to where Tom had just been standing and put her hand on the door handle.
I hope he's decent.
She turned the door handle, and surprisingly it was unlocked. She pushed it open and squeezed herself threw the doorway. "Oh mein gott!" She screamed. "Don't you think you could have opened a window so you don't die from hairspray fumes?"
"Oh I hadn't noticed a difference." He set the can of hairspray down.
"Are you almost ready?"
"Yeah I just got done."
"Then lets go." She grabbed his hand and dragged him out of the bathroom and out of her apartment."
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"Are we there yet?" Tom whined in the back seat.
"Yes, we are about 2 minutes away from the resturant." Brittnayy look at Tom throught the rearveiw mirror.
"Thank God!" he yelled.
Bill turned around and glared at his brother. "Shut up!"
"What!?" Tom asked.
"Just get back to making out with your 'woman'."
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Brittnayy pulled her car up next to the curb and stepped out. She quickly closed the door and slammed herself agains the car. A semi had just went past and almost hit her. She walked to the other side of the car where Bill, Miranda, and Tom waited. They staired at her.
"what!?" yelled.
Bill pointed down. She looked. When the semi had flew passed the gust of wind caused her dress to fly up, and now she was standing there exposing herself...
"Shiesse!" She straightened her dress. "Let's go inside. She grabbed Bill's hand and lead them inside.
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"Table for four."Bill told the man standing at the podium.
The man gathered four menu's "Right this way."
The room was very dimly lit, and Brittnayy could hardly see. "Bill, I forgot to put in my contacts today."
Bill grabbed her hand. "Just follow me."
Brittnayy did just that.
"Here are your seats, your waiter will be out in a moment." The short stubby man walked away.
Brittnayy took a seat next to Bill and across from Miranda. "I havn't been to this place since I was a child."
"Me either." Miranda added.
"Remember when we ALWAYS used to come here?"
"Ye--." Miranda squeaked and then squiggled.
Brittnayy gave her a weird look. "So Bill you guys are leaving tommarrow... How was your time spent at my house?"
"Oh, you know.... I don't want to leave!" he jumped on Brittnayy and pulled her into a bear hug.
"Bill it's only for two months, you go to Europe do your shows, and then come back. I'm not going anywhere."
"Yeah.. But, I was think..." He didn't finish.
"Okay you can finish that sentance later than."
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Miranda and Brittnayy talked so did the twins. The only diffrence bettween the two groups were, The girls talked none stop, and the boys stop and shared a few look and moments in silence.
Brittnayy looked over. Bill and Tom were in one of there silent modes, exchanging looks. Brittnayy couldn't read either one of there facial expressions. "So, what are you guys doing!?"
Bill slowly turned his head towards Brittnayy. "Oh, noth-"
He was cut off by Tom.
"Bill wants to ask you something Brittnayy!"
Brittnayy's mouth grew dry.
What's he going to ask? Will I have the right answer?"
Bill cleared his throat. "Yes. Thank you Tom." Bill turned towards Brittnayy once again. "Since I don't want to be away from you so long, and you don't want to be away from me, I can up with an idea...." he paused.
"Well spit it out already!" Brittnayy slapped his lap... really hard.
"Do you want to go on tour with tokio hotel?"
Brittnayy jumped out of her seat and started jumping around. She was attracting alot of attention. "Yes! Yes! YES!" She belted out.
"Can you sit down!?" Tom asked.
Brittnayy stopped bouncing up and down and took her seat again. "Killjoy!" She stuck her tongue out at Tom.
He rolled his eyes.
"I'm going on tour too!" Miranda butted in. "Now we are going to be together all of the time."
Brittnayy bit her tongue so she wouldn't cause another scene.
[i] This is going to be amazing!
blackmoon91892
July 2nd, 2008, 09:27 PM
YAY!!!! my fav part we the dress
BrittnayySTFU
July 2nd, 2008, 09:30 PM
I loved the dress part!
tears.dont.fall
July 2nd, 2008, 10:25 PM
YAY!!!! good update.
tarnished-memory
July 2nd, 2008, 10:39 PM
Yays!
I would've said something sooner, but I've been dragged away from the 'puter so many times.
Loved it. =3
BrittnayySTFU
July 3rd, 2008, 02:56 AM
Thank you!
tears.dont.fall
July 4th, 2008, 02:35 AM
more please!
^^
blackmoon91892
July 4th, 2008, 01:34 PM
*bangs forks on table* MORE!!!
xXKillerxQueenXx
July 4th, 2008, 01:56 PM
Post more soon, or I will be forced to throw a cheap plastic spork at whoever gets in my way.
BrittnayySTFU
July 4th, 2008, 04:20 PM
Okay okay, I will update this one...
I was going to do a rewrite of this,
but nobody is looking at it or reading it.
so i guess i will keep doing this one.
tears.dont.fall
July 4th, 2008, 06:06 PM
^^
ive been reading it for awhile
^^
i like it
^^
BrittnayySTFU
July 4th, 2008, 07:13 PM
Reading this one?
Yeah some have been, I know people lerk around
reading it. But don't even bother to comment
on what they think...
I have to write my POV, then i will write another chapter for this one.
tears.dont.fall
July 4th, 2008, 07:59 PM
yep yep and ok...if you ever get writers block..i can give you a hand
BrittnayySTFU
July 5th, 2008, 12:15 AM
IWill have to check into that.
Haha
BrittnayySTFU
July 5th, 2008, 09:16 PM
CHAPTER 11!
Brittnayy sat on the curb looking up at all the boys packing the suitcases into the care. "Are you sure they are all going to fit?" She asked looking at the 4 remaining suitcases sitting next to her.
All together there were about seven suitcases. Her and Bill shared suitcase making that a total of 3. Tom had two to him self, one for all of his hats, and another for his clothes. Gustav and Georg only had one.
"I'm pretty sure that we can fit seven suitcases in the trunk of your car." Tom looked at her.
Her car wasn't very big but it wasn't small either.It was a spur of the moment kind of deal. She was looking at cars with her best friend Jessica and wasn't planing on buying one for herself... Untill she spotted her dream car. A red 2007 Shelby GT Mustange. It even had the white stripe on it. She just couldn't resist it. So she bought it.
"Okay, and if it doesnt it can go in the back seat with you, George, and Guastav." She giggled.
"Yeah, yeah, yeah."
Brittnayy put her head to her knees and closed her eyes.
'Babe, you ready to go?" Bill asked.
"What!?'
"You must have fell asleep, we got all the stuff in the trunk and we are ready to go."
"Yeah, let's go." She let the three boys get in the back and then got in the drivers seat. Bill getting in soon after. She started the car and they were off to the New York airport.
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"This place is huge!" Brittnayy squealed while looking around the airport.
"Yeah It is." Bill put his arm around her.
"Where are we meeting Miranda?"
"Umm, at the food court." Tom butted in.
"THEY HAVE A FOOD COURT HERE!?"
"Yeah..." All four of the boys said in unison.
"Sweet, I'm starving." She ran off into a random direction. The boys were right behind her.
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Burger King... McDonalds... Burger King.... McDonalds...
"The **** with it, I'll get both!" She said out loud.
She ran to burger king first ordering just a Whopper, because BK's fries are nasty. Then ran over to McDonald's and ordered a Big Mac with a large fry... She went back to the table and sat down.
"You are hungry..." Tom said looking at all the food on her tray.
She stuck her tongue out. "If you want some fries take some."
He grabbed a hand full of fries and shoved them in his mouth.
"Yeah, I'm the hungry one.." She rolled her eyes.
"Shut up!" Tom said through a mouthfull of french fries.
"Ew Tom ew!" she wiped her shirt off. "Please, next time don't talk with your mouthfull. I would rather not get bathed in french fries. I perfer water and soap!"
Bill giggled.
"Oh you think that's funny huh?" She grabbed a fry and flicked it at him.
'Hey that's not nice."
'Sorry, I'm know not to be nice."
'I guess." He leaned over and kissed her cheeck.
Brittnayy blushed, then looked over to she a very short girl with blonde hair walking. She reconized the walk of the girl.
"Miranda!" She got up and ran towards the blonde haired girl, and tackled hugged her.
"Brittnayy..." Miranda commented. "It's nice to see you to."
"Yeah come back and eat with us while we wait till it's time to head to the plane."
They both walked back to the table.
BrittnayySTFU
July 6th, 2008, 12:21 AM
Wowzers nobody is reading it...
tears.dont.fall
July 6th, 2008, 02:17 AM
I AM
^^
yay! good update
^^
BrittnayySTFU
July 6th, 2008, 04:23 PM
I AM
^^
yay! good update
^^
Well thankith you.
Unknown598
July 6th, 2008, 05:20 PM
I AM
^^
yay! good update
^^
i AM DOS!!
:mrgreen:
tears.dont.fall
July 6th, 2008, 05:24 PM
^^
anytime brittanyy...anytime
BrittnayySTFU
July 6th, 2008, 06:41 PM
Haha yeah...
tears.dont.fall
July 6th, 2008, 07:13 PM
whats wrong?
BrittnayySTFU
July 6th, 2008, 07:46 PM
Nothings wrong..
my grandma just kept inturupting me...
I hate when people wont leave me alone.
Oh, and my friend miranda was over...
So that was another problem.
blackmoon91892
July 6th, 2008, 10:14 PM
french fry bath!!! that was s good chappie!! even if the thought of food is making me sick!!
tarnished-memory
July 6th, 2008, 10:20 PM
*feels bad for not being on*
I took a long time to finally read it. . . but I loved it! The whole food scene was adorable!
BrittnayySTFU
July 6th, 2008, 11:22 PM
Thanks guys haha!
You guys keep me writing!
BrittnayySTFU
July 7th, 2008, 03:40 AM
CHAPTER 12!
"Can I have some orange juice?" Brittnayy asked looking up at the uniformed lady standing above her.
"Anything else?" The lady asked in a really pitchy voice.
"No thank you."
Brittnayy leaned over Bill to look out the window of the plane. They were only about 45 minutes into the flight, and they still had a stop so they could get on another plane to finish their trip to Germany, and Brittnayy was already getting anxious.
"Brittnayy calm down." Bill exclaimed.
"If you haven't noticed I always need something to keep me busy." She giggled.
This is going to be a really long trip.
Brittnayy leaned her head back and closed her eyes. If she couldn't do anything fun the least she could do was sleep.
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Brittnayy woke up to being violently shaken by Miranda and Tom, while Bill shoted her name.
"10 more minutes!" she moaned.
"No! We are here!" They shouted in unison.
She opened her eyes and looked around. "Really, already?"
"Yeah but we have one more flight, so get up so we can go get something to eat." Tom said.
"Fine!" Brittnayy said.
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"Fry?" Bill asked holding out a fry to Brittnayy.
Brittnayy took the fry and shoved it in her mouth. She wasn't hungry enough to get her own meal so she decided she would mooch off her friends for some of their food.
"Thank you ." She took another french fry. "If I keep eating this stuff I am going to get fat."
"You are not going to get fat!" Miranda yelled.
"Okay.. Okay. What time do we get on the plane?"
"Umm, In about 15 minutes." Tom looked at the clock hanging above the Dairy Queen.
"Good then I can catch up on my sleep." She let out a sigh.
"You sure do sleep alot." Miranda took a big bite of her BigMac.
"I'm sorry I didn't get any sleep last night." She snagged a few of Bill's fries.
"Hey!" Bill shouted.
Brittnayy stuck her Tom out. She wasn't about to pull a Tom and bath Bill in french fries.
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"I CALL WINDOW SEAT!" Brittnayy ran past the others and onto the plane, soon taking the window seat in a random row.
The others flowed onto the plane soon after her.
"You don't seem to be tired anymore." Bill kissed her on her forehead.
"Oh I'm still tired I just wanted a window seat...." she giggled.
"I see I see."
Brittnayy shot her hand into the air signaling for one of the ladies in the funky blue uniforms to come over.
'May I help you." The girl asked.
"Yes, may I have a pillow please?"
"Sure." The lady walked away.
Brittnayy sat in her seat with her knees to her chin while she waited for the lady to come back. She usually hated plane rides, but this one she didn't seem to mind. She wasn't even the least bit scared or nervous.
"Here you go." The lady from before handed her a pillow.
"Thank you." Brittnayy took the pillow and layed it on Bill's shoulder.
"What are you doing?" He looked at her.
"You make a good pillow."
"Okay..."
She fixed the pillow on his shoulder and layed her head down. She slowly fell asleep.
blackmoon91892
July 7th, 2008, 09:17 AM
aww...Bill doesnt get a fry bath. thats not fair. :lol:
but this plane ride wont go as well as the other, will it? i caught some possible foreshadowing....
Unknown598
July 7th, 2008, 03:49 PM
good chapter :D
i REALLY want a plane ride now...
i love taking off, u so sooo fast, and then WOOSH! ur goin up ^_^ window seat! u watch everything get smaller, cars become so small the looks like dots, and then u cant see em no more!! *YEAHHH
i love plane rides....
BrittnayySTFU
July 7th, 2008, 03:56 PM
Haha yeah I love plane rides too.
But sometimes they scare me half to death.
ScreamItAway
July 7th, 2008, 04:17 PM
i iz waiting for more!!!
BrittnayySTFU
July 7th, 2008, 04:20 PM
you tiz have to wait then because I don't know when I will be on next
tarnished-memory
July 7th, 2008, 05:24 PM
I loved the chapter!
The pillow scene. . . cute!
BrittnayySTFU
July 7th, 2008, 05:30 PM
Thank you, I am getting ready to write the next chapter.
But I am a little stuck...
BrittnayySTFU
July 7th, 2008, 07:08 PM
Chapter 13!
"Tom!" Brittnayy threw the pillow that was resting on Bill's shoulder.
"What!?" Tom looked around whistling innocently.
"You know what! I was trying to sleep and you were throwing freaking random objects at me!" Brittnayy pulled skittlez out of her hair.
"I'm sorry..." He threw something eles at her.
"That is it!" Brittnayy leaped over the back of the seat in front of her and jumped on Tom.
The whole thing turned into a big pillow fight. Everyone was in on it, Bill, Miranda, Tom, and Brittnayy. All the uniformed ladies would do was stand there disaprovingly.
"Okay, Okay. Guys let's stop." Miranda giggled. "I think they are getting a little upset." She pointed to the group of ladies grouped together at the back of the plane.
"Yeah." Brittnayy got up and walked back to her seat and then sitting down.
"That was crazy." Bill flopped down in the seat next to her.
"Yeah. And, now I'm not tired anymore." she smiled.
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"Holy Huge Room!" Brittnayy and Miranda yelled in unison.
They looked around the hotel room. It was huge! There were 3 double beds and a pull out sofa. Two of the beds were On the bottom floor and the other bed was on the top floor. Yes, there was two floors in the hotel room, but the second floor was more like a balcony.
"Top floor!" Brittnayy yelled and grabbed Bill's hand pulling him up the steps.
Miranda and Tom got a bed together, George got a double bed to himself while Gustav got to sleep on the pullout sofa.
"Miranda I see you!" Brittnayy leaned over the side of the "balcony". "This place is amazing."
Miranda rolled her eyes. "Yeah, it is."
"Oh shutup sour puss! You're just mad because you don't get the second floor!" She laughed.
"Yeah, that is exactly it!"
Brittnayy took a deep breath."IIIII LOOOOVVEEE YOUUU!" She belted out.
Everybody gave her a weird look.
"What!?"
"Nothing..." Miranda replied.
Brittnayy looked at the clock. It read 11 o'clock at night.
"Holy cow!" She exclaimed "I think I am going to bed."
"Yeah me too, we have to go to the venue tommarrow to do our first sound check for the concert in two days."
"NIGHT!" Brittnayy yelled over the balcony to everyone.
"Night." They replied tiredly.
jennaybell
July 7th, 2008, 07:17 PM
i likey!!!
more plzz
=D
BrittnayySTFU
July 7th, 2008, 09:13 PM
I love how everybody
wants me to write more...
I will guys
I will....
Unknown598
July 7th, 2008, 09:40 PM
i speakih for moreith por favor ^_^
blackmoon91892
July 7th, 2008, 10:12 PM
I love how everybody
wants me to write more...
I will guys
I will....
now you know how i feel
MORE!!
BrittnayySTFU
July 7th, 2008, 10:15 PM
ARIEL!!!!
Be quite...
I am going to write tommarrow,
when I am at work.
tarnished-memory
July 7th, 2008, 10:21 PM
PILLOWS! X3
An over-all cute chapter.
BrittnayySTFU
July 7th, 2008, 11:32 PM
Thank you I am writing the next chapter now!
blackmoon91892
July 7th, 2008, 11:40 PM
Thank you I am writing the next chapter now!
YAY!!
BrittnayySTFU
July 7th, 2008, 11:51 PM
CHAPTER 14!
"Brittnayy, if you keep bouncing up and down in that chair you will br-" Miranda was cut off by a loud crash.
She looked down. Brittnayy was sitting on the floor with her legs above her head. She broke the chair.
"See, that's is exactly what I was going to say." Miranda put her hands on her hips. "You get way to excited over the littlest things." She grabbed Brittnayy's arms and pulled her up. "They are only doing sound check."
"It's not that I'm excited about." Brittnayy brushed herself off. "Well, I'm not really excited.... I forgot to take my medication today. You know... My ADHD meds. And when I forget to take those I GO NUTS!"
"I can see that."
Brittnayy looked at the seat that she was sitting in. The bottom part of it (the part that you acually sit on) was on the floor. "Umm maybe if I find a way to put it back on there without acually fixing it, they won't notice a thing...."
"Maybe, I'll help."
They both grabbed the seat and set it so it would stay there. You couldn't even notice that it was 'broke'.
"Let's go down to the floor." Brittnayy started down the stairs.
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"Brittnayy, I seeee youuu!" Bill said into the microphone.
Brittnayy walked over to the stage and rested her arms on the side.
Bill leaned down and grabbed her pulling her up on the stage.
"Bill!" She giggled.
"What?" He grabbed her waist and made her wiggle.
"Nothing." She didn't resist wiggling.
Brittnayy jumped half way in the air. Tom had came behind her and played a few random chords on his guitar.
"Tom! What the **** is you problem!?"
'Sorry, I was just checking to see if my guitar worked."
"Whatever." She walked to the side of the stage and sat down letting her feet dangle.
Wow, this is going to be a long trip.
Unknown598
July 7th, 2008, 11:57 PM
*pictures Bill singing its raining men*
listening to it doesnt help....
no breaking the chairs! shame~
blackmoon91892
July 7th, 2008, 11:58 PM
haha Tom's an ***
BrittnayySTFU
July 8th, 2008, 12:01 AM
I have acually broken one of those kind of chairs.
You know the ones that have the bottom that flips up and when you sitt on them they go down?
Yeah I broke one of those.
Chapter 15 is coming!
Unknown598
July 8th, 2008, 11:24 AM
It's Raining Men!
:mrgreen: :ugeek:
no more breaking chairs :mrgreen:
tarnished-memory
July 8th, 2008, 12:36 PM
The chair scene made me laugh.
As usual, very cute and funny!
BrittnayySTFU
July 8th, 2008, 04:26 PM
Okay you know what marissa,
you make me want to listen to that song!
Chibi- Yes I know I love that chair part. I put it in there because I have accually done it.
Unknown598
July 8th, 2008, 04:57 PM
Okay you know what marissa,
you make me want to listen to that song!
Chibi- Yes I know I love that chair part. I put it in there because I have accually done it.
:mrgreen:
BrittnayySTFU
July 8th, 2008, 05:01 PM
Haha yeah.
I like your icon.
blackmoon91892
July 8th, 2008, 05:41 PM
Haha yeah.
I like your icon.
haha me too. thats how ive defined school for years
BrittnayySTFU
July 8th, 2008, 05:58 PM
Yeah me too..
I am going to write chapter 15.
sshiel94
July 8th, 2008, 06:16 PM
Brittnaaaaayyyyyy!!! <33
Is it too late to 'apply' to be in the story? I just read it all on a whim and I REALLY like it.
...actually, I think I read the first chapter a few days ago, but that's it. XD
Woof! ^^
Unknown598
July 8th, 2008, 06:17 PM
Haha yeah.
I like your icon.
haha me too. thats how ive defined school for years
:mrgreen: :mrgreen:
Unknown598
July 8th, 2008, 06:21 PM
Yeah me too..
I am going to write chapter 15.
yay
BrittnayySTFU
July 8th, 2008, 06:22 PM
Yes you are aloud to apply still...
I just need to go back and get all the people that have applied.
sshiel94
July 8th, 2008, 06:27 PM
Yes you are aloud to apply still...
I just need to go back and get all the people that have applied.
That's fair. ^^
Name: Tenn
Age: 19
Style: Uh... short brown hair, usually just wearing a T-shirt and jeans... -pokes icon- XP
Personality: Pretty hyper and spazzy at times, but I can be laidback, too. Really outgoing...
How you want to know me in the story: Can I just be a random obsessive TH fangirl that follows the band around? XDD
BrittnayySTFU
July 8th, 2008, 06:56 PM
People that applied to be characters
Ariel
Kelsey
Mandii
Samantha
Miranda
Sy
Tenn
People that are crossed out are already used...
Just refer back here if you want to see who still has to be in the story or to see if you are used yet. Or if you are on the list.
BrittnayySTFU
July 9th, 2008, 03:03 AM
BATMAN!
Unknown598
July 9th, 2008, 11:30 AM
BATMAN!
that made me laugh... and i sounded like a idiot ><im such an idiot
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WE'VE BEEN WEASEL DORFED
TexasGirlLovesTH
July 9th, 2008, 03:08 PM
Hey, Brit!
I just wanted to let you know I have all the chapters you've posted so far, and I'll get to work on them sooner than I expected! Just PM me the next chapters when you can.
:geek:
Unknown598
July 9th, 2008, 03:32 PM
Germany: Our men are hotter than your women as in Bill, Tom, Georg and Gustav... and others i dont know of >< stfu me...
lol
TexasGirlLovesTH
July 9th, 2008, 03:41 PM
Germany: Our men are hotter than your women as in Bill, Tom, Georg and Gustav... and others i dont know of >< stfu me...
lol
:lol:
BrittnayySTFU
July 9th, 2008, 04:55 PM
OKIE DOKIE!
tears.dont.fall
July 9th, 2008, 07:41 PM
...sy still gets georg...right?
sceneiexweenie
July 9th, 2008, 10:09 PM
man. all fan fic is the same...
hoping fer a dream...
that will never come tru...
(no offense)
BrittnayySTFU
July 9th, 2008, 10:19 PM
man. all fan fic is the same...
hoping fer a dream...
that will never come tru...
(no offense)
Um that is the point....
You don't have to come up on my story and write this you know?
BrittnayySTFU
July 9th, 2008, 10:22 PM
Oh and to tell you,
This isnt a dream! I know I will never get with bill Kaulitz...
The only reason I used my name was because I was to lazy to think of another one!
losers need to stay away!
blackmoon91892
July 9th, 2008, 11:12 PM
Oh and to tell you,
This isnt a dream! I know I will never get with bill Kaulitz...
The only reason I used my name was because I was to lazy to think of another one!
losers need to stay away!
Britt, dont let it get to you. some people have nothing better to do than to waste their time saying mean things about other people. you dont have to explain yourself to anyone.
BrittnayySTFU
July 9th, 2008, 11:49 PM
I wasnt explaining myself
Betches like that **** me off!
blackmoon91892
July 10th, 2008, 12:12 AM
I wasnt explaining myself
Betches like that **** me off!
you were too explaining yourself!! dont question me!!!
and i hate people like that too
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