PDA

View Full Version : ~*RAIN*~ (new fic) (sorry im stuck on MILLIE)



THDNacolleMarie
June 23rd, 2008, 09:23 PM
SORRY MY DARLINS!! I HAVE MUCHO WRITERS BLOCK WHEN IT COMES TO THE MILLIE STORY!!! SO I HOPE THIS HOLDS YOU OVER UNTIL I WORK SOME MORE ON MILLIE!!


He sat there quietly, watching the rain beat against the window pane in front of him. The sound of her voice saying, “Goodbye” a million times over playing in his mind, he looks down at the faded white circle around his finger, where the ring, and promise of her love and devotion had sat for the last three years. Leaning back in his chair he closes his eyes tightly, fighting back the tears, and he hears the “Goodbye’s” getting louder. Images of her are filling his mind, her curly auburn hair and those gorgeous baby blue eyes, the smile that he loved so much. He opens his eyes letting the tears flow down his cheeks, running his fingers through his long black hair. Taking in a deep breath he leans forward resting his elbows on his knees, staring down at the floor for a moment before he gets up and makes his way to the bathroom.
Standing at the sink in the bathroom he gazes into the mirror and sees his tear streaked face, he combs back his long hair from his face and tucks it behind his ears before splashing his face with cool water. Leaning over against the sink he lets the water drip from his face.

“God Bill, get a hold of yourself.” He mutters quietly while reaching for a towel to dry his face. He pats his face dry and leaves the bathroom, making his way for the stereo in the living room, he puts on some music and paces about the living room floor, letting his mind go crazy with thoughts of her.

Taken from his thoughts by loud knocking at his front door, when he opens it he sees his brother, his face hidden beneath the shadow of his cap he wore. Standing there in an oversized sweatshirt, the ends of his dreadlocks dripping with water, he looks at Bill and smiles.

“Well are you going to let me in or not? You know it is raining out here.” Tom says to him trying to crack a smile from his little brother.

Bill waves him in, and shuts the door behind them, watching Tom shed the drenched sweatshirt, and lay it on the back of the chair.

“What’s going on Tom?” Bill asks him standing there with his arms crossed in front of him.

“What do you mean, what is going on? I should be asking you that, I knew something was wrong so I thought I would come by and see you, I know you’re upset Billa.” Tom replies to him and he sits down on the sofa.

“I’m not upset Tom, I am perfectly fine!” He retorts and turns around to head for the kitchen. Tom gets up from the couch and follows after Bill.

“Don’t lie to me Bill, I know when something is wrong with you, and I can tell you were crying so don’t give me a load of crap Okay, just talk to me, that’s why I’m here.”

“Do you want some coffee?” Bill asks as he starts a fresh pot, just enough to change the subject that he did not feel like diving into. Tom sighs and sits on one of the stools at the bar.

“Yea sure, that’s fine Bill.” He mutters.

“What? Now what’s wrong with you?” Bill asks sternly.

“Nothing Bill, forget it. So, what are you doing tonight anything fun?” Tom asks changing the subject, due to the obvious fact that Bill was not ready to talk about what was bothering him.

“I guess if you call, sitting here at home watching the rain fall, something fun, then sure of course!” He says flashing Tom his fake smile.

“Very funny Bill, really, you should go out with us or something, we need to get you out of the house” Tom says seriously as he looks over at his brother who is fidgeting with everything in sight to avoid eye contact with his brother.

“Go out with you and Bree? Why? So I can stare at every happy couple who happens to walk by me and be reminded of what I used to have? No thank you Tom!”

“Bill you need to get your mind off of Evie, being cooped up in this house is not helping anything, I know you miss her man, but you can’t keep on like this Bill, you just can’t.”

“Why do I need to get my mind off of Evangeline? I don’t need to do anything of the sort Tom, I love her, and nothing is going to change that” Bill says hopping up on the counter looking over at Tom.

“Bill I didn’t say you didn’t love her.” He replies to Bill.

“Then why should I get my mind off of her? She’s my wife, … I know I messed up, I know I made a mistake, But I can’t just let her go like that Tom”

“Well maybe you should have thought about how much you loved her before you got involved with Karis that night, I mean if you loved Evie so much then why did you do that to her?” Tom asks.

“I didn’t mean to do anything Tom and you know it, I was drunk and so was she, and it just happened, I know I messed up, ROYALLY, but I cant take back what I did” Bill says to Tom trying not to cry again.

“Bill, we know it was more then that night, you continued to see her, why? When Evie was here at home, waiting for you to get off tour.”

“I was lonely I guess, We didn’t do anything after that night we just, well, we just spent time together.” Bill tries to explain to Tom.

“Billa, Bree saw you guys kissing the night before we came home, don’t lie to me, If you were lonely, why didn’t you fly your WIFE out to come spend time with you? Shouldn’t she have been the one you wanted to spend your time with?” Tom questions Bill and gets up when he hears the coffee pot beeping.

“Yea, I did want to be with Evie, but we fought so much while we were away on tour, and she has her job and everything, I don’t know why Tom, I don’t know why I didn’t just bring Evie out, all I know is that I messed things up, she's gone now, and I have no idea what to do”

“Sugar and cream, Bill?” Tom asks quickly, Bill nods his head yes and Tom hands him his cup of coffee and he leans against the counter looking over at Bill.

“Maybe you just need to give her some time Bill, I know she loves you, and we all know that you love her, but you can’t just expect her to forgive you for what you did, at least not just like that, I mean she's hurting. You have to understand that Bill.” Tom tries to explain to his little brother while sipping on his cup of coffee.

Bill moves around on the counter trying to find a comfortable position, and he sets his cup of coffee down, looking at Tom.

“I know she's hurting, and that’s what is making things worse, Is that I know her pain is because of me, and I promised her that day, I would never do anything to hurt her, ever, and now look, I hate myself Tom”

“You don’t hate yourself, you’re just mad at the choices you made, you just need to wait, Give her time like I said, but in the meantime you cannot sit here alone in this house sulking and moping, its not going to make anything better, in fact its just going to make you even more upset Bill”

“But I cant bare to go out there and see you and Bree so happy together, and be reminded of how we used to be, knowing my Evie is alone and hurt and I can do nothing to make it better” Bill says again running his long slender fingers through his hair.

“Yes you can Bill, you have to, we have music to take care of , remember, your career, you can’t just let all that slip away because you made a mistake, don’t let everything go Bill, not like this.”

“But I want her back Tom, I want her, I need Evie, she is everything to me Tom, you don’t understand”

“Yes I do, because Bree is the same to me, I know what you feel for her, You just have to wait things out right now Bill, but come on please just lets go out or something, just for a while, or at least just come over to our place, just get out of here for a bit, that is all I am asking”

“Okay, just to your place that’s it, nowhere else Tom.” Bill says seriously, as he hops off of the counter, grabbing his coffee cup and puts it in the sink.

“Let me call Bree and tell her we are on the way.” Tom says to Bill before washing out both coffee cups and places them in the dishwasher.

“Okay, Let me go change my clothes then before we go” Bill makes his way into the bedroom and changes into something warm, and sees Tom looking at the wedding pictures Bill has on the mantle.

“I know, I should take those down but I just can’t yet” Bill mutters

“I wouldn’t expect you to have taken them down Billa, no rush, all in good time, right?”

“Right”

“Ready to go then Bill?” Tom asks him, Bill nods his head and they make their way to Tom and Bree’s house.

“Hallo Bill, nice to finally see you hun” Bree says giving Bill a hug. Bill smiles and hugs her back. Tom walks over to Bree and gives her a kiss.

“Hallo babe, dinner is almost done I hope you boys are hungry.” She says smiling.

“Were always hungry, you know that. Right Billa?”

“Yep, smells really good Bree, what are you making?” Bill asks her

“Spaghetti, got the bread in the oven and the salad is all ready.” She says fluffing one of the pillows on the couch.

“Wow, It’s been a while since I had real food, I mean Evie used to always,…yea” Bill trails off and then plops down on the sofa.

“Bill do you want anything to drink luv?” Bree asks giving Tom a worried look.

“Sure, Whatever Tom is having” Bill says staring down at his hands.

Tom follows Bree into the kitchen, to Bill and himself something to drink.

“Tom, is he ok?” Bree asks

“No, he’s so depressed Bree, he wants Evie back so bad but he knows he messed up. He still has their wedding pictures up and everything.” Tom tells her.

“Wow, really? Well, Evie still has her ring on” Bree explains to Tom.

“What? Really? When did you find that out?”

“Today, Evie came over for a while, when you were gone. She wanted to talk, she still has her wedding ring on, she still loves Bill, you can tell, she's just really hurt, but I still don’t agree with what she's doing.” Bree says

“I know, but that’s her choice for now, I mean I don’t like it either but there’s nothing we can do about it.”

CocoRockStar
June 23rd, 2008, 09:31 PM
YES first comment!!! And I just wanted to be the first to tell you that this story is AWESOME!!!!

THDNacolleMarie
June 23rd, 2008, 09:33 PM
YES first comment!!! And I just wanted to be the first to tell you that this story is AWESOME!!!!
w00t! YAY! glad you like it!! I will post the rest of what I have later after I See what everyone else thinks...OY VEY! I know its not Millie but bare with me!!

Ich_liebe_bill
June 23rd, 2008, 09:44 PM
YES first comment!!! And I just wanted to be the first to tell you that this story is AWESOME!!!!
w00t! YAY! glad you like it!! I will post the rest of what I have later after I See what everyone else thinks...OY VEY! I know its not Millie but bare with me!!



NEIN! NEIN I WAS THE FIRST >.>


<.<


hehe.


no, but really. its amazing.

THDNacolleMarie
June 23rd, 2008, 09:49 PM
YES first comment!!! And I just wanted to be the first to tell you that this story is AWESOME!!!!
w00t! YAY! glad you like it!! I will post the rest of what I have later after I See what everyone else thinks...OY VEY! I know its not Millie but bare with me!!



NEIN! NEIN I WAS THE FIRST >.>


<.<


hehe.


no, but really. its amazing.
HAHA Im glad you both enjoyed it

THDNacolleMarie
June 23rd, 2008, 10:31 PM
“She's hurt yes, but that is Bills baby too, she shouldn’t be shutting him out like that, you know what I mean?” Bree asks pouring Tom and Bill a glass of iced tea.

“Yea, plus I know her telling Bill, that once the baby is here, he’s not allowed in the baby’s life, I know she doesn’t mean that.”

“Well of course she doesn’t, I just don’t know what to do, both of them are so miserable Tom, it breaks my heart to see them both so upset” Bree says handing him the glasses of iced tea.

“We will figure something out babe, don’t worry.” He kisses her forehead and goes out the living room, handing Bill his iced tea.

“Thank you.” Bill says to Tom.

“Your welcome, so,…” Tom tries to think of something to talk about.

“I wonder what she's doing. I wonder how the baby is doing. If it’s a little boy or a little girl, do you know Tom?” Bill inquires.

“Evie hasn’t found out if it’s a boy or girl yet, at least I don’t think so. Bree, babe can you come here for a second?” Tom calls out. Bree pops her head into the living room for a moment.

“Yea babe?”

“Bill was wondering if Evie found out if the baby is a boy or girl, did she say anything to you.” Tom asks her.

“She said today that she hasn’t found out yet” Bree explains to Bill

“But shouldn’t she know by now, she's due very soon like within the next two weeks” Bill questions her.

“Yea she can find out she has just chosen not to, she said she wants to wait.” Bree says looking at Bill and then over at Tom, trying to hide the fact that Evie had earlier told her they were having a little boy.

“Oh, well I hope I can get her to come around before the baby comes, I want to be there for the birth of my child.”

“Well, that’s quite alright for you to want such things, you’re the father, you should be there” Tom says.

“Yes you should Bill, and I am sure Evie will come around soon, in the meantime try to keep your sights on something else to keep your mind from going completely crazy, like right now, focus on the delicious dinner that is ready to be served, Come on boys, time to eat!” She smiles and she disappears into the kitchen. Tom and Bill head into the dining room and sit down, Bree serves them both a full plate of pasta and a bowl of salad., and then does the same for herself.

“Wow, this looks amazing, thank you Bree” Bill says smiling

“No problem, and eat up, there is plenty more in the kitchen”

“ Babe, you always cook enough to feed a small army.” Tom jokes with her.

“Yea, maybe you will get the hint that we need to start working on that ‘small army’ of ours.” She grins.

“You just have baby fever.” Tom says taking a bite of his dinner.

“Well, Evie is having a baby, Georg and Prue already have little Payton, and Gustav and Shelby have that cutie little Xander, I just cant help it Tomi.” She says. Bill sits there in his own little world, enjoying his dinner that Bree cooked for them. Tom looks at Bree and winks at her, she smiles at him and they both go back to their meal.

The phone starts ringing from the other room, Bree puts her napkin aside and places her fork on her plate, and gets up from the table

“I’ll get that, be right back boys”

“Okay babe.” Tom says, Bill still sat there quietly eating his dinner, and is brought from his little trance when he hears Bree say Evies name.

“Yes hello Evie, is everything ok? Your where? Um,…well yes he is here, him, Tom and I were just sitting down to dinner. Do you want me or Tom to come get you? No! your not walking in the rain,…wait you what!?” Bree continues, and then she walks over to the door when she hears a knock. She opens the door and sees Evie standing there rain soaked and she hangs up the phone.

“Oh my god EVIE, why did you do that? You shouldn’t be out there like that. Come in!” Bree says bringing Evie inside and she takes her coat off of her and wraps her in a blanket.

“I’m sorry Bree, I didn’t want to bother you again today, but no one else would answer and your place was the closest, I cant get the car to start at all, I didn’t know what to do” She says shivering.

Bill and Tom hear Bree and Evie talking, Bill looks over at Tom with a worried look on his face. Tom nods and gets up, and makes his way into the living room.

“Evie, is everything ok?” Tom asks.

“My car like, died a couple of blocks away, well first I got a flat and then it decided to not start at all, I don’t know, I’m sorry to bother you and your dinner plans, I should go soon, I know hes here” she says looking around.

“No you don’t have to leave, I’ll leave. It’s ok.” Bill says standing by the doorway from the dining room. Evie looks up and sees the worry on his face.

“You do not need to do that. I am the one who intruded on your dinner party here, I’m sorry.”

“Don’t be sorry Evie, Is everything Okay? Are you ok? Do you need something?” Bill asks her rushing over to her side like he always had done when he knew something was wrong.

Evie moves away from Bill a little bit looking at him like he’s a complete stranger.

“I am quite alright thank you very much.” Evie says leaning back on the sofa rubbing her hands on her very pregnant belly.

“Let me get you something to change into” Bree says leaving the room to find something dry for Evie to wear.

Bill looks over at Evie’s belly, and tears fill his eyes. Tom looks over at Evie and smiles trying to make her feel less uncomfortable about the set situation.

“The baby is moving, look.” She points to her belly, and lifts her shirt to show the movement in her tummy.

“Oh my, wow, what is the baby doing in there? Playing soccer or something?” Tom jokes around.

“Oh it feels like it, trust me.” Evie says, Bill sat there trying to keep the tears from falling, he stands up and gets ready to leave the room and Evie grabs his hand.

“Don’t you want to feel your baby? To feel our son, do you want to Billy?” Evie asks looking up at him like she always used to. Bill shakes his head yes, and gets down on his knees in front of Evie. He places both of his hands on her belly gently and feels the baby kicking.

“Say Hi to your son Bill.” Evie says trying to fight her tears as well. Tom gets up and quietly walks to the other room where Bree is.

“It’s a boy?” He asks her. Evie nods her head yes.

“Hallo baby, my son, it’s me, I’m your daddy” Bill talks to Evie’s belly, the baby starts to kick more, Evie and Bill both smile.

“What’s his name?” Bill asks her.

“I haven’t picked a name yet, not without you.” She says looking at Bill.

“Evie, I,…I um..” he stammers.

“I know you are Bill, I know your sorry, I know you made a mistake, But that doesn’t help me forget what you did. You really hurt me Bill, A LOT, and I can’t pretend to understand what you chose to do, but I need you Bill, this is OUR baby” She says looking at him.

“I know Evie, I know it is, and I honestly don’t have a reason for why I did what I did, I just know that I am so very sorry and if I could take it all back I would.”

“I need you around for the baby, I know I told you I wanted you to have nothing to do with me and the baby but, that’s not fair to our son, so I am asking you to be here for the baby, please Bill.”

“Of course I will, anything Evie, anything you need just let me know.” He says smiling, and he sits on the couch next to her, and they start their conversation on baby names.

In the other room Tom walks in to see Bree raiding his closet for clothes.

“What are you doing babe?” He asks.

“Trying to find something for Evie to wear, Why did you leave them two out there alone Tom, they are going to start fighting again.” She says with a concerned look on her face.

“No they wont, they are talking, she's made Bill talk to the baby, they are ok. Trust me.” Tom says smiling, before he leans over to kiss her on the forehead.

“What? You mean they are actually being civil with each other? well then I don’t want to go out there and bother them.” Bree says holding a pair of clothes for Evie in her hand.

“It’s okay, Evie needs dry clothes, come on lets go give them to her, and then I’ll head over to see about her car.” Tom says grabbing the clothes and they both go back into the living room.


“Here you go Evie” Tom says handing her the clothes.
“Thank you Tom” she grabs them and sets them at her lap.

“Evie go change.” Bree and Bill say together.

“I will, I will, in a minute.” She answers them taking off the blanket Bree gave her.

“No, now Evie, your going to get sick, please, go change.” Bill asks her nicely.

“Okay, fine, I’ll be back in a minute.” She says getting up and going into the bathroom to change.

liveEVRYsecond
June 23rd, 2008, 11:11 PM
holy ********!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! SO AWESOME!!!!! i love it so much nacolle!! once again u baffle me with ur way with words. ahaha awesome to the max much!!! luv ya!!

Ich_liebe_bill
June 23rd, 2008, 11:18 PM
amazing. i love it. love love love it. wow. omg. ^.^

THDNacolleMarie
June 23rd, 2008, 11:21 PM
holy ********!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! SO AWESOME!!!!! i love it so much nacolle!! once again u baffle me with ur way with words. ahaha awesome to the max much!!! luv ya!!
DANKE DANKE DANKE!! hehe

THDNacolleMarie
June 23rd, 2008, 11:21 PM
amazing. i love it. love love love it. wow. omg. ^.^
DANKE SCHON LUV!! :D

THDNacolleMarie
June 23rd, 2008, 11:48 PM
More of RAIN will be posted soon!! :)

ShadowIW
June 24th, 2008, 01:00 PM
WOW!!! that is so good!

THDNacolleMarie
June 24th, 2008, 02:05 PM
WOW!!! that is so good!
DANKE DANKE!!

Viv_Kaulitz
June 24th, 2008, 02:05 PM
omg!
i love it!!! :D

THDNacolleMarie
June 24th, 2008, 02:59 PM
omg!
i love it!!! :D
danke schon darlin!

liveEVRYsecond
June 24th, 2008, 06:04 PM
cant wait for more!!! u rock to the max!!

CocoRockStar
June 24th, 2008, 09:04 PM
More of RAIN will be posted soon!! :)

STILL waiting...

cold_love
June 24th, 2008, 10:07 PM
OMFG!!! That was AMAZING!!! I totally wanted to cry in the first chapter! Very very very good!

Dreaminginthestars
June 24th, 2008, 10:31 PM
This story is amazing.
It's so sweet.
L O V E it.

Update when you get the chance,
+Amy+

CocoRockStar
June 26th, 2008, 06:43 PM
Please update Nacolly!!!

CocoRockStar
March 7th, 2009, 03:50 AM
Nacolle loves to start these awesome fanfics, and get you hooked on them......and then NEVER update them again :evil:

THDNacolleMarie
March 14th, 2009, 02:01 AM
Nacolle loves to start these awesome fanfics, and get you hooked on them......and then NEVER update them again :evil:
im sorry soon soon! i loose inspiration is all lol

Andie
March 15th, 2009, 11:32 PM
Nacolle loves to start these awesome fanfics, and get you hooked on them......and then NEVER update them again :evil:
I totally get where you're coming from! :roll:
So...more soon, right? :cry:

CocoRockStar
March 16th, 2009, 05:50 PM
Nacolle loves to start these awesome fanfics, and get you hooked on them......and then NEVER update them again :evil:
im sorry soon soon! i loose inspiration is all lol


Well then get it back!! :x

THDNacolleMarie
April 7th, 2009, 02:11 AM
Nacolle loves to start these awesome fanfics, and get you hooked on them......and then NEVER update them again :evil:
im sorry soon soon! i loose inspiration is all lol


Well then get it back!! :x
ugh u dont tell me what to do lol im trying!

THDNacolleMarie
September 11th, 2010, 01:41 AM
okay...realized I like the rain in my fics haha. LAME. But seriously I should try to write more often.