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tears.dont.fall
June 25th, 2008, 11:59 PM
My name can ring fear into the hearts of my victims, and yet I’m not all that terrifying.

My name is Syrena Phoenix-Lisbon, and I am on a mission to save the lives of four guys who I don’t know. I was given names, but no faces. However I quickly found out that they were rock stars and finding their pictures was easy…way to easy.. But first I think I should tell you about yours truly.

I was born in a small village in Japan, 17(almost 18) years ago on a dark stormy night in October…well kind of…it wasn’t really storming, just raining, and I just like to say that cause my birthday is Halloween. Anyway, my father died when I was two and my mom and I were driven out of the village. We have no clue why either. We moved to Germany not long after my 5th birthday, where we lived until I turned 11. That year was probably one on the toughest years of my entire life. My mom, whom I was very close to, died from unknown causes. Only 11 and I was alone, very alone. I soon moved to America to live with a couple who had lost a child that would have been my age. And now, I had to learn my third language…switching from Japanese to German was hard enough seeing as how in the Japanese alphabet, the letter L doesn’t exist. I was constantly ostracized cause I would always mispronounce things and so I usually kept my mouth shut and tried to learn the L sound. I had lived in Rochester Indiana with my step family for 5 years when, on my 16th birthday, my life changed drastically.

*flashback*

My adopted family always decorated the backyard for Halloween, and this year was no different. I loved having my birthday on Halloween. A lot of people describe me a punk/emo with a gansta twist. My outfit for the night was a black and red plain just-above-the-knee skirt with my favorite knee high boots, a black Bullet For My Valentine tank covered with a red midriff sweatshirt. I was also wearing a white hat with the Kanji (Japanese) word for love written graffiti style in red and black all over it. I had done the graffiti myself too!
The night was going smoothly and about an hour before we would tear everything down and head inside for my birthday “festivities” AKA dinner cake…the usual, my best friend Beth wanted to walk around for a bit. My adopted parents, of course, said that it was ok.
As we started walking towards city park, I became aware that we were not alone (my ninja senses kicked in.), but every time I turned to look, no one was there. By the time we reached the park, Beth and I were scared senseless.
“We’ve watched one too many scary movies.” Beth whispered nervously.
“Ah, but this is no movie.” a voiced hissed behind us.
Beth took off screaming and me, being the ‘brave one’ tried to punch the bodiless voice.
“oh, we’ve got a feisty one!” the voice hissed again.
“who are you and what do you want?” I asked hoping my voice sounded more confident than I felt.
“I’m Lucifer and I’m hungry” he whispered in my ear.
I felt a sharp pain right below my left ear and just as sudden as it came it was gone. I remember nothing else except for screaming and a lot of rustling behind me.
*end flashback*

When I woke, I don’t know how long I was out, I was back in Germany, with the man who rescued me. His name was Krystopher Lisbon, and he explained exactly what had happed to me, and what Lucifer was.
Oh yes my friends, Lucifer was a full-fledged vampire, and he had bitten me.
I’m not a full-fledged vampire, and it’s unclear why, there are very few like me. I guess you could call us a sister breed, or carriers. We look like humans, act like them, and are them, but at the same time, we’re not human. Over time many books have come close to what vampires act like, but not quite close enough. They can go out in sunlight, they have reflections, and wooden stakes…maybe in the past but definitely not now. Humans who are aware of the existence of vampires (my adopted parents are a prime example of this, except they don’t believe the myths, just what Krys told them) tend to believe that vampires will spontaneously combust or glitter in sunlight, I personally like the glitter idea, very ‘twilight’(I love that book, even now). Carriers can eat food and drink human beverages and we don’t need or crave blood except on the night that we were bitten. We have heightened senses and quicker reflexes, however unlike vampires, we carriers can bleed and die like humans…like if human was stabbed or something bloody and gruesome like that. Basically carriers are more off-road-ready humans.

Anyway, enough about me, on to my mission. On my 17th birthday, my ‘brother’ Krys, whom I have lived with for a year now(and I always call and write my family and friends back in the states, my adopted parents are the only ones who really know what happened, the rest think I’m on a foreign exchange program for two years.), gave me an important mission. He gave it to me because of my skill and experience with fighting and protecting others. (I’ve been a black belt in martial arts since I was 13 and I have a pretty killer aim too)
My mission, you ask?
To protect the members of international superstars, Tokio Hotel, from a bunch of crazy vampires who want Bill and Tom Kaulitz dead.
Their motives are unknown…and who they are is another question and matter entirely. Up until now I have never even heard of Tokio Hotel and how I was going to make this mission a success…I have no idea.

Songs I listened to while writing this included:
Break Away- Tokio Hotel
Waking the Demon- Bullet For My Valentine
Lies- Evanescence
Anything For You- Evanescence


please, please, PLEASE comment and tell me what you think. I NEED FEEDBACK LIKE BILL NEEDS HAIRSPRAY!
i also need characters for future chapters.
WARNING!!! it might take me a while to update...these chapters are long and am a slow typer.

tokiohotel26
June 26th, 2008, 12:37 AM
please, please, PLEASE comment and tell me what you think. I NEED FEEDBACK LIKE BILL NEEDS HAIRSPRAY!
i also need characters for future chapters.
WARNING!!! it might take me a while to update...these chapters are long and am a slow typer.

well in that case...i think it is great! i like it alot! and i usually dont like vampire fanfics.

name:lexi [[alexis]]
age:14-18 [[my age is 14 but u can use watever age u need]]
style: same as syrena but more of a gangsta style with a punk/emo twist
other:must have black nail polish and hoop earrings!

like these:
http://www.bonnefee.co.uk/acatalog/rhinestonehoopbg.jpg
http://www.i-shock.co.uk/images/silver_000175.jpg
https://shanalogic.com/item_images/shan ... _full2.jpg (https://shanalogic.com/item_images/shana_heart_full2.jpg)

u know i think these r enough: http://www.i-shock.co.uk/index.php?cPath=58_62

i like to get into detail about jewelery so dont mind me!
:shock:
:shock:
:shock:
:shock:
I ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ BILL KAULITZ!!!!!!! :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

sorry i get very random at times

tears.dont.fall
June 26th, 2008, 12:39 AM
please, please, PLEASE comment and tell me what you think. I NEED FEEDBACK LIKE BILL NEEDS HAIRSPRAY!
i also need characters for future chapters.
WARNING!!! it might take me a while to update...these chapters are long and am a slow typer.

well in that case...i think it is great! i like it alot! and i usually dont like vampire fanfics.

name:lexi [[alexis]]
age:14-18 [[my age is 14 but u can use watever age u need]]
style: same as syrena but more of a gangsta style with a punk/emo twist
other:must have black nail polish and hoop earrings!

like these:
http://www.bonnefee.co.uk/acatalog/rhinestonehoopbg.jpg
http://www.i-shock.co.uk/images/silver_000175.jpg
https://shanalogic.com/item_images/shan ... _full2.jpg (https://shanalogic.com/item_images/shana_heart_full2.jpg)

u know i think these r enough: http://www.i-shock.co.uk/index.php?cPath=58_62

i like to get into detail about jewelery so dont mind me!
:shock:
:shock:
:shock:
:shock:
I ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ BILL KAULITZ!!!!!!! :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

sorry i get very random at times
commiting info to memory...i already have an idea for you.

blackmoon91892
June 26th, 2008, 12:52 AM
OMG THAT WAS AWESOME!! YOU CAN DEFINATLY USE ME FOR THIS!! do i need to give you a discription of myself cuz im too lazy to do that now....you could always try to tell what i look like from my newest youtube vids! haha!!

tokiohotel26
June 26th, 2008, 12:58 AM
please, please, PLEASE comment and tell me what you think. I NEED FEEDBACK LIKE BILL NEEDS HAIRSPRAY!
i also need characters for future chapters.
WARNING!!! it might take me a while to update...these chapters are long and am a slow typer.

well in that case...i think it is great! i like it alot! and i usually dont like vampire fanfics.

name:lexi [[alexis]]
age:14-18 [[my age is 14 but u can use watever age u need]]
style: same as syrena but more of a gangsta style with a punk/emo twist
other:must have black nail polish and hoop earrings!

like these:
http://www.bonnefee.co.uk/acatalog/rhinestonehoopbg.jpg
http://www.i-shock.co.uk/images/silver_000175.jpg
https://shanalogic.com/item_images/shan ... _full2.jpg (https://shanalogic.com/item_images/shana_heart_full2.jpg)

u know i think these r enough: http://www.i-shock.co.uk/index.php?cPath=58_62

i like to get into detail about jewelery so dont mind me!
:shock:
:shock:
:shock:
:shock:
I ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ BILL KAULITZ!!!!!!! :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

sorry i get very random at times
commiting info to memory...i already have an idea for you.
yay!!! whoo hoo!!! im unique arent i?

wait...is it a good idea or bad for my character?
just curious cuz i get myself confused alot and...well it aint pretty i can tell u that much

tears.dont.fall
June 26th, 2008, 09:20 PM
you'll see.

Samantha<3Bill
June 27th, 2008, 01:48 AM
I'm guessing you have Bill in this story, Can I be Tom's gf then?? puh-puhleezz if not Tom then Bill lol heres the thing

Age:16
Description:brown hair, nose ring short
style: Usually wearing jeans with a hole in the knee and a tanktop with beaded neckless or somthing
anything else??

Samantha<3Bill
June 27th, 2008, 01:50 AM
OHMEHGOSH I want to be a Vampire sooooooOOOoooOOOoo bad. If I can't be bill or Tom's girlfriend I want to be like the Villain!!! but don't kill me to quickly I want to be tricky LOL :lol: :!:

tokiohotel26
June 27th, 2008, 02:05 AM
hey no wait a sec here! i want bill! ill even be the bad person for him! if not the same goes for tom!

tears.dont.fall
June 27th, 2008, 11:40 PM
no fighting over bill and tom...girlfriends wont come until later on...however there will be 'chances' with tom before that.



oh and ....bill is already taken

tokiohotel26
June 27th, 2008, 11:51 PM
well i said same 4 tom so...ja! i wont have a problem

steevie!
June 27th, 2008, 11:52 PM
yeah ^-^


do you still need characters?

tears.dont.fall
June 28th, 2008, 12:35 AM
yep miss steevie i do

steevie!
June 28th, 2008, 12:39 AM
schweet ^-^ :mrgreen:



lets see here...
I be 14, but I'm up for aging.
I got medium/short black hair with a blonde streak on the right side ^-^ It's asymmetrical and what not. Short layered && spiky && all that jazz.
My style is amazing ^-^. Uhm... I wear pants all the time -.-
&& A hoodie pretty much everyday -.-
I paint my nails white if that counts for anything -.-
My make-up is always dark too -.-
I'm pretty cliche >.>
OOO! I always wear a chain necklace. :P
but whatever, you can do whatever :mrgreen:

tears.dont.fall
June 28th, 2008, 01:02 AM
CHAPTER 2 WILL COME INTO EXISTANCE HERE SOON!!!

blackmoon91892
July 1st, 2008, 10:40 AM
yay!!

blackmoon91892
July 1st, 2008, 10:42 AM
i forget...did i send you a character thing?

xluciax
July 1st, 2008, 11:51 AM
I LOVE THIS FF!!!!!!!
it's awesome!!!!
please update soon,
or i'll die of the suspence!!!!! :shock:

Haley1018
July 2nd, 2008, 07:51 PM
I luffs it!!!! ^-^

tears.dont.fall
July 2nd, 2008, 07:53 PM
does haley want to join my mazing crew of characters?

Haley1018
July 2nd, 2008, 07:56 PM
Ja!!! :D

Ooh, can I be a vampire???
Vampires are uber-awesome. ^^

Name: Haley
Age: 17
Style: snakebites, dark hair, dark clothing
Personality: mean, feisty, smart

tears.dont.fall
July 2nd, 2008, 07:59 PM
Ja!!! :D

Ooh, can I be a vampire???
Vampires are uber-awesome. ^^

Name: Haley
Age: 17
Style: snakebites, dark hair, dark clothing
Personality: mean, feisty, smart

mostly what i need!

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 2nd, 2008, 09:01 PM
I finally read it!!!
And I like it!! :mrgreen:
So does Mina. :lol: :lol: :lol:

:lol: ...Ninja Skills... :lol:

xluciax
July 2nd, 2008, 11:05 PM
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!
I DON'T THINK I CAN LAST ANY LONGER :shock:
WITHOUT THIS FF!!!!!!
*starts to have difficulty breathing*

tears.dont.fall
July 3rd, 2008, 01:23 AM
lol...well i dont want to be the cause of any deaths
------------------------------------------------

SOMETHING IMPORTANT I FORGOT:
anything that is italicized is in German.

Chapter 2

Finding them is not a problem…staying near enough to them is. I’ve traveled all over trying to get close enough t o them to figure out how I could somehow work with them. While I did that I also found as much information about the twins as I could, from their parent’s divorce all the way to the name of Bill’s teddy bear to how Bill cuts a pizza. God, when I did all of my research…I felt like a freaking stalker psycho fan girl…thing. But a vamps gotta do what a vamps gotta do.(I tend to call myself a vamp…even though I’m not.)
Anyway…currently, I’m sitting in an airport waiting for my flight to LA to be announced…so bored.

“what are you listening to?" A voice asked me suddenly.

I turned to see none other than TH sitting around me.(oh the irony)

“music” I answered with a smirk and turning to Bill I asked “Does Tom always talk to strange girls?” (that’s not good…after all the people after him and Bill could be girls)

“ja he does…whenever they are alone…he’s shy when it comes to groups of girls.” bill said cracking out his melt-your-heart smile.

-Flight 423 bound for LA is now boarding. Have a wonderful flight and we hope that you enjoy flying on German Airways-

“that’s my flight!” I squeak jumping up knowing perfectly well that it was their flight too. And In my haste…I forgot my iPod and I never go ANYWHERE without my iPod.

I walk up to the ticket desk.

“name?” the lady asked

“Syrena Phoenix-Lisbon’ I stated, hissing slightly on my S’s (it’s a vamp thing)

“miss slight problem…this is a private flight” the lady replied

“what!? But my big brother, Krystopher Lisbon, told me that there would be a ticket waiting for me…for THIS flight.” I replied, becoming frantic.

“Krystopher Lisbon is your brother?” the lady asked, surprised

“well Krys Lisbon the 3rd is my brother.” (did I mention krys is a billionaire? Oh I didn’t…my mistake)

“oh I’m terribly sorry miss…here is your ticket!”
“its ok and danke!” I reply with a smile.

When I finally got to my seat, first class( danke Krys), I realized as I reached for it…my iPod was gone.

I was, quite literally, hanging out of the overhead luggage compartment when I heard Tom exclaim, “Well isn’t this our lucky day! Hot and able to get on a private flight.”( I’m glad I decided to wear jeans that day.)

“well it just so happens to be my big brother who got me on this flight…I mean he does own the airport…and Tom…keep it in your pants.” I replied as I dropped from the luggage compartment.

“you left this in the airport.” Georg said for the first time, handing me my iPod.

“OMIGOSH!!!! DANKEDANKEDANKE!!!!!”

“so….what are you listening to?” Tom tried again.

“your stupid pick-up line.”

All the guys, except Tom, cracked up laughing.


“well seeing as how we are all on this extremely long flight to LA, who are you?” Gustav (big shock…I know.) asked, suddenly curious.

“I’m Syrena Phoenix-Lisbon, I’m 17, tri-lingual, Japanese and extremely bored.” I say turning on my iPod.

That is I would have if Tom hadn’t reached over and stole it.

*twitch*

Georg got this look on his face like, oh snap.

“Tom…don’t make me go all crazy white chick on your ***.” I snap, giving him a look that gave a new meaning to ‘if looks could kill’.

Tom looked like he peed his pants and handed my iPod back.

“Danke” I say with a huge smile.

One hour of meaningless chit-chat, that was mostly smart-*** comments directed towards Tom, and four bags of gummibears later, I slowly drifted to sleep.

-AUTHORS POV-

Gustav leaned over towards Georg and whispered, “she creeps me out.”

“why is that?” Georg asked.

“I dunno, she just does.”

Syrena did have a creepy look to her especially today.
Tripp jeans, a corseted shirt, black fingerless gloves and black and green make-up. Not only that but the multi-colored streaks in her hair definitely made a statement.

“whatever Gustav. We should try to get some sleep. I think she’s ok and so do Bill and Tom. And plus I think we’re the only ones up.” Georg replied after looking Syrena over.

Gustav was still unsure about Syrena.

“yeah…I guess so.”

Eventually everyone was asleep.

Songs listened to for this chapter:
Tourniquet- Evanescence
Haunted- Evanescence
Goodbye We’re Falling Fast- Aiden
Die Romantic- Aiden



OK PEOPLE...I SERIOUSLY NEED FEEDBACK HERE.....um...oh i know...LIKE GEORG NEEDS HIS FLAT IRON!!!!!

Haley1018
July 3rd, 2008, 01:28 AM
I luffs it! :D
"Don't make me go all crazy white chick on your ***" :lol:

steevie!
July 3rd, 2008, 01:35 AM
ha,
that was great >.<

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 3rd, 2008, 02:05 AM
:lol: :lol: :lol:
Awesomeness!!

I'm gonna go and listen to "Die Romantic" now...

tokiohotel26
July 3rd, 2008, 03:47 AM
i died at the part where she said “Tom…don’t make me go all crazy white chick on your ***.” :lol: :lol: :lol:

MusiciansMuse
July 3rd, 2008, 07:58 AM
dude, if you don't update soon, I'M gonna go all crazy white chick on your ***!

mehr bitte! <3

blackmoon91892
July 3rd, 2008, 11:11 AM
Gusti is very perceptive

tears.dont.fall
July 3rd, 2008, 03:36 PM
dude, if you don't update soon, I'M gonna go all crazy white chick on your ***!

mehr bitte! <3

oh really?
well ya know what...no just no
chapter 3 out soon!!!

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 3rd, 2008, 05:22 PM
*sets up tent*
*unrolls TokioHotel sleeping bag*

I'm gonna wait for the next chapter, right here!
>.<

blackmoon91892
July 3rd, 2008, 06:07 PM
*sets up tent*
*unrolls TokioHotel sleeping bag*

I'm gonna wait for the next chapter, right here!
>.<
in two places at once now, are you? i will join you here then. *unrolls sleeping bag*

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 3rd, 2008, 06:43 PM
*sets up tent*
*unrolls TokioHotel sleeping bag*

I'm gonna wait for the next chapter, right here!
>.<
in two places at once now, are you? i will join you here then. *unrolls sleeping bag*

Yup...in 2 places at once! :mrgreen:
Cuz I'm magical. 8-)

tears.dont.fall
July 3rd, 2008, 08:27 PM
awww...i feel loved.

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 3rd, 2008, 11:40 PM
awww...i feel loved.

You should!!
*tacklehug*

I can do that now, cuz I'm not preggo anymmore! :mrgreen:

tears.dont.fall
July 3rd, 2008, 11:43 PM
awww...i feel loved.

You should!!
*tacklehug*

I can do that now, cuz I'm not preggo anymmore! :mrgreen:

xD nice

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 3rd, 2008, 11:45 PM
awww...i feel loved.

You should!!
*tacklehug*

I can do that now, cuz I'm not preggo anymmore! :mrgreen:

xD nice

8-)
Yup Yup!

tears.dont.fall
July 3rd, 2008, 11:53 PM
xD
i ♥ you guys!

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 3rd, 2008, 11:55 PM
xD
i ♥ you guys!

And we ♥ you!


Now go and add another chapter!
>.<

tears.dont.fall
July 4th, 2008, 12:13 AM
im working on it!

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 4th, 2008, 12:29 AM
im working on it!

Good girl!
You do that!!

*tacklehug*

8-)

tears.dont.fall
July 4th, 2008, 12:31 AM
im working on it!

Good girl!
You do that!!

*tacklehug*

8-)
-_-' i feel like steevie right now.

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 4th, 2008, 12:33 AM
im working on it!

Good girl!
You do that!!

*tacklehug*

8-)
-_-' i feel like steevie right now.

O.o

I tacklehug everyone.....

steevie!
July 4th, 2008, 12:38 AM
>.<
that made my day.

tears.dont.fall
July 4th, 2008, 12:52 AM
>.<
that made my day.
and you made mine!

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 4th, 2008, 12:53 AM
*is left out of the lovefest*
:cry:

steevie!
July 4th, 2008, 12:54 AM
haha Shelby ^_^

-points && laughs-


naw,
I'm jp.

tears.dont.fall
July 4th, 2008, 12:56 AM
:twisted:


*tacklehugs shelby*

^^ you should feel loved now ^^

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 4th, 2008, 01:02 AM
:twisted:


*tacklehugs shelby*

^^ you should feel loved now ^^

I feelz da lurve, nau!!!!!!!!!!!!
8-) ...feelz da lurve.

tears.dont.fall
July 4th, 2008, 01:11 AM
:twisted:


*tacklehugs shelby*

^^ you should feel loved now ^^

I feelz da lurve, nau!!!!!!!!!!!!
8-) ...feelz da lurve.
xD

tears.dont.fall
July 4th, 2008, 09:41 AM
i forget...did i send you a character thing?
crap...no you didnt

blackmoon91892
July 4th, 2008, 01:29 PM
i forget...did i send you a character thing?
crap...no you didnt
ok here it is then


Name: Ariel
Age: 18
Appearence: wears black most of the time....band shorts and stuff like that...chains, suspenders, studded belts and chokers. meduim length brown hair thats heavily layered...hazle/green eyes...very dark eyeliner......
personality: a generally happy person. very energetic. likes most people unless theres a good reason....and then you will know i dont like you. doesnt like being told what to do at all.

and i want to be a vampire!

raven
July 4th, 2008, 03:18 PM
aw cool write more

LipsOfAnAngel
July 4th, 2008, 04:48 PM
interesting. maybe i'll keep reading this one.

xluciax
July 7th, 2008, 08:17 PM
PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!! I REALLY NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!
Sorry... having a hyper moment there.... :D

Samantha<3Bill
July 8th, 2008, 11:50 AM
AHH. this is AMAZING. gahh keep going ur doing GREAT :mrgreen: :D :) 8-) :lol: :P

jadell129
July 8th, 2008, 03:50 PM
wow sy!!
this is awesome!! i was hooked after the second sentence!
haha plz wite more :D

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 8th, 2008, 03:54 PM
Sy, Im gonna poke you until you update!
*poke*
*poke*
*pokidy*
*poke*


8-) Ja. Take that!

Remember, Shelby luffs you! :oops:

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 10th, 2008, 01:17 PM
*poke*
*poke*
*pokidy*
*poke*

tears.dont.fall
July 10th, 2008, 01:23 PM
ima go crazy white chick on you ariel!!!
then there will be no update...it takes me forever to type up a chapter...sy is sorry

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 10th, 2008, 01:25 PM
ima go crazy white chick on you ariel!!!
then there will be no update...it takes me forever to type up a chapter...sy is sorry

I shall forgive you when you update.
:geek:

*poke*

tears.dont.fall
July 10th, 2008, 01:27 PM
-gets people mixed up-
hey shelby...i think...sorry running on no sleep right now

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 10th, 2008, 01:37 PM
-gets people mixed up-
hey shelby...i think...sorry running on no sleep right now

Yeah, it's me.
Weird *** perverted Shelby! 8-)

tears.dont.fall
July 10th, 2008, 01:47 PM
xD...is shelby on my list of characters?

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 10th, 2008, 01:49 PM
xD...is shelby on my list of characters?

I believe so....
:geek:

...am I?

tears.dont.fall
July 10th, 2008, 01:56 PM
xD...is shelby on my list of characters?

I believe so....
:geek:

...am I?
-doesnt think so-

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 10th, 2008, 01:57 PM
xD...is shelby on my list of characters?

I believe so....
:geek:

...am I?
-doesnt think so-

I think I sent you my info in a PM.

tears.dont.fall
July 10th, 2008, 02:48 PM
I think I sent you my info in a PM.
can you resend it please
-_-'
i think i deleted it

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 10th, 2008, 02:49 PM
I think I sent you my info in a PM.
can you resend it please
-_-'
i think i deleted it

Yup!
What all do you need?
I forgot... :oops:

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 10th, 2008, 03:02 PM
Name: Shelby
Age: 17
Style: Jeans, Heels, form fitting shirts. You could also say, "goth cowgirl"
Other: Hmm...what do you mean by "other" ??

blackmoon91892
July 10th, 2008, 03:23 PM
YOU JUST SAID YOU WROTE IT NOW POST IT! *throws a rock*

tears.dont.fall
July 11th, 2008, 09:53 PM
HEY NO THROWING THINGS!!!!!
or no posts...i gotta finish typing the next chappie.

tears.dont.fall
July 11th, 2008, 11:10 PM
Chapter 3

SCREECH!!!!!
I jerked awake to the sound of the landing gear coming to life( heightened senses…a gift and a curse.) I looked around at the sleeping guys and I carefully found his sidekick, added my name to his friends list( a bit obvious if you ask me… sy43schrei) and did the same for Tom and Georg. But just as I go to reach for Gustav’s , the fasten seat belt sign flipped on and the pilot came over the intercom announcing our arrival at LAX.

I quickly sat back down and accepted friend requests for the following:

Bill- gummibear-Bill
Tom- Guitar-Guy-TH
Georg- *Awesome-Possum*

[author: oh yeah….I went there…don’t ask how I came up with that…please…it involves lack of sleep, the 1st Lord of the Rings movie, and an extreme sugar high…not to mention the fact that it was 3 or 4 am ^^]

*FF to airport*

While TH was tackled by fan girls I slipped away…and sensed a vampire nearby.
Vamps tend to smell…well…intoxicating there really is no other way to explain it.
I didn’t know this vamp(after a while you can recognize each vamp’s scent), he or she could be the one im after.

At that time I dropped my bags and ran back towards the gate where TH had been standing mere moments ago…only to find them gone.
Quickly I ran back to where I dropped my bags and took of outside like I was being chased by a pack of rabid wolves and began my frantic search for the mystery vamp and TH.

When I got to the pick-up area I spotted TH…and the Vamp not far behind.

She was a small hyperactive vampire who was making a beeline for TH.
I hurried to catch up with them.

“OMIGOSH!!! Can I have your autographs? You guys are sooooo hot!!!” the girl asked them

She then noticed that I was standing next to her.

“OH you must be Syrena!!!! Krys was looking for you!!!!!!!!! I’m Ariel, your cousin!!!” she squealed, smiling taking her autograph and skipping over to a waiting limo with, yep you guessed it, Krys standing next to it.

“Syrena my dear little sister!!! Did you have a nice flight?” Krys asked, hugging me

“nice enough considering that I highly dislike flying” I replied hugging back

“anything new?” he whispered softly

“nein” I whisper back and turning to TH “ well I guess I’ll see you later”

“yeah see ya” Tom replied more than happy to be rid of my teasing.

At that time my sidekick vibrated and Krys was dragging me to the limo like there was no tomorrow.

*in the limo*

“what on earth are you in such a rush about seeing as how you’ve had 300 years to do just about wha…” I started

“Lucifer is a part of the plan to get the Kaulitz twins.” Krys interrupted.

Songs:
Wo Sind Eure Hande- TH
Wings Of A Butterfly- HIM
Grounded- Jairus Cry
Shadow Of The Day- Linkin’ Park

sorry it took so long
^^
chapter 4 is being types right now

just remember....I NEED FEEDBACK LIKE GUSTAV NEEDS HIS DRUMS
^^

Haley1018
July 11th, 2008, 11:21 PM
Yay update!!! :D

drummergirl24
July 11th, 2008, 11:22 PM
I loved it! Can't wait for more!

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 11th, 2008, 11:22 PM
ZOHMYGODDESSWHATTHEF*CK?!?!?!?!?!?!

tears.dont.fall
July 11th, 2008, 11:24 PM
ZOHMYGODDESSWHATTHEF*CK?!?!?!?!?!?!
xD what?

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 11th, 2008, 11:33 PM
ZOHMYGODDESSWHATTHEF*CK?!?!?!?!?!?!
xD what?

Sorry. I was watching cloverfield and saw the monsterthingy.
:oops:

tears.dont.fall
July 11th, 2008, 11:38 PM
save the crazy comment for after chapter 5 when i have everyne confused.


its got the 'family' tree in it
^^

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 11th, 2008, 11:41 PM
*waiting for the next chapters*

tears.dont.fall
July 12th, 2008, 12:03 AM
chapter 4 coming soon
^^

jadell129
July 12th, 2008, 12:17 AM
i loved it sy!
need more tho! haha

tokiohotel26
July 12th, 2008, 12:17 AM
<3 this ff!

tears.dont.fall
July 12th, 2008, 12:19 AM
hehe...i left a cliffhanger
-evil laugh-
im working on chapter 4...its a long one.

steevie!
July 12th, 2008, 02:58 AM
^-^

tears.dont.fall
July 12th, 2008, 03:07 AM
you're in the next chapter
^^
im almost done with it.

steevie!
July 12th, 2008, 03:09 AM
yaay :]

tears.dont.fall
July 12th, 2008, 03:13 AM
ok..be up in like 5 min.

steevie!
July 12th, 2008, 03:14 AM
yay!

tears.dont.fall
July 12th, 2008, 04:23 AM
IMPORTANT!!!
Anything that looks like this is Syrena's thoughts
^^


Chapter 4

Krys was still talking, but I didn’t hear a word he was saying.

…Lucifer…the object of my nightmares….the reason why I…why I hate myself!!
I can still hear his voice

Sy? Are you listening to me?

How he makes my blood boil

Sy? …You ok?

Nein…how can I be ok? Never in a million years from now will I ever be ok!!!!!

Sy!!

…Lucifer…

SY!!!!

…I want him dead…

Hello??? Earth to Sy!!!

…I can hear him calling me…

SY!!!!!
*SMACK*
I jerked back to reality when Krys smacked me. (he’s the only one allowed to hit me)

“WHAT WAS THAT FOR!?!?!?” I yell, touching my cheek

“I’ve been trying to get your attention for like an hour now!” krys snapped back. “now I’ve managed to contact TH’s tour manager and asked her if there were any jobs available for you and Ariel. They needed someone to assist the bodyguards and someone to help with light design.”

“I thought you weren’t going to interfere…”

“ well I wasn’t…but now that Lucifer is involved…its personal.” Krys said grimly “ that’s also where ariel comes in…good old Lucifer got her 2 years ago.”

“apparently I didn’t taste all that great…ooo…SHINY!!!” Ariel giggled, getting distracted by her zipper.

I just raised my eyebrows

“I know what you’re thinking…but Ariel is actually really good at creating distractions…that’s why she’s helping with the lights.” Krys said simply.

One thing I should mention about Krys and Lucifer….they are twins…one good, one evil.

We pulled up to a hotel that had a huge crowd standing outside that was so big (how big was it?) Texas wouldn’t have enough hotel rooms to keep them all happy. (and that’s BIG)

Our chauffer opened the door and Krys got out first followed soon by myself and Ariel.

Somehow we managed to get through the crowd and into the hotel.

“what the…are you following us or something?” a voice said from the other side of a couch.

“um…nein.”(um…ja) I said to a slightly miffed Tom

“HI I’m Lexi…the tour manager.” a woman’s voice cut across the intense Phoenix-Lisbon/ Kaulitz stare off with Ariel judging.

The newcomer dressed very similar to myself...but was definitely more of a gangsta style with a punk/emo twist. She was wearing a plain white tank with black jeans and white sneakers. She also had on black nail polish and hoop earrings.

“oh, this is Steevie, she’s our make-up artist.” Lexi pointed to another girl with crazy layered short black hair. Steevie had a blonde streak on the right side of her ’do and was dressed in jeans and a black tank and hoodie. She had dark, but awesomely done make-up, white nail polish, and a chain necklace. Steevie waved but kept glancing at Gustav.(not noticeably…I just caught her glance at him)

“I’m Syrena and the one trying to unzip all of Bill’s zippers (he was wearing the jeans with all the zippers in them) is Ariel” I reply laughing as Ariel gave a squeal of ‘SHINY!!’ and tried once again to attack Bill’s pants…and fell flat on her face.

One thing that’s for certain…there isn’t going to be a dull moment on this crazy ride.


Songs:
Discovery Channel- The Bloodhound Gang
La Vie Boheme- RENT movie cast
Gegen Meinen Willen- TH
Ocean Avenue- Yellowcard
[I hate that song…but it makes me angry ^^ and I need that for the beginning]


SY NEEDS FEEDBACK LIKE A COW NEEDS GRASS ^^

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 12th, 2008, 04:27 AM
:lol:

We pulled up to a hotel that had a huge crowd standing outside that was so big (how big was it?) Texas wouldn’t have enough hotel rooms to keep them all happy. (and that’s BIG)


Ya **** skippy! 8-)
woot woot!
TEXAS!!!

tears.dont.fall
July 12th, 2008, 04:27 AM
xD
that made my day

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 12th, 2008, 04:33 AM
xD
that made my day

WEll, you mentioned TEXAS. 8-)

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f102/hott_mama73/thfah-q.jpg
I want that printed on a shirt! :mrgreen:

tears.dont.fall
July 12th, 2008, 04:34 AM
xD
lol

Haley1018
July 12th, 2008, 05:04 AM
Luff ^-^

tears.dont.fall
July 12th, 2008, 05:13 AM
^^

jadell129
July 12th, 2008, 01:42 PM
love love love it sy!
more plz ^.^

drummergirl24
July 12th, 2008, 01:56 PM
Awesome Sy! I can't wait for the next chapter!

xluciax
July 12th, 2008, 02:03 PM
I just read chapers 3&4 and I LOVED them!!! They were so cool, Sy!!! Write more!!! PLEASE!!!! :D

blackmoon91892
July 12th, 2008, 02:16 PM
ok those where seriously funny. you got me pretty good. i like that i get to work the lights. im like a freaking walking distraction heehee....and the zippers....yes....i am facinated with them....and those are my fav pair of Bill's pants....haha....you must write more!!

steevie!
July 12th, 2008, 02:44 PM
^-^
I<3youSy!
I love!
Please continue!

tears.dont.fall
July 12th, 2008, 06:30 PM
lol...i thought you'd like that ariel
^^
ooo...gusti/steevie
^^
thats all im gonna say.

steevie!
July 12th, 2008, 07:12 PM
SSQQQQQUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!






!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

!

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 12th, 2008, 07:17 PM
Yay for Steevie and Gustibear!!!!
:mrgreen:

*secretly hoping for Shelby/Georg or Shelby/Bill*
:lol:

steevie!
July 12th, 2008, 07:20 PM
Steevie loves that in every fanfic she's in she's with Gustibear ^-^

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 12th, 2008, 07:22 PM
Steevie loves that in every fanfic she's in she's with Gustibear ^-^


I know you do!
8-)

tears.dont.fall
July 12th, 2008, 07:26 PM
...shelby georg....
hahahhahahaha...ha..heh..hmm....
no just no.
but...maybe bill.
or Krys?
you might like him...he cool

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 12th, 2008, 07:30 PM
...shelby georg....
hahahhahahaha...ha..heh..hmm....
no just no.
but...maybe bill.
or Krys?
you might like him...he cool


Bill! 8-)
But I guess Krys is cool, too.




*shiftey eyes*







VIVA LA BIORG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 8-)

tears.dont.fall
July 12th, 2008, 07:31 PM
...shelby georg....
hahahhahahaha...ha..heh..hmm....
no just no.
but...maybe bill.
or Krys?
you might like him...he cool


Bill! 8-)
But I guess Krys is cool, too.




*shiftey eyes*







VIVA LA BIORG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 8-)
ima smack you silly

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 12th, 2008, 07:32 PM
...shelby georg....
hahahhahahaha...ha..heh..hmm....
no just no.
but...maybe bill.
or Krys?
you might like him...he cool


Bill! 8-)
But I guess Krys is cool, too.




*shiftey eyes*







VIVA LA BIORG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 8-)
ima smack you silly


:lol:
I lurves you!
:mrgreen:

tears.dont.fall
July 12th, 2008, 07:34 PM
Bill! 8-)
But I guess Krys is cool, too.




*shiftey eyes*[/color]







VIVA LA BIORG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 8-)
ima smack you silly


:lol:
I lurves you!
:mrgreen: [/quote]
you better...ill write outta the 'family' tree
^^

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 12th, 2008, 07:38 PM
you better...ill write outta the 'family' tree
^^[/quote]

:shock:
iloveyouiloveyouiloveyouiloveyou!!!!!!!!!!!!

tears.dont.fall
July 12th, 2008, 07:53 PM
you better...ill write outta the 'family' tree
^^

:shock:
iloveyouiloveyouiloveyouiloveyou!!!!!!!!!!!![/quote]
that...made...my day
xD
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 12th, 2008, 07:56 PM
*Flyingtacklehugs Sy*
:mrgreen:

tears.dont.fall
July 12th, 2008, 08:05 PM
*Flyingtacklehugs Sy*
:mrgreen:
...ow...

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 12th, 2008, 08:06 PM
*Flyingtacklehugs Sy*
:mrgreen:
...ow...

Sorry.
Is my *** in your face again?

tears.dont.fall
July 12th, 2008, 08:16 PM
*Flyingtacklehugs Sy*
:mrgreen:
...ow...

Sorry.
Is my *** in your face again?
nein...that was in the dogpile earlier.
your on my wounded leg

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 12th, 2008, 08:17 PM
whoops!
Sorry, darlin!

tears.dont.fall
July 12th, 2008, 08:25 PM
s'ok

blackmoon91892
July 12th, 2008, 08:26 PM
WRITE WOMAN WRITE!!

tears.dont.fall
July 12th, 2008, 08:29 PM
OK
:shock:
i just posted 2 chapters...sheesh

blackmoon91892
July 12th, 2008, 08:35 PM
OK
:shock:
i just posted 2 chapters...sheesh
i know. i just wanted to say something but you guys talked alot since the last time i was on and im too lazy to figure out what all i missed

tears.dont.fall
July 12th, 2008, 08:37 PM
OK
:shock:
i just posted 2 chapters...sheesh
i know. i just wanted to say something but you guys talked alot since the last time i was on and im too lazy to figure out what all i missed
i sorry.

blackmoon91892
July 12th, 2008, 08:38 PM
OK
:shock:
i just posted 2 chapters...sheesh
i know. i just wanted to say something but you guys talked alot since the last time i was on and im too lazy to figure out what all i missed
i sorry.
so what did i miss?

tears.dont.fall
July 12th, 2008, 08:45 PM
haev you read chapter 3 & 4?
if so...then nothing.
but i will give you a bit of...um...a sneak peak? yeah.
someone almost dies.
it involves Lucifer, Syrena(me), Steevie, Georg, and Gustav.
the twins are hidden somewhere with Ariel and Shelby(new character TBA) Krys goes MIA....and if i tell anymore then that, it wont be a surprise.
^^

TexasGirlLovesTH
July 12th, 2008, 08:47 PM
haev you read chapter 3 & 4?
if so...then nothing.
but i will give you a bit of...um...a sneak peak? yeah.
someone almost dies.
it involves Lucifer, Syrena(me), Steevie, Georg, and Gustav.
the twins are hidden somewhere with Ariel and Shelby(new character TBA) Krys goes MIA....and if i tell anymore then that, it wont be a surprise.
^^


8-)

blackmoon91892
July 12th, 2008, 08:49 PM
haev you read chapter 3 & 4?
if so...then nothing.
but i will give you a bit of...um...a sneak peak? yeah.
someone almost dies.
it involves Lucifer, Syrena(me), Steevie, Georg, and Gustav.
the twins are hidden somewhere with Ariel and Shelby(new character TBA) Krys goes MIA....and if i tell anymore then that, it wont be a surprise.
^^oh yeah ive read the chapters. i just wanted to know what all the discussion was about after i posted about the zippers

tears.dont.fall
July 12th, 2008, 09:03 PM
i cant remember

xluciax
July 13th, 2008, 03:17 PM
*starts begging on both kneas*
PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! PLEASE!!!

tarnished-memory
July 13th, 2008, 04:11 PM
>.< Chibi's got another fan fic addiction! WRITE!

tears.dont.fall
July 13th, 2008, 09:53 PM
lol
tis coming...its a long chappie so it'll take a while

blackmoon91892
July 13th, 2008, 11:25 PM
HURRY OR ARIEL WILL DIE!!

tears.dont.fall
July 13th, 2008, 11:40 PM
-isnt in the mood to type-

it will be up before i go to pennsylvania.

tarnished-memory
July 13th, 2008, 11:50 PM
-isnt in the mood to type-

it will be up before i go to pennsylvania.
O.o Which is when?!

tears.dont.fall
July 14th, 2008, 12:31 AM
-isnt in the mood to type-

it will be up before i go to pennsylvania.
O.o Which is when?!
sometime soon...waiting for my sister to call me.

tarnished-memory
July 14th, 2008, 12:33 AM
-isnt in the mood to type-

it will be up before i go to pennsylvania.
O.o Which is when?!
sometime soon...waiting for my sister to call me.
It better be soon.

tears.dont.fall
July 14th, 2008, 12:50 AM
it is
^^

tarnished-memory
July 14th, 2008, 09:37 AM
YAY!

Samantha<3Bill
July 14th, 2008, 11:17 PM
MOREEEE :mrgreen:

raven
July 18th, 2008, 08:01 PM
more :evil:


please :D

Samantha<3Bill
July 23rd, 2008, 03:21 PM
UGG GIRLL WRITE MORE YOU ARE KEEPING ME ON EDGE!!

Hahaha, on the edge ***Its getting light outside she is still there but no one caresss** lol sorry :mrgreen:

Samantha<3Bill
August 2nd, 2008, 11:45 PM
More BITTE.

tears.dont.fall
August 3rd, 2008, 06:18 PM
i havent been on because i was at my dad's and he doesnt have internet....



please dont hurt me!!!!!!!!

i will update soon as i can

blackmoon91892
August 3rd, 2008, 08:45 PM
HURRY! IM DYING!

Samantha<3Bill
August 7th, 2008, 09:55 PM
WRITEWRITEWRITEEE :D

Lol.. No pressure.... :?

WHAT ARE YOU THINKING HURRY UP!! :o

One again...No pressure :mrgreen:

tears.dont.fall
August 7th, 2008, 10:00 PM
i will...but right now i cant...long chapters...and i take forever to type something.
i is sowwy.
your patience will be rewarded with some Tom torture and a little romance ;)
oh and of course an attack by some blood thirsty vamps

Samantha<3Bill
August 7th, 2008, 10:20 PM
OHOHO. I can't wait. WAITWAIT..Do I still play the role of Tom's girlfriend l8er??

Or has it changed...?

tears.dont.fall
August 7th, 2008, 10:25 PM
you arent in it yet...so idk.

Samantha<3Bill
August 7th, 2008, 10:27 PM
mmkay..Cuz I know I signed up to be the bad girl and or Tom's Girlfriend.

I was the only original one. :mrgreen:

ACK. This story is amazing.

tears.dont.fall
August 7th, 2008, 10:57 PM
thanks...and i only know of 2 positive couples so far...not saying who though.

Samantha<3Bill
August 8th, 2008, 06:37 PM
OooOoH


YAY. I wanna knowww :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

tears.dont.fall
August 9th, 2008, 10:41 PM
NO!!!!

but the twins are still......
and the G's are.......


:twisted:
im so evil

blackmoon91892
August 10th, 2008, 03:03 PM
JUST F*CKING UPDATE!

tears.dont.fall
August 10th, 2008, 05:36 PM
:shock:
....ok....

tarnished-memory
August 10th, 2008, 06:56 PM
Please?

tears.dont.fall
August 10th, 2008, 06:58 PM
-is working on a very complicated chapter5-

please...dont hurt me...i really am working on it!!!

xluciax
August 10th, 2008, 09:24 PM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA Y!!!!!!!!!!

tears.dont.fall
August 11th, 2008, 09:44 PM
:shock:

Samantha<3Bill
August 12th, 2008, 10:58 PM
Lol, take your time girl. I good chapter takes work 8-)

Don't stress :mrgreen:


But hurry up cuz I'm uber excited

tears.dont.fall
August 13th, 2008, 08:14 PM
Chapter 5 Part 1
Family Ties

If you haven’t noticed, I keep calling people my ‘brother’ or they introduce themselves as a new family member. All for good reason, of course. When a human is bitten by , oh lets just say, Lucifer…his older brother, Krys knows…ya know, twin senses. Ever since Lucifer turned evil for reasons unknown, krus follows his brother everywhere, rescuing Lucifer’s victims, like myself and Ariel.

In this chapter, its Ariel’s tale…and then a very confusing journey through my “family tree”.

ARIEL’S POV

Whenever I see something shiny, I go straight for. I have a huge fear of getting lost, which happens quite a bit…like right now.

All I know is that I’m somewhere near a creepy old mansion that’s supposedly haunted, and its almost midnight.

I can remember walking into the mansion’s gardens and getting distracted by something shiny, a mirror to be exact. As I looked into the mirror, I saw a tall man with long, silky, white blonde hair and bright glowing red eyes. I was so scared…I couldn’t move.

“hn…I was right….humans are easily distracted.” he hissed.

I had no strength left in my body. Every fiber of my being was screaming at me to run, but I couldn’t. not even when he moved my hair and bit down on my neck.

“such a beauty…” he whispered in my ear.

~…so much pain…~

“Lucifer…let…her…go.” another voice demanded.

I can remember seeing his face, so much like Lucifer’s, yet so different. The second man had medium-long white blond hair that was spiked up, kinda like that blond guy in that one band…um…Forever The Sickest Kids.

~never heard their music…I’ve only seen their pictures~

He had bright silver gray eyes, instead of the glowing red ones.

“well if it isn’t Krys, my hero of a big brother.” Lucifer sneered, releasing me. I sunk to my knees, shocked, but still alive.

I heard a loud bang, a scream and then I gave myself up to the inevitable darkness.

When I woke up, I had no idea where I was, but I did know that I was still 17 year old Ariel Jones, who easily got hyper off of gummy worms and easily got distracted by shiny things, I don’t know how I knew, but I did know that I was a vampire.


Sorry this took so long to get up!!!!! Part 2 is the confusing part of Chapter 5...so bear with me.

Haley1018
August 13th, 2008, 08:19 PM
FTSK!!!!<3

I loved it! :shock:

blackmoon91892
August 13th, 2008, 08:21 PM
*dances* Ariel likes!

tears.dont.fall
August 13th, 2008, 08:22 PM
^^
i made people happy
^^




...that sounded so wrong...

haley...do i need to listen to FTSK???

Haley1018
August 13th, 2008, 08:25 PM
Yes.

Yes, you do. ^-^

tarnished-memory
August 13th, 2008, 08:28 PM
XD You got Ariel mastered.


I love it!

raven
August 13th, 2008, 08:33 PM
sweet i luff it

Samantha<3Bill
August 13th, 2008, 09:31 PM
AHH. you posted :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

ACK. I CAN'T WAIT FOR MOREEEEE.

tears.dont.fall
September 2nd, 2008, 05:28 PM
OK GUYS!!!!!
im so sorry i havent been updating....but all for good reason.
i no longer have internet at my house and it takes me foreve to type a chapter...however...i havent forgotten about anyone or anything in the forums...i miss you all so much...and ill work on updateds to be posted!!!!!!