Unexpected Bump

[jennaybell]

so i use to hate reading fanfics because they seamed so real and it would just make me jealous...
sad isnt it?
well i read a few and so i was like i think ill make one soo here it is
=D


Chapter 1

Jenny was so excited about the upcoming Summer concerts and was at the mall to pick out a cute outfit for them. But she had to go by herself because all of her friends were busy…
Jenny’s favorite band was Tokio Hotel and wanted to look awesome for the concert and the signing.
She also knew that they liked to go shopping whenever they could and she was hoping to get a sneak peak at the band members at the mall.
Her phone rings and it turns out to be her best friend Jason (they have been friends since the 8th grade).

“Where are you at missy?”
“Must you know everything?”
“Well for you info I know you are at the mall finding something to wear for the upcoming concerts and you are hoping to see ‘Bill’…you know the guy you have been stalking ever since the 9th grade?”
“Oh shut up Jason! You are sending a negative vibe towards me and I don’t like it! Haha.”
“Well I just wanted to tell you that you are obnoxious and that’s it!”
“You called me just to say that?”
“Yep! I got to go. Loves you!”
“Yea whatever!”

The line goes dead and Jenny continues looking for the perfect outfit.
Soon she sees a familiar face she hadn’t seen in a while.
It was her friend Tyler (Jenny had a big crush on him in the previous years…HAD).
“Jennay!”
“Ty!”
*hugs*
“So what have you been up to?”
“Oh nothing much. Shopping for the perfect rock concert outfit. You?”
“Uhm I’m just shopping. It gets kind of boring since your computer crashed and we haven’t been able to talk…”
“You have my number you know.”
“But its not the same.”
“Sure. Well I got to go. I’ll call you?”
“Yea sure thing.”
They said their good-byes and went separate ways. Jenny is all happy and is all up in the clouds and didn’t notice that she was about to bump into someone.
BANG!
Jenny and the other person both fall and the things in their bags go flying.

“I am so sorry!” Jenny says hastily.
“Its okay…” the person said in a German accent.

When they had fallen the other person’s sunglasses fell off and they put them back on in a hurry.
But not fast enough for Jenny to catch a glance at their eyes.
Jenny then looks over the person and right at that moment she knew who it was.
Jenny crawls over to the other person and helps pick up their things and whispered, “Are you Bill Kaulitz?”


tell me what you think!

[xXKillerxQueenXx]

OHMiGOD! Awesome! Continue plz!

[tarnished-memory]

Keep going! I need new fan fiction addictions all the time!

You're doing fine!

[jennaybell]

Chapter 2

The other person just stopped in their tracks and looked at me, or at least that was where his face was facing since I couldn’t see their eyes.

“Is it obvious?”
“Nein…I mean no.” Jenny said smiling at him.
“Well I’m trying to keep it that way.”
“I think I could help!”
“Really?”
“Yea. Just stick close by me.”

So with that we went on our way to the food court and talked the whole time. When we got there we got us some McDonald’s and sat down to eat.
Soon after some fans spotted him and came rushing over asking a lot of questions and asking for autographs.
I motioned for Bill to stay quiet and for me to take the matters into my own hands.

“Uhmm excuse me girls. This is not who you think is ‘Bill Kaulitz’. This is my cousin Joe and he has horrible lisp and doesn’t talk in public. So please go on your way and leave us be.”

The girls gave me glares and left.

“You didn’t have to do that you know!” Bill whispered harshly.
“Yes I did! Once you gave them what they wanted they would have came back with more fans and before you know it you are surrounded by fans!”
“You make a good point. That was also quit a story. How’d you come up with that?”
“Practice.” Jenny said with a smirk.
“Well your practice just saved me from being…what do you call it?”
“Mobbed?”
“Exactly!”

So they talked for another thirty minutes and got up to go shopping.
Turns out that Jenny has the same fashion taste as Bill so they go to all the same stores and try on a bunch of clothes. By the end of the day they both had their arms full of bags of clothing.

“Well, I think that is a days worth of shopping” Jenny said sarcastically.
“Yep. Uhmm Jenny?”
“Yeah?”
“Do you want to come to the hotel and meet the boys?”
“Do I want to? Of course!”
“I knew you would say yes. Since I’m just so adorable and you cant resist.”
“Haha. You know, that is so true.” I said with a big smile on my face.
“Oh and before I forget, Tom is very uhmm… What’s it called again?”
“Flirtatious?”
“How do you know everything?”
“Practice?”
“You sure do practice a lot don’t you?”
“Oh yes.”

[blackmoon91892]

*claps like and insane perosn* WRITE MORE!!!

[tarnished-memory]

*laughs*

Practice makes perfect. XP


More!

[tokiohotel26]

more! :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: please?

[jennaybell]

if you ant to be in the story fill this out

Name:[in the story]
Age:[in the story]
Personality:[in the story]
Looks:[optional for the story]

and workin on chapter 3!

[jennaybell]

Chapter 3

They arrive at the hotel laughing at a joke Bill told. They were greeted by Tom who was snickering.

“Little bro took a long time at the mall.” Tom snickered.
“Tom, I want you to meet Jenny. She kept me from being mobbed today at the mall so I invited her to meet the rest of the band.”
“Okay… Whatever you say little bro.” Tom said with a wink at me.

Jenny met the rest of the band and she fit right in. They all sat down on the couch and told things about their selves. Jenny found out that Gustav wasn’t that quiet (he doesn’t like the media to know his business) and Georg is a perv but a funny one at that! Tom was all that she had been told- funny, perverted, and hot.
Bill got up to get some drinks and when he came back, he sat beside Jenny on the loveseat that was vacant.

“Get it Bill!” Tom said with a smirk.
“How about you get your own?” Bill said smiling at me.
“Awwww” Gustav and Georg said at the same time.
“Don’t be jealous” Bill said while he put his arm around me.

Right then Jenny started to panic through her mind.
Did I put on deodorant? How is my breath?
You are fine! Plus if he smelt you he would have gotten up to get more drinks.
Jenny felt reassured and scooted next to Bill more and smiled up at him.
Bill looked down at Jenny and smiled so sweetly when Georg decided to point out that it 2 a.m.!

“Well I have an empty bed in my room.” Bill offered so kindly.
“And the bed will probably stay empty!” Tom said with a laugh.
Bill ignored Tom’s remark and said, “I would feel awful if you to drove home all by yourself at 2 in the morning.”
“Okay. I am feeling a little tired.” I said after a moment of thinking.
“I will go get the room ready for you.”
“Thank you Bill.”

As Bill left the room Tom Georg and Gustav all moved closer to Jenny asking a lot of questions.
“So how did you become the lucky girl?”
“What do you do for a living?”
“Are you thief?”
“Are you an undercover reporter?”

“Well aren’t you all so protective” Jenny said with a smile.
They continue to stare her down.
“I helped him out at the mall. I work at the mall at Sak’s Fifth. I stole a bag of m&m’s when I was seven and that’s it. And no I’m not an undercover reporter, I have been a fan since your first album. You happy now?”
“I’m starting to like this chick.” Tom said.

They all laughed and then Bill walked back into the room.

“Jenny you can go ahead and go in the bathroom and change. I set out one of Tomi’s big shirts for you to wear.” Bill said.
“Thank you Bill.”

Jenny walked into the bathroom and while she was changing the band sat and talked.
“I think she is a keeper” Bill said.
“Well I know she is a big fan and she really likes you.” Gustav said.
“She said she liked me?”
“No but we can tell dude. And this time I dot think this girl likes you for the fame and money. She likes you for you.” Georg said.
“This is like a dream come true for Billi.” Tom said sarcastically.
“Oh shut up Tomi.” Bill retorted.
“Did anybody miss me while I was gone?” Jenny said walking in the room with one of Tom’s shirts on.
“Bill did.” Tom muttered.
“Well I am going to get in the bed now so- how do you say it in German?” Jenny asked.
“Nacht?” They said in unison.
“Yes, nacht.” Jenny said and walked into the bedroom.

Bill got up and went into the bedroom and was about to go the bathroom when he saw Jenny in the bed.
He walks to her bed and leans over and kisses her on the head.

“Good night Jenny.”

[xXo0BillKaulitz0oXx]

Gahh,Its hard for me to find a story I can really get into,
and this one is completely wining me over!!
Great Job!!!
Please Keep going!!
Mehr Bitte!!!
XD

[tarnished-memory]

*squeals* AW!

[xXKillerxQueenXx]

OOH! I love it!
Now, I think that I'm the first one here....

Name:I'll go by my real name: Ally.
Age: Am I allowed to change my age? If I can, I'd like to be a decent age...you can pick.
Personality: Well, in real life, I'm kinda shy, but I can also be spunky and bubbly and hyper and fun.
Looks: Well, In real life, I'm like, Eurasian or whatever you call it. Half Polish, Half Chinese/Malaysian.
That basically means that I have dark hair, dark eyes, and average height. I don't know why, but they call that "exotic beauty"
*Starts laughing*
What is it with me and these laughing fits? Ugghhh.

Oh, wait! I don't want to be rude, but just in case, can I not be some strange desperate fangirl/stalker/weirdo?
Sorry, I get all like, paranoid and stuff for no reason.
It's amazing, because they say I'm perfectly fine...
*haha*

[jennaybell]

OOH! I love it!
Now, I think that I'm the first one here....

Name:I'll go by my real name: Ally.
Age: Am I allowed to change my age? If I can, I'd like to be a decent age...you can pick.
Personality: Well, in real life, I'm kinda shy, but I can also be spunky and bubbly and hyper and fun.
Looks: Well, In real life, I'm like, Eurasian or whatever you call it. Half Polish, Half Chinese/Malaysian.
That basically means that I have dark hair, dark eyes, and average height. I don't know why, but they call that "exotic beauty"
*Starts laughing*
What is it with me and these laughing fits? Ugghhh.


yea jenny in the story is 18
do you want to be 18?

[xXKillerxQueenXx]

18 sounds good to me. Maybe it's bumping my age a little, but like I said, 18 is fine. =D

[blackmoon91892]

oh!! so cute!!!

[tokiohotel26]

awesome chappies!!!!!!!!!


Name:Lexi [alexis]
Age:17
Personality:crazy and random but not mental hospital crazy. just wild. LOVES TOM! [my billi is taken so ill go for tom]
Looks:always wears black nail polish and hoop earrings. gangsta style with a punk/emo twist.

anything else u need?

18 sounds good to me. Maybe it's bumping my age a little, but like I said, 18 is fine. =D
i know what u mean. 17 is bumping my age up 3 years.

[jennaybell]

well yea
im bumping my age up 4 years but it is a fanfic

but you can be whatever age you want to be

[xXKillerxQueenXx]

awesome chappies!!!!!!!!!


Name:Lexi [alexis]
Age:17
Personality:crazy and random but not mental hospital crazy. just wild. LOVES TOM! [my billi is taken so ill go for tom]
Looks:always wears black nail polish and hoop earrings. gangsta style with a punk/emo twist.

anything else u need?

18 sounds good to me. Maybe it's bumping my age a little, but like I said, 18 is fine. =D
i know what u mean. 17 is bumping my age up 3 years.

OHMYGOD. You're like me, except that I like Bill.
My real name is Alexa, close to Alexis...
I'm about your age, because you said that you bumped your age up...
I can be crazy and wild and random
And I'm a gangsta/emo person, basically.

Sorry, I have this weird way of finding similarities in other people.

[tokiohotel26]

awesome chappies!!!!!!!!!


Name:Lexi [alexis]
Age:17
Personality:crazy and random but not mental hospital crazy. just wild. LOVES TOM! [my billi is taken so ill go for tom]
Looks:always wears black nail polish and hoop earrings. gangsta style with a punk/emo twist.

anything else u need?

18 sounds good to me. Maybe it's bumping my age a little, but like I said, 18 is fine. =D
i know what u mean. 17 is bumping my age up 3 years.

OHMYGOD. You're like me, except that I like Bill.
My real name is Alexa, close to Alexis...
I'm about your age, because you said that you bumped your age up...
I can be crazy and wild and random
And I'm a gangsta/emo person, basically.

Sorry, I have this weird way of finding similarities in other people.
nope we r just about the same because i LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE [1 hour later] LOVE LOVE BILL!!!!!!!

[xXKillerxQueenXx]

Quote

"OHMYGOD. You're like me, except that I like Bill.
My real name is Alexa, close to Alexis...
I'm about your age, because you said that you bumped your age up...
I can be crazy and wild and random
And I'm a gangsta/emo person, basically.

Sorry, I have this weird way of finding similarities in other people."

"nope we r just about the same because i LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE [1 hour later] LOVE LOVE BILL!!!!!!!"
___

*Squeals loud fangirl scream*
EEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!
yay!
Bill!
Wow, twinzies...
*starts laughing again*

[tokiohotel26]

Quote

"OHMYGOD. You're like me, except that I like Bill.
My real name is Alexa, close to Alexis...
I'm about your age, because you said that you bumped your age up...
I can be crazy and wild and random
And I'm a gangsta/emo person, basically.

Sorry, I have this weird way of finding similarities in other people."

"nope we r just about the same because i LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE [1 hour later] LOVE LOVE BILL!!!!!!!"
___

*Squeals loud fangirl scream*
EEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!
yay!
Bill!
Wow, twinzies...
*starts laughing again*

your like the long lost twin i never had! :cry:
im crying tears of joy
*laughing and rolling on the floor* :lol:


hmmm....im hungry and i wanna doughnut
yum doughuts... :mrgreen:

[jennaybell]

chapter four is on its way

and if you submitted to be in the story you will be in it...i have to build it up a little more and you will be introduced =D

[jennaybell]

Chapter 4

Jenny was the first one awake and she got up and sat down on the couch and turned on the television.
She turned it to MTV Hit List and guess who was on with their hit list?
Correct: Tokio Hotel.
She turned it up a little and then she heard footsteps.

“I see you found us on the screen?” Bill said behind me.
“Yes I have. And I have to say you are looking pretty good at seven o’clock in the morning.”
“And so do you.” He sat right beside me and out my hand around me.
“When I first woke up, I thought yesterday was a dream. But I woke up in the same room as you which confirmed it was not a dream. But if this is some dream that is forever long I hope I never wake up.”
“I hope you don’t wake up. You just got to know me.”
“Exactly”
“So tell me, how big of a fan are you of Tokio Hotel?”
“Well I’m on the e-team, street team, I’m a member of the official forum that you should so look at, member of the official Tokio Hotel website and a few others.”
“Wow. So I guess you know a lot about me?”
“A lot.” Jenny said with a smile.
“Well we have all day don’t we?”

So Jenny told him all that she knew about Bill and highlighting on romantic.
Bill laughed and told her what was wrong and what was true. Then they talked for an hour with none of the other boys up yet.
And the room started to get cold.

“Bill, does it seem cold to you?”
“Yea its getting a little chilly. I will go get a blanket.”
Bill left and Jenny was left to think.
Omg I love his accent!
I can’t believe I’m not dreaming!
Wait, did Bill say ‘a’ blanket?
Don’t get too excited.
Calm down.

Bill came back with of course ONE blanket. He sat down really close to Jenny and draped the blanket over both of them.
They looked at each other and time moved fast until his face was only two inches away from her face…

[xXKillerxQueenXx]

Quote

"OHMYGOD. You're like me, except that I like Bill.
My real name is Alexa, close to Alexis...
I'm about your age, because you said that you bumped your age up...
I can be crazy and wild and random
And I'm a gangsta/emo person, basically.

Sorry, I have this weird way of finding similarities in other people."

"nope we r just about the same because i LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE [1 hour later] LOVE LOVE BILL!!!!!!!"
___

*Squeals loud fangirl scream*
EEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!
yay!
Bill!
Wow, twinzies...
*starts laughing again*

your like the long lost twin i never had! :cry:
im crying tears of joy
*laughing and rolling on the floor* :lol:


hmmm....im hungry and i wanna doughnut
yum doughuts... :mrgreen:

Twins!?!? I've always wanted a twin!
Yay!
Donuts? I want a donut!

May I have the secret code that will digitally transport the donut to me via internet?

Oh, yeah, good chapter btw. Love this story!

[xXo0BillKaulitz0oXx]

Yay!,XD
L.O.V.E it!
Please Update soon!
XD Mehr Bitte!

[jennaybell]

Chapter 5

“Hey you two lovebirds!” Tom yelled.
“Why don’t you get on with your life or something? Stop stooping around me and ruining my moments!” Bill yelled back.
“Don’t have to get all mad about it.”
“Sure I don’t. I don’t go around watching you and your girlfriends kiss!”
“Fine I get the point. I’m leaving for the mall.”

Just then Jenny’s phone rang. She jumped up and left Bill and ran to get it. It was her best friends Ally and Lexi wanting to know if I wanted to go the mall with them today.

“Well I’m going to have company, is that okay?” Jenny asked.
“Well who is it?” Ally asked.
“You’ll see. And Lexi, I think I might have someone for you.”
“What?!” Lexi asked shockingly
“Got to go! See you in a few!” Jenny said.

The line went dead and Jenny raced to catch up with Tom. But paused as she saw Bill’s look of puzzlement and motioned that she would be right back.

“Tom! Wait up!”
“What? Want to give me a kiss now?” Tom joked.
“No… I was wondering if I could go with you to the mall.”
“Sure. Hurry though.”
“I’ll be ready in 10 min.” Jenny turned to leave.
“And Jenny?”
“Yeah?”
“You know you are still wearing my shirt out in the lobby.”
“See ya!” she said quickly.

Jenny rushed back into the room finding Bill still in the same spot staring at her as she walked in.

“What was that about?”
“I asked Tom if I could go to the mall with him.”
“Why?” he said as I sat down next to him.
“Because I have a best friend that loves him to death and I want her to meet him.”
“Oh. I thought you were leaving me for him.”
“I would never do that to you!”

And with that, he kissed her on the head.
Jenny sat there beaming at Bill.

“Well can I come along with you and Tom to the mall?”
“Of course you can!”
“Well lets get ready.”
“I have a question as of getting ready.”
“What is it?”
“How do you rock that eyeliner so well?”
“Haha. I have super powers.”
“I want those super powers!”
“How about I shed off some of my powers on you?”
“That would be awesome.”

They both laughed hard and got up to go get ready.



and im not writing anymore until i get more feedback...

[tarnished-memory]

*squeal*

CUTE!

[jennaybell]

*squeal*

CUTE!


i squeal about it too
and im writing it!!
lol

[Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S]

*new reader* i love your story!!! and i was wondering even though this is my first time reading it if i can be in your story? :D

[jennaybell]

*new reader* i love your story!!! and i was wondering even though this is my first time reading it if i can be in your story? :D


yea!
just give me what you want your name, age, personality and description of yourself of what you want to be in the story
[ which means that you dont have to be totally yourself in the story ]

[xXo0BillKaulitz0oXx]

Gahhh,I love it so much!!
See now I want to have a "Unexpected Bump" with Bill!!
XD...Well,
I can dream!

[Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S]

name:Karissa
age:18
description: 5'8, dark brown hair a couple inches past the shoulders with a rock style haircut, and green eyes
personality: shy and cute at first until she knows the person a little bit, loves to wear cute clothes, but also loves to shop at Hot Topic for random things like fish nets, loves to sing (especially the soundtrack from Wicked and Tokio Hotel songs, when someone gives her sugar they better watch out...

anything else just message me! :D

[tokiohotel26]

AAAAAAHHHHHHH! IM IN THE STORY! YAY!!!!! AND I GET TO BE WITH TOM!!!! IM SOOOO HAPPY :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

[iilyRein]

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY IT ROCKS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHH

[LuckyShelbs92]

Pretty awesome, Jen.

Can't wait for more. :]

Und just yell at me if I don't comment after a few chapters...or one. xD

[BillsEternalRose]

Um, ja, can I be in teh story too??? I absolutely love how its coming along!

Name: Erika

Age: 18

Personality: pretty much how I am in real life... Fun, spontanous, slightly perv (think Georg), and I have a great sense of humor. I mainly have a thing for Bill, but since he's taken, I'll go for my second choice, Georg! (I see Tom as a brother, and I'm in love with Georg's eyes/hair) I am NOT a CFF. In real life or otherwise.

Looks:
(just take a look at my siggy! Except in the story, the red streaks in my irises are way more pronounced, making them resemble the color of rich dark cherry wood.)

Can't wait to read more!

[xXxMandiixXx]

THIS FANFIC ROCKS!!!

i love the story line and bahaha joe and bad lisp i couldnt help but laugh at that :P :P

CONTINUE!!
<3 Mandii xx

[jennaybell]

it might be a day or 2 for the next chapter
im workin on it though!

[jennaybell]

Chapter 6

“I have been waiting for 20 minutes you two!” Tom yelled.
“Sorry, Bill helped with the eyeliner.” Jenny said.
“Well, you cant really tell since that’s how you usually do your makeup!” Tom joked.
“Haha real funny” Jenny said sticking her tongue out.

Bill walked up behind Jenny and hugged her tightly then stepped beside her.

“Bill is coming too?” Tom asked.
“Yes I am Tomi. I don’t think I got what I wanted to yesterday.” Bill said slyly.
“That is so great…” he said sarcastically.

On the way to the mall Jenny explained that she was meeting with some friends and that she would like to introduce them to the twins. But she didn’t tell Tom that she was going to try to hook him up with her best friend Lexi.
They arrived at the mall and met up with Jenny’s friends. And when Jenny spotted them, she motioned for them to stay quiet.
Lexi and Ally’s jaws dropped to the floor when they saw who Jenny was with.

“Tom, Bill, I want you to meet my friends Lexi and Ally.” Jenny announced.
“Hallo Lexi and Ally!” Bill said.
“Well hey Lexi… and nice to meet you Ally” Tom said smiling.


They at first all went to the same stores. Then as Tom got to know Lexi more, asked her if she wanted to go to another store.
She of course excepted. So it was Jenny, Bill, and Ally left.
“So Jenny, how did you come across Bill?” Ally asked.
“I just saved him from a mob of fans yesterday and I got rewarded by seeing the rest of the band.” Jenny answered.
“Oh…Got ya.”
“But I think Jenny is pretty awesome for an American chick.” Bill said.
“Why thank you Billi. I think you are pretty awesome for a German dude.” Jenny said patting his cheek.

They walked around until they came upon a candy store.

“Hey Bill! You want some gummy worms?” Jenny taunted.
“Gummiwormz?!?!” Bill said shocked and he started looking around for them.
“Well come on! I have a huge sugar craving at the moment!” Jenny said taking Bill’s hand and leading him to the store.

Bill rushed to the gummy worms leaving me and Ally to talk.

“Wait, didn’t you say you saved him yesterday?” Ally asked.
“Yeah.” Jenny answered.
“Then how are you here with him today? Did they come by your apartment and pick you up?”
“No…”
“You didn’t!”
“Yeah, I did. But I had my own bed and all!”
“You naughty girl!” Ally joked.
“Oh whatever” Jenny said as Bill came back with about 5 bags full of gummy worms.
“You think I have enough?” Bill asked.
“For you or for me?” Jenny asked.
“For me…But I will go get you some. Be right back.” Bill said leaving me and Ally once more.
“So do you and Bill here have some chemistry going on?” Ally asked.
“Maybe…You’ll see.”
“Tell me now!”
“I said you will see!” Jenny said laughing.
“Do you think this is enough for me and you both?” Bill said as he came back with twice as many bags as before.
“Yes I think so.” Jenny said.
“Well lets go find Tom and your friend before they get caught doing something they aren’t suppose to be doing.” Bill said.
“That’s a good idea.” Jenny and Ally said in unison.


please some feedback!
=D

[tokiohotel26]

hee hee me and tom!

[quote="jennaybell"]
“Well lets go find Tom and your friend before they get caught doing something they aren’t suppose to be doing.” Bill said.

Awww but thats the best part!

[iilyRein]

hahaha
honestly why does Tom **** every girl he's right there and then

[jennaybell]

thats just how tom is
a hornayy lil perv
lol

[Monicaalynn]

haha I loved bill's reaction to the gummie wormz!! that's almost like my reaction when I was in Wegmans and saw gummie wormz in the candie aisle [sp?]


can I be in the story too. or do already have enough people??

[jennaybell]

yes you can be in iy

it might take a while for you to fit in the story

just fill out the info from the previous pages


and gustav is still free

[Monicaalynn]

yay *claps hands really fast*

Name: Monica

Age: 17

Personality: it really loud, get escited easily and is always trying to be funny when with her friends, but when she's around the guys [sept for Gusti!] she becomes shy cuz she secretly has a huge crush on Bill but knows that Jenny likes him so she doesnt say anything. and is really tight with GUSTI!!!!!

Looks: average weight and hight, dark brown[almost black] hair that ends a couple of inces past her sholders, brown eyes and has thick rimmed glasses[that are red]. almost always wearing jeans and band t's

[blackmoon91892]

wow i should have expected this much onsidering how long i was gone....i like how Bill didnt even get you gummiwormz!! that was funny!! and so very adorable!!

"ill go get you some!"

:lol:

[Musik-ist-Liebe]

*clears throat*
POST MORE NOW!!!
Thank you, that is all.
:]

[jennaybell]

sorry it took so long....

Chapter 7

The three looked around the whole mall for about 30 minutes before someone pointed out that Lexi has a cell phone.

“Hello?” Lexi said.
“Where the **** are you two?” Jenny asked.
“Uhmm…” Tom said in the background.
“I know you aren’t lost Lexi” Jenny said.
“No we aren’t lost! We just uhmm took a break.” Lexi said.
“Where?”
“The bathroom”
“Tom is in the bathroom with you?!”
“No…” Lexi said hesitantly.
“Well we are going to go now so you guys can take your time but you two are going to have to get a taxi!”
“Wait! You know how much I hate taxis! We will be there in a few.”
“Sure, after Tom zips up his pants!” Bill pointed out and laughed.
“At least I didn’t get busy all night last night!” Tom said a little aggravated.
“We didn’t do anything Tom!” Bill practically yelled into the phone.
“Sure…”
“Well we are leaving in 10 minutes right outside the food court. Bye you two!” Jenny said hanging up the phone.
“I told you they would be doing something.” Bill said.
“And didn’t we agree?” Jenny asked.
“Can’t I have a moment in glory?”
“Of course you can. ‘Bill, how can you always be right? I mean me and Ally are just plain dumb while you are swimming in the sea of wisdom.’” Jenny joked. Bill shot a pose as if he just defeated an army by himself.
“Haha Billi. Well lets go to the food court and lets go.” Jenny said hooking her arm around Bill’s.
“Okay lets go you two.” Ally said.

The three went to the food court and waited 20 minutes before they saw Lexi and Tom.
The two were hand and hand walking to the food court and the three already had remarks at the tips of their tongues.

“Don’t say a word to me or Tom because we don’t want to hear it.” Lexi said as soon as she was in hearing distance.
“We weren’t going to say anything now were we guys?” Ally said with a smirk.
“Nein.” Jenny and Bill said in unison.
“Don’t lie!” Tom demanded.
“Fine. I was going to call Lexi a hoe and you… I’m not sure what I was going to call you Tom.” Jenny said.
“I’m not a hoe!” Lexi shrieked.
“Then what do you call yourself after what you did?” Ally asked.
“Well I call her my girlfriend.” Tom said.
“Along with five other ones back in Germany.” Bill taunted.
“Keep your remarks to yourself pretty boy.” Tom retorted.
“Well lets go before-” Jenny said right before someone she knew came up beside her.

Karissa, Erika and Monica had been shopping when they spotted their friends Jenny, Ally and Lexi and wanted to stop by and say hello and see who they were hanging out with. They were huge fans of TH also.

“Hey Jenny!” Erika said.
“Hey Erika! Karissa! Monica!” Jenny said just as someone else walked up beside Bill.

[Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S]

more! More! More! im excited...i really cant wait for more!

[tokiohotel26]

:o how dare u almost call me a hoe! :evil:
******* slaps*

well now that thats settled.

YAY! IM TOMI'S GIRLFRIEND! woo hoo we got freaky in the bathroom! :lol:
AWESOME CHAPPIE

[Monicaalynn]

yay! you updated! haha, so who's next to Bill?????

[jennaybell]

you will see =D

next chappie might take a while though

sorry

[steevie!]

Steevie likes ^-^
continue!

[jennaybell]

i need more posts before i post anymore chappies =/

[tokiohotel26]

MORE OR I WILL EAT U!





pwease? :mrgreen:

[Monicaalynn]

awww COME ON PEOPLES READ THIS STORY!!!!! it's niice!

[xXKillerxQueenXx]

More or I will unleash the unicorns with sporks.
They're vicious.

[xXo0BillKaulitz0oXx]

PLEASE!!!!!
Post more XD

[mandieluvsth4ever]

this is amazing

please updatee!

[lilangel02371]

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!

[jennaybell]

sorry it took so long guys!
but here it is =D
enjoy

Chapter 8

“Hey guys!” Gustav said.
“Hallo Gustav and Georg!” Tom said.
“We decided to come to the mall for a few and catch up with you.” Georg said.
“Well we were about to-”
“Hey Gusti!” Monica said coming into Gustav’s view.
“Monica?” Gustav said surprised.
“Do you know each other?” Lexi asked.
“Don’t you remember I won that backstage pass last year and I hung out with Gusti the whole time? You don’t remember me telling everyone that?” Monica said.
“We thought you were lying…” Karissa said quietly.
“Well I wasn’t lying”
“Yeah. Remember what we did to Bill?” Gustav asked Monica.
“Yes! His hair went all flat and got major mad!”
“You two did that?!” Bill asked enraged.
“Whoops! That was suppose to be secret wasn’t it?”
“Yeah. But Bill wouldn’t do anything to us anyways.” Gustav said.
“Oh yes I will!” Bill said still enraged.
“Like what? Paint his nails?” Tom joked.
“Exactly! Thanks for giving me the idea! Now Gustav, would you like a bright red or a dark blue?”
“But all you have is black and white…” Gustav said trying to get out of this strange punishment.
“Uhmm… We are right beside a nail store!” Bill said dragging Gustav into the nail spa.

Everybody laughed and got to know each other. After thirty minutes of talking and not seeing neither Bill nor Gustav, Jenny and Monica slipped away from the group and walked into the nail spa.
They both gasped and started laughing.
Gustav was getting a manicure with a bright orange color.

“Don’t look at me!” Gustav said.
“Doesn’t he just look great?” Bill said enthusiastically.
“He looks wonderful” Jenny joked.
“I knew you would agree with me” Bill said with a smile.
“Well I think he looks absolutely hilarious!” Monica said laughing.
“But now I have to think of a punishment for you missy!”
“I think her punishment is laughing too hard about Gustav!” Jenny said looking at Monica that was still laughing without ceasing.
“Well I guess so. Well lets go show everybody Gustav’s new look!”

[lilangel02371]

lmao thats funny i wouls so do that to a guy

[tarnished-memory]

XD I'd like to see Gusti's nails orange one day.

[jennaybell]

orange nails would be totally awesome!

[LuckyShelbs92]

aww, poor Gusti. but that would be sehr hilarious to see. xD

[jennaybell]

well like i said b4...
i wont post another chappie until it gets more posts...
sorry

[tokiohotel26]

hahahahaha! bright orange manicure...Gusti...hahaha!

:lol: :lol: :lol:

[The Broken Star]

LMFAO! Orange nailz! :lol:..... More, more, more!! That was really good! :mrgreen:

[TokioVamp2812]

-new reader-
I LOVE THIS IT'S AWESOME!!!
XD
*begs 4 more*

[jennaybell]

yepp yepp
thanx readers!!

well i now have to write in secret cuz i had them saved to the computer ad my dad read it ALL and now he is all mad
grrr

[Monicaalynn]

hahaha, I loved that!!!!! I found it really weird that Bill called me missy mainly cuz that's my real life nickname from my mom.hahaha. But now I really want to break into their tourbus and paint Gusti's nails orange hahaha.

I'm sorry about the whole 'my dad found the story thing' my mom would be the same way.... my dad doesn't even know how to type a web adress so I wouldn't have to worry about him haha.

[jennaybell]

sorry it took a while...dad under constant survielance...


Chapter 9

As soon as the group was in seeing distance Gustav shoved his hands deep in his pockets looking at the ground as he walked. Nobody really noticed his little rage.
Jennay noticed however Georg was standing pretty close to Erika and gave her a wink.

"Look everyone!" Bill anounced yanking one Gustav's arms out of his pockets with a little difficulty. And everyone of course laughed.
"Bill, please dont make another you because i can hardly stand you as a brother" Tom joked.
"Shut it Tom."
"Well i think i need to lay down for a bit. I didnt get much sleep last night." Jenny said shooting a glare at all the guys.
"You know i would like to go see the place where you stay while you are in town." Lexi said.
"Well Tom and I will go back with Jenny and Lexi and the rest of you can shop. That sound like a plan?" Bill explained.

Everyone agreed and the four rode back to the hotel. Lexi was given a 'tour' of the suit and went into one of the rooms and closed the door behind themselves. Jenny went to the small bar and got a bottle of water out. Bill came up beside her and put his arm around her waist.

"Shall i show you to the couch?" Bill asked.
"Of course you can" Jenny answered cheerfully.
"Well how well do you think i did with the Gustav punishment?"
"I think it was torture for him" she chuckled.
"I knew you would agree with me" His eyes dancing in the light.
"How so?" She looked puzzled.
"I think you might be a puzzle piece"
"Puzzle piece?" She said still a little confused but she thought she knew what this was leading to.
"Yes. You seem just like everybody else but if you compare them to the others you are unique"
"Well i never thought of it that way before"
"And you seem to fit perfectly next to me" His arm tightening around her waist.
"Well isnt that sweet?" She said looking into the depth of his eyes.
"How did i know you would say that?" he said sweetly.
"Im that puzzle piece remember?" she said with a grin.

They talked for a while when Lexi came out of the room quietly.

"Oh! I thought you two might have been sleeping." Lexi exclaimed.
"Nope just talking." Jenny said.
"Well i have to go home. It is getting late and i have to work tomorrow. And tell sleeping beauty in there i said goodbye okay? See you later!"
"Okay. Bye" Bill and Jenny said in unison.
"Well it is late... Maybe i should go..." Jenny said after a moment of silence.
"I think we still have enough room for you." Bill said.
"I couldnt..."
"You can" he said with a little plead.
"Well i suppose so..."
"Ja!" He jumped a little for joy.
"Calm down! Remember we have a sleeping beauty in that room that can wake up." She whispered.
"Thats right. Well you know where you sleep and you can go ahead and get ready. Oh! I wonder where Georg and Gustav are"
"Who knows" She laughed.
"Well g'nacht."
"G'nacht!"

[jennaybell]

sorry it took so long
i will try not to take that long next time
=D

[Monicaalynn]

aww that was cute!

[TokioVamp2812]

tis cute!
more plz.

[Monicaalynn]

when will there be more???? or did you stop writing it? It's been a month since you last updated the story

[jennaybell]

my last reply doesnt seem to have gotten on here...

well i had said that i need more people to comment and i thank you for you faithful readers-y'all are awesome!

i will try to get another chapter up soon =D

[xXo0BillKaulitz0oXx]

Yup Yup Yup!^^