gabrielaax
June 30th, 2008, 02:05 AM
okay heres part two of the fanfic i started writing. Im uber bored so i shall write fanfics my whole summer hahaha. Okay heres the link to the part. viewtopic.php?f=23&t=4695 (http://tokiohotel.pop24.de/forum/us/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=4695)
Elle slowly drifted away from the dance floor. Some older guy was groping on her and she was getting creeped out. Elle needed to get out of there. Her blue eyes searched the room for Jan but she wasnt there. Elle strolled into the bathroom and checked in the stalls. Still no Jan. Where could she have gone? She quickly checked herself in the mirror before she left the bathroom. She looked flawless as ushaul. Elle stumbled out of the apartment and stood on the corner of the street. "****n im gonna be in trouble, how am i gonna explain to everyone Jan just dissapered.." She thought in her head. She looked at her reflection in a near by shop window. She had curves in all the right places. And her skin was warm tan color. She was wearing a fitted tube dress with 3 necklaces. Her shoes were Jimmy Choo and her bag was Chanel.
((now back to Jan))
Jan stared at the man infront of her. He was tall but decked out in baggy clothes. He almost looked like he was drowning in those clothes. HE stared at her grinning. "Who was he?!" Jan thought in her head.
"Umm, i was just walking around..." Jan responded to his question. She twiddled her figners together and stared at her feet.
" Are you lost? Do you need help" The guy asked in a thick accent. Jan could tell it was a german accent. With the little light she could see he had olive skin. His eyes were a light brown and they glittered.
"No no i was just walking around, thanks though.." Jan politely blurted out.
" Oh okay" he responded. "I just dont like seeing beautiful girls roaming scary dark allies at night."
Jan blushed. A boy had never called her beautiful. And this boy was cute, he was really cute. Jan stared at him and smiled. "I'm Tom by the way."
"Im Jan, So what are you doing here anyway i mean your roaming a dark alley too ya know.." Jan responded. Tom smirked.
"Well have you seen that sign outside?" Tom questioned.
"Yeah i have, do you know what a tokio hotel is?" Jan replied. Tom started laughing. Jan felt stupid. Was that a dumb question? Before tom could respond a man poped out from the door.
"Tom we go on in 5 mintues what are you doing!?" The man was looked older, he was wearing all black, had glasses and black hair with a few gray specs.
"Saki one sec man!" Tom responded in a relaxed tone. Suddenly the man started shouting at tom in german.
"Entspannen Sie sich Mann! Ihr Embaressing mich vor diesem schönen Mädchen! Ich komme in 10 Sekunden!" tom responded. Jan stood their perplexed. What was going on? she thought. Suddenly Tom grabbed her hand and there was no turning back.
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Elle slowly drifted away from the dance floor. Some older guy was groping on her and she was getting creeped out. Elle needed to get out of there. Her blue eyes searched the room for Jan but she wasnt there. Elle strolled into the bathroom and checked in the stalls. Still no Jan. Where could she have gone? She quickly checked herself in the mirror before she left the bathroom. She looked flawless as ushaul. Elle stumbled out of the apartment and stood on the corner of the street. "****n im gonna be in trouble, how am i gonna explain to everyone Jan just dissapered.." She thought in her head. She looked at her reflection in a near by shop window. She had curves in all the right places. And her skin was warm tan color. She was wearing a fitted tube dress with 3 necklaces. Her shoes were Jimmy Choo and her bag was Chanel.
((now back to Jan))
Jan stared at the man infront of her. He was tall but decked out in baggy clothes. He almost looked like he was drowning in those clothes. HE stared at her grinning. "Who was he?!" Jan thought in her head.
"Umm, i was just walking around..." Jan responded to his question. She twiddled her figners together and stared at her feet.
" Are you lost? Do you need help" The guy asked in a thick accent. Jan could tell it was a german accent. With the little light she could see he had olive skin. His eyes were a light brown and they glittered.
"No no i was just walking around, thanks though.." Jan politely blurted out.
" Oh okay" he responded. "I just dont like seeing beautiful girls roaming scary dark allies at night."
Jan blushed. A boy had never called her beautiful. And this boy was cute, he was really cute. Jan stared at him and smiled. "I'm Tom by the way."
"Im Jan, So what are you doing here anyway i mean your roaming a dark alley too ya know.." Jan responded. Tom smirked.
"Well have you seen that sign outside?" Tom questioned.
"Yeah i have, do you know what a tokio hotel is?" Jan replied. Tom started laughing. Jan felt stupid. Was that a dumb question? Before tom could respond a man poped out from the door.
"Tom we go on in 5 mintues what are you doing!?" The man was looked older, he was wearing all black, had glasses and black hair with a few gray specs.
"Saki one sec man!" Tom responded in a relaxed tone. Suddenly the man started shouting at tom in german.
"Entspannen Sie sich Mann! Ihr Embaressing mich vor diesem schönen Mädchen! Ich komme in 10 Sekunden!" tom responded. Jan stood their perplexed. What was going on? she thought. Suddenly Tom grabbed her hand and there was no turning back.
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