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Musik-ist-Liebe
July 4th, 2008, 05:37 PM
Ja, so I think I'm an okay writer, but my other fan fics have failed miserably...I'm hoping this one is different. Leave a comment.

Part 1
Out of all the places her Oma and Opa could have taken her, they take her to some village in the middle of Germany. It's name is not even important, that's how small it was. The population is about 100, give or take. All the houses were made of brick, making it very quaint and storybook-like. The village was cute, but it didn't look like it had electricity even.

Lisi Hanagan's grandparents had taken her in when her parents went to Africa on some missionary trip. They were very religious and they begged Lisi to go along. She refused, not believing in the whole, "Save the world" fad. So they left her alone in the house while her grandparents bought her a plane ticket to Berlin. The drive from the airport was trecherous, taking 14 hours. Of course she brought her iPod and when it died on her she sat looking at the scenery outside her window.

They pulled onto a road with a large house at the end of the street. Whoever lives in that house has money, Lisi thought. She didn't consider someone famous lived in that house or that they would change her life forever. She did know that they would never want to meet a girl like her though. After getting unpacked, Lisi decided to go walk around in the town square. Her thoughts trailed off to when her father announced that they were leaving and taking her little sister with them. That day was painful, because her parents would not talk to her after she said she would not be going with them. Her mother turned away hiding the pure disappointment in her eyes. She didn't have to hide it. Lisi knew. She was the outcast of the family and she didn't want anything to do with her overprotective, narrow minded parents.

Her worlds would soon collide, and there was nothing she could do about it.

BlondPunk
July 4th, 2008, 05:57 PM
More bitte!
I like it so far!

xlisax
July 4th, 2008, 06:15 PM
i love it!(:

tears.dont.fall
July 4th, 2008, 06:17 PM
...-_-' i highly dislike cliffhangers...
so more bitte
^^

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 4th, 2008, 06:40 PM
Thank you. I feel like writing.

Part 2
Lisi sat at the cafe table, sipping her chai tea slowly. The small town square had shops and one cafe. She had just set down her cup when around the corner came four boys. They caught her off gaurd. She was not expecting to see any cute guys here, but four were standing right there. They sat at the table to the left of hers and started laughing. Lisi couldn't help but look up at them every other minute, and she knew it was obvious.

"Um, do you need something?" the one with dreads asked.

"No, just looking. Thanks." She took him as a wannabe, and a very rude one too.

"Tom, be nice. I'm Bill. You look new. Are you from around here?"

"Nope. America."

They invited her to sit with them, much to Tom's objections. She quickly learned their names and was joking around with them. When the time came for her to go home, she really didn't want to. Regardless, they exchanged numbers and parted ways.

The next day, Lisi got a call from Bill. He invited her to a CD store next door to the cafe. When she got there all four boys were goofing off.

"Doesn't it matter that at any second someone who's not me can walk in here and find you throwing things at each other? That's bad for buisness guys." she teased.

"We had it closed for today." Tom spat back. He had a problem with Lisi, but she couldn't imagine why. So she shrugged it off.

"We wanted to show you something Lisi." chimed Gustav.

They led her over to a CD rack with hundreds of plastic covers on it. Georg handed her one titled Schrei and forced her to listen to it on the sample machine.

"You like it?" Bill couldn't stop giggling and asking Lisi if she wanted to buy it.

"It's okay." As she said this Tom's mouth dropped. She knew of course that she was talking to the members of the band despite their attempts to cover the faces on the Schrei CD. She played them a bit.

"Just okay? These guys are awesome. You don't know good music if you don't like Tokio Hotel. Try this CD." He handed her one titled Zimmer 483 and grinned.

"Ah. Nothing special." Lisi patted herself on the back

They listened to almost all of the CDs and wouldn't drop the subject of Tokio Hotel. Lisi had heard this music before and she liked it. Finally she got annoyed and practically screamed that she knew who they were.

"Why are you hanging out with me though? I just don't get it. You can have anyone and anything." She really was confused. "And why are you here anyway? Shouldn't you be off touring or something?"

"Well, we are here on official matters." said Bill acting serious. "We'll tell you later, ok? Right now we want you to meet someone."

Note: Here's where you come in! Just fill this out and post it here. It will get better. I promise. Danke!

Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Personality:
What you are in the story(to the band and to Lisi):

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 4th, 2008, 09:37 PM
I need comments.
This is bad for my self-esteem.
:[

xXKillerxQueenXx
July 4th, 2008, 09:47 PM
*Squeals*
OhMyGod I love your story.
(Don't worry, as you keep writing, you'll get more reviews - I don't get many for mine either)
The first two chapters were really good.

Am I the first?
Name: Ally
Age: Same as everyone in the story
Appearance: Dark brown hair, dark brown eyes, wears a lot of black, average height, typical emo style - band tees, skinny jeans, studded belt, the works... also wears black eyeliner...and Converse!
Personality: happy and spunky and bubbly, full of energy and fun, despite the way she looks
What you are in the story(to the band and to Lisi): Lisi's best friend who loves Tokio Hotel but is NOT a CFF.

And if you haven't already worked out the pairings, could my character be with either Bill or Tom if it's not too much trouble? It's fine if it can't...
I'd still read your story...

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 4th, 2008, 09:51 PM
Thank you!
Yes you are the first.
Tom is available so he's all yours.
I'll get you in the story this post or next.
Not sure lol.

xXKillerxQueenXx
July 4th, 2008, 09:56 PM
Yay!
I was rereading the story just now, and again, it's really good. It's better written than a lot of stories on here.

bbgroove
July 4th, 2008, 10:42 PM
This is really good so far (^_^)....

I'm sad that Lisi's family deems her an outcast though... that majorly sucks...

update soon...

also

Name:Blaine
Age:17
Appearance: She was an American, of mixed Filipino descent, tanned skin, long night black hair (natural), button nose and, although the opposite of most islanders, fairly tall with an athletically built curvy figure. Wears long summer dresses or tight jeans with a bohemian top. Wears contacts but loves her retro purple glasses
Personality: She's VERY smart book-wise, but lacks a bit of common sense. She tends to blow things out of proportion, but is loyal to a fault to her friends. She likes to believe in fairytales, but just not in her own love life.
What you are in the story(to the band and to Lisi): ummmm (O_o) not sure... I guess I could be an exchange student (I'm doing that anyways next summer)


update soon please (^_^)

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 4th, 2008, 11:44 PM
Okee, so guess what.
I had a whole long chappie typed out and it got deleted.
Ihatemylifesomunch.
I'll post tomorrow k?

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 5th, 2008, 02:11 PM
Ugh.

Part 3
"Lisi, this is Gabriele. She also just moved here and we thought you two would get along."

The girl that stood in front of Lisi was short, about 5'3". Gabriele was beautiful, and she reminded Lisi of Ally, her best firend in America. Gabriele was wearing skinny jeans and a tight black and hot pink shirt. Her black hair was streaked with blonde and green highlights. Lisi felt like a hag compared to this girl.

She offered a wave, being the shy girl that she was. Lisi didn't have many friends because of this, and many people thought she was arrogant. But that wasn't the case.

"Hi! Like Bill here said, I'm Gabriele!" Wow she is really bubbly, thought Lisi. The two girls got talking and found out they had a lot in common.

"Mine too. We were like, seperated at birth or something." Lisi said. The girls shared the same interests in books, movies and music. Their hobbies and dislikes were exact matches. Soon Bill and Tom left, getting annoyed by the high shrills coming from Gabriele. She was loud, but Lisi liked her. And soon enough it was time to go.

"Bye Gabby! I'll call you." Lisi said as she hugged Gabriele, who told her to call her Gabby.

Lisi walked home and sat down on the couch. She sighed loudly as her grandmother strode into the room.

"Hey honey. How was your time out?" She had a trail of distress in her voice, but her face showed otherwise.

"Great Oma, I met some new friends." said Lisi.

"Well, that's, uh, great Lisi. We need to talk."

Just then her cell phone rang. The screen read Ally and Lisi squeeled.

"I have to answer this! Can we talk later?" she asked as the phone went on to its third ring.

"Ahhh! Hey Ally! What's up?"

"Ohmygodguesswhat? I'm coming to Germany!"

Lisi couldn't help it. She jumped around and shrieked. Now she had to talk to her grandparents, and she wasn't looking forward to it.

Author's Note:Okay so it's not as good as I thought it would be, but it's just a filler chapter. Blaine I'll get you in the next part, k? No new post until I get some good reviews. Like I said, this is really bad for my self-esteem. :]

xXKillerxQueenXx
July 5th, 2008, 05:08 PM
I loved this chapter.
Update soon!
Please?

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 5th, 2008, 06:06 PM
You're just being nice. I know it.

Part 4:
"So guys what's up?" Lisi said as she walked into the living room. Her grandparents were about to tell her something bad. She could feel it.

"Well, sit down first hun."

Lisi sat down, putting on a fake smile.

"Your-your parents have to stay in Africa. For a long time." her grandfather stated.

"Yeah? And?" That's not that bad, thought Lisi.

"There was an-accident and your sister got hurt." choked her grandmother.

A feeling over-whelmed her, sending her happiness into a downward spiral. She wasn't close to her sister either, but it hurt in a weird way.

"What happened?" she breathed.

Her head hurt, and she felt dizzy. Apparently one of the guards in the camp they were in got confused. He thought the young girl was trying to harm one of the orphans and, to Lisi's horror, started beating her. She had a major concusion and some bruises according to her parents, and she would not be returning in a long time. So the were going to stay there.

"And Lisi? We're sorry, but we have to go see her. Your parents didn't bring much with them, and the orphanage wont feed or house them."

"You're kidding me. I'm going to be here alone?" she couldn't help but be excited, but nervous and scared at the same time.

---

Lisi watched as the car drove out of view. Ally would be arviving in an hour or two. She was excited that they had the house all to themselves, and she wanted to bring Gabby to see Ally.

She went inside and cleaned up, picking up a plate and a towel off the floor. Who knew old people could be so messy? Her heart skipped a beat when she remembered Bill. He actually existed, didn't he? As if someone read her mind, her phone rang, and it was Bill.

"Can you come here?" he said.

"Hello to you too. And I can't. My friend's coming from America."

"Then we'll come over there." He hung up.

Well then. Suddenly there was a knock on the door. There stood Ally and another girl.

Lisi grabbed Ally and hugged her until she was sure her back had broken. Ally introduced the girl as Blaine.

"I met her at the airport and we thought we'd stop here before we went to her exchange family."

They went inside and sat around, drinking Coke and talking. Another knock came on the door. It was the band and Gabby.

"Holy $h!t. Are you having a party or something?" asked Tom.

"No Tom. These are my friends, Ally and Blaine."

He glanced at both of them, looking them up and down. This was going to be good, thought Lisi.

Georg and Gustav looked at them too. Georg winked at Blaine, but it was harmless. He meant it as a friendly gesture.

"So what was so important Bill?" Lisi pulled him aside as the other four sat down with Ally and Blaine.

"I need to tell you what we're doing here remember?"

Author's Note: Just tell me what guy you want k? That way I can pair you up. Thanks for reading. :]

xXKillerxQueenXx
July 5th, 2008, 07:16 PM
I loved that chapter too!
This IS an awesome story!




Author's Note: Just tell me what guy you want k? That way I can pair you up. Thanks for reading. :]

Okay, well, like I already said, either Bill or Tom is fine.
I like Bill better, but Tom comes in as a close second, so I'm fine with whatever. It's your story, so you make the pairings.

Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 07:24 PM
I luffs it!!
Mehr bitte!

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 5th, 2008, 07:54 PM
Do you think Blaine would mind being paired up with Gustav though? I have a good idea so it would work if you, Blaine, could be with Gustav.

xXKillerxQueenXx
July 5th, 2008, 08:03 PM
Who's Blaine?

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 5th, 2008, 08:09 PM
bbgroove.
She's on the first page.
:]

ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
July 5th, 2008, 09:08 PM
i hope im not too late to be in this ff

name: Kelsey
age: 17
apperance: tall 5'9", tanned skin, has shoulder length black hair with bright pink streaks, almost black eyes, athletic body, wears skinny jeans, mini skirts, grafic t's,
personality: nice, out-going, loves to party, always there for her friends, serious at serious moments

what are you in the story( to the band and lisa): umm....can i be your neighbor or someone you met in germany

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 5th, 2008, 10:06 PM
Sure.
You're not too late.
But now all the spots are filled.
Who do you like better?
Georg or Gustav?
:]

bbgroove
July 6th, 2008, 04:53 AM
Gustav?

YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES (^_^)

I seriously luff that boy to death! lol


AND I LOVED YOUR CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!! (^_^)

it's sad that her sister got hurt though... that sucks..

but home alone rules!!

seriously... I'm just sad I was so late in reading them.... havn't been on my computer all day (cousin got married)

please update soon though (^_^)

xXxMandiixXx
July 6th, 2008, 06:49 AM
love the story continue!!!

<3 Mandii xx

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 6th, 2008, 12:45 PM
Part 5
"We had to come here to work on our 3rd album. Our manager said it was good to step out of the spotlight while we wrote the music." Bill said.

"Then how's it going?"

"Great. But I never expected anything like you to come along. Even though we just met I really like you. A lot."

Tom came over before Lisi could reply. He had an evil smile on his face.

"That Ally girl is pretty isn't she Billy Boy?" Bill just shrugged and shot a sideways look at Lisi.

Tom went back to Ally and started to flirt.

"So what's his problem with me anyway?" Lisi still hadn't found out.

"He thinks I may be jepordizing our music when I hang out with you. But you inspire me. If anything you are the best thing that's happened to this band."

Lisi's heart fluttered, making her even happier.

---

The band had left, and all four girls were in the living room giggling about everything. Lisi's mind was on Bill, and she only half-heartedly laughed. She wanted so badly to kiss him, to just melt into his body. He had that affect on her. She had never felt this way about anyone. Blaine and Gabby were going to stay the night too. Lisi found them fun to be around and since she was scared out of her mind about Bill, she needed the extra company.

Love scared Lisi. Her aunt was divorced 5 times. Her parents weren't even remotely close, so she had this idea that love was destined to be ruined sooner or later. And sex was out of the question. Her cousin Alex was raped. Love was not a good subject in the Hanagan family. No one hugged or kissed.

"Hello Lisi? Are you in there?" Lisi looked up from staring at the floor. Ally was poking her and Gabby was talking to her.

"I said I might have to go to Berlin. Tonight."

"How come?" Gabby explained her mother lived there and hadn't seen her in over year. So Gabby left at 8:30 that night. The three girls decided to watch a chick flick. One of the very sappy ones where the guy can't live without the girl. It struck Lisi as funny, but the other girls were in tears.

Another knock came on the door. This time it was a girl named Kelsey. Lisi had met her yesterday when she went on a walk. Kelsey was her nextdoor neighbor and she was hilarious.

"Hey Kelsey! You wanna watch this movie with us? It's a chick flick. Guys this is Kelsey, my neighbor. Kelsey, Ally and Blaine." They all smiled and said hi. I'm sure introducing a lot of people, she thought.

Soon all the girls were best friends. This shocked Ally, who knew how shy Lisi was. Maybe she's changed, she thought.

"So Ally. How's Tom doing?" Blaine asked when they started talking about music.

"He'so hot. I love him."

"You just met him. You can't love him." Kelsey had heard about everything that went on today.

"Yes she can. I love Bill. It's possible. Oh, and Blaine, I saw Gusti checking you out!" Lisi stuck up for her best friend.

"Really? He's adorable!" Blaine cried.

"I want a boyfriend," said Kelsey, sticking out her lower lip.

Everyone giggled and yawned. They spread out blankets and went to sleep. Ally and Blaine were smiling in their sleep, meaning they were having a great dream. Kelsey was snoring loudly and kicking her legs occasionaly. Lisi couldn't sleep. She let out a loud sigh and rolled over.

Author's Note: Filler chapter. I had to get rid of Gabby because she was just a little thing to...I don't know. No new chapter until you review. Sorry, but I need comments :]

xXKillerxQueenXx
July 6th, 2008, 12:52 PM
Yay! Another chapter!
It was good, even though it was a filler. In every story you need them, so, yeah.
Post more soon!

bbgroove
July 7th, 2008, 01:15 AM
I really like this...

and you can fall in love that quickly...

HELLoooooo love at first sight? lol

please update soon (^_^)

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 7th, 2008, 01:20 AM
True dat.
Lol I'll post tomorrow.

babygurl3183
July 7th, 2008, 06:06 AM
woah, that was really good!
*new reader! :D

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 7th, 2008, 12:06 PM
Yay!
I'll update in a few.
Watching Tarzan with my sister...

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 7th, 2008, 02:34 PM
Sorry guys I might not post for a while.
Writer's block and mild depression.
=]

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 7th, 2008, 04:14 PM
Ok, I'm trying to be happy, so I'll write.

Part 6
His lifeless body was staring up at her. She saw the man murder the love of her life and his band mates. The man had made a desperate attempt to escape, throwing the gun behind him into the shadows. Wearing all black, he blended well, but the moonlight hit his face at the perfect angle.

It was unclear why he murdered them, but he was there the whole time, waiting in the room with them. Tom and Gustav were next to each other on the floor. Georg was on the bed and Bill was slouched against the wall. How could something like this happen so fast. Within 10 minutes he had them dead.

The guys had taken Kelsey, Ally, Blaine and Lisi with them on their next tour, testing the waters of the relationship. So far the girls were doing well. They weren't getting in the way of the sound checks and concerts. they went to each and every concert, cheering the band on. They had a concert the next night here in Sweden.

Tom and the G's were in their hotel room watching a movie. Bill had taken Lisi out for a walk around the hallways, and Ally, Blaine, and Kelsey were in their rooms, probably sleeping.

"I'm so glad you came Lisi. I really love you."

"Me too." Lisi said, confused. She loved him, but she was too afraid to say so.

She made her way to Blaine's room. She heard voices inside, signaling her best friends weren't asleep.

"Anyone find it weird that we just met and now we're living with them?"

"That's the Lisi I know. Worried about even the happiest things." Kelsey said.

"Just relax. This is a good experience." Blaine piped up. Ally nodded her head.

The girls cleared out, and Lisi went to sleep, thinking of Bill. The disappointment was clear on his face when she didn't say she loved him back. She hadn't meant it that way. She wanted desperately to tell him, but her previous knowledge of love prevented her from connecting. 3 loud bangs went off, a crash and some 2 more bangs.

Her head snapped up off the pillow, ears perked. No more noise. She slipped out of the bed and into the dim hallway. The room where the boys were at was 2 rooms down. The door was cracked, and a glow came from the room.

"Bill? Are you okay?" When he didn't answer, Lisi went in the room. A man ran full speed at her, flailing his arms wildly. He struck her on the head with a hard object. She fell to the floor.

Minutes later she was up, the man long gone, and Bill laying on the wall by the door. She rushed over to him, panic rising in her throat.

"Help! Somebody HELP!" she wailed.

"Lisi...I-"

"Bill, shhh. Don't speak baby." Her face was drenched in tears. "I really do love you Bill. I wil always love you."

She muttered "I love you" into his chest many times, never pausing to breathe. A voice was calling her name. It was raspy, but it grew louder and stronger with every syllable. She glanced up at Bill's still face and gasped. He was gone. Tom was across the floor with his face towards her. Georg was looking at her blankly.

That left Gustav to be examined. He was staring at her...blinking.

"Lisi. Lisi! LISI!"

Her body shook violently, with fright and anger. She would never forget the murderer's big head and bulging arms. He had done this to the love of her life and he was going to pay-

Suddenly a hand on Lisi's houlder made her open her closed eyes. She turned around and gasped. She was bent over looking at Lisi, her ponytailed hair falling over her shoulder.

"Ally. They're all gone! I can't deal with it!"

"Lisi. Wake up. Lisi! LISI!"

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Okay. So tell me what you think. Next chapter after review.

xXKillerxQueenXx
July 7th, 2008, 04:31 PM
OHMYGOSH! Suspense!
Awesome chapter, kinda morbid, but cool.
Was it all a dream?
For some reason this reminds me of 'Forever or Never' by Cinema Bizarre. I don't know why, but it does.
Probably because I was listening to it as I was reading this, but it seems to fit.

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 7th, 2008, 04:36 PM
Yeah kinda morbid huh? :shock:
I do agree there.
It didn't seem THAT bad when i wrote it last night though.
You'll see... ;)

bbgroove
July 7th, 2008, 05:17 PM
Was it a dream?

please let it be a dream... PLEASE!

Lisi JUST told Bill she loves him...

I love this! (^_^) update soon (^_^) please lol

This_Is_Sarah
July 7th, 2008, 07:47 PM
No, no, no, no, more, more, more!!!!!
now you got me repeatin' myself

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 7th, 2008, 07:49 PM
Lmfao.
Sorry if that last Part offended anyone...
Not intended to.

bbgroove
July 7th, 2008, 11:17 PM
Gah!

lol... I thought you updated when I saw that you posted something...

see.. you&#39;ve got me hooked on this story now..lol

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 8th, 2008, 01:06 AM
Well I'm glad.
In the process of writing part 7.

bbgroove
July 8th, 2008, 01:37 AM
Well I'm glad.
In the process of writing part 7.


can&#39;t wait (^_^)

babygurl3183
July 8th, 2008, 01:44 PM
Well I'm glad.
In the process of writing part 7.

yay! lol
i keep checking back haha :D

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 8th, 2008, 03:52 PM
This part is happier. I can't believe my mind generated something that horrible to happen to our fav guys. I'm sorry!

Part 7
Lisi's clothes were soaked in tears and a thin sheet of sweat. Why had she dreamt that? It caused her too much pain to even think about the dream.

"Are you ok?" asked a worried Kelsey.

"Um, yeah, I gotta lay off the junk food before bed." she joked, laughing nervously. She didn't want to tell anyone her dream, and if they asked she would break down.

"Let's go back to sleep. I'm beat." Ally said.

But Lisi didn't want to go to sleep again. She wouldn't let something like that replay and happen to Bill again. She got up and took a shower. She threw on some skinny jeans and a hoodie and went out for a walk. The morning was chilly and bleek, and it complimented her mood. Soon she was in the park at the end of town, and she wasn't alone. Gustav was there.

"What are you doing? It's 4 in the morning?" he asked.

"Couldn't sleep. What are you doing?"

He glanced around and shrugged. His gray sweats and dark blue tee-shirt were wet. Gustav was the early bird, Lisi knew, but she hadn't imagined him up this early.

"So what do you think of Blaine?" He shot a sideways look at her, suspicious of her approach.

"She's really cool. I like her a lot."

"And what does Georg think of Kelsey?"

"What's up with the interrogation? He can't stop talking about her." Lisi just wanted her friends to be happy, and if having boyfriends made that happen, she would hook them up anyday. "He really likes you, you know." Lisi was taken aback by this. She knew he was talking about Bill and he had told her he liked her himself. Still, it was different ot Lisi. She had never been loved by anyone, not even her grandparents. They had to help her because she was family. But Bill didn't even need to look at her.

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Tom had come to pick Ally up for a date. No one kenew where they were going, but they seemed giddy. You could see the love in Tom's eyes, but the look on Ally's face whenever she heard his name was...undescribable. They were like two school children, giggling at each other constantly.

Georg had officially asked Kelsey to be his girlfriend, and she accepted. The expression on Georg's face was hilarious when she jumped into his arms. They were out driving around the town, finding random places to go.

Blaine and Gustav were the sweetest people. They didn't like the public show of affection, but the spark was totally there. Gustav was shy and polite to Blaine, and she returned the politeness. They were practically made for each other. Blaine, being the doubtful one, had forgotten everything that ever was except Georg. She hadn't trusted any other boy but him. She actually believed in this relationship for once. No one would ever change that. They were at the guys' house, the big mansion, playing the drums. Blaine thought it'd be fun.

Bill had surprised Lisi with a picnic in her backyard. In between bites of the perfect potato salad, they would talk and hold hands. Her heart beat faster and harder each time their skin touched. His wonderfully smooth face was glowing. Lisi wondered why he was so happy when she felt so guilty. She felt like the dream was all her fault even though she would never want Bill dead. Ever.

"Can you come with me on my next tour?"

"What?!" Lisi choked on her Coke. he was so calm and excited at the same time. Bill acted as if he had simply asked her to pass the salt. He crinkled his brow, confused.

"You don't want to go?" This time he looked hurt.

"When are you leaving?"

"In 3 weeks. We're almost done with the album."

"I do want to go. With all my heart." She did, but she couldn't help but feel worried. "But what about the girls? I'm not leaving them here alone..."

"We'll ask them tomorrow. That's when I was supposed to ask you, but I couldn't wait." He laughed and jumped up.

"Where are you going now?"

"You'll see. C'mon."

He took her about 10 miles out of the village in his brother's Cadillac.

"I didn't think you had your liscense." Lisi was scared, but she started to relax.

"I don't." he said, grinning. Just then they pulled up to the most beautiful thing Lisi had ever seen.
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Review, review, review!

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 8th, 2008, 05:16 PM
bump?

tokiohotel26
July 8th, 2008, 06:19 PM
AWWW!!!!

bbgroove
July 8th, 2008, 08:56 PM
love love (^_^)

Bill made a picnic... how adorable...lol

and you seriously made me giggle like a school girl when I read the Gustav/Blaine part...lol

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 8th, 2008, 09:14 PM
Yay!
I love making people laugh!
*spaz*







^^Yeah, had a moment.
Totally cool now, see?

This_Is_Sarah
July 8th, 2008, 10:51 PM
Woohoo!
this is amazin'
Keep it comin' please :D

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 9th, 2008, 01:46 AM
Part 8 is going to be kinda short because I'm really tired. I'll post part 2 of part 8 tomorrow. Confusing...

Part 8(part 1)
Right in front of her was a lake, clear and glassy. A small gazebo stood off to the right with flowers and vines taking it over. A bright pink tree hung over the blue water as the wind blew petals everywhere. It was picture perfect.

"This place is gorgeous!" Lisi exclaimed.

"Really? I hate it," said Bill scrunching up his face. Lisi playfully hit him in the chest. "Actually, it's the second most beautiful thing I've ever seen. Aside from you of course."

"Wow that was cliche."

Lisi was laughing and Bill was going crazy. He couldn't help it. In everything he had ever done he was eager, and this moment was no different. He bent down slowly and kissed her. It was everything he ever expected...times a bazillion.

"So was that," she joked. She got up and did a cartwheel in the lush green grass. He tackled her from behind, landing on top of her. She looked up into his eyes and died a little on the inside. Bill brushed her cheek with his thumb, and she melted all over.

They walked hand in hand to the gazebo and sat down on the bench. As the day turned to night, the sun to the moon, Bill's heart turned to mush. He was in love.

---

The drive home proved to be a long one, and Lisi fell asleep. Bill was nervous to be driving with no liscense, but he would be arrested if it meant pleasing Lisi. His eyes wandered the dark road, scanning for cops and road signs. Without trouble, he finally arrived in the village. As he turned on some soft rock, Lisi stirred in the seat next to him. When he glanced over, she frowned.

"I don't want this night to end." She whispered.

"It doesn't have to." Bill said as he turned into an alleyway. Where was his brain? He usually thought before acting, even in all his eagerness. She made him crazy though. He parked and ripped off his shirt, revealing his all mighty 'v'. Lisi gasped.

"It's sooo much sexier in person." She grinned and started to kiss him gently. Suddenly the kiss turned wet, as tears streamed down her face.

"Oh my god. I can't do this. I'm sorry." Lisi jumped out of the car and started walking.

Great, I ruined everything, Bill thought as he banged his head on the steering wheel. **** it!

Author's Note: Guten nacht! *collapses on keyboard*

bbgroove
July 9th, 2008, 02:45 AM
BILL!!!!

RUN AFTER HER!!!!! gosh darnit!

night night (^_^)

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 9th, 2008, 11:58 AM
Sorry for all the cussing I did yesterday. I don't cuss usually. I feel really bad now because for all these years I haven't said a curse word. Darn...


Anyways, hope you likee!

This_Is_Sarah
July 9th, 2008, 06:42 PM
more, please
I Lubb This Story :) :)

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 10th, 2008, 02:07 PM
More than I thought for Part 8(part 2). I absolutely lovee this chapter and hope you do too.

Part 8(part 2)
He got out of the car and sprinted after her.

"Look. I'm sorry I couldn't think straight. I usually don't do things like that." Bill said. Lisi didn't answer him, but she sniffled. She stopped walking only to collapse to the floor. Bill was caught off guard, but he bent over to help her up.

"It's my fault Lisi. Stop crying. Please." It hurt him to see her in pain, and doubly so because he had caused it. He lifted her chin only to have her look away. Her brown eyes averted his gaze, and his stomach heaved. "Let's go." He helped her up and back to the car. He grabbed her hand, but her grip was loose, almost shy.

"Do you hate me now?" she asked when he started the car.

"Oh mein Gott. Nein!" He was just a tad frustrated. He had told her it wasn't her fault. She needed to hear him out. He actually loved her, so he would never hate her. Ever. He dropped her off at her house and leaned in for a kiss. She dodged him and got out.

---

Ally left Tom's house at around 2 am. Bill had came home an hour before, meaning Lisi was back at the house. Tom insisted on giving her a ride in his newly returned Cadillac (which he wasn't so happy about Bill stealing it) but she wanted to walk. Her cell phone rang a while later, and it was Kelsey and Blaine. They were at Kelsey's house and were bragging about their dates.

"He kissed me! I'm so happy I could die!" said Blaine.

"Gustav kissed you?! Awww..." she said, then realized there were no lights on in the house. "Hey I gotta go. Call me later." She walked in and went to turn on the light. Lisi was sitting on the couch staring at a blank TV.

"Uh, hey?" She looked up and nodded. "What's wrong?"

"Nothing."

"Lisi Madison Hanagan! You tell me what happened or else I will call Bill and get his skinny butt over here to tell me!" Lisi's eyes were wide when she heard her best friend yell at her. She knew it was in good nature, but it shocked her. So she told her everything.

"Can't you see that you make him crazy? He wanted you to open up, but you shut him out. You should apologize. It's not really his fault, despite what he said. you played him for a while. Call him." Lisi down to her basement bedroom and fell asleep on the bed, fully clothed.

---

Over the next 3 weeks, Bill called her 39 times. She never answered for fear of upsetting him even more. Each message was more heartwrenching than the last. Finally, a day before they left on tour, he made another call.

"Hey. We're leaving tomorrow. I really want you to come with me. I haven't thought about anything other than you all this time, hoping you'd change your mind. Call me please."

And each new message meant a wet pillow that night. Lisi made up her mind that she would be strong tonight and take the nagging. Her friends wanted her to go so bad they wouldn't stop trying to convince her. She just ignored their pleads and tried to have a good time that night. She didn't cry when they went to bed, and she didn't dream anything. It was a restless sleep, but she woke up at 9:37 to a strange buzzing.

Oh please no, she thought as she put her flip-flops on. She ran out the door to see a gigantic black bus go down the road. Another had gone by, and she ran faster than she ever had. Her depression was replaced by anger and confusion as she banged on the bus windows. "Bill, no! Don't leave me!" Her friends had left without saying good-bye, but she understood. She wouldn't say good-bye to herself either. If that made any sense.

Finally, the bus came to a screeching stop. She saw Bill run to the front and trip on the way. She laughed through her tears as he got up and practically pryed the bus doors open. His skinny arms embraced her, and she breathed in his scent. She did love him. And she told him so, right then and there. As he said it back, she started to cry and smile all over again. She was reunited after all this torture. It was her fault, and she knew it all along. He looked better than ever before, and his lips were just calling her name.

Lisi had reached her Bill. <3



THE END


















Just joking. More to come. :D

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 10th, 2008, 02:39 PM
Buuuuummmpp

bbgroove
July 10th, 2008, 04:03 PM
THE END




I nearly died when I read that...lol

awesome chapter per usual (^_^)

update soon please

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 10th, 2008, 10:33 PM
Part 9
"Bill I'm so sorry I was a bumble bee to you. I really wanted to answer your calls but I didn't want to hurt you. Can I still come with you, please?"

He just squeezed her and grabbed her hand. He took her up the stairs on the bus to the couch. Bill's head swam with exhilerating thoughts. He was back with Lisi and on the road for another tour. He loved her and she loved him, which made him happier than ever. He pushed her hair out her eyes and closed his eyes. Before he knew it her lips were on his. He made a little noise, and she pulled away. Lisi looked at him like she was hurt.

"Morning breath," he whispered, pulling her back to him. He kissed her again, this time more passionately. She giggled mid-kiss, causing them to break apart once more. He didn't care about anything other than her at this moment.

Gustav walked out of the back room with Lisi trailing behind him. "What the-OH MY GOD LISI!" Blaine attacked her best friend, knocking her over on the couch. A loud gasp came, indicating a need for air. "Oh, sorry," she said giggling.

Lisi couldn't believe it. She had actually been missed by at least two of the band members. Gustav gave her a hug, and she enjoyed the company of three of her favorite people.

The bus was huge. Probably bigger than any house she ever lived in with her parents. Which reminded her, if they tried to get in touch with her they couldn't. She smiled to herself only for a second. At least they wouldn't be able to ****** about what she was doing wrong.

Bill stared at her intently. He was thinking really hard by the expression on his face. Her heart imploded right then and there, confused by all the love she had for him. But why was he staring.

"You don't have any clothes. Or a toothbrush for that morning breath." He said as she rolled her eyes.

"I didn't think about that. All I thought about was you." Gustav made a gagging sound from the back room, as if he was eavsdropping. Blaine yelled and the two in front heard giggling.

"We'll take you shopping later, Muffin." Bill said as he emphasized th last part. More gagging noises followed. Lisi was in love with this life, and no matter what happened, she'd always belong to Bill.

"Gustav, stop listening!" shouted Lisi as she chuckled. "Bill, I'm so glad I came here. I don't care if I never change clothes again. I'm here with you." she whispered.

"But I do. So that's why we're going shopping."

"You're just in such a joking mood, aren't you?" said Lisi. She raised an eyebrow. The bus came to another stop as they leaned in for yet another kiss, causing them to bump heads. The door opened and in walked Georg and Tom. They called back to the other bus as soon as they saw Lisi, and Kelsey and Ally, like Blaine, tackle hugged her. Georg gave her a warm hug, while Tom just stared blankly at her.

"Tom?" She said as she opened her arms. He grinned, and hugged her for the first time. "Thank you, Tomi. Finally you don't hate me." And at that moment, everything was pefect. Beyond perfect.

---

They got to Berlin, their first stop, at around 7:00. Their hotel was big, but oh so grand. It made everything else appear miniscule.

"Willkommen im hotel, ladies." Tom said, opening the lobby door for them. They stepped in a were shocked. Inside was a rather large fountain and a gold chandelier. The couches were cream colored and all the accent pieces were gold.

"Dude. Germany is officially my favorite place ever!" exclaimed Ally.

"And dude. Everyone's staring at pajama girl over here." Georg pointed out. It was true. Lisi's purple and black plaid outfit was quite a sight. The shorts were barely there, and the spaghetti strap top was v cut.

"Let's get you up to the room. There's some guys over there that I don't exactly like." said Bill quickly. They made their way to the elevators and went into their new home.

Author's Note: Blaine you are my only reader. Everyone else is gone. =[ But I love you! So it's all good.

bbgroove
July 10th, 2008, 10:36 PM
I shall call some of my friends on the board...

1000oceansluv and rette_mich only come on to read fanfics... but we three pretty much have the same taste in stories...

so I&#39;ll PM them like CRAZY... because I really like this story (^_^)

and I love you back (^_^) lol

EDIT:

forgot to tell you that I loved this chapter... morning breath...hahahaha

rette_mich
July 10th, 2008, 10:41 PM
HALLoooooooo

:D :D

I am a friend of Blaine&#39;s... and official new reader of this story lol

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE the moments between Bill and Lisi...like the picnic (^_^)

but there should be more Tom in the story... for obvious reasons...lol tomismysexymanlol

bbgroove
July 10th, 2008, 10:44 PM
YES!!!!!

I win!

Kara! (rette_mich).. you rock right now (^_^)...

now Musik-ist-Liebe... update soon please (^_^)

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 10th, 2008, 11:02 PM
I have an idea for Tom (wink, wink).
Thanks so much for reading.
It means a lot to me!

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 11th, 2008, 11:28 PM
Part 10
You can guess what Ally and Tom were up to. They rolled around for awhile, bored, then decided to do something. Going to the shower, Tom made a swat at Ally's butt. She slapped his arm away and jumped on the couch. In the shower the scalding water burned at Tom's already damp skin. He savored the steam and loss of vision as the water pounded his face. It felt too good to let the water hit your tense muscles, as we all know. But this was what Tom needed.

Soon he was joined by Ally, who complained the water was too hot. "Maybe if you weren't taking so long I wouldn't be here."

"Trust me. I don't mind." He took a wash cloth and lathered it with soap. Her neck was stiff with the stress of being couped up on a bus for hours upon end. His hands massaged her neck and she turned around. Ally gazed into his eyes. The intensity in her eyes scared Tom in so many ways. But the good kind of scared. He kissed her, left it at that, and stepped out. He didn't feel right for some reason, just like he did when something was wrong with Bill. Maybe it was Bill.

Ally stepped out too, covering her body with a towel he handed her. She embraced him, one tear running down her face. Her skin was soaked so he didn't recognize the drop plunging from her chin. Why she was crying, she did not know. All at once Tom made her feel special and retched at the same time. His player image scared her, yet she felt completely comfortable.

He dressed in a white and black shirt and his normal jeans. Ally's silver sequined mini dress made him want to crawl in bed with her and neve come out. The plunging neckline accentuated her flawless skin. Her black accessories and makeup perfected the look and made her look sofisticated, yet sexy. He resisted temptation however, and snuck out without telling anyone, not even Bill or Lisi.

She had no idea why she was going with someone who had already felt bored with her. Obviously he didn't need her anymore, and seeing how he had turned her down in the shower, something was wrong.

---

Bill had taken Lisi out to the pool for a little night swim. Her hot pink bikini blew his mind. Literally, He had all he could do to talk, yet alone stop staring.

"Hey babe. My eyes are up here." He blushed and dove in the crisp water. The summer air hit his skin as he emerged, right next to Lisi. She grabbed his shoulders and hoisted herself up in a piggyback fashion. She hadn't ever had as much fun in her life.

She jumped off Bill's back and doggie paddled over to the shallow end. He followed quickly tickling her feet behind her. She kicked fiercly trying to get away, laughing wildly. She dove under, sure Bill was right behind her. The lights were not on, but there was a dim glow coming from the hotel rooms.

Bill's chest was smooth against her cheek as she laid on top of him. Her heartbeat so fast it might have popped out and sunk to the bottom. They weren't going to do anything of course, but she felt naughty. The back of her neck tingled as she kissed his lips softly and stroked back his wet hair. His hand found her hip and they floated there for a while, kissing her well. HORRIBLY WELL. So well in fact, she wanted to take him up to the room right away.

He broke away and hopped up onto the slippery cement. Something must have happened because as soon as his other foot reached, he plunged into the dark water. Seeing how they were in the shallow end, Lisi panicked and dove under. Her vision was blurred by both the darkness and the chlorine, but she found him within 30 seconds. Her hands shook as her pulled him out of the pool and onto a nearby deckshair. She fumbled in what she thought was her bag for a cell phone. It turned out to be Bill's cell phone, but a key pad was a key pad, and she dialed 911 hurridly. She was worried because he was under so long. Lisi grabbed his hand and administered CPR. She dodn't think the damage was that bad, but if he wasn't conscious underwater and out here, it was bad.

The ambulance arrived faster than she imagined. She only had time to start pumping on his chest for the third time before the paramedics came by with a gourney.

"Will he be alright?" She was too shocked to cry. Her tearducts had seem to have shriveled up within those dreadful 3 weeks. Her emotions would get the best of her later, however, as she called Tom. No answer. She tried Ally. Same result. Georg and Gustav had come out after she called their cells, explaining that Kelsey and Blaine had long been asleep. They hugged her gently as she stared into the night. Finally the medics called to her.

"He needs to undergo some tests ma'am. You may come to the hospital to see him tomorrow morning okay?" She nodded in the light of their vehicle, her brain rattling in her head. Why did Bill always get hurt when with her, whether in dream or reality?

Author's note: Next chapter will be about Blaine and Kelsey and their "magical" nights with the guys before the terrifying call. Enjoy!

babygurl3183
July 12th, 2008, 12:52 AM
i forgot i was reading this, my bad.
cant wait for the next chapter! [:

oh and the mornign breath is my fav part. haha

bbgroove
July 12th, 2008, 02:17 AM
Sorry I&#39;m commenting so late...

I had orientation for UC all today and JUST got back home...

anways...

BIIIIIIIILLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!
I hope he&#39;s going to be okay...

and yeah about next chapter (^_^)

xXKillerxQueenXx
July 13th, 2008, 06:58 PM
'Ello!
I just got back, and I have to say, the last couple chapters were awesome!
Updateee soon!

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 13th, 2008, 10:05 PM
K guys. Lots has happened since I last updated. I'm grounded from the computer until next Saturday, and I'm not supposed to be on here right now. Apparently I'm lazy and I don't help out enough. Psssh. Anyway, I GET TO GO TO THE DENVER CONCERT!!! Okay, it's out of my system. So I will update as soon as possible. Please don't forget about my story and check back occasionaly. I may sneak on every once and a while when my parents are gone to update for my two favorite (and only) readers.

Love ya lots,
Marlee<3

xXo0BillKaulitz0oXx
July 14th, 2008, 12:34 AM
LoL,I read it too...now!!!
XD Well ok!!!
I will be waiting!!!

bbgroove
July 14th, 2008, 01:30 AM
Until Saturday?

*cries*

I hope you have major ninja sneaking skills so you can update... because I might not last until then

babygurl3183
July 14th, 2008, 06:06 PM
i read it too! lol

but ok i'll keep checking back. [:

This_Is_Sarah
July 16th, 2008, 08:44 PM
wow.
such a great writer!
keep on keepin on :D

bbgroove
July 18th, 2008, 01:45 AM
I&#39;m seriously dieing from story deprivation...

I keep checking back for sneak updates... but alas I must wait until Sat

This_Is_Sarah
July 18th, 2008, 10:47 PM
Just...One...More...Day... :(

xXKillerxQueenXx
July 18th, 2008, 10:48 PM
Aww, you poor thing.
Hope everything was okay.
One more day isn't that bad.

bbgroove
July 18th, 2008, 11:08 PM
Just...One...More...Day... :(


I understand your pain...

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 19th, 2008, 12:27 PM
Gah. So I couldn't sneak on because they were always home! But I'm back.

PART 11!
Kelsey and Georg had ordered pizza for the night and had sat down to watch a movie. Kelsey really loved Georg, and he loved her right back. They just hadn't said it yet. He wrapped his thick arms around her as they sat down on the bed to watch their movie, and she smiled.

It wasn't an exquisite night, but it was fun and wickedly romantic. In the layed back kind of way. Her life was too perfect right now.

---

Gustav gave Blaine a box and ordered her to open it. The box was medium size, about the size of a toaster, and it felt as light as a feather. She shook it but nothing rattled inside.

"Is this a joke?" He shook his head and burst out laughing. Blaine could tell he was excited. She glared playfully and opened the cardboard. Inside was a bunch of tissue paper, and under that another really small velvet box.

"Oh my god..." Blaine gasped. In the small box lay a diamond necklace. "It's 5 carats. I had it specially made just for-" She attacked him before he could finish.

"I love you." She gasped in between kisses.

---

At 11 o'clock, Georg answered the phone in the hotel room. Kelsey was asleep in his lap and he was stroking her hair as he talked to a worried Lisi.

"Ok. We'll be right down." He slid out from under Kelsey and put on a shirt. He knocked on Gustav's door just to make sure he was coming too. He led Gustav down to the elevator and down 3 stories to the pool at the side of the hotel. Lisi stood there staring blankly, gazing stupidly at the flashing lights from the ambulance.

Gustav hugged her tightly. He didn't like seeing anyone in pain, let alone any of his friends. Georg did the same, whispering his apology in her ear. Soon they were joined by the girls, who had realized they were alone.

"Oh Lisi. I'm so sorry." Kelsey said as the confused Lisi gaped back at the crowd of four. The realization must have hit her, because a tear rolled down her cheek, then another, and another. She couldn't be strong anymore.

---

That night, Bill woke with a start in the hospital. No one was in the room with him, and his head hurt horribly. He let out a cry and quickly layed back against the pillow. Why was he alone? Where was Lisi? What had happened? His thoughts were interrupted by knock on the door.

Tom and Ally strolled in, worried looks on their faces. Bill could sense the tention between them and didn't like it at all.

"Hey little bro." Tom said as Ally took a seat at the chair next to the bed. "Oh, okay. Guess I'll stand then." he said. Whatever had happened, Tom was mad, and Ally was hurt.

Author's note: So glad you guys stuck with me. Thank you so much!

xXKillerxQueenXx
July 19th, 2008, 12:34 PM
What happened there?
Why is Bill in the hospital?
Good chapter!
Can't wait for more!

bbgroove
July 19th, 2008, 04:09 PM
(^_^)

You have no idea hoe happy I was to see that you updated...

I danced around my bedroom for about five mintues screaming "She&#39;s BACK!"

I&#39;m such a dork...hahahaha


anyways... What happened with Ally and Tom? and Bill... is he going to be okay?

babygurl3183
July 19th, 2008, 06:05 PM
where is everyone?
and why is tom mad? lol

cant wait for the next chapter! (:

ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
July 19th, 2008, 06:08 PM
omg i am soo srry i didnt post or anything.........this ff is soo good please update soon

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 19th, 2008, 08:50 PM
I'll get to why they are mad in a bit...
Suspense. Don-don-dooooon.

xXKillerxQueenXx
July 19th, 2008, 09:54 PM
YES!
I'm glad.

Though Lexi has left...
-sad face-
She won't bring her enthusiasm into the comments =(
But we cane make up for it, right guys?
Ehmm...maybe...

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 20th, 2008, 11:55 AM
Lol. Bill's in the hospital because of the thingy with the pool. He hit his head on the bottom. 'Member?

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 20th, 2008, 03:27 PM
Okeey Dokeey. Here we go. This takes place before they hear about Bill, then they get the message.

Part 12 [Tom and Ally at the club]
Her hips swayed with the music, intoxicating Tom to the point where he wanted to rip her clothes off. Other girls were starring at her with menacing looks. Ally didn't care. She was mad at the world right now, and especially Tom. It could have been an overeaction and she knew it. But that didn't stop her temper from getting the best of her. Usually she was calm and level-headed, but love does funky things to people's brains.

Tom noticed that everytime he tried to touch her glittery skin, she practically hissed at him. He wondered over to the bar with her and ordered two drinks.

"I didn't want that." Ally yelled over the music. What was her problem? Where was the Ally he loved? But he shrugged and mumbled an apology that was lost in the beat. A girl walked over to him and led her hand up his leg.

"Um, hi?" Couldn't she see Ally right there?

"Hey sexy. Wanna dance?" Tom glanced over at Ally, but she was smiling at another guy, who was winking at her. "Suuure."

He followed the blonde to the dance floor, looking over his shoulder to find Ally. She had sauntered over to the man, and was flirting noticebly with him. He put his hands all over the stranger dancing with him. Who cares if I'm going out with Ally? She's being a huge ******, he thought.

"Here's my number. Call me hun." the blonde said as she strolled out the door. Okaaay...

"So much for loving me, Tom." He chased after her as she ran out to hail a cab. "So much for being subtle, Ally."

She turned around and glared at him. His heart shrunk in his chest. He had hurt her dancing with that girl, but hadn't cared at the time. He wanted revenge, to make her extremely jealous. Needless to say it worked.

Her hand shot up and she slapped him. A taxi arrived and she hopped in, leaving Tom in a daze. "Are you coming or not?" She snarled. He timidly climbed in, careful not to breathe wrong.

On the drive back, his cell phone beeped. 4 missed calls read the screen. All calls were frantic, but at the same time calm, if that makes any sense. Ally's cell phone went crazy too, and the alarmed look on her face showed she got the same message.

"Drive us to the hospital please." Whatever had happened had been bad enough for Bill, because now he lay unconcious in the hospital. What a perfect end to a pefect night.

Author's Note: Sorry it's so short. Intense writer's block, man.

xXKillerxQueenXx
July 20th, 2008, 03:36 PM
OHMYGOSH!
I love that chapter,
Because it's all. about. me.
No, just kidding.
I loved it though!
The drama...
WHAT'S HAPPENING TO BILL?
I swear, if Bill dies
(Which he won't because you WILL NOT kill him)
I will make Lexi use her softball bat...
Not really, but I've always wanted to say that.

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 20th, 2008, 03:39 PM
He may or may not die.
JUST JOKING.
He hit his head on the pool remember????
He WILL NOT die.
:]

xXKillerxQueenXx
July 20th, 2008, 03:43 PM
Whew, good.
I was getting worried there for a second,
'Cause you said that he was still unconscious...
Mehr, bitte!

This_Is_Sarah
July 20th, 2008, 07:47 PM
those were definately worth the wait! :D

more please!

bbgroove
July 20th, 2008, 09:45 PM
I&#39;m not sure if I should blame Ally for the fight... or Tom...

but amazing chapter as always (^_^)....

update soon please... I really want Bill to be okay... (^_^)

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 21st, 2008, 03:41 PM
Ahhh.
I need help.
If you have any ideas feel free to PM me.
I have next chapter thought up so after I post that
hit me up with any ideas, yo.

bbgroove
July 21st, 2008, 05:19 PM
*salutes*

ai yi captain (^_^)


*thinks* is that how you spell ai yi?

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 22nd, 2008, 12:43 PM
I don't know. lol. Anyway, I'm coming up with more ideas, so I may not need the help. I'm so sorry. You are talking to the world's most confusing writer.

Part 13
They couldn't believe it. Ally had broken up with Tom.

"Are you effing insane?!" Kelsey yelled.

"Show some support Kelsey." Blaine reached over and hugged her friend. Ally went on to explain that he only wanted her body and that he was too conceited for her.

A knock came on their door, startling an alreay anxious Lisi. Whatever Tom had done it had hurt Ally, and she wasn't about to let him get away with it. There was something left unsaid floating in the air. Tom hit her...or something much much worse that she didn't even want to think about. SO help her God, if he touched her in a mean or harmful way, he would get it. Regardless she jumped up and swung open the door.

"Hey babe. Georg's taking us to din din. Get dressed." Bill stood bouncing at the door, raising an eyebrow at his girlfriend. He turned and skipped away.

"Wow, Lisi. Wow. Some boyfriend. Where are we going Kelsey?" Blaine looked over at her, hinting that she needed to know what to wear. "Red Robin. Nothing fancy."

All girls went to their respective rooms and emerged in assorted clothes. It was cold out, so all were in long sleeve shirts or jackets. Lisi wore a tight lavender shirt with a shimmery brown sweater. Her jeans were tucked into some brown knee high boots and the gold jewelry sparkled in the light. Kelsey's black shirt accented the gray skinnies she wore with some Converse high tops. The smokey makeup on her face gave some depth to the outfit. Ally had on a navy blue hoodie with a lace cami underneath and some cute jeans over Puma sneakers. Kelsey look the best in a gold shirt with a black scarf and black skinny jeans. Her makeup was done to perfection, while her earings glittered.

"Woah. You guys look great." Georg said, staring only at Kelsey. She smiled at him and he pushed his hair back from his face. They pushed through the crowd of girls outside, loaded up into the vans, and made their way to the restaurant.

---

Georg cleared his throat and stood up. No one else was there, so no one thought it was weird that a random man was addressing his table quite loudly. Kelsey looked confused, and as Georg spoke, she softened her expression.

"We've known each other for a while now. What happened to Bill was 3 weeks ago and we've left that behind us, moving forward and advancing in our lives together, all 8 of us. I feel devoted to our family, even though somethings have been going wrong lately. Needless to say we all love each other. Sometimes we don't always show it," he looked straight at Tom as he said this. "but it's there. Kelsey. My love for you grows stronger every day I spend with you. My life is complete now that you are here, and I couldn't function without you around. I've given this lots of thought. I even asked the guys and they agree with me. I hope I'm not rushing things because I don't want to scare you away. With that said, I present you with this promise ring. I will marry you someday. Even though we are still young, I want to spend my remaining years by your side." Applause thundered from the eavsdropping staff, as well as everyone at the table.

"I have never loved anyone else more than you. So I accept." Kelsey cried into Georg's shoulder as they hugged. Ally was saying something to Lisi, and no one heard. "What Ally?" She leaned closer.

"I'm pregnant." The world stopped spinning and her stomach lurched. Apparently everyone else heard too, because the applause stopped abrubtly and Tom's smile evaporated. "What?" He raised an eyebrow and smirked. Obviously she was wrong. Still his hands shook violently.

"You heard me. You got me effing pregnant! I HATE YOU TOM! YOU RUINED MY LIFE!" She ran out the door into the dark night. Lisi sprung up after her, pausing only to dump her soda on Tom's head.

It was snowing hard now, blinding anyone who should be outside. Which way had she gone? She heard Bill's voice calling her name frantically, so she followed the cries getting lost in the wind. She eventually stumbled into him, sobbing hysterically in his shoulder. Her newly pregnant friend was lost in a blizzard. Der God...

Author's Note: Hope you guys don't mind this twist of events. And something will happen to Blaine soon too. If you mind, I'll edit it okay? Thanks for reading! Comment please.

xXKillerxQueenXx
July 22nd, 2008, 12:46 PM
Oh no!
My character is pregnant!
That's cool with me.
makes the story interesting.
I loved this chapter.
And I loved all your other chapters.
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Mehr bitte!

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 22nd, 2008, 02:40 PM
Yay.
Thanks for being cool about it.
I couldn't think of anything else...

xXKillerxQueenXx
July 22nd, 2008, 03:54 PM
It's totally okay.
It's your story, so
You can play around with
Whatever character you want.
Us readers will still love it!
=D

bbgroove
July 22nd, 2008, 08:52 PM
OMG!!!!

Do you have any idea how amazing that was?

wow... update soon please...

I&#39;m excited to see what happens with me...lol

hypergal
July 22nd, 2008, 09:47 PM
Coolio! New reader alert! By the way...I think it's movin a bit fast. Could u maybe slow it down a lil? I love stories that go by slowly...Like with the promise ring and all? Yeah I would have put tht in a lil later...But TOTALLY AWESOME nonetheless! and OMG I say din din too! <3

tokiohotel26
July 22nd, 2008, 10:10 PM
CONGRATS ALLY!

:lol:

anyway! great chappie!!!

xXKillerxQueenXx
July 22nd, 2008, 10:14 PM
CONGRATS ALLY!

:lol:

anyway! great chappie!!!

I know, I'm going to be a mommy!
My little bundle of joy will be named Ralph. Or Selena.
lol.

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 23rd, 2008, 05:19 PM
Ralph is the best name. So serious.
Selena is such a purrty name.

xXKillerxQueenXx
July 23rd, 2008, 05:21 PM
Then the little boy could be called Ralphie!
Like from the Little Rascals!

bbgroove
July 23rd, 2008, 11:41 PM
I&#39;m suffering from withdrawls

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 24th, 2008, 11:45 AM
I promise I'll update today.

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 24th, 2008, 12:11 PM
Coolio! New reader alert! By the way...I think it's movin a bit fast. Could u maybe slow it down a lil? I love stories that go by slowly...Like with the promise ring and all? Yeah I would have put tht in a lil later...But TOTALLY AWESOME nonetheless! and OMG I say din din too! <3
That's the whole point of that part.
To go fast.
;)

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 24th, 2008, 05:14 PM
Here's part 14. Comment please!

Part 14
The ride back was difficult, partly because of the snow, partly because of Tom. Bill had all he could do to look at him. He had been mad and dissapointed in Tom before. But this wasn't messing up a chord or taking the last cookie. This was huge and Bill was furious. How could he be that careless? Nothing was happening right today, especially now that Ally was pregnant.

To be truthful, Bill had thought that Georg promising Kelsey to marry her was wrong. They were too young to think of marriage yet. Granted Georg was almost 21, but Kelsey was still too young. She could not possibly be happy tied down at this age, yet it had already happened.

Gustav and Blaine were the only impartial ones in the group, happy for Ally, but mad at the same time. Lisi, Blaine aand Kelsey were so worried about their pregnant friend alone in a blizzard, but they all gave Tom grief.

"How could you do this?"
"Did you ever think about condoms?"
"What the **** Tom? Can you keep it in your pants?

---

Bill needed to do something to take his mind off all the chaos. He went out for a walk, across the street to a skate park. Of course he was joined by Lisi later, and he actually didn't mind. "Hey." she said as a bird landed in the bowl of the empty park, its feet leaving little marks in the powdery snow. She sat down and pulled her knees up to her chin.

"I know it's hard Bill. I don't think we are being very nice to Tom though. After all, it takes two to tango." Bill laughed half-heartedly.

"It's just so...weird. We're so young, and things are happening too fast for me." He closed his eyes, picturing Tom holding a baby, Kelsey and Georg at the alter. He shuddered. She rubbed his back, his eyes flicked open. Bill was scared for everyone at that moment, especially Lisi. For some reason he felt something coming, something undescriabable in many ways. Nothing seemed right. How could everything go this wrong?

"It will get better. I swear. Things will work out for the best, and we'll all be happy." Lisi's confidence brought him a burst of strength. She was so sure of herself when no one else was.

"I love you so much," Bill started. "it hurts sometimes. Please don't leave me. Ever." Tears formed in his eyes, and he couldn't stop them from sliding down.

"What? Why would I ever leave? No Bill. Never." She grasped his hand with hers, feeling the connection despite the gloves. He pulled her to him, unsure of himself and why he was crying. He felt awkward now, but he still hugged her with all his heart, and kissed her with even more than that. He breathed her in, savoring the moment.

"We should get back. We need to wait for Ally to come back." He stood up, clearing his throat. Lisi stood up too, putting an arm around his small waist. She was enough to brighten his spirits, enough to save him from all he was. He needed her more than air itself.

---

The time came to apologize to Tom. Lisi got her apology out in no time and hugged him afterward. Bill went last. He needed something to say to his older brother, but nothing came. He stood in front of Tom, mouth open, eyes on Lisi. Go on she mouthed. He nodded, and let it all out.

"This is all wrong. We've been so close over all these years, you were my support. Our relationship cannot possibly change, even over a stupid mistake. We are in our glory years now. You are not a little boy anymore and niether am I. So we should stop acting like it. So for all of us, accept my apology and let's move on. Together." Tom started to talk, then shut up. The brothers hugged, and Lisi felt her eyes burn. Tears were a common thing in this family, mind you. So she let them out. Nothing felt better than to cry.

---

Bill cracked his eyes open. His phone was ringing, and Lisi was nowhere to be found. "Hello?" He asked groggily.

"Bill? I'm scared. Can you come get me?" He sat up and rubbed his face. "Where are you?"

"I don't really know...um, I was walking and I found this house looking thing. I went in but there are a lot of men here and they are trying to get in and I can't get out so-"

"Stop. Tell me the last thing you saw before you went in." He walked the clothes he wore yesterday and struggled to put on his pants. "A...um, a McDonald's!" She said hopefully. A man shouted in the backround, followed by a scream. "Ally?" The line was dead. He ran out of the room, adrenaline coursing through his body, surging his energy. He didn't know who to ask for help, so he ran out to the street. What was he going to do?

xXKillerxQueenXx
July 24th, 2008, 05:36 PM
Oh God, what's going to happen now?
Love it! <3
Mehr bitte!

bbgroove
July 24th, 2008, 06:17 PM
YAY! you updated...

anyways...lol

great chapter... I hope Bill gets to her in time...

update soon

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 25th, 2008, 01:23 PM
Thanks you guys.

Part 15
"Bill, can you open the door please?" Lisi stood outside the room, shivering in her bare feet and thin pajamas. "Bill!" She whisper yelled. She had stepped out to get a bottle of water, which they had run out of the day before. Apparently she forgot her key card. She sank down on the wall, thinking of what to do. Suddenly she remembered grabbing her phone on the way out, a habit all the girls had. She dialed Bill's phone number, forcing her eyes to stay open longer. He didn't answer, and she had no way of getting in the room. She sighed rather loudly, intending to wake someone up. If she couldn't sleep, no one could.

---

"Wakeup. What are you doing out here?" Tom was kicking her foot with his, plastic coffee cup in hand. Lisi rubbed her eyes and stretched. Owww. Her neck was stiff and her back was sore. She felt like she got hit by a frieght train.

"I didn't have a key last night." Tom shrugged and pulled her up. "Bill's downstairs. Said he needs to talk to us all." She raced ahead of him, unsure if Bill was in the lobby or in the breakfast place (what is that thing called?). Tom grabbed her arm as she headed for the lobby, pulling her to go eat breakfast. Bill was sitting at a table with everyone else, but Ally of course.

"Okay you guys. Now that we are all here, I'd like to talk to you. Last night I got a call from someone, and I helped them out a little. So may I present to you...Allllyy!" Heads turned as Ally walked into the room, avoiding Tom. All the girls jumped up and smothered Ally in hugs and kisses. She took a seat in between Blaine and Lisi, across from Tom.

"What did you do Bill?" Bill craned his neck and poofed out his chest, acting proud of himself. "I reescued her of course. There were all these men, right? So I walk in and they come out and jump on me. Annnd I fight them off one by one." Lisi's eyes widened. Her boyfriend had fought off big strong men? Well, she was impressed.

"Actually, he called the cops." Bill sent her a look that said, "You had to ruin the moment." She laughed and turned to Lisi. Everyone else was making fun of Bill, so it gave her time to say something to her.

"I really feel bad about Tom. This whole thing made me realize how much I need him." Lisi grinned from ear to ear.

"Good, because we think you should get back together." Ally said her goodnights, well good mornings, and hurried up to bed. They were leaving that night for Denmark, and it was a long drive. All the concets in this country had been a success, and at every concert they were asked to play an encore. Duh, they were Tokio Hotel.

---

"Is that the last bag?" Kelsey handed Georg a suitcase and nodded. They were leaving in a few minutes, off to sweep another country off its musical feet. With everything and everyone loaded up the boys made their way to the back of their buses, keeping it the same as last time. Gustav and Blaine riding with Bill and Lisi, Tom and Ally with Georg and Kelsey.

"Hey can I talk to you a sec?" Bill was in the back of the bus, doodling all over his notebook. Gustav looked up from his sheet of paper and nodded. "I want to do something special for the girls. And you are going to help me the most." They got started right away, organizing and arguing more than ever. But before they arrived at the hotel that night, they completed what they wanted done.

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 25th, 2008, 05:04 PM
Bump?
Please?
I feel like this is a bad story.

bbgroove
July 25th, 2008, 05:08 PM
It&#39;s not a bad story..

I wasn&#39;t able to get on here until just now...

update soon please (^_^)

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 27th, 2008, 04:31 PM
Part 16
Georg still had to do his part, but they weren't so sure about Tom. Were he and Ally going to get back together? They needed to know so they could finish it all.

When the girls wanted to go to bed that night, the band met in the spa. Why not relax while planning? Bill handed Georg the piece of paper, and Georg passed it to Tom. "Oh, no. He doesn't get it until he makes up with her." Gustav cut in. Tom glared at him, and Gustav stuck out his tongue. Tom ran out of the room. "Okaaay."

He cam back 45 minutes later. "Can I see now?" Bill shot him a confused look, and gave him the paper. "Let's just say she accepted." He licked his lip ring slowly, reading over the sheet of paper. It was decided. All four of them would participate, but when would they do it?

---

Lisi woke up late the next morning. A note was on her clock, written in scratchy handwriting. It was cute.

Lisi
We went to soundcheck for tonight.
Here's a hundred dollars.
I'm spoiling you now, so don't expect this everytime we tour.

Love you, Bill

She got up, smirking. Oh goody, a hundred dollars. Her excitement radiated through the hallways as she made hyer way down to the others. Kelsey opened her door first. "He gave me a hundred dollars! I'm so happy." She joked. Kelsey looked confused, so Lisi laughed and banged harder on Ally and Blaine's doors. They emerged, ready to go out for an afternoon on the town, all four arm in arm.

"Where to first?" Blaine asked. The girls had no idea where they were, but they were having loads of fun already. A movie theater was on the next street, and luckily a show was just starting. Lisi grabbed the nearest hand and dragged them over. It was fun, and they giggled at everything said. It was a drama, but the girls found it hilarious. By the end they were in tears, crying from pure delight. "I love you guys!" Ally breathed in between spurts of laughter.

Soon the boys called. It was time for their concert, and their special friends had front row seats. This concert was the best so far, and according to Lisi, Bill looked the best he ever had. Of course all the girls thought that of their respective boyfriends. They drove over to the club for the afterparty, yelling and laughing the whole way. This is going to be awesome, Bill thought as they pulled up.

---

So not awesome. He was so drunk, his head hurt already. He couldn't think straight, and he really needed to get it out of his bloodstream. He walked over to the bar and sank onto the counter. "I need a water!" He shouted to the bar tender. Shortly, a bottle of water was in front of him, and he chugged it down. "Lesson learned Billy?" a voice behind him said. He spun around way too fast, making him dizzy and disoriented. From what he could make of her, it was Lisi. He nodded, or at least he thought he did. Suddenly, he felt the urge to puke.

"Okay let's go. MOVE!" Lisi pushed a dancing couple out of the way, and forced Bill into the bathroom. He fell to the floor and let it out. She held his hair back for him, and he nodded off to sleep. "Bill, wakeup." She shook him gently. A man walked into the stall, then apologized.

"Oh, it's all right. He just..." She looked up and choked on her words. "...um, yeah." She smiled shyly and urged Bill to wake up. "If you want, I can get him out to your car." She had no other choice. She nodded and stood up. This man was so familiar but she couldn't place it. Where had she seen him before?

The man made his way through the crowd, Lisi picking out her friends. Bill was slung over his shoulder, partially being dragged, paritally walking.

"Who was that man?" Tom asked as he shut the van door. It hit Lisi all of a sudden. She shrugged timidly, but she knew. The man from my dreams...

bbgroove
July 27th, 2008, 06:33 PM
YAY!

update soon please (^_^)

and ooo... hte man from her dreams... I&#39;m excited to see what happens next (^_^)

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 27th, 2008, 09:15 PM
Does anyone wanna do a joint fanfic with me?
I really feel left out because my best friend on this site left a while ago and I need to stop sulking.
This is how I will get over it and develop new friendships.
So if you want to do one just...PM me I guess.
You guys are great.
<333

crazychick6195
July 28th, 2008, 02:38 AM
CONGRATS ALLY!

:lol:

anyway! great chappie!!!

I know, I'm going to be a mommy!
My little bundle of joy will be named Ralph. Or Selena.
lol.

OMFG!!! selena?!!?? that's my name!! lol woooooooooahhh!!!
lol im so hyper u like my name hehe and this amazing ff writer things its preety. btw new reader. i read all of it 2nite and its really GREAT and all the chapters r amazing hehe :geek:

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 28th, 2008, 11:48 AM
Yay!
I love new readers.
Thank you everyone for reading.
=]

bbgroove
July 30th, 2008, 10:04 PM
update?

pwease (^_^)

babygurl3183
July 31st, 2008, 02:38 PM
woah i just got internet back since i moved,
and i immediatly had to read what happened, haha and wow promise rings and pregnancy? lol

update soon.(:

Musik-ist-Liebe
July 31st, 2008, 02:44 PM
Yeah I really don't like where it's going, so I'm going to skip ahead about 5 months ok?
Thank you so much for sticking with it even though it sucks!
I'll post today some time.

babygurl3183
August 1st, 2008, 03:31 PM
Yeah I really don't like where it's going, so I'm going to skip ahead about 5 months ok?
Thank you so much for sticking with it even though it sucks!
I'll post today some time.

ok, and it doesn't suck!
and ok i'll be sure to check back later. (:

babygurl3183
August 9th, 2008, 08:51 AM
woah what happened? ):

Musik-ist-Liebe
August 9th, 2008, 10:32 AM
Okay so I lied.
I'm bad at this.
Totally forgot about this story.
It's really that bad to me.

babygurl3183
August 9th, 2008, 05:09 PM
aw , its ok (:

bbgroove
August 10th, 2008, 02:43 AM
Marlee... but... but...

I loved this fic...

if you ever get the urge to continue it... let me know, and I&#39;ll comment in a heartbeat (^_^)

Musik-ist-Liebe
August 10th, 2008, 09:44 AM
Marlee... but... but...

I loved this fic...

if you ever get the urge to continue it... let me know, and I&#39;ll comment in a heartbeat (^_^)

I might...I just don't know...
It might take a while though.
No one but you guys was reading this
and Ally even forgot about it (lmao).
So I don't know...

Musik-ist-Liebe
August 11th, 2008, 02:07 PM
Ok guys!
I'm not going to continue with this piece of crap,
but instead I'm working on a new piece of crap!
It's going to be called
"Our Happy Ending's Gone."

So have your eyes open for it,
and I promise it will be better.

babygurl3183
August 12th, 2008, 02:41 PM
ah it wasn't a piece of crap,
but ok i'll keep an eye out for it. (:

herseykiss
August 12th, 2008, 07:12 PM
-new readerrr!!!<3-

ohyehh moree plzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!

bbgroove
August 12th, 2008, 08:00 PM
Well I can&#39;t wait for the new one (^_^)

crazychick6195
August 14th, 2008, 01:30 PM
Aww the story ended =[ feel like crying like a baby hehe. Well it was good while it lasted and i would have liked 2 c what happened next but ill def. Check it out =]