Listen to Your True Feelings (Final Chapter and message up) [Archive]

thxxbill

July 5th, 2008, 12:48 AM

just something i thought i'd try
i want feedback. honest feedback.

if you want to be in the story, PM me.

here we gooooo

Chapter 1

"Jess, I don't know. The nuns will freak and I can't afford more detentions." Jessica giggled and just laughed at Carrie. "Oh my GOD Carrie. You are amazing. We will not get caught. School hasn't even started yet. Which means we can sneak out the back entrance and get to my car!"

Carrie thought about this. On one hand, she'd see Tokio Hotel at the mall. On the other hand, she couldn't afford getting caught. It was only the middle of September and she'd already received 5 detentions.

Eh. Carrie rolled her thick lined eyes. "Fine let's go." Jessica squealed. "Yay! Let me get Emily. We can get Liz to cover for us. Isn't she in most of your classes?"

"Uh...yes." "Well good," Jessica said. "That'll be easier for us!"

The 3 friends snuck out to Jessica's car and texted Liz to cover for them. When Liz agreed they slowly and carefully drove off the school property.

When the got to the mall, Jessica and Emily pulled Carrie into Hot Topic and started to pick out accessories. "As much as I love Hot Topic, why are we getting stuff?" Jessica sighed. "BECAUSE, I'm not meeting Tokio Hotel looking like a little Catholic school girl. You can just get some rubber bracelets, a bandanna, and a necklace. Once they look at your boobs, you won't have any problem."

Carrie gave Jessica a look and Emily came over and hugged Carrie. "Oh, you know how she is. Anyway, we better hurry up. We need food and the signing starts at 9. It's 8:30 right now."

They went to go get some coffee. As they waited and sipped their coffee, Carrie wondered about what Jess said. How would they react?

Chapter 2 might come in a bit. It gets better. Sorry if this bites ^^"

thxxbill

July 5th, 2008, 01:15 AM

waiting for a response >.o

thxxbill

July 5th, 2008, 01:30 AM

eh. while i'm waiting, i'll do chapter 2 :3

Chapter 2

When Carrie, Jess, and Emily got back to Hot Topic it was already crowded. "Whoa...I guess a ton of people must be skipping today," Emily said. "Well, yeah! Band signing? Hot Topic? CHYEAHHH!!!" Jess screamed. Carrie laughed a little at Jess and her antics.

When they got to the front, all Carrie did was smile at Tom and he shot up out of his chair. Bill giggled at his brother then took his notice on Jessica. Gustav and Georg also took notice, but both pairs of eyes were on Emily.

Tom smiled a little and Carrie smiled back. Tom slowly started to look Carrie from top to bottom. Carrie glanced at what he was doing and wondered what was going on. Tom then looked straight at her and said "So how do you like to music?"
"They're the best songs I've ever heard."
"Thanks. That means a lot. I was wondering..." He leaned in close and smiled. "How would you like to, you know, get to know each other better later?"

Carrie almost slapped him right then and there, but played her cool. She leaned in and smiled sweetly.

"Sorry, hon. That doesn't work on me." Jess and Emily said their good byes to Bill, Georg, and Gustav. As they walked out of the store, Emily looked back and saw them starting to walk out of the store. "You know they're going to follow us right?" Jess laughed and smiled. "Of COURSE they will! That was your plan all along, right Carrie?"

Carrie nodded without thinking, but inside her head were different thoughts.
What did I do back there? I can't believe it...I've talked to guys all the time, but no guy has ever said that to me before...

Jess was right. They were going to start following them. Part of Carrie wished they wouldn't, but the other part begged to see Tom again.

That's all for tonight. Beddy bye for me xDD
If you wanna be in the story, remember, just PM me and let me know and you'll be in there! Chapter 3 will be up tomorrow!

Haley1018

July 5th, 2008, 01:33 AM

I likes it!!!!!! :D

TexasGirlLovesTH

July 5th, 2008, 01:34 AM

Me likes!

Unknown598

July 5th, 2008, 01:42 AM

tis very good!!

:D

i'd skip school to see TH, maybe not a signing but yea, i hate school anyways...

BrittnayySTFU

July 5th, 2008, 02:34 AM

I Likes!

xXxMandiixXx

July 5th, 2008, 03:54 AM

love love love

"Sorry, hon. That doesn't work on me." omg i love that part was so funny hehe i could imagine toms face :) its would be somthing like this-> O_O

continue!

<3 Mandii xx

thxxbill

July 5th, 2008, 10:31 PM

yay! feedback :3 time for chapter 3!

Chapter 3

Carrie, Jess, and Emily sat down near Starbucks and relaxed. "Oh man...hot German rockstars going after us...does this day get better or what??" Jess squealed. "...Or what..." Carrie mumbled.

Emily looked up and noticed a hyperactive dark haired girl squealing and running towards their table. "Carrie...isn't that your friend Mandii?" Carrie looked up giggling and said "That's impossible..." But she stopped giggling when she realized Emily was right. "Oh my lanta, it is Mandii."

Mandii jumped on Carrie and gave her a hug. "CARRIEEEEEEEEEE!!!" Carrie laughed a little. "Hey Mandii. Were you at the signing?" "Oh baby, was I! That place was packed. And our boys were looking pretty darn gorgeous."

Carrie got up, laughing at Mandii's excitement. "They were looking extremely cute today, I will admit." Mandii giggled and looked up and saw the four boys coming towards them. Tom looked eager to see Carrie, so Mandii thought of something. "So Carrie, let's pretend I'm some hot rockstar. 'Ohhhhhh Carrrriiiiiieeeee. You so fineeeee.'" Carrie nervously laughed and back away slowly, bringing her closer to Tom. Jessica and Emily flirted with Bill and Gustav from far away while Georg looked interested in Mandii.

A little boy drove his car right under Carrie's feet, causing her to trip. Carrie made a small shriek of fright and notice that someone caught her.

Carrie looked up to see Tom smiling down at her. "Finders keepers," Tom said and kissed Carrie on the cheek.

Chapter 4 will be coming shortly so no worry!

Haley1018

July 5th, 2008, 10:33 PM

Luffed it!!

thxxbill

July 6th, 2008, 12:30 AM

Chapter 4

Carrie jerked away and blushed. "Yeah, yeah...losers weepers." Tom just brought her back into his arms and held her close. "Please. You know you can't resist me. Why try?" Carrie looked up at him. "You don't even know my name." Tom looked up at Jess, who was getting a lot of attention from Bill, and asked "What's her name?" Jess said "Carrie!" without a second thought and directed her attention back to Bill.

Emily looked over at Carrie and winked as if to say 'Niiiiiice.' then turned back to Gustav. Mandii glowed from the attention she was getting from Georg. Why was it that Carrie was the only one getting more...intimate attention than everyone else??

Tom slowly ran his lips down Carrie's neck. "Mmm...Carrie. Gorgeous name for a gorgeous girl." Carrie jerked away , blushing furiously. "Please! We're in a public place." Tom raised his eyebrows at first, but then a smile crept onto his face. He grabbed Carrie's hand, pulled her close again, and whispered "Just name the hotel, the day, and the time, and there might be more."

Carrie, remembering to keep her cool, smiled back. "Well, in that case..." Tom grinned and said "Yeah?" "Keep dreaming." Carrie started to walk away but Tom pulled her back. He was still smiling. Carrie started to blush a little which made him smile more. "Just at least let me have your number." He put both hands on the side of her face gently. "I don't want to forget this face."

Carrie turned red, which made her friends take notice and smile. Mandii nudged her. "Come on, give it to him! They're in town for a few more days. Might as well have fun with it!" At first Carrie hesitated, but then gave in. She pulled out her eyeliner and grabbed his arm, but he suddenly pulled it away. Carrie was confused. "Do you want it or not?" Tom suddenly wrapped his arms around her again, making it so she could write on his arm and he could still hold her. Carrie wrote her number on his arm and quickly pulled away. Bill gave Jess a kiss on the cheek for his good bye. Mandii kissed Georg on the cheek. Gustav kissed Emily's hand. But Tom had to be different. He leaned in and kissed Carrie deeply. "Until tomorrow." Tom winked and walked off with the rest of the band.

Until tomorrow? Carrie thought. What...?

What did Tom mean? What will happen tomorrow? All will be revealed in chapter 5...tomorrow!
HA. xD

ScreamItAway

July 6th, 2008, 01:36 AM

-eyes roll in head while i'm squealing-

that shiz...was amazing! Me likey carrie!! And TOM you old dog you! XD

POSTIE PLEASE!!!

tokiohotel26

July 6th, 2008, 01:48 AM

OMG! I LUFFS IT!!! :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
what info do u need so i can be in the story?

xXxMandiixXx

July 6th, 2008, 02:05 AM

OH YEAH UH HUHHHH GEORG LIKE ME WHOOP WHOOP *does victory dance *

ok continue!!!!!!!!!!!

<3 Mandii xx

steevie!

July 6th, 2008, 04:06 AM

Steevie likes ^-^
more?

amandaaraujo

July 6th, 2008, 05:03 AM

WOWZERS LOVE IT :D

Monicaalynn

July 6th, 2008, 10:49 AM

I luff it!!! I can't wait for the next post

Unknown598

July 6th, 2008, 04:01 PM

yo still likes it

*silently laughing *** off....*

eyeliner will forever make me remember these guys....

thxxbill

July 6th, 2008, 11:29 PM

SQUEEEEEEEE!!!! i'm so happy people love the story!

to be in the story, just message me with your name, what you look like, and your personality :]

Chapter 5

Emily and Jess said their good byes to Carrie and she went to spend the night at Mandii's house.

Mandii squealed on the way back to her house. "Oh my lanta, Carrie!!! Georg had the most amazing eyes and did you see that SMILE?? But we can't forget you and Tom." Carrie laughed nervously. "Please. He's just a 6 foot German rockstar man *****." "Who has a thing for you." "Yes. Who has a...HEY." Carrie started to blush. Mandii giggled a little. "It's ok to have someone like you. You don't need to block people out."

Carrie looked away. No. It was ok to block people out. The last boy she let into her heart and her life ripped it to shreds. It made it worse knowing that Tom was this huge player. Carrie's thoughts were interrupted by her phone ringing. She slid it open to see a number she didn't recognize. She answered cautiously. "Hello?"

"Wow. Your voice is sexy in real life but on the phone, it's even better." Carrie lightly turned red. Mandii giggled in the background and jumped around. "Was there a point to calling me?" "Just to hear you and ask you a question." "Question only, you man *****." "Ouch! That hurt. Is that anyway to treat the man who saved you?" "From a toy car..."

Tom laughed a little. "However, you owe me." "I thought you got your reward when you had your hands all over me today." "Please. That was the beginning. What I wanted to know is we have tomorrow off and the next day is the concert. The next day, we're gone. So we wanted to know if you and your friend wanted to spend the day with us at the mall." Carrie blushed at what had happened today.

"I guess...we can." She could practically feel his smile over the phone. "Great! We'll meet you there at 10. You'll fall for me eventually. Don't deny it." Carrie blushed again. What is it with this boy and making her blush? "I doubt it. See you tomorrow." She hung up and texted Emily and Jess. They both quickly and happily responded yes. Mandii quickly agreed. "But tomorrow when we leave, just tell your mom you're still staying at my house. Your mom will freak if you come home smelling like a sexy German rockstar."

Carrie laughed. "You know my mom all too well. She'll be ok with it." Carrie and Mandii went up to Mandii's room and danced around wildly to random music. This is how I should be spending my Friday night, Carrie thought. Not thinking about some guy. But while she and Mandii danced to When I Get Home, You're So Dead by Mayday Parade, she couldn't help thinking about Tom.

Why is he so into me? And only me? And with that last thought, she let herself fall slave to the music. She didn't want to be Tom's next one night stand. Or did she?

Chapter 6 will come tomorrow! time for me to skedaddle to bed. summer school tomorrow and i need to get up early to catch the bus. let me know what you think! and thank you so much for the amazing feedback! i'll keep the chapters coming!

steevie!

July 6th, 2008, 11:33 PM

yay :mrgreen:

xXxMandiixXx

July 7th, 2008, 01:58 AM

OMG OMG OMG GET ME WITH GEORG ALREADY!!! HEHE I THINK THAT RHYMED bahaha

loving the new chapter continue!!!

<3 Mandii xx

Monicaalynn

July 7th, 2008, 10:01 AM

hahaha, i love how she calls him a man ***** to his 'face'

Unknown598

July 7th, 2008, 12:39 PM

*dances to I'm Like a Lawyer With the Way I'm Always Trying to Get you Off (Me & You)* >< long title

8-) chillin, waitin for more

thxxbill

July 7th, 2008, 09:20 PM

heads up all.

1) i didn't really say scallywag...never used that word before. but it's the word that it turned out to be ^^

2) you guys also have an option to have me write tom's POV for the first 6 chapters. :) so just post on here if you want that.

i'll write chapter 6 in a few, ok?

Unknown598

July 7th, 2008, 09:38 PM

i think stories from different point of views r pretty cool 8-)

but you do what u wish!!

ill read keep reading, even... i wont finish that setence...

iilyRein

July 7th, 2008, 09:40 PM

I cant wait!
this story is UBER GOOD
:D

thxxbill

July 7th, 2008, 11:28 PM

Chapter 6

Mandii woke Carrie up by shoving her off the couch. "Oww! What is wrong with you?" "Carrie! Today's your big date! Time for you to get your sexayyyyy on!!!!!!!" Carrie sighed. She didn't want to be attracted to Tom, but for some reason, she kinda was. The way he was so laid back about everything and who can forget that adorable accent? Still she didn't like him for his reputation for one night stands. And how he liked to touch her. A lot.

She went into the bathroom and showered. She got dressed, blow dried her hair, and started to straighten it. She saw Mandii prancing about with clothes singing "Georg, Georg!!!!!!!!!!!" They both got their make up on and headed off to the mall. She saw Jess, Emily, and the band already there. Mandii nudged Carrie. "Did you see Tom's face light up when he saw you? He'll be all over you!" Carrie sighed. He likes being grabby..., she thought. Georg took Mandii's hand and led her into the mall. Emily just had to smile at Gustav and he blushed furiously. Jess and Bill started smiling and laughing without a care in the world.

But everyone turned around when Tom took Carrie into his arm and kissed her the same way he kissed her yesterday. Carrie turned red then quickly pulled away. Tom just smiled. Georg snickered which made Bill make a comment about how he won't get as much action in a year than Tom does in a day. Mandii comforted Georg while Tom kept smiling at Carrie. "From the way you at first reacted to that kiss, I can tell you missed me." "I can tell you need to keep your hormones in check."

Tom leaned down and gently bit her ear. "You're hot when you're angry. Let me take you anywhere you want." He smiled at her again, which made her turn a little red. "...Fine. But no pushing me against a wall and getting all hot and bothered." Tom laughed a little. "We'll see how that goes."

They strolled into Hot Topic where Mandii and Carrie spotted their friend Al. Her pitch black bangs fell over one eye as she looked up, smiled, and called the two over. "Ok," she whispered. "Who are the hotties and are they available." Mandii giggled and said "Well, the guy with shoulder length brown hair is mine. But the guy with the dreads only wants Carrie. And man, does he want her bad." Al grinned. "Well now...in that case, we have some sexy corsets on sale if you wanna take a peek." Carrie raised her eyebrows. "No chance, Al."

They looked around and every time Carrie picked something up she wanted to get, Tom said he'd put it on his card. But from the direction he was looking in, she could tell he wanted her in one of those corsets and matching panties. She decided to play with his head. She went around to that area and pretended to browse. His eyes lit up and he was grinning. Carrie turned to him, smiled, and walked off without even picking up anything. Tom laughed a little and went off to talk to Jess about how listening to rap can be just as amazing as listening to rock.

Bill came over and smiled at Carrie. "He really likes you, you know. Tom." Carrie looked up to see the spiky black haired boy. "Really now. He has a very physical way of showing it." "That's just how Tom is. If he was like me, exactly like me, would you blush like you do with how Tom is?" Carrie thought about this. "Maybe." Bill smiled. "Look at Georg. We make fun of him, but Mandii seems to like him how he is. And you can tell her likes her back." Georg was holding Mandii's hand. He was looking at her like she was the goddess of Hot Topic. Tom treated her like a goddess. A very physical, sexual goddess. Maybe she'd give him a chance.

But not yet. She needed to know that he would be able to be regular around her. Not super physical, but maybe she'd accept that...

Time for me to go! Chapter 7 will be up tomorrow!

steevie!

July 7th, 2008, 11:34 PM

Steevie loves very much ^-^

xXxMandiixXx

July 8th, 2008, 02:07 AM

whoop whoop goddess of hot topic XD

i wish there was a hot topic in australia :(

oh well ill live :) theres always online :D

CONTINUE!!

<3 Mandii xx

Unknown598

July 8th, 2008, 11:21 AM

*wiggle*

*dance*

i wants to go to hot topic now....

^_^

Monicaalynn

July 8th, 2008, 12:51 PM

ok, when i read that chapter the song "let's get physical...physical" kept playing like a broken record in my head lol.

iilyRein

July 8th, 2008, 12:59 PM

yay
I went to hot topic the other day 2!
cant wait for more ;]

Unknown598

July 8th, 2008, 03:07 PM

*goin off topic ><

iilyRein, i love ur avatar thingy ^^

thxxbill

July 8th, 2008, 08:38 PM

oh my lanta! thanks for making this a popular topic! :3

so i'll post tom's POVs
until i get to chapter 6 for his POVs

:D

thxxbill

July 8th, 2008, 09:04 PM

Tom's POV

Chapter 1

Tom looked out the window on the way to the mall. Another day, he thought. Another signing with gorgeous fans. He grinned at the thought of it. "...Tom....TOM." Tom snapped out of his daydream, only to be freaked to see his brother's thickly lined eyes so close to his face. Tom jumped a little. Georg laughed in the background. "THAT scared you Tom? How pathetic." Tom raised an eyebrow. "Georg, you get scared whenever you see a girl that shows emotion when you're around." This caused Bill and Gustav to laugh.

"Tom, tell me you won't see some fan and talk her into coming back to the hotel," Bill whispered. Tom rolled his eyes and Bill smacked him on the head. Tom looked up with puppy eyes. "My dear brother...why would you do such things?" Bill looked him dead in the eye. "Please. That worked when we were 7. But we're older now. More mature. More --" "Jumbie," said Gustav. "JUMBIEEEEEEEEE!!!" Bill shrieked with happiness. Tom chuckled lightly.

He may be like a 5 year old, but Bill was still his brother. Tom went back to looking out the window. He would never trick one of his fans into a hotel room. He didn't have to trick anyone. That was dirty. He just got to know his fans better. And if he mentioned the hotel room, they just came along. Who was he to deny his fans happiness? Tom smiled at the thought. It would be another signing. Another fan. Another night for them to remember.

steevie!

July 8th, 2008, 09:06 PM

ha,
Bill
JUMBIE!

XD
That made my day.

iilyRein

July 8th, 2008, 09:14 PM

omg JUMBIE
ahah bill is so cute
:lol:

Unknown598

July 8th, 2008, 09:17 PM

ha,
Bill
JUMBIE!

XD
That made my day.

same here ^^ :mrgreen:

iilyRein

July 8th, 2008, 09:49 PM

*goin off topic ><

iilyRein, i love ur avatar thingy ^^

>off topic
lol thanks!!!! =D
*waits for new chp*

thxxbill

July 8th, 2008, 10:21 PM

Tom's POV

Chapter 2

They sat down in their chairs and the signing started. Beautiful fans coming with their CDs, posters, articles of clothing, anything really. One girl offered herself to Georg, which caused Tom to laugh. But out of nowhere Tom heard this bright laughter. It was adorable. Then it stopped. He kept going with the signing, but for the next few minutes, he couldn't get it out of his head.

Then she came in. She had longish golden brown hair, gorgeous blue-gray eyes, and cute black, plastic frames surrounding them. But what really got Tom's attentions was her amazing curves. They were almost too good to be true! Bill, Gustav , and Georg must be taking notice on her friends, because they looked up as well.

He got excited when he realized they got in line, so he nodded to the guys and they agreed to speed up the signing. A few of the fans were miffed, but Tom was focused on getting that girl in his arms and to the hotel room. She finally got up to the front and smiled at Tom. He shot up our of his chair. "So how do you like the music?" They're the best songs I've ever heard." "Thanks. That really means a lot. I was wondering..." He leaned in closed to her and looked into her beautiful, thickly lined eyes. "How would you like to, you know, get to know each other better later?"

At first it looked like she wanted to hit him. But her look smoothed into a sexy smile. She leaned in and whispered, "Sorry, hon. That doesn't work on me." She and her friends then left the store. Tom was shell shocked but also so turned on. Gorgeous, knock out curves, and an attitude to boot. Bill caught the hint and announced that the signing was over. They snuck out of the store and noticed them leaving their store. Watching her from the back was almost as better as watching her from the front. He started to follow her with the rest of the band. He just needed to convince her that she would be his. Eventually.

Unknown598

July 8th, 2008, 10:28 PM

Danke schön for posting more =D

that was great ^^

*sits against wall*

8-) waiting for more

thxxbill

July 8th, 2008, 10:44 PM

just a little treat for the readers :3

this is what tom looks like laughing ;D

http://www.celines.se/wp-content/uploads/tom-kaulitz-5.jpg

steevie!

July 8th, 2008, 10:59 PM

-dies-

thxxbill

July 8th, 2008, 11:14 PM

Tom's POV

Chapter 3

"Her voice was sexy and her body...whoa, her body." Bill laughed at how excited Tom was. "You'll see her again soon. We're following them. Now it's starting to get creepy." Gustav giggled. All three of them turned to look at him, eyebrows raised. "Oh come on," he said. "We're like their fans now." Bill stopped to think about that. "You know, he's right."

Tom got a little angry. "We have to keep going! I'm just so..." "...Physically lusting after a girl who shot you down?" Georg said cheerfully. Tom stared at Georg. "Of course, because you have girls lusting after you right now, right?" Georg frowned. Bill snickered. "Her other friend, the one with the short black hair, was adorable." "I liked her friend with the blond hair," said Gustav.

Tom looked over at Gustav. "Are you sure it's not just because you're blond?" "...No..." They started to reach the area when Georg spotted another one of the girl's friend with black hair, but his one had pink and blue streaks in her hair. He stared at her. It was obvious he was turned on. Tom saw her looked at her once again. God, her body was a gift to the world.

All of a sudden, a kid pushed a small car out under her feet. She started to trip and fall backwards. Tom caught her just in time. She looked up to see who caught her.

"Finders keepers," he said with a smile and kissed her on the cheek.

Unknown598

July 8th, 2008, 11:48 PM

*little kid scream*

^-^

thxxbill

July 9th, 2008, 09:49 PM

Tom's POV

Chapter 4

The girl jerked away and turned red. "Yeah, yeah...losers weepers." Tom just brought her back into his arms and held her close. "Please. You know you can't resist me. Why try?" She looked up at him with a raised eyebrow. "You don't even know my name." Tom then looked up at the girl who Bill was interested in. "What's her name?" "Carrie!" she said quickly, then turned back to Bill.

One of her friends winked at her. Georg, Gustav, and Bill were all giving the girls they liked attention. Might as well show Carrie the perks of being with me, he thought.

Tom slowly ran his lips down Carrie's neck. "Mmm...Carrie. Gorgeous name for a gorgeous girl." Carrie jerked away , blushing furiously. "Please! We're in a public place." Tom raised his eyebrows at first, but then a smile crept onto his face. He grabbed Carrie's hand, pulled her close again, and whispered "Just name the hotel, the day, and the time, and there might be more."

Tom looked at her and she just smiled at him. "Well, in that case..." Tom grinned and said "Yeah?" "Keep dreaming." Carrie started to walk away but Tom pulled her back. He was still smiling. Carrie started to blush a little which made him smile more. "Just at least let me have your number." He put both hands on the side of her face gently. "I don't want to forget this face."

Carrie turned red. Tom liked that she could get so red over just a few shows of affection. She pulled out her eyeliner and grabbed his arm, but he suddenly pulled it away. Carrie looked confused. "Do you want it or not?" Tom suddenly wrapped his arms around her again, making it so she could write on his arm and he could still hold her. Carrie wrote her number on his arm and quickly pulled away. Bill gave Jess a kiss on the cheek for his good bye. Mandii kissed Georg on the cheek. Gustav kissed Emily's hand. But Tom had to be different. He leaned in and kissed Carrie deeply. "Until tomorrow." Tom winked and walked off with the rest of the band.

Tom walked off, smiling at his advantage on her. He loved kissing her. His thoughts were consumed with images of her. All he had to do was make one call and soon, he'd get her in that hotel. It would only take one day.

Unknown598

July 9th, 2008, 10:59 PM

*lil kid scream*

^-^ :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :ugeek:

thxxbill

July 10th, 2008, 11:58 PM

Tom's POV

Chapter 5

They got back on their tour bus. The didn't sleep on their buses like other bands. They had hotels to sleep in. But their stuff was on there, so it felt like home. "Has anyone seen Jumbie?" said Bill as he walked to the back of the bus. "Why are you looking for Jumbie? I thought we threw that thing out," said Gustav. Bill looked horrified. "How COULD you?" Georg laughed. "He's kidding, Bill. Jumbie's in your bin over there on the shelf." Tom rolled his eyes and smiled. "You know, maybe we should meet up with them tomorrow. You know...just to talk to them again." Bill arched an eyebrow. They had a mini staring contest, then Tom gave in. "Yes I want to see Carrie."

"Oh please. You want to see Jessica, Georg wants to see Mandii, and Gustav likes Emily." The others nodded. "So, it only makes sense to see them again." They nodded again. "So I'll call her, and of course, she'll say yes." Bill looked at Georg and they burst out laughing. "Did you SEE how she kept trying to get away from you? Are you blind??" said Bill. "Feh. She'll love me. Just watch."

Tom dialed her number and waited for her to pick up. Finally, a sweet but sexy voice answered. "Hello?" "Wow. Your voice is sexy in real life but on the phone, it's even better." "Was there a point to calling me?" "Just to hear you and ask you a question." "Question only, you man scallywag." "Ouch! That hurt. Is that anyway to treat the man who saved you?" "From a toy car..."

Tom laughed a little. "However, you owe me." "I thought you got your reward when you had your hands all over me today." "Please. That was the beginning. What I wanted to know is we have tomorrow off and the next day is the concert. The next day, we're gone. So we wanted to know if you and your friends wanted to spend the day with us at the mall." "I guess...we can." "Great! We'll meet you there at 10. You'll fall for me eventually. Don't deny it." "I doubt it. See you tomorrow."

Tom hung up, smiling about his success. He thought about her, removing her clothes with his mind. Tomorrow, he'd slowly get her to love him, and it would be off the hotel room. She owed him. And he knew just how to put his plan in action. But there was also his real feelings for her. He watched her with her friends. Her cute laugh, the way she could shoot comments back when they were aimed at her, and her amazing body. What if his feelings interfered with his plan? Maybe they would, maybe they wouldn't.

Unknown598

July 11th, 2008, 11:52 AM

. "Has anyone seen Jumbie?" said Bill as he walked to the back of the bus. "Why are you looking for Jumbie? I thought we threw that thing out," said Gustav. Bill looked horrified. "How COULD you?" Georg laughed.

lol
XD

that made me laugh ^_^ :mrgreen:

thxxbill

July 12th, 2008, 02:57 AM

Tom's POV

Chapter 6

The boys arrived at the entrance to the mall. Each of them wee happy to see the girls they've been thinking about. First Jess and Emily showed up. That meant Mandii and Carrie still had to show. Tom fantasized about what she'd wear. She didn't seem like the type to wear tight shirts and short skirts, but it was his fantasy.

Tom saw Mandii and Carrie from across the parking lot at smiled. She looked hot like whoa. Mandii whispered something to Carrie which made her roll her eyes. The minutes Carrie walked over, Tom greeted her the same way he had said goodbye yesterday. Carrie blushed and pulled away. Georg snickered, which made Bill say "Please, Georg. You wouldn't get as much action in a year than Tom does in a day." Georg frowned and Mandii comforted him.

"I can tell from the way you reacted to that kiss that you missed me." "I can tell you need to keep your hormones in check." Tom leaned down and gently bit her ear. "You're hot when you're angry. Let me take you anywhere you want." He smiled at her again, which made her turn a little red. "...Fine. But no pushing me against a wall and getting all hot and bothered." Tom laughed a little. "We'll see how that goes."

They went into Hot Topic where a girl with black hair called Mandii and Carrie over. She and Mandii were giggling, but Carrie was shaking her head. They were laughing and talking. Tom just couldn't help himself. He just wanted to get it on right in the dressing room. When they were done talking, Carrie went to go look for clothes. Tom took this as a chance to put part one of his plan into action.

They looked around and every time Carrie picked something up she wanted to get, Tom said he'd put it on his card. But from the direction he was looking in, she could tell he wanted her in one of those corsets and matching panties. Tom started to smile. He got a little excited when he thought that she was browsing. He then laughed when he realized she was just messing with him.

Jess called him over and he told Carrie he was going to tell her about rap. Carrie nodded him off and Bill came over and started talking to her. Jess said "You need to be careful with your come ons to her." Tom looked puzzled. "Why?" "Because the last boy she let in ripped her heart to shreds. I'm all for her finding someone she can trust, but if all you're interested in is loving her then leaving her, then just go." Tom stood there and thought for a second. He did want to be with her, but he didn't know how it would work out. She was gorgeous, amazing, funny. He also just wanted her in bed. But he knew to take it slow and gain her trust.

"Trust me. I wouldn't do that." Jess smiled. "I'll hold you to that." He smiled and looked at Carrie. He knew he'd gain her trust. It would just take a little bit of time. Hopefully, by the end of the day.

thxxbill

July 12th, 2008, 10:47 PM

ATTENTION

i will now be going back to the regular story :3
onward to chapter 7!

thxxbill

July 13th, 2008, 03:06 AM

Chapter 7

Carrie gathered up her stuff and called out to the group. "Al, come here and unlock the changing room. Guys, I'm gonna try on my stuff, alright?" They nodded and went back to what they were doing. Al walked over with the key and a white corset with black lace and matching panties. "You should at least TRY it on." "Geh...fine." Carrie smiled at Al. She added it to her pile and went in the dressing room and started to try on her clothes. While she was trying on some shirts, she heard a knock at the door. Carrie looked down. She recognized those Ecko Unlimiteds anywhere.

"Can I come in?" he asked. Carrie thought about her options. On one hand, something could happen and she could figure out her feelings. Or she could ignore him and let him go. She decided to let him. He got in and closed the door behind him. "Wow. You've got a ton of clothes with you...oh." He started to smirk and held up the corset. "Want to explain? If you wanted stuff like this, I could've taken care of it." Carrie turned red and snatched it out of his hands. "Al told me to at least try it, so I am." "Well?" "Well what?" "Are you going to try it on or am I just here to kiss you?" Carrie got redder.

"Excuse me?" Tom pulled her close and held her tight. "Don't even act like that. You know very well what I mean." Carrie tried to pull away but this time he wouldn't let her. "If I try it on, will you let it go of me?" Tom smiled. "Of course." "Turn around and close your eyes." To her surprise, he actually obeyed. She finally got it on. "You can open." Tom opened his eyes and his jaw dropped. He just couldn't stop staring.

He came towards her and held onto her. Carrie turned red again. She was about to fight him but she didn't. Tom leaned in and kissed her. And for the first time, she kissed him back. They kept kissing while they sat down on the bench where her clothes were and longer they were in there, the more intense it got. Soon Tom started to remove the corset and Carrie could feel it. She stopped him dead in his tracks.

"I know how easy this normally comes to you, but it won't go that way this time. Now get your pretty boy tushie out of here so I can push my clothes back on." At first Tom was a little upset, but then he smiled. He leaned down and kissed her neck. "No problem. Just as long as we can keep going later." He winked at her and she turned red. "Maybe. MAYBE." Tom kissed her again. "I'll buy the corset if you want." She knew how bad he wanted her in that corset. "...Fine." He grinned and took the clothes she was getting, including the corset. She was happy to be back in her old clothes, but there was something about that corset that made her feel different.

Carrie recalled what had happened earlier and she walked out of the changing room. Tom was smiling and handed her her bags. She lightly blushed. It was hard not to think about that. Tom slipped his arm around her waist and everyone was surprised she let him. She looked up and glared at him. He just smiled and kissed her. "...pfft..." she muttered. She just wanted to know one thing.

What was it about her that was so attractive? And why did he want her that bad?

iilyRein

July 13th, 2008, 08:35 PM

ahaha
carrie...tom...=D
cant wait for the next chp!

thxxbill

July 13th, 2008, 11:46 PM

Chapter 8

They walked past stores and stopped when they saw a hyper blond girl with small black glasses running towards Carrie. "Tom...let go." "Why?" "If you want to live to ever look at me again, let go." Tom did as she said and was glad her followed Carrie's advice. "CARRIE!" "Hi Sam! Wait...you're working today?" "You know it! Want a bear? I swear, if you guys come in there, I'll feel more sane." They all agreed to and Sam smiled. They walked in and Carrie smiled. They were in Build-a-Bear, which she hadn't been to since she was 7. She got all excited and started to look at the bears, bunnies, and cats. "Wow. Someone dosed on their sugar today."

Carrie spun around only to see her best friend, Cole. "Ooooo, Mr. Smarty is here. Why would you be here?" "Joey wanted to come here. That, and Sam called me to tell me you were here." Cole glanced over at the guys. "With some VERY hot guys." Carrie giggled. She couldn't help it. Cole had only admitted he was bi about a month ago and he had a very sweet boyfriend. But Joey seemed to get jealous of how close Carrie and Cole were. Jessica and Bill were trying to pick out an animal that could be Jumbie v2.0, and Georg, Gustav, Mandii, and Emily were all laughing at the clothes for the animals.

Sam over while Carrie and Cole were laughing and pulled Carrie to the side. "Have you looked at Tom recently?" "Why?" She looked over and saw something she couldn't believe that she didn't want to see. Tom was over there flirting with some gross looking chick. Short skirt, tight shirt, and giant boobs. Basically, his perfect match. She marched over there and nailed him in the shoulder. "I see you haven't changed. You are such a liar." She started to walk away, angry and sad at the same time.

Tom went after and and grabbed her arm, but she pulled away. "I knew you couldn't change. Once a player, always a player. It just makes me laugh that I considered giving you a chance." Tom just laughed. Carrie stared at him. "It's nice to know you think it's funny." Tom looked down at her and smiled. "That was a fan, trying to ease her way into a one night stand. I went along with it to see how you'd react. Now I know." He pulled her close. "You can't resist me. Admit it."

"I'll do this once. ONCE." She leaned and kissed him. Just to add a little bit of fun, she played with his lip ring. He must've been turned on because for the next 10 minutes, it was a total make out session. Carrie stopped. "I can too resist you." Tom started to kiss her again. "Like you did now?" "That's different. You tricked me." They kept kissing until she got a text from Jess asking where she was. They all left and waved bye to Sam. Tom once again had his arm around Carrie. All she'd have to do was convince him she wasn't the one for him. Wow. That might take a while.

thxxbill

July 14th, 2008, 03:24 PM

waiting for replies...

o_o

Unknown598

July 14th, 2008, 05:57 PM

*does little kiddy hyper kicky thing*

:mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

*does mini celebration for 1100 posts ^-^

in such an idiot, AND IM PROUD

thxxbill

July 14th, 2008, 09:18 PM

Sie sind zu gütig! Vielen Dank!
(You are too kind! Thank you!)

now all i wanna hear is feedback
just til i post chapter 9

and i have exciting news about my story :3

Monicaalynn

July 14th, 2008, 10:13 PM

haha, she'll fall sooo hard for him... i can see it now... and then somethin' will happen and BAM! hahaha. or maybe not.... i have so many ideas to where this might lead, but i cant think straight right now...

but keep up the awesome work. I'm actually eager to read the next chappie!

Unknown598

July 14th, 2008, 10:21 PM

i can feel the pressure, its geting closer now... ><

*dances while waiting*

thxxbill

July 14th, 2008, 10:29 PM

GOOD NEWS:

- if requested, i will do spoilers
- this story is actually part 1 of a 3 part story :3

iilyRein

July 14th, 2008, 10:33 PM

*waits*
*waits*
*waits*
=D

thxxbill

July 14th, 2008, 11:08 PM

Chapter 9

The walked around the mall but then noticed the time. "OH MY ****!" Carrie shouted. "Karma hasn't seen me since yesterday morning. My mom must be freaking." Bill turned to Jessica. "Who's Karma?" Jess giggled. "Karma is Carrie's adopted 7 year old German sister. At first she only spoke German, but she's starting to learn some English. She's really attached to Carrie, since Carrie is the only one who's allowed to speak German back to her." "We can come back to the mall, you guys, but can we go back to my house quickly for 15 minutes?" "DUH!!!" said Mandii. "I love Karma! She's too cute!" Carrie laughed.

It was true. All her friends loved Karma and Karma loved them. The guys looked interested and agreed. Carrie called home, but there was no answer. She called her sister on her cell and was surprised to hear her response. "Mom and Dad are in Florida until Tuesday and I'm with my friends camping until Monday." "You mean you left Karma ALONE???" "Carrie. She can handle herself. Just drop by. She said she wanted to go stay at a friend's house. Just hang with her and drop her off." "...Fine."

Tom looked at her. "Everything ok?" "Yeah. We just need to chill with Karma for a bit then drop her off at her friend's house. She'll be good after that." They drove off to Carrie house. The band stared up in awe at her house. Carrie lived in one of the most expensive neighborhoods in her town. Her parents worked hard to get there and they loved it. Carrie opened the garage and ran in the house with everyone behind her. When they got to the den, she saw a little blond girl with bright blue eyes look up at her. "Ich liebe Carrie!" she scream and ran towards Carrie. "Ich liebe Karma!" Carrie picked her up and swung her around.

Karma sat down and pointed towards her stuff animals. "Vogel! Vogel! (Bird! Bird!)" Carrie went and got her her stuffed flamingo. Bill and Jess sat down and played with Karma and Georg, Gustav, Mandii, and Emily watched TV. Tom was the only one who wasn't seen. Carrie went up to her room only to see it open. Tom was in there looking around at her posters. "So I'm guessing this is your room?" Carrie turned red. "Who said you could come in here?" "Well now, let's see, the fact that the sign on your door that says 'All members of Tokio Hotel welcome'?" She remembered that sign.

"I was kidding. Now get out." Tom sighed. He's so sexy when he sighs... she thought. He looked like he was about to leave, but instead, he ran over, locked the door, and pulled her down on her bed. To his surprise and hers, she laughed. They started to kiss. A little bit after, Tom slipped her a small plastic card and a piece of paper. "That's another key to my room at the hotel and the room number. Later, you'll be able to get in if you want." Carrie turned red. "Maybe...maybe not." Tom smiled and played with his lip ring.

"You're amazing, you know that? The only girl to turn me down and it's such a turn on. I'm hoping you'll be at the concert tomorrow, right?" She nodded and he smiled. "You're gorgeous." And with that, she realized. Maybe she did have feelings for him. But she wouldn't let him know. Not yet anyways.

Unknown598

July 14th, 2008, 11:20 PM

*childlish laugh*

hehehehe

:mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

Unknown598

July 15th, 2008, 01:55 PM

*listens to Scream..... by Slipknot!!

that song is randomly on when im on the forum...

:mrgreen:

more soon?

MusiciansMuse

July 15th, 2008, 08:59 PM

Instant Karma's gonna get you... Gonna get you right in the head...

that was the first thing that came to mind when I read this chapter. mehr, bitte?

Unknown598

July 15th, 2008, 09:27 PM

Instant Karma's gonna get you... Gonna get you right in the head...

that was the first thing that came to mind when I read this chapter. mehr, bitte?

im gonna go put that song on ^_^

more soon?

Monicaalynn

July 15th, 2008, 10:04 PM

haha awww so cute! c:

iilyRein

July 15th, 2008, 10:17 PM

OMFG
so good!!!!!!

thxxbill

July 15th, 2008, 10:21 PM

no chapters today.
i gotta go take a shower and do summer school homework.
definitely tomorrow :]

i'm happy everyone likes it.
but if you really wanna know
just let me know and if wanted
i'll give spoilers :3

but most likely
i can keep the chapters coming ;D

Unknown598

July 15th, 2008, 10:25 PM

yay

homework shall burn :twisted:

thxxbill

July 16th, 2008, 11:16 PM

Chapter 10

As the evening went on, Carrie and everyone went to dinner. They were brought to a table with 7 chairs and the hostess apologized. The restaurant was short of chairs, but the group said they would handle it. Everyone quickly sat down and Carrie just stood there. "Well, I love you all too." Tom looked up. "I have an idea." They all looked at him and gasped as he pulled Carrie onto his lap. She turned red and tried to get away, but he bit her ear. "Don't act like you don't love it." Carrie stayed red and stayed put.

They ordered their food and the waitress made a comment about how Tom and Carrie made a cute couple. Carrie tried to stammer out that they weren't a couple but Tom interrupted her by thanking the waitress. "We are NOT a couple!" she hissed. He started to nibble at her neck. "She doesn't have to know that," he said and smirked. Gustav and Emily giggled. Everyone finished their food and just headed out to explore. Tom kept his arm around Carrie as if to ward off other guys.

Carrie blushed and they went into a nearby club. The music pumped loud into the club and everyone disappeared except Tom and Carrie. He pulled her to dance and she went with him. She started getting into the song and Tom took notice. He started to grind her and she giggled. He got her drinks which loosened her up. By the time it was around 10:30, she was giggling and laughing it up. Tom pulled her by him. "So how do you feel now?" "OH MY ****! I feel grrrrrrrrreat! You know...maybe we could get to know each other better later." She grinned, totally unaware of what she was doing. He walked her out of the club and to the car. While they were off to the hotel, he asked her a question. After that, she could only remember answering 'Yes.'."

Unknown598

July 16th, 2008, 11:35 PM

oh my'

has very naughty thoughts

**** my mind...

:mrgreen:

awesome chapter ^_^

thxxbill

July 18th, 2008, 12:24 AM

Chapter 11

Carrie woke up with a massive headache and the sun streaming through the curtains didn't help. She looked around and bolted up, freaking. This is not my room. My room isn't white, gold, cream. Those are old people colors. And colors for my parents. This room is just like my parents...so I am home...wait. Where are my pants? PANTS????, she freaked in her head.

She looked around and realized that this couldn't her parents' room. It was WAY fancier than her parents' room. The was gold leaf embroidered in the sheets and embedded in the tables. Then she looked up to see the back of a guy with long dread come out of the bathroom. "Oh. My. ****." she said to herself. "I didn't...I did! NO. I DIDN'T. But what if I did...?" She freaked in her own little world while Tom noticed that she was up. He crawled back into the bed, unnoticed, and pulled her down by him.

She turned red and he started to bite her ear. "Don't worry. We didn't do anything. You took off your pants and then you fell asleep." Carrie stared at the ceiling. "Basically, we were going to do something and then I fell asleep?" She hit him on the arm and got out of the bed. "So you lied to me. You didn't change. You're just looking for one night stands." He got up and pulled her close. "I do care. Don't worry." "How come you're up early?" "Normally I'm not, but I had to re-wax. Here. Take these." He handed her 4 backstage passes. "Why?"

"I really do care about you. I just have a different way of showing it." He tossed her her pants. "You might want to put your clothes on. Unless...you want to stay that way." He smirked and she smacked him on the head. "Give me my pants." She got dressed and the two fought for the mirror while getting ready. She was finally ready and she laid down on the bed. All of a sudden she felt warmth and cool metal on her lips. She opened her eyes and saw Tom kissing her.

She didn't fight him and they kept going until Tom got a call on his phone. "It's Bill..." Tom was talking to Bill who was super happy to be talking to his dear brother. Carrie laughed a little. "Well, we can have breakfast with your guys, but then we have to go get ready for the concert." "Alright." Carrie called up her friends and they agreed to meet them at the hotel. "So should we go to the hotel restaurant?" said Georg. "PFFFT. No! We're going to IHOP!" said Jessica. Bill looked confused. "I...HOP?" Emily laughed. "It's a pancake house."

They went off to the nearest IHOP and they helped the guys order. Bill got excited over the pancakes and so did Georg. Tom bit Carrie's ear a little and she smiled. It's very possible that tonight, she'd share her true feelings.

Unknown598

July 18th, 2008, 01:07 PM

:cry: i want pancakes now T.T

ihop is in the next town over too.....

but last time i ate pancakes, i got sick ><

:roll: :ugeek:

o.o i loves the chapter too ^_^

:mrgreen:

ILuvKaulitzTwins4E

July 19th, 2008, 04:34 PM

please update sooon....... this ff is soo good

Unknown598

July 19th, 2008, 06:06 PM

ja ja. plz update soon ^_^

nice Toph avatar thingy btw ^-^

thxxbill

July 19th, 2008, 08:56 PM

Vielen vielen Dank!!!

i'll post the final chapter...sadly...but after chapter 12

check back for an important message!

iilyRein

July 19th, 2008, 10:24 PM

omg
go carrie & tom!!!!!!

ive never been to ihop
only denny's but that was all the way in Canada!*road trip*

thxxbill

July 19th, 2008, 10:43 PM

Chapter 12

The day wore on and the guys announced that they had to get to the concert hall to practice and set up. They said their goodbyes and Tom made Carrie promise not to forget to come backstage. She nodded and smiled. They kissed and separated. The girls left to head to Carrie's house since she had makeup to last til her 80th birthday.

They ran up the stairs to Carrie's room, grabbed almost all her makeup, and locked themselves in her bathroom. They played around with her many colors of eyeliner - red, green, navy, yellow, white, and many more. At first they joked around, but then they got serious. Carrie tried to stick with her usual routine, but Emily wouldn't let her. "You need to look sexy for your man." Carrie stared at her. "My...man?" Emily worked her makeup magic on Carrie's face and she had to admit; she liked the results.

They picked through Carrie's closet and found clothes. Carrie went with her favorite shirt, a black Recycling is Love shirt, a white lace tank underneath, her Chip and Pepper jeans, black Converse, and black rubber bracelets. She had to admit that she looked good. Real good. They went down to eat dinner and just chill until the concert when Jess announced some very shocking news.

"I don't think it's going to work out with Bill," she said bluntly. Everyone looked at her amazed. "But why?" said Mandii. "You all know very well that I don't like being tied down. He cute and stuff, but I don't like sticking with one guy." They all thought about this. It was true. Jess hated being with one guy. She's gone through more boyfriends than people have in a month. Carrie knew that Bill might be a little heartbroken, since he seemed to be having an amazing time with Jessica.

They got into Carrie's car and drove to the concert hall. They didn't have to worry about school the next day, since they had the day off. They arrived and flashed their tickets. Carrie looked around as the crowd slowly started to fill in. They talked until they couldn't hear each other anymore. The concert started up and it was amazing. The energy was pulsing through the hall.

Tom glanced down at Carrie and saw her smile. He started to play louder, like he was recharged. The concert went on and everyone cheered louder and louder. When it ended, the four girls slipped backstage to see the guys. Carrie noticed Jess walk over to Bill and felt a horrible feeling in her stomach. She knew what was about to happen but Tom walked over and she felt better. She knew what she was about to say and she knew he would love hearing it. Because he had been right. She did fall for him. But she could still hold her ground.

He held her for a while, playing with his lip ring. "I told you so." She stared up at him. "You told me so what?" "That you'd fall for me and you'd be in a hotel room with me." "The hotel thing happened due to you giving me drinks until I completely lost my common sense." He laughed. "It still happened though. You can't change that." "To be honest with you, I wouldn't change it if I got the chance." Tom looked surprised. "BUT. You better keep in touch with me. And I want you being honest. No lies, Tom Kaulitz." "No lies, Carrie. I promise." And with that promise, they kissed, hoping never to let go. She finally listened to what she tried to keep inside. She finally listened to her true feelings.

THE END.