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Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 02:58 AM
HERE ARE THE PAGES THE CHAPTERS ARE ON IF YOU WANT TO READ MAH FICCIE:
Prologue - 1
Chapter 1 - 2
Chapter 2 - 3
Chapter 3 - 5
Chapter 4 - 8
Chapter 5 - 10
Chapter 6 - 12
Chapter 7 - 16
Chapter 8 - 21
Chapter 9 - 25
Chapter 10 - 29
Chapter 11 - 32
Chapter 12 - 33
Chapter 13 - 38
Chapter 14 - 56
Chapter 15 - 59
Chapter 16 - 65
Chapter 17 - 84
Chapter 18 - 86
Chapter 19 - 87
Chapter 20 - 91
Chapter 21 - 97
Chapter 22 - 100
Chapter 23 - 118
Chapter 24 - 124
Chapter 25 - 126
Chapter 26 - 134
Chapter 27 - 136
Chapter 28 - 138
Chapter 29 - 144
Chapter 30 - 168
Chapter 31 - 170
Chapter 32 - 174
Chapter 33 - 177
Chapter 34 - 180
Chapter 35 - 181
Chapter 36 - 183
Chapter 37 - 188
I've had this idea floating around in my mind since January, and I finally began to write it down. *is proud of herself*
This ficcie is based on the songs "The Way She Feels" by Between The Trees, "Dark Blue" by No Doubt, and "A Time For Yohe" by Between The Trees.
This story is dedicated to Lena (TH_luv)! :D
Prologue
"We die when love is dead."
“You’re fourteen. How can you possibly know what love is?” Steevie asked, peering over the rim of her glasses to stare at her sister. She twisted the key in the doorknob and swung open the door, not once taking her hazel eyes off of Camilla. Camilla gulped and averted her gaze from Steevie’s stare to the carpet floor as she walked in the front door.
“I–I don’t know, it’s just this feeling I get whenever I think about him...” Camilla stammered, the words tumbling out of her mouth. Steevie looked at her for a long while before shrugging and muttering incoherently. Camilla quickly began to make her way to the bedroom she shared with her twin sister Fiona in an effort to avoid any further questions from Steevie.
As she approached the door, she heard moans of pleasure emanating from the room. Camilla’s eyes widened and she killed the dirty thoughts floating around in her brain. Fiona is probably just watching a movie and there’s a sex scene, she told herself. That was logical. Yup, Fiona’s only watching a movie, she decided.
Camilla flung open the door and her jaw fell to the floor when the events going on in the bedroom reached her eyes. The boy she had been talking about being in love with only moments earlier with her older sister was on top of her twin, naked, his lips attached to her neck. “OH MY GOD!” Fiona screamed, pushing Riley onto the floor. He pulled a blanket off the bed and wrapped it over his nude body, Fiona doing the same. “Camilla! This isn’t what it looks like!”
Angry tears filled Camilla’s eyes and she fought to hold them back. “This isn’t what it looks like?” she hissed through clenched teeth. “My sister wasn’t having sex with my boyfriend?” Fiona was silent for a moment, then hung her head, knowing she was defeated.
Camilla turned to Riley. She slapped him across the face and pushed him against the nearest wall. “You said you loved me.” She began to beat Riley furiously; well, as furiously as a short, somewhat chubby girl with barely any strength could manage. “I trusted you. I told you all of my secrets, and you cheat on me with my twin sister?!?”
“It’s not his fault!” Fiona interrupted. “I forced myself onto him, and we got lost in the heat of the moment, and then you found us...” “I don’t care.” Camilla’s eyes burned with rage. “Both of you can go to ****!” She turned sharply on her heel and stomped out of the bedroom.
Anyone want me to continue?
TH_luv
July 5th, 2008, 03:02 AM
oh snaps!Evil twin sister! >.< continue,please? psshh,I'd cuss them both out if I was Camilla,poor Camilla
steevie!
July 5th, 2008, 03:03 AM
-scoffs-
What'd I tell you!
okay.
I'm done.
That's terrible!
Beat him up some more!
Continue!
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 03:08 AM
Yay I have readers! :D
OH AND BY THE WAY, LENA!!!
This story is dedicated to you, because you are my most loyal and dedicated reader. :D :D
I luffs you, my dear!
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 03:09 AM
-scoffs-
What'd I tell you!
okay.
I'm done.
That's terrible!
Beat him up some more!
Continue!
:lol: :lol:
TH_luv
July 5th, 2008, 03:11 AM
Yay I have readers! :D
OH AND BY THE WAY, LENA!!!
This story is dedicated to you, because you are my most loyal and dedicated reader. :D :D
I luffs you, my dear!
YAY! :D I feel so specials! I luffs you toos! XD
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 03:13 AM
Yay I have readers! :D
OH AND BY THE WAY, LENA!!!
This story is dedicated to you, because you are my most loyal and dedicated reader. :D :D
I luffs you, my dear!
YAY! :D I feel so specials! I luffs you toos! XD
:D :D
xXxMandiixXx
July 5th, 2008, 05:51 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
LOVE IT!!!
OK SPAZ OVER
continue!
<3 Mandii xx
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 04:32 PM
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
LOVE IT!!!
OK SPAZ OVER
continue!
<3 Mandii xx
Thank you!!! :D
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 04:54 PM
Almost done with chapter one, lovelies, so it'll be up shortly! :D
steevie!
July 5th, 2008, 04:54 PM
yay :mrgreen:
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 04:55 PM
:mrgreen:
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 05:02 PM
Chapter One
"Don't tell me cos it hurts."
Three Years Later
Camilla awakened to the feeling of the toe of a boot stabbing her repeatedly in the gut. Frowning, she forced her eyes open and sat up. She looked up and met her twin’s gaze. Fiona’s face was scarlet and her chocolate brown eyes were tightened, which was a sure sign that she was angry; no, furious.
She swiftly kicked Camilla in the stomach once more, making her double over in pain. “How dare you, Camilla!” she screeched. “I can’t believe you!” Camilla stared at Fiona confusedly. “What the **** are you talking about? What did I do?”
Wide awake from the kick in her belly, Camilla noticed her surroundings and realized what she had done. She sighed heavily and leaned against the toilet. “YOU RUINED OUR BIRTHDAY PARTY, CAMMY!” Fiona roared. “You forced your friends to sneak in beer so you could get drunk! LIKE EVERY NIGHT!”
“Not every night,” Camilla protested. “Just every other night.” Ignoring her, Fiona continued with her yelling. “You got wasted and embarrassed both of us in front of all our friends! YOU WERE HAVING SEX WITH SOME RANDOM GUY ON THE FLOOR IN THE LIVING ROOM!” Camilla thought Fiona would explode from anger, and giggled at her, but Fiona didn’t notice. “AND EVERYONE WAS WATCHING! GOD, YOU’RE SUCH AN EMBARRASSMENT TO THIS FAMILY!”
Fiona regained her composure and patted her hair down. “You better go thank Steevie; she was nice enough to hold back your hair whenever you were puking your guts out.” She walked out and slammed the bathroom door, leaving Camilla alone in her thoughts.
“Such an embarrassment to this family,” Cammy repeated to herself. She sighed. “I know I am.”
steevie!
July 5th, 2008, 05:05 PM
oh cheese,
that was sad >.<
I got your back Camilla!!
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 05:08 PM
oh cheese,
that was sad >.<
I got your back Camilla!!
:lol:
It really isn't that sad; it gets worse. :(
steevie!
July 5th, 2008, 05:10 PM
oh cheese!
Don't be stupid Camilla!
I believe in you!
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 05:14 PM
:lol:
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 05:38 PM
8-)
TH_luv
July 5th, 2008, 06:26 PM
:lol:
It really isn't that sad; it gets worse. :(
awww,it gets worse? thats already sad,I would've cussed Fiona out about the embarassment it is being related to someone who would f*ck my boyfriend lolz
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 06:28 PM
:lol:
It really isn't that sad; it gets worse. :(
awww,it gets worse? thats already sad,I would've cussed Fiona out about the embarassment it is being related to someone who would f*ck my boyfriend lolz
Yes, it gets worse. :(
Ha, me too
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 07:30 PM
Working on chapter 2....
steevie!
July 5th, 2008, 07:32 PM
I kinda demand you post it soon.
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 07:32 PM
I kinda demand you post it soon.
Lol
Mmmk
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 08:52 PM
Chapter Two
"I'm a thousand miles away and I'm out of oxygen."
“You have got to be *****ting me,” Tom grumbled as he stumbled through the front door into the small apartment. “Is anyone even home?” Bill called out. “I’m here, I’m here!” A short, petite woman with messy gray hair ran as fast as her tiny legs could take her over to the twins. Tom stared at the woman in shock. “You’re our Aunt Lydia?” he asked in disbelief. The woman, Lydia, nodded. “Yes, I am!” she said. Her voice was high-pitched and had a hint of a German accent in it, proving that she was indeed the Kaulitz twins’ aunt and that she had lived in Germany many years ago.
“I’m go glad you’re here, boys!” Lydia exclaimed. “Well, we’re not,” Bill mumbled under his breath, looking around the cluttered apartment and frowning deeply. “Remind me why we’re here again,” Tom commanded, rubbing his forehead. Bill sighed. “Because we made the mistake of telling Mom we needed a break from Tokio Hotel, so she shipped us off to New York to stay with an aunt we never knew we had.”
“Let me show you to your rooms,” Lydia said, leading them to a hidden hallway. She pointed to two rooms at the far end of the hall. “You can pick which one you want.” With that, she turned around and left, leaving the twins to unpack their belongings and get settled.
“I can’t believe Mom forced us to come here,” Bill groaned to himself, tossing his suitcase on the bed. He trudged over to the window and looked out, watching people walk down the sidewalk. A girl with auburn hair stumbled drunkenly through the street, her clothes barely covering her body and her legs walking every which way except a straight line. She screamed random things, and Bill tried to decipher what she was saying, though her speech was slurred. “I’m not an embarrassment!” she yelled to no one. People stared at her as they went past, giving her odd looks.
“I’m not an embarrassment!” she repeated. Bill thought otherwise. “I’m just...uh...confused!” She fell to her knees and threw up the contents of her stomach. Bill looked away in disgust. He closed the window and fell onto the bed. “Not an embarrassment indeed,” he muttered sarcastically.
steevie!
July 5th, 2008, 08:54 PM
ha,
Bill,
you douchebag.
I love you XD
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 08:57 PM
:lol:
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 09:08 PM
8-)
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 09:21 PM
8-)
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 09:30 PM
hiiojopgoihbiojqoboi
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 09:58 PM
My story won't get too low on the first page.
*is determined*
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 10:12 PM
*is still determined*
steevie!
July 5th, 2008, 10:13 PM
nice >.<
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 10:16 PM
nice >.<
Ja, I know.
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 10:19 PM
Working on chapter 3....
steevie!
July 5th, 2008, 10:19 PM
yay ^-^
-hands cupcake-
I just made em :D
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 10:20 PM
yay ^-^
-hands cupcake-
I just made em :D
Yay danke for the cupcake :D
I have no baking skills whatsoever :lol:
steevie!
July 5th, 2008, 10:24 PM
ha,
me neither,
but I really wanted some XD
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 10:28 PM
XD
steevie!
July 5th, 2008, 10:38 PM
they be chocolate ^-^
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 10:47 PM
I LOVE CHOCOLATE CUPCAKES
Yay ^-^
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 11:02 PM
Is almost done with chapter three....
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 11:08 PM
Chapter Three
"The innocent can never last."
Camilla, so drunk that it took her nearly twenty minutes to open the door, ran into the living room and fell onto the floor. Steevie gave her a questioning look and then scowled. “******, Cammy,” she groaned, taking her little sister’s arms and dragging her into the bathroom.
Steevie held back her hair as Camilla stuck her face into the toilet bowl and vomited. Normally this would disgust Steevie, but she was used to it; she had been doing this for half a year now. “God, are you ever sober, Cammy?” Camilla responded by retching, the beer she consumed a few hours earlier spilling out of her mouth. “I suppose not,” Steevie said, answering her own question. She sighed. “You really need to lay off the alcohol.”
“I know, I know,” Camilla told her, reaching for a towel and using it to wipe her mouth. “You drink like a f**king man, Cammy,” Steevie said. “How does your little body hold so much alcohol?” Camilla shrugged. Hearing her twin’s retching, Fiona walked into the bathroom and sighed. “My God, I just woke you up off the bathroom floor this morning!” she exclaimed. “AND YOU’RE DRUNK AGAIN?!?” “Oh, shut up, Fifi,” Steevie demanded. Soberer than before but still drunk, Camilla giggled. “Yeah! Shut up, Fifi.” Fiona glared at her. “You know Steevie is the only person that can call me that, and that’s only because she’s three years older than us.” “Yeah, but I’m eight minutes older than you,” Camilla pointed out. “So that gives me a right to call you that too.”
Fiona rolled her eyes. “Just shut it, Cammy. You’re obviously too drunk to hold a proper conversation with someone.” “Oh yeah? Too drunk to hold conversations with people, like you did with Riley?” Fiona’s eyes tightened; she was getting mad. “Don’t talk about him, Camilla.” Camilla stood up, trying not to fall over and was somehow successful. “I can talk about him if I want to, Fifi.” “DON’T CALL ME THAT!” Camilla smirked; she was ******* Fiona off, and that made her happy. “Make me.” Fiona stomped on her twin’s foot, and ran out of the bathroom.
Sighing, Steevie stood up and looked at Camilla. “When are you two going to work out this whole Riley situation? It’s been three years, ******. You should be over it now.” “Well I’m not!” Camilla snapped. “And never!” With that, Camilla kneeled over the toilet and finished emptying her stomach.
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 11:17 PM
Gwen Stefani
steevie!
July 5th, 2008, 11:31 PM
Big Sis knows best ^_^
but Fifi is a b*tch -.-
I want to slap her.
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 11:35 PM
Big Sis knows best ^_^
but Fifi is a b*tch -.-
I want to slap her.
Haha yes. :lol:
steevie!
July 5th, 2008, 11:36 PM
...
can I
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 11:37 PM
-.-
I'll think about it.
steevie!
July 5th, 2008, 11:41 PM
yay :mrgreen:
Haley1018
July 5th, 2008, 11:42 PM
:mrgreen: :D
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 12:07 AM
*still determined*
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 12:19 AM
About to start work on chapter four...
steevie!
July 6th, 2008, 12:30 AM
yay!
TexasGirlLovesTH
July 6th, 2008, 12:40 AM
I'm not Fifi...am I?
steevie!
July 6th, 2008, 12:42 AM
if you are I want to slap you ^-^
TexasGirlLovesTH
July 6th, 2008, 12:43 AM
if you are I want to slap you ^-^
And I will cut you.
:geek:
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 01:01 AM
Nein, you're not Fifi. ^-^
I don't know who you are yet.
TexasGirlLovesTH
July 6th, 2008, 01:04 AM
Nein, you're not Fifi. ^-^
I don't know who you are yet.
-.-'
Ok.
AT LEAST I'M NOT FIFI!!!!!!!!!!
:lol: :lol:
steevie!
July 6th, 2008, 01:05 AM
I won't slap you ^-^
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 01:08 AM
:lol: :lol:
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 04:04 AM
*still determined*
steevie!
July 6th, 2008, 04:07 AM
XD
you're so awesome Haley >.<
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 04:08 AM
Yes, yes I am. 8-)
jk jk
Danke!!! :D
You're awesome too, my dear!
steevie!
July 6th, 2008, 04:08 AM
Squee :D
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 04:14 AM
:D
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 04:51 AM
*determined*
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 04:04 PM
NO!!
IT GOT TO THE BOTTOM!!! :cry:
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 04:08 PM
Going to start working on chapter four.... :D
steevie!
July 6th, 2008, 04:08 PM
aw,
poor Haley!
-there there,
it's okay-
yay for new chapters!
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 04:15 PM
aw,
poor Haley!
-there there,
it's okay-
yay for new chapters!
Thank you for the comfort. :cry:
steevie!
July 6th, 2008, 04:19 PM
anytime,
anytime.
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 04:21 PM
:D :D
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 04:36 PM
*still determined*
steevie!
July 6th, 2008, 04:42 PM
XD
you're so cute Haley!
You're determination makes me smile ^-^
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 04:46 PM
XD
you're so cute Haley!
You're determination makes me smile ^-^
Thank you! :D
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 05:07 PM
Chapter Four
"You came in with the breeze on Sunday morning."
Camilla walked through the busy streets of New York City, lost in her cluttered thoughts. A chilly breeze swept past her, and she shivered, cursing herself for not bringing a jacket. She stared at the sidewalk as she walked so the wind wouldn’t whip across her face and freeze it.
“Oof!” She stumbled backward, looking up to see the person she crashed into, a girl with blonde-streaked black hair. Her heavily eye-lined eyes glared at her. Camilla scowled. “Sorry, excuse me, miss,” she apologized coldly. The girl’s frown deepened. “No, excuse me.” Camilla’s eyebrows raised in surprise; her voice was too deep to be a girl’s. She squinted, looking closer at the person. “Are you a boy?” she blurted, then inwardly scolding herself for being rude.
“Yes,” the person answered. “And no, I’m not gay!” he added, reading Cammy’s thoughts. Camilla nodded, and began to walk away, but the boy suddenly pulled her back. “I know you!” he exclaimed. Her eyebrows reached her forehead once more. “Really?” she asked in disbelief. The boy nodded. “Yeah, you were drunk and stumbling through the street yesterday and I was in my apartment watching you.” His eyes widened as he finished his sentence, realizing that he shouldn’t have said that.
Camilla’s face burned with anger and she was shaking uncontrollably. It took every drop of strength she had not to beat the ***** out of the boy, right there on the sidewalk in the middle of New York City with everyone watching. The boy’s face flushed red with embarrassment. “Oh mein gott, I didn’t mean that, I mean I did but I shouldn’t have said that, I’m awfully sorry...” he stammered. “Shut. Up,” Camilla hissed through clenched teeth. She stomped away, mumbling profanities under her breath. “I’M BILL, BY THE WAY!” the guy called after her. Turning around, she gave him the middle finger and replied, “I DON’T CARE, DIP*****!” She then continued her walk to God knows where, not paying any attention to Bill, who was screaming after her.
steevie!
July 6th, 2008, 05:09 PM
XD
that was freakin' awesome.
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 05:13 PM
Yay danke! :D
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 05:34 PM
*still determined*
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 05:41 PM
It seems as if Steevie is my only reader now.... :cry:
steevie!
July 6th, 2008, 05:43 PM
-pats head-
I can go beat some more people up for you ^-^
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 05:45 PM
Thank you my dear, but that won't be necessary. :cry:
steevie!
July 6th, 2008, 05:47 PM
aw,
there there
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 05:50 PM
:(
I can't really be sad when I'm listening to a kinky Gwen Stefani song. :lol:
steevie!
July 6th, 2008, 05:52 PM
XD
You crack me up
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 05:53 PM
:lol:
Yay!!! :D
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 06:05 PM
Dressing up in your love is a dangerous thing. My sexy super lover's got a real bad sting. 8-)
steevie!
July 6th, 2008, 06:09 PM
.-.
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 06:10 PM
Late night lovers, kicking in the covers, don't need no one but you and I. Cos everyday's a weekend, forget what we were thinking, another sweet fluorescent night. 8-)
*still determined, but now using song lyrics*
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 06:24 PM
When I think about you, I touch myself...
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 06:36 PM
Going to start work on chapter five...
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 06:57 PM
Almost finished with chapter five....^-^
steevie!
July 6th, 2008, 06:58 PM
whoopwhoop ^-^
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 07:00 PM
:mrgreen:
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 07:10 PM
Chapter Five
"She smokes like an amethyst, she's moving her way through my skin."
Hearing footsteps behind her, Camilla whirled around and gave Bill a look that clearly said “go to hell”. “Stop following me, a$shole,” she demanded. Bill looked hurt, but Camilla didn’t give a rat’s ***. “Turn around and go home before I call the police and tell them you’re stalking me!” she threatened.
Bill decided to give in, but only on one condition. “Fine. But before I go, tell me your name.” “Why would you want to know?” Bill said nothing, he just stared at Camilla, waiting for an answer. Wanting to get this guy off her back, she sighed and told him her name. He smiled and repeated her name to himself. “Camilla...that’s a very pretty name. It suits you, for you are a pretty girl.” “I know,” Cammy replied, tossing her hair over her shoulder. People had always told her and Fiona that they were the world’s most gorgeous twins, and after fifteen years of this, Camilla didn’t thank the person anymore, she simply responded, “I know.”
“Where are your manners?” Bill asked, smirking. Camilla frowned. “Not with me, obviously.” She glanced at her watch. “Look, I don’t have time for this. Go away.” “Okay.” Bill shook Camilla’s hand. “It was nice to meet you, Camilla.” He turned around and left. Cammy stared after him for a while and then glanced at the hand that he had shook. “Freak,” she grumbled to herself, beginning to walk home.
Camilla sang to herself as she made her way home. “So different, yet so the same, two sisters only have their parents to blame...” She stopped singing, realizing that the lyrics described her relationship with her twin. She smiled, happy with herself for discovering this, and continued her singing. “It’s rare that two can get along, but when they do, they’re inseparable. Such a blessing comes to few...”
Arriving at her destination, Camilla shut up and opened the front door to her house. She was greeted by Shelby, her best friend. “Shelby!” she exclaimed, throwing herself against her friend. Shelby didn’t hug her back though, and Cammy knew something was up. “Shelbs? Is something wrong?” “Erm, kind of...”
steevie!
July 6th, 2008, 07:13 PM
oh snap!
what is it Shelby!?!?!!?
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 07:16 PM
I'm not exactly sure yet.
But I think I know.
steevie!
July 6th, 2008, 07:16 PM
...
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 07:19 PM
GODD*MN WILL SOMEONE ELSE REPLY?!?!?!?!?!?
At least the people on tokiohotelus.com like it *sniff*
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 07:33 PM
*determination is weakening*
TexasGirlLovesTH
July 6th, 2008, 08:00 PM
DUDE!!!!
WHAT'S WRONG???
I feel like I should know this...but I don't...
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 08:01 PM
DUDE!!!!
WHAT'S WRONG???
I feel like I should know this...but I don't...
8-)
tokiohotel26
July 6th, 2008, 08:08 PM
look im sorry but i have no manners
im going to tell u the truth ok...dont be hurt by what i say alright.
I WILL KILL U IF U DONT HURRY UP AND POST THE NEXT **** CHAPTER! U GOT IT!
get it?
got it?
good. :mrgreen:
like i said: no offense
steevie!
July 6th, 2008, 08:08 PM
-Steevie still wants to slap Fifi-
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 08:10 PM
look im sorry but i have no manners
im going to tell u the truth ok...dont be hurt by what i say alright.
I WILL KILL U IF U DONT HURRY UP AND POST THE NEXT **** CHAPTER! U GOT IT!
get it?
got it?
good. :mrgreen:
like i said: no offense
:shock:
8-)
Mmk.
I'll start working on it right away, my dear. 8-)
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 08:12 PM
*worships readers*
steevie!
July 6th, 2008, 08:12 PM
...
nice XD
tokiohotel26
July 6th, 2008, 08:15 PM
look im sorry but i have no manners
im going to tell u the truth ok...dont be hurt by what i say alright.
I WILL KILL U IF U DONT HURRY UP AND POST THE NEXT **** CHAPTER! U GOT IT!
get it?
got it?
good. :mrgreen:
like i said: no offense
:shock:
8-)
Mmk.
I'll start working on it right away, my dear. 8-)
good cuz i dont wanna go all the way to texas just to kill some one! :mrgreen:
[btw i am not stalking u! i have just read some of your comments]
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 08:27 PM
look im sorry but i have no manners
im going to tell u the truth ok...dont be hurt by what i say alright.
I WILL KILL U IF U DONT HURRY UP AND POST THE NEXT **** CHAPTER! U GOT IT!
get it?
got it?
good. :mrgreen:
like i said: no offense
:shock:
8-)
Mmk.
I'll start working on it right away, my dear. 8-)
good cuz i dont wanna go all the way to texas just to kill some one! :mrgreen:
[btw i am not stalking u! i have just read some of your comments]
Stalker.
jk :lol:
tokiohotel26
July 6th, 2008, 08:30 PM
watever u say, my friend. whatever u say :lol:
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 08:37 PM
watever u say, my friend. whatever u say :lol:
:lol: :lol: :lol: 8-)
tokiohotel26
July 6th, 2008, 08:46 PM
watever u say, my friend. whatever u say :lol:
:lol: :lol: :lol: 8-)
*thinking*
i know im cute!
so where's that new chappie?
hmmm u didnt think i forgot did u?
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 08:47 PM
watever u say, my friend. whatever u say :lol:
:lol: :lol: :lol: 8-)
*thinking*
i know im cute!
so where's that new chappie?
hmmm u didnt think i forgot did u?
:lol:
I'm going to start working on it soon
but atm i'm working on a new siggie
tokiohotel26
July 6th, 2008, 08:50 PM
ok! i can see that. i knew that was a different no doubt pic!
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 08:53 PM
Ja, my siggy has to be a No Doubt pic ^-^
I think I'm almost done, but i'm not sure...
tokiohotel26
July 6th, 2008, 09:03 PM
alright then...[heads in direction away from here!]
i will be back to check on the story!
good luck on finding that perfect ND siggy!
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 09:04 PM
alright then...[heads in direction away from here!]
i will be back to check on the story!
good luck on finding that perfect ND siggy!
Screw it,
photobucket's begin an arsehole :evil:
I'm starting work on chapter six nau, my dear! :D
tokiohotel26
July 6th, 2008, 09:19 PM
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 09:21 PM
:D :D
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 09:40 PM
Chapter Six
"This is the most craziest ***** ever."
“Tell me what’s wrong,” Camilla demanded. Shelby hesitated, contemplating whether to answer her friend or not. “TELL ME!” “Fine,” Shelby sighed. “Riley’s moving back to New York.”
Camilla’s jaw dropped to the floor. “Are you kidding me?!?” she cried. Shelby shook her head. “No. He called me personally and told me this morning.” Camilla’s mind raced with questions. “When is he coming back?” “Tomorrow.” “TOMORROW?!?” she screamed. Tears filled her eyes and she stomped her feet. Shelby wrapped her arms around her small frame, pulling her into a warm embrace.
After that day three years ago whenever Cammy found Riley f**king her sister, she, of course, dumped him, but he started dating Fiona. This crushed Camilla, to have her twin sister do that to her. About a year after this happened, Riley impregnated Fiona and he fled to Florida, leaving Fiona back in New York with their baby. Everyone in Camilla’s family helped Fiona with her baby, except for Cammy. This is why Fiona was such a ****** to Camilla, because she didn’t love her baby, she looked at with disgust in her eyes.
“Why is Riley even coming back?” Cammy mumbled, wiping away a few tears. Shelby shrugged. “He said he ‘missed you and Fiona’.” “I don’t believe me.” “Neither do I.” “HE’S COMING BACK?!?” Fiona, who had been secretly listening to their conversation, shrieked. She didn’t wait for them to answer. “Oh my God, oh my God! I HAVE TO PROTECT LUCILLE!” She raced upstairs to the nursery to guard her baby.
Camilla sighed and rubbed her temples. “What am I going to do?” she asked Shelby. “I don’t know, Cam,” Shelby replied.
steevie!
July 6th, 2008, 09:45 PM
oh snap son!
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 09:49 PM
oh snap son!
wtf??
:lol:
steevie!
July 6th, 2008, 09:51 PM
that's my phrase -.-
Don't be hatin'.
-pops collar-
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 09:52 PM
that's my phrase -.-
Don't be hatin'.
-pops collar-
:?
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 09:57 PM
.
tokiohotel26
July 6th, 2008, 10:05 PM
YES! U POSTED! IT WAS AWESOME!!!!
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 10:05 PM
YES! U POSTED! IT WAS AWESOME!!!!
Thank You!!!!!!!!! :mrgreen:
tokiohotel26
July 6th, 2008, 10:07 PM
YES! U POSTED! IT WAS AWESOME!!!!
Thank You!!!!!!!!! :mrgreen:
your welcome! i wont threat u anymore
today... :twisted:
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 10:12 PM
YES! U POSTED! IT WAS AWESOME!!!!
Thank You!!!!!!!!! :mrgreen:
your welcome! i wont threat u anymore
today... :twisted:
:shock: :o
tokiohotel26
July 6th, 2008, 10:13 PM
:lol: :mrgreen:
u know u luff me!
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 10:15 PM
I do, I do!!!
:D :mrgreen: :D :mrgreen:
Haley1018
July 6th, 2008, 10:50 PM
*still determined*
TH_luv
July 7th, 2008, 12:00 AM
mein gott!I stay away from the cpu for one day and you've already updated so much! XD oh mein Gott...Riley can go to ****...so can Fiona :P awww,poor Camilla and mein gott!What was up with those thoughts in Bill's mind?!He says to himself "Not an embarassment at all" in sarcasm and then is sudden;y interested in her?!...I never get Billy lolz mehr,bitte?
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 12:02 AM
mein gott!I stay away from the cpu for one day and you've already updated so much! XD oh mein Gott...Riley can go to ****...so can Fiona :P awww,poor Camilla and mein gott!What was up with those thoughts in Bill's mind?!He says to himself "Not an embarassment at all" in sarcasm and then is sudden;y interested in her?!...I never get Billy lolz mehr,bitte?
Billa is a very confusing person. :?
tokiohotel26
July 7th, 2008, 12:06 AM
I do, I do!!!
:D :mrgreen: :D :mrgreen:
i knew it! :mrgreen:
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 12:07 AM
I do, I do!!!
:D :mrgreen: :D :mrgreen:
i knew it! :mrgreen:
:lol: :D
tokiohotel26
July 7th, 2008, 12:38 AM
I do, I do!!!
:D :mrgreen: :D :mrgreen:
i knew it! :mrgreen:
:lol: :D
but i was right! :mrgreen:
if it werent 12:38 in the mornig i would dance around the room doing my happy-dance!
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 12:48 AM
i knew it! :mrgreen:
:lol: :D
but i was right! :mrgreen:
if it werent 12:38 in the mornig i would dance around the room doing my happy-dance!
Hahaha :lol:
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 01:54 AM
*still determined
and probably going to start chapter seven soon*
tokiohotel26
July 7th, 2008, 03:01 AM
OKAY!!!!!!!!
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 03:06 AM
:D
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 05:32 PM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
IT GOT TO THE SECOND PAGE!!!!!!!!!!! :cry:
*is more determined than ever now*
*and can't stop listening to McFly today*
tokiohotel26
July 7th, 2008, 05:46 PM
put up next chappie! or else i will be forced to find u! i WILL find u. :twisted:
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 05:48 PM
put up next chappie! or else i will be forced to find u! i WILL find u. :twisted:
:shock:
I'll start working on now. :shock:
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 06:07 PM
*still determined*
xXKillerxQueenXx
July 7th, 2008, 06:08 PM
I've been lurking around and reading this and if you don't
UPDATE SOON
or I will stab you with a spork! =]
Have a good day now!
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 06:11 PM
I've been lurking around and reading this and if you don't
UPDATE SOON
or I will stab you with a spork! =]
Have a good day now!
:shock:
It seems as if I don't finish this chapter I'm going to be killed by either you or Lexi. :shock:
*works at full-speed*
tokiohotel26
July 7th, 2008, 06:18 PM
I've been lurking around and reading this and if you don't
UPDATE SOON
or I will stab you with a spork! =]
Have a good day now!
:shock:
It seems as if I don't finish this chapter I'm going to be killed by either you or Lexi. :shock:
*works at full-speed*
lexi will kill u first... :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 06:21 PM
I've been lurking around and reading this and if you don't
UPDATE SOON
or I will stab you with a spork! =]
Have a good day now!
:shock:
It seems as if I don't finish this chapter I'm going to be killed by either you or Lexi. :shock:
*works at full-speed*
lexi will kill u first... :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:
:shock: :shock:
*is nearly done with chapter seven*
steevie!
July 7th, 2008, 06:21 PM
yay for Haley ^_^
tokiohotel26
July 7th, 2008, 06:22 PM
HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY! :mrgreen:
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 06:24 PM
:shock:
*is scared for her life*
I BETTER GO, SHE BLOWS MY BRAINS OUT, SILENCE IS A SCARY SOUND!!!!! 8-)
*random* 8-)
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 06:30 PM
Chapter Seven
"Just tell yourself, ah, I'll be okay."
Camilla and Fiona sat on the couch, squeezing each other’s hands and shaking uncontrollably. The sisters couldn’t control their tears, and were sobbing so hard their bodies were rocking. “He’s coming back, he’s coming back,” Fiona mumbled to herself over and over again. “What if hurts my Lucille?” Ignoring Fiona’s question, Camilla spoke softly to herself. “What if Riley hurts me again, like he used to? I can’t deal with any more of his crap.”
Suddenly there was a loud knock on the door, and the twins screamed in agony, like they were being tortured. They sat very still on the couch, hoping their visitor would leave, but he didn’t. “OPEN THE DOOR!” he screamed. “I KNOW YOU’RE IN THERE!” Hearing the knocks, Steevie descended down the stairs and flung open the door. She glared at Riley fiercely. “Do you need something, kind sir?” she asked coldly. Riley smirked. “Yes, I do. I’d like to speak to those lovely ladies,” he replied, motioning towards Cammy and Fifi. The twins, locked in a strong embrace, squeezed each other even tighter, nearly snapping one another’s spines in half.
“Why the worried faces, girls?” Riley asked, his voice dripping with forced sweetness. “You know why, you scumbag,” Fiona answered. Riley’s face twisted in fake hurt. “You really think I’m a scumbag?” The girls nodded. He began to walk toward them, but Steevie grabbed his wrist and pulled him back. “Sorry, but if you want to speak to them, you must stay right here.” Sighing, Riley nodded his head and turned to the twins.
“I really did miss you two,” he said. “Fiona, I’m sorry for leaving you after I found out you were pregnant. That was really immature of me, and I just wasn’t ready to be a father...” He trailed off, and then smiled. “But now I’m more than willing to accept responsibility for my actions and help raise our child.”
Camilla noticed Fiona’s chocolate brown eyes soften. Oh *****, she thought. Fiona’s not really going to fall for his tricks, is she?? Answering Cammy’s question, Fiona peeled herself off the couch and skipped merrily over to Riley. She gently hugged him, then reached up and kissed his cheek. “I forgive you, love.”
Riley grinned widely, and then averted his gaze to Camilla. “Cam, I’m really, really sorry for leading you on when we were younger. That was wrong of me to hurt you like that. And I also apologize for being an *** to you before I left for Florida.” Camilla stared at the man for the longest while, before slowly standing up and walking over to him. Lifting her leg, she kicked him in the balls and jumped backward so he could double over in pain. “Take that ‘apology’ AND SHOVE IT UP YOUR ***!” she hissed before turning, and marching upstairs to her bedroom.
tokiohotel26
July 7th, 2008, 06:32 PM
its official! i love this story!
go camilla!
steevie!
July 7th, 2008, 06:33 PM
...
I really,
really,
REALLY
wont to slap Fiona.
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 06:33 PM
its official! i love this story!
go camilla!
Yay!
Thank you! :D
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 06:34 PM
...
I really,
really,
REALLY
wont to slap Fiona.
I knew you were going to say that. :lol:
Your time will come soon, my child. 8-)
steevie!
July 7th, 2008, 06:35 PM
-dances-
I GET TO SLAP THE IDIOT!!!!
-calms self-
I'm done now.
-sits down and waits for more-
tokiohotel26
July 7th, 2008, 06:35 PM
its official! i love this story!
go camilla!
Yay!
Thank you! :D
your welcome!
and just because u said dont kill u in the title--ill think about it :mrgreen:
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 06:37 PM
-dances-
I GET TO SLAP THE IDIOT!!!!
-calms self-
I'm done now.
-sits down and waits for more-
Good thing Shelby wasn't here to read the "dances" part. -.-'
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 06:38 PM
its official! i love this story!
go camilla!
Yay!
Thank you! :D
your welcome!
and just because u said dont kill u in the title--ill think about it :mrgreen:
YAY Thank you! :D
I luffs my life
steevie!
July 7th, 2008, 06:40 PM
I really gotta stop dancing.
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 06:40 PM
I really gotta stop dancing.
You can dance, just not when Shelby's around. :lol:
steevie!
July 7th, 2008, 06:47 PM
lol,
okay ^_^
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 06:50 PM
:lol:
TH_luv
July 7th, 2008, 06:52 PM
lmao rofl! XD ahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! XD I died of laughter at that...Fiona's stupid,but if he didn't miss the girls then why come back?...I gots a bad feeling about him >.< but OH MEIN GOTT! XD lmao!She kicked him in the balls lmao!mehr,bitte?
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 06:54 PM
lmao rofl! XD ahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! XD I died of laughter at that...Fiona's stupid,but if he didn't miss the girls then why come back?...I gots a bad feeling about him >.< but OH MEIN GOTT! XD lmao!She kicked him in the balls lmao!mehr,bitte?
I'll probably update later tonight! :D :D
xXKillerxQueenXx
July 7th, 2008, 06:56 PM
Yay! Another chapter!
I guess I don't need this anymore.
-throws spork our window-
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 06:58 PM
Yay! Another chapter!
I guess I don't need this anymore.
-throws spork our window-
YAY!!!!!!! :D :D
*is not worried for her life anymore*
tokiohotel26
July 7th, 2008, 07:11 PM
Yay! Another chapter!
I guess I don't need this anymore.
-throws spork our window-
YAY!!!!!!! :D :D
*is not worried for her life anymore*
dont be so sure about that :twisted:
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 07:13 PM
Yay! Another chapter!
I guess I don't need this anymore.
-throws spork our window-
YAY!!!!!!! :D :D
*is not worried for her life anymore*
dont be so sure about that :twisted:
:shock: :shock:
I need to get some ninja bodyguards, like, seriously. -.-'
tokiohotel26
July 7th, 2008, 07:15 PM
heh heh :mrgreen:
u still luff me though rite?
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 07:16 PM
heh heh :mrgreen:
u still luff me though rite?
Of course, my dear! :D
tokiohotel26
July 7th, 2008, 07:17 PM
heh heh :mrgreen:
u still luff me though rite?
Of course, my dear! :D
*does happydance!*
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 07:18 PM
heh heh :mrgreen:
u still luff me though rite?
Of course, my dear! :D
*does happydance!*
:mrgreen: :mrgreen:
tokiohotel26
July 7th, 2008, 07:23 PM
dont get mad at me for being nosey ok?
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 07:24 PM
dont get mad at me for being nosey ok?
Ok, I'm nosy too, so I don't mind! ^-^
iilyRein
July 7th, 2008, 07:26 PM
wow go cammy <3
fiona is such a ....
well u know
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 07:26 PM
wow go cammy <3
fiona is such a ....
well u know
:D
tokiohotel26
July 7th, 2008, 07:31 PM
dont get mad at me for being nosey ok?
Ok, I'm nosy too, so I don't mind! ^-^
oh but u might
[concerned face]
r u and ur cousin ok? i read wat happened the other day
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 07:34 PM
dont get mad at me for being nosey ok?
Ok, I'm nosy too, so I don't mind! ^-^
oh but u might
[concerned face]
r u and ur cousin ok? i read wat happened the other day
No no no, I don't mind! ^-^
It actually makes me happy when people ask me if I'm alright!!! :D
Ja, we're fine now. We've gone back to the way things were before.
However, I did get my revenge last night :twisted:
She was drinking dr. pepper and i said something that made her laugh so she choked on it.
I think of it as payback. :twisted:
She tramautizes me for life, so I nearly kill her. :twisted:
I'm a ******, aren't I? :roll:
tokiohotel26
July 7th, 2008, 07:41 PM
i congratulate u! i should do that to my sister... :twisted:
man i love that twisted evil smilie!
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 07:43 PM
i congratulate u! i should do that to my sister... :twisted:
man i love that twisted evil smilie!
Thank you! :lol:
And I do too
:twisted: :twisted:
tokiohotel26
July 7th, 2008, 07:44 PM
i congratulate u! i should do that to my sister... :twisted:
man i love that twisted evil smilie!
Thank you! :lol:
And I do too
:twisted: :twisted:
i especially like it when i threaten u :mrgreen:
i also love mr green!
:mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 07:47 PM
i congratulate u! i should do that to my sister... :twisted:
man i love that twisted evil smilie!
Thank you! :lol:
And I do too
:twisted: :twisted:
i especially like it when i threaten u :mrgreen:
i also love mr green!
:mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
:(
I like these:
:twisted: :mrgreen: :ugeek: :roll: 8-)
tokiohotel26
July 7th, 2008, 07:50 PM
:(
I like these:
:twisted: :mrgreen: :ugeek: :roll: 8-)
i like these:
:mrgreen: :twisted: :cry: :lol: :roll: :? :shock: :o
ya thats about it
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 07:51 PM
:mrgreen:
Oh that reminds me, Lexi!!
I deleted my MySpace and made a new one, but whenever I tried to add you it said my e-mail was wrong :?
So will you add me, plz? :D
tokiohotel26
July 7th, 2008, 07:59 PM
yea i will! and it said it was wrong because u were supposed to enter mine. :lol:
i was wondering where you were! i was gonna throw bill, tom, gustav, and georg at u yesterday
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 08:00 PM
yea i will! and it said it was wrong because u were supposed to enter mine. :lol:
i was wondering where you were! i was gonna throw bill, tom, gustav, and georg at u yesterday
Oh, that could be the problem :lol:
Oh yay!!!! :mrgreen:
No one's ever thrown them at me before ^-^
tokiohotel26
July 7th, 2008, 08:03 PM
yea i will! and it said it was wrong because u were supposed to enter mine. :lol:
i was wondering where you were! i was gonna throw bill, tom, gustav, and georg at u yesterday
Oh, that could be the problem :lol:
Oh yay!!!! :mrgreen:
No one's ever thrown them at me before ^-^
ja steevie threw them at me and then i threw them at everybody
whats your url
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 08:06 PM
Steevie never threw them at me :cry:
****** :twisted:
myspace.com/artificialsweetener1018
^-^
tokiohotel26
July 7th, 2008, 08:19 PM
I CANT FIND YOUR ADD ME BUTTON!!!
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 08:29 PM
I CANT FIND YOUR ADD ME BUTTON!!!
DUDE, WHAT THE ****?!?!?!?!
I just noticed I don't have one :o
Hold on, let me find a new layout and then i'll message you whenever I find one >.<
F**king layout >.<
tokiohotel26
July 7th, 2008, 08:33 PM
I CANT FIND YOUR ADD ME BUTTON!!!
DUDE, WHAT THE ****?!?!?!?!
I just noticed I don't have one :o
Hold on, let me find a new layout and then i'll message you whenever I find one >.<
F**king layout >.<
:lol: :lol: :lol:
OK
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 08:39 PM
Mmk it's fixed now ^-^
tokiohotel26
July 7th, 2008, 08:43 PM
Mmk it's fixed now ^-^
I LUFFS IT! ITS SO CUTE!!!
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 08:45 PM
Mmk it's fixed now ^-^
I LUFFS IT! ITS SO CUTE!!!
Yay thank you!! :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 08:45 PM
Mmk it's fixed now ^-^
I LUFFS IT! ITS SO CUTE!!!
Yay thank you!! :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
tokiohotel26
July 7th, 2008, 08:46 PM
ok now accept my request!
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 08:55 PM
I did, my dear ^-^
I luffs your layout too!!!!!!! :mrgreen:
tokiohotel26
July 7th, 2008, 09:03 PM
THANKS U! i sent tokio hotel down your way!
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 09:10 PM
YAY!!!! :D :D
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 11:23 PM
*still determined*
Haley1018
July 7th, 2008, 11:47 PM
About to start working on chapter eight...
Haley1018
July 8th, 2008, 12:15 AM
*still determined*
tokiohotel26
July 8th, 2008, 12:16 AM
YAY!!!!!
Haley1018
July 8th, 2008, 12:17 AM
:mrgreen: :mrgreen:
Haley1018
July 8th, 2008, 12:56 AM
Chapter Eight
"Nothing good can come of this."
Slamming her bedroom door and locking it, Camilla flung herself on her mattress and sobbed into her favorite fuzzy blue pillow. “I thought he was finally gone,” she said softly to herself. “I thought he would never come back, and that he would never torture me again. How wrong I was.”
There was a loud knock on the door. “Cammy! Please, open up!!! I want to talk to you!” “F**K OFF, RILEY!!!” Camilla screeched at the top of her lungs. “DON’T YOU KNOW I HATE YOU, OR ARE YOU SO F**KING RETARDED YOU CAN’T TELL?!?” Riley went silent, and Cammy knew he was trying not to chuckle. “Go away, assmonkey,” she commanded loudly, but more quietly. Riley tried to suppress a laugh, but was unsuccessful. “Assmonkey?” he repeated. “YES, ASSMONKEY! YOU ARE A GODD*MN ASSMONKEY!”
“Camilla! DON’T TALK TO RILEY LIKE THAT!” Fiona yelled through the door. Camilla rolled her eyes and replied, “He’s a big boy, he can stand up for himself. So shut the f**k up, Fifi.” She emphasized Fiona’s nickname, smirking to herself. “DON’T CALL ME THAT!” Fiona roared. The fight was interrupted by Lucille’s wailing, and Cammy heard footsteps run off to the baby’s room.
Slowly Camilla rolled out of her bed and made her way to the door, opening it cautiously. Surprised to see Riley standing there, her eyes widened and she tried to slam the door, but he caught it. He flung it open, causing Cammy to lose her balance and fall backward. Closing the door and locking it behind him, Riley then turned to Camilla. She tried to peel herself on the floor, but Riley pushed her down again and pinned her to the carpet with his strong arms.
“Riley...” Camilla breathed. “Please. Don’t.” “Oh, Cammy. I have to. I’ve been away from you for far too long...” His breath ghosted over her neck, and she shivered. “GET OFF ME!” she hissed fiercely, using all of her strength to try to wriggle out from under his body. “DON’T YOU F**KING TALK TO ME LIKE THAT!” Riley screamed, punching Camilla in the face. She winced in pain, but he didn’t care, he continued to remove her clothes. “Riley...don’t...stop!” Cammy demanded as he unhooked her bra and tossed it aside. “Make me, Camilla. I dare you to.”
No! Camilla shouted in her head. Not this torture again!
steevie!
July 8th, 2008, 12:59 AM
...cheese.
He isn't even in the house for 2 minutes...
MAKE BIG SISTER COME TO THE RESCUE HALEY!!!!
-or Bill,
'cause I'm sure that's what will happen-
tokiohotel26
July 8th, 2008, 01:00 AM
:o
:o
:o
:o
:shock:
he raped her before? that is sad...
Haley1018
July 8th, 2008, 01:01 AM
This story makes me sad :cry:
BUT I F**KING LOVE TO WRITE IT. ^-^
Haley1018
July 8th, 2008, 01:02 AM
...cheese.
He isn't even in the house for 2 minutes...
That made me laugh :lol:
Oh how ironic, as I'm thinking of a plan for chapter nine, "The Way She Feels" comes up on my iTunes... :roll:
Oh, the irony, eh, Steevie?
tokiohotel26
July 8th, 2008, 01:03 AM
im with u there!
steevie!
July 8th, 2008, 01:04 AM
Who doesn't love irony!?
Haley1018
July 8th, 2008, 01:06 AM
im with u there!
:mrgreen:
Who doesn't love irony!?
Haha, true! :lol:
Oh mah Jesus, "The Way She Feels" makes me sad :cry:
When I first heard it and saw the music video, it made me cry :cry:
Here it is:
http://youtube.com/watch?v=cTdjCsZoW_0
steevie!
July 8th, 2008, 01:17 AM
that was pretty cliche,
but good,
none the less.
I also love how the keyboardist was insanely into the song.
It made me laugh XD
Haley1018
July 8th, 2008, 01:18 AM
Haha :lol:
I love the keyboardist and the frontman :lol:
MY BEST FRIEND CASSIDY WENT TO WARPED TOUR AND MET THE KEYBOARDIST YESTERDAY!!!!! :evil:
Lucky f**king wh*re. :evil:
steevie!
July 8th, 2008, 01:19 AM
.-.
that's awesome ^-^
I've never been to warped tour -.-
Haley1018
July 8th, 2008, 01:20 AM
I've never been to anything
except a gay *** Clay Walker concert my mom dragged me to a couple of years ago -.-
steevie!
July 8th, 2008, 01:21 AM
that does sound gay -.-
Haley1018
July 8th, 2008, 01:23 AM
Mhmm. :|
*working on the dirty version of chapter eight and then will begin chapter nine* ^-^
steevie!
July 8th, 2008, 01:25 AM
dirty bird.
Haley1018
July 8th, 2008, 01:29 AM
I like being a dirty bird ^-^
steevie!
July 8th, 2008, 01:33 AM
XD
I've noticed ^-^
It makes you you though!
Haley1018
July 8th, 2008, 01:37 AM
Indeed, it does. :lol: 8-)
And you being a secret perv makes you you too! :mrgreen:
steevie!
July 8th, 2008, 01:44 AM
Right,
'you know me so well Haley!
-pokes-
Meanhead.
Haley1018
July 8th, 2008, 01:46 AM
I am not a meanhead. :cry:
Haley1018
July 8th, 2008, 02:23 AM
*still determined and feels kind of bad for writing a rape scene :? *
steevie!
July 8th, 2008, 02:25 AM
rape scene O.o
Haley1018
July 8th, 2008, 02:26 AM
Mhmm.
I wrote about her getting raped and posted that chapter on tokiohotelus.com instead of the clean one I used for this forum.
steevie!
July 8th, 2008, 02:27 AM
oh,
that's cool?
yeah...
I think it's cool?
-ponders-
It's cool.
Haley1018
July 8th, 2008, 02:28 AM
Thank you. :mrgreen:
i really shouldn't be writing about a girl getting raped, I'm 12 for f**k's sake -.-'
TexasGirlLovesTH
July 8th, 2008, 02:29 AM
*POW*
Betches, I'm back!!!
steevie!
July 8th, 2008, 02:29 AM
That makes you unique Haley ^-^
SHELBY!
Haley1018
July 8th, 2008, 02:30 AM
I suppose it's does...
HALLO MY DEAR SISTER. ^-^
TexasGirlLovesTH
July 8th, 2008, 02:32 AM
hey, Haley...I'm gonna start reading the story over on THUS. All the convos are pi$$in me off. >.<
But anywayziz...hey y'all!
steevie!
July 8th, 2008, 02:33 AM
...
what happened now?
Haley1018
July 8th, 2008, 02:33 AM
hey, Haley...I'm gonna start reading the story over on THUS. All the convos are pi$$in me off. >.<
But anywayziz...hey y'all!
I suppose now we know how Steevie's readers feel :lol:
Let's switch this convo over to Steevums's old fic, ok?
TexasGirlLovesTH
July 8th, 2008, 02:37 AM
deal!!
Haley1018
July 8th, 2008, 02:38 AM
:mrgreen:
Haley1018
July 8th, 2008, 02:01 PM
Working on chapter nine, my lovelies ^-^
TexasGirlLovesTH
July 8th, 2008, 02:07 PM
8-)
Shaweeeeeeeeeeeet!
Haley1018
July 8th, 2008, 02:10 PM
:mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
TexasGirlLovesTH
July 8th, 2008, 02:15 PM
*wiggle wiggle*
TexasGirlLovesTH
July 8th, 2008, 02:56 PM
HALEY!!!!!!!
Where the **** did you go?
:cry: *is lonly without her perv sister*
Haley1018
July 8th, 2008, 02:57 PM
I AM HERE, MY LOVE!! :D
Let's go chat in Steevie's ficcie, ja??
And we'll force her to come join us :twisted:
Haley1018
July 8th, 2008, 03:24 PM
*still determined and is having trouble with chapter nine* :cry:
tokiohotel26
July 8th, 2008, 03:52 PM
*still determined and is having trouble with chapter nine* :cry:
nooooooooooo!!!!!! :cry:
take your time...but not too long! ok?
Haley1018
July 8th, 2008, 03:56 PM
*still determined and is having trouble with chapter nine* :cry:
nooooooooooo!!!!!! :cry:
take your time...but not too long! ok?
Ok :D
TH_luv
July 8th, 2008, 04:04 PM
:shock: :shock: :o
Riley is a fi*kin horndog! >.< so he came back cuz he ran outta girls to screw?...alch ficker...mehr,bitte?
Haley1018
July 8th, 2008, 04:17 PM
Chapter Nine
"I gotta go, she blows my brains out."
As soon as Riley climbed off of Camilla, she leaped off the floor and began slipping her clothes over her body. Riley reached over and patted Camilla on the head gently. “That was good. You didn’t protest as much as usual.” She shot him a death look. Riley smirked. “That look turns me on, you know.” He winked. “I might just come back for more later.”
He left, closing the bedroom door. Camilla sat on the floor, staring into space as she let the familiar feeling of disgust, pain, and hate take over her. “I can’t take much more of this,” she whispered to no one. Standing and walking over to her dresser, she searched for her beloved razorblade and sliced it across her left wrist when she found it. Camilla watched as ruby red blood spilled out of the cut, dripping onto the carpet. She wrapped her wrist in gauze that she found in the bathroom, and then headed down to the bar, the one place where she could forget about everything and everyone just for a little while.
Upon entering the bar, Camilla immediately heard a familiar voice. “I thought I’d find you here.” Her muscles tensed up, but then relaxed as the voice’s body stepped out from behind a shadow. She breathed a sigh of relief, but then her mood turned sour. “What are you doing here, Bill?” she snapped. Bill smirked as he replied, “I’m not really sure. You simply, erm...fascinate me.”
Camilla raised her eyebrows. “Dude, you barely even know me,” she remarked. “Now move.” She shoved him aside and took a seat at the bar. “Aye, Cam,” the bartender greeted her. “Hey, Oliver.” “Your usual?” Camilla nodded as the bartender slid a glass of some kind of alcohol down the bar. Bill watched as she gulped it down, then another and another and another.
“Come on,” Bill suddenly ordered as Cammy began to feel tipsy. “Hey! What do you think you’re doing, dude?” she demanded as Bill pulled her off the stool and dragged her out the door. “I ain’t even drunk yet!” “Exactly the point,” Bill hissed in her ear. “You say you’re an embarrassment to your family, don’t you? I’m just trying to be nice and get you out of here before you get wasted and embarrass yourself further.” Camilla pulled her arm away from his grasp and shot daggers at him with her eyes. “I’m a big girl, you know. I can take care of myself, thank you very much.”
“Yes, well, you’re coming back to my apartment with me,” Bill said, once again grabbing Camilla’s arm firmly and leading her down the street. “I’m not going to be your one-night stand,” Cammy said. “I know you’re not. I just want to make sure you don’t sneak off to the bar again. Drinking as much alcohol as you do is not healthy.” Bill looked her over, his heart aching slightly as he took in her appearance; her eyes were bloodshot and purple bags rested under them, she was weak and pale, and there were several black bruises covering her body. “Plus, you look like you could get away from whatever you’re dealing with. That’s why you go to the bar so much, right?”
Camilla nodded hesitantly. Suddenly her eyes filled with fear, and she shriveled away from Bill. “You’re...you’re not going to hurt me, are you?” she asked, her voice quiet as she thought of the incident with Riley earlier that day. It nearly killed Bill to see this girl look so fragile and broken, and he loosened his grip on her arm. “No. I promise I wouldn’t ever hurt you.”
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