Bring Me to Life (Fanfic comments plz? Chapter three up)

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Okay I'm going to try once again writing fanfics on here I lost my other three. But I'll try and Keep up with this one.
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Intro
My name is Mitchie Elektra Murdock. I’m the daughter of the blind lawyer from Hell’s Kitchen and Nikolas Natichos daughter Elektra. My parents meeting; was a strange one. You see my mom wouldn’t give her name up to my Dad so he followed her to the park and they did a small kung-fu battle in front of all these children. But that’s not the real point of the story. My Dad wasn’t just a blind lawyer from Hell’s Kitchen; he was also The Man with out Fear, Daredevil. My mom also kind of had a super hero identity, she was Elektra, I know not very known, her main goal was to avenge her father’s death by killing Daredevil who she thought killed her father when it turns out it was Bull’s Eye. But that a long story. When I was five years old my mom gave me her good luck necklace that said Elektra, that was right before she was murdered, by the Kingpin of all crime; Wilson Fisk. Dad got crazy with revenge and killed Fisk then he hung up his Daredevil suit for good. He trained me into defending myself, made me swear not to start crime fighting until I was out of college. But one case he took changed that promise, made me have to adorn the maroon leather to fight crime.
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Chapter One
“Mitchie, Mitchie Murdock, pay attention,” Mr. Parker my science teacher yelled at me. I jumped. I was caught sleeping in school again, I’ve been have trouble sleeping at night and I usually fall asleep in third period, Chemistry.
“Sorry, Mr. Parker,” I said yawning.
“Mitchie, can I talk to you outside?”Mr. Parker asked me. I nodded as the class did a collective “ooh”. But I think Mr. Parker is only concern, because he’s friends with my dad. You see his first name is Peter, yes he was the free lance photographer for the Daily Bugle that took all of Spider-man’s pictures, but when Spider-man went away he had to find an alternative job because Mr. Jameson really only excepted his Spider-man pictures.
“What’s up, Mr. Parker,” I asked.
“What’s wrong, lately you’ve been falling asleep in my class and you never fall asleep in school,” Mr. Parker said.
“Been having trouble sleeping lately,” I said, but I never mention it was because I could hear every crime going on in Hell’s Kitchen. I still haven’t asked Dad how he slept at night knowing he could hear every crime. Maybe that’s what I’ll do when I see at home tonight.
“Oh well do you know why?” Mr. Parker asked.
Yes, I thought but said,” No, I think I’m stressed over something.”
“What’s been stressing you lately,” he asked.
Hearing every crime in Hell’s Kitchen, I thought but said,” I think it’s my math mid-term I’m not to good at math, I’ve also been burning the midnight oil cramming for the mid-term.”
“Don’t worry too much about it, you’ll pass, you’re very smart,” he said,” I should know, Sara complains about it all the time.” He smiled.
I smiled back. “She always tells me I’m too smart.” Sara was Mr. Parker’s daughter.
“It’s impossible to be too smart; it is possible to know too much about certain situation, trust a lot of the pictures of Spiderman I took were at the scenes of hostage situations because the hostage knew too much,” He said, he always does that, oh well gets me out of learning. Just then the bell rang.
“Oh crap, well go get your books and I’ll see you later,” Mr. Parker said heading in the room I followed grabbed my books and followed everyone else out the door.
“Mitchie, what did Dad want with you,” Sara asked as I caught up to her.
“To know if anything was wrong,” I said.
“Oh, okay, so you didn’t get in trouble,” Sara said.
“No,” I said.
“We have our math mid-term next,” said my friend Riley Richards, son of Reed and Sue Richards of the Fantastic Four.
“Thanks for reminding me Riley,” I said.
“You’re welcome, don’t worry Mitchie, you’ll do fine,” he said putting his arm around my shoulder. Riley and Sara are my best friends, we have an understanding of we each keep secrets, weird that we do but we don’t yell at each other for lying about our parents’ lives back in the day, Well we all know Riley’s parents are Mr. Fantastic and the Invisible Women. Anyway I took the mid-term our Algebra teacher Mr. Lee gave us, as in Stan Lee, a random guy you most likely saw throughout my dad’s and the rest of the superheroes’ lives. Anyway after school ended that day I took the bus over to the courthouse because Dad wanted to meet me there.
“Matt, Mitchie is here,” Franklin Nelson, Dad’s law firm partner in their law firm of Nelson and Murdock, said.
“Hey Mitchie,” Dad said.
“Hi Dad,” I hugged him,” What’s up?”
“We’re recessing right now, the jury is deciding, then we’re getting our new client right afterwards,” Dad said.
“So soon,” I asked. Frank nodded. I shrugged.
“Yeah,” Dad said. After a while court reformed and Dad’s client was found innocent. After everyone else left Dad, Frank, and I walked out and down the hall to a room where the most gorgeous guy was, standing there. He had long, black, spiky hair with blonde strikes in it. Brown eyes, a tall lanky body. What could he have possibly done to need an attorney.
“Who are you,” He said in a German accent.
“Your Attorney’s if you’re innocent,” Dad said stepping closer to the guy,” So are you……innocent?”
“Yes, I never stole shirt,” the guy said.
“ I believe you, Mr. Kaulitz, you got yourself a defense,” Dad said.
“A very good defense might I add, my Dad is impossible to lie to,” I said.
“Mitchie shh,” Dad said.
Dad’s client smiled “That’s okay, thanks for defending me, but I think the guy who framed me killed someone also, he probably will stop at nothing to win this case, oh and call me Bill.” He looked right at me and smiled.
“Bill, if you don’t mind me asking, how old are you, you look really young,” Frank said.
“I’m 18,” Bill answered. He was only a year older than me, awesome.
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“Mitchie, Mitchie Murdock, pay attention,” Mr. Parker my science teacher yelled at me. I jumped. I was caught sleeping in school again, I’ve been have trouble sleeping at night and I usually fall asleep in third period, Chemistry.
“Sorry, Mr. Parker,” I said yawning.
“Mitchie, can I talk to you outside?”Mr. Parker asked me. I nodded as the class did a collective “ooh”. But I think Mr. Parker is only concern, because he’s friends with my dad. You see his first name is Peter, yes he was the free lance photographer for the Daily Bugle that took all of Spider-man’s pictures, but when Spider-man went away he had to find an alternative job because Mr. Jameson really only excepted his Spider-man pictures.
“What’s up, Mr. Parker,” I asked.
“What’s wrong, lately you’ve been falling asleep in my class and you never fall asleep in school,” Mr. Parker said.
“Been having trouble sleeping lately,” I said, but I never mention it was because I could hear every crime going on in Hell’s Kitchen. I still haven’t asked Dad how he slept at night knowing he could hear every crime. Maybe that’s what I’ll do when I see at home tonight.
“Oh well do you know why?” Mr. Parker asked.
Yes, I thought but said,” No, I think I’m stressed over something.”
“What’s been stressing you lately,” he asked.
Hearing every crime in Hell’s Kitchen, I thought but said,” I think it’s my math mid-term I’m not to good at math, I’ve also been burning the midnight oil cramming for the mid-term.”
“Don’t worry too much about it, you’ll pass, you’re very smart,” he said,” I should know, Sara complains about it all the time.” He smiled.
I smiled back. “She always tells me I’m too smart.” Sara was Mr. Parker’s daughter.
“It’s impossible to be too smart; it is possible to know too much about certain situation, trust a lot of the pictures of Spiderman I took were at the scenes of hostage situations because the hostage knew too much,” He said, he always does that, oh well gets me out of learning. Just then the bell rang.
“Oh crap, well go get your books and I’ll see you later,” Mr. Parker said heading in the room I followed grabbed my books and followed everyone else out the door.
“Mitchie, what did Dad want with you,” Sara asked as I caught up to her.
“To know if anything was wrong,” I said.
“Oh, okay, so you didn’t get in trouble,” Sara said.
“No,” I said.
“We have our math mid-term next,” said my friend Riley Richards, son of Reed and Sue Richards of the Fantastic Four.
“Thanks for reminding me Riley,” I said.
“You’re welcome, don’t worry Mitchie, you’ll do fine,” he said putting his arm around my shoulder. Riley and Sara are my best friends, we have an understanding of we each keep secrets, weird that we do but we don’t yell at each other for lying about our parents’ lives back in the day, Well we all know Riley’s parents are Mr. Fantastic and the Invisible Women. Anyway I took the mid-term our Algebra teacher Mr. Lee gave us, as in Stan Lee, a random guy you most likely saw throughout my dad’s and the rest of the superheroes’ lives. Anyway after school ended that day I took the bus over to the courthouse because Dad wanted to meet me there.
“Matt, Mitchie is here,” Franklin Nelson, Dad’s law firm partner in their law firm of Nelson and Murdock, said.
“Hey Mitchie,” Dad said.
“Hi Dad,” I hugged him,” What’s up?”
“We’re recessing right now, the jury is deciding, then we’re getting our new client right afterwards,” Dad said.
“So soon,” I asked. Frank nodded. I shrugged.
“Yeah,” Dad said. After a while court reformed and Dad’s client was found innocent. After everyone else left Dad, Frank, and I walked out and down the hall to a room where the most gorgeous guy was, standing there. He had long, black, spiky hair with blonde strikes in it. Brown eyes, a tall lanky body. What could he have possibly done to need an attorney.
“Who are you,” He said in a German accent.
“Your Attorney’s if you’re innocent,” Dad said stepping closer to the guy,” So are you……innocent?”
“Yes, I never stole shirt,” the guy said.
“ I believe you, Mr. Kaulitz, you got yourself a defense,” Dad said.
“A very good defense might I add, my Dad is impossible to lie to,” I said.
“Mitchie shh,” Dad said.
Dad’s client smiled “That’s okay, thanks for defending me, but I think the guy who framed me killed someone also, he probably will stop at nothing to win this case, oh and call me Bill.” He looked right at me and smiled.
“Bill, if you don’t mind me asking, how old are you, you look really young,” Frank said.
“I’m 18,” Bill answered. He was only a year older than me, awesome.
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I'm going to be talking alot about Marvel Comic Superheroes...which include Fantastic Four, Spider-man (Peter Parker), Daredevil of course, Iron Man, Maybe the Hulk, X-men, and I think that's all the ones I know... but if you have any questions just ask...I'll do my best to explain but if I can't explain I make soemthing up until I find the real answer LOL...

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Chapter Two
Bill’s POV
As my attorneys left the girl turned around and smiled at me. She was really cute. But it probably be too risky going out with an attorney’s daughter, especially the attorney who was defending me. But weird thing was he was blind. But he most be good. I’ve heard stories about Matt Murdock, the blind lawyer.
“Bill,” I heard Tom’s voice behind me, I turned around.
“I’ve got a defense,” I said.
“That’s good, who is it,” he asked.
“Frank Nelson and Matt Murdock of Nelson and Murdock,” I said.
“No way, your lawyer is the blind lawyer?” Tom asked. I nodded. “That’s wicked,” he said.
“Yeah, how did I get into this mess again,” I asked.
“Because, we encountered an overzealous fan and well her boyfriend got over jealous,” Tom said.
“Thanks,” I said flatly.
“No problem brother,” Tom smiled.
MITCHIE’S POV
“We’re home,” I told Dad as I unlocked our door.
“How was school,” Dad asked.
“Had my math mid-term,” I said.
“How do you think you did,” Dad asked.
“Okay,” I said.
“Come on you’ve been cramming for that test for about a month,” Dad said.
“Yeah I know, I’ve been up late at night from hearing everything that goes on in this city so I thought since I can’t sleep I miles well study,” I said.
“Oh, you had the same problem I did when I first went blind, mega hearing sucks,” Dad said.
“How do you stop it,” I asked,” I mean I’ve always had my superhuman senses but why does it bug me now?”
“Well if you need to, play you IPOD loud at night it’ll drown out everything and it’s probably because you senses are at the peak of their strength,” Dad said.
“Okay,” I said,” I have homework to do.”
“Okay, go do you homework,” Dad said. I walked to my bedroom opened my textbook and started working on History.

No please, I swear I won’t tell!
Too late, you’ve crossed paths with the wrong person!
No please, give me more time, I’ll get the lawyer and his daughter!
It’s too late, Venom will have to take matters into his own hands!I woke up screaming. I can’t believe it, Venom is still alive. But who was he after. Dad came rushing it.
“What is it,” He asked.
“I fell asleep and I heard someone threatening someone,” I said.
“Well, do what I told you to,” Dad said.
“Okay,” I said putting my IPOD headphones in my ears and turning it up full blast as I worked on my history homework.
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Chapter Three
Mitchie’s POV
“Hey, It’s Mitchie right?” I heard behind me as I waited for the bus, I was meeting a friend at the mall. I looked it was Dad’s client Bill.
“Yeah, what are you doing here?” I said.
“Well, It’s not like I’m convicted of murder, this is just a case to see if I get a fine or not, and a probation officer, so I can wonder the streets of New York,” Bill said. I laughed.
“I don’t know, they are kind of dangerous, haven’t you ever heard of Super Villians,” I asked.
“yeah but didn’t they go away with the super heroes,” he asked.
“No, evil never retires, just last night I over heard someone mention Venom, a particularly nasty villain that almost killed Spider-man,” I said.
“Psahh, if Superman faced Venom, Venom would have been dead in the matter of seconds,” Bill said making me laugh again.
“But Superman was facing his own foe, Bizarro,” I said,” Which was kind of his Venom.”
“Point well taken,” Bill said. “Where are you going?”
“To the mall, I promised my best friend I’d meet her there, we’re going shopping for prom, even though we don’t really have dates, but we are determined to find dates,” I said. He laughed.
“Well I was going to find the mall also, my brother is driving me insane, may I tag along,” he asked.
“Sure,” I said not seeing why he couldn’t.
“Yo, Bill, why’d you leave me, oh now I see why,” said a guy with dirty blond dreadlocks but had the same face as Bill.
Bill groaned. “Tom this is Mitchie Murdock, my attorney’s daughter, Mitchie this is Tom, my twin brother, and I left you because you won’t stop asking me about my lawyers!”
“Oh, so it’s not like that,” Tom asked.
“Not like what, I’m only 17, for Pete’s sake,” I said. The bus came none too soon I quickly bored and found a seat. Bill sat next to me as Tom sat behind us.
“So where are we going,” Tom leaned forward to asked.
“The Daily Bugle, J. Jonah Jameson would love to write fiction about you and Spider-man fighting and Eddie Brock would love to supply the picture for a staff job,” I said angrily to him.
“Sorry I asked,” Tom said. Bill laughed.
“Are you always so –“ He started to ask.
“What, short-temepered, yeah I get it from my Dad,” I said.
“You’re dad is short temepered?” Tom asked.
“Yeah, especially when it comes to injustice, like if justice isn’t served he could just kill the assailant himself,” I said. Tom gulped and so did Bill. “But he doesn’t kill people, he used to ask Daredevil to do but since Daredevil retired after killing the Kingpin dad just swears a lot when justice isn’t served.” I could tell I was scaring them.
“Your Dad actually did that, man I wish Daredevil didn’t retire then,” Bill said.
“Why,” I asked.
“Well then if justice isn’t served with me then the guy framing me would get killed,” Bill said.
“You’d wish someone dead, Dad yells at me for saying I hate someone,” I said, they looked at me. “Yes, he has grown soft since I was born.”
“Oh,” Bill said.
LATER THAT NIGHT
“Dad, I’m home,” I shouted as I walked in the door, there was no reply. He most be at the courthouse reviewing the evidence, that’s why Bill and Tom left the mall, or maybe it was because me and Sara started asking them to hold or purses. I sat down in the living room and turned on the TV. Dad only got the TV to keep me out of his hair as a child, I was always up his butt right after mom died, and when I snuck along while he chased a lead on the Kingpin, well he got the TV and asked Frank to babysit me when he went out to kill the Kingpin.

I got you the lawyer.
Yeah but I need his daughter so that way I have ransom
If we don’t have ransom then we’ll lose the case
But Venom didn’t steal the shirt
No he didn’t but he was hired by the guy who did
So you’re working for a guy who’s working for someone?I heard a punch and a groan.

Get me the daughter, she’ll realize he’s missing tomorrow and go to the law firm asking for her Dad
I’ll do it, only because I’m freaking terrified of what will happen if I don’t
“Hey, Eric, maybe she's going to give you the big gift. You know, the BIG gift. You guys know what I'm talking about right?”
“Yes, Kelso. We got it. Then, we got it.”
“I'm not even from here, and I got it.” I woke up. So that’s who they were after. I shut the TV off even though it was a good episode of That ‘70s Show and ran to where my Dad kept his Daredevil supplies. I grabbed a mask, the billy club that he disguise as his walking stick, and a grappling hook thinger. Then I ran to my room put on a maroon tank top, with a maroon zip up sweatshirt over it. I put on my maroon high tops and put the weapons in my jean pockets. I snuck outside in the blaring sunlight and put the mask on. My hair was already braided into two pigtails to keep it off my neck.
I scaled the building to avoid people seeing me, last thing I need is for the citizens of New York to think that Daredevil has a copy cat or something. I stood on the law firm’s roof and watched as a guy with blond hair and what looked to be really sharp fangs stood there looking around. He must be looking for me. I saw Bill walk past him into the building, I guess I should scare the guy off. I jumped down landing lightly behind the guy. He turned around.
“Well what do we have here? A Daredevil copy cat?” he said holding a camera up and taking a picture. “J. Jonah Jameson is going to love this picture!” It was Eddie Brock.
“I hear you’re after a girl, why what she do to you,” I asked trying to sound tougher then I felt.
“Because if I don’t get that blind lawyer to have sucky defense for that Kaulitz guy I’m going to be like a bug on a windshield,” he said as a black goo incased his head.
“Venom!” I said. He laughed I back away but he grabbed me and took off my mask.
“Oh the lawyers daughter, thought you’d come and rescue Daddy, sorry princess, I’m not letting that happen, I’ll kidnap his client if need be” he said. I felt him hit my head, stars exploded in front of my eyes as I passed out.
BILL’S POV
“Sorry Bill, I haven’t seen Matt, I can’t get a hold of him,” Mr. Nelson said to. I nodded and walked out of the law firm building. As I did I heard.
“Oh the lawyer’s daughter, thought you’d come and rescue Daddy, sorry princess, I’m letting that happen, I’ll kidnap his client if need be.” I saw Mitchie with a guy in a black suit that looked like Spider-man’s.
“Venom,” I whispered but what was he doing with Mitchie. Suddenly he knocked her out, grabbed her and web-slinged away. “Mitchie!” I shouted as I watched him get away with her. I looked down at me feet to see a mask, Daredevil’s mask, and his weapons, what was Mitchie hiding? Why did Venom take her? Why would he kidnap me?

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