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TH_luv
March 15th, 2008, 01:17 PM
kk,who writes poems? well I do and because Im really bored right now Im gonna post some of mine.
Now just a sec.I have to find an appropriate poem that isnt too...hmmm...lol

The Nightmare Begins

glass shatters as if a hearts been smashed
rain falls as if the sky is crying
The clouds rumble as if they were roars
Roars of sadness and fear crawl out
The cover your screams and cries for help
So that no one can hear you untill its too late
The blood that drips down is pain getting out
She walks in and screams with the thundering clouds
Its too late to hide for she's already seen
This is it now the beating has now come to an end
For someone will die now this very second
Just count down with me now and on 3 its over
Two and then three with blood all on the ground
with one shattered vase all around and inside
With tears just like rain drops rolling down lifeless cheeks
And a sobbing young girl who has just entered ****

__________________________________________________ _________

I dunno what the point of that poem was I think I was just bored when I wrote it but whatever lol

HERE IS ANOTHER ONE!
This life of mine
is this for real?
Im nothing but a disappointment
you've lost all faith
I've lost all love
It may sound too far
but Im saying what I feel
I feel hate I feel distance
You dont trust me I dont trust you
This is some family you've made
Im sorry to say this
but you kill me so silently
Im drowning so much
That Im up to my neck
go ahead and just say it
You dont want me around
my mistakes and imperfectness
Is just too much to bare
So make me want death
you already give me glares
grab on me and bruise me
I've noticed one thing
if I could die tommorrow
it'd be a blessing
to me.
__________________________________________________ _________
ja I pretty much noticed that I dont think my poems ryme lol but I heard that poems dont have to ryme and so ever since I started I've been writing poems to tell people how I feel because its just too hard to tell them...but I never show people the poems lol so any other poems?

TH_luv
March 15th, 2008, 11:53 PM
no poems? awww were the poems that bad?

SpaceDementia
March 16th, 2008, 09:32 PM
kk,who writes poems? well I do and because Im really bored right now Im gonna post some of mine.
Now just a sec.I have to find an appropriate poem that isnt too...hmmm...lol

The Nightmare Begins

glass shatters as if a hearts been smashed
rain falls as if the sky is crying
The clouds rumble as if they were roars
Roars of sadness and fear crawl out
The cover your screams and cries for help
So that no one can hear you untill its too late
The blood that drips down is pain getting out
She walks in and screams with the thundering clouds
Its too late to hide for she's already seen
This is it now the beating has now come to an end
For someone will die now this very second
Just count down with me now and on 3 its over
Two and then three with blood all on the ground
with one shattered vase all around and inside
With tears just like rain drops rolling down lifeless cheeks
And a sobbing young girl who has just entered ****

__________________________________________________ _________

I dunno what the point of that poem was I think I was just bored when I wrote it but whatever lol

HERE IS ANOTHER ONE!
This life of mine
is this for real?
Im nothing but a disappointment
you've lost all faith
I've lost all love
It may sound too far
but Im saying what I feel
I feel hate I feel distance
You dont trust me I dont trust you
This is some family you've made
Im sorry to say this
but you kill me so silently
Im drowning so much
That Im up to my neck
go ahead and just say it
You dont want me around
my mistakes and imperfectness
Is just too much to bare
So make me want death
you already give me glares
grab on me and bruise me
I've noticed one thing
if I could die tommorrow
it'd be a blessing
to me.
__________________________________________________ _________
ja I pretty much noticed that I dont think my poems ryme lol but I heard that poems dont have to ryme and so ever since I started I've been writing poems to tell people how I feel because its just too hard to tell them...but I never show people the poems lol so any other poems?

I like your first one a lot! Maybe I'll get around to putting some of mine on here at some point....

agoraphobiaticalibi
March 17th, 2008, 02:29 AM
:P ooooo, i write some poems. this was on the old boards, but this one is a random one i wrote w/ a bazillion TH song titles and lyrics in it.

it's everything about you that makes my heart stop,
the smile, the eyes, the laugh, the voice,
you said through the monsoon you would go with me
protect me from everything and jump for me
crossed 1.000 meere to be by my side
and when i turned around you were here

it's what you make me do that really matters
no matter what i go through
your words ring true in my head
the feeling that i get each time i hear your voice is undeniable
i wouldn't give this up for anything even if i had a choice
because you're undescribable

you're a mystery to me and although we've never met,
all your songs are stories of times in my life that i'll never forget
you rescued me from a world that i needed to break away from
and when i wanted to scream you helped me to fly
you taught me to live in the second, and when i couldn't go on any longer and i felt like a forgotten child,
you came and i know that we'll never die out
just say ready, set, go, and we'll leave all the talking behind
and even if our love is dead, to me you will be sacred until our final day.

i'll do anything you say if you can take this pain away
i know we may never meet, but i feel like we already have
and i won't trade this feeling for anything in this world
because you're just that undescribable

kArLa2tH
March 18th, 2008, 09:14 PM
:P ooooo, i write some poems. this was on the old boards, but this one is a random one i wrote w/ a bazillion TH song titles and lyrics in it.

it's everything about you that makes my heart stop,
the smile, the eyes, the laugh, the voice,
you said through the monsoon you would go with me
protect me from everything and jump for me
crossed 1.000 meere to be by my side
and when i turned around you were here

it's what you make me do that really matters
no matter what i go through
your words ring true in my head
the feeling that i get each time i hear your voice is undeniable
i wouldn't give this up for anything even if i had a choice
because you're undescribable

you're a mystery to me and although we've never met,
all your songs are stories of times in my life that i'll never forget
you rescued me from a world that i needed to break away from
and when i wanted to scream you helped me to fly
you taught me to live in the second, and when i couldn't go on any longer and i felt like a forgotten child,
you came and i know that we'll never die out
just say ready, set, go, and we'll leave all the talking behind
and even if our love is dead, to me you will be sacred until our final day.

i'll do anything you say if you can take this pain away
i know we may never meet, but i feel like we already have
and i won't trade this feeling for anything in this world
because you're just that undescribable



i love this one =)

TH_luv
March 18th, 2008, 09:20 PM
:P ooooo, i write some poems. this was on the old boards, but this one is a random one i wrote w/ a bazillion TH song titles and lyrics in it.

it's everything about you that makes my heart stop,
the smile, the eyes, the laugh, the voice,
you said through the monsoon you would go with me
protect me from everything and jump for me
crossed 1.000 meere to be by my side
and when i turned around you were here

it's what you make me do that really matters
no matter what i go through
your words ring true in my head
the feeling that i get each time i hear your voice is undeniable
i wouldn't give this up for anything even if i had a choice
because you're undescribable

you're a mystery to me and although we've never met,
all your songs are stories of times in my life that i'll never forget
you rescued me from a world that i needed to break away from
and when i wanted to scream you helped me to fly
you taught me to live in the second, and when i couldn't go on any longer and i felt like a forgotten child,
you came and i know that we'll never die out
just say ready, set, go, and we'll leave all the talking behind
and even if our love is dead, to me you will be sacred until our final day.

i'll do anything you say if you can take this pain away
i know we may never meet, but i feel like we already have
and i won't trade this feeling for anything in this world
because you're just that undescribable


awesomeness! >.< dude that is officially my new favorite poem!

agoraphobiaticalibi
March 20th, 2008, 12:19 PM
:P ooooo, i write some poems. this was on the old boards, but this one is a random one i wrote w/ a bazillion TH song titles and lyrics in it.

it's everything about you that makes my heart stop,
the smile, the eyes, the laugh, the voice,
you said through the monsoon you would go with me
protect me from everything and jump for me
crossed 1.000 meere to be by my side
and when i turned around you were here

it's what you make me do that really matters
no matter what i go through
your words ring true in my head
the feeling that i get each time i hear your voice is undeniable
i wouldn't give this up for anything even if i had a choice
because you're undescribable

you're a mystery to me and although we've never met,
all your songs are stories of times in my life that i'll never forget
you rescued me from a world that i needed to break away from
and when i wanted to scream you helped me to fly
you taught me to live in the second, and when i couldn't go on any longer and i felt like a forgotten child,
you came and i know that we'll never die out
just say ready, set, go, and we'll leave all the talking behind
and even if our love is dead, to me you will be sacred until our final day.

i'll do anything you say if you can take this pain away
i know we may never meet, but i feel like we already have
and i won't trade this feeling for anything in this world
because you're just that undescribable



i love this one =)
thank you! :D

agoraphobiaticalibi
March 20th, 2008, 12:20 PM
:P ooooo, i write some poems. this was on the old boards, but this one is a random one i wrote w/ a bazillion TH song titles and lyrics in it.

it's everything about you that makes my heart stop,
the smile, the eyes, the laugh, the voice,
you said through the monsoon you would go with me
protect me from everything and jump for me
crossed 1.000 meere to be by my side
and when i turned around you were here

it's what you make me do that really matters
no matter what i go through
your words ring true in my head
the feeling that i get each time i hear your voice is undeniable
i wouldn't give this up for anything even if i had a choice
because you're undescribable

you're a mystery to me and although we've never met,
all your songs are stories of times in my life that i'll never forget
you rescued me from a world that i needed to break away from
and when i wanted to scream you helped me to fly
you taught me to live in the second, and when i couldn't go on any longer and i felt like a forgotten child,
you came and i know that we'll never die out
just say ready, set, go, and we'll leave all the talking behind
and even if our love is dead, to me you will be sacred until our final day.

i'll do anything you say if you can take this pain away
i know we may never meet, but i feel like we already have
and i won't trade this feeling for anything in this world
because you're just that undescribable


awesomeness! >.< dude that is officially my new favorite poem!
i'm glad you like it!!!! :mrgreen:

agoraphobiaticalibi
March 21st, 2008, 01:02 PM
i wrote this for my friend. . .
As the World Crashes Down

I tried to sit back and hear all your stories
of the hurt, of the pain, the fears and the glories
I laughed and I cried as I tried to hide the hurt I felt for you
You told of the doubts and troubles of your heart
the bloodstained wrists and blackened eyes helped to tell their part of the story
the nightmares you lived through
and if you feel like just giving up like you can go on any longer
just remember these words
and hopefully they'll make you stronger

it's the smile on your face
it's the beat of your heart
it's the glint in your eyes, though you're falling apart
it's the pound of the rain as it falls to the ground
it's the pain I see in you though you don't make a sound
it's the fear in your voice when you try to be strong
and keep telling yourself that this won't last long
just try to remember, nothing lasts forever

every night when the raindrops fell
they were falling from your eyes
and all the hours that I heard your tales
it just never seemed right
and sometimes I wonder how you can move on any longer
the demons through all these years
just seemed to make you stronger

it's the smile on your face
it's the beat of your heart
it's the glint in your eyes, though you're falling apart
it's the pound of the rain as it falls to the ground
it's the pain I see in you, though you don't make a sound
it's the fear in your voice when you try to be strong
and keep telling yourself that this won't last long
just try to remember, nothing lasts forever.

agoraphobiaticalibi
March 21st, 2008, 01:03 PM
here's another. . .

A broken heart, a tearstained cheek: these are my memories of you

Last year my heart was dead and somehow it's back again
Those tears are gone, they're not coming down anymore
I'm hating you, but I wish you could see
The person that I've come to be, no thanks to you
My heart has healed
And my eyes have dried
I've forgotten what it's like with you by my side anymore

I hate the thought of you and I hate your memory
You left but now you want to come back to me
But I've given up on you
And everything that you stand for
Don't try to hold me back
Cuz I just can't take it anymore

As time drags on and on
The years pass slowly by
My heart's no longer with you
That's a part of me that died
But don't think that I cry
With every thought of you
If anything, I cry about my time I wasted on you

I hate the thought of you and I hate your memory
You left but now you want to come back to me
But I've given up on you
And everything that you stand for
Don't try to hold me back
Cuz I just can't take it anymore

You might think that I have changed
And you could be right about that but let me explain
Why I don't want you back
I've thought my life through
Made plans that don't involve you

I hate the thought of you and I hate your memory
You left but now you want to come back to me
But I've given up on you
And everything that you stand for
Don't try to hold me back
Cuz I just can't take it anymore

agoraphobiaticalibi
March 27th, 2008, 12:50 AM
here's another random song i wrote, i've never posted this one!

Fight

When the rain won't fall
But the tears don't stop
We'll look to the sky and watch the sun drop to the ocean below
If the world comes to an end
We'll still hold our own
Keep your head held high
Even if no one seems to notice you
Soon they'll see what you can be if you just try

Don't let them tell you who you are
Don't let them push you around
Don't let them overpower you
Don't let them bring you down
Don't let them manipulate the thoughts running through your head
If you let them get to you
You might as well be dead

When the night sky dies
Welcoming each new day
Try hard to smile
Don't let them know you're afraid
When we finally feel safe
We'll be together once more
One day we can love
Like we used to before

Don't let them tell you who you are
Don't let them push you around
Don't let them overpower you
Don't let them bring you down
Don't let them manipulate the thoughts running through your head
If you let them get to you
You might as well be dead

die-katze
March 27th, 2008, 06:11 AM
agoraphobiaticalibi, your poems are so perfect!!!!
it's so wonderful and beautyful!!!! keep writing poems. you do it perfectly!!!!!!!

agoraphobiaticalibi
March 27th, 2008, 09:25 AM
agoraphobiaticalibi, your poems are so perfect!!!!
it's so wonderful and beautyful!!!! keep writing poems. you do it perfectly!!!!!!!
danke so much!!!!! :D

cherry_kaulitz
April 2nd, 2008, 11:20 PM
this is called HOPE
i lost my will to live
i lost my everything
i lost every single person that i ever truly loved
but only 1 thing has kept me alive one thing that every body should have.one thing and its called hope
hope to see them again
hope to hug them once more
hope to stay with them forever
hope to never let them go
hope to hope forevermore


plz dont laugh cuz i really love yours i had better ones that actually rymed but i left the note book at school

agoraphobiaticalibi
April 3rd, 2008, 01:00 AM
no one's gonna laugh!!! that was good! it was kinda hard to read tho b/c it kept moving and my eyes were like :shock: sort of like that!!!!

agoraphobiaticalibi
April 3rd, 2008, 01:09 AM
i'm working on yet another new poem. . .

a world is breaking down
and hearts are bleeding now
the tears are falling faster than they did yesterday
a voice is calling out
in a world of quiet sound
we're running faster now
just to get away
and though my world is melting all around me
and everyone seems to have all disappeared
a different view seems to have found me
and left me stranded here

i'm breaking away
i'm hurting myself
i can't stay here
sitting on this dark shelf
i'm breaking out of this corner
and finding something new
these walls were built to keep me out
but the thing they're holding back is you
and another that i started today. . .

time stands so still
yet it's racing before me
i've lost my way
beneath the burned remains
of a world that i once lived in where everything was okay
how i wish i could be so carefree is what they always say

hearts beat so slow
and the ground is falling now
right out from under us
i'm hanging on the edge
the bottom's so far away

and yet one more. . .
today is so far away
and tomorrow will stay the same
the future is drawing near
but it's all passing me by
i would hate this empty feeling
if i knew what anything else felt like
but today's gone and i carry on
slowly ending now
this world's an empty world
and there's nothing here for me
these teardrops don't mean a thing
except for that i'm alive

cherry_kaulitz
April 3rd, 2008, 06:25 PM
awsome you guys are deep