View Full Version : Attacked (Chapter 3 ~ other half~)
luvukaulitztwins
July 6th, 2008, 06:14 PM
Ok so guys my other fanfics didn't go too well V_V
So here I start with another hoping it's better so...
:D
Chapter 1- The worst day of my life or is it
I took my ways downstairs to where my food may lay. Yeah I’m weird. I was just so happy tonight was the concert of Tokio Hotel. I just couldn’t wait my friend was coming too which made it even more fun. As I came into the kitchen my little brother stood finishing my toast. My brother was nice he is 13 years old and his name’s David. He was a nice brother considering he was a Goth. I smiled at him he put the plate on the table.
“Morning” I said he did a peace sign to me. I smiled; he was just so weird. I finished up my toast eating as fast as I could.
“Bye”
“Hm!” He said with a spoon full of corn flakes in his mouth. I picked up my bag leaving. Oh did I forget to tell you my name’s Lucy, chyeah I’m a blonde with blue eyes. Well I’m not a very good introducer. I was about 500 yards to my school. The was territories especially against the outcasts you know like emos
Moshers punks against chavs. Annual year 1st of July is when chavs go after the outcast. You get beaten up like **** last year I was in hospital. I arrived at my school I couldn’t walk past a tree to get to my friends or I would be punched to smithereens. I walked past the tree next to that was the preps. Sometimes chavs and the preps would mix. All the lesbians would be with the chavs the quantity of them are boys. The preps are all girls. To the right was the drama club. Gays and all hard wannabe’s. You had the nerds, science freaks, the bullies, the metal heads and last, but not least the outcast’s. The group I was part of the best group in the world or shall I say the entire school. I walked through the preps.
“Oi you can’t do that!” Nina yelled.
“I just did what you gonna do” The other preps came behind her. There was 23 including her I raised a brow. I gave a fake laugh I stroke a pose. The others came behind me. The outcast’s were the biggest group 67 people. They were mostly skaters. Everyone looked and it was all silent. I pulled her hand pulling a nail off. She opened her mouth she kicked my in the leg. I pushed her and everyone went back talking. We walked off I sat down we made a circle.
“Hey sorry I just couldn’t be bothered to go the long way”
“It’s ok” Jamie said. He was like the head of the group he was a punk. His hair was blue spiking up. He always wore tartan (plaid) clothing. I walked to Nancy I smiled.
“Concert!” We yelled in unison.
:End of school:
As I arrived back from school. I screamed I went into the kitchen jumping up and down smiling. My brother looked down I stopped. Something is wrong.
“Lucy, Lena kinda put your tickets in the frying pan as I finished making my bacon, I was eating cornflakes at the time”
“What!” I yelled. I raised my hand up, she covered her face. I could never hit her I ran upstairs. I called Nancy.
“I can’t go Lena threw my ticket in the frying pan”
“No!”
“Can I still come I know I can’t get in, but please”
“Sure 5pm sharp” The disconnected tone came in. I laid on my bed looking up was the one and only Gustav, my favourite member. I turned looking to the left and there was the twins and a couple of pictures of Georg, I laid there for 20minutes. I changed a little and had a shower. I put on a mini skirt with my Panik top. I did my hair just putting some spray, and adding a new layer to my make-up. I was 10 minutes late. I ran downstairs to see Nancy and David playing couch commando.
A/N: IK SHORT CHAPTER
I made it tht way V_V
BlondPunk
July 6th, 2008, 06:23 PM
OMG
BAD LENA!!!
let's hope she can get in....
luvukaulitztwins
July 6th, 2008, 06:31 PM
OMG
BAD LENA!!!
let's hope she can get in....
Lolz I will post the next chappie just fur u or do u want me to wait
BlondPunk
July 6th, 2008, 06:38 PM
OMG
BAD LENA!!!
let's hope she can get in....
Lolz I will post the next chappie just fur u or do u want me to wait
POST IT!
luvukaulitztwins
July 6th, 2008, 06:48 PM
Lolz here we go :D
I'M GENIUS xD
Chapter 2- Gustav meeting
I pulled her and she came out. We drove blasting Zimmer 493 singing loud. We got to the front she got in the cue.
“You go in instead of me” She held out the ticket. I put my head down shaking my head. I walked away. I walked through the grass up the hill. I used to come here when I was young. I sat down next to the old oak tree. I smiled at the fans yelling ‘Wir wollen Tokio Hotel’ I giggled I loved that. If I was on the line I would be shouting it.
“I bet Nancy is gonna have a nice time” I whispered aloud. Nobody was here so nobody would hear me. I sighed.
“Why are’t you?” A voice came behind me. I turned seeing crutch of some shorts, a little awkward, I looked up quickly. The Gustav Schäfer. Thee Gustav I love not fan girl love real love.
“Uh...well...my sister...uh...licked a cup” What the **** did I say that for.
“Uh...sorry I mean my sister threw them in a frying pan I think it had hot oil in it” I was blushing I started to sweat. I was so nervous, this was just so weird. He sat down next to me. Woo this is just so woo. I played with my skirt looking down.
“So...name?”
“L...Lucy”
“Gustav as you will know” I smiled. He held out hand and shook it, as I was about to let go he stood pulling me up and holding my hand. I looked in his eyes, a grin came to his face.
“Want to see the concert still” I nodded. I was too scared, he pulled me. He led me running through the grass. He pulled me backstage I heard laughing. It all stopped coming into the room with the boys. I stood silent and worried. I was so nervous meeting my favourite band.
“Um...where’s the bathroom”
“Oh up there and too your left” Gustav said.
“Thanks” I ran I was too nervous. I was sweating I so had to call Nancy. Instead of going into the bathroom I leaned on the wall around the corner. I took out my mobile looking for her number, in my contact book. I heard it ringing I jumped up and down impatient.
“Hello what’s up” She said. I could hear girls screaming there heads off.
“You will never believe this”
“Hey there coming on I gotta go” She cut off. I put my mobile away walking away casually. Tom ran past following Georg and Gustav. Bill stood looking at me.
“Lucy I believe your name is” I nodded.
“Well I will be back I kinda gotta go on stage” Bill jogged off. I stood there not knowing what to do. What happened Bill can back pulling me till I was watching from the sidelines.
Wow they were amazing the concert finished. I just could not believe that. Bill ran out laughing and the others stood smiling and throwing there water and plectrums out. I smiled they came running out. Bill and the others next to each other watching Gustav. He made the crowd go wild. Leading onto his massic drum solo. Magnafic I say.
After seeing that I was stunned. He came out taking of his tank top. Wow it was amazing, he chucked some water over his back. The angel wings looked wonderful. I followed the others back. We all sat down on a sofa.
“So tell us about you” Tom said drinking a 2 liter bottel of water.
“Um...my name is Lucy, Lucy Chuck I’m 17 um...”
“That’ll do” Georg said. Ok a little odd, but it suites me fine. I just was way too nervous to saying anything else. The others went packing away except for Gustav.
“Aren’t you going to help” I asked. He shook his head.
“Not until they need me to pick up heavy stuff” I nodded. Looking down all was silent. I looked down then Bill was screaming. We looked up and a huge case was leaning on him he was strugling to breathe. Tom tried to pick it up. Gustav run over pulling it uyp with Tom’s help. Bill gasped for breathe.
“Tom...ar--e...you trying....to kill me” Bill yelled through every breathe. Tom stood trying not to laughing nodding his head.
A/N: DESPERATE FOR NEW READERS
Ik there short i like short chappies i ought to make them longer
SCHREIoutLOUD
July 6th, 2008, 07:06 PM
AWWWWH.
<3
BlondPunk
July 6th, 2008, 07:12 PM
XD
poor Bill.
Tom almost broke him.
Gustav is so cute!
<3
More bitte!
=D
luvukaulitztwins
July 7th, 2008, 02:59 AM
Lolz :D
I may post some 2moz or something or maybe today it depeneds im off today teacher training day :D
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 7th, 2008, 05:16 AM
yay i love it!
*cough*youshouldputsedonainyourstory*cough*
just a suggestion ;)
luvukaulitztwins
July 7th, 2008, 07:57 AM
yay i love it!
*cough*youshouldputsedonainyourstory*cough*
just a suggestion ;)
*Thinnks bout it*
Hmmm...let's wait and see ;)
MAYBEH U CULD B BILL'S :D
OR somin :D
Maybe or maybe i will leave u out
BlondPunk
July 7th, 2008, 10:07 AM
:o
I she gets to be in the story than so do I!
Jk!
The ff is awesome! Writez more asap!
luvukaulitztwins
July 7th, 2008, 12:04 PM
Next chapter may be up soon unless my mum comes cause i have to go to my grandads and my files r saved on my laptop and i cant use his internet it's gay dial-up
Btw everyone who wanted a place maybe in the next chapter or the one after im half way through the next chappie
BlondPunk
July 7th, 2008, 12:13 PM
Next chapter may be up soon unless my mum comes cause i have to go to my grandads and my files r saved on my laptop and i cant use his internet it's gay dial-up
Btw everyone who wanted a place maybe in the next chapter or the one after im half way through the next chappie
yay!
*squealz*
xXxMandiixXx
July 7th, 2008, 12:15 PM
whoop whoop lolz
<3 Mandii xx
luvukaulitztwins
July 7th, 2008, 12:58 PM
Chapter 3- Chased
They finished packing up Bill sat next to me trying to breath still. I phoned Nancy finally she answered. I so needed to tell her.
“You will never believe this” I said smiling. Bill looked at me.
“I met...” Bill was shaking his head.
“Please!” I whispered. He shook his head taking my phone and sliding it down.
“Why!” I yelled.
“Your friend is a fan right” I nodded.
“Then no”
“Please she will be ok she wont go off on one”
“Fine!” Bill stood up walking away. I phoned Nancy back telling her. The others came back I grinned.
“Were going for some food wanna come” Tom asked rubbing his forehead.
“Um...I can’t I kinda have to go back with Nancy”
“Nancy?” Gustav asked.
“Oh that girl I was meant to come with”
“Oh! She could come” Bill said.
“Ok well uh...lets go” The all nodded we walked down the hall to the exit. They put there coats on leaving. We walked I found Nancy the boys where behind the old oak tree. I pulled her up as she saw Georg’s hair she screamed yelling Tokio Hotel. The boys turned looking and loads of fans were looking too. They charged towards us. I pulled Nancy. Tokio Hotel fan mob woo that is pretty scary. I didn’t know how many girls were running I ran to the guys who started running. We ran then following us. We all ran to the parking lot Nancy’s car was gone.
“What we gonna do” Bill said out of breathe.
“Uh...oh my god let’s keep running and I have an idea” I said. I pushed them running and running. How we gonna get out of this we have probably been running for at least 20 minutes. There were loads of them I think the were multiplying by the minute. I decided to phone Yana hoping she would pick us up or something.
“Rainbow?” I was breathing heavy.
“Yeah!” She said.
“Um...where are you”
“Out with uh...Sedona and Mandii”
“Um...well uh...um...me and uh Nancy and uh don’t scream Tokio Hotel need help”
“You know Tokio Hotel! Oh wait and what is it help with”
“Yea well kinda and we need picking up. We are being chased by maybe 120 fans I’m guessing”
“Woo and sure where are you”
“Uh...um...Im Rebenloh”
“Woo ok I will be as quick as I can stupid speed limits” I know Germany you must be at least 18 to drive. Ever since Yana moved to Georgia and back she got her licence and so when she came back here they let her, since she was qualified.
A/N:Ok well when Sedona gets bk to me I can finish the chappie up :]
Cause I will introduce u guys who are being included :D
So I kinda thoght this
Yana and Bill
Mandii and Georg
Lucy and Gustav
And if Sedona gets back to me
Her and Tom :]
ISH tht ok :D
BlondPunk
July 7th, 2008, 01:18 PM
YES!
It was awesometastic!
=D
I get Bill!
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA *3 hours later* aaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!
Mehr bitte!
I love this ff!
*hugs you tightly*
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 7th, 2008, 03:38 PM
sedona wants tom!!!!!!!!!!
thats two stories i have tom in........
xXxMandiixXx
July 8th, 2008, 02:11 AM
WHOOP GEORG LOLZ IM HAPPY XD
CONTINUE!!!
<3 Mandii xx
luvukaulitztwins
July 8th, 2008, 03:01 AM
MORE TONIGHT :D
8-)
LAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
BlondPunk
July 8th, 2008, 10:34 AM
MORE TONIGHT :D
8-)
LAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!
=D
luvukaulitztwins
July 8th, 2008, 03:05 PM
WELL HERE IT IS :D
We kept running I have no clue for how long. Then Yana was there, but the thing was there was not room in the car. So Bill sat in the front I had to sit on Gustav’s lap, Sedona on Tom’s, Mandii on Georg’s and Nancy on Bill’s. As soon as soon as Yana saw she was not happy, cause of course Bill was her favourite. I wondered what she was thinking. The think was Yana and Nancy never really liked each other. When they were in the 7th grade they had a huge fight. It was over a boy, because Yana hugged him, but really Michael the boy hugged Yana. They hated it when they got to high school cause they were going to the same high school. Oh if you don’t know what I’m talking about here’s the deal. Yana moved back to Germany yes, so my parents died before that and I had to take care of my brother. Me and Yana was like best friends forever so I decided to move here too. So Nancy decides to come too which I didn’t mind I was quite happy with it, but Yana wasn’t. So me and Yana AND! Nancy came to the same school. Yana couldn’t handle it and got Nancy kicked out. Mandii moved here from Australia which was cool, especially she's a Tokio Hotel fan. So that’s it well back to reality.
I was enjoying it on Gustav’s lap. Not sure about the others. Yana wasn’t daring to look at Bill and Nancy. Though I saw her glaring. I knew her like the back of my hand. A picture of Bill or at a concert her eyes would follow. If there was a picture she would sit there and at least stare for 15 minutes.
Bill’s POV:
Having some girl on my lap who was not really my type was not my thing. I mean too much black clothing and too close too them people who slit there wrist’s. Wait what they called. Oh yeah Emo I know they don’t really slit there wrist’s, but I didn’t care. The girl who was driving though perfect. I mean punk, gotta be a punk. Her hair was like mine of course, but multicoloured oh with bangs. Why couldn’t she be on my lap this was just my luck.
Tom’s POV:
Okay I know I’m into a little rock music, and not into girls who are dressed kinda like Bill. You know kinda weird. This girl wasn’t as weird scary hair, but cute. Her clothes where fine. Normally girls like this or I like I think about banging her. Yeah thee type of bang. For some reason some reason I liked her, but didn’t want her to be a one night stand. I didn’t get it, I like her don’t want her as a one night stand and I would normally not want the girl. But I want her. It was just all odd to me I mean some girl with some blond hair with pink highlights scene or emo or whatever you call it hairstyle, a septum piercing I think that’s what it’s called, I seem to like a girl like her wow weird. Girl how am I so scared to talk to you? That’s a question I wanna ask out loud of course I can’t god **** it.
Georg’s POV:
Okay me and that manikin are over. I mean like woah black hair, side fringe, blue lowlight and pink highlights. Dresses I don’t no say goth punk I would have to check that with Bill. Wow maybe since I really like a girl and never really ever liked a girl, maybe my family will stop thinking I’m gay. One thing I wanted to do is for her to be mine. That may never happen, but I have to think positive. Oh what am I kinding I will end up telling the guys Tom will take the mik. Also I will say something stupid I did that once. Wait I was 13. Wow that was long ago.
Yana’s POV:
Okay how could this be I mean flipping Nancy on Bill’s lap. Why can’t that be me I could not look. I would feel like killing her or trying to push her out of the window. One more thing I WANT HER OUT OF MY CAR! I mean like what’s the deal. I drove fast getting more angry causing me to drive at 100 MPH.
“Slow down fu.cking hell” Sedona yelled. I just got faster. We made it back to my house. I got out of the car slamming the door. I stood waiting for the others to get out. I locked the car knocking on my door. My mum answered.
“You have got your friends with you hunny”
“Hm!” I said. I waved for them to come here. They came in and we entered the living room. Sitting down on our new leather sofa’s.
“Ok I’ll drive you home in a minute oh and uh...guys I guess hotel”
“Yea” They said in unison. Bill was sitting next to me I mean real close our legs where touching. I felt like grinning.
“Um...so I’m Yana this is Sedona, Lucy, Mandii, andNancynowIKnowyouguysweredoingaconcertcouldn’t comeI’msorrysonowshallmegetallofyouback” I said really fast. I was next to Bill sh.itttttt. I stood up clapping for them to hurry up.
“Nowlet’sgogogo” I said speaking even faster.
“What did you just say and say before that” Georg said. I would just go faster so I didn’t bother to speak. Bill said the exsact words. He took my hand pulling me. Ut...oh I didn’t want to speak you know speaking at 100 MPH this did not work. I just walked to the car waiting for everyone else. Of course me and Bill was in the car.
“Uh...so Yana rad hair”
“Uh...thanksitwasactuallyinspiredbyyouandallIkno wit’sprettyweirdbutwhocantell” This was not going worse I shook my leg. I bibbed the horn. Bill laughed.
“Ok were coming!” Lucy yelled.
“Talking fast is your thing as I can see” Bill smiled at me and was giving thee eye rape at the same time.
“YeahIlovetalkingfastnothingbetterthenthat” I said bibbing again they all rushed into the car. I dropped the boys off and Bill slid his number on a piece of paper kissing my cheek. The others got there numbers too.
Don't blame me if it's sh.it >.<
BlondPunk
July 8th, 2008, 04:25 PM
It wasn't bad!
It was good!
That's exactly what I'd be doing if I were in that situation. x]
It was awesome!
Mehr bitte!
=D
luvukaulitztwins
July 8th, 2008, 04:33 PM
It wasn't bad!
It was good!
That's exactly what I'd be doing if I were in that situation. x]
It was awesome!
Mehr bitte!
=D
IT WAS AWFUL >.<
I HAVE NO IDEA HOW I GOT A A* IN ENGLISH >.<
Lolz :D
MORE 2MOZ
:D
x]
MY MUM IS OUT SO I CAN STAY UP LATE :D
THTS HOW MY DAD ROCKS AND SO I MAY GET THE NEXT CHAPTER UP TONIGHT
BlondPunk
July 8th, 2008, 04:41 PM
x]
It wasn't awful!
it was awesome!
AND YAY FOR MORE!!!!
=D
luvukaulitztwins
July 8th, 2008, 05:30 PM
Ok here is half I just wanted to post more just incase I don't finish the rest of the chapter in time it's like 22:30 my mum culd walk through at 11pm or 12am so...ja here's half ;D
OH BTW I FORGOT TO SAY MY COPY AND PASTE DIDN'T GO WELL AND UM...NANCY LEFT THE CAR WHEN THE BOYS LEFT STUPID COPY AND PASTE THINGY
Chapter 4- Nancy is a stalker
Lucy’s POV:
“Yana talked fast Yana talked fast” I said.
“And?”
“Oh you think he is hot which he is”
“And?”
“Uh...last time I saw you do that we was in the 9th grade”
“Oh whatever he’s a boy that’s all”
“You likey him I mean likey likey”
“Shut up I will force you to walk another 130 miles”
“Dang!” I said. I turnt to the side. I stared into space seeing Sedona smiling in the back looking at he phone. I turned round looking at her.
“What you smiling about”
“A text from Tom...Oh no I mean nothing...**** I had to say that”
“Ohhhhhhhhhh...another likey”
“Shut-up he is betting me 80 Euro that I can’t play one of there songs on my Cello”
“Oh well there’s a challenge”
“Yeah but I rose the price to 150 Euro he accepted”
“Well let’s see you and Cello and Tom could be laughing at you I’d say he wins 150 Euro”
“No...It’s tomorrow so uh...it’s 11pm holy sh.it he bet me at 2pm. Oh well failing...no I wont” Sedona sat with a confused look saying I wont I will every 10 seconds. She shook her head thinking. As for Mandii well she was just asleep. We came to a halt at Mandii’s house she screamed.
“What happened!” She yelled.
“We are at your house!” Yana said raising a brow.
“Oh right! I knew that I just did it...oh” We started laughing. We drove away.
“Texty!” Yana yelled. She picked up her phone looking at it then looking at the road. I snatched the phone.
“Stop! No reading and driving no speaking and driving on the phone!”
“But it’s from Bill”
“I’ll read it out then”
“Fine!” She moaned.
“Uh...that girl that was on my lap Nancy oh yea she is weird she is kinda following me....Woo Nancy is following Bill stalker!” I said. Nancy is following Bill what’s her problem.
“Oh god where is he ask him”
“Ok...” I typed it in and waiting for a reply 10 seconds later he came back with an answer.
“He text’s quick. Ok he says he is in his room and he wants to go see Tom but when I open the door she tries to come in”
“I knew she was always a *****”
“Hey uh...guys so Tom is coming my house and I invited the others so you guess wanna come and I just texted Mandii she said yes. Oh and you can hear me defeat Tom **** I should have made I could shave off half of his hair if I won”
“Oh anything to see meh Gusti oh not mine but will be...oh could be” I said confused.
“I’ll go if Nancy’s not going”
“Well I don’t think Bill will have escaped by then” Sedona said biting her lip. We got to Sedona’s house she said bye leaving. Tomorrow could be fun or boring not sure. After Yana dropped me home I recruited to David’s room, the bathroom for a shower and then to my soft lovely bed.
BlondPunk
July 8th, 2008, 05:40 PM
AWESOMENESS!
Sedona's gonna win, I bet you!
GET AW3AY FROM MAH MAN NANCY, OR ELSE YOU'LL HAVE TO FACE THE WRATH OF YANA!
and then Bill can escape when I distract you.
Then you'll be bleeding.
>D
awesomeness!!!
mehr wenn du kannst
<3
luvukaulitztwins
July 8th, 2008, 05:51 PM
OK NOT MUCH MY MUM IS KNOCKING ON THE DOOR SO LIKE NOW IS A LIL MORE THE REST AND NEXT CHAPTER WILL BE UP 2MOZ SO GOODNIGHT AND WOO LAAA
I woke up in the morning I look to my bedside table my breakfast was there steaming. Scrambled egg on toast yum! I sat up on my bed placing the try on my lap and turning on the TV. I put on Viva seeing Spring Nicht about to start. I started singing and then placing some food in my mouth, chewing, swallowing and singing again. I ate slow. I texted Sedona to check the time I was meant to be round she said 12pm and Yana’s picking me up. it was only 10am. I had plenty of time. I finished going downstairs David stood up taking my plate and was about to start washing it.
“Hey dude I can do it you know” I pushed him playfully out the way and started to wash up.
“i’m being helpful”
“I know but you make dinner breakfast weekends lunch wash-up do the laundry so stop for a little bit” He nodded going upstairs. I finished walking up-stairs. I turned on the TV putting on CNN finally the English language. It said it was going to be 40 degrees woah what happened to Germany. It said it was at least 20 degrees. The sun was shining bright. I put on a mini rara skirt with a Guns N’ Roses shirt on. I put on my black boots with the metal on the front and on the back. Going into the bathroom I put some make-up on taking me 8 times to get it right. I finally did it I brushed my hair straightening the bottoms and my side fringe. The doorbell rang just in time. I picked up a jacket just in case. I opened the door Yana had some jeans on with some trainers and a bunny top with a rainbow behind. I smiled and we got into the car and drove away. We got to Sedona’s I could hear her playing her Cello and kept stopping. I think she was playing Wir Sterben Niemals Aus. We knocked on the door and her mum answered.
“Hello girls she’s upstairs” I smiled nodding and wiping my feet for at least 3 minutes. You see Sedona had a big house she lived in Dortmund city which was amazing. We also lived in the same place, but her house is amazing. It is masive when you go up the stairs lovely woodon stair case. As you got to the top lovely furyblue carpet. When you got here you must remove your shoes. I took them off caring them. I knocked on her door.
“Come in!” She said. She smiled leaning her Cello on the edge of her bed. I put my shoes in her cupboard like we always got told, but might as well do it now. Another knock came in. Sedona stormed out of the room I could hear her feet on the stairs.
Bill came running in luckily in his lovely black socks.
“She followed me here” Bill ran over to Yana hugging her giving a weird face. Wow when Yana see’s Nancy she will beat the cra.p out of her.
BlondPunk
July 8th, 2008, 06:06 PM
Okay, I can wait for tommororw :]
I loved it!
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 8th, 2008, 06:23 PM
yayyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!
moremoremoremoremoremroemoremroemoremroemroemore
xXxMandiixXx
July 9th, 2008, 01:56 AM
GO YANA DO IT KICK HER *** STUPID STALKER :evil:
and whoop whoop georgy like me :)
and sedona shall win that 150 euros!
continue!
<3 Mandii xx
BlondPunk
July 9th, 2008, 09:50 AM
I have to go somehwere today, so I'll have to read it tommorow
x]
luvukaulitztwins
July 10th, 2008, 01:42 AM
Bill pushed over Mandii making her fall off he bed; Bill got on his knees looking out of the window. Yana got up looking out of the window; Bill rolled backward taking Yana with him. Bill was ontop of Yana. Awkward. Bill jumped up running and sat hugging his knees. Yana looked back out of the window I had no idea what she was looking at.
Yana’s POV :
I took my shoes pushing Georg out of the way. As I got down the stairs putting my shoes down and putting them on as quickly as I could. I opened the door going to Nancy. I pushed her on the floor.
“Ow! You bit.ch” She yelled. Nancy stood up smashing me into a lamppost. I hit my back that really hurt causing more anger to appear. A tear came down my cheek the others stood at the door watching. Nancy kicked my in the chest. This is the worst she has ever beaten me up. I pulled on the lamppost standing up. I kicked her in the face causing her to be knocked out. I started crying my back hurt like **** and my chest. I walked slowly back to the door and everyone walked back in. I took of my shoes going back upstairs. I sat on the bed Bill came over and hugged me.
“Why did you do that?” Tom asked looking confused.
“Because” I said.
Sedona’s POV:
I wanted to practice, but I kept getting it wrong at the end. That would be embarrassing. Tom handed me my Cello I sighed taking it. Here we go don’t mess up don’t mess up. Tom sat smiling I smirked. It was silent. I started to play I started getting to the end. Don’t mess up I finished perfectly I sighed.
“Happy!”
“She is so getting 150 Euro for that” Mandii said laughing. Tom shook his head he dug into his pocket taking out his wallet. He took the money out I took it counting it. I know checking it was a bit in trustworthy, but I don’t trust anything. I counted it there was 300 Euro.
“Uh...Tom there is fu.cking 300 Euro here”
“Yeah and” I passed him back the extra 150 Euro she shook his head pushing it back. I stood up smashing the money in his chest.
“Ah...that hurt” He moaned holding his chest. He took the money I sat down smiling happily. I could never take that much. Georg was flirting with Mandii it was obvious he was playing with her hair. Lucy was daydreaming while Gustav stared at her. Yana went and picked up a hair brush and started singing a Tina Turner song. It was really good it was funny she looked like she was singing in pain. She did all the hand movements. Bill took the hair brush looking at her and clapping. I looked to my right, Tom fiddled with drawings I had drawn in Art class. I didn’t want anyone to see them I rushed over.
“Hey move away” I pulled him he was holding up a drawing of him I did, I had a art project we had to draw it then paint it on canvas. He went looking around my room. Don;t tell me he is looking for my painting no way. It was so fu.cking sh.it. I got a A* that doesn’t mean nothing. He found it looking at it. It always hanged on my wall, but I took it down today since he came round.
“Woo” He said. Bill, Grustav and Georg crowded.
“That’s amazing” Bill said. I ran over taking it and placing it back behind my wardrobe. I shooed them off.
Chapter 5
Lucy’s POV:
I woke up in Sedona’s bedroom. I sat up rubbing my eyes Sedona was in Tom’s arms. Mandii and Georg wasn’t here Bill and Yana was next to each other. Gustav was next to me sleeping. I smiled opening the door I bit my lip walking downstairs. I wondered if anyone was up. Sedona’s clock wasn’t where it was like 6 days ago. I looked in the living room no-one kitching. Sedona’s mum was there and Georg and Mandii. I smelt pancakes Georg and Mandii were sitting there eating together.
“Hello Lucy others asleep oh...Tom and Sedona...”
“Yeah they are oh and no kissing or nothing” I smiled. Wow I can’t believed I answered that. I sat down next to Mandii I smiled and she waved at me.
“Hey!” Georg said stuffing a piece of pancake down his gullet. I yawned I was still tired I had no clue how long we was awake for. Sedona’s mum gave me a pancake.
“Thank you” She nodded smiling. Someone walked in I turned my head. Sedona’s hair was messed up she was in her Hello Kitty pyjamas. She gave her mum a kiss on her cheek sitting to Georg.
“Hello!” Sedona’s little sister said smiling showing her teeth which she only had one. She waved.
“Who’s that” She pointed over Georg.
“It’s rude to point stop that’s Georg remember Tokio Hotel the band you like as well” Sedona said. She gasped.
“Bill?”
“He’s upstairs don’t go up there wait till he comes down” She nodded sitting on Sedona’s lap. I ate my pancake up washing my plate.
“Thanks” I said.
“Your welcome”
Tom came down. He nearly fell over.
“Woo!” He blinked a couple of times. He waved to Sedona’s mum.
“Um...uh...I better get the others up and leave”
“Uh...Tom I believe your name is would you like some breakfast” Sedona’s mum stood with a spectacular in her hand.
“Uh...yes please” Yana and Bill were together hand in hand. I smiled.
We all left in Yana’s car we dropped the boys off then me and Mandii. I I got home thinking if Gustav ever woke up. Georg and Tom had to place him in the car asleep. I got a phone call caller I.D was Sedona.
“Yo”
“Hey! You will never believe this you know the money I won...”
“Yeah”
“I found more money between my drawings there’s 450 Euro there and Tom was fiddiling with him do you recon it’s from him ‘cause I have to give the money back”
“Well it’s a good chance it is maybe he wants you to keep it the more you try to give it back the more he is going to try for you to have it”
“True..."
OK NO NAME FOR CHAPTER 5
IK IT'S BORING, but hopfully it will get better as I keep writing :D
xXxMandiixXx
July 10th, 2008, 03:28 AM
one simple but not simple question
CAN I PLEASEEEE QUICK THAT NANCY CHICKS A** IS THIS STORY PLEASEEE
and omg yana grr nancy's dead*gets fists ready*i dont want to litterly kill her of course i juts wont to make her learn her lesson
and whoop whoop sedona won hehe XD
me + Georg = happy couple if we are one that is ?
CONTINUE!!!
<3 Mandii xx
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 10th, 2008, 03:50 PM
woot i won!!!!!!!
why is tom giving me so much money?
*gasp*
amiaprostitutenow???????????
hehe
BlondPunk
July 10th, 2008, 04:46 PM
Yay! I knocked her out!
Coolz
mehr bitte!
And it wasn't boring!
luvukaulitztwins
July 10th, 2008, 05:29 PM
woot i won!!!!!!!
why is tom giving me so much money?
*gasp*
amiaprostitutenow???????????
hehe
Lolz no :D
Unless u want to be then I will make u one :]
I didn't have time to write any today so more 2moz or Saturday
IM GETTING MY HAIR CUT AT SOME POINT so i may not be able to post till Sunday
PLUS my nans internet don't work it's f.ucked so...
More sometime?
BlondPunk
July 10th, 2008, 05:39 PM
woot i won!!!!!!!
why is tom giving me so much money?
*gasp*
amiaprostitutenow???????????
hehe
Lolz no :D
Unless u want to be then I will make u one :]
I didn't have time to write any today so more 2moz or Saturday
IM GETTING MY HAIR CUT AT SOME POINT so i may not be able to post till Sunday
PLUS my nans internet don't work it's f.ucked so...
More sometime?
More swometime sounds good to me :]
luvukaulitztwins
July 10th, 2008, 05:43 PM
BAD NEWS MY MUM MAY BAN ME FROM THE COMPUTER
TILL NEXT SATURDAY
(my b-day) *JUMPS UP AND DOWN!*
IM GONNA BEG MY DAD TO LET ME GO ON :D
BlondPunk
July 10th, 2008, 07:38 PM
:[
Awwwww man!
I guess that'll make me more anxious for the next chapter
luvukaulitztwins
July 12th, 2008, 02:02 AM
Ok heres the deal i wanna make a banner for the fanfic so i will need a picture of u if ur character looks like your character or just get a pic that does pm me :D lalala
BlondPunk
July 12th, 2008, 10:29 AM
Ok heres the deal i wanna make a banner for the fanfic so i will need a picture of u if ur character looks like your character or just get a pic that does pm me :D lalala
okay!
Sadly, I don't look like my character.
haha.
Just a little.
So I'll find somebody that looks a little like may character
^.^
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 12th, 2008, 12:34 PM
Ok heres the deal i wanna make a banner for the fanfic so i will need a picture of u if ur character looks like your character or just get a pic that does pm me :D lalala
yay!
*runstofindpic*
luvukaulitztwins
July 13th, 2008, 07:45 AM
Chapter 6-Cello
Sedona’s POV:
The next day I woke up late. I missed school great how was I ever going to get a good job. I could not be bothered to go into school it was like 12pm. I mean what’s the point school finishes in like an hour and 30 minutes. I turned on my computer sitting down. I picked up the picture of the Stradivarius Cello I wanted. Shame it was 5000 Euro I would have to wait a life time. I was going to try to start working at least three jobs just to get it. I thought about the 150 Euro I got from Tom winning. I ran to my papers with my drawings in. I looked through I couldn’t find it. I went searching everywhere then I found it on the floor. That’s where Tom was sleeping. I shrugged picking it up. I crossed out the 600 Euro I had wrote writing 750 Euro. I put it next to my computer placing my Sim’s 2 disk in. I started playing I played for 30 minutes. I went in the shower coming out and putting out a long light yellow top with pink skinny jeans. I didn’t bother doing my hair like I normally did I just put some eyeliner on. I sat playing the Sim’s 2 for ages. At 2pm there was a knock on the door. I wonder who it was couldn’t be my dad of course he comes home at 3pm. I continued hearing my mum say hello Tom. What was he doing here? I didn’t care he knocked on my door.
“Come in!” I said. I turned he stood smiling I raised my eyebrows standing up.
Tom dug into his pocket taking alot of money out. He held it out.
“What do I look like a prostitute” He laughed shaking his head. He walked over to my desk looking through my drawings. He picked up a piece of paper putting it in my face. I read it, the Cello I wanted.
“What?”
“Here!” He handed me money.
“What! I’m not taking that!”
“Why not?”
“Cause” I really wanted to take it. I mean like how much was there. I pushed him out of my bedroom slamming the door. How much I wanted that Cello. All I have to do is forget about it. I heard the front door shut. I sat listening to music on my bed. I fell asleep this was so not the time to fall asleep.
I woke up someone knocking on my door. What the heck now?
“Come in!” I moaned. Tom came through with a Cello case. What the ****. He pulled me off the bed putting the case on the bed and opening it. It was the Cello I wanted I mean oh my god.
“Ok this is like 5000 Euro...”
“Yeah and pfft it’s yours”
“What!” I yelled. I shook my head. He is trying to force me to take it. I know I want it. He took it out taking the bow too.
“Play it!” I shook my head. He nodded making a angry face. I took it sitting down and starting to play. It sounded much better then my other one. I really wanted it would make a difference. I stopped half way through placing it back in it’s case.
“So...”
“So...what?”
“Well?”
“I like it but it’s too expensive”
“And just keep it please” Tom pouted. His pout was so cute.
“Fine!” He smiled.
“Thanks by the way” He kissed my cheek. I smiled, he left waving. Wow weird, but I mean the cello just woo. How did I get this? Most importantly why did he buy it? I packed it away properly locking the case. I put it down laying down and falling asleep.
Lucy’s POV:
I was on the phone to Yana at this point. This was half way through the conversation.
“Another girl!” She yelled down the phone.
“Yeah I’m totally sad now”
“I’ll beat her up for you”
“What’s the point he likes her she likes him oh well”
“Trust me she’s just a friend”
“Yeah he had his arm around her waist”
“True!” Oh if you didn’t know I’m talking about Gustav. He was with a girl, but oh well you know I don’t care. Ok you know I totally care.
“Ugh! I’m so going” I shut off the phone right on Yana. I didn’t care I was ****** off I had to calm down.
Chapter 7- She returnes
Sedona’s POV:
We met up at school. It was boring we sat down on a bench.
“God I’m tired” Mandii said. We all looked at her.
“I was on Photoshop till 3am stupid picture” I looked at Yana she was asleep.
“Miss Jenkins got a new foot” Lucy yelled.
“Where!” She yelled. I pointed she didn’t used to have a foot. She lost it, she got hit by a car. We went to first lesson French what I silly language. I didn’t get it. The rest of the day was a blur. People were acting so strange they were talking to us. We came outside the school girls screamed. My worst nightmare what are they screaming for. We all stood looking. It all went silent and they cleared a walk way and they smiled at us. Tom was down the end calling us to come. We walked to him getting in the car.
The journey was silent no questions asked. We came to a big house. It was lovely kinda whitish grayish colour. The door was wooden. There was a stone path with grass around it. There were flower beds. So many colours. Where was we. There was a nice park across the street. Tom got out a key opening the door. His house? Wait no I thought him and Bill lived in a flat. I’m so confused. We came in it was big. There was a staircase in front of us. To the right a dining room and left a living room. In the living room there was Georg and Gustav in some weird clothes. They were dressed posh. They were sitting with a little tea cup with the pinky's high.
“Well I’m parched!” Gustav said using a royal English accent, and even talking England.
“Oh yes I do say Mr Sasafas” I turned my head Mandii and Lucy went into the room. Gustav and Georg stood up running out into another room which led to somewhere else. They came back dressed normal. He smiled at them they were blushing. Tom took my hand pulling me to somewhere.
Yana’s POV:
Wow I’m left here. No Bill I guess I went into the living room where Lucy and Mandii were. This was so not on.
“Ah! Get away from me!” Someone screamed, wait that sounded like Bill. Someone banged on the door still screaming. It stopped I opened the door and Bill and Nancy was kissing. Bill was trying to push away Bill looked at me. I pulled her on the floor. I got on top of her punching her in the head. Bill ran in.
“It’s Nancy!” I yelled. The other girls came out. I got up and Mandii grabbed her hair pulling it down the path. Her neck started to bleed. Mandii picked her up slamming her in a lamp post. Graphic, but it was for her own good she had to learn to stop stalking. Sedona punched her in the stomach trying to pick her up.
“Help!” We came over, but we still couldn’t pick her up. Georg and Gustav came we went to the park across the street. We swang her and threw her into the pond. She tried to swim she was doing the doggy paddle. We all left smiling. I came back into the house going upstairs. I needed the bathroom so bad.
Bill was in there I stopped in the door frame he put some mouthwash in his mouth. He shook it around he looked at me. I laughed at him it was all overflowing out of his mouth. He laughed spiting most of it out onto the floor. He put the rest in the sink.
“Tom!” He yelled.
“What!?”
Can you do something for me”
“No fu.ck off”
“Tom!” Bill moaned.
“No! Leave me alone you little cu.nt” Harsh.
Bill went downstairs and came back up with a cloth. He got down onto his knees and started cleaning. He got it all over his hands. I bent down taking the cloth and started to do it. I got spray, spraying the floor I could see Bill staring at me. I finished lifting my head and Bill was in front of me. I moved back.
“Thanks!” He said.
“Your welcome”
I followed Bill. We went into a room with a guitar, drums, bass and a mic. I ran over getting the guitar I started playing. Misery Business by Paramore. I started singing it till I finished the whole song.
“Wow you sing good”
“No way I’m way out of tune”
“Trust me your not!” Bill gave me the eye rape. I had to trust him.
A/N: Sorry it took long I sat 3 hours this morning writing like 6 chapters then I shut my computer down without saving.
xXxMandiixXx
July 13th, 2008, 08:01 AM
whoop i kicked nancy's us so did the rest of whoop whoop
*does victory dance*
CONTINUE!!!
<3 Mandii xx
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 13th, 2008, 01:04 PM
yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but where did tom take me????????
>.>
<.<
BlondPunk
July 13th, 2008, 01:52 PM
Yay!
I hurt Nancy!
:D
That was awesome!
I'm sorry you lost all your writing. :[
That happens to me waaaaaaaaay too much.
luvukaulitztwins
July 13th, 2008, 04:54 PM
yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but where did tom take me????????
>.>
<.<
Something you will never know
OK JUST HAD A GREAT IDEA FOR NEXT CHAPTER x]
SO next chapter on Tuesday 2moz my hair ish beings all cut off V_V
GOOD BY SUCKISH CURLY HAIR
Sorry xD
ANYWAY :D
BlondPunk
July 13th, 2008, 05:25 PM
yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but where did tom take me????????
>.>
<.<
Something you will never know
OK JUST HAD A GREAT IDEA FOR NEXT CHAPTER x]
SO next chapter on Tuesday 2moz my hair ish beings all cut off V_V
GOOD BY SUCKISH CURLY HAIR
Sorry xD
ANYWAY :D
I love getting haircuts ^_^
oooooooh
can't wait until tuesday
1. ur updating
2. I get to go to Luia's house
could tuesday get any better?
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 13th, 2008, 05:31 PM
yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but where did tom take me????????
>.>
<.<
Something you will never know
OK JUST HAD A GREAT IDEA FOR NEXT CHAPTER x]
SO next chapter on Tuesday 2moz my hair ish beings all cut off V_V
GOOD BY SUCKISH CURLY HAIR
Sorry xD
ANYWAY :D
............gr
blahhhhh im not gonna be able to read the new chapter until i get back from vegas in a week
blahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
grrr x.x
luvukaulitztwins
July 13th, 2008, 06:18 PM
When u going
BlondPunk
July 13th, 2008, 06:33 PM
When u going
tommorow.
I think.
Yeah, either tommorow or Tuesday.
But I'm pretty sure Sedona said Monday
luvukaulitztwins
July 13th, 2008, 06:41 PM
Hmm...y did i hm hey look flying unicorn
BlondPunk
July 13th, 2008, 06:42 PM
Hmm...y did i hm hey look flying unicorn
XD
where?
o.o
jk
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 13th, 2008, 07:18 PM
When u going
who?
me?
tomorrow
luvukaulitztwins
July 15th, 2008, 01:57 AM
AHHHHHHHH SH.IT
I will post more soon
I'm soover joyed my hair is now black and getting high lights dunno which colour
AND :D
It's cut x]
My mum said from the front I look like Georg >.<
But with black hair now >.<
ANYWAY MORE TONIGHT
BlondPunk
July 15th, 2008, 10:44 AM
AHHHHHHHH SH.IT
I will post more soon
I'm soover joyed my hair is now black and getting high lights dunno which colour
AND :D
It's cut x]
My mum said from the front I look like Georg >.<
But with black hair now >.<
ANYWAY MORE TONIGHT
Yay for more!
Omg, your aloowed to dye your hair black?
Luuuuuuucckky.
My mom would NEVER let me do that.
But I will when I'm 18.
No.
When I'm 18.
My hair will be a rainbow of joy and haapiness, making everybody that sees me happy.
Bring a smile to their face.
x]
I'm crazy
luvukaulitztwins
July 15th, 2008, 01:39 PM
AHHHHHHHH SH.IT
I will post more soon
I'm soover joyed my hair is now black and getting high lights dunno which colour
AND :D
It's cut x]
My mum said from the front I look like Georg >.<
But with black hair now >.<
ANYWAY MORE TONIGHT
Yay for more!
Omg, your aloowed to dye your hair black?
Luuuuuuucckky.
My mom would NEVER let me do that.
But I will when I'm 18.
No.
When I'm 18.
My hair will be a rainbow of joy and haapiness, making everybody that sees me happy.
Bring a smile to their face.
x]
I'm crazy
IK
:D
But the thing is it's hair dye tht lasts 15 washes im pi8ssed my mum wuldnt let me get the 28 one but still it's black x] and im straightening it more now :D
BUT MORE IN 15MINS :]
OR 30 MINS NOT HAD DINNER YET
BlondPunk
July 15th, 2008, 03:17 PM
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!
*wants more*
gah!
I have to leave in an hour to go to Lucia's house.
We are going to have a discussion about our fanfic and waffels.
luvukaulitztwins
July 15th, 2008, 03:31 PM
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!
*wants more*
gah!
I have to leave in an hour to go to Lucia's house.
We are going to have a discussion about our fanfic and waffels.
I can post half :]
BlondPunk
July 15th, 2008, 04:00 PM
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!
*wants more*
gah!
I have to leave in an hour to go to Lucia's house.
We are going to have a discussion about our fanfic and waffels.
I can post half :]
Yay!
half is better than nothing!
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!
luvukaulitztwins
July 16th, 2008, 02:02 PM
Sorry half kinda gots a writer's block I need music IK im weird music helps me write
Chapter 8
That night me and Bill stayed up talking. The other’s were asleep. It was 2AM.
“Hey you wanna high jack Tom’s car”
“Ok!” I said. Tom’s car wow I so wanna drive his car. We crept into Tom’s room he was sleeping Sedona beside. They look so cute. The door creaked and Tom pulled Sedona closer to him. I came to the nightstand taking the keys and running out. Bill pulled my hand leading me to the garage. I unlocked the car getting in. I was cold I left my jacket oh well. I started to drive not know where I was going.
“Where now” I stopped at the end of a road.
“Ugh left then take the first right!” I nodded. I carried on driving we came to the motorway.
“What the ****!”
“Follow the signs to Rostock”
“That’s miles away!” I changed gears.
“And just do as I say!” I was not in the mood for arguing. There were many cars on the motorway. Bill put on some Green Day. After 2 hours drive we arrived. I stopped the car sighing. I was so tired.
“Not there yet!”
“What!” I yelled.
“Come on just go to the signs to Warnemünde please”
“Fine!” We drove for another hour. We came to a car park we parked. Bill took my hand pulling me. It smelled of seaweed. We was then on a beach. I fell on the sand. Bill laughed putting his arm round me. We sat on a bench.
The sun blinded my eyes. I opened my eyes looking the sun was rising. Bill smiled at me.
“Wow! Beautiful!” I said. The sun was amazing and the clouds they were a kind of yellow colour. It made me smile.
“Yeah I know”
I looked at Bill he was staring at me. I twisted his head too look at the sun rising.
“Oh that’s beautiful oh right!”
“Yeah!” I giggled.
“Well I said that yo-” He shook his head.
Tom’s POV:
“Where’s my car keys!” I yelled. I forgot Sedona was still asleep. She looked at me rubbing her eyes.
“What?”
“My car key’s are gone wait!” I ran out to the garage. My car was gone. No! I ran to see who was in and Yana and Bill was gone. No way. I sat down waiting and waiting thinking the could have smashed my car up or something.
Yana’s POV:
“We better get back” Bill nodded. Bill was just so cute. He nodded. We drove back I drove faster. We came down the street I parked the car. Walking in with Bill. Tom charged up to me and held my arms.
“What did you do to my car!”
“Nothing!”
“Where were you” He yelled.
“Warnemünde!” Bill said pulling me out of Tom’s grip. I walked straight past him Bill behind me. I looked at my arms they were a little red. I walked to Tom tapping on his shoulder.
“Here are your keys...”
“Thanks”
“Thanks”
“Oh one more thing!” I yelled. I pulled off his caps pulling a dread out. He screamed.
“This is for making me have red marks on my arms” I walked over to the bin chucking it away. I walked out a little annoyed.
“Do you wanna use the shower!” Bill asked.
“Uh...sure but c-” He pulled me up the stairs handing me some clothes even some of his pants (O_e) the ones with Bill on them. I remember he had these on at an interview. I got in the shower changing.
Mandii’s POV:
Georg was flirting with some girl at the counter. I felt like shaving her hair off and ripping her eyes out. Georg was whispering in her ear and laughing. If you didn’t know already were in a M.A.C shop you know the make-up. I was looking at blue eyeliner she was making me so mad I snapped the pencil. They turned there head I threw it down smiling. I turned to face the make-up properly and there was mirrors on the wall with, lights around them. I wanted to make a angry face, but Georg was talking and looking at me seeing me in the mirror. I looked down at some lipgloss. Georg put his hand on my shoulder.
“What was the snapping of the pencil thing”
“Oh nothing I wanted to see the inside do it all the time” I sound like a maniac great. He nodded. I went to one of the staff asking if I could have one blue and purple eyeliner, a lip gloss and some pink and sparkly white eye shadow. She got them and scanned them. Georg pulled my out of the way. He gave the girl his credit card smiling at her. He finished paying handing me the bag.
“What the ****!” I said.
“What?”
“Money? Got to pay you back!”
“No! It’s only 70 Euro small amount” The girl he was talking to walked up to him and passing him something on paper. She waved and we walked out. Wow total bi.tch.
Georg crumpled it up chucking it in the bin.
“What was it?”
“Phone number”
“Why didn’t you keep it I thought you liked her it looked like it”
“She was ok I like someone though that’s the thing oh well” I nodded. Who did he like?
We carried on walking through shops. All I could think about this girl he likes. Trying not to get my hopes up.
Lucy’s POV:
I sat down at the fake drum kit. Gustav picked a song I started drumming away. I messed up Gustav laughed at me. He kept poking my sides making me laugh and squirm. I kept messing up. I laughed my head off falling backwards. He came on top of me tickling me. I slapped him to make him move.
“M-o-v-e”
“No!” Gustav stopped looking at me. I smiled at him he started to lean in then someone opened the door and he moved off quickly.
“We better go!” Yana said.
“Oh right”
“Bye!” Gustav smiled at me he got up helping me up.
“Bye!” He kissed me on the cheek.
We went to get Sedona from Tom’s room they were talking. We could hear them.
“Reden!” Me and Yana whispered laughing that we said it at the same time. Yana opened the door a little looking in I stood on my tippy toes looking over her head. Sedona had her head on Tom’s chest. I knocked. It was all so weird Yana was in Bill’s clothes, I was in some of Gustav’s and Sedona in Tom’s which looked rather odd.
“Yeah!” Yana opened the door a little bit.
“Come on Sedona”
“Ok! Coming in five minutes please”
“N-!” I put my hand over Yana’s mouth closing the door. I pulled her down the stairs.
“Hey!” She yelled.
“Just wait for god sake what if that was you and Bill!” She sighed nodding. She came down the stairs. Smiling, grinning more like. We left getting into the car.
“Where’s Mandii!”
“Oh her and Georg left for the mall but first they went to her house!” Sedona said. I opened the window nodding. They dropped me home. I came seeing my brother sitting there playing the guitar. I waved to him I had to wash my hair so I took another shower changing. I put on pajamas it was 6pm. I came downstairs putting Gustav’s clothes in the washing machine.
“What you want for dinner!” I yelled.
“Uh...schnitzel please with uh...chips!”
“Ok!” I yelled back. He better not have had schnitzel for lunch. I don’t want him to be fat. I started making the food. I finished dishing it out and placing it out on a plate.
“Come!” David walked in sitting down at the table. I sat down too.
“So what did you do today!” He said, I swallowed.
“Hanged with Gustav playing rock band on Nintendo Wii...you”
“Hanged with Fedra”
“I swear you like her!” He blushed playing with his chips with his fork.
“I do ok she’s really nice I just try and ask her out for a movie or something I just can’t”
“Ah! Well maybe get someone to ask for you!”
“No!” He shook his head. We finished eating dinner I washed up going up to my bedroom. I sat on my bed falling asleep.
OK THT WAS SHI.T AND BORING LISTENING TO MUSIC NOW AND STARTING NEXT CHAPTER
xXxMandiixXx
July 17th, 2008, 11:14 AM
omfg georg :( ill kill that girl
ohhhh i snap eyeliner pencils all the time to see wat it looks like inside<----bahha sarcasm lolz
that was funny tho
everyone else is practically hooked up and me and georg are still on the brinks oh well eventually im guessing?
COMTINUE!
<3 Mandii xx
BlondPunk
July 17th, 2008, 12:04 PM
It wasn't boring!
It was awesome!
x]
I could NEVER fit in Bill's clothes in real life...
They'd be too long, and too big.
x]
Mehr bitte
luvukaulitztwins
July 17th, 2008, 03:22 PM
It wasn't boring!
It was awesome!
x]
I could NEVER fit in Bill's clothes in real life...
They'd be too long, and too big.
x]
Mehr bitte
LOLZ
POST MORE OF UR FF :|
Then I may post more of mine ;D
BlondPunk
July 17th, 2008, 05:55 PM
It wasn't boring!
It was awesome!
x]
I could NEVER fit in Bill's clothes in real life...
They'd be too long, and too big.
x]
Mehr bitte
LOLZ
POST MORE OF UR FF :|
Then I may post more of mine ;D
o.o
lucia's supposed to write the next chappie.
so........
I'l try and get her to work on it.
:]
..............
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 17th, 2008, 08:52 PM
YAY SEDONA IS BACK FROM VEGAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AND I LOVE THE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 19th, 2008, 01:46 PM
updateeeeeeeee pleasssseseseessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
luvukaulitztwins
July 19th, 2008, 05:31 PM
Ok CALM
I'm gonna I'm giving each of you a chapter each so...
Sedona u first
Then Yana then Mandii
OR I may change it sometimes I'm nearly done calm it will be up by tonight promise I was on my wii for too long so I'm typing as fast as I can which is speedy.
luvukaulitztwins
July 19th, 2008, 05:43 PM
Chapter 9- Stupid Tom
Sedona’s POV:
I entered the school gates. Going to the section taking the route.
“You know Tom Kaulitz right”
“Uh...” My phone went off so I took it out. Mum...one of the girls snatched it. I tried to get it off them. She dug her nails into me causing me to bleed. Why are they too girly I mean really long nails, and sharp.
“Hello! Is this Tom Kaulitz!” She yelled. I grabbed the phone. They kept snatching it. I tried pulling and it fell of the floor smashing into pieces.
“No!” My phone was an iPhone great this sucks.
“You evil bi.tches!” I yelled they walked away. I will get them back. I went and sat down and sighed. I only got this phone like 2 weeks ago. I sat down next to Josh.
“What’s wrong?” He asked putting his arm round my shoulder.
“Preppy bit.ches broke my phone!” I yelled looking at them. He stood up. Oh god he beat up 4 students, because they said stuff about me. I could not be bothered to stop him.
“5...4...3...2...1” Screams knew it. Everyone laughed at them. He came back giving some money to me.
“What?”
“Oh right I took there money oh and a rather bleed to her head. Oh she may have a concussion but who cares” He smiled. I hugged him tightly. He had always stuck up for me ever since I was 13. He stood up holding out his hand for me I smiled. I needed to see if Yana didn’t mind taking me. The bus stop was pretty far from school. I asked her unluckily she said no. I sighed.
“Sorry great time for my mum to take my car keys”
“It’s ok um...”
“Ask Tom!” She leaned her head in grinning. I laughed at her nodding. She passed me her mobile. I dialed his number.
“Uh...hello?”
“Bill get away from my condom’s...no you may not chuck them away there freaking 3 Euro each who do you take me for...” There was a pause and him and Bill were having a fight about it.
“So I got to find some girls tonight I got to have a good time before the next concert in 3 days!...uh hello”
“Um...ok girls and eww an-”
“Sedona it’s you, you heard everything!” He yelled.
“Yeah!”
“Aww...sh.it!” He yelled. Then there was a bang.
“Can you do me a favor and what was that!”
“Yeah you can I just punched the wall I think I broke my knuckle”
“Oh...um...then my favor wont help nevermind!”
“No! What is it”
“Just to take me to get a new phone please...some girls broke it in school!”
“Uh...sure I will collect you and I will sort them out!”
“Uh...someone's done that but she's ok still a shame!”
“No she needs a proper beating. Oh you called me earlier what the heck was all that noise”
“The girls broke my phone they go you know Tom Kaulitz all this sh.it and they called you and blah explain later I got to go bye!” I cut off. Josh stood waiting I ran pulling his arm.
:End of day:
“Bye Sedona” Yana, Lucy and Mandii said in unison.
“Bye” Tom leaned on his car while girls crowded him. He took off his sun glasses I shook my head. He pushed them out the way. I pointed to the girls. Tom started talking to them I stood watching. He started touching there hair what the ****. Well I guess it is Tom. I stood watching he went in to kiss her slamming her head against the school gate bars. Woo I never knew he was like that.
“Bit.ch!” He yelled. He came back smiling opening the door for me.
I got in Tom kinda scares me. I sat silent not blinking.
I got my new phone storing peoples number’s trying to remember a couple.
“Uh...I need some beer I wont be a minute” Tom stopped outside a off licence he got out running in. After about 40 secopnds he was back. He took out opening it.
“What the heck you doing!” I yelled snatching it. He started the car driving.
“You care about me” He smirked.
“No I just don’t wanna die” Ok that I just said is true and I care about him. Pfft who cares.
“Right let me have a sip please I’m desperate”
“Fine! I’m kidnapping you!” He locked the doors and the windows putting the air condition on. He laughed at my expression.
“Now this is not funny I have school tomorrow”
“Who cares bunk”
“Bad education!”
“And you want need a job”
“What!” I yelled. I looked at the can of beer I kind of like beer I always have. My dad gave it to me when I was little.
“Don’t you dare” I looked straight to Tom. I took a drink. He snached it off me he turned the wheel with him. He put the wheel straight going at 120 MPH.
“What! Stop going fast!”
“No!” He went faster changing into gear 4.
“Tom!” He was dodging in and out cars. I was scared if you was in my view trust me you will be trying to kill yourself. He went fall speed I started crying. He stopped pulling over.
“Hey! Don’t cry sorry I didn’t mean to scare you!” He reached over hugging me I flinched away. I leaned over him unlocking the doors getting out. I took the beer with me. **** no I’m I staying in a car with him. I sat down cross legged putting the beer in front of me. Pulling me knees into me. I continued to sob.
I looked up Tom looked at me holding out his hand. I stopped crying.
“Please!” He said. I took his hand getting up. He pulled me in.
“Quick get in the police are coming” He handed me the beer running round getting in. I got he drove at normal speed.
“So I’m going home right” I said.
“No your still kidnapped!” I sighed. We drove back to the house. He got out I opened my door stepping one foot out. He slung me over his shoulder shutting the door and locking the car.
“Tom!” I banged on his back. He opened the door running up the stairs taking two steps at a time. He went into his bedroom chucking me on his bed.
“This is a crime” I said giving a sarcastic look.
“Well Bill, Gustav and Georg have done the same to the others so I guess it ain’t I’m going out to get my beers I’m locking you in!” I opened my mouth wide he run out shutting the door and locking it.
OKAY NEXT CHAPTER IS YANA ALL THE WAY THROUGH x]
Oh will Billy kins x]
So it will be up soon I'm working on it.
xXKillerxQueenXx
July 19th, 2008, 06:25 PM
I LOVE IT!
Mehr bitte!
luvukaulitztwins
July 19th, 2008, 06:28 PM
I LOVE IT!
Mehr bitte!
LOLZ YAY
*HUGS U FOR READING IT*
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 19th, 2008, 08:30 PM
xDDDDDDDDDDDD
i cant believe i got kidnapped.
lmao
luvukaulitztwins
July 20th, 2008, 07:10 PM
Chapter 10- LOCKED!
Bill un handcuffed me I rubbed my wrist. Bill turned Tom slammed the door shut. I heard it lock. Bill twisted the door knob.
“Tom that’s not funny!”
“It is to me”
“You sick bast.ard” Bill yelled. Bill kicked the door. He turned to me I sighed.
“This is so not on”
“Hey I’m sorry!”
“Hey it’s cool anyway uh...it’s big!”
“Yep!” He said. I sat down on the edge of the bed. Bill kissed my cheek I looked up he smiled so I just smiled back. What was that for.
“Hey uh...I really need a shower!” He said.
“Uh...ok!” He nodded going into his draw heading into the on-suite bathroom. He shut the door I heard the shower turn on. Wow this is like every fan girls dream locked in a room with Bill Kaulitz. I took off my shoes moving back. I sat cross legged. I got bored I played with my fingers like a 3 year old. After I don’t know about 30mintes Bill came out rapped in a towel on his bottom half and his hair wet. It was all wavy au-natural well kinda since it’s black. I looked at him staring he just looked at me I looked away. I should not be staring. I looked in the corner of my eye. He was putting his underpants under his
towel pulling them up as he pulled them up the towel fell. He picked it up chucking it in the bathroom putting on a top and some jogging bottoms. He brushed his hair yanking at a tangle.
“Hey! God your gonna rip your head off wait!” I said. I got up and he passed me the brush. I done it gently seeing it come out I did the rest of his hair.
“Hey can you um...plat my hair for me!”
“Sure!” I said smiling. He put a finger to me he rushed into the bathroom turning the light off. He sat down on a chair.
“Um...can you do French plats” He asked.
“Yeah!”
“Can I have two please” I split his hair in half. Doing cute little French plats, but at the end I did a herring bone.
“Done!” Hew picked his mirror up putting it down hugging me.
“Thank you!”
“I’m really tired! God this so fricking sucks I can’t even sleep” Bill gave a confused look. He ran to his wardrobe handing my clothes. I took them entering the bathroom shutting the door changing. Gay **** stupid idiotic Tom. I came Bill opened the bed sheet cover for me.
“I will sleep on the floor!”
“No!” Bill yelled. He pulled my arm throwing me in. I laid normal. He looked down at me his lovely face features. I sat up on my arms he leaned in. His lips touched mine I got the sparks. His lips were soft, warm and gentle. He smiled at me I bit my lip laying back. He pulled the covers up kissing my forehead. He laid on the floor. Wow did I really just kiss Bill. The light went off. I fell asleep. I dreamt of me and Bill I died and he didn’t care. In fact happy. I woke up it was morning birds chirping. Thank god for that.
A/N: NEXT CHAPTER SOON
xXKillerxQueenXx
July 20th, 2008, 07:14 PM
YAY!
More is coming soon!
Me happy!
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 20th, 2008, 07:30 PM
aww that was cute.
MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEE
please
BlondPunk
July 20th, 2008, 09:37 PM
x]
I liked that chapter.
XD
Tom kidnaped Sedona!
x]
mehr bitte!
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 20th, 2008, 09:42 PM
x]
I liked that chapter.
XD
Tom kidnaped Sedona!
x]
mehr bitte!
being kidnapped is fun!
especiallywhentomisdoingthekidnapping....
hehe!
BlondPunk
July 25th, 2008, 09:39 AM
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 25th, 2008, 12:47 PM
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!
yes!
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOORE
or i will sent the evil cupcake after you.....
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s270/Emilly_101/cupcake.jpg
he's vicious...
xXKillerxQueenXx
July 25th, 2008, 01:22 PM
More!
MOREMOREMORE.
Or Pookie will attack you.
http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg170/helloemy/thmine.jpg
BlondPunk
July 25th, 2008, 04:44 PM
More!
Or else the evil flower will eat you!!!
http://www.alancaseyentertainment.com.au/Giant%20flower%202.jpg
luvukaulitztwins
July 26th, 2008, 01:54 PM
SORRY I WAS IN FRANCE AND BELGUIM
I kept writing while i was there i need to type it up
:]
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 26th, 2008, 02:59 PM
SORRY I WAS IN FRANCE AND BELGUIM
I kept writing while i was there i need to type it up
:]
type speedy!!!!!!!!!!!!
luvukaulitztwins
July 26th, 2008, 04:36 PM
Ok me and my bro were working out the wo sind eure hande chords :D
I'm nearly done one more chapter to do
I can't be bothered to stop :D
SO IT WILL B UP TO NIGHT PROMISE
I SWEAR OR TOMS DI.CK WILL FALL OFF TONIGHT
Yeah tht'll happen :D
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 26th, 2008, 07:42 PM
Ok me and my bro were working out the wo sind eure hande chords :D
I'm nearly done one more chapter to do
I can't be bothered to stop :D
SO IT WILL B UP TO NIGHT PROMISE
I SWEAR OR TOMS DI.CK WILL FALL OFF TONIGHT
Yeah tht'll happen :D
:shock:
UPDATE
i dont want that to happen to poor tomi
lmfao
luvukaulitztwins
July 27th, 2008, 01:30 PM
Ok me and my bro were working out the wo sind eure hande chords :D
I'm nearly done one more chapter to do
I can't be bothered to stop :D
SO IT WILL B UP TO NIGHT PROMISE
I SWEAR OR TOMS DI.CK WILL FALL OFF TONIGHT
Yeah tht'll happen :D
:shock:
UPDATE
i dont want that to happen to poor tomi
lmfao
Sorry I was bout to post last night and my mum slapped me and slammed my laptop shut...
So ja...
I will post now :]
BlondPunk
July 27th, 2008, 01:35 PM
POSSSSSSSSST!
don't make me get the flower again.
He looks sweet, but he's really evil.
o.o
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 27th, 2008, 02:03 PM
yes post NAU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
luvukaulitztwins
July 27th, 2008, 04:02 PM
Chapter 7
:one week later:
Mandii’s POV:
Georg wasn’t really paying attention to me no more. I don’t know why I don’t think he likes me or never did. One thing was he may hate me. At the moment me and Sedona was out. Not doing much walking talking all she ever went about was Tom. She stopped I carried on day dreaming about Georg. Me and him kissing always have dreams, but the dreams never come true. I looked at Sedona she was smiling with her sun glasses on.
“What you so happy about”
“The guys!” She grinned looking at me. I looked ahead oh no why does this happen. I gave a polite smile to the boys I looked at Georg. He smirked looking down. I sighed I stomped my foot walking behind them.
“Why you all the way back there!” Georg said standing still waiting for me. I shurgged he started walking with me. So now he talks to me and he had been ignoring me.
“Why have you been ignoring me” I asked quietly.
“Because...your annoying!” He said. When was I annoying, wait what am I thinking I sould ask him that question.
“When was I annoying I have never been annoying give me one time!” I yelled.
“Well...uh...sh.it...” Georg stormed away. What the heck was all the uh...and swearing. I pulled his shirt pulling him back. I may look weak, but I’m not.
“Let the heck go!” He yelled I shook my head.
“Not until you answer me!”
“Let go!” He yelled.
“No why should I!
“Fine I lied I’m not telling you why so don’t bother asking...”
“No tell me why!”
“No...!”
“Yes!” I yelled. I looked at the others staring at us in shock. Georg pulled me off he shook his head walking away. I started to walk after him Tom put his hand out. He shook his head.
Georgs POV:
I couldn’t tell her I freaking liked her I am such a chicken. I’m such a di.ck head. I wanted to tell her, but I couldn’t. I wish I had done it there and then. I walked back seeing her behind the others. I ran to her I put my hand over her mouth. I pulled her round I stared at her.
Mandii’s POV:
This is all confusing. He was just there gone and back the next. What the **** is wrong with him. Then bam he kissed me. I don’t get it he ignores me says I’m annoying doesn’t know how, and goes, comes back and kisses me.
OK CARM IT I DNT LIKE THT FLOWER
Mwahahaah :D
So I will keep it too u guys till I get onto the Lucy girl I made up xD
I'M WATCHING WAR OF THE WORLDS
IT'S ON BBC 1
:D
U dnt know it of course (the bbc one thingy)xD
:D
luvukaulitztwins
July 27th, 2008, 04:08 PM
GUYS I HAD AN IDEA
I'M GOING TO DO A WAR OF THE WORLDS THING :D
OR make it into a sequel to this one
USE EVERYTHING THT HAPPENED BUT CHANGING IT SLIGHTLY WITH U GUYS AND IN GERMANY AND ETC :D
WAT DO U GUYS THINK
BlondPunk
July 27th, 2008, 05:13 PM
War of the worlds?
Sounds a little confusing...
yet I like the idea...
but I have no clue what the war of the worlds was about.
I'm stupid when it comes to history.
But if it's science,
I probably would've klnown it already...
and....
I sound like a nerd >_<
anyways,
I'm so glad you updated!
^-^
mehr bitte!
or else the flower......will eat you.
luvukaulitztwins
July 27th, 2008, 05:15 PM
War of the worlds?
Sounds a little confusing...
yet I like the idea...
but I have no clue what the war of the worlds was about.
I'm stupid when it comes to history.
But if it's science,
I probably would've klnown it already...
and....
I sound like a nerd >_<
anyways,
I'm so glad you updated!
^-^
mehr bitte!
or else the flower......will eat you.
Lolz war of the worlds
Is a film and a book
GET THE BOOK TRUST ME ITS RELI GOOD I READ IT WHEN I WAS 9
:D
IT'S UBER GOOD :D
:D
It's about aliens and then they take over the...
I'm not saying no more :D
luvukaulitztwins
July 27th, 2008, 06:28 PM
MORE
Chapter 8-TOM TOM TOM!
Sedona’s POV:
:At the guys house:
Tom made me laugh he was just really funny. He could be a little moody like a girl. I couldn’t stop talking about him. What was wrong with me I had to stop. It was just weird I spent more time with Tom then my mum now. Oh trust me my mums cool. Oh infact I was with Tom now. They were leaving tomorrow or something for the America tour again. Tom was playing his guitar. I looked up at him he was having his orgasm. Awkward. He looked down at me pulling his lips in continuing to play. I took out my mirror looking at my hair and toying with it. I pouted looking at my make-up.
“Why do girls do that!” Tom asked placing his guitar down on a stand.
“I don’t know...” I said.
“Come on there's no need to check your always gonna be beautiful even without make-up”
“Really....wait you have never seen me without make-up!” He smiled getting up and leaving. I made a confused face. He came in with cotton wool and eye-makeup remover. I shook my head I lent back he pulled me in.
“Come on!” I sighed closing my eyes. He started rub in off he pushed hard. My eye hurt now. He finished I opened my eyes blinking I took the mirror shutting it instently.
“See better!”
“No worse make-up works!”
“No!” I toor up. He snatched it.
“Hey!” He walked away so I ran after him. I chased him down the stairs waving and smiling to the guys. I jumped clinging onto his back.
“Give it!”
“What you gonna do!” I kicked him in the side of the leg. I will be violent. I took his cap off taking it to the sink. I turned on the water.
“You wouldn’t!”
“I would!” He shook his head laughing. I put it under causing it to drench.
“No...!” He yelled he screamed like a girl I laughed at the scream. It was hilarious. He picked me up sitting me on the counter. He splashed water over my hair causing it to flatten.
“Oi!” He got the eyeliner putting it under the tap.
“Waterproof!” I said smiling.
“Sh.it!” He yelled. He pulled me in and our lips came in contact. The freezing cold steel lip ring.
“Aww!” Bill said I stopped kissing Tom looking at him. He turned playing with his ear. Tom pulled my hand sitting me down the others were there.
“Come on tour with us!” The guys said in unison. I raised a brown looking at Yana.
“Yes...Well I will!” Yana yelled looking down pretending to be innocent.
“I will!” Me and Mandii said in unison. Lucy nodded smiling.
OK IM DESPIRATE TO GET TO THE SEQUEL
SO blah :D
I HAVE A WHOLE DAY TO WRITE
So next 2 chapters suld come unless I have to go out
BlondPunk
July 27th, 2008, 07:42 PM
Yay!!!
omg, aliens?
Ynaz a wittle scared.
Hold me!!!
-_____________-'
AMERICA THE BEAUTIFUL FOR AMBER WAVES OF GRAIN!
FOR PURPLE MOUNTAIN MAJESTIES ABOVE THE FRUITED PLAIN!
AMERICA!
AMERICA!
GO SHINE THEY GRACE WITH THE (that was wrong...)
AND CROWN THY GOOD
WITH BROTHERHOOD
FROM SEA TO SHINING SEA!!!!
o.o
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 27th, 2008, 09:59 PM
*gasp!*
he got my hair wet!
xDDDDDDD
but
YAY!
i kissed tom!!!
lmao
luvukaulitztwins
July 28th, 2008, 04:28 AM
*gasp!*
he got my hair wet!
xDDDDDDD
but
YAY!
i kissed tom!!!
lmao
Mwahahaha :D
I will be evil
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 28th, 2008, 12:58 PM
*gasp!*
he got my hair wet!
xDDDDDDD
but
YAY!
i kissed tom!!!
lmao
Mwahahaha :D
I will be evil
xDDDD
i had a dream about tom last night
and it basically happened EXACTLY like your story
it was WEIRD
hehe
now update
in.die.nacht.
July 28th, 2008, 07:21 PM
~*new reader*~
I'm liking this story!
More please!
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 29th, 2008, 11:14 AM
update pleasess???
luvukaulitztwins
July 30th, 2008, 02:54 AM
YAY new reader
Sorry Sedona I will
I may not b able to if I go out with my friends (or maybe not even friends more like 3 ppl or even 2 or 1) *screams*
Anyway :D
If u want I culd stay home and catch up on the fanfic
in.die.nacht.
July 30th, 2008, 10:18 AM
YAY new reader
Sorry Sedona I will
I may not b able to if I go out with my friends (or maybe not even friends more like 3 ppl or even 2 or 1) *screams*
Anyway :D
If u want I culd stay home and catch up on the fanfic
Freinds are more important.
I think you should go hang out with your freinds.
:]
luvukaulitztwins
July 30th, 2008, 05:28 PM
Ok chapter 9 will lead into a fight with 2 ppl :D
And then DUN DUN DUN
The squal too war of the worlds but the squel will b long I WILL POST SOON :D
VERY SOON
BlondPunk
July 30th, 2008, 05:37 PM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
more more more!!!
luvukaulitztwins
July 30th, 2008, 05:45 PM
Ok it's short but listen
I wanna move on to the sequel I have great ideas 8-)
Chapter 9- First concert :] and a unexpected killer of...
Yana’s POV:
Tom punched Bill on the plane. God knows why so Bill’s cheek is huge and he has a black eye. It wasn’t pleasant, but Bill was getting ready. He wasn’t talking to Tom at all which was sad, because they would be mean to each other. Me and the others were going out since we didn’t want to be at every concert. We left the guys alone leaving.
We didn’t do much ate and sat and chatted. Pass by time returning back to the hotel was long.
I went to the room I had to share with Bill and Jost tried his best to not get doubles he is scared about Tom and Georg.
Bill was lying on his bed with some chocolate I jumped on the bed and I kissed him.
Sedona POV:
I walked down to the room. Outside Tom had a girl against the wall kissing her he was touching her leg. This is so shocking I felt sad and angry. I didn’t feel like crying that much I wanted to slap him. Am I just like one of them girls I let out a whimper and Tom turned round. He let go of the girl chucking her on the floor he started to bang his head on the wall. I started to cry I went up to Tom about to slap him he grabbed my hand. I used my other on he grabbed that too.
“Look I’m sorry I don’t know what I’m doing I’m too used to it”
“No! Your sorry it will happen again” I sniffed.
“Listen to me please!” He pulled me into the room locking it.
“I never meant it please I love you”
“Oh yeah you love me sure you do you would have never done that!” I yelled.
“Please go ask Bill I tell him everything!” A tear came down his cheek. I kicked him in the nuts sitting on the bed with my head in my hands.
“Aw...Sh.it!” Tom yelled. The wind picked up and it was making a noise. I looked outside a light patch formed in the sky.
“Tom!” I said sniffing.
“Yeah!” He whispered I looked at him not moving my head and looked out the window he looked.
“****! What’s that!”
“God come!” I pulled Tom’s hand. The others were screaming.
“Wait!” Tom said he got my coat and a jacket for him self.
“We better go check it out Sedona why are you crying!” Mandii asked.
“I will tell you in a minute!” I said giving Tom a death glare. I separated from Tom and the boys went in one lift and we went in a another. I explained they were so shocked. We came outside everyone was looking at it. I was standing next to Tom. Lightning struck behind the hotel. I grabbed on Tom’s arm and he rapped his arms round me. Lightning struck in the same place. It will strike in a different place it never strikes twice in same place. It happend at least twelve times in the same place I got really scared.
“Wait the wind is blowing towards the storm!” Mandii blurted out.
“Thats creeping me out!” Yana said clinging onto Bill.
“Can you get to the back of the hotel!” Tom asked. We shook our heads. We followed people and it was on the road behind the hotel. The police was there. I bent down picking up some rock the road had cracks in it. All coming up. I juggled it in my hands.
“Hot?” Lucy asked.
“No it’s bloody freezing!” I yelled. Tom pulled me chucking it down.
RIGHT WHO WANTS MORE TO FIND OUT WAT IT IS?
COMMENT OR CHAPTER ONE OF THE SEQUAL WILL NEVER COME
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 30th, 2008, 06:42 PM
ALIENS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
are the aliens tokio hotel fans?
gahhh and i cant believe tom!
that little skank!
xD
luvukaulitztwins
July 30th, 2008, 06:53 PM
ALIENS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
are the aliens tokio hotel fans?
gahhh and i cant believe tom!
that little skank!
xD
Mwahahaha more? :]
BlondPunk
July 30th, 2008, 06:56 PM
O_O
OMFG THE ALIENS ARE COMING.
OH YOU BETTER NOT TAKE BILL.
**** NO!!!
STAY AWAY, OR ELSE I'LL SCREAM, AND GET MY GUN!
OH GOD ALIENS.
I'M SCARED
HOLD ME!!!!
*cries*
I HATE ALIENS!
WER'E ALL GONNA DIE!
WER'E GONNA DIE!!!
THEY'RE GONNA DISECT US WHILE WER'E STILL LIVING AND IT'LL HURT.
AND THEN WE'LL DIE A PAINFUL DEATH!!!
AND HOLY CRAP!!!!
I'M SCARED!!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA *30 days later* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!
*cries some more*
I'm scared,
but I do want to know what happens next.
*sobs*
luvukaulitztwins
July 30th, 2008, 06:59 PM
O_O
OMFG THE ALIENS ARE COMING.
OH YOU BETTER NOT TAKE BILL.
**** NO!!!
STAY AWAY, OR ELSE I'LL SCREAM, AND GET MY GUN!
OH GOD ALIENS.
I'M SCARED
HOLD ME!!!!
*cries*
I HATE ALIENS!
WER'E ALL GONNA DIE!
WER'E GONNA DIE!!!
THEY'RE GONNA DISECT US WHILE WER'E STILL LIVING AND IT'LL HURT.
AND THEN WE'LL DIE A PAINFUL DEATH!!!
AND HOLY CRAP!!!!
I'M SCARED!!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA *30 days later* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!
*cries some more*
I'm scared,
but I do want to know what happens next.
*sobs*
Lolz I'm half way through the next chapter :D
It will b either up tonight or 2moz is tht kewl :]
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 30th, 2008, 07:00 PM
ALIENS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
are the aliens tokio hotel fans?
gahhh and i cant believe tom!
that little skank!
xD
Mwahahaha more? :]
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BlondPunk
July 30th, 2008, 07:03 PM
O_O
OMFG THE ALIENS ARE COMING.
OH YOU BETTER NOT TAKE BILL.
**** NO!!!
STAY AWAY, OR ELSE I'LL SCREAM, AND GET MY GUN!
OH GOD ALIENS.
I'M SCARED
HOLD ME!!!!
*cries*
I HATE ALIENS!
WER'E ALL GONNA DIE!
WER'E GONNA DIE!!!
THEY'RE GONNA DISECT US WHILE WER'E STILL LIVING AND IT'LL HURT.
AND THEN WE'LL DIE A PAINFUL DEATH!!!
AND HOLY CRAP!!!!
I'M SCARED!!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA *30 days later* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!
*cries some more*
I'm scared,
but I do want to know what happens next.
*sobs*
Lolz I'm half way through the next chapter :D
It will b either up tonight or 2moz is tht kewl :]
Yes, thats cool with me!
And tommorows my birthday, so you'll be able to update on my birthday, right???
yes.
And btw....
I'm so ****ing scared of aliens it's not funny.
If I'd see one, I'd scream while crying.
And I scream reeeeaaally loud.
I HATE ALIENS!!!!
WER'E GONNA DIE!
WER'E GONNA DIE!
OH MAH LORD I THINK I SEE A WHITE LIGHT!!!
O_O' O_O O_O DDDDDD;>
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
wer'e gonna die!!!!!!!!!!!
luvukaulitztwins
July 30th, 2008, 07:10 PM
O_O
OMFG THE ALIENS ARE COMING.
OH YOU BETTER NOT TAKE BILL.
**** NO!!!
STAY AWAY, OR ELSE I'LL SCREAM, AND GET MY GUN!
OH GOD ALIENS.
I'M SCARED
HOLD ME!!!!
*cries*
I HATE ALIENS!
WER'E ALL GONNA DIE!
WER'E GONNA DIE!!!
THEY'RE GONNA DISECT US WHILE WER'E STILL LIVING AND IT'LL HURT.
AND THEN WE'LL DIE A PAINFUL DEATH!!!
AND HOLY CRAP!!!!
I'M SCARED!!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA *30 days later* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!
*cries some more*
I'm scared,
but I do want to know what happens next.
*sobs*
Lolz I'm half way through the next chapter :D
It will b either up tonight or 2moz is tht kewl :]
Yes, thats cool with me!
And tommorows my birthday, so you'll be able to update on my birthday, right???
yes.
And btw....
I'm so ****ing scared of aliens it's not funny.
If I'd see one, I'd scream while crying.
And I scream reeeeaaally loud.
I HATE ALIENS!!!!
WER'E GONNA DIE!
WER'E GONNA DIE!
OH MAH LORD I THINK I SEE A WHITE LIGHT!!!
O_O' O_O O_O DDDDDD;>
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
wer'e gonna die!!!!!!!!!!!
Lolz :D
Ur birthday x]
W00T
:D
If I knew u I wuld give u a present this sucks xD
Anyway I will update on ur b-day
ur gonna b 14 right?
BlondPunk
July 30th, 2008, 07:18 PM
O_O
OMFG THE ALIENS ARE COMING.
OH YOU BETTER NOT TAKE BILL.
**** NO!!!
STAY AWAY, OR ELSE I'LL SCREAM, AND GET MY GUN!
OH GOD ALIENS.
I'M SCARED
HOLD ME!!!!
*cries*
I HATE ALIENS!
WER'E ALL GONNA DIE!
WER'E GONNA DIE!!!
THEY'RE GONNA DISECT US WHILE WER'E STILL LIVING AND IT'LL HURT.
AND THEN WE'LL DIE A PAINFUL DEATH!!!
AND HOLY CRAP!!!!
I'M SCARED!!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA *30 days later* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!
*cries some more*
I'm scared,
but I do want to know what happens next.
*sobs*
Yes, thats cool with me!
And tommorows my birthday, so you'll be able to update on my birthday, right???
yes.
And btw....
I'm so ****ing scared of aliens it's not funny.
If I'd see one, I'd scream while crying.
And I scream reeeeaaally loud.
I HATE ALIENS!!!!
WER'E GONNA DIE!
WER'E GONNA DIE!
OH MAH LORD I THINK I SEE A WHITE LIGHT!!!
O_O' O_O O_O DDDDDD;>
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
wer'e gonna die!!!!!!!!!!!
Lolz :D
Ur birthday x]
W00T
:D
If I knew u I wuld give u a present this sucks xD
Anyway I will update on ur b-day
ur gonna b 14 right?[/quote]
Yep! 14 years old!!!
No need for a present!
The best kind of present form a person with a ff that I'm reading is UPDATING!!!
Tommorow.
Because I have to go now ^^
luvukaulitztwins
July 30th, 2008, 07:21 PM
xD
I was on the par of finishing the chapter ok I have to go soon at 1am x]
luvukaulitztwins
July 30th, 2008, 07:38 PM
Chapter 1- Something or someone god **** machines
Tom pulled me back and told the others to follow. The floor cracked breaking a skyscraper. We all ran onto a wall. Everything was breaking smashing. The world dying or maybe just American. Then the floor got sucked in poofing out and all the floor flying everywhere. Cars were stopped everywhere I looked at my phone nothing no movement. It didn’t work. These machines came up from the ground with a funny sound. Everyone stood in amazement. They were tall big they had things that looked like eyes. It was gray it had had some hand kinda things. A kind of redish purpleish light zapped someone they burned leaving clothes. It was scary a grandad jogged past with his grandaughter I feel so sad.
“Run!” I yelled. I started running they all were behind me. There was one of the machines I hide behind a wall. I started to cry. Tom picked me up running with me on his back. He got to a black Cadillac in a garage.
“I need a solenoid!” He pushed over the guy fixing the car. He started to fix it. I never knew he knew about cars.He took the keys getting in.
“GET THE **** IN!” Tom yelled. He reversed. He drove like a mad man he put on his seat belt.
“Put on your seat belts!” I did it shutting my eyes. Yana looked back I looked back trees on fire loads of clothes. Yana started screaming and crying. Tom drove like a maniac.
“We have to be the only car working around here sh.it!” I was scared to drove and drove.
“What are they and where are they from!” Bill asked sniffing.
“I don’t know nobody fuc.king knows!” Tom yelled.
“It's weird they must have been something before...maybe something or someone came down in the lightning or something!” I said. Tom came to a place in the woods.
“Let’s sleep we should be safe here!” Tom said. I looked at my phone it was working. This is strange something unordinary. I feel asleep, scared and worried. Sleeping was rough I awoke we was driving. Tom looked tired everyone else was asleep.
“Good morning!” Tom said taking a glimpse of me. It was a little sunny.
“Uh...um...morning” I whispered.
“I uh...am sorry about you know...um...uh!” Tom said still driving.
The army sped past us. Wow the army this is really serious. There was a new crew.
“Tom stop!”
“No we have to keep going!”
“Please!” He nodded pulling over I got out running over to the woman.
“Any news!” I asked.
“No! Have you seen this!” She showed me the lightning.
“I was in the middle of one of those!”
“Well look at this look at the lighting!” I looked there was like things stretching the lightning going into the ground.
“So now what I wanna know who’s driving the god **** things!”
“Wow...”
“We have to go!” She pushed me out of the van and shutting the door. She drove away.
OK CHAPTER 2 IS GONNA B UP FOR YANA 2MOZ x]
AND MAYBE CHAPTER 3 :D
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 30th, 2008, 08:39 PM
stoopid aliens
theyre evil
lmao
if i get killed i swear.....i will slap you with a fish
and if tom gets killed, i'll slap you with a porcupine
xD
BlondPunk
July 31st, 2008, 10:01 AM
Scary evil aliens....
WER'E GONNA DIE!
WER'E ALL GONNA DIE A PAINFUL DEATH!!!
AND I'LL PROBABLY BE THE FIRST TO GO!
why me??????
WHYYY????????
WER'E GONNA DIE!!!!!!!
yay!
more for me ^-^
*is happy*
MORE!
:D :D :D
DANCE DANCE REVOLUTION.
is awesome.
luvukaulitztwins
July 31st, 2008, 10:05 AM
Scary evil aliens....
WER'E GONNA DIE!
WER'E ALL GONNA DIE A PAINFUL DEATH!!!
AND I'LL PROBABLY BE THE FIRST TO GO!
why me??????
WHYYY????????
WER'E GONNA DIE!!!!!!!
yay!
more for me ^-^
*is happy*
MORE!
:D :D :D
DANCE DANCE REVOLUTION.
is awesome.
Dance revolution?
I'm posting in a min sorry I just need to quickly read over chapter 3 my spelling is reli suckish :]
BlondPunk
July 31st, 2008, 10:08 AM
Scary evil aliens....
WER'E GONNA DIE!
WER'E ALL GONNA DIE A PAINFUL DEATH!!!
AND I'LL PROBABLY BE THE FIRST TO GO!
why me??????
WHYYY????????
WER'E GONNA DIE!!!!!!!
yay!
more for me ^-^
*is happy*
MORE!
:D :D :D
DANCE DANCE REVOLUTION.
is awesome.
Dance revolution?
I'm posting in a min sorry I just need to quickly read over chapter 3 my spelling is reli suckish :]
mkay!
Dance Dance Revolution is a video game for PS2, wich I just got this morning. And I'm HOOKED on it.
I't salot of fun. ^-^
luvukaulitztwins
July 31st, 2008, 10:17 AM
Scary evil aliens....
WER'E GONNA DIE!
WER'E ALL GONNA DIE A PAINFUL DEATH!!!
AND I'LL PROBABLY BE THE FIRST TO GO!
why me??????
WHYYY????????
WER'E GONNA DIE!!!!!!!
yay!
more for me ^-^
*is happy*
MORE!
:D :D :D
DANCE DANCE REVOLUTION.
is awesome.
Dance revolution?
I'm posting in a min sorry I just need to quickly read over chapter 3 my spelling is reli suckish :]
mkay!
Dance Dance Revolution is a video game for PS2, wich I just got this morning. And I'm HOOKED on it.
I't salot of fun. ^-^
Cool never heard of it but cool :D
U make me wanna try it but I only have a Nintendo Wii:]
I will post I'm eatin at the mo
BlondPunk
July 31st, 2008, 10:18 AM
Scary evil aliens....
WER'E GONNA DIE!
WER'E ALL GONNA DIE A PAINFUL DEATH!!!
AND I'LL PROBABLY BE THE FIRST TO GO!
why me??????
WHYYY????????
WER'E GONNA DIE!!!!!!!
yay!
more for me ^-^
*is happy*
MORE!
:D :D :D
DANCE DANCE REVOLUTION.
is awesome.
Dance revolution?
I'm posting in a min sorry I just need to quickly read over chapter 3 my spelling is reli suckish :]
mkay!
Dance Dance Revolution is a video game for PS2, wich I just got this morning. And I'm HOOKED on it.
I't salot of fun. ^-^
Cool never heard of it but cool :D
U make me wanna try it but I only have a Nintendo Wii:]
I will post I'm eatin at the mo
Oky ^-^
Yana be patient
luvukaulitztwins
July 31st, 2008, 10:35 AM
Chapter 2
I ran to the car Tom leaned into kiss me, but I pushed him away. Mandii was awake looking down everyone else still asleep. We drove for a little while. We came to a machine looking straight at us.
“Ahhhhhhhhh!” I screamed everyone else woke up.
Yana’s POV:
I started crying. It was amazing, but scary at the same time.
“No I’m gonna die!” I yelled. Why did this have to happen. I put my head into Bill’s chest shutting my eyes. I looked up Tom we had stopped again. We must have only drove for 3 minutes. I looked back and the machine was gone.
“Toilet break!” Tom said. I got out of the car. I didn’t really need the toilet well I did, but I’m not doing it in a bush. I walked down into the forest. There was a bird sitting on a branch.
“Stay in sight!” Tom yelled. I looked to my left at Mandii.
“Are you crazy Tom god!” Mandii yelled. I walked with Mandii further into the forest. We could hear water running like a stream.
“Wanna go further?” She asked. I nodded. I was scared like ****. What if one of them things were there or we get killed. We stopped at the lake there were clothes floating down baby clothes too. I was scared and I felt bad for the people who had died. How long can we go till we die. I remember when it all started the clothes people were wearing, they were flying everywhere when they were zapping them.
“Ahh!” Me and Mandii screamed. Georg came behind Mandii and Bill behind me covering out mouths pulling us. How many people have died? Has the whole of America had this? Whole of Europe? Asia?
We pilled into the car sitting in there. I was petrified.
OK SHORT BORING BLAH
:D
But u know chapter 3 :D
BlondPunk
July 31st, 2008, 10:47 AM
Aliens?
ALIENS!
*hides In Bill's shirt*
I want to know what happens next!
*be's patient*
MORE!
tokiohotel26
July 31st, 2008, 10:55 AM
my mind is so f*cked up right now...
luvukaulitztwins
July 31st, 2008, 10:57 AM
my mind is so f*cked up right now...
O_e y
tokiohotel26
July 31st, 2008, 11:04 AM
i watched untraceable last night [never again...] and now im reading about aliens...
my brain can only take so much...
luvukaulitztwins
July 31st, 2008, 11:05 AM
i watched untraceable last night [never again...] and now im reading about aliens...
my brain can only take so much...
LOLZ
:D
tokiohotel26
July 31st, 2008, 11:06 AM
i watched untraceable last night [never again...] and now im reading about aliens...
my brain can only take so much...
LOLZ
:D
-_-'
my pain is not funny...well actually it is but still!
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 31st, 2008, 11:15 AM
SEDONA DOESNT WANNA DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AND SEDONA DOESNT WANT TOM TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
luvukaulitztwins
July 31st, 2008, 11:16 AM
SEDONA DOESNT WANNA DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AND SEDONA DOESNT WANT TOM TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh...u want Tom to die I will see wat I can do xD
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 31st, 2008, 11:18 AM
SEDONA DOESNT WANNA DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AND SEDONA DOESNT WANT TOM TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh...u want Tom to die I will see wat I can do xD
NEIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
luvukaulitztwins
July 31st, 2008, 11:23 AM
SEDONA DOESNT WANNA DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AND SEDONA DOESNT WANT TOM TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh...u want Tom to die I will see wat I can do xD
NEIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Uh...I don't understand Japanese
xD
FINE!
xD
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 31st, 2008, 11:24 AM
xDDDD
luvukaulitztwins
July 31st, 2008, 11:26 AM
xDDDD
I'm being nice next time Tom will burn in flames his eyes in some kids mouth setting the kid on fire O_e
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 31st, 2008, 11:51 AM
xDDDD
I'm being nice next time Tom will burn in flames his eyes in some kids mouth setting the kid on fire O_e
:shock:
luvukaulitztwins
July 31st, 2008, 11:55 AM
xDDDD
I'm being nice next time Tom will burn in flames his eyes in some kids mouth setting the kid on fire O_e
:shock:
Sorry I'm a lil disturbed
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 31st, 2008, 11:56 AM
I'm being nice next time Tom will burn in flames his eyes in some kids mouth setting the kid on fire O_e
:shock:
Sorry I'm a lil disturbed
ive noticed xDDD
luvukaulitztwins
July 31st, 2008, 12:00 PM
O_e
Yeah people think I'm a goth cause of it 8-)
MWAHAHAHAAHAHAAAAAAAAA
:D
STILL I LUV BEING DISTURBED
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 31st, 2008, 12:02 PM
xDDD
jaja
lol
...
just dont kill tom
or me
you can kill yana though
xD
luvukaulitztwins
July 31st, 2008, 12:05 PM
xDDD
jaja
lol
...
just dont kill tom
or me
you can kill yana though
xD
O_e
OK :D
I SHALL GET HER GET CAUGHT UP IN THE...
DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
NEXT CHAPTER SOON x]
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 31st, 2008, 12:06 PM
xDDD
okay
luvukaulitztwins
July 31st, 2008, 12:47 PM
Maibe I wont post the next chapter tonight
I can't stop watching the film I put on u tube it makes me laugh sooo much.
BlondPunk
July 31st, 2008, 01:15 PM
xDDD
jaja
lol
...
just dont kill tom
or me
you can kill yana though
xD
*eye twitches*
I WILL NOT DIE!!!
I DO NOT WANT TO DIE.
as long as I don't die from bieng disected by scary aliens.
I wonder what will happen next.
Who's the first to die???
tokiohotel26
July 31st, 2008, 01:41 PM
-walks away sneakily to avoid scary alien conversation...and avoid death-
in.die.nacht.
July 31st, 2008, 02:14 PM
omg, aliens. I hope nobody dies.
luvukaulitztwins
July 31st, 2008, 05:13 PM
Ok if someone gives me a idea wat to write in the message for the binder for the guys u know Billsinternalrose person :]
Tht shes makingum..
THEN I WILL POST THE NEXT CHAPTER :D
BlondPunk
July 31st, 2008, 05:55 PM
I know what you mean.
I have a good idea what I'll write.
So....tell them that their music is awesome, and say wich song is your favorite. Tell them something about you, and then how you got to know them, and then a nice little ending like "I hope to see you guys soon!"
And,
yeah.
Was that a good idea???
luvukaulitztwins
July 31st, 2008, 05:58 PM
I know what you mean.
I have a good idea what I'll write.
So....tell them that their music is awesome, and say wich song is your favorite. Tell them something about you, and then how you got to know them, and then a nice little ending like "I hope to see you guys soon!"
And,
yeah.
Was that a good idea???
Yeah I'll post in a min I just have to type wat u said to do
luvukaulitztwins
July 31st, 2008, 06:23 PM
Ima post half I'm not happy with the other half I need to add alot of stuff in xD
Chapter 3- Nearly dying
We drove and drove. We was gonna get a boat to get away from it all. We came through loads of people it was raining. We drove through.
“Georg can you take over!” Tom yelled.
“Sure!” Tom and Georg switched. Tom sat next to Mandii. People jumped on the front of the car. Banging the window some guy smashed the windshield and pulled the class out making his hand bleeding. Read blood millions of eyes I nearly got hit with glass. Georg got pulled out. Then the others I was stuck in the middle people started getting in. Crushing me I screamed.
“Stop!” Mandii yelled. She had scissors ok very not intimidating and weird. I looked at Gustav handing her a gun from his picked she nodded smiling. Why did he have that?
“Where’s...ow my nose...Lucy, Sedona, Bill, Tom!” Mandii yelled.
“Here!” Bill said faintly. I couldn’t see much. The others were beaten up. A man put a gun to Mandii’s head.
“Ok everyone off the car and drop the gun!” He yelled. Everyone moved out. I was frozen scared I wanted to get out.
“Um...can we take her please!” Mandii said.
“Sure whatever!” The guys said. I jumped out I ran hugging Bill. He drove off. They were beaten up badly. I picked up Gustav’s gun handing it to him.
Mandii’s POV:
We walked past stopping at the crossing , because a train was approaching. The train came on fire burning windows. Wow I never knew how violent these things are. Georg took my hand we walked and walked. There was a cafe so we decided to stop in there. We sat down the lights flashing. There were only booths, the seats were red leather and white tables.
Tom had his head in his hands. Sedona was trying to comfort him.
We sat in silence we decided to try and get onto the boat.
Lucy’s POV:
I walked with Gustav we couldn’t get on the boat. They said it was full when there was loads of room. We all grabbed hands in two packs me Gustav, Yana and Bill. Also Georg, Mandii, Sedona and Tom in that order they charged through. Getting through the army guys. We got on the boat and they shut the boat big gate thingy. Some people were hanging on the overside. Gustav climbed up pulling people over. I was amazed he would help people. He ran down to me and the others walked up the boat I was about to walk.
“If we die then I have to do this now!” He said he kissed me a long kiss. He finished pulling me we caught up with the others.
BlondPunk
July 31st, 2008, 06:33 PM
WER'E GONNA DIE!
WER'E GONNA DIE!
I'M GONNA DIE A VIRGIN!
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
OH LORD THIS IS THE WORST DEATH EVER!
WER'E GONNA DIE!
I DON'T WANNA DIE A VIRGIN!!!
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
*laughs at own thoughts*
what?
wouldn't you agree with me?
x]
...........................
:D :D :D
WER'E GONNA DIE!
OH GOD I DON'T WANNA DIE NOW!
cantmeandbillgetmarriedandhavekidsfirst???
>_>
<_<
O_O
mehr
schrei.in.die.nacht
July 31st, 2008, 07:10 PM
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
but if you do decide to kill me....
caniatleastdoitwithtomfirst???
xDDDDDD
luvukaulitztwins
August 1st, 2008, 03:08 AM
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
but if you do decide to kill me....
caniatleastdoitwithtomfirst???
xDDDDDD
Mehr later my grandad might take me to drive with his rubbish automatic
I'M SO HAPPY I'M TWELVE AND I CAN DRIVE
I saw a 6 year old boy driving his dad had a um...BMW and this guy had a Porsch and he slammed into the back of the Porsch I WAS LIKE HOLY MOTHER OF PEARL
BlondPunk
August 1st, 2008, 10:10 AM
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
sedona doesnt wanna die
but if you do decide to kill me....
caniatleastdoitwithtomfirst???
xDDDDDD
Mehr later my grandad might take me to drive with his rubbish automatic
I'M SO HAPPY I'M TWELVE AND I CAN DRIVE
I saw a 6 year old boy driving his dad had a um...BMW and this guy had a Porsch and he slammed into the back of the Porsch I WAS LIKE HOLY MOTHER OF PEARL
12???????
woah.
You get your lerners permit when your 15 in america.
I've been driving my mom's car around since I was 12.
That's been two years now.
So now I just have to study that little packet you have to study about cars and what to do on the road (wich I think is pretty interesting... :geek: )
But I only drive around my subdivision, and to my freind's house.
she lives 3 subdivisions away.
The cops haven't caught me driving yet ^-^
And a year from now I'll hopefully have my lerners permit!!!
luvukaulitztwins
August 1st, 2008, 11:10 AM
U cant get ur permit till ur 16 here
It's this special thing :]
It's made for 5 years and older and u drive ur parents car around round abouts junctions and stuff it's fun I was doing it with my cousin he was in his dads car it was jokes
BlondPunk
August 1st, 2008, 11:16 AM
U cant get ur permit till ur 16 here
It's this special thing :]
It's made for 5 years and older and u drive ur parents car around round abouts junctions and stuff it's fun I was doing it with my cousin he was in his dads car it was jokes
Oh! I thought it was for 12 year olds and up! I was like "Dang, I wish I was in England!"
haha.
I love my mom's car.
It's a hummer.
I named it bumble bee, cuz it's yellow!
And I love driving it.
It makes me feel like the queen of the road.
and I'm still waiting for the cops to catch me when I drive to my freind's house, or to the stores down the street.
But I guess they think I'm old enough to drive.
Sunglasses and a pillow on the seat always make me look older than I am ^-^
Wait.
Why are we talking about cars???
I WANT MORE STORY!!!
luvukaulitztwins
August 1st, 2008, 11:19 AM
U cant get ur permit till ur 16 here
It's this special thing :]
It's made for 5 years and older and u drive ur parents car around round abouts junctions and stuff it's fun I was doing it with my cousin he was in his dads car it was jokes
Oh! I thought it was for 12 year olds and up! I was like "Dang, I wish I was in England!"
haha.
I love my mom's car.
It's a hummer.
I named it bumble bee, cuz it's yellow!
And I love driving it.
It makes me feel like the queen of the road.
and I'm still waiting for the cops to catch me when I drive to my freind's house, or to the stores down the street.
But I guess they think I'm old enough to drive.
Sunglasses and a pillow on the seat always make me look older than I am ^-^
Wait.
Why are we talking about cars???
I WANT MORE STORY!!!
Haha more in a min my grandads round my grandmas and im round my grandmas
BlondPunk
August 1st, 2008, 11:23 AM
U cant get ur permit till ur 16 here
It's this special thing :]
It's made for 5 years and older and u drive ur parents car around round abouts junctions and stuff it's fun I was doing it with my cousin he was in his dads car it was jokes
Oh! I thought it was for 12 year olds and up! I was like "Dang, I wish I was in England!"
haha.
I love my mom's car.
It's a hummer.
I named it bumble bee, cuz it's yellow!
And I love driving it.
It makes me feel like the queen of the road.
and I'm still waiting for the cops to catch me when I drive to my freind's house, or to the stores down the street.
But I guess they think I'm old enough to drive.
Sunglasses and a pillow on the seat always make me look older than I am ^-^
Wait.
Why are we talking about cars???
I WANT MORE STORY!!!
Haha more in a min my grandads round my grandmas and im round my grandmas
oh, okay!
*waits in her waiting corner*
*eye twitches*
luvukaulitztwins
August 1st, 2008, 11:25 AM
HAHA EYE TWITCHING
OH NO MY FINGERS FELL OFF SORRY CAN'T TYPE NO MORE x]
luvukaulitztwins
August 1st, 2008, 11:28 AM
More xD
We stood there at the side of the boat looking into the sea. I looked up to where the captain was he was screaming trying to turn the boat. I looked a vortex.
BlondPunk
August 1st, 2008, 11:29 AM
HAHA EYE TWITCHING
OH NO MY FINGERS FELL OFF SORRY CAN'T TYPE NO MORE x]
Then how did you write that?
with your nose?
oooooh!
i wanna type with my nose!!!
-types thiws wi thj her noswe-
O_O
it was supposed to say
-types this with her nose-
it's fun typinf with youy nose!!!!
BlondPunk
August 1st, 2008, 11:30 AM
More xD
We stood there at the side of the boat looking into the sea. I looked up to where the captain was he was screaming trying to turn the boat. I looked a vortex.
O_O
oh.
mah.
lord.
O_O
MEHR
x]
it was short.
luvukaulitztwins
August 1st, 2008, 11:32 AM
HAHA EYE TWITCHING
OH NO MY FINGERS FELL OFF SORRY CAN'T TYPE NO MORE x]
Then how did you write that?
with your nose?
oooooh!
i wanna type with my nose!!!
-types thiws wi thj her noswe-
O_O
it was supposed to say
-types this with her nose-
it's fun typinf with youy nose!!!!NO MORE xD
Yeah I'm using my nose not reli but I wanna write my name
jah\
THTS WAT I GOT
DANG
BlondPunk
August 1st, 2008, 11:33 AM
HAHA EYE TWITCHING
OH NO MY FINGERS FELL OFF SORRY CAN'T TYPE NO MORE x]
Then how did you write that?
with your nose?
oooooh!
i wanna type with my nose!!!
-types thiws wi thj her noswe-
O_O
it was supposed to say
-types this with her nose-
it's fun typinf with youy nose!!!!NO MORE xD
Yeah I'm using my nose not reli but I wanna write my name
jah\
THTS WAT I GOT
DANG
x]
aww man, no more.
It's over?
>____<
:( :( :(
luvukaulitztwins
August 1st, 2008, 11:36 AM
x]
aww man, no more.
It's over?
>____<
:( :( :( LOL
I wanna b mean 2 u cause I hate u :]
Jk I luv u xD
I will post some in a min -_-
I'm waiting for a pic from my grandad cause my uncle met the queen hes part of the army :]
BlondPunk
August 1st, 2008, 11:38 AM
x]
aww man, no more.
It's over?
>____<
:( :( :( LOL
I wanna b mean 2 u cause I hate u :]
Jk I luv u xD
I will post some in a min -_-
I'm waiting for a pic from my grandad cause my uncle met the queen hes part of the army :]
The queen and the army?
That's cool!
:O
how dare you hate me!
lolz
okay, I can wait!
*waits in waiting corner*
luvukaulitztwins
August 1st, 2008, 11:45 AM
x]
aww man, no more.
It's over?
>____<
:( :( :( LOL
I wanna b mean 2 u cause I hate u :]
Jk I luv u xD
I will post some in a min -_-
I'm waiting for a pic from my grandad cause my uncle met the queen hes part of the army :]
The queen and the army?
That's cool!
:O
how dare you hate me!
lolz
okay, I can wait!
*waits in waiting corner*
DNT U DARE GO OFFLINE :]
MORE NOW ONE MIN I NEED TO LOOK AT SOMETHING xD
*glues u down to ur chair and glues you face to the computer screen* :]
BlondPunk
August 1st, 2008, 11:46 AM
LOL
I wanna b mean 2 u cause I hate u :]
Jk I luv u xD
I will post some in a min -_-
I'm waiting for a pic from my grandad cause my uncle met the queen hes part of the army :]
The queen and the army?
That's cool!
:O
how dare you hate me!
lolz
okay, I can wait!
*waits in waiting corner*
DNT U DARE GO OFFLINE :]
MORE NOW ONE MIN I NEED TO LOOK AT SOMETHING xD
*glues u down to ur chair and glues you face to the computer screen* :][/quote]
*is stuck*
Yay!
more!
^-^
luvukaulitztwins
August 1st, 2008, 11:55 AM
Ok :D
UM WHERE WAS II tapped the others pointing. It was amazing I have always wanted to see one, but not when I’m going to be in one.
“Abandon ship!” The captain yelled. I jumped over I went under water. I treaded water to get up. I started coughing.
“Come on!” Georg yelled.
Gustav pulled me on his back. I looked back the machines were pulling people out by these arm things. They were screaming it was breaking my heart that they were going to die. We came to land of grass. I climbed up cold as ever. I looked at Sedona.
“Sedona!” I yelled. Tom was grinning staring at her.
“Hm!” She looked at me. I pointed to her top she looked down. She looked at Tom slapping him. She pushed Tom over she took his jacket.
“Hey where's yours!”
“In the fight someone pulled it off me this is mine now!” She yelled. I looked to my left a machine with it’s lazers scanning. Trying to see if there was anyone there. We ran up the hill.
We laid on the floor watching it walk over us. We stood up running into the trees. We stood there for a minute.
“We better go this way!” Yana said pointing ahead.
“No! Right!” Tom said.
“No the machine just went that way!” I yelled. It turned round walking this way. We all ran.
OK THE REST OF COURSE IT'S GONNA B SHORT IT'S A HALF
Chapter 4 soon
I'm so bored no-one to tlk to and nothing to do :/
BlondPunk
August 1st, 2008, 12:00 PM
oh mah god.
wer'e gonna die.
yep.
wer'e gonna die.
all of us.
dead.
dieng.
Wer'e gonna die.
>___<
okay.
now I want more again.
luvukaulitztwins
August 1st, 2008, 12:03 PM
oh mah god.
wer'e gonna die.
yep.
wer'e gonna die.
all of us.
dead.
dieng.
Wer'e gonna die.
>___<
okay.
now I want more again.
HAHA no more till 2moz :]
I do have a life
I have no life
LAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
BORED BORED BORED
BlondPunk
August 1st, 2008, 12:31 PM
Okay!
Then go read what I updated!
It's all about the magical wonders of Goliath.
tokiohotel26
August 1st, 2008, 12:51 PM
aliens...
O_o
[mind is still f*cked up...i watched the strangers...]
BlondPunk
August 3rd, 2008, 10:36 PM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!
luvukaulitztwins
August 4th, 2008, 03:37 PM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!
U WANT MORE
*CHUCKS MY LAPTOP AT U*
:[
HAPPY!
BlondPunk
August 4th, 2008, 03:48 PM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!
U WANT MORE
*CHUCKS MY LAPTOP AT U*
:[
HAPPY!
NO! :[
lolz
I can't read ur laptop
It's invisible o.o
Why do I want more you might ask?
Because I won't be here up until Wednesday, or maybe even Saturday!
Why?
because tommorow my mom has Surgery,
and school starts thursday.
And that my good freind is why I want more.
But I can wait ^-^
even though this is how big my patientcy is: .
hehe
luvukaulitztwins
August 4th, 2008, 04:22 PM
I WULD POST NOW BUTT HE FORUM IS WORKING SLOW AND IM NOT FINISHED :shock:
Sorry :[
BlondPunk
August 4th, 2008, 04:41 PM
I WULD POST NOW BUTT HE FORUM IS WORKING SLOW AND IM NOT FINISHED :shock:
Sorry :[
Yeah, they're really slow today!
luvukaulitztwins
August 5th, 2008, 02:55 AM
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
I DNT RELI WANNA WRITE MORE I THINK THE STORY IS JUST SO SH.IT :(
schrei.in.die.nacht
August 5th, 2008, 10:49 AM
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
I DNT RELI WANNA WRITE MORE I THINK THE STORY IS JUST SO SH.IT :(
:shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :shock: :shock: :shock: :cry:
YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
luvukaulitztwins
August 5th, 2008, 02:54 PM
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
I DNT RELI WANNA WRITE MORE I THINK THE STORY IS JUST SO SH.IT :(
:shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :shock: :shock: :shock: :cry:
YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
:/
Maybe...
I may once I have finished making my dreadlocks and coloured hair extensions :]
schrei.in.die.nacht
August 10th, 2008, 01:38 PM
update!!!!!!!!!!!!
and
tomshouldtotallygetmepregnant................
O__o
LMAO
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