Love Song For No One [CHAPIE 8 IS UP!]

[jadell129]

this is my first FF so it's kinda rough on the edges. but they will be sand down in no time :) tell me what you think plz! and more to come just dont want to type right now :mrgreen:

1. Heat
It was early in the evening, on a week day afternoon. There was a Santa Ana (?) wind notice all through San Diego County.

Tori lade on her bed window wide open, in front of the biggest fan she could find. She was still in awe from the concert the night before. She gone to see her fav. band, Tokio Hotel, kick off their summer tour.
"This is unreal!", were the only words to come out of her mouth the entire time she was there.

But now the only thing running through her head was, 'I wonder how many ice cubes I can fit in my bath tub'.

She began to doze off while pondering this thought. But just as she went from a slumber to deep sleep the roar of far off screams filled her eardrums.

Next thing she knows there are 4 strange, sweaty figures climbing in through her window. Still half a sleep Tori wiped her chocolate brown eyes with the back of her hand and giggled like a 12 year old in the presence of JB. (tho she was 18 and didn't even realize they were real)

The 4 figures looked at her and each other with a look that read, 'What the flip?!'.

She didn't take notice though. She just laid back down again and began to doze off once again. Then all of a sudden a huge crowd of raging hormones that are fangirls went sprinting by.

Tori woke up startled at the immense noise and the size of the mob passing by, then by the 4 figures leaning up against the strip of wall under her window. Once the reality of their presence hit her eyes widened and she opened her mouth to scream.

But before she had a chance, one of the figures darted forward and covered her mouth. She began to struggle, when she heard a deep yet soft voice wissper(sp) in her ear, "Please, we just need to get away from them. They have been chasing after us for almost 20 minutes!".

She nodded in agreement and was released. As she turned to see the face of her capture, she realized just who was sitting in her room.....


2. OH.EM.GEE!

This can't be happening! This must be a dream! Wake up already Tori! Wake up!

After what seemed like miles of fangirls passing by, Tori finally asked "Are you guys really Tokio Hotel?".

"Yeah, we really are.", Tom said in a sort of sarcastic, annoyed tone.
This made Tori turn a bright shade of red, and look down at her shaggy purple carpet.

"Shut up Tom, You could at least thank her for not calling the cops on us or anything.", Bill said in an annoyed yet thankful tone as he shot a smile her way.

"Yeah. Yeah......thnx.", He said it so that it lost it's meaning once you replayed it in your head. But still she was happy he had said it, and she smiled at both of them.

"Thanx! We were running from them for a while.", Georg said with an awkward smile.

This was fallowed by a quiet "Thank You." from Gustav.

"Oh, you guys are welcome. But if you don't mind me asking, what exactly are you guys doing here? I mean there isn't a hotel for more then 20 miles.", Tori questioned. As she did so she stood up and walked to the door, opened it, and walked out.

The guys looked at each other questioning what they should do. Just then Tori stuck her head through the door way and asked, "Are you guys coming or what?".
They all laughed and fallowed after her. Tori was a bit on the short side compared to the guys, she was 5'6" and never wore heals. The blue streaks shone in her long midnight black hair. This was due to all the sunshine streaming in through the sky light above. All she needed were wings, and she could pass for an angel. The boys seemed to take notice of this as well, they stood a few feet away with there mouths open in amazement.

Tori just smiled and asked if everything was okay. Not wanting to admit that they were awing over her they replied "Yeah, everything is fine", "I'm okay", "Yeah", everyone except one....Tom. he replied "You're glowing".
This just brought on strange looks and awkward smiles.
"Thank you?"
Yeah,",he finally snapped out of it"Oh, you're......eh........Welcome." Fallowed by a smile only described as perfection.

Tori turned red instantly, but she couldn't get herself to look away. She was pulled in by his smile but trapped by the longing in his soft brown eyes.
3. Tom (his point of view)

"You're glowing"
All I could do was stare at her. I hadn't noticed how beautiful she was when we were sitting in her room. Now under the streaming sunlight coming from the skylight in her roof, I could see her every flaw. But to my surprise the only flaw i could see was that she wasn't in my arms.

"Thank you?"

"Yeah,".
Shoot! what did i just say?! Wait what did she say?! Darn it!
"Oh,you're........eh..........welcome."

I'm so stupid! she must think I'm an idiot now! Just smile Tom, that always works.

All of a sudden i was caught up in her sparkling eyes. That's when i knew i had to make her mine. But just as we were having a moment stupid Bill had to go and ruin it.

"Ehm. Do you think i could use your phone...ehm.....," Bill began, realizing he didn't know her name.

"Ha ha, sorry! i forgot to introduce myself. My name is Tori." She said it with a sweet smile.

"Oh, Hi. I suppose you already Know who we are." Replied Bill.

"Yeah I'm pretty sure i do." Another sweet smile. "Do you guys want something to drink? It's pretty hot outside, shoot it's pretty hot in here!"

We all replied with a yes, and water. After the introductions, a phone call or two and cooling off a bit, we got down to it.

"So is anyone going to answer my question?", Asked Tori taking a sip of her pink lemonade.
I couldn't take my eyes off of her. She was just so calm and indifferent to the fact that we were "rock stars". And judging my all the posters and pictures of us on the walls of her room, her favorite band.

"Oh, well you see we got lost on our way to a signing and when we stopped to get directions we were mobbed by fangirls. So we started to run because more kept joining in, and then more and more as we kept running."

At this point Tori was almost in tears laughing. "Why are you laughing?!" Georg almost screamed it at her, as he stood up.

"I'm sorry! I just think it's funny something like this would happen here.", She replied.

"Oh, well it's still not nice to laugh at others misfortunes you know?"

"I know I'm truly sorry. I couldn't contain my self." Tori said as she regained her calm.

"You have a strange sense of humor." I commented.

"Yeah, so I've been told."

I could feel myself blushing as she looked at me and giggled to herself. That just made her giggle even more.

"Do you live here by yourself?" I asked trying to brake the awkwardness of the situation. After I said it I took a look around and was a bit surprised at what i saw.

Her house, or more specifically the room we were all sitting in, witch i imagine to be the living room was painted a deep red. the floors were dark wood same as most of the furniture. Although her couch was a light tan color with red pillows. The two chairs on either side were the same except they had different striped pillows. There was a striped pillow for every color of the rainbow. There were two book shelfs side to side, all covered in poem books, classic novels and Sci-fi books. She must be a real book worm with all those books. But no were in the room could he find pictures of her family or friends.

"No I don't. I have four room mates."
Suddenly I snapped back, "Oh, that's cool." i said.

Outside you could here the sounds of two cars pulling up to the house.

[Bill Kaulitz=Love]

I like it! Wow, how I'd like to be a few years older and in her place. Write more!

[jadell129]

I like it! Wow, how I'd like to be a few years older and in her place. Write more!

lol thnx!
i will promise :mrgreen:

[steevie!]

oh snap!
I like ^-^
Continue!

[drummergirl24]

Oooo, awesome Dell! I love it...! More when you can!

[jadell129]

haha yes of course!

thnx too :)

[bbgroove]

It would have sucked if it was a two story house... the boys might have been in some trouble if that were the case....lol

update soon (^_^)

[Mrs.TomKaulitz1109]

WHOASNAP...i love it...continue!!!

[tokiohotel26]

CONTINUE!!!

[steevie!]

aw,
Tom ^-^

[jadell129]

aw,
Tom ^-^


haha yeah he makes me smile

[Mrs.TomKaulitz1109]

yay!!! its great...mmm...sarcastic Tom=Love!! lol!!!

[Bill Kaulitz=Love]

Tom is awesome. More!

[tarnished-memory]

Jadell, I love it!

Update soon!

[drummergirl24]

Love the new addition girlie! I love Tom...he's so adorable in this!
More please!

[jadell129]

Love the new addition girlie! I love Tom...he's so adorable in this!
More please!

haha you got it

[drummergirl24]

I just read the update and I love it!!!!! I'm thinking about adding you in my fanfic...do you want to be in it? If you do then PM me your likes/looks/personality/appearance and all that fun stuff!

[Mrs.TomKaulitz1109]

mmm...i love it...more please!!!

this part made me laugh!!

"Oh, well it's still not nice to laugh at others misfortunes you know?"

haha...i can so see him saying that!!!

[Bill Kaulitz=Love]

Oh, Tom is intent on getting her. Continue!

[jadell129]

Oh, Tom is intent on getting her. Continue!

haha ya but im not sure if he will 8-) :lol:

[jadell129]

new-ness! haha tell me what you think plz!!
need comments! haha

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4. a perfect sunset

A moment later the doorbell was rung and the sounds of chirping filled the house.
"I'll get it!", Tori jumped up and walked towards the door. She opened it to find two of her room mates on the other side.
I guess they forgot their key
"Hey guys. You're home early today. Did something happen at work?"

"No, we just thought we would check in on you and make sure you were okay is all."
"Guys I'm fine really! I'm a big girl you know."
"Yeah but still everyone needs there sisters at one point. You can be alone in your head, but you're never alone out here."

Two of them walked into the living room with surprise on their faces.
"I didn't know we had company", Nikki whispered to Tori.
Nikki was tall and very muscular, this was due to the many hours she spent on the soccer field. Her long golden blond curls framed her face very nicely. She wore blue shorts and a white T-shirt with the words 'Bombing for war is like f*cking for virginity' in black and read letters. Her black nail polish stood out against her milky skin, and her sky blue eyes seem to light as she smiled and said, "Hi! I'm Tori's sister Nikki. Nice to meet you!"

They were all surprised when she said the word 'sister' but managed to say hello and introduce them selfs. They were all talking about how they had met and gotten in, you know all that jazz. When another girl walked into the room holding a milk carton and saying, "Nikki you bum spot! I though you said...." she stopped mid-sentence realizing they weren't the alone.
"H-Hi. Sorry I didn't realize anyone was here." She said blushing and bringing the milk carton down in front of her so she could fidget with the cap.
"Ha ha it's okay." Said Bill smiling at how she had become so shy all of a sudden. "Don't mind us really."
The girl smiled and said, "Okay! Well my name is Chelsea."
"I'm their sister.",She said pointing to Tori and Nikki.

At this point the guys were extremely confused." Wait, so all three of you are sisters?",Georg asked while scratching his head.
All three of them laughed and Tori said, "Yeah, strange we know but we all had different moms. So we are half sisters."
"Oh! That makes more sense.", Georg was blushing for some reason.

Again the idle chit-chat began of how they had come to be sitting in the girl's living room. But this time as they were talking Bill tapped Nikki softly on the shoulder and asked, "Will you go for a walk with me?"
"Sure! Let me just get my hoodie, it get a little cold out."

They had been walking in silence for a block or two when Nikki finally spoke up, "So, you're in that band Tori likes rite? Something Tokyo?"
Bill laughed and said "Tokio Hotel. Yeah I am."
"Oh rite! That's what it's called. Sorry I just don't have much time for music anymore."
"And why is that?"

They sat on the curb and Nikki began to explain how when there father had died they all were forced to live with their mothers.. But seeing as how each one's mom hated the two others they decided to move out and live together. But Nikki being the oldest and first out of high school had to work two jobs to pay the bills.
"Oh, that must be tiring. But now that Tori and Chelsea are older can't they help with the bills as well?"
"Yes of course! and they do. But i just got so into working all the time, that it doesn't feel right when i don't."
"So, you enjoy working two jobs and never having any free time?"
"No..... I just don't know.......what to do with the free time." Nikki said in between burst of laughter.
"Well you could always hang out with me." Bill said looking up at the sky. But Nikki could tell he was blushing.
"Ha ha. That's not a bad idea."

Bill looked down just as Nikki placed her right hand over his left, and they looked into each others eyes. With his free hand Bill stroked her porcelain cheek and pulled her head closer to his, pressing his lips onto hers. He pulled away and looked into her blue eyes, witch now reflected the stunning pinks ,yellow and oranges of the perfect sunset behind them. Then once again they kissed this time he pulled her even closer supporting her back and deepening there kiss.


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i might update agin later on tonight. tell me what you think!!
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5. Love or lust?

Back at the house Georg and Gustav were having a great time talking to the bubbly Chelsea.
"You guys are crazy! Selena's butt was WAY bigger then JLO's!"
Georg and Gustav were both teary eyed and rolling on the floor. Chelsea was quite a character. Her long light brown hair looked like a sheet of pure silk. Her skin was a darkly tanned, and her soft brown eyes made her seem exotic. Chelsea was the kind of person that spoke her mind no matter what the subject. It was a very strange incident that her and Georg were both obsessive with peoples........ behinds.

Having grown tiered of all the "behind" talk Tori was sitting outside under a big maple tree. Having wondered were she had gone Tom went looking for her.

Where the **** did she go? just as he thought it he saw her threw the screen door. Wow. How come every time i see her she seems to be glowing?
"Hey, what are you doing?"
"huh?.....oh nothing just....nothing"
"Come on tell me." Tom said as he took a seat next to her. She looked up at him and smiled.

"I was just thinking. That's all."
"Well, what were you thinking about?"
"This." Tori simply replied.
"Come on Tori!! Tell me what you were thinking about, please?" Tom begged

Tori laughed and replied "I was thinking about this. About you and Bill and Gustav and Georg and just everything."
"Oh, well they weren't bad thoughts were they?"
"Ha ha, NO! I was just thinking how weird it is that you just happened to climb in my window."
"Well if you ask me, I'm glad we did." Tom said not once taking his eyes off of Tori's.

"Gosh! You are such a little playboy!"
"Ha ha i wish!"
Tori shot him a questioning look. "I was kidding! Gosh! Take a joke would ya?"
"Ya sure...."Tori looked up at him "Whatever you say."
Tom smiled and added "But i did mean what I said about climbing in your window."

Tori looked at him surprised, "Really?"
"Yeah." He was avoiding looking her in the eyes, and trying his hardest not to turn too red.

She laughed and put her head on his shoulder,"Well I'm glad you did too."
At this point they were both red. Tom softly placed his hand in hers as she leaned her head on his chest.

I can't believe I'm holding hands with TOM KAULITZ!! This is unreal! I think it is safe to say I am the happiest girl alive rite now.

Meanwhile.........

Nikki and Bill were walking hand in hand basking in the silence between them. But it wasn't that awkward silence from before, this was the kind of silence that you had after a passionate kiss. It was a silence filled with love and happiness. Nikki had decided that she would quit her second job and use the time to hang out with Bill for a few days.

"So what exactly are you doing in San Diego?", Nikki asked.
"We started our U.S. tour here."
"Cool! So how long are you in town?"
"Well we missed our signing today so we will probably have to reschedule. I would say.....3 or 4 days."
"Well then we must hang out before you leave." Nikki said with a smile that had sadness lingering in it from the thought of him leaving.

They were coming into view of the house now, and they could see two ppl sitting under the big maple tree in the front yard.
"I think one of the guys fell for your sister." Bill said laughing.
"Oh, I hope it's not ...." Nikki said suddenly stopping and covering her mouth in mid-sentence.
"You hope it's not who?" Bill questioned.
"Tori." Nikki said reluctantly.
"Why?"
"It's a long story."
"well let's go for another walk and you can tell me."
"But it's starting to get dark."
"It's okay you're with me" Bill said protectively putting his arm around her.
She smiled and agreed, they turned around and walked the opposite way.

[Mrs.TomKaulitz1109]

.....mmmmm....gurfrann i love it!!!! i love it when they get close and almost dirty lol...more please!!!!

[drummergirl24]

Ooooo...I love it! Can't wait for more girlie!

[jadell129]

thnx! i will post more later :]

[tears.dont.fall]

-squeal-
ZOMG!!!!
DELL I LOVES IT!!!!!
^^

[drummergirl24]

Awesome update!!! I can't wait for more!

[Mrs.TomKaulitz1109]

whoasnap!!! i wanna know why it is not good t Tori is falling for someone...more please!!

[jadell129]

whoasnap!!! i wanna know why it is not good t Tori is falling for someone...more please!!

i will try and update again today. depends tho

[dizzinikki77]

i already told you this but i love my role!!! :)

[jadell129]

lol yes you told me! haha
more to come!!! but it's mostly bout Tori's past.

[jadell129]

6. Tori's Past

Nikki and Bill walked four blocks to a small coffee shop that was open late.
"So tell me this long story." Bill said after they had bought to large coffees.

"Well it all started when Tori was little. She lived with her mom, Cindy. Everything was fine until they moved to Texas. See her mom was having a hard time with her life in general, and being in a new place where she didn't know anyone just made it worse. She became an alcoholic and at one point she even did drugs."

"Oh mein gott! Thats terrible!" Bill cut in almost spitting out his coffee.

"Yes I know. But thats not all, see because she was always drunk or high Cindy couldn't keep a job for more then a few weeks. Every time she got fired everything became worse. She became frustrated and angry but since she didn't really have anyone to talk to, she would take out her anger and frustration on Tori. Cindy would hit her, slap her till her face was red, and at one point she would even through her on the floor and kick her till Tori passed out. But since Tori was only 5 or so she didn't have anyone that she could tell. So things just went on like that for a while, that is until she turned six. That's when Cindy met Al. He was a disgusting perv. who always took advantage of Tori when her mom was passes out drunk. She couldn't take it anymore, so she told her school counselor who called child services. They immediately took Tori away from Cindy. That's when she came to live with Dad and us."

"That's horrible! Poor Tori must have had a hard time trusting people after that." Bill stated as he took a sip of his drink. Rubbing the back of Nikki's had with his thumb.

"Oh!, that she did. She wouldn't speak to anyone until she was 7 1/2. See our dad was gay, so he always had a boyfriend over at the house and such. Well Tori didn't like men in general, the only reason she was okay around dad was because well, he was our dad. But eventually she got a hold of the fact that we weren't going to hurt her, that we loved her. Finally she started going to school when she was about 8, she had been home schooled up until then. For a while everything was normal. She started trusting people again, made friends, started dating, she was happy."

"Then what happened? I mean why don't you think it is a good idea for one of the guys to fall for her?"

"Well, see everything was normal until my dad died. Tori was 16 and it was just too much for her." Nikki paused, but seeing Bill's confused face she added, "She was there when our dad was shot."

"Shot?!"

"Yeah, his boyfriend of the time, Joey, he had real problems. We all new it, and we had told Dad many times that he should stop seeing him but he never listened. Well one day Joey lost it, him and Dad had gotten into a big fight and he pulled out a gun. Tori had come home for lunch like she always did on Thursdays. We would rotate, each day one of us would go home and eat with Dad." Nikki had tears welding up in her eyes. "She heard voices coming from the office and she peeked into the room just in time to see Joey pull the trigger. He shot five times before he realized what he had done. He fell to the floor and Tori could see the dead body covered in blood. She ran out of the house, took the car and drove back to school. She came into my class, her face covered in tears and said 'Dad's dead!'"

Tears started to roll down Nikki's pale cheeks as Bill held her in his arms and tried his hardest to comfort her. After a few minutes Nikki composed herself and they began the short walk home.

"Ever since that day Tori has never let herself completely trust anyone besides us. She has been in relationships but when she senses they are getting to serious she calls it quits."

"Wow. I feel bad that those horrible people had to ruin her happiness like that."
Nikki smiled taking Bill's hand in hers and said "Yeah."
They reached the house to find Tori asleep in Tom's arms, who was also asleep. Their fingers interlocked and bodies close together.

"But maybe Tom can change that." Bill whispered, a confidant reassuring smile on his face.
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sorry for the delay here is the latest chapter hope you like it! I AM SO SORRY IT WAS ALL MESSED UP BUT I FIXED IT!! YAYA!!
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7. Coffee

“I have an idea,” Bill said with a devious smile on his face.
“What is it?” Nikki asked.
Bill leaned in and whispered into Nikki’s ear. “That’s not a bad idea!”
Nikki disappeared to the side of the house and came back holding a long green garden hose. She motioned for Bill to turn the water on and they drenched Tori and Tom. They jumped as soon as the cold water hit them.
“WHAT THE **** ARE YOU DOING?!” screamed a soaked Tom.
Nikki and Bill burst into laughter, “Sorry we just couldn’t resist!” They both said.
“YOU’RE SUCH A BUM SPOT BILL!”
Hearing all the yelling coming from outside Georg, Gustav and Chelsea ran to the door.
“What happened to you?!” asked a giggling Georg.
But Tom was too angry to even speak. “I think we better go now, Tom should change before he catches a cold.” Said a calm and collected Gustav.
“Yeah you’re probably right.” agreed Bill. “Can one of you girls give us a lift to our rental?”
“Sure! I can give you a ride!” Chelsea beamed in before the others could get a word out. She smiled and said, “Let me get my keys!”

They all piled into Chelsea’s silver Dodge Durango, and they all tried there best to figure out where they had left their car.
“I think it’s this way”
“No! It’s that way!”
“You’re both wrong, It’s to the left rite there!”
It when on like that for a while, but little did they know that Tom had already told her how to get there. As they pulled up to the AMPM where they had left their rental, “We’re here!” chirped at them.
“See I was rite.” Georg boasted. They broke out into an argument once again.

“Are you okay Tom? You were awfully quiet on the way here.” Chelsea asked in a worried tone.
“Yeah, I’m fine I just have a lot on my mind, is all.”
“Like what?”
“Nothing, just…things. That’s all.”
“Okay, well I’m always here if you need to talk.” Chelsea said with a smile. “Here give me your phone for a sec.”, she added.
“Okay?” he handed her his phone with a puzzled look on his face.
She pressed a bunch of buttons and then handed it back.
“What did you do?” he asked
“Nothing. I just put our phone numbers in, that’s all”
“Oh, okay.”

Finally once the others had calmed down, they said there goodbye’s and Chelsea went home.
The next day Chelsea was woken by the buzz of her sidekick, witch was on the side table next to her. She reached up a hand and pulled it down to her face. The screen read “Text message from Tom”. She shot up and opened the message. It read “Hey Chelsea. I was wondering if u wanted 2 get coffee.” She replied and got up to shower and change.
“Sure I would love to! Meet me at the living room café in 20.”
After she showered she changed into a pair of black shorts, white t-short with a picture of a guitar in black, black Vans and finished off with a white ribbon in her long brown hair. She tipped toed out into the hall, being careful not to wake anyone grabbed her keys and drove to the café. When she got there she was waved over by an eager Tom. They drank coffee and talked about….well about Tori.
“So you really like her don’t you?”, Chelsea asked with a giggle.
“Yes I really do. There is just something special about her. She’s different then all the other girls. That’s why I need your help to get her to feel the same way about me.”
“Well…” Chelsea took a sip of her coffee before she began again “I don’t think you need my help. She seems to already be developing feelings for you.”
“Really?!” Tom asked with an eager look on his face.
“Yeah!”, Chelsea said with a giggle “So just keep being yourself.”

They said their goodbyes and Chelsea went home. When she arrived she noticed there was a red jeep in the driveway were her Durango had been earlier. She unlocked the door to find one of her best friends standing on the other side. She set her keys down and before she could turn around to say a proper hello she was on the floor with Sy on top of her.
“Where have you been hiding?”
“I wasn’t hiding, if I was you wouldn’t be on top of me now would you?”
“True true.”
Sy lifted herself off of Chelsea and announced chels’ arrival to the rest of the house. Chelsea stood up and dusted herself off as she examined her friend a little closer.
Her crazy brown air made her beautiful green eyes jump out at you. And as always she was dressed in ripped jeans black Zeppelin shirt. But also as always she looked simply stunning.
“So where is everyone?”

[Mrs.TomKaulitz1109]

awww...poor tori...that was really sad but i loved the new chappie...cant wait for more mama!!

[tears.dont.fall]

that ending was so sweet

[drummergirl24]

really good addition!!! I loved it even though it was so sad! More please!

[jadell129]

:D you guys are the best!
i will update as soon as i can. but i think i mite need a few more characters if anyone wants to be in it just PM with:
your look
personality
style

:D
thnx!!

[xXxMandiixXx]

i've been reading this from the start but havent had a chance to comment it so yeah

I LOVE THIS STORY !!!

and omg poor tori :(

lets hope tom can change tori for the better :)

CONTINUE!!!

<3 Mandii xx

[jadell129]

hi madii!

haha let's hope

thnx im glad you like it :]

[Mrs.TomKaulitz1109]

oh i loved it!!!! so good..cant wait for more...i was think chelsea was gonna steal tom from tori there for a sec lol...more soon!!!

[tears.dont.fall]

wow...your posts are all screwed up...

YAY!!!
im in it, im in it!!!!!

WOOHOO FOR TACKLES!!!!!
^^

[jadell129]

wow...your posts are all screwed up...

YAY!!!
im in it, im in it!!!!!

WOOHOO FOR TACKLES!!!!!
^^

hah i just realized!
ahhh i must fix!

[tears.dont.fall]

wow...your posts are all screwed up...

YAY!!!
im in it, im in it!!!!!

WOOHOO FOR TACKLES!!!!!
^^

hah i just realized!
ahhh i must fix!
no prob...all you really have to do is switch chapter 6 and 7 around an you should be good.

[jadell129]

wow...your posts are all screwed up...

YAY!!!
im in it, im in it!!!!!

WOOHOO FOR TACKLES!!!!!
^^

hah i just realized!
ahhh i must fix!
no prob...all you really have to do is switch chapter 6 and 7 around an you should be good.

yes i fixed! yay
hehe im sorry ur entrance was kinda...?...shaky lol

[spammi]

very good i cant wait for more :D

[tears.dont.fall]

i still think sy would like to be tackled by Georg.
xD
yes yes Sy would
:lol:

[drummergirl24]

Ahh that was sooo cute! I can't wait for mor sweetie!

[jadell129]

Okay! This is the longest chapter yet i believe and frankly it's a lot of words! lol but i hope you like it, tell me what you think!
8. Date?
“Hey Tori.”
“Hi?”
Silence.
“Not to sound rude but who is this?”
“Ha ha! This is Tom.”
“Oh! I’m sorry. Ha ha. I didn’t recognize your voice.”
“It’s okay. So…do you have any plans for today?”
“Umm no I don’t think so. Why?”
“I was wondering if you could show me around.”
“Oh sure! There is a ton to do around here.”
“Cool. Umm…I’ll pick you up at 9? Is that okay?”
“Yeah that’s perfect!”
“Okay well I’ll see you in a bit.”
“Okay! See you then.”
Tori hung up the phone and realized she was grinning from ear to ear. She quickly got up and showered. When she got out she spent a good amount of time going through her closet at least 10 times before finally picking something to wear. She decided on a pair of light blue skinny jeans, a white and black Beatles shirt, silver ballet flats and a small black hoodie. She pulled half of her hair back and tied it together with a silver ribbon. She looked in the mirror, took a deep breath and walked out to the kitchen.
I wonder where he would want to go? Well just about every mall here has a Lids store if not 2, so that should keep him happy! I suppose I could show him around Horton Plaza. I wanted to go to the book store there anyways.
“Hey there stranger!” Chelsea interrupted
“Wah?...Oh hey.”
Tori went straight to the fridge and reached for the orange juice only to have her fingers grasping nothing but air. She looked at her hand in surprise, and then turned around to see Sy sitting at the island with the orange juice next to her.
“Sy can I have the orange juice please?”
“Yeah here.”
“Oh and when did you get here?”
“A few minutes before Chelsea…” but before she could finish Chelsea had her hand over Sy’s mouth and finished for her “before I got up.”
But Tori was so lost in thought she hadn’t noticed anything. “Cool.”
Just as she put her cup down from taking a drink someone knocked at the door.
“That’s for me!”
“It is?” Both Sy and Chelsea questioned.
“Yeah! Tom and me are going to go explore this Oh so wonderful town” Tori said with a small giggle “I’ll be back later.” She kissed her sister and her close friend goodbye and reached for the door.
“Call me later okay?” Chelsea said just before Tori closed the door.
“Who’s Tom?” Sy asked, extremely confused.

Outside Tom stood in front of his car, hands in his pockets and a huge smile on his face. “Hey! You’re early.” Tori said as she walked towards him and then stopped about a yard in front of him.
“Yeah, I was too excited. I could leave and then come back later, if you want?”
Tori looked surprised at first but then she couldn’t help but smile. He’s so nervous! It’s kind of cute.
“No silly! It’s okay, I’m glad you came early” she said with a smile.
“Are you sure?”
“YES! Now come on we have a lot of ground to cover.”
Tom smiled and they both stepped into his car. After a long hour of trying to navigate towards their destination Tori finally gave up and took over the driver’s seat. Finally they arrived at Horton Plaza. After a minute of just standing in the mist of a giant crowed of people. After finding an opening in the sea of people they headed up stairs to the second floor. They went in every store they saw. And got kicked out of about half of them for being too loud or destroying displays and what not. They were both enjoying themselves to the fullest extent.
Finally after making their way back to the elevator where they had begun there rant of destruction, they went up to the third floor to get some food.
Tori grabbed Tom’s arm and asked “Tom can we please go in here for a minute?” She pointed at the open door to a bookstore.
“Sure.” Tom shrugged. Twenty minutes later he was STARVING! But he had lost Tori among all the stacks of books. He was about to panic when he passed by a row of sci-fi books. He stepped back and looked down the row once again. He saw a beautiful girl sitting cross legged surrounded by stacks of novels.
He found himself staring at this girl. She on the other hand had felt his eyes on her and didn’t know if she should look up or not, but eventually she did. They both looked at each other and smiled, Tori motioned to Tom to sit with her and her many piles of books. He did as told and found a spot and centered himself rite in front of her.
She looked up in surprise at how close he was. She smiled and began to read from the book in her hands…
“ It was many and many a year ago,
In a kingdom by the sea,
That a maiden there lived whom you may know
By the name of ANNABEL LEE;
And this maiden she lived with no other thought
Than to love and be loved by me.

I was a child and she was a child,
In this kingdom by the sea;
But we loved with a love that was more than love-
I and my Annabel Lee;
With a love that the winged seraphs of heaven
Coveted her and me.

And this was the reason that, long ago,
In this kingdom by the sea,
A wind blew out of a cloud, chilling
My beautiful Annabel Lee;
So that her highborn kinsman came
And bore her away from me,
To shut her up in a sepulcher
In this kingdom by the sea.

The angels, not half so happy in heaven,
Went envying her and me-
Yes!- that was the reason (as all men know,
In this kingdom by the sea)
That the wind came out of the cloud by night,
Chilling and killing my Annabel Lee.

But our love it was stronger by far than the love
Of those who were older than we-
Of many far wiser than we-
And neither the angels in heaven above,
Nor the demons down under the sea,
Can ever dissever my soul from the soul
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee.

For the moon never beams without bringing me dreams
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;
And the stars never rise but I feel the bright eyes
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;
And so, all the night-tide, I lie down by the side
Of my darling- my darling- my life and my bride,
In the sepulcher there by the sea,
In her tomb by the sounding sea.”
She looked up, smiled and added “Annabel Lee By Edgar Allen Poe. My favorite.” She moved her hand across the page as if she could feel the words. Tom was struck by the sound of her voice as she had read. But all the same he felt his heart flutter and skip a beat as she looked up at him and started to blush. He couldn’t stand it anymore he had to do it! He just had to! So…he did.
He leaned down in front of her so that they were face to face. She looked at him, confusion on her delicate face as he pushed a stray hair behind her ear and she began to form the words ‘thank you’ as he placed his lip on hers catching her in the middle of the word you.
They sat there in the middle of a bookstore surrounded by pages and pages of words, yet they could not find the words to say to each other. So they sat there, staring dreamily into the others eyes, fingers interlocked, as their hearts slowly started to beat as one.

[drummergirl24]

Oh my goodness, I love that poem...I know it by heart! It's so beautiful...and so are you for putting it in your adorable story!
I can't wait for more!

[jadell129]

Oh my goodness, I love that poem...I know it by heart! It's so beautiful...and so are you for putting it in your adorable story!
I can't wait for more!

lol ya i love that poem too!
haha it's one of my faves next to the raven :]

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:shock:
i love love LOVE Edgar Allen Poe!!!

[mandieluvsth4ever]

*new reader*

i loved that chapter !

[jadell129]

*new reader*

i loved that chapter !
:mrgreen: thank you!

i wil be trying to post a new chapter soon i have been really busy lately and haven't been able to update

[tears.dont.fall]

sy needs a new chappie!!!!!!!!!


like now!!!

she has been deprived of internet access for 2 weeks now and is just now regaining her sanity.

well a little bit of it at least.

[TH<3]

updateee? =[

[tears.dont.fall]

DELL????
are you there????


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-is all alone-