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Izzylicous
March 16th, 2008, 12:14 PM
Ch.1-Monday,Not Off to a Good Start
It was Monday morning.The bright Australian sun was hitting Shiloh's face.She fluttered her beautiful green eyes open......"Uggggghhhh..."she said.
Today Shiloh didn't feel like getting up for school.Well she never really does.But today she REALLY didn't want to get up for school because today was the day that she would have to tell her friends that she was moving to Germany.But she had to.Suddenly out of no where her older brother Ethan came in singing 'I'm Every Woman' by Chaka Khan.
He danced around her bed with a bucket of water full of ice cold water in his arms.
Her brother was 22 he was kinda of immature.No wait scratch that he was VERY immature but Shiloh liked that about her brother...He was very fun and laid back.
"I'm every woman,its all in me!"he sang like a broken record.
Then he did the unthinkable....He dumped the bucket of water on his little sister.
Her jet black hair with dark blue streaks was drenched,dripping wet.The little droplets of water fell onto her shoulders and she had a scowl on her face.She glared at her older brother.
"Wakey wakey little sis!"
"AAAAAAAAAAAAH I MA SO GOING TO KILL YOUR ***!!!!!!!!!"she yelled at the top of her lungs.
"Awww little sis...Don't yell I just wanted to wake you up that way you wont miss school"he said innocently.
She chased him.But when she got into the hallway she slipped back because the water dripped on the floor.She hit her head on the hard wood floor.
"OUCH!"she yelled.
"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!"Her brother bursted out laughing.She got up,jumped on his back,and started pulling his hair.
"Why the **** did you poor freezing cold water on me?!?!?!?"
"Get off of me you fat cow!"he yelled.She was pulling his hair really hard.
"Ouch!"he cried.
"Pay back is a ***** isn't it Ethan!"she screamed back while she was still pulling on Ethan's golden blond locks.
"What in the **** is going on here?!?!?!"their dad came out yelling.
His black hair was messed up and frizzy and he was in his robe and pajamas.
"He started it!"Shiloh said while pointing at her older brother.
"No I didn't!!She did!"
"Did not!"she argued.
"Did too."
"Did not."
"Did too."
"Did not."
"Did too!"
"Shut it!Both of you!Shiloh go get ready for school!Ethan go to your room or get a job or something and stop bothering your little sister!"
"Yes dad"they both said in a bored tone.

Shiloh was ready for school.
What she had on was a plaid button up shirt that was purple and black,she rolled the sleeves up to her elbows, and she wore a black tank top under it.Shiloh wore black skinny jeans on her thin legs.She had a lot of bracelets around her wrists,a silver necklace with a black jewel in the middle,and some silver earrings on her ears.Also since she had both of the sides of her bottom lip pierced she wore black lip wrings on both sides of her bottom lip.
And she had a silver tongue piercing.
Satisfied with the way she looked,she walked out the front door and headed to school.
'I wonder how my friends are going to take the big new about me moving in with my mom in Germany?'she thought a she was walking to school.

Shiloh was in front of her gigantic high school building.
BRRRRRRRRRIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGG
The bell rung.
'Just in time' she thought and she headed off to her first class.

She entered the small classroom and she sat with all her friends
Flora,Joey,Gabriel((((Gabriel is a girl)))),Darnell,Gavin,Elayne,Elijah,Hannah and Saidie.
"Hey!"Saidie greeted.
"Oh hey Saidie!!"Shiloh smiled.
"How was your weekend?"Shiloh asked Joey while she was staring into his beautiful azure eyes smiling.
"We all kicked his *** in a game of Soccer!"
Gavin said.
"Yeah and we were there to watch!"Elayne and Gabriel said.
"Yeah it was awesome!"Elijah said.
Joey began to blush"I was going soft on you guys thats why you guys won."
"Of course you were"Darnell said with his voice full sarcasm.
"Well seems like you guys had a nice weekend...Too bad mine wasn't so nice"Shiloh said.
"What happened?" Saidie asked.
"Well I got some news and.....I'm leaving Austalia to go move in with my mom in Germany!"
"WHAT?!?!??!?!?!"all her friends said,staring at her with their eyes full of shock.

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Izzylicous
March 16th, 2008, 12:26 PM
CH.2-Telling Gina Off

"Didn't your mom leave you and your dad here??"Saidie asked.
"Yeah she did but she says that she wants to make up for the years that she wasn't there for me...I went because I felt bad and I kind of had to you guys"Shiloh frowned while saying this.
"Define leaving next week!"Gabriel said.
"Well I'm leaving this Saturday"she answered.
Everyone frowned.
"We're all going to miss you"Joey said gently as he put a hand on her shoulder.
"But don't worry you guys I'll visit on Holidays and vacations!"Shiloh said trying to cheer her friends up.
"At least we'll still get to see you"Elayne said happily.
"If you're sad about leaving think of it as going on a new adventure...I mean its going to be really cool in Germany....Its legal for you to drink liquor in Germany.
"I don't wanna drink liquor...But you have a good point about going on a new adventure"Shiloh said smiling.
"For once he is right!"Elijah said jokingly.
"But how are you going to be able to survive your mother?"Flora asked.
"I don't know....But I hope that she is not sleeping around with men...and I'm still ****** at her for leaving my dad,Ethan,and me here"she said glumly.
The school bell run signaling for all the kids to get to their next class.
"Well see you guys later!"Shiloh said to her friends.
"Bye they all said.
[[At lunch]]
The were all sitting down.
"You are so lucky that you're moving though you wont have to deal with Gina and her little followers!"Flora said.
"Speaking of the devil shes headed towards us right now!"Elayne said.
"Aaaaaaw Shiloh I heard that you're moving to Germany...Too bad no ones going to miss you!"
"Go away you ***** why don't you just get back to work giving guys hand jobs TRICK!"[[Sorry for the bad language]]Shiloh said.
"Hallelujah!!I've finally seen the light!!!"Elijah said.
"And what exactly is the light??"Gabriel asked.
"Well its Shiloh telling Gina off or Jessica Alba in a bikini."
Shiloh and her friends started to burst out laughing because of Elijah's remark.
"UGH!I demand respect!"Gina said.
"Yeah Gina demands respect!"One of Gina's group members Kat repeated.
"KAT!"she said.
"Gina how are we supposed to respect you when you don't even respect yourself.
You need to stop sleeping around with guys and stop dressing like ***** and respect yourself."
Shiloh said.
"I'm fine the way I am!!!!"Gina yelled.
"LETS GO GIRLS!"
"I'm gunna pray for her"Shiloh said.
Gina left and her group members followed.
"Wow that was weird"Joey said.
"Yeah"Darnell nodded.
"Well looks like its time for our next class...."Flora said.
"See you guys later"Shiloh waved at her friends and they all left the cafeteria.



I might right the third one right now
it depends
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Well some info on the fan fic
Shiloh is half German and Australian
Her mom is German her dad is Australian
and she has a thick Australian accent because she was born and raised in Sidney....
By the way right now the story is taking place in
Sidney Australia...
Just to let you guys know!!!!
TH is going to come up soon!!!!
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TH_luv
March 16th, 2008, 12:57 PM
Ich liebe de fanfic! >.< I want more and lmao that was funny! "well,its Shiloh telling Gina off or Jessica Alba in a bikini" XD lmao rofl! that was funny!

Izzylicous
March 16th, 2008, 02:10 PM
Ch.3-The Night Before saying goodbye

Shiloh's last days in Australia flyed by.
Now here she is laying on her bed the night before she has to leave to Germany.
'I wonder what mom is going to say when I get there' she thought.
'I shouldn't even care about what she says or has to say...She left me ,dad,and Ethan when I was only six.She left me....I had to grow up qithout a mother's love because she wanted to start a new life....
[[OMG ITS A FLASH BACK WHAT ARE WE GOING TO DO?!?!?!]]
Ethan was sleeping through this whole event but Shiloh wasn't...Ethan was eleven and Shiloh was only six....
She was hiding in the hallway lisyening to her parents' conversation.
"Ashton I want a new life!"her mother Abbey screamed.
"What do you want to do Abbey??Just leave the kids with me here in Sidney motherless!"
"If that is what it takes!"Abbey screamed.
"You are so selfish...Don't you ever think of anyone besides yourself?!?!"
"I am not being selfish ASHTON!"
"YES YOU ARE!!!"
"I'm sorry Ashton but I have to go because I've also met another man.........."
"You know what go leave I'll take care of the kids!You don't even have to take a glance at them for the wrest of your worthless life Abbey!"
"I'm not saying that I want to be completely out of their lives I just wanna start a new life....But I want you to take care of them!"
"Leave I'll take care of them!"
"Okay then!Bye!"and with that said Shiloh's mom headed out the front door and left.
Shiloh ran up to her dad.
"Oh Shiloh!"her dad embraced her.
"Why were you and mommy fighting?"
A tear started to fall down her dads cheek.
"Well ummmmmmmm......sometimes your mommy and I fight over which flavor of ice cream tastes the best..."
"Where did mommy go daddy?"Shiloh asked innocently.
"Mommy went away for a long time....But you'll see her again.....Okay sweety"her dad explained.
"Come on I'll tuck you back into bed."
"Okay daddy."
[[THE END OF THE FLASH BACK WHOA!!!!!]]
"****** I hate her so much"Shiloh said as she punched her mattress with her small fist.
She began to cry.
'Why was mom so selfish?'she thought.
She cried and cried until she fell asleep.

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Izzylicous
March 17th, 2008, 08:26 PM
Ch4-Goodbye Australia Hello Germany

"Wake up Shiloh...You need to get ready to go to the airport.."Her dad said while stroking her soft thick black and blue hair.She glanced up at her dad's Eden green eyes that were the same color as hers.
"I don't want to go to Germany dad, I like it here in Australia..."
"I know you don't but you have to do this for your mother"her dad replied.
"Well I guess you're right dad."
"Okay well start getting ready while Ethan and I start putting your stuff in the car."
"Okie dokie dad."

Shiloh was finished getting ready.She had soft dark bow sweat pants,a light blue short sleeved henley,a dark blue matching sweater.Her was up in a mess bun and she had a little light blue bow on the side of her head.And on her feet she wore a pair of light blue flip flops.
'Its only the airport...And plus my trip is going to take hours' Shiloh thought as she was staring herself down in the mirror for the last time.Then she grabbed her carry on bag and ran out to the front yard.

"Well Shiloh everything here is pretty much done" her dad told her while Ethan was putting in the last bag.
"Looks like we could get going"Ethan said.
Everyone got into the car.Her father in the driver's seat,Ethan in the passenger's seat and her in the back seat.Her father started the car.Shiloh turned around to look at the back window a tear rolled down her pale cheek.
'Goodbye home sweet home' she thought as she watched her house fade away while the car just kept on moving forward.

She arrived at the airport.She stared in shock.Before her eyes were all of her friends and they made a giant sign that said "We're going to miss you Shiloh!"
she jumped out of the car and she quickly ran out to all of her friends to give them a group hug.
"AAAAAAAAAAWWWWW!!!You guys didn't have to do this for me!"Shiloh said while smiling.
"But we did!"Saidie said.
"YEAH!"The wrest of her friends agreed.
Ethan and Shiloh's dad walked behind her.
"Come on you guys...Shiloh can't be late for her flight"her dad said.
Everyone nodded and they followed her dad inside the airport.
"Well heres my stop.."Shiloh said in a depressed tone.
She gave her dad a big bear hug and he kissed her forehead.
"Don't worry kiddo...You'll survive living with your mom.."
Shiloh chuckled a little bit at this.
"Come here skwirt!"Ethan said.He gave her a hug.
"Wow know I'm gunna miss bugging you...Nut thats why God invented telephones!"
Shiloh gave all of her friends.As she entered her gate her friends held up the sign.
"WE'LL MISS YOU SHILOH!"All of them yelled.
"Bye you guys!"she waved.
And she began to cry but no one noticed.

The plane ride to Germany was agonizing long but she was finally there.And boy was she lost.
"UGH!What the ****?!?!?I don't know all this German crap!Everyone I've asked to translate doesn't even know English!ARGH!I'm so confuzzled!"she said to herself.
Then she saw a group of boys one of them had long black hair with blonde streakes,another one had dreadlocks that were dirty blonde,another one had long straight light brown hair,and the last one had short dirty blonde hair.They all were wearing hats and sunglasses.
She quickly walked up to them.
"Ummm...DO you guys know any English???"
"Oh no..We've been caught!"the one with the dreadlocks.
"What are yo guys talking about I just wanted to know if you guys know any English"she said.
"You're not from around here aren't you?"The one with the black hair said.
"No I just came here from Australia."
"Well we're part of a band named Tokio Hotel and we thought that you were going to chase us.....Well I'm Bill Kaulitz this is my twin brother Tom Kaulitz and thats Gustav Schafer and Georg Listing."
"Oooooooooooooooooooooooh"Shiloh said.
The boys took off their hats and sunglasses.
"Ach so!Es Tokio Hotel((Oh!Its Tokio Hotel))!"A girl screamed.
"Say what?!?!"Shiloh said in a very confused tone.
"RUN!!!!!!!"The boys of Tokio Hotel shouted.





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Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S
March 17th, 2008, 10:36 PM
love it please write more...

TH_luv
March 17th, 2008, 10:48 PM
yay! she meets TH! awesomeness I want mehr! =D

Izzylicous
March 18th, 2008, 06:39 PM
CH.5-Getting Chased
Bill pulled her arm.
"AAh!Where the **** are you guys taking me?!?!?"Shiloh screamed.
"Do you wanna get run over buy a large group of fan girls??"
Bill asked.
"No..."she replied.
"Then I suggest that you come with us!"He pulled her arm and they ran.
"BILL ICH LIEBE DICH!"One of the girls screamed.
"Wow....they must REALLY like you!"Shiloh said running next to Bill.
"No kidding!"Tom said coming up from behind.
Bill still had his hand on Shiloh's arm.
And....Surprise surprise a group of paparazzis were chasing them.
"Oh mein gott!"Tom said.
"Bill who is this new girlfriend of yours?!?"The paparazzi asked.
"I'm not his girlfriend!"Shiloh yelled.Bill frowned a little bit at this 'no i can't like' Bill thought.
"Aaaaw no need to be feisty!" the paparazzi said.
"Hey we can go in here!"Georg pointed at a small broom closet.
"YEAH!"Gustav agreed.
"Tom opened the samll broom closet and Bill,Shiloh,Georg,Gustav,and himself went in.
The girls wouldn't stop pounding on the doors.
As they were pounding they kept on yelling "Tokio Hotel!Tokio Hotel!Tokio Hotel!Tokio Hotel!"
"We're stuck inside this broom closet!"Gustav said in a furious tone.
"Well at least we're safe"Bill said trying to put up everyones mood.
"Hey I think I got an idea"Shiloh said looking up at the air vent above their heads.




Sorry its short but my mom kicked me off
>=[[well i'll probably update some more 2night

Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S
March 18th, 2008, 07:07 PM
ooo...whats the idea...cant what until more...

Izzylicous
March 18th, 2008, 09:40 PM
Ch.6-The Escape Plan That Went Bad

"Okay you see that vent up there....Well we're going to escape through there"Shiloh whispered.
"I have two questions"Tom piped up.
"1.Why are we whispering 2.ARE YOU INSANE!?!?!"Tom yelled.
"Shut up!"Shiloh put her hand over Tom's mouth and he kept on rambling on but no one understood him.
"Me and my older brother used to do this all the time at my dads old office building....Don't ask why..."
"Okay this is what we're going to do.....Bill since you're like a giant compared to me your going to open the
vent....I'll go in first."
Bill opened the vent.Shiloh jumped up and grabbed on to the edges of the air vent.Using her muscles she pulled her self up and her two legs were on each side of the vent...Now she was hanging up side down.
"Crap how am I going to get out of this position?"She said.
All the boys just stared at her.
Her hand slipped.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!"She fell on top of Bill's stomach.
"Oof!"They were both blushing like mad.
"I'm not that fat am I?"
"No you just fell on my stomach"Bill said.
"Oops!Sorry!"she got off of him.
"Well I'm going to need a boost"she sighed.
"I'll do it!"Bill said happily.Everyone stared at him including Shiloh.
"I mean I'll do it..."Bill said in a more "normal" tone.
Bill boosted her.
Shiloh helped everybody in and they were crawling throught the vent.Shiloh was leading and Bill,Tom,Georg,and Gustav followed.
"Cool I found a twenty Australian dollars!"Gustav said.
"Oh hey give it back thats mine Gustav!"
The vent creaked.
"Shhh!Did you guys hear that?"
"Hear what?"Bill asked.
The vent began to shake and it broke.
"Shiloh,Bill,Tom,Georg,and Gustav fell out of the vent.They were all covered in dust.
They landed in the area where they weigh peoples luggage.
The worker looked at them.
"Hallo!"Shiloh said as she gave them a nervous smile.


This one was kinda short too!
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Mr.G.L+Ms.K.S
March 18th, 2008, 09:59 PM
lol....please write more....

TH_luv
March 19th, 2008, 06:15 PM
I want more! >.< its awesome

Izzylicous
March 26th, 2008, 06:23 PM
Sorry I haven't updated in a while....Well hope you guys enjoy this Chapter......
thought

Enjoy!
Chapter.7-Mom I Can't Believe You!
The worker stared at Shiloh."Well ummmm....I should get going..."and with that said Shiloh left to go get her bags and the boys did the same.

Shiloh was standing in front of the airport waiting for her mom to pick her up.She probably forgot about me!A black stretch limo passed in front of her.One of the windows lowered.Bill stuck his head out of the window.
"Hey I never got your name!"Bill said."It Shiloh"Shiloh said."Shiloh what a unique name....Do you need a ride somewhere??"Bill asked."Actually I think I do need a ride some where because I think that my mom forgot about me..."Shiloh said dully."Well then hop in!!"Tom said as he pushed his brother out of the window.

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"You said that you came fropm Australia...So what part of Australia were you born in?"Gustav asked."Well I was born and raised in Sidney"she said in a tone that showed that she was proud of where she came from."Does everyone there have a sexy accent like you?"Tom asked giving her "The eye brow"while playing with his lip ring."Well the majority of people do"she said with a little bit of laughter in her voice."Here is your stop Miss Shiloh...."the limo driver said.They were parked in front of a beautiful mansion.
[i]Wow she thought.She stared at the house in awe.
"Bye Shiloh!"All of the boys said in unison.
"Thanks for the lift guys...Maybe I'll see you guys again someday"Shiloh said getting out of thbe car.
All the boys waved at her.The limo began to strat driving and before she knew it the limo was out of sight.Shiloh checked if the front door was opened.And it was.Shiloh heard a sound that sounded like a cow eating grass.SHe walked in what seemd like the formal living room and she saw her mom making out with some guy.Who is that guys is the guy she ditched me,dad,and Ethan for???
Her mom stopped kissing the guy."Shiloh sweety how are you?"Her mother smiled at her.But Shiloh just frowned in return."I hope you guys had a nice "Make Out Session" because mom you forgot to pick me up from the airport!"Shiloh yelled."Luckily I got a ride from some rock band named Tokio Hotel."
"Oh sweety I'm so sorry."
"Look mom if you really want to make up those years to me than you have to start by getting your priorities straight.Mom can you just tell me where my room is??"
"Its the room up stairs that has a golden plaque with your name on it."Her mom replied.
Shiloh took her bags and walked upstairs to go look for her room.
Mom I can't believe you!



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drummergirl24
March 27th, 2008, 10:28 AM
OOOooooooooo I like it! More ppppplllllleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeee?!

Izzylicous
May 31st, 2008, 11:39 AM
Ch.8
"Shiloh darling come down for dinner!"Her mom yelled from downstairs.The old hag wants me to have dinner with her.How thoughtful.
Shiloh left her room,walked downstairs,and sat at the dinner table where her meal was waiting."So Shiloh how have you been?"Her mom asked."Pretty good considering that I was being raised by a single parent my whole life"she spat.Her mom winced."Why can't you just give me a chance?"Her mom asked."Why?Well because you ditched dad,Ethan,and I because of your own selfish needs."You needed to be a women and raise your family.But you were a spineless as a jelly fish."Shiloh said with a discusted look on her face.Shiloh heard the door open."She looked to see a blond girl about her age walk into the dining room.""Oh Shiloh this is Max's daughter Giselle."Her mom said gesturing Giselle."Oh great you managed to find a replacement kid!"Shiloh said."Well if you don't mind I'm gonna go out for a while."With that Shiloh got up from the dinner table."Hey Shiloh let me cheer you up!"Max said chasing after her."Here I was supposed to go to my friend's nephews' party today.But I'll let you go instead here's the address."He said."DADDY YOU'RE LETTING HER GO BUT NO ME!"Giselle yelled."I'll take you with me if you want...""Fine I'll go only because you insist..."Giselle said sticking her nose up into the air.All Shiloh could think was What the ****?The two girls began to get ready....

They were ready and a limo was waiting for them in front of their house.They got in the limo and it began to drive off....
Hope you like....I haven't posted for a while.......But here you go....Anyways comment tell me what you think
if i should continue
danke ;)

xXxMandiixXx
May 31st, 2008, 12:04 PM
hehe i love it

continue!!!!

<3 Mandii xx