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BlondPunk
March 16th, 2008, 06:34 PM
Okay, for those of you who know my fanfic...I'm moving it over here.You don't have too... cuz it'll still make sense if u don't(cuz it's practically a differnt story) but: If you want to catch up with my story (this is the Charleen+Bill story by Michelle herself lol)here's the link:

http://www.tokiohotel-us.com/boards/def ... tid=214516 (http://www.tokiohotel-us.com/boards/default.aspx?cid=420&tid=214516)

okay here's more.





The girl set her papers down and looked at the classroom. They were standing up clapping on the desks. The teacher came over to the girl.
"Your story was good Michelle...but it was supposed to be a mystery. There were no detectives or anything."
"But..."
"No buts. You get a B."
The teacher stamped a big letter B on her papers. She sat down on the chair, tuning the teacher out.

okay, now you need to know about michelle :]

Michelle is a 17 year-old day dreamer...as her freind used to say... she gets easily carried away with her imagination. She has short, black hair with red Highlights. She also has a lip piercing. But her life isn't a nice life like Charleen in her story, her life was miserable.

Her mother died when she was born, leving Michelle with her dad. She still had a happy life. But soon things changed. When she was 6, her dad was in a bad car accident, and died. Then she was living with her Grandma. But THAT wasn't all of it yet. One day while walking home from school when she was 9, ahe got kidnapped. He raped her, and did very horrible other things to her. All sh did for the next 2 years was draw and write stories. One day while he went out for something, he accidnetly left her door open. when he was gone she quickly ran outside and saw the light for the first time in 2 years. She ran and ran on the old dirt road. She soon found a house. She ran to it. She knocked on the door and told the people everything. The people helped her with everything. Then their daughter comes down. At first the two girls despise each other, but soon they realized how much they had in common. The girl's name was Heather. She had beautiful long curly, brown hair with Crystal blue eyes. The two where practicley sisters. But one day when Michelle came home when she was 14, she found Heather laying on the floor with some drug in her hand. Michelle found a suicide note, sighned by her. She was dead. Nobody knew why she did this. Soon the parents of Heather put Michelle up for adoption. She was adopted by some lonely woman. Michelle was 16 when the lonely woman died of a heart attack. Then she was adopted by Beatrice. Beatrice was fat with short red hair. She never had a smile on her face. The woman was Evil.

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"MICHELLE!!! GET DOWN FOR DINNER!!!"
Michelle went down the stairs to see pizza on the table. She took a slice and bit in it.
"HEY! THAT WASN'T FOR YOU! It was for the others."
Pretty soon two identical twin brothers come down the stairs fighting for the pizza. You couldn't tell the boys apart.
"TYLER! CODY! SIT DOWN!"
The boys quickly seated themselves.
Michelle quickly took the last bite of the pizza,
Beatrice shoved a TV dinner towards her. It was Broccoli, Sushi and Green Beans. Micelle picked at her food.
"You better eat your food or else you'll only get skinnier." Beatrice said with her mouth full of pizza.
She was right. If Michelle didn't eat she would drop back down to 80 pounds. Michelle was only 85 right now.
"You know she's not eating cuz she's Emo." Tyler grinned.
"I'M NOT EMO!!!"
"Well then why are you so sad all the time?"
Michelle slapped Tyler. Tyler started crying fake tears.
Beatrice got up. Michelle started running, but pretty sonn Beatrice caught up to her. She raised her hand and slapped her across the face. Michelle ran up to her room crying. The boys were behind Beatrice, laughing like crazy.
"GO TO YOUR ROOM!!! ALL THREE OF YOU! AND DON'T COME OUT UNTIL BREAKFEST!!!"
Michelle did what she usually did, go on the internet, talk to her freinds there while surfing YouTube.
All the sudden she came across a band...Tokio Hotel. She listened to them and decided she really liked them. She told all her freinds about them and looked up more about them.
The next day at school, everyone noticed something was different about Michelle. She wasn't sad, she was actually happy, laughing with old freinds. And that wasn't the only thing that happened that day. On her way home she walked with her Best freind...Brandon. Brandon had dark Brown, spiky, hair with Blonde highlights. He was a little taller than Michelle, maybe only three inches. She stopped at his house so she wouldn't have to deal with Beatrice. They talked, laughed, and did other stuff, just like they used to do with Jennifer. Usually she would be really quite and wouldn't talk much. And right when Brandon started walking Michelle home, something happened. He asked Michelle out. Michelle hugged him yes. Then they helt hands walking down the street.
"Well, this is your stop madam. I hope you enjoyed your walk home."
"I sure did sir."
"Brandon kissed her on the cheek and waved bye. When Michelle came in she skipped to her room. She ate all her dinner. She talked all night long with Brandon and some others. She couldn't stop thinking about Brandon. Just one band changed how she felt for others, how she acted.


Tell me what you think so far :]]]]]

riza13
March 19th, 2008, 11:14 PM
YAY!!! you moved it!
i really like it. and it's getting more interesting
cant wait for more

BlondPunk
March 20th, 2008, 04:46 PM
More

:]]]

A week after her story thingy

She and Brandon walked to school together. Michelle showed him about the new band she found.
"They are pretty cool, but not as cool as me."
Brandon fluffed his hair on the sides like someone who's full of themselves.
Michelle laughed.
"Not even in your dreams! Nobody's cuter then Bill!"
Brandon pouted his lip.
"I didn't say you were ugly."
"Then I must be hotter."
Michelle laughed.
"Okay, you can be the hottest."
"Yes. Go Brandon, go Brandon, your hot!"
"You can stop now.
The rest of the way they walked in silence. When they got to the school Michelle caught up with a girl she met yesterday and waved bye to Brandon. He smiled back and gave a salute.
Those were the good days, the time where the world opened up to her. But it didn't last long. Like her whole life, something sad, terrible would happen.
One day after school, Brandon came up with somethig in his hand. It was their 1 month anniversary of bieng together. He didn't forget.
"Happy one-month anniversary."
He revealed a smal box in his hand.
"Open it."
Michelle untied the red bow from the black box. She opened it. There it was. A red half heart with the name "Brandon" engraved. The heart was held by a black chain.
"Oh my god...It's amazing Brandon!"
Brandon took off the scarf covering his neck. There was the same necklace but the name "Michelle" was engraved on the heart this time.
"See...the hearts click together."
He brought Michelle closer and brought the hearts together. It made a tiny 'click' noise.
Michelle hugged Brandon tightly. They stood at the road crossing, hand in hand, waiting for the cars to pass. They crossed the road. Michelle skipped across. All the sudden a car's breaks squealing was heard.
"Look out!!!"
Brandon pushed Michelle out of the way of the car. All that was heard was the sound of a car driving over something. A scream was also heard. Tons of people came outside to see what happened. The car door opened and slammed shut.
It was an old dude with thick, round glasses.
"Oh my lord...I ran over him!"
Michelle crawled over to Brandon. He was still breathing. Michelle just stared at his face, wich was now in her lap. He smiled at Michelle.
"I love you Michelle."
His voice was a whisper,
"I love you too Brandon."
Tears poured out of Michelle's eyes. Brandon closed his eyes. His mouth moved...but no words came out. She could feel that his heart started beating slower. He took one last deep breath. Michelle sobbed, as the ambulance rushed to cary him to the hospital. Then someone, who she didn't know came over and hugged her tight. She was also crying.
The ambulance drove away. But they were too late. Brandon was gone. Right on their 1 month anniversary. Then Michelle noticed that her whole lap was covered in blood.




Tell me what you think :]]]
If it gets boring tell me :]

riza13
March 22nd, 2008, 11:14 PM
Charleensobbed, as the ambulance rushed to cary him to the hospital. Then someone, who she didn't know came over and hugged her tight. She was also crying.
The ambulance drove away. But they were too late. Brandon was gone. Right on their 1 month anniversary. Then Charleen noticed that her whole lap was covered in blood.

i think you made a mistake there. shouldn't those be michelle??

BlondPunk
March 23rd, 2008, 04:22 PM
Charleensobbed, as the ambulance rushed to cary him to the hospital. Then someone, who she didn't know came over and hugged her tight. She was also crying.
The ambulance drove away. But they were too late. Brandon was gone. Right on their 1 month anniversary. Then Charleen noticed that her whole lap was covered in blood.

i think you made a mistake there. shouldn't those be michelle??



XD
sorry...I was thinking of the other story lol :]

BlondPunk
March 24th, 2008, 11:29 AM
Morez :]


The girl helped Michelle get up. Then she took Michelle to her house.
"Here, I can let you borrow some jeans."
The girl came back with some blue jeans. Michelle went to the bathroom to get changed.
"Thanks."
"Please make yourself comfy."
Michelle noticed the girl had a thick German accent.
"Are you from Germany?"
"Yes, I'm staying at my Grandmother's for Spring Break."
"Cool."
"By the way, my name is Malina."
"My names Michelle."
Malina was very pretty. She had long Blond hair with some blonde highlights. Her eyes were very pretty, big and brown bear eyes with eyeliner. But Malina insisted Michelle was prettier.
"Would you like something to drink?"
"No, I'm fine."
"Okay."
"So, how old are you?"
"I'm 18."
"So when are you gong back to Geramny?"
"In 5 days."
"That's not long at all..."
"I know. Where do you live?"
"I live down the road, with an evil foster mom."
"Ahh...with Beatrice right?"
"How do you know?"
"I remember last year when I visited here. Beatrie came over here. My grandma and her are good freinds."
"Really?"
"Yeah...when I left my grandma called me and told me a girl was living there. She told me alot about you."
Michelle squirmed at the thought of what she knew wbout her.
"I think you better get home, it's late."
"Yeah...I don't want her yelling at me again."
"What are you doing tomorow?"
"Bieng bored at home."
"Do you think you could come over?"
"Sure. I'll see you tommorow."
"Okay. Bye."
"Bye."
Michelle walked home in the darkness. She felt watched so she started running. She came flying through the door of Beatrice's house.
"WHERE WERE YOU??!!??"
"I was just at Malina's house."
"WHAY DIDN'T YOU CALL ME?!?"
Michelle didn't say anything.
"I heard that Brandon died."
Michelle just realized she forgot all about Brandon.
"Just go to bed. I don't want to see your face anymore. And don't come down for breakfeast. It'll be under your door. That's what you get for not telling me where you were. And while your at it, clean p your room. Tommorow you clean the HOUSE. And if this house isn't clean when I get home from thatparty at Mrs. Johnson's house, I'll take your computer, cell phone, and T.V. away for a month."
Michelle went up the stairs. She wanted to just yell and scream at Beatrice, but she knew if she did she'd go to a group home. That's the last thing she wanted.
She opened her room door and laid down on the bed, thinking of what Brandon did for her, how he saved her life. She closed her eyes and treid to forget Brandon. She turned on the T.V. and looked for something good to watch. Then she saw Brandon on the news. she quickly changed the channel. Outside she saw lightning strike and heard the thunder grumble. Typical North-Georgian weather. But after a few minutes wind started picking up. It wasn't heavy wind. The rain grew heavier too. Soon it started hailing too. She changed the channel to a reliable weather station.
"Countys under tornado Warning: Hall, Gwinnett, Barrow, ..."
"Barrow...that's us." Michelle turned the volume up abit.
"If you are in these countys, seek shelter as fast as you can. A tornado has been spotted in Gwinnett."
She quickly grabbed her laptop, cell phone, and a photo album and hurried down the to basemant.


If it gets boring...tell me. :]

riza13
March 27th, 2008, 02:52 AM
:D
like it

BlondPunk
March 27th, 2008, 04:51 PM
:] More :]


Right when Michelle got in front of the basement door, she quickly realizec she forgot the necklace Brandon gave her. She quickly ran up stairs. The rain was getting lighter, yet the hail was still pounding on the roof. She heard Beatrice and the boys run down to the basement. She reached her room and quickly grabbed the necklace., but it wasn't the one Brandon gave her. She searched for the necklace everywhere, but she couldn't find it. She looked in her back pack, then in her jewlery box. She looked outside to see lightning striking in every corner of the city. The sky was a greenish-yellowish color. The rain has now become a drizzle, and the hail has almost stopped. That doesn't mean everythings safe. She thinks real hard, then she remembers she put in her jeans pocket. She found her jeans and looked through her pockets. She finally found it, after panicking to find the pocket itself. She looked outside at the lightning filled sky, but that wasn't the only thing she saw. She saw a cloud, twisting. It must've been at least a mile wide, and it was almost touching the ground, headed straight towards her house. For a few seconds she was frozen, standing there looking at the huge swirling mass come closer. She finally came back to the real world and was racing towards the base ment door. On her way down the stairs she tripped over one of them sending her head first down the stairs. What she heard was a train coming down the tracks. The plates hung on the kitchen wall were shaking, some crashing on the floor. The whole house was shaking now. She scrambled to her feet and opened the basement door. She turned around to look outside the door. It looked like telphone poles sticking out of the sky in a huge, swirling, cloud. she went down the basement steps, everything in her hands. She went down the creaky stairs, leading to the ghost-like Basement. She quickly found the corner where the others were, and went to the opposite corner. All the sudden the tornado was right there, right above there heads. It was tearing the upper part of their house off, leaving the basement almost untouched. The metal bar holding the Basement cieling groaned and creaked, the nail and bolts popping out. And the worst thing was, the metal rod was right above Michelle's head.




It's short...I know :]

riza13
March 28th, 2008, 02:57 AM
OMG! watch out Michelle!

BlondPunk
March 28th, 2008, 03:36 PM
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More :]]]]


The bar kept groaning and squeaking, it was slowing coming down. Michelle looked up and watched the bar come down. It came dowb with a loud bang on the ground. The bar also landed on Michelle's head.

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Michelle woke up in a dark, dark world. She couldn't remember anything. She heard voices in the room. She didn't know where she was, or how things looked. She didn't remeber much avout the tornado either. Actually, she couldn't remeber much at all.
"Ahhh... good to see your awake Michelle."
"Where am I?"
"In the hospital."
Michelle still only saw a dark world. It was as if she were trapped in a box and couldn't see anything.
"Now all we need to do are some tests..."
"Why?"
"Don't you remember the tornado?"
"What tornado?"
"I see...you must've lost your memory in the accident."
"What acident?"
"Where the metal bar hit your head."
"Oh..."
"Yes yes, okay, you don't remeber what happened before the accident?"
"The last thing I remeber...bieng at Malina's house."
"Okay. Now follow my finger."
"What finger. I don't see no finger."
"It's right in front of you."
"I see nothing."
"Hmmmm... well your eyes are open. What do you see Michelle?"
"A dark, dark, dark, pitch-black wall of nothing."
"So... you can't see nothing but black?"
"Everythings black."
"Okay...do you see my light?"
"What light?"
"Michelle...I think you're blind."
Michelle shook her head in disbelief.
"Nuh-uh"
"Yes, you are. Your eyes are open, yet you see nothing."
"Isn't their a way to cure this?"
"No..."
"Oh."
The doctor left Michelle alone with her thoughts.
All the sudden there's a knock on the door.
"Come in."
"Hi Michelle...I brought you flowers."
Michelle smiled. The voice is familier.
"Hi Malina."
"How are you doing?"
"Bad."
"Why? Are you hurt?"
"Nope. I'm Blind."
"What? No way."
"Yep. Look out world, there's a new Blind girl in town. Maske fun of her, and she hits you with her magic wand."
Malina came over and hugged Michelle.
"No, this isn't good. You poor thing."
"Stop giving me pity...I don't deserve it."
"Yes you do."
"Now that I'm a handicapped freak doesn't mean you have to treat me like some little bling-girl."
"Okay, I'll treat you like normal Michelle. But first, I need to tell you something."
"What?"
"Beatrice died. So did the boys."
Michelle was quite...she didn't know whether to be happy or sad, But deep down, there was a part of her truly happy.
"But that's not it. There's more to what will happen when you get out of the hospital."
"Lemme guess...I'm gonna live with you for a little while."
"Yes...but even better..."

TanteMegs
March 28th, 2008, 04:24 PM
First off, YAY!!! more story. Second, OMG! I hope things work out for her. Can't wait to read more.


Megan

BlondPunk
March 29th, 2008, 05:16 PM
:]]]
More(no duh) :]


"Okay what is it?"
"You get to come with me to Germany!"
Michelle sqealed. This was going to be easy. Michelle already learned the German language. She also been to Germany before...but now she forgot how it was over there.
The doctor came in.
"Michelle, I've run some tests, and they show that your Blidness isn't permenant, but we don't know when you will regain sight. I know this will be very stressfull, but I think that you can be able to get used to this. You will be sent to some specialists to train you to learn how to get around." The doctor left.
"Oh great. They het to teach me how to use a magic wand. Or maybe they'll give me some dog. This will sooo much fun."
"Awww, Michelle stop it. Things might turn out better then they seem."
"Yeah, they might. Besides, I'm probably gonna be this way for 40 years."
"Stop bieng so negative."
"Why don't you try bieng stuck in abox for the rest of your life?"
"I'm gonna go take a walk."
"Whatever."
Malina leaves the room. The doctor caomes back in.
"Here we are. This is Paden. She'll be one of your trainers."
Paden took Michelles hand and shook it.
"I'm glad to meet you. I'll be helping you learn brail and to use your stick[[(what's the name for that stick thing???)]].
"Nice to meet you too."
Paden helps Michelle up.
"What am I wearing?"
"A red shirt and some blue pants."
"Great...now I'm wearing prep clothes." Michelle thinks to herself.
"Okay."
Paden leads Michelle to the elevator. She hears some kid say something.
"That girl has one bad bang in her head."
Michelle turned to the voices. She glared at them.
She heard the kids take off.
"It sounds like four people."
"You almost guessed right, there were three. That's really good."
"I hate bieng praised." Michelle thinks to herself.
Michelle can feel people stare at her.
"Okay, we need to go down somstairs now. Be careful."
Michelle had some problems walking down the stairs, but she made it alone.

_________

I have to stop cuz I'm watching a movie the same time I write this story.
It's a scary movie :[
And it's thundering outside >_<
scary movie with thunder+thundering outside= scared Yana >_<

BlondPunk
April 3rd, 2008, 05:48 PM
:]]] More :]]]


After a month of training, Michelle gets around easier and doesn't need training any more. The doctors now think that her blidness might be permanent though. Now she is moving to Germany with her good freind Malina.

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Michelle's footsteps echo in the cold hall way, also with the sound of her suitcase rolling behind her. The flight was long and boring, but she made it through. She already went through customs, so she just stood and waited for Malina to get done using the restroom.
"Why is this taking so long..."
Michelle waits impatiantly in front of the bathroom, Hearing voices go by and feels watched. Finally Malina comes out.
"Why did it take so long?"
"I don't like the airplane toilets, so I had to hold it for 3 hours. Can't I use the bathroom in Peace?"
Michelle laughed at Michelle.
"Okay. let's get going."
It was going to be a long walk to the car though, but luckily Michelle ran into somebody.
"Oh, Sorry."
"Nein, it's okay. Do you need a ride somewhere miss? I'd be glad to take you there."
It was a security guard.
"Yes sir, that would be nice."
The two girls hopped on and talked on the way to Malina's car.
"I wish I could drive."
"Yeah...but that would be kinda hard Michelle."
"Yeah...I know."
"Here you girls are, parking lot 482"
"Thank you sir."
"Anytime."
Next tothe parking lot there was a Black Escalade that Michelle ran into. The security alarm sounded.
"It's loud!!!"
"I know!!! Get in the car!!!"
Michelle felt for the door and opened it. She quickly hopped in and closed the door.
"Oww...that hurt my ears."
They both laughed.
"But it was pretty funny."
"Yeah..."
"Oh my god...you must've hit it hard!"
"Why?"
"There's a dent on it!!!"
Michelle laughed harder.
"Whoever own's that car will probably be mad!"
"Yeah, probably."

TanteMegs
April 3rd, 2008, 06:46 PM
YAY!!! Loved the new edtions. The stick thing she's using is called a guide cane, and the correct spelling is Braille. My niece is going blind, so I know these things. Can't wait to read more.

Megan

BlondPunk
April 3rd, 2008, 07:08 PM
Okay ty ^^

BlondPunk
April 11th, 2008, 02:44 PM
I'm trying to write more but it's not working...

luvukaulitztwins
April 11th, 2008, 02:56 PM
I clicked the link I been trying for a week now nothing and I wanna read your fanfic :(

BlondPunk
April 11th, 2008, 03:18 PM
Okay more...


They parked at a gas station in a city named Hamburg.
"Okay, I'm going to get some gas in the car and Then go in to get us something to drink. Wanna come with?"
"Nah, I'll be fine here. Just get me some water."
"Alright."
Malina was back very fast.
"Here's your water."
Malina headed back on the road further in the city.
"We'll be home soon."
Michelle opened up the water baottle and took a sip. It was starting to rain outside. Pretty soon Malina came to a stop and turned off the car.
"Okay, wer'e here. But it's not the best thing to live in."
Malina lived alone in a two story apartment with three bedrooms, a living room, one and a half bathrooms, a kitchen, and a small office. It was nothing fancy, but it was enough. Michelle felt her way aroung every inch of the house.
"You can have the room downstairs, I'm sure it would be easier for you."
"Okay, it is bigger than the other room upstairs anyways."
Malina laughed.
"Okay. Tomorow I'm going to show you around our part of the city, so that you know where you are. There's a store down the street, and next to us there is a bakery. A rfew blocks down is a very fancy Hotel, and that's where I work on weekdays, except Wednesday."
"Cool. I'm going to bed, I couldn't sleep on the airplane at all. I felt trapped in there."
"Okay, sleep well."
"Yeah."
Michelle went into bed and imagined how Malina looked like, trying to remeber how she looked like herself. She could barely remember how life was seeing. But somehow, she could still see everything, except without her eyes."

*********

The next morning Michelle arrives in the kitchen to the smell of fresh bread.
"Here, I thought you would like some bread with Nutella on it. It' not much, but it was on sale."
She gobbled down the breakfeast and was already raedy to leave.
"Come on, are you ready yet?"
"Almost. Wait."
Malina finally came in. It was still raining outside.
Malina showed her around every single block around her house. She now knew where she was and where to go for food and where to go shopping. She also met a few neighbors.
"Alright, I got to get to work, if you nee anything, you can come to the Hotel."
The hotel was only four houses away from Malina's house. And across the road at the hotel I they heard a very, very mad person yelling about his car.
"Whoever put this dent in my car is gonna pay! If I find whoever done this, I'm gonna rip them apart. This is my car, nobody messes with my car!!!"
"Well, I better go see what's wrong over there."
"Alright, have fun at work."
"I won't."
Michelle smiled and walked up the stairs to the house. After about five hours, Malina still wasn't home.
"She said she would come home in four hours. I better go see what she's doing, because if she's having a party, I want to be there too."
She got out of the house, locked the door, and headed across the street to the Hotel.
When she got in, it was very quiet. Nobody there. She heard a few voices and the corner, and a few people walking around.
"Malina said she worked in the kitchen on the third floor. So I have to take the elevator."
She made her way over to the elevator. She heard somebody coming her way, but whoever it was wastalking on the phone.
All the sudden the two ran into each other. Michelle fell on the floor.
"Ja, I'll call you back later Tom."









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there shall be more soon. =D

BlondPunk
April 11th, 2008, 03:20 PM
I clicked the link I been trying for a week now nothing and I wanna read your fanfic :(


hmm...that's strange....
but you don't have to read that part of the story...
this is a different story. Here's the link again...

http://www.tokiohotel-us.com/boards/def ... tid=214516 (http://www.tokiohotel-us.com/boards/default.aspx?cid=420&tid=214516)

BlondPunk
April 11th, 2008, 03:21 PM
It's a story Michelle wrote in class...and then this is MIchelle's story :]

BlondPunk
April 13th, 2008, 06:07 PM
More :]]]]
Oh yeah, did I tell you Michelle could speak German since she was little???
I think I didn't..... so yeah, she's speaking german the whole time :D


The boy hung up his phone.
"I'm sorry, are you okay?"
The boy offered to help Michelle up, but since she couldn't see his hand, she got herself up.
"That was kinda rude. Maybe she'll be happy if I pick up her purse."
The boy bent down to pick up the purse laying on the floor.
"Here is your purse."
"Thank you. I dropped something else..."
"I don't see anything else."
"It's a long, stick-looking thing."
Soon the boy found what she wanted.
"Ohhh...so she's blind..."
"Here you go."
He handed her the guide cane.
Michelle smiled at him.
"Thank you."
She walked to the elevator, and to her luck, the buttons didn't have braille numbers on there.
"Where are you going?"
The boy was behind her.
"I need to get to the kitchen on level three."
"This is sooo embarasing."
Michelle was very uncomfortable in the tiny elevator with this boy she didn't even know. But he did seem nice.
Soon the elevator came to a stop and she got out, not knowing what to do.
"I can take you to the kitchen if you want."
She nodded and smiled.
"I bet he thinks I'm a retard..."
He took hold of her hand and led her to the kitchen.
He opened the door and took her in. Luckily, she heard somebody come up to her, but it wasn't Malina. It was Paul, the waiter.
"Hi Michelle, why are you here?"
"To see if you guys are having some party without me, and to see what Malina is doing."
"She left work an hour ago..."
"Yeah I know, but she's not home."
"She isn't?"
"Nope."
The waiter sighed.
"I don't know where she went. Let me call and see."
The waiter went to his purse [[(The waiter guy is gay...^^)]] to get his cell phone out.
"So...who's Malina?"
"She's my best freind. We live in a house together."
"Cool. What's your name?"
"Oh, I'm Michelle."
"I'm Bill."
The waiter came back.
"I called three times, but she didn't answer. And I called her cell phone."
"Wierd."
"I'll take you back home if you want. And maybe Michelle is inside and is sleeping or something."
"Sure Paul."
"I'll come too."
"Okay, the more the merrier."
Bieng surrounded by boys, she led them to her house.

*************

Michelle unlocked the door and opened it. It was really quite in the house.
"Malina? Are you here? Hello?"
"Nobody's home."
Paul shivered.
"Maybe we should search the house?"
"If anybody is searching then it's you guys."
The two bpys shrugged and searched the house from top to bottem. That's when Paul found something, In the basement.


TO BE CONTINUED.
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TanteMegs
April 13th, 2008, 11:45 PM
??????? What did they find????? You can't keep a girl waiting here. What's going to happen to Malina and if something did happen to her, what's going to happen to Michelle??? Breathelessly waiting more.

Megan

BlondPunk
April 14th, 2008, 04:07 PM
I'll update tonight if I can.
:]]]

BlondPunk
April 14th, 2008, 07:30 PM
"Oh my gosh! Look guys! I found something!"
Michelle ran down the basement stairs, and din't trip. It was very dark in there, and the light wouldn't turn on. Luckily Paul brought a flashlight. Bill stood at the doorway. Michelle sensed he was stilll up there. She turned around in looked up the stairs.
"Come on down here Bill. Don't be chicken."
"But it's dark down there, I can't see anything."
"Boohoo. So you can't see down here. Is that a problem?"
Noticing whathe said, Bill started feeling guilty for what he said. He walked slowly down the stairs to see what Paul had found.
"Look, it's a note."
Paul read it aloud so Michelle could hear too.

"Dear Michelle,

I am sorry, but I had to go. I couldn't see you anymore. Whenever I saw you, I just got all sad inside. I know you'll hate me for saying this, but I did something really bad. You're gonna hate me for this too.
You remeber that one summer day when your freind died? And you remember that one girl? That jealous one? That was me.
And what does this have to do with what I'm saying? I'm
saying that jealousy took hold of my body. I'm jealous of you from the begining I saw you. You're pretty, smart, and everything any girl would ever want to be. But you know what? I didn't have those things. So I made your life even more miserabel than it was. I killed Your freind.
And you know what? I want to kill you too. You know why?
Because your life isn't miserable enough. It was just my Luck that all those other things happened to you.
But I'm still out there. I'm watching your every move.
And I still will kill you.

your "freind",
Malina. Or should I say, Karen."

Michelle just stood there, amazed at what her so called "freind" betrayed her. She didn't even know this.
For all she knew, "Karen" could have poisened her last meal, or died her hair brown instead of Black with red highlights. And maybe she was wearing Hollister and not Hot Topic. But how Karen betrayed her, that was just about the worst thing of it all. She was doing a pretty good job of holding back tears. But when she thought about all the things she done for her, and then what is going on right now. The thought of how she was her best freind, the person she thought would never give up on her, just wrote that note, that's when she couldn't hold back.
But when she started crying, she was also crying for her freind, for her parents, pretty much for herself and what has happened. She just couldn't take it anymore. Life was just not working out for her. She took everything life has gave her well, and turned it into good, but all she recieved was bad things, few happy things. There was just too many deaths, too many betrayels, and too many kidnappings, was too long held captive in a house, almost died. It was all too much. But then, she didn't realize this, her only hope was just right next to her. The person who would save her from her misery was right next to her, hugging her, almost crying himself. Bill would bring hope, happiness and everything she had before, right back to her.
She just doesn't know it.....not yet.

BlondPunk
April 15th, 2008, 08:59 PM
More<3


Michelle's POV (finally lol)

I buried my head in Bill's chest, letting the tears squeeze out of my eyes. I didn't know what to do anymore. I felt like the world would end right there, like everything would come to an end. At least my world.
Why is life so unfair? Why do all these things happen to me? I feel like a retard, standing here in this creepy basement that looked like a hundred years old crying. I would love to be able to see how I look right now.
But of course I can't. I'm freaking handicapped.

Bill's POV

I felt bad for the girl. I mean, what can I say? She just lost her best freind. But I don't think that's the only thing that has happened to her. She seemed like she had many problems to begin with. All the sudden she left me and walked up the stairs. More like running. I didn't know whether to follow her or not. So I followed. She was laying on the counch, holding something that seemed really important to her. I looked over and sat next to her, looking at the picture. It was a picture of her when she was younger, I think. And a very tall man standing next to her in the picture. I guess it was her dad since they had the same eyes and hair color as her. I know she couldn't see it.
"Is that your dad?"
"Yeah."
She seemed really sad, I don't know whether she'd tell me about her dad or not. I'm so nosy, I shouldn't ask. That would be rude.I couldn't help but asking her though.
"I don't mean to be rude or anything, but where is your dad?"
She laughed a little, almost looking me directly in the eye.
"He died when I was six. My mom died when I was born. All my other family died. Most of my freinds died. I was held captive in some crazy guy's basement and managed to escape somehow. That's what has all happened in my life. And now, thanks to some metal bar in my basement dalling on me, I'm blind."
I was stunned at what she had said. I had to say something.
"I..I didn't know...wow...I'm sorry."
"Hmm...that's what they all say when they hear that. There is nothing really to say to that is there?"
She sounded hurt, and also a little sarcastic.
"Sorry I had to say that all. I just had to let it all out."



Soory it was hrot. It's not my fault, it's my moms

TanteMegs
April 15th, 2008, 11:27 PM
Oh, now that was sooooooo not cool. What on Earth possesed Malina/ Karen to do that?? Does she not know what Michelle has gone through???? Jealous heifer. More please. Just so you know, I really get into most of the stories I read. :D

Megan

xXxMandiixXx
April 16th, 2008, 03:25 AM
awesome fanfic im drawn to it lolz

hope everything starts working out for michelle :)

cant wait to read the next chapter

and as for karen *evils* lets kill her :D

<3 Mandii xx

BlondPunk
April 16th, 2008, 04:33 PM
awesome fanfic im drawn to it lolz

hope everything starts working out for michelle :)

cant wait to read the next chapter

and as for karen *evils* lets kill her :D

<3 Mandii xx

Yay new ff reader!!! lol.
Yes, Karen should die.
But I shall say nothing.
Maybe she will, maybe she won't.

And Megan,
Karen was an evil person from way back that visited America frequently. She was jealous of Michelle, so she killed her freind.
In the end, she was sad because she didn't know that her whole family is dead and everything.
So that's why she left.
And Karen's brain is messed up.
Just an FYI. :]

BlondPunk
April 16th, 2008, 04:57 PM
More <3


Bill's POV (CONTINUED)

"I'm sorry I had to let that all out."
And what do I say now? I don't know...What should I say?
She continued laying on the couch, flinging the picture to somewhere on the floor. She closed her eyes for a minute.
I wonder what she was thinking right then.

Michelle's POV

I closed my eyes for a little while, just to try to remeber how The picture looked like. I can still remember.
I was wearing that hideous white dress with yellow polka dots on it. I had long hair back then, it almost reached the end of my back. It was curly, but not too curly, and it was a dark brown. I think I had this retarded smile, and made my eyes extra big, just to be silly. I could imagine big blue eyes ready to come out of the socket.
And then my dad, I only reached his waist. He had the same blue eyes, except he didn't make them extra big like I did. He had short black hair, had a tiny bald spot too. He was wearing a black tuxedo.
Now I remeber what was going on that day again.
My dad was rehearsing his wedding, wich was in a few days.
Right after the rehearsel, me and my dad drove to some resteraunt and ate. On our way back home, a drunk truck triver crashed into the mini-van, killing my dad. I was in the back seat, and nothing happened to me.
I wonder why. I wonder why I didn't die with my mom after she gave birth to me. I wonder this with every single death in my life.
Why didn't I die with them? Would my life be better than it was now?
All these Questions hurted my head, so I just erased them all away.
And now there was one question that bothered me ever since I met Bill in the Hotel.
How did Bil look like?
Was he some hobo?
He has long hair, I know that for sure.
I bet he's a hobo. Now I just have to ask him how he looks like. I bet that will be fun. And how old he is.
I want to know everything about him.
So, I'll just say it. What could possibly happen?
"How do you look like?"

Bill's POV

"How do you look like?"
Now she wanted to know how I look like. I bet she'll be scared of me after I say it. But what could possibly go wrong?
"Well, I can't really describe how I look."
"Okay, then I'll give you the feel-your-face-and-ask-what-color-this-and-that-is-treatment."
"Okay....."
Is she going to feel my face now or something? This is scary. So here she goes, putting her hand on my face. But her hand isn't cold, it's warm. She ran her fingers around every inch of my face. She asked me the color of every little thing. And tehn she goes over my eyebrows. She might pull the pircing out. I just brace myself for that, but she just goes right over it. As she does, she has a confused look on her face. She looked extremeley confused when she touched my hair from top to bottom. Now she should have an idea about how I look like.




:]]]
It was kinda boring.
Just have to explain what's going on :]

herseykiss
April 16th, 2008, 06:21 PM
*new reader*
omg awsomeness!!!

BlondPunk
April 17th, 2008, 06:58 AM
^^
Glad you made it here new readers ^^
I'll wright more tonight.
:]

xXxMandiixXx
April 17th, 2008, 08:17 AM
hehe i wonder wat picture is going to pop into her head hmmm :lol:

good chapter keep up the good work :D

<3 Mandii xx

DeeDee
April 17th, 2008, 08:42 AM
* new reader *

aww poor girl she's had too much to deal with

mehr bitte wenn du kannst hun

BlondPunk
April 17th, 2008, 04:33 PM
More <3 ;]


Michelle's POV

He looks, or feels, different than most boys. He has long, spiked up hair. And he has a piercing in his eyebrow. He is definetley not a hobo, Hobo's can't afford hairspray, hair gel, or piercings. I could tell there was makeup on his eyes. I could feel the smudgyness of eyeliner and eyeshadow. His nose wasn't crooked, and his face had no pimples. I think he looks like some Punk-Goth dude. But I think he has his own style.
He didn't look at all like Brandon though. Maybe he lookedbetter. I wish I could actually see him.
And now, there is thumping in the basement. It sounds like a person knocking on the wall.
"Okay,this house is freaking me out now. I think it's mad."
Bill laughs a little, but it sounds more like a scared laugh.
"Yeah...it is kinda freaky."
It's late at night, probably 12:00 by now. And I do not want to be in this house alone at night.
And who would want to stay at a house making noises?
"Michelle, you want to stay in my Hotel room tonight?"
I was so happy that I didn't have to ask that question.
"Yeah. Don't let me stay in the creepy old house."
The thumping noise ist still maing noise, and now there's something else making noise.
"Let me out of here! Help! Somebody! I'm trapped behind the door!"



To be continued.
You wouldn't guess who's behind the door.
[It's not Karen :)]

DeeDee
April 17th, 2008, 05:16 PM
more hunnij more bitte

TanteMegs
April 17th, 2008, 06:45 PM
Ummm, description is awesome. The last bit was a little freaky. I'm kind of scared as to find out what happens next. Please continue.

Megan

BlondPunk
April 17th, 2008, 08:35 PM
:]]]
This part is NOT scary, FYI :]]]



Bill's POV

After I hear that, thing, scream for help in the basement, a cold shiver ran down my spine. Michelle pushed me towards the basement door.
"Go on, open it. I'll come with you, but I'll be right behind you."
I grabbed a flashlight and opened the door. The basement was dark, and it had that dripping sound like a cave. It wasn't your average basement, It was more of a cave. It looked like the oldest building in Berlin. So I turn on the flashlight. In the corner of the tiny basement, I find a small door. I wouldn't be able to fit in it. Michelle probably could, she's a short person, she didn't come up to my shoulder, almost exactly at my elbow. I knew the noises whre coming through that door. I move slowly to it.
The thumping continues, and more creis for help come out.
I have my hand on the door.
"Open it."
I jumped, because Michelle broke the silence. I opened the door, and you wouldn't believe who came out----Paul.
Paul stared t me with bugged out eyes and pointed t me.
"You! You left me in the basement!!!"
Michelle and I laughed hysterically, while Paul was standing there all fraked out.
"Sorry Paul!!! I didn'r know we forgot you!!!"
Michelle gave him a pat on the back.
"I'm guessing you want to go home now, right Paul?"
"Yes, yes, Home sounds good. Good sweet Home. I'll be on my way now."
Paul still looked kinda freaked out.
"Bye Paul."
Paul waved back.
"Okay...so, you should go get your clothes packed up."
"You don't have to tell me what to do. Anyways, I was going to do that now."
Michelle walked up the stairs. It was amazing to believe after all what she gone through, that she is still a very happy girl. I liked that about her. No matter how sad she got, in a few minutes it is all forgotten. And how bieng blind doesn't stop her from bieng so...normal. I couldn't believe that she couldn't see out of her eyes. They look perfectly normal. I went up the stairs and closed the basement door behind me. I went in Michelle's room to look at it. Her room was average, nothing special. There were posters of bands and singers on her wall. There were ten posters in total. And one of those ten posters surprised me.

TanteMegs
April 17th, 2008, 10:29 PM
LMAO!!!! I completely forgot about Paul! How funny was that. I loved it. Please more soon.

Megan

DeeDee
April 18th, 2008, 07:45 AM
gahh more hunnij
you're gonna drive me up the wall soon with the anxiety

BlondPunk
April 18th, 2008, 04:37 PM
[color=#00FF00]<3 <3 <3
I'm pretty sure you know who the poster is of :]
Honey moon, lol XD


Bill's POV

I don't know how to react to the poster. It was a poster, a big poster of me and Tom.
I didn't know whether she knows i I'm that guy or not.
After feeling my hair she should've known I was him if she knew our band.
"I like your posters."
I waited for an answer.
"Emmm...cool...but they aren;'t my posters. I don't even know who's on the poster."
"Oh, haha, so who's is it?"
" "Karen's" sister. I wonder where her sister went."
She said the last sentence sarcastically. I'm kinda glad she doesn't know who I am, but how long will it take for her to find out? I erase the question for now and just watch how Michelle packs her clothes. She feels the shirt (or whatever else she's packing) and either throws it in the suitcase, sees if it's too small, or throws it in the corner. By the time she reached a different drawer, and she had all her pants, socks, shoes, and shirts packed, I knew what she was packing next. She looked my way.
"I don't mean to be rude or anything, but can you kinda...wait for me somewhere else now?"
"Yeah, I'll be in the Living room."
I walked over to the living room. It was rather small, it had a T.V. that probably doesn't work so well, an old couch, and a wall with bunches of pictures and photoalbums laying on the ground. So I go and pick up the one that says "Honey moon." Whatever that means. "Honig Mond?" that doesn't make any sense. Are the pictures something with a mooon covered in Honey? I open it to find out myself. When I saw the first picture, I knew what it meant. It was a picture of a very, very, short woman, who looked exactly like Michelle. Then there was the tall man again.I passed alot of pics of rollercoasters, beaches, and a picture of a pregnant woman. The pregnant woman was the last picture.
Michelle rolled the suitcase out.
"I'm Ready to go."
I closed the book and put it back on the floor.
"Alright."


Michelle's POV

So we headed out the door to the Hotel. I'm glad that he didn't notice I left something behind...the stupid little blind stick. And yes, I like giving stupid names to that guide cane. But we aren't walking, all the sudden Bill starts running, dragging me with him. I can tell he's not sporty, he runs slower than me. Way slower.
"Why are we running?"
"Because!"
Uhhh...boys.


[color=#8000FF]<3 i might write more tomight <3

herseykiss
April 18th, 2008, 04:53 PM
[color=#00FF00]<3 <3 <3
I'm pretty sure you know who the poster is of :]
Honey moon, lol XD


Bill's POV

I don't know how to react to the poster. It was a poster, a big poster of me and Tom.
I didn't know whether she knows i I'm that guy or not.
After feeling my hair she should've known I was him if she knew our band.
"I like your posters."
I waited for an answer.
"Emmm...cool...but they aren;'t my posters. I don't even know who's on the poster."
"Oh, haha, so who's is it?"
" "Karen's" sister. I wonder where her sister went."
She said the last sentence sarcastically. I'm kinda glad she doesn't know who I am, but how long will it take for her to find out? I erase the question for now and just watch how Michelle packs her clothes. She feels the shirt (or whatever else she's packing) and either throws it in the suitcase, sees if it's too small, or throws it in the corner. By the time she reached a different drawer, and she had all her pants, socks, shoes, and shirts packed, I knew what she was packing next. She looked my way.
"I don't mean to be rude or anything, but can you kinda...wait for me somewhere else now?"
"Yeah, I'll be in the Living room."
I walked over to the living room. It was rather small, it had a T.V. that probably doesn't work so well, an old couch, and a wall with bunches of pictures and photoalbums laying on the ground. So I go and pick up the one that says "Honey moon." Whatever that means. "Honig Mond?" that doesn't make any sense. Are the pictures something with a mooon covered in Honey? I open it to find out myself. When I saw the first picture, I knew what it meant. It was a picture of a very, very, short woman, who looked exactly like Michelle. Then there was the tall man again.I passed alot of pics of rollercoasters, beaches, and a picture of a pregnant woman. The pregnant woman was the last picture.
Michelle rolled the suitcase out.
"I'm Ready to go."
I closed the book and put it back on the floor.
"Alright."


Michelle's POV

So we headed out the door to the Hotel. I'm glad that he didn't notice I left something behind...the stupid little blind stick. And yes, I like giving stupid names to that guide cane. But we aren't walking, all the sudden Bill starts running, dragging me with him. I can tell he's not sporty, he runs slower than me. Way slower.
"Why are we running?"
"Because!"
Uhhh...boys.


[color=#8000FF]<3 i might write more tomight <3

dude i like it but can u plzz Tell me if she will see again i mean i feel srry for her that she cant see the sexy thing right in front of her

BlondPunk
April 18th, 2008, 05:13 PM
... :]]]
I shall say nothing.
But It'll happen soon, kay?
I'm thinking about doing that in the next chapter :]

herseykiss
April 18th, 2008, 08:10 PM
... :]]]
I shall say nothing.
But It'll happen soon, kay?
I'm thinking about doing that in the next chapter :]

-jumps up and down-
OOHH YEHHH!!1
ahem srry lol had a mo momment

BlondPunk
April 18th, 2008, 08:27 PM
XD
we all have our Random moments, it's all good ;]

BlondPunk
April 18th, 2008, 09:46 PM
:]]]
HersheyKiss...Thanx 4 the wonderfull idea ;]
Enjoy <3



Bill's POV

I was running, because there were people on the streets, and I didn't want to get caught. Michelle seemed willing to run faster. But I didn't. In minutes we arrive at the Hotel.
"That was mean Bill, I hate running."
The funny thing was, I was more out of breath than her.
"Yeah...I do it alot..."
She smiled at me. It was almost as if she was staring at me as she was smiling. We made our way to the elevator.
And soon we were in front of my Hotel room.
And all the sudden, Tom came popping out of nowhere.

Michelle's POV

We walked into the Hotel room, and all the sudden this boy attacks me, slamming me into the wall.
"Tom! What did you do that for?"
The boy got up.
"I thought it was you!"
"Why did you do it anyways?"
"Because you hung up on me! And I didn't know where you were! I was sitting here worried for the last hour!"
"You could've called me!!!"
That boy was quiet.
"See...you forgot to call again. Call before you freak."
My head was hurting, alot. Thanks to that Retard, Tom, or whatever his name is. Bill knelt down.
"Are you okay?"
"Yeah...my head hurts a little, but I'm fine."
Bill glared over at Tom.
"I'm gonna go pee."
And there I left for the bathroom. I soon found it, and yeah, I did my buisness. Then when I got through washing my hands, something so embarressing happened. I liftyed up my head and baged It against this metal medicine cambnet.
"Oww, oh god."
That's about the last thing I remebered.

Bill's POV

As I was arguing with Tom, I heard something In the bathroom. I quickly ran to the bathroom to see Michelle unconcious on the ground. Nothing Serious, just a little bump from the medicine cbnet I'm guessing. I pick her up and carried her to my bed.
"Tom, go get an ice sack."
"Now you're bossing me around and...."
"JUST GO GET THE FRIGGIN ICE PACK!"
"Sheesh okay..."
I layed her on my bed and put the covers over her.
"Here's the Ice pack."
I grabbed it from Tom's hand and put it on her head.
"See, it's all your fault she's unconcious. If you wouldn't have pounced on her in the first place..."
"If you wouldn't have hung up on me I wouldn't be here...."
"And If you would've called me..."
"Just shut up!"
"Make me!"
"I WILL!"
"FINE!"
and then finally, Tom left.

BlondPunk
April 18th, 2008, 09:46 PM
But sadly she won't see....yet ;]

BlondPunk
April 19th, 2008, 11:58 AM
More, Enjoy]



Bill's POV

After about five minutes, Tom called me.
"Hi Tom."
"Hi, I'm sorry I got you mad."
"Yeah...whatever. I know it wasn't your fault she's unconcious."
"Oh, but It's my fault that I pounced on her, she saw me, so she could've gotten out of the way."
"Well, there's one problem."
"What?"
"She can't see."
"Ohhh...okay."
"Yeah. Bye Tom."
"Bye..."
I hung up the phone and imagined what Tom was thinking. He's probably mad at himself for not realizing that she was blind in the first place. I sat in the bed and turned the T.V. on to see if anything on was good.
The only good thing I could find was Spongebob. I don't want to watch the Matrix, or Transformers. Too bad Gute zeiten Schlechte zeiten or Scrubs wasn't on.
So I ended up watching Spongebob, and his wierd retarded freind Patrick.
After it was over I found better things to watchThank god Prison break was on.


Michelle's POV

Pretty soon I was half awake, half asleep. I didn't want to get up yet. Apparentley Bill was already awake, because I heard the T.V.on. So I sat up and streched.
"And you're finaaly awake."
I layed back in bed and closed my eyes.
"Not for long."
Bill sat on the edge of the bed, trying to get me awake.
"Come on! Get up, time for the day to start."
I pulled the covers over my head.
"Come on, It's already 12:00."
I pulled the covers off my head. I sat up, and streched again. I opened my eyes, and had to close them again because of the bright sunlight shining in them. I covered my eyes.
"Can you close the blinds?"
"Yeah...why?"
"Because..."
Pretty soon the blinds were closed and what I saw was a room, and a huge bl;ack fuzzy figure in front of me.
Finally it hit me...I could see again.



[color=#FF0000]Hopped you liked it <3

herseykiss
April 19th, 2008, 05:32 PM
WAIT WAIT WAIT HOW I GIVE U AN IDEA IM LOST
its awsome more more moree!!!
please and thank u lool

BlondPunk
April 19th, 2008, 05:34 PM
When you said it was ad she couldn't see, then u gave me an idea :]

herseykiss
April 19th, 2008, 05:45 PM
When you said it was ad she couldn't see, then u gave me an idea :]

ohhh
well this relle goood and it would be awsome if u wrote more
pleasee

DeeDee
April 19th, 2008, 06:12 PM
yayyy she can see again
gahh tom pleseee dont be that weird pleasee

mehr bitte wenn du kannst hun

BlondPunk
April 19th, 2008, 08:10 PM
More <3



Michelle's POV

Instantly a smile came across my face. It was too good to be true. Bill opened the blinds again, but this time it wasn't that bed. Soon the things in the room weren't fuzzy anymore.
"What are you so happy about?"
I could see Bill smiling at me. I never knew that he would be this hot! I imagined him waaaay uglier. But he was just, amazing, beautiful, and way prettier than me.
I looked at every inch of his face. And his hands made me jealous. After I got a good look at him, I looked him in the eyes.
"Are you okay?"
"Yes, I'm okay, I'm just so happy!"
"Why?"
"Because! I can see!"
His jaw dropped.
"No way."
"Yes way!"
I got up and got dressed quicker than he could ask me any questions. And when I looked in the mirror, I scared myself. I couldn't beliee how I looked like!!!
"Karen" must be some mean girl, because what I saw in the mirror wasn't me. It was this blonde-haired girl. It couldn't be me. I had no lip piercing anymore. How could she have done this to me? I look like some prep!
I stomped out of the bathroom, cussing and complaining in English, hoping He wouldn't understand.

Bill's POV

I was so happy for Michelle. Once she came out of the bathroom, she seemed really mad.
"**** frigging Retard. Why did she dye my hair blonde? I'm gonna kill that freak...."
"Umm...what's wrong?"
She looked me, straight in the eye. She wasn't mad at me though, thank god. She picked up her hair and pointed at it.
"You see this?"
"Yeah...it's blonde hair? So?"
"Okay. When I lived ion America..."
"You're from America?"
She never told me she was from America. I know she knew English, but from America? I had no idea.
"Yeah, I'm from America. Anyways, When I lived there, my hair was black with red and white highlights."
"Really?"
I didn't know that either.
"Yeah. When we went to the hair salon, she didn't tell me she dyed my hair blonde. This is ridiculous. I look stupid!"
I personally, didn't think she looked stupid. She was really pretty.
"If it's that much of a problem I can get your hair back like that. I'll pay."
"But Bill, I can pay, It's not that much of a problem."
"No Michelle, It's really no problem at all. Go get dressed and leave your hair the way it is, and I'll bring you to a hair salon."
She smiled at me.
"This is the nicest thing that somebody did for me in months. Thanks."
Her eyes were watery. I guess not alot of people offered to buy something for her. Or maybe it was because this was something really nice of me to do, even though I really don't have to do it. I watched her go back to the bathroom.
I wonder what she was thinking.



Yeah...It was kinda soupy.
But more will come soon my lovies <3
:]]]

DeeDee
April 20th, 2008, 06:34 AM
awww bill you're too much of a sweet heart

mehr bitte wenn du kannst hun

xXxMandiixXx
April 20th, 2008, 06:40 AM
Oh...M...Gee

she can see

haha that rhymes lolz


good fan fic

keep it coming

<3 Mandii xx

BlondPunk
April 20th, 2008, 03:21 PM
:]]]
Mehr <3


Michelle's POV

I went back to the bathroom. I don't know why that crazy girl dyed my hair blonde. I told her black. This sin't black. I bet Bil think's I'm prissy, or a drama queen.
But it's Blonde! I get out my favorite black jeans that are way too long, and a green shirt that says "Hug a tree".
I decide not to put any make up on. Then I brush my hair and get out of the bathroom.
Then we heard a knock on the door.
"I'll get it."
I went over to open up the door to a boy who looked similar to Bill in the face. He had dirty blonde dreads and a piercing in the lip. He had beautiful brown eyes. He also had a N.Y. hat on.
"Hi."
"Hi, I'm Tom, Bill's older brother by 10 minutes."
"Okay, I'm Michelle."
Bill came over to the door.
"Ja, that's my identical twin brother Tom."
"Identical?"
"Yep."
They looked nothing close to identical.
"Alright Tom, you gonna come with us to the hair salon?"
He kept on looking at me, smiling every now and then.
"Sure."
He gave me a wink. I pretended not to see that.
"Alright."
Bill led the way to the elevator. He glanced at Tom, and Tom nodded his head.

Tom's POV

This girl was perfect. I wonder why she was getting her hair done. Bill looked over to me, and I could see that he was saying "She doesn't know wer'e famous"
I nodded back. Her eyes were hypnotizing. The were crystal blue. I could write a full page of how her face looked like. But I won't.
We took the elevator down to the parking lot, and made our way to my dented Escalade. Michelle took a good look at the car.
"Nice car. It has a dent on the side."
She studied the dent, squinted her eyes, and hopped in the back of the car.
"Thanks, it's mine. And you can sit up front if you want to, Bill won't mind."
Bill glared at me. I smiled at him, and I also knew this, Bill really likes this girl, and she likes him.
But not for long.


More will come tonight or tommorow ;]

DeeDee
April 20th, 2008, 05:02 PM
oh god tom , leave them in peace

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herseykiss
April 20th, 2008, 05:31 PM
oh god tom , leave them in peace

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lol i agree

DeeDee
April 21st, 2008, 12:44 PM
yayy someone agrees with me

tom just don't ruin it pleasee don't

BlondPunk
April 21st, 2008, 06:32 PM
More More More <3


Michelle's POV
So I guess it would be rude if I didn't sit up front.
Tom smiled at me, and Bill slumped back in his seat and crossed his arms, glaring at Tom every now and then.
"I didn't know the city was so pretty."
"Ja, It is very pretty here. You should see the Canal, Me and Tom love to walk over the bridge and feed the birds bread..."
Tom broke in.
"And then some crazy fa....."
Bill broke in.
"And then some crazy girl named fanny always walks her dog there."
Wierd. I know Tom was going to say something different.


Bill's POV

That was close. If Tom would've said fans...I would've beat him up, with a frying pan. Tom can be such an idiot at times. And now it was quiet. I hated it when it got quiet, so then Tom broke the silence by singing "Sweet Home Alabama."
I joined in.
"SWEET HOME ALABAMA!!!(and so on)"
Michelle laughed.
"Tom...you sing wierd!!!"
Me and Michelle were laughing so hard. I never seen her so happy before. Tom turned around and looked at me.
He glared at me.
"Who said you sing any better?"
I glared at Tom.
Michelle looked at both of us.
"Stop fighting, it was just a joke. Okay, Tom you do sing kinda funny cuz of your accent. Same with you Bill, you just can hold the note better."
She was right, but somehow and made me mad.
"How about you sing for us?"
She turned her head around and stared at me.
"Are you crazy? **** no!"
I gave her puppy dog eyes.
"Nein! Not those eyes! I'm turning around."
"Bitte?"
"Nein!"
Then Tom joined me in the pleading.
"Bitte? For me and Tom?"
"NEIN!"
"Plaese?"
"No!"
"I say it in English for you."
"NO!"
"Fine then."
Michelle was sweet, but she is very stubborn.


<3 mehr soon :]

DeeDee
April 21st, 2008, 06:46 PM
how can you resist those eyes ?!!

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BlondPunk
April 21st, 2008, 06:58 PM
how can you resist those eyes ?!!

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I defineltley couldn't resist.

Puppy dog eyes! Well, almost
http://i252.photobucket.com/albums/hh30/Blond_Punk_TH/Tokio%20Hotel/1a1abillpuppydogeyes.jpg

DeeDee
April 22nd, 2008, 06:24 AM
ow maj gowddd

you just killed mee there , hes sooo adorable awww

BlondPunk
April 23rd, 2008, 04:42 PM
Michelle's POV

I'm not going to sing in front of them, no matter how good or bad I am. I hate singing in front of people. I only do that when I'm alone.
"Wer'e here!"
I followed Bill out of the car to a person's house. Bill skipped all the way. The door opened to show a short blonde haired woman.
Bill ran over to her and hugged her.
"Hey Bill! What are you in for today?"
"Oh, it's not for me Lisa, it's for my freind."
She looked short against Bill, but she was about 5 or 6 inches taller than me. She came over and studied my hair.
"Well, your hair seems just fine. But what do you want?"
"I want it black with red and white highlights, parted in the middle, layered with bottom even and top going down in zig-zags, a little fanned out here and there too."
"Okay, come in, I'l get it sketched and show you."
I walked into a hallway. Then we entered a living room, with a door that led to another room.
"Please, sit down."
I sat down and picked up a newspaper, I looked inside and fliiped the pages, finding a familiar picture. I looked over to Bill.
"Bill, what is this?"

Bill's POV

I looked at the picture she was talking about. It was a picture of me, Tom, Gustav, and Georg.
"Well?"
I didn't know what to say.
"Ummm...Tom?"
Tom looked over at the picture.
"Hey! I look good there!"
I took a deep breath.
"Well, I'm in this band called Tokio Hotel..."



MORE TOMMOROW!!!
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DeeDee
April 23rd, 2008, 07:03 PM
OH GOD all **** is going to break loose more pleaseee

BlondPunk
April 24th, 2008, 04:44 PM
More <3 Hope you like it <3


Bill's POV


Michelle crossed her arms and leaned back deeper into the couch.
"...And we are a very famous band here and Europe. I didn't want to tell you....."
Her eyes were wide, and she blinked in disbelief.
"....so I'm hanging around with a famous band?"
"Actually, you're hanging around the most famous band here in Germany, and some other parts of Europe."
"The most famous band? You're kidding."
"I'm dead serious."


Michelle's POV

I can't believe that they didn't tell me! This is so Awesome!
"I would've never imagined that when we first met. But this is awesome!"
Bill laughed with his adorable smile. He looked much cuter in person than in this picture.
"I would've never imagined that you didn't recognize me when you saw me!"
"This is unbelievable. I'll never recognize you as a famous person."
"Well, you will once we get outside for a walk!"
I looked at the other pictures of them. There was one where Bill lifted his shirt up...and revealed a star tattoo.
"Is this the only tattoo you have?"
Bill grinned.
"Nope. There's two more."
"Okay, show me the others."
"You have to find them!"
"Okay then!!!"
I got up and pounced on him, and pinned him tot he floor.
"Okay," I raised took off his jacket and raised up his shirt. He giggled when I raised his shirt.
"Stop! It tickles!"
He wasn't mad, he was smiling this huge smile.
"This is your first tattoo, am I right?"
I poked the middle of the star.
"No, that's my second."
Then I looked at his arm.
"Ha! I found it!"
"No...that's tattoo number three!"
I looked everywhere, I even took off his shirt!
He laughed as I took off his shirt and quickly grabbed the shirt back.
"Okay, there are no clothes over tattoo numero uno, but it's hidden under something. Look up."
I looked up. Nothing. So then turned him around and lifted up his hair.
"I found it!"
Bill got up and put his shirt back on. Tom watched us.
"That was very amusing."
The door in the living room opened.
"Okay, I have three sketches, wich one do you like the most?"
I looked at the first one, wich was chin level.
"That one is too short."
Then I looked at the secound. It was a little too much, but it looked pretty cool.
"Hmmm...Let me see the third."
She showed me the third one, wich was perfect.
"I like that one."
"Okay, come woth me."
She showed me to a chair, where she did the person's hair. I sat down and looked around. Bill and Tom where standing in the doorway. Bill was talking to Tom, and Tom was listening, but was looking at me. He nodded and whispered something back. Are they talking about me? I tried to hear the conversation, but all I could make out of it was a few words. Then the lady came over and started on my hair.
What I could hear was, " I'll take her and you can already pack up and go..."
What does Bill mean by that?


Hope you liked the "attack Bill" part. My freind gave me the idea btw :]

DeeDee
April 24th, 2008, 04:53 PM
gahhh she didn't kiss him gahhh

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herseykiss
April 24th, 2008, 04:55 PM
plzz write moree plzzzzzzzzzzzz

BlondPunk
April 24th, 2008, 08:18 PM
Mehr <3


Michelle's POV


"OH MY GOD! I LOVE IT LISA!"
I kept on touching my hair from top to bottom. Then I heard someone running, and Bill came bursting through the doors.
"What hap.....woah."
He stared at my hair. He came closer and examined my hair.
"Thanks Michelle, I'm glad you liked it."
I gave Lisa a quick hug.
"You look so...different."
I crossed my arms.
"What do you mean by "different"?"


Bill's POV

She looked so different without her long fake blonde hair.
But I guess this is how she looked like before everything.
And she was nowhere close to ugly...she was very pretty.
"I mean it in a good way."
She smiled.
"Thanks for doing this, you really didn't have to do this."
I smiled.
"Yeah, but I didn't want you to be depressed about your hair...you had enough to deal with."
I hugged Lisa and then we left.
"I'm hungry...do you like burgers?"
I tried not to have any facial expression and looked at her.
"I don't like hamburgers, I LOVE Hamburgers."
Michelle giggled.
"I love hamburgers too. Where's the best place for Hamburgers?"
I smiled.
"I'll take you there."

Michelle's POV

It was beautiful outside. I couldn't believe it was already 9:00 at night. The city was amazing, filled with lights. I had no Idea where he was taking me , but I followed.
"The city is so pretty at night."
"Yeah...I love coming out here. No screaming, crying fans running to us, begging for autographs."
"That must be really annoying."
I looked at Bill's face. He was looking at the city too.
"You see those flashing lights? And can you here music?"
I listened for a while. I heard music, and I saw flashing lights.
"You know what that is over there?"
"No."
"It's der Kanal Jarmarkt (Canal Fair grounds). They have awesome rides there."
"Cool. I used to go to fairs, but they all sucked where I lived."
It was cold outside, but that's normal for fall here. I was so stupid, that I didn't even think about wearing a jacket, while Bill is wearing three. And I was in a T-shirt. I'm so stupid. And I feel so short against Bill. He's like a giant, and I'm an elf. I'm just al little taller than his elbow. I looked at the canal, wich had about five boats swimming around in it. There was a big one with a light that blinked on and off. The wind started to pick up, blowing Bill's poofy hair to one side. I was cold, so I got between Bill's arm and hid side and snuggled in. He rested his arm on my shoulder and smiled at me.


More tommorow...I think!

DeeDee
April 25th, 2008, 06:07 AM
aww thats adorable

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BlondPunk
April 25th, 2008, 08:27 PM
More <3



Bill's POV


I bet She was cold. I had three jackets on, and she only had a T-shirt. So I stopped and took off my black, white, and red leather jacket and put it on her. She snuggled back in my side, and I put my arm back where it was. Her hair was shining from the street lights, the red and white shining the brightest. I ran my fingers throught her hair, and she looked up at me and smiled.
"Where are we going?"
I smiled and looked up at the stars.
"It's gonna be a surprise."
"Okay."
We were coming closer to the canal, with a few boats floating around. We reached where I wnated to go.
Across the bridge, to the other side of the small city.
"It's so pretty here at night."
"Yeah. That's why I wanted to go here."
The jacket was too big for Michelle. The sleeves were way too long, and so was the jacket. She was adorable, with how short she was, and how the jacket was too big. We stopped halfway on the bridge, leaning over the ledge.
"It's so high up. And the wind is harder here."
I looked down. We were very high up, and my hair was leaning to the left side. She looked at my hair and giggled.
"You're hair is messed up!"
She tried to push my hair to the right side, but the wind got my hair stuck like that.
"Well, it won't matter. My hair will get messed up anyways with where we are going."
She looked at the city, every inch of it. Her hair was blowing to the left too now.


Michelle's POV

It was amazing up there. Bright lights from the city where everywhere, and behind us was nothing. We were on the edge of the city. Bill put his hand over my hand, and looked out to the city. He looked at me.
"Should we get going to the surprise?"
"Yeah, You're hair is getting even more messier."
He smiled.
"You're hair isn't perfect either."
I poked his nose. He took my hand and skipped a little along the way off the bridge.
"We're almost there. It's just about five minutes away."


<3 I'll write more soon!

DeeDee
April 26th, 2008, 03:40 AM
awww they like eachother loadz

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riza13
April 26th, 2008, 10:28 AM
i havent been in this section of the boards for a while now... and when i saw you updated your fanfic i was so happy!! :D

BlondPunk
April 26th, 2008, 04:33 PM
i havent been in this section of the boards for a while now... and when i saw you updated your fanfic i was so happy!! :D


Ja! I updated quite alot...
Glad your back!

riza13
April 27th, 2008, 05:42 AM
i havent been in this section of the boards for a while now... and when i saw you updated your fanfic i was so happy!! :D


Ja! I updated quite alot...
Glad your back!
yup, tnx! :D

BlondPunk
April 27th, 2008, 08:12 PM
More <3


Bill's POV


I'm so excited to get to the "surprise place". I hope she's not tired...we'll probably be there for a few hours!
I reached in my jacket and quickly counted about 1000 Euros on me, but I won't use it all. Michelle's hair matched the Giant jacket on her. Her eyes were focused on the street infront of us. They were sky-blue, and her lips were a light pink. There was something I never noticed that there was a hole under the left side of her lip.
"Did you have any piercings before?"
She sighed.
"I had one on the left side of my lip, but I lost the stud one day and forgot to buy a new one. You probably saw a small hole, am I right?"
I felt my face turn red, because than she knew I was studying her face.
"Yeah..."
She looked at me and smiled.
"You have a piercing too...in the eyebrow."
"Yeah, and that one too."
I stuck out my tounge.
"And there's another one."
We were almost there, I heard music and screaming in the distance. But they were'nt screaming because they were getting hurt, they were having fun.


I had to make it short, my mom and I have to share a computer, and she wants to get on now. And I'm trying to loose my habit with writing "smile" too much.
....More soon!!!

DeeDee
April 28th, 2008, 09:05 AM
gahh more pleaseee

BlondPunk
April 29th, 2008, 06:26 PM
...Hope you like it ;]



Michelle's POV

I heard people screaming, yelling, talking, and having fun.
Bill smiled this silly smile.
"We're here."
"Finally!"
I saw bright lights flashing from everywhere, and music playind.
"I need to go behind this tree real quick. Stay behind me."
I wtched him brush his spiky hair down and tie it in a pony tail. Then he took a hat out of nowhere and put it on. Then he put on some sunglasses.
"I have to do this so nobody will recognize me."
I couldn't help but smile. You could still tell who he was.
"Let's go!"
He took my hand and broght me there. I saw kids and teenagers and old people walking around there.
"Here we are, the fair!"
All the rides had lights on them, and so did the food stands.
"Well, I changed my mind on burgers, and wanted waffels. When I saw the fair was here on the bridge, I wanted to go here for some waffels."
I followed him to the nearest Waffel stand. He got himself in no time a waffel. He was in waffel heaven, inhaling the three waffels he ordered.
"You can eat fast."
He nodded. Soon he was done and we walked around. Then something caught my eye. It was a ride, called the Street fighter. What a stupid name for a cool-looking ride. It was a claw, that spun in circles going up and back down, almost like a swinging ship. Except waaay faster. It was pink, with bright lights on every corner. I jumped up and down and pointed at that.
"Can we go on that?"
Bill had a shocked look on his face.
"You want to go on that?"
I nodded.
"Okay..."
"Yay!!!"
He went over there and bought two tickets for the ride, and waited in the never-ending line to get on. He was shaking a little.
"Scared?"
He shook his head.
"Me? Scared? Haha...nonsense! I'm never scared!"
I could tell he was. You can tell by the look on his face. Finally after about twenty minutes, we get on the ride.

Bill's POV

I can't tell her I'm scared! She'll call me a wimp or something like that. But now it's too late to chicken out. She was all smiles, saving seats in the middle of the ride.
I got in the seat and put the over-head seat strap on, holding on to it so tightly my hands hurted before the ride started.
"Bill, it's okay if you're scared. You'll be happy you went on this when we're done."
I smiled at her.
"I guess."
Pretty soon the ride started moving. Michelle was jumping in her seat. She was so fearless. It went up and back down, first very slowly. It wasn't that bad.
"This isn't so bad."
Michelle smiled.
"Bill, it's gonna get faster than this. Waaay faster."
I gulped. Suddenly this sick feeling crept over my stomach.
It started getting faster, my sunglasses were about to fall. I guess the people were wondering why somebody would wear sunglasses at 9:00 anyways. But it got faster. The people in the waiting line looked like ants from here. It kept on getting fatser, so fast that my sunglasses did fall off. Michelle had here hands in the air, screaming for no reason. It got to it's fastest point, and that's when I got scared. We did a flip over the top, and I screamed as loud as I could, for fun.
Michelle looked over at me worried.
"Are you okay?"
I smiled like a five-year old who just got their first bicycle.
"Yes! Again!"
She smiled and nodded her head.
"I knew you'd like it!"
After about going five times on that, We finally moved along. We went on other rides, such as the Super Hopper and the Break Dancer. My6 favorite was the Schnee bahn (snow railroad) It was a roller coaster that had about twenty cars, and each c ar could fit bunches of people. The person who sat at the end was gonna get squished by the others though. And it was fast too. I agot stares from some people, since my sunglasses were gone and you could almost tell who I was easily. But I didn't care. It was a long time since somebody besides my family and freinds to not go crazy or ask me loads of questions just because I'm famous. Michelle didn't care if I was famous or not.


Michelle's POV

"That was the best day I ever had in a long time!"
We walked along the small pavement road, leading into the place were you buy things. I saw Tokio Hotel pillows, flags, shirts, jewlery, almost anything you could think of!
"Wow, Tokio Hotel is really famous here."
"Ja, it's crazy."
We walked around, and all the sudden a jewlery stand, a big one, caught my attention.
"You can stay here, I'm gonna go do something."
"Okay."
I looked at the chokers, and the necklaces. Then the guy on the counter said something.
"I think I have something that you'd like. Look here."
He reaveled a very, very, cool thing. It was perfect!



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The rides were real rides that I rode in Germany.
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Yes, there was a ride named the Street fighter O_o
and I have no clue why.

riza13
April 30th, 2008, 07:19 AM
:]]]]
The rides were real rides that I rode in Germany.
:]
Yes, there was a ride named the Street fighter O_o
and I have no clue why.
weird names.. i agree...

more dude :D

DeeDee
April 30th, 2008, 12:26 PM
awww did you have to stop

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BlondPunk
April 30th, 2008, 04:53 PM
I'll continue :]


Michelle's POV

In his hand he helt a black stud. The top had a sphere (Like Tom's) and the bottom had a star instead of another sphere.
"Wow, I love it!"
The man chuckled.
"I heard you and your boyfreind talking down the street about your missing lip piercing, so I'll sell this to ya, for half off."
My face truned red. Did people actually think we're...together? But half off sounds nice.
"How much is it?"
"Since it was hand made, 25 dollars."
"It was 50?"
"Yes, but it's a good deal, right?"
It was a good deal. I got out the money I had, and counted out twenty five. I put it on the table.
"Here ya go. Hope ya like it."
Why did he always say "ya" instead of "you"? Anways, I put the piering back through my lip. It felt good to have a piece of metal there again. I was starting to miss having it. Pretty soon Bill came back. He smiled a shyish smile.
"I um, have something for you."
He blushed a little handing me the cutest little soft teddy bear. It was white, and very, very soft. It also had a light pink ribbon tied around it's neck, with two pink hearts dangling from it.
"Awwwww! It's so cute and fluffy!"
He smiled. Then I couldn't help but to hug him. He was so shy, just standing there hoping that I would like it. He looked at me for a moment.
"Did you get a lip piercing?"
"Yes, I finally remebered to get one. Is it okay?"
"Yeah, it looks good on you."


Bill's POV

I'm so glad she liked it. I know we only know each other for a day, but I really like her. Her lip piercing was pretty, It looked better on her than on Tom. Maybe that's only because she's a girl. A very pretty girl.
"We need to go, Tom's waiting for us."
"Okay."
We walked to Tom's black Escalade, Getting more stares form people. I didn't care at all what they thought. I opened the door for Michelle. And then she saw the G's.
"Michelle, this is Georg, and this is Gutsav."
Georg sat up front, and Gustav on the left side of the car.
She sat in middle, and I sat on the end. She put the bear in her lap, and streched her arms and yawned.
"Hi."
She smiled sleepily at the G's.
"Ummm, hi."
Gustav was uncomfortable sitting next to a girl. He was squirming around. Tom turned around, and I saw jealousy in his eyes.
"How was your day?"
Michelle answered.
"It was great! Me and Bill went to the fair, and I got him to ride some rides with me, and then I bought the piercing, and Bill bought me the cutest little teddy bear!"
Tom smiled, even though I knew he was jealous.
"You really got him on the rides?"
"Yep."
"Wow. That's a first for him."
I hit him lightly on his shoulder.
"Don't hit me, I might wreck."
"It's not like your car doesn't have a dent."
Michelle looked suspicously around the car.
"What is it?"
She gave us an unsure smile.
"That dent, it was kinda me."
Tom stopped the car.
"Whaaatt?!?! You messed up my cra?"
She played with her fingers nervously.
"At the airport, I kinda, ran into it."
"Aw Gawd. Why?"
Then he hit himself on the forehead.
"Oh yeah...You couldn't see!"
Tom quickly changed the subject.
"So you have a lip piercing?"
"Yep, I had one before, but I lost the stud, so I bought a new one today."
"I couldn't live without mine."
"Me neither."
It grew silent in the car. The last thing I remeber before falling asleep, was Michelle sleeping on my shoulder, snoring.




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There was more, hope you liked it.
I know the teddy bear was a little corny.
But I had no other choice, the voices told me to do it anyways.

DeeDee
April 30th, 2008, 05:13 PM
awww dats adorable

mehr bitte hun

BlondPunk
May 1st, 2008, 05:04 PM
Michelle's POV


I woke up to the car turning off.
"We're home!"
"Home?"
"Home!"
I looked at a good sized house. It wasn't Gigantic, and it wasn't normal sized. It was wooden, with about four stories, and very wide. Okay, I realized it was a mansion once I saw how long it was from the back. Bill hopped out of the car, and got his suitcases.
"I haven't been home in weeks!"
"Well, I guess me and Gustav better get going. See ya!"
Then Georg and Gustav got into a blue BMW and drove off.
Bill opened the door that was twice his size. I entered in a huge two-story entrance room. Then we walked gurther into the house. It was very beautiful.
"Wow, you're house is amazing!"
Bill nodded.
"Do you want your own room?"
"My very own room?"
"Yep! To put all your things in, or if you want to be alone you just go in there."
"Are you sure it won't take up any space?"
Bill laughed.
"No, we have plenty of rooms!"
Tom walked upsatirs.
"I'm going to bed. Night."
"Gute Nacht Tomi!"
"Let's go."
Bill picked up his suitcases and went up the stairs.
"Here's my room."
We walked all the way down the hallway to get there. His room had red walls, a King-sized bed, a plasma screen T.V., everything!
"Your room is so cool!"
He smiled and put his stuff down.
"Now let's get your room."
He showed me into a room, a little smaller than his. It had green walls, a Queen sized bed, a plasma screen T.V., a huge closet, a private bathroom with a whirpool bathtub, and a few other things.
"This is my room?"
"It sure is."


Bill's POV

She was so surprised at her room.
"This is so cool!"
She was really happy.
"Well, I'm going to bed. We have to get up at 10:00, we have a interview downtown."
She walked over to me. I looked at her eyes, sparkling from the light.
"Thanks for everything Bill."
"You're welcome."
I brushed her hair back, and leaned forward to her. Our lips touched, and then we pulled back. I felt my face grow hot. She blushed. Right before I left the room, she kissed me on the cheek. I smiled at her and closed the door quietly behind me. I can't believe I just did that.


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More will come soon.
This was hopefully better than the last one :]

DeeDee
May 1st, 2008, 05:56 PM
awww dats adorablee dey kissed yayy tom is gonna get jelous

mehr bitte hun

riza13
May 2nd, 2008, 02:12 AM
the teddy bear from the last chpter is so cute.. :D

amandaaraujo
May 2nd, 2008, 01:46 PM
awwwww yhats soo cute i just read your story today and you totally made my day :D love this story and i laughed so hard when you told tom that M had dented his car hahahaha update soon

BlondPunk
May 2nd, 2008, 10:17 PM
Michelle's POV


I don't know what to say. I can't believe he would like me in that way. I thought of this just as a freindship. But this, this is cool too. I guess wer'e kinda, not really though, together. I was so happy. I changed into my black and Pink night clothes. Then I hopped in bed and turned on the lights. I let the rain drift me off to sleep.

*-------------*


I was stuck in the dark, dark room, watching the man infront of me laugh. His laughter echoed in the empty basement. I remeber him, he was the guy who kidnapped me. I tried to get away, but I was only eight, and he was stronger than an eight year old.
"Welcome to ****!"
His voice echoed in the room. Tears where streaming down my cheeks as I watched the man torture me. But then the floor under me broke, sending me into a dark alley, where I heard footsteps coming closer. Then a woman's laughter. The moonlight shined bright enough to show a tall skinny woman. She had long, straight black hair that reached the floor. She had all-black eyes, shining. No white in her eyes. She had bright red lips, and fangs coming out of her mouth. Then all the suddne, she screamed a silent scream, nothing was to be heard, except for my own scream. Her mouth was open enough to fit a basketball in it. Her eyes were focused on me.

I woke up from my own scream, sweating and shaking from the nightmare. My covers were laying on the floor. It was raining outside. All the sudden lightning struck, bringing a blueish glow in the room. A light in the hallway turned on.


Bill's POV


I half woke up to a scream, but what really woke me up was the bolt of lightning from the sky. I turmed on the hallway light and walked over to Michelle's room. Sleepily, I opened her door, rubbed my eyes, and turned the light on.
"Is everything okay?"
I realized she was sgivering, or shaking. I sat down next to her.
"Yeah...yeah...it was just a nightmare."
She gave me an unsure smile. The sky sent more lightning down, this time the thunder made a crackling sound.
She flinched.
"It's only thunder. If you want, you can come with me to bed."
She nodded, getting up form the bed, not as shaky as she was before. I took her hand and brang her in the bedroom. I crawled in bed and scooted up close to her.
"Are you going to be okay?"
"Yeah. I don't think I'll dream hat again."
She looked at me and smiled. I couldn't help but smile back. It was akward having her in my bed, with me, alone. But it was comforting, not bieng alone at night. I liked it this way.

amandaaraujo
May 2nd, 2008, 10:30 PM
awwww i always wanted for a guy i liked to do that for me espesially bill but thats juust fantacy. hmm oh well so howd you get the idea for that scary woman after reading her description i think ill have nightmares :bill: hihih keep writing its getting sooo good i luv it :D

BlondPunk
May 3rd, 2008, 08:45 AM
awwww i always wanted for a guy i liked to do that for me espesially bill but thats juust fantacy. hmm oh well so howd you get the idea for that scary woman after reading her description i think ill have nightmares :bill: hihih keep writing its getting sooo good i luv it :D



scary movie...
About A game that kills people whoever die in the game.
And then they have to kill the scary woman.
And when she dies she screams.
It was scary.
Don't watch the movie...
The woman was...freaky O_o
..........

BlondPunk
May 3rd, 2008, 09:40 AM
Michelle's POV


It was hard to get the woman's face out of my mind. I climbed into the huge bed, and Bill came closer to me. But the begining, I remember that. When I was eight, I was kidnapped, and the dream had to remind me of him. That was the only thing I remeber, the part where he was about to kill me, but the doorbell rang. He accidently left the door open, so I ran out of it. I really didn't want to think of him. I looked over to Bill and he was looking at me.
"Do you want to talk about it?"
"The dream, the begening, it was real. It really happened, when I was eight. It was about the man who kidnapped me, he was about to murder me. But then doorbell rang, and he left the basement door open on accident. Then I got out."
"Oh."
"Yeah. It's okay, I'm over that. And the scariest part was the screaming woman."
He smiled. I layed back down and looked at the cieling.


Bill's POV

She's been through alot. But at least she isn't scared anymore. She layed back down and looked at the cieling.






I was trying to finish, but my 6, yes 6 year old brother wants to go on the computer to do some stupid star wars game that he doesn't even know how to play. So I'm sorry for not finishing what I want to finish.
I HATE MY BROTHER!!!!!!
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

riza13
May 3rd, 2008, 10:10 AM
awwww i always wanted for a guy i liked to do that for me espesially bill but thats juust fantacy. hmm oh well so howd you get the idea for that scary woman after reading her description i think ill have nightmares :bill: hihih keep writing its getting sooo good i luv it :D



scary movie...
About A game that kills people whoever die in the game.
And then they have to kill the scary woman.
And when she dies she screams.
It was scary.
Don't watch the movie...
The woman was...freaky O_o
..........

i think i know that movie!
i just cant remmber the title

BlondPunk
May 3rd, 2008, 11:20 AM
:]]]
Now my brother is gone yay!!!
:]]]


Bill's POV

She turned over and layed on her side. The only thing lighting the room was lightning. Her eyes were covered by her hair. I brushed her hair back. She put her hand on my cheek, also brushing some hair that was covering my yes. The only thing that was heard was the rain, pouring down on the house. We both came closer to each other. I wrapped my arms around her waist, and she had one hand on my head, and the otheraround my shoulder. We kissed, at first slow and soft, but it got more passionate. I ran my hand down her side, one hand holding her head, and the other one laying on her side. We parted.
"Michelle?"
"Yeah?"
"I love you."
"I love you too."



Ahhhhh...love.
:]

DeeDee
May 3rd, 2008, 02:27 PM
awww thats adorable yayy love
tom's not gona like this is he ?

mehr hunni

BlondPunk
May 3rd, 2008, 02:50 PM
awww thats adorable yayy love
tom's not gona like this is he ?

mehr hunni


:]
nope.
:]

BlondPunk
May 3rd, 2008, 03:39 PM
Michelle's POV

When I woke up, Bill was already up, but not ready. He was trying to put on his shirt and eat grapes at the same time.
When he was done, his hair looked like a wet nest.
"Oh, good morning sweetie. I was just, getting ready. We have to leave in an hour and a half."
"Okay, I'll get ready in my room." I got up and went in my room to take a shower. Then I got out red pants with a silver chain, and three black stars on it. My shirt was a black background and written in white was some stupid thing "Queen of hearts". I have no idea why I bought it. But nobody would see it, because I was wearing a black jacket. I straightened my hair, wich was way too curly, and took pieces of hair, pointed them straight up, hairsprayed it. It wasn't going to stay up, but it was going to stick out a liitle. I got on my black vans with white roadtracks, and headed for the kitchen where everybody was already sitting there. Tom buried his head in the magazine, not looking up once.
"What's wrong with you, Tom?"
"Nothing."
He sounded mad.
Bill was packing up his huge white purse with unnesesary things.
"Tom's just bieng stupid."
Tom glared at Bill.
"Am not!"
"Well, if you aren't stupid, then what are you?"
I know Bill was joking, but Tom took it serious.
"Tired Bill. I'm tired."
"Then you should've went to bed."
He groaned and slumped back in his chair.
"I did go to bed. There were just some people who were keeping me up all night."
Bill laughed.
"How do you think I feel when you decide to bring somebody home with you? Hmmm?"
"Well, that's not the same."
"Your right, it's worse."
Tom slammed the newspaper on the table and went to do something. I think I know why he's mad now. I'm pretty sure he heard everything we said. So he's jealous because he likes me.
Soon we were ready to get going. We hopped in Tom's car and sat in the back. Then we picked the G's up. I had to sit in the middle seat, but this time Georg was sitting next to me.
"Hey Gustav. Hey Hobbit."
"My name is Georg, not Hobbit Tom."
"Okay Georg. I'll call you Georg. But if you don't behave I'll have to call you Hobbit."
Georg sighed and sat back in his seat. Gustav and Tom were now arguing about some car they seen, and wich one goes faster. Georg was listening to his iPod, and Bill was looking out the window.


Bill's POV

The argument between Gustav and Tom ended, finally.
"So, what's new in life?"
Can Gustav get any lamer with his "what's new in life"?
"Well, I beat Fire Bolt Speed last night. Then I fell to sleep and woke up to thunder. I fell back to sleep and got woke up by these two back there. They were awake and talking, wich wasn't all that annoying. But it still was annoying, especially when they made out."
Michelle blushed a little. The G's looked at us.
"No way!"
Gustav looked terrefied.
"Really?"
Georg looked at us in disbelief.
"Yep, they did."
"So? It's not like you never do it!"
"You have a point there, Billy."
"Woah. I never thought the day Bill found a girlfreind would come so soon."
"Whatever, Hobbit."

DeeDee
May 3rd, 2008, 06:07 PM
poor tom i really pitty him

mehr bitte hun

BlondPunk
May 3rd, 2008, 06:16 PM
poor tom i really pitty him

mehr bitte hun


Don't pitty him.
He'll have somebody.
:]]]

BlondPunk
May 3rd, 2008, 06:38 PM
Tom's POV


I really hated this. Why did they have to be together? Michelle and I could've been a cute couple too. This is torture. I am supposed to be the one kissing with Michelle. Not Bill. We made it just in time for the interview. We walked in.
"Michelle, I think you have to stay here. The interviewer will ask who you are. If the world knows I have a girlfreind, there will be so many dissapointed, and sad, fans. And I don't want to risk that. The band comes first."
"No, it's okay. Just don't say anything stupid."
Bill smiled his ridiculously stupid smile, and went on to the interviewing room. We sat down on a big, comfy couch.

Man(interviewer): So, how is it to be back home?

Bill: It's really nice. I haven't been home in over a month!"
Tom: Yeah, I really missed home.

Man: What are your future plans?

Bill: We are going to finish the European tour soon. Then, we will start with the 50 cities tour in america. 1 city for each state.

Man: I bet alot of girls are really excited about this. Do you have any plans for a new single, or album?

Tom: Me and Bill have been working on a song together. We won't say more though.
Bill: But we can promise that another album will come out in 2009.

Man: Alot of girls go crazy about you guys. What do you think would happen if any of these girls would find out your dating with somebody.

I could tell Bill was really uncomfortable right now. But I know he can mae it without slipping.

Tom: We really don't know what would happen. We do think that some of our fans would be really sad though. Maybe some would even hate us. But a true fan would accept this and move on.


The rest of the interview went on smoothly, ending with basic questions. And some wierd personal questions.

Bill's POV

I'm glad that was over. That one question really scared me. And I think the man could tell. But I'm happy to say nothing happened.


Michelle's POV

When they left, I sat down on a couch and sat there, bored. Then somebody knocked on the door. A girl, taller than me, walked in. She had long black hair, and brown eyes,and lips that weren't too big, and weren't too small. She was skinnier, and prettier than me.
"Hi. I'm Jessica
I could tell she was very open
"Hey. I'm Michelle. What are you doing?"
"Oh, I work here."
"Really? You interview people?"
"Yeah. But I recently got fired."
"Oh wow, I'm sorry to hear that."

DeeDee
May 3rd, 2008, 07:43 PM
yayy hope tom likes her

mehr hunn

BlondPunk
May 4th, 2008, 04:17 PM
Michelle's POV


"No, don't be sorry. I wanted to be fired anyways."
"Why would you want to get fired?"
"Well, I got sick of it. And there were too many people. So I just decided to leave."
"But why did you come in here?"
"Oh! I saw you alone. And I'm bored. So I just came in."
We learned alot about each other. Her parents were divorced, and she ran away from home two years ago. But now she's living alone in her own apartment. She's from America too, but came to Germany when she was 14. Her favorite color is red, just like mine. And she's 17 too, exactly (excluding minuted) 7 days older than me. Her birthday was Febuary 25.
"How would you like to come over to my apartment one day?"
"That would be great!"
We exchanged phone numbers. Jessice was the coolest girl I met so far in Germany. She was nothing like any of the others. Then the door opened, and Tom came in.
"You didn't tell me you knew Tokio Hotel!"
Tom smiled.
"I remeber you! You're Jessica, am I right?"
"Wow! You actually remember my name?"
"I never forget any hot girl's name."
Jessica blushed a little.
"Um, Thank you."
"You're welcome."
Then the others came in. Bill was walking backwards, talking to the G's at full speed. Then he stopped talking and looked at Jessica.
"I think I know you from somewhere..."
Jessica turned her attention to Bill.
"Oh, I'm Jessica. I interviewed you guys before."
"Oh yeah! I think I remember..."
"So Jessica, would you like to go somewhere? The movies, the mall, out to eat, wherever you want."
"Sure. I don't really care where we go."


Bill's POV

I sat down next to Michelle and put my arm around her shoulder. She smiled at me.
"So Tom, where are you two going?"
Tom grinned at Michelle.
"It will be a surprise."
Gustav turned his attention away from his Ice cream.
"Can me and Georg come too?"
"Everyone can come!"
I knew where Tom was taking us, I could tell.
"So, when are we going?"
"It's best if we go at night. As for now we can go home and chill out."
Tom turned his attention back to Jessica.
"I'll pick you up infront of this building tonight. Okay?"
"Okay."
Tom left and winked at her. I stood up and waited for Michelle by the door. We walked back to the car, and that's when Michelle's phone rang.

Michelle's POV

I found my phone right before it stopped ringing.

"Hello?"
"Hey Michelle, it's Paul."
"Oh, hey Paul! What's up."
"Listen, you have to get over here. I know it's a long drive from Berlin, but I have some good news, and some bad news."
"Okay, Paul."

I hung up the phone.
"Who was it hun?"
"Paul. He said He has to tell me something, but he can't tell me it over the phone."
"That's wierd. Should we even go?"
"I think it's about Karen."



:]]]]
Muhahahhhaaa.

TexasGirlLovesTH
May 4th, 2008, 04:33 PM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! :o
You can't leave me hanging like this!! It's torture, I tell you! TORTURE!!!!!!

DeeDee
May 4th, 2008, 05:43 PM
grr more nowww


mehr bitte hun

BlondPunk
May 4th, 2008, 05:51 PM
:]]]


Bill's POV

I don't know what Paul's up to. Why won't he just tell her? And what could this be?
"I don't know what this could be about, but it sounds dangerous. I don't want you getting hurt."
"Bill, nothing will go wrong, okay? I'll just go get a taxi to drive me there. It'll be okay."
"Should I come with you?"
"No, I can handle this on my own. Trust me."
"Okay. But you aren't going to go tonight, are you?"
"No, I'll got tommorow."
I smiled.
"Okay."


----------

We got out of the car and we all went inside.
"Okay Tom, I want proof that you beat the high score."
"See for yourself!"
Tom turned on the big T.V. in the living room and turned on the playstation three. Then he put in his precious "Fire bolt Speed" in the game slot, giving it a little kiss before he let the game take it in. He showed them the high score list, and there he was, PacoTaco14 in place number one.
"Why PacoTaco14?"
"Because it's awesome!"
Georg and Gustav griped around that it was impossible that Tom could've beaten the high score record.
"That's unbelievable!"
"No way!"
"Yes way, Gustav. And it is believable Georg."
The G's were mad, challinging Tom in a race.
"But we need four players, three doesn't work. Michelle, can you play?"
"Sure."
Michelle took the controller. When the race was over, Tom slammed his controller on the ground.
"I DEMAND A REMATCH!"
"Sure, watch me beat your but again."
Surely enough, Michelle had one.
"Tom lost to a girl!"
"It was only beginers luck!"
"Okay, let's have a rematch then."
Finally, ten games later, Tom gave up.
"Okay, since I beat you TEN times in a row, admit that I'm the better player."
"No!"
"Admit it!"
"Not to a girl!"
"ADMIT IT!"
"Okay, okay! You're the better player."
"Good. Now admit that all girls are better than boys."
"**** no!"
"I was just kidding."


Michelle's POV

Uhhh, Tom will never undersatnd the fact that I'm better at him in video games.
"Hey look, You beat Tom in the high score list!"
It was true, there was my name, Michelle.
"Hah! Now you have to work hard to get back your reputation at bieng the best in that video game!"
"Hah, that'll be easy!"
"Yeah right. I scored 1000 more points than you did!"

BlondPunk
May 4th, 2008, 08:37 PM
Tom's POV


Great. Now I have to work on beating her high score! It'll take forever! And of couse she sits right back where she was, with Bill playing with her hair. They smiled at each other. But then I do realize that they were meant for each other. They look perfect together. I feel like a jerk now for everything I thought and said. But soon we were going to leave for the surprise place.

riza13
May 5th, 2008, 12:20 AM
hahaha XD

tom beaten by michelle! i like that part!

DeeDee
May 5th, 2008, 10:03 AM
aww tom finally you got to your senses

mehr hun

BlondPunk
May 5th, 2008, 04:48 PM
Michelle's POV


"Okay, is everyone ready?"
Tom has been asking if if we were ready for the last ten minutes. Bill always has the same reply.
"Not yet!"
I was laying on the couch, writing some E-mails on my Lap Top. Tom was pacing the room, every now and then glancing on my computer screen, and then the clock.
"Bill! You better hurry up!"
"Ja! But it's my hair!"
"Always his hair, it takes him hours for him to get it perfect!"
I turned off the computer and went upstairs to see what he was doing. I knocked on the door.
"Can I come in?"
"Ja."
I opened the door, to find Bill's hair perfectly styled. But what he was doing was reading a magazine.
"What are you doing?"
He looked up from the magazine.
"Reading the magazine."
"Why? Wer'e supposed to leave now."
"Yeah, I know. But look at this!"
It was a picture of Bill and Tom, and Tom is making this wierd face. It looked like he was mooing. And Bill looked like Bill.
"Isn't it funny?"
"Yeah, I guess."
"I think it's hilarious!"
He burst out laughing, almost crying.
"I have to show this to Tom."
He ran down the stairs. I walked.
"Tom! Tom! Look what I found!"
Tom looked at the picture of him "mooing".
"Hey! That's not nice! It should've been you!"
"But it's hilarious! BWAHAHAHAHA!"
The G's joined in the laughter. I couldn't help but giggle a little.
"Let's just forget about this and go yo the place!"
"I'll try."
We went in the car and made our way to pick Jessica up. I wonder where Tom was going to take us. Jessica hopped in the car and squeezed herself between me and Tom. This time Tom let Gustav drive. He wouldn't let Georg drive because his hair was too long, and that's dangerous.
"Okay Gustav, remeber what I told you, right?"
"Yes."
"Good. Fun, here we come!"


Bill's POV

Soon we got out of the squished car and went inside Tom's surprise place. You wouldn't believe where he took us!
"The talking Burrito?"
"The talking Burrito!"
I knew he was going to take us to his favorite resteraunt. And I had the feeling he was in a mexican mood too. Michelle was happy we went here though, and Jessica was only happy because of Tom.
"I haven't had mexican food in a long time!"
"Then The talking Burrito is just what you needed."
Tom offered to take Jessica's hand, and bowed down.
"May I hold your hand, madam?"
"Yes, you may."
He took her hand and got in the resteraunt.
"Table for, 4...5 people please! The one with long brown hair is an alien. He doesn't count."

amandaaraujo
May 5th, 2008, 05:01 PM
aahahahahahahahahahahhaa pleeez update soon i just came from runing and this is i needed ahhshshshsagaag update soon pleez hihhihi

DeeDee
May 5th, 2008, 05:36 PM
gahh tom leave georg alone

mehr bitte

BlondPunk
May 5th, 2008, 07:12 PM
Talking Burrito XD XD XD

Burrito: Hello Yana
Me: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!
O_o
that sounds scary.

Michelle's POV


Everyone was laughing, Gustav was laughing the most. I wasn't laughing though.
"Awww! Stop messing with Georg! It's always him, isn't it Tom?"
Georg's frown turned upside down.
"At least I know there will always be somebody besides me who doesn't think these jokes are funny."
The waiter brought us to a giant table, with those soft cushoined benches. We got our meals, Tom having the biggest of us all. When we were done, Tom decided to leave a tip.
"Here we go. Some dubble-bubble gum, and a melted chocolate bar. That's a great Tip!"
We left the resteraunt laughing as we watched the waiter take his tip. Poor guy, I think he treid really hard to serve us. He looked like he was about to cry when he saw his tip. We went in the squished car and went back home, and Jessica was coming with.
"Michelle, are you really going to go to Paul tommorow?"
"Yeah, why not?"
"I'm just wondering. But shouldn't I come with?"
"Bill, you have things to do tommorow with Hoffman. I'll be home, don't worry."
"Okay. Just incase me and Tom aren't home when you come back, here's the house key."
I took the key and put it in my purse.
"Don't worry Bill, I'll be fine."


Bill's POV

Tom was already inside, doing something in the kitchen. He came back out with four glasses of red wine, and two empty glasses. He handed one of the full glasses to me, Georg, and Gustav
"So, what do you girls like to drink? Look in the kitchen and find the one you like. Michelle seemed to know what she liked. Some kind of Peach-flavored wine. Jessica came back with something too. Tom filled up the glasses and handed them to the girls.
"Toast!"
"Tom, it's prost."
"Oh yeah, Prost!"
Tom was already a little tipsy from his beer at the talking Burrito. We drunk the wine and partyed, blasting music through the house. Georg was dancing very strangley after about thirty minutes. Tom and Jessica were already dancing too. Gustav watched in terror.
"Michelle, can you dance?"
"I know how to, but I'm not good at it."
"Yeah, dancing isn't for me."
Even though we didn't like dancing, we danced anyways. I don't even remeber what happened, and I really don't remeber dancing. Soon the whole thing was over and Georg and Gustav made their way to the free bedrooms upstairs. Michelle and I went into my room. She plopped on the bed and smiled.
"That was so much fun."
She sounded like she was in a distant world, but I don't think I was any better. But soon we went to sleep.

DeeDee
May 6th, 2008, 08:58 AM
yayy drunk ppl

mehr hunnij

BlondPunk
May 6th, 2008, 07:19 PM
Michelle's POV

Today was the day I was going to Paul. It was already ten, and Bill was about to leave to go to a photo-shooting.
"By sweetie, be careful."
"Bye Bill."
I gave him a kiss on the cheek and he left. Th etaxi was waiting for me. I went in and waved to Bill. He waved back.
The taxi ride was long, but I survived. He dropped me off infront of Karen's house, and Paul was standing infront of it.
"Michelle! I'm glad you came! Now listen, there's been something strange going on in this house. I think Karen is still in it, because the living room light is always on. And the soor inside is open. I wanted you to come so you could help me."
"Yeah, it's no problem Paul. Let's go in."
I went in the door way, Paul following me close behind. The place was a ghost house, I never seen it with my eyes. It was freaky. We went into the basement door, wondering if some secret would be there again. There was, and it wasn't pretty.

DeeDee
May 6th, 2008, 07:35 PM
you're scacring me seriously

mehr hunnij

amandaaraujo
May 6th, 2008, 07:47 PM
:o :o :ooh no Karens the evil woman aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh run Michelle call BILLLhihihihiiiih plez update reall soon

BlondPunk
May 6th, 2008, 08:32 PM
Michelle's POV

Paul tricked me. He was working for Karen. Karen gave me an Evil smile.
"Well well, nice to meet you again Michelle. How was life?"
"Great ever since you left."
"Oh really? Well now I'm back, and it's all about to change."
"Why are you doing this?"
"Because Michelle. I have my reasons."
"What? You're sick."
"No Michelle, no I am not. I know exactly what I'm doing."
This is creeping me out. Paul throws me into a small room in the basement, throing me in.
"Michelle, I'm really sorry." He whispered in my ear.
"If you were so sorry you wouldn't have done this." I whispered loudly back.
Karen laughed an evil laugh and went out of the basement with Paul, leaving me in the basement. Great, could life get any better? I realized they forgot to take my purse, so I quickly hid in one of the corners where they wouldn't see me and texted Bill.

"Bill I should've listened to you. I shouldn't have went here. Paul and Karen teamed up together, and they're keeeping me locked in a small room in the basement.
<3 Michelle"

I hit the send button and hoped it would work.


Bill's POV

We were right in the middle of the photo-shooting when my cell phone buzzed. I looked at the others and shrugged.
I picked up my cell phone and read the text message. I gasped as I read the text message in shock. Why would they do this to her? Tom went over to me, realizing something was wrong.

Tom's POV

Bill stared at his cell phone. His hand was shaking a little. I went over to him.
"What is it Bill?"
"It's Michelle." He said in a whisper. I read the messsae and looked at Bill. He looked really worried. I gave him a hug, and I didn't care how wet my shoulder would be. Some paparazzi were questioning Bill and me what was wrong. All the sudden our manager came in the room and the body guards ushered everyone out of the room. He came up to us.
"What's wrong?"
I helped Bill over to the couch.
"Can I tell?"
Bill nodded yes.
"Bill, has a, girlfreind. And... now she's kidnapped by some fools back in her town."
He nodded.
"Well, we all know that if anybody finds out and tells some papparazzi about it, it could effect the band badly. But we'll try to get her back."
I nodded. I went over and picked Bill's cell phone up to reply.

"Michelle, don't worry. We'll come get you. It'll be alright. -Tom + Bill


Michelle's POV

My cell phone lit up. I read the text message. I didn't want to reply and use up the battery, so I turned it off and layed down to think. Then the basement door slammed open. I heard Paul and Karen talking in a low whisper. Then they both laughed, Karen laughing the most.
"It'll be perfect! The plan is already working!"
"Yeah, and once they come here, It'll be to late!"


:]]]]
Muahahahahahahaha
Will they be able to save her?
Or will she be stuck in here?
The world may never know.

:]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]

amandaaraujo
May 7th, 2008, 01:10 AM
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh the suspense oh nooooooo poor billy my billy oops sorry hihihi i mean poor him awww brotherly love oh no MICHELEEEEEEEEEE

DeeDee
May 7th, 2008, 01:44 PM
oh sh*ttt

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BlondPunk
May 7th, 2008, 04:48 PM
Michelle's POV

"Yes, Karen, your plan is excellent."
"Thank you, thank you. Now go check on her."
The door opened. Paul came around in searched the room, and found all he wanted.
"You think wer'e stupid, right? We left you your purse so you could tell them to save you. But really, when they come here, It'll be too late to save you. I won't tell you anything else."
Paul took my purse and everything I had with me.
"Nice knowing you."
"Yeah, I wish I never knew you."
He paused in his steps.
"I didn't want to know what you thought about it."
I smiled.
"Well, what I really think is that you and Karen are two messed up sick and crazy aliens. You're not even human!"
He smiled evily.
"Wer'e not aliens hunny, wer'e just evil. Getting rid of you will do the world better. Trust me."
I glared at him.
"The world without out you would be so good that everybody would be dancing on your grave and partying until they can't party no more!"

DeeDee
May 7th, 2008, 05:10 PM
these people need mental help

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BlondPunk
May 8th, 2008, 05:11 PM
I don't think you guys know this, but there's a boy in my school named Paul. He's perverted, and pretends to be gay *rolls eyes* The reason why I put him in my story, is because I'm mad at him. :]


Michelle's POV

Paul folded his arms and took my things and slammed the door behind him. I sat down in a corner. I sat on something hard. It was a book. I looked at it closer. It was a diary. I read a few entries. Then I saw an entry with my name in it. It was about four years ago, around the time my freind died.

"Today, March 17, 2004, Karen and Paul have a new plan. They talked to the all-knowing, and said that if Karen and Paul want to live forever, they must kill somebody. She goes ny the name Michelle Victoria Callaway. They are planning on searching for her, hunting her down, make her life miserable, and then kill her. These people are sick. Anyways, I'm starving to death. I will probably die soon if they don't give me any food. Sick people.

on the bootom, it said "page number 109"


That was me, Michelle Victoria Callaway. So they're killing me so they can live forever? And who's the all-knowing? How long did Karen and Paul know each other? And are they even human? I decided to write in an empty page on the diary.


"Today, November 31, I, Michelle Victoria Callaway (refer to page 109), was kidnapped by Karen and Paul. They want to kill me, just so they can live forever. I don't even think they're human!
I really hope I make it out of here alive.


page 483"

I took a deep breath and leaned back in the corner, trying to make myself comfy.



Bill's POV

We were in the car, making our way to Karen's house. I was really worried. Tom told me every time I got worried, I should chew a piece of chewing gum. My mouth had a huge wad of chewing gum inside of it. I took out another piece and chewed on it.
"Bill, pretty soon you'll be choking on the chewing gum."
I kept on chewing. So many things were going through my head. Is she alright? Did they kill her? Is she bieng tortured? Is she scared? I tried not to think about all that. We were probably 15 to 20 minutes away. I really hope we'll make it.



Michelle's POV


All the sudden I heard the front door slam open, people running around the house. Karen walked over to the hole through the door and laughed.
"It was nice knowing you Michelle, but now you'll have to die. I'm pretty sure you don't know why you are dieng, but trust me, it's a good cause."
Then she dropped something in the room. I kicked over to the other side of the room. It was a bomb. It was set to blow in about 5 minutes. The footsteps came down the stairs, and soon Bill was standing infront of me, chewing a huge amount of gum. He tried to unlock the door, but it wouldn't budge. Karen locked it. Tom, Gustav, and Georg were taking care of Karen and Paul.
"There's a bomb, over there, and it's going to blow in 3 minutes."
"A...bomb?"
"Yeah."
He took out a credit card and tried to unlock it that way. Didn't work.
"2 minutes."
He tried running against it, but all it did was make the door squeak and bruise his arm. Then he took out a pair of pliers, and got the lock open. But the door wouldn't move. I pushed against it while Bill pulled.
"It's not working!"
this time he pushed and I pulled. Nothing.
"60 secounds."
He ran against, this time really hard. The door fell open, but that wasn't the only thing that fell.

DeeDee
May 8th, 2008, 06:10 PM
oh ****

mehr mehr im curious hun

BlondPunk
May 10th, 2008, 08:37 PM
Bill's POV

I looked up to see the wall between me and Michelle start falling. I grabbed Michelle and pulled her over to me.
"We gotta get out of here!"
Everybody was running up the stairs. We all tried not to fight to get up there, but Gustav was running to slow. Tom started pushing Gustav.
"Go! Move!"
Finally we all made it to the top, running, or more like falling, out the fornt door. We quickly got up and scrambled in Tom's car. Roght when Tom turned the car on the place was gone. I tured my attaention to Michelle, and hugged her.
"Are you okay?"
"Yeah, I'm fine."
She didn't sound fine.
"Did they do anything to you?"
"No, they just kept me in that room."


Michelle's POV


I couldn't help but wonder what Karen and Paul were. Maybe they were Vampires? Or maybe something wierd like that. But why would killing me help them live forever? Bill put his hand over mine and looked me in the eyes.
"Michelle, what's bothering you?"
"Nothing."
"Honey, I know something is bothering you."
"It's really nothing."
"Okay."
Bill looked really worried, like something bad happened. Well, yes, something bad did happen. But that's not what I mean.

DeeDee
May 11th, 2008, 01:04 PM
aww bill

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riza13
May 11th, 2008, 11:40 PM
more!!! :D

BlondPunk
May 12th, 2008, 05:11 PM
Sorry for the wait :]



Bill's POV

I'm glad that Michelle is okay, but I really want to know what's bothering her.
"Thanks for saving me guys, I don't know what would've happened to me if I wouldn't have met Bill that one day, and if you guys weren't brave enough to go in there."
I smiled.
"I felt like a stalker the first day, and I'm pretty sure you thought I was a stalker. But all I wanted to do was help because..."
"Because I was blind. I know, I got that alot, especially form boyscouts. And Bill, I thought you were a stalking Hobo."
"A HOBO?"
"Yeah..."
The whole car burst into laughter.
"My brother is secretley an undercover Hobo. Who would've known? Watch out guys, he'll stalk anybody that comes across his way too, even though he gets stalked by crazy fangirls. But he loves to stalk handicapped people the most."
Everybody laughed harder, and I couldn't help but to laugh too.
"Shut up Tom."
"Whatever Bill."
Michelle wasn't laughing. I immeadiently stopped when I saw her not laughing, nor smiling. She looked at her shoes, that's a common sighn of something bothering her.
But then I realized what it was.


If you think you know, don't say it!!!
:]

riza13
May 12th, 2008, 11:18 PM
i have a hunch, but i think its not it

DeeDee
May 13th, 2008, 12:00 PM
oqqow wot happened

mehr hun

riza13
May 16th, 2008, 11:46 PM
bloodpunk where are you??

update asap pls....

BlondPunk
May 17th, 2008, 10:20 AM
bloodpunk where are you??

update asap pls....


sorry...
:]
I've been trying to, but my mom gets me off the computer.
I'm grounded from it...but I sneak on it anyways :]

BlondPunk
May 17th, 2008, 07:15 PM
Sorry for the wait :]


Michelle's POV

It was rude of Tom to say handicapped. I know he was refering to me.
"Michelle, is everything okay?"
I looked up from my shoes and stared at him blankly.
"Yeah, just fine. And you know what...It was really nice of Tom to say that I was handicaped."
"I didn't know it offended you. Jeez."
I glared at Tom.
"Tom! Stop bieng rude!"
"Well maybe Michelle needs to toughen up some more!"
"She's tough enough!"
"Aparantley not!"
"What is wrong with you Tom?"
"Nothing! I'm just saying that Michelle is too soft!"
"Shut up Tom!"
He was quite. Soft? I'm soft? What?

riza13
May 18th, 2008, 07:49 AM
bloodpunk where are you??

update asap pls....


sorry...
:]
I've been trying to, but my mom gets me off the computer.
I'm grounded from it...but I sneak on it anyways :]
oh okay... sorry about that

i understand, ill try to be more patient ;)

and thanks for updating :D

DeeDee
May 18th, 2008, 08:53 AM
tom just shut it :evil:

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amandaaraujo
May 18th, 2008, 09:12 PM
:shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: tom you dumbass how can you say that...... :evil: :evil: :evil: omg i missed so much hihihihihi wow this story issss greaaat :D

BlondPunk
May 19th, 2008, 04:36 PM
Michelle's POV

I am definetley not soft. Maybe I was just acting soft around them. They probably don't even know the real Michelle. The girl who beat up a boy in the fifth grade and became a school star for a little while.
Yeah. They really don't know me. But if I don't defend myself then Tom will really think I'm soft.
"If you think I'm soft, then you must be crazy."
I'm glad Tom wasn't driving. He turned around from the passanger seat and looked at me.
"Well, that's how you act, and that's how I saw you. It's not a bad thing to be soft."
"Then why did you say I need to toughen up some more? I really don't think any of you know how I really act."
"I said you need to toughen up so you can take simple jokes and not get hurt by them."
"I wasn't hurt by your joke! I was just thinking."
"You're defending yourself, because you know you're soft."
"Do you know how badly I want to slap you?"
"Go ahead, slap me. I want to see how hard you can slap me, considering you're a girl."
That was it. Bill gave me a horrified look as I started to raise my hand. Tom was just sitting there, smiling and pointing at his left cheek.
"Right there, okay?"
Bill's facial expression changed.
"Ja Michelle, please slap him. He's bieng a retard."
He kept on smiling this stupid smile. Then I raised my hand a little higher and then let go of it. He was still smiling his stupid smile. Then it hit the exact spot he pointed. It sounded like those slaps you here in movies when the wife hits her husband, but really doesn't hit. Tom touched his cheek.
"Owwwww...GOD!"
Everyone was lauging.
"Am I still soft?"
"No."
"Good."
He rubbed his cheek and then looked at it in the mirror. It was bright red and had a perfect imprint of my hand on it.
"Hahahaha! Now You'll have to cover that up with alot of make-up Tom, or else the fans will wonder who slapped you!"
"Shut up Bill."

amandaaraujo
May 19th, 2008, 04:44 PM
hahHhhHAHAHahahahahhhahahahahah omg that what you deeserve tommy boy hahhahahaha omg that wasso fnnny i was imagning toms face ahhahahah

BlondPunk
May 19th, 2008, 04:55 PM
hahHhhHAHAHahahahahhhahahahahah omg that what you deeserve tommy boy hahhahahaha omg that wasso fnnny i was imagning toms face ahhahahah


:]
I thought he deserved that :]
But Tom will get nicer :]
MAYBE

amandaaraujo
May 19th, 2008, 05:07 PM
omg mabe, oh boy do i have teach that boy a lesson hihihihihiihihihihihihihih. :D :lol: :lol: :lol: please update soon :D

riza13
May 21st, 2008, 09:40 AM
hahahaha...
nice update...

i want to see tom's face if that really happened :lol:

BlondPunk
May 25th, 2008, 05:36 PM
sorry I didn't update!!!


Bill's POV

I think I never really knew the real Michelle. She's tougher than I thought. Tom's such a retard. Ah well. I still want to know hat was bothering Michelle a few minutes ago. We arrived home, and Tom immeadiently ran to the phone to call Jessica. Michelle and I sat down on the couch. Before she got up, I asked her.
"Michelle, what was bothering you?"
She sighed.
"Karen and Paul...they aren't human. Apparentley they have some leader. If they kill me, they'll be able to live forever. They're aliens or something like that. I just really want to know why and what they are."
"Oh, wow. That's....wierd."
"Yeah. But that was it. I should've listened to you and stayed."
"But the good thing is that you're okay."
She smiled. Then Tom came in the living room.
"We'll be picking Jessica up in about an hour. She'll spend the night, and maybe she and Michelle can have some time together. Oh, and David left a message. We have to leave for the american 50 concerts tour in a week, so that means one more week at home and that's it...plus another interview with a mini concert in two days. Oh! And the airport sighning the day before we leave."
"Woah...that hurt me listening to all those things. You guys are really busy."
"Yeah...it's all for the fans."
"And the money!"
I laughed.
"Yeah...I guess."
The phone rang, and Tom ran to get it.
"Hello? Oh...okay. Yeah, we can squeeze that in somehow. Yes, were not too busy. Yeah. See ya."
"Who was it?"
"Oh, it was David again. We're also gonna have to squeeze an American meet and greet and another interview.
"Why so many interviews?"
"So they always know what's up. But I know what to say and when to say it. But right now I can't say anything about you."


Michelle's POV

Jessica and Tom were headind upstairs already.
"Good night."
"Yeah."
Me and Bill walked over to his room. He went in the bathroom andgot dressed, I was already ready. He climbed in bed and smiled at me.
"I'm really glad you aren't hurt. If something would've happened to you...I would've been devestated. I love you."
"I love you too Bill."
We cuddled...but soon were disturbed by Tom and Jessica. Bill sighed and took his hands and pulled hi hair back.
"Ugggghhhh...Tom! He always does that."
He groaned and put the pillow over his head. Soon he was sleeping, with his pillow over his head. And I was left there to hear Tom and Jessica do "it" for another hour. Highly disturbing.

riza13
May 26th, 2008, 05:35 AM
yes.. very disturbing...

amandaaraujo
May 26th, 2008, 11:18 PM
oh boy tomy active ahhahah omg tht kid need someone to set him strait because i can see bill is sick of it hHhAHHAH

BlondPunk
May 27th, 2008, 05:13 PM
Bill's POV

In the morning I went down stairs, not for breakfeast. Michelle was still sleeping, and I didn't want to wake her up. It was only Tom downstairs. I glared at him.
"What?"
He gave me an innocent look.
"Did you and Jessica have a good night?"
"Yeah. It was good."
"Good."
I went back upstairs to get ready.

Michelle's POV

I woke up and got ready. Bill was already downstairs, giving Tom payback by annoying him while he plays video games. Jessica was watching the T.V.
"So Jessica, you want to go shopping today?"
"Sure...better than watching the bys play video games."
Bill gave me a "why-are-you-leaving-me-here-with-Tom?" look.
"It's okay, you'll live."
He sighed.
"Should I get a Limo?"
"Yes!"
He called somebody by the name "Saki" to get us a Limo.
"It'll be here in a few minutes."
In less than five minutes there was a knock at the door, and the Limo driver gestured us to the Limo.
"Bye guys!"
"Bye, have fun! And be careful!"
"Ja, we will."
We got in the Limo.
"Where to misses?"
"The best and biggest mall in Berlin."
He nodded and closed the small window between us. I looked at all the things there were.
"Oooohh...look, it's a fridge!"
"I wonder who was in this Limo..."
"Ummm...famous people?"
"Yeah...and rich people."
"I don't think any Hobos were in here..."
"Nah...they're to nasty and poor to go in a Limo."
Jessica laughed.
"Hobos..."
It was quiet.
"So...how long do you know Bill?"
"Hmmm...a week?"
"Woah...I know Tom for maybe two days. But we met about 4 months ago. I think I hung around with him for an after party once too. But that was it."
"Hm. How much longer...I wanna go shopping!"

BlondPunk
May 29th, 2008, 01:14 PM
Michelle's POV

About 15 minutes later we finally arrived at a huge mall. I dragged Jessica out of the Limo and into the mall. It was huge.
"Where are we going first?"
"Homkratik!"
"Never heard of it."
"It's a really cool store, almost as cool as Hot Topic."
"Okay, let's go."
We went into the store called "Homkratik" and I bought a shirt that was red, and it said "Leave me alone, I bite."
There were other stupid shirts we bought at other wierd stores with wierd names. The last stop was Hot Topic.
I ran over to the first thing I saw.
"Look at this cute dress!"
"Look! They have it in black and red! We can match, but with different colors!"
"I'm taking red. Red's cooler."
"Okay."
It was a red dress, that had a smll sleeve. It was red, black and gray, more red and black. It was plaid, and had chains all over it, and two sets of black buttons running down from the top to the waist. The skirt part had three layers, and only went down to a little above the knee. There was a matching hat, and a matching head band. To go with it I bought the black boots that went all the way to my knee, and some fish-net leggings. I also bought some other stuff, and spent about 300 dollars there.
"The dress is so cute!"
"Yeah. Let's go to that make-up store."
"Sure."
I bought black, red, and green eyeliner. The green eyeliner looked pretty cool. I also bought mascara and red and black lipstick.



stupid mom, is kicking me off, because she's a *****...

riza13
May 30th, 2008, 01:59 AM
yay! you updated

tnx :D

BlondPunk
May 30th, 2008, 09:36 AM
Michelle's POV

Nobody was home when we got back. It was quite, and empty.
"So, what do we do now?"
"I don't know..."
"Maybe we could put on our new clothes and do our make-up and paint our nails."
"Okay. How about we put the dresses on?"
"Sure."
We went upstairs to get our new things on. I put on the dress, my leggings, and those giant black boots that go up to my knee. Jessica was wearing just about the same things as me, except in reverse colors. The only things that were the same were the chains and the boots. The rest was "if I have black, you have red" She put on red lipstick, wich meant I had to put on Black lipstick. Mascara and eyeliner was the same though, both black. She had red nailpolish and I had black. We went to the mirror to see how we looked. I scared myself at first, so did Jessica. We looked really different.
"Okay, lets go downstairs and wait for the boys to come home."
"Okay."

DeeDee
May 30th, 2008, 04:10 PM
d boiis are gonna lav dem im sure


mehr bitte hun wenn du kannst :D

BlondPunk
May 31st, 2008, 10:34 AM
Bill's POV

We got home from the interview pretty early. I could hear Jessica and Michelle talking in the living room. I set my bags down and walked into the living room.
"Hey guys!"
"Woah, you guys look great!"
"Ja, very pretty."
They looked really grwat, they were matching exactly, but had a reverse on color. I loved the color red, it looked good on Michelle. I sat down next to her, examining everything she was wearing. Tom sat down next to Jessica.
"The G's are coming tonight to pick us up with the Limo, and Tom's car will be put on the airplane. You girls better pack your bags with everything you want to bring with."
"Where are we going?"
"America, for the 50 states tour."
"Oh yeah!"
"Yeah, I'll help you pack."
We went upstairs and I started packing everything I liked from her clothes.

Michelle's POV

"So, how long are we going to be in America?"
"I think about 2 and a half months."
I nodded, packing some of my favorite shirts.
"Is everything okay?"
"Yeah, I'm fine."
"You seem quite."
I nodded. I went into the bathroom to get my hair products and make-up. Then I put in all my jewelrey.
"Okay, done?"
"Yeah, almost."
"What else do you....oh, okay."
He left the room so I could finish packing the rest.

Monicaalynn
May 31st, 2008, 05:25 PM
awww... i love this story, i think it's uber cute. c: please write more bitte!!!!???!

BlondPunk
June 1st, 2008, 07:13 PM
Bill's POV

"Are you ready guys?"
Gustav, Georg, me, Tom, and Jessica were waiting down stairs for Michelle.
"Yeah...almost."
I went upstairs and picked up Michelle's suitcases.
"Michelle can I tell you something real quick?"
"Yeah."
"Listen, you know I'm famous. I have alot of fans. I would love to tell them about you, but I'm scared that if I do they'll hate me. I still love you, but they just can't know that you're my girlfreind."
"Okay, so are you going to have to hide me?"
"Not exactly hide, but we just have to be really careful. If anybody asks, wer'e just best freinds."
"Okay."

Sorry for the uber-boring chapter, I'm still thinking of a way to spice it up.

DeeDee
June 1st, 2008, 07:48 PM
hope she does'nt object its for her own good

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Monicaalynn
June 1st, 2008, 08:41 PM
please write more. please

amandaaraujo
June 1st, 2008, 11:50 PM
wow awesome chapters love it and Bill hide michelle not a good idea

tokiohotel26
June 2nd, 2008, 02:22 AM
:]]] More :]]]

"I don't like the airplane toilets, so I had to hold it for 3 hours. Can't I use the bathroom in Peace?"
Michelle laughed at Michelle.

michelle laughed at michelle?

BlondPunk
June 2nd, 2008, 09:50 AM
:]]] More :]]]

"I don't like the airplane toilets, so I had to hold it for 3 hours. Can't I use the bathroom in Peace?"
Michelle laughed at Michelle.

michelle laughed at michelle?

.....
XD XD XD
oooops, haha, I do wierd things like that sometimes.
I think it's michelle laughed at Malina.
I got mixed up because both names had an M.
:]

TWIXX
June 2nd, 2008, 08:34 PM
~new reader~
this is really good!!!!
dang she wen through alot!!!!
i wonder what karen and paul are??!!
girl you need to update this soon!!!!
i wanna meet tokio hotel now!!!!
bitte!!

riza13
June 3rd, 2008, 08:02 AM
wee... more!

i like the cats on your siggie, bloodpunk :D

tokiohotel26
June 3rd, 2008, 03:08 PM
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!
IM DYING OVER HERE
*IN HOSPITAL BED BECAUSE NO MORE PARTS OF STORY YET!!!!*

BlondPunk
June 3rd, 2008, 03:43 PM
Sorry guys, my brain is dying, literally.



Michelle's POV

We were in the airport, and just passed a GIANT crowd of fans. Bill said that it wasn't many. I wonder how many there are when it's not 3:00 in the morning. Our plane for America was gonna come in two hours, but Bill wanted to get here early. Our plane hasn't even landed yet, it still has 1 hour to fly! We finally found a comfy place to sit. I layed down on the couch. Bill sat down, putting my head in his lap. I fell asleep almost immeadiently.


Bill's POV

"Bill, why did you want to come early?"
"Because! I thought there would be traffic!"
"We live 30 minutes away from the airport, with bad traffic maybe an hour! I'm so tired and It's hard to sleep here!"
"Well sorry."
Gustav and Georg were laying on the couch behind us, also sleeping. Soon it was only me, Saki, Toby, and some of the other bodyguards awake.

Michelle's POV

"Michelle, wake up! We have to get on the plane in half an hour."
I stretched.
"Why did you wake me up then?"
"So that if you had to use the bathroom, or wanted something to eat you could go do that now."
"I'm fine."
I stood up and stretched again. I sat back down.
"Maybe I should get something to drink real quick."
"Okay."
I went over to a small stand and bought a drink. I saw two girls reading a newspaper, Bill was on the cover. They looked at me, and then whispered something to each other. I went back to Bill.
"We're gonna board the plane already."
"Okay."
I picked up my small carry-on bag and followed Bill to our seats. First class seats.
"Wer'e gonna sit by the window, Tom and Jessica will sit in the middle, and Georg and Gustav behind us."
"Alright."
I sat next to the window, and looked at the people outside of the plane. The two girls I saw a few minutes ago were in the plane too. They looked at Bill and the others and were squealing a little, the one girl looked like she was about to cry. They went on to the economy section. Tom gave Bill an uneasy look.
"What's wrong with him?"
"Tom? He's scared of flying."
"Oh."
He squirmed around. I didn't like airplanes, the thought of a Giant hunk of metal flying doesn't seem very real.

tokiohotel26
June 3rd, 2008, 03:47 PM
yay u wrote today!! it was good 2!!!

Monicaalynn
June 3rd, 2008, 06:25 PM
yay!! i love airplanes!!!! i wonder what those fan girls where says.....*is deep in thought*.... i got nothing... please write some more.... something crazy is bound to happen on the plane.

BlondPunk
June 3rd, 2008, 06:34 PM
yay!! i love airplanes!!!! i wonder what those fan girls where says.....*is deep in thought*.... i got nothing... please write some more.... something crazy is bound to happen on the plane.

:]
they're cff's lol

BlondPunk
June 3rd, 2008, 07:51 PM
Bill's POV

We were going to take off in a half an hour.
"Wer'e going to be stuck here for 9 hours straight, no stopping."
"Then I'll have plenty of time to sleep. I'm so tired!"
"Ja, me too."
The stuerdesses passed out cookies and things to drink. Michelle ate it and then leaned her chair back.
"Hi Georg! How are you?"
She was looking at Georg upside down from her seat.
"I'm doing fine, how are you?"
"Tired."
"Me too."
She put up her seat.
"I forgot, we have to put our seats up when we start."
I looked over to Tom.
"Are you going to be okay?"
"Ja, I'll be okay."
I looked over to Michelle.
"You like flying, don't you?"
"No, not really. I constantly have to keep my mind busy, or else it'll ask questions like 'how does this huge pice of metal even fly?' or 'what would happen if a ton of birds get sucked into the turbine, and the turbine gets clogged up, and we crash?' I really don't enjoy flying, only the starting and lannding part."
Tom looked wide-eyed at us.
"And you have to make me think of more possibilities of what can happen in an airplane?"
"You didn't have to listen!"
Tom sat back down in his chair. Then the pilot said we were going to start, and all you could hear was "Womp and womp womp, womp I womp womp and womp. We willwomp womp at womp o- womp, in womp womp womp. womp womp womp, womp. I hope you have a great flight with Luftansa today."

Michelle's POV

The plane backed up, and Tom's hands were clawing into the seat. I was holding on to the end of the arm chair, almost clawing in it too. Bill put his hand over mine.
"It'll be okay, nothing is going to happen."
I nodded my head. The plane was cold. The plane got to the runway. It was getting faster and faster, it felt like my chair was sucking me in. The top of the plane lifted, and then it did a tiny didve and started going up. The it started to get level. It did a turn here and there, and then it was steady. Tom was sitting in his chair like he was just electrecuted.
"Tom, are you still here?"
He nodded his head. I leaned my chair back and fell asleep, and hopefully wouldn't wake up until the food came.

tokiohotel26
June 5th, 2008, 03:41 PM
yay u rote!
i like the part where tom freaked out
that was funny

Monicaalynn
June 6th, 2008, 09:15 AM
haha, poor tom... please write more soon. c:

BlondPunk
June 6th, 2008, 12:51 PM
Bill's POV

It took me five minutes to wake up Michelle. She finally opened her eyes and sat up.
"Wer'e gonna land soon."
"Were's my food?"
"You wouldn't wake up for it."
"Aw man."
"The food was nasty anyways."
"Okay. At least I didn't eat anything nasty."
We soon landed, and got out of the airplane. We had to wait for Georg to finally get out of the airplane. He decided that he had to go to the bathroom and couldn't hold it when the airplane was landing. Poor Georg. The two girls that we saw earlier came up to me and Tom.
"Can we have your autographs?"
I nodded and sighned the piece of paper. I gave it to Tom, then Tom gave it to Gustav. Georg finally came out of the plane. He signed the paper and the girls sqealed when they got them back. We kept on walking.

Michelle's POV

The girls were practically following us. Saki and Tobi were close behind us, keeping them from pouncing on one of the boys. I was a little dizzy from the airplane ride, and I smelled food. We made our way to the Limo, and billions of girls were screaming their heads off. We were in New York. The first concert was tonight. Bill waved and smiled to the fans, and sighned a few autographs. We got in the Limo and I layed down on the seat and tried to go back to sleep. Instead I got to hear the boys conversation.

Monicaalynn
June 6th, 2008, 05:49 PM
I love airplain foodz!!!!! I'm just weird like that though...

please write more

BlondPunk
June 9th, 2008, 10:41 AM
O_o
You actually like that gunk?

Michelle's POV

Bill played with my hair, like he always does. I wonder why he likes my hair so much.
"She's so cute when she's asleep."
"Bill, you need to focus more on the band. I know you love her, but that doesn't mean you can forget about the band."
"I am thinking about the band! The band comes before her."
"Yeah but we don't do things the way we used to. We don't do things alone, the girls are always with us."
"Tom, remember yesterday? The girls went shopping, and we did our things, alone."
"But I feel as though you're forgetting about us! You're paying more attention to Michelle than us!"
"Well I'm sorry that you're not happy about this."
"That's not what I meant! I'm happy that you love Michelle and she loves you! I'm just saying, I don't want you to forget about us!"
"I won't! How can I forget about you guys if wer'e together 24/7?!"
"I didn't mean forget that way, I meant forget as in, Don't ignore us so much, and, maybe you should spend more time with us."
"I will! Just because I have a girlfreind doesn't mean I won't have time for you guys."
"Okay. To keep your promise, we have do something together, just the four of us, once a week. Okay?"
"Okay."

Monicaalynn
June 9th, 2008, 06:35 PM
sadly yeah I do like their food. but I havent been on a plane for a while so now I forget what the food tastes like... but i just remember liking it. lol.

Bill would never forget about the band he loves music too much.

I <3 this story. c:

amandaaraujo
June 9th, 2008, 07:27 PM
hahahahah that was so funny i d the same thing i hate the landings and take offsmy palms start sweating too . ahahah i was imagining tom bwahahahh

BlondPunk
June 10th, 2008, 01:32 PM
hahahahah that was so funny i d the same thing i hate the landings and take offsmy palms start sweating too . ahahah i was imagining tom bwahahahh


I love airplanes!!!
I hope to be a pilot when I'm older :]

tokiohotel26
June 10th, 2008, 06:58 PM
aahh u actually like planes?
i freakin terrified of heights and i hate going on planes
oddly enough i like sitting in the window seat... lol :lol:

BlondPunk
June 11th, 2008, 04:25 PM
aahh u actually like planes?
i freakin terrified of heights and i hate going on planes
oddly enough i like sitting in the window seat... lol :lol:


If I don't get the window seat on the plane, I get mad. One time we all got seperated (me, my mom, and 6 year old brother) and I had to sit inbetween this fat lady and this fat man. So I played my iPod REALLY loud. And I mean LOUD. So then the lady poked my shoulder and asked me to turn the volume down (and she was very rude in the beginning. She didn't want us to sit together because she had to sit on the outside of the row. At first I thought "okay, so she probably has blatter problems." Well, guess what. She didn't go to the bathroom one time. Not once! It made me so mad! And the tone of her voice! GAAAH!!!
I WAS DIENG!!! And I was bieng very rude to give her payback for bieng rude. I made sure to spill my drink on her. But I'm only a clumsy kid! lol.
That was soo fun. Yet sooooooooo terrible!!!!

BlondPunk
June 12th, 2008, 10:24 AM
Okay, less of that story, more of this story.
Yes, I loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooovvvve planes. I'm wierd like that.


Bill's POV

Stupid Tom, I'd never forget about him or the band! Just because I have a girlfreind! He has a girlfreind too (or at least I think he does.) So why does he think I'll forget about him? We stopped infront of our hotel, and there were some fans waiting outside. I tapped on Michelle's arm.
"Wake up sweetie, wer'e here."
She stretched and got up.
"Did you have a good sleep?"
"Yeah, It was good."
I smiled to the fans and sighned a few autographs. A girl was crying, and another girl fainted. Some of them lared at Michelle. We checked in at the reception desk, and there were the two girls from the airplane. They squealed when they saw us. I waved and smiled, and they squealed louder. At least they weren't trying to murder us. We went in the elevator.
"Well, I guess I'll see you guys later tonite for dinner."
"Ja, see ya."
We went to our room. I opened it with the card and Michelle gasped.

Michelle's POV

"Oh my god, it's giant!"
"Ja, usually our hotel rooms are smaller."
"Wow..."
There was a living room, a kitchen, and two bedrooms. Bill put our clothes in one bedroom and the other bedroom as for us to sleep in. It was as big as an apartment, maybe bigger. There was a balcony, wich was huge. You could see the pool from it. I went to see what Bill was doing.
"Nice, huh?"
"Yeah, it's amazing."
"I know. This is the biggest hotel room I ever stayed at."
"Cool."
"I'm tired, I can't sleep in airplanes."
"So am I."
He plopped on the bed and snuggled under the covers. Then he fell asleep. I layed down and went to sleep too.

Monicaalynn
June 12th, 2008, 12:49 PM
yay snuggling! lol.

BlondPunk
June 13th, 2008, 01:13 PM
Yay Gustav's POV!!!


Gustav's POV

Me and Georg walked around the lobby and looked for something to do. The girls that were on our airplane were watching our every move.
"They're kinda scaring me Goerg."
"No, they're just fans. Let them stare, it'll probably be the last time bieng this close to us."
The one girl had straight red hair that went a little over her shoulders. Her bangs were a little over her eyes. She had a few black highlights here and there. She had hazel eyes, and a nose. It would be wierd if she didn't have a nose. The other girl was small, very small, but not as small as Michelle. Michelle is super tiny! She had long curly blonde hair, dark brown eyes, and she also had a nose.
"What are you looking at Gustav?"
"Oh, nothing."
"You were checking the girls out, right?"
"No!"
"Yes you are, you're face is red. Hey, let's go talk to them!"
"No, I-i have to go pee."
"You can go pee after we talk to them."
I sighed and followed Georg to the two girls. I let him do the talking.
"Hey, do you mind if we sit here?"
"No! Not at all!"
We sat across from them. They giggled and were really happy.
"So how are you doing?"
"It was great! And how was your day?"
"Pretty good."
"Cool. How was your day Gustav?"
I could feel their eyes on me.
"It was very nice."
"So what are you boys doing today?"
"Wer'e just waiting for Bill and Tom to come down here so we can eat dinner."
"Can we stay for dinner?"
"Only if you don't scream or start crying."
"We won't."
"So what's your names?"
"I'm Laura, and this is my best freind forever Shadow. She's rather shy."
Laura was the blondie, and Shadow was the red haired girl. Got it. Shadow seemed very shy, but she did finally coem out of her shell to ask Georg a question.
"Georg, what kind of hair straightner do you use? I never can get my hair as straight as yours."
I could see Georg's eyes lite up.

BlondPunk
June 16th, 2008, 12:42 PM
No readers?
Bump Bump Bump.
............

Monicaalynn
June 16th, 2008, 03:54 PM
oh gosh I had no idea you updated!!!!

for some reason I dont trust those girls, i dont know why. lol. they seem like stalkers... hahaha

mehr bitte?

tokiohotel26
June 19th, 2008, 12:20 AM
aahh u actually like planes?
i freakin terrified of heights and i hate going on planes
oddly enough i like sitting in the window seat... lol :lol:


If I don't get the window seat on the plane, I get mad. One time we all got seperated (me, my mom, and 6 year old brother) and I had to sit inbetween this fat lady and this fat man. So I played my iPod REALLY loud. And I mean LOUD. So then the lady poked my shoulder and asked me to turn the volume down (and she was very rude in the beginning. She didn't want us to sit together because she had to sit on the outside of the row. At first I thought "okay, so she probably has blatter problems." Well, guess what. She didn't go to the bathroom one time. Not once! It made me so mad! And the tone of her voice! GAAAH!!!
I WAS DIENG!!! And I was bieng very rude to give her payback for bieng rude. I made sure to spill my drink on her. But I'm only a clumsy kid! lol.
That was soo fun. Yet sooooooooo terrible!!!!
sorry i havnt been here in a while! i cant believe u did that! i wish i was there 2 see it lol

tokiohotel26
June 19th, 2008, 12:27 AM
now that i have read those chpters...oooh gusti is in love...i think...i might just confuse myself again so im gonna shut up now :| :) :D :mrgreen:

BlondPunk
June 19th, 2008, 03:29 PM
Sorry I didn't update! My brain was bieng dead again :]


Georg's POV

"I use a cortex 9000 deluxe. You can even straughten your hair when it's wet, and it won't fry! I love that flat iron, it's the best thing in the world."
She took out a piece of paper and wrote the name down.
"It sounds great."
"It is great!"
Bill, Michelle, Tom, and Jessica came up to us and sat at the table.
"Guys, this is Shadow, and This is Laura. They're the girls we saw in the airport and in the airplane."
"Nice to meet you."
Bill and Tom shook hands with the girls. Shadow uneaslily looked at Michelle and Jessica.
"Are you two their girlfreinds?"
Michelle's eyes widened, not knowing what to say.
"Because this magazine says-"
Bill snatched the magazine out of her hands and looked at the cover. Then he turned to the page it was on and gasped.

Monicaalynn
June 19th, 2008, 08:06 PM
*gasp* whatdiditsaywhatdiditsaywhatdiditsaywhatdiditsay!! ?

riza13
June 21st, 2008, 04:12 AM
more pls

BlondPunk
July 4th, 2008, 04:04 PM
Sorry I didn't update in so long.
I was thinking about discontiniung, but I just needed a long break from the story.
I have something planned, But I still don't know if I'm going to use that plan............
Oh well Here's more!


Bill's POV

My jaw dropped.
Singer Bill Kaulitz (19) from the famous band Tokio Hotel has been caught with this girl. Black hair with red highlights, a lip piercing, short, skinny, and beautiful. Fans all over the country are jealous and mad at this girl, who may be Bill's girlfreind. Nothings final yet, but as of right now we are closeley watching these two teens. Could this be love? Type in "LOVE YES" to "1000BRAVO" for yes, and "LOVE NO" to "1000BRAVO" for no.
And here's Wednesday's Poll for "Would you still be Tokio Hotel's fan if they had a girl freind?" 31% said no, and 9% said yes, and 60% said that they want TH to be as happy as possible.

"Bill? What does it say?"
I gave the magazine to Tom, Georg, Gustav, Michelle, and Jessica.
"So everybody kno-"
"SSSSSSSSSSSShhh! Not so loud Tom!"
"So everybody know that you have a girlfreind?" He said a little quiter.
"Not exactly. But they might soon."
Georg shook his head in disbelief.
"It's all Bill's fault." Georg said.
"Don't blame it on me! Tom has a girlfreind too, and as I see you two will be having one soon too."
Georg nodded.
"I think I will."
Gustav kept quite.
"Stop acting so quite Gustav! You need to talk more! And who do you think will be your girlfreind Georg."
He smiled.
"This loveley lady with red hair here. She loves flat irons as much as I do, and we both play Bass Guitair. Isn't that a funny coincidence?"
Shadow blushed. I nodded to Georg.
"I didn't mean for people to start hating you guys. I'm so sorry."
"There's no need to be sorry! It's not your fault. It's nobody's fault."
She tried to smile.

iilyRein
July 4th, 2008, 09:02 PM
argh! i need more
*new reader btw*
uber good

BlondPunk
July 5th, 2008, 11:30 AM
Yay a raeder!
*dances around*
Just ONE more reader and I'll make a post!

iilyRein
July 5th, 2008, 11:34 AM
aww no fair
i wanted more
darn ............ =(

xXxMandiixXx
July 5th, 2008, 11:54 AM
havent comented in ages SORRY lolz

anywayz love it continue!!!

<3 Mandii xx

Monicaalynn
July 5th, 2008, 04:19 PM
awww georg likes her!!!! mehr?

BlondPunk
July 5th, 2008, 04:54 PM
Yay! I got two more readers!
And I has a plan.
A tiny little plan.



Michelle's POV

"I still feel like it's my fault that you're loosing fans."
"I don't care who's fault it is. Even though alot of people are mad at us, they'll still like our music. At least a true fan would. It's my fault. Not you'rs."
"But-"
"No. Don't say anything else. Let's just get something to eat and enjoy ourseleves."
A waitress came to take our orders.
"I would like a cheeseburger. He wants a Pepperoni Pizza, and the other two want chicken. ANd the other three want pizza and the girl next to him wants a grilled chicken sandwich."
She nodded.
"What would you like to drink."
"4 colas and 4 sprites."
"Okay. I'll be back with your things soon."
In about ten minutes everything came. Bill and Tom inhaled their food, Gusatv was picking at it, and the rest of us ate our things like normal people. Bill was the first one done.
"Hah! I beat you Tom!"
Tom glared at him.
"Well I beat you last time, three weeks in a row!"
"So? I was letting you win, because I felt bad for you. You weren't winning for months! So I thought you would've gotton a little depressed if I didn't let you win."
"Pffffft. Yeah right."
"Wahtever Tom."

BlondPunk
July 8th, 2008, 01:32 PM
Bill's POV

Tom will never beat me. I always eat faster than him.
"So, you want to hang out some time?" Georg asked Shadow.
"Sure, that would be great."
"Cool. You can come up with me in my hotel room, if you want."
"That sounds cool."
Gustav finally was trying to start a conversation with Laura. He was failing, but at least he was trying.
"You want to go back up to the hotel room Michelle?"
"Huh? Oh! Yeah, I' like to go back up."
"We'll see you guys tommorow morning."
"Don't do anything I wouldn't do!" Tom yelled.
"No, it goes like this, Don't do anything Tom would do."
"Whys that?"
"Because, I don't want to do what you do."
"And what do I do?"
"Girls."
Tom gave me a confused look.
"You don't get it, do you?"
"No."
"You. do. girls. Get it? You asked wht do I do. You do girls. It would be scary if you did boys, you know."
"Oh. Right."
I rolled my eyes.
"Let's go. Tom still doesn't get it."

tokiohotel26
July 8th, 2008, 03:18 PM
:lol: :lol: :lol:
that was hilarious!

Monicaalynn
July 8th, 2008, 05:03 PM
lol. the joys of having sexy germans not understanding anything...

xluciax
July 9th, 2008, 11:13 AM
HAHahaha!!! Tom really is turning into an old man!!!

BlondPunk
July 17th, 2008, 12:51 PM
Oh oh oh!!!!
Yana has an ideases!
=D


Michelle's POV

Bill layed down on the bed and looked up at the cieling. I took out my laptop and turned it on, too see if I recieved any emails.
"You know, I feel like we've known each other since forever. But We only met a week ago. Bumping into you was about the best thing that's ever happened to me, besides starting a band and getting famous."
"Yeah, bumping into you is the best thing that's happened to me so far."
I clicked on my emails. Only five. Two from Haley, one from Alexis, and two from Kacy. Haley is about my best freind. Kacy and Alexis are just freinds. Nothinig more.

Haley101:

Miiiiicccccchhhhhheeeeeellllleeeeee!!! Where in the world are you? I've been worried about you ever since the school said you wouldn't come back! I know what happened, so at least you got rid of the beast! How is it in Germany? Are there any cute guys? Tell me everything!

Kacy and Alexis' were similar to Haley's.

Haley101:

Michelle you'd never believe this. Your aunt was here, looking for you. Listen, there are some pretty freaky things about your family going on. I think your dad lied to you about your mom. She's still alive.
Your dad and mom divorced just a few days before you were born. The people gave you to your dad, I don't know why though. So your mom's still alive. Your dad just didn't want you to ever meet your mom, because he hated her. Your mom got remarried a few months after you were born. When your dad died, you were supposed to go to your mom, but the people didn't believe your mom so they didn't allow her to have you. Your mom wants you back Michelle. If you want to, I can send you the plane tickets to come back. You just have to tell me where you are.

I immediently wrote her back.
"Michelle? Are you okay?"
"Huh? Yeah! Read this."
I gave him my laptop and opened it to what Haley said.
"My mom wants to see me! Isn't this great?"
I was bouncing on the bed by now.
"Yeah, it's great."

Monicaalynn
July 17th, 2008, 03:03 PM
wow.... that's kinda depressing. but it was good! mehr?

BlondPunk
July 28th, 2008, 01:32 PM
Michelle's POV

We left New York two days ago. I told Haley that I'd be in Hollywood by the time the plane ticket arrived, so she said she'd get plane tickets to fly from Hollywood to Atlanta. Haley said the ticket would come soon. We're in Hollywooed right now, and just got done with another amazing concert. Tom and Bill are mad at each other right now. Again. They haven't talked since last night. Tom also broke up with Jessica. I think it was Jessica who broke up with Tom, because he was talking to other girls and stuff. But it's his own fault. Shadow and Georg are together, and so is Laura and Gustav. So wer'e all one big happy group, excluding Tom.

Bill's POV

We finally got to our hotel room and I started unpacking in the seperate room. Michelle went to bed. There was a knock on the door, and I went to go see who it was.
"Hi, we have something for Michelle."
"Okay, I'll give it to her when she wakes up."
He handed me a an envolope that said "Delta airlines" on it. I knew it was the plane ticket for Michelle to go home.
She said we could visit each other every now and then.
But I don't want her to go. I want her to stay with me. She makes me so happy, and I don't want her to go. I took the plane tickets and put them in my suitcase, so she wouldn't go back to Georgia. I want her to stay.

Monicaalynn
July 28th, 2008, 03:30 PM
gasp Bill, you cant do something like that!!!! she'll be mad at you when she finds out!

in.die.nacht.
July 28th, 2008, 07:20 PM
~*new reader*~
Bill! you bad bad boy!
how dare you hide the tickets!
oh, I've been reading this for a while now, but just made an account ^-^

xluciax
July 31st, 2008, 11:38 AM
BAD BILL!!!!!BAD!!!
Bill is being a very bad boy!!!
Write more!!!!
Please?
Or else I will use evil plan T!!!
BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!! :twisted:

BlondPunk
July 31st, 2008, 02:05 PM
BAD BILL!!!!!BAD!!!
Bill is being a very bad boy!!!
Write more!!!!
Please?
Or else I will use evil plan T!!!
BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!! :twisted:

T stands for........
Take me to six flaGs?

GOLIATH
o.o

xluciax
July 31st, 2008, 09:38 PM
BAD BILL!!!!!BAD!!!
Bill is being a very bad boy!!!
Write more!!!!
Please?
Or else I will use evil plan T!!!
BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!! :twisted:

T stands for........
Take me to six flaGs?

GOLIATH
o.o

It stands for Tomb stone!!!
BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! :twisted:

BlondPunk
August 1st, 2008, 10:47 AM
BAD BILL!!!!!BAD!!!
Bill is being a very bad boy!!!
Write more!!!!
Please?
Or else I will use evil plan T!!!
BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!! :twisted:

T stands for........
Take me to six flaGs?

GOLIATH
o.o

It stands for Tomb stone!!!
BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! :twisted:


O______________________________o
TOMB STONE???
u.u
ui ye
I guess I better update!

BlondPunk
August 1st, 2008, 11:08 AM
Okay, I do not want to die.
So I'll update.


Michelle's POV

The plane ticket was supposed to come in yesterday. But they didn't. The plane leaves today, in 4 hours, and if I don't have that freaking plane ticket, I'm going to be so mad It won't be funny anymore. Maybe Bill seen them. But he's sleeping, so I shouldn't wake him up. I'll just go get ready. I walked into the room that had our clothes on it. And I guess I could steal one of Bill's shirts today, he won't mind. I opened up his suitcase and looked around for his "The Icon" shirt. But instead of finding that shirt, I found something else, right beneath all his clothes. I found the plane ticket. Why didn't he want me to leave? What the heck? Why in the world would he do this?
I quickly got changed and some of my clothes and started packing everything. If he tries to tell me some stupid lie I will slap him across his face so hard he'll forget all about me and find some other girl to lie to. Okay, not really lie, but you kinda know what I mean, don't you?
"Michelle? What are you doing?" A sleepy Bill said from behind me.
"Packing." I said plainly.
"But, wha- how- I-"
"I found the tickets in your suitcase, okay?" I said, slamming the suitcase shut.
"I-i It-" He stammered.
"No Bill, you're not sorry. And yes, you know how it got there. I'm not stupid, okay? I'm leaving, okay? Don't bother finding me. And don't try to make me stay."
"Michelle, please!"
"Please what? Bill, I can't live with you after this! It's just not right that you would do this to me! Wer'e through. Done. It's over."
"Please don't go, I'll do anything!"
I froze, right in front of the open door. I turned around and laughed.
"Anything?" I asked.
"Anything, I swear!" Bill said.
"Okay, quit everything, and I'll see. Oh wait, band before me, no? Well, I'll see you on T.V. Bill!" I said, walking away from his room.
"Michelle!"
was the last thing I heard before the elevator doors close.

Monicaalynn
August 3rd, 2008, 10:47 PM
*gasp* that had some major intensity to it, i loved it!

iilyRein
August 4th, 2008, 06:06 PM
harsh much =O

crazychick6195
October 7th, 2008, 09:29 PM
Omg i can't believe she just stormed out like that! =O i hope bill runs after her. Btw im sorry 4 commenting this fic so freekin late but i just saw it today so im comenting now lol. Ru gonna continue?? Pleasse say yes! I love this FF. Ur great.

BlondPunk<3
October 7th, 2008, 09:31 PM
Oh wow... I kinda left this fic standing.
Ah!
Now I remember my plan!
I'll try and update soon!

crazychick6195
October 13th, 2008, 12:00 AM
Lol i kno
Yay
update when ur ready!

BlondPunk<3
October 18th, 2008, 10:42 AM
Michelle's POV

"Hey Michelle! You have to come see this!" My half sister Tori yelled from downstairs.
I got out of bed and and sleepily walked downstairs. My mom gave me a warm smile and a hug as she passed by. I went to the living room to find Tori holding a magazine with the front cover reading "Tokio Hotel".
"Tori you know I-"
"No Michelle, you gotta read it." Tori said, shoving the page in my face while pointing at where I should start.

In big letters it read "Bill's shocking announcmenet"

It's been three weeks since Singer Bill Kaulitz (19) has seen his now ex-girlifreind. The shocker: He admitted to us he was going out with the mysterious black and red haired girl, Michelle. "Without her, there's no joy in life. I do it only for the fans, and for my band mates. But I can't do it anymore. Without Michelle I'm lost. I need her. And since my fans and bandmates don't understand, there's nothing else to do but... quit." The young singer said. Millions of fans all over the world are shocked and miserable. When will our Bill get over this break up and come back to his band? We don't know.

I threw the magazine on the floor and sat down on the couch. Tori pulled me into a hug.
"Michelle, he needs you. Why won't you just forgive him and move on?" Tori asked.
I sighed.
"I don't know."
"It's not going to get any better. And he must really love you Michelle. Come on, How many guys would do that for a girl? Not many. Michelle you have to find him and fix this! You know you love him!"
I shook my head.
"I don't know." Was all I said.

Janaye
October 19th, 2008, 11:30 PM
:o He quit Tokio Hotel omg now if he did that in real life I would most likely cry

BlondPunk<3
October 20th, 2008, 05:11 PM
:o He quit Tokio Hotel omg now if he did that in real life I would most likely cry

You'll see if he really did or not ;]