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ShadowIW
March 17th, 2008, 02:33 PM
Hi ok here is my FanFic....ok so this is goin' to be long......

Georg and Tom were at their studio with the rest of the band.
“So Tom, what are u going to do this weekend?” gustav said already knowing the answer
“U know party!” Tom said as he started to put his iPod earphones in his ears
Bill and Georg entered the room with the ‘Style’ section of an American newspaper. They laid it down on the coffee-table. The headline said “New club opening in Austin Texas! Looks like a 5-star!”
“I got us the fastest flights there…we have to get out of here! I am bored out of my skull!” Bill said sitting on couch.
“Flight leaves tonight at 9:30! Get packing!” Georg said leaving the room
“Didn’t know my wish would be answered that fast!” tom said with a grin
“idiot….” Gustav mumbled under his breath. They all left to get packed they didn’t know how long they were staying so they packed for 5 days. When 9:30 came around they were on the plan heading for Austin….

*****************

“Hey, Angie!” Laurie said handing her friend a newspaper
Angie read the article, her eyes widened “New club?! Is it in Travis County? Or where-“
“Angie, its near the mall!” Laurie said jumping up and down “Party—shop—party!”
“When should we go?” Angie said looking at a calendar
“TOMORROW!!! OPENING NIGHT!!” Laurie screamed



Angie and Laurie were so happy that they chose their cloths that night because they couldnt sleep. By the time morning came around they realized that they staied up all night.
"Oh Angie...i am glad today is saturday or I would have have to gone to work." laurie said turning on the TV... then she heard Angie start to snore
'ZZZzzz...."
'thats a good ide--a' laurie thought as she herself fell asleep.

**********
'BEEP BEEP BEEP' Bills alarm clock in his hotel room went off.
"Ugh..five more minutes...." he moaned as he hit the snooze button.
Just then Tom came running into the room and started jumping on Bill's bed.
"BILL!!! TODAY THE CLUB OPENS!!!" tom screamed
"How in the world did you get into my room?" Bill said
"You gave me your extra key dumby." Tom got off the bed and went into the other room to sit on the couch. Bill got up and got dressed
"Hey Bro, what is the club's name?" Tom said as Bill walked into the room.
"Its um Club...um..oh.. NEON! Thats it club NEON..." Bill said as he turned on the TV
"Bill how do we get there? We have never been here before..."
"Uh.. we will use that NEVERLOST thing in the rent-a-car."
"Do you know how to work it?"
"Georg will probably know.... Lets call the others... we could do some sight seeing......."
Tom called the rest of the band, the first place they went to was the Bob Bullock museum (that is an acctual museum)
"OOOOhhhh its so BIG!" Bill said looking around...
"What the heck is an IMAX?" Gustav said to Georg
"Idk but they got one...." Georg said laughing




After looking around and getting lunch. The boys went back to the hotel to change to go to NEON. The Girls on the other hand like I said before, already knew what they were going to wear. So around 8:00 the girls left to try to get in early... There was suposed to be a HUGE line..... and there was.
"DANG! the line is.....oh my!" Laurie said
"Well, its not like Paris Hilton is hear or something" Angie said laughing
*in background..."LOOK ITS PARIS HILTON!!!!"*
Angie's face looked like this 0.-
"ok maybe she IS here but...Tom Cruze isn--- LOOK ITS TOM CRUZE!!!!" Angie said jumping up and down squeazeing Laurie's arm
"Okaaayyy... can now wish we had famous Boyfriends?!" Laurie said smilieing
"OK, I will..." Angie said closeing her eyes "we want famous boyfriends, I wish that we had Famous boyfriends" Angie opened eyes and looked around
"Well this proves you cant get everything you wish for..." Laurie said then she realized they were in front of the line "Come-on..." she said to Angie then they walked in.
************
"Boy... LONG LINE!!" Gustav said
"OHHH...look GIRLS!!!" Tom said looking around
"Tom there are girls everywhere..." Bill said rolling his eyes
"But these are Texan girls!" Tom said wildly




When the boys FINALLY got in to the club the music was AWSOME.... it was hip-hop, rock, any other kind...(so lets get back to the story!)
"dude. just... DUDE!" Georg said to tom
"Whaaaat?!" tom said angerly
"You just flirted with 3 girls in 2 minutes..." Georg said, his face looked like this -.-
"Are u jelouse...??" Tom replied
"NEIN!" Georg yelled
"Boys calm down and look at those two girls over there" Bill said wide-eyed, he was pointing to Angie and Laurie
"DUUUUUUUDDDDDDDEEEEE...." They all said at the same time
**************
"Angie! what r u doing?" laurie laughed
"Im danceing!! la la la!" Angie spun around crazily
"That aint dancin' laurie said
"Ill show you danceing...."
Laurie started to dance like she was a pro.
********
"Tooooooooommm, look at that girl dance!" Bill said
"Look at the other one being silly." Tom replied
*********
The song FAME was playing....
"THATS MY SONG!!" Laurie said as she started singing "I can catch the moon in my hands... REMEBER MY NAME! FAME!! Im gonna live forever!" Just then She looked at Bill... being random she waved then did a back flip
Bill's jaw was wide opened
"Let's talk to them" Gustav said as he started walking towards the girls
The rest of the guys followed
just then Tom ran in front of them
"Hey.. Im Tom" He said to the girls
"Yo, what up?" Angie said
"Hey, yo! How do u like the club?" Laurie said walking up behind them
"Oh well we like it... By the way, Im Bill this is Georg Gusta and my twin bro Tom." Bill said
"Hang-on..." Laurie said then she truned around and screamed "FAME , light up the sky like a flame!"
Then she turned back around and said "oops sorry! had to do that, dude

"Dont ya'll dance?" Laurie said looking at the boys who were just standing there.
"sometimes." tom said
"ok, u probably need a sugar rush." Angie said "Bartender 4 Sherly-temples, 4 sprites, and 6 chocolate marshmellows!"
the boys just looked at each other.
gustav just shruged
"Boys... here is a life lesson... Sugar= angie's insanity" Laurie said
then angie gave her a sharp look
"Laurie! Im not the one who dances around the house with her iPod singing Funkytown!" Angie said
"I dont care." Laurie went over to Tom
"You seem like you would dance. Come and dance with me." Laurie grabed his hand and lead him over to the dance floor... They soon started danceing.
"Yo, where are yall from?"Laurie said to tom
"Germany..." he replied
"O? cool!What do yall do?"
"We are a famous band... Tokio Hotel."
Laurie just stoped. she thought about Angie's wish...
"Laurie? u okay?" tom said laughing
"O ya Im fine. I cant believe yall are famous! I mean with a band and all. that is awsome." she said back
they continued danceing
*********
Back with the others
"Angie,do you and Laurie do for free-time?' bill said
"Oh well we go shopping. Drive to San Antonio... um and a bunch of other stuff. Why?" Angie asked
"Well- we are staying here for a couple more days and I was wondering if you and Laurie could show us around." Bill replyed
"that would be a good idea.." Gustav said
"we'd be happy too!" Angie said "Where are you all staying?"
"Um the double tree thats just down the road--"
"Oh my word!" angie inturuped "You are staying THERE?! nonsense!Its too much money! you all are staying with me and Laurie, no questions asked."
Just then tom and Laurie walked up, they heard the whole thing.
"Uhhh.... Angie can I talk to u?" Laurie said
they walked to about 10 feet away
"Remeber that wish?......" laurie staredto say
"what wish-- oh that one ya.." Angie said glanceing at Tom
"ANGIE! look-- look at me- stop stareing at tom." Laurie grabed angie's jaw so Angie would pay attention.
"let go, you're hurting me."
"Sorry.. but any way.. Tom, Bill, Georg and Gustav are FAMOUS!" Laurie whispered to Angie
"O my word! r you serous?" Angie's eyes widened
"yep. I am sure of it...ya"
"I told them that they are staying with us Laurie!oooo...four cute famous boys are staying with us!" Angie started to laugh histericly
"Angie are you ok?" Laurie said
"Look at tom! he is acting ganster! it so funny! wait---BILL IS TRYING TO RAP!! hahahahahhhaa!"
Both of the girls started laughing and walked back over to the boys
"ok guys are ya'll ready to leave? we have to go get your bags from your hotel." Laurie said
"Ya lets go before Tom and Bill loose their minds" Georg said
they all left to go get Angie and Laurie's car.
"ok boys pile in the back, luckly this is MY car so its big enough to hold all of us an your bags...unlike Laurie's pick-up truck...." angie said as she unlocked the car
"at least I can drive better than you." Laurie said getting in
"Girls its ok." Bill said as he got in after gustav
they all drove to the hotel got the bags and left for Angies and Laurie's house
as they got their Laurie told them where the boys were staying.
"Ok, Gustav you will have the room on the right at the top of the staircase. Georg you will that room across from Gustav, Bill you can stay in my room- I show you where that is and Tom you can have Angie's room- she will show you where that is....if she can find it herself. Angie and I will sleep down stairs in the living room."
"Are you all sure you want us here." Tom said
"YES WE'RE SURE." Angie said as she pulled into the drive way
"OK guys here we are!"
They all got out and got their things and went into the house
"k, boys we'll show you all your rooms." Laurie said as she opened the door
the boys were speechless. the house was HUGE! It was also spotless and had suround sound speakers set up with a big flat screen TV.
"What the heck do you girls do for a living?" Gustav said as he walked in
"We didnt tell you guys? Me and Angie are lawyers." Laurie said as she put her purse in the coat closet.




"your lawyers....but you are....your LAWYERS?!?!" Tom said with mouth wide opened
"ya we are..." Angie said
"Here I'll show ya'll your rooms." Laurie said turning on the radio
Carrie Underwood's song American Girl was on, Laurie started humming to it.
"Follow me boys." Laurie said
the boys grabed bags and followed her to their rooms.
"Gustav this your room, Georg thats yours...Bill, Tom keep following me." Laurie said walking down the hall
Laurie opened the door to her room.
"Here ya go Bill."
"wow it's spotless!" Bill said as he walked in
Laurie laughed alittle and kept walking
"Here tommy boy." She said as she opened the door to Angie's room
"Thanks." he said
then Laurie walked back down the stairs
"Hey Ang-" Laurie started to say
"SHHH..." Angie whispered "You can hear them talking through the vent.."
"Angie thats rude--what are they saying?"
"listen-"
They could hear georg and Tom talking
"Hey Georg."
"Hey tom."
"Do you think Angie likes me?"
"Ya-why?...."
"Cuz I like her, dude- Can you hear something?"
"what?"
"its like----BILL!"
"What!?" Bill said
you could hear Georg open the door
"Why were you listening in on us?" tom said
"Cuz Im board."
"Bill..." Georg said
"anyway" tom said "I like Angie."
"You do? I like Laurie.." Bill said
*****
the girls backed away from the vent
"have mercy!" Laurie whispered
"I should make wishes more often" angie replied
Lets go to bed." Angie said as she got the quilts and pillows out.
"Do you want to sleep on the couch or floor?"
"uh Ill sleep on the floor." Laurie said as she turned up the radio which was now playing Miranda Lambert's song Gunpowder and Lead
Laurie and Angie started singing it at the same time
"Im goin' home gonna get my shotgun, he aint seen me crazy yet..."
then bill walked down the stairs
"Hey what are you girls doing?"
"Oh uhhh singing..." Laurie replied "what do ya need?"
"Water."
"Oh you just open that cabnet, and get the water out of the fidge door."
Then Angie started laughing
"what are you laughin' at?" laurie turned around
"it's just....hahahaha....the song!"
"What song? the one playing" Bill asked
"no..." angie kept laughing
"Oh not that one... ANGIE!! do not--" Laurie said but got inturrupted
"It was a song Laurie made." Angie told Bill
"You wrote a song?" Bill asked laurie
"ya" laurie mumbled
"what was it?"
"I'll tell you about it later-right now I have to go hurt Angie."
Angie ran up the stairs with Laurie running after her scream things like
"COME BACK HERE YOU IDIOT!" or "DON'T MAKE ME HURT YOU!"
all the guys could do was laugh
then laurie tackled angie to the ground and started tickleing her
"Tom save me!" angie screamed
"Bill stop tom!" Laurie said
"uhh... we're not going to take sides in this." Tom said laughing

after all that was over everybody went to bed.
*****
the next day..... after everyone woke up

"What do you boys want to do?" Laurie asked
"What do you guys do here?" Gustav said
"Ok thats it we are going to the Alamo!" Angie said grabing her purse
"uh oookkkkaaaayyy..." Laurie said
"Remeber the Alamo!" Angie yelled as she unlocked the car
Everybody got in
"everybody settled in?" Angie asked Tom was sitting in the passenger-seat in the front
"yup." he said
"im good." Gustav said looking out the window
"me too." Georg said
"Dito" Bill said with a smile--he was sitting next to LAurie
"im fine." Laurie said and smiled back at Bill
"GOOOD! Now we're off!" Angie said starting the car.
on the way to San Antonio..
"Angie...STOP THE CAR!" Laurie said
"Whhaat?!" Angie steped on the brake
"Whats wrong laurie?" Bill said
"im gettin' car sick! I need air!" Laurie got out of the car and so did Angie.
They walked around a bit.
"Laurie, you never have gottin' car sick before what's wrong?" Angie asked
"Oh, I have just been thinking...im not really car sick..." Laurie replied
"Thinking of what?" Angie said looking like -.-
"I was thinking about Bil-- BILL! Hi!" Laurie said as bill walked up
"Are you two ok?" Bill said putting his hand on Laurie's back.
"Yep lets go." Angie and Laurie said
they all walked back to the car
"Hey laurie lets switch places, i think if you sat in front that you would feel better." Tom said getting in the back
"Oh, thanks" laurie said
*******
an hour later....

"Laurie? do you have a nickname?" Gustav
"ya, she does its idiot." Angie said
"Shut-up, dork!" Laurie said
"hey no name calling children!" Georg said with a grin
when they finally got there the ate lunch and walked around. The girls took the boys to the Alamo and an IMAX movie. When they were walking around they passed a mini-mall.
"do you want to go look?" Laurie asked bill
"Sure!" Bill said "Hey guys me and Laurie are going to look inside of the mall. you guys can go where-ever, we got our cell phones."
The guys and Angie waved goodbye

"So where do you want to go first?" Laurie said when they walked in
"Uhhhhhh....idk...." Bill said
"ok, lets go to PAC-SUN." Laurie said grabbing bill's hand and leading him to the store.
"Ohh thats so cute!" Laurie ran over to a stack of tops.
"Should I try it on?" she said holding up a Pink tube-top
"ya! go ahead." Bill said, he walked over to the sunglass rack and tried on a pair or two...or three
then he heard Laurie call his name
He turned around to see Laurie in the tube-top
"what do you think?" She asked
"uhhhh...woooooow!" Bill said
"So you like it?"
"ya."
"cool cuz im getting it!" Laurie went back to the dressing room to change

*********
while that was happening between Bill and LAurie the others walked around a park-lake area
"Angie? do you want to feed the ducks?" tom said
"Sure! I love little duckys!" Angie said smileing
Georg and Gustav looked at each other knowing that that was their signal to leave or something
"You know Gustav and I will get some stale bread to feed the ducks from that reasturant over there." Georg said then they left and Tom and Angie were alone
"so...." angie sighed
"Ya, so have you ever been out of the country?" Tom asked
"No." Angie said then she smiled suddenly
"What?" tom said smileing
"Well... you."
"What about me?"
"You're cute..." angie said blushing
"you are too..." tom said then he kissed her on the cheek.
then his cell phone rang... it was Bill....

Tom answered his phone
"Hallo? Bill?"
Angie stared off into space

"Tom, ya were comeing where are you?"
"We're feeding ducks at the lake."
"ok, bye"
"Bye bill"

Tom hung up his phone
"What are you thinking?"
"Oh, um just something...." angie looked down at her feet
"Are you ok? is something wrong?" Tom said lifting her head up.
"Well, I really wanted to spend some time with you...." angie's voice trailed off as she looked behind tom
"what?" tom asked
"Oh no.no no no." Angie whispered
tom started to turn around when angie stoped him
"DONT look!" She whispered "i cant believe he got out of prison!"
"Who?" tom looked surprized
"My ex-boyfiend!" angie said
"your ex was in jail?"
"Yes, he abused me... so i sued him, I put him in prison...he is really mad at me. oh here he comes!" You could see fear in Angie's face.
Just when her ex-boyfriend walked up Tom grabed Angie and started makeing out with her.
"Well Angie!" Her ex said
a reply came from tom when they stoped kissing
"Yo, dude... Cant you see she was busy?" he said
"tom..." Angie mumbled
"excuse me?!" Her ex said
"You heard me...." tom said
"Listen buddy-- I talk to her when I want to. I still control her!"
"No you dont!" Tom said his face was getting red
Just then angie's ex boyfriend punched Tom
"Tom!" she screamed "John what did you do?!"
"Come on babe." John grabed Angie's arm.
"No!" Angie screamed
Just then Angie felt adrenaline and bravery run through her vains.
"No one hurts my friends!" she yelled as she puched John. Then he he slapped her then picked her shook her like a rag doll then through her on the ground. There was 2 things John didnt think about:
1. Angie wasnt going down with out a fight
2.On the way back Georg and Gustav rean into Bill and LAurie and were walking back to Angie and Tom when they saw the whole thing....

"Angie! Tom!" Laurie screamed they all started running towards what was happening
Angie got up and attacked John.
Laurie grabed Anie purse and pulled out a pistol
"NO way john" she said pointing the gun at him
Just then Tom got up and walked over to John
"Tom." Bill said
"Hang on Bill." Tom said
"Mr. idiot, it has come to my attention that these two girls dont like you....nethier do I." After that tom knocked John out.
He grabed Angie's arm.
"Its ok" he whispered, he saw tears run down her cheeks and whiped them away

They all walked back to the car silently.....The ride to the house was silent.

When they arrived Laurie was the first one to break the silence

"ok, I'll show you the song I wrote..." Laurie walked over to the bookcase as everyone sat down.
Then she put it down on the coffee table and walked off into a room and shut the door behind her
Angie suddenly had a big smile on
"What is it?" Tom asked scooting closer to her
"oooohh, just something..." she said
all the boys looked at eachother
Just then Laurie walked in with a Gutair.
She sighed "You want to hear it?"
All the boys nodded
Then she started singing
"hmmmm... whooaaa whoa
You cant hear her cries
You cant see through her eyes
You dont hear those lies
So listen
listen
take her by the hand
show her there is hope
Everything can change
find a way and
change this day
If you may find a way
show it show it
can you not tell me that she is hurting
you cant tell me she isnt scared
cuz' he put her there
cuz' she trusted him
she trusted him
hey! hey!
We can get her out
We can show her hope
we can find a way
we can change this day...."
Her voice was like an angel.
The boys were amazed and Angie was smileing mouthing the words "that was good, they like it!!"
"Sooo guys, do ya'll want to watch a movie??" Laurie said putting her guitar down
"uhhhh....suuuuuuurrrree." Georg said
"Ok, have you guys seen Miss Conginiality?" Angie asked
"No, is it good?" bill said
"Oh yeah!" Laurie said
"Ok we'll watch it." Gustav said
Laurie was makeing popcorn and drinks in the kitchen and Angie was getting the movie, pillows and quilts out.
Once they all got settled down and started watching it. The phone rang. Angie got up to get it because Laurie and bill were sitting close next to each other.
"Hello?" Angie whispered so she wouldnt disturb the movie
"No way..." she said "Hung-jury?...THEY HAD ENOUGH EVIDENCE!...They need us in court.NOW?! it's like 10:30!...ok, we'll be there in afew minutes." up the phone and stoped the movie
"Sorry guys. Laurie, hung-jury...we need get to the court house after we change to our suits."
"Hung-jury?! Are you kidding?" Laurie said getting up "Guys...you all are comeing with us.. wear what you have on. You guys dont have to be in front of a judge."
After the girls changed to their suits they all went to the court house.
"The girls look good in their suits dont they?" Georg whispered to the other guys as they walked in the court room
"Laurie looks the best..." bill whispered back
"No Angie does..." Tom mumbled
"guys shush, they're about to speak." Gustav said
At that moment Angie spoke to the jury and judge
"members of the jury..." she started "The evedence shown before you is enough to convict the denfendent of frawd and neglegence. It has been proven." She sat down and looked at Laurie who then stood up "There has been some new evedence found your honor. May I call a witness to the stand?"
"You may." the judge said
"your honor the prositcution would like to call Kelly Willams to the stand."
A girl stood up from the second row and walked to the witness stand.
as they were swearing her in the boys whispered to one another
"This is cool." tom said
"They are so professinal!" bill said
"oh my, they are so serious!" Gustav commented
"look Angie is questioning that girl." Georg said
Angie was up and talking

"Ms. Williams would you please identify this please..." Angie handed her a sheet of paper
"uh this is the contract that all clients would have to sign before treatment." kelly said
"does it say that their would be any 'effects' of this treament?" angie asked
"no it does not." kelly replied
"no further questions." Angie sat down
after that the jury went into confrence. then cam back out
"We the jury find in the favor of the Plantiff in the amount of $156,768."

"They won!" Bill said standing up smileing at Laurie, she smiled back. Angie started to walk towards tom
"We did it!" she said and he gave her a hug.
"Lets go home, please..." Laurie said rubbing her eyes.
"you guys were awsome!!" Georg and gustav said.
They all went back to the house on their way the girls told the boys about the case and what happened...

After they went home and got some sleep Angie and Laurie woke up early to choose some outfits that would surprize the boys...they would dress like rockstars!!

Angie walked into her room hopeing she wouldnt wake-up Tom. She walked over to her closet, then tom made a noise. She stoped dead in her tracks.
'No, dont wake up!' She thought
then she started walking back to her closet. she was looking through her cloths quitely when she felt a warm breath on the back of her neck. It was tom.
"What are you doing?" he whispered
"Shush. Go back to bed." She whispered back
"no." he said
"ugh!" she said as she turned around.
The bed was just behind tom. So she said
"You still tired?"
"ya...why?" he said
"CUZ!" she said as she pushed him on to the bed then she turned around to look through her cloths.
"Angie!" tom said as he grabed her wrist
"What tom?" she said
"Will you be my Girlfriend?"
She just stood there
**********
Back to Laurie
**************

Laurie walked into her room as quite as a mouse.
She looked at Bill sleeping
"how cute!" she whispered to herself
she kept walking to her closet
She looked throuh her cloths and picked out an outfit
then she quitely sat down on the bed and gave bill a kiss. He woke up.
"oh..um hi bill!" she said
"I like you to laurie!" he said
"oh well then...." she was turning red
"It's ok." he said "How about the rest of the boys and I take you and Angie back to Germany with us for YOUR vaction?" Bill said
Laurie was shocked and didnt know what to say.
She couldnt get out of her head that Bill liked her!



to be continued...... sorry its so long!

ShadowIW
March 17th, 2008, 10:30 PM
ok sooooo should I stop this??

TH_luv
March 17th, 2008, 10:51 PM
ok sooooo should I stop this??

yesh! I've been waiting for the next part for like...ever!

tiklemepurple
March 17th, 2008, 10:56 PM
jeeperz
i was wondering when you were gonna move this thing
now you need to write more!!

lilangel02371
March 17th, 2008, 11:26 PM
YES YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE!!!!

ShadowIW
March 18th, 2008, 12:29 AM
More!!

"Um bill that is---um-- AWSOME!" Laurie said grabing a pillow and screaming into it
"So you want to go with us?" Bill said laughing
He got up and started looking through his cloths to wear.

"Laurie!!" Angie yelled as she walked into the room "Can i speak with you?"
"sure angie, be right back bill,." Laurie said as she and angie walked out of the room.

"Laurie....O my word!" Angie said with the biggest grin
"What?"
"Tom is my New BF!" She said excitedly
"AH!! I am speechless! I am with speech!" Laurie said sqeaked
"Angie...I got news for you too! We get to go to Germany!! Uh huh! yuppers! You, Me, Bill, Tom, Georg, Gustav! Together! Germany!"
"aaaaaaaaaaaa." Angie's mouth hung opened until she could say "Whaaa! THIS IS GRRREEAATT!"
They both started screaming and laughing and Crying all at the same time as they danced around the hall.
"Whats going on?" Gustav said walking out of his room
"We are on a happy-high!" Laurie said then she did the Moon-walk and started singing Danceing in the moonlight.
"Whaa??the heck?" Georg said rubbing his head as he came outof his room.
Angie joined Laurie danceing and singing while all te boys watched
"Danceing in the moonlight!"
Then when they calmed down everrbody got dressed for the day.

"So Bill when are we leaving for Germany?" Laurie said walkinup to him with a weird grin on her face.
"In two days." he said as he got a glass out of the dishwasher
"um, bill... I dont know how to speak German." LAurie started to sound worried
"Dont worry I'll teach you!" He got a glass of water and drank it. He put the glass down on the counter and grabed Laurie's hand andlead her to the couch.
"ok." she said as he sat down
"so I'll say something and you repeat.ok?"
Laurie nodded
"Say Ja."
"Ja."
"Good! ok now Nein."
"Nein."
"You say Guttentag?"
"Guttentag!"
"Ok now repeat my sentencess."
"Ok...i'll try bill."
bill thought for a second
"Nein! Sie sind fur immmer! Ich Liebe dich. Unsere Liebe ist ewig."
"umm ok ill try.. uh, Nein. Sie sind fur--inner- no wait...um, oh I dont know bill! what does that mean anyway?"
Bill took her hands and held them
"it means. 'No you are forever, i love you, our love is forever....'"
"Oh bill thats beautiful!" Laurie said as she started to cry
Bill held her close to him. Laurie looked up at him as he looked back down at her he smiled gently and kissed her.

"LOVE BIRDS!!" Gustav shouted as he walked into the room.
"Oh stop!" Laurie said laughing.
Just then Tom and Angie walked into the room.
"Lucky us! We got First Class Tickets for the ride back!" Tom said as he held Angie's hand.
Georg walked in and said "Girls, if you need to go shopping please do it today. cuz it will be easier than tomorrow."

To be continued...
TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!

lilangel02371
March 18th, 2008, 04:40 PM
MEHR!! BECAUSE I FRICKING LOVED IT!!!! LOL OH ALMOST FORHOT AND SOON!!!! LIKE NOW!

ShadowIW
March 18th, 2008, 09:40 PM
i'll add more soon!!

ShadowIW
March 18th, 2008, 11:47 PM
MORE!!!! oohhh!! long!

“Ok we will go shopping right now then!” Laurie said getting up “Angie! Come here please.”
“Whaaat?!” Angie yelled as she walked down the stairs
“Georg commanded that we go shopping!” laurie smirked
“I did not!” Georg said
“well anyway we are going…” Laurie said
“Bye boys! Get packing!” Angie said as she and laurie walked out of the house
The girls got in the car and drove to the mall.
They walked all around buying a bunch of new cloths, some looked Sophisticated, some gansta, some looked rocker. The genre of cloths was so mixed up it was weird…
As the girls were going to H&M, they passed a piercing place.. Laurie just stopped in front of it.
“Laurie what are you looking at? Huh?” Angie said walking up to Laurie
“Lets get MAKEOVERS!”Laurie said as this huge smile came on her face
“Sure that sounds fun but….why did you stop here? You already have your ears pierced.” Angie stated
“I want I lip ring-no---SNAKEBITES!! Yes! Awesome!” Laurie said
Angie was dumfounded. She looked like O____o
“You sure…snake-bite?” Angie said
“Yes of course….What about you?? Huh? Tongue ring…no not that..uh, Eye-brow…na, ugh um how ‘bout--”
“Laurie, I want my ears double pierced. And one at the top of my ear, you know the cartilage..”
“Whimp.”
“I am not and you know it! I just don’t like any other piercings!” Angie said as she walked in, Laurie followed.
After they got their piercings they went to get their hair done.
“I want mine dyed black.” Laurie said to the stylist
“I would like mine cut shoulder length, that is layered and piecey lookin’ with hot pink highlights!” Angie said
Laurie was the first one finished and her phone rang.
“Hello?” she said
“HEY GIRL!!” People on the other line said
“KIKI AND MACY!!!” Laurie screamed into the phone “Whats up?”
“Youre going to be jealous!” they said
“Why?”Laurie said smileing
“Cuz were going to GERMANY!!!in 2 days” Kiki and Macy screamed
“Huh, that’s ironic! Angie and I are going their too with a couple of friends….what flight are you on?”
“It’s a direct flight from New York!” Macy said
“We are taking a flight into NY then to Gemany!”Laurie screamed
“We’ll see you and your friends then…Bye!” Macy and KiKi said
“ByE!” Laurie said
She walked over to angie to tell her. When she walked over to Angie the stylist was almost done with her hair
“Wow! LOVE IT!” Laurie said then explained what happened.
“Cool!!” Angie said.
After they were done they went home……
As they walked in the door they realized the guys were upstairs packing so they walked up the stairs to surprise them with their new look.
Georg was the first to see them.
“WHAT DID YOU DO TO YOURSELVES?!?!?!?!?!” he stared in amazement
The other boys heard him and walked to his room.
Gustav saw them next and said “WAaaaAAaAaA?? Ooh! Well Punk Princesses!”
Then Bill saw them he was texting on his phone when he looked up and saw the girls
“AAAAh! DUUUDEEEES!!!!!! THAT STYLE ROCKS!!!!!!”

Lastly tom walked in. “What the troub---oooooh… GANSTA!!!!”
“Thanks sweety!” Angie said walking up to him.. “Tom, your eye! Its red and puffy! Your getting a black eye! Oh honey!”
“Its ok Angie, babe, whats with your Bruses? They’re all over your arms!” He said staring at her arms.
“Hello! Its from the Fight! Smart-one!” Laurie said as she shook her head
“I knew that Laurie!” Angie said


2 DAYS LATER ………

“GUYS! GET UP GET DRESSED GET OUT!” the girls screamed, they were already dressed for their early flight….they woke up 2 hours earlier.

“OK!” all the boys yelled.
As soon as the boys got dressed they got in the car and drove to the Airport.
As they waited for their flight to New York that would take them to Germany Tom sat down next to Angie and tapped his foot against hers. She looked up at him and he looked away. Then he tapped he foot again. Angie understood what he was doing and she kicked him and started laughing.
“Oh so funny!” he said rubbing his leg
“Oh babe…” she said while laughing “It cant hurt that bad…here ill make it better..” then she kissed him
“Gross….” Laurie mumbled
“Shut-up its not like you never kissed bill….” Angie said
Laurie spit her tongue out at Angie.
The plane arrived and they flew to NY.
When their plane arrived there Angie and Laurie got off first and saw Macy and Kiki…. (o boy….here we go)

“Kiki! Macy!” Laurie yelled
“Waaa! Laurie! Angie!” they screamed as they ran up to them
Bill , Tom , Georg and Gustav were standing behind Laurie and Angie
“I love your hairstyles!” Macy said
“Me too….HEY YOU HAVE PIERCINGS OTHER THAN REGULAR EAR PIERCINGS!” Kiki yelled
“Yuppers! We knew it would bother you!” Laurie said
“Don’t make me chase you today!” Kiki said then she looked at Angie and the boys, she saw that tom had a black eye and Angie had bruises on her arms.
“ANGIE!! What happened!?!!?! How did you get hurt? DID THAT GANSTA HURT YOU?!” she pointed to tom and walked up to him
“DID YOU HURT HER?---“ just then bill walked in between them
“Don’t mess with my bro.” he said
“You look like a GIRL and expect me to believe that you’re going to defend your brother? What are you anyway? Girl or boy?”
“Uh HE IS A BOY!!” Laurie said walking up to her “MY BOY!”

“Angie!” Macy yelled and ran up to give her a hug.
“NO! No HUGS! You know I have a BUBBLE SPACE!” Angie said running behind tom
“Angie! Come on!” Macy said laughing
“No…No flu season!” Angie said getting closer to tom
All the boys were laughing
“NO FLU FOR U!” Kiki yelled

They all walked to their new gate laughing and talking.
Here is what happened

“Hey Angie? How is that hottie over there?” Macy said pointing to Georg
“that’s Georg he plays the bass….”
“Well he’s hot” Macy said brushing her red hair out of her face
“Georg!” Angie said
“Ja?” he said slowing down
“I would like you to meet Macy! She is a Judge here in New York.”
“Hello.” Macy said blushing
“Hallo.” Georg said back
Just then Angie sped up to be with tom
“Well, do you like America?” Macy said
“Ja Ja… how long have you known Laurie and Angie?” he asked
“10 years, middle school, high school, college and law school.” Macy said
“Wait… all of you all are 18…. How could you have—“ Georg said but stopped
“We skipped 3 grades, graduated high school at 14 then went to 3 years of college and then law school…” macy said
“WHOA YOU GUYS ARE SMART! Well, Laurie and Angie have very beautiful and smart friends….” Georg said
Macy Blushed
Kiki and Laurie were talking about the boys’ band.
“So is Gustav the drummer then?” Kiki said
“Yepo!” Laurie said
“In my opinion….” Kiki started to whisper “Gustav is hotter than a hot chillipepper on a hot day! He is FINE! Can he be mine?”
“ur loosening it…” Laurie said
“No im not, Angie is look!” she said pointing to Angie
Angie put her I pod head phones in her ears and turned her Ipod on….. and started singing Miracle by CASCADA and started dancing/doing a model walk. Tom was watching her.

“I need a miracle
I wanna be your girl
Give me a chance to see
That you are made for me
I need a miracle
Please let me be your girl
One day you'll see it can happen to me….”
“Good point.” Laurie said “well if you like Gustav that much TALK TO HIM!”
“Oh snap!” Macy screamed.
“What?” Kiki asked
“OUR PLANE IS BORDING NOW!!!” she said pointing to the TV screen with the Departure times
“we are ten gates away!!! RUN!!!” Angie Yelled and they all started running.
They dodged other passengers, Angie had to do flips to get over trash cans. It was like an action movie!
When they finally got there they found out that their plane didn’t board yet… it was a different flight but as soon as they got there the plane just started boarding.

cherry_kaulitz
March 19th, 2008, 11:19 AM
HEY IS CHERRY_BOO NOW DUBBED CHERRY_KAULITZ I STILL LOVE THE FAN FIC I THINK ITS 1 OF DA BEST AYY TOM AND BILL ARE RESERVED 4 ME HUMF NAW IM J/KING LOVE YA BUH BYE

tiklemepurple
March 19th, 2008, 11:05 PM
im eating jelly bellys waiting for more people to post their fan fics
so write more
before i run out of jelly bellys

lilangel02371
March 20th, 2008, 04:52 PM
YES WRITE MORE!!! LOL I'll be waiiiting!

ShadowIW
March 20th, 2008, 10:58 PM
Once they got settled on the plane they realized that they were the only ones in first class….
“Weird huh?” Kiki said to across the aisle Angie
“Ya…How is your job going?” Angie replied
“Oh you know it’s ok, I mean like Fashion Designing is hard but fun!” Kiki
On plane there were 2 first class seats in each row.
Laurie sat next to Angie behind them were Tom and Bill
Then across the aisle were Kiki and Macy and behind them were Georg and Gustav.
After the plane took off and they got 10,000ft above the ground they all started listening to their Ipods.
After awhile Tom got up in the aisle and started dancing to Soulja Boy. Everyone started laughing.
“Well if we’re going to have a talent show…who’s next??” Macy said with a chuckle
“ME!” Angie said getting up.
“What are you going to do? Dance, Sing? What?” Laurie said
“I am going to sing…ABBA.” Angie said (BTW---- ABBA is an old Swedish band that rocks)
“Which song?” Macy asked
Angie thought for a moment “Ah!” she said “Voulez Vous!”
She turned her Ipod on that song and put it in the portable speakers she brought then started singing and dancing…..

“People everywhere
A sense of expectation hanging in the air
Giving out a spark
Across the room your eyes are glowing in the dark
And here we go again, we know the start, we know the end
Masters of the scene
We've done it all before and now we're back to get some more
You know what I mean

Voulez-vous (ah-ha)
Take it now or leave it (ah-ha)
Now is all we get (ah-ha)
Nothing promised, no regrets
Voulez-vous (ah-ha)
Ain't no big decision (ah-ha)
You know what to do (ah-ha)
La question c'est voulez-vous
Voulez-vous...

I know what you think
"The girl means business so I'll offer her a drink"
Feeling mighty proud
I see you leave your table, pushing through the crowd
I'm really glad you came, you know the rules, you know the game
Master of the scene
We've done it all before and now we're back to get some more
You know what I mean

Voulez-vous (ah-ha)
Take it now or leave it (ah-ha)
Now is all we get (ah-ha)
Nothing promised, no regrets
Voulez-vous (ah-ha)
Ain't no big decision (ah-ha)
You know what to do (ah-ha)
La question c'est voulez-vous

And here we go again, we know the start, we know the end
Masters of the scene
We've done it all before and now we're back to get some more
You know what I mean……..”
While she was singing everyone was amazed! They all thought Laurie was the singer and dancer of the group. They thought Angie was the serious one that didn’t have fun. At that moment it flipped, Angie was shining and smiling with the biggest smile she ever had….
“ok ok ok…..” Kiki said getting up “We had two competitors and now the people have decided…the winner is Angie.”
“ah-ha!” Angie said turning to Tom. “You don’t compete with the queen!”
“Sure, Princess, whatever you say…” Tom said back
“Keep thinking that….” Angie said
After an hour or two they all switched seats.
Tom next to Angie, Bill next to Laurie, Georg next to Macy and Gustav next to Kiki.
Laurie looked across the aisle to see that Kiki and Gustav were getting along very well.
Angie snuggled up to Tom, rested her head on his shoulder and eventually fell asleep. Tom looked over at her and kissed her head. Bill looked back to see them and tom mouthed the words “She rocks! I like her SO much!” tom almost became giddy but he didn’t because he would have waked up Angie.
Then Bill looked over at Laurie who was reading a magazine, after that he fell asleep.
Georg and Macy were watching the airline movie together . Then suddenly Angie started talking in her sleep. Everyone started looking at her because of what she was saying she was saying
“Does it feel the same when she calls your name?”
“No, you cant! Don’t leave me! Pleeeaase….”
She also said something very strange she said “The winds may blow, The sky may fall, I may lose it all, cuz---“ but she never finished
Bill turned to Laurie
“Was that a poem?” he asked
“WHAT?! PSHHH! IDK why should I know?!! Go to sleep!” then she looked out the window
“SNAP!” Kiki Yelled (she did it to wake up Angie)
“HEY!” Angie yelled “UGH!” then she got up to use the bathroom. When she came back out and went to her seat, Tom was standing in the way of her seat to block her.
“Tommy let me through….please?” she said as she got closer.
“Nein, say the magic word.” He said
“Tom…” She said then kissed him
“that works!” he said
When the plane finally landed the Girls and Boys had REALLY BAD JET-LAG

TELL ME WHAT YA"LL THINK!!!

cherry_kaulitz
March 21st, 2008, 03:04 PM
LOVE IT PLZ MORE IF YA CAN :D :D :D :) :) :) :lol: :lol: :lol: :P SORRY CRAZY AND SMIELY HAPPY

TH_luv
March 21st, 2008, 05:23 PM
yay! I want more! >.< its awesome...but woah...whats so secretive about the poem? O.O

RetteMich
March 21st, 2008, 09:23 PM
i want more now u hear me now :D

lilangel02371
March 21st, 2008, 10:34 PM
JA MEHR!!! ICH WANT(IDK HOW TO SAY WANT IN GERMAN LMAO) MEHR!!!!!!It was good I especially like the Tom password part

ShadowIW
March 21st, 2008, 11:06 PM
ATTENTION!!!

I have now just realized i have made I bunch of typeing mistakes on the story because I have been typeing to fast and day dreaming about it too much while typeing! So sorry for all the grammer mistakes!

lilangel02371
March 21st, 2008, 11:32 PM
we dont really care if you mess up with the grammar cuz we all pretty much suck at it lol

ShadowIW
March 22nd, 2008, 12:36 AM
When they got off the plane the boys security guards and tour manager were waiting at the gate for them.
“Hey I thought people can’t wait at the gates.” Angie said to Gustav
“Well our security can…”Gustav replied as they were walking.
“Ok girls! This is our Head security guard Saki and our manager David Jost.” Bill said “Saki, David, meet Laurie, Angie, Kiki, and Macy.”
“Hello girls! Are you ready for screaming fans?” David Jost said
“I bet Kiki can scream louder than all the fans….” Angie said with a smirk
Kiki glared at her.
“Ok girls, we don’t know how the fans will act, so be careful ok?” Saki said
“Ok.” All the girls replied
They walked to the Escalator that takes people to the baggage claim. When they got on Macy said “Dang they can yell, what a headache I have now…”
“Ya, we are used to it…” Georg said
“here we go.” Saki said as he got off the escalator.
“LOOK ITS TOKIO HOTEL!” one fan screamed
“You know…”Angie whispered to Laurie as the fans girls started running towards them “Lets get the bags and let them sign autographs.”
“Good Idea.” Laurie waved to the other girls and they all walked over to the baggage claim
David looked at the girls walking away and fallowed them to the bags.
“Girls I’ll help you with your bags” he said catching up with them.
“ Thank you Mr. Jost.” Angie said
“Oh call me David. If your friends of TH your friends of mine!”
“Oh ok.” Macy said
“So girls….Have you all been to Germany before? You all look like a band that was famous here a couple of years ago…” David questioned
“No, but we do have a band like thing.” Kiki said “We can all play instruments and sing.”
“Oh well what’s your ‘band-like-thing’ called?”
“Noise!” they all replied
“Very nice!” He said grabbing a bag
As soon as they got all the bags and got in the car. David started telling the boys when their interviews were and their concerts.
“Do you ladies want to go to a concert?” David asked while driving
“Sure!” they all said.
Once they got home the boys showed the girls their rooms
“Princess, your room is close to mine.” Tom said as he opened the door to Angie’s room
She smiled and put her stuff on the bed.
“So what are you thinking so far?..” tom said walking in the room and closing the door behind him
She turned around “Wow! It’s amazing! It’s so beautiful! I love it!” she said with a smile gleaming on her face.
“Good!” tom said “I leave you to unpack.” Then he walked out of the room
Bill was showing Laurie her room
“Here you are sweets!” He said as he opened to door
“Nice!” she said as she placed her bag on the floor and fell on top of the bed “I can’t believe I’m here!”
“Well I am glad you are!” Bill said smiling then he left
The other boys showed the other girls their rooms and then caught up with each other.
“Dude! These girls are amazing!” Georg said “I really like Macy! She is wonderful and humorus!”
“Guys, Kiki is hysterical and full of life!” Gustav said
“Well Bill, what do you think of Laurie?” Georg asked
“Dudes she is awesome, amazing, brilliant!” Bill said with a goofy grin
“And how about Angie, Tom?” Gustav asked
“Well boys, you don’t come across her type very often, She is Outgoing, funny, brave, smart as heck, beautiful, loyal, MAGNIFICENT!! That is what she is! I can’t get over how beautiful she is! Her brown hair is flowing and---” he was interrupted by David who heard the whole thing
“Ok tom they don’t need a novel they know what she looks like.” David said
“Well she rocks….” Tom mumbled under his breath.
Just then he saw the girls walking down the hall
“Guys we are hungry!” Kiki said “We need food!”
“ok we will get pizza! How about that?” Gustav said getting closer to Kiki
“Yumm….” Macy said
After the boys ordered pizza they gave the girls a tour of the Studio/House.
By the time the guys finished the tour the pizza was delivered.
“uh, this is good!” Laurie said stuffing a slice in her mouth
The rest of the girls were to busy stuffing their faces to talk, same with the guys.
After they were all finish Angie got up.
“Excuse me.” She said
“Where are you going Baby-doll?” Tom asked
“Bathroom.” She said and walked out of the room
Just then Laurie sprang up and said “Ooops! I forgot to, uh, tell Angie something important!” then she rushed out of the room. Macy shook her head.
“What is it?” Georg asked
“Oh! Um, I forgot my camera! Silly me!” she said
Laurie caught up to Angie
“Angie!” she said
“What?” Angie said as she turned around
“On the plane when you fell asleep….” Laurie’s voice dropped “You started talking….”
“Oh no! I didn’t! Did I say too much?” Angie said with a worried look on her face
“No Kiki woke you up before you could say too much. Besides that secret, you need to stop the other one…” Laurie said
“Ugh! Laurie! Just but out of it! Ok? I am fine.” Angie said
“But those dizzy spells and the--” Laurie started to say but stopped
“Hey I know you care, I do. Those dizzy spells are nothing…” Angie said
“But-”
“But nothing. I am fine, I will be fine, Please don’t tell my two secrets to the guys- don’t let Macy or Kiki tell either!” Angie said and walked off
“fine…” Laurie mumbled and walked back to the room.
“Hey ya’ll I’m going to bed. Night.” She walked over to Bill and kissed him on the cheek
“night, Snake-Bite!” he said
Laurie giggled
“Good-night Laurie!” they all said
Then Angie walked into the room.
“You will never guess this…” Angie said laughing as she sat in Tom’s lap
“What ?” Gustav said
“I forgot to pack Pajamas!” She started to laugh harder
“YOU ALWAYS DO THAT!” Kiki Said Laughing with Macy
“Well I remembered Pajama pants…..” Angie said
“You can sleep in one of my shirts.” Tom said
“Ya it’s huge enough!” Georg said
Tom took Angie’s hand and lead her to his room to get a shirt.
“Here.” He said handing her one of his shirts
“Thank you.” She mouthed
“Angie” He whispered in her ear
“yes.” She whispered back
“you are so beautiful.” He whispered then looked at her to see her wonderful smile
“I like it when you smile…” he said then he kissed her. Then ran his fingers through her hair.
“Good-night….” She whispered
“Good-night.” He whispered back, then she left. When she was in the hall she saw that everyone else went to bed so she walked into her room shut the door changed into her PJs then went to sleep.


TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!
IT TOOK 2 HOURS TO COME UP WITH IT!

lilangel02371
March 22nd, 2008, 09:39 AM
THAT WAS AWESOME!!! LOL

THDGaja
March 22nd, 2008, 12:24 PM
ATTENTION!!!

I have now just realized i have made I bunch of typeing mistakes on the story because I have been typeing to fast and day dreaming about it too much while typeing! So sorry for all the grammer mistakes!

I greatly appreciate that you care about your grammar. :)

TH_luv
March 22nd, 2008, 03:46 PM
YAY!!! I love it and I want more missy! >.<

tiklemepurple
March 22nd, 2008, 09:08 PM
yes yes
more more!!!
lol

ShadowIW
March 23rd, 2008, 12:18 AM
THE NEXT DAY….

David let the boys and girls sleep late because of all the traveling, But when they did wake up the boys woke up first.
Bill walked silently into Laurie’s room and sat on the edge of the bed and stroked her head.
Then she began to wake up.
“hey bill.” She said tiredly
“good-morning sleepy head.” He whispered “Would you like Breakfast?”
“Yes, I’m hungry!” she said licking her lips “Let me get dressed and I will be down there soon.”
“Ok Laurie, come down when you’re ready.” Then he got up and left.

When Tom woke up he walked into Angie’s room and shut the door behind him silently.
He walked over to the bed and sat on the edge. He just stared at Angie for a moment because of how breath taking she was. Then he leaned in closer to her and saw that she hadn’t took off her locket the night before.
‘odd…’ he thought
Just then she stretched her neck and looked up at Tom.
“hey baby, how was your sleep?” tom whispered
“Mmm…I don’t want to move. Your shirt is comfy and smells good…” she said quietly and smiling
“good…” he said combing his hand through her hair “Your hair is so soft.”
“thanks.” She whispered and started to sit up
“So David told us that the band had two interviews today….do you want to come for one of them?” tom said, he started to play with his lip-ring
“sure … how is your eye?” she said getting closer to examine it
“It’s fine.” He said
“No it isn’t, you need to put ice on it.” She said worried
“Ok I will, how are your arms? Let me see them.”
Angie showed her arms, the bruises were bad near he shoulders
“Oh babe! Don’t you hurt?” He said getting even closer to her
“Just sore….” She said, then he pulled her in and kissed her. “Breakfast is downstairs.”
“ok I’ll be there in a minute.” She smiled, then tom left.
When Laurie got to the kitchen she saw Kiki, Macy, Georg, Gustav, Bill, and David were already there.
You could see Macy and Georg flirting it was obvious that they liked each other.
“Hey guys!!” Laurie said walking in
“Here is your food.” Bill said handing her a plate of toast and eggs.
“Kiki told me you like eggs.” Bill said
“thanks” she said as she sat down to start eating
Then Tom walked in and sat down at the table next to Bill and grabbed his coke, Then Kiki and Gustav sat down next to each other. Then Angie walked in.
“Ya’ll it’s way too quite!” Angie said as she sat down next to Tom.
“Here’s breakfast.” Tom said handing her a plate
“yum!” she said as she started eating.
“Ok girls, would you like to go to the interview the guys have?” David said
“Sure! Why not?” Macy said.
After they all finished Angie got up and said “I need to redo my lip-gloss! Be right back.” Then she left
When she came back they were all ready to go.
“Ok all get in the van.” David said
They all got into the van and drove to the interview, When they got there the cameras were all set up
“Wow!” the girls said in unison
“you can sit over there girls.” David said pointing to some chairs behind the cameras
The girls went and sat down when the interview started , One camera man kept looking at the girls strangely.
“I don’t like the way he is looking at us…” Macy whispered to the other girls
“Ya, the boys are about to take a break so let’s just say we want to go shopping.” Kiki whispered back
When the boys took their break the girls told them that they were going shopping and that they would meet them on the corner on the block in an hour. After they left the camera man took his camera and followed them without being seen that he was leaving…

About 45 minutes later the girls were walking to the corner to meet the boys when the camera man ran up to them with his camera rolling.
“Girls! Girls!” he said getting in front of them
“Excuse me.” Laurie said as the girls kept walking
He wouldn’t stop “What are your names? Where are you from? Are you dating Tokio Hotel?”
Then the girls say the band walk up to the corner. They tried to get to them but the man wouldn’t let them go with the questions, So Angie turned around to him, you could see her anger in her eyes
“LISTEN UP! You don’t need to know our names, where we are from or who we are dating! You need to understand IT AINT YOUR BUSSINESS! The only way you will get answers is over my dead body!” then she turned around and started walking to the boys, before the other girls left Kiki turned to the camera and punched the lens out. When Angie was walking she suddenly just stopped.
“What is it?” Laurie asked
“Uh, uh, my head…..wow dizzy fast!” Angie said as she started to go week at the knees
“Uh-oh!” Laurie and Macy said as they caught her
The boys saw what happened with the camera man and Angie, so they started running towards them.
“ANGIE!” Tom yelled running to them
“Whats wrong?” bill asked
“Is she ok?”Gustav and Georg said in unison
“ahhh…my head, im so dizzy….” Angie mumbled
“Is There a restaurant near here? She needs some steak or water….” Laurie said
‘Please be ok…’ tom thought
“Ya over there..” Georg said pointing to the restaurant.
They all helped Angie walk over to the restaurant, when they finally gave her steak and water she became her normal self again..


TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!

TH_luv
March 23rd, 2008, 12:35 AM
zomg! Its the dizzy spell! >.< dude I want more! >.<

lilangel02371
March 23rd, 2008, 12:44 AM
UBERTASTIC MORE!!

ShadowIW
March 23rd, 2008, 02:47 PM
Tom was sitting next to Angie making sure she was ok and if she needed anything.
“See, all I needed was some food, that’s all...I guess I didn’t eat enough breakfast.” Angie said assuring everybody
“ya right….”Kiki mumbled just then Laurie cough so you wouldn’t hear what Kiki said
“Where are we going now?” Macy said
“Well that interview was the only thing we had until the concert.” Georg said
“Well when is your concert?” Kiki asked
“it’s 6:00 ” said Bill
“Ok then it’s 11:00 now, so let’s go home and change.” Laurie stated
Then they all got up and left to go back to the house/studio.
When they got there the girls ran to their rooms and started to go through their cloths.
Laurie gave Kiki her stilettos, Kiki gave Macy her earrings, and Macy gave Kiki her watch in exchange for the Earrings. By the time the girls were ready it was about an hour and a half later.
Laurie was done first, she curled her hair that was in front of one of her eyes and was wearing a off-the-shoulder-strap black tight shirt with white and red stars, skinny jeans and Black leather stiletto boots. When she came out she realized the guys were waiting out in the hall for them.
“Wow!” Bill said taking her hands “You’re ready!”
“Thanks, the other girls should be ready soon!” Laurie smiled then Bill kissed her then showed her off to the guys.
“Guys, this is my date!” Bill said
Just then Macy came out she had straightened her hair and had a black hat on with ripped jeans and a green short sleeved shirt with Kiki’s gold hoop earrings.
“Hey, you look good.” Georg said walking up to her
“thanks” she said
He kissed her on the cheek and she blushed.
Then Kiki came out, She was wearing a spaghetti-strap purple shirt a black leather jacket a black skirt with Laurie’s stilettos. Gustav took her hands and spun her around.
“cool!” he said
“Thanks…apparently I’m the best looking one here…” Kiki said laughing
Just then Angie walked out if her room, She styled her hair and was wearing a strapless black shirt with a picture of a red rose on it with a plaid mini-skirt with black leggings and strappy 4 inch heels. She also had on glitter make-up that made her face shimmer in light.
“Hey guys are you ready?” Angie said
“yep!” tom said then he took her hand and they started walking to the front door. The rest followed.

TH_luv
March 23rd, 2008, 05:39 PM
wow! mehr?! bitter!! =D I love it!

cherry_kaulitz
March 23rd, 2008, 08:23 PM
love itur sooper good @ writing ya always got me hanging love ya soooo laterz

ShadowIW
March 24th, 2008, 12:20 AM
When they got to the concert hall the boys did their sound check and the girls were walking around the stage. Then Angie whispered something to Laurie, Laurie got all the girls together and the stood in a line.
Then they started dancing to the sound check.
“Ch-ch-check, Ch-ch-check, the sound! That sound!” Kiki sang
The girls started singing silly songs and dancing like idiots. The boys saw them and tried not to laugh but Gustav couldn’t help it. After the sound check everyone was backstage waiting in a room.
“I am so nervous!” Bill said to Laurie who was sitting next to him on the couch.
“Don’t be!” Laurie said “You really shouldn’t be.”
Kiki was watching Gustav do breathing exercises
Macy and Georg were walking around the room talking
Tom and Angie were on the second couch across from Bill and Laurie
“Tom, Your shaking!” Angie said she got closer to him
“Ya I always am at concerts, luckily you cant see my black eye!” he said
(He and Angie had but stage makeup on their bruises to cover them)
“Yep.” Angie sighed then put her head on his shoulder. He smiled like it was comforting
Then David Jost walked in “Girls! Remember how you told me you have a band?”
“Yes……” Laurie said raising an eyebrow
“Well, I extended the show! I made an announcement to the fans that you all will be playing after Tokio Hotel as a special gift from TH to them.”David said
“AWESOME!!” Angie yelled jumping up, Then the girls got together and started jumping up and down
“You aren’t nervous?” Bill asked
“ No.” Kiki said “We are energized!”
“Woo-Hoo!” Macy said
After the concert started the boys played most of their songs, then they introduced the girls.
“Ok! We would like to introduce a band that we are friends with! They are called Noise!” Bill said to the crowd, The crowd of course went wild.
The girls walked out smiling and waving, the crowd cheered louder.
The boys gave the girls their instruments and microphones then left the stage.
“Ok all you people out there!” Laurie said into the Microphone “Are first song is called ‘Wonder road’”
Kiki started to play the drums, Followed by Macy with the bass then Angie with the guitar.
Laurie started singing
“I’ve been down this path before
Long ago in a different time
Before we could be who we are
When all you had was a wishin’ star
Night seemed to be forever and Day seemed to be a dream
(guitar and drums picked up speed)
I have been this wonder road
I have been here before
What the heck brought me back?
When I could have had you
I could have had the riches of the king
I could have been sailing the oceans
I could have had whatever I wanted
Now all I am is haunted
I left all that to go be with you
You left nothing to be with me
I can’t see why
This twisted fairy-tale was a lie
Now all I do is cry
I’m back on this Wonder road
Starting all over…….”
After that song was finished the fans were going crazy because of how much they liked it. The boys liked it too!
“Ok! Awesome!” Laurie said and walked up to Angie “Now Angie and I are going to sing together!”
Angie’s eyes widened with excitement and Laurie handed her the microphone to say something
“Ok you all we are going to sing ‘Haters’ by Hillary Duff!” Angie said
She started playing the guitar and singing in the Mic.

“Dont spit on me and shame yourself
Because you wish you were someone else
You look so clean but you spread your dirt
As if think that words dont hurt
You build up walls no one can climb
The things you do should be a crime
You're queen of superficiality
Keep your lies out of my reality
And when you're nice it's just a pose
You're one of those

[Chorus] (Angie and Laurie sang together each chorus line)
Haters
Traitors to the human race
Haters
What a drag
What a waste
I'd like to see them disappear
They dont belong anywhere
Haters
(Laurie’s part)
Spinning a web thats hard to see
Of envy, greed and jealousy
Feeling angry but you don't know why
Why dont you look me in the eye?
You want my friends
You want my clothes
You're one of those

[Repeat Chorus]

(Angie’s part)
Different life form
Different species
Broken promises and treaties
Talkin' bout exterminating
Not the haters
Just the hating
You say your boyfriend's sweet and kind
But you've still got your eyes on mine
Your best friend's got her eyes on yours
It all goes on behind closed doors
And when you're nice it's just a pose
You're one of those

[Repeat Chorus]

Haters (sang together)
Later for the alibis (Angie)
Haters(together)
Any shape(Laurie)
Any size(Angie)
I'd like to see them disappear (together)
They dont belong anywhere (together)
Haters.”

They were all having fun. Kiki and Macy got together to sing ‘Take a chance on me’ by ABBA The boys were laughing in the Background still watching the girls.
Then Angie grabbed the microphone from Laurie’s hand.
“Well, now I am going to sing without the other girls.” Angie said as the crowd was still screaming
“hmmm…I guess I will sing ‘underneath this smile’ by Hillary duff.” She said and handed Laurie the guitar. Kiki was at the drum-set ready and Macy was also ready.
Then they started playing. Angie seemed fine when she first started singing,

“What I'm standing on is sinking in
And I don't have a clue how to get off of it
But when I look at you there is hope
It's like you see the sadness in my eyes
You read the blue between the lines
You could be the one to hold me when I wanna cry

Underneath this smile
My world is slowly caving in
All the while
I'm hanging on
Cause that is all I know
Could you be the one to save me from every bad habit that has helped me dig this hole?
I've been hiding out for miles
Underneath this smile

I have walked this earth with broken bones
I've been keeping secrets under all these lights
But when you're around my defenses go
You don't let me run away from you
You don't let me twist and turn the truuu-t-h….” Then Angie fainted on stage while she was singing.
Everyone stopped the other girls put down their instruments and the boys ran to help.
“ANGIE!! ANGIE!!!” they screamed
Laurie was the first to get to her. She was trying to check for a pulse.
Kiki and Macy tried to pick her up but they were not strong enough.
Then Tom picked Angie up off the stage and they all walked off. David was getting a drink of water so he didn’t see what happened. When he saw the Angie unconscious in tom’s arms he called for an ambulance and then told someone to explain to the fans that the concert was over. When the ambulance came they took Angie to the ER and David tool the others in the van. Everyone was upset and crying on the way there.

ShadowIW
March 24th, 2008, 09:23 AM
GASP!

CrazyKenya16
March 24th, 2008, 10:00 AM
ANDDDD????

ShadowIW
March 24th, 2008, 12:04 PM
When they got to the hospital they found out that the doctors stabilized her and what room she was in.
When they got to her room everyone ran to her side. Tears were filled in their eyes,
“Oh Angie…” Bill sighed, a tear rolled down his cheek.
“Waaaahhh!!” Kiki wailed
Then a nurse came in with 2 doctors.
“Hello. I’m Nurse Houlehan.” She said “This is Doctor Pierce and Doctor Hunnicut.”
“Hello.” The doctors said
“Is she unconscious?” Tom asked
“Unfortunately yes.” Dr. Hunnicut said
“We are running tests on her; we took x-rays and blood samples. Dr. Winchester is looking over them right now.” Dr. Pierce stated as he looked at Angie
“Are you all her friends?” Nurse Houlehan asked
“Yes, we are…” Macy said
“I’m her boyfriend.” Tom said gently
“Well, If you need us call us.” The Doctors said and then left
“Miss Angie is very pretty.” The nurse said “She is lucky that you all care for her…I leave you all to be with her.” She said then left
Laurie walked over to a chair that was next to a window sat down and started crying. Bill walked over and sat down next to her and tried to comfort her. Tom pulled up a chair next to Angie’s hospital bed and held her hand and cried. Kiki and Macy walked over to another window and just stared out it. Georg walked over to Macy and put his arm around her, Gustav did the same with Kiki.
“Why? Why her? She doesn’t deserve this…I told her to see a doctor! I told her to stop!” Laurie yelled into her hands.
Everyone looked at her then Tom got up and walked over to her. “Stop what?” he said, tears
“I can’t tell you…” Laurie buried her head in bill’s jacket
Kiki walked to the door and closed it, then Macy Started to get even more upset that she started yelling
“OH JUST GET IT OUT!! We think Angie’s bulimic!! Angie denies it, but we don’t believe her! I MEAN COME ON!!! HAVEN’T YOU KNOWTICED THAT SHE LEAVES THE ROOM AFTER SHE EATS?! Ok happy now?? We all have our secrets! I mean I have arthritis! Kiki has Split personality disorder and Laurie has diabetes!! So we’re just a bunch of FREAKAZODES that just happen to know each other!” Macy walked over to the corner.
Bill turned to Laurie “Why didn’t you tell us?”
“We all thought that you would break up with us….” Laurie sounded ashamed
“No we wouldn’t of…” Bill said
Georg walked over to Macy “Macy, darling I like you just the same!”
“You do?” Macy asked
“Yes…” Georg said
Gustav turned to Kiki.
“Do you not like me any more?” Kiki cried
“Don’t think that! I will always like you!” Gustav said giving her a hug
Tom was silent and walked over to where he was sitting and sat back down. He held Angie’s hand again and he looked at her. “Angie, wake up, wake up…please do it for me…” he whispered in her ear.
She didn’t wake up
“Come on, you can do it, you can wake up…WAKE UP!” He cried, he put his head on her shoulder
Then Angie’s heart started race faster on the
Tom shot up and ran to open the door “DOCTORS!” he screamed
Angie’s heart started beating even faster than before
The doctors ran in just as Angie lost her pulse, They started to try and revive her.
“CODE BLUE! CODE BLUE!” one of the doctors yelled
The boys and girls stood back with fear in their eyes.
The Doctors got her pulse back fast so there probably was no brain damage.
“See, this is just what I thought she had!” Dr. Winchester said to Dr. Hunnicut and Dr. Peirce
The doctors turned to the others.
“We found out what’s wrong….” Dr. Peirce said
“We know, she’s bulimic…” Laurie said crying
“No she’s not her esophagus isn’t damaged. It’s her heart.” Hunnicut said
“WHAT?!” they all yelled in unison
“Unfortunately yes, She has a congenital heart defect…” Winchester said “Does she go to the bathroom after she eats?”
“yes…” the girls said
“Well then, that could because she thought she had heartburn or acid reflex disease…she was probably taking medicine for heartburn.” Peirce said
“Can it be treated?” tom asked
“yes it can…but we have to put her through surgery…” Hunnicut answered

MORE TO COME WHAT DO U THINK???

CrazyKenya16
March 24th, 2008, 12:52 PM
Go go go

tiklemepurple
March 24th, 2008, 01:23 PM
i like kikis outfit
except for the skirt
i dont like shirts
they are too..ummm...idk
i just feel like i cant do anything in them

POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

TH_luv
March 24th, 2008, 01:45 PM
ZOMG! ANGIEE! dude more I need more >.<

ShadowIW
March 24th, 2008, 03:20 PM
“Surgery?! What?” Bill said
“We have to put a pace maker in her heart.” Hunnicut said
“But- But-Couldn’t she die!?!” said Georg
“Yes she could die….But you could die in any surgery….”Pierce said
“good point…”Gustav said
“How long will it be?” Kiki asked
“A few hours.” Hunnicut answered
“Will…Will it leave a scar? Angie doesn’t like scars….” Laurie whimpered
“No, it wont…we should do the surgery now, we don’t know how long it will be before her pulse races again…” Peirce said
“Ok, just make sure she will be alright….” Tom said
The doctors wheeled Angie’s bed out of the room.
Everyone else sat down. Then David walked in “Hey guys, sorry I got lost…Where’s Angie?”
“Surgery.” Gustav said quietly
Just then Tom realized that Angie’s locket was on the table next to the door. He walked over to pick it up when he picked it up he decided to open it. Inside was and old Letter and a poem. The Letter said
“Dearest William,
I have received your last letter to me and I know you said not to respond.
Why would you say those things? I thought you said you loved me. Was I wrong?
There is nothing I can say to make you come back. I had thought that you cared.
I guess I was wrong.

Margery”
Tom was puzzled by the letter so he started reading the poem and he realized it was what angie was talking about in her sleep on the plane the poem said
“The winds may blow,
The sky may fall,
I may lose it all,
But I will not bend
I will not brake
I have more to live for
I will make it through the dark
I will have the sun to see
All I have is me.”

Tom walked up to Laurie, “What does this mean?”
“I honestly don’t know. All Angie told me was it was some mystery in her family that she was trying to solve, I don’t know…..” Laurie said

When they were waiting in Angie’s room every second seemed like an eternity. Then Dr. Peirce walked into the room. Everyone stood up.
“Good news!...” He started “She made it through surgery but she is still unconscious, we will bring her in soon.”
“Oh good.” Macy said
Then Dr. Peirce left. David stood up from where he was sitting “You all need rest you need to go home. It’s 11:00pm”
“I’m not going.” Tom said “I think I should stay here and everyone else should go home and get rest.”
“Tom, you will have no room to sleep! You don’t have PJs or a change of clean cloths…” Gustav said
“I don’t care! I am not leaving her, never…I will move that recline-able chair over next to Angie’s bed and sleep in that. I will sleep in my cloths! So everyone should go!” Tom demanded
“Ok, tom we will come back in the morning.” Georg said
“Love you, Bro!” Bill said as they all left
A few minutes after they left the Nurse Houlehan and Doctor Hunnicut wheeled Angie in.
“Where are the rest of your friends?” Houlehan asked
“They left to get sleep…”Tom said
“Are you staying here over night?” Hunnicut asked
“Yes I am.” Tom replied
“Then we will get you some blankets.” The Nurse said then left
“Boy, you are devoted to this girl if you are going to stay here all night and if your crying over her.” Hunnicut said
“I really like her, she is everything I have ever wanted I never thought I would lose her, and now I just may…I don’t want that to happen….” Tom replied
“You’re a good man.” Hunnicut said as he left
Tom pulled the recline-able chair over to Angie’s bed side and sat in it. Then Nurse Houlehan brought in some blankets and then left Tom to be with Angie. Tom knew Angie couldn’t hear him but he still talked to her, he stroked her hair and kissed her. He held her hand too.
“Angie…” he whispered “Don’t leave me, wake up, I don’t want to be alone, I don’t want to lose you…”
He started to cry silently then he soon fell asleep. The next morning he woke up early to see if Angie was awake, but she wasn’t. Then Nurse Houlehan walked in to check on them
“How are you?” She asked
“Terrible, Angie isn’t waking up.” Tom said quietly
“I am sure she will….I let you be with her.” She said quietly then left
Tom just sat there thinking, then out of the corner of his eye he saw her hand move.
He turned around quickly and pushed the chair back a little so he could stand closer to her.
He could see her eyes opening.
“Angie?” He said
“To-Tom…where—I am I?” she whispered
“Princess you fainted on stage, you are at the hospital.” He said pushing some hair out of her face
“Ooohh….I’m so sore.” She whispered
“I know babe, You had to go through surgery.” Tom said
“Do I have a scar?” She whimpered
“No, don’t worry. I’ll be here.” He kissed her forehead
“Where are the others?” she said
“They will be here shortly….” He whispered then he saw that she started to cry
“Tom, I don’t want to lose you. Please don’t leave….” She said crying
“I won’t leave you….ever.” he said holding her hand
Just then the doctors walked in
“Ah! You’re awake! Good show! Good show!” Dr. Winchester said
“You look healthy!” Dr. Hunnicut stated
“Your vital signs are good! Amazing I might say!” Dr. Peirce said “Doctors…I think these two have catching up to do!” they walked out laughing
Tom Pushed the Recliner back to its original spot and brought up a different chair.
“Tom, why did you stay here with me?” Angie asked
“I am not about to leave go.” Tom said
Then the others walked in.
“Look guys! She’s awake!” Bill said jumping up and down and ran to Angie’s side with everyone else

ShadowIW
March 24th, 2008, 04:23 PM
So what do ya'll think??? Im trying to make it REALLY good ....

lilangel02371
March 24th, 2008, 05:01 PM
That was goood so write more!!!Bitte?

herseykiss
March 24th, 2008, 05:34 PM
PLZ WRITE MORE I BEGG UU!!!

i love itt!!!

ShadowIW
March 24th, 2008, 09:51 PM
Ok so my spring break ended and I have a lot to do so I may post super short parts or may not post at all, thanks for reading!

TH_luv
March 24th, 2008, 11:08 PM
dude! I love it! mehr bitter? :D

ShadowIW
March 25th, 2008, 09:57 PM
“No, no…I’m fine.” Angie said tiredly
“No you’re not! You need some food!” Bill said and ran out of the room
“Angie! Angie! Do you know what day it is??” Kiki asked worried
“No….how long have I been unconscious?” Angie asked back
“OH NO! SHE’S LOST HER MEMORY!!” Kiki said
“Kiki, calm down, it’s a reasonable question.” Tom said “Angie, you were out for a 12 hours.”
“Angie, I’m sorry that we didn’t believe you when you said weren’t bulimic.” Laurie said
“That’s ok.” Angie smiled
Then Bill walked through the door with a tray full of food and put it down on the table next to her bed.
“Looks—yummy!” Bill gulped
“Uh, it looks alive.” Angie said “Let me taste.”
Angie took the fork that was on the tray and tasted it.
“Uh….it taste like…rubber-mush!” she said as a gross look came upon her face “Thanks for the effort Bill.”
“Macy and I will go out and get good food for you.” Georg said then he and Macy walked out
“Angie, why don’t you rest?” Gustav said
“that’s sounds good…hmm, I don’t know if I can go to sleep though.” Angie replied
“You can…here I’ll say the word ‘sleep’ three times and you will sleep, ok?” Laurie said
“I don’t know Laurie….” Angie started
“Oh yeah? Watch this. Sleep. Sleeeeeeep. Sleep.” Laurie said….Angie went to sleep.
About 30 minutes later she woke up when Georg and Macy walked in with McDonalds
“Hey, when will I get out of here?” Angie questioned as Georg handed her the food
“When the doctors say so.” Tom said
“Yuuuuummmmmm!” Angie said putting a fry in her mouth
Tom smiled to pass time everyone talked to each other and played silly games. Tom told stories to Angie to make her smile….
“…Then Bill said ‘NEIN! JUMBIE!!!’……”Tom said finishing a story
Angie laughed and held Tom’s arm, Tom liked that Angie was happy again
Then Dr. Hunnicut walked in “Well Angie, you can leave right now if you want, or If you like us that much you can stay here..” he laughed
“Home!” Angie said loudly
Everyone Laughed
Then Dr. Hunnicut Left.
“We brought some clean clothes that you can change into..” Laurie said handing her a shirt and jeans
“OK ya’ll need to leave so I can change.” Angie said
They all left and waited out in the hall
Then the heard Angie yell “This is TOM’S SHIRT! IT’S HUGE!!”
Then Angie walked out, everyone saw that she tried to shorten it by tying a knot of extra cloth on the side
“Well, at least it’s Dallas Cowboys!” Laurie laughed

lilangel02371
March 25th, 2008, 11:59 PM
THAT WAS.. AWEOMMME!!! LMAO More!! If you can and thank you for taking the time to write more!!

THDGaja
March 26th, 2008, 11:45 PM
“Hello. I’m Nurse Houlehan.” She said “This is Doctor Pierce and Doctor Hunnicut.”


...

MASH?

ShadowIW
March 28th, 2008, 09:19 PM
“Hello. I’m Nurse Houlehan.” She said “This is Doctor Pierce and Doctor Hunnicut.”


...

MASH?


YEP!!! I LOVE MASH!!

TH_luv
March 28th, 2008, 09:40 PM
Ich liebe de ff! XD mehr? bitter?

ShadowIW
March 28th, 2008, 11:20 PM
yo peoples! NEW CHARATER THAT ROCKs!

When they got home they decided to hang-out for awhile.
Bill and Laurie were in the room with all the instruments playing them and talking.
“Ha ha bill that isn’t how you play a guitar….” Laurie laughed
“I have my own way of playing this thingy!” Bill smiled “Sit next to me!” Bill patted the space beside him on the couch that he was sitting on. Laurie moved next to him.
“Laurie….can I ask you something…..about…Angie?” Bill said softly and then got up to close the door and sat back down.
“Uh, what do you want to know?” Laurie said cautiously
“Is there something she isn’t telling the rest of us?” he whispered
“To tell you the truth... i dont know…she is mysterious, She can change emotions quickly and when she is extremely mad…..you want to run away. She is hardheaded and a perfectionist! She has such a drive to learn, it’s incredible! She is….unique, I guess you could say. She is funny, wild, optimistic, religious, loving….you know, she is the only one of us that hasn’t gone insane!” Laurie said
“Really? Is she that special? What so great about her that you guys go insane if something happens?” Bill asked
“She has gone through a lot….lets say that… and her intuition is amazingly right a lot of the time! She is the only one of us that has stable ground even though she has been through a lot, her emotions are always in check….there is so much more but it’s hard to describe.” Laurie said laying her head on Bill’s shoulder
“Why did you want to know?”
“Because….Tom is like going gah-gah over her and I have never seen him like that.”
“Well, she has a strange way with people, even the shyest open up to her.”
After Laurie said that bill looked at her and started making out with her.

Georg and Macy were in the kitchen talking at the table.
“So, Angie is well again….why do you look puzzled?” Georg asked placing his hand on Macy’s
“Uh….do you think we could send someone up here…for Angie?” Macy sounded like she was thinking
“Sure….who do you want to send up?” Georg said
“It’s, um, one of Angie’s best friends besides us…the girl’s name is Jane Lani…” Macy said
“Ok, um where does she live?” Georg said grabbing his phone
“Pensacola Florida.” Macy answered, Georg handed her the phone “Type in the number and call…it’s 10:00am in America.”
Macy typed in the number and put the phone to her ear
The phone conversation went like this:
“Yo, what up? This is Jane Lani” Jane said
“Hello Jane, um I don’t know if you remember me but this is Macy Handler.”
“OH!!YA! Your another one of Angie’s buds! Sweet!”
“Ya! Cool you remember! Ok well we and a couple of other friends are in Germany…and um I have some news…”
“K, you got news…spill-it!” Jane said you could hear ocean waves behind her she was at the beach
“Well, Angie was hospitalized yesterday and got out today—She’s fine now…but uh—“
“WHOA!! Wait! Angie was in the Hospital! You are in Germany!!! Dude!” Jane said shocked
“OK Ok….Will you come to Germany and stay with us…you would cheer Angie up!” Macy rushed
“YES YES YES! I will so be there for her like she was for me! No prob! I’ll be there on the next flight out!”
“Cool uh…Call my number 156-789-852 when you have a flight.”
“Ok Macy! Hang-loose I’m out!” Jane hung up

Macy hung up the phone and handed it to Georg.
“She’s coming on the next flight she can get…do you guys have enough room?” Macy asked
“Have you not seen this place!? ITS HUGE! Of course we have room!” Georg laughed as he kissed her cheek
Kiki and Gustav were in the living room.
“So, how many personalities do you have?” Gustav asked
“Two.” Kiki replied sounding ashamed
“Don’t feel bad…it makes you more interesting to me.” Gustav said
“Uh, well not to me, I feel weird have of the time.” Kiki said looking down
“Well, You are a wonderful person anyway. Nothing can change that.”
Kiki blushed after he said that
Then Gustav leaned in and kissed her……..

Tom was walking Angie to her room.
“Hey do you need help walking???” Tom said putting an arm around her
“No. Tom I’m fine, really.” Angie said as they go to her room
She opened the door, walked in and took off her shoes.
Tom sat in the chair in the right corner of the room near the door after he shut it so he could see her.
Angie sat on the bed facing Tom.
“Why do you always shut the door after you enter??” Angie asked
“Cuz the other boys like to listen in…” Tom answered
“oh well then…”
“You sang very well at the concert!” Tom said having a tired look in his eyes
“Thanks…what’s wrong? You look different today….” Angie said walking over to the chair
“Nothing, doll.” He smiled then she sat in his lap and they laughed
“Is that so Mr. Kaulitz? Can you prove that with evidence? Or are you lying on the witness stand?” Angie laughed gently
“Uh, I object!” Tom smiled
“Object to what?!”
“Due to, uh, um….uh…your distracting me….”
“Huh?”
“Your pretty! It’s distracting!”
“Quit making excuses….your different today and you know it!” Angie started to play with her hair
“Ok ok…Im worried about you…What was that thing in your locket?”
Angie got wide eyed
“YOU OPENED MY LOCKET?!” She said
“um…………..ya” Tom looked down at the chair’s arm
“its ok…I was wondering if you had enough guts to do it.” Angie smiled and kissed Tom on the cheek
“What’s all that about?”
“It’s a family mystery. Laurie will probably have told you that I’m crazy for trying to solve it.”
“What are you trying to solve?”
“I want to know who Margery was…and who the letter was too and what happened to her.”
“I’ll help you….if you want.” Tom started to look deep into Angie’s eyes
“I would like that.” Angie said blushing
Then he kissed her gently
“Can I ask you something?” He said
“Sure.” She said softly
“Why are you friends with Laurie, Macy, and Kiki if they don’t believe what you say and always try to take the lead?”
Angie giggled “They don’t act like that..They are always there for me..Even though they can get annoying…I’m there for them. They know they’re crazy…”
“They do?” Tom said laughing then he picked her up and walked around he room holding her
“What are you doing Tommy-boy?” Angie asked
Then he put her on the bed
“You need more rest…just take a nap and I will wake you up for dinner.” He said then left the room

lilangel02371
March 28th, 2008, 11:31 PM
MORE!!! THATS SO GOOD!!

ShadowIW
March 29th, 2008, 07:36 PM
working on more!

CrazyKenya16
March 29th, 2008, 09:29 PM
more plz

herseykiss
March 29th, 2008, 09:39 PM
*runs in street and yells* im not moving from here till u rogth more!!!
OH SNAP IMA GET HITTT!!

ShadowIW
March 29th, 2008, 11:37 PM
I am working hard on more but I fear that I have....WRITERS BLOCK!!

TH_luv
March 29th, 2008, 11:59 PM
I am working hard on more but I fear that I have....WRITERS BLOCK!!

NOT A WROTERS BLOCK!!! oh no! >.< oh no oh no oh no!!!! >.<

ShadowIW
March 30th, 2008, 12:02 AM
I am working hard on more but I fear that I have....WRITERS BLOCK!!

NOT A WROTERS BLOCK!!! oh no! >.< oh no oh no oh no!!!! >.<

ya writer's block sorry.... sorry.....

ShadowIW
March 30th, 2008, 11:00 PM
Im getting over writer's block, Ill update soon, but no promises. I have tests this week!
Wish me luck!

TH_luv
March 30th, 2008, 11:05 PM
Im getting over writer's block, Ill update soon, but no promises. I have tests this week!
Wish me luck!
I wish you the best of luck! =) with both the tests and the writers block XD

ShadowIW
April 3rd, 2008, 09:17 PM
Sorry that its so short


When dinner was ready Kiki walked up to Angie’s room and walked in to wake her up, but to Kiki surprise Angie was already awake.
“hey, Kiki.” Angie said
“Hey, dinner is ready.” Kiki said
“Ok, I’ll be down there soon.” Angie replied
Kiki stared at her a little-bit then left.
When everybody was at the dinner table they all started eating.
“yum!” Macy said putting a bite of food in her mouth.
(Nobody wants to read about them eating so….ill move on)
After dinner Macy and Angie were talking “I got a surprise for you!’ Macy smiled
“Oh do you now?” Angie laughed
“Yes it should come in tomorrow….” Macy giggled as she started to walk away
Laurie was talking with Kiki.
“Kiki, how are you and Gustav?” Laurie asked
“Oh, well we’re ok…. I don’t think we are ‘clicking’.” Kiki sighed “I thought it would work.”
“Oh, I’m sorry….” There was an awkward silence.
“Well…..uh, I’m going to bed…..” Kiki said
“Good-night.” Laurie said then they both went to bed.
As Angie walked to her room she thought about her family mystery and about Tom.
When she opened the door Tom was already in her room waiting for her in the chair.

TH_luv
April 3rd, 2008, 09:21 PM
zomg... :shock: whats the surprise?!Why arent they "clicking"!? and why is Tom in her room...waiting in a chair?! XD *sigh* I love this fanfic!

ShadowIW
April 7th, 2008, 04:54 PM
“Oh Tom! You scared me!” Angie said sounding surprised
“Oh, sorry. Can I talk to you?” Tom asked
“Sure, what is it?”
“Well, we never really ‘talked’ before….”
“Huh?” Angie said raising an eyebrow
“I mean to say we never told each other our likes and dislikes and all that other stuff.”
“Ok? So? Do you want to start?” Angie turned on the lights and shut the door then pulled up the other chair in the room closer to Tom’s chair.
“Sure….lets see, where should I start?” Tom asked
“Where ever you want to start.” Angie smiled
“Ok, when Bill and I were seven our parents got divorced.”
“Oh Tom, I am so sorry.”
“Thanks, uh after that…...” Tom went on telling Angie about his life then he asked Angie about her life.
“What about you Angie?” Tom asked
“Well, I have a half-sister, I talk to her sometimes. My mom has always been there for me with support. Her side of the family lives in Texas so I go see them every once in awhile.” She said
“What about your dad? What about his side?” Tom questioned
“Uh, that’ s hard to explain. I-” Angie’s eyes started to swell up with tears but she breathed in deeply and held them back.
“What is it?” Tom asked
“Tom, my dad died when I was little- very little.” Angie sighed
“Oh, Angie I’m so sorry! I didn’t know.” Tom said quietly
“Tom…..I miss my dad, so very much….” Angie said crying
“I know you do.” He said wiping tears from her eyes
“The sad thing is…I don’t remember him that much.”
“It going to be ok, I promise.”

TH_luv
April 7th, 2008, 07:41 PM
awesomeness!thats really sad =( but still,awesome! mehr? bitte?

ShadowIW
April 8th, 2008, 07:06 PM
YAY!! I will have more free time to add more...my test are finished!!!!!

CrazyKenya16
April 8th, 2008, 07:20 PM
this is so sad :cry:
but continue

ShadowIW
April 8th, 2008, 07:59 PM
The next day everyone woke up to see that Angie was gone.
“ANGIE!!” they yelled walking around the house
No answer
“Did she leave a note?” Kiki asked
“No….where could she have gone?” Tom said
“Guys, her Bible is missing from her suitcase.” Laurie said walking out of Angie’s room
“Why would her Bible be missing?” Kiki replied
Just then Angie walked in the front door wearing a nice Sunday-outfit.
“Angie! Where were you?” Bill said being the first to see her
“I went to church. Hello?...Today is Sunday.” Angie replied
“But how could you have gone to church? You don’t know where one is.” Georg asked
“David drove me to one a couple of blocks away. I told him I would walk back sense it is such a nice day.” Angie said
“But David is….Where is David?” Bill asked
“Im right here boys.” David said as he walked into the room “I went to the store after I dropped her off.”
“Guys…why do you always worry about me?” Angie said dryly “There must be something that is more interesting, than me.”
“Cuz you are the one that just had surgery and has had a critical life!” Kiki over dramatized “Like remember in Middle School….when that binder gave you a black-eye for a week!”
“Kiki, that was your binder remember? You threw it at me for not paying you back that $20 I still owe you. YOU GAVE ME THAT BLACK EYE!” Angie said putting her Bible on the table near the stair case
“Waaiittt….You still owe me $20?” Kiki said
“You should have said that Angie!” Laurie giggled
“Oh-shoot! Your right!” Macy Laughed with Laurie
The boys looked at each other like they were questioning what Laurie and Macy said
“ANGIE! RUN!” Georg yelled
Angie took off running as fast as she could Kiki was running after her.
Then Angie ran into her room. She could hear everyone laugh, she laughed too. Then she started to change in some more comfy cloths. After a while they were all sitting in the living room talking when the door bell rang.
“Oh Angie! That’s your surprise!”Macy squealed as she ran towards the door
The rest of the gang was still sitting in the living room. When Macy came in and said
“TAA-DAA!!” Then Jane Lani (the one from Florida) came in wearing ripped jeans & a yellow surf shirt and said “J-J the jet plane had arrived!”
Angie got up and squealed
“JANE!! I cant believe you’re here!!!! J you have to meet everyone!!” (J is Jane for short0
“Okay okay….who are these people??” Jane said
“K, Jane well you know Macy, Laurie, and Kiki. This is my boyfriend Tom and his twin bro Bill and their friends Georg and Gustav. This is their tour manager David Jost.” Angie introduced everyone
“Here I will show you where you can stay” David said getting up and Jane followed him to her room
Angie had a huge smile on her face for the rest of the day.

TH_luv
April 8th, 2008, 08:19 PM
sweet! ^_^ I loved it! XD

cherry_kaulitz
April 8th, 2008, 11:26 PM
freaking cool yay you finnally did more i was like wtf where is she and then i got ur message and i said yay yay yay more more more :D :D :D :D :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

ShadowIW
April 11th, 2008, 11:15 PM
OK, so I know I havent been posting much.... But I will soon!!!! Promise!

CrazyKenya16
April 11th, 2008, 11:17 PM
More :mrgreen:

ShadowIW
April 11th, 2008, 11:50 PM
The Next day after they all woke up, the girls went to sight see while the boys did some interviews. When they met for lunch the boys took the girls to their next interview.
“Girls, Do you want to sit next to us during the interview?” Gustav asked as he sat down in his chair for the interview.
“Sure, why not.” Jane said
“Uh….wont the fan-girls be mad?” Laurie asked
“We don’t care.” Bill said
Then the girls sat down. When the interview started the girls were quiet
“Aren’t you the band Noise? That played at the concert the other night? Are you the girl that passed out on stage?” The interviewer said looking at the girls
“Um, uh..” Macy said
“Why yes we are!” Angie said sitting up straighter “Yes I’m the one that passed out.”
“Well are you ok….some of the fans were worrying..”The interviewer said
“They were? Well how nice of them! Yes the boys were freaking out too. Luckily they all were there for me.” Angie said as the rest of the girls stared at her in surprised at her for being so outgoing at a random moment.
“So, are you dating one of the boys?” The interviewer said smiling
“ Yup! I’m dating Tom! Laurie is dating Bill and Macy is Dating Georg.” Angie said
“Very interesting! Are you American girls?”
“Yes! I for one am proud of it….Not that I don’t like Europe….I’m like half European.”
“Ooo! This is big news! You look very trendy!”
“Why thank you.” Angie said then Laurie started to say something
“She has always had good fashion sense! Us girls have known each other for years.”
Then the interview went on. After the interviewer left the girls all glared at Angie
“WHAT DID YOU DO THAT FOR????!!!” Macy said
“What?” Angie replied
“Now all those fans girls are going to get mad and chase us down the street….then kill us like road kill.” Jane said “And I wasn’t in this at first and now you dragged me into it!”
“Listen up! What has happened to all of you? All you people do now is pick on me! You try to find me where ever I am! What do you want from me????” Angie said getting up and headed toward the door
“No Angie, wait! Wait! We didn’t mean it!” Laurie said stopping her
“ok. Ok then you wouldn’t mind this.” Angie walked to a widow and opened it then put her head out it and yelled to the streets that had some fans out there
“HEY EVERY BODY!! I GOT NEWS FOR YOU!!! I DATING TOM KAULITZ!!!!! BWAHAHAHA!!!” she yelled
Then the boys pulled her from it as the heard the fan girls start screaming in anger
“Do you want to die?” Kiki said as she shook her
“Don’t you want to have fun?” Angie asked
“Listen…why are you upset with her? The fans would have found out eventually.” Bill said
“your right bill.” Laurie said walking up to him and kissing him on the cheek.
Then they were escorted to the car to their home, when they got home it was around 7:30pm
“Laurie, come with me!” Bill said as they walked into the house
“ok” she said as she followed him to his room
When they got there he shut the door and walked over to his dresser and opened a drawer and pulled out a small box
Laurie gasped and squealed
Bill handed her the box
“Go ahead…open it.” He whispered

TH_luv
April 12th, 2008, 12:30 AM
what is it!?! what did he pull out?! >.< zomg I need to know this!

ShadowIW
April 21st, 2008, 10:40 PM
WARNING!!!!
I MAY DISCONTINUE THIS!!! TELL ME WETHER TO GO ON OR NOT! I COULD JUST MAKE A REALLY STUPID ENDING

TH_luv
April 21st, 2008, 11:36 PM
continuuuuuue! >.<

xXxMandiixXx
April 22nd, 2008, 12:17 AM
new reader here please please please continue i love it soo far hehe

<3 Mandii xx

herseykiss
April 22nd, 2008, 11:36 AM
countinueeeee!!!!!! plzzzzzzzzz

ShadowIW
April 25th, 2008, 11:13 PM
NEW SHORT PART!! finally!! bwaaa!


Laurie opened it
“Oh Bill! It’s beautiful!” Laurie said as she held up the diamond necklace in her hand
“Im so glad you like it!” Bill said “Would you like me to put it on you?”
“Yes, of course!” Laurie squeaked
Bill put it on her then Laurie ran to the Bathroom to see how it looked, Bill followed
“IT’S BEAUTIFUL!!!” Laurie said admiring the shine the diamonds gave off in the light
Just then they heard Jane yell
“Guys!! You have to come see the News! Angie is on it!”
Laurie and Bill looked at each other and ran to the living room with everyone else
They all watched the headline
“Do the band members of Tokio Hotel have girlfriends? This girl was seen yelling out the window to the fans that she was dating Tom.” Then they showed the clip “The fans seem in dismay and outraged that the boys of TH would keep this a secret.” Then the news ended after that the girls looked at Angie
“Hey, if the fans don’t like me….their problem, not mine.” Angie said coolly
Jane stared in confusion
“How can you say that?! You have no clue if the fans will kill you or not! You- You- Bwaaa! Just Blah!” Jane said
“smooth J.”Kiki said “Angie….you are stupid….”
“ok peoples! Listen. It’s boring trying to step around people’s feelings. Fans should be happy!” Angie stood up and looked at all of them “I say we go out in public as couples….and Make a statement! Show we are not scared of Fans!”
They all stood there dumbfounded.
“We’re doomed.” Jane mumbled

TH_luv
April 25th, 2008, 11:16 PM
lmao 'we're doomed' ahahaha! thats funny I love this ff! mehr? bitte?

CrazyKenya16
April 25th, 2008, 11:19 PM
lmao 'we're doomed' ahahaha! thats funny I love this ff! mehr? bitte?

XD
I kno

continue

ShadowIW
April 27th, 2008, 12:08 AM
The next day Angie got up earlier than the others and got dressed and wrote a note to them. It said
“Hey Guys- it’s 8:00am!
Since Laurie, Jane, Kiki and Macy are too wimpy to go out in public now. I have chosen to go out and walk around….Maybe the city or just the block…Either way I have my cell. Don’t worry! I know self-defense if the ‘fans’ try to hurt me. LOL. ;)
L8ter! Angie”

When the others read this it was 10:00am. Angie had been gone about 2 hours.
“Uh…I think we better call her….” Georg said
“Ja. Your right.” Gustav said
Laurie went and got her cell out of her purse and called Angie’s phone then put it on speaker
Angie picked up
“Hello! Hello!” she said. She sounded like she was panting
“Angie! Are you ok? Where are you?” Laurie asked
“Idk where I am….Im f-fine!” she said breathing harder
Then you could hear someone scream “ANGIE!! WE LOVE YOU!!!”
“Who is THAT?!” Tom said
“Your guess is as good as mi-ne!” Angie panted
“Angie whats happening?” Bill asked
“Ummm…lets see, I am being cha-s-ed by 2 mobs! One likes me…the o-the-r not so much.”
“WHAT?!” Kiki yelled then said “Hey what does the street your on look like?”
“Um..is that importa—ok it has some stores and apartments….I think Im like 6 blocks away from the house!” Angie said
“Ok! Me and J are on the way!” Kiki said
“OK guys Ill try to stay here.” Then she hung up
Kiki and J started out the door when the boys stopped them
“You cant do this!” Gustav said “You cant run fast enough!”
Then Macy and Laurie stepped up “Yes they can! They were the fastest people on the track team! They need to go!” Laurie said as she pushed the boys out of the way
“Get in the car! And we’ll meet them there! Just go! We don’t have time!” Macy said
Kiki and Jane ran out the front door as the others headed to car
Kiki and Jane were fast! Dude, we are talking like BWAAA fast! Their adrenaline was pumpin’!
When they rounded the corner where Angie was they saw her climbing a fire escape, then they saw the others in the car pulling up but not getting out because fans saw them and split so they swarmed the car and Angie!
“YO! ANGIE!” Kiki yelled
Angie looked down on them and smiled
The Kiki turned towards the crowed
“PEOPLE! SHUT YOUR MOUTHS AND PAY ATTENTION!!” Nobody heard
Then Kiki and Jane climbed the fire escape to be over the crowed and yelled again
“PEOPLE! LISTEN UP!!” still no one heard
Then bill cracked the window in the car and showed he had his megaphone (lol I he has to take that!)
“NEIN! NEIN!” Bill said in the Mega phone
The crowed was silent
“OK PEOPLE! LISTEN TO ME!” Kiki said
Then Jane popped her knuckles
“YOU DON’T TOUCH THIS GIRL!! OR WE HURT YOU! GOT THAT! I DO KNOW KUNG-FU!”
Then Jane Yelled “IF YOU GOT A PROBLEM WITH TOKIO HOTEL DATING…..THEN YOU NEED HELP! THEY ARE PEOPLE TOO! ALL YOU PEOPLE ARE, ARE SELFISH BRATS!”
Then Bill spoke out of his mega-phone and told the mobs in german to go home then Angie got down and got in the car and the first words she said was “I look to good for this to happen!”
Then they all laughed and went back home
After Angie took a shower and changed she was going through her suitcase when Jane walked in
“Angie? Can I talk to you?” Jane asked
“Sure just shut the door if it is important.”
Jane shut the door quietly
“Is Kiki dating… Gustav?” Jane asked as she started to get red
“Um, no…she just told me that they ended it. But nothing ever really happened.”
“Ok! Well I got to go!” Jane said rushing out of he room when she opened the door she ran into Tom who was just about to knock. “HI T, BYE T!” Jane said rushing out
“Well….she just called me T.” Tom said re-shutting the door
“Hey, babe…” Angie said still going through her suitcase
“What cha got in their?” tom said nudging her out of the way
“Tom!” Angie said running into tom trying to push him back “don’t look! Its my stuff!”
He laughed
“Babe. Your cute, you know that?” he said holding her
“um…no. Do you think Im crazy?” Angie asked
“No….just spunky and spontaneous! I like that!” he said stroking his hand through her hair
“Hmmm…bwaa!” she barked
They both laughed and hugged eachother

TH_luv
April 27th, 2008, 12:19 AM
awesome! XD mehr? bitte?

TexasGirlLovesTH
April 27th, 2008, 01:45 AM
WHOOT WHOOT! :D
TEXAS!!! :)
Represent!! 8-)
BTW, I just started reading the story, and it's really good! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE continue!!!???
*holds up a pic of bill making puppy dog eyes* (you know you can't resist it) :mrgreen:

amandaaraujo
April 27th, 2008, 05:49 AM
omg keep writing can you beleive i stayed up all night reading your story i dont even know what time it is well im from NY but go texas y Bff was born in texas :)

ShadowIW
April 27th, 2008, 10:29 PM
YAY! I have 2 new readers!! Update is soon!

ShadowIW
April 30th, 2008, 10:07 PM
NEW AWeSOME TWIST~!


The next day Angie and Bill were the only two home. Tom went to the studio to check on things, Laurie and Kiki went to the store, Georg and Macy went on a date and Gustav and Jane went to the mall.
Angie was in the living room just hanging out in shorts and a tank top when Bill walked in.
“Hey Bill…” Angie said
“Hey…” Bill said dryly
He sat down next to her
They just stared off into space not saying anything. Bill was the first to break the silence
“So..Can I ask you a few questions?” Bill said
“Sure..what for?” Angie said
“I want to see if you are right for my bro.” Bill smiled
Angie giggled “Ok…”
“Ok, first….Where were you born.”
“In Texas…” Angie rolled her eyes
“hey I got to make sure..Next one um, how were your grades in school?”
“Uhh…Bill I already graduated college and law school….but I always made straight A’s…I don’t mean to boast but I was always the smartest of the group…” Angie said as she grabbed a magazine
“Really? You were? What grades did Laurie make?” Bill said surprised
“She made goods grades too! Her GPA is like 4 points lower than mine….”
“Oh. So um…. Are you multi-talented?”
“Ya….sooo?”
“YOU ARE?! Really? That is cool!”
“Thanks Bill.”
“Umm…so if you...um..is your brown hair your natural color?” Bill said, he looked like he wanted to touch her hair
Angie gulped “yes…..” she looked like this O_o
“That’s nice….so are you part German?”
“Yes actually, I am German, French, Irish, Scottish, English, Dutch….ya.”
“Wow! Big combination! What part of your family gave you those brown eyes?”
“Um, my mom’s side….” Angie started to feel uncomfortable “Bill, your starting to sound weird…”
“Sorry…I like asking questions…so..I think you’re a right match for me…I mean Tom! TOM! A very good match for Tom!” Bill said trying to correct his sentence
“Bill! What are you saying? Are you saying you like me?” Angie said as she jumped up
“What?! Um..yes--- I mean no..no! Well yes…maybe…I think… a little… ok yes! Yes! Yes!” He said with his heads in his hands
“No Bill! No you like L-A-U-R-I-E! Do you hear me? You like Laurie!” Angie said in frustration
“Please! Angie! Please! I know, But yet I don’t-” just then Tom walk through the door
“Hey you two!” He said
“Tom!” Angie said running into his arms
“hey…I wasn’t gone that long…” tom laughed
“But it felt like forever….didn’t it Bill?” Angie said
“Oh ya..an eternity tom..just sitting here waiting for everybody…” Bill said

TH_luv
April 30th, 2008, 10:14 PM
BILL!!! zomg he likes Angie?! but hes supposed to be with Laurie! whats Laurie gonna say?! zomg I need mehr!

ShadowIW
April 30th, 2008, 10:51 PM
After that soon everybody else came home and David had told them there was a party for rockstars or something like that and the girls and guys got dressed and went to it. When they arrived they found out that the party had a karaoke thing…….
“MuST Do KaRaOKe!” Laurie said grabbing Angie’s arm
Angie had no other choice but to sing with her
They sang 2 songs and when they got off the stage they found out Kiki was bold enough to start flirting with a singer from US5….
Tom and Angie were rockin’ the dance floor (cuz you know they so would!)
Bill and Laurie were off on the side lines
“Bill are you ok? You seem…not there….” Laurie said getting closer, she was wearing her new necklace that bill gave her
“Yes I am fine…I’m thinking.” He said and smiled gently
“Thinking of what?” Laurie asked
Bill had to make up some thing to tell her. He knew he couldn’t tell her about what happened with Angie.
“Of you…and the girls in the dance off the party is having” he said pointing to the poster on the wall
“That is a Great Idea Bill!” Laurie said squealing
So Laurie got the girls together and they entered the dance off
When the speaker announced them…lets just say…WOW!*___*
They danced to Rhythm of life by US5
The boys stood off on the side and could not believe that the girls could dance that well
When the girls were done they were breathing heavily and they went to the bar to get drinks
“Wow! You girls sure you don’t have super powers?” Gustav laughed
“Uhh..I don’t feel good…” Jane said as she went to sit down
Laurie dung through her purse to find aspirin for Jane’s headache
When they went home they all took showers and went to bed…but in the middle of the night
Bill quietly snuck into Angie’s room.
He closed the door and sat at the edge of her bed
She woke up and gasped
“Bill…get…out” she whispered
“I cant…” he whispered back
“Yes you can…” She whispered as she nudged him
"I let you love me....please let me love you!" Bill said stareing into her eyes.
"Bi- Bill- I- I-dont...." She stuttered
"Please...." He said as he leaned in and kissed her
“bill!” she said as she pushed him away
He got up quietly and walked out.
Angie knew she had to do something….but what?

TH_luv
April 30th, 2008, 11:25 PM
zomg! Bill you bad boy!Laurie's gonna kill you! >.< I want mehr

TexasGirlLovesTH
April 30th, 2008, 11:52 PM
:shock:
A twist, indeed!
OMFG! Bill needs to stop being an idiot!
I mean, meine gotte!

ShadowIW
May 1st, 2008, 08:18 PM
Over the next couple of days Angie was think on what she could do without making it known to the others. One day she had finally knew what to do….she knew because Bill, when no one was looking, would put his hand on her waist or try and kiss her. So the day before she left she knew she would have to have a conversation with Bill…even though she would lie sometimes
When she saw Bill alone she walked up to him
“Hey Bill….” She tried to sound calm
“Hey, how you doing?” he said getting closer
“Good, hey your right…”she was putting her plan into action
“About what?” he said raising an eyebrow
“About you and me…” She lied
“Really? You know…I don’t want to hurt Tom or Laurie…But when they see how much we-”
Angie interrupted “How about you and I go somewhere tomorrow….just you and me…”
“I’d like that.” He smiled
“Good…make up a lie and tell it to the others before we leave….be ready at 11:30 am.”
She left and went to her room he just smiled
The day went on like normal

THAT NIGHT…..
Angie woke up and locked the door to her room then walked over to her suitcase
She took all the clothes and threw them on the bed
‘Oh…ok…here we go.’ She thought
She messed up the clothes and bed then changed from her PJs to some tennis-shoes, sweat pants, white shirt, and a oversized sweater that she wears on airplanes. Then she pulled her hair back in a ponytail.
After that she wrote some letters, One to Tom, One to Kiki, and One to Jane.
She told Tom that she had just discovered something about her Family secret and told her the family she was going to research
She put 36 Euros with Kiki’s and told her to not spend it until Kiki gets another letter from her
She told Jane the truth in the last letter but told Jane to not tell…because it would ruin the rest of the plans.
She quietly walked into Tom’s room and put the letter next to his hat and kissed his forehead
She slid the other letters under Kiki’s door and Angie’s door
Then she took some money with her but left everything else except for her locket.

amandaaraujo
May 1st, 2008, 08:39 PM
omgggggggg i cant beleive bill would do such a thing hihih i get into these stories alto so you may see some stupid comments from me love your story hihihhi update soon :D :o

ShadowIW
May 1st, 2008, 09:15 PM
The next morning everyone was shocked to find out that she left, When Jane read the letter she hid it in her suitcase and didn’t say a word. Tom was freaking out and was crying. The sky was dark that day. The weather man it was going to Thunderstorm. Tom didn’t know what to do, Bill was trying to console him, While Laurie went and made coffee for the others.
“Bill, why wouldn’t she take me with her?” Tom said sobbing
“I- oh tom…we are all upset…I don’t know wha…”
“No, you don’t know! You don’t know how great she was! She- She- She was….I LOVE HER!” Tom yelled while sobbing
“I know, you did…” Bill said he started to feel guilty
Just then Macy and Georg ran in
“GUYS! GUYS! QUICK!” Georg yelled so everybody would pay attention
When everybody got there Macy spoke
“We all know she left but….Georg and I think...” She gulped “She may not come back..” tears started to fill her eyes
“What makes you say that?”Laurie sounded angry
“She left her Bible…..” Macy’s voice dropped
Then everyone started to cry
When they gained their composer they went out to search for Angie before it rained

Angie was walking down the street when she passed the hall of records.
She decided to see if she could find the German part of her family, all she knew was the last name
‘ok…my family would be where now?’ she thought as she looked through books.
Then a nice lady walked up “Can I help? The lady asked
“Um…yes please..” Angie smiled
The woman was wearing a black pinstripe suit, she was middle aged
“Who are you looking for?” the woman asked
“The Von Hassuer family.” Angie replied
“That sounds very familiar…” the woman said grabbing a book from a self
She flipped through the pages until she said “AH! Found it!”
“Oh thank you!” Angie replied
“Now I know why that named sounded familiar!” The woman exclaimed
“Really why?” Angie question
“Well…read this.” The woman said handing her the book “Are you related to this family?”
“Yes…” Angie said taking the book then she notice the woman suddenly had a huge grin on her face
Angie started to read some out loud.
“The Von Hassuer family, known for Beauty and Brains….had a wonderful history….German royalty..WHOA! GERMAN ROYALTY??!!?!!!!?!!?” She looked up at the woman who just nodded and said keep reading “Daughters married to French Royalty ……” Angie’s mouth just hung open
The woman laughed “Well…would you like to know something cousin?”
“Cousin?” Angie repeated
“Yes! I am related to Von Hassuers’ also! My name is Margery, named after our Great Great Great Grandmother who married a Brit! I have come in here for the past 7 months doing back ground checks on the family…I know a lot now…” Margery said
“Wow! My name is Angie! I don’t know who I am related too in the family but…ya! That is great! Gee, I look like an awful mess! I am so embarrassed!” Angie blushed
“Oh don’t be! Listen how about tomorrow you and I get together for lunch!” Margery said

lilangel02371
May 1st, 2008, 09:56 PM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MROE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE lol

cherry_kaulitz
May 1st, 2008, 10:16 PM
awsome babe more plz

TexasGirlLovesTH
May 1st, 2008, 10:28 PM
OMFG!!!! Crazy Plot Twist!!!
But, wait! What's Bill gonna do? I need to know! Don't keep these things from me!! (AWWWWWWWW! Tom said he loves her!)

*German Royalty...wow. I never would have come up with something like that!*

amandaaraujo
May 2nd, 2008, 12:27 PM
omggggg wowwow keep writing and plez make bill be nice and stay with ,laurie :D :D :D

RetteMich
May 2nd, 2008, 07:47 PM
mehr bitte

TH_luv
May 2nd, 2008, 08:54 PM
woah! royalty?! woooow XD that's awesome!

ShadowIW
May 3rd, 2008, 12:21 AM
“Yes that would be great!” Angie said her face twitched
“Something wrong?” Margery asked
“Oh..well..no I don’t think so.” Angie lied
“Ok, well, I will meet you here at 11:30 tomorrow.” Margery said
“Sure!” Angie said
Then Margery left. Angie looked around think ‘Now I have to find a hotel! I don’t have that money! I cant go back! What do I do?’
Just then she heard a crack of thunder…it started to rain
Angie then found out that the Hall of records was closing so she had to go out in the rain.
The others were in the car when it started rain…they were still looking for Angie
“Listen…we are never going to find her this way!” Tom said “Stop the car. I am getting out to search for her on foot!”
“Tom, if you haven’t notice…it’s raining.” Georg said (he was driving)
“Well, If she is out there in the rain…I’ll be out there too!” Tom argued
Georg stopped the car then Tom got out. Jane and Laurie got out with him. Then started to walk around the town, becoming drenched with the rain.
Jane started to laugh and whimper
“What is it?” Tom asked
“When Angie and I were younger we would dress up funny and walk around the neighborhood on rainy days. We would sing and dance. How stupid we were, but we didn’t care we had fun. That was when we were 12-14 years old.” Jane sighed
“That sounds fun…what would you sing?” Laurie asked to keep the conversation going
“Well that’s just the thing…We had always kept a secret from the rest of you guys…we talked to each other through song.” Jane said brushing her wet hair out of her eyes.
“Through song? But how?” Tom asked
“Well listen….” She sang “Super Trouper lights are gonna find me
Shining like the sun.” then she thought she could hear Angie singing with her but her hopes were gone…she was just imagining.
“I still don’t get it.” Laurie said
“It would tell our moods…every word would mean something different..have a message.” Jane said
They heard another crack of thunder.
Angie walked down and ally thinking of what she could do where she could stay.
She walked passed an abandoned building then walked back to it.
This is where she would stay for the night. She walked around looked through rooms
‘I can make it.’ She thought
She found some paper and through it in a pile and then sat on it.
She just sat there waiting for sleep to set in, waiting for an escape from what was happening.
She cried, she cried for Tom and how he had to feel, she cried for Jane in knowing that she told Jane why she left and how she ran.
“Why?!” She screamed “I shouldn’t of run! I- I- I- I want my dad! I want – how do I know what I w-aa-nnt?!” She sobbed then she laid back and closed her eyes then fell into a deep sleep.

amandaaraujo
May 3rd, 2008, 12:36 AM
oh my this is getting reall good keep writing and update soon :o :shock:

ShadowIW
May 3rd, 2008, 01:05 AM
Her dreams were wild, one moment she was with Tom in a park. The next she was in a palace decorated with royal blues and purples. She was wearing a buttercup yellow dress, the one a princess would wear, with jewels and diamonds. Then a beautifully dressed woman… someone she could not name, walked to her, curtsied and said “There you are, follow me…” the woman left. Then Angie woke up. By now it was morning. (BTW…The others were home trying figure out where she was) She got up and walked out of the building. She stopped a man and asked the time. He said it was 10:30 am. Luckily she was close to the Hall of records to meet Margery. Once she got there she saw that Margery was early..
‘Great I cant run into the bathroom and wash my face now…’ Angie thought
When Margery got a look at her she gasped
“Angie! What happened to you? You look tired and your clothes are dirty!”
“well, you see I don’t have a place to stay. I mean I did, but something came up and now I don’t…it’s a long a terribly complicated story.” Angie replied
“Well, Angie you can stay with me. Before we go to lunch…lets get you fixed up. Do you have money?”
“Yes, I do. I have um 47 Euros.” Angie sighed
“Well come along then, why don’t we start our shopping? Tell me about how you ended up here.”
They walked and shopped, Angie like being with this new family member even though they had just met Angie felt as if she could trust Margery with her life. She told Margery about Tokio Hotel and how they got here. Once they got done with the shopping they went lunch and changed into her new clothes.
Prada was the key element….lots of it
“Thanks for the clothes!” Angie said looking fresher
“Your welcome! Oh how pretty you look! Now tell me what do you do in America?” Margery cocked her head
“I am a lawyer.” Angie said “What do you do?”
“I am a producer and photographer.” Margery replied
“Well that seems interesting.”
“Have you ever been a model?”
“Me?! A Model? No no… I am not that pretty. I mean my friends are so much prettier! I am too blah and dull.” Angie said shocked
“Oh, come now, you are beautiful! No wonder this Tom fellow and is twin like you! You have so many things going for you! Like your complexion! What about that radiant smile? Your Laugh? You cant tell me that your ugly. You look mysterious, sophisticated, charming, headstrong, sensitive, and brave, yes courageous! Just like our family! Our family was brave when on the thrown! When our family went into hiding from the ‘danger’ everyone thought that there was no one left! But there is! There is!”
Angie was dumbfounded

amandaaraujo
May 3rd, 2008, 01:20 AM
awww i wish i had a unknown cousin that was that nice :D

TexasGirlLovesTH
May 3rd, 2008, 10:00 AM
I think I know where this is going!! But I need more updates to be sure. ;)

ShadowIW
May 3rd, 2008, 08:58 PM
"You can see that by looking at me? and, if people find out that we are left in the family….what will happen?”
“Yes, by looking at you. There is so much to know. If people did find out about us… We could…well I don’t know…Queen Elizabeth has competition!”
The others were back at the house.
Tom was pacing back and forth in his room.
‘Where….Where…’ he thought
Then there was a knock at his door, Jane entered
“What do you want?” Tom’s words sounded harsh
“I want to teach you the code…the one that Angie and I made up.” She sat on the bed
“Why should I learn it?” Tom said closing the door
“She wants me to teach it to you…” Jane lowered her voice
“How do you know?” Tom said sitting next to Jane
“She told me in the letter I got from her.”
“What else did she say?” Tom raised his eyebrows
“She told me not to say until she writes again.”
Tom lowered his head “What is the first thing to learn?”
Jane pulled out a list of words, songs, lyrics. With them was a code.
“Memorize.” Jane said then she left.
Tom stared at it.

Bill was in the living room lying on the sofa mumbling “What did I do?”
Georg slept to get away from the stress
Laurie walked around solemnly
Kiki went out to run around the block
Macy stared out the window
Jane laid on her bed staring at the ceiling
Gustav was sitting in the kitchen
Later that day Angie asked Margery to go by where the others stayed, Angie wrote four more letters
One for Tom, One for Jane, One for Kiki, One for Bill.
Angie knew the others never met Margery so she could easily deliver the letters.
When they got there Angie hid in her seat the best she could while Margery went up to the door with the letters
When she rang the doorbell. Laurie is the one that answered.
“Hello?” Laurie said
“These are from her.” Margery said then left immediately

herseykiss
May 3rd, 2008, 09:03 PM
more plzz plzz plzz!!!

TexasGirlLovesTH
May 3rd, 2008, 09:04 PM
OH! Please add more! Come on! You know you want to!

ShadowIW
May 3rd, 2008, 09:40 PM
Laurie closed the door and thought it was odd that Angie only wrote 4 letters.
She gave the letters to Jane, Tom, Kiki and Bill.
Jane’s letter said:

“Dear J,
Please don’t worry! I am fine! I found out that I am related to German Royalty! Please don’t tell. You won’t hear from me…but you will see me when “I walk through the door like a debutant.”
“I can still recall our last summer.”
Ang!e”

Jane hid the letter with the other one. She knew it meant that Angie will be with them somewhere and that it will be like old times…but when and where she had no clue.

Tom’s letter said:

“Dear Tom,
I miss you! I hope you are staying strong. I hope you don’t hate me. Please….you will soon find out a wonderful thing! You will see me soon…I hope.
Your princess,
AngiE”

Kiki’s letter said:

“You will need the money that I gave you soon….”

Bill’s letter said:

“Bill, it’s not your fault that I left.
In Fact, I have forgiven you. Keep Laurie under control…she needs you. ‘She needs to sing a new song.’
Angie”

Everybody was quiet when they read their letters.

CrazyKenya16
May 3rd, 2008, 09:43 PM
MORE!!


sorry...I have anger issues lol

more plz

ShadowIW
May 4th, 2008, 12:28 AM
Tom told everyone that he thought it was strange that Angie capitalized the A and E her name.
Jane hid her letter with the other one and then realized that the “!” for the ‘I’ in Angie’s name meant something with the A and E… She shut the door to her room and tried to figure out what Angie meant.
She remembered that in their code “Walk through the door like a debutant” meant Fashion Show or Model. Then (as blunt as it may sound) Jane tried to remember the last summer she spent with Angie. Just by themselves and not with Laurie or Kiki or Macy. She remembered that one summer they tried out for a modeling agency, Angie made it, Jane didn’t, so Angie gave it up because she couldn’t do it with Jane.
‘So…she is a model?...’ Jane thought ‘Na…’ then she tried to figure out what the ‘AE!’ could mean she looked through all the songs then came across what it meant…
“Angel Eyes!” Jane yelled
Then she bolted out the door to get the others.
“Guys! Is there a fashion runway near here?” Jane asked to the others
The others stared at her strangely
“Ya. The Angel Eye Runway, It’s where all the greatest fashion designers go.” Gustav said
“Great!” Jane said then ran out the front door
“Is everyone going insane or is it just me?” David said
Jane ran as fast as she could to try to find where this Runway was.
Once she found it a she went to the ticket office to find out if Angie was there…
“Nein Miss, A woman named Angry isn’t here…” the man said dryly
“No…it’s A_N_G_I_E! not Angry….” Jane sounded annoyed
“No miss.” He said again
“Ok…was there anything left for me? My name is Jane.” She tried to sound calm
“Uhhh…” He moaned
“OK LISTEN! YOU BETTER STEP IT UP HERE! DO YOU HERE ME?! MY NAME IS JANE WAS THERE ANYTHING LEFT HERE FOR ME?!” Jane chewed the guy out
“Ya, here.” The guy handed her a pair a Prada sunglasses
Jane took them at went inside, She looked around but she couldn’t find Angie so she left
‘Hmm…’ she thought as she got home
She walked up the stairs and into her room. ‘Well, I know she is ok or she wouldn’t of gotten me these.’ Jane thought
Everyone thought that sense they couldn’t find Angie that they would report it to the police and fill out a missing persons report.

TexasGirlLovesTH
May 4th, 2008, 12:43 AM
Girl, what is going on?????
I'm confuseldedid... :mrgreen:

ShadowIW
May 4th, 2008, 12:47 AM
Girl, what is going on?????
I'm confuseldedid... :mrgreen:
you will see soon...and everything shall make sense

TexasGirlLovesTH
May 4th, 2008, 12:54 AM
I hope so...because like I said, I'm confuseldedid! :lol:

ShadowIW
May 4th, 2008, 10:06 PM
Margery took Angie back to her house.
When Angie got all settled in she took a shower and changed into her PJs, it was 9:30pm.
Margery told Angie good night and they went to bed.
But Angie had that dream again, except there was more to it. It started out like last time, But when she got to the part where she was in the Princess dress, Jane walked up to her and said “It was your choice.” Then she grabbed Angie’s hand and lead her to a different room and left her there. It had a huge window in it. You could see an old English country side. Then she heard someone walk in she turned and saw it was Tom, he looked upset. She ran over to him but he backed up.
He kept chanting “Why did you leave me? I thought you loved me.”
She tried to speak but she couldn’t then suddenly the wall started to crumble around her. She was alone now. She saw the ceiling fall in front of her. She felt a pain in her side. All she could do was scream.
When she woke up it was in the middle of the night.
She thought about what Jane said in her dream and how Jane was right.
‘Must go back…’ Angie thought as drifted back off to sleep
The next morning Margery woke her up.
“Hey, I need you to a model in a fashion show today. A friend called me and said a model of hers cant do it today and it’s the biggest show of the year!” Margery said
“Oh ok, I’ll help.” Angie said
Angie got up and got dressed then Margery took Angie to where the fashion show was.
Little did Angie know, that Margery noticed how much she missed the others so Margery invited the others to the fashion-show. The others didn’t know Angie would be there, Angie didn’t know that Tom would be there. When they got there Angie met two very nice models that would show her where to go, their names were Cally and Miranda. When the show started Cally went first then a couple other models.
Miranda and Angie were in the back. Miranda was telling Angie how to walk a turn. Then Miranda went out to go down the runway.
‘come on Angie….you can do it!’ Angie thought to herself she was next when Miranda walked off Angie took a deep breath and walked out on stage. She walked down the runway perfectly, she didn’t notice the others, but they noticed her. After the show Tom tried to find Angie. Margery saw him and told Angie to wait in the back room. Margery walked up, “Hello there. If you’re looking for who I think you’re looking for…she is in the back room here follow me.” Tom followed Margery to where Angie was. Margery opened the door for Tom then left. Tom walked in and shut the door quietly. Angie was looking out the window hand had her back to the wall so she didn’t know that Tom walked in. He just stood there for a moment looking at her and was relieved that she was ok.
Then Tom said “I am so glad I found you!”
Then Angie turned around “Tom!” then she ran into his arms
“Oh, I missed you….”she cried
“I missed you too!” He held her close “Why did you leave?”
“It’s hard to say.” She replied
Then they both sat down on the couch
“You can tell me why you left.” He said hold her hand and leaned back then she laid her head on top of his chest.
“I left for personal reasons.” She said
“What type of personal reasons?” He asked
“Personal family reasons.” She said coolly. Tom could tell that she lied and that she was scared
“Really? I know well enough to tell when you are lying.” Then they sat up “Why wont you tell me?”
“I just…” she looked at her feet
“Did you….did you cheat on me?” Tom choked on his words
“NO!” Angie said loudly “If I told you…you would have to promise you won’t tell Laurie or hurt anyone.”
“I promise. Now tell me what’s bothering you.” Tom kissed her cheek
“It’s about Bill…”
“What about Bill?”
“He wanted me to cheat on you….with him.” Angie said as she looked down at the floor
“BILL DID WHAT?!” Tom sounded mad “I’LL HURT HIM!”
“Tom you promised! He is your brother! Forgive him!” Angie said
Tom took a deep breath “Ok. I forgive him.”
“Good. I have missed you Tom. I also have great news!” Angie said grinning
“What is it angel?” Tom asked stroking her hair
“I am um…royal…like my family is German royalty…I am a real princess!”
“YOUR WHAT!?!?!?!?!?!?!” Tom looked like O.O “That’s great sweetie!” then he kissed her.

amandaaraujo
May 5th, 2008, 12:36 AM
hiihijhihihihihiihihihhin im so giggly today omg ......i love thisssssss pleeeeeeeeeez i begggggg yououuuuuu to write more tonight pleeeez im on my kneees hihiihihi pleeeeeeeeeeeez :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

TH_luv
May 5th, 2008, 09:26 AM
schweet! I hope tommy boy doesnt go home and treat Billy boy mean

amandaaraujo
May 5th, 2008, 12:16 PM
schweet! I hope tommy boy doesnt go home and treat Billy boy mean

i know billy his is kinda strange for him ami right or is it just me :?:

TexasGirlLovesTH
May 5th, 2008, 04:39 PM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
Tom better not beat the **** out of Bill... :evil:
Anywayziz...great update! Continue!!!!

ShadowIW
May 5th, 2008, 10:36 PM
Tom led Angie to where the others were. When they saw Angie they were so happy! Angie introduced them to Margery and told them about what she found out about her family.
“All hail…Princess Angie!” Gustav said and bowed
“Thank you, Thank you.” Angie said giggling
Angie thanked Margery for taking her in and told her that she would be in touch soon. Then she went back home with the others. Tom was in the room where the instruments were and was just hanging out when Bill walked in.
“Hey Tom.” Bill said
“Hey.” Tom said fast
“I’m sorry.” Bill said looking down at his feet
Then Angie walked past the door and realized that Tom and Bill were talking so she stood beside it and listened in.
“You should be sorry.” Tom said
“Tom…I don’t know what I was thinking. I was stupid.”
“Bill, How about you just- just- ugh! why did you do that?!” Tom yelled
“Tom lower your voice. I – I- I envied you.” Bill said quietly
“Huh?” Tom raised his eyebrow
“Well Angie is cool… She is interesting!” Bill explained
“You know. I forgive you….but I should be mad at you.”
“I think you should be mad too.”
“You totally freaked her out! You know I love her and you go and do that!” Tom looked off
Then Angie decided to walk into this conversation
“Boys.” She said and shut the door
Bill turned around “I got to go.” Angie grabbed his arm “Sit down.” She commanded
“ok.” He said then walked over to the couch
“You too Tom.” Angie said
Tom walked over to the couch
“Guys…ok well I know you two are upset at everything. And I have something to say, I forgive Bill. It was my choice to leave. I realize that was a very very stupid thing to do, but I should have told you Tom in the beginning.” Angie said
“Angie don’t blame yourself.” Bill stated
“Ja, babe , don’t.” Tom said
“Guys. Its over what was in the past was in the past.” Angie smiled “Are we ok now?”
“yes.” The boys said in unison
“This is what I like about you.” Tom said as he kissed her.

TH_luv
May 5th, 2008, 10:48 PM
yay! They forgave eachother! :D I ♥ this ff!

ShadowIW
May 6th, 2008, 01:28 PM
After Angie left the room Tom and Bill still talked
“Bill…How much do diamond rings cost?” Tom asked
“I don’t know...are thinking what I think your thinking?” Bill said surprised
“Um, what do you think I am saying?” Tom said
“Are you going to ask Angie to marry you?” Bill whispered
“yes.” Tom said
“Bwwwaaaaaa!” Bill yelped
“Shhhhhh!” tom said “Don’t ruin it.”
“How are you going to propose?” Bill asked
“Idk maybe go to a fancy restaurant. Put it in some champagne.”
“Tom that’s way too traditional.”
“What should I do then?” Tom started to play with his lip ring
“Uh….how about you do it at our next concert? Or in a park?” Bill suggested
“Well….she has to meet our mom and dad. I have to meet her family.”
“Ya your right.” Bill said then they heard Macy scream so they ran down to see what happened
“GUYS I HAVE WONDERFUL NEWS!!!” Macy said with her hands behind her back
“Ya we do….we- being spontaneous just got…married!” Georg said
Macy showed her left hand it had a wedding ring.
Everybody just stood there dumfounded
“Macy that’s terrific!!” Angie screamed as they jumped up and down.

After that wonderful news Tom and Bill told Laurie and Angie that their parents were coming over the next day.
“Wow! So sudden!” Laurie said “We will be happy to meet them.”
“Ah-huh.” Angie nodded
Angie’s eye twitched.
“Some thing wrong?” Tom asked
“My family is coming up in the next few days cause I told them I was Princess and such.” Angie said
“Great! Our families can meet each other!” Tom said as he squeezed her.

TH_luv
May 6th, 2008, 06:58 PM
zomg! thats awesome...but why do I feel that something bad is gonna happen? >.<

ShadowIW
May 6th, 2008, 11:56 PM
The next day Tom and Bill’s parents were supposed to come over. Angie was freaking out….just a little bit
“TOMMY! What if I act stupid!” Angie said holding on to Tom like the world would end
“Calm down, relax.” Tom said stroking her back
“Tom…what if they hate me?!” Angie said then the door bell rang “Oh boy!”
“Shh.” Tom went to get the door Angie tried to gather her cool
“Hey Mom!” Tom said opening the door.
“Tom my boy!” Tom’s Mother Simone said
“Ah! Tom! We missed you!” Tom’s step dad Gordan said
“Hey, I want you all to meet, Angie.” Tom said introducing them
“Wow! She is as beautiful as you said tom!” Gordan complemented Angie
Angie blushed
“Angie tell them your big news!” Tom smiled getting beside her
“Oh, well, I found out I am German Royalty…” She said
“Mom, Dad, she is Princess of Germany!” Tom said
Simone and Gordans face went blank

amandaaraujo
May 7th, 2008, 12:42 AM
oooohhhh no nothing bad just astoshment pllllleeeez dont make it like there famaily was in a fued cuz that will just ruin the moment plllleeezzz oh boy look at me im already assuming somthing thats prob. not going to happen hihihih please update reallll soon

ShadowIW
May 7th, 2008, 12:32 PM
“Your Princess of Germany?! But they said a long time ago that all the royal family had died or disappeared.” Simone said
“Well I was doing family research and found out that my family was the last one on the throne.” Angie blushed
“Really? Should we bow and say ‘Oh your majesty! What would like us to fo for you this fine day?’”Gordan said
They all laughed. Then Bill and Laurie walked up.
“Mom! Dad!” Bill said happily
“Bill!” They said
“Mom, Dad, this is Laurie.” Bill said
Laurie blushed
“Nice to meet you.” Simone said
“Well Mom and Dad, Laurie and Angie fixed dinner for all of us!” Tom said
They got the others and walked to the dining room to eat. Laurie and Angie were very nervous. They had never met their Boyfriends parents before.
After dinner they all sat in the living room talking.
“So tell me Angie are you going to put your family back on the thrown and rule Germany?” Simone asked kindly
“I don’t know. My family is back in America and I would be alone here. Because Laurie, Kiki, and Jane would have to go back eventually. I don’t know what Macy and Georg will do sense they randomly got married. So I would be in a big palace all by myself” Angie replied
“It wouldn’t be that bad. I mean we would come and visit!” Bill said
After that the guys were watching sports with Gordan. Jane, Kiki and Macy were watching the guys and would hang out in the kitchen. Laurie, Angie and Simone were sitting n the patio in the backyard admiring the stars.
“So Angie, I heard that your family is coming up to see you. Maybe Gordan and I could meet them.” Simone said
“Oh yes! That would be wonderful! I wish that—“ Angie was interrupted
“Don’t make another wish..please!” Laurie laughed
“Huh?” Simone asked
“Angie’s wishes always come true!’ Laurie said
They all laughed
“Anyway, How do you girls like Germany?”
Laurie was the first to answer “It is absolutely wonderful!”
“I like it too!” Angie said
“That’s good. Are the boys taking of you girls?” Simone asked
“Yes they are very sweet!” Laurie said and Angie nodded
“Well, sense you girls are here at their house….are you living with them?” Simone said that with a straight face
“What? No…no…no…” Angie said “I don’t live with boys. It was the way I was raised, you only live with a boy if you are married.”
“Angie! You could say that we are living with them I mean it’s been what 2-3 weeks?” Laurie said
“Ugh! Laurie, if you said that in front of my family…I would be taking away an insane institute.” Angie said then Simone laughed.
“Oh well. I can’t wait to meet your family!” Simone said then got up and left.
“Laurie do you think my family will like Tom?” Angie asked
“Ya….do you think Tom will like your family?” laurie replied
“What do you mean?”
“I mean I have met your family. They are nice people…but they act different than Tom and Bill’s family. Who in your family is coming any way?”
“My Uncles and Aunts, My Mom and my second cousin.”
“Have mercy.” Laurie mumbled

TexasGirlLovesTH
May 7th, 2008, 04:26 PM
OH YEAH!!! 8-) PLEASE tell me that Angie has a crazy redneck family!!!
Wait a minute... some of my characters have crazy redneck families. :lol: ( That means you, Ash! :mrgreen: )

amandaaraujo
May 7th, 2008, 04:27 PM
OMG aaaahhhh wow so many family members hihih update soon pleeeaasee

ShadowIW
May 7th, 2008, 04:38 PM
OH YEAH!!! 8-) PLEASE tell me that Angie has a crazy redneck family!!!
Wait a minute... some of my characters have crazy redneck families. :lol: ( That means you, Ash! :mrgreen: )

I never said that they were redncks! LOL so ya I can wait to see my family in ur story!

CrazyKenya16
May 7th, 2008, 04:42 PM
Princess??

Woah!

ShadowIW
May 7th, 2008, 10:51 PM
NOTE: I have hit writers block again..... I will post more as soon as I can... But I am going on vacation so you wont get any new stuff this weekend...unless I can do it from my phone or tomorrow if i have time

TH_luv
May 7th, 2008, 11:00 PM
ack!writers block=nicht guton! >.<

ShadowIW
May 8th, 2008, 10:37 PM
The next couple of days were the same. Tom and Bill’s parents would come over and hang out.
Then it came for Angie’s family to come visit.
They were going to stay at a hotel.
When Angie got them and brought them back to the house this time it was Tom that was nervous.
When Angie opened the door she said
“Here they are!”
Everybody including Tom and Bill’s parents went to the front door.
“Ok so, This is my Uncle Potter who is married to my Aunt Mary. This is my Uncle Marshall who is married to my Aunt Marissa. This is my mom, Katherine and my second cousin Dania.”

TexasGirlLovesTH
May 8th, 2008, 11:00 PM
OK, I'm only gonna do this because I lurve you we're practically writing eachothers' stories. ;)
I am giving you the weekend to come up with more chapters to your story. But I am expecting a few paragraphs by Monday evening! *cracks whip*
Otherwise...I'm gonna have to send Cinema Bizarre over to your place for a little visit. :twisted:
8-)

ShadowIW
May 11th, 2008, 08:29 AM
OK, I'm only gonna do this because I lurve you we're practically writing eachothers' stories. ;)
I am giving you the weekend to come up with more chapters to your story. But I am expecting a few paragraphs by Monday evening! *cracks whip*
Otherwise...I'm gonna have to send Cinema Bizarre over to your place for a little visit. :twisted:
8-)

I am writing! it's kinda hard to post cuz I am with friends... I cant post monday either....I WILL BE ON A PLANE..... just go type random words in microsoft.
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ShadowIW
May 13th, 2008, 08:41 PM
FAMILY EMERGENCY!!! CANT POST FOR AWHILE....

ShadowIW
May 16th, 2008, 06:18 PM
I promise more soon.....idk when exactly but I promise it will be soon....!!!

BTW
Thanks for your patenice while I had to deal with that emergency...

amandaaraujo
May 16th, 2008, 06:25 PM
dont worry youtake take care of your family emergency :) hope everthings ok ;)

lilangel02371
May 16th, 2008, 09:23 PM
Good job write whenever you can I absolutely love this ff!!!! funny how my bf just met my mom, aunt, and 2 cousins today lol

ShadowIW
May 17th, 2008, 12:30 AM
ok MORe!


Angie introduced them to each other. Angie’s family was extremely nice to everybody.
They all sat in the living room talking about music and jobs and stuff like that.
“So when will we all get to go to the Palace?” Aunt Mary said
“Oh tomorrow. Unless you all rather stay there….Margery gave me the key and said there would be a surprise, in fact, yes ALL of us will stay there tonight!” Angie smiled
“Angie-May, your too sweet!” Her Uncle Potter said (Angie-May was what he called her)
“Even us?” Simone asked
“Yes! Everyone!” Angie said
“Awesome!” Laurie squeaked
Then everyone brought a suitcase to the palace
This was Angie’s first time seeing it too.
When they walked in it was about 6:30pm Angie was the first one to like freak-out with happiness
“O MY WORD IT IS HUGE!!! Then she dropped her bag, took her shoes off and ran around the Grand Entry.
Jane joined in followed by Bill and Gustav.
The others just laughed
“Do you not see this space?!” Jane said doing a triple back hand spring
“Lets go explore the rest of it!” Bill said
Then Tom, Georg, Gustav, and Bill went one way and Angie, Laurie, Jane, Macy and Kiki went another.
Angie’s family and Tom’s family were left alone (O_o lol)
“Well, it is wonderful to meet you.” Aunt Marissa said to Simone and Gordan
“I can see one of my sons like your little Angie.” Simone giggled
“Oh really now?” Angie’s mom asked “Which one?”
“Tom.” Gordan replied
Then they heard the Girls run in they were all screaming “Look at Angie!!!”
Then Angie ran out behind them. She was wearing a princess dress that was Blue with a diamond tiara.
“I look like Cinderella!” She yelled then twirled around
“We always said you would be a princess!” Her Uncle Marshall said walking up to her “May I please have this dance?” He joked
Then they started to dance.
The boys walked in.
“Hey Cindi!” Georg teased as they walked in.
Then Laurie grabbed Bill’s hand and they started doing the waltz around the room.
“May I cut in?” Tom asked to Uncle Marshall
“You may.” He replied
Then Angie and Tom danced around the room also.
“You all should see my room!! It’s like whoa!” Angie said to everyone while they danced
“How come it’s your room?” Kiki asked
“Because it says ‘Princess Angie’s room’ on the sign that’s on the door!” Laurie replied

TH_luv
May 17th, 2008, 12:40 AM
lmao awesome! :D hahaha cinderella! xD mehr,bitte?

lilangel02371
May 20th, 2008, 06:42 PM
THAT WAS AWESOMETASTALICIOUSNESS!! LMAO! MORE WHENEVER YOU CAN!

amandaaraujo
May 21st, 2008, 01:48 AM
ahhh thats sounds like fun!!!!!!

ShadowIW
May 24th, 2008, 11:58 PM
What can I say? I kinda have an excuse for not wrighting......EXTREMELY BAD GRADE on BIG TEST.........I am mad at myself, so mad that I have wrighter's block......im thinking...

ShadowIW
May 31st, 2008, 12:15 AM
Hey peoples....I just got to say. Thanks for your pateince! I am writing more!

TWIXX
June 2nd, 2008, 11:08 PM
~new reader~
this is really good!!!!
dang i cant believe she a princess!!!!
they is soo crazy!!
i cant wait to see what happens next!!!!
you have to update this soon!!!!
bitte!!

ShadowIW
June 4th, 2008, 08:19 PM
Later that night when they all went to bed, Tom had trouble sleeping. He tossed and turned; when he finally got to sleep he had a nightmare about Angie. He dreamt that he couldn’t find her and that he was running in the woods. Then he heard her scream and he turned and saw a tired, breathless, and ragged Angie. He looked at her face and she looked at him then she closed her eyes and fell backwards onto the ground. He ran to her when he brushed her hair out of her face she mumbled “you have to let me go.”
Then he woke up sweating. He rubbed his eyes and went to take a walk around the palace.
While Tom was doing that Angie was still playing dress-up with the ball gowns that she found. When she did that she looked in the back of the closet and found an old trunk, she pulled it out and looked through it.
She found:
3 corsets
4 petticoats
9 more dresses
The dresses she found were more beautiful than the others.
She decided to try them on, but just by looking at them she knew they were smaller than what her size was but then she remembered the corsets. She put a corset on then a petticoat then a lilac colored dress on.
Wouldn’t it be lovely if I was a size 2 like Laurie? Tom probably likes me out of pity…
Then she thought how pretty her friends were and how weird she looked, but those thoughts didn’t stay there for long. The dress was beautiful on her and because of that she walked around the palace.
She twirled around the grand entry and dance with a pretend person on the balcony. Then she looked at a clock on the wall. It said that it was 12am
Is that all??? She thought
She was thirsty so she went to the kitchen, when she got there she saw Tom standing next to the counter.
“Tom? What are you doing here? Up so late?” She asked
“I should be asking you the same question.” Tom said flatly
“Well, I was playing dress up!” Angie giggled then she walked up to him and held him tight, then she looked up at him, he wasn’t showing any emotion
“Now, Tom Kaulitz, can you tell me why you are here?” She tried to sound happy
“I had a bad dream. That’s it.” He patted her on the back as if she was a child and went to sit down.
Angie straightened the lilac dress
“Tom, what’s wrong? You can tell me.” She went to sit down next to him
“Let’s just get off of it!” Tom snapped at her
She had a shocked look on her face
“Ok, then, um, do you like my dress?” she got up and twirled
“Ya, you don’t look at big as you usually do….” Tom said then he covered his mouth when he realized what he said. Angie just stood there silently.
Tom got up and rushed over to her “I didn’t mean that- the dream it made me-.”
Angie pulled away from him
“Is that the way you really feel?” she whispered
“No, no, no…nein baby, I think your pretty just as you are.” he smiled

tell me what you think!!!

TH_luv
June 4th, 2008, 08:28 PM
STUPID TOM! >.< I oughtta slap you! better yet *slaps Tom* now go try and comfort Angie more >.< you should know to NEVER say something like that to a girl! >.<

ShadowIW
June 4th, 2008, 10:45 PM
More people!

She turned away “Really?! So you think that this bump in my nose is pretty? You think that me being a size 6 is pretty? When you KNOW that you could have any girl in Germany, you choose me? What did you choose me for, huh?! Because you didn’t have any other girl to choose from at that club that we met at??!” tears started to swell up in her eyes.
“Nein! Don’t say those things! I want you- I need you Angie!” he said
“I honestly don’t know what to say to you. I thought that you loved me.” Angie started to choke on her words, tears rolled down her cheeks.
“Angie! I do! That dream was about you…” Tom tried to wraps his arms around her
She pulled away again. “Get away, I have a 10 foot bubble space. If you love me say it to my face. I really thought that you would care.”
Then she walked away leaving Tom in the kitchen totally dumbfounded. She could believe what he had said to her, after everything, she just didn’t understand. She walked into her room changed into her PJs and sobbed into pillow all night, by the time she went to sleep it was 6am. The next morning the others didn’t know what Tom and Angie were doing. It was 12pm and they still haven’t gotten out of their beds. Angie’s mom went to go check on her. She lightly tapped on the door and then opened it. She quietly walked in and shut the door behind her. Angie was sleeping soundly.
She nudged Angie “Angie-May, wake up.”
Angie moaned “mom?”
“Yes, little one, it’s me.”
“I feel so bad.”
“Does your stomach hurt?”
“No Mom. Tom hurt my feelings.” Angie yawned
“Tell me what happened.” Her mother asked
Angie began to tell her mom the story, while that was going on Bill checked on Tom and Tom told Bill his side of the story. Bill convinced Tom to get dressed and get up, but when Angie’s mother heard what happened she was angry (like mother lion protecting her young mad…) She let Angie sleep some more.
When she walked into the casual living area she saw everybody there including Tom.
“Tom! What did you do to my daughter!” She said gritting her teeth
“I didn’t mean too!” Tom said in defense
“You NEVER EVER talk to MY little girl that way. DO YOU HEAR ME?! BECAUSE I CAN GET ANGRIER THAN THIS!”
“What did he do?” Simone asked
“He called Angie fat!” Angie mom exclaimed
“HE DID WHAT?!” Simone said then turned to Tom “You young man are going to apologize!”
“I did!” Tom said
“You didn’t do it enough! If she still isn’t over it! Now go to her!” Simone yelled
Tom left to go talk to Angie
Then their mom’s turned to each other
“We rock….” Angie’s mom laughed
“You bet we do!” Tom’s mom joined

ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 5th, 2008, 04:40 PM
omg i cant believe Tom said that........dayum those two moms are good.....please update soon

dragoness573
June 5th, 2008, 06:18 PM
Love your story, but don't you need to post more stuff?
-VIP :lol:
Maybe don't rush.

ShadowIW
June 5th, 2008, 10:13 PM
Love your story, but don't you need to post more stuff?
-VIP :lol:
Maybe don't rush.
OH MY WORD! you're here!! I cant beleive you got signed up!!!
I better watch out then...LOL
Have FUN on the fun!

ShadowIW
June 5th, 2008, 10:24 PM
short but emotional....

When Tom got to Angie’s room he heard her sobbing through the door. He felt extremely sorry for what he said to her. He opened the door and walked in quietly then shut the door. He looked at the huge canopy bed that she was on. Angie didn’t notice that he was there. He went down to sit on the edge of her bed. Her back was to the ceiling and she was face down in the pillow sobbing, she was dressed in jeans and at regular T-shirt, her hair was a little messy but she didn’t care, neither did tom. Tom had to fight back his own tears while he started to stroke Angie’s back. She looked up in surprised
“Get out!” she whimpered
“No, I am here to apologize.” Tom said strongly
“I don’t need to hear it.” She said as she turned her head and put it back on the pillow
“Yes you do. You need to know that I do think you are beautiful.” He said
“No, no I am not.” She whispered
“Quit thinking like that, listen I didn’t even notice that you had a bump in your nose until you mentioned it. It isn’t that noticeable, and you being a size 6 is fine! I don’t like those girls who are size 0 and show there ribs.”
“You- You think so?” She glanced at tom but looked away
“You are magnificent.” Tom whipped away one of her tears then she rolled over and looked up at him.
He had started to shed a few tears but not a lot.
“Oh Tom…” She sat up to hold him
They held each other for a few minutes. Then Angie put her head on Tom’s shoulder.
“Tom, I tired of crying….” She whispered
“I know you are, you have been through a lot.” He whispered back
“Tom, I know you have always said you loved me and-” she stopped
“And what?” he said looking down at her
“I love you too.” She gave a small smile and then Tom held her tighter

ShadowIW
June 6th, 2008, 12:11 AM
I was on a roll...............i have stopped.............. *goes insane*

TH_luv
June 6th, 2008, 07:36 PM
aaaawwww! >.< they're together again!...and you need to kill that writers block you have! >.< cuz they're never pleasent!

dragoness573
June 6th, 2008, 08:57 PM
Hate writer's block
Stop with the writer's block
Must know what happens :shock:
-vip-

ShadowIW
June 7th, 2008, 01:12 AM
Ok so I have awesome news...like I always do...LOL anywaysI am working on more and it will br GOOD if NOT GREAT! Like stun you peoples to peices!

TH_luv
June 7th, 2008, 01:29 AM
Ok so I have awesome news...like I always do...LOL anywaysI am working on more and it will br GOOD if NOT GREAT! Like stun you peoples to peices!
YAY! writers block is gone! XD Im so happy right now :D

ShadowIW
June 7th, 2008, 11:12 PM
There is more but here is a lovely part: ♥♥♥♫
After that they got up and walked out of the room after Angie brushed her hair.
When the others saw Angie and Tom, Jane said “Aww. They’re back together!”
“Hey Angie. Margery called.” Her cousin Dania said
“What did she have to say?” Angie asked
“They want to officially crown you!!!!” They all screamed
Angie’s mouth dropped “Me?! When?! What?!”
“Yes! They want to do it next week! She said you need ‘royal’ training.” Her Uncle Potter said
“Well then, that is awesome!” Macy said
“But, there is a small catch….you have to be here…alone.” Her mom said
“What?!” Angie said
“Ya, you have to start your training today. So that means we have to leave today.” Her mom said
Angie and Tom squeaked
“Don’t worry, you’ll see each other again.” Gustav joked
When it was time for them to leave, Margery came over and Angie said goodbye.
After a while Margery and Angie were going through the crowns and dresses.
“What about this one for tomorrow?” Angie said holding up a pink dress
“No, wear this.” Margery handed Angie a butter colored dress
“I will look like a stick of butter.” Angie said
“No. You just have to wear it right.” Margery replied
They went on like that for the rest of the day.
The next morning Angie woke up and got dresses in the dress that was butter colored, she fixed her hair and walked into the kitchen. The phone started to ring.
“Hmm, Hello?” Angie said
“Hey, how are you? How was your night?” It was Tom
“Tom, I’m fine. How are you? Did you miss me?” Angie giggled
“I couldn’t sleep. Of course I miss you, I was worried about you.” Tom said
“Tom, you shouldn’t have. You know that I will be fine.” Angie said yawning
“Babe, are you tired?” Tom said
“Tom Kaulitz,” Angie started “You don’t need to worry about me.”
“Yes. I do.” He said
“No you don’t.”
“Yes.”
“No.”
“Yes!”
“No! Babe! Stop!” Angie started laughing
“I love it when you laugh.” Tom flirted
“Ugh, I am wearing the weirdest dress.” She stated
“What color is it?” He asked
“Butter yellow.” She said
“I wish I could see it! I am now going to call you butter from now on.” He laughed
“No! Don’t you dare!” Then Margery walked in “Hey, can I call you back?”
“Sure….butter!” Then tom hung up
Angie started to laugh.
Margery looked at her “See? You look wonderful! Your first lesson today is grammer.”
“ahhh….I hate grammar!”
“All you have to do is speak it…” Margey said
Angie made a face. “Ok.”
They practice until Angie was tired of talking. Which is very rare.
That night when Angie went to bed she heard a tap at her window.
She walked over to the window and saw…..guess who… Tom
She opened the window
“What is it?” she asked
“You never called me back!” Tom said
“So you came here? You’re not supposed to be here!” she said putting some hair behind her ear
“Come down!” Tom said
“I am in my pajamas!”
“I don’t care!” he smiled
“I care!”
“Then put something on!”
Angie ran over to her dresser and changed into a t-shirt and jeans
“How do you expect me to come down without the alarm going off?”
“Jump out the window!” Tom said
“What?! Didn’t Bill sing ‘DON’T JUMP’?!” she said shocked
“I’ll catch you!” He said
“Then how do I get back in?”
“Quit asking questions! You’ll climb up the wall!”
“I am a lawyer! Its my job! How come you cant climb the wall?”
“Because! I am afraid of heights! Now jump!”
“You better catch me!” she said as she started to climb out the window
Tom braced himself as Angie jumped, He caught her.
When she was in his arms he kissed her like there was no tomorrow.

tokiohotel26
June 8th, 2008, 09:41 PM
“What?! Didn’t Bill sing ‘DON’T JUMP’?!” she said shocked

~new reader~
aww that was a cute chapter
and this part cracked me up
i almost woke up my parents!

ShadowIW
June 8th, 2008, 10:43 PM
“What?! Didn’t Bill sing ‘DON’T JUMP’?!” she said shocked

~new reader~
aww that was a cute chapter
and this part cracked me up
i almost woke up my parents!

YAY!! new reader!!!!

TH_luv
June 8th, 2008, 11:11 PM
lmaorofl! “What?! Didn’t Bill sing ‘DON’T JUMP’?!” she said shocked

lmao I laughed at that part XD mehr,bitte?

herseykiss
June 9th, 2008, 01:04 PM
aww how cuteee omggg ...**** why cant my dude be like that...he can carryy me on his bak and he can so catch me..i guess he scared of my dad

ShadowIW
June 9th, 2008, 03:39 PM
“Tom.” She said after tom kissed her
“What?” he said
“Well, you are going to be there when I am crowned right?” she asked
“Yes, why would ask?”
“I don’t know, I just have a really bad idea about this crowning thing.”
“Well, I will be there, I promise you that.”
“thanks.” She said
Then he started to kiss her again.
Out of the corner of her eye she saw a light turn on in Margery’s room
“I got to go! Be careful going home. ” she whispered
“Ok, I will, be careful climbing that wall. I love you Angie.” Tom said as he left
“I love you too!” she replied then she walked to the wall and started to climb it once she got back to her room and changed into her PJs, Margery walked in, Angie pretended that she was asleep.
“Come on Angie, I know you were with Tom.” Margery said
“How did you know?” Angie said
“I saw you out my window.” She said
“oh…well.” Angie didn’t know what to say
“Listen, Angie, its ok. I know I don’t like the ‘you can’t see anyone’ rule either. I just don’t want you getting hurt marrying someone you don’t love.”
Angie looked puzzled “What? I mean, Tom hasn’t proposed….and I love him, but what do you mean marry someone I don’t love?”
“I mean,” Margery sighed “You have to marry someone of royal blood. The Duke of Berlin is your age and well….”
“And well what?” Angie said worried
“He has already asked for your hand in marriage. You have to agree.”
“No! NO! NO! No I don’t! There must be a way out of this! I need to..I need to…um Call people!”
Just then she jumped out of her bed and ran to the nearest phone that was in the hallway
First she called her mom:
“Mom! MOM! MOMMY!!” she said
“WHAT? Is something wrong??”
“Yes, I have to marry the duke of Berlin!” she said
“What? Why is that---oh boy, can they do that to you?”
“It’s the stupid law mom! I don’t want to marry him! Get me out of it!” she said
“I will see what I can do. I love you Angie-May”
“I love you too mom.”

Then she called Jane (she was saving tom for the end):
“J! I am in huge trouble!”
“huh?” Jane was half asleep
“I HAVE TO GET MARRIED!” Angie yelled into the phone
“WHAT?! TO WHO?!” Jane was now awake
“SOME STUPID DUKE!”
“They just cant do that! Don’t worry! I will think of something!”
“Jane, Tell Kiki, Macy, and Laurie.”
“Ok.” Jane hung up

Finally she called Tom:
“TOM!” she screamed
“WHAT?! What is it?!” he asked
“I have to get married!”
“what do you mean?”
“I mean, they are making me marry a duke because of tradition!”
“No they won’t! I will find a way to get you out of this! Trust me sweety.”
“TOM! I DON’T WANT TO MARRY THE DUKE OF BERLIN!”
“The duke of Berlin?.... man, they want you to marry him? Do you know how many of his girlfriends disappeared under mysterious circumstances?”
“Tom that’s not helping!”
“Ok ok just calm down…go get some sleep and I will tell the others.”
Then they hung up.

TH_luv
June 9th, 2008, 03:44 PM
zomg say what?! aaah!I need mehr! >.< this is way to much!You can't stop there! :shock: :shock: :shock: mehr,bitte bitte bittteeeee!!!

ShadowIW
June 9th, 2008, 03:52 PM
zomg say what?! aaah!I need mehr! >.< this is way to much!You can't stop there! :shock: :shock: :shock: mehr,bitte bitte bittteeeee!!!

cliff hanger!!!!

DUN DUN DUN!

TH_luv
June 9th, 2008, 03:57 PM
cliff hanger!!!!

DUN DUN DUN!
neeein! cliff hangers are eviiil! >.< lolz Im too impatient

ILuvKaulitzTwins4E
June 9th, 2008, 04:00 PM
omg omg omg...i need more please write more.....she cant mary some duck....i mean duke....please write more

ShadowIW
June 9th, 2008, 10:49 PM
The next morning Angie had to meet the Duke of Berlin.
Which was a VERY bad idea because of 2 reasons:
1. Angie was brain dead that day
2. Angie loved Tom not this Duke of Berlin guy
When he came over he was dressed in a suit and tie. He had thick wavy dark hair, blue eyes and had the look of a prince. Angie was dressed in a nice looking black dress.
They meet in the Grand living area.
“Hello, Princess Angie.” The Duke Bowed and kissed her hand
Smooth… Angie thought
“Hello, Duke.” She said as she curtsied
“Please you may call me James. My full name is James Henry Von Dued, and yours is? ”
“As you wish James. My full name is Angie Rachel Cambridge.”
“ Ah, what a lovely name! I think ‘Angie Von Dued’ just rolls off the tongue. Don’t you agree?”
Angie smiled “Oh, yes lovely.” She lied
Von Dued??? EWWW! She thought
“Now my darling,” James started “Let us sit and get to know each other.”
They sat together on the couch. Angie spoke first
“Can you play an instrument?” she asked
“Yes, the violin.”
“Oh, how wonderful.” She said
“Tell me Angie, how many relationships have you had?” He asked
Angie thought it was a very stupid question so she lied about the number
“Around six or seven. One of my ex boyfriends just got out of prison!”
He looked shocked, she smiled “Something wrong? How many relationships have you had?”
He coughed “Nothing’s wrong, I have had 4 other relationships. How did your ex get in prison?”
“He abused me. I sued him.” She said.
“Do you have an occupation?” James changed the subject
She wasn’t about to tell him what she did for a living
“No.” she said
“How did you get here then?” he asked
“Some Very close friends brought me.”
“How nice.” He said
There was a dead silence for about one minute when the door bell rang
“one moment.” Angie said standing up
She walked towards the door
When she opened the door it was Kiki in a french maid outfit
“May I help you?” Angie said trying not to laugh
“Oui, Oui!” Kiki started her lie in a fake French accent “I am Clare for live in maid service! I was called by a Margery.”
“Oh! Yes! I remember now!” Angie looked over at James “You will have to excuse me, I have to show her where she will be staying.”
James nodded politely
“Follow me Clare.” Angie said
Kiki picked up 2 bags and followed Angie to a guest room.
When they got in the room Angie couldn’t help but let out a giggle.
Kiki looked at her “Oh, Tu es intelligente! (you are intelligent) Do you underestimate the power of Frenchyness!” she said in that fake accent
“Kiki, I am so glad you are here! I have to be stuck in the grand living area with Mr. Von Dued..ick!”
“Angie, Im here for you, the plan is falling into action.”
“What plan?” Angie raised an eyebrow
“Not now I will have to tell you later you got to get back to Mr. Von Cheesey or what ever his name is.”
Angie walked back to James
“Sorry for that interruption.” She smiled at James
“That’s ok, come sit next to me.” James had a flirty looking face on him
Angie sat down.
James kissed her on the lips.
Angie hated it, she felt as if she was cheating on Tom, which she wasn’t! She knows that James is only after her money and wants his name to go down in history. Oh how she hated this feeling that felt like she was backstabbing Tom, The thing that hurt the most was that she couldn’t do anything but marry this Von Dued guy. Tom was her true love and it was killing her that she couldn’t see him and that she wasn’t allowed to love Tom.

TH_luv
June 9th, 2008, 11:12 PM
holy shnizz!That's bad! >.< she cant marry him!She cant!If he only wants her money,he will KILL for her money to go to him! >.< they've gotta save Angie! mehr,bitte?

ShadowIW
June 10th, 2008, 01:53 AM
After that miserable time…. She found out that she had to meet his parents the next day.
That night Tom came again and they did the whole climbing out the window and junk.
As soon as tom caught her again she held him tight.
“Angie, tell me what happened.” Tom said kissing
“That duke kissed me….” She said “I feel so bad about it.”
“I know you didn’t mean it….you were just going along with it.”
“I know but I feel so rotten! He wants my money! I don’t want to be Angie Von Dued!” she was sobbing into his shoulder, he was wearing a jacket.
He took his jacket off.
“I want you to have this.” He said handing it to her
She put it on and held him again
“Tom! Tom! What are we going to do?” She asked
“I have a plan…..when are you getting crowned?”
“Next Friday, I will be miserable….I am miserable, Tom I need you!...” Angie gulped
“Honey, what are you thinking?”
“What if he tried to kill me to get my money?”
“No, I wont let that happen, I am NOT going to loose you.” He said
Then they kissed each other good bye for the night.

TH_luv
June 10th, 2008, 02:08 AM
oh snaps!Dont let Angie die!Tom you've gotta save her!She needs you! >.< mehr,bitte?

TexasGirlLovesTH
June 10th, 2008, 10:33 AM
:shock: :shock: :shock: *faint*

I come back from my cruise...and you make me faint. What's the deal??

I'm kidding. I missed you! And everyone!! And the stories as well!!

I'm just glad to be home! :)

ShadowIW
June 10th, 2008, 11:40 AM
:shock: :shock: :shock: *faint*

I come back from my cruise...and you make me faint. What's the deal??

I'm kidding. I missed you! And everyone!! And the stories as well!!

I'm just glad to be home! :)


more to come.....
you will love the it1!!


it makes me go:

BWHAHAHAHAHAHAH!

:D

ShadowIW
June 10th, 2008, 03:40 PM
The next day when Angie got up and got dressed Kiki was dusting the living room furniture.
“Uh..Kik- I mean Clare.” Angie said
“Oui, Oui!” Kiki replied
“Um….what are you ‘dusting’?”
“Le flowers.” Kiki said laughing
Angie leaned her head in closer and whispered “Did you put Le camera in Le flowers?”
“Oui! Oui!” Kiki replied
Angie walked past the flowers
“Good job.” She said
“Merci!” Kiki smiled
Angie walked back up to Kiki and whispered “Where does it go to?”
Kiki looked around and whispered “It goes to the boy’s house.”
Then the doorbell rang.
Kiki went to answer
It was James and his parents.
Kiki led them to the grand living area were Angie was.
They said their ‘hellos’ and all.
“Well, Angie, darling! I just cant wait until you are my daughter-in-law.” His mother said
“Oh well thank you! I cant wait till you’re my mother –in-law!” Angie lied
“can you play an instrument? Want my son to be with someone musical.” His father said
“Oh, yes! I can play the piano and the guitar.” She replied with a radiant smile
“Guitar?” His father said “Do you play acoustic?”
“Yes, but mostly electric!” Angie was trying to act weird/rude/ignorant
******
While that was going on the boys were watching in through the hidden camera in the flowers.
“Ok, so, what are we going to do now?” Bill asked Tom
“We are going to listen in on the dukey boy and see what we can do with the info.”
“Tom, Bill, ok so…Are we in some spy ring?” Andreas said (the boys asked him to help)
“nein but we do have the latest spy gear and disguise kits!” Georg said
Then Laurie walked up “Ya Kiki is supposed to be the maid. Gustav is going to be the butler!”
Tom was watching the screen that was on Angie “Shush!” he said
Everyone turned to look, James parents weren’t in the room…Kiki was probably showing them around the place
Then they heard James say
“So, Angie when are you going to have that bump in your nose removed?” he asked
Everyone was shocked, Tom wanted to hit the guy
Angie didn’t look like she was hurt “I’m not, when are you going to get your acne cleared up?”
James had a stunned look on his face.
Everyone was laughing and cheered for Angie’s victory
“She brings the lightning down.” Laurie said giving Jane a fist bump
“I will hurt him!” Tom yelled
“Tom, settle down.” Gustav said
*******

So after she met his parents and had that miserable time….She had to have ‘quality’ time James.
So they went hunting… 
(Angie is a good hunter!)
They brought guns…and bow and arrows, James suggested it.
“James, can you use those arrows??” Angie said in a fake flirty way
“Yes, would you like to see me use them?” He said
“Oh yes! Then maybe I could try.” She said batting her eye lashes
He looked around and saw his pack of gear then he dug in it and found a can of spray paint
“You brought spray paint?” she asked raising eyebrow
“Yes, you never know when you will need it.” He made a target on a tree then got the bow and arrows
When he set it up he pulled back then released it.
It was an inch from the bullseye. Then Angie tried it.
She set it up, concentrated on the target, pulled back then released.
She hit the bullseye. James looked at her “Have you ever done this before?!”
“No.” She said innocently

TexasGirlLovesTH
June 10th, 2008, 03:43 PM
BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

ShadowIW
June 10th, 2008, 04:35 PM
Hey Y'all! Ok I just got to say (and I feel bad for saying this) I am takeing a break for a little while....cuz well, I feel bad, like extremely bummed. I dont know why, but please bear with me for the next few days. I just feel misserable right now. Please dont hate me! and well ya.

TH_luv
June 10th, 2008, 04:42 PM
ahaha!awesome chapter! :lol: she showed him!

and I dnu hate you,if your depressed,then taking a break is probably a good idea

lilangel02371
June 10th, 2008, 06:34 PM
THAT WAS AMAZING!! CAN I PLEASE HAVE SOME MORE!!? I LOVED MORE WHENEVER YOU CAN OKIES?

ShadowIW
June 10th, 2008, 11:46 PM
Hey Y'all! Ok I just got to say (and I feel bad for saying this) I am takeing a break for a little while....cuz well, I feel bad, like extremely bummed. I dont know why, but please bear with me for the next few days. I just feel misserable right now. Please dont hate me! and well ya.

OK so I am better...
ick...
well for those who know *wink wink*....I say ick.

(Hope you get it....)

Either ways I am going to be able to write more!!!! cuz well...something just gave me more free time!

so new chapter tomorrow!

TH_luv
June 10th, 2008, 11:54 PM
Hey Y'all! Ok I just got to say (and I feel bad for saying this) I am takeing a break for a little while....cuz well, I feel bad, like extremely bummed. I dont know why, but please bear with me for the next few days. I just feel misserable right now. Please dont hate me! and well ya.

OK so I am better...
ick...
well for those who know *wink wink*....I say ick.

(Hope you get it....)

Either ways I am going to be able to write more!!!! cuz well...something just gave me more free time!

so new chapter tomorrow!

yay! :D

lilangel02371
June 11th, 2008, 12:34 PM
OH MEIN GOTT!!! YAYSKY!!! THATS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ShadowIW
June 11th, 2008, 01:28 PM
He got closer to her and kissed her again.
And again she felt awful for it.
Then he put the bow and arrows up.
“I think our children will be beautiful…” He said as they walked along
“Ch- Chil- Children?” Angie choked on her words
“Yes, you don’t want children?” He asked raising an eyebrow
“um, well I wasn’t really thinking of them now, I mean we are 18…” She said calmly
Inside she could have screamed “If you had children, what would you want?”
“I want at least 3 boys. Maybe one or two girls for you.” James said
“So you want 4 or 5 children?”
“Yes, I think you will do a good job taking care of them and raising them.”
She gulped and thought Me?! Raise 5 children…oh if he thinks that then he has another thing coming! Who is he anyway? Henry the eighth? Wait….didn’t King Henry the 8th kill his wives?!
“Sure! How fun!” She said then she tripped and fell, James turned around and saw her rubbing her ankle.
“Oh, did you fall?!” He said with fake concern
“No, I love getting face down in dirt!” She said
“ Here, I’ll carry you back.” He picked her up and carried her back to the palace
When they walked in they saw Kiki talking to Gustav , Bill and Laurie.
If you think their cover was blown, it wasn’t.
They were wearing disguises, like Gustav, he was dressed as a butler
Bill had his hair tucked up in a chef’s hat and wasn’t wearing makeup, he was dressed as a chef
Laurie was another maid who would work with Kiki.
When they saw James carry Angie in Kiki said
“Oh, Non! Non! Mademoiselle Angie!”
James saw Gustav and said “Here, carry her to her room, have her change into something more comfortable, when she is ready tell me. Uh, Clare, get her some ice for her ankle.”
They followed his commands, Bill and Laurie walked into the kitchen.
When Gustav and Angie got to her room he put her on the bed
“How is everything?” he asked
“I think…I think he is going to hurt me. He wants me to raise 5 children by myself!” she moaned
“Ugh! how miserable! Ok where are your clothes?” he asked
“Look in the dresser over there, give me my sweats.” She said
He handed them to her “Kiki and I will be back shortly with ice for that ankle.”
“Give me an aspirin, I don’t care if it is a sleeping one or non-sleeping. And- And a ice-pack for my head, please” she asked
“You bet.” He said leaving the room.
She got changed and laid back down the Gustav, Kiki, and James walked in
“Here you are Miss. Angie,” Gustav said give her the pill and ice-pack
Then Kiki put the other ice pack on Angie’s ankle
Then Gustav and Kiki left leaving James and Angie alone.

TexasGirlLovesTH
June 11th, 2008, 01:53 PM
NONONONO!! :o Don't leave him alone with Angie!!
I have a bad feeling about this... :?

TH_luv
June 11th, 2008, 02:37 PM
oh snaps!whats gonna happen?!Is James going to admitt that he hates her?!that hes gonna kill her?!What's gonna happen?! >.< mehr,bitte?

lilangel02371
June 11th, 2008, 07:16 PM
uh oh this doesnt sound good poor Tom he's the one having to see all this and hes not able to do anything

ShadowIW
June 12th, 2008, 03:14 PM
BWAAAAAAAAAAAA!
:lol:




Angie shut her eyes, the pill Gustav gave her was a sleeping one
James sat on the edge of her bed.
“Hope you get better.” He tried to hold her hand but she moved it before he could reach it.
“James, darling, can you please hand me my Bible that’s on the dresser?” she asked
He got up and got it for her then he handed it to her.
“James, are you a Christian?” She asked
“Um, yes.” He lied
“Really? Do you know what it says in the Bible in the book of Psalms? Chapter 116?” she asked again
“Yes…” he lied again
“Then tell me what the first verse is…without looking at it.” Her words became strict
“Um, it states, That the Lord is Good and takes good care of us…” He said
She opened her eyes “You don’t know that verse. LIAR!”
she started “It SAYS “I Love the LORD because he listens to my prayers for help!”
He glared at her, “You better watch your pretty little head! I’ll get you. I will hurt you if you don’t listen to me, once we are married…”
“You could kill me right now; I know where I’m going.” She said with courage
“You don’t want to make me your enemy, I can hurt you.”
“And I you.” She said
“I can make you shut you mouth once we are married.”
“Be careful….I bite.” She smirked
Then he looked around the room and got up.
As he was opened the door he mumble “watch out.”
Then he turned to see her reaction all she said was “no…It’s YOU who should watch out….”
Then he left.



Oh no!
what ever shall she do?

What does James have evily planed?

*looks around*
I think James is behind me right now.
He doesnt like me writeing this
*Punches James*

LOL


HAve FUN dear readers!

TexasGirlLovesTH
June 12th, 2008, 03:20 PM
"Be careful...I bite"
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:


*kicks James* :mrgreen:

ShadowIW
June 12th, 2008, 04:44 PM
Sooo lets continue

After that Angie looked at her Bible and rubbed the leather cover.
Then she closed her eyes and drifted off to sleep.
Mean while, Bill and Laurie were in the kitchen.
“Ugh, that James creeps me out.” She said
“He is going to hurt her…” Kiki and Gustav said walking in
“How do you know?” Bill said shocked
“We eased dropped on them, dude she didn’t sound scared at all.” Said Gustav as he sat at the table
“She must be terrified.” Laurie said
“You know Laurie, I think you’re wrong.” Kiki sighed
“What?! You’re kidding right? I mean this guy she doesn’t love she has to get married to him, and he is going to hurt her. So after all that, you’re telling me that she isn’t scared.” Laurie said
“I know it sounds weird.” Kiki said then they heard footsteps, they knew James was gone but they didn’t know where Margery was, and they thought Angie was sleeping
“Hey, Guys.” Tom said walking in, he looked ragged
“How did you get in?” Kiki said
“I’m the stable boy!” He said
“Oh, well, what are Andreas and Jane doing?” Gustav asked
“They are watching the security cameras.” Tom replied
“So, what were you guys talking about before I walked in?” he said
“James has a plan to hurt Angie.” Kiki blurted out before Laurie could put a hand over her mouth
“Ugh! I am going to hurt him!” Tom started “Where is Angie anyway?”
“She is in her room.” Bill said “Do you guys want anything to eat?”
“Um, sure, make whatever you can Bill, we all know you cant cook.” Tom said leaving
Tom walked down the hall to Angie’s room He quietly opened the door and saw her waking up.
Then he looked at her ankle.
“Tom? What are you doing looking like that?” Angie said sitting up
“I am the stable boy.” He said
“Wait…I have a stable?” She said
“You have 8 horses…” he laughed
“I want you to be a nice looking stable boy instead of…the dirt clothes you have on.”
“Yes, your majesty.” He bowed “What happened to your ankle?”
“Tripped.” She said “I think that it’s better.” She got up and walked on it
“Yup! I’m good.” She said
“So what did that James say to you?” Tom put his arm around her waist
“Pshh…that he will hurt me.. that he can make me miserable, that he can… make me shut up.” She said she put a hand on his shoulder
“Ugh, babe, we need to get you out of this!” Tom moaned
“I told him that I bite.” She giggled
“….you told him what?” Tom looked like O.o
“That I bite…you don’t believe me?” she flirted
“Um, I never dated a girl that bit.” He said
“I don’t bite! But I will if I have too!” She giggled “Now, handsome stable boy, will you escort me to the kitchen?” she curtsied
He gave her a small bow and they linked arms then walked into the kitchen.




*growl* *bark*

TexasGirlLovesTH
June 12th, 2008, 04:53 PM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! How sweet!


*meow*
:lol: Hehe! Inside joke. 8-)

ShadowIW
June 12th, 2008, 04:57 PM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! How sweet!


*meow*
:lol: Hehe! Inside joke. 8-)

*bark*

TexasGirlLovesTH
June 12th, 2008, 05:59 PM
*meow*

*kicks James, again* :mrgreen:

TH_luv
June 12th, 2008, 06:04 PM
lmao she bites!Beware XD mehr,bitte?

lilangel02371
June 12th, 2008, 07:40 PM
aww thats so cute stupid James!!! I just wanna choke him to death! lol

ShadowIW
June 14th, 2008, 02:07 AM
Working on more!!! trust me...the next few chapters will be more awesome than a penguin playing a banjo....

tokiohotel26
June 14th, 2008, 05:04 PM
well thats good because i dont like banjos! lol

ShadowIW
June 14th, 2008, 09:03 PM
well thats good because i dont like banjos! lol

LOL

tokiohotel26
June 15th, 2008, 12:53 AM
well thats good because i dont like banjos! lol

LOL
and i dont really like penguins either [[god help me if my bffaeaeaea
[etc.] alexis heard me]]
I LIKE MONKEYS!!!!!!!!!!! :mrgreen:

ShadowIW
June 15th, 2008, 05:19 PM
HUGE FAMILY EMERGENCY! I MAY NOT BE HERE,
I CANT FDNN OF MY FAMILY MEMBERS AND WELL, WE ARE WORRIED SO....

I DONT KNOW WHAT ELSE TO SAY

I am really scared....

awesomequeen
June 16th, 2008, 12:36 AM
HUGE FAMILY EMERGENCY! I MAY NOT BE HERE,
I CANT FDNN OF MY FAMILY MEMBERS AND WELL, WE ARE WORRIED SO....

I DONT KNOW WHAT ELSE TO SAY

I am really scared....

Cousin, dont worry ur not the only one scared, but ur story is wonderful and you know i want more.

♥♫♥♫♥

love ya!

TexasGirlLovesTH
June 16th, 2008, 12:58 AM
I understand.
We'll all be here waiting and hoping for the best.
*bearhug*

ShadowIW
June 16th, 2008, 01:59 PM
Everything is good now.

Update soon

ShadowIW
June 16th, 2008, 03:22 PM
After that they all ate the dinner that Bill made…or tried to make.
Anyway, Margery came and told Angie in front of everyone in disguise, that she was going to have to marry James the after she got crowned which, was in a few days.
“Huh? But he is going to try and hurt me!” Angie exclaimed
“Well, there is no way you can get out of it, I don’t really know what to say.” Margery replied
Angie eye’s filled with confusion.
“Angie, do you have proof?” Margery said “How do you know?”
“He told me!” Angie defended
“Angie…Im sorry, but you’re going to have to do this….come with me so I can show you your wedding dress.” Margery replied
“I don’t even get to choose my dress!” Angie whined
“Now…THAT is unfair…” Laurie blurted out
Then Margery led to Angie to a room with the plans for the wedding.
Angie looked at the dress…
“It’s so…..ugly….cant I get a different one?” she sighed
“It’s vintage and unfortunately, no…every royal woman wore that dress.” Margery said tears started to fill her eyes.
“Why are you crying?” Angie asked
“I am so sorry that you have to marry him….”
“There must be another reason that goes with that…”
“Well, yes..one of our other family members had to go through the same thing…and it drove her to her doom.” Margery cried
“Doom?” Angie repeated
“Yes..let’s not talk about it.” Margery said
******

“I hate this.” Kiki said
“We all do.” Tom said
“She can’t even choose her dress.” Laurie stated
“We all are going to be there, at the wedding right?” Bill asked the others
“Yes.” They replied
“This is painful.” Laurie said “I hope he doesn’t hurt her.”
“Let’s just go to bed…” Bill sighed


For those who want to know this is the dress:

http://www.heritagegown.com/image/1930s ... e_gown.jpg (http://www.heritagegown.com/image/1930s_vintage_gown.jpg)


iT IS SOO UGLY!

tokiohotel26
June 16th, 2008, 03:27 PM
i feel so sorry for tom
he has to watch his girlfriend[/true love] get married to a guy she doesnt even like and is trying to hurt her
i know i would be ******

awesomequeen
June 16th, 2008, 06:25 PM
GASPERS!!!

so far-out

dragoness573
June 16th, 2008, 08:12 PM
Thats just plain cruel!!
James needs to go in a cave with vamp babes!! :x

ShadowIW
June 17th, 2008, 01:10 AM
That night Angie came up with an idea to get out of the marriage that was very soon.
The days came and went the others showed up disguised to follow through with their plan but they didn’t know that Angie had a plan of her own, a plan that would be perfect.
The next few days past being the same, James would come and visit, Angie would do her Princess Training thing.
Angie didn’t tell anyone about her plan; she knew that if she did it would ruin the others’ plans.
She walked to the room where the wedding plans were and shut the door. Then she looked at the way the wedding was supposed to be planed.
This isn’t what I wanted, I wouldn’t have this or that….She thought

This was turning into a big nightmare for Angie.
She was there in the room with all the wedding plans alone;
until she heard footsteps outside the room and heard James voice with another voice…It was James’ father.
They were going to come in the room
She looked around for a place to hide then saw the wardrobe, she got inside it and cracked the door a little to see out.
James and his father walked into the room.
“Well, son, nice job.” His father said
“Thank you, father.” James replied
“I mean look at this, you are going to have a beautiful castle, beautiful wife and beautiful children.”
“I have to share it though.” James said looking through the wedding plans
Angie couldn’t stand to hear what else he said so she blocked their voices out until they left.
That night after James left the castle, Angie took a walk around the castle but not in any fancy clothes.
While she walking she started to sing to herself. She sang a Barlow Girl song
“Once again I said my goodbyes
To those who I love most
My heart feels that familiar pain
As I long for home
'Cause this road is hard
When I feel so far

God I'm crying out tonight
'Cause I've given You my life
But I'm tired and I'm missing what's behind
So once more here's my life

On the day that You called my name
All that I knew changed
I found when I said yes that I'd never be the same
Though the call is hard
You are worth it all

God I'm crying out tonight
'Cause I've given You my life
But I'm tired and I'm missing what's behind
So once more

Even when the tears are falling
When I find I fear the calling
You remind me
Words You've spoken over my life
Promises I've yet to see
You comfort me….” The stopped on the balcony that over looked the garden.
There was a light breeze.
Then Kiki walked up quietly behind her
“Angie, are you scared?” She asked
Angie kept looking down at the garden
“A little.” Angie replied
“You seem to be handling it well.”
“I have to; there is no other choice but too.”
“No, you could be scared and never come out of your room.”
“Well, I guess that’s true. I wish I was braver.” Angie said
“You are the definition of brave.” Kiki said
“What?” Angie turned to see Kiki
“Think about it, your father died, you have gone through moving, and other hard times, but still have kept your Faith in God and still have a smile on your face as if you just won an award.
I mean I couldn’t do that! None of us could do that! Then look at this situation now, your acting as if this is normal. You are brave Angie, I wish I could be as brave as you.” kiki replied
“I had no other choice. What else was I to do? Run away? I couldn’t do that.” Angie smiled a bit
“What is it?” Kiki asked
“It’s hard, moving and dad dying, but its not like I never cried.” Angie said
“We all know you cry Angie.”
“But I never cry for long.”
“You know that’s true…why is that?”
“It’s God. I go to him when I am sad or whenever I feel down, I go to him when I am happy.”
Kiki smiled “You will make it.”
“I know.” Angie smiled back

Wonderful readers! If you want to hear that song by Barlow Girl it is called 'Here's My Life' here is a link:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FP26xNcXaec


Enjoy everything!

tokiohotel26
June 17th, 2008, 10:11 AM
whats her plan?????? im curious...

lilangel02371
June 17th, 2008, 07:13 PM
hmm i wonder whats she planning?

awesomequeen
June 17th, 2008, 11:11 PM
O!


SO OUT OF SIGHT!

ShadowIW
June 18th, 2008, 01:23 AM
It felt as if the day Angie got crowned came faster than expected.
Angie got up early and got dressed in the best looking dress, It was light blue and the top was embroidered.
When she fixed her hair she sighed, her wedding was tomorrow.
Margery walked in wearing her best dress “Angie, the press is here!”
“Margery, Is the rest the family out there?”
“Yes, and don’t worry, all of your friends are out there too. They are all dressed in their best.”
“That’s nice.” Angie sighed
Then they walked out into the hall and Margery lead her to the beginning of the red carpet,
where she would walk down to the thrown and be crowned.
Margery put a royal cape around her, it was red.
Angie over heard a reporter speak
“In just moments Angie Cambridge will be crowned as Princess of Germany!
Then once she gets married tomorrow, she shall be Queen!”
Angie looked down at the floor, smiled a little, but then gained her composer.
“It’s your time, go.” Margery whispered
Angie looked up and started walking; she walked the perfect speed, not to fast not to slow.
When she got closer to the thrown she saw Tom and the others smiling like no tomorrow.
Then she saw James with a fake smile.
Then she looked up to the throne and stepped up the few steps that were there and turned around and sat on the throne.
Everyone was silent as she got crowned.

ShadowIW
June 19th, 2008, 01:48 AM
HOPE YOU LIKE IT!!!!!!!!

The reception after that was only for family and friends.
She was talking to Jane when James walked up.
“Hello.”” He smiled
“Hello.” Jane snorted
“James!” Angie started “This is my good friend Jane!”
They said their hellos when Angie said “You will have to excuse me, I have to tell Macy something!”
Angie walked away and over to Macy and Georg
“Hey Angie!” Macy said giving her a hug
“Hi!” Angie smiled radiantly
“Well, you seem happy!” Georg smiled
“Well, I have a reason to be! I am Princess of Germany!”
They laughed.
While that was happening Angie’s mother ran into James
“Well, You must be the young man my daughter is marrying tomorrow.” Her Mother said
“Yes, ma’am I am.” He smiled
“Well, Can I tell you a secret?” Her mom lowered he voice
“Yes, is it something about Angie?” He raised an eyebrow
“Well, no…”
“What is it then?”
Her mom kept her voice low,
“Ok, you want to know? Here it is, If you lay a single finger on Angie the wrong way…I will come for you, I will bring her uncles, we will get you, and if you run and try to hide, we will find you, I will deal with you myself, got that?”
“You cant hurt me, I will be king soon.” James smirked
“I don’t care who you are! I will get you, and your body will be dead before it hits the ground.”
James gulped
“That’s right.” Her mom said then walked off.

After that everyone was enjoying themselves, dancing and singing and more dancing.
That night when everyone left the others snuck back in and got in there disguises and got together with Angie.
“Angie! Oh Angie! Your getting married!” Laurie said holding back tears
“It’s ok go ahead and cry.” Angie said lifting up Laurie’s chin
Then everyone began to cry except Angie
“Why are you all crying?” Angie asked
“You will be miserable for the rest of your life!” Gustav said whipping away a tear.
“That is a way to put it!” Angie giggled a little
“But it’s true!” Tom said squeezing the air out of Angie by accident
“How can you even be remotely happy?” Bill said
“Because I got the Joy of the Lord!” Angie started “Tom, let go I cant breath.”
Tom let go the Angie walked up to Kiki,
“Kiki remember those songs we sang in school?”
“Um, which ones?” Kiki asked
“Every move I make I make in YOU! You make me move Jesus, Every step I take I take in you!...”
Kiki’s eyes brightened
“OH and it goes ‘Na na na na na na HEY!” Kiki started to sing a long and Bill clapped to it.
Then Angie switched songs
“I got the Joy Joy Joy Joy down in My heart!
Where?
Down in my Heart !
I got the Joy of the Lord in my heart!”
Angie smiled at everyone and bowed
“I still don’t understand why you aren’t bawling your eyes out.” Laurie said
“Well, that’s ok you don’t have too.” Angie yawned “I am going to bed.”
She hugged everyone goodnight then Tom walked her to her room.
“Angie, what am I supposed to do when your gone?” he asked holding her in his arms
“Be strong, carry on, and know that I am never gone! Hey it rhymes!” She said as she looked up into is eyes
“I am going to miss your smile and laugh!” He whimpered
“Honey, listen, I know you have a plan, but I have one too and you have to know that it will work.”
“You made a plan? What is it?” he asked combing her hair with his fingers
“I can’t tell you.” Angie said as she kissed him on the lips. “Goodnight, Tom Kaulitz”
“Goodnight, Princess” he whispered back





SOOO DID YALL LOVE IT??!?!?!?

TexasGirlLovesTH
June 19th, 2008, 01:55 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! :lol:

writeratheart412
June 19th, 2008, 10:21 PM
Oh, so sweet! I love where you took the press thing! Keep it up, and send me updates, please!!!!

awesomequeen
June 19th, 2008, 11:11 PM
MORE!

writeratheart412
June 19th, 2008, 11:34 PM
MORE!Yes, more!!!!

TH_luv
June 19th, 2008, 11:43 PM
zomg!I loves it! :D lmao I almost died of laughter at what Angie's mom said to James! :lol:

ShadowIW
June 19th, 2008, 11:48 PM
zomg!I loves it! :D lmao I almost died of laughter at what Angie's mom said to James! :lol:

Thank you!!!!!



Thats what my mom really says.... :shock:

writeratheart412
June 19th, 2008, 11:49 PM
:o

Are you serious????

TH_luv
June 19th, 2008, 11:50 PM
zomg!I loves it! :D lmao I almost died of laughter at what Angie's mom said to James! :lol:

Thank you!!!!!



Thats what my mom really says.... :shock:
lmao! XD zomg seriously?!I'd love my mom for saying that lolz

writeratheart412
June 19th, 2008, 11:51 PM
zomg!I loves it! :D lmao I almost died of laughter at what Angie's mom said to James! :lol:

Thank you!!!!!



Thats what my mom really says.... :shock:
lmao! XD zomg seriously?!I'd love my mom for saying that lolzMe, too, lol. :)

ShadowIW
June 19th, 2008, 11:53 PM
YUP! she really says those things!

her fave is the "Your body will be dead before it hits the ground...."

Yes my mom rocks... :D :mrgreen: :D

TH_luv
June 19th, 2008, 11:54 PM
YUP! she really says those things!

her fave is the "Your body will be dead before it hits the ground...."

Yes my mom rocks... :D :mrgreen: :D
lolz thats my fave too! XD

writeratheart412
June 19th, 2008, 11:56 PM
I've never heard it, but it rocks! :o Ash...Edward should have used that threat on Victoria! James should use it on Tom! OMG!!!!

TH_luv
June 19th, 2008, 11:59 PM
I've never heard it, but it rocks! :o Ash...Edward should have used that threat on Victoria! James should use it on Tom! OMG!!!!
lolz we're now talking about twilight? XD

ShadowIW
June 20th, 2008, 12:07 AM
I've never heard it, but it rocks! :o Ash...Edward should have used that threat on Victoria! James should use it on Tom! OMG!!!!
lolz we're now talking about twilight? XD

Nein, one of her other Fanfics.....

writeratheart412
June 20th, 2008, 10:08 AM
Edward and Victoria are two characters in a Swithfoot fanfic I'm writing. One of them loves the other so much that he's willing to do anything--and I mean anything--to make her happy. He almost killed his competition to force her into loving him, but he was stopped when she had to get surgery.

ShadowIW
June 20th, 2008, 12:26 PM
Edward and Victoria are two characters in a Swithfoot fanfic I'm writing. One of them loves the other so much that he's willing to do anything--and I mean anything--to make her happy. He almost killed his competition to force her into loving him, but he was stopped when she had to get surgery.

Your still writing that?

writeratheart412
June 20th, 2008, 12:44 PM
Yes, but I'm afraid I'm losing interest...

ShadowIW
June 20th, 2008, 06:27 PM
Yes, but I'm afraid I'm losing interest...

NO!!


GAIN YOUR INTEREST OR I WILL MAKE YOU GAIN IT!

:shock:

sorry....i just like it.....

writeratheart412
June 20th, 2008, 07:31 PM
Thanks. I think I'm suffering a major case of Block, lol. Btw, on A New Dawn, I've got ch. 5 up. I'm working on 6.

ShadowIW
June 20th, 2008, 08:06 PM
The next day was the wedding; Angie got up and looked at herself in a mirror.
A tear slid down her cheek.
She got dressed in the wedding dress.
“Eeewww!” She grimaced
Then Margery walked in “Oh, you are already dressed!”
“Yes ma’am.” Angie smiled
“Well, how are you?” Margery asked
“Ah, blah.” Angie said “Is the press here again?”
“Yes, they want to do an interview with you before the wedding, I told them no.”
“Good, I don’t want them to know that I hate James.”
Then they did some last minute touches.
There wasn’t anything to do, Angie didn’t have any bride’s maids and James didn’t have any groom’s men.
(Ya, it was THAT awful because Angie didn’t plan it.)

So when it was time, the others were dressed in their best again,
after that they would skip the reception and get back to the disguises and plan.
When Angie got to the aisle her hands trembled a little while she held the flowers.
Then she walked down the aisle, knowing that her plan had to work.
This wedding was unusual, the preacher didn’t ask if there were objections…
Angie knew that James probably talked to the preacher and convinced him not to do it.
When it came time to sign the Wedding Certificate Angie let James sign first then her plan went into action.
At the reception Angie acted happy and joyful.
The others were in their disguises, Tom peeked in on the reception as he was walking to the stables.
He cried when he saw her, but then walked on.
He thought his true love was gone, but little did he know how powerful Angie’s little plan was.
After the reception James and Angie walked down the hall where the others were listening in.
(James thought they were working and thought Tom came in for the night)
Angie held the wedding certificate in her hand.
Then James stopped her in her tracks and backed her up to the wall.
“I told you I would get you! Now I can get the money….”
James said blocking her so she couldn’t escape.
The others listened intently incase he tried anything.
“Oh, that’s right; you think you get my money.” Angie retorted
“What do you mean by think? I know I get it!” James said suspiciously
“We are NOT married.” Angie smiled in victory
Tom’s eyes lit up with both fear and joy.
“What do you mean we are NOT married?!” James said
“We said vows we did everything! You are Angie Von Dued!”
“No, you’re wrong…according to this certificate we aren’t married.”
“Give me that!” James grabbed the paper from her and looked at it, “ANGIE KAULITZ!!!”
His eyes looked at her with anger “You signed the wrong last name!”
“That’s right James!” She defended
Tom’s eyes glanced at her then looked away and went back to pretending to help Kiki
At that moment something happened in James’ mind, he went mentally insane.
Angie smiled “Ha ha ha.” She started to walk away to her room.
When she got there she locked the door and breathed heavily,
she knew he was going to get her.
Then she saw the window and started towards it when James broke the door down.
He grabbed her and tied her hands together and
covered her mouth with a rag that he tied around her mouthr=
She tried to scream but she couldn’t, she tried kicking but she couldn’t get away.
He dragged her to one of the towers and lock the door behind them.
Then he threw her to the ground, she got back up then he hit her.
She couldn’t scream or hit back, she knew she couldn’t do anything, so she just took the hits.
Finally he took the rag off because he knew no one could hear her.
“I told you to watch it!” He said
“You will be sorry!” She said
“Like I believe you.” He said walking out of the room then locked the door.

writeratheart412
June 20th, 2008, 08:11 PM
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Incredible! You followed my advice...thank you! It's really, really good so far; keep up the good work!

ShadowIW
June 20th, 2008, 08:26 PM
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Incredible! You followed my advice...thank you! It's really, really good so far; keep up the good work!
thanks!!! I worked really hard trying to figure it out!
....I like the Angie Kaulitz part...

but either way thanks for the advice.

writeratheart412
June 20th, 2008, 08:28 PM
No problem. :) The Angie Kaulitz part is awesome!

ShadowIW
June 20th, 2008, 08:31 PM
No problem. :) The Angie Kaulitz part is awesome!

dankeshon!! :D :D :D :D

writeratheart412
June 20th, 2008, 08:33 PM
Sure! I loved that part!

ShadowIW
June 20th, 2008, 08:42 PM
Sure! I loved that part!

:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

ShadowIW
June 20th, 2008, 08:42 PM
Sure! I loved that part!

:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

TexasGirlLovesTH
June 20th, 2008, 10:08 PM
..."Angie Kaulitz"...I bet Tom liked hearing that! :lol:

Hmm...I wonder if it gave him any ideas. ;)

ShadowIW
June 20th, 2008, 10:14 PM
..."Angie Kaulitz"...I bet Tom liked hearing that! :lol:

Hmm...I wonder if it gave him any ideas. ;)
Yes...i think he did... :lol:

TexasGirlLovesTH
June 20th, 2008, 11:13 PM
..."Angie Kaulitz"...I bet Tom liked hearing that! :lol:

Hmm...I wonder if it gave him any ideas. ;)
Yes...i think he did... :lol:

8-)
I had a feeling it would. ;)

TH_luv
June 21st, 2008, 12:27 AM
I swear that James needs to go jump out of a window lolz,and oh mein Gott!Kaulitz! XD I love it mehr,bitte?

writeratheart412
June 21st, 2008, 11:02 AM
Well, James definitely has issues and priorities to sort out...he gives me the creeps. :shock:

ShadowIW
June 22nd, 2008, 12:25 PM
Laurie saw what happened and ran to get the others.
“Guys! Guys!” She panted
“What?!” Kiki said worried
“It’s Angie! We got to save her!” She rushed
“What happened?!” Tom said worried
“He locked her in a room in one of the towers and I think he hit her or something now she is trapped!”
“Which tower?” Kiki asked
“I don’t know I think the east tower!” Laurie replied
“Call Jane, Georg, Macy, and Andreas NOW!” Bill command as he and Tom started to run out of the room
“Wait! What are you doing?!!” Kiki yelled
“We need to find another way in incase we can’t get in the main way!” Tom yelled back
Then they ran around the castle trying to find another entrance
Kiki ran towards the phone and called the others, Sense Angie got married Margery wasn’t staying there anymore so they couldn’t get her.
Jane answered the phone:
“Hello?” she asked
“Emergency plan has to go into action! Get here and be all suited up! Angie is locked in a tower!”
“WHAT!” Jane yelled into the phone
“That’s right it’s Code Red!” Kiki said
Then they hung up.
Kiki and Laurie were about to say something when James walked in
“Ah, Clare and, um..Clare’s helper you didn’t finish cleaning up in the Grand Dining hall…”
“Clean it up your-“ Laurie was interrupted by Kiki “Oui oui! Mr. Ven Dude!”
“Von Dued.” He corrected
“Oui! Ven Dude!” Kiki acted as if she had no clue what she was saying
“Yes, Mr. Von Dued.” Laurie said then they walked off.
While that was happening Jane, Macy, Georg, and Andreas were getting ready.
They were getting the spy gear and spy suits.
Then they got in the car and speeded towards the castle.

TexasGirlLovesTH
June 22nd, 2008, 01:52 PM
:lol: "Ven Dued" :lol: :lol: :lol:

writeratheart412
June 22nd, 2008, 02:57 PM
Ven Dude.... :lol: :lol: :lol:

I love it!!!! Keep it up!

TH_luv
June 22nd, 2008, 05:18 PM
lmao "Von Dude" XD nice job Kiki!

ShadowIW
June 23rd, 2008, 03:26 PM
When Tom and Bill ran to the east tower they saw a window, at that time Jane, Georg, Andreas, and Macy showed up. They drove to the stables and hid their car.
Andreas set up the inner ear pieces that the Jane, Macy and Georg would wear.
When they Tom and Bill found them they got their own ear pieces, Tom and Bill filled them in on where they thought Angie was.
“Ok, give me that hook.” Macy said
“huh?” Jane said
“Just give it to me.”
Jane handed Macy the hook.
Then they went over the plans to save Angie.
James walked into the room where Angie was, she was standing up leaning against the wall.
“What are you going to do now?” Angie snapped
“You should learn not to talk to me that way!” He grabbed her shoulders and shook her
“Stop! Stop!” She screamed
“Shut up!” he slapped her, she fell to the floor.
He grabbed the collar of her shirt and picked her up then threw her against the wall (he gave her some clothes to change into from the wedding dress a few moments before he came back in) breaking a mirror.
“Please…” she whimpered as she fell to the floor
“You will pay for your trick!” he yelled then walked out again
At that time Macy used the hook to catch the sill of the window and started climb up the side of the castle.
Georg was sneaking in through the window in the Grand dining room and Jane, Tom, and Bill, went back to the kitchen to see if they could set up a trap for James.
When Macy got up to the window she saw that there was an alarm that she had to disable
She reached in her pocket and got out a Swiss army knife and cut the wires.
Angie was almost about to blackout when Macy came through the window
Macy looked at Angie. She was bloody and bruised, that mirror had cut her arms and some of her face.
Angie’s eyes were bruised and swollen, looked up at Macy
“help.” She whispered then blacked out
Macy got Angie up and tried to open the door.
“Dang it! Its locked!” she said to herself then she radioed Andreas
“Hey, Andreas! See if you can get someone to open the door!”
“Rodger that!” he replied then radio the others to see who could open the door.

Kiki, Laurie, and Gustav were in the grand dining hall when Georg came through the window.
“Hey girls, just got radioed by Andreas, he said that Macy and Angie are locked in the tower we need away to get in.”
“Leave that to me…” Laurie grinned
Laurie told them her plan to get the keys.
Kiki and Laurie would walk past James while Laurie pick-pocked him them would turn the corner to the Hall and hand the keys to Gustav and Georg.
They tried to figure out where James was but couldn’t find him, so the radioed Jane, Tom and Bill.
“Guys we cant find James.” Georg radioed
“Ok we are on it.” Jane replied
They turned the corner to go down another hall
“Uh, Guys have we ever been down this way before?” Bill asked
“No…at least I don’t think so.” Tom said
“Guys, where does that door lead?” Jane asked
“I don’t know…lets see.” Bill opened it, it creaked and opened slowly. Then when they walked in the found cob webs.
“Ewww!” Jane said
“Look there is more to this!” Tom said then he got his flashlight out and showed them a secret compartment hidden in a wall.

awesomequeen
June 23rd, 2008, 05:43 PM
:shock:

writeratheart412
June 23rd, 2008, 06:02 PM
Secret compartment? Oooh, this will be interesting! More, please!!!

awesomequeen
June 23rd, 2008, 06:31 PM
Secret compartment? Oooh, this will be interesting! More, please!!!

she is right!

cherry_kaulitz
June 23rd, 2008, 06:44 PM
more more more i love it ahhhhhh you rule this is gonna be so awsome